Hyadain - Enemy Appearance! [OsuMania] · forum

Marirose

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Marirose 2014-06-14T15:14:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月7日 at 15:53:58

Artist: Hyadain
Title: Enemy Appearance!
Source: Kaku-San-Sei Million Arthur
Tags: SquareEnix
BPM: 170
Filesize: 2359kb
Play Time: 01:18
Difficulties Available:

HD - 4Key (2.73 stars, 551 notes)
MX - 4Key (3.63 stars, 838 notes)
NM - 4Key (1.61 stars, 246 notes)

Download: Hyadain - Enemy Appearance!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd mania map
A BGM from MA (Kaku-San-Sei Million Arthur)
Enjoy this easy&funny song !

General

Diff set:
NM
HD
MX

妈妈的这强敌出现忒洗脑了下次再也不弄这样ZZ的曲子了Orz

Last edited by Marirose 2014-09-07T07:54:15+00:00, edited 56 times in total.

hokin1995

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Joined August 2008

hokin1995 2014-06-14T16:29:30+00:00

其實我不明白「來看看」是什麼意思lol
是mod 還是想我打一遍試試看

因為不知是哪個意思所以我打了一遍及隨便看了看w
順便騙kudosu

~~傻逼型琪露諾~~

Column 1|2|3|4

[General]
Please check the AiMod in all diffs

4K NM+ - http://puu.sh/9tf5m/b57e5c515e.jpg

4K HD+ - http://puu.sh/9tfm9/19f60df113.jpg

4K MX - http://puu.sh/9tgft/b6a7c8ea20.jpg

[4K NM+ ]
00:09:529 - add note?
00:14:647 (14647|3) - move to 3
00:14:823 (14823|1) - move to 4
00:17:294 (17294|0) - move to 2
00:17:470 (17470|3) - move to 1
我覺得 normal 盡量不要有極短面條吧w

[4K HD+]
1/8

Last edited by hokin1995 2014-06-14T16:33:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

hokin1995

495 posts

Joined August 2008

hokin1995 2014-06-14T16:32:59+00:00

會不會太快lol
我才剛剛貼出來w

Marirose

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Marirose 2014-06-14T16:33:54+00:00

hokin1995 wrote:
會不會太快lol
我才剛剛貼出來w

不会的，我一直在关注⊙▽⊙

hokin1995

495 posts

Joined August 2008

hokin1995 2014-06-14T16:36:44+00:00

xeona wrote:
hokin1995 wrote:
會不會太快lol
我才剛剛貼出來w
不会的，我一直在关注⊙▽⊙

竟然是這樣w
可能mod得不太好請原諒w
因為真的找不到什麼大問題
可能是我功力不夠

NaxelCL

NaxelCL 2014-06-14T17:17:45+00:00

Hello , from in-game

[4K NM+]
*00:11:294 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714834 ~ more easy to play.
*00:12:352 - add in 4 or used this suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714840 ~ more easy to play.
*00:23:647 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714847 ~ if you test this , is more good to play and like for this part , i'm recommended you to used this pattern of all parts of this sound.
*00:35:470 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714856 , ~ Your you attack a mistake in this type of parts, must not complicate the player doing streams unnecessary, I recommend to you to use this.
*01:03:529 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714863 ~ ñe , more fit with the song

Other are fine. , delete the ''+'' in this diff

[4K HD+]
*00:24:352 (24352|1) - delete , very hard to play ~ and bad hand balance
*00:35:823 - move to 4 ~ hand balance.

I'm not took much this diff , is a delicate equilibity , not used much mods in this diff , is like right , this overmapped is good to play.

[4K MX]

*The same of the 4K HD+ , is a good diff , you spread is a excelent , i'm shoot a star , good luck!!!!

Marirose

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Topic Starter

Marirose 2014-06-14T17:23:38+00:00

NaxelCL wrote:
Hello , from in-game

[4K NM+]
*00:11:294 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714834 ~ more easy to play.
*00:12:352 - add in 4 or used this suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714840 ~ more easy to play.
*00:23:647 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714847 ~ if you test this , is more good to play and like for this part , i'm recommended you to used this pattern of all parts of this sound.
*00:35:470 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714856 , ~ Your you attack a mistake in this type of parts, must not complicate the player doing streams unnecessary, I recommend to you to use this.
*01:03:529 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1714863 ~ ñe , more fit with the song

Other are fine. , delete the ''+'' in this diff

[4K HD+]
*00:24:352 (24352|1) - delete , very hard to play ~ and bad hand balance
*00:35:823 - move to 4 ~ hand balance.

I'm not took much this diff , is a delicate equilibity , not used much mods in this diff , is like right , this overmapped is good to play.

[4K MX]

*The same of the 4K HD+ , is a good diff , you spread is a excelent , i'm shoot a star , good luck!!!!

Thanks a lot

,great advice⊙▽⊙

Sakuya Lv9

25 posts

Joined May 2012

Sakuya Lv9 2014-06-14T20:02:33+00:00

[4K NM]

00:14:823 (14823|3) - 長條尾放個note

00:19:764 (19764|3,19764|0) - 可以考慮多放點東西這譜面不是EZ

00:26:823 (26823|0,26999|3,27176|0,27352|3,27529|0,27705|3,27882|0,28058|3) - 這裡變成雙押縱連反而會比較簡單的感覺

00:31:058 (31058|3,31058|1) - 可以考慮多放點東西這譜面不是EZ

00:34:588 (34588|1) -
00:35:999 (35999|0) -
00:37:411 (37411|3) - 長條尾放note

00:56:470 (56470|1) - 這裡開始加個kiai time吧

00:42:352 (42352|0,42352|3) - 可以考慮多放點東西這譜面不是EZ

01:04:941 (64941|0,64941|3) - 這裡來個這個吧

[4K HD+]

00:19:764 (19764|3,20029|0) - 這兩個去掉，或者在後面也加點有規律的雙押

00:30:705 (30705|2,30705|0,30705|3) - 改成FJK

00:31:058 (31058|2) - 這裡開始的三列亂鍵換別的吧.. 我打不了..

00:58:588 (58588|2,58676|1,58676|0) - 有點卡

01:07:764 (67764|1,68294|1) - 去掉

01:16:764 (76764|3,76764|0,76764|2,76764|1) - DJ和FK交換

[4K MX]

00:21:470 (21470|3,21529|2,21588|1,21647|0) - 這裡放回旋律裡的位置

對這難度我沒多少能說的了..

Marirose

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Topic Starter

Marirose 2014-06-15T00:37:34+00:00

Sakuya Lv9 wrote:
[4K NM]

00:14:823 (14823|3) - 長條尾放個note

00:19:764 (19764|3,19764|0) - 可以考慮多放點東西這譜面不是EZ

00:26:823 (26823|0,26999|3,27176|0,27352|3,27529|0,27705|3,27882|0,28058|3) - 這裡變成雙押縱連反而會比較簡單的感覺

00:31:058 (31058|3,31058|1) - 可以考慮多放點東西這譜面不是EZ

00:34:588 (34588|1) -
00:35:999 (35999|0) -
00:37:411 (37411|3) - 長條尾放note

00:56:470 (56470|1) - 這裡開始加個kiai time吧

00:42:352 (42352|0,42352|3) - 可以考慮多放點東西這譜面不是EZ

01:04:941 (64941|0,64941|3) - 這裡來個這個吧

[4K HD+]

00:19:764 (19764|3,20029|0) - 這兩個去掉，或者在後面也加點有規律的雙押

00:30:705 (30705|2,30705|0,30705|3) - 改成FJK

00:31:058 (31058|2) - 這裡開始的三列亂鍵換別的吧.. 我打不了..

00:58:588 (58588|2,58676|1,58676|0) - 有點卡

01:07:764 (67764|1,68294|1) - 去掉

01:16:764 (76764|3,76764|0,76764|2,76764|1) - DJ和FK交換

[4K MX]

00:21:470 (21470|3,21529|2,21588|1,21647|0) - 這裡放回旋律裡的位置

對這難度我沒多少能說的了..

谢谢宵夜哥的意见⊙▽⊙

Marirose

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Marirose 2014-06-18T17:54:21+00:00

感谢宵夜哥的EZ GD

Heart of Bitch

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Heart of Bitch 2014-06-20T03:52:28+00:00

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只看HD，因为我只喜欢（能打）HD！

[General]
HP建议调到8会比较人性。
然后HS建议再细致一些。这个有点不明显。如果自创节奏可以找一些鼓点HS。
最后音频建议做淡出效果，因为这个截取的版本突然停顿会影响整体美感（←事儿逼）

[4K HD]
00:08:705 (8705|0,8823|1) - 可删:3 （我知道你原创节奏卖萌）如果你想抓背景音00:08:705 (8705|0) - 也应该在底下红线。
00:10:411 (10411|3) - 这可以加一个在4.然后改一下后面的排列。
00:13:764 (13764|3,13764|2) - 这里改成结束在红线的LN。因为什么呢？因为底下这条！底下你抓了完整的LN。要不然就都改成单个的小豆豆:3
00:16:235 (16235|2) - 放到1.然后在00:16:411 这里的 3加一个音。
00:19:411 (19411|1) - 停在底下的红线。（其实是蓝线）
00:36:352 (36352|0) - ^
00:46:588 (46588|0) - 底下红线结束
00:47:205 (47205|1,47294|2) - 都向下移一格
00:47:382 (47382|3) - 开始位置是下面白线。:3 （放50%！）
00:52:235 (52235|3,52852|2,52941|1,53029|0,53029|2) - 一模一样的问题
00:57:882 (57882|0,58499|2,58588|0,58676|1,58676|2) - 还是一样的问题，顺便建议改排列
这个排列卡手。00:58:588 (58588|0) - 把这个挪到4就好很多。
01:04:588 (64588|2,64941|1,65029|2,65117|1,65205|2,65294|1,65382|2,65470|1,65558|2,65647|1,65735|2,65823|1,65911|2,65999|1,66088|2,66176|2,66264|1,66352|2,66441|1,66529|2,66617|1,66705|2,66794|1,66882|2,66970|1,67058|2,67147|1,67235|2,67323|1,67411|2,67499|1,67588|2,67676|1) -
这个？为什么列出来呢？（因为一大堆可以凑字数啊）交替连打在HD(别以为你标+就合适了)真的不合适，你看你自己打的也吃力。建议改掉！01:06:088 (66088|2,66176|2) - 还自带小连点，你在逗我么？
01:07:764 (67764|2,68294|2) - 为啥这里是单独的LN，01:10:588 (70588|0,70588|1,71117|2,71117|3) - 这里就变成双键？ :3

就这样辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！辣辣辣辣！

顺便第一发★接好

Marirose

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Marirose 2014-06-20T04:22:05+00:00

谢谢hob啦！辣辣辣辣你就学我

，谢谢射

星咯

Kamio Misuzu

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Kamio Misuzu 2014-06-21T06:20:02+00:00