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Tanizawa Tomofumi - Kimi ni Todoke (TV SIZE) [Taiko]

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HeatKai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 28 November, 2014 at 4:15:18 AM

Artist: Tanizawa Tomofumi
Title: Kimi ni Todoke (TV SIZE)
Source: Kimi ni Todoke
BPM: 126
Filesize: 1395kb
Play Time: 00:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.93 stars, 132 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.65 stars, 81 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.28 stars, 184 notes)
  4. Oni (3.11 stars, 240 notes)
Download: Tanizawa Tomofumi - Kimi ni Todoke (TV SIZE)
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Dainesl
Akemi_homura
Tasha
Flask pro mod
mingmichael
mancuso_jm
taiko_maniac1811
Jerry
mintong89
qoot8123

Thanks for everything.
NewrulerNA for the metadata check, ming for the discussion and alacat for confirming the metadata.

Dainesl, it's not your fault, Thanks! :D
Dainesl
Taiko mod via Queue.

General
君に届け as Japanese Song Title
check to see if タニザワトモフミ is the Japanese artist; i'm not too sure myself

maybe lower Kantan's HP to 4?
Remove Countdown and Letterbox
combine the two Kiais into one on each diff.
00:00:580 - Since the map starts here, put the timing point here?

Kantan
As a general rule, keep 1/2s out of Kantan; I won't list them here 'cause there's quite a lot (generally the notes on red ticks should be kept to follow the background instruments)
00:17:723 - how come there's a gap here and not at the other bits like it? fill it in with a don
00:25:104 (56) - imo there is a sudden loudness here compared to the other bits before it; big don maybe?
00:26:770 (57,58) - cymbal plays here quite a bit; finishers here too maybe?
00:31:532 (69) - decreasing pitch of vocal compared to 68; don maybe?
00:40:580 (92) - extend this 1/2 a beat and remove 93 to follow the vocal like you have been doing?
00:44:389 (98) - significant part of the song; big don here?
00:50:818 (116) - this note isn't needed here imo; move to 00:51:056 - for better flow with the music?

Futsuu
00:15:818 (43) - relatively high pitch vocal here; maybe make this a kat?
00:17:009 (46,47) - swap these? it'd make a nicer pattern relating to the instruments :3
00:24:866 (69) - Maybe if the next suggestion is applied you could make this a kat since kD plays less awkwardly than dD?
00:25:104 (70) - again, maybe make this a big don due to loudness?
00:26:770 (71,72) - same as Kantan; cymbals play here; maybe make these big notes?
00:32:009 (85,86,87,88) - why are you using this 3/4 pattern in a Futsuu; make it on the beat :o like this
00:42:961 (117) - a soft cymbal sound plays here; maybe make this a kat since there's nothing to follow but the instrument here?
00:50:818 (142) - this note seems a bit weird in terms of the vocals; maybe remove?

Muzukashii
00:11:770 (37) - a quick snare here; maybe make this a kat to follow that a bit more? would also add a bit more variety :3
00:25:104 (84,85,86) - Again, make these three notes finishers maybe?
00:44:389 (150) - maybe make this a big don instead for consistency with the other diffs?
00:45:580 (155) - maybe make this a don instead? I don't see much reason for it being a kat; the instruments don't really suggest it imo.
00:51:532 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181) - why suddenly lots of finishers during this ending pattern? ._.

Oni
00:09:628 (32) - imo having this doesn't really work; I suggest making it a don as there's no real snare or kick to this
00:25:104 (100,101,102) - same as every other diff; make these finishers maybe?
00:28:318 (108) - this feels like it should be a don. it would flow nicely with the music as there's nothing really suggesting a kat here. it sounds a bit nicer too :3
00:44:270 (188) - maybe remove this note so that 189 can be a big don instead? it'd work a bit better

good luck with this mapset! ;w; sorry if the mod got a bit worse in the higher diffs; I couldn't really find as many things that didn't really fit what you were going for~
Topic Starter
HeatKai
thank you very much, most of them are applied! :D
Akemi_Homura
Heatkai~~! Here is my 1st taiko modding~! :3
almost suggestion..!

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. FINE~ OwO/


  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:06:056 (11) - move this k 00:05:818. I think this rhythm is more fit.
  2. 00:07:961 (15) - same as (11). It's move to 00:07:723.
  3. 00:11:294 (24) - move to 00:11:532. because vocal('Ho') is emphasized this part. So It's same as 00:13:913 (30,31)

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:23:913 (66) - k?
  2. 00:24:389 (67,68,69,70) - kdkd?
  3. 00:28:199 - add d is better imo.. o_o
  4. 00:51:294 (142,143,144,145) - dkdK is more fit to vocal~!

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:28:556 (93) - delete this note and add k 00:28:794
  2. 00:32:366 (107) - When I test play,this note defeat me..!!! So I think move this k to 00:32:247 and change to d is better.
  3. 00:47:604 (126) - same as 00:32:366 (107).Change like this..!

  • [Oni]
  1. Fine. I think~!

your map is always nice~ =w=/
GL to Rank~!
Topic Starter
HeatKai
thank you! fix some of it! :D
karterfreak
Topic Starter
HeatKai
Thank you Tasha! :)
Flask
HeatKai asked me to leave some poor suggestions so I'm here lul

[General]
  1. Not sure that (TV Size) is allowed nowadays or not, perhaps you'll need to ask someone for this
[Oni]
  1. 00:15:342 (56) - k
holy shit I can't find anything else bye
Dainesl
speaking of TV Size there's no TV Size in the non-Romanised title ;w;
Topic Starter
HeatKai
Thanks flask xD I think about the title, i'll stay like this first..
Dainesl ohh thanks! just noticed XD
mingmichael
sorrryyyyyyyy i am lateeeeeee ;w;


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Futsuu]

General
☞ okay~

Notes Structure
☞ okay~ :3

Notes
• delete 00:11:770 - . this note just any particular sounds, just the bass sounds there. it's better if we follow the vocals on there, so it'll be o o o only

• change 00:55:580 - to be don here, to keep the vocal which is same like 00:54:866 - and 00:55:104 - .


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[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ okay~!


Notes
• change 00:11:294 - to be kat because of the instrument sounds (it's like shake sound..? isn't it?). i saw that basically you followed that sound with a kat

• change 00:15:104 - and 00:15:342 - to be o o. the reason is same like above too ^

• start from 00:17:009 - until 00:18:675 - , try this. i gave that suggestion to follow that instrument sounds which need kat

• you missed a finisher on 00:36:770 - . the finisher sound comes out on there, same like 00:36:294 - that the finisher comes out too there and you used finisher to follow it :P

• change 00:55:580 - to be don, same like Futsuu


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[ Oni]

General
☞ okay~

Notes Structure
☞ nice pattern :oops: nothing big issues are found here

Notes
• change 00:35:818 - to be kat here. this kat will follow the instrument sound which comes out on there (i dunno what sound that is lol)

• same like Futsuu and Muzukashii 00:55:580 -


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that's all from me~ can't find anything in kantan
nice mapset here :P goodluck for the next~ :oops:
Topic Starter
HeatKai
updated! thank you very much ming!
mancuso_JM_
Super Random mod! Maybe this will be a surprise for you :P

[Kantan]

• I would avoid to use 1/2 in Kantan difficulties, even if the BPM is low, some of them don't fit really well with the difficulty so you could remove at least some of them.

  1. 00:09:866 (18,19,20,21) - I think this pattern could be a little easier listening to the song. I'd delete (18), and I'd use a k k k in the following notes to follow the new instrument that appear in the song. I think this new thing that appear in there sounds more like kats.
  2. 00:13:675 (24) - There is not an intense sound in this beat, so I don't find this object really necessary at least in this difficulty. I recommend you to remove this note.
  3. 00:15:580 (28) - As I mentioned before, is better to delete this note, still if you want to keep a 2-plet here, I suggest you to move this note 1/2 back. Definetly the sound that appear in 00:15:342 - is higher than the one in 00:15:580 -
  4. 00:21:294 (40,41) - Hmm.. This is not following really well the music. Would be better if you move (40) 1/2 forward and then delete (41) to give new players a little rest time.
  5. 00:33:675 (65) - I don't feel this beat that intense to have a note in this difficulty. Try removing this note, in addition the transition is better (in my opinion ofc :P)
  6. 00:42:723 (81,82,83,84,85) - I didn't like this ''off-beat'' pattern, it can be a bit difficult for new players in some aspect. You can maybe move (81) 1/2 forward, this pattern will be more consistent with others in your map, and I think it'll be easier to read to new players.
  7. 00:51:532 (101) - Make this a don (? 1/2 3-plet is usually hard in Kantan (even if the BPM is low, as I said at the beginning of the mod), transforming this pattern a d d d, will make it easier.
  8. 00:53:675 (105,106,107) - Move (105) 1/2 forward to cover better the instrumental, then use d d d in this pattern.
- Some points in this mod were to make the difficulty a bit easier, others, I saw your style and tried to fix some tiny issues with things that you've already used before, I hope this help you. Anyway, is not a bad difficulty, so don't worry!

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:42:009 (x) - Meh.. I need a note here, without it the rhythm sounds weird when you play the map. Consider it, pls.
  2. 00:53:199 (133,134,135,136) - Would make the end of the map more ''emotional'' if you follow drums instead of vocals here because drums sound pretty constant in this point. My suggestion is something like this
- Uff.. I couldn't find anything else.. Nice one!

[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:04:747 (13,14) - This 2-plets look so alone in this map, because is the only one you've used. I suggest you to add more of this in the whole of the map to make it more consistent or just remove (13) from there (or maybe add a don in 00:04:628 - and make a ddd pattern, you have a lot of varieties xD)
  2. 00:21:294 (x) - Add a note for a better flow (?
  3. 00:32:366 (108) - :o .. This plays so weird for me, I don't know if it was intentional or just a mistake. But please, try to move this 1/4 back (the best option imo) or 1/4 forward, and I think would be better if you make this a don.
  4. 00:43:199 (147) - Finisher to emphisize the cymbals in the BGM (?
  5. 00:45:818 (156,157,158) - I've to say the transition between the patterns is weird here. Try this instead pls :(
  6. 00:48:437 (x) - Hmm.. Maybe a don for a better flow (? I find the flow in this pattern weird.
  7. 00:53:675 (181) - Move this 1/2 forward.. Follow better the highest part in the drums.
- Not bad, just some sections flow weird in the last kiai, anyway I've already mentioned in my mod.

[Oni]

  1. 00:28:675 (110,111,112) - kdd will be more consistent because (111) have the same sound in the music as the note (103) and this note is a don, so I think this one should be a don as well :P
  2. 00:42:485 (180,181,182,183) - I'd go with k d k D here, but this is really optional :P (I wanted to be consistent with Muzu and Futsuu)
  3. 00:45:818 (195,196,197,198) - I don't like how this sound, I'd go with something like k kkd here, anyway if you want to keep the 2-plet pattern, I'd use kk dk here..
  4. 00:53:913 (137) - Hmm.. Finisher (?
- Not much more things to say, just some 2-plets didn't convince me a lot, but still, they played well during the gameplay, that's why I didn't complain :P

Uff.. Such a long time after my last taiko mod! xD
Still, I hope this helps you HK!
Best of luck with this map!
Topic Starter
HeatKai
wow I fixed most of it thanks mancuso xD
I'm suprised XD haha thanks!
Topic Starter
HeatKai
updated!!!
taiko_maniac1811
IRC mod coz HeatKai ask me too lol

IRC
20:30 taiko_maniac1811: meh aq mod
20:31 HeatKai: go
20:31 taiko_maniac1811: mod irc xD
20:31 taiko_maniac1811: sikit je ni
20:34 taiko_maniac1811: copat xD
20:36 HeatKai: kau post je sini lu
20:36 HeatKai: aku check nnt ixD
20:36 taiko_maniac1811: 00:18:675 (71) - delete
20:37 taiko_maniac1811: 00:28:080 (106,108) - swap k > d, jadi dkkd
20:37 HeatKai: what diff
20:37 taiko_maniac1811: oni
20:38 HeatKai: berehgu
20:38 taiko_maniac1811: rehgu
20:39 taiko_maniac1811: 00:41:056 (173) - k?
20:40 taiko_maniac1811: dh le tu oni
20:40 taiko_maniac1811: muzu lak
20:41 taiko_maniac1811: 00:07:723 (24) - delete? ade break ok gak
20:42 taiko_maniac1811: 00:11:532 (35) - delete ^
20:45 taiko_maniac1811: 00:32:366 (108) - alih ke 00:32:247 - sedap sikit
20:45 taiko_maniac1811: futsuu lak
20:47 taiko_maniac1811: 00:06:294 (13) - d?
20:47 taiko_maniac1811: 00:07:723 (17) - delete? simplekan pattern
20:48 taiko_maniac1811: 00:18:675 (47) - delete?
20:49 taiko_maniac1811: 00:32:009 (79) - delete ni, ade break ok jgk sini
20:50 taiko_maniac1811: kantan lak
20:52 taiko_maniac1811: kantan xde apa lol
20:52 taiko_maniac1811: dh
Jerry


HAHAHAHAH 5 MONTHS AGO LOLOLOL /me slapped

Seriously, sorry for the huge delay lol

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:51:532 (97) - try kat?
  2. 00:53:675 (101) - ^


  • [Footsoup]
  1. Looks good!


  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:532 (71) - change to don, this part of the music doesn't have an increase of pitch. And also it's to make it consistent with 00:19:628 (63) - since they both sound the same

  2. 00:25:104 (85) - Finish?

  3. 00:32:366 (108) - this note sounds like it's in the wrong position .w. Move to 00:32:247 - ?


  • [Oni]
  1. 00:25:104 (100) - Finish?

  2. 00:28:794 (111) - kdd sounds abit weird for this part imo, delete this note?

  3. 00:43:794 - this part sounds quite empty, add a don here? it makes the pattern flow well imo :3

  4. 00:47:485 and 00:47:961 - change these two to kat, because the vocals goes very high here. Then, change 00:48:199 to don, following the lowering of the pitch (This is also to follow what you did in Muzukashii on this part)

That's all from me hue
Fast rank pls
Topic Starter
HeatKai

Jerry wrote:



HAHAHAHAH 5 MONTHS AGO LOLOLOL /me slapped
I cri'd

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:32:366 (108) - this note sounds like it's in the wrong position .w. Move to 00:32:247 - ?
This one is based on the piano! wanted to make the pattern different in muzu. :3

  • [Oni]
  1. 00:28:794 (111) - kdd sounds abit weird for this part imo, delete this note?
I change to kkd, sounds good to me. well my ears at least lol
Others fixed, thanks jerry <3
mintong89
Hi, mod as your request.

[General]
Title should be "Kimi ni Todoke (TV ver.)". http://vgmdb.net/album/23293
Uncheck "Widescreen Support".
Hitsound Volume -10%? The song isn't that loud.

[Oni]

00:15:818 (58) - How about move this to 00:16:056 - here and change 00:15:580 (57) - this to k for better fit to vocal?
00:27:247 - => 00:28:913 - How about change these to D d kddkk d kkd to more fit to the song?
00:29:509 (114) - I suggest to delete this song and make 00:29:628 (115) - this note to D because there's have a cymbal at here, and that k seem not really necessary imo.
00:34:866 (140) - hmm, how about k here to make some various? (00:32:961 (130) - this is d so k here to more fun!)
00:35:580 (144,145,146,147,148) - The pattern rhythm at here seem rusty, how about kkddk?
00:36:651 (150) - The 1/4 at here sound weird...I'd prefer you delete this and 00:36:770 (151) - make this to big note for the cymbal.
00:42:247 (178) - k here for high pitch vocal?
00:45:818 (195,196,197,198) - Same...kk dk sound weird, how about k kdk?
00:52:723 (230) - k for high pitch vocal.

[Muzukashii]

00:06:056 - Add here a note for the clap. (Well maybe you can't hear anything here, but it sound totally weird for that long break imo.). Also if you apply please delete 00:07:961 (25) - this note for avoid so long pattern for Muzukashii player.
00:12:009 - => 00:13:913 - The pattern rhythm at here sound little weird, how about this?: 00:15:342 (48) - k for high pitch vocal.
00:24:270 - add a note at here for apply 1/4 vocal.
00:33:199 (111) - Delete this note for break? Since you have 00:32:009 (107,108,109) - pattern of this and it give little stress for Muzukashii player imo.
00:53:675 - Add a note at here? You have the note connect to the rhythm before big note but why not here? (I mean 00:52:485 (179) - you have a note before D so why not here?)

[Futsuu]

00:12:961 - Add a note at here to fit vocal. Actually it's fine to me until 00:14:866 - => 00:15:818 - here, it sound rusty and didn't fit the song imo. So I think you gonna first add a note at here, then 00:13:437 (32) - delete this note, then 00:15:580 - add a note at here, then 00:17:485 - add a note at here for avoid too more d d _ d d _ d d _ d d situation. Lastly just 00:17:961 (45) - delete this note.
00:36:294 - Add a big note at here for follow cymbal.
00:43:913 - Add a note at here to follow vocal, if you wanna break delete 00:44:151 - this note instead, because that just high pitch but not heavy beat.

[Kantan]
If can, please make this Kantan more easier by delete some 1/2 part at kiai time. As you can see, the note and the star rating is almost near to Futsuu and it's arkward imo. (About 75~90 note, and star rating at least below 1.6)

00:20:104 (34) - Since that is have a big note before this note, so we gonna put some break to Kantan player by delete this note imo.
00:32:009 (57) - Change this note to k and delete 00:32:485 (58) - this note for give some break for Kantan player to ready to beat 1/2 note.

Call me back when you fix it.
Topic Starter
HeatKai
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