1. Ami's Easy (1.43 stars, 106 notes)
2. Hard (3.22 stars, 290 notes)
3. Insane (4.7 stars, 417 notes)
4. Normal (1.94 stars, 184 notes)

1. The first offset is a bit late, i suggest moving it to 00:00:021. The second offset is fine (this play was made using my offset, only 5% mistimed hits)
   
   How to do it fast

   select those timing points and move them by -12ms
   
   
   
   
   then select this and drag it back to snap correctly
   Insane 00:21:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
   Hard 00:21:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
   Easy 00:21:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)
2. You could add "drum n bass" and "no more idols" to the tags

1. AR-1 or OD+1 i'd say
2. 00:36:192 (2) - imo it's much nicer like this http://puu.sh/8Vd02.jpg - copy paste 00:35:678 (1) and ctrl+H ctrl+J
3. 00:49:049 - there should be something here, maybe another 1/2 slider
4. 00:54:535 (7) - i would make it flow the opposite side http://puu.sh/8VcWY.jpg
5. 01:42:535 (3) - too close to the previous slider, move to 142|197 to make an equilateral triangle with the other 2 sliders http://puu.sh/8Vf86.jpg
6. 01:51:621 (7) - how about this http://puu.sh/8VePo.jpg
7. 02:08:960 (7) - an 1/2 slider here is cool http://puu.sh/8VeLu.jpg

1. 00:24:375 (7) - ignore DS to the following slider and put it here http://puu.sh/8VfrX.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8VfoM.jpg
2. 00:45:118 (3) - rotate by -10° around selection center http://puu.sh/8VfZH.jpg
3. 00:46:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm sounds so much better
4. 01:22:318 (1) - i find it much nicer like this http://puu.sh/8VgTO.jpg
5. 01:26:947 (5) - the end is too near to (3)'s end imo, i would suggest something like this http://puu.sh/8VgFW.jpg (the selected thing is (6) )
6. 01:40:147 (5) - copy-paste 01:40:661 (6) and ctrl+H ctrl+J, it looks much cleaner http://puu.sh/8Vh0i.jpg
7. 01:42:718 (4,5) - move to 188|96
8. 01:43:404 (6) - ^f you made this, move to 412|152
9. 02:08:960 (7) - you can make it a 1/2 slider here too if you made it on insane

1. 00:54:890 (1) - the strong beats on both drums and vocals are here 00:54:890 - 00:55:233 - 00:55:747, i suggest changing the rhythm in these parts (on the whole map) into something like this http://puu.sh/8Vi6l.jpg or even better like this http://puu.sh/8VicM.jpg
2. 01:19:575 (3) - this can be blanketed a little better
3. 01:34:661 (2) - bad overlap with the previous slider, i suggest http://puu.sh/8VhE9.jpg or http://puu.sh/8VhH2.jpg

Sephibro wrote:

sup

[General]

1. The first offset is a bit late, i suggest moving it to 00:00:021. The second offset is fine (this play was made using my offset, only 5% mistimed hits) I tested it multiple times and really, this offset is fine
   
   How to do it fast

   select those timing points and move them by -12ms
   
   
   
   
   then select this and drag it back to snap correctly
   Insane 00:21:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
   Hard 00:21:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
   Easy 00:21:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)
2. You could add "drum n bass" and "no more idols" to the tags

[Insane]
I modded this difficulty with the offset i suggested, but it shouldn't give you problems anyway

1. AR-1 or OD+1 i'd say OD+1 it is
2. 00:36:192 (2) - imo it's much nicer like this http://puu.sh/8Vd02.jpg - copy paste 00:35:678 (1) and ctrl+H ctrl+J missing puush sdfkjhsdkfhd, it's copy pasted right now + i kind of like it, i didn't want to use a single blanket in this diff
3. 00:49:049 - there should be something here, maybe another 1/2 slider Added a circle instead
4. 00:54:535 (7) - i would make it flow the opposite side http://puu.sh/8VcWY.jpg I prefer it the way it is :c
5. 01:42:535 (3) - too close to the previous slider, move to 142|197 to make an equilateral triangle with the other 2 sliders http://puu.sh/8Vf86.jpg Fixed
6. 01:51:621 (7) - how about this http://puu.sh/8VePo.jpg missing puush
7. 02:08:960 (7) - an 1/2 slider here is cool http://puu.sh/8VeLu.jpg i like a circle more than a slider as ending

[Hard]

1. 00:24:375 (7) - ignore DS to the following slider and put it here http://puu.sh/8VfrX.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8VfoM.jpg Fixed somewhat
2. 00:45:118 (3) - rotate by -10° around selection center http://puu.sh/8VfZH.jpg Looks kinda bad, it's currently a copy of the next slider
3. 00:46:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm sounds so much better
4. 01:22:318 (1) - i find it much nicer like this http://puu.sh/8VgTO.jpg puush pls
5. 01:26:947 (5) - the end is too near to (3)'s end imo, i would suggest something like this http://puu.sh/8VgFW.jpg (the selected thing is (6) ) fixed
6. 01:40:147 (5) - copy-paste 01:40:661 (6) and ctrl+H ctrl+J, it looks much cleaner http://puu.sh/8Vh0i.jpg It's a copy, but instead of ctrlh i used ctrlg, kind of the style in this map
7. 01:42:718 (4,5) - move to 188|96 fixed a bit different
8. 01:43:404 (6) - ^f you made this, move to 412|152 ^
9. 02:08:960 (7) - you can make it a 1/2 slider here too if you made it on insane Didn't

[Ami's Easy]

1. 00:54:890 (1) - the strong beats on both drums and vocals are here 00:54:890 - 00:55:233 - 00:55:747, i suggest changing the rhythm in these parts (on the whole map) into something like this http://puu.sh/8Vi6l.jpg or even better like this http://puu.sh/8VicM.jpg Personally I think this is fine, it's an easy diff and not every beat should be mapped, the most strongest beats are mapped the way it is
2. 01:19:575 (3) - this can be blanketed a little better Fixed
3. 01:34:661 (2) - bad overlap with the previous slider, i suggest http://puu.sh/8VhE9.jpg or http://puu.sh/8VhH2.jpg Fixed

Very clean mapset overall, good luck!

Also let me know when you revive it, I'll shoot a couple stars

Sephibro wrote:

sup

[General]

1. The first offset is a bit late, i suggest moving it to 00:00:021. The second offset is fine (this play was made using my offset, only 5% mistimed hits)
   
   How to do it fast

   select those timing points and move them by -12ms
   
   
   
   
   then select this and drag it back to snap correctly
   Insane 00:21:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
   Hard 00:21:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
   Easy 00:21:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)
2. You could add "drum n bass" and "no more idols" to the tags

[Insane]
I modded this difficulty with the offset i suggested, but it shouldn't give you problems anyway

1. AR-1 or OD+1 i'd say
2. 00:36:192 (2) - imo it's much nicer like this http://puu.sh/8Vd02.jpg - copy paste 00:35:678 (1) and ctrl+H ctrl+J
3. 00:49:049 - there should be something here, maybe another 1/2 slider
4. 00:54:535 (7) - i would make it flow the opposite side http://puu.sh/8VcWY.jpg
5. 01:42:535 (3) - too close to the previous slider, move to 142|197 to make an equilateral triangle with the other 2 sliders http://puu.sh/8Vf86.jpg
6. 01:51:621 (7) - how about this http://puu.sh/8VePo.jpg
7. 02:08:960 (7) - an 1/2 slider here is cool http://puu.sh/8VeLu.jpg

[Hard]

1. 00:24:375 (7) - ignore DS to the following slider and put it here http://puu.sh/8VfrX.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8VfoM.jpg
2. 00:45:118 (3) - rotate by -10° around selection center http://puu.sh/8VfZH.jpg
3. 00:46:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm sounds so much better
4. 01:22:318 (1) - i find it much nicer like this http://puu.sh/8VgTO.jpg
5. 01:26:947 (5) - the end is too near to (3)'s end imo, i would suggest something like this http://puu.sh/8VgFW.jpg (the selected thing is (6) )
6. 01:40:147 (5) - copy-paste 01:40:661 (6) and ctrl+H ctrl+J, it looks much cleaner http://puu.sh/8Vh0i.jpg
7. 01:42:718 (4,5) - move to 188|96
8. 01:43:404 (6) - ^f you made this, move to 412|152
9. 02:08:960 (7) - you can make it a 1/2 slider here too if you made it on insane

[Ami's Easy]

1. 00:54:890 (1) - the strong beats on both drums and vocals are here 00:54:890 - 00:55:233 - 00:55:747, i suggest changing the rhythm in these parts (on the whole map) into something like this http://puu.sh/8Vi6l.jpg or even better like this http://puu.sh/8VicM.jpg
2. 01:19:575 (3) - this can be blanketed a little better
3. 01:34:661 (2) - bad overlap with the previous slider, i suggest http://puu.sh/8VhE9.jpg or http://puu.sh/8VhH2.jpg

Very clean mapset overall, good luck!

Also let me know when you revive it, I'll shoot a couple stars

Secretpipe wrote:

Hello Kshro \o/

As requested !

[General]

1. Fix Tags stuff in AiMod
2. Clean!

[Ami's Easy] Fixed everything here

1. 00:21:975 (1) - I'd curv that slider for improve the transition with 00:23:347 (2) - .
2. 00:28:833 (2,3,1) - I guess you can try to make a triangle by moving 00:29:861 (3,1) -
3. 00:39:804 (2,3,1) - Here , I can see a triangle but it's not well made ! Consider to make it better :3
4. 00:49:404 (1) - I'd curv it like that imo :
   
   Click!

   
   I didn't change it a lot , I just moved the last point !
   
5. 01:16:490 (4,2) - Be careful , these notes are overlapping ! Consider to space them :3
6. 01:33:290 (1,2) - I guess the blanket can be much better :
   
   Click!

   
7. 01:42:890 (2) - I thought you'll blanket it ! Maybe move it to x:2088 y:128 ?
8. 01:44:261 (1) - If you fixed what I mentionned above , fix that overlap !
9. 02:00:718 (1) - That object isn't snapped ! Be careful
10. 02:07:589 (2,3) - These notes are kinda high placed ! Maybe move them down ?

[Normal]

1. 00:37:575 (4) - That object is too high placed ! Move it down ! Done
2. 00:42:375 (3,1) - I'd maybe stack here ! We can notice the stack with the low AR ! I dislike stacks in easier diffs, pretty hard for newbies
3. 00:45:118 (2,3,4) - I find that pattern too "straight" ! I mean , add some curv slider and not only straight sliders , it's not cool for the flow in general Fixed
   
4. 00:56:261 (4) - I'd curv a biiit this slider ! I'm sure you'll know why ! Fixed
5. 00:57:633 (1,2) - Inconsistent pattern ! I mean , you use a curved slider and then a straight slider ! In my opinion , you should put 2 curved slider or 2 straight slider instead of makin' 2 differents ! But I'd suggest you two curved slider like 00:57:633 (1) - ! Just rotate it and paste it in 00:58:147 (2) - 's place! Make it like that : 01:14:090 (1,2) - Fixed
6. 01:11:347 (1,2,3) - I'd change that pattern like that one : I prefer my pattern because having 2 of the same curved sliders above eachother is pretty ugly
   
   amazing pattern by pipe(tm)

   
7. 01:35:175 (5) - Reaaaally nazi but I'd move that note here for follow the straight slider : x:60 y:240 Fixed
8. 01:36:033 (1,2,3) - aah men , that triangle is kinda akward to play and can be really weird readable for newbies~ I'd like to see these 3 notes spaced I'd rather keep it, it's pretty simple to play
9. 01:59:175 (4) - Too high :b Fixed
10. 02:08:789 (7) - Like Ami's Easy , I'd love to see that note NC'ed ! Also , if you don't NC , I'd suggest you to finish by a double ! It fits better imo o.o Fixed in a different way

[Hard]

1. 00:27:461 (1,2) - I guess you can try to curv them a little bit for making a better flow ! Also , you can move 00:27:975 (2) - here : x:156 y:112 if you fix what I mention above ! I prefer to keep it in this style
2. 00:40:833 (6) - If you reverse the slider , it'd be amazing for the cursor's movement Fixed
3. 00:47:518 (2) - Maybe move that note here :248 y:104 Same as earlier
4. 00:59:004 (6,7) - Same thing as 00:27:461 (1,2) - ! ^
5. 01:12:547 (4,6,7) - I guess the shape of the triangle can be better ! Literally 1 pixel up lol, but sure fixed
6. 01:19:061 (7,8) - Be careful , that object is out of the screen ! It isn't, but i moved it 1 grid to the right
7. 01:30:204 (8,4,5) - I can see an overlap here :3 The note is gone before the next one appears, but sure fixed
8. 02:08:103 (6) - Maybe you can add variety in timeline and don't use a reverse slider : Seems cool, fixed
   
   Timeline!

   

[Insane]

1. 00:29:518 (6) - A Ctrl+G would be amazing there Would ruin the style I'm using here
2. 00:36:718 (3,4,1,2) - I'd swap these notes sure why not
3. 00:38:433 (1) - Same here , a reversed slider would be amazing ! I'd rather keep it
4. 00:49:061 (7) - I don't think that that note is really useful ! Maybe delete it and see the difference ! But don't worry , it's not an overmapped note ! You're right, I added it with the previous mod but I think it's better without
5. 00:58:147 (6) - In order to represent the drum sound , I'd use a New Combo here ! It'll match perfectly with the cymbals THen the whole map would be NC mania, I'd rather keep it like this
6. 01:03:633 (6) - Same here!
7. 01:14:604 (6) - Same here!
8. 01:15:461 (1) - I'd Ctrl+H that slider ! Try ! You'll see , it can be better for the flow Plays better the way it is :c
9. 01:34:147 (3) - Same as above mentionned ! ^
10. 01:47:518 (6,6) - Really useless but I'd like to see these notes close or even stacked Sure why not
11. 02:07:932 (5,6,7) - It reminds me of the end of the Hard ! If you choose to delete it , add some variety or a triangle with a little jump ! Made something cooler hueh

That's all from me ! Sorry for the poor mod but the mapset is really clean !
I really enjoyed modding this and I really liked the song !
Good luck and have a star ! (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

• Easy
  
  >00:23:347 (2,1) - Blanket here can be improved a tiny bit
  >01:12:718 (2,1) - This looks weird considering that this difficulty doesnt have any other places where there wouldnt be a blanket in a spot like this
  
  Very clean diff
  
  Normal
  
  >01:00:375 (1) - This slider looks really weird imo, I'd make it Z shaped for better visuals
  >01:17:175 (2,3) - Tried this rhythm and worked quite well imo
  
  
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  >01:43:747 (6,1) - Better rhythm here would be like this in my opinion
  
  
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  >01:58:490 (3,4,5) - I would try something like this here
  
  
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  >02:04:674 (4) - This feels weird - consider replacing with something like this
  
  
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  Very clean diff - just a few suggestions here.
  
  Hard
  
  >00:41:175 (1) - Spacing
  >00:42:547 (4) - ^
  >00:57:975 (2,4) - These would be easier to read if they were unstacked imo, had something like this in mind
  
  
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  >01:03:461 (2) - If you unstack the previous ones, consider unstacking this too
  >01:09:461 (3) - ^
  >01:14:433 (2) - ^
  >01:19:918 (2) - ^
  >01:30:890 (2,4) - ^
  >01:44:947 (3) - ^ lol
  >01:48:718 (7) - ^ these were all of them D:
  
  Cool Diff
  
  Insane
  
  The mod on this difficulty will be more of a personal preference thing and suggestions, since there isn't really nothing wrong here and I'm not gonna look for nazi 1 grid changes xD
  
  I couldnt help but notice that there are 0 triplet stack rhythms in this difficulty, unless made by repeat arrows.
  I'd consider changing few of these kind of sliders 00:54:890 (1) - To have a rhythm like this in this pic
  
  
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  But this is just a personal thing for me and would add some more variety. But I can totally see why you wouldnt want to add these.
  
  The streams are fun to play, maybe consider having more smaller DS on the few short streams like in this 01:04:147 (11,12,13) - for example.
  
  Also you could make few short repeat arrows into 2 short sliders, like 1/4 sliders.

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Yo Kyshiro! Here is the mod you requested

• Easy
  
  >00:23:347 (2,1) - Blanket here can be improved a tiny bit Fixed
  >01:12:718 (2,1) - This looks weird considering that this difficulty doesnt have any other places where there wouldnt be a blanket in a spot like this Fixed
  
  Very clean diff
  
  Normal
  
  >01:00:375 (1) - This slider looks really weird imo, I'd make it Z shaped for better visuals Sure why not
  >01:17:175 (2,3) - Tried this rhythm and worked quite well imo I prefer the rhythm I have right now
  
  
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  >01:43:747 (6,1) - Better rhythm here would be like this in my opinion Doesn't follow the music that well
  
  
  Picture

  
  
  >01:58:490 (3,4,5) - I would try something like this here Same
  
  
  Picture

  
  
  >02:04:674 (4) - This feels weird - consider replacing with something like this Fixed
  
  
  Picture

  
  
  Very clean diff - just a few suggestions here.
  
  Hard
  
  >00:41:175 (1) - Spacing There's really no need to fix this kind of spacing, its unnoticable
  >00:42:547 (4) - ^
  >00:57:975 (2,4) - These would be easier to read if they were unstacked imo, had something like this in mind fixed
  
  
  Picture

  
  
  >01:03:461 (2) - If you unstack the previous ones, consider unstacking this too Fixed all
  >01:09:461 (3) - ^
  >01:14:433 (2) - ^
  >01:19:918 (2) - ^
  >01:30:890 (2,4) - ^
  >01:44:947 (3) - ^ lol
  >01:48:718 (7) - ^ these were all of them D:
  
  Cool Diff
  
  Insane
  
  The mod on this difficulty will be more of a personal preference thing and suggestions, since there isn't really nothing wrong here and I'm not gonna look for nazi 1 grid changes xD
  
  I couldnt help but notice that there are 0 triplet stack rhythms in this difficulty, unless made by repeat arrows.
  I'd consider changing few of these kind of sliders 00:54:890 (1) - To have a rhythm like this in this pic
  
  
  Picture

  
  
  But this is just a personal thing for me and would add some more variety. But I can totally see why you wouldnt want to add these.
  
  The streams are fun to play, maybe consider having more smaller DS on the few short streams like in this 01:04:147 (11,12,13) - for example.
  
  Also you could make few short repeat arrows into 2 short sliders, like 1/4 sliders. I'd rather not do all these things, I think it'd ruin the playstyle i created

That's it for the mod I guess - Good luck with this !

Moo-Chan wrote:

The M4M :3

[Insane]

1. 00:23:004 (3) - I personally would move this to x:396 y:260. It makes the small jump from 00:22:490 (2) - to 00:23:176 (4) - even. If you understand what I'm saying It used to be even, idk what happened, fixed
2. 00:38:433 (1) - Maybe ctrl - g? And you could make 00:38:090 (7) - match the shape of 00:38:433 (1) - if you were to do this change I prefer it the way it is
3. 00:43:576 (7) - ctrl - g and move up just a bit from 00:43:233 (6)? Yeah seems cool
4. 01:41:518 (1,2) - I feel like you could blanket these two. But I don't really see any other blankets in the song so it's up to you Mapped this without using any blankets, that kind of was the point here lol
5. 01:49:404 (11) - This slider is kinda going off screen. Maybe move the tail to the right? Fixed
6. 01:51:633 (7,1) - Again with that feeling of needing to blanket ;w; nuu
7. 02:08:960 (1) - It's probably not necessary, but maybe you could NC this note? I don't see the point in doing that :c

Really nice mapset ;w; And sorry for the short mod >< It's all I could really find. Though, take my 2 stars :3/

1. I liked this difficulty, fun to play with a challenge, you did a fine job! Only thing that concerns me (or rather, wonder) that why does the ''normal'' parts have a bigger spacing almost compared to the kiai, it felt kind of dull to play in that sense because I was looking a bit more jumpish stuff to play but hey, it's still nicely done and very enjoyable either way.
2. 00:37:747 (5,6) - Played really cool, but what I was looking here was more of a zig-zag pattern if you can call it that. If you would try to move these 2 notes a bit more up, let's say to x:184 y:244, it'd give them a nice movement to work with. Up -> Down -> Up -> Down, rather than your current one. You can fix 7 accordingly but yeah, just a quick little suggestion!
3. 00:45:804 (6) - I disliked this slider due to the fact it cuts the vocals, variety is also good, but I'd like more if you'd be consistent with either one. Preferably you could re-arrange this like 00:48:376 (5,6) - ? Just a personal opinion
4. 00:58:661 (11,12,13) - Try to give this a little curve to match the previous streams? It doesn't look that appealing and to be honest, it played a bit better at least with the curve on the triple, try it out! http://puu.sh/b7eje/00625be0c1.jpg
5. 01:04:490 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd move this stream more to the right so your 01:03:975 (10,12,1) - would actually form a proper triangle. (Might be a bit hard to re-arrange stuff after this, though)
6. 01:25:576 (6,7,8,9,10) - Again just a curve suggestion. Try to give this more curve in order this to fit better with your previous one? It kind of looks flat now which isn't really great if you ask me.
7. 01:42:890 (1,2,3,4,1) - Patterns such as this were kind of dull due to the low spacing usage, I was kind of looking forward to a jumpy kiai which would've fit better I guess? Nonetheless it still plays awesome, I'd just give this pattern more spacing. Especially this and 01:38:775 (1,2,3) -
8. 01:53:004 (2) - Is it just me or does this slider look a bit more symmetrical if you move it a grid or two down? Try it!
9. 01:53:518 (3) - Move this slider to x:188 y:232? It'd look a lot cooler and more symmetrical this way.
10. 02:05:875 (7) - Same here, I'd move this to somewhere x:236 y:344 so it'd look better in editor, this way the spacing would look consistent if you judge it from 6's head.
11. 02:08:961 (8) - Emphasis this note with a NC? It feels kind of weird when this is in the same combo as 02:08:617 (7) - . (Would apply to all difficulties)

1. There's honestly not much to say here because it's really clean. I'd raise the Ar though, it feels really, really slow compared to the Insane, this isn't low bpm either so the raising part would make a lot of sense. 7,5 or 8, either way works for me. (if you use ar 8, +1 OD)
2. The other thing that bothered me here is the gap to Insane, it's not huge, but at the same time it's not perfect. Try to remove one or two (possibly more) of those repeat sliders and add triplets instead, I feel like it'd be a good way to introduce players to the streams Insane has. Now that the Hard has ONLY repeat sliders, it's kinda meh :s

1. Hmm, same here, I'd go for the Ar raise. It feels so slow when the bpm is quite high and this normal has a lot of 1/2, would make sense to me.
2. 00:30:204 (1) - Transition would be better if this would be ''under'' the start of 3, like at x:140 y:136 but it still is good either way so..
3. 01:17:175 (2,3) - Ehh, re-arranging 3 like this would make the pattern look better imho; http://puu.sh/b7f6F/36eb756d3a.jpg
4. 01:17:690 (3,4) - Just a small, small distance error here, really easy to fix!

1. +1 Ar if you agreed on the others
2. 00:28:833 (2) - CTRL + H -> CTRL + G this slider, waves would look a ton better this way rather than your current one.
3. If you really want to keep the NC on your last note, remove it at 02:08:960 (1) - to be consistent!

Asphyxia wrote:

Hello!

[Insane]

1. I liked this difficulty, fun to play with a challenge, you did a fine job! Only thing that concerns me (or rather, wonder) that why does the ''normal'' parts have a bigger spacing almost compared to the kiai, it felt kind of dull to play in that sense because I was looking a bit more jumpish stuff to play but hey, it's still nicely done and very enjoyable either way.
2. 00:37:747 (5,6) - Played really cool, but what I was looking here was more of a zig-zag pattern if you can call it that. If you would try to move these 2 notes a bit more up, let's say to x:184 y:244, it'd give them a nice movement to work with. Up -> Down -> Up -> Down, rather than your current one. You can fix 7 accordingly but yeah, just a quick little suggestion! Yeah why not
3. 00:45:804 (6) - I disliked this slider due to the fact it cuts the vocals, variety is also good, but I'd like more if you'd be consistent with either one. Preferably you could re-arrange this like 00:48:376 (5,6) - ? Just a personal opinion I'm following the guitar in the background here
4. 00:58:661 (11,12,13) - Try to give this a little curve to match the previous streams? It doesn't look that appealing and to be honest, it played a bit better at least with the curve on the triple, try it out! http://puu.sh/b7eje/00625be0c1.jpg I tried but I keep feeling it's rather messy, I don't see what's wrong with a straight tripple though
5. 01:04:490 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd move this stream more to the right so your 01:03:975 (10,12,1) - would actually form a proper triangle. (Might be a bit hard to re-arrange stuff after this, though) Fixed, moved the tripple instead so there wasn't much to change hue
6. 01:25:576 (6,7,8,9,10) - Again just a curve suggestion. Try to give this more curve in order this to fit better with your previous one? It kind of looks flat now which isn't really great if you ask me. Idk I like it the way it is, more curve would make it messy
7. 01:42:890 (1,2,3,4,1) - Patterns such as this were kind of dull due to the low spacing usage, I was kind of looking forward to a jumpy kiai which would've fit better I guess? Nonetheless it still plays awesome, I'd just give this pattern more spacing. Especially this and 01:38:775 (1,2,3) - Gave it more spacing
8. 01:53:004 (2) - Is it just me or does this slider look a bit more symmetrical if you move it a grid or two down? Try it! Sure
9. 01:53:518 (3) - Move this slider to x:188 y:232? It'd look a lot cooler and more symmetrical this way. Alright
10. 02:05:875 (7) - Same here, I'd move this to somewhere x:236 y:344 so it'd look better in editor, this way the spacing would look consistent if you judge it from 6's head. okay
11. 02:08:961 (8) - Emphasis this note with a NC? It feels kind of weird when this is in the same combo as 02:08:617 (7) - . (Would apply to all difficulties) you know i'm not a fan of this but yeah why the f not, it fits i guess

[Hard]

1. There's honestly not much to say here because it's really clean. I'd raise the Ar though, it feels really, really slow compared to the Insane, this isn't low bpm either so the raising part would make a lot of sense. 7,5 or 8, either way works for me. (if you use ar 8, +1 OD) AR8 and OD6.5 now
2. The other thing that bothered me here is the gap to Insane, it's not huge, but at the same time it's not perfect. Try to remove one or two (possibly more) of those repeat sliders and add triplets instead, I feel like it'd be a good way to introduce players to the streams Insane has. Now that the Hard has ONLY repeat sliders, it's kinda meh :s Replaced a few sliders with tripples

[Normal]

1. Hmm, same here, I'd go for the Ar raise. It feels so slow when the bpm is quite high and this normal has a lot of 1/2, would make sense to me. Sure, ar5 feels fine
2. 00:30:204 (1) - Transition would be better if this would be ''under'' the start of 3, like at x:140 y:136 but it still is good either way so.. I prefer to keep it this way
3. 01:17:175 (2,3) - Ehh, re-arranging 3 like this would make the pattern look better imho; http://puu.sh/b7f6F/36eb756d3a.jpg I think mine looks better though :c
4. 01:17:690 (3,4) - Just a small, small distance error here, really easy to fix! Fixed

[Ami's Easy]

1. +1 Ar if you agreed on the others Alright
2. 00:28:833 (2) - CTRL + H -> CTRL + G this slider, waves would look a ton better this way rather than your current one. I like the way it looks right now better
3. If you really want to keep the NC on your last note, remove it at 02:08:960 (1) - to be consistent! Fixed in the other diffs instead

All for now, good luck Kyshiro~

Ayu wrote:

modmodmod

Ami's Easy

1. 00:41:175 (1) - You should repeat this slider aswell. Is it worth breaking the pattern/rhythm consistency here for some variety? The song has the same feeling here as in the patterns before it, so the repeat would really fit according to that and the consistency of the patterns. I really don't see what's wrong with a note instead of a repeat, fits just fine
2. 01:38:775 (1,2) - Although (1) ends on the vocals and appears to follow the instruments, I'm not really sure what (2) is focussed on. It doesn't start on the vocals and it misses out on a lot of the instrumental beats. I'd rather see something like this, so you cover the dominant beats and have a little variety. The same applies to 01:42:890 (2) - as this is the same situation. Fixed
3. 02:07:589 (2) - This also sounds really out of place, because it just misses the actual string, but got emphasized with a whistle, so it kind of focusses nothing. Redid this part a bit

Normal

• Fixed all

1. 00:26:433 (3,4) - I'd rather see this being mapped a different way than the sudden 1/2, you've emphasized the music greatly in other situations in a less pressure-giving way. That also makes this a bit inconsistent, if you ask me.
2. 01:09:118 (2) - There's nothing wrong with following vocals, but it feels really sudden and it doesn't really make that much sense to change the focus to vocals in the midst of a pattern like this. You're missing out on a very dominant instrumental beat on the red tick here.
3. 01:40:147 (4) - This slider also appears to suffer from a wrong focus, since it also misses out on the vocals and on the instruments. I'd use something like this personally.

Hard

1. 00:24:718 (1) - Why did you emphasize this different than in the other patterns? It's pretty much the same. Also, why did you not cover the string sound? The feel here is the same as in the next situations, so it doesn't make a lot of sense to me. If you'd grow ears you'd hear it's mapped to the strings after all
2. 01:09:118 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - Are you sure you want to put more pressure on these with the circles? I guess I'd use the repeat sliders again for consistency, but that's rather a personal preference. It was a little too easy, I had only repeat sliders before
3. 02:00:732 (1) - I think the design of this would look really great if you use a horizontally flipped and reversed version of (2), like this Sure why not.

Insane

1. 00:24:718 (1) - 00:32:947 (1) - 00:35:690 (1) - 00:38:433 (1) - These are really asking for some more emphasizing. They feel a little bit left out, since some others make a nice jump and some objects in the pattern are also emphasized more than these. Putting jumps here would make great emphasizing that would go extremely well with the start of a new pattern. Fixed em all
2. 01:52:490 (1) - This is kind of the same thing, but this should also be emphasized more than it is now. The pattern before it already got emphasizing on something less dominant, so it almost seems disrespectful to leave the potential hanging around like a sloth here. This one is fine as it is, i also don't want to ruin the pattern i made here which i love

With a perfect map like this, you're just asking for small mods.

Kyshiro wrote:

If you'd grow ears you'd hear it's mapped to the strings after all