Hanatan - glow · forum

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-08T17:46:33+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 17, 2014 at 8:40:45 PM

Artist: Hanatan
Title: glow
Tags: VOCALOID Hatsune Miku -Neipezi -Kirito keeno
BPM: 85
Filesize: 4862kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:

-Neipezi's Hard (3.02 stars, 230 notes)
Normal (1.75 stars, 153 notes)

Download: Hanatan - glow
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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花たん - glow
First Map and first rank ~ !! ~ ^ω^
Hope you enjoy it ~ ^・ω・^

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Last edited by Xiaolin 2014-09-11T16:00:03+00:00, edited 181 times in total.

[FantasticMiku]

[FantasticMiku] 2014-01-09T19:32:06+00:00

Hard can you change the Overall Diff. to 6?

Love, Miku

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-09T19:37:12+00:00

[FantasticMiku] wrote:
Hard can you change the Overall Diff. to 6?

Love, Miku

Okie~ Updated.
The OD is better if it was 7. :3

Last edited by Xiaolin 2014-01-10T16:34:02+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[FantasticMiku]

[FantasticMiku] 2014-01-09T19:40:06+00:00

Ehm :3 00:11:611 Fix the Slider, pay attention to the rhythm :3

Love, Miku :3

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-09T19:41:09+00:00

[FantasticMiku] wrote:
Ehm :3 00:11:611 Fix the Slider, pay attention to the rhythm :3

Love, Miku :3

In which diff? o.o''

[FantasticMiku]

[FantasticMiku] 2014-01-09T19:42:37+00:00

Oh Sorry :O In Hard

Make it so. :3

CrashBattle

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CrashBattle 2014-01-09T20:38:00+00:00

[Normal] Slow bit more from 04.00s - 14.00s listen at rhythm, less one at slider 3rd at 12.00s and i don't understand about the hitsound when going up to 14s @.@

oh when i try this beatmap, music sound kill the hitsound ._. hitsound volume is too low than music sound, i don't know when i must click if i do hidden mods

Keep Fighting!!

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2014-01-10T00:04:14+00:00

Hi ~
Just pass by a awesome Hanatan's song and take a look <3

Btw , I think the timing of this song should be :

BPM : 85 (or 170)
offest : 00:03:013 -

SPOILER

you can try to set on this timing and listen , it will be better fit with rhythm

also , you can reference some ranked map with miku original ver. here

Good luck ~

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-10T15:41:49+00:00

[FantasticMiku] wrote:
Oh Sorry :O In Hard

Make it so. :3

The slider was at that timing when the overall 5. xD But fixed~
Thanks for modding~

Last edited by Xiaolin 2014-01-10T16:02:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-10T15:45:05+00:00

CrashBattle wrote:
[Normal] Slow bit more from 04.00s - 14.00s listen at rhythm, less one at slider 3rd at 12.00s and i don't understand about the hitsound when going up to 14s @.@ I don't get it.. More information please.
oh when i try this beatmap, music sound kill the hitsound ._. hitsound volume is too low than music sound, i don't know when i must click if i do hidden mods I'm not really good at making hitsounds. >.<'' But thanks for the information. c: Fixed~

Keep Fighting!!

Thanks for modding~

Last edited by Xiaolin 2014-01-10T16:02:25+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-10T15:47:53+00:00

leon1341414 wrote:
Hi ~
Just pass by a awesome Hanatan's song and take a look <3

Btw , I think the timing of this song should be :

BPM : 85 (or 170) Fixed~
offest : 00:03:013 -
Fixed~
SPOILER
Well, a big problem happen after I changed the timing. >.<'' Do I have to re-map it?

you can try to set on this timing and listen , it will be better fit with rhythm

also , you can reference some ranked map with miku original ver. here

Good luck ~

Thanks for modding~

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2014-01-10T16:15:16+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Well, a big problem happen after I changed the timing. >.<'' Do I have to re-map it?

Well , change BPM is a most major changing

so seems you need to do some adjustment or really re-map ;_;

but you will get a map with better correct timing , I think maybe it will be worth :3

Hope don't give up , you can do it

CrashBattle

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CrashBattle 2014-01-12T17:08:13+00:00

[Easy & Normal] i've fix some timing, well i can't say it perfect cause i just human i'm worst i know it..

the problem is timing when [Normal] 00.01.19 - 00.01.21 i don't know to deal with it

sorry
here is DL link for normal http://www.mediafire.com/view/mdmyvo4ykad6y04/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BNormal%5D.osu
here is DL link for easy http://www.mediafire.com/view/l254yld7yjk3chu/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
i just deal with timing, so for range i depend on u

i've try to play it really worst when use HR mod XD
u can try it, hope this's can help

Last edited by CrashBattle 2014-01-12T18:00:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

BigWilly

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BigWilly 2014-01-12T17:49:26+00:00

[Easy]

As this is Easy Increase the Circle Size

00:03:013 (1,1,1,1) - Look over the Timing of these Sliders. They are slightly off
00:40:071 (4) - Put the Repeat at the First Slider Tick
00:45:189 (4,5,6) - Please Check the Timing here
00:51:012 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick
00:57:718 (2) - Make this Slider more symmetrical
01:03:365 (6) - Bump is not in the Middle. Consider Changing
01:27:189 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick

Please Look over your Timing

Good Luck

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-13T11:51:46+00:00

CrashBattle wrote:
[Easy & Normal] i've fix some timing, well i can't say it perfect cause i just human i'm worst i know it.. the problem is timing when [Normal] 00.01.19 - 00.01.21 i don't know to deal with it sorry
here is DL link for normal http://www.mediafire.com/view/mdmyvo4ykad6y04/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BNormal%5D.osu
here is DL link for easy http://www.mediafire.com/view/l254yld7yjk3chu/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
i just deal with timing, so for range i depend on u i've try to play it really worst when use HR mod XD
u can try it, hope this's can help

Thank you very much ~ ! >w<

Updated~

Last edited by Xiaolin 2014-01-13T12:11:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lust

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Lust 2014-01-13T11:55:28+00:00

oh its this song :3

ganbatte, maybe ill finish my set sooner or later

CrashBattle

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CrashBattle 2014-01-13T12:04:08+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Thank you very much ~ ! >w<

Urwell but i'm just help less than 3% ._.

well 頑張ってね

Last edited by CrashBattle 2014-01-13T12:09:00+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-13T12:04:18+00:00

Feverie wrote:
[Easy]

As this is Easy Increase the Circle Size Nope, the CS is already fine, and if I increased it, I think its gonna be hard for the new players.

00:03:013 (1,1,1,1) - Look over the Timing of these Sliders. They are slightly off Ok~
00:40:071 (4) - Put the Repeat at the First Slider Tick Already added.
00:45:189 (4,5,6) - Please Check the Timing here Checked. :3
00:51:012 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick Already added.
00:57:718 (2) - Make this Slider more symmetrical Hmm, good idea.
01:03:365 (6) - Bump is not in the Middle. Consider Changing Ok.
01:27:189 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick Already added.

Please Look over your Timing

Good Luck

Thanks for modding!

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-19T12:22:26+00:00

Updated every mod. c:

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-20T13:38:12+00:00

Alright, map is ready to go for ranked and ready to have more mods~ o/

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-01-25T11:54:21+00:00

Lust wrote:
oh its this song :3

ganbatte, maybe ill finish my set sooner or later

Remind me to mod it after you finish it~ :3 GL ~ !

CrashBattle

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CrashBattle 2014-02-01T07:10:55+00:00

[Easy & Normal]
i've update some part, i think this's more better than before. ._.

Easy : http://www.mediafire.com/view/n523il56mjdi9vq/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
Normal : http://www.mediafire.com/view/2c1nvv2g2mm7gm6/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BNormal%5D.osu

i forget part i was edit ._. but just fix timing, my conversation is bad so just can mod like this

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-02-01T11:33:48+00:00

CrashBattle wrote:
[Easy & Normal]
i've update some part, i think this's more better than before. ._.

Easy : http://www.mediafire.com/view/n523il56mjdi9vq/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
Normal : http://www.mediafire.com/view/2c1nvv2g2mm7gm6/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BNormal%5D.osu

i forget part i was edit ._. but just fix timing, my conversation is bad so just can mod like this

Thanks Crash~ c: Updated.

- Melody

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- Melody 2014-02-02T14:36:18+00:00

IRC-Mod ~

♥

13:35 Lapis Aoki: Did you finish the IRC?
13:35 - Melody: Hm?
13:36 Lapis Aoki: The IRC mod wich you did ysterday.
13:36 Lapis Aoki: Yesterday*
13:36 - Melody: Did you fixed the spacings?
13:43 Lapis Aoki: What spacing? o.o''
13:43 Lapis Aoki: I forgot it I guess. >.<'' Sorry.
13:43 - Melody: The Distance Snap.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Oh.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Yes I did.
13:44 *- Melody is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/351970 Hanatan - glow [Easy]]
13:44 Lapis Aoki: Let's begin again.
13:44 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1) - Slider or Circles at blue ticks are difficult to hit for newbies
13:45 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1,2) - And also they have not the right Distance Snap
13:46 - Melody: Do it like this
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hfqo.jpg
13:46 - Melody: wait
13:46 - Melody: 00:57:616 -
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfsP.jpg *
13:47 Lapis Aoki: Gonna fix them.
13:47 - Melody: ok
13:49 - Melody: 00:59:483 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make them like this :
13:49 - Melody: 1. http://puu.sh/6HfAk.jpg
13:49 - Melody: 2. http://puu.sh/6HfBA.jpg
13:50 - Melody: 3. http://puu.sh/6HfCW.jpg
13:51 - Melody: 01:14:307 (5) - Why is this not snapped?
13:51 - Melody: Snap it on 01:15:718 -
13:52 - Melody: 01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Distance Snap !
13:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfK0.jpg
13:53 - Melody: 01:20:307 (1) - Let it end on the red tick 01:21:718 -
13:54 - Melody: 01:32:660 (1) - Ctrl + H
13:55 Lapis Aoki: http://tinypic.com/r/2ugz3n4/8 Is it fine if I did it like this.
13:55 Lapis Aoki: And I'll try to get all these modes together.
13:55 - Melody: 01:23:483 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Distance !
13:55 - Melody: Yes, its fine
13:55 - Melody: Tell me if you do it, then we can continue with normal.
13:56 Lapis Aoki: Ok, I'll start fixing them.
13:56 - Melody: Okay.
14:03 Lapis Aoki: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1303090
14:04 - Melody: Let it end on the white tick.
14:04 Lapis Aoki: Okay.
14:14 Lapis Aoki: Okay, done~
14:14 Lapis Aoki: We can now start with normal.
14:14 - Melody: Yes.
14:15 - Melody: 00:04:424 (1,2) - Do it like this ;
14:15 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgVo.jpg
14:15 - Melody: Looks better
14:16 - Melody: 00:05:836 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgWR.jpg
14:16 - Melody: 00:07:248 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgZt.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:08:660 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh09.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:10:071 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh1G.jpg
14:17 - Melody: ~ When you do this, it looks more beautiful and not messed up (:
14:18 - Melody: 00:11:483 (1,2,3) -
14:18 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh5h.jpg
14:19 - Melody: 00:20:307 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Use Distance Snap, player will think, that these are streams
14:20 - Melody: 00:43:954 (2,3,4) - ^
14:20 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hha8.jpg
14:21 - Melody: 01:02:307 (5) - Ctrl + J
14:21 - Melody: 01:04:071 (6) - Roate by +45°
14:22 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hhej.jpg
14:22 - Melody: It's better for the flow
14:22 - Melody: 01:04:777 (1,2,3) - They are not exactly stacked, fix it.
14:23 - Melody: 01:18:189 (2,3,4,5) - I dont like this shape, this looks better : http://puu.sh/6Hhhm.jpg
14:24 - Melody: Because of the curve.
14:24 - Melody: 01:19:777 (1) - Delete this, it doesn't fit in there & it's hard to hit a Circle on a blue tick for newbies.
14:24 - Melody: 01:22:071 (4) - Add Finish
14:25 - Melody: 01:28:071 (1) - Move it to the red tick at 01:28:071 - it's fit more in there
14:25 - Melody: 01:33:895 (3) - ^ (red tick!)
14:26 - Melody: 01:39:365 (1) - ^
14:26 - Melody: That was it with normal, call me back so we can continue with Hard
14:39 Lapis Aoki: Okay, ready for hard~ c:
14:42 Lapis Aoki: We can start now~
14:42 - Melody: Good.
14:43 - Melody: 00:03:365 (2,3,4) - Copy them
14:43 - Melody: & paste it to 00:04:777 -
14:43 - Melody: and make ctrl + h
14:43 - Melody: So it'll be similar
14:43 - Melody: 00:10:424 (1,2,3) - ctrl + g
14:43 - Melody: 00:07:601 (1,2,3) - ^
14:44 - Melody: 00:11:836 (1,2,3,4) - This looks ugly
14:44 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hij1.jpg
14:44 - Melody: This have more shape.
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:424 (1) - Cut this until this 00:13:777 - point
14:45 - Melody: and add a Circle here
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:954 -
14:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hin9.jpg
14:46 - Melody: 00:15:895 (7,1) - Move them to : x288 y272, for a blanket
14:47 - Melody: 00:16:071 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 00:17:130 -
14:47 - Melody: and make Ctrl + h
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hisy.jpg
14:48 - Melody: 00:16:954 (2) - is stacked with 00:18:012 (2) - in the screen
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiuM.jpg
14:50 - Melody: 00:32:483 (4) - make it like this for a better flow : http://puu.sh/6Hizw.jpg
14:51 - Melody: 00:43:954 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Fix the Distance Snap here
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiEH.jpg
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiFb.jpg
14:52 - Melody: 00:44:836 (7) - is stacked with 00:45:895 (2) -
14:52 - Melody: 00:50:307 (6,7) - Make them a little bit round to keep the flow to the next slider
14:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiJk.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:49:601 (5) - Make it like this, to have a good transition : http://puu.sh/6HiLL.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:51:189 (2) - ctrl + h
14:55 - Melody: And rotate it to +18°
14:55 - Melody: 00:51:718 (3,4) - Make here a curve to for the slider flow
14:55 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiQf.jpg
14:56 - Melody: 00:53:130 (6,7) - Curve http://puu.sh/6HiRQ.jpg
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Stack this with 01:19:954 (3) -
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Add Finish
14:57 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1) - NC
14:58 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1,2) - This doesn't flow with the previous Slider
14:58 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiYr.jpg
14:58 - Melody: That's much better
14:58 - Melody: 01:28:248 (7) - x336 y216 , same reason as above.
14:59 - Melody: 01:38:307 (5) - Cut this Slider : http://puu.sh/6Hj28.jpg

~Good Luck !

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-02-02T14:38:52+00:00

- Melody wrote:
IRC-Mod ~

♥
13:35 Lapis Aoki: Did you finish the IRC?
13:35 - Melody: Hm?
13:36 Lapis Aoki: The IRC mod wich you did ysterday.
13:36 Lapis Aoki: Yesterday*
13:36 - Melody: Did you fixed the spacings?
13:43 Lapis Aoki: What spacing? o.o''
13:43 Lapis Aoki: I forgot it I guess. >.<'' Sorry.
13:43 - Melody: The Distance Snap.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Oh.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Yes I did.
13:44 *- Melody is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/351970 Hanatan - glow [Easy]]
13:44 Lapis Aoki: Let's begin again.
13:44 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1) - Slider or Circles at blue ticks are difficult to hit for newbies
13:45 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1,2) - And also they have not the right Distance Snap
13:46 - Melody: Do it like this
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hfqo.jpg
13:46 - Melody: wait
13:46 - Melody: 00:57:616 -
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfsP.jpg *
13:47 Lapis Aoki: Gonna fix them.
13:47 - Melody: ok
13:49 - Melody: 00:59:483 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make them like this :
13:49 - Melody: 1. http://puu.sh/6HfAk.jpg
13:49 - Melody: 2. http://puu.sh/6HfBA.jpg
13:50 - Melody: 3. http://puu.sh/6HfCW.jpg
13:51 - Melody: 01:14:307 (5) - Why is this not snapped?
13:51 - Melody: Snap it on 01:15:718 -
13:52 - Melody: 01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Distance Snap !
13:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfK0.jpg
13:53 - Melody: 01:20:307 (1) - Let it end on the red tick 01:21:718 -
13:54 - Melody: 01:32:660 (1) - Ctrl + H
13:55 Lapis Aoki: http://tinypic.com/r/2ugz3n4/8 Is it fine if I did it like this.
13:55 Lapis Aoki: And I'll try to get all these modes together.
13:55 - Melody: 01:23:483 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Distance !
13:55 - Melody: Yes, its fine
13:55 - Melody: Tell me if you do it, then we can continue with normal.
13:56 Lapis Aoki: Ok, I'll start fixing them.
13:56 - Melody: Okay.
14:03 Lapis Aoki: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1303090
14:04 - Melody: Let it end on the white tick.
14:04 Lapis Aoki: Okay.
14:14 Lapis Aoki: Okay, done~
14:14 Lapis Aoki: We can now start with normal.
14:14 - Melody: Yes.
14:15 - Melody: 00:04:424 (1,2) - Do it like this ;
14:15 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgVo.jpg
14:15 - Melody: Looks better
14:16 - Melody: 00:05:836 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgWR.jpg
14:16 - Melody: 00:07:248 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgZt.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:08:660 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh09.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:10:071 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh1G.jpg
14:17 - Melody: ~ When you do this, it looks more beautiful and not messed up (:
14:18 - Melody: 00:11:483 (1,2,3) -
14:18 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh5h.jpg
14:19 - Melody: 00:20:307 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Use Distance Snap, player will think, that these are streams
14:20 - Melody: 00:43:954 (2,3,4) - ^
14:20 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hha8.jpg
14:21 - Melody: 01:02:307 (5) - Ctrl + J
14:21 - Melody: 01:04:071 (6) - Roate by +45°
14:22 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hhej.jpg
14:22 - Melody: It's better for the flow
14:22 - Melody: 01:04:777 (1,2,3) - They are not exactly stacked, fix it.
14:23 - Melody: 01:18:189 (2,3,4,5) - I dont like this shape, this looks better : http://puu.sh/6Hhhm.jpg
14:24 - Melody: Because of the curve.
14:24 - Melody: 01:19:777 (1) - Delete this, it doesn't fit in there & it's hard to hit a Circle on a blue tick for newbies.
14:24 - Melody: 01:22:071 (4) - Add Finish
14:25 - Melody: 01:28:071 (1) - Move it to the red tick at 01:28:071 - it's fit more in there
14:25 - Melody: 01:33:895 (3) - ^ (red tick!)
14:26 - Melody: 01:39:365 (1) - ^
14:26 - Melody: That was it with normal, call me back so we can continue with Hard
14:39 Lapis Aoki: Okay, ready for hard~ c:
14:42 Lapis Aoki: We can start now~
14:42 - Melody: Good.
14:43 - Melody: 00:03:365 (2,3,4) - Copy them
14:43 - Melody: & paste it to 00:04:777 -
14:43 - Melody: and make ctrl + h
14:43 - Melody: So it'll be similar
14:43 - Melody: 00:10:424 (1,2,3) - ctrl + g
14:43 - Melody: 00:07:601 (1,2,3) - ^
14:44 - Melody: 00:11:836 (1,2,3,4) - This looks ugly
14:44 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hij1.jpg
14:44 - Melody: This have more shape.
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:424 (1) - Cut this until this 00:13:777 - point
14:45 - Melody: and add a Circle here
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:954 -
14:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hin9.jpg
14:46 - Melody: 00:15:895 (7,1) - Move them to : x288 y272, for a blanket
14:47 - Melody: 00:16:071 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 00:17:130 -
14:47 - Melody: and make Ctrl + h
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hisy.jpg
14:48 - Melody: 00:16:954 (2) - is stacked with 00:18:012 (2) - in the screen
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiuM.jpg
14:50 - Melody: 00:32:483 (4) - make it like this for a better flow : http://puu.sh/6Hizw.jpg
14:51 - Melody: 00:43:954 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Fix the Distance Snap here
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiEH.jpg
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiFb.jpg
14:52 - Melody: 00:44:836 (7) - is stacked with 00:45:895 (2) -
14:52 - Melody: 00:50:307 (6,7) - Make them a little bit round to keep the flow to the next slider
14:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiJk.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:49:601 (5) - Make it like this, to have a good transition : http://puu.sh/6HiLL.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:51:189 (2) - ctrl + h
14:55 - Melody: And rotate it to +18°
14:55 - Melody: 00:51:718 (3,4) - Make here a curve to for the slider flow
14:55 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiQf.jpg
14:56 - Melody: 00:53:130 (6,7) - Curve http://puu.sh/6HiRQ.jpg
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Stack this with 01:19:954 (3) -
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Add Finish
14:57 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1) - NC
14:58 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1,2) - This doesn't flow with the previous Slider
14:58 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiYr.jpg
14:58 - Melody: That's much better
14:58 - Melody: 01:28:248 (7) - x336 y216 , same reason as above.
14:59 - Melody: 01:38:307 (5) - Cut this Slider : http://puu.sh/6Hj28.jpg
06:36 Lapis Aoki: Done hard~
~Good Luck !

Thanks - Melody! I fixed some of your mod. :3 It was really helpful.

Updated~

minyeob

osu! Alumni

2,540 posts

Joined May 2008

minyeob 2014-02-02T19:32:39+00:00

Hanatan rocks~~

[Easy]
01:23:483 (3) - I think you should add New combo on here :p

[Hard]
00:14:307 (3) - Maybe New combo on here. (Suggestion)
01:27:012 (8) - Timing is wrong I think D: I sugeest making this 1/4 beat longer. It should be end on 1:28:424
01:28:248 (9) - Delete this if you extended 01:27:012 (8)

and add a note on 01:28:777

Good luck

Boncho

91 posts

Joined October 2011

Boncho 2014-02-03T13:29:37+00:00

Hey, from my Queue~

Easy

00:14:307 (5,1,2,3) - use Distance Snap!
00:47:483 add a circle
00:47:836 add a circle
00:47:836 (1,2,3,4) - place them on 00:48:189
00:46:424 (6) - extend slider till 00:47:483
00:53:130 (3) - shorten slider till 00:53:660
00:54:189 (4,5) - there are many messy parts on your beatmap like this part. I would recommend you to do this and the same parts like this:

Normal

Change Circle Size to 3!
00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Distance Snap!
01:26:660 (5,1) - ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^
01:39:365 (1) - remove NC
01:40:424 (3) - NC
please set kiai time at 01:24:895
please end kiai time at 01:47:483
Fix all your timing Sections!

good luck!~

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-03T15:05:25+00:00

minyeob wrote:
Hanatan rocks~~

[Easy]
01:23:483 (3) - I think you should add New combo on here :p Umm.. Sorry but nope.

[Hard]
00:14:307 (3) - Maybe New combo on here. (Suggestion) Nope.
01:27:012 (8) - Timing is wrong I think D: I sugeest making this 1/4 beat longer. It should be end on 1:28:424 Fixed.
01:28:248 (9) - Delete this if you extended 01:27:012 (8) and add a note on 01:28:777 Fixed.

Good luck

Thanks for modding min~ ! c:

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-03T15:19:35+00:00

Bonch0 wrote:
Hey, from my Queue~
Easy

00:14:307 (5,1,2,3) - use Distance Snap! Ok.
00:47:483 add a circle Ok.
00:47:836 add a circle Here is already a slider, so no.
00:47:836 (1,2,3,4) - place them on 00:48:189 Nope, its looks fine like this.
00:46:424 (6) - extend slider till 00:47:483 Sorry, but no.
00:53:130 (3) - shorten slider till 00:53:660 Fixed.
00:54:189 (4,5) - there are many messy parts on your beatmap like this part. I would recommend you to do this and the same parts like this:

Fixed.
Normal

Change Circle Size to 3! Nah. Its already fine like that. :3
00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Distance Snap! Okay~
01:26:660 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:39:365 (1) - remove NC Fixed.
01:40:424 (3) - NC Fixed.
please set kiai time at 01:24:895 Nope.
please end kiai time at 01:47:483 The finish dosen't start at that time, so no.
Fix all your timing Sections! Okay, I'll try my best~ ^^

good luck!~

Thanks for modding~

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2014-02-04T14:39:04+00:00

y u no poke me earlier ;w;;;~~i won't bite~~

[Kirito's Hard]
00:04:071 (4,1) - You could make a jump here to represent the heavier beat
00:05:483 (2,1) - ^
00:07:954 (4,1) - ^Yup, this is what I am talking about
00:09:718 (4,5) - ^
00:11:483 (1) - ^
00:13:954 (4) - http://puu.sh/6JFcd.jpg This could help the flow, (4) Copied from 00:13:601 (3) -
00:23:483 (3,1) - You could make the distance smaller as it is a 1/2 beat but the origin distance is same as previous 1/1 beat >00:22:777 (1,2,3) -
00:28:424 (1,2,3,4) - Some creative pattern would be nice

Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFj3.jpg
00:31:601 (2) - Maybe you should consider adding a note here, the missing beat is just tricking players
00:39:365 (5,1) - This isn't nice to play

. but I don't think anything is wrong tho, just forget about it
00:45:365 (1,2) - Copy and Paste the same curve slider
00:49:954 (4,5) - I don't think pattern like this fit slow song... but... nevermind :p nothing wrong too just imo
00:57:718 (1,2,3,4,1) - Suggest something like this, you should follow the NC in it tho, http://puu.sh/6JFsn.jpg
00:59:307 (8) - A normal triple will do well here
01:07:954 (1) - Suggest you put it below 01:07:248 (5) - rather on upper level of it http://puu.sh/6JFw7.jpg
01:13:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggest something like this, could be better to play http://puu.sh/6JFy2.jpg
01:16:071 (6) - Stacking on 01:16:424 (1) - would be nicer

01:17:836 (1) - Remove NC
01:18:365 (2) - NC as the distance of notes increased
01:34:071 (2) - CTRL G to match 01:34:601 (1)
01:36:895 (2,3) - Avoid contact, bigger spacing will help

[Normal]
00:03:013 (1) - Why not?

http://puu.sh/6JFKB.jpg
00:04:424 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved
00:05:836 (1,2,1) - ^
00:07:248 (1,2) - ^
00:10:424 (2,1,2) - doesn't look nice tho, use 00:10:071 (1) as a centre circle, 00:10:071 (1,2) - Increase the distance between them same as 00:11:836 (2) - , then make a big bracket , best if you could avoid any overlapping on sliders Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFTD.jpg
00:13:424 (3) - NC, CTRL G, Remove 1 repeat
00:13:954 (4) - Add a note stacking 00:14:307 (5) -
00:16:777 (3) - You could Copy and Paste 00:14:660 (1) - , then CTRL H > CTRL G to make the slider match each other like a pair
00:17:836 (4,5,6) - Suggest this http://puu.sh/6JFZc.jpg
00:31:248 (1) - You should start your map here as this is the first beat of the rhythm, adding a note will do well
00:33:012 (2) - A larger distance will help alot here, its a 1/1 but the distance is just same as 1/2 00:34:071 (3,4) -
00:34:071 (3) - NC
00:38:307 (2,3) - Same as 00:33:012 (2)
00:39:718 (3) - NC
00:42:189 (1) - This will really confuse player...
00:45:012 (1) - Change the slider curve to down as to match the angel you cut in from previous note http://puu.sh/6JG6Q.jpg
00:47:836 (4) - NC
00:49:601 (5) - Spacing problem like the previous I noticed
01:04:071 (6,1) - Bad flow
01:05:483 (3,5) - Why don't just copy and paste one and another?
01:11:130 (2,4) - Avoid any overlap between sliders
01:13:601 (5) - NC
01:21:718 (2) - Suggest not to stack
01:23:483 (1,2) - Better blanket could be apply
01:24:895 (3) - NC for Kiai Time
01:26:660 (5) - 2x repeat doesn't fit
01:30:542 (5) - NC here instead of 01:31:601 (1) - here
01:32:307 (2) - Same as the previous slider I said, 2x repeat doesn't fit
01:37:954 (5) -
01:40:424 (1) - NC
01:41:836 (1) - NC

hanatan <33 huhu

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-04T16:37:08+00:00

_AI wrote:
y u no poke me earlier ;w;;;~~i won't bite~~

[Normal]
00:03:013 (1) - Why not? http://puu.sh/6JFKB.jpg Ok, fixed. :3
00:04:424 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved Nope.
00:05:836 (1,2,1) - ^ ^
00:07:248 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:10:424 (2,1,2) - doesn't look nice tho, use 00:10:071 (1) as a centre circle, 00:10:071 (1,2) - Increase the distance between them same as 00:11:836 (2) - , then make a big bracket , best if you could avoid any overlapping on sliders Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFTD.jpg Ok.
00:13:424 (3) - NC, CTRL G, Remove 1 repeat I prefer it with 2 repeat.
00:13:954 (4) - Add a note stacking 00:14:307 (5) - Its gonna be hard for the people who just started playing normal.
00:16:777 (3) - You could Copy and Paste 00:14:660 (1) - , then CTRL H > CTRL G to make the slider match each other like a pair Fixed.
00:17:836 (4,5,6) - Suggest this http://puu.sh/6JFZc.jpg Fixed.
00:31:248 (1) - You should start your map here as this is the first beat of the rhythm, adding a note will do well Added.
00:33:012 (2) - A larger distance will help alot here, its a 1/1 but the distance is just same as 1/2 00:34:071 (3,4) - Ok.
00:34:071 (3) - NC Ok.
00:38:307 (2,3) - Same as 00:33:012 (2) Fixed.
00:39:718 (3) - NC Ok.
00:42:189 (1) - This will really confuse player... Ok, I fixed that part. :3
00:45:012 (1) - Change the slider curve to down as to match the angel you cut in from previous note http://puu.sh/6JG6Q.jpg Fixed.
00:47:836 (4) - NC Ok.
00:49:601 (5) - Spacing problem like the previous I noticed Fixed the problem. x3
01:04:071 (6,1) - Bad flow Seems perfect to me, if people complained about it, I'll try to deal with it.
01:05:483 (3,5) - Why don't just copy and paste one and another? Ok, I fixed it. >o<
01:11:130 (2,4) - Avoid any overlap between sliders Ok.
01:13:601 (5) - NC Ok.
01:21:718 (2) - Suggest not to stack The stack is fine in this part. :/

01:23:483 (1,2) - Better blanket could be apply Ok.
01:24:895 (3) - NC for Kiai Time Ok.
01:26:660 (5) - 2x repeat doesn't fit It fits.
01:30:542 (5) - NC here instead of 01:31:601 (1) - here Ok.
01:32:307 (2) - Same as the previous slider I said, 2x repeat doesn't fit It does fit. >w>''
01:37:954 (5) - ..
01:40:424 (1) - NC Ok.
01:41:836 (1) - NC ^

hanatan <33 huhu

Thanks AI~! I'll tell Kirito-kun to fix his diff. c:

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-02-05T11:11:34+00:00

_AI

_AI wrote:
y u no poke me earlier ;w;;;~~i won't bite~~

[Kirito's Hard]
00:04:071 (4,1) - You could make a jump here to represent the heavier beat ok
00:05:483 (2,1) - ^ ^
00:07:954 (4,1) - ^Yup, this is what I am talking about ^
00:09:718 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:11:483 (1) - ^ ^
00:13:954 (4) - http://puu.sh/6JFcd.jpg This could help the flow, (4) Copied from 00:13:601 (3) - ^
00:23:483 (3,1) - You could make the distance smaller as it is a 1/2 beat but the origin distance is same as previous 1/1 beat >00:22:777 (1,2,3) - it sounds like a drum and clap sounds.
00:28:424 (1,2,3,4) - Some creative pattern would be nice Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFj3.jpg change
00:31:601 (2) - Maybe you should consider adding a note here, the missing beat is just tricking players 00:31:601 - circle add
00:39:365 (5,1) - This isn't nice to play . but I don't think anything is wrong tho, just forget about it hmm, ok
00:45:365 (1,2) - Copy and Paste the same curve slider nope..
00:49:954 (4,5) - I don't think pattern like this fit slow song... but... nevermind :p nothing wrong too just imo change the circle
00:57:718 (1,2,3,4,1) - Suggest something like this, you should follow the NC in it tho, http://puu.sh/6JFsn.jpg Fixed!
00:59:307 (8) - A normal triple will do well here nope
01:07:954 (1) - Suggest you put it below 01:07:248 (5) - rather on upper level of it http://puu.sh/6JFw7.jpg oh, so good
01:13:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggest something like this, could be better to play http://puu.sh/6JFy2.jpg ^
01:16:071 (6) - Stacking on 01:16:424 (1) - would be nicer
01:17:836 (1) - Remove NC nope
01:18:365 (2) - NC as the distance of notes increased nope
01:34:071 (2) - CTRL G to match 01:34:601 (1) fixed
01:36:895 (2,3) - Avoid contact, bigger spacing will help x1.2 change

hanatan <33 huhu

thank you for modding

change code

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Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-05T12:00:27+00:00

Updated.

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-02-05T12:09:45+00:00

Your mod was't very helpful, so fast check
[Easy]
00:03:013 (1) - It's unreadable for newbies, make it like 00:04:777 (1) -
00:04:777 (1,1,1) - remove NCs
00:11:836 (1) - delete, it's too hard for newbies
00:14:307 (5,1) - you should you DS in ALL diff
00:34:424 (3) - keep the same Slider Velocity in all diff, remove this green point and remap that moment/slider
00:45:012 (4) - DS again.check the whole diff, you should use DS
00:57:718 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable
01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard
01:32:660 (1) - unreadable
01:40:424 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable
and again.. check all diff. if you don't use DS in some moments, you should fix it

[Normal]
00:39:718 (3) - Should I say you about DS again?
00:42:189 (1) - same as in Easy
01:41:836 (5) - ^

You have a lot of unreadable and unrankable things, I listed it up. now check your diffs and fix it

[Hard]
no problems

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-05T13:43:25+00:00

AlexaBM wrote:
Your mod was't very helpful, so fast check
[Easy]
00:03:013 (1) - It's unreadable for newbies, make it like 00:04:777 (1) - If I made it like that, it won't fit the timing.
00:04:777 (1,1,1) - remove NCs Ok.
00:11:836 (1) - delete, it's too hard for newbies I don't think its gonna be hard..
00:14:307 (5,1) - you should you DS in ALL diff I already did it before.
00:34:424 (3) - keep the same Slider Velocity in all diff, remove this green point and remap that moment/slider Nah, its fine like that, and if I did it, the slider will be so long, and also, if I did it I have to add short sliders and it'll be harder
00:45:012 (4) - DS again.check the whole diff, you should use DS Ok, fixed.
00:57:718 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable It seems fine, maybe I'll change it if there's another person complained about it. >.<
01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard I dunno, but I checked the nano ver. and it was the same thing.
01:32:660 (1) - unreadable I'll try to fix.
01:40:424 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable Its fine.
and again.. check all diff. if you don't use DS in some moments, you should fix it I checked all the DS with Melody when we were doing the IRC mod.

[Normal]
00:39:718 (3) - Should I say you about DS again? I'll see what I can do.. >.<''
00:42:189 (1) - same as in Easy Ok.
01:41:836 (5) - ^ It will be a long slider. D:

You have a lot of unreadable and unrankable things, I listed it up. now check your diffs and fix it

[Hard]
no problems

Thanks Alexa! I'll try me best to fix everything.

Winek

888 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2014-02-05T17:15:45+00:00

Yeah my first map out of 25

IRC mod :3

16:24 Winek: Wanna IRC?
16:25 Lapis Aoki: Maybe yes.
16:25 Winek: awright :3
16:25 Lapis Aoki: If your modding hard, please do it with -Kirito
16:25 Winek: awright
16:25 Winek: then let's start with Easy.
16:26 Winek: That's what im the best for .-.
16:26 Lapis Aoki: Same here~

16:27 Winek: 00:06:189 (1) - This note could start like at 00:05:836 and add a reverse arrow. What do you think about it?
16:27 Lapis Aoki: Let's test it.
16:27 Winek: I would make a little like the first note 00:03:013 (1) -
16:29 Winek: how's it?
16:36 Winek: gosh my internet ><
16:37 Winek: are you der
16:38 Winek: gosh my internet
16:38 Winek: sorry, it crapped >///////<
16:38 Lapis Aoki: Gtg, but keep your IRC mod.
16:39 Winek: awright ._.
16:39 Winek: 00:08:660 - don't know if it's on purpose, but this blank space is kinda wrong..
16:40 Winek: 00:09:365 (1,2) - You should really use DS ><
16:41 Winek: 00:17:483 (1,2,3) - At this part, the 3 circle get repetitive. Why not change 1 or 2 into 1/2 slider + reverse arrow, or even 1/1 slider.
16:42 Winek: 00:38:307 (2,3) - Here you let a little space between the 2 and 3.
16:42 Winek: 00:43:954 (3,4) - Do the same here? Just remove the reverse arrow and move it.
16:43 Winek: 00:47:836 (1) - Same here. Also, something that disgust me is when a downbeat is inside a slider >< Sorry if i look rude
16:44 Winek: You should just make it 1/3
16:44 Winek: Oops, i mean 1/2.
16:45 Winek: 00:53:130 (3) - This one shouldn't be following the drums. the best is to expend it to the next downbeat.
16:47 Winek: As if you don't expend, 00:54:189 (4) - will look kind of weird, and confusing.
16:48 Winek: 01:24:542 (4,5) - While you have opportunities, blanket. It make the map prettier, and more adept to be Modded by BATS.
16:49 Winek: oh btw the "Glow" at the end.
16:49 Winek: Center it, it's a bit off.
16:49 Winek: I mean, i think. Not sure.
16:50 Winek: Wait, drop it. It just look different in "Desing" Tab..
16:50 Winek: Now For -Normal-
16:51 Winek: 00:04:424 (1) - I think ya should remove New combo.
16:51 Winek: At least 4 notes should be in the same combo for the start.. i think.
16:52 Winek: 00:13:424 (3,4) - This get a bit hard for Normal players, you know.
16:52 Winek: Just remove 4 and add a reverse arrow, it shoulda be fine
16:53 Winek: 00:31:601 (1) - I really do not think this need a NC
16:53 Winek: 00:34:777 (5) - Not sure, but you could make this form prettier
16:54 Winek: 00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Wrong spacing like that can confuse player
16:55 Winek: You don't use DS enough... It's somehow consfusing. I also see many mod telling you about that..
16:55 Winek: 01:26:660 (5) - Think it deserve only 1 reverse arrow, and a circle to finish downbeat.
16:56 Winek: Well, I'll post the Hard in the thread.

For me i checked Hard, It look clean. So good luck about it! Btw *star* since ~~i don't give a crap about kudosu~~ Your map is really great

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-02-06T14:38:00+00:00

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Sorry for the late mod

[Easy]
Spacing and DS should be remained constant, also try arrange them with Tiny grid size
00:03:013 (1,1) - Confusing pattern, they overlapped too
00:04:777 (1,1,1) - Remove their NC
00:09:012 - Missed note here (guitar)
00:10:424 - ^
00:12:895 (4) - Make it stop at 00:13:601 -
00:14:660 (1) - As usual, no jumps for Easy and Normal
00:16:071 (1) - Inconsistency DS
00:17:483 (1) - ^
00:20:307 (1) - ^ Use Grid size: Tiny and then arrange them properly
00:20:660 (2) - This can be at middle line if you agree with it
00:31:954 (1,2,3) - Suggest to remove them
^ If you insist to keep them make 00:34:424 (3) - spaced properly at 1.0x DS before turning it into 0.5x, and also NC it
I personally don't suggest slowed down SV for Easy
00:36:895 (1) - Same point as mods above on the spacing
00:45:012 (4) - No jump
00:47:836 (1) - Inconsistency DS, space it with Tiny grid size
00:53:836 - Missing note
00:54:542 - Missing beat and vocal
00:57:718 (2) - Not suggesting slowed down DS, if you insist NC it and DS it in 1.0x SV
00:59:483 (3,4) - No jump
01:03:012 (7) - ^
01:05:130 (1) - Remain the same DS which is 1.0x from the beginning
01:18:189 - Extra hit at here
01:19:601 - Missing vocal
01:24:895 (5) - NC for KIAI
01:36:542 (4) - NC
01:40:424 (2) - No point slowing down here tho, NC it for SV change

[Normal]
Spacing and flow is important, take a close look at them
Try to make no jumps and constant DS for Normal diff, means remain 0.96x - 1.04x DS if you're using 1.0x DS
00:13:424 (3) - NC for constant
00:13:954 (4) - There's a jump here
00:14:307 (5) - NC here, remove NC at 00:14:660 (1) -
00:31:601 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:071 (3) - NC here
00:37:601 - Missing beat and vocal
00:40:071 - Vocal
00:42:189 (1) - Bad flow
00:47:483 (3) - DS
00:57:895 (2) - ^
01:04:777 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:130 (2) - NC here
00:39:718 (3) - DS is important
01:12:542 (4) - A part of the slider border overlapped with 01:11:130 (2) -
01:16:424 (1) - No jump
01:19:601 - Missing vocal
01:20:307 - Vocal should be at here
01:21:012 - ^
01:23:483 (1,2) - Suggest to remove
01:24:895 (3) - NC for KIAI
01:26:660 (5) - Bad flow, I dont like many reverses
01:28:071 (1) - No jump
01:29:130 (3) - ^
01:33:718 (3) - ^
01:34:777 (1) - ^ Applies
01:36:189 (3) - NC
01:37:954 (5) - Prevent overlapping with 01:36:189 (3) -
01:39:365 (1) - No jump
01:40:424 (3,4,5) - This isn't symmetry, try at center like and make them reflected
01:41:836 (5) - No point slowing down but, NC it if you want to

[-Kirito's Hard]
Good and ok to play, maybe there can be more creative? >.<? Not sure, keep it if you want to, it's nice
00:16:777 (5) - Unstack this, place above 00:17:130 (1) - might make better flow
00:21:718 (4) - Place at tail of 00:20:660 (2) -
00:24:718 (3,4,5) - I prefer to switch their place with 00:25:071 (6) -
00:25:248 (7,8) - ^ If you do, swap them too
00:47:130 (4) - Place below 00:47:483 (5) -
01:05:660 - Missing vocal?
01:06:365 - Note here
01:07:071 - Vocal
01:17:483 (4) - Stack with 01:16:424 (1) - (optional)

Hope they helped

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-06T17:06:18+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Sorry for the late mod

[Easy]
Spacing and DS should be remained constant, also try arrange them with Tiny grid size Alright~ :3
00:03:013 (1,1) - Confusing pattern, they overlapped too Okay, I'll try to fix.
00:04:777 (1,1,1) - Remove their NC Ok.
00:09:012 - Missed note here (guitar) I don't get it.
00:10:424 - ^ ^
00:12:895 (4) - Make it stop at 00:13:601 - Fixed.
00:14:660 (1) - As usual, no jumps for Easy and Normal I'll try to make it a slider.
00:16:071 (1) - Inconsistency DS Fixed.
00:17:483 (1) - ^ ^
00:20:307 (1) - ^ Use Grid size: Tiny and then arrange them properly ^
00:20:660 (2) - This can be at middle line if you agree with it Ok.
00:31:954 (1,2,3) - Suggest to remove them Why? Its seems perfect.
^ If you insist to keep them make 00:34:424 (3) - spaced properly at 1.0x DS before turning it into 0.5x, and also NC it Ok.
I personally don't suggest slowed down SV for Easy Ok.
00:36:895 (1) - Same point as mods above on the spacing Ok.
00:45:012 (4) - No jump Nope.
00:47:836 (1) - Inconsistency DS, space it with Tiny grid size Ok.
00:53:836 - Missing note I'll just make the slider long till that time. :3
00:54:542 - Missing beat and vocal Trying to fix.
00:57:718 (2) - Not suggesting slowed down DS, if you insist NC it and DS it in 1.0x SV Ok.
00:59:483 (3,4) - No jump Its seems fine like that.
01:03:012 (7) - ^ ^
01:05:130 (1) - Remain the same DS which is 1.0x from the beginning Ok.
01:18:189 - Extra hit at here Nope.
01:19:601 - Missing vocal Trying to fix.
01:24:895 (5) - NC for KIAI Ok.
01:36:542 (4) - NC ^
01:40:424 (2) - No point slowing down here tho, NC it for SV change Ok.

[Normal]
Spacing and flow is important, take a close look at them
Try to make no jumps and constant DS for Normal diff, means remain 0.96x - 1.04x DS if you're using 1.0x DS
00:13:424 (3) - NC for constant Ok.
00:13:954 (4) - There's a jump here Nope, seems fine to me.
00:14:307 (5) - NC here, remove NC at 00:14:660 (1) - Ok.
00:31:601 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:34:071 (3) - NC here ^
00:37:601 - Missing beat and vocal Ok.
00:40:071 - Vocal ^
00:42:189 (1) - Bad flow Gonna try to fix.
00:47:483 (3) - DS Fixed.
00:57:895 (2) - ^ ^
01:04:777 (1) - Remove NC Ok.
01:05:130 (2) - NC here Ok.
00:39:718 (3) - DS is important Just like what Alexa said,fixed.
01:12:542 (4) - A part of the slider border overlapped with 01:11:130 (2) - Ok.
01:16:424 (1) - No jump Nope.
01:19:601 - Missing vocal Ok.
01:20:307 - Vocal should be at here Ok.
01:21:012 - ^ ^
01:23:483 (1,2) - Suggest to remove Nope, It'll be a long space.
01:24:895 (3) - NC for KIAI Ok.
01:26:660 (5) - Bad flow, I dont like many reverses Ok.
01:28:071 (1) - No jump Nope.
01:29:130 (3) - ^ ^
01:33:718 (3) - ^ ^
01:34:777 (1) - ^ Applies ^
01:36:189 (3) - NC Ok.
01:37:954 (5) - Prevent overlapping with 01:36:189 (3) - Ok.
01:39:365 (1) - No jump Nope.
01:40:424 (3,4,5) - This isn't symmetry, try at center like and make them reflected Ok.
01:41:836 (5) - No point slowing down but, NC it if you want to Ok.

Hope they helped

Thanks Rakuen ~ ! It helped alot. :3

Yoeri

433 posts

Joined March 2012

Yoeri 2014-02-06T20:17:59+00:00

[General]
In the storyboard it says "Original Artist: Hatsune Miku". Miku is technically not an artist, but an instrument. The original artist is keeno.
01:24:895 - Unsnapped section.
01:34:424 - Remove section.
01:36:189 - ^
01:40:071 - ^
01:47:483 - Unsnapped section.

[Easy]
You should probably get rid of the slider velocity changes in this diff.
00:03:013 (1) - Make this a circle followed by a slider with one return.
00:14:307 (5,1) - Fix spacing.
00:21:365 (1) - If you're going to have a spinner, you should probably start it at 00:22:777.
00:33:365 (3) - Doesn't feel very fitting to have a slider of this length here.
00:43:954 (3,4) - Fix spacing. Maybe by putting the sliderend on (5).
00:47:483 (7,1) - Fix spacing a bit.
00:53:130 (3) - Doesn't play well.
00:55:601 (6,1) - Fix spacing.
00:59:483 (3) - New combo probably. Also spacing is very inconsistent in this part.
00:59:836 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing?
01:06:189 (2,3) - Not a very good blanket.
01:14:307 (5) - Fix spacing.
01:24:895 (5,6) - Blanket the end of (5)?
01:27:012 (1) - Try making this a symmetrical wave slider.
01:32:660 (1) - Please avoid using using kicksliders in an Easy. It's not very fitting either.
01:40:424 (2) - Slider should start at 01:41:483.
01:43:777 (1) - Start spinner at 01:43:954.

[Normal]
AR 4 please.
00:04:424 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Blankets here could be better.
00:10:071 (1,2) - ^
00:13:424 (3,4) - Very confusing. Point (3) upwards and fix the spacing.
00:13:954 (4,5,1) - Fix spacing.
00:31:601 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:012 (2,3) - Pretty bad blanket.
00:34:777 (5) - Not sure what to say about this slider. You could patch up the curves a bit. http://puu.sh/6MjaM.jpg
00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing.
00:42:189 (1) - Unfitting kickslider.
00:47:836 (4) - Make this more symmetrical.
00:50:660 (1,2) - Kind of bad blanket.
00:53:483 (3,5) - Make symmetrical.
00:56:660 (1) - This just looks bad. Just use a round slider or something.
00:59:836 (2,4,5) - ^
01:05:483 (3,5) - ^
01:11:130 (2) - Try making the curve more round.
01:12:542 (4) - ^ Also avoid the overlap.
01:13:601 (5) - Again, try a symmetrical wave slider.
01:14:660 (6,1) - Fix spacing.
01:19:954 (1) - Start slider at 01:20:660.
01:23:483 (1,2) - Try blanketing (2).
01:25:954 (4,5) - Blanket looks kind of bad. (5) being a kickslider is also rather unfitting.
01:26:660 (5,2,3) - Fix spacing.
01:29:130 (3,4) - Could be a blanket.
01:31:601 (1,2) - Also bad blankets, and (2) is another unfitting kickslider.
01:34:071 (4,1) - Fix spacing.
01:37:248 (4,5) - Same as before. Bad blankets and unfitting kickslider.
01:39:718 (2,3) - This blanket could be better as well.
01:43:777 (1) - Spinner should start at 01:43:954.

[-Kirito's Hard]
Great map.
Storyboard still says "Map: Lapis Aoki". Should be -Kirito, I'd assume.
00:43:954 (3,4,5) - Increase distance maybe. They're easily confused for a 1/4 triple.
00:45:012 (6,7,1) - ^
01:13:248 (7) - Remove whistle from sliderend.
01:13:601 (1,2) - Should be a blanket.
01:16:424 (1) - Soft finish sound better.

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-02-07T12:32:35+00:00

Hallo

General:

-Kirito's Hard:
well didn't really understand idea of that spacing changes 00:50:307 (6,7,1) - and 00:53:483 (6,7,1) - or 00:51:718 (3,4,5) - and all over
everything else seems fine

Normal:
inconsistency in nc, just put then every white tick or by pattern but not 00:03:013 (1,1,1) - so often
00:39:718 (3,4) - blanket? http://puu.sh/6N6Xk.jpg
00:42:189 (1) - consider to change this, 3 repeat slider is not really suitable for normal imo
01:26:660 (5) - ^
01:32:307 (2) - ^
01:37:954 (5) - ^
00:58:777 (3,4,5) - maybe put slider on 00:58:601 (3) - http://puu.sh/6N6SH.jpg
01:11:130 (2,4) - remove overlap

Easy:
00:03:013 (1) - try http://puu.sh/6N6Zl.jpg
00:43:954 (3,4) - DS?
00:53:130 (3) - http://puu.sh/6N725.jpg finish on 00:53:836
00:59:483 (3) - well it's recommended to keep DS constant on easy diff, check over diff you have many of this
that's all

Good Luck!

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-02-07T14:04:22+00:00

Rakuen

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Sorry for the late mod

[-Kirito's Hard]
Good and ok to play, maybe there can be more creative? >.<? Not sure, keep it if you want to, it's nice
00:16:777 (5) - Unstack this, place above 00:17:130 (1) - might make better flow okay
00:21:718 (4) - Place at tail of 00:20:660 (2) - fixed
00:24:718 (3,4,5) - I prefer to switch their place with 00:25:071 (6) - nope
00:25:248 (7,8) - ^ If you do, swap them too ^
00:47:130 (4) - Place below 00:47:483 (5) -
01:05:660 - Missing vocal?
01:06:365 - Note here
01:07:071 - Vocal
01:17:483 (4) - Stack with 01:16:424 (1) - (optional)

Hope they helped

Yoeri

Yoeri wrote:
[General]
In the storyboard it says "Original Artist: Hatsune Miku". Miku is technically not an artist, but an instrument. The original artist is keeno.

[-Kirito's Hard]
Great map.
Storyboard still says "Map: Lapis Aoki". Should be -Kirito, I'd assume.
00:43:954 (3,4,5) - Increase distance maybe. They're easily confused for a 1/4 triple.
00:45:012 (6,7,1) - ^
01:13:248 (7) - Remove whistle from sliderend.
01:13:601 (1,2) - Should be a blanket.
01:16:424 (1) - Soft finish sound better.

Sieg

Sieg wrote:
Hallo

General:

-Kirito's Hard:
well didn't really understand idea of that spacing changes 00:50:307 (6,7,1) - and 00:53:483 (6,7,1) - or 00:51:718 (3,4,5) - and all over
everything else seems fine nope

Good Luck!

thank you for modding:D/

upload

lapis aoki~
"lapis aoki.png" the difficulty easy, normal, please add a separate file.

1.Edit :

code

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lapis aoki.png",320,240
 M,0,30542,,320,240
 S,0,30542,,0.6
 F,0,30542,31248,0,1
 F,0,31248,35483,1
 F,0,35483,36895,1,0
 M,0,36895,,320,240

2.Edit : 花たん add

Last edited by -Neipezi 2014-02-08T11:53:46+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-07T14:30:10+00:00

Yoeri wrote:
[General]
In the storyboard it says "Original Artist: Hatsune Miku". Miku is technically not an artist, but an instrument. The original artist is keeno
Okay, I'll change it after I get photoshop, and also in ''-Kirito's Hard'' it says ''Map: Lapis Aoki'' cause I didn't knew that he'll make hard, and before he makes hard, there was another hard diff made by me, so that's why.
[Easy]
You should probably get rid of the slider velocity changes in this diff. Ok.
00:03:013 (1) - Make this a circle followed by a slider with one return. Nope.
00:14:307 (5,1) - Fix spacing. Ok.
00:21:365 (1) - If you're going to have a spinner, you should probably start it at 00:22:777. Decided to remove spinner instead. :3
00:33:365 (3) - Doesn't feel very fitting to have a slider of this length here. Nope, I like it better with a slider.
00:43:954 (3,4) - Fix spacing. Maybe by putting the sliderend on (5). Ok.
00:47:483 (7,1) - Fix spacing a bit. Ok.
00:53:130 (3) - Doesn't play well. Nope.
00:55:601 (6,1) - Fix spacing. Ok.
00:59:483 (3) - New combo probably. Also spacing is very inconsistent in this part. New combo no.But sapcing fixed. :3
00:59:836 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing? Sure, why not.
01:06:189 (2,3) - Not a very good blanket. Seems fine.
01:14:307 (5) - Fix spacing. Ok.
01:24:895 (5,6) - Blanket the end of (5)? Ok.
01:27:012 (1) - Try making this a symmetrical wave slider. Ok.
01:32:660 (1) - Please avoid using using kicksliders in an Easy. It's not very fitting either. Ok.
01:40:424 (2) - Slider should start at 01:41:483. Fixed.
01:43:777 (1) - Start spinner at 01:43:954. Nope.

[Normal]
AR 4 please. Nope.
00:04:424 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Blankets here could be better. Nope.
00:10:071 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:13:424 (3,4) - Very confusing. Point (3) upwards and fix the spacing. Ok.
00:13:954 (4,5,1) - Fix spacing. Ok.
00:31:601 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok.
00:33:012 (2,3) - Pretty bad blanket. Fixed blanket. :3
00:34:777 (5) - Not sure what to say about this slider. You could patch up the curves a bit. http://puu.sh/6MjaM.jpg People just complain about the slider when it was like that, so no.
00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing. Ok.
00:42:189 (1) - Unfitting kickslider. Ok.
00:47:836 (4) - Make this more symmetrical. Ok.
00:50:660 (1,2) - Kind of bad blanket. Fixed.
00:53:483 (3,5) - Make symmetrical. Ok.
00:56:660 (1) - This just looks bad. Just use a round slider or something. Fixed.
00:59:836 (2,4,5) - ^ ^
01:05:483 (3,5) - ^ ^
01:11:130 (2) - Try making the curve more round. Fixed.
01:12:542 (4) - ^ Also avoid the overlap. ^
01:13:601 (5) - Again, try a symmetrical wave slider. Ok.
01:14:660 (6,1) - Fix spacing. Ok.
01:19:954 (1) - Start slider at 01:20:660. Nope.
01:23:483 (1,2) - Try blanketing (2). Ok.
01:25:954 (4,5) - Blanket looks kind of bad. (5) being a kickslider is also rather unfitting. Ok.
01:26:660 (5,2,3) - Fix spacing. Ok.
01:29:130 (3,4) - Could be a blanket. Ok.
01:31:601 (1,2) - Also bad blankets, and (2) is another unfitting kickslider. Ok.
01:34:071 (4,1) - Fix spacing. Nope.
01:37:248 (4,5) - Same as before. Bad blankets and unfitting kickslider. Ok.
01:39:718 (2,3) - This blanket could be better as well. Its already fine. o.o
01:43:777 (1) - Spinner should start at 01:43:954. Nope.

Thanks Yoeri ~ !

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-07T14:43:53+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hallo

Normal:
inconsistency in nc, just put then every white tick or by pattern but not 00:03:013 (1,1,1) - so often Ok.
00:39:718 (3,4) - blanket? http://puu.sh/6N6Xk.jpg Nope.
00:42:189 (1) - consider to change this, 3 repeat slider is not really suitable for normal imo Fixed. :3
01:26:660 (5) - ^ ^
01:32:307 (2) - ^ ^
01:37:954 (5) - ^ ^
00:58:777 (3,4,5) - maybe put slider on 00:58:601 (3) - http://puu.sh/6N6SH.jpg I test it but it was hard for new normal players. :/
01:11:130 (2,4) - remove overlap Ok.

Easy:
00:03:013 (1) - try http://puu.sh/6N6Zl.jpg Its already the same as now.
00:43:954 (3,4) - DS? Sure, why not.
00:53:130 (3) - http://puu.sh/6N725.jpg finish on 00:53:836 Nope.
00:59:483 (3) - well it's recommended to keep DS constant on easy diff, check over diff you have many of this Ok.
that's all

Good Luck!

Thanks Sieg ~ !

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-07T15:19:06+00:00

-Kirito wrote:
Rakuen
Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Sorry for the late mod

[-Kirito's Hard]
Good and ok to play, maybe there can be more creative? >.<? Not sure, keep it if you want to, it's nice
00:16:777 (5) - Unstack this, place above 00:17:130 (1) - might make better flow okay
00:21:718 (4) - Place at tail of 00:20:660 (2) - fixed
00:24:718 (3,4,5) - I prefer to switch their place with 00:25:071 (6) - nope
00:25:248 (7,8) - ^ If you do, swap them too ^
00:47:130 (4) - Place below 00:47:483 (5) -
01:05:660 - Missing vocal?
01:06:365 - Note here
01:07:071 - Vocal
01:17:483 (4) - Stack with 01:16:424 (1) - (optional)

Hope they helped

Yoeri
Yoeri wrote:
[General]
In the storyboard it says "Original Artist: Hatsune Miku". Miku is technically not an artist, but an instrument. The original artist is keeno.

[-Kirito's Hard]
Great map.
Storyboard still says "Map: Lapis Aoki". Should be -Kirito, I'd assume.
00:43:954 (3,4,5) - Increase distance maybe. They're easily confused for a 1/4 triple.
00:45:012 (6,7,1) - ^
01:13:248 (7) - Remove whistle from sliderend.
01:13:601 (1,2) - Should be a blanket.
01:16:424 (1) - Soft finish sound better.

Sieg
Sieg wrote:
Hallo

General:

-Kirito's Hard:
well didn't really understand idea of that spacing changes 00:50:307 (6,7,1) - and 00:53:483 (6,7,1) - or 00:51:718 (3,4,5) - and all over
everything else seems fine nope

Good Luck!

thank you for modding:D/

upload

lapis aoki~
"lapis aoki.png" the difficulty easy, normal, please add a separate file.
Edit :
code
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lapis aoki.png",320,240
 M,0,30542,,320,240
 S,0,30542,,0.6
 F,0,30542,31248,0,1
 F,0,31248,35483,1
 F,0,35483,36895,1,0
 M,0,36895,,320,240

Gonna update after I fix the lyrics. x.x Need help.

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2014-02-09T17:48:22+00:00

Hi, M4M

[Easy]

00:04:071 (2) - Overlap
00:14:307 (5) - NC
00:17:483 (1) - Don't use 3/4 in Easy, make it 1/2
00:24:189 (2) - Make it a 1/1, then add a note at 00:25:248
00:34:424 (3) - Overlap + Try to avoid speed-ups and Slow-Downs in Easy
00:36:895 (1) - OVerlap
00:39:718 (3) - Too far away. Keep using Distance snap at 0.8, and NEVER change it in Easy, except in the kiai
00:57:718 (2) - Overlap + Speed
01:08:660 (5) - Weird Slider, change appearance
01:12:189 (3) - Move 1 grid up
01:14:307 (5) - Overlap + Speed
01:14:307 (5) - Overlap
01:20:307 (1,2) - Make a spinner, to 01:22:777
01:24:895 (4) - NC
01:32:660 (1) - Too many reverses

[Normal]

00:09:012 (3) - NC
00:24:895 (6) - Don't use 1/4 in Normal
00:31:601 (2) - make it 1/2
00:57:895 (2,3,4,5) - Don't use 1/4
01:32:307 (2) - No 3/4, use 1/2
01:37:954 (5) - ^^

[Kirito's Hard]

Rename to insane, feels better

00:57:718 (1,2) - Don't know which one is slider
01:13:601 (1) - Ctrl G For smaller jump
01:41:836 (1) - Make it a spinner
01:45:895 (1) - Why NC?, it should be on 01:45:718 (4)

Good map, and Good lcuk!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-02-10T01:49:08+00:00

m4m hereee

[Easy]

00:03:013 (1,2) - rather than having the slider first, how bout put the circle first? http://gyazo.com/495c1e5dab92429e6bedc6fca53a0012

00:09:012 (2) - nc here instead of 00:09:365 (1)?

00:14:307 (5) - nc here instead of 00:14:660 (1)?

00:22:424 (5,2) - this overlap ;-; looks bad

00:17:483 (1) - the problem with this is that the reverse is on a blue line... which doesn't really follow the music

00:21:012 (3,4) - why does spacing get smaller here?

00:24:189 (2) - adjust blanket at little

00:34:424 (3) - avoid these kind of velocity changes
01:14:307 (5) - ^

00:43:954 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:542 (1,2) - ^

00:47:483 (7) - could you maybe somehow fit this right below 00:48:895 (2)

00:54:189 (4,6) - ugly. imo, if you want to make something like this, either make it like perfectly circular or don't make them at all
00:59:836 (4,5) - same here

01:01:954 (6,7) - these need to connect a bit better

01:10:424 (6,3) - not stacked properly

[Normal]

00:04:424 (1,2) - how come these are spaced differently than 00:03:013 (1,2)? suggestion: just copy and paste one set and do ctrl + h
00:07:248 (1,2) - ^

00:10:424 (2) - this blanket needs fixing
01:31:601 (1) - ^
01:34:777 (1) - ^

00:18:895 (1) - curve the middle section a bit

00:22:777 (4,5) - blanket?

00:31:601 (2) - same issue as the one in easy

00:33:012 (3) - not stacked properly
01:37:248 (4,1) - ^

00:50:660 (1,2) - blanket

00:56:660 (1) - why does this end on a blue?

01:05:130 (1,2) - how bout blanket
01:29:130 (3) - ^

01:18:189 (2,3,4,5) - fix up this curve

01:41:836 (5) - again, avoid these

[Kirito's Hard]

01:13:601 (1) - fix blanket (finaly found something t-t)
01:14:130 (2) - ^

01:19:248 (1) - same issues as in easy and normal
01:22:071 (1) - ^

yahh... this difficulty is pretty much good

sry if my mod sucks. not very good at modding :/

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2014-02-10T02:32:17+00:00

Hi M4M from your queue~

[General]
Is the SB not done yet? I don't see any lyric I just see the background effect and text on the begin and ending the song, how about you make the text a bit bigger and add effect on it?

[Easy]
My personal opinion, you can spread the notes more, you can use 1.1 Distance Spacing, It'll looks neater and not look so crowded
00:03:013 (1,1,1,1) - Delete the whistle sound on slider body?
00:09:012 (2,1,2,3) - Not fit the song, if you follow the main guitar sound you can follow this rhythm instead 00:03:013 (1,2,1,1,1) - or you can try this rhythm based on secondary guitar sound

00:17:483 (1) - Not fit the song, why not change into 1/2 slider with repeat?
00:21:012 (3,4) - Change the rhythm into this?

00:21:365 (4,5,1,2,3) - Too corwded here and bad overlap for this notes 00:22:424 (5,1,2) -
00:31:248 - Add circle here?
Please be aware, in Easy and Normal diff is not allowed to have diffrent slider velocity multiplier, like this one e.g. 00:34:424 (3) -
Please wisely use Distance Spacing properly in Easy and Normal diff, or least your Distance Spacing must be consistent, because new player still learning
01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use this rhythm instead?

01:32:660 (1) - Too many repeat, you can reduce that though like this

Don't you think 100% volume is too loud? maybe you can lower it to 60~80%
Some green lines on kiai time is not snaped, please fix that

[Normal]
00:08:660 - Add a circle here?
I think a note on blue tick is a bit hard, so you can delete this 00:13:424 (3,4) -
00:14:307 (5) - Add New Combo
00:14:307 (5,1) - Inconcistent Distance Spacing
00:23:836 (5,6,7) - Bad overlap
00:31:601 (2) - Not fit the song, why not change into 1/2 slider with repeat? and add circle here 00:32:660 -
00:34:777 (6,1) - Bad overlap, not looks so good while playing, or you can move that up a bit and delete this 00:36:895 (7) - and use this rhythm instead

00:42:189 (1) - Not fit the song, you can follow the singer or the drum sound
00:47:483 (3,4) - Use this rhythm

00:48:189 (5) - New Combo
00:50:660 (1) - Not fit the song, you can follow the singer or the drum sound
00:53:483 (3,4) - Use this rhythm

00:53:837 (4) - New Combo
00:54:895 (5) - Not fit the song, you can follow the singer or the drum sound
00:56:660 (1) - Not fit the song, Use 1/1 slider
00:57:895 (2,3,4,5) - Use this rhythm instead

01:14:660 (6,1) - Wow a jump, you should avoid a big jump like this on Easy and Normal diff
01:24:542 (2) - Delete?
01:26:660 (4) - 01:32:307 (2) - 01:37:954 (5) - Use 1/1 slider with repeat and add a circle after that
Please be aware, in Easy and Normal diff is not allowed to have diffrent slider velocity multiplier, like this one e.g. 01:41:836 (5) -
Some green lines on kiai time is not snaped, please fix that
Don't you think 100% volume is too loud? maybe you can lower it to 60~80%

[Hard]
00:14:307 (1) - 00:25:601 (1) - Hit-finish on head a bit loud, maybe you can lower it?
01:18:542 (4) - Change into drum hit-clap for better sounding
01:18:718 (5) - Change into drum hit-clap for better sounding
01:19:071 (7) - Change into drum hit-finish? the "bump" sound a bit not fit
01:19:248 (1) - Add drum hit-whistle on head? a hear a "ting" sound there
01:35:836 (7) - Change into into drum hit-clap for better sounding
01:46:777 (3) - Add drum hit-clap?
01:46:954 (4) - Add drum hit-clap?

The Easy and Normal diff need a little work on rhythm, spacing, and SV
That's all

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-02-10T10:58:31+00:00

baraatje123

baraatje123 wrote:
Hi, M4M

[Kirito's Hard]

Rename to insane, feels better

00:57:718 (1,2) - Don't know which one is slider
01:13:601 (1) - Ctrl G For smaller jump okay fixed
01:41:836 (1) - Make it a spinner
01:45:895 (1) - Why NC?, it should be on 01:45:718 (4) fixed

Good map, and Good lcuk!

Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:
m4m hereee

[Kirito's Hard]

01:13:601 (1) - fix blanket (finaly found something t-t) fixed
01:14:130 (2) - ^ ^

01:19:248 (1) - same issues as in easy and normal sry._.
01:22:071 (1) - ^ ^

yahh... this difficulty is pretty much good

sry if my mod sucks. not very good at modding :/

Mako Sakata

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hi M4M from your queue~

[General]
Is the SB not done yet? I don't see any lyric I just see the background effect and text on the begin and ending the song, how about you make the text a bit bigger and add effect on it? i have completed the storyboard is about.

[Hard]
00:14:307 (1) - 00:25:601 (1) - Hit-finish on head a bit loud, maybe you can lower it?
01:18:542 (4) - Change into drum hit-clap for better sounding fixed
01:18:718 (5) - Change into drum hit-clap for better sounding sry
01:19:071 (7) - Change into drum hit-finish? the "bump" sound a bit not fit strange sound
01:19:248 (1) - Add drum hit-whistle on head? a hear a "ting" sound there ^
01:35:836 (7) - Change into into drum hit-clap for better sounding ^
01:46:777 (3) - Add drum hit-clap? ^
01:46:954 (4) - Add drum hit-clap? ^

The Easy and Normal diff need a little work on rhythm, spacing, and SV
That's all

minasan thanks:D/

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Xiaolin 2014-02-10T13:07:28+00:00

Okay, here are the mods which I got.

baraatje123

baraatje123 wrote:
Hi, M4M

[Easy]

00:04:071 (2) - Overlap Ok.
00:14:307 (5) - NC Ok.
00:17:483 (1) - Don't use 3/4 in Easy, make it 1/2 Okie~
00:24:189 (2) - Make it a 1/1, then add a note at 00:25:248 Nope.
00:34:424 (3) - Overlap + Try to avoid speed-ups and Slow-Downs in Easy Ok.
00:36:895 (1) - OVerlap ^
00:39:718 (3) - Too far away. Keep using Distance snap at 0.8, and NEVER change it in Easy, except in the kiai Ok.
00:57:718 (2) - Overlap + Speed Nope.
01:08:660 (5) - Weird Slider, change appearance Nope.
01:12:189 (3) - Move 1 grid up Fixed.
01:14:307 (5) - Overlap + Speed Nope.
01:14:307 (5) - Overlap Ok.
01:20:307 (1,2) - Make a spinner, to 01:22:777 Nope, the spinner will be short btw.
01:24:895 (4) - NC Ok.
01:32:660 (1) - Too many reverses I ran out of ideas. ;-;

[Normal]

00:09:012 (3) - NC Ok.
00:24:895 (6) - Don't use 1/4 in Normal Why? It looks fine.
00:31:601 (2) - make it 1/2 Ok.
00:57:895 (2,3,4,5) - Don't use 1/4 Ok.
01:32:307 (2) - No 3/4, use 1/2 Ok.
01:37:954 (5) - ^^ ^^

Good map, and Good lcuk!

Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:
m4m hereee

[Easy]

00:03:013 (1,2) - rather than having the slider first, how bout put the circle first? http://gyazo.com/495c1e5dab92429e6bedc6fca53a0012
Nah, its fine like that

00:09:012 (2) - nc here instead of 00:09:365 (1)? Ok.

00:14:307 (5) - nc here instead of 00:14:660 (1)? ^

00:22:424 (5,2) - this overlap ;-; looks bad I'll try to fix. c:

00:17:483 (1) - the problem with this is that the reverse is on a blue line... which doesn't really follow the music I see it fine.

00:21:012 (3,4) - why does spacing get smaller here? Well try to fix.

00:24:189 (2) - adjust blanket at little Ok.

00:34:424 (3) - avoid these kind of velocity changes I dunno how do I deal with this one. ;_;
01:14:307 (5) - ^ ^

00:43:954 (3,4) - spacing Ok.
00:42:542 (1,2) - ^ ^

00:47:483 (7) - could you maybe somehow fit this right below 00:48:895 (2) Ok.

00:54:189 (4,6) - ugly. imo, if you want to make something like this, either make it like perfectly circular or don't make them at all Looks fine.
00:59:836 (4,5) - same here ^

01:01:954 (6,7) - these need to connect a bit better Fixed.

01:10:424 (6,3) - not stacked properly Ok.

[Normal]

00:04:424 (1,2) - how come these are spaced differently than 00:03:013 (1,2)? suggestion: just copy and paste one set and do ctrl + h Ok.
00:07:248 (1,2) - ^ Ok.

00:10:424 (2) - this blanket needs fixing Nope.
01:31:601 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:777 (1) - ^ ^

00:18:895 (1) - curve the middle section a bit Fixed.

00:22:777 (4,5) - blanket? Ok.

00:31:601 (2) - same issue as the one in easy Ok.

00:33:012 (3) - not stacked properly Ok.
01:37:248 (4,1) - ^ ^

00:50:660 (1,2) - blanket Ok.

00:56:660 (1) - why does this end on a blue? Because of the next slider.

01:05:130 (1,2) - how bout blanket Ok.
01:29:130 (3) - ^ ^

01:18:189 (2,3,4,5) - fix up this curve Nope.

01:41:836 (5) - again, avoid these Nope.

sry if my mod sucks. not very good at modding :/

Mako Sakata

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hi M4M from your queue~

[General]
Is the SB not done yet? I don't see any lyric I just see the background effect and text on the begin and ending the song, how about you make the text a bit bigger and add effect on it? The SB is now done.

[Easy]
My personal opinion, you can spread the notes more, you can use 1.1 Distance Spacing, It'll looks neater and not look so crowded Sure.
00:03:013 (1,1,1,1) - Delete the whistle sound on slider body? Nope.
00:09:012 (2,1,2,3) - Not fit the song, if you follow the main guitar sound you can follow this rhythm instead 00:03:013 (1,2,1,1,1) - or you can try this
rhythm based on secondary guitar sound Nope.
00:17:483 (1) - Not fit the song, why not change into 1/2 slider with repeat? Ok.
00:21:012 (3,4) - Change the rhythm into this? Fixed.
00:21:365 (4,5,1,2,3) - Too corwded here and bad overlap for this notes 00:22:424 (5,1,2) - Ok.
00:31:248 - Add circle here? Added.
Please be aware, in Easy and Normal diff is not allowed to have diffrent slider velocity multiplier, like this one e.g. 00:34:424 (3) -
Please wisely use Distance Spacing properly in Easy and Normal diff, or least your Distance Spacing must be consistent, because new player still learning
01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use this rhythm instead? Nope.
01:32:660 (1) - Too many repeat, you can reduce that though like this Fixed.
Don't you think 100% volume is too loud? maybe you can lower it to 60~80% Nope.
Some green lines on kiai time is not snaped, please fix that

[Normal]
00:08:660 - Add a circle here? Added.
I think a note on blue tick is a bit hard, so you can delete this 00:13:424 (3,4) - Nope.
00:14:307 (5) - Add New Combo Nope.
00:14:307 (5,1) - Inconcistent Distance Spacing Ok.
00:23:836 (5,6,7) - Bad overlap Gonna fix.
00:31:601 (2) - Not fit the song, why not change into 1/2 slider with repeat? and add circle here 00:32:660 - Nope.
00:34:777 (6,1) - Bad overlap, not looks so good while playing, or you can move that up a bit and delete this 00:36:895 (7) - and use this rhythm instead Nope.
00:42:189 (1) - Not fit the song, you can follow the singer or the drum sound Ok.
00:47:483 (3,4) - Use this rhythm Nope.
00:48:189 (5) - New Combo Nope.
00:50:660 (1) - Not fit the song, you can follow the singer or the drum sound Ok.
00:53:483 (3,4) - Use this rhythm Nope.
00:53:837 (4) - New Combo Nope.
00:54:895 (5) - Not fit the song, you can follow the singer or the drum sound Ok.
00:56:660 (1) - Not fit the song, Use 1/1 slider Ok.
00:57:895 (2,3,4,5) - Use this rhythm instead Nope.
01:14:660 (6,1) - Wow a jump, you should avoid a big jump like this on Easy and Normal diff Ok.
01:24:542 (2) - Delete? Nope.
01:26:660 (4) - 01:32:307 (2) - 01:37:954 (5) - Use 1/1 slider with repeat and add a circle after that Ok.
Please be aware, in Easy and Normal diff is not allowed to have diffrent slider velocity multiplier, like this one e.g. 01:41:836 (5) -
Some green lines on kiai time is not snaped, please fix that
Don't you think 100% volume is too loud? maybe you can lower it to 60~80% Nope.

The Easy and Normal diff need a little work on rhythm, spacing, and SV I'll try my best. c:
That's all

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-02-10T18:40:28+00:00

Ello, mod via PM request o̿ ̭ o̿

[General]
*Remember, BG should have the dimensions 1336x768 or 1024x768

Easy

OD +1 (because 0 is just weird O~O)
Did you use Distance Snap? It's Crucial that you use DS in Easy & Normal diffs.
I checked AiMod, and it appears that many of your objects are not distanced correctly.

00:12:895 (4) - A hitsound suggestion, the tail's default hitsound can be changed to normal-hitsound to match the drum hit heard here. Simply double click the tail (00:13:601) and change the audio settings seen on the top left of the board, to this:

00:54:189 (4) - Move to 00:54:542 instead, and remove 00:55:248 (5) - . This part sounds over mapped because clearly you don't hear the vocal, or the beat between 00:53:836 - 00:54:542.
00:57:718 (2) - New combo for the slider speed change.
00:59:483 (3) - NC
01:14:307 (5) - Instead put a hit circle here, and move the slider to 01:14:660. That way, the slider will hit the vocals long hold on the 'to' on 01:14:660. Also New combo on the slider.
01:22:071 (2) - Add finish
01:24:895 (4) - ^ And first object appearing in Kai time should always be NC
01:36:542 (5) - NC

This diff still looks messy in general, but apart from the incorrect DS, I'd say it looks ok.

Normal

*Some objects are still unsnapped. Check AiMod (Ctrl + Shift + A)
00:14:307 (5) - Add finish
00:23:836 (5,6,7) - Ooh, a funky slider

However,I don't think that style works well here, especially since it can't really blanket 00:22:777 (4) - ... Here, try this suggestion:

368,232,23836,2,0,B|352:280|312:280|312:280|312:336|248:360,1,160
192,352,24895,2,0,L|144:352|120:352,2,40
232,280,25601,1,4,0:0:0:0:

00:47:836 (4) - Move slider to 00:48:189, and shrink its tail to 00:48:895. That way, the slider will hit the vocals long hold on the 'su' in Mitsuka
00:53:483 (3) - Shrink its tail to 00:53:836 so it hits the vocals saying 'me' in sume properly.
01:24:895 (3) - Add finish on the head, and NC
01:36:189 (1) - Add finish on the head, and NC
01:41:836 (5) - NC for the slider speed change.

-Kirito's Hard

00:14:130 - There only needs to be 1 hit circle here, with the normal hitsound.

Nice diff

Hope this helps!

Hanatan - glow

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