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Xiaolin
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Xiaolin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 17, 2014 at 8:40:45 PM

Artist: Hanatan
Title: glow
Tags: VOCALOID Hatsune Miku -Neipezi -Kirito keeno
BPM: 85
Filesize: 4862kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. -Neipezi's Hard (3.02 stars, 230 notes)
  2. Normal (1.75 stars, 153 notes)
Download: Hanatan - glow
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花たん - glow
First Map and first rank ~ !! ~ ^ω^
Hope you enjoy it ~ ^・ω・^
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Last edited by Xiaolin , edited 181 times in total.
[FantasticMiku]
[FantasticMiku]
Hard can you change the Overall Diff. to 6?

Love, Miku
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

[FantasticMiku] wrote:

Hard can you change the Overall Diff. to 6?

Love, Miku
Okie~ Updated.
The OD is better if it was 7. :3
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[FantasticMiku]
[FantasticMiku]
Ehm :3 00:11:611 Fix the Slider, pay attention to the rhythm :3

Love, Miku :3
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

[FantasticMiku] wrote:

Ehm :3 00:11:611 Fix the Slider, pay attention to the rhythm :3

Love, Miku :3
In which diff? o.o''
[FantasticMiku]
[FantasticMiku]
Oh Sorry :O In Hard :)

Make it so. :3

CrashBattle
25 posts
Joined May 2013
CrashBattle
[Normal] Slow bit more from 04.00s - 14.00s listen at rhythm, less one at slider 3rd at 12.00s and i don't understand about the hitsound when going up to 14s @.@

oh when i try this beatmap, music sound kill the hitsound ._. hitsound volume is too low than music sound, i don't know when i must click if i do hidden mods

Keep Fighting!! ;)
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
Hi ~
Just pass by a awesome Hanatan's song and take a look <3

Btw , I think the timing of this song should be :

  1. BPM : 85 (or 170)
  2. offest : 00:03:013 -
SPOILER

you can try to set on this timing and listen , it will be better fit with rhythm

also , you can reference some ranked map with miku original ver. here

Good luck ~ :)
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

[FantasticMiku] wrote:

Oh Sorry :O In Hard :)

Make it so. :3

The slider was at that timing when the overall 5. xD But fixed~
Thanks for modding~
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Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

CrashBattle wrote:

[Normal] Slow bit more from 04.00s - 14.00s listen at rhythm, less one at slider 3rd at 12.00s and i don't understand about the hitsound when going up to 14s @.@ I don't get it.. More information please.
oh when i try this beatmap, music sound kill the hitsound ._. hitsound volume is too low than music sound, i don't know when i must click if i do hidden mods I'm not really good at making hitsounds. >.<'' But thanks for the information. c: Fixed~

Keep Fighting!! ;)
Thanks for modding~
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Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi ~
Just pass by a awesome Hanatan's song and take a look <3

Btw , I think the timing of this song should be :

  1. BPM : 85 (or 170) Fixed~
  2. offest : 00:03:013 -
Fixed~
SPOILER
Well, a big problem happen after I changed the timing. >.<'' Do I have to re-map it?

you can try to set on this timing and listen , it will be better fit with rhythm

also , you can reference some ranked map with miku original ver. here

Good luck ~ :)
Thanks for modding~
Xinchii
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Joined January 2011
Xinchii

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Well, a big problem happen after I changed the timing. >.<'' Do I have to re-map it?
Well , change BPM is a most major changing

so seems you need to do some adjustment or really re-map ;_;

but you will get a map with better correct timing , I think maybe it will be worth :3

Hope don't give up , you can do it :)
CrashBattle
25 posts
Joined May 2013
CrashBattle
[Easy & Normal] i've fix some timing, well i can't say it perfect cause i just human i'm worst i know it.. :) the problem is timing when [Normal] 00.01.19 - 00.01.21 i don't know to deal with it :( sorry
here is DL link for normal http://www.mediafire.com/view/mdmyvo4ykad6y04/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BNormal%5D.osu
here is DL link for easy http://www.mediafire.com/view/l254yld7yjk3chu/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
i just deal with timing, so for range i depend on u :) i've try to play it really worst when use HR mod XD
u can try it, hope this's can help
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BigWilly
214 posts
Joined October 2013
BigWilly
[Easy]

As this is Easy Increase the Circle Size

00:03:013 (1,1,1,1) - Look over the Timing of these Sliders. They are slightly off
00:40:071 (4) - Put the Repeat at the First Slider Tick
00:45:189 (4,5,6) - Please Check the Timing here
00:51:012 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick
00:57:718 (2) - Make this Slider more symmetrical
01:03:365 (6) - Bump is not in the Middle. Consider Changing
01:27:189 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick

Please Look over your Timing

Good Luck
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

CrashBattle wrote:

[Easy & Normal] i've fix some timing, well i can't say it perfect cause i just human i'm worst i know it.. :) the problem is timing when [Normal] 00.01.19 - 00.01.21 i don't know to deal with it :( sorry
here is DL link for normal http://www.mediafire.com/view/mdmyvo4ykad6y04/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BNormal%5D.osu
here is DL link for easy http://www.mediafire.com/view/l254yld7yjk3chu/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20(Lapis%20Aoki)%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
i just deal with timing, so for range i depend on u :) i've try to play it really worst when use HR mod XD
u can try it, hope this's can help
Thank you very much ~ ! >w<

Updated~
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Lust
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Lust
oh its this song :3

ganbatte, maybe ill finish my set sooner or later
CrashBattle
25 posts
Joined May 2013
CrashBattle

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Thank you very much ~ ! >w<
Urwell but i'm just help less than 3% ._.

well 頑張ってね
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Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

Feverie wrote:

[Easy]

As this is Easy Increase the Circle Size Nope, the CS is already fine, and if I increased it, I think its gonna be hard for the new players.

00:03:013 (1,1,1,1) - Look over the Timing of these Sliders. They are slightly off Ok~
00:40:071 (4) - Put the Repeat at the First Slider Tick Already added.
00:45:189 (4,5,6) - Please Check the Timing here Checked. :3
00:51:012 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick Already added.
00:57:718 (2) - Make this Slider more symmetrical Hmm, good idea.
01:03:365 (6) - Bump is not in the Middle. Consider Changing Ok.
01:27:189 (1) - Put the Repeat arrow at the 2nd Slider Tick Already added.

Please Look over your Timing

Good Luck
Thanks for modding!
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin
Updated every mod. c:
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin
Alright, map is ready to go for ranked and ready to have more mods~ o/
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

Lust wrote:

oh its this song :3

ganbatte, maybe ill finish my set sooner or later
Remind me to mod it after you finish it~ :3 GL ~ !
CrashBattle
25 posts
Joined May 2013
CrashBattle
[Easy & Normal]
i've update some part, i think this's more better than before. ._.

Easy : http://www.mediafire.com/view/n523il56mjdi9vq/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
Normal : http://www.mediafire.com/view/2c1nvv2g2mm7gm6/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BNormal%5D.osu

i forget part i was edit ._. but just fix timing, my conversation is bad so just can mod like this
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin

CrashBattle wrote:

[Easy & Normal]
i've update some part, i think this's more better than before. ._.

Easy : http://www.mediafire.com/view/n523il56mjdi9vq/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BEasy%5D.osu
Normal : http://www.mediafire.com/view/2c1nvv2g2mm7gm6/Hanatan%20-%20glow%20%28Lapis%20Aoki%29%20%5BNormal%5D.osu

i forget part i was edit ._. but just fix timing, my conversation is bad so just can mod like this
Thanks Crash~ c: Updated.
- Melody
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- Melody
IRC-Mod ~

♥
13:35 Lapis Aoki: Did you finish the IRC?
13:35 - Melody: Hm?
13:36 Lapis Aoki: The IRC mod wich you did ysterday.
13:36 Lapis Aoki: Yesterday*
13:36 - Melody: Did you fixed the spacings?
13:43 Lapis Aoki: What spacing? o.o''
13:43 Lapis Aoki: I forgot it I guess. >.<'' Sorry.
13:43 - Melody: The Distance Snap.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Oh.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Yes I did.
13:44 *- Melody is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/351970 Hanatan - glow [Easy]]
13:44 Lapis Aoki: Let's begin again.
13:44 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1) - Slider or Circles at blue ticks are difficult to hit for newbies
13:45 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1,2) - And also they have not the right Distance Snap
13:46 - Melody: Do it like this
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hfqo.jpg
13:46 - Melody: wait
13:46 - Melody: 00:57:616 -
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfsP.jpg *
13:47 Lapis Aoki: Gonna fix them.
13:47 - Melody: ok
13:49 - Melody: 00:59:483 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make them like this :
13:49 - Melody: 1. http://puu.sh/6HfAk.jpg
13:49 - Melody: 2. http://puu.sh/6HfBA.jpg
13:50 - Melody: 3. http://puu.sh/6HfCW.jpg
13:51 - Melody: 01:14:307 (5) - Why is this not snapped?
13:51 - Melody: Snap it on 01:15:718 -
13:52 - Melody: 01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Distance Snap !
13:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfK0.jpg
13:53 - Melody: 01:20:307 (1) - Let it end on the red tick 01:21:718 -
13:54 - Melody: 01:32:660 (1) - Ctrl + H
13:55 Lapis Aoki: http://tinypic.com/r/2ugz3n4/8 Is it fine if I did it like this.
13:55 Lapis Aoki: And I'll try to get all these modes together.
13:55 - Melody: 01:23:483 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Distance !
13:55 - Melody: Yes, its fine
13:55 - Melody: Tell me if you do it, then we can continue with normal.
13:56 Lapis Aoki: Ok, I'll start fixing them.
13:56 - Melody: Okay.
14:03 Lapis Aoki: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1303090
14:04 - Melody: Let it end on the white tick.
14:04 Lapis Aoki: Okay.
14:14 Lapis Aoki: Okay, done~
14:14 Lapis Aoki: We can now start with normal.
14:14 - Melody: Yes.
14:15 - Melody: 00:04:424 (1,2) - Do it like this ;
14:15 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgVo.jpg
14:15 - Melody: Looks better
14:16 - Melody: 00:05:836 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgWR.jpg
14:16 - Melody: 00:07:248 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgZt.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:08:660 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh09.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:10:071 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh1G.jpg
14:17 - Melody: ~ When you do this, it looks more beautiful and not messed up (:
14:18 - Melody: 00:11:483 (1,2,3) -
14:18 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh5h.jpg
14:19 - Melody: 00:20:307 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Use Distance Snap, player will think, that these are streams
14:20 - Melody: 00:43:954 (2,3,4) - ^
14:20 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hha8.jpg
14:21 - Melody: 01:02:307 (5) - Ctrl + J
14:21 - Melody: 01:04:071 (6) - Roate by +45°
14:22 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hhej.jpg
14:22 - Melody: It's better for the flow
14:22 - Melody: 01:04:777 (1,2,3) - They are not exactly stacked, fix it.
14:23 - Melody: 01:18:189 (2,3,4,5) - I dont like this shape, this looks better : http://puu.sh/6Hhhm.jpg
14:24 - Melody: Because of the curve.
14:24 - Melody: 01:19:777 (1) - Delete this, it doesn't fit in there & it's hard to hit a Circle on a blue tick for newbies.
14:24 - Melody: 01:22:071 (4) - Add Finish
14:25 - Melody: 01:28:071 (1) - Move it to the red tick at 01:28:071 - it's fit more in there
14:25 - Melody: 01:33:895 (3) - ^ (red tick!)
14:26 - Melody: 01:39:365 (1) - ^
14:26 - Melody: That was it with normal, call me back so we can continue with Hard
14:39 Lapis Aoki: Okay, ready for hard~ c:
14:42 Lapis Aoki: We can start now~
14:42 - Melody: Good.
14:43 - Melody: 00:03:365 (2,3,4) - Copy them
14:43 - Melody: & paste it to 00:04:777 -
14:43 - Melody: and make ctrl + h
14:43 - Melody: So it'll be similar
14:43 - Melody: 00:10:424 (1,2,3) - ctrl + g
14:43 - Melody: 00:07:601 (1,2,3) - ^
14:44 - Melody: 00:11:836 (1,2,3,4) - This looks ugly
14:44 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hij1.jpg
14:44 - Melody: This have more shape.
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:424 (1) - Cut this until this 00:13:777 - point
14:45 - Melody: and add a Circle here
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:954 -
14:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hin9.jpg
14:46 - Melody: 00:15:895 (7,1) - Move them to : x288 y272, for a blanket
14:47 - Melody: 00:16:071 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 00:17:130 -
14:47 - Melody: and make Ctrl + h
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hisy.jpg
14:48 - Melody: 00:16:954 (2) - is stacked with 00:18:012 (2) - in the screen
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiuM.jpg
14:50 - Melody: 00:32:483 (4) - make it like this for a better flow : http://puu.sh/6Hizw.jpg
14:51 - Melody: 00:43:954 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Fix the Distance Snap here
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiEH.jpg
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiFb.jpg
14:52 - Melody: 00:44:836 (7) - is stacked with 00:45:895 (2) -
14:52 - Melody: 00:50:307 (6,7) - Make them a little bit round to keep the flow to the next slider
14:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiJk.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:49:601 (5) - Make it like this, to have a good transition : http://puu.sh/6HiLL.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:51:189 (2) - ctrl + h
14:55 - Melody: And rotate it to +18°
14:55 - Melody: 00:51:718 (3,4) - Make here a curve to for the slider flow
14:55 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiQf.jpg
14:56 - Melody: 00:53:130 (6,7) - Curve http://puu.sh/6HiRQ.jpg
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Stack this with 01:19:954 (3) -
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Add Finish
14:57 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1) - NC
14:58 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1,2) - This doesn't flow with the previous Slider
14:58 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiYr.jpg
14:58 - Melody: That's much better
14:58 - Melody: 01:28:248 (7) - x336 y216 , same reason as above.
14:59 - Melody: 01:38:307 (5) - Cut this Slider : http://puu.sh/6Hj28.jpg


~Good Luck !
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
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Topic Starter
Xiaolin

- Melody wrote:

IRC-Mod ~

♥
13:35 Lapis Aoki: Did you finish the IRC?
13:35 - Melody: Hm?
13:36 Lapis Aoki: The IRC mod wich you did ysterday.
13:36 Lapis Aoki: Yesterday*
13:36 - Melody: Did you fixed the spacings?
13:43 Lapis Aoki: What spacing? o.o''
13:43 Lapis Aoki: I forgot it I guess. >.<'' Sorry.
13:43 - Melody: The Distance Snap.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Oh.
13:43 Lapis Aoki: Yes I did.
13:44 *- Melody is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/351970 Hanatan - glow [Easy]]
13:44 Lapis Aoki: Let's begin again.
13:44 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1) - Slider or Circles at blue ticks are difficult to hit for newbies
13:45 - Melody: 00:56:483 (1,2) - And also they have not the right Distance Snap
13:46 - Melody: Do it like this
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hfqo.jpg
13:46 - Melody: wait
13:46 - Melody: 00:57:616 -
13:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfsP.jpg *
13:47 Lapis Aoki: Gonna fix them.
13:47 - Melody: ok
13:49 - Melody: 00:59:483 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make them like this :
13:49 - Melody: 1. http://puu.sh/6HfAk.jpg
13:49 - Melody: 2. http://puu.sh/6HfBA.jpg
13:50 - Melody: 3. http://puu.sh/6HfCW.jpg
13:51 - Melody: 01:14:307 (5) - Why is this not snapped?
13:51 - Melody: Snap it on 01:15:718 -
13:52 - Melody: 01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Distance Snap !
13:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HfK0.jpg
13:53 - Melody: 01:20:307 (1) - Let it end on the red tick 01:21:718 -
13:54 - Melody: 01:32:660 (1) - Ctrl + H
13:55 Lapis Aoki: http://tinypic.com/r/2ugz3n4/8 Is it fine if I did it like this.
13:55 Lapis Aoki: And I'll try to get all these modes together.
13:55 - Melody: 01:23:483 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Distance !
13:55 - Melody: Yes, its fine
13:55 - Melody: Tell me if you do it, then we can continue with normal.
13:56 Lapis Aoki: Ok, I'll start fixing them.
13:56 - Melody: Okay.
14:03 Lapis Aoki: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1303090
14:04 - Melody: Let it end on the white tick.
14:04 Lapis Aoki: Okay.
14:14 Lapis Aoki: Okay, done~
14:14 Lapis Aoki: We can now start with normal.
14:14 - Melody: Yes.
14:15 - Melody: 00:04:424 (1,2) - Do it like this ;
14:15 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgVo.jpg
14:15 - Melody: Looks better
14:16 - Melody: 00:05:836 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgWR.jpg
14:16 - Melody: 00:07:248 (1,2) -
14:16 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HgZt.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:08:660 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh09.jpg
14:17 - Melody: 00:10:071 (1,2) -
14:17 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh1G.jpg
14:17 - Melody: ~ When you do this, it looks more beautiful and not messed up (:
14:18 - Melody: 00:11:483 (1,2,3) -
14:18 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hh5h.jpg
14:19 - Melody: 00:20:307 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Use Distance Snap, player will think, that these are streams
14:20 - Melody: 00:43:954 (2,3,4) - ^
14:20 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hha8.jpg
14:21 - Melody: 01:02:307 (5) - Ctrl + J
14:21 - Melody: 01:04:071 (6) - Roate by +45°
14:22 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hhej.jpg
14:22 - Melody: It's better for the flow
14:22 - Melody: 01:04:777 (1,2,3) - They are not exactly stacked, fix it.
14:23 - Melody: 01:18:189 (2,3,4,5) - I dont like this shape, this looks better : http://puu.sh/6Hhhm.jpg
14:24 - Melody: Because of the curve.
14:24 - Melody: 01:19:777 (1) - Delete this, it doesn't fit in there & it's hard to hit a Circle on a blue tick for newbies.
14:24 - Melody: 01:22:071 (4) - Add Finish
14:25 - Melody: 01:28:071 (1) - Move it to the red tick at 01:28:071 - it's fit more in there
14:25 - Melody: 01:33:895 (3) - ^ (red tick!)
14:26 - Melody: 01:39:365 (1) - ^
14:26 - Melody: That was it with normal, call me back so we can continue with Hard
14:39 Lapis Aoki: Okay, ready for hard~ c:
14:42 Lapis Aoki: We can start now~
14:42 - Melody: Good.
14:43 - Melody: 00:03:365 (2,3,4) - Copy them
14:43 - Melody: & paste it to 00:04:777 -
14:43 - Melody: and make ctrl + h
14:43 - Melody: So it'll be similar
14:43 - Melody: 00:10:424 (1,2,3) - ctrl + g
14:43 - Melody: 00:07:601 (1,2,3) - ^
14:44 - Melody: 00:11:836 (1,2,3,4) - This looks ugly
14:44 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hij1.jpg
14:44 - Melody: This have more shape.
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:424 (1) - Cut this until this 00:13:777 - point
14:45 - Melody: and add a Circle here
14:45 - Melody: 00:13:954 -
14:46 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hin9.jpg
14:46 - Melody: 00:15:895 (7,1) - Move them to : x288 y272, for a blanket
14:47 - Melody: 00:16:071 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 00:17:130 -
14:47 - Melody: and make Ctrl + h
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6Hisy.jpg
14:48 - Melody: 00:16:954 (2) - is stacked with 00:18:012 (2) - in the screen
14:48 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiuM.jpg
14:50 - Melody: 00:32:483 (4) - make it like this for a better flow : http://puu.sh/6Hizw.jpg
14:51 - Melody: 00:43:954 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Fix the Distance Snap here
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiEH.jpg
14:52 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiFb.jpg
14:52 - Melody: 00:44:836 (7) - is stacked with 00:45:895 (2) -
14:52 - Melody: 00:50:307 (6,7) - Make them a little bit round to keep the flow to the next slider
14:53 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiJk.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:49:601 (5) - Make it like this, to have a good transition : http://puu.sh/6HiLL.jpg
14:54 - Melody: 00:51:189 (2) - ctrl + h
14:55 - Melody: And rotate it to +18°
14:55 - Melody: 00:51:718 (3,4) - Make here a curve to for the slider flow
14:55 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiQf.jpg
14:56 - Melody: 00:53:130 (6,7) - Curve http://puu.sh/6HiRQ.jpg
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Stack this with 01:19:954 (3) -
14:57 - Melody: 01:22:071 (5) - Add Finish
14:57 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1) - NC
14:58 - Melody: 01:25:071 (1,2) - This doesn't flow with the previous Slider
14:58 - Melody: http://puu.sh/6HiYr.jpg
14:58 - Melody: That's much better
14:58 - Melody: 01:28:248 (7) - x336 y216 , same reason as above.
14:59 - Melody: 01:38:307 (5) - Cut this Slider : http://puu.sh/6Hj28.jpg
06:36 Lapis Aoki: Done hard~
~Good Luck !
Thanks - Melody! I fixed some of your mod. :3 It was really helpful.

Updated~
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Hanatan rocks~~

[Easy]
01:23:483 (3) - I think you should add New combo on here :p

[Hard]
00:14:307 (3) - Maybe New combo on here. (Suggestion)
01:27:012 (8) - Timing is wrong I think D: I sugeest making this 1/4 beat longer. It should be end on 1:28:424
01:28:248 (9) - Delete this if you extended 01:27:012 (8) :D and add a note on 01:28:777

Good luck
Boncho
91 posts
Joined October 2011
Boncho
Hey, from my Queue~

Easy


00:14:307 (5,1,2,3) - use Distance Snap!
00:47:483 add a circle
00:47:836 add a circle
00:47:836 (1,2,3,4) - place them on 00:48:189
00:46:424 (6) - extend slider till 00:47:483
00:53:130 (3) - shorten slider till 00:53:660
00:54:189 (4,5) - there are many messy parts on your beatmap like this part. I would recommend you to do this and the same parts like this:


Normal


Change Circle Size to 3!
00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Distance Snap!
01:26:660 (5,1) - ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^
01:39:365 (1) - remove NC
01:40:424 (3) - NC
please set kiai time at 01:24:895
please end kiai time at 01:47:483
Fix all your timing Sections!

good luck!~
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin

minyeob wrote:

Hanatan rocks~~

[Easy]
01:23:483 (3) - I think you should add New combo on here :p Umm.. Sorry but nope.

[Hard]
00:14:307 (3) - Maybe New combo on here. (Suggestion) Nope.
01:27:012 (8) - Timing is wrong I think D: I sugeest making this 1/4 beat longer. It should be end on 1:28:424 Fixed.
01:28:248 (9) - Delete this if you extended 01:27:012 (8) :D and add a note on 01:28:777 Fixed.

Good luck
Thanks for modding min~ ! c:
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin

Bonch0 wrote:

Hey, from my Queue~

Easy


00:14:307 (5,1,2,3) - use Distance Snap! Ok.
00:47:483 add a circle Ok.
00:47:836 add a circle Here is already a slider, so no.
00:47:836 (1,2,3,4) - place them on 00:48:189 Nope, its looks fine like this.
00:46:424 (6) - extend slider till 00:47:483 Sorry, but no.
00:53:130 (3) - shorten slider till 00:53:660 Fixed.
00:54:189 (4,5) - there are many messy parts on your beatmap like this part. I would recommend you to do this and the same parts like this:

Fixed.

Normal


Change Circle Size to 3! Nah. Its already fine like that. :3
00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Distance Snap! Okay~
01:26:660 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:32:307 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:39:365 (1) - remove NC Fixed.
01:40:424 (3) - NC Fixed.
please set kiai time at 01:24:895 Nope.
please end kiai time at 01:47:483 The finish dosen't start at that time, so no.
Fix all your timing Sections! Okay, I'll try my best~ ^^

good luck!~
Thanks for modding~
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI
y u no poke me earlier ;w;;;i won't bite

[Kirito's Hard]
00:04:071 (4,1) - You could make a jump here to represent the heavier beat
00:05:483 (2,1) - ^
00:07:954 (4,1) - ^Yup, this is what I am talking about
00:09:718 (4,5) - ^
00:11:483 (1) - ^
00:13:954 (4) - http://puu.sh/6JFcd.jpg This could help the flow, (4) Copied from 00:13:601 (3) -
00:23:483 (3,1) - You could make the distance smaller as it is a 1/2 beat but the origin distance is same as previous 1/1 beat >00:22:777 (1,2,3) -
00:28:424 (1,2,3,4) - Some creative pattern would be nice :) Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFj3.jpg
00:31:601 (2) - Maybe you should consider adding a note here, the missing beat is just tricking players
00:39:365 (5,1) - This isn't nice to play :(. but I don't think anything is wrong tho, just forget about it
00:45:365 (1,2) - Copy and Paste the same curve slider
00:49:954 (4,5) - I don't think pattern like this fit slow song... but... nevermind :p nothing wrong too just imo
00:57:718 (1,2,3,4,1) - Suggest something like this, you should follow the NC in it tho, http://puu.sh/6JFsn.jpg
00:59:307 (8) - A normal triple will do well here
01:07:954 (1) - Suggest you put it below 01:07:248 (5) - rather on upper level of it http://puu.sh/6JFw7.jpg
01:13:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggest something like this, could be better to play http://puu.sh/6JFy2.jpg
01:16:071 (6) - Stacking on 01:16:424 (1) - would be nicer :)
01:17:836 (1) - Remove NC
01:18:365 (2) - NC as the distance of notes increased
01:34:071 (2) - CTRL G to match 01:34:601 (1)
01:36:895 (2,3) - Avoid contact, bigger spacing will help

[Normal]
00:03:013 (1) - Why not? :D http://puu.sh/6JFKB.jpg
00:04:424 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved
00:05:836 (1,2,1) - ^
00:07:248 (1,2) - ^
00:10:424 (2,1,2) - doesn't look nice tho, use 00:10:071 (1) as a centre circle, 00:10:071 (1,2) - Increase the distance between them same as 00:11:836 (2) - , then make a big bracket , best if you could avoid any overlapping on sliders Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFTD.jpg
00:13:424 (3) - NC, CTRL G, Remove 1 repeat
00:13:954 (4) - Add a note stacking 00:14:307 (5) -
00:16:777 (3) - You could Copy and Paste 00:14:660 (1) - , then CTRL H > CTRL G to make the slider match each other like a pair
00:17:836 (4,5,6) - Suggest this http://puu.sh/6JFZc.jpg
00:31:248 (1) - You should start your map here as this is the first beat of the rhythm, adding a note will do well
00:33:012 (2) - A larger distance will help alot here, its a 1/1 but the distance is just same as 1/2 00:34:071 (3,4) -
00:34:071 (3) - NC
00:38:307 (2,3) - Same as 00:33:012 (2)
00:39:718 (3) - NC
00:42:189 (1) - This will really confuse player...
00:45:012 (1) - Change the slider curve to down as to match the angel you cut in from previous note http://puu.sh/6JG6Q.jpg
00:47:836 (4) - NC
00:49:601 (5) - Spacing problem like the previous I noticed
01:04:071 (6,1) - Bad flow
01:05:483 (3,5) - Why don't just copy and paste one and another?
01:11:130 (2,4) - Avoid any overlap between sliders
01:13:601 (5) - NC
01:21:718 (2) - Suggest not to stack
01:23:483 (1,2) - Better blanket could be apply
01:24:895 (3) - NC for Kiai Time
01:26:660 (5) - 2x repeat doesn't fit
01:30:542 (5) - NC here instead of 01:31:601 (1) - here
01:32:307 (2) - Same as the previous slider I said, 2x repeat doesn't fit
01:37:954 (5) -
01:40:424 (1) - NC
01:41:836 (1) - NC

hanatan <33 huhu
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin

_AI wrote:

y u no poke me earlier ;w;;;i won't bite

[Normal]
00:03:013 (1) - Why not? :D http://puu.sh/6JFKB.jpg Ok, fixed. :3
00:04:424 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved Nope.
00:05:836 (1,2,1) - ^ ^
00:07:248 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:10:424 (2,1,2) - doesn't look nice tho, use 00:10:071 (1) as a centre circle, 00:10:071 (1,2) - Increase the distance between them same as 00:11:836 (2) - , then make a big bracket , best if you could avoid any overlapping on sliders Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFTD.jpg Ok.
00:13:424 (3) - NC, CTRL G, Remove 1 repeat I prefer it with 2 repeat.
00:13:954 (4) - Add a note stacking 00:14:307 (5) - Its gonna be hard for the people who just started playing normal.
00:16:777 (3) - You could Copy and Paste 00:14:660 (1) - , then CTRL H > CTRL G to make the slider match each other like a pair Fixed.
00:17:836 (4,5,6) - Suggest this http://puu.sh/6JFZc.jpg Fixed.
00:31:248 (1) - You should start your map here as this is the first beat of the rhythm, adding a note will do well Added.
00:33:012 (2) - A larger distance will help alot here, its a 1/1 but the distance is just same as 1/2 00:34:071 (3,4) - Ok.
00:34:071 (3) - NC Ok.
00:38:307 (2,3) - Same as 00:33:012 (2) Fixed.
00:39:718 (3) - NC Ok.
00:42:189 (1) - This will really confuse player... Ok, I fixed that part. :3
00:45:012 (1) - Change the slider curve to down as to match the angel you cut in from previous note http://puu.sh/6JG6Q.jpg Fixed.
00:47:836 (4) - NC Ok.
00:49:601 (5) - Spacing problem like the previous I noticed Fixed the problem. x3
01:04:071 (6,1) - Bad flow Seems perfect to me, if people complained about it, I'll try to deal with it.
01:05:483 (3,5) - Why don't just copy and paste one and another? Ok, I fixed it. >o<
01:11:130 (2,4) - Avoid any overlap between sliders Ok.
01:13:601 (5) - NC Ok.
01:21:718 (2) - Suggest not to stack The stack is fine in this part. :/

01:23:483 (1,2) - Better blanket could be apply Ok.
01:24:895 (3) - NC for Kiai Time Ok.
01:26:660 (5) - 2x repeat doesn't fit It fits.
01:30:542 (5) - NC here instead of 01:31:601 (1) - here Ok.
01:32:307 (2) - Same as the previous slider I said, 2x repeat doesn't fit It does fit. >w>''
01:37:954 (5) - ..
01:40:424 (1) - NC Ok.
01:41:836 (1) - NC ^

hanatan <33 huhu
Thanks AI~! I'll tell Kirito-kun to fix his diff. c:
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
_AI

_AI wrote:

y u no poke me earlier ;w;;;i won't bite

[Kirito's Hard]
00:04:071 (4,1) - You could make a jump here to represent the heavier beat :arrow: ok
00:05:483 (2,1) - ^ :arrow: ^
00:07:954 (4,1) - ^Yup, this is what I am talking about :arrow: ^
00:09:718 (4,5) - ^ :arrow: ^
00:11:483 (1) - ^ :arrow: ^
00:13:954 (4) - http://puu.sh/6JFcd.jpg This could help the flow, (4) Copied from 00:13:601 (3) - :arrow: ^
00:23:483 (3,1) - You could make the distance smaller as it is a 1/2 beat but the origin distance is same as previous 1/1 beat >00:22:777 (1,2,3) - :arrow: it sounds like a drum and clap sounds.
00:28:424 (1,2,3,4) - Some creative pattern would be nice :) Suggest: http://puu.sh/6JFj3.jpg :arrow: change
00:31:601 (2) - Maybe you should consider adding a note here, the missing beat is just tricking players :arrow: 00:31:601 - circle add
00:39:365 (5,1) - This isn't nice to play :(. but I don't think anything is wrong tho, just forget about it :arrow: hmm, ok
00:45:365 (1,2) - Copy and Paste the same curve slider :arrow: nope..
00:49:954 (4,5) - I don't think pattern like this fit slow song... but... nevermind :p nothing wrong too just imo :arrow: change the circle
00:57:718 (1,2,3,4,1) - Suggest something like this, you should follow the NC in it tho, http://puu.sh/6JFsn.jpg :arrow: Fixed!
00:59:307 (8) - A normal triple will do well here :arrow: nope
01:07:954 (1) - Suggest you put it below 01:07:248 (5) - rather on upper level of it http://puu.sh/6JFw7.jpg :arrow: oh, so good
01:13:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggest something like this, could be better to play http://puu.sh/6JFy2.jpg :arrow: ^
01:16:071 (6) - Stacking on 01:16:424 (1) - would be nicer :)
01:17:836 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: nope
01:18:365 (2) - NC as the distance of notes increased :arrow: nope
01:34:071 (2) - CTRL G to match 01:34:601 (1) :arrow: fixed
01:36:895 (2,3) - Avoid contact, bigger spacing will help :arrow: x1.2 change


hanatan <33 huhu

thank you for modding

change code
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Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin
Updated.
AlexaBM
755 posts
Joined March 2013
AlexaBM
Your mod was't very helpful, so fast check
[Easy]
00:03:013 (1) - It's unreadable for newbies, make it like 00:04:777 (1) -
00:04:777 (1,1,1) - remove NCs
00:11:836 (1) - delete, it's too hard for newbies
00:14:307 (5,1) - you should you DS in ALL diff
00:34:424 (3) - keep the same Slider Velocity in all diff, remove this green point and remap that moment/slider
00:45:012 (4) - DS again.check the whole diff, you should use DS
00:57:718 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable
01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard
01:32:660 (1) - unreadable
01:40:424 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable
and again.. check all diff. if you don't use DS in some moments, you should fix it

[Normal]
00:39:718 (3) - Should I say you about DS again?
00:42:189 (1) - same as in Easy
01:41:836 (5) - ^

You have a lot of unreadable and unrankable things, I listed it up. now check your diffs and fix it

[Hard]
no problems
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin

AlexaBM wrote:

Your mod was't very helpful, so fast check
[Easy]
00:03:013 (1) - It's unreadable for newbies, make it like 00:04:777 (1) - If I made it like that, it won't fit the timing.
00:04:777 (1,1,1) - remove NCs Ok.
00:11:836 (1) - delete, it's too hard for newbies I don't think its gonna be hard..
00:14:307 (5,1) - you should you DS in ALL diff I already did it before.
00:34:424 (3) - keep the same Slider Velocity in all diff, remove this green point and remap that moment/slider Nah, its fine like that, and if I did it, the slider will be so long, and also, if I did it I have to add short sliders and it'll be harder
00:45:012 (4) - DS again.check the whole diff, you should use DS Ok, fixed.
00:57:718 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable It seems fine, maybe I'll change it if there's another person complained about it. >.<
01:16:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard I dunno, but I checked the nano ver. and it was the same thing.
01:32:660 (1) - unreadable I'll try to fix.
01:40:424 (2) - I already told about this, it's unreadable Its fine.
and again.. check all diff. if you don't use DS in some moments, you should fix it I checked all the DS with Melody when we were doing the IRC mod.

[Normal]
00:39:718 (3) - Should I say you about DS again? I'll see what I can do.. >.<''
00:42:189 (1) - same as in Easy Ok.
01:41:836 (5) - ^ It will be a long slider. D:

You have a lot of unreadable and unrankable things, I listed it up. now check your diffs and fix it

[Hard]
no problems
Thanks Alexa! I'll try me best to fix everything. :)
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
Yeah my first map out of 25

IRC mod :3
16:24 Winek: Wanna IRC?
16:25 Lapis Aoki: Maybe yes.
16:25 Winek: awright :3
16:25 Lapis Aoki: If your modding hard, please do it with -Kirito
16:25 Winek: awright
16:25 Winek: then let's start with Easy.
16:26 Winek: That's what im the best for .-.
16:26 Lapis Aoki: Same here~ :o
16:27 Winek: 00:06:189 (1) - This note could start like at 00:05:836 and add a reverse arrow. What do you think about it?
16:27 Lapis Aoki: Let's test it.
16:27 Winek: I would make a little like the first note 00:03:013 (1) -
16:29 Winek: how's it?
16:36 Winek: gosh my internet ><
16:37 Winek: are you der
16:38 Winek: gosh my internet
16:38 Winek: sorry, it crapped >///////<
16:38 Lapis Aoki: Gtg, but keep your IRC mod.
16:39 Winek: awright ._.
16:39 Winek: 00:08:660 - don't know if it's on purpose, but this blank space is kinda wrong..
16:40 Winek: 00:09:365 (1,2) - You should really use DS ><
16:41 Winek: 00:17:483 (1,2,3) - At this part, the 3 circle get repetitive. Why not change 1 or 2 into 1/2 slider + reverse arrow, or even 1/1 slider.
16:42 Winek: 00:38:307 (2,3) - Here you let a little space between the 2 and 3.
16:42 Winek: 00:43:954 (3,4) - Do the same here? Just remove the reverse arrow and move it.
16:43 Winek: 00:47:836 (1) - Same here. Also, something that disgust me is when a downbeat is inside a slider >< Sorry if i look rude
16:44 Winek: You should just make it 1/3
16:44 Winek: Oops, i mean 1/2.
16:45 Winek: 00:53:130 (3) - This one shouldn't be following the drums. the best is to expend it to the next downbeat.
16:47 Winek: As if you don't expend, 00:54:189 (4) - will look kind of weird, and confusing.
16:48 Winek: 01:24:542 (4,5) - While you have opportunities, blanket. It make the map prettier, and more adept to be Modded by BATS.
16:49 Winek: oh btw the "Glow" at the end.
16:49 Winek: Center it, it's a bit off.
16:49 Winek: I mean, i think. Not sure.
16:50 Winek: Wait, drop it. It just look different in "Desing" Tab..
16:50 Winek: Now For -Normal-
16:51 Winek: 00:04:424 (1) - I think ya should remove New combo.
16:51 Winek: At least 4 notes should be in the same combo for the start.. i think.
16:52 Winek: 00:13:424 (3,4) - This get a bit hard for Normal players, you know.
16:52 Winek: Just remove 4 and add a reverse arrow, it shoulda be fine
16:53 Winek: 00:31:601 (1) - I really do not think this need a NC
16:53 Winek: 00:34:777 (5) - Not sure, but you could make this form prettier
16:54 Winek: 00:38:307 (2,3,4) - Wrong spacing like that can confuse player
16:55 Winek: You don't use DS enough... It's somehow consfusing. I also see many mod telling you about that..
16:55 Winek: 01:26:660 (5) - Think it deserve only 1 reverse arrow, and a circle to finish downbeat.
16:56 Winek: Well, I'll post the Hard in the thread.

For me i checked Hard, It look clean. So good luck about it! Btw *star* since i don't give a crap about kudosu Your map is really great
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Sorry for the late mod

[Easy]
Spacing and DS should be remained constant, also try arrange them with Tiny grid size
00:03:013 (1,1) - Confusing pattern, they overlapped too
00:04:777 (1,1,1) - Remove their NC
00:09:012 - Missed note here (guitar)
00:10:424 - ^
00:12:895 (4) - Make it stop at 00:13:601 -
00:14:660 (1) - As usual, no jumps for Easy and Normal
00:16:071 (1) - Inconsistency DS
00:17:483 (1) - ^
00:20:307 (1) - ^ Use Grid size: Tiny and then arrange them properly
00:20:660 (2) - This can be at middle line if you agree with it
00:31:954 (1,2,3) - Suggest to remove them
^ If you insist to keep them make 00:34:424 (3) - spaced properly at 1.0x DS before turning it into 0.5x, and also NC it
I personally don't suggest slowed down SV for Easy
00:36:895 (1) - Same point as mods above on the spacing
00:45:012 (4) - No jump
00:47:836 (1) - Inconsistency DS, space it with Tiny grid size
00:53:836 - Missing note
00:54:542 - Missing beat and vocal
00:57:718 (2) - Not suggesting slowed down DS, if you insist NC it and DS it in 1.0x SV
00:59:483 (3,4) - No jump
01:03:012 (7) - ^
01:05:130 (1) - Remain the same DS which is 1.0x from the beginning
01:18:189 - Extra hit at here
01:19:601 - Missing vocal
01:24:895 (5) - NC for KIAI
01:36:542 (4) - NC
01:40:424 (2) - No point slowing down here tho, NC it for SV change

[Normal]
Spacing and flow is important, take a close look at them
Try to make no jumps and constant DS for Normal diff, means remain 0.96x - 1.04x DS if you're using 1.0x DS
00:13:424 (3) - NC for constant
00:13:954 (4) - There's a jump here
00:14:307 (5) - NC here, remove NC at 00:14:660 (1) -
00:31:601 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:071 (3) - NC here
00:37:601 - Missing beat and vocal
00:40:071 - Vocal
00:42:189 (1) - Bad flow
00:47:483 (3) - DS
00:57:895 (2) - ^
01:04:777 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:130 (2) - NC here
00:39:718 (3) - DS is important
01:12:542 (4) - A part of the slider border overlapped with 01:11:130 (2) -
01:16:424 (1) - No jump
01:19:601 - Missing vocal
01:20:307 - Vocal should be at here
01:21:012 - ^
01:23:483 (1,2) - Suggest to remove
01:24:895 (3) - NC for KIAI
01:26:660 (5) - Bad flow, I dont like many reverses
01:28:071 (1) - No jump
01:29:130 (3) - ^
01:33:718 (3) - ^
01:34:777 (1) - ^ Applies
01:36:189 (3) - NC
01:37:954 (5) - Prevent overlapping with 01:36:189 (3) -
01:39:365 (1) - No jump
01:40:424 (3,4,5) - This isn't symmetry, try at center like and make them reflected
01:41:836 (5) - No point slowing down but, NC it if you want to

[-Kirito's Hard]
Good and ok to play, maybe there can be more creative? >.<? Not sure, keep it if you want to, it's nice
00:16:777 (5) - Unstack this, place above 00:17:130 (1) - might make better flow
00:21:718 (4) - Place at tail of 00:20:660 (2) -
00:24:718 (3,4,5) - I prefer to switch their place with 00:25:071 (6) -
00:25:248 (7,8) - ^ If you do, swap them too
00:47:130 (4) - Place below 00:47:483 (5) -
01:05:660 - Missing vocal?
01:06:365 - Note here
01:07:071 - Vocal
01:17:483 (4) - Stack with 01:16:424 (1) - (optional)

Hope they helped
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