This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 сентября 2014 г. at 17:42:58

Artist: Sergey Eybog
Title: Everlasting Summer
Source: Everlasting Summer
Tags: eroge visual novel iichan kiviman game russian
BPM: 140
Filesize: 22514kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy - 7Key (1,14 stars, 184 notes)
2. Hard - 7Key (2,03 stars, 396 notes)
3. Normal - 7Key (1,45 stars, 310 notes)

Download: Sergey Eybog - Everlasting Summer
Download: Sergey Eybog - Everlasting Summer (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy - 100% Hitsound = 100%
Normal - 100% Hitsound = 100%
Hard - 100% Hitsound = 100%

Kiviman's MX Difficulty

Mod: 14/7
Bubbled by Shi-Ra
Ranked by Simple_Star

Hello,Lesus,here is mod by your request~
Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[General]
You need Open Aimod to Check these Problems:
1.Preview Point
2.Letter Box
3.Enable Countdown
4.Tags
5.Kiai Time,It must be same in every Diffs
[Summer]
HP6 OD7
00:53:040 - ~ 00:54:969 - Unnecessary Double Notes
00:55:183 - I Suggest you this--> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1324172
01:20:897 - Add a Note at 3
01:21:326 - Add a Note at 6

[Everlasting]
HP8 OD7
00:11:897 (11897|3,11897|2) - Move to 5 and 7
00:18:326 (18326|3) - Move to 5
00:18:754 (18754|4) - Move to 2
00:22:183 (22183|1) - Move to 7
01:20:469 (80469|4) - Move to 7

[Kivi]
I need cite ljqandylee's Say. "Any patterns should fit the song, fit the instruments in it"
You need Rethink This Diff

Good Luck

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello,Lesus,here is mod by your request~
Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[General]
You need Open Aimod to Check these Problems:
1.Preview Point
2.Letter Box
3.Enable Countdown
4.Tags
5.Kiai Time,It must be same in every Diffs
[Summer]
HP6 OD7
00:53:040 - ~ 00:54:969 - Unnecessary Double Notes
00:55:183 - I Suggest you this--> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1324172
01:20:897 - Add a Note at 3
01:21:326 - Add a Note at 6

[Everlasting]
HP8 OD7
00:11:897 (11897|3,11897|2) - Move to 5 and 7
00:18:326 (18326|3) - Move to 5
00:18:754 (18754|4) - Move to 2
00:22:183 (22183|1) - Move to 7
01:20:469 (80469|4) - Move to 7

[Kivi]
I need cite ljqandylee's Say. "Any patterns should fit the song, fit the instruments in it"
You need Rethink This Diff

Good Luck

Thank you very much Simple Star

Hi mod by request damn too long

[General]

- delete sum.ogg , it was doesn't need as hitsound. too low audio sound[/list]

- Recommended to turn all volume timing to 40%

- Set preview time 00:28:397 -

- Set kiai time from 00:28:397 - 00:55:826 -

- You should give respective name diff use the right name as difficult, EZ - MX, now your diff name doesn't sense as name difficult

[Summer]

- 00:12:969 (12969|3,14254|3) - move this to 1st, just more fit pattern

- 00:24:111 (24111|4) - move to 00:23:897 -

- 00:26:254 (26254|2) - delete

- 00:45:540 (45540|4) - move to 6th

- 00:46:183 (46183|2) - move to 2nd

- 00:56:469 - add note here

- 01:00:326 (60326|5) - move to 01:00:111 -

- 01:13:611 (73611|4) - move to 6th

in my problem, most beat placement seems randomly placed. i'm confuse to see where the sound that you followed. pattern is fine

[Everlasting Summer]

- 00:01:611 (1611|2) - move to 1st & 00:01:611 (1611|3) - move to 7th

- 00:05:040 (5040|4) - move to 1st

- 00:12:969 (12969|2) - move to 6th

- 00:23:897 (23897|3) - move to 6th

- 00:26:754 (26754|6,26897|5,27254|5,27397|3,27540|4,27611|3,27683|2,27969|2,28111|3,28183|2,28254|1) - you should fix this pattern & the real beat placement

a best way if you want to improve this map is re-arrange all

[Hell Summer]

- 00:12:969 (12969|3) - delete this then extend 00:11:897 (11897|5,11897|1) - to 00:12:969 - , it's worth as good pattern

- 00:15:326 (15326|4,15326|3,16397|2) - this does same like above

a best way if you want to improve this map is re-arrange all

[Overall]

yeah i see most your beat pattern messed up, i highly you to re-arrange them to pattern which fit to the hand - and good as pattern - and importantly follow the piano sounds. it's the best work in this song. anyway good luck for ranking !

Reikosaka wrote:

Hi mod by request damn too long

[General]

- delete sum.ogg , it was doesn't need as hitsound. too low audio sound[/list]

- Recommended to turn all volume timing to 40%

- Set preview time 00:28:397 -

- Set kiai time from 00:28:397 - 00:55:826 -

- You should give respective name diff use the right name as difficult, EZ - MX, now your diff name doesn't sense as name difficult

[Summer]

- 00:12:969 (12969|3,14254|3) - move this to 1st, just more fit pattern

- 00:24:111 (24111|4) - move to 00:23:897 -

- 00:26:254 (26254|2) - delete

- 00:45:540 (45540|4) - move to 6th

- 00:46:183 (46183|2) - move to 2nd

- 00:56:469 - add note here

- 01:00:326 (60326|5) - move to 01:00:111 -

- 01:13:611 (73611|4) - move to 6th

in my problem, most beat placement seems randomly placed. i'm confuse to see where the sound that you followed. pattern is fine

[Everlasting Summer]

- 00:01:611 (1611|2) - move to 1st & 00:01:611 (1611|3) - move to 7th

- 00:05:040 (5040|4) - move to 1st

- 00:12:969 (12969|2) - move to 6th

- 00:23:897 (23897|3) - move to 6th

- 00:26:754 (26754|6,26897|5,27254|5,27397|3,27540|4,27611|3,27683|2,27969|2,28111|3,28183|2,28254|1) - you should fix this pattern & the real beat placement

a best way if you want to improve this map is re-arrange all

[Hell Summer]

- 00:12:969 (12969|3) - delete this then extend 00:11:897 (11897|5,11897|1) - to 00:12:969 - , it's worth as good pattern

- 00:15:326 (15326|4,15326|3,16397|2) - this does same like above

a best way if you want to improve this map is re-arrange all

[Overall]

yeah i see most your beat pattern messed up, i highly you to re-arrange them to pattern which fit to the hand - and good as pattern - and importantly follow the piano sounds. it's the best work in this song. anyway good luck for ranking !

Thank you so much darling Reika

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!
Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Summer EZ]
Nice EZ~

[Everlasting Summer NM]
Kool NM~

[Hell Summer HD]


[Kivi's MX]
Too complicated for me. Suggesting to reduce usage of LNs. I will just mention some few points.
[Overall]
Nice relaxing song and good for a 1st timer like you. Go ask more mods so you can work on it more closer to ranked! Thank you for requesting and Goodluck!

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!
Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Summer EZ]
Nice EZ~

SPOILER

00:06:111 (6111|6) - move to 6. I assume this is the mirror version of this LN 00:02:683 (2683|0) but the pitch is lower so change column.\
00:09:540 (9540|1) - move to 1. Same as 00:02:683 (2683|0) and reduce it length which it should be on the white line same as the other LN for that sound
00:10:826 (10826|3) - move to 00:10:611
00:11:040 (11040|6) - remove
00:11:254 (11254|2) - move to 6
00:24:754 (24754|1,24969|2) - ctrl h for pitch
00:28:397 (28397|3) - move to 2
00:30:969 (30969|2) - move to 2
00:31:397 (31397|6) - move to 5
00:37:183 (37183|0) - move to 4
00:37:826 (37826|3,38254|0) - move to 2 and 6
00:44:040 (44040|2) - move to 1. same pitch and mirror of 00:42:754 (42754|6)
00:45:111 (45111|0) - move to 2
00:54:969 - Suggesting : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1438745
• Pitch for the piano-like sound, stair is comfortable and consistent.

[Everlasting Summer NM]
Kool NM~

SPOILER

00:11:254 - add note to 1. chord piano sound, should be 2-noted.
00:12:969 (12969|2) - remove. no other sound to be 2-noted.
00:22:183 (22183|6) - move to 6
00:26:754 (26754|6,26897|5,27326|5,27397|4,27469|3,27540|4,27611|5,27683|6,27754|1,27969|0,28040|2,28111|3,28183|2,28254|1) - resnapped these notes as they are off. It should be just on 1/2 and 1/4 lines. Listen carefully with 25% speed. Apply to all similar notes.
00:28:504 (28504|4) - same with this. Snap and move it at 00:28:397 then add note to 7 for chord,
00:31:826 - add note to 2. ^
00:33:754 (33754|0) - move to 5
00:35:254 - add note to 5
00:42:111 - add note to 5 for cymbal-finish-like sound,
00:45:540 - add note to 7
00:48:969 - add note to 2
01:20:469 - suggesting stair notes like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1438784

[Hell Summer HD]

SPOILER

00:11:897 (11897|1,11897|5) - extend this long note to 00:12:969
00:41:576 (41576|6) - move to 00:41:683
• Note: Some notes do not represent instruments. I suggest to remove them. Use Playback Rate 25% and see and hear if your notes do represent an instrument in the mp3. Turn off sound effects so you can clearly hear it.

[Kivi's MX]
Too complicated for me. Suggesting to reduce usage of LNs. I will just mention some few points.

SPOILER

• Intro: The piano sounds should not be on Mini-LN, change those to short notes. This is to avoid LN abuse.
00:27:647 (27647|3) - move to 5
00:27:969 (27969|0,28183|0) - move to 6
01:21:540 - add another LN note at 2 and same length as 01:21:540 (81540|5)

[Overall]
Nice relaxing song and good for a 1st timer like you. Go ask more mods so you can work on it more closer to ranked! Thank you for requesting and Goodluck!

Thank you very much

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

[Kivi's MX]
Too complicated for me. Suggesting to reduce usage of LNs. I will just mention some few points.

SPOILER

• Intro: The piano sounds should not be on Mini-LN, change those to short notes. This is to avoid LN abuse.
00:27:647 (27647|3) - move to 5
00:27:969 (27969|0,28183|0) - move to 6
01:21:540 - add another LN note at 2 and same length as 01:21:540 (81540|5)

Thank you! All done C:

Hi, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Лень оболочку на русский переписывать, в боксах всё на русском в общем

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
Everlasting Summer [NM]

Hell Summer [HD]

Kivi's MX

Good luck :3/

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Kivi's MX
00:15:540 - здесь можно добавить ещё одну ноту в пятый столбец согласно бэксаунду

00:18:969 - аналогично предыдущему, но опционально, поскольку здесь это может быть неудобно и потребуется переделать весь паттерн

00:25:826 - можно добавить ноту в шестой столбец согласно тому же звуку на бг, что и в двух предыдущих случаях

01:03:969 (63969|4) - эту ноту можно удалить, одной здесь вполне достаточно, мелодия здесь идёт чистая, без добавочных битов или нот
ну нельзя же, барабан и пианино

01:11:897 (71897|2) - три ноты слишком много для акцента двух звуков здесь, перемести её сюда 01:12:111 - и выдели с помощью неё бэкбит

01:18:754 (78754|3) - аналогичная ситуация, передвинь её сюда - 01:18:969

Остальное поправил, спасибо С:

mother of Русский

Haha, why not

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Лень оболочку на русский переписывать, в боксах всё на русском в общем

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
Everlasting Summer [NM]

Inside :3

00:02:683 (2683|5) - советую сдвинуть в третий столбец и сделать паттерн двухсторонним с ЛНами по бокам, это будет намного удобнее, чем с текущим положением этой ноты

00:06:111 (6111|1) - аналогичная проблема и такой же совет для её решения, все паттерны должны быть сбалансированными

00:07:611 (7611|3) - эту же ноту лучше передвинуть во второй столбец, чтобы получить более удобный паттерн с промежутком в один столбец после каждой ноты

00:15:326 (15326|4) - рекомендую использовать открытые аккорды и переставить эту ноту в пятый столбец, это намного удобнее чем три плотный аккорд с зажатием ЛНа

00:17:040 (17040|1) - всё тот же третий столбец, последний раз здесь упоминаю об этом, дальше просмотри и думаю сможешь разобраться в том, как сделать всё сбалансированнее

00:26:790 (26790|6) - передвинь чуть назад, на 00:26:683 - бит идёт здесь именно в такой очерёдности

От 00:34:397 до 00:35:254 - рекомендую так же использовать открытые аккорды с промежутком в один столбец между нотами, это касается и паттернов далее

00:39:754 (39754|4) - передвинь во второй столбец, текущее положение слишком неудобно в виду близкого расположения к ЛНу

Hell Summer [HD]

Inside :3

00:01:611 (1611|4,1611|3) - рекомендую переставить эти ноты в четвёртый и шестой столбцы соответственно, данный паттерн будет более удобным для игры с ЛНами

00:05:040 (5040|5) - эту ноту можно переместить в нулевой столбец, это будет более удобно играть вместе с предыдущим паттерном

00:15:326 (15326|4,15326|3) - во-первых, необходимо удалить один из ЛНов, здесь нет никакого усиливающего звука, во-вторых нужно дотянуть ЛН до конца - 00:16:397 - чтобы правильно его расположить

00:17:040 (17040|1) - как писал ранее, три близко расположенные ноты играть не комфортно, чтобы исправить эту проблему, перемести данную ноту в 4й или 5й столбец

00:20:469 (20469|4,20469|3,23897|4,23897|3) - снова не могу увидеть оснований для расположения двух ЛНов одновременно в этих частях, удали лишнее и попробуй разнообразить паттерн, располагая ЛНы более вариативно например 4й>2й>5й>1й столбцы, это будет намного удобнее играть

00:23:147 (23147|5,23147|6) - похоже эти ноты съехали ниже, чем полагается, верни их на место - 00:23:254

00:25:611 (25611|5,25611|2,26576|6) - снова не в такт, поправь и расположи это всё здесь - 00:26:683

От 00:39:326 до 00:41:254 - и далее, снова советую использовать открытые аккорды, чтобы более разнообразить паттерны и сделать их удобнее, к тому же закрытые аккорды намного сложнее играть с ЛНами

00:48:111 - предлагаю заменить эту часть на такой паттерн, более удобный бреккетинг

Далее постарайся ориентироваться на вышенаписанное и исправить остальные проблемы, по сути они все те же - закрытые аккорды, не дотянутые до конца ЛНы и т.д.

Kivi's MX

Inside :3

00:15:540 - здесь можно добавить ещё одну ноту в пятый столбец согласно бэксаунду

00:18:969 - аналогично предыдущему, но опционально, поскольку здесь это может быть неудобно и потребуется переделать весь паттерн

00:25:826 - можно добавить ноту в шестой столбец согласно тому же звуку на бг, что и в двух предыдущих случаях

01:03:969 (63969|4) - эту ноту можно удалить, одной здесь вполне достаточно, мелодия здесь идёт чистая, без добавочных битов или нот

01:11:897 (71897|2) - три ноты слишком много для акцента двух звуков здесь, перемести её сюда 01:12:111 - и выдели с помощью неё бэкбит

01:18:754 (78754|3) - аналогичная ситуация, передвинь её сюда - 01:18:969

Good luck :3/

спасибо Шира :3

hi ~ from queue :3

yoshilove wrote:

hi ~ from queue :3

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

7k

[EZ]
nice~

[NM]
00:12:969 - add note to 5
00:30:969 (30969|2,30969|3) - left 2 column
00:41:683 (41683|4) - move to 4

[HD]
why drum sound?
00:05:040 - add note to 4
00:12:969 - add LN to 3 end 00:13:826 and add note to 5
00:42:111 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1496132
00:43:076 - add note to 7
00:43:183 - add note to 1
00:43:504 (43504|1) - remove
00:43:719 - add note
00:43:933 (43933|1) - remove
[Kivi's MX]
nice~

Thank you yoshi

Hi~! Mods for your chart as requested.

[General]

- Add to tags : electronic Russia and remove those " , "

[EZ]

00:12:969 (12969|0) - Delete this ln, it doesnt have a meaning and it doesn follow any sound. the start of this ln should be at 00:11:597 so listen carefully.

00:14:040 - 00:14:469 Add notes in these parts, it feels very empty and might be a little odd cause its a passive and strong sound.

00:16:397 (16397|6) - End this on 00:17:040 and add note in there as well. to follow the sound better.

00:20:469 This part has a very very strong sound. And you still ignored it, i suggest you to add a note here to fill the emptiness.

00:27:326 (27326|1,27540|2,27969|3,28183|5) - These notes doesnt even give any use, it doesnt follow the sound very well. i suggest you to turn these notes into this: , This way it follows the sound perfectly and easily

00:38:683 (38683|6) - This one has a high pitch, so consider adding another note on 1

00:56:254 (56254|5,56469|3,56683|1,57111|4) - What you did is pattern breaking and it isnt good you should have sticked to your pattern or else it gone so ugly. So turn it like this :

01:02:897 add another note, such strong piano sound cannot be ignored.

[NM]

00:01:611 (1611|6,1611|3,1611|0) - Not sure about these, a triple at the intro? I only recommend it on HD+ higher diffs! also you have many kind of problem like this so fix them

00:15:111 (15111|1,15326|1) - This minijack/ministack doesnt really fit i suggest you to find and be more creative on your pattern.

00:27:647 (27647|4) - Delete this note its doesnt follow the sound anymore.

00:27:754 (27754|5,27754|6,28183|2,28183|3) - Delete one of them i dont know why you doubled here, have a listen.

00:39:754 (39754|1,39969|1) - I suggest you to mirror this 00:40:397 (40397|3,40611|4) - instead

[HD]

00:09:540 (9540|2,9540|3) - I suggest you to be more creative and move this note in another columns, cause it doesnt fit here. try 1 and 7 i think,

00:11:254 (11254|1) - Place this note at the middle, it fits on the pattern the most.

00:25:611 (25611|2) - move this note to 2 to make your pattern more consistent and eligible.

00:28:290 (28290|4) - Delete this note useless.

00:48:111 (48111|2,48111|0,48111|5,48219|6,48219|1,48219|4,48326|3,48433|2,48540|1,48540|4,48540|6,48647|3,48647|0) - Have a listen and redo these notes, be more creative keep that in mind.

01:04:397 add another note here, you cannot ignored such obvious sound.

[Kivi's MX]

00:20:469 (20469|4) - End this note on 00:21:540

00:47:040 (47040|1,47147|0,47254|1,50469|5,50576|6,50683|5) - I dont get what are you following here.

00:52:826 add another note because strong sound.

00:53:469 (53469|0) - ^

00:54:111 (54111|6) - ^

00:54:754 (54754|5) - ^

Nice mx,

Goodluck~!

thank you Yuno *o*

ahhhh suggestion/mod~

much ahhhh
Relaxing song~ Relaxing map~ ahhhh

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi~! Mods for your chart as requested.

[Kivi's MX]

00:20:469 (20469|4) - End this note on 00:21:540 Fixed

00:47:040 (47040|1,47147|0,47254|1,50469|5,50576|6,50683|5) - I dont get what are you following here. I follow my heart ... And there are sounds, seriously

00:52:826 add another note because strong sound. OK

00:53:469 (53469|0) - ^ OK

00:54:111 (54111|6) - ^ Yes, but it's too clean and there should be only one note, I think. Also, I stressed same sounds with one note further too lazy to change

00:54:754 (54754|5) - ^ ^

Nice mx,

Goodluck~!

Thank you very much! That was useful

Lokovodo wrote:

ahhhh suggestion/mod~

EZ

00:42:111 move to 7
00:42:754 move to 6

much ahhhh

NM

00:37:826 move 4 to 6
00:47:469 move to 2
00:47:683 move 4 to 5
00:47:683 move 6 to 7
00:48:111 move 3 to 2
00:48:540 move 7 to 6
00:51:540 move 3 to 1
01:06:754 move 5 to 2
01:11:897 move 6 to 7
01:13:611 move 4 to 3
01:13:611 move 5 to 6
01:15:326 move 6 to 1
01:17:040 move 2 to 1
01:18:754 move 5 to 2
01:19:611 delete 3
01:19:826 move to 3
01:20:469 move 4 to 5

Relaxing song~ Relaxing map~ ahhhh

Thank you