1. Cup (3.52 stars, 123 notes)
2. Platter (5 stars, 224 notes)
3. Rain (5 stars, 292 notes)
4. Salad (4.28 stars, 144 notes)

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- R u m i a - wrote:

platter suggestion x.x

14:15 mingmichael: rumiaaaaaaaaaa
14:15 mingmichael: i need your helpp againnn
14:15 mingmichael: ;3;
14:15 - R u m i a -: yes
14:15 - R u m i a -: what is it ming :3
14:16 *mingmichael is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/336277 UVERworld - CORE PRIDE (TV Size)]
14:16 mingmichael: can you try it? ;w;?
14:16 mingmichael: i need some comments about the diffs
14:16 mingmichael: ;3;
14:19 - R u m i a -: ok
14:19 - R u m i a -: dat ctb map
14:19 - R u m i a -: wa
14:19 - R u m i a -: ming so pro mappur.
14:19 mingmichael: ;w;)b yeah www
14:19 mingmichael: damnn, no prooo loll
14:22 mingmichael: too hard for platter? ;w;?
14:22 mingmichael: damnnn i can't make platter well.... ;3;
14:23 - R u m i a -: no its ok
14:23 - R u m i a -: but
14:23 - R u m i a -: y the heck the start
14:23 - R u m i a -: so fast
14:23 - R u m i a -: lolol
14:23 mingmichael: lolll
14:23 mingmichael: i will set the auto delay later xD
14:23 - R u m i a -: i have some suggestion tho
14:24 - R u m i a -: but lemme check other diff
14:24 mingmichael: wat wat??? tell meeee owo)
14:24 mingmichael: okayy
14:24 - R u m i a -: dafuq so gay lol
14:24 mingmichael: xDDD
14:24 - R u m i a -: xDD
14:25 - R u m i a -: idk y rain maps so hard for me T-T
14:25 mingmichael: wat is yor suggestions?
14:25 mingmichael: xD
14:25 - R u m i a -: 00:00:388 (1,2) -
14:26 - R u m i a -: make stair to right
14:26 mingmichael: what diff btw?
14:26 - R u m i a -: platter lol
14:26 - R u m i a -: i only play that diff xD ?
14:26 mingmichael: ohhhhhhh xDDD lol kay ka
14:26 mingmichael: 00:00:712 (2) - make straight with 00:00:388 (1) - ?
14:27 mingmichael: hmm i don't make it straight now, just move to left a bit :3
14:28 - R u m i a -: yea
14:28 - R u m i a -: ok o,o
14:32 - R u m i a -: 00:41:415 (2) -
14:32 - R u m i a -: 1/4 slider?
14:32 - R u m i a -: move left a bit , then make slider head to right
14:32 - R u m i a -: lol da heck im modding ctb
14:33 mingmichael: ohh no xD i focus for the drum hits there www like rain diff too
14:33 - R u m i a -: it looks like it freezed for a bit
14:33 mingmichael: yes that's right :3
14:34 - R u m i a -: 00:55:523 (2,3) -
14:34 - R u m i a -: move to right a bit ww
14:34 - R u m i a -: make more syok play
14:34 - R u m i a -: or 00:54:874 (1) -
14:34 - R u m i a -: to left a bit bit
14:36 mingmichael: changed :3
14:36 mingmichael: and change the previous notes too www
14:36 mingmichael: 00:52:279 (1,2,3) - move to a bit left tooo
14:36 - R u m i a -: 01:10:117 (6) - left a bit make the pattern balance
14:37 mingmichael: welll i used reverse pattern there :c
14:37 mingmichael: okay~
14:37 mingmichael: change something btw there www
14:37 - R u m i a -: 01:13:685 (5,6) - i think make it outward better o , like this 01:13:036 (3,4) - but reverse the head xD idk how to explain
14:38 - R u m i a -: 01:13:036 (3,4) - this is inward xD lol
14:39 mingmichael: owhh with mine :'c those notes are easier to catch btw xD
14:41 - R u m i a -: 01:18:225 (1) - move to right by 1
14:41 - R u m i a -: lol
14:41 - R u m i a -: 01:18:712 (2) - move up by 1
14:42 mingmichael: well moved a bit :3
14:42 - R u m i a -: last part so hard lol
14:42 - R u m i a -: but idk what to suggest so
14:42 - R u m i a -: xD
14:43 - R u m i a -: k thats all i think idk what to suggest d
14:43 mingmichael: yeahhh :3
14:44 - R u m i a -: is it helpful? lol
14:44 mingmichael: sureeee helppp >3<
14:44 mingmichael: just post the chat to the forum :3
14:44 mingmichael: kds kds~
14:44 - R u m i a -: ok lol xD

1. Take this difficulty spread as reference, please: t/151744&start=0. It is guideline by now in CTB maps to keep AR and OD constant, so I suggest you AR+1 because 4 is very low for a Cup.
2. 00:06:874 (1) - Plays very weird here, I'd remove the reverse arrow and substitute this part with single notes at 00:07:847 - and 00:08:171 - to create a kind of triplet - pattern. Or you should think about letting the spinner start at 00:08:171 - already.
3. You have a lot of pauses now which are not comprehensible for me. You really should think about adding some notes:
   00:11:739 - There is a drum voice here, why no note?
   00:13:685 - ^
   00:14:982 - ^
   00:15:631 - ^
   00:16:928 - ^
   00:19:198 - ^ Maybe you thought something behind this but those are important 1/1 sections that normally need a note. I can understand you tried to map on vocals but listen clear here: He sings on these sections, for example at 00:14:982 - he definitely sings "core" or something similar.
4. 00:08:496 (1) - Spinner should start 1/1 section earlier already. Listen to the rhythm.
5. 00:10:766 (1) - Why NC here? Not really needed after 1 note.
6. 00:12:063 (2,3) - Very boring to play. Try this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229236
7. 00:27:631 (2) - In CtB you don't really see that this is a vertical slider with so many reverse arrows. Also, I do not like sliders with so many reverse arrows. Here a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229243
8. 00:41:252 (1,2,3) - , 00:43:847 (2,3,4) - , 00:51:631 (2,3,1) - , 00:54:225 (3,4,1) - , and so on... and so on... You used this triplet shape too often. And always the same distance makes it very repeating and boring. Think of different shapes that make these sections more interesting, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229297 (that's only possible on this part cos of the singer's rhythm), or a slider with reverse arrow. Be creative.
9. 00:52:279 (1) - According to the rhythm this section should end at 00:52:604 - , if you agree add a single note at 00:52:928 - .
10. 01:09:793 (3) - CTRL+G for a better left-right-left-right-flow.
11. 01:20:820 (1,1) - Too boring, you could mirror 01:20:820 (1) - to the same as 01:23:415 (1) - , what I mean is this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229327
12. 01:27:306 (2) - Very boring ending. How about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229337

1. OD +1 to make it the same as AR which is guideline in CtB mapsets.
2. 00:02:009 (1) - Might be more interesting if you create a bit of movement here, for example by not leaving this slider completely straight or create a little stream with single notes.
3. 00:08:496 (1) - Spinner has to start 1/1 earlier, like in the Cup.
4. 00:12:063 (1) - I miss a little jump here cos of the voice. Remove the reverse arrow and do something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229383
5. 00:32:496 (2) - Move this more to the left, a little bit of challenge is fitting here somehow.
6. 00:45:793 (3) - Change the position more to the left, so it has the same distance as the previous note: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229376
7. 00:45:306 (2) - If you want you can also delete this slider and make a triplet here, I find this much better.
8. 01:09:306 (3,4,1) - Very boring to play, it is just way too linear. Move 01:10:442 (1) - much more to the left to create a little jump here, but still NOT A Hdash since this is not allowed in a Salad! For example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229411
9. Increase distance a bit from note to note to create a better ending feeling: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229416

1. Very solid Platter, I must say. You have talent for it.
2. 00:02:333 (3,4) - Increase distance of these both even a bit more, I cannot really feel a big difference to the previous notes.
3. 00:14:496 (3) - More to the right to increase the distance here a bit.
4. 00:28:604 (4,5) - Move them more to the left, a jump is needed here due to the harsh rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229451
5. 00:31:523 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda repititive section. Move 00:32:171 (3,4) - more to the right to create more movement. And careful with the next note after (4): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1229459
6. 00:41:901 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. 00:45:306 (3) - Can be moved a bit to the left to create difficulty here.
8. 00:52:279 (1) - More to the right to create a little dash here, fits with the shout of the singer.
9. 01:28:360 (5,6,7,8) - As in Salad, increase distance from note to note a bit.

1. 00:00:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - Whoa!! Very unexpected for the beginning of the map. I am not sure if you directly should start with something like that. Decrease the distance a bit maybe.
2. 00:23:739 (1,2) - The transition between these notes is very filthy. Move 00:24:063 (2) - a bit more to the left to keep a better flow here.
3. 00:59:901 (1,1) - Too unexpected HDash. You stand there, waiting for the next note and directly need to rush to the right but stand a while there without doing anything. Try to create more movement in the whole section, if possible. or erase the Hdash.
4. 01:09:793 (3,4,5,6) - Always increase distance here a bit more from note to note. This makes it much cooler to play.
5. Rest seems pretty nice here. I somehow like this Rain a lot.

SUBSTAC9 wrote:

Good Luck to you ming

1. Fix your bg size, it's not exactly in 1024*768 but in 7024*764.
2. Generally we avoid to use a red combo like yours, due to the color of the hyperdash. Change this to a brighter or darker red.
3. Take this as my personal opinion, but in all your diff I found your kiai really boring. Compared to the rest of the diff the density of note is reduced and there is any huge difference of spacing. Also I can't understand why it's not extended to 01:24:712 - for me it's still the same part of the song
4. 01:24:712 (1) - 2/3 repeated slider ? Are you sure of this one I can't see another 1/3 snaping in your map

1. You seem to use a 1,20* spacing during all the diff. It's ok for a cup but I think that you can increase a few number of spacing accorded to the song.
2. 00:12:063 (3) - I think it's more logic with the song (and even if it's a cup) to change this to a 1/1 slider + a note at 00:12:712 - Also all the following part with 1/1repeated sliders are really boring to play due to your low sv (0,80)
3. 00:28:928 (4,1) - More logic if the nc is on (4)
4. 00:29:415 (1,1) - I talked about increasing spacing in cup here is an example. Here your note are isolated (more than 1/2 break before and after) so I think that you can use something more interesting here. Take this as an example, spacing is increased and slider are leaned to show to players the direction of the next note http://puu.sh/6cQz4.jpg
5. 00:42:550 (1,2) - The flow is bad here :s This can be more logic and interesting if you use something like this here http://puu.sh/6cSCC.jpg or http://puu.sh/6cT0v.jpg
6. 00:58:117 (1,2) - Stack have bad look in ctb. There is no need to add difficulty but just something like will have a better look http://puu.sh/6cTz7.jpg. Same remark for all following stacks and especially this one 01:09:793 (3,1) - where you can at least curve (1)
7. 01:00:063 (1,2) - Orly a stack :'( If (1) really deserve for you a kiai flash it's not logic to have something like this between (1,2). Try this for example it seem more logic http://puu.sh/6cTl8.jpg

1. Same sv as cup ? Cause of this all your sliders have really a lack of movement even when they are totally horizontal. It's probably too late for a rework but next time avoid this kind of thing. This is really a problem for your 1/1repeated sliders because you don't really need to move to catch the head and the tail :s
2. 00:00:388 (1,1,1) - Why a nc spam here ?
3. 00:02:496 (4,1,1) - As my personal opinion the jump should be between (4,1) rather than currently
4. 00:02:820 (1) - Remove nc there is no need for just a note :s
5. 00:14:658 (1) - 00:17:252 (1) - Those one could be changed to a slider 1/1 + a note. By consistency with 00:12:063 (1,2) -
6. 00:15:631 - No note here ?
7. 00:29:415 (1,1) - Move each of them by two grid outward. You can give here to the player something more spaced than the actual 1,50* spacing.
8. 00:40:279 (2) - Not a huge fan of your stack but if you really want to keep this move at least this one to the tail of 00:40:442 (1) - for a better look
9. 00:45:793 (5) - Spacing fail ? If you really want to have a fluid movement for (2,3,4,5) move this one to 1grid to the right.
10. 00:49:685 (1) - Divide this one to a note + 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/6d289.jpg this is more logic. Also if you do this you can add a jump between those notes since 00:49:685 (1) - is really strong, same for the spacing here 01:00:063 (1,2) -
11. 01:15:631 (1,1,1,2,1) - All this kiai is really boring ... It's more or less the same as your cup.
12. 01:16:928 (1) - Remove nc by logic with your cup
13. 01:20:171 (1) - Same as 01:16:928 (1) - also why this one is a slider ? Change this to 2 notes currently it's more easy than your cup.
14. 01:28:442 (5) - This one can be changed to 2 notes for a better ending. Another idea would be to change the sv of this slider for a better flow but you don't really use this kind of thing here ...

1. I have to be agree with Sey this platter is really solid. But (because there is alway a but) I have some doubts about your use of jump specially in the last quarter of the song and I will try to explain this later in the mod.
2. Next time use a grid 3 for your platter :s
3. 00:01:523 (1) - You can remove this nc, this one isn't really needed.
4. 00:02:496 (4,1) - As already said in the salad for me this one should be a more important jump. Try to move (1) by 2 grid to left. Also not sure if you really need a nc here. Be careful if you change the spacing here you probably need to curve this one 00:03:306 (1) -
5. 00:04:279 (1,2,1) - The strong note is on (2) and note on 1st (1) so your hdash should be between (2,1) and not between (1,2). Try to move (2) to x=416 it's not a hdash but totally playable.
6. 00:10:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This seem cool in editor but something more smoother will be more cool to play (but you need a grid 3 '-')
7. 00:28:279 (3,4) - Reduce this one it's a jump closer to the spacing of a hdash and can be really hard to catch. or change this to a hdash (one grid to the left).
8. 00:59:415 (3,4,1,1) - The placement of (3,4,1) isn't really the best. When I play this I have the feeling that it's just made on purpose to have a hdash between (1,1) and to be quite frank the result isn't perfect :s Try to ctrl+g (3,4) and to move (3) to x=160 I think it's more interesting.
9. 00:59:901 (1) - A nc just for a note ?
10. 01:16:117 (2,3) - Ok so here is my big doubt about your jump, for me during all the kiai (and also after because it's the same song u_u) all this kind of 2-plet should be a more important jump. Those notes are mapped on 2 strong syllables and so could be more interesting. Same for 01:17:415 (2,3) - 01:18:712 (2) - for this one I don't understand also your use of a slider 01:21:306 (2,3) - 01:22:604 (2,3) - 01:23:901 (2,3) -
11. 01:16:604 (1) - 01:17:901 (1) - Remove nc here, those one are useless and not logic with the following part when you have the same kind of timeline and a combo different like here 01:20:820 (1,2,3,4) -
12. 01:24:712 (1,2,1) - I personally ear the huge spacing between (2,1) than between (1,2)

1. Nice rain, really ...
2. 00:01:360 (1) - No need for a nc here, not justified by your song or your pattern
3. 00:02:496 (4,1) - Reduce this jump, after a hdash a jump like is too hard for a rain
4. 00:18:063 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not fan of this kind of thing. A curved stream will have a better look a give a better flow here. Try to just move (6) to x=384
5. 00:26:090 (4,1) - Reduce this jump, it's really hard to catch this just after
6. 00:26:333 (1) - Change this to a curved slider for a smoother curve http://puu.sh/6dcLa.jpg
7. 01:01:036 (1) - 01:03:469 (1) - 01:08:820 (1) - I don't really understand your nc here
8. 01:20:658 (4,1) - An hdash here would be logic for the consistency with all your hdash in this part
9. 01:24:712 (1,2) - There is no real reason for a hdash here