AnreFM wrote:

Hey Mint :3 M4M from your queue~

[General]
Audio bit rate is higher than 192kbps which currently is 256kbps, convert it to lower fixed
How about adding an easy? The song is relaxing and easy is really fit to it nope, normal is already easy
No hitsound? D: just when I'm about to mod the hitsound --" are you sure? please check it again


[Bubbles]
00:02:848 (1) - NC for the vocal start and to avoid some long combos for normal sorry but i don't follow vocal and it's no long combos for normal
00:28:563 (5) - use 0.75 SV here? fit with the vocal no, it's too hard for normal
00:49:991 (5) - NC for long combos too, 8 isn't exactly short on normal
00:55:348 (4,5,1) - How about to stack these three together in the (4) instead of (5)? It gives a better relaxing feeling and the straight line pattern on (4) and (5) isn't looked exactly good orz wat? it should be play better. looked means nothing.
01:01:420 (5) - NC?
01:05:705 (2) - NC here instead of 01:04:277 (1) - the vocal divides here
01:07:134 (3) - NC here too
01:12:848 (4) - bring this up a few grid to avoid that small hitburst overlap and get a better encirclement on o 01:11:063 (2) - ok

[Fireworks]
00:52:848 (1) - move this up to 212 220 for better blanket on the (3) slider hitburst and a higher jump which is fit with the current vocal. A bit more like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896080 nope, on playing (3) is already disappear.
00:52:848 (1) - add note here for a triplet? The current vocal is fit are you sure? it's totally no fit anymore
01:07:134 (1,2) - hmm try to make it like this for better encirclement http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896088 no

Ummm I guess that's all, amazing map as always mint-san:3
Hope that will be useful to you and be ranked soon!

i think you better see at playing but not on editing, but anyway thanks.

11:15 cheesiest: hey
11:15 mintong89: hey
11:16 cheesiest: so like
11:16 cheesiest: your mapet
11:16 cheesiest: mapset*
11:16 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281495 supercell - Utakata Hanabi (TV Size) [Fireworks]]
11:16 mintong89: thanks o.o
11:16 cheesiest: can I do an IRC mod real quick?
11:16 cheesiest: or would you like me to post a forum mod?
11:16 mintong89: sure
11:16 cheesiest: which one? :3c
11:16 mintong89: irc :3
11:17 cheesiest: 00:05:348 (2,3) - i think you should make the 2 a slider
11:17 cheesiest: that is 1/2 long
11:18 cheesiest: so you delete 3
11:18 cheesiest: 00:06:063 - and put a circle here
11:18 cheesiest: and then for 00:06:420 (4) -
11:18 cheesiest: i think you should delete it and put a circle on 00:06:420 -
11:19 cheesiest: and a slider that is 1/1 long on 00:06:777 -
11:19 cheesiest: and delete 00:07:134 (1) -
11:19 cheesiest: and take away 1 repeat on 00:07:491 (2) -
11:19 cheesiest: and then move 00:07:491 (6) -
11:20 cheesiest: to start at 00:07:848 -
11:20 mintong89: ..
11:21 cheesiest: ;~;
11:21 mintong89: 00:07:134 (1) - i put a note at here because have a piano sound here
11:21 mintong89: btw i prefer this
11:21 mintong89: http://puu.sh/3XIGf.jpg
11:22 cheesiest: ok :3c
11:22 cheesiest: 00:08:563 (7) - i think you should add a repeat
11:22 cheesiest: because like her voice is kinda like together
11:22 cheesiest: for those 3 notes
11:22 cheesiest: and ofc you have to 00:09:277 (8) - delete this or something
11:23 cheesiest: maybe put a circle here? : 00:09:634 -
11:24 mintong89: hmm ok
11:25 cheesiest: 00:12:848 (1) - the slider's first part (1/2 of the slider) looks like it's leaning in more towards the red point
11:25 cheesiest: the point at 196, 160
11:25 cheesiest: should be moved 1 to the left (grid size 4) to make it move a bit more smoothly
11:26 cheesiest: 00:16:420 (2) - and then the same thing w/ this
11:26 mintong89: ok
11:27 cheesiest: move the point at 136, 176: 1 to the left
11:27 cheesiest: maybe you can do something different with this slider: 00:22:848 (1) -
11:27 cheesiest: the map is slow enough that it shouldn't cause problems but
11:27 cheesiest: idk i thing that can be handled better
11:28 mintong89: nope, first the NC can show the SV change
11:28 cheesiest: 00:32:134 (4) - this should be extended by 1/4 more
11:29 mintong89: ..1/4?
11:29 cheesiest: yeah
11:29 cheesiest: so the slider is 3/4 long
11:29 mintong89: can you use screenshot? i'm really bad on english (
11:29 mintong89: sorry ><
11:29 cheesiest: it's ok :3c
11:30 cheesiest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/917559
11:30 mintong89: hmm ok
11:30 cheesiest: ofc, you have to move it around so that it's not a big jump to 00:32:134 (4,1) -
11:31 cheesiest: other than that
11:31 cheesiest: i think it's a really good diff
11:31 cheesiest: (-:
11:32 cheesiest: that's all i have for the fireworks diff
11:32 mintong89: thanks
11:32 cheesiest: and now we can do the bubbles diff
11:32 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281543 supercell - Utakata Hanabi (TV Size) [Bubbles]]
11:34 cheesiest: well hmm
11:34 cheesiest: i don't really have any problems with the bubbles diff
11:34 cheesiest: (-:
11:34 cheesiest: so ya
11:34 cheesiest: nice mapset (-: