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Topic Starter
mintong89
fix some thanks~
Nemis
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High suggestion (unrankable in some cases)

[General]
I'd suggest to add the epilepsy warning since there are many fast fireworks in the chorus.

[Fireworks]
00:01:420 (1,2,3,4) - To improve this pattern you should keep the same distance from 00:02:134 (2) - this note to each slider, it would be really better esthetically in my opinion:
00:04:277 (1,2,3,4) - There are many jumps in this combo but why when starts 00:07:134 (1) - this one the spacing decreases? You should make as minimum a jump 00:06:420 (4,1) - here to emphasize the combo change.
00:12:848 (1) - You should add a note instead head-end even if you'll need to change the slider, there is a vocal note that I'd not leave out.
00:14:277 (3,4,1) - Keep the same distance between these sliders, the pattern would be a lot better in my opinion:
00:19:991 (3) - For a better flow you should flip this slider horizontally (CTRL+H):
00:21:420 (1,2,1) - Same as 00:14:277 (3,4,1) - for a better pattern.
00:22:848 (1) - Increase the volume of its reverse (15-20% would be fine), the vocals aren't so low.
00:30:706 (2,3,4,1) - For a better flow you should 00:31:420 (3) - flip this slider horizontally (CTRL+H) and move it at x:136 y:108. Then you should reverse 00:32:134 (4) - this slider (CTRL+G) to obtain the pattern below:
00:32:134 (4,1) - Add a note between these two sliders to follow the vocals.
00:52:134 (4) - Rotate this slider a bit (15°) to make it different from 00:51:420 (3) - this one
00:55:706 (1) - Increase the volume (15-20% would be fine).
00:59:991 (1) - This new combo is not needed since there is a combo consistency (new combo on each downbeat).
01:12:491 (5,1) - Add a note between these two elements to follow the vocals:
01:26:777 (1) - After 01:25:705 (3) - this slider, this one would flow really better if reversed (CTRL+G):

[Bubbles]
Use AR4 and OD3 to balance the difficulty spread

00:23:563 (6) - Increase the volume (15-20% would be fine), the vocals aren't so low.
00:28:563 (5) - Same as above for its end.
00:32:848 (1) - Remove this new combo to keep consistency (new combo on each 2 downbeats).
01:08:563 (5,6,7,1) - Since this is the easiest difficulty, you shouldn't map a pattern like this one, I don't know how much is it playable from a beginner. I'd unstack 01:09:277 (7,1) - these two elements.
01:24:277 (1) - As I said for 00:32:848 (1) - remove this new combo to keep consistency (new combo on each 2 downbeats).
Topic Starter
mintong89
thanks for mod, almost fixed :D

just one thing: that volume setting is really fine for me so sorry...
cheesiest
irc mod
11:15 cheesiest: hey
11:15 mintong89: hey
11:16 cheesiest: so like
11:16 cheesiest: your mapet
11:16 cheesiest: mapset*
11:16 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281495 supercell - Utakata Hanabi (TV Size) [Fireworks]]
11:16 mintong89: thanks o.o
11:16 cheesiest: can I do an IRC mod real quick?
11:16 cheesiest: or would you like me to post a forum mod?
11:16 mintong89: sure
11:16 cheesiest: which one? :3c
11:16 mintong89: irc :3
11:17 cheesiest: 00:05:348 (2,3) - i think you should make the 2 a slider
11:17 cheesiest: that is 1/2 long
11:18 cheesiest: so you delete 3
11:18 cheesiest: 00:06:063 - and put a circle here
11:18 cheesiest: and then for 00:06:420 (4) -
11:18 cheesiest: i think you should delete it and put a circle on 00:06:420 -
11:19 cheesiest: and a slider that is 1/1 long on 00:06:777 -
11:19 cheesiest: and delete 00:07:134 (1) -
11:19 cheesiest: and take away 1 repeat on 00:07:491 (2) -
11:19 cheesiest: and then move 00:07:491 (6) -
11:20 cheesiest: to start at 00:07:848 -
11:20 mintong89: ..
11:21 cheesiest: ;~;
11:21 mintong89: 00:07:134 (1) - i put a note at here because have a piano sound here
11:21 mintong89: btw i prefer this
11:21 mintong89: http://puu.sh/3XIGf.jpg
11:22 cheesiest: ok :3c
11:22 cheesiest: 00:08:563 (7) - i think you should add a repeat
11:22 cheesiest: because like her voice is kinda like together
11:22 cheesiest: for those 3 notes
11:22 cheesiest: and ofc you have to 00:09:277 (8) - delete this or something
11:23 cheesiest: maybe put a circle here? : 00:09:634 -
11:24 mintong89: hmm ok
11:25 cheesiest: 00:12:848 (1) - the slider's first part (1/2 of the slider) looks like it's leaning in more towards the red point
11:25 cheesiest: the point at 196, 160
11:25 cheesiest: should be moved 1 to the left (grid size 4) to make it move a bit more smoothly
11:26 cheesiest: 00:16:420 (2) - and then the same thing w/ this
11:26 mintong89: ok
11:27 cheesiest: move the point at 136, 176: 1 to the left
11:27 cheesiest: maybe you can do something different with this slider: 00:22:848 (1) -
11:27 cheesiest: the map is slow enough that it shouldn't cause problems but
11:27 cheesiest: idk i thing that can be handled better
11:28 mintong89: nope, first the NC can show the SV change
11:28 cheesiest: 00:32:134 (4) - this should be extended by 1/4 more
11:29 mintong89: ..1/4?
11:29 cheesiest: yeah
11:29 cheesiest: so the slider is 3/4 long
11:29 mintong89: can you use screenshot? i'm really bad on english (
11:29 mintong89: sorry ><
11:29 cheesiest: it's ok :3c
11:30 cheesiest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/917559
11:30 mintong89: hmm ok
11:30 cheesiest: ofc, you have to move it around so that it's not a big jump to 00:32:134 (4,1) -
11:31 cheesiest: other than that
11:31 cheesiest: i think it's a really good diff
11:31 cheesiest: (-:
11:32 cheesiest: that's all i have for the fireworks diff
11:32 mintong89: thanks :D
11:32 cheesiest: and now we can do the bubbles diff
11:32 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281543 supercell - Utakata Hanabi (TV Size) [Bubbles]]
11:34 cheesiest: well hmm
11:34 cheesiest: i don't really have any problems with the bubbles diff
11:34 cheesiest: (-:
11:34 cheesiest: so ya
11:34 cheesiest: nice mapset (-:
Heanday
Hi, from #modreqs cause of yanaginagi

[Bubbles]

00:31:420 (3) - What about use Basic hit whistle end slid ? Sounds good imo

00:37:134 (2,3) - Add circle between them for follow voice a bit ? That's don't ruin the dificulty i think.

00:56:757 (1) - Why clap ? This circle don't deserve it

01:14:634 (6) - Whistle this one ?

01:20:705 (7) - Whistle the whole slider ( for sliderslide )

01:24:277 (1) - NC ?

Nice one

[Fireworks]

00:32:134 (4) - Same than previous dif, basic hit whistle ?

00:58:563 (1) - Whistle with finish ?


That's all, short song short mod :(
Topic Starter
mintong89
almost fixed thanks!
Irie Miyuki
quick mod (卖个萌

[Firework]

00:28:384 (3) - reverse那里去掉whistle吧

00:43:920 (1) - ctrl+g一下?

00:56:935 (2,3) - 我是觉得去掉finish比较好 要不就加条绿线把声音变小点? o.o

00:59:813 (4) - 蓝线clap听着怪怪的 后同 而且带上前面的finish和后面的底鼓一共连着了三次是不是有点..

01:08:920 (1) - 建议把后面的finish也换成clap

[Bubbles]

00:57:114 (2) - silder头加finish

00:59:991 (3) - 结尾的finish建议去掉跟后面保持一致

01:01:420 (5,6,7) - 我觉得把这里节奏换成1/1 slider - note - 1/1 slider的感觉更好点..


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Topic Starter
mintong89
大多都fix了 谢谢 :)
scanter
Hi Hi mint-chan ~ sry my poor mod and adjourn modding ;_; nowadays so busy =3=

General

  1. You're not used SB\white.jpg. you should delete it or insert it.

Bubbles

  1. 01:20:705 (7) - Slider's passing whistle was intended?
  2. 01:26:777 (1) - This slightly overlap of slider's start point and end point looks bad to play IMO. how about move nodes to more visible?

Fireworks

  1. 00:37:134 (3) - A little bad flow. Ctrl + G?
  2. 00:42:134 (2) - I think, this slider is hard to read. almost beginner players might think number 1 is 1/2 slider one. how about change distance to like x0.7?
  3. 01:08:920 (1) - This part hasn't anything tempo change. so, changed SV was not matched up this sound IMO.
  4. 01:26:777 (1) - Same as normal.
Sry ;_; I can't found much things. take me plz ! so nice SB ! /me runs
Topic Starter
mintong89
fixed some thanks ;w;
xChippy
Hi~ Mint :3
Random mod =w=/
Most suggestions~ :3

[Bubbles]
00:15:706 (5) - Maybe curve this slider?, This way you can also make a nice blanket with 00:17:848 (6) - :3
01:20:705 (7) - Imo this should be a finish on the head (Same finish you used here: 00:58:542 (1) - )
01:22:491 (2) - Listen closely to music: Remove whistle from head and add finish, and add whistle to end

[Fireworks]
00:42:134 (2) - Not sure about this one but this might confuse some players o-o, Since this distance differs alot from the other parts with the same rythm
00:52:134 (4) - ctrl+G flows better imo
01:12:670 (6) - add note to follow vocal o-o?
01:20:705 (4) - Same suggestion as in Bubbles

That's all :3
lol shitty mod ;.; haven't modded in 3 weeks =w=
Mint pro mapper =w=/
Topic Starter
mintong89
fix some thanks ><
Nymph
[Fireworks]
00:57:114 (4,5) - I really doubt these 1/8 sliders, they don't fit the music at all. I think 1/4 is enough

01:09:455 - I would add 2 notes or a short slider at here to follow the drum, and I don't really understand why low speed slider is using before here..


others all fine.
Topic Starter
mintong89

Nymph wrote:

[Fireworks]
00:57:114 (4,5) - I really doubt these 1/8 sliders, they don't fit the music at all. I think 1/4 is enough ok~

01:09:455 - I would add 2 notes or a short slider at here to follow the drum, and I don't really understand why low speed slider is using before here.. fixed


others all fine.
thanks for mod ><
Nymph
bubbled.
Topic Starter
mintong89
妮妮最好了 ><!
Heanday
Gogo !
Umi
supercell <3 gogo mint :3
Raose
go mintong! =w=
Oyatsu
Pro mint. Go! Go! I really like calm song ^^
scanter
go mint >3<
HelloSCV
oh god already bubbled ;_;

you can use your ticket on other songs

good luck mint :D
jericho2442
Removed some slowdown sliders what didnt follow the song correctly and also became confusing due to being identical size to some sliders next to it what was much faster, remapped them sliders to follow what the mapper told me they was origially meant to follow, just now they follow it correctly.

00:04:277 (1,2) - changed spacing at this point to follow the music and flow of the overall map better
00:08:563 (3,4,1) - same with this one, respacing to follow and flow better since the current spacing was kinda broken

these are pretty big changes so im best to rebubble, will try and help you find a bat to check
Topic Starter
mintong89
thanks >,<
Oyatsu
Ranked by Faust ><"
Faust

Oyatsu wrote:

Ranked by Faust ><"
Nope.

IRC log:

Removed all the un-needed timing sections. This is just plainly 84 BPM.

20:19 mintong89: hi 0.0
20:20 mintong89: i requested mod at morning
20:20 Faust: ;?
20:20 mintong89: umm...Utakata Hanabi
20:20 *mintong89 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281543 supercell - Utakata Hanabi (TV Size)]
20:21 Faust: I know.
20:21 mintong89: do you remember?
20:21 mintong89: oh ok
20:35 Faust: why do
20:35 Faust: you have an extra timing section
20:35 mintong89: really?
20:36 Faust: yeah
20:36 mintong89: ...
20:36 Faust: 00:56:777 - the one around here
20:37 Faust: remove it
20:37 mintong89: you mean red timing?
20:37 Faust: that's what I mean
20:37 Faust: by timing section
20:37 mintong89: oh wait
20:37 mintong89: ok
20:37 mintong89: deleted
20:39 Faust: delete the next one as well
20:39 Faust: there's only 1 red section at 1,420
20:39 Faust: lol
20:40 mintong89: ...?
20:40 Faust: ?
20:40 mintong89: umm i have multi red timing because offset change?
20:40 Faust: sigh
20:41 Faust: you don't have any extra timing sections
20:41 Faust: at all
20:41 Faust: this song doesn't need them
20:41 Faust: it's just 84 BPM at 1,420 offset
20:41 Faust: that's all
20:42 mintong89: hmm ok then
20:42 mintong89: fixed~
20:47 Faust: updated ?
20:47 mintong89: wait
20:47 mintong89: updated

Re-bubbled.
Topic Starter
mintong89
thanks again~ :)
KantoKun
(ノ・ω・)ノ
Oyatsu

Faust wrote:

Oyatsu wrote:

Ranked by Faust ><"
Nope.

IRC log:

Removed all the un-needed timing sections. This is just plainly 84 BPM.

20:19 mintong89: hi 0.0
20:20 mintong89: i requested mod at morning
20:20 Faust: ;?
20:20 mintong89: umm...Utakata Hanabi
20:20 *mintong89 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281543 supercell - Utakata Hanabi (TV Size)]
20:21 Faust: I know.
20:21 mintong89: do you remember?
20:21 mintong89: oh ok
20:35 Faust: why do
20:35 Faust: you have an extra timing section
20:35 mintong89: really?
20:36 Faust: yeah
20:36 mintong89: ...
20:36 Faust: 00:56:777 - the one around here
20:37 Faust: remove it
20:37 mintong89: you mean red timing?
20:37 Faust: that's what I mean
20:37 Faust: by timing section
20:37 mintong89: oh wait
20:37 mintong89: ok
20:37 mintong89: deleted
20:39 Faust: delete the next one as well
20:39 Faust: there's only 1 red section at 1,420
20:39 Faust: lol
20:40 mintong89: ...?
20:40 Faust: ?
20:40 mintong89: umm i have multi red timing because offset change?
20:40 Faust: sigh
20:41 Faust: you don't have any extra timing sections
20:41 Faust: at all
20:41 Faust: this song doesn't need them
20:41 Faust: it's just 84 BPM at 1,420 offset
20:41 Faust: that's all
20:42 mintong89: hmm ok then
20:42 mintong89: fixed~
20:47 Faust: updated ?
20:47 mintong89: wait
20:47 mintong89: updated

Re-bubbled.
Only re-bubble. Omg >:(
Faust
Omg >:(
Topic Starter
mintong89
...don't angry at my maps please :(
Meisle
好美的图跟歌
我挑不出毛病~来射星
Konei
And I'm too late again, like srsly ;__;
dkun
AIBAT is giving me something very small.

AIBAT wrote:

'Sliderborder' in [Bubbles] is misspelled. Change it to SliderBorder.
'Sliderborder' in [Fireworks] is misspelled. Change it to SliderBorder.
Please change this and call me back!
dkun
This is a really nice map! :)
Topic Starter
mintong89
thanks :)
Azure
又rank哭哭喔
Raose
congrats kawaii mintong ^___^
-Neipezi
mintong san congratz~!
Flask

Azure wrote:

又rank哭哭喔
Regou
膜拜
Fycho

Azure wrote:

又rank哭哭喔
KantoKun
Gratz~! lol
Oyatsu
Aha. FInally. Congratz! mint!~ :)
HeatKai
AWESSSSSSSSSOME MINNNNNNNNNNNNNNTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOONGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.
scanter
<3
Irie Miyuki
又rank毫无人性 congratz :D
Meisle
没想到第二天过来看看就rank了
恭喜
Neiji Razuiya
congrat mint :D
Quilt
Gratz xD
Selisi
效率好高> <~~
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