This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 1 September, 2013 at 1:38:32 PM

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: Fantastic Future (TV Size)
Source: Hentai Ouji to Wakawanai Neko
BPM: 172
Filesize: 2236kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.46 stars, 104 notes)
2. Hard (4.95 stars, 253 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 379 notes)
4. Normal (4.02 stars, 142 notes)

Download: Tamura Yukari - Fantastic Future (TV Size)
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My 1st beatmap~ Completed~

Hi, from buddy list(lul)
[General]
Add a 2 second music lead-in time for players to prepare as this map is full of streams

[Insane]
00:32:092 (3) Overlapping end of slider (2) - Move it away, it's confusing. Difficult to distinguish between (3) and (5)
00:33:575 Add a circle (up to you)
00:38:982 (3,4) Snap these properly
00:39:418 (6) Will be out of place because of snapping (3,4) - Position this as well.
00:39:767 ^
01:06:278 (1) Overlapping (21) Move this note
01:13:953 (5) Overlapping slider end (4) - Slightly move this to make it easier to read
01:16:743 (3,4,5,6,7) I'd suggest move these notes down slightly
01:27:906 (3) Remove whistle, leave cymbal

Don't overuse hitsounds too.
Overall, this is a freaking enjoyable map. I just LOVE dem streams.

YWL.

Juz some messy mod lol
Insane
00:01:918 (4) - Place it far abit
00:04:708 (5) - Dun make it stack, kinda confuse
00:05:581 (4,5,6) - Make it like a jump (you can copy 00:04:883 (1,2,3) and paste it to take the angle better)
00:09:767 (1) - Convert it into slider
00:16:569 (5) - Dun make it stack, kinda confuse
00:17:179 (8) - Remove
00:20:755 (3) - what is this lol ? it stack with the end of 00:20:581 (2) , remove it
00:21:540 (11) - Add a note
00:28:953 (3) - Place it far abit
00:30:522 (3) - ^
00:33:313 (2) - Remove it, it stack with the end of 00:33:139 (1)
00:33:575 (3) - Add a note here
00:33:749 (5) - Add a note
01:03:488 (1~22) - xD haha nice one
01:10:377 (2) - Make it stack with the head of 01:09:418 (2) to make it look better
01:16:743 (3,4,5,6,7) - Place it far abit
01:27:121 (11) - Add a note

[Hard]
Increase to AR9 as it'd be more fun that way.
00:09:767 (3) Extend repeater to 00:10:464
00:10:639 Add circle
00:10:813 Add slider till 00:11:162
00:11:249 Add circle
00:17:441 (1) Shorten repeater to 00:17:790
00:17:964 Add circle
00:47:441 (3) Change slider angle : http://puu.sh/3Ct3e.jpg
00:55:813 (5) Shorten repeater to 00:56:162
00:56:336 Add circle
00:57:732 Remove repeater, lengthen slider to 00:58:081 : http://puu.sh/3Ctiz.jpg
01:25:726 (1) Move spinner start to 01:25:813, shorten spinner end to 01:26:860

[Normal]
Drop approach rate to 6-7 (or 8 if you like, 9 is just too fast for a normal diff)
Increase drain to 5 (yes)
Besides these, I have nothing else to comment on it.

From #modreqs. I'm on my laptop and I can't test maps because of the massive lag, so something can be wrong in my mod, sorry

General

If I were you, I'd add an Easy, so everyone can play and enjoy your map, anyway it's your choice

Normal

This normal is too hard, first of all AR9 for a normal is unrankable, reduce it to 4/5! Reduce also Overall Difficulty by 1 or 2. I also suggest to use Circle Size 3 because big circles are easier to play

00:06:278 (7) - Add a NC here
00:17:441 (1,2) - They shoould have the same shape, so the pattern will look better, copy and paste the first one
00:20:232 (5) - NC
00:23:110 (1,2) - Make this better please!
00:27:208 (3) - Add a finish in the beginning and in the end
00:29:999 (3,4) - Something like this is better
00:32:790 (3,4) - Add claps at the end of these sliders
00:36:278 (5,1) - They are supposed to have the same shape!
00:38:371 (4,5) - Add normal whistles here
00:42:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd use the same shape for all of these sliders
00:46:046 (6) - NC here
00:48:139 (10) - Here too
00:43:953 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Please add some hitsounds in this part, it feels so empty... I suggest claps
00:54:418 (2) - This is too crooked, it looks ugly...
00:56:162 (6) - There is a spacing error here, please fix it
00:56:511 (7) - NC here
00:59:999 (2,3) - Clap at the end of these sliders
01:06:627 (2,3) - Again, same shape
01:17:441 (1,3) - Again, so the pattern can be symmetrical, also, add a clap on (3)'s repeat
01:20:232 (1,2) - Same shape
01:24:418 (3,4) - Same shape, look at my screen!
01:25:988 (1) - Add a finish

In my opinion the spacing you used (x1.1) is too high, since this is the easiest diff of your mapset, so you have two choices: First, you make an Easy or Second, you remap the Normal with lower spacing, I highly suggest the first. Anyway, this Normal needs to be semplified in any case, unfortunately

Hard

AR9 for a Hard? It's too hard and also unrankable, use AR8 instead!

00:11:336 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't agree with 1/4 streams in hard diffs, they are too hard in my opinion, and this doesn't follow any instrument...
From 00:00:697 - to 00:11:860 - Add some hitsounds, it feels a bit empty
00:13:255 (1,2) - Use the same shape
00:13:953 (3) - This is too crooked, it looks bad, anyway use ctrl+g on it for a better flow
00:16:046 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - These pattern are just too ugly, you should adjust the sliders and make them neater
00:17:790 (1) - Clap in the end
00:22:674 (4,5,6,7) - The same about 1/4 streams, maybe replace this with a 1/4 kickslider
00:25:813 (1) - move 2nd sliderpoint to 78|252 and it will have a better shape
00:29:650 (4,1,2) - These are ugly too, remake them
00:31:395 (1) - 2nd sliderpoint to 411|385 for a better shape and a blanket
00:37:674 (3,4) - Same shape please
00:48:836 (2) - This is ugly
00:50:929 (1) - Move to 120|64
00:51:976 (3,4) - Do this blanket well please
00:54:941 (4) - This too ^
00:56:511 (6) - New Combo here
00:57:557 (8,9 - Blanket
00:59:302 (16) - NC here as well

Well, there isn't any other problem, only the sliders, the are really ugly, you should remake them and give them a proper shape, look at ranked maps to know how to make them!
Another thing, why do you put a red point at the end of the sliders? I think it can cause problems, so I suggest to turn all of them in normal white points, in all diffs!

Insane

00:01:395 (3) - Ctrl+g for a better flow
00:11:598 (5,6,7) - Like in hard, this stream doesn't follow anything... I'd remove these three notes
00:10:290 (5) - Bad-looking slider...
00:28:429 (1,3) - Swap NCs
00:33:662 (4,5) - This is totally wrong, move this note 1/4 earlier and this note 00:33:749 (5) 1/4 later!
00:46:743 (1,2) - Ugly, use the same shape
00:52:150 (4,5) - Ugly overlap, move (5) away from the slider
00:54:941 (1,2) - The same
01:04:883 (9,10,11) - This doesn't fit imo, delete 01:04:883 (9,10) - And put a NC on 01:05:057
01:05:929 (1,2,3) - This is wrong too! Move this 1/2 earlier, delete 01:05:755 (15) and add a clap at this point 01:05:929
01:18:836 (1,2) - Same shape please, copy and paste the first, then press ctrl+h
01:24:418 (3,4) - The same ^
01:27:034 (10,11) - Delete these notes, they don't fit

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Done, I only pointed out the unrankable issues, you need a lot of mods to improve the map. Please, remake the sliders because some of them are really ugly...
Anyways good luck, take a star And when you will get a lot of mods call me back, I will help you for the bubble

Thank you so much everyone~ It really helps a lot!

You should quote every mod answering what you fixed and what you didnt.

good luck, nice map :3

Insane
00:07:674 (3) - Add a note
00:07:848 (4) - Add a note
00:09:767 (1) - Convert the slider into stream ? just a suggestion
00:22:935 (4,1) - Snap the Distance correctly between them
00:44:999 (5,6) - Move to X:136 Y:304
00:45:697 (2,3) - Move to X:164 Y:48
00:13:255 (5) - Move to X:304 Y:136
00:13:429 (6) - Stack with the end of 00:12:906 (4)
00:13:953 (2) - Move to X:188 Y:152
00:28:429 (10,11) - Make this two note a jump
01:03:836 (3) - Move to X:308 Y:40 for a better flow
01:05:057 (9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Suggest you to change it to something like this
01:26:423 (3) - Delete this
01:27:034 (9,10) - Add two note here to complete the stream

Hard
Approach Rate set to 6 or 7
Overall Difficulty set to 5 or 6
00:01:743 (4) - Delete this
00:01:743 (4) - ^
00:10:639 (4) - ^
00:11:685 (8) - ^
00:11:424 (7) - Add a note to make a triple
00:28:517 (7) - ^
00:42:034 (4) - Delete a repeat
01:04:883 (2) - Delete this
01:05:057 (3,4) - Change into Slider

Normal
Overall Difficulty set to 2 or 3
01:25:900 (1) - End spinner on 01:26:860
00:47:441 (5) - Start the slider from 00:47:267

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Personally think [Hard] is really abit too hard
Try to make slider more bueatiful >.o
[Normal] is great ~ :3

Goodluck ~ :3

sorry for my poor English

lead in: 3s is better than 2s
[Easy]
00:00:697 (2) - ending unsnaped ,plz make it end on next white line
00:02:092 (3) - ^
00:03:488 (4) - ^
00:14:650 (2) - ^
00:03:488 (4) - NC
00:06:278 (6) - ^
[Normal]
00:17:441 (1) - remove NC
00:48:749 (2) - unsnaped slider ,plz start at 00:48:836 (2) -
[Hard]
00:10:813 (4) - end on 00:11:162 -
00:56:511 (1) - i think there is no reason to make this note so close to 00:57:034 (2) - ,try place this note to other place like X 212 Y 188
01:16:046 (5) - NC
01:25:900 (1) - unsnaped spinner ,move to 01:25:813 -
[Insane]
01:06:017 (17) - delete this
01:07:674 (5) - add NC
01:08:022 (1) - remove NC
01:10:290 (1) - remove NC
01:10:464 (3) - add NC
01:13:081 (1) - remove NC
01:13:255 (3) - add NC
01:18:836 (5) - NC
that's all
GOOD LUCK~~

Dat Leper wrote:

You should quote every mod answering what you fixed and what you didnt.

good luck, nice map :3

Opps, didn't know about this, thanks for the advice~

_AI wrote:

Insane

SPOILER

00:07:674 (3) - Add a note
00:07:848 (4) - Add a note
00:09:767 (1) - Convert the slider into stream ? just a suggestion
00:22:935 (4,1) - Snap the Distance correctly between them
00:44:999 (5,6) - Move to X:136 Y:304
00:45:697 (2,3) - Move to X:164 Y:48
00:13:255 (5) - Move to X:304 Y:136
00:13:429 (6) - Stack with the end of 00:12:906 (4)
00:13:953 (2) - Move to X:188 Y:152
00:28:429 (10,11) - Make this two note a jump

Box

01:03:836 (3) - Move to X:308 Y:40 for a better flow
01:05:057 (9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Suggest you to change it to something like this

Box

01:26:423 (3) - Delete this
01:27:034 (9,10) - Add two note here to complete the stream

Hard
Approach Rate set to 6 or 7
Overall Difficulty set to 5 or 6
00:01:743 (4) - Delete this
00:01:743 (4) - ^
00:10:639 (4) - ^
00:11:685 (8) - ^
00:11:424 (7) - Add a note to make a triple
00:28:517 (7) - ^
00:42:034 (4) - Delete a repeat
01:04:883 (2) - Delete this
01:05:057 (3,4) - Change into Slider

Normal
Overall Difficulty set to 2 or 3
01:25:900 (1) - End spinner on 01:26:860
00:47:441 (5) - Start the slider from 00:47:267

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Personally think [Hard] is really abit too hard
Try to make slider more bueatiful >.o
[Normal] is great ~ :3

Goodluck ~ :3

Applied most of your mod, thank you very much~ Now look a bit less messy~

gxytcgxytc wrote:

sorry for my poor English

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SPOILER

ead in: 3s is better than 2s
[Easy]
00:00:697 (2) - ending unsnaped ,plz make it end on next white line
00:02:092 (3) - ^
00:03:488 (4) - ^
00:14:650 (2) - ^
00:03:488 (4) - NC
00:06:278 (6) - ^
[Normal]
00:17:441 (1) - remove NC
00:48:749 (2) - unsnaped slider ,plz start at 00:48:836 (2) -
[Hard]
00:10:813 (4) - end on 00:11:162 -
00:56:511 (1) - i think there is no reason to make this note so close to 00:57:034 (2) - ,try place this note to other place like X 212 Y 188
01:16:046 (5) - NC
01:25:900 (1) - unsnaped spinner ,move to 01:25:813 -
[Insane]
01:06:017 (17) - delete this
01:07:674 (5) - add NC
01:08:022 (1) - remove NC
01:10:290 (1) - remove NC
01:10:464 (3) - add NC
01:13:081 (1) - remove NC
01:13:255 (3) - add NC
01:18:836 (5) - NC
that's all

GOOD LUCK~~

Thanks for the mod, still not used to adding NC at the correct place @.@

Hello.From #modreq.

Hard

1. 00:01:569 (3) - remove?
2. 00:28:604 (1) - remove NC and add NC on 00:28:953 (2)
3. 00:55:813 (5) - sounds strange.maybe you can flow drums here.
4. 01:27:208 (1,2,3) - sounds strange too.maybe you can flow vocal here.like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

Insane

1. maybe you can use some normal hitsound?It sounds have no beat-feeling now.
2. 00:20:842 (3) - remove this note? There is no drumbeat.
3. 00:33:662 - why not add note?
4. 00:53:197 (6,7,8) - remove? It sound no vocal and no drums here.
5. 00:56:249 (5) - remove? flow the drum.
6. 01:05:581 - add note?
7. 01:16:743 (3) - this note is blocked by slider.And why use such short DS? looks like from the last 1/4 beat but in fact it is 1/2 beat.

not good at mod Easy and Normal so that all.
Good Luck.

this should be Fantastic future (TV Size) fix the tittle :p

Koihik wrote:

Hello.From #modreq.

SPOILER

Hard

1. 00:01:569 (3) - remove?
2. 00:28:604 (1) - remove NC and add NC on 00:28:953 (2)
3. 00:55:813 (5) - sounds strange.maybe you can flow drums here.
4. 01:27:208 (1,2,3) - sounds strange too.maybe you can flow vocal here.like this:
   [spoilerbox]

Insane

1. maybe you can use some normal hitsound?It sounds have no beat-feeling now.
2. 00:20:842 (3) - remove this note? There is no drumbeat.
3. 00:33:662 - why not add note?
4. 00:53:197 (6,7,8) - remove? It sound no vocal and no drums here.
5. 00:56:249 (5) - remove? flow the drum.
6. 01:05:581 - add note?
7. 01:16:743 (3) - this note is blocked by slider.And why use such short DS? looks like from the last 1/4 beat but in fact it is 1/2 beat.

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not good at mod Easy and Normal so that all.
Good Luck.

Thanks for the mod~

Natsu wrote:

this should be Fantastic future (TV Size) fix the tittle :p

Fixed that, but is it necessary? o.o

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
No Problem.

[Easy]
00:09:069 (1) - (put the endding of the spinner here?)
00:13:255 (1) - no nc(new combo)?
00:14:650 (2) - nc(the distance snap is 0.67x here)
00:18:836 (1) - no nc?
00:20:232 (2) - nc
00:42:557 (5) - nc
00:45:348 (8) - nc
00:49:534 (3) - (Try to avoid using slider with 3 returns in a Easy beatmap)
01:14:302 (4) - delete?

[Normal]
00:04:185 (3) - (Try using 2 slider here to fit the music?)
00:20:232 (1,2,3,4,5) - put some clap?
00:38:720 (5) - clap?
00:45:348 (5) - nc
00:46:046 (1) - no nc
01:02:092 (6) - (nc?)
01:18:836 (3) - I find the 3 claps here noisy.

[Hard]
00:09:767 (3) - end the slider here?
00:10:639 (4) - add a note here?
00:22:674 (4) - (reduce to 2 return? it is hard to me to go with the next slider)
01:25:813 (1,1) - the spinner is too short and the time after this is also too short.

[Insane]
01:27:383 (2) - add a note?

[AI's Another]
Countdown: 0?1?
Tags:
No problem.

Good map, good luck.

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

SPOILER

[General]
No Problem.

[Easy]
00:09:069 (1) - (put the endding of the spinner here?)
00:13:255 (1) - no nc(new combo)?
00:14:650 (2) - nc(the distance snap is 0.67x here)
00:18:836 (1) - no nc?
00:20:232 (2) - nc
00:42:557 (5) - nc
00:45:348 (8) - nc
00:49:534 (3) - (Try to avoid using slider with 3 returns in a Easy beatmap)
01:14:302 (4) - delete?

[Normal]
00:04:185 (3) - (Try using 2 slider here to fit the music?)
00:20:232 (1,2,3,4,5) - put some clap?
00:38:720 (5) - clap?
00:45:348 (5) - nc
00:46:046 (1) - no nc
01:02:092 (6) - (nc?)
01:18:836 (3) - I find the 3 claps here noisy.

[Hard]
00:09:767 (3) - end the slider here?
00:10:639 (4) - add a note here?
00:22:674 (4) - (reduce to 2 return? it is hard to me to go with the next slider)
01:25:813 (1,1) - the spinner is too short and the time after this is also too short.

[Insane]
01:27:383 (2) - add a note?

[AI's Another]
Countdown: 0?1?
Tags:
No problem.

Good map, good luck.

Thanks for the mod~ Quite helpful for Easy and Normal difficulty

Hi~ -S c a r l e t-

[Easy]

HP + 1 OD + 1

Ai Mod Check

00:03:488 (1) - DS 1.49x NO~NO~ 1.00x OK! ( Easy difficulty Should not be jumping! )
[Normal]

OD + 1

Ai Mod Check

00:20:232 (1) - Clap Delete

00:20:929 (3) - Clap Delete

00:24:767 (4) - Add to Clap

00:25:464 (6) - Add to Clap

01:18:836 (3) - Slider 2st add clap

[Hard]

HP + 1

Ai Mod Check

[AI's Another]

00:28:429 (1) - No NC

01:02:092 (1,2,1) - Snap does not fit

01:27:557 (1) - No NC

01:27:906 (2) - NC

[Insane]

Ai Mod Check

01:04:796 (8) - NC

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/147483 My Map !!

hi~ mod req

I do my best to help you to modify ^^

[General]

The picture is error . "1024x768" is true.



[Easy]

00:59:302 (1,2) - end + clap
01:06:278 (1) - ^
01:08:371 (3) - clap


[Normal]



[Hard]

[Insane]
No problem ^^

Ok,hope you ranked early!

smallboat wrote:

hi~ mod req

I do my best to help you to modify ^^

SPOILER

[General]

The picture is error . "1024x768" is true.



[Easy]

00:59:302 (1,2) - end + clap
01:06:278 (1) - ^
01:08:371 (3) - clap


[Normal]

00:32:790 (3,4) - front removed clap is good.
00:43:953 (3,4) - ^
00:47:441 (5) - front + whistle
00:58:429 (5) - front removed clap is good.
00:59:999 (2,3) - ^
01:16:046 (5) - end removed whistle
01:16:743 (6) - front + whistle
01:18:836 (3) - front & end removed clap.

[Hard]

00:02:615 (2,3,4,5,6) - hitsound feel not good.
00:04:185 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:07:674 (1) - front + clap
00:13:604 (2) - http://imgur.com/LjAiOSz
00:19:185 (3) - http://imgur.com/DqdZyCT
00:32:615 (4) - DS
01:10:813 (2) - http://imgur.com/ypZBETB
01:16:046 (1,2) - front removed whistle
01:19:708 (3) - DS
01:23:720 (3) - ctrl+g
01:24:418 (1) - ^

[Insane]
No problem ^^

Ok,hope you ranked early!

Done applying the mod~ Thanks!

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ -S c a r l e t-

SPOILER

[spoilerbox][Easy]

HP + 1 OD + 1

[spoilerbox]

Ai Mod Check

00:03:488 (1) - DS 1.49x NO~NO~ 1.00x OK! ( Easy difficulty Should not be jumping! )
[Normal]

OD + 1

SPOILER

Ai Mod Check

00:20:232 (1) - Clap Delete

00:20:929 (3) - Clap Delete

00:24:767 (4) - Add to Clap

00:25:464 (6) - Add to Clap

01:18:836 (3) - Slider 2st add clap

[Hard]

HP + 1

SPOILER

Ai Mod Check

[AI's Another]

00:28:429 (1) - No NC

01:02:092 (1,2,1) - Snap does not fit

01:27:557 (1) - No NC

01:27:906 (2) - NC

[Insane]

SPOILER

Ai Mod Check

01:04:796 (8) - NC
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t/147483 My Map !!

Done~ Thanks for the mod~

offset:-6 from the original offset