1. Andrea's Hard (4.35 stars, 213 notes)
2. Insane (4.47 stars, 244 notes)
3. Normal (2.44 stars, 138 notes)

DzH4BftkS wrote:

Hard

00:03:911 (2) - 新combo //不太好, 這邊我跟一節一節音樂放的new combo
00:11:816 (3,4) - 位置错开摆好一点? //先保留一下
00:41:005 (2,3) - 中间再加一个note 变成这样 //我還是覺得2連比較好
00:53:370 (4,8) - 中间加满note 变成 //這邊亂塞1/4就不合音了
01:49:316 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议做成逐渐向左的三角小跳,三角顶点请不要重叠…… //我是故意重疊的...
01:52:559 (1,2,3) - 这里跟歌词的节奏稍稍有点不一样。歌词那里最后几个音有点叠在一起的感觉 这里完全用slider.像01:52:559 (1,2,3) - 这里一样紧凑。 //我是在跟歌詞啊
最后想说的是……kiai好精彩阿T_T真的真的!

祝早日rank:DDD

goodbye wrote:

Request from in-game pm

[General]

1. 感觉这BG不做SB有点对不太起歌…… //找人做了

[Hard]

1. 
   00:17:695 (2) - slider flow有点怪，换成这样？或者换个位置。
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:357 (1,2) - 1很容易就会按快……建议放远一点。
3. 01:04:316 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 估计这一段会坑死一堆开看前面太容易就开DT的，特别是6到1 hhh //不會啊...不少人1PC
4. 01:24:181 (4,5) - 有一点细微的错开了……没平行
5. 01:25:600 (2) - 我觉得放左边比右边flow要好一点……这样
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:34:722 (2) - 这口哨是故意的吗……有点刺耳

[Normal]

1. 
   CS再大一号？反正都这么慢的歌……
2. 01:21:343 (4) - nazi spacing(别打我
3. 这难度叠一起太多了感觉略不友善

中文MOD就让我偷点懒吧我就不写论文了……

1. Disable the Countdown and Letterbox on all the difficulties since you're not using them.

1. I'd prefer if you actually reduce all the settings by 1 tick, they're too high right now to me.

1. 00:02:897 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking these together, they might be confusing for beginners to read.
2. 01:29:857 (5,1,2,1) - This pattern seems way too hard to play and read for beginners, try to space it in a simple way please.
3. 01:37:762 (2,1) - Wrong spacing, try to avoid using even small jumps on the easiest difficulty of the mapset.
4. 01:49:722 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking these together, they might be confusing for beginners to read.
5. 01:57:424 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner, try to make it start later or to reduce the spinner lenght.

1. 01:37:559 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.

L_P wrote:

[kpy]

00:02:897 (1) - 第二repeat whistle delete?感覺用太多了 //2那邊pitch是開始升高, 所以加whistle
00:10:397 (2) - 覺得whistle在這邊分散放比較好聽，不如放在00:09:586 - ？
00:18:505 (3) - whistle (畢竟前面都跟了 音樂里的tick tick tick 突然不見不大適應..
其實這首歌我會比較喜歡前面部份下很少音效那種，畢竟歌曲本身已經很平靜祥和so calm~
可以試試看 只在每兩個bar下一次00:13:640 - 00:16:884 - 00:20:127 - 這樣..
嘛 我個人喜好啦
00:44:249 (4) - whistle換去上一個slider尾巴
00:45:262 (6) - whistle
00:46:073 (3) - 我是覺得這邊可以試試看用default 15% 加個 soft-addition finish //效果感覺不太好
00:52:559 (3) - ^ ^
00:59:046 (2) - ^ ^
01:02:086 - 加個note?
01:18:100 (3) - 這尾巴不夠霸氣,不如用sc2那個?
01:21:749 (5) - soft-addition finish?
01:31:478 - 找MAT/BAT小心 可能會強制加tick rate... //你我都懂
01:36:546 (2) - x152, y144? //感覺一般

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Disable the Countdown and Letterbox on all the difficulties since you're not using them.

~Normal~

1. I'd prefer if you actually reduce all the settings by 1 tick, they're too high right now to me. //Reduced HP and OD only.

1. 00:02:897 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking these together, they might be confusing for beginners to read. //since this is a low bpm song, so there is enough time for them to determine it.
2. 01:29:857 (5,1,2,1) - This pattern seems way too hard to play and read for beginners, try to space it in a simple way please. //make them more consipicous.
3. 01:37:762 (2,1) - Wrong spacing, try to avoid using even small jumps on the easiest difficulty of the mapset.
4. 01:49:722 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking these together, they might be confusing for beginners to read. //Same as 00:02:897
5. 01:57:424 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner, try to make it start later or to reduce the spinner lenght. //Consider this as very low bpm song, there is enough time to catch it.

~Hard~

1. 01:37:559 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible. //nope, it didn't in new skin <_<

1. *nazi* 感覺Audio Lead-In 1750就夠了 不過一樣看你

1. Stack3 人性?
2. 00:02:897 (1) - 怎麼感覺拆成一顆note跟折返兩次的滑條比較好 畢竟00:02:897 - 的音樂跟後面的相比還是有音量區別 連在一起有種詭異的感覺orz
3. 00:20:532 (4,1,3) - 不曉得你的NC怎麼下的..不過如果是我我會跟vocal (4)跟後面的(3)NC 然後(1)的NC去掉
4. 00:33:100 (5,1,3) - ^
5. 00:42:830 (1,2,3) - 有點主觀 不過突然縮小spacing看起來有點像1/4 (畢竟在背景音樂比較豐富之後還沒出現1/4) 把spacing弄成一般那種距離大概就行
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:05:330 (1) - 怎麼聽都覺得擺錯位置 這個地方應該是沒有顯著vocal音的啊... 不如就放個break直接刪reserve往後移到重音
7. 01:27:830 (1,2) - 跑太遠了吧
8. 02:00:465 (1) - 可以作音量漸層

1. 00:02:897 (1) - I'd like to put whistle at the end of this slider instead of adding at the begin. The piano sound is much louder at the end imo. (If you agree, do for 00:09:384 (1) - too!)
2. 00:13:640 (3) - Eww, only one note to follow the beginning of the vocal-parts? I'll use 1/2 slider instead of a boring note here.
3. 00:36:343 (3,4) - This spacing would confuse the player pretty well. I can't see the reason for reducing spacing actually, a bit nonsense imo. Try to use random spacing (1.5x) instead current one (1.2x) pls.
4. 01:33:911 - Soft sampleset? That must be too soft to emphasize the background music here! Consider to use Normal sampleset instead soft. (Like what you did at 01:32:289 -, which's awesome!)
5. 01:50:127 - ^
6. 01:43:032 (6,7) - Again, this spacing is weird. You just use as big as 1/2 rhythm spacing for 1/4 slider, and then you reduce the spacing? The players will think that's still in 1/4 rhythm! Try to increase the spacing here, at least make a difference from that 1/4 pls.
7. 01:53:168 (2,3) - ;__; so ugly

1. 整體來說沒問題 不過有些1/4的折返太多了 有種不太平衡的感覺 希望能迴避狗狗汪汪

Flask wrote:

[General]

1. *nazi* 感覺Audio Lead-In 1750就夠了 不過一樣看你 //長一點沒關係把...

[Hard]

1. Stack3 人性? //我的圖都是3....沒關係得
2. 00:02:897 (1) - 怎麼感覺拆成一顆note跟折返兩次的滑條比較好 畢竟00:02:897 - 的音樂跟後面的相比還是有音量區別 連在一起有種詭異的感覺orz //修了一點
3. 00:20:532 (4,1,3) - 不曉得你的NC怎麼下的..不過如果是我我會跟vocal (4)跟後面的(3)NC 然後(1)的NC去掉 //我現在就是跟vocal阿 = = 後面的nc是新一段的開始
4. 00:33:100 (5,1,3) - ^ //^
5. 00:42:830 (1,2,3) - 有點主觀 不過突然縮小spacing看起來有點像1/4 (畢竟在背景音樂比較豐富之後還沒出現1/4) 把spacing弄成一般那種距離大概就行 //這個暫時保留把
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:05:330 (1) - 怎麼聽都覺得擺錯位置 這個地方應該是沒有顯著vocal音的啊... 不如就放個break直接刪reserve往後移到重音 //做平衡note和間距得功效
7. 01:27:830 (1,2) - 跑太遠了吧 //故意的, 又不難打...
8. 02:00:465 (1) - 可以作音量漸層 //spinner我全搞靜音

[Normal]

1. 整體來說沒問題 不過有些1/4的折返太多了 有種不太平衡的感覺 希望能迴避狗狗汪汪 // = = 還可以把

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