This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月25日 at 11:10:04

Artist: Rinjinbu
Title: Bokura no Tsubasa (TV Size)
Source: Boku wa Tomodachi ga Sukunai NEXT
Tags: ending Fumika Netsukawa mikazuki yozora kashiwazaki sena kusunoki yukimura shiguma rika hasegawa kodato takayama maria inoue marina itou kanae yamamoto nozomi fukuen misato hanazawa kana iguchi yuka
BPM: 147
Filesize: 14104kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (3.24 stars, 102 notes)
2. Fumika's Hard (4.84 stars, 215 notes)
3. Insane (4.96 stars, 244 notes)
4. Normal (4.45 stars, 185 notes)

Download: Rinjinbu - Bokura no Tsubasa (TV Size)
Download: Rinjinbu - Bokura no Tsubasa (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#12
僕は友達が少ない NEXT ED
Find OP here!
Easy by me 100%
Normal by me 100%
Hard by Fumika 100%
Insane by me 100%
Thanks to spboxer3 for the video help!

good song!
can i make a taiko maps? >w<

ReySHeL wrote:

good song!
can i make a taiko maps? >w<

Sorry, but I don't want to add taiko in this mepset ;_;

popner wrote:

ReySHeL wrote:

good song!
can i make a taiko maps? >w<

Sorry, but I don't want to add taiko in this mepset ;_;

ok
sry ;w;

嗷

[General]
把图做得这么神让我怎么mod;_;

[Insane]
01:08:149 (7,10) - 这两，改成这样？(x404 y152,我只是粗略的摆了摆)
[Other]
OTL

大概是no kd

http://puu.sh/1OlbQ

Add "Fumika Netsukawa" in tags =w=

from my queue
requested Easy, Normal, Insane.

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you will be able to reject them without reason.

[Easy]

1. You don't use Distance Snap, but you need to be aware of it a little more.
   The players don't have "pixel eyes", but it has a little discomfort.
2. I have not mention to hitsound, but it needs more work. It would be better to have a little regularity. and to add your favorite sound on it.
3. Set video to this diff.
   
   
4. 00:00:803 (1) - 1 grid left
5. 00:25:700 (5) - You put whistle on slider's body, it add a different sound to the slider. If you don't have any reason, please remove it.
6. 00:49:782 (2,3,4) - ^
7. 01:06:517 (2,3) - whistle + clap sound is doesn't fit to this diff, in my opinion. You can use more clearly hitsound.

[Normal]

1. 00:07:741 (5) - change to clap
2. 00:07:945 (6) - change to clap on the slider's head and remove clap on the slider's end.
3. 00:25:700 (5) - You don't put whistle here, is it intentional?
4. 00:56:109 (1) - change to finish, if you don't hate finish sound.
5. 00:57:741 (6) - add finish to the slider's head.
6. 00:59:374 (1) - ^
7. 01:12:435 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Good flow map :3

1. 00:08:149 (8) - change to whistle
2. 00:14:476 (8) - add whistle to the slider's end
3. 00:14:884 (9,10,11) - you use whistle to (10), but 00:19:782 (3,4,5) -, you use whistle to (3). If you don't have a reason, I recommend try to unify.
4. 00:56:109 (1) - change to finish on the slider's head, if you don't hate finish sound.
5. 00:57:741 (6) - add finish to the slider's head.
6. 00:59:374 (1) - ^
7. 01:12:435 (1) - ^

good luck<3

terametis: changed a new Easy. Thank for your mod!

No Hard diff ?

[Easy]
00:13:660 (3) - 这里感觉拖拍了，easy哎Orz.........考虑end在白线上然后再折返，或者因为排版原因可以在后面加个短slider
大概就是这样吧
00:20:802 (1) - 从这段开始节奏你就貌似开始诠释的太明显了，easy的难度里我经常和别人说的是一些明显的红线节奏虽然明显但是我并不很赞同用note表现出来而是用slider或者slider加折返盖过去
因为以上理念如果你到时候要实行的话可能要改比较多，所以这里举例一下...
00:21:211 (2) - 要是我的话会搞成这样
00:34:273 (2) - ^
然后这个节奏基本上已经属于normal级别的了
Easy要求不用强迫正好3星或者3星以下，但是至少从osu这边看也是显示为三星才rankable的，如果不想调节AR啊OD啊那些乱七八糟的设定的话就需要加slider来缓冲难度了
而且我也觉得这个难度对于新player玩太坑了Orz..............

[Normal]
00:02:435 (5) - NC
00:28:149 (4) - 去掉
00:31:415 (4) - 去掉
01:01:619 (5) - 去掉
01:12:231 (10) - 去掉
01:18:762 (7) - 去掉
这个难度比较大的问题就是你note放过多而导致节奏感没有起伏..............稍微空一些拍子后玩起来会更好玩
然后前部分我打的时候比较别扭也是因为这个，你可能为了排版而把一些应该有打击感的地方用slider划过去了导致我感觉我一直在点击但是感觉没点到歌里的重音上Orz
00:08:762 (1) - 像是这个，你可以拆成两个note，效果会比一个slider更好
00:11:007 (6) - 这边空出来
00:11:823 (x) - 然后这边加note
然后这个normal因为大部分节拍你都放在红线上后，clap加上去会很奇怪，所以我建议你把默认soft的铃声用上，然后用上normal的finish修饰一下

[Hard]
没啥大问题

[Insane]
00:14:272 (7,8,9) - 这仨间距控制一下，保持一致
00:20:190 (6) - 这边其实可以再拉远点
00:37:537 (3) - 和前面呼应一下加个nc被
00:38:149 (5) - 然后这边nc
00:54:272 (5,6,7) - 仨间距控制下
01:02:639 (1) - 摆到x464 y204那里后面的4就在中间了

音效的话考虑加点whistle和finish吧，kiai那边就蹦蹦声好单调

Ty for modding! Will update later.

hi~ m4m

very late.. sorry

[General]

●This artist name is the group name. Therefore, I recommend that you put the person you're singing to Tags.
Simply put, please add them to the tags ↓
mikazuki yozora kashiwazaki sena kusunoki yukimura shiguma rika hasegawa kodato takayama maria (Is the name of the anime character)
inoue marina itou kanae yamamoto nozomi fukuen misato hanazawa kana iguchi yuka (Is the name of the voice actor)

URL used for reference: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boku_wa_Tomodachi_ga_Sukunai

●Audio Lead-in 1200 ⇒ 1500 change? I will think that it is best to 500 units.
●Add Tags: anime ?

[Easy]

●Slider tick rate: 2 ⇒1 change? I think I should be in 1. there are too many tick..
●00:08:149 (4) - clap ⇒ whistle change[End]. and, 00:08:761 (1) - whistle ⇒ clap change[Start].
●00:21:211 (2) - I think this is good in the form http://puu.sh/1PV1y
●00:34:273 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/1PV3t

[Normal]

●00:02:435 (5) - Add new combo
●00:07:945 (6) - Add clap [Start]. and, Remove clap [End]
●01:07:333 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Fumika]

●01:10:802 (6) - Change the shape a little?　http://puu.sh/1PVgW
●This diff is a really good map :3

[Insane]

●00:03:864 (6) - Move (x:280 y:292)? However, I think you're doing on purpose...or your mistake
●00:34:272 (1) - Remove new combo?　
●01:24:680 (1) - ^

Overall good map. But, I think you had better to add more new combo.(Insane diff) good luck~ :3

Thank you Gamu~

Hi, mod req from my queue ^^

These are all suggestions, feel free to diregard them if you disagree!

[Easy]

00:22:639 (4) looks a bit odd
00:35:700 (4) ^


[Normal]

00:02:435 (5) - new combo
00:04:068 (8) - ^
00:07:129 (4) - ^
00:31:415 (4) - move to 376,104 for slightly better alignment with 00:31:007 (3)
00:42:639 (7) - new combo
00:43:047 (1) - remove new combo


[Fumika's Hard]

no comment, nice map


[Insane]

01:25:496 (6) - remove clap, add finish?

This is it, the maps already looks great obviously so I didn't find that many things but I hope it will help! Good luck for rank ^^

Thanks for modding :3

Hello, M4M here.

Easy:

00:08:762 (1): Add Finish?
00:15:292 (1): ^
00:19:986 (3): I think this would sound better if slider finishes in 00:20:190 instead.
00:24:068 (1): Move to x:172 y:204 so that way you will make the spacing equal between previous and next note.
00:33:047 (5): Make a slider that finishes in 00:33:251 instead this note, follow music better.
00:46:313 (1): Add Finish?
00:59:374 (1): ^
01:05:905 (1): ^
01:12:435 (1): ^
01:15:088 (4): A short slider sounds better than a note here.
01:18:966 (1): Add Finish?

Normal:

00:02:435 (5): NC
00:08:762 (1): Add Finish?
00:10:190 (4): Move 1 grid to the right, so you will equal spacing a bit.
00:12:639 (2,3): Same here, try to move this a bit, just check the spacing, it doesn't seem so good.
00:15:292 (1): Add Finish?
00:17:537 (5): ^

Well, I think you know what I mean, try to equal spacings to be most close to 1,00x possible.

00:20:190 (5): Add Finish?
00:25:700 (5): You're missing a Whistle here.
00:46:313 (1): Add Finish?
00:59:374 (1): ^
01:11:211 (7) NC?
01:12:435 (1): Add Finish?
01:18:966 (1): ^
01:25:496 (9): ^

Fumika's Hard:

00:11:211 (7,8,1,2,3): Try this rhythm instead?, sounds much better.
00:19:986 (7): This repeat shouldn't be here since it's not following anything on the music, so try to remove it then move next note to x:196 y:232, this way you will fix spacing.
00:32:231 (7,8): Why jump here?, feels so random.
00:36:313 (7,1): ^
00:42:435 (1): Remove NC and add it on the next note?
01:07:537 (5): NC here, fits good with vocal, and with the spacing change too.

Insane:

00:04:068 (7): Add NC?
00:07:129 (6): ^
00:27:333 (2): Try to move like this.
00:34:272 (1): Why NC?, doesn't fit at all, remove it.
00:42:639 (8,9): This extreme jump feels so random, try to reduce spacing a bit.
01:07:537 (6): NC?
01:18:966 (1): Move to x:122 y:93, so it will be stacking 01:17:129 (5) - perfectly.
01:24:272 (1): Remove NC.

Well, that's it for me, please consider to add some Finishes in your diffs as Fumika did, they sound really good at some places and you almost didn't add them.

Good luck!

Ty for modding

Checked all mods and updated:

Hi!
[General]
Tags: ending fumika netsukawa

[Easy]
00:05:292 (4,1) not put notes on ..
00:06:517 (2,3,4,1) Keep pace, is an easy level ..
00:13:047 (2,3) ^
00:24:476 (2,3) ^
00:26:721 (1,2) ^
00:37:537 (2,3) ^
There are many and all alike, that works
[Normal]
00:00:803 (1,2,3,4) on No Place
Good map. Much difference to the Diff Easy!

Sorry for not making mod levels Hard ~ Insane But I have no errors to tell .. :/

Ty for modding!