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MAKE-UP (feat. Shouko Nakagawa) - Pegasus Fantasy Ver. Omega

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masamune11
21 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
masamune11
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 25, 2012 at 10:03:13 PM

Artist: MAKE-UP (feat. Shouko Nakagawa)
Title: Pegasus Fantasy Ver. Omega
Source: Saint Seiya Omega
Tags: Saint Seiya Omega, Anime, Opening Theme
BPM: 165
Filesize: 9489kb
Play Time: 01:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.41 stars, 48 notes)
  2. Hard (4.82 stars, 162 notes)
  3. Normal (4.08 stars, 97 notes)
Download: MAKE-UP (feat. Shouko Nakagawa) - Pegasus Fantasy Ver. Omega
Download: MAKE-UP (feat. Shouko Nakagawa) - Pegasus Fantasy Ver. Omega (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Because this song it too good to be passed. The map comes out with three difficulties, but I still think they need improvements. ....very much improvements.

This beatmap is dedicated to a friend of mine, who'll have her 14th birthday on December 15 2012. <3

[Update (all in accordance to GMT+7):]
SPOILER
  1. 12/11/12: Fix filenames; japanese characters are not allowed. The beatmap should be playable now. Also, remove epilepsy warning because it's not flashy.
  2. 12/17/12: Correcting timing and kiai time, tweaking several beats in accordance to SpinsAlot's suggestions, and recalibrating the positions of beats in questions.
  3. 12/18/12: Fix timing for Hard difficulty. There are some tricky bits, especially on chorus part.
  4. 12/20/12: Fix timing for all difficulties in response to RikiH_'s recommendation, fixing technical faulties (double mp3 and decrease volume). Also modded it in accordance to SilverJetter's and RikiH_'s recommendations, as well as fixing layout for the beatmaps I realize that the design is not... pretty @_@. Please re-download if you're still using past version.
  5. 12/21/12: Doomsday, yaaay. Fix combo colors, consistent offset, tags, preview time, and kiai times. Fix several points which DaxMasterix points out. Change combo colors to seven-color format.
  6. 12/25/12: Fix some patterns in Hard difficulty.

Difficulty Level:
  1. Easy: Finished
  2. Normal: Finished
  3. Hard: Finished
Trivia:
  1. Need comments before December 15th orz The person who had his/her birthday had already received thiiiiis \o/ Doesn't mean I don't want any more feedbacks, though.
  2. The seven color combo format corresponds with SSO elemental cosmo theme. You will also realize that these colors come out during specific screentime ;)
Last edited by masamune11 , edited 12 times in total.
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
CrestRising
The mp3 is EXTREMELY quiet. You need to amplify the volume.
The timing section at 00:46:142 just killed the timing. Line them up with the big white marks. The timing section at 00:46:415 is just useless and renders the Kiai time completely useless.
Probably should delete the timing sections after those as well.
Now as for the map itself...

[Easy:]

  • 00:19:043 (5) You could just start this at the red tick just before. It would sound a bit nicer.
    00:22:316 (1) This slider should be shortened to 4 beats.
    01:09:316 (1) The spinner should end at 01:13:952 or so.
[Normal:]

  • The approach rate is WAY to high for Normal. It should be around 5.
    01:09:589 (1) See Easy about what to do with this spinner.
[Hard:]

  • 00:10:315 (3,4) This looks weird stacked.
    00:29:225 (6) You should probably add one more repeat to this slider.
    00:40:861 (7) It would sound better if this was doubled in length (making it a 1 beat slider).
Not the worst first attempt at a beat map that I've seen. Good luck. :)
masamune11
21 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
masamune11

SpinsAlot wrote:

The mp3 is EXTREMELY quiet. You need to amplify the volume.
The timing section at 00:46:142 just killed the timing. Line them up with the big white marks. The timing section at 00:46:415 is just useless and renders the Kiai time completely useless.
Probably should delete the timing sections after those as well.
Now as for the map itself...

[Easy:]

  • 00:19:043 (5) You could just start this at the red tick just before. It would sound a bit nicer.
    00:22:316 (1) This slider should be shortened to 4 beats.
    01:09:316 (1) The spinner should end at 01:13:952 or so.
[Normal:]

  • The approach rate is WAY to high for Normal. It should be around 5.
    01:09:589 (1) See Easy about what to do with this spinner.
[Hard:]

  • 00:10:315 (3,4) This looks weird stacked.
    00:29:225 (6) You should probably add one more repeat to this slider.
    00:40:861 (7) It would sound better if this was doubled in length (making it a 1 beat slider).
Not the worst first attempt at a beat map that I've seen. Good luck. :)
Timing has been fixed and revamped, beats have been re-calibrated.
Easy: First and second point has been corrected. As the third point, the slider has been lengthened, but not so much that it ends at 01:13:952.
Normal: See the Easy section.
Hard: Correct them all... with additions.

Thank you for reviewing :D
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Ohai, m4m from my queue. Sorry for shit english :3

General

There are two mp3 in the map's folder
You have three different offsets in each diff and this in UNRANKABLE. Use 10747 in all diffs, it should be ok!
After the offset change don't forget to resnap all notes and green sections.
I think audio is too high, decrease it please!

Important: I modded this map after I have changed the offset!

I'd start 1st kiai here: 00:45:837
I'd start second kiai here: 00:51:656
I'd start third kiai here: 00:57:474
I'd END last kiai here: 01:11:837

Easy

00:12:747 (2) - x:352 y:176
00:25:292 (2) - Make this slider symmetric, maybe don't use that annoying grid snap :V
00:38:019 (5) - x:320 y:224
00:42:747 (1) - x:192 y:240

Nothing particular to say, try to make curves with sliders because "L" sliders are very ugly...

Normal

00:22:020 (1,2,3,4) - Take the whole pattern and move to x:256 y:168
00:26:748 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:112
00:29:111 (4) - Move second sliderpoint in x:456 y:80
00:38:384 (3) - 2nd sliderpoint to x:224 y:272
00:43:112 (3) - 3 repeats are bed, change this into a spinner maybe

Hard

00:17:837 (7,8) - Bad stacking, turn grid snap off and stack them manually
00:19:292 (3,4) - Same
00:28:019 (5) - No. Replace this with notes or two 1/2 sliders and a note
00:29:292 (6) - The same!
00:41:474 (8,9,10) - Unreadable jump, fix spacing please!
00:42:747 (1) - As said before, replace this with 1/2 sliders or notes
00:49:928 (2) - Start this 1/4 earlier
01:10:019 (1) - Same as before, blah blah blah

You need a lot of work with this map, good luck! :)
SilverJetter
77 posts
Joined November 2011
SilverJetter
moinsen ^^

lets start with my mod ;D but remember im still a beginner in modding ^^

General:
i dont like the kiais in this map...you should check them they start not in rythm (dont start them on the blue lines...better at the red or white ones in the timeline)
all in all i would say this isnt rankable yet

Easy:
00:12:770 (2) - please put the circle not under the slider put it a bit away from it

Normal:
00:29:111 (4,5) - the slider dont fit in beat i think better slider without reverse at 00:29:293 - 00:29:657 and two circles at 00:30:021 and 00:30:293
00:30:566 (6) - the slider doesnt sound good start it at 00:30:748

Hard:
00:29:316 (6) - not so much reverses in one slider...split it in two or three sliders
00:42:770 (1) - ^
00:49:922 (2,3) - put them together in one slider
you have to work again on this diff :)
masamune11
21 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
masamune11

RikiH_ wrote:

Ohai, m4m from my queue. Sorry for shit english :3

General

There are two mp3 in the map's folder Stupid me forgot to trash the other unamplified version #facepalm
You have three different offsets in each diff and this in UNRANKABLE. Use 10747 in all diffs, it should be ok! Fixed for Easy and Normal. The Hard one, however, starts about 4-beats earlier than your proposed offset
After the offset change don't forget to resnap all notes and green sections. Done~
I think audio is too high, decrease it please! Done~

Important: I modded this map after I have changed the offset!

I'd start 1st kiai here: 00:45:837
I'd start second kiai here: 00:51:656
I'd start third kiai here: 00:57:474
I'd END last kiai here: 01:11:837
Proposed kiai time approved~

Easy

00:12:747 (2) - x:352 y:176 Done
00:25:292 (2) - Make this slider symmetric, maybe don't use that annoying grid snap :V Done
00:38:019 (5) - x:320 y:224 Done
00:42:747 (1) - x:192 y:240 Modified--or at least, I make it so that the 1-2-3 combos create and evenly-spaced triangle

Nothing particular to say, try to make curves with sliders because "L" sliders are very ugly... The idea of this difficulty is to make it as straight as possible (...), so... xD;

Normal

00:22:020 (1,2,3,4) - Take the whole pattern and move to x:256 y:168 Done
00:26:748 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:112 Done
00:29:111 (4) - Move second sliderpoint in x:456 y:80 Modified, because the position for each beat has been compromised *after great deal of layouting, lol*
00:38:384 (3) - 2nd sliderpoint to x:224 y:272 Done
00:43:112 (3) - 3 repeats are bed, change this into a spinner maybe Done

Hard This one got mostly redecorated, but I somewhat get your modding ideas and apply it :Db

00:17:837 (7,8) - Bad stacking, turn grid snap off and stack them manually Done
00:19:292 (3,4) - Same Done
00:28:019 (5) - No. Replace this with notes or two 1/2 sliders and a note Done
00:29:292 (6) - The same! Done
00:41:474 (8,9,10) - Unreadable jump, fix spacing please! Done--and redecorated
00:42:747 (1) - As said before, replace this with 1/2 sliders or notes Done
00:49:928 (2) - Start this 1/4 earlier Modified. 1/4 is so slow that I decide to shift it by 1/8
01:10:019 (1) - Same as before, blah blah blah Done

You need a lot of work with this map, good luck! :) Thank you for your time xD

SilverJetter wrote:

moinsen ^^

lets start with my mod ;D but remember im still a beginner in modding ^^

General:
i dont like the kiais in this map...you should check them they start not in rythm (dont start them on the blue lines...better at the red or white ones in the timeline)
all in all i would say this isnt rankable yet
Followed RikiH_'s suggestion xDb

Easy:
00:12:770 (2) - please put the circle not under the slider put it a bit away from it Done

Normal:
00:29:111 (4,5) - the slider dont fit in beat i think better slider without reverse at 00:29:293 - 00:29:657 and two circles at 00:30:021 and 00:30:293 Now that you mention it... Done, but with slight combo modifications
00:30:566 (6) - the slider doesnt sound good start it at 00:30:748 Modified; slider is shifted according to your recommendation, but I still add a beat over here.

Hard:
00:29:316 (6) - not so much reverses in one slider...split it in two or three sliders Done
00:42:770 (1) - ^ Done
00:49:922 (2,3) - put them together in one slider Nope. I made it as such to accentuate the orchest-mode thing, and a single slider doesn't cut it :\
you have to work again on this diff :)
Thank you for both of your time xDD
DaxMasterix
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
1,562 posts
Joined February 2010
DaxMasterix
Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
Saint Seiya! (8)

General:

  1. You have an Inconsistency in ComboColours.
  2. You have an Inconsistency in the BPM.
  3. You have an Inconsistency in Tags.
  4. You have an Inconsistency in PreviewTime.
  5. You have an Inconsistency in Kiai Times.
    Sorry.. all of these need be the same in all the diffs. So .. Fix all.
Easy:
  1. Reduce the GeneralAudio to 70%
  2. AR -1
  3. HP -1
  4. 00:18:928 (5) - Remove the whistle from the body of the Slider.
  5. 00:20:383 (6) - (^) The same
  6. 00:22:383 (1) - (^) The same And I think you can add A finish in the begin of the Slider o3o
  7. 00:25:292 (2) - (^) The same but don't add any finish here xD
  8. 00:27:837 (1) - I think the correct place of this is in 00:28:019 and end in the same part.. ( 00:28:747 )
  9. 00:34:383 (2) - Remove the finish from the end of the Slider
  10. 00:35:837 (3) - (^) The same
  11. 00:45:292 (5) - I think now you can add a Finish in the end of the Slider.
  12. 00:56:201 (4) - Erase this note.
  13. 01:01:656 (x) - I think you can add a note here o3o
Normal:
  1. 00:29:111 (4,5,6,7) - Here you have a big error.. This pattern start in 00:29:111 .. But need start in 00:29:293 ... Move the pattern to that place and you will Understand.. After of that.. Try fix the pattern.
Hard:
  1. OD & HP -1
  2. 00:09:837 (1) - Move this note to x:272|y:304 [Grid lvl: 3]
  3. 00:10:564 (x) - Here you can add a Note
  4. 00:12:746 (5) - NewCombo
  5. 00:13:473 (x) - Here you can add a Note too
OKAY- I think that is all.. for me.. xDD Good luck :)
masamune11
21 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
masamune11

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
Saint Seiya! (8)

General:

  1. You have an Inconsistency in ComboColours.
  2. You have an Inconsistency in the BPM.
  3. You have an Inconsistency in Tags.
  4. You have an Inconsistency in PreviewTime.
  5. You have an Inconsistency in Kiai Times.
    Sorry.. all of these need be the same in all the diffs. So .. Fix all.
- You can't have inconsistent offsets? o 3o Alright, all fixed~

Easy:
  1. Reduce the GeneralAudio to 70% - Done
  2. AR -1 - Done
  3. HP -1 - Done
  4. 00:18:928 (5) - Remove the whistle from the body of the Slider. - Done
  5. 00:20:383 (6) - (^) The same - Done
  6. 00:22:383 (1) - (^) The same And I think you can add A finish in the begin of the Slider o3o - Done
  7. 00:25:292 (2) - (^) The same but don't add any finish here xD - Done
  8. 00:27:837 (1) - I think the correct place of this is in 00:28:019 and end in the same part.. ( 00:28:747 ) - Done
  9. 00:34:383 (2) - Remove the finish from the end of the Slider - Done
  10. 00:35:837 (3) - (^) The same - Done
  11. 00:45:292 (5) - I think now you can add a Finish in the end of the Slider. - Done
  12. 00:56:201 (4) - Erase this note. - Modified; slider (3) is made longer to compensate this note o3o
  13. 01:01:656 (x) - I think you can add a note here o3o - That would ruin Seiya's face kidding, tweaked a bit, adding not only one note, but two--in here and 01:02:019 In the end, I ruin Seiya's face lol
Normal:
  1. 00:29:111 (4,5,6,7) - Here you have a big error.. This pattern start in 00:29:111 .. But need start in 00:29:293 ... Move the pattern to that place and you will Understand.. After of that.. Try fix the pattern. - Fixed; shifts the entire pattern by 1/2 beat earlier and change the pattern.
Hard:
  1. OD & HP -1
  2. 00:09:837 (1) - Move this note to x:272|y:304 [Grid lvl: 3] - Eeeh, but it's so fa--oh right, it's hard. Done.
  3. 00:10:564 (x) - Here you can add a Note - Done
  4. 00:12:746 (5) - NewCombo - Done
  5. 00:13:473 (x) - Here you can add a Note too
- Done o3o
OKAY- I think that is all.. for me.. xDD Good luck :)
Thank you~ Is this supposed to be nazi-modding? Because I love it xDD
Yumih
296 posts
Joined January 2012
Yumih
Hello! Thank you for requesting on my Modding Queue!

Here's my mod!

Items of the same color in different difficulties means that they are related in some way or are the exact same thing.

Geral

Oh, remove the Countdown from the Song Setup. It doesn't match with the beginning of the song at all, since it starts with the calm voice of a womam.

I think that starting the Kiai Time at 00:46:201 would look better, sice there will be a Kiai Fountain (the stars that comes from the side of the window) to match the emphasis after the main part of the chorus of the song. Also, delete the Inheriting points from 00:51:656 - 00:57:474 - and 01:07:474 since they aren't changing anything and have no use.

I think that a Kiai Fountain everytime after the guy sings "Saint Seiya" would look nice too! If you want to do so, follow these steps:
  1. 00:52:019 - Add a Inheriting Point here, with Kiai Mode Effect ON.
  2. 00:57:838 - ^
  3. 01:03:656 - ^
  4. 00:51:928 - Now, add another Inheriting Point here, with Kiai Mode Effect OFF.
  5. 00:57:747 - ^
  6. 01:03:565 - ^
And you are done!
Easy

I think this difficult has too many linear sliders, how about adding some curves? Oh, the sliders are too long too, so I guess you could try adding some more notes, even if it's the Easy difficult. Or else the difficult becomes... boring? Replacing the long sliders with some notes and shorter sliders, that's what I mean. I'll try to give you some examples.

Notice that the Examples are just suggestions! You may replace the sliders (if you are doing so) with your mapping style, if that's your wish.
  1. Example 1 - 00:10:747 (1) - (http://puu.sh/1Gu9k) The slider 00:10:747 (1) was shortened to 00:11:655 and a 1/2 beat slider was added on 00:12:019
  2. 00:13:656 (4) - ^
  3. Example 2 - 00:18:928 (5) - (http://puu.sh/1Gue8) The slider was shortened to 00:19:292 and a Reverse Arrow was added to follow the vocal better.
  4. Example 3 - 00:22:383 (1) - (http://puu.sh/1GuiN) The slider was replaced by 3 Sliders and a 4th slider was added on 00:24:564 where, previously, was a blank space.
  5. 00:22:383 (1) - You can use the right spacing here (0.8x)
  6. 00:24:564 - How about adding a note here?
Normal

I think the notes are too close for a Normal difficult. You're using 0.8x, the same you used on Easy. How about changing it to 1.0x?
  1. From 00:16:019 to 00:21:473 - Take a look on the item of same color from Hard. This part looks kind of monotonous.
  2. 00:30:565 (7) - I think you can delete this note. Since this is Normal, too many notes in a row wouldn't look good.
  3. 00:34:201 (2) - ^
  4. 00:35:656 (5) - ^
  5. 00:45:474 (2) - ^ (This in addition to the next item)
  6. 00:45:292 (1,2,3,4) - 00:51:111 (1,2,3,4) - 00:56:929 (1,2,3,4) and 01:02:747 (1,2,3,4) - Take a look on the item of same color from Hard. It's the same.
  7. 01:07:656 (2) - I think you can remove this note to lower the number of notes in a row of this combo and make things a little bit easier.
Hard

You used too many stacks on this difficult, how about removing some? I'll try to point out some places where I think that stacks aren't really needed. The spacing is too small for a Hard difficult, too. For this one, a spacing equal to or higher than 1.0x would be better.
  1. 00:09:837 (1,2) - Why the big jump between them? I don't think it's really needed.
  2. 00:10:201 (2,3,4,5) and 00:13:110 (2,3,4,5) - I think these could be better. How to say it...? Elaborated, that's the word. 4 notes on the same spot is kind of monotonous. Even a line of circles ended by the slider would look better, I think.
  3. 00:15:564 (6) - This note sounds out of place, but I think I understand where you wanted to put it. How about moving it to 00:15:655 ?
  4. 00:16:382 (3) - This slider is so small that I don't think you need that 3rd point in the middle of it to make it round (despite that this slider is not that round).
  5. From 00:16:019 to 00:20:019 - Don't you think that the exact same thing 3 times in a row becomes repetitive? Try making something that sounds the same but looks (and is) different. For example: You could change 00:17:473 (5,6,7,8) to something like this (http://puu.sh/1Gsnu).
  6. 00:17:473 (5) and 00:20:382 (1) - New Combo? I think it would make more sense since there are pauses on the voice.
  7. From 00:22:382 on - I think the clap sound is too loud, even if you already changed the Volume on the Inheriting Point to 50%. I think that 40% would sound better.
  8. 00:23:110 (5,6) - These sliders are so small that putting curves here looks kind of odd.
  9. 00:28:019 (5,6,7) - 2 stacks on the same combo is too much, in my opinion. Personally, I think this part would look better if none of these were stacked.
  10. 00:42:746 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part looks kind of weird. Instead, jumps here would look good since this is a Hard difficult (and it follows the voice)! What do I mean by that? I mean that deleting these 4 sliders and adding 3 notes instead, at 00:42:746 - 00:43:292 and 00:43:837 with 1.4x spacing between them would look better.
  11. 00:47:837 (3) - This note doesn't need this stack, in my opinion, since there is a whole beat between it and the previous note.
  12. 00:50:564 (9) - ^ (Also, the 3rd point on the middle of the slider doesn't seem to be needed here, too)
  13. 00:45:291 (1,2,3,4) - 00:51:110 (1,2,3,4) - 00:56:928 (1,2,3,4) and 01:02:746 (1,2,3,4) - Everytime the guy sings "Saint Seiya", there's this exact same thing. How about varying a little bit? Maybe something like (http://puu.sh/1Gt0Z), (http://puu.sh/1Gt2v) or (http://puu.sh/1Gt42)?
  14. 01:01:110 - How about adding a note here?

As you can see, I focused myself on the Hard difficult xD!

Good luck with your map! If you have any questions, just PM me ;)
ShiroiYume
13 posts
Joined October 2012
ShiroiYume
Easy

  1. General:
    - Your sliders are boring... (Make something more creative - sorry about that :o )
    - Put more notes. I know it is the difficulty easy, but it makes the map boring - sorry againT^T
    - The sliders are too long.
    - The hitsounds are good *o*
  2. 00:12:747 (2) - Put this note on x:444 (It follows the previous note)
  3. 00:13:656 (3) - ^
  4. 00:18:928 (5) - Put this note on y:64
  5. 00:29:656 (2) - Put this note on x:448
  6. 00:35:837 (3) - Put this note on x:40
  7. 00:42:747 (1) - Put this note on y:208
Normal

  1. 00:16:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you should change these notes to something different. It is too repetitive
  2. 00:24:929 (4) - Put this note on x:251
  3. 00:13:656 (1) - Put this note x:433
  4. Again, the hitsounds are good *o*
Hard

  1. Nothing to say
PS:I Love this anime. (My name is Saori like Athena :3). Good luck with the map \o :)
C A M U S
1 post
Joined December 2011
C A M U S
seems need more hard work…… good luck! hope to see it ranks soon
what on earthTokisada is?
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