This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月4日 at 下午 03:33:38

Artist: ZAQ
Title: Kimi e (TV Size)
Source: Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai
Tags: 121561995 cococanro Jerry
BPM: 93
Filesize: 12358kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.8 stars, 68 notes)
2. Hard (4.78 stars, 175 notes)
3. Insane (4.92 stars, 244 notes)
4. Jerry's Muzu (4.02 stars, 175 notes)
5. Jerry's Oni (4.8 stars, 286 notes)
6. Normal (4.27 stars, 130 notes)

Download: ZAQ - Kimi e (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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121561995 and My first map~~
中二病でも恋がしたい！Lite OP - 君へ
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Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by 121561995
Insane by cococanro
Taiko mode by Jerry
ready for mod

leon1341414 wrote:

My first map~~

First beatmap,, read this first :

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Insane
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

General


leon1341414's Easy


121561995's Hard



that's all
thanks

Luster_DNFWTF wrote:

leon1341414 wrote:

My first map~~

First beatmap,, read this first :

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Insane
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

General

the better background is 1024 x 768

KIAI time started at 00:49:795 and ended at 01:25:924

leon1341414's Easy

00:43:383 (2) - wrong placing
01:08:182 to 01:09:795 - spread it or replace it with the spinner
start the spinner at 01:23:343 and ended at 01:25:294 ( you may remove the red slider and circle )

your sliders are too straight,, give it more curves
and some of the circles are at the same place,, spread it

121561995's Hard

01:25:924 - the spinner end at here

umm,, you may to see the ranked hard diff
and,, give it more style

that's all
thanks

Thanks for your mod! Your suggestions were so helpful.
I will try to fixed those problems!

I am doing this as my first mod.
Unrankable
Highly recommended
Suggestions or minor problems

General

Put Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai lite in source , Title your map ZAQ - kimi e (TV size).Full submit after these.Read this before you do: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
Your image size is 960x678 , which differs from the recommended 800x600 or 1024x768 and causes letterboxing.Find a new one.
It supposed to be a video right?Include it in your beatmap.

leon1341414's Easy

Add 1 second to music lead in.It is hard to catch the first beat.
Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:12:375 (2,3,4) - Overlapping.Maybe you should point 00:13:666 (3) - to south and move 00:14:956 (4) -
00:25:924 (4) 00:27:214 (1) - They are overlapping.I suggest to move 00:27:214 (1) down
00:29:795 (3) - Overlap with 00:27:214 (1) -
00:32:375 (1) - ^
00:32:375 (1) to 00:35:601 (2) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.Change them with sliders or circle patterns
00:36:892 (1) to 00:40:763 (4) - Hard to read for easy
00:44:633 (3) - ^
00:49:150 (4,1,1) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.
00:49:795 (1) - It supposes to be kiai here.Use inherited timing sections to do so.
00:51:085 (2,3) - Overlapping.Curve the two sliders to solve this.
00:54:956 (5) - New Combo
00:58:827 (8) - Hidden under slider.Move it straight to the left.
01:00:117 (1) to 01:07:214 (2) - Stacks and Overlapping are too difficult for easy.Find a better pattern without stacks and overlappings
01:03:021 (1) - This spacing does not suits.
01:10:440 (1,2,3) - use smaller grids and place the sliders till the end of the sliders are in the same position
01:14:311 (1) - Hidden under slider.
01:18:182 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for easy
The main problems of this diff are stacks and overlapping.You have to understand , not all the new players can read them.

121561995's Hard

Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:14:956 (2) - Reverse arrow hidden by 00:14:150 (3) - which is unrankable
00:19:795 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
00:49:795 (1) - kiai
00:51:085 (5,6) - Liked the way you used claps
01:22:053 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
There are fewer problems with this diff , but you lack some creativity.Make some symmetrical shape, have a better flow on some beats and it will be better.

Good luck with your first beatmap

kelvinli wrote:

I am doing this as my first mod.
Unrankable
Highly recommended
Suggestions or minor problems

General

Put Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai lite in source , Title your map ZAQ - kimi e (TV size).Full submit after these.Read this before you do: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
Your image size is 960x678 , which differs from the recommended 800x600 or 1024x768 and causes letterboxing.Find a new one.
It supposed to be a video right?Include it in your beatmap.

leon1341414's Easy

Add 1 second to music lead in.It is hard to catch the first beat.
Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:12:375 (2,3,4) - Overlapping.Maybe you should point 00:13:666 (3) - to south and move 00:14:956 (4) -
00:25:924 (4) 00:27:214 (1) - They are overlapping.I suggest to move 00:27:214 (1) down
00:29:795 (3) - Overlap with 00:27:214 (1) -
00:32:375 (1) - ^
00:32:375 (1) to 00:35:601 (2) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.Change them with sliders or circle patterns
00:36:892 (1) to 00:40:763 (4) - Hard to read for easy
00:44:633 (3) - ^
00:49:150 (4,1,1) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.
00:49:795 (1) - It supposes to be kiai here.Use inherited timing sections to do so.
00:51:085 (2,3) - Overlapping.Curve the two sliders to solve this.
00:54:956 (5) - New Combo
00:58:827 (8) - Hidden under slider.Move it straight to the left.
01:00:117 (1) to 01:07:214 (2) - Stacks and Overlapping are too difficult for easy.Find a better pattern without stacks and overlappings
01:03:021 (1) - This spacing does not suits.
01:10:440 (1,2,3) - use smaller grids and place the sliders till the end of the sliders are in the same position
01:14:311 (1) - Hidden under slider.
01:18:182 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for easy
The main problems of this diff are stacks and overlapping.You have to understand , not all the new players can read them.

121561995's Hard

Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:14:956 (2) - Reverse arrow hidden by 00:14:150 (3) - which is unrankable
00:19:795 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
00:49:795 (1) - kiai
00:51:085 (5,6) - Liked the way you used claps
01:22:053 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
There are fewer problems with this diff , but you lack some creativity.Make some symmetrical shape, have a better flow on some beats and it will be better.

Good luck with your first beatmap

Thank you for your modding.
The Problems that you suggested is very helpful.
It's also a good lesson to me to learn more on editing maps.

I have fix most Problems of them.

The image for background will be Update when I found a adaptable one.

But when I change source into "Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai lite" , Title the map "ZAQ - kimi e (TV size)" it will turn into a new map and need submit again?


Your suggestion realy help me a lot.

Thats why I told you to read http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
I had this problem, too.It was just 1 month ago...
I failed to do that because I exited the editor, where the post told me what I not do to do so.
I believe you can fix it.

kelvinli wrote:

Thats why I told you to read http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
I had this problem, too.It was just 1 month ago...
I failed to do that because I exited the editor, where the post told me what I not do to do so.
I believe you can fix it.

Thanks.
I fix it Successful.

這樣寫 然後上傳 (方法跟前面的一樣)




然後你需要一個難度名叫"Normal", 因為一張圖必須要有良好的diff spread, 就像Easy - Normal - Hard這樣


加油! no kds plz

好聽~
我可以加一個難度insane嗎XD
話說音質有點差

Flask wrote:

這樣寫 然後上傳 (方法跟前面的一樣)




然後你需要一個難度名叫"Normal", 因為一張圖必須要有良好的diff spread, 就像Easy - Normal - Hard這樣


加油! no kds plz

喔喔,這樣我剛剛改錯了
已改正~~

感謝建議~~~
難度會試著再增加

cococanro wrote:

好聽~
我可以加一個難度insane嗎XD
話說音質有點差

當然~~如果你願意的話非常歡迎XD
我們也正討論要做一個呢~~
能加一個就幫大忙了QQ

音質的話我也不大清楚QQ
(其實我聽是沒有什麼感覺.........)

聽聽看以下兩個的跟你的有什麼差

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62868

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/59806

cococanro wrote:

聽聽看以下兩個的跟你的有什麼差

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62868

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/59806

我懂了.......

我的聽起來比較不清晰

看你要不要把歌曲換掉~
and難度的部分最好是取Easy.Hard
然後在此串打
Easy by leon1341414
Hard by 121561995
這樣子

別kd

no kudos please
ZAQ - kimi e (TV size) but not ZAQ - kimi e (Tv side)

kelvinli wrote:

no kudos please
ZAQ - kimi e (TV size) but not ZAQ - kimi e (Tv side)

haha~
It's my mistake
I will fix it. Thanks~

現在的BG尺寸要1024x768或800x600 你的不符合 所以幫你弄了一下 拿去用吧~ (別kd

http://imm.io/JRSw


另外preview Time每個難度都要有 設一下

~

Flask wrote:

現在的BG尺寸要1024x768或800x600 你的不符合 所以幫你弄了一下 拿去用吧~ (別kd

http://imm.io/JRSw


另外preview Time每個難度都要有 設一下

~

喔喔~感謝~~

已修改XD

Random mod for #modreqs ~

General:
The kiai time must be the same in all your diff.
The "Set as Current Position Preview Point" also has to be the same in all your diff.
The insane difficulty has different offset than the other diff.

Easy:
00:23:974 (3) - you could make this slider as 00:21:394 (1) - to make it look better
00:27:200 (1) - I would recommend you to do these sliders because an easy cornering with long straight slider is
bored of playing
00:29:781 (3) - ^

159's Hard
01:20:749 (1) - if you should change how or if.
01:22:039 (2) - ^
The notes are very close together, use a slightly higher spacing.

Insane:
-2 AR
00:40:581 (1) - you should replace this by a slider Spiner
01:23:323 (1,1) - no need for 2 Spiner. You have only one.

Good luck with your map :3!

[Yue] wrote:

General:
The insane difficulty has different offset than the other diff.

Insane:
-2 AR
00:40:581 (1) - you should replace this by a slider Spiner
01:23:323 (1,1) - no need for 2 Spiner. You have only one.

fix all ~ thank you Yue!

http://puu.sh/1o0ZQ

[Yue] wrote:

Random mod for #modreqs ~

General:
The kiai time must be the same in all your diff.
The "Set as Current Position Preview Point" also has to be the same in all your diff.
The insane difficulty has different offset than the other diff.

Easy:
00:23:974 (3) - you could make this slider as 00:21:394 (1) - to make it look better
00:27:200 (1) - I would recommend you to do these sliders because an easy cornering with long straight slider is
bored of playing
00:29:781 (3) - ^

159's Hard
01:20:749 (1) - if you should change how or if.
01:22:039 (2) - ^
The notes are very close together, use a slightly higher spacing.

Insane:
-2 AR
00:40:581 (1) - you should replace this by a slider Spiner
01:23:323 (1,1) - no need for 2 Spiner. You have only one.

Good luck with your map :3!

Easy difficulty was be fixed~
Hard diff will be fix soon
Thank you~~

[Yue] wrote:

Random mod for #modreqs ~

General:
The kiai time must be the same in all your diff.
The "Set as Current Position Preview Point" also has to be the same in all your diff.
The insane difficulty has different offset than the other diff.

159's Hard
01:20:749 (1) - if you should change how or if.
01:22:039 (2) - ^
The notes are very close together, use a slightly higher spacing.

Good luck with your map :3!

All diff are fixed~~
Thanks for your modding:)

Dark_Ai wrote:

• [Insane]
  
  [list:8b4f7]

1. 00:01:394 (3,4,5) - spacing
2. 00:14:136 (1) - spacing and remove nc
3. 00:14:942 (1) - ^ same
4. 00:19:781 (1) - ^ same
5. 00:22:523 (5) - spacing
6. 00:23:813 (2,3,4) - sapcing
7. 00:25:265 (1) - spacing and delete nc
8. 00:27:684 (1) - ^ same
9. 00:30:103 (1) - ^ same
10. 00:44:297 (1) - remove nc
11. 00:51:394 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this part :/ too many jumps and it is totally weird @.@
12. 01:17:361 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ same here @.@
13. 01:22:684 (1) - end this spinner on 01:26:555

Nice Song and really good for a first map ;3

Good Luck with rank!~

except spacing, fix all~
about spacing, i think don't need to change..

and the end spinner looks better in 01:26:071 - ?

http://puu.sh/1p94i

thanks u~

Dark_Ai wrote:

• [Easy]
  
  [list:04b45]

1. Volume 60% I think it is better
2. 00:08:490 - 00:11:071 - Delete this break
3. 00:14:942 (4) - delete finish
4. 00:15:587 (-) - add a note here (with finish if you want) sound is better
5. 00:20:103 (4) - delete finish
6. 00:20:749 (-) - add a note
7. 00:36:232 (1) - delete new combo
8. 00:49:781 (1) - ^ same
9. 00:59:458 (-) - add a note
10. 01:14:297 (1) - delete nc
11. 01:22:684 (1) - end this spinner on 01:26:555

Easy was all fixed~

• [159's Hard]
  
  [list:04b45]

1. Volume 60%
2. 00:12:362 (3) - end this slider on 00:13:007
3. 00:13:490 (1) - remove nc
4. 00:18:007 (1) - ^
5. 00:18:813 (2) - add nc
6. 00:19:781 (1) - remove nc
7. 00:22:362 (1) - ^
8. 00:30:749 (1) - ^
9. 00:31:071 (1) - ^
10. 00:31:717 (2) - add nc here
11. 00:44:942 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is wrong, fix that
12. 00:46:555 (1) - remove nc
13. 00:46:878 (1) - ^
14. 00:47:200 (1) - ^
15. 00:48:168 (1) - ^
16. 00:52:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing is wrong, fix pls
17. 00:53:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
18. 00:55:910 (1) - ^
    Before my mod is full of wrong spacing. Please check your Diff again and work on it, since there is really many spacing mistakes :/
19. 01:22:684 (1) - end this spinner on 01:26:555

Hard is fixing~
some of wrong spacing are still looking for correct place

Nice Song and really good for a first map ;3

Good Luck with rank!~

Thanks for you modding.
I will try my best

Taiko diff done

http://puu.sh/1rUkt

BG :

Jerry wrote:

Taiko diff done

http://puu.sh/1rUkt

BG :

OK~
Updated~

just these. good luck.

@leon1341414: 卧槽你至少要两个taiko diff (muzukashii 和 oni) 才能rank哦. @@

mintong89 wrote:

Taiko Mod <3
...

[Jerry's Taiko]

00:10:103 - maybe remove this and 00:09:781 - this k? becuase i hear piano sound already stop at 00:09:781 - .
00:11:716 - k. seem d is not fits.
00:20:426 - k too.
00:23:652 - i think remove this is better.
00:25:588 - and 00:26:232 - i think k and 00:25:749 - remove this and add a d at 00:26:394 - is better.
01:09:136 - k

just these. good luck.

@leon1341414: 卧槽你至少要两个taiko diff (muzukashii 和 oni) 才能rank哦. @@

Thanks for your mod~~~

不過,原來有加上taiko diff要有那2個難度才可以被rank喔 QQ
了解了@@

我再去看看,感謝~

Fixed : http://puu.sh/1rW9K

Thanks for the mod.

Taiko IRC Mod~


good luck with the map :3

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko IRC Mod~

IRC

• 20:29 taiko_maniac1811: irc moddo taimu~
  20:29 Jerry: ok o3o
  20:29 taiko_maniac1811: 00:07:200 (4) - k
  20:30 taiko_maniac1811: 00:07:523 (1) - d
  20:31 Jerry: ok changed
  20:31 taiko_maniac1811: 00:25:587 - d?
  20:32 taiko_maniac1811: 00:26:071 - del d
  20:33 Jerry: done
  20:36 taiko_maniac1811: 00:47:845 - move k to 00:48:007 and add d here
  20:36 taiko_maniac1811: 00:48:329 - del d
  20:37 Jerry: nice slow stream xD
  20:38 taiko_maniac1811: xD
  20:39 taiko_maniac1811: 00:53:168 - add k?
  20:39 taiko_maniac1811: 00:54:136 - ^
  20:40 taiko_maniac1811: ^ i mean d
  20:40 Jerry: both add d? o3o
  20:40 taiko_maniac1811: 00:54
  20:40 Jerry: oh ok
  20:40 taiko_maniac1811: 00:53 k
  20:41 taiko_maniac1811: ok done =w=
  20:42 taiko_maniac1811: that's all i can think of lol
  20:42 Jerry: oh ok
  20:42 Jerry: thanks
  20:42 taiko_maniac1811: :3

Fixed : http://puu.sh/1uS9r

Thanks

Updated~~

general

volume is too high in easy and hard
offset -20
make a normal difficulty or ask someone to make one
source: Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai
remove Chuuniboyu demo koi ga shitai from tags because its already in source
add 121561995 cococanro Jerry to tags because they made guest diffs

easy

your patterns are good but you need to improve the note placing and slider shapes, this mapping style feels old..

00:03:329 (1,2,3) - this notes are too far in the timeline, if you dont want to map this part with common notes you better remove this circles
00:14:942 (4,1) - overlap, not good in the newbie's difficulty
00:15:587 (5) - remove finish
00:16:232 (1) - add finish to slider start
00:25:910 (4) - remove finish
00:27:200 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/1tSUE

00:36:232 (5) - remove finish
00:36:878 (1) - add finish to slider start
00:44:619 (3,1) - you changed to distance snap here, intentional? not good imo
00:45:265 (1) - strange shape, does not fits the next slider
00:49:136 (4) - remove finish
00:49:781 (5) - add finish, add new combo
00:50:426 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:426 (1,2,3,4) - use this pattern http://puu.sh/1tT7q
00:53:652 (4,1) - its a jump, no jumps in easy diffs
01:04:297 (1,1) - overlap
01:01:716 (3) - remove finish at slider tail
01:03:007 (1) - same as above
01:04:297 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:265 (2) - add new combo
01:05:910 (1) - remove new combo
01:22:684 - add a note here
01:23:329 - spinner start here
01:26:071 - spinner end here

159's Hard

your patterns are good but are using the same slider velocity as easy, that's not "hard", i sugest you using a slider velocity higher than 1,70
you will need to recalculate slider lenghts after changing slider velocity
the notes are too close

00:59:459 (1) - remove finish at slider start, add clap
00:59:781 (2) - add clap at slider start, remove clap at slider tail and add finish
01:00:749 (3) - missing clap
01:20:749 (1,2) - weird sliders

insane


this difficulty starts too easy and then becomes really challenging. make the general difficulty more consistent

00:00:484 (1) - this slider is unsnapped, remove it and change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and make this slider at 00:00:507 http://puu.sh/1tUx8
00:21:394 (1) - stack to previous slider end
00:23:329 (1,2) - i know you what you wanted to do, but this anti jump is too small, breaks the flow
00:31:716 - note here
00:32:039 (1,2,3) - make the spacing even

that's all i can find, good luck

pimpG wrote:

general


offset -20

insane



00:00:484 (1) - this slider is unsnapped, remove it and change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and make this slider at 00:00:507 http://puu.sh/1tUx8
00:21:394 (1) - stack to previous slider end
00:23:329 (1,2) - i know you what you wanted to do, but this anti jump is too small, breaks the flow
00:31:716 - note here
00:32:039 (1,2,3) - make the spacing even

that's all i can find, good luck

all done. thank you!
and the refrain has reduced complexity

http://puu.sh/1vdop

pimpG wrote:

general

volume is too high in easy and hard
offset -20
make a normal difficulty or ask someone to make one
source: Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai
remove Chuuniboyu demo koi ga shitai from tags because its already in source
add 121561995 cococanro Jerry to tags because they made guest diffs

easy

your patterns are good but you need to improve the note placing and slider shapes, this mapping style feels old..

00:03:329 (1,2,3) - this notes are too far in the timeline, if you dont want to map this part with common notes you better remove this circles
00:14:942 (4,1) - overlap, not good in the newbie's difficulty
00:15:587 (5) - remove finish
00:16:232 (1) - add finish to slider start
00:25:910 (4) - remove finish
00:27:200 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/1tSUE

1st curve point x136 y288
2nd curve point x256 y224
3rd curve point x376 y288

136,288,27200,6,0,P|256:224|376:288,1,280

make sure you fix the spacing to next note if you use this sugestion

00:36:232 (5) - remove finish
00:36:878 (1) - add finish to slider start
00:44:619 (3,1) - you changed to distance snap here, intentional? not good imo
00:45:265 (1) - strange shape, does not fits the next slider
00:49:136 (4) - remove finish
00:49:781 (5) - add finish, add new combo
00:50:426 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:426 (1,2,3,4) - use this pattern http://puu.sh/1tT7q
00:53:652 (4,1) - its a jump, no jumps in easy diffs
01:04:297 (1,1) - overlap
01:01:716 (3) - remove finish at slider tail
01:03:007 (1) - same as above
01:04:297 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:265 (2) - add new combo
01:05:910 (1) - remove new combo
01:22:684 - add a note here
01:23:329 - spinner start here
01:26:071 - spinner end here

159's Hard

your patterns are good but are using the same slider velocity as easy, that's not "hard", i sugest you using a slider velocity higher than 1,70
you will need to recalculate slider lenghts after changing slider velocity
the notes are too close

00:59:459 (1) - remove finish at slider start, add clap
00:59:781 (2) - add clap at slider start, remove clap at slider tail and add finish
01:00:749 (3) - missing clap
01:20:749 (1,2) - weird sliders

insane


this difficulty starts too easy and then becomes really challenging. make the general difficulty more consistent

00:00:484 (1) - this slider is unsnapped, remove it and change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and make this slider at 00:00:507 http://puu.sh/1tUx8
00:21:394 (1) - stack to previous slider end
00:23:329 (1,2) - i know you what you wanted to do, but this anti jump is too small, breaks the flow
00:31:716 - note here
00:32:039 (1,2,3) - make the spacing even

that's all i can find, good luck

Ok~ Easy diff and general problem all fixed.
and I will try to improve hard's note distance soon.

Thank you~~

[Timing]

1. I feel offset 740 would be better

[General]

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime, check it out and fix please
2. I don't think countdown fit this song, so remove countdown of [Easy] and [Hard] diff
3. Taiko diff has a different timing

[Easy]

1. This diff lack of hitsounds, try add some drum sound during 00:31:696 - 00:49:761, you can use this custom sound as soft-clap2 during 00:11:051 - 00:31:696, and use your custom soft clap1 for climax part

[Hard]

1. The same hitsound suggestion as Easy
2. 00:31:374 (1) - Why NC this note?
3. 00:35:568 (2) - Didn't stack well under 1, and the slider shape can be improved

[Insane]

1. 00:14:922 (5) - Slow down slider, NC for a warning
2. 00:30:083 (5) - ^
3. 00:39:922 (2) - This jump is unreasonable
4. 00:49:761 (1) - No finish here, it's climax start
5. 01:04:116 (5) - Unexpected jump

[Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary

Breeze wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:14:922 (5) - Slow down slider, NC for a warning
2. 00:30:083 (5) - ^
3. 00:39:922 (2) - This jump is unreasonable
4. 00:49:761 (1) - No finish here, it's climax start
5. 01:04:116 (5) - Unexpected jump

都修改好了.
感謝._.

http://puu.sh/1x1Lm

Breeze wrote:

[Timing]

1. I feel offset 740 would be better

[General]

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime, check it out and fix please
2. I don't think countdown fit this song, so remove countdown of [Easy] and [Hard] diff
3. Taiko diff has a different timing

[Easy]

1. This diff lack of hitsounds, try add some drum sound during 00:31:696 - 00:49:761, you can use this custom sound as soft-clap2 during 00:11:051 - 00:31:696, and use your custom soft clap1 for climax part

[Hard]

1. The same hitsound suggestion as Easy
2. 00:31:374 (1) - Why NC this note?
3. 00:35:568 (2) - Didn't stack well under 1, and the slider shape can be improved

[Insane]

1. 00:14:922 (5) - Slow down slider, NC for a warning
2. 00:30:083 (5) - ^
3. 00:39:922 (2) - This jump is unreasonable
4. 00:49:761 (1) - No finish here, it's climax start
5. 01:04:116 (5) - Unexpected jump

[Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary

修改完成~~
感謝Breeze

Hello~

[Taiko]
00:06:867 (3) - Unsnapped by 2ms
00:10:738 (3) - ^
00:12:996 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Tickrate 2 fits best imo
From 00:11:062 - to 00:49:772 - lacks hitsounds. You only have a few when the snap sounds occurs. Sure it would be more acceptable if it were an Easy/Normal because it doesn't have as much objects like Hard/Insane.
The way you mapped it is just like if it was the doubled bpm. AR 7 feels really slow for this imo, I suggest you try 8
00:00:504 (1) - this one is unsnapped (use 1/8 to re-snap it properly)
00:02:998 (1,2,3) - the spacing here looks unequal. I know there are more, but this was more notable imo. You should use a higher Grid level (Grid level 4) to prevent such things
00:23:643 - Add a note here? it would flow better imo
00:56:546 (1,2,3) - Mind spacing up these notes a bit so it feels more natural? The spacing is pretty close to chat you use as jumps

[Hard]
The Slider Velocity is really low imo. You should've used 1,70 or something. Easy is using 1,40 which makes it even more strange.
Regular claps doesn't fit at all. I suggest you use custom ones, just like Insane. Make all sections custom
00:00:740 - Use 30% vol from here. 60% is too much imo, and it's a calm song
00:31:385 (4,5) - the overlap looks bad D:
00:49:772 - 50% here. Fits better imo
00:51:308 - What's with all the random bookmarks here? lol
00:53:643 (1,2,3) - This might be alright, but I still think it's so tight
01:02:030 (8,9,1) - I don't really like that you have this much of a gap between (9) and (1)
01:09:127 (7,8,9) - same as 00:53:643 (1,2,3) -
01:15:579 (3,4,5,6) - same here kinda
01:17:675 (8,1) - This doesn't look too well when stacking. the velocity is really low as well
01:16:062 (4) - clap on end. You skipped it
01:17:353 (7) - clap on end
01:18:804 (4) - clap on start
01:20:095 (6) - clap
01:20:740 (1) - clap on end
01:22:030 (2) - ^
01:23:321 (1) - Do the same as Insane did. 5% it

[Easy]
Please use 30% volume till you get to the kiai. 70% is really loud for this song
00:11:062 - You don't really need this green line. You can make the Red line Custom instead
00:46:546 (2) - clap on the end doesn't really fit here
01:04:288 (2) - clap on start
00:49:772 - 50% here and use custom claps here (S:C1)
01:23:320 (1) - Like the other diffs, make it 5% instead


That's all I guess~
Good luck!

[Insane]
Tickrate 2 fits best imo
From 00:11:062 - to 00:49:772 - lacks hitsounds. You only have a few when the snap sounds occurs. Sure it would be more acceptable if it were an Easy/Normal because it doesn't have as much objects like Hard/Insane.
The way you mapped it is just like if it was the doubled bpm. AR 7 feels really slow for this imo, I suggest you try 8
- fix,and ar8 is better
00:00:504 (1) - this one is unsnapped (use 1/8 to re-snap it properly) - fix
00:02:998 (1,2,3) - the spacing here looks unequal. I know there are more, but this was more notable imo. You should use a higher Grid level (Grid level 4) to prevent such things - fix
00:23:643 - Add a note here? it would flow better imo - i add nc here,and spacing up 00:23:320 - a little.
00:56:546 (1,2,3) - Mind spacing up these notes a bit so it feels more natural? The spacing is pretty close to chat you use as jumps
- fix

That's all I guess~
Good luck!

thank you!

http://puu.sh/1xH7n

>.>

Saten wrote:

[Taiko]
00:06:867 (3) - Unsnapped by 2ms
00:10:738 (3) - ^
00:12:996 (1) - ^

Fixed : http://puu.sh/1xIDI

Thanks :3

cococanro wrote:

thank you!

http://puu.sh/1xH7n

Jerry wrote:

Fixed : http://puu.sh/1xIDI

Thanks :3

Updated~~

Saten wrote:

Hello~

[Hard]
The Slider Velocity is really low imo. You should've used 1,70 or something. Easy is using 1,40 which makes it even more strange.
Regular claps doesn't fit at all. I suggest you use custom ones, just like Insane. Make all sections custom
00:00:740 - Use 30% vol from here. 60% is too much imo, and it's a calm song
00:31:385 (4,5) - the overlap looks bad D:
00:49:772 - 50% here. Fits better imo
00:51:308 - What's with all the random bookmarks here? lol
00:53:643 (1,2,3) - This might be alright, but I still think it's so tight
01:02:030 (8,9,1) - I don't really like that you have this much of a gap between (9) and (1)
01:09:127 (7,8,9) - same as 00:53:643 (1,2,3) -
01:15:579 (3,4,5,6) - same here kinda
01:17:675 (8,1) - This doesn't look too well when stacking. the velocity is really low as well
01:16:062 (4) - clap on end. You skipped it
01:17:353 (7) - clap on end
01:18:804 (4) - clap on start
01:20:095 (6) - clap
01:20:740 (1) - clap on end
01:22:030 (2) - ^
01:23:321 (1) - Do the same as Insane did. 5% it

[Easy]
Please use 30% volume till you get to the kiai. 70% is really loud for this song
00:11:062 - You don't really need this green line. You can make the Red line Custom instead
00:46:546 (2) - clap on the end doesn't really fit here
01:04:288 (2) - clap on start
00:49:772 - 50% here and use custom claps here (S:C1)
01:23:320 (1) - Like the other diffs, make it 5% instead


That's all I guess~
Good luck!

Easy diff was all fixed.
Hard diff accepted the sound suggestion. And do some major revise.

Thanks Saten~~

hey ^^

Easy: 01:08:159 (1) - i dont like the spinner here...make it longer or replace it with an slider 01:08:481 - 01:09:127 and a circle at 01:09:772 imo

Hard: 01:16:062 (4,5,6) - i think you have to place them better...like in a line
and recheck the spacings here...it looks too difficult

Insane:
looking good

sorry for this little mod but i think this maps are good ^^

SilverJetter wrote:

hey ^^

Easy: 01:08:159 (1) - i dont like the spinner here...make it longer or replace it with an slider 01:08:481 - 01:09:127 and a circle at 01:09:772 imo

Hard: 01:16:062 (4,5,6) - i think you have to place them better...like in a line
and recheck the spacings here...it looks too difficult

Insane:
looking good

sorry for this little mod but i think this maps are good ^^

Thanks SliverJetter~

Hard diff was fixed

and I think I need that Easy diff's spinner to make it a relax time. sor.

H i , Random Taiko modding .

These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .
　
[Taiko General]

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~

　
| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |

[ Jerry's Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary
   　
2. 00:20:417 (1) - d
3. 00:31:707 (1) - D
4. 00:46:385 - add a d
5. 00:49:771 - D
6. 01:05:094 (4) - re
7. 01:05:256 (1) - D

　
good luck .

Cuvelia wrote:

[Taiko General]

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~

Taiko Muzukashii diff done : http://puu.sh/1EBKB
　

Cuvelia wrote:

[ Jerry's Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary
   　
2. 00:20:417 (1) - d
3. 00:31:707 (1) - D
4. 00:46:385 - add a d
5. 00:49:771 - D
6. 01:05:094 (4) - re
7. 01:05:256 (1) - D

　
good luck .

Fixed Taiko Oni diff : http://puu.sh/1EBKn

Thanks for the mod :3

Jerry wrote:

Cuvelia wrote:

[Taiko General]

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~

Taiko Muzukashii diff done : http://puu.sh/1EBKB
　

Cuvelia wrote:

[ Jerry's Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary
   　
2. 00:20:417 (1) - d
3. 00:31:707 (1) - D
4. 00:46:385 - add a d
5. 00:49:771 - D
6. 01:05:094 (4) - re
7. 01:05:256 (1) - D

　
good luck .

Fixed Taiko Oni diff : http://puu.sh/1EBKn

Thanks for the mod :3

Update~

Thanks for taiko diff~