hello, for m4m
wow, this map is super fun to play. take my suggestions below lightly, they most just opinion. also, pm me if any questions ^^;;
00:10:634 (1,2) - just consider alternative using hitcircles instead. i think it might be better to click these 4 notes
00:14:772 (4,5) - i feel like the kickslider going perpendicular to the next note isnt very very good. if you are worried about overlap with 00:14:083 (1) , maybe don't worry because they are not on-screen at the same time anyway
00:24:341 (4,5,6,7) - can you explain why the spacing here isnt like the other streams? it cant be because of the sudden direction change because of 00:18:565 (2,3,4,5,6) - , so im guessing its because its a straight line? either way i think this should be consistent with the others.
00:28:393 (3,4,5) - imo this rhythm plays better like this because the current rhythm has no click on 00:28:565
01:00:117 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - something to keep in mind, right now 01:00:634 (3,4) is the largest emphasis due to DS even though it should be the weakest (since the vocal isnt pronouncing something sharp here, more like adding to the prev instead). imo the largest emphasis should be 01:00:807 (4,1) .
an easy fix is to stack 01:00:807 (4) on 01:00:290 (1) (which is ok imo due to the AR)
01:00:979 (1,2) - for slow sliders like this, consider good blanket because its not like its going to escape the player's attention at this speed
01:49:945 (9) - this should probably be deleted because keeping it actually ruins some of the emphasis of the empty space going into 01:50:634 (1)
01:58:910 (1,2) - this can be cleaned up
there are couple other sliders that also can also look much better in editor (and in game) with better blankets. you can either ignore, find them and correct, or just PM me forum or in-game and i will point them out.
02:11:927 (4) - delete this because its not in the music and also takes away from emphasis on clicking the head of 02:12:014 (1) . if you do delete, you also would need to remap to redo the emphasis tho, so your call.
02:32:876 (4,5) - i actually don't get the point of this. i dont think you need the kicksliders for vocals; hitcircles would be better here. if you do decide to keep kicksliders, make them overlap more and closer because then it also looks less messy imo.
02:36:841 (4) - this feels like it should be a kickslider and in a pattern with 02:37:014 (5,6)
02:39:945 (8) - try to make this tail clickable, its big.
02:53:393 (3) - same as the last time about making this kickslider
03:23:393 (2,3) - i dont see the need for kicksliders, especially in the calm section and when only thing here is vocals
03:51:324 (5) - delete or not, its up to you
03:52:358 (2,3) - this here is wasting potential to make 03:52:358 (2,3,4) - into 2 cool looking wub sliders representing the same sound. also, i dont see a need to make 03:52:531 (3) a clickable beat anyhow
03:54:083 (5,6,7) - this really really feels like it should be like this rhythm with the kickslider being in a pattern with 03:53:565 (2,3,4) due to similar sounds and for the emphasis on 03:54:427 (8)
03:57:186 (7) - this really feels like it could and should be 3/4 and not 1/2
04:39:255 (2,3,4,5,6) - this feels a tad bit awkward. if you change flow like this, make it more sharp and not round.