as you requested
[Girl who Violently Kills with a Sword]
00:07:298 (4,5) - tbh i would like to have the 1/2 tick clickable than a sliderend because the piano is pretty stronger and needs more emphasis imo // 00:09:464 (1,2) - same goes here tho // 00:12:631 (4,5) - // 00:15:298 (3,4) - and so on
00:23:464 (3,1) - i don't like the concept of the rhythm here because it sounds lame imo to have 1/2 slider and then an 1/1 slider which doesn't follow the piano properly moreover the piano calls for 2 1/2 sliders or 1/2 slider + two notes or viceversa in order to give more emphasis to the piano and follow it properly
http://puu.sh/vDt3v/7becdf3a0d.jpg 00:57:464 (7) - i think you missed a nc here since i feel like here's the new stanza
01:11:298 - missing 1/2 note? the instruments are stopping here and not on 01:10:797 (1) - 's tail because the music is still ongoing from there so would be nice to have a note on this 1/2 tick as you did at 01:13:131 (1,2) - for instance // 01:15:298 - same goes here // 01:19:297 - // 01:23:297 - and so on
01:26:131 (1,2,3) - just to avoid any difficulty spikes why don't you make 1/3 repeats instead?
http://puu.sh/vDtWs/5a99348c75.jpg 02:07:130 (2) - i don't think this 1/1 slider really fits because it sounds kinda lame imo and it doesn't follow the music pretty well so i would like to make this 1/1 slider into a 1/2 slider and on that 1/1 tick from 02:07:463 - you can add a note to not leave that beat empty in this way you'll follow the music more properly imo
http://puu.sh/vDujX/6b25591cf1.jpg // 02:08:130 (1) - same here // 02:09:463 (1) - // 02:12:130 (1) - and so on
02:11:463 (1) - on its repeat there's no any sound imo so a 1/2 slider would fit better here tbh
02:21:130 (7) - this one is touching the hp bar by its tail so move it a bit down to avoid the touch of the hp bar if possible
02:25:463 (1) - i think this one is wrongly snapped it's supposed to end on 1/2 and not on 1/8
02:32:630 (1,2) - tbh would be nice to have the rhythm like this one
https://puu.sh/vDuWG/c430d39833.jpg to emphasize properly the piano mapping only 2 circles on the very intensive piano sounds kinda empty imo // 02:43:297 (1,2) - same as above
02:41:797 (1,3) - unproper stack on tail? if yes better fix it it doesn't look really good imo
03:20:686 (2,3,1) - wew what happened here? it's pretty hard to distinguish this pattern especially 03:20:741 (3) - lol
https://puu.sh/vDvnp/b4da76a180.jpg04:04:463 (5,6,7,8) - i think this stream feels overmapped imo especially 04:04:547 (6) - so i guess you have to delete this 1/4 note
04:15:130 (2) - don't you think that this one is overdone? the music doesn't support something like this
https://puu.sh/vDvTo/074b0b10be.jpg so the rhythm should be like this one imo so the music would support this kind of rhythm and also it won't be overdone anymore
04:26:797 (1,1) - there are many stronger hihats from the song which needs more emphasis but using only 1/1 sliders you slightly ignore them which doesn't look really good imo so you need to change the rhythm into this
https://puu.sh/vDw9g/cf48126abc.jpg in this way you'll give that emphasis to the stronger hihats than ignoring them
04:29:463 (1) - maybe fullfill this gap with 1/2 slider instead? having only two notes feels pretty empty here imo // 04:34:796 (1) - same here
04:42:629 (1,1) - here because of the high distance and probably the sv changes the transition could be a bit harsh for players and they might do an easy sliderbreak at 04:42:795 (1) - so i suggest to decrease the spacing here for a safe transition moreover 04:42:795 (1) - should end on 1/4 tick because the music stops there so actually the slider is currently wrongly snapped imo
04:49:210 (2) - here the piano is calling for two sliders not an 3/4 slider because it sounds kinda lame since it slightly ignores the stronger piano imo so would be nice to have two 1/4 sliders here in order to give more emphasis to the stronger piano
http://puu.sh/vDwAY/482ac3cfa4.jpg that's all from me pay attention on rhythms i don't really like how you ignored some important beats which some of them needs to be clickable imo
gl!