00:06:621 (5,6) - maybe move (5) a bit up and (6) a bit down? In order to follow the flow 00:05:954 (2,3,4) -
00:07:954 (1,2) - swap nc
00:10:621 (1) - unnecessary nc, and also in case if you remove it, swap nc 00:10:954 (5,1) -
00:11:954 (4,2) - unstack it to emphasise different vocal from 00:11:621 (2,3,4,5) -
00:14:621 (1,3) - swap nc
00:20:121 (1) - i don't like that slider ends on the strong sound, maybe make triple instead (with nc on the last note) to emphasise piano here?
00:32:287 (1,6) - not very good overlap which can be avoid
00:38:787 (1,2) - swap nc
00:40:287 (5,1) - ^
00:41:287 (1,2) - ^ and also remove nc 00:40:954 (1) -
00:41:954 (2) - don't like that strong drum and also vocal is at the slider's end. You can make slider on 00:41:787 - and then on strong sound you will decide at own discretion
00:42:788 (1,3) - swap nc
00:45:454 (1,3) - ^
00:45:621 (3) - ctrl+j for good flow to 00:45:954 (4) -
00:46:954 (6,1) - swap nc
00:48:121 (1,3) - ^
00:49:287 (1,2) - ^
00:50:621 (1) - remove nc and also swap nc 00:50:954 (4,1) -
00:51:787 (1,3) - swap nc
00:52:454 (1,2) - same as 00:41:954 (2) -
00:56:287 (5,1) - swap nc
00:58:954 (7,1) - ^
01:02:954 (5,1) - ^
01:03:787 (1,5) - ^
01:03:621 (3) - 01:04:621 (6) - bad overlap
01:06:954 (5) - put nc
01:09:621 (3,1) - swap nc
01:16:121 - 01:17:454 - 01:18:787 - you can put notes here (make triple on the frist place for emphasise piano) in order to a bit diversify this part
01:22:287 (1,4) - swap nc
01:23:954 (1,2) - ^
01:44:121 (1,3) - swap nc?
okay i'm really tired to say about EVERY wrong ncs, just say a few words of advice: USUALLY (except for the emphasis cross-jumps or streams) ncs put on big white or on red tick BEFORE big white tick. About ncs at the triples: nc is better to put on the last note of the triple if this last note are in big white tick (or on the red tick before the bif white tick optional) and on the first one if it are in big white tick or the red tick too. Hopefully that i gave enough examples.
01:46:954 (4) - maybe curve this slider down for good flow to 01:47:287 (1) - ?
02:09:621 (4,5) - nc
02:48:037 - 02:48:204 - why you skip these drums? you can make something like
this02:56:287 (2) - nc
03:00:287 (5,1) - swap nc (these three mods about nc is specially cases, a bit different from your typical mistakes
03:13:287 (3,1) - stack note with end of slider as you did it in 03:07:954 (3,1) -
03:40:287 (1,3) - fix blanket
04:59:384 - why you don't emphasise this strong sound using note?