Silent Siren - Koi Yuki · forum

Kinomi

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-11-22T16:29:16+00:00

General

Knotts' Normal
kinda hard
00:13:145 (6,1) - swap whistle will be better, since you add whistle 00:11:236 00:12:327 00:13:740, same piano same hitsound, and piano 00:13:418 is not the track you followed before.
00:16:741-00:17:400 10% is enough
01:41:712 (5) - add finish will better

Hard
00:34:452 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this hidden pattern is too hard, i think you can rotate each part of the pattern to avoid.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Snow in Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74996
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Koi Yuki short ver.
TitleUnicode:恋い雪 short ver.
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:Gaia
Version:Hard
Source:
Tags:Knotts Kibbleru Snow in Love サイレント サイレン
BeatmapID:537920
BeatmapSetID:231476

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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00:41:952 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:669 (4) - →x248y184, keep moving 00:52:966 (3,4,1) - here has better flow than a jumping

Kibbleru's Insane
Verse is better than kiai
00:01:964 (4,5) - ctrl g, piano told me
00:07:145 (2,3,4,5) - same here decrease the spacing between 2,3 increase the spacing between 3,4
00:22:031 (1) - ctrl g, downbeat with finish and jump feels better.
01:29:877 add a note here to show the buleline vocal
01:48:274 i think you should map this finish
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - i will swap 1,2 amd 3,4's placement on timeline to show the most exciting part in the song.

SPOILER

Melting
没有什么特别大的问题，不过排列在整齐美观和前后物件的联系方面还可以提高
有想法之后，还得花时间想想怎么让梗一个接一个流畅地衔接，而现在这个diff给我的感觉pattern还是比较零碎。
除了可以的pattern以外，短时间滑条的弧度变化不宜过多，不然容易让人感觉杂乱
kiai和前面的主歌，最好能做出不同，让人一打就知道，啊这是kiai了
00:04:690 (1,2,3) - 听音调，这里应该是1,2音调升高，2,3音调降低，spacing按照音调变化比较有逻辑
其他几处也注意一下
00:09:599 (3,4) - a bit ugly, avoid this overlap
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - 我更倾向于这四个都ctrl g一下，由外向内，间距拉大，由此形成跳跃感来强调整首歌最高潮的部分

that's all.

Last edited by Kinomi 2014-11-22T18:49:13+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Knotts

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Knotts 2014-11-22T18:34:58+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Knotts' Normal
kinda hard
00:13:145 (6,1) - swap whistle will be better, since you add whistle 00:11:236 00:12:327 00:13:740, same piano same hitsound, and piano 00:13:418 is not the track you followed before.
00:16:741-00:17:400 - 10% is enough
01:41:712 (5) - add finish will better

fixed everything i think, ty

Knotts' Normal

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Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-22T20:12:57+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General

Hard
00:34:452 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this hidden pattern is too hard, i think you can rotate each part of the pattern to avoid. slight change to yours, fixed
00:41:952 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:53:669 (4) - →x248y184, keep moving 00:52:966 (3,4,1) - here has better flow than a jumping fine imo

Melting
没有什么特别大的问题，不过排列在整齐美观和前后物件的联系方面还可以提高
有想法之后，还得花时间想想怎么让梗一个接一个流畅地衔接，而现在这个diff给我的感觉pattern还是比较零碎。
除了可以的pattern以外，短时间滑条的弧度变化不宜过多，不然容易让人感觉杂乱
kiai和前面的主歌，最好能做出不同，让人一打就知道，啊这是kiai了 hmmm 我覺得提高SV就夠提出kiai了
00:04:690 (1,2,3) - 听音调，这里应该是1,2音调升高，2,3音调降低，spacing按照音调变化比较有逻辑有道理但我喜歡我現在這樣 ><
其他几处也注意一下
00:09:599 (3,4) - a bit ugly, avoid this overlap 這裡我也感覺傷腦筋..... 不知道應該怎樣修
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - 我更倾向于这四个都ctrl g一下，由外向内，间距拉大，由此形成跳跃感来强调整首歌最高潮的部分這樣的話flow就一蹋糊塗拉 ;w; 我覺得還好

that's all.

謝謝摸圖 ^^

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2014-11-22T23:28:38+00:00

Hello, as requested :3

Knott's Normal

00:04:690 (1,2) - Maybe you can try to make them parallel ?
00:16:082 (4) - The 3 first "construction points" of this slider should be aligned, it'll make a better shape for the curve. (aligned horizontally if possible)
00:31:874 (1,3) - You can maybe try to improve this blanket ?
00:27:187 (3) - You should maybe try to reverse its curve, it'll follow (4)'s shape and increase the flow :

SPOILER

01:01:403 (1) - The curves of this slider doesn't looks great, the construction point needs to be placed like this for a better curve :

SPOILER

01:46:400 (1,2) - You should maybe increase the distance between them, then it'll be easier for beginners to understand when (2) is placed.

Hard

00:24:843 (3,4) - You should try to use the same slider for these 2 sliders. I suggest to use also a linear slider for (4), it'll make a kind of symmetry.
00:26:484 (2,3,4) - You could try to make an equilateral triangle ?
00:28:593 (3,4) - This big jump isn't nessecary and can be hard for players since this is the first time you use this kind of jump. I suggest to destack (4) and move it around x188|y72
00:30:937 (1,1) - There's the same problem here. I suggest to move it around x440|y248, then it won't overlap with 00:32:343 (3).
00:44:061 (6,1) - The transition between these 2 sliders is quite bad because of (6)'s shape. You should reverse the curve. But there's a problem : if you reverse the curve, it won't follow the pattern with 00:42:186 (4,3,6). So I suggest to make 00:43:123 (3) a linear slider, then it'll be the curve moving a little bit instead of being the same for this pattern :

SPOILER

00:45:936 (5,1) - Same problem about the jump. I suggest to move (1) around x160|y368
00:52:966 (3,4) - Still the same problem ;w; Just try to move (4) around x264|y196
00:56:950 (4,1,2,3) - Still these big jump... Try to move the circle to make an equilateral triangle with the 2 sliders :

SPOILER

01:01:403 (1) - Try to use CTRL+G to avoid the big jump ?
01:08:668 (4) - Maybe you can stack it with 01:07:731 (2) for the same reasons as above ?
The jumps on the kiai time are okay in my opinion, since the kiai time should be more difficult.

(Btw I love the last slider <3)

Kibbleru's Insane

00:50:857 (2,1) - You maybe could try to make them parallel ?
01:26:948 (5,3) - Maybe you can try to stack them perfectly ?

I really love your mapping style. The diff is quite perfect, great job \:D/

Melting

00:05:781 (4) - The end of the slider is quite unrankable in my opinion, because the part after the red anchor is too small, it makes the sliderball moving strangely. You should try this exemple :

SPOILER

00:10:145 (4) - Same problem (even without any red anchor O.o)
01:07:965 (3,4) - I suggest to use the same slider, then it'll make a kind of symmetry
01:32:338 (3,5) - You can improve this blanket by decreasing (3)'s curve, which is actually too curved.
01:39:603 (3,4) - You should try to use the same slider's shape

Good luck for rank <3

Kibbleru

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5,844 posts

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Kibbleru 2014-11-23T00:04:47+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General

Kibbleru's Insane
Verse is better than kiai wow my map or song?
00:01:964 (4,5) - ctrl g, piano told me nah i want to keep my increasing DS thing
00:07:145 (2,3,4,5) - same here decrease the spacing between 2,3 increase the spacing between 3,4 nah its fine i think
00:22:031 (1) - ctrl g, downbeat with finish and jump feels better. nice done
01:29:877 add a note here to show the buleline vocal k
01:48:274 i think you should map this finish its fine, i got a kink
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - i will swap 1,2 amd 3,4's placement on timeline to show the most exciting part in the song. nice.
SPOILER

that's all.

Kibbleru's Insane

00:50:857 (2,1) - You maybe could try to make them parallel ? mm nah
01:26:948 (5,3) - Maybe you can try to stack them perfectly ? ok

I really love your mapping style. The diff is quite perfect, great job \:D/ thanks ;w;

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Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-23T00:08:31+00:00

Kenterz wrote:
Hello, as requested :3

Hard
00:24:843 (3,4) - You should try to use the same slider for these 2 sliders. I suggest to use also a linear slider for (4), it'll make a kind of symmetry. nah i like it this way
00:26:484 (2,3,4) - You could try to make an equilateral triangle ? isnt this alraedy owo lol well fixed i guess
00:28:593 (3,4) - This big jump isn't nessecary and can be hard for players since this is the first time you use this kind of jump. I suggest to destack (4) and move it around x188|y72 i think it's fine, it's not really that big of a jump tbh, the nc also helps players read the stack pattern (not to mention its quite a strong note too)
00:30:937 (1,1) - There's the same problem here. I suggest to move it around x440|y248, then it won't overlap with 00:32:343 (3). another big note
00:44:061 (6,1) - The transition between these 2 sliders is quite bad because of (6)'s shape. You should reverse the curve. But there's a problem : if you reverse the curve, it won't follow the pattern with 00:42:186 (4,3,6). So I suggest to make 00:43:123 (3) a linear slider, then it'll be the curve moving a little bit instead of being the same for this pattern : changed pattern completely :3
SPOILER
00:45:936 (5,1) - Same problem about the jump. I suggest to move (1) around x160|y368
00:52:966 (3,4) - Still the same problem ;w; Just try to move (4) around x264|y196
00:56:950 (4,1,2,3) - Still these big jump... Try to move the circle to make an equilateral triangle with the 2 sliders :
SPOILER
01:01:403 (1) - Try to use CTRL+G to avoid the big jump ?
01:08:668 (4) - Maybe you can stack it with 01:07:731 (2) for the same reasons as above ?
The jumps on the kiai time are okay in my opinion, since the kiai time should be more difficult.
for my jumps, I only put them when there's a really big note that i want to emphasize. you can see that i dont really put a lot of jumps in my hards, so i think i'm okay :3
(Btw I love the last slider <3) Thanks! <3

Melting
00:05:781 (4) - The end of the slider is quite unrankable in my opinion, because the part after the red anchor is too small, it makes the sliderball moving strangely. You should try this exemple :
SPOILER
00:10:145 (4) - Same problem (even without any red anchor O.o) Fixed up the shape a bit though i dont think it's unrankable owo I see this kinda stuff everywhere lol
01:07:965 (3,4) - I suggest to use the same slider, then it'll make a kind of symmetry ehh i dont like copy pasting too much :s
01:32:338 (3,5) - You can improve this blanket by decreasing (3)'s curve, which is actually too curved. ohh nice catch
01:39:603 (3,4) - You should try to use the same slider's shape same as above

Good luck for rank <3

Thanks for modding! (:

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-11-23T01:23:16+00:00

EDIT: NEW EASY CODE

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Snow in Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74996
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Koi Yuki short ver.
TitleUnicode:恋い雪 short ver.
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:Gaia
Version:Kinshara's Easy
Source:
Tags:Knotts Snow in Love サイレント サイレン
BeatmapID:546179
BeatmapSetID:231476

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-23T01:56:55+00:00

Finally the god has appeared

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-23T01:59:23+00:00

ermahgerd its a christmas miracle

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-11-23T02:07:10+00:00

I swear, you guys... e.e

Sanapri

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Sanapri 2014-11-23T02:33:19+00:00

yayyy

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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-11-23T02:52:40+00:00

the god gd

better call it kinshara's GoD

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-23T06:16:28+00:00

Kenterz wrote:
Knott's Normal
00:04:690 (1,2) - Maybe you can try to make them parallel ? nah I don't like parallel stuff
00:16:082 (4) - The 3 first "construction points" of this slider should be aligned, it'll make a better shape for the curve. (aligned horizontally if possible)
00:31:874 (1,3) - You can maybe try to improve this blanket ?
00:27:187 (3) - You should maybe try to reverse its curve, it'll follow (4)'s shape and increase the flow : I don't really like the way (2) goes into (3) if i change it
SPOILER
01:01:403 (1) - The curves of this slider doesn't looks great, the construction point needs to be placed like this for a better curve :
SPOILER
01:46:400 (1,2) - You should maybe increase the distance between them, then it'll be easier for beginners to understand when (2) is placed.

Ty for the mod

Knotts' Normal

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,530 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-11-23T09:15:59+00:00

wcx's xmas round, as well as cuz Gaia said to do so

Kinshara's Easy

00:02:781 (1,2,3) - I swear this part seemed so awkward, but I couldn't find out any way to change the rhythm to get this awkwardness away. Instead I think it might partially be the hitsounds. Remove the whistles on 00:04:145 (2) and at the start of 00:04:690 (3) - by highlighting just certain more important parts of the piano section, it showcases those parts more, showing emphasis and doesn't sound even all the way, which might have added to the awkwardness
00:08:509 (2,3,4) - ^ to just be consistent I guess
00:15:385 (1,1) - use 1 slider instead, reduces the chances of a beginner not getting the bpm change of hitting inaccurately
00:31:405 (1,2) - unstack them
01:01:403 (1) - I would think the Normal hitsound finish would suit this cymbal sound part here more, it rings more and spreads out the sound of cymbals better than the Soft default, being the Easy, and the rhythm is most relaxed, and everything can be heard clearly and individually
01:08:903 (1) - ^
01:30:463 (3,1) - imperfect blanket

Knott's Normal

00:03:054 (2,3) - spacing them out instead of stacking would be better
00:09:054 (1) - shouldn't the hitsounds here be the same as 00:04:690 (1) - ? They are the same in music
00:11:236 (4) - I'm trying to ignore the fact this isn't a NC since you had an 8 beat combo before this, but it just felt like a totally new melody would start here and a new combo would fit it
00:22:031 (1) - show more of this slider?

SPOILER

00:36:796 (4,5) - feels better spaced
01:31:401 (1,2) - ^
01:44:290 (5) - use a circle here instead of a slider, create a gap at 01:44:525 which would emphasize the beat at 01:44:290 more and also give more rest for players for this quite long pattern, in this Normal.
01:48:040 (2,3) - space them out, the stacking just somehow takes away the greater emphasis of 01:48:274 (3) where the vocals comes into it's final phrase, which would show out more if 01:48:274 (3) was isolated away from others and not stacked

Just felt kinda cramped in some parts with multiple stacks within 1 pattern

Hard

00:07:145 (1) - remove the whistle at the end of the slider
00:27:656 (1,3) - imperfect blanket
00:41:952 (3,4,1,2) - this pattern looks weirdly placed, the closeness of 00:41:952 (3,1,2) also isn't really too appealing
00:43:123 (3) - curve it like 00:42:186 (4) and 00:44:061 (6)
00:44:061 (6) - shift this one to look more covered by 01:04:215 (3) which is placed quite fine around the rest already, just this circle
01:40:306 (5,1) - could still even out the spacing between the ends of 01:40:306 (5) with the next slider

Kibbleru's Insane

00:29:062 (6) - touches the health bar, doesn't look good
00:57:419 (4,1) - imo compared to the other instances you use anti-flow for this phrase in the music like 00:53:669 (2,1) - this one is really the most extreme one, rotating 00:57:653 (1) a little bit more to ease the angle would be nice
01:41:712 (3,4) - continue facing less in the same direction like 01:40:775 (1,2) - ? It feels like a better effect for the vocals here
01:46:400 (1) - this part of the slider doesn't look nice honestly....

SPOILER

Melting

01:03:044 (5,1) - feels like a section for bigger spacing instead, or something that goes against the flow, like 01:04:684 (4,1)
01:39:603 (3,4) - make them similar?
01:42:181 (4,1) - improve the blanket

Good Luck~

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-23T09:31:00+00:00

neonat wrote:
wcx's xmas round, as well as cuz Gaia said to do so

Hard

00:07:145 (1) - remove the whistle at the end of the slider k
00:27:656 (1,3) - imperfect blanket fixed
00:41:952 (3,4,1,2) - this pattern looks weirdly placed, the closeness of 00:41:952 (3,1,2) also isn't really too appealing s: how 2 fix
00:43:123 (3) - curve it like 00:42:186 (4) and 00:44:061 (6) i want 1 straight slider lol
00:44:061 (6) - shift this one to look more covered by 01:04:215 (3) which is placed quite fine around the rest already, just this circle fixed i think
01:40:306 (5,1) - could still even out the spacing between the ends of 01:40:306 (5) with the next slider uhhhhhhhhhh idk spacing is fine tho??

Melting

01:03:044 (5,1) - feels like a section for bigger spacing instead, or something that goes against the flow, like 01:04:684 (4,1) antijump here does the trick for me
01:39:603 (3,4) - make them similar? not intended
01:42:181 (4,1) - improve the blanket fixed

Good Luck~

Thanksss! ~

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-11-23T19:29:17+00:00

neonat wrote:
wcx's xmas round, as well as cuz Gaia said to do so

Kinshara's Easy

00:02:781 (1,2,3) - I swear this part seemed so awkward, but I couldn't find out any way to change the rhythm to get this awkwardness away. Instead I think it might partially be the hitsounds. Remove the whistles on 00:04:145 (2) and at the start of 00:04:690 (3) - by highlighting just certain more important parts of the piano section, it showcases those parts more, showing emphasis and doesn't sound even all the way, which might have added to the awkwardness
00:08:509 (2,3,4) - ^ to just be consistent I guess
00:15:385 (1,1) - use 1 slider instead, reduces the chances of a beginner not getting the bpm change of hitting inaccurately i believe the end would be the unsnapped cuz of new offset? Still, I wanna keep it consistent with the previous 2 hit circles. If it does become a major issue, i'll fix it.
00:31:405 (1,2) - unstack them stacks are fine (to an extent) in an easy diff
01:01:403 (1) - I would think the Normal hitsound finish would suit this cymbal sound part here more, it rings more and spreads out the sound of cymbals better than the Soft default, being the Easy, and the rhythm is most relaxed, and everything can be heard clearly and individually
01:08:903 (1) - ^
01:30:463 (3,1) - imperfect blanket GAIAAAA FIX THIS LOL

gonna leave all hitsounds to gaia since i copied them off of his diff orz

Good Luck~

THANKS!

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-23T19:54:03+00:00

fixed hitsounds from neo's mod + that blanket lol

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-23T21:17:41+00:00

neonat wrote:
Knott's Normal

00:03:054 (2,3) - spacing them out instead of stacking would be better I don't really like the way 1/2 spacing looks unstacked
00:09:054 (1) - shouldn't the hitsounds here be the same as 00:04:690 (1) - ? They are the same in music
00:11:236 (4) - I'm trying to ignore the fact this isn't a NC since you had an 8 beat combo before this, but it just felt like a totally new melody would start here and a new combo would fit it I don't really want to break my pattern though ;w;
00:22:031 (1) - show more of this slider? Nah i think this looks fine
SPOILER
00:36:796 (4,5) - feels better spaced okay i changed this one
01:31:401 (1,2) - ^ I wouldn't like the way this would look spaced
01:44:290 (5) - use a circle here instead of a slider, create a gap at 01:44:525 which would emphasize the beat at 01:44:290 more and also give more rest for players for this quite long pattern, in this Normal. Ehh, I'm not too sure about this one. I feel like this is a nice way to conclude the kiai
01:48:040 (2,3) - space them out, the stacking just somehow takes away the greater emphasis of 01:48:274 (3) where the vocals comes into it's final phrase, which would show out more if 01:48:274 (3) was isolated away from others and not stacked

Just felt kinda cramped in some parts with multiple stacks within 1 pattern

Thanks for the mod

Knotts' Normal

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356,278,16082,6,0,B|337:276|337:276|310:276|289:254|289:254|302:281|302:320|294:350|294:350|336:332,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,138,18282,6,0,P|347:83|320:34,1,100,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,48,18985,1,8,0:3:0:0:
240,78,19219,2,0,L|132:73,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,56,19922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,56,20156,2,0,P|104:116|83:163,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,172,20859,2,0,P|44:209|53:234,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,256,21328,2,0,L|146:244,2,50,4|2|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,300,22031,6,0,L|171:296,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,311,22734,2,0,P|221:265|199:206,1,100,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,186,23437,2,0,P|163:155|170:128,2,50,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,205,24375,1,2,0:0:0:0:
265,205,24609,2,0,L|380:196,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
414,203,25312,2,0,P|421:179|421:154,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,113,25781,6,0,P|392:85|405:55,2,50,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,126,26484,2,0,L|226:117,1,100,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,149,27187,2,0,P|163:150|136:136,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,169,27656,2,0,P|96:222|110:275,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,301,28359,2,0,P|171:302|209:290,1,50,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:3:0:0:
226,265,28828,2,0,L|278:274,1,50,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,273,29296,1,2,0:3:0:0:
325,273,29531,6,0,P|311:307|311:341,2,50,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,237,30234,2,0,P|361:210|350:173,2,50,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,265,30937,2,0,P|429:261|463:242,2,50,2|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,335,31874,6,0,L|214:329,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,269,32812,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,269,33046,2,0,P|131:300|128:333,2,50,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,243,33749,2,0,L|180:122,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,100,34452,6,0,P|148:77|146:48,2,50,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,79,35390,2,0,P|247:106|242:147,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,44,36327,2,0,P|355:81|345:114,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,137,36796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,176,37030,2,0,L|465:164,2,100,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,188,38436,2,0,P|262:230|272:258,2,50,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,103,39374,6,0,P|153:91|91:117,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,181,40311,2,0,L|54:243,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,268,40780,2,0,L|73:336,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,210,41717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,210,41952,6,0,P|157:172|139:148,2,50,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,278,42889,2,0,P|260:246|266:216,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,325,43826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,325,44061,2,0,L|49:312,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,353,45233,2,0,P|234:345|256:334,1,50
288,255,45936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,255,46170,6,0,P|331:263|353:274,1,50,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,330,46873,2,0,P|446:328|472:312,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,278,47342,2,0,L|477:166,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,139,48045,1,2,0:0:0:0:
446,139,48279,2,0,P|411:140|378:126,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,63,48982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,126,49451,2,0,L|262:185,2,50,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,87,50154,6,0,B|153:63|111:104|111:104|137:52,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,28,51326,2,0,L|0:90,2,50,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,32,52029,2,0,L|84:147,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,178,52732,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,178,52966,2,0,P|148:155|202:169,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,198,53669,6,0,L|222:270,1,50,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,248,54372,2,0,L|317:176,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,165,54841,2,0,P|405:174|448:151,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,105,55544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
471,105,55779,2,0,L|480:211,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,254,56482,2,0,P|456:279|421:288,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,282,56950,6,0,P|378:311|381:340,2,50,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,182,57888,2,0,P|386:141|375:115,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,245,58825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,245,59060,2,0,P|306:321|324:350,2,100,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,230,60231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
397,209,60466,2,0,P|396:133|378:104,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,56,61403,6,0,B|265:30|226:39|226:39|196:74|141:62,2,150,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,102,63044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,102,63278,2,0,L|434:88,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,63,63981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
461,63,64215,2,0,P|452:107|473:162,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,255,65153,6,0,B|441:270|397:226|397:226|414:259|411:287,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,235,66325,2,0,P|318:196|334:173,1,50,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,149,66793,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,149,67028,2,0,L|235:146,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,163,67731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,163,67965,2,0,L|216:234,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,239,68434,2,0,L|242:299,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,331,68903,6,0,L|335:321,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,324,69606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,324,69840,2,0,P|388:337|431:345,2,50,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,274,70543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,274,70777,2,0,L|376:155,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,123,71715,2,0,L|280:237,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,274,72652,6,0,L|186:163,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,131,73355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,131,73590,2,0,P|220:108|235:56,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,41,74293,5,4,0:0:0:0:
368,21,74761,1,6,0:0:0:0:
456,68,75230,1,6,0:0:0:0:
232,180,76402,6,0,P|301:155|339:169,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,197,77105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,197,77339,2,0,L|348:259,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,278,77808,2,0,L|397:330,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,250,78511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
430,250,78746,2,0,P|446:192|428:143,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,77,79683,6,0,B|331:66|331:66|311:83|275:81,1,100,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,58,80386,2,0,P|202:58|181:63,2,50,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,81,81089,2,0,L|268:194,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,230,81792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,230,82027,2,0,P|297:233|321:224,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,221,82495,2,0,P|414:220|463:252,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,317,83433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,366,83901,6,0,B|239:363|239:363|186:335,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,245,84839,2,0,B|234:227|234:227|295:224,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,240,85542,2,0,P|363:203|345:136,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,123,86245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,123,86479,2,0,L|242:126,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,81,87182,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,153,87651,6,0,L|114:267,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,80,89057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,134,89526,2,0,P|300:138|340:119,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,85,90463,2,0,P|207:72|171:79,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,133,91401,5,4,0:0:0:0:
254,133,91635,2,0,L|236:188,1,50,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,211,92104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,211,92338,2,0,L|301:321,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,330,93041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,308,93276,2,0,P|428:303|450:312,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,334,93744,2,0,L|474:218,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,153,94682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
482,79,95150,5,2,0:0:0:0:
482,79,95385,2,0,P|486:55|478:25,2,50,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,102,96088,2,0,L|334:96,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,108,96791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,108,97025,2,0,P|292:147|304:169,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,196,97494,2,0,P|321:228|306:251,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,116,98431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,36,98900,6,0,P|267:31|217:65,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,95,99603,2,0,B|229:143|229:143|222:200,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,220,100306,2,0,L|199:274,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,314,100775,2,0,P|260:295|320:316,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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422,248,102650,6,0,L|423:131,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,99,103353,2,0,P|369:97|341:82,1,50,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,56,103822,1,8,0:3:0:0:
272,51,104056,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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313,97,106400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,185,108040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,219,108274,2,0,L|120:337,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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185,129,110149,5,2,0:0:0:0:

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-11-24T04:30:31+00:00

[ Rizen ] wrote:
Timing: I got an offset of 18264 instead of 18312 for the 128BPM Timing point. Double check timing?

guineaQ wrote:
Recheck timing

HelloSCV wrote:
about the timing, current timing set seems really inapproriate (you may already know this), so i recommend moving last timing line by -25 ~ - 27, it quite fits nicely with the song imo

Kibbleru wrote:
00:18:312 - offset sounds VERY VERY late.

Pho wrote:
You should definitely have a recheck on your offsets again, the last one is pretty much off. Offset 18286 should be right, but have someone recheck.

wcx19911123 wrote:
I feel that the timing is a bit off somewhere(like 01:14:327 - ). you'd better to find some timing pro to check it

Zero__wind wrote:
why is the timing so bad x.x

CloudSplash16 wrote:
The map lags behind the song as we get later in the song, indicating that bpm is higher than you think. In this case, the BPM is not exactly 128. It's closer to 128.01.. yeah

[]
seriously

mp3 you should be using

uninherited timing points you should be using

2972,545.454545454546,4,2,1,70,1,0
13881,645.161290322581,4,2,1,70,1,0
15171,674.157303370787,4,2,1,70,1,8
15845,705.882352941176,4,2,1,70,1,8
16550,561.797752808989,4,2,1,70,1,0
18516,468.75,4,2,1,70,1,8
18750,468.75,4,2,1,70,1,0

@gaia: have fun resnapping
@kinshara: map the first downbeat ffs
@modders: pleeeeeease

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-24T04:57:37+00:00

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yaaaay thanks:D

pishifat wrote:
@kinshara: map the first downbeat ffs

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-11-24T12:41:41+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

how about adding AudioLeadin 1000~1500?

[Hard]

00:04:881 (4,1) - DS 1.7x is better
00:25:312 (3) - curve it in order to make symmetrically to 00:25:781 (4) -
00:53:437 (3,4) - i prefer to avoid jump
01:26:250 (1) - rotate clockwise more
SPOILER
01:32:812 (3,4) - make symmetrically
01:44:062 (3,4) - I prefer to blanket it correctly

[Melting]

00:08:972 (5) - upward slider is better to make symmetrically to 00:08:426 (4) -
00:38:906 (4) - curve leftward
00:42:656 (4) - why not curve like 00:43:593 (3) - and 00:44:531 (6) - ?
01:08:906 (4) - make symmetrically to 01:08:437 (3) -
01:36:562 (3,4) - make symmetrically
01:40:078 (3,4) - ^

[Kinshara's Easy]

00:14:203 (1,1) - I suggest to exchange to 1/1 slider. hard to find rhythm for beginner, imo

[Knotts' Normal]

I feel too close spacing. I suggest to change to 1.2x
00:03:517 (2,3) - u~m, avoid stack. a little confusing
00:48:515 (4,5) - ^
01:32:578 (3,4) - ^
00:33:281 (2,3) - follow vocal like this
01:06:796 (2,3) - a little confusing. how about this?

[Kibbleru's Insane]

01:08:203 (2,3,4) - i prefer this for following vocal

good winter song <3
support ~☆
~Good Luck~

Fuseka

155 posts

Joined November 2011

Fuseka 2014-11-24T14:27:43+00:00

Can't you map the full ver?
The song and maps are awesome =D

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-24T17:50:29+00:00

Fuseka wrote:
Can't you map the full ver?
The song and maps are awesome =D

Yeah Gaia, you suck

syuru

134 posts

Joined May 2012

syuru 2014-11-24T18:03:05+00:00

♛ hello, from mod queue! this song is so pretty
so many mods already, i don't know if i can find anything (　ﾟдﾟ)
[General]

imo the hitsounds up until 00:18:750 are too loud, i think the volume should be toned down to ~55-60% instead. it's not as noticeable at first but in the harder difficulties i definitely felt like they were a bit too much, also after 00:18:750 the volume is still 70% for a while despite the first part being significantly quieter

[Kinshara's Easy]

uncheck widescreen support
01:15:234 (4) - the head and tail are both strong beats, maybe it would be better to have circles instead of a slider?
01:28:125 (1) - this slider feels a bit off, the tto part of the kitto in the music is a tiny bit before the red tick but after the blue tick, so i'm not sure how to resolve this ;_; the only way i can show it is by using 1/8 snap and it really seems to start around the yellow tick, like

[Knott's Normal]

there's two notifications in AIMod but i don't really think they are issues
01:05:625 (1,2) - this part might be difficult for players to figure out

[Hard]

01:09:375 (1,2) - were you intending to blanket? if so, this could be improved as the slider is too curved
00:41:250 (1,2,3,4) - i think 4 should be stacked under 2

[Kibbleru's Insane]

uncheck widescreen support
er, why are there two kiai times when all other difficulties only have 1?
00:26:484 (2) - i think this is 1 tiny grid space off from being centered evenly between 1 and 3
01:15:703 (3) - move to ~264, 184

[Melting]

01:01:875 (1) - why not make this a 1/1 slider like you did at 01:05:625 (1) and 01:09:375 (1)?
01:07:031 (4) - bring down a bit, make symmetrical to 01:06:562 (3) and ctrl g would make this flow better imo

good luck, have a star ☆

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-25T00:34:36+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
how about adding AudioLeadin 1000~1500? oops uhh i just need 500 i think
[Hard]
00:04:881 (4,1) - DS 1.7x is better agree
00:25:312 (3) - curve it in order to make symmetrically to 00:25:781 (4) - nah
00:53:437 (3,4) - i prefer to avoid jump fine i think
01:26:250 (1) - rotate clockwise more sure
SPOILER
01:32:812 (3,4) - make symmetrically nah
01:44:062 (3,4) - I prefer to blanket it correctly fixed
[Melting]
00:08:972 (5) - upward slider is better to make symmetrically to 00:08:426 (4) - on purpose :<
00:38:906 (4) - curve leftward ^
00:42:656 (4) - why not curve like 00:43:593 (3) - and 00:44:531 (6) - ? it goes straight -> slight curve -> really curved owo
01:08:906 (4) - make symmetrically to 01:08:437 (3) -
01:36:562 (3,4) - make symmetrically
01:40:078 (3,4) - ^ sorrrrry all these i didn't take because I'm not a big fan of perfect symmetry ): but it's just preference so yeah i blame me ><
good winter song <3
support ~☆
~Good Luck~

Thanks for modding and star! C:

ankou wrote:
♛ hello, from mod queue! this song is so pretty
so many mods already, i don't know if i can find anything (　ﾟдﾟ)
[General]
imo the hitsounds up until 00:18:750 are too loud, i think the volume should be toned down to ~55-60% instead. it's not as noticeable at first but in the harder difficulties i definitely felt like they were a bit too much, also after 00:18:750 the volume is still 70% for a while despite the first part being significantly quieter yeah you're right, fixed
[Hard]
01:09:375 (1,2) - were you intending to blanket? if so, this could be improved as the slider is too curved no didnt intend on blanketing but fixed something else too lol
00:41:250 (1,2,3,4) - i think 4 should be stacked under 2 ya
[Melting]
01:01:875 (1) - why not make this a 1/1 slider like you did at 01:05:625 (1) and 01:09:375 (1)? it would kill my pattern but well it works both ways really lol
01:07:031 (4) - bring down a bit, make symmetrical to 01:06:562 (3) and ctrl g would make this flow better imo ehh its fine to me
good luck, have a star ☆

Also disabled widescreen in Kinsharabae/Kibb's diffs!

Thanks for the mod and star!

Knotts wrote:
Fuseka wrote:
Can't you map the full ver?
The song and maps are awesome =D
Yeah Gaia, you suck

no u

uhh i didnt have the mp3 to the full ver when i first started then i found it literally yesterday and i feel like poop ):
its ok tho Kinsharabae will map a full set with the full version C: C: C:

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-25T02:29:51+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[Knotts' Normal]
I feel too close spacing. I suggest to change to 1.2x It should be okay
00:03:517 (2,3) - u~m, avoid stack. a little confusing Looks simple enough to me
00:48:515 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:32:578 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:33:281 (2,3) - follow vocal like this
01:06:796 (2,3) - a little confusing. how about this? i don't think this one is worth changing

No changes from ankou's mod
Thanks for modding

Knotts' Normal

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Snow in Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 75468
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Koi Yuki
TitleUnicode:恋い雪
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:Gaia
Version:Knotts' Normal
Source:
Tags:Knotts Kibbleru Kinshara Snow in Love short ver. サイレント サイレン
BeatmapID:538302
BeatmapSetID:231476

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-11-25T03:48:06+00:00

ankou wrote:
[Kinshara's Easy]
uncheck widescreen support fixed~
01:15:234 (4) - the head and tail are both strong beats, maybe it would be better to have circles instead of a slider? done~
01:28:125 (1) - this slider feels a bit off, the tto part of the kitto in the music is a tiny bit before the red tick but after the blue tick, so i'm not sure how to resolve this ;_; the only way i can show it is by using 1/8 snap and it really seems to start around the yellow tick, like although what you say makes perfect sense, making such a change would be too complicated for an easy diff.
good luck, have a star ☆

@Random Effect, fixed everything!

Thank you both! :3

@pishifat, no

code

osu file format v13

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Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:恋い雪
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:Gaia
Version:Kinshara's Easy
Source:
Tags:Knotts Kibbleru Kinshara Snow in Love short ver. サイレント サイレン
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Xgor

Elite Mapper

2,534 posts

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2014-11-25T10:17:41+00:00

This gonna be quick.

[Images]
A lot of the images has unnecessary transparency. Please crop them

Otherwise I can't say much. I don't know Japanese so it's hard to judge if everything is placed on the right time but it seems like it, Would be nice if you checked it with somebody that knew to be 100% sure.

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-11-25T10:40:20+00:00

from my topic

Melting

01:04:218 this?
http://gyazo.com/a5d3c591c99d70dc5e0acc7c2c3b49e8

01:19:687(4,5,6) i like ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/deda6fd674ec39933f1378e409b4bc6b

01:23:906(4) 01:23:437(3) Ctrl G H J

01:28:828(3,4) forrow plz

01:32:109
http://gyazo.com/2913888d22656484e4b931460884018f

01:38:906 Proposal
http://gyazo.com/1d310606fb3565df639d3caf14977553

Kibbleru's Insane

00:36:093 00:35:156(4)　Ctrl D

Hard

00:13:881 forrow
http://gyazo.com/b812bdcbac513bfa561a71adf58de605

01:33:281 01:32:812(3) Ctrl D J

Knotts' Normal

00:24:843 NC?

01:05:625(1,2) forrow

01:28:724 X172 Y81 01:27:656(6) this

01:44:765 NC?

Kinshara's Easy

Fine

-------------------------------------

good song!!

nice CS , I like it XD

i hope ranked

Star presents!!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-11-25T14:04:12+00:00

if u let me make hard then the y of yuki will also be bold
lol

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-25T16:32:33+00:00

Yuki! ♥
(omg genius idea)

Meanwhile my G is like, wtf am i doing here lol ;A;

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-11-25T18:40:15+00:00

Call me when this is a month old, this song is about godlike. <3

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-11-25T20:00:06+00:00

Damn Gaia, so many BATs on this thread...

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-25T21:37:40+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
Knotts' Normal

00:24:843 NC? Not worth breaking my pattern here

01:05:625(1,2) forrow ?

01:28:724 X172 Y81 01:27:656(6) this

01:44:765 NC? Same as the other NC suggestion

Thanks for the mod

Knotts' Normal

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TitleUnicode:恋い雪
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:Gaia
Version:Knotts' Normal
Source:
Tags:Knotts Kibbleru Kinshara Snow in Love short ver. サイレント サイレン
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Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-26T02:05:18+00:00

Xgor wrote:
This gonna be quick.

[Images]
A lot of the images has unnecessary transparency. Please crop them oo yup fixed

Otherwise I can't say much. I don't know Japanese so it's hard to judge if everything is placed on the right time but it seems like it, Would be nice if you checked it with somebody that knew to be 100% sure.

thanks for checking :3 Idk if i should give kds tho o-o tell me if i should !!

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
from my topic

Melting

01:04:218 this? okie
http://gyazo.com/a5d3c591c99d70dc5e0acc7c2c3b49e8

01:19:687(4,5,6) i like ↓↓↓ sorry i dont s:
http://gyazo.com/deda6fd674ec39933f1378e409b4bc6b

01:23:906(4) - 01:23:437(3) Ctrl G H J wait isnt that the same thing then lol owo?

01:28:828(3,4) forrow plz i dont really understand lol orz

01:32:109 - its ok
http://gyazo.com/2913888d22656484e4b931460884018f

01:38:906 Proposal i like mine more
http://gyazo.com/1d310606fb3565df639d3caf14977553

Hard

00:13:881 forrow okey
http://gyazo.com/b812bdcbac513bfa561a71adf58de605

01:33:281 01:32:812(3) Ctrl D J its fine

-------------------------------------

good song!!

nice CS , I like it XD :3

i hope ranked

Star presents!!

thanks for mod and star!

@Konei yaaaay thanks >w< I'll bug u when the time comes then~
(wow i got my 2 bats pretty dam fast this time lol)

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-11-26T05:06:02+00:00

too many mods to reply ;A; pm me if you want feed back.

but i fixed most major suggestions. kept most optional ones

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LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2014-11-26T06:35:01+00:00

Christmas queue mod owo

Amazing song

Melting

I love this song Silent siren forever!!! Nice map I loved it it was fun it fit the song very well but there are a few weird parts in the map that could use some polishing so lets start

:!: This is just my suggestions so you don't have to change anything if you don't want to

00:02:972 (1) - Why don't you add a soft whistle to the first part of this slider so it corresponds with the Piano sound plus you made a whistle right here 00:09:517 (1) and here 00:11:699 (1) so you should probably add a soft whistle here to keep consistency
00:06:244 (4) - I suggest to add a soft whistle at the end same reason as above owo
00:10:608 (4) - This overlap isn't very pretty to be honest. I would really suggest move that slider in a different position so that it doesn't overlap over lapping slider bodys usually doesn't look to good >.<
00:10:608 (4) - why not just make of these sliders straight so that you have a cool triangle shaped pattern like this owo
00:23:671 (4,6) - This overlap looks a bit a odd I suggest that you move 4 and 6 a bit so that they don't overlap. this pattern also can be a bit misleading since when you hit 4 it has a hit impact and this hit impact widens when it is hit so thus it widens over 6 and makes 6 less noticeable I suggest moving them so that you can also clear any readability issues owo maybe try doing this it looks better and easy to read :>
00:48:281 (4) - at the end of this slider you will notice there is a quieter soft clap so I suggest you add a inherited point here 00:48:515 with around 40% volume and add a soft clap I think it really adds more emphasis to the stanzas right after it owo just make sure to make the volume after them back to normal
here is a bit of the pattern
- 00:50:390 (5)
- 00:52:265
- 00:54:140
- 00:56:015 (4)
Etc.. just follow that pattern
00:52:500 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern could use some work it doesn't really look so well how about you make it into a proper star pattern. Star patterns are pretty looking and they flow very nicely try something like this
01:00:937 (5) - remove the curve off this slider and make it go straight like the other 2 sliders after this one it looks more consistent and neater that way
01:18:281 (4) - Why don't you place this above 3 like this. it looks less random this way since it goes in a straight pattern aligning the 3 4 and 5 like a straight line owo
01:36:562 (3) - I think making 3 the same as 4 looks better since it has neat organized symmetry to it like this
01:40:546 (4) - Why don't you make this the same as 3 it looks neater and less random owo
01:44:296 (4) - I suggest to stack this with 2 so that it looks better and it is less confusing to look at

That's all for this diff :> Nice diff followed with a amazing song

Kibbleru's Insane

Nice diff Kibbleru I like it owo not that many things I noticed :>

:!: This is just my suggestions so you don't have to change anything if you don't want to

00:02:972 (1) - Why don't you add a soft whistle to the first part of this slider so it corresponds with the Piano sound plus you made a whistle right here 00:09:517 (1) and here 00:11:699 (1) so you should probably add a soft whistle here to keep consistency
00:06:244 (4) - I suggest to add a soft whistle at the end same reason as above owo
00:18:516 (1) - I think adding a soft whistle to the head of the slider will emphasize the guitar very well it really makes the guitar and the note more like there lol
00:23:671 (3,4) - Why don't you switch these 2 notes by pressing crtl+g so that the 4 will jump bigger into the triplet this makes the upcoming finish hit sound seem more emphasized
00:27:421 (5) - this seems odd being next the other slider and not looking the same since by the way you placed the slider (kinda symmetrical placing) it looks like it was supposed to be I think making it the same would look neater and more organized owo
00:41:250 (1) - Why don't you stack this with 00:40:546 (2) I think it looks prettier and neater the overlap looked a bit and seems confusing this should be less confusing owo
00:48:281 (4) - at the end of this slider you will notice there is a quieter soft clap so I suggest you add a inherited point here 00:48:515 with around 40% volume and add a soft clap I think it really adds more emphasis to the stanzas right after it owo just make sure to make the volume after them back to normal
here is a bit of the pattern
- 00:50:390 (5)
- 00:52:265
- 00:54:140
- 00:56:015 (4)
Etc.. just follow that pattern
01:12:187 (3,4) - This looks kinda weird since 3's overlap with 1 is kinda noticeable so I suggest to crtl+g 3 and 4 then crtl+g only 3 again to make it look like this. plus I think the pattern looks and plays nice aswell. if you change be sure to fix the hitsounds on 3 and 4
01:14:765 (1,2,3) - why don't you add Nc's on 2 and 3 like Gaia did in Melting(I know since they for under jumps but I think it fits).I think that emphasizes the 3 guitars pretty well and it also keeps consistency with Melting
01:27:421 (5) - I suggest to stack this with 01:26:484 (2) so it looks less cluttered and more organized owo
01:31:875 (1) - I really suggest you use a straight slider here cause of the flow you made with the stream it was straight it curving the slider kinda ruins that flow you built plus it will look better since it wont look random
01:38:437 (5) - I think stacking 5 onto 01:37:734 (2) having 2 in the middle 5 slider path is odd looking and confusing so putting 5 onto 2 looks a bit neater
01:44:531 (3,1) - the overlap isn't very pretty it looks random why don't you try stacking 3 at the end of 1 and see how that is >.<

That's all owo nice diff good job

Hard

00:16:550 (1) - how about putting this near the slider's tail since between the 2 notes there is not music. so to emphasis that properly doing a antijump is the right way to go :3 like this
00:18:516 (1) - I think adding a soft whistle to the head of the slider will emphasize the guitar very well it really makes the guitar and the note more like there lol
00:29:765 (4,1) - Why don't you lower the ds on these 2 notes to 1.80 since it a bit more reasonable for a hard diff :3
00:30:703 (1) - How about you just make this slider straight instead of it being curved so that it will flow into both of the notes :>
00:48:281 (4) - at the end of this slider you will notice there is a quieter soft clap so I suggest you add a inherited point here 00:48:515 with around 40% volume and add a soft clap I think it really adds more emphasis to the stanzas right after it owo just make sure to make the volume after them back to normal
here is a bit of the pattern
- 00:50:390 (5)
- 00:52:265
- 00:54:140
- 00:56:015 (4)
Etc.. just follow that pattern
00:58:125 (1) - you really should lower the ds on this note I think that is a bit too large for hard players that is more an insane ds :<
00:59:062 (3) - Lower the ds on this note please Same reason as above
01:17:812 (3) - I think this would be a good jump since of the emotion expressed in her voice it much stronger and a jump would emphasize that pretty well owo
01:18:281 (4,1) - if you did the previous suggestion then I suggest you lower this note a bit since that large of a jump seems a bit unneeded here im not saying remove the jump just lower it a bit enough that you can emphasize the bit of emotion in her voice . right here there was some emotion in her voice but not as much as 01:17:812 (3). this is what I did as you can see I made it into a 1.5 jump which I think is enough to emphasize the voice properly owo
01:37:500 (1) - how about you lower this jump a bit im think about to 1.6 so that hard players wont have too much of a trouble
01:39:375 (1) - Lower this ds a bit I think about to 1.6 is good there really isn't too much emotion into the voice so it seems a bit exaggerated
01:43:125 (1) - A jump would have fitted this note amazingly since you put a finish hit sound there the jump would have really emphasized this perfectly
01:45:703 (3) - maybe lower this just a bit there really isn't too much to indicate such a jump in a hard diff. Plus this is jump is too large for hard players :<
01:46:875 (1) - This actually works fine you can put big jumps in hard but they have to be justified and have a proper thing that they emphasize for you shouldn't put them too randomly >.<

Hard diff is nice you just need to work on some of the difficult jumps :>

Last edited by LexiaLovesU 2014-11-27T00:38:06+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-26T06:51:44+00:00

LexiaLovesU wrote:
Christmas queue mod owo

Amazing song

Melting

I love this song Silent siren forever!!! Nice map I loved it it was fun it fit the song very well but there are a few weird parts in the map that could use some polishing so lets start I love them too!! >w<

:!: This is just my suggestions so you don't have to change anything if you don't want to

00:02:972 (1) - Why don't you add a soft whistle to the first part of this slider so it corresponds with the Piano sound plus you made a whistle right here 00:09:517 (1) and here 00:11:699 (1) so you should probably add a soft whistle here to keep consistency
00:06:244 (4) - I suggest to add a soft whistle at the end same reason as above owo ahhhh idunno how to explain but the default soft:hitnormal feels so much more right than the whistle here ><
00:10:608 (4) - This overlap isn't very pretty to be honest. I would really suggest move that slider in a different position so that it doesn't overlap over lapping slider bodys usually doesn't look to good >.< Yeahhhhh i know but i stilll dunno how to change this without killing my spacing and flow ;w;
00:10:608 (4) - why not just make of these sliders straight so that you have a cool triangle shaped pattern like this owo less angled but not perfectly straight :3
00:23:671 (4,6) - This overlap looks a bit a odd I suggest that you move 4 and 6 a bit so that they don't overlap. this pattern also can be a bit misleading since when you hit 4 it has a hit impact and this hit impact widens when it is hit so thus it widens over 6 and makes 6 less noticeable I suggest moving them so that you can also clear any readability issues owo maybe try doing this it looks better and easy to read :> I like the overlap tho >< i moved it down slightly
00:48:281 (4) - at the end of this slider you will notice there is a quieter soft clap so I suggest you add a inherited point here 00:48:515 with around 40% volume and add a soft clap I think it really adds more emphasis to the stanzas right after it owo just make sure to make the volume after them back to normal
here is a bit of the pattern
- 00:50:390 (5)
- 00:52:265
- 00:54:140
- 00:56:015 (4)
Etc.. just follow that pattern errr yeah i just totally forgot to hitsound those lol :s Fixed by adding a whistle tho!
00:52:500 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern could use some work it doesn't really look so well how about you make it into a proper star pattern. Star patterns are pretty looking and they flow very nicely try something like this i dont like perfect shapes but since so many people have pointed this out i guess i'll be fixing this slightly haha
01:00:937 (5) - remove the curve off this slider and make it go straight like the other 2 sliders after this one it looks more consistent and neater that way slight change
01:18:281 (4) - Why don't you place this above 3 like this. it looks less random this way since it goes in a straight pattern aligning the 3 4 and 5 like a straight line owo cool
01:36:562 (3) - I think making 3 the same as 4 looks better since it has neat organized symmetry to it like this ehhh i like it this way with more variation :s
01:40:546 (4) - Why don't you make this the same as 3 it looks neater and less random owo i guess i'll make 3 have less curve so its clearly differentiated from 4 owo?
01:44:296 (4) - I suggest to stack this with 2 so that it looks better and it is less confusing to look at ehh this is barely noticeable ingame so it's fine imo

That's all for this diff :> Nice diff followed with a amazing song

clover's day skin <3
:3
Thanks so much for modding! C:

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2014-11-26T15:59:31+00:00

Hello, from my queue!
[General]

Can I know why u call the diff is Melting ?
Add to tags: cut version. Also, if you knew what album this song comes from. Should add to tag, too!
How about creating the introduction lines of GDers' name for each diffs? Example like: Difficult by ---. That would be nice.

[Melting]

HP+7? Since this diff is the most difficult in this map. HP+7 doesn't have anyproblems
00:02:699 (5,1) - Swap whistle-hitsound, i think it should be at (1) better instead of (1). Also, the piano at (5) is louder
00:02:972 (1) - Ctrl+J this slider? Looks more sensible with 00:03:790 (3) -
00:04:062 (4) - Look it is semi-straight. Using the straight slider is better and more logical with 00:04:608 (5) -
00:08:153 (3) - 272/344 for better flow
00:12:244 (2) - The placement isn't good. It is stacked with 00:10:608 (4) - . The 00:10:062 (3) - is stacked with 00:10:608 (4) - . So this slider shouldn't. It is really medley. How about moving to 164/240?
00:16:550 (1) - The timing always changes. Overlap like this will make player think it is the same rhythm. Anti-overlap was necessary
00:18:516 (1,2) - Add whistle-sound due to the sound of guitar in song
00:20:390 (6) - Add drum-clap-addition. I can hear sound
00:21:328 (2) - How about moving to 80/140. In order to balance the distance
00:22:500 (1) - Missing the whistle at the tail, right?
00:24:140 (6) - I feel the jump flow isn't fine. Try to move to 180/164 to overlap with the head of 00:22:500 (1) - . Look more logical and not to bad stack way.
00:24:375 (1,2) - The tail of (2) is quite near with (1) maybe. I sugguest moving to 232/320, it is more balance. Altho the distance is farer but hope it's fine because that's Insane diff :3
00:20:507 (7) - Add hitsound like 00:28:007 (6) - ?
00:29:765 (5) - Why do you anti-jump this? This circle is for a strong rhythm. Next rhythm is piano. They are so different. Move it to other placement. example like: 180/148
00:30:000 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - The pattern is really nice, nothing to say but i think 00:30:000 (1,2,3) - are really too near, just 0.8x. This is Insane diff, and a distance is sensible for 1/4 rhythm instead of 1/2. I also tried to play, i think you can move more far, just abit, no need much. Try into 1x or 1.2x would be nice
00:38:203 (2) - move to 216/320. It will be straight with 00:37:031 (6) - . Have nicer pattern.
00:40:312 (3) - The head is quite near with the head of 00:39:843 (2) - . I think you should move down abit, example like: 124/260
00:35:156 (4,3,6) - Yeah, the pattern is used straight slider. 00:42:656 (4,3,6) - these are used for curved slider. So, i think using curved slider for 00:42:656 (4) - is more logical ^^. Also, I feel 00:44:531 (6) - is cuvred quite much, not as 00:43:593 (3) -
00:47:343 (2) - How about Ctrl+H slider, and arounds 00:46:406 (5) -? Try to see below example That looks nicer.
Example
00:53:906 (6) - Ctrl+J slider? It is better flow for both it and previous slider
01:05:625 (1) - Move to 218/300, so the tail will be overlaped with 01:04:218 (2) - . Looks cleanly!
01:13:125 (1) - Change the placement of tail to 236/328. It is more balance.
01:33:515 (5) - Move to 184/248 is better balance with 01:32:812 (3) -
01:40:546 (4) - Move to 448/240 to ^
01:44:765 (1) - Rotate this for -4* looks fitter
01:45:703 (3) - Move to 171/169 if you fixed above

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:08:153 (4) - I feel this is quite near 00:07:608 (2) - . Move abit down?
00:18:516 (1) - Add whistle at head, like guitar sound. It is easier for player to catch rhythm
00:38:437 (4) - Ctrl+H this slider is better flow. Put 00:37:968 (2) - at the center of 00:38:437 (4) -
Example
01:07:031 (4) - Change the placement of tail to 236/260. It is more balance with 01:07:500 (1) -
01:14:062 (3) - How about moving to 76/60?
01:26:484 (2) - Stack here isn't really good. Overlap with 01:24:375 (1) - is nicer flow
01:31:875 (1) - In this case, I think using straight slider is more sensible pattern with previous streams instead of curved slider
LIke 01:07:031 (4,1) - , why don't you make 01:33:750 (1) - into curved slider to be logical with 01:33:750 (1) - ? That would be better
01:44:531 (3) - Just my opinion but i don't think this stack work well. You should anti-stack in mean time.
01:50:156 (1) - 2 circle work better instead of 1 slider.
01:50:156 (1) - Add whistle-hitsound for them anyways if you fixed above or not.

[Hard]

00:16:550 (1) - Same issue as Melting diff
00:18:516 (1) - Add whistle dueto guitar sound
00:28:007 - There is instrument here. Why do u ignore it? I think you should put a circle here to creat trigle circles. Like you did with 00:20:390 (6,7,1) - . THey are the same rhythm
00:29:765 (4) - As I said in Melting diff, i sugguest moving to 168/48. It is arounded by 00:30:703 (1) - and more balance for distance. THat would be nice
00:54:140 (4) - This jump is really quite far with current distance set for Hard diff. You should move nearer.
00:28:125 (1) - The tail should be at 44/144. It is more balance with 00:29:062 (3) -
01:18:281 (4) - I feel this is semi-near with 01:17:812 (3) - . Also I don't see why 01:18:750 (1) - needs to be jumped. I sugguest moving 01:18:281 (4) - to 256/72. It is more balance distance btw previous & after notes
01:20:859 (2) - I think Ctrl_J this slider is more sensible at 01:21:562 (3) -
01:31:875 (1) - I sugguest move this circle be straight with the tail of 01:31:406 (6) -
01:28:828 (2) - Idon't really think that this slider works well. Both following the voice and instrument, i feel it's quite weird :3. How about chaging into 1/1 slider?

[Knotts' Normal]

00:03:244 - There is piano-sound here, and yeah you map it but 00:05:972 - 00:10:335 - don't. You should consider to make more logical. Delete previous or add note for after rhythm.
00:09:517 (1) - Almost slider is stacked under 00:08:972 (5) - . It isn't good flow and difficult to noobplayer can relize it. I sugguest moving to 324/328 to improve the placement. If you fixed, don't forget to fix the distance afterward
00:12:790 (5,6,1) - The placement of them are too high. Also, the flow is really bad. I sugguest moving them to 128/180. Then, move 00:13:608 (6) - to 152/44, and 00:13:881 (1) - 196/44. If you fixed, let you fix both the notes after them
Example
The BPM is just 128 BPM. So for Normal, 1/2 rhythm should be used "not stacked" (example like 1.8x distance). It isn't too difficult. With current set, everything is so untidy. Stack quite many altho you used many 1/2 rhythm. I hope you can take experience for next time.
01:31:875 (1,2) - Repeating this rhythm fits better to follow the voice and instrument
01:48:515 (2) - This overlapped with 01:48:750 (3) - is more sensible pattern.

[Kinshara's Easy]

00:14:203 (1) - Add whistle at head. The piano is quite loud and strong
00:24:375 (2) - How about this? The pattern is nicer and won't ignore the bank-sound of instrument.
Example
00:31:875 (1,2) - Repeating this rhythm fits better. Try it, you will have feeling like me
01:44:062 (2,3) - I feel the rhythm ignored something.If I was you, I will try my below rhythm.
Example
00:15:171 - This rhythm is really necessary due to it is quite important, loud. 1 newbie can't realize the rhythm of next note to click. Try to start a slider here to 00:16:550 - Creat a nice slider appearance for catching the piano at 00:15:845 - . It isn't too hard, believe me See my pic. for exploring better, just example, you can creat other slider appearance:
Example

---------------------------------
Good luck!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-11-26T20:50:50+00:00

fix lots

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Silent Siren - Koi Yuki

Tsukuyomi wrote:

Tsukuyomi wrote:

Knott's Normal

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Kibbleru's Insane

Melting

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Kibbleru's Insane

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Knott's Normal

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