Learning25 wrote:

[Insane]

1. ASDLKFJALKSD THIS MAP IS SO MUCH FUN!!!!! It's going to be hard to find bad things
2. 00:42:878 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Right now the steam looks like this nah!~
3. 01:14:218 (2) - should move up ~12 grids (y=80) so that it flows with the curve better.
4. 01:27:878 (1,2,3,4) - Here I think you should keep the same jump pattern you were using in the last two gonna keep~
5. I think that's it, really nice difficulty, really fun to play.

[Hard]

1. Great map as well.
2. HP feels a lot nicer at 5.5 a lot of NC, maybe change if more complains
3. I think this 00:11:985 (6) should be moved closer to 00:12:164 (1) , and have the 6 start the combo, because the vocal line is leading into that slider.
4. Really like the end slider at 01:28:950 (2). ds is fine, plus i'm following backbeat
5. Hitsounds sound great. Really nice use of the claps.
6. Your jumps are really fun to play, and easy to follow, great job!

[Normal]

1. 00:01:807 (2) - I'd put this away from the slider, like what you have at 00:04:664 (2,3).
2. 01:11:807 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:43:057 - I think 50% is too loud for the claps :S constant in diffs

[Easy]

1. 01:15:200 (1) - This spinner ends too quick for an easy map. it is fine

I feel like I hardly helped at all, but this is a really good mapset. You're a great mapper, hope to see it ranked~ thank you! thanks for the compliemtns

Inyuschan wrote:

Hi, from my queue o3o

General:

1. Disable Widescreen Support in Easy, you don't have SB.

Easy:

1. 00:52:164 (1) - Add finish o3o
2. 00:53:593 (1) - Remove NC.
3. 00:55:021 (2) - Then add NC~

Normal:

1. 00:23:593 (1) - Fix this: http://puu.sh/aW191/220110fb76.jpg Is touching scorebar ;_; so sad, i already change before. some people scorebar too big
2. 00:37:878 (1) - Better something like this? http://puu.sh/aW1dh/4e53552b35.jpg i like it str8
3. 01:19:664 (1, 2) - Add NC in (2) instead of (1).

Hard:

1. 00:17:164 (1) - Remove NC. i was afraid the spacing would be a problem, idk changing for now
2. 01:20:735 (7, 1) - Add NC in (7) instead of (1).

Insane:

1. 00:01:985 (7, 1) - NC in (7).
2. 00:42:164 (3) - NC. drain is not that bad

That's all, good luck.

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. It's only ideas!

Insane: 2.0 SV? Exra: 1.80 SV? Okay...

[Insane]

00:10:378 (5) - Delete slider, and add circle here: 00:10:378 - . Move 00:10:735 (1) - slider here: 00:10:557 - , and change slider end here: 00:10:914 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3nj/f2809319b6.jpg Sounds better. interesting idea, however percussion at 00:10:557 - is ignored, which i don't want.
00:11:807 (4,5) - CTRL + G not feeling it
00:12:164 (1) - CTRL + G nah~ prefer current pattern
----------
00:16:628 (1) - Remove circle.
00:16:271 (6) - Add once repeat.
00:16:807 (7) - Add NC
Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3sy/78f14b5b23.jpg sorry but the beat at 00:16:628 (1) is really important.
-----------
00:31:093 (2) - Two circle is better! vocals
00:38:235 (2,3) - Move here: 00:38:414 - and put circle here: 00:38:235 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3zP/8fc0b9a32b.jpg sliderend on 00:38:593 - which is bad, powerful drum
01:01:628 (4) - Move circle here: x: 392 y: 296 keeping pattern
01:10:378 (5) - Remove slider, put circle here: 01:10:378 -,and move 01:10:735 (1) - slider here: 01:10:557 - . Put circle here: 01:11:271 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3Hs/164a1dc343.jpg Sounds better! (Vocal) really good, thanks!
01:15:200 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! keeping unless its a really big issue

[Hard]
AR: 7!

00:08:236 (2) - Two circle is better! nope
00:13:057 (2) - Remove slider, and put circle here: 00:13:235 - not fitting
00:17:521 (3) - Two circle is better! why though
01:15:021 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! same as insane
-------
01:18:057 (2) - Remove circle, and move 01:17:700 (1) - slider here: 01:17:878 - Sounds better! vocals on blue tick, no change
01:18:235 (2,3) - Replace them.Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW417/17a1f42e2e.jpg nah
----
01:25:378 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! nothing to map to

[Normal]

00:22:164 (3) - add clap the slider end.
00:24:664 (2) - ^
01:13:235 (5) - Add clap, the slider head.
01:13:771 (6) - Add clap. SLider end.
01:24:307 (5) - ^
01:25:378 (7,1) - Hmm? 1.45 Distance? Unranked! Please, use 1.0x distance!

[Easy]

Good.


Good Luck. (And sorry, my english is horrible)

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello, from my queue, no kd please.

Here is a screenshot of my score, first play.

SPOILER

• 
  
  This looks fine for ranking anyway.
  I don't especially find it interesting, they are things which could be improved. i'll just leave few suggestions here.

1. 00:10:735 (1,2) - They are not the same slider, it could be better if you use the same slider for this kind of pattern, where the "rotate by"' tool is used. don't know how i skipped this..
2. 00:13:414 (7,1) - it could be better if you unstack these objects, for different reasons. a stack here looks out of place since you didnt stack here for patterns earlier and later. And Unstacking here will allow you to emphasize this strong note here 00:13:593 (1) -
3. 00:52:164 (1,2) - starting a kiai part with two 1/2 reversed slider is weird, because they are easy to handle and, they are not really difficult. You should try something else, which has more density and more suitable like circles instead as you did for you patterns before.
4. 01:12:343 - this tick is really audible, and when playing, i feel this is empty here, this tick should be played or followed.
   
   
   Rhythm could be improved in the calm part
5. For example, this tick 00:39:485 - which could be played because you hear a strong note.
   You could make an interresting rhythm here, and 1/2 sounds like spam.

I hope it was helpful. thanks!

rui wrote:

M4M

[Normal]

1. 01:09:307 (2) - add clap end of slider

[Hard]

1. 00:04:664 (4,5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/b00Jc.jpg nah, i want keep calm
2. 00:45:380 (3) - Unsnapped circle
3. 00:07:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel miscellaneous. It is a proposal of placement no thanks
   

   156,264,7164,2,0,P|168:304|220:340,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   316,240,7521,2,0,P|284:244|248:256,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   348,160,7878,2,0,P|380:156|416:144,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   272,140,8235,2,0,P|253:113|224:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   292,216,8593,2,0,P|278:245|270:282,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:13:057 (2) - (nazi) use 00:13:414 (3)'s AR as shown http://puu.sh/b01TJ.jpg keep straight
5. 00:13:950 (1,2,3,4) - I feel miscellaneous too. How about this? http://puu.sh/b01ZU.jpg don't like neat!
6. 01:21:271 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:20:735 (1,1) - 01:20:735 (1) move (316,284) 01:21:450 (2) - move (248,68) nah!
8. 01:24:307 (3) - end of the slider is next white line keep~

[Insane]

1. 00:01:450 (4) - (nazi) move (152,220) following 00:01:807 (6,1) -
2. 00:11:807 (4,5) - 00:11:807 (4) move (248,348) 00:11:985 (5) move (168,236) http://puu.sh/aZX9v.jpg actually i changed the whole thing, i don't like line pattern~
3. 00:26:450 (1,2,3) - keep distance is better imo. so move (380,68). How about this ? http://puu.sh/aZXxw.jpg
4. 00:34:307 (4) - remove NC ?
5. 00:34:664 (5) - (nazi) bending slider is better remapped
6. 00:43:503 (10) - keep distance 0.7
7. 00:50:735 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:50:914 (2) - add NC

Good luck

TT Mouse wrote:

Hi ！
from paper modding team

[nomarl＆easy]

good diff tyty


[hard]

00:56:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard for this diff reduce the ds please no thanks, even hard must have a 'hard part'


[Insane]

00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - ↓ good for flow good flow but i don't think it fit vocal well~
00:06:628 (2,4) - ctrl+g is better , sorry, same as ^

00:13:057 (1) - NC ? no need, drain is also ok

00:15:378 (2,3) - ctrl+g ^ hmm, current one better.

00:26:271 (8) - 208 314 better ds

00:32:878 (1,2) - ctrl+g ^ applied this, change a little

00:57:343 (3,4) - ↓ good for flow
00:58:772 (3,4) - ^

\ rank please / ty!!

Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my Queue
Remember, all of these are just suggestions. You do not have to change them

[General]

1. Overall very nice mapset, I only have a few things to add.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:593 (3) - could make into more interesting shape kinky slider ftw
2. 01:07:878 (2,3,4) - I would make these 2 1/1 sliders loudest beat ever on 01:08:235 - on a sliderend? nty
3. 01:28:950 (3) - dunno if I would change this to a circle or not, but it sounds fine as a slider keeping constant with other difficulties

[Normal]

1. I would change SV to either 1.1 or 1.0, 1.2 feels a little fast for a normal for me. keeping~
2. would also change AR to 4 too cluttered
3. 00:31:450 (5) - I would make the curve of the slider go the other way, feels better flow-wise for a normal not my style!
4. 00:33:593 (3,4,5) - would change to this rhythm good use of first repeat, however second slider is too close to (5) and i wanna emphasize all the drum beats.
5. 00:47:878 (4,5) - did you mean to not blanket these? nazi but fixed, probably
6. 01:23:593 (4) - NC? following NC pattern. it might last a little song, but drain-wise it's also not that bad.

[Hard]

1. 00:21:985 (4,5,6) - I would move these to around here ds constraints, so no thanks
2. 00:45:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - dunno if this pattern is too hard for a hard but I like it

[Insane]

1. 00:37:165 (3,4,5) - I would make this a jump combo, the strong bass made me think there should be one here ah true, but its a buildup to another slow part, and i'd think a jump would ruin the flow a little.
2. 00:42:878 (4) - would make into two circles, but eh it's good either way. Also would make NC so do i, the music dictates otherwise :p following NC pattern~
3. 01:03:146 - should be circle here reason? i see no reason to, honestly.

I can't mod extra's sorry ;; But very good mapset, good luck with ranking!

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

1. Your preview time is unsnapped, snap it to 00:51:450. sure
2. Please add a silent sliderslide, coz it's quite noisy currently. And I have also found a clap for you, let's see if it fits! http://puu.sh/b2Q0E/ead95be3a6.rar

i'm also bad at hitsounds so thank you haha

Insane

1. It's quite odd to see setting of Insane the same as that of Extra. So to differentiate them, decrease OD by 1. 7.5!!
2. 00:03:593 (1) - Finish.
3. 00:15:021 (1) - Finish on head.
4. 00:25:914 (6,7,8) - Drum finish on (6) and drum claps on (7,8).
5. 00:26:807 (2,3) - Place the clap on (3) instead of slider head of (2). Same for 00:28:235 (5) . In fact, starting from 00:30:378 (3) till 00:36:450, the drum pattern in the music has changed, personally, claps should be placed on the third white tick instead of second and fourth.
6. 00:37:165 (3,4) - Drum finish on (3) and drum clap on (4).
7. 00:43:057 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Curvature here is unnatural provided that the slider at the back is a semi-circle. Try this: changed slider instead
8. 01:15:200 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:16:807 to fit the drum and as it's an Insane, we don't need any gap between the spinner and post-spinner slider.
9. 01:28:593 (5) - Remove this clap as there's only vocal on this timepoint, like you won't place a clap on head of 01:28:950 (6).

Hard

1. 00:14:664 (4) - Alter the angle and place it like this to improve the flow:
2. 00:20:735 (1,3) - Stack them perfectly by the built-in function of editor.
3. 00:22:075 (5) - Delete this as it's overmapped.
4. 00:22:164 (6) - Make it a 1/2 slider to match the drum at 00:22:343?
5. 00:56:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These jumps are harsh in Hard, reduce the DS please. .

Normal

1. 00:37:878 (1,3,4) - Why are these 1/3? Keep track on the drum please. green line sv problem, fixed in easy also
2. 01:00:021 (1,2) - Swap NCs. Same for 01:08:593 (1,2) and 01:11:450 (1,3) and 01:19:664 (6,1).

Easy

1. OD and HP are a bit too high, compared to other diffs, consider reducing each of them by 1 so that the four dimensions complement more balance with those of other diffs.
2. 00:55:021 (1) - Distance snap.

I hope some of these help and good luck! thanks!!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:19:307 (3,4,1) - flow suggetion~
2. 01:03:235 (4) - move downward a little for good flow
3. 01:17:878 (1) - I recommend to move the slider's head near the center. a little hard for beginner

[Normal]

1. 00:10:735 (3,4,5,6) - not good flow, imo. how about diamond pattern? (and stack 00:11:093 (4) - on 00:13:235 (2) - ) nice!
2. 00:37:521 (4,2) - I recommend to avoid overlapping

[Hard]

1. 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - reduce hitsound's volume? fix in easy and normal too
2. 00:21:271 (2,4) - avoid overlapping
3. 01:16:985 (1) - u~m, move near the center?
4. 01:19:843 (2,3,4,5,6) - confusing, imo. I suggest not to stack 01:20:200 (4) - keep, not that hard i think
5. 01:24:307 (3,4,5,1) - rhythm suggetion this is very nice, thank you!
   [Insane]
   
   1. 01:12:610 (3) - I prefer to delete

nah, fit vocal i think. i don't wanna use blue tick sldier

very very nice song!!! I like this song and anime
~☆
~Good Luck~

buhei wrote:

from my queue

[Hard]
00:16:807 (2) - move to 384,316
00:17:164 (3,4) - move (3) to 184,256 together with (4)
00:19:307 (1) - a bit hard to read nah!
00:40:735 (1,2,3) - put them nearer nope
00:45:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - too hard for a hard diff nope
00:56:271 (4) - why not use the shape as 00:40:735 (1) - ? not used, but changed slider
00:56:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - put them a bit nearer its very close already
01:09:843 (1,3) - put them farther. they look uncomfortable:< remap
[Insane]
the kiai part is much harder than the part before:<
00:32:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a bit hard for this part hard but intended ^^
01:01:807 (5,1) - their tails nearly touch each other. put them a bit farthe
01:06:271 (7,1) - why stacked? put a note at 01:06:360 - ? pattern changed~
01:15:200 (1) - finish at 01:16:628 - for the suddenly appearing slider imo it is ok
01:22:343 (2,3) - why not use ctrl+c ctrl+v ctrl+g
01:28:235 (3) - 01:28:414 (4,5) - exchange positions intentional!
that's all

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

no kd

Insane

1. 00:08:593 (4) - ctrl+g? i think now flow better
2. 01:28:950 (6) - nc
3. same suggestion as what i mentioned in ex diff's mod to u will relook, thanks!

mod and map more, u can improve if u give a sight at what ranked maps' look like nowadays

good luck

ShiraKai wrote:

hi:3 from PM

[General]
Let's set the video to Clyine's Extra

[Easy]
good

[Normal]

1. 00:00:736 (1) - aligned clean the curve? copied but i see no diff orz
2. 00:16:271 (4) - a little curve?
3. 00:36:450 (3) - remove finish and add clap on slider end?
4. 00:56:807 (4) - this shape is ugly
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:04:664 (4) - why do you use same form as 00:03:593 (1,2,3)? vocal change, and emphasize the stop in instrument!
   2. 01:02:432 - add note? added note at another place and changed pattern!
   3. 01:17:700 (1) - this NC is not necessary imo fixed, i think?
   4. 01:28:414 (8,1) - swap NC?
   5. 01:20:557 (6) - stuck on 01:20:021 (3) ? flow will be better
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:33:414 (4,1) - ctrl + G ? flow better, but i wanna keep drum rhythm with the notes pattern
   2. 00:51:450 (3) - move to x:240, y:111? now is s little bad flow
   
   good luck

OniJAM wrote:

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

[ Insane]
Placement

1. 00:27:521 (4) - NC. and also maybe you can remove clap at the end?

random jumps are not always good ways to show the music and sometimes they are boring or confusing. but anyway this map is good enough for first one, hope you can do better in the future
that's all from me. good luck

Leorda wrote:

Hi there... sorry for delay

[Easy]
* AR +1? Your current AR seems bit slow its fine

00:13:593 (3) - Move 2nd slider anchor to 1 gird up for fix the better blanket combo? (nazi)
00:27:521 (2) - Why clap at 1st white tick? Shouldn't clap is at 3rd white tick for the current part? err 1-3-1-3 owo
00:36:807 (3) - Remove clap for better hitsounds sound

[Normal]
00:19:307 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?
00:24:843 (3) - This slider is not good for blanket because the slider border isn't fit to approach circle. So, make the slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1965675
00:56:807 (4) - Why not use curve slider instead linear? It makes good looking btw (wwww)

[Hard]
00:19:307 (1) - Reverse this slider for making a better flow? follow vocal, but i wanna follow guitar strum pattern
00:21:985 (4,5,6) - Why this spacing is increased? Any reason? spacing is 1.5, normal.
01:25:200 (1) - Spinner here would difficult to spin for players because it's hard to spin with short spinner. Consider to change it to new pattern or extend it if possible its actually fine

Good luck~

Yasora wrote:

waa

Easy

1. 00:19:307 (2,3,4) - the flow in here seems a bit weird.. cuz (3)'s curve is feel into wrong direction (how I explain this :v) well, try this maybe? -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983395 | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983387 good suggestion, but keeping pattern~
2. 00:45:021 (3) - seems the tail out of stage in here, I guess this is better -> http://puu.sh/be1pI/ba0202c245.jpg totally overlooked, ty~
3. 00:52:164 (1) - maybe try to move 2nd point 1 grid down? seems more clean if not touching (2)
4. 00:53:593 (3) - ^ but 1 grid up
5. 01:15:200 (1) - how about end this spinner at 01:16:807 - then add a note at 01:17:521 - ? the note after spinner seems too early appear
6. 01:18:950 (2) - clap seems fit in the end of this slider, not in the next note. also more be consistent

Normal

1. 00:00:736 (1) - curve in here look too up based on (3)'s curve. move 2nd point 256|128 ; 3rd 344|124 perhaps?
2. 00:01:807 (2) - I guess it's better to just stack this on (3)'s start. more comfortable on movement and clicking it :3 this is applied in similar pattern with this (ex: 00:04:664 (2) - 00:01:807 (2) - etc.) need to make the diff harder owo
3. 00:01:985 (3) - 2 grid up on slider's end if you care blanket thing lol
4. 00:16:271 (4) - add clap at start? drum sound can heard in there
5. 00:23:593 (1) - It's better if just blanket slider (3)? 1st point 248|60 ; 2nd point 132|20
6. 00:31:450 (5) - the flow more smooth if the curve go to down -> http://puu.sh/be2sb/d22a72af23.jpg mirror pattern with 00:32:878 (2) -
7. 00:36:450 (3) - add clap at start for consistency with previous sliders
8. 00:37:521 (4,1,2,3,4) - it seems these pattern was being forced placing lol here my suggestions: good suggestion, i use my own pattern however
9. 00:52:164 (1,2,3) - sliders reverse placement seems a bit meh, here my suggestion -> http://puu.sh/be3fW/7e0f4afa31.jpg i like current~
10. 00:55:021 (1,2,3) - same here. but since the it's different position from prev, here -> http://puu.sh/be3nm/5c7d225699.jpg ^
11. 01:10:378 (3) - this slider can be improved like this I guess -> http://puu.sh/be3v5/73395e8362.jpg
12. 01:17:164 (1) - similar thing as in easy (about spinner). since this is still normal diff, It's better if more easier.. so delete this note keeping~
13. 01:19:664 (1) - clap here and delete clap in next note (slider start)
14. 01:24:307 (4) - I guess this slider more nice to look if it have similar shape with 01:25:378 (6) - i dont like to spam curve slider!
15. 01:28:950 (5) - slider's tail look too close with start. maybe, just make it straight like in easy? or the curve can more soft fixed curve

Hard

1. 00:04:664 (4) - since 00:03:593 (1,2,3) - have curve shape, why this slider isn't? it more look nice if it a bit curved too emphasizing the end of instrument. hard to explain but i think it should be different!
2. 00:21:985 (4) - clap here for obviously drum sound
3. 00:24:843 (1) - finish at start
4. 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - these sliders speed seems not really noticeable at first.. reducing spacing seems more make comfortable when click. the current is too far and not different with normal (1.0x speed) spacing 8(
5. 00:46:271 (2) - pls this slider curve is too rage up xD calm it with move 2nd point to 384|252
6. 00:46:807 (1) - 00:47:521 (1) - 00:48:235 (1) - I don't see the reason why this is should be nc.. it still play well without those nc. also maybe add some space like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983644 | http://puu.sh/be4Tq/9b86e1a457.jpg | after that stack 00:48:950 (3) - under slider 00:47:700 (1) - need nc to heal after missing jumps owo, also fixed spacing, but no stack (3), using DS
7. 00:57:878 (1) - clap at end
8. 01:00:021 (3) - mm skipped a bit fast vocal in here sounds not good imo. shorter this at 01:00:200 - and add a note at 01:00:378 - will follow vocal more accurate~
9. 01:03:593 (1) - add finish at start
10. 01:05:378 (1) - clap at start
11. 01:10:378 (2) - clap
12. 01:11:093 (1) - clap at start
13. 01:13:950 (4) - stack this at (6) more better to view I guess
14. 01:19:664 (3) - clap
15. 01:19:664 (3,1,2,3,4) - this pattern can be improved imo. between (1,2,3) seems a bit messy lol here i like messy!
16. 01:25:200 (1) - shorter this at 01:26:093 - will follow drum sound and more easier imo. 1/2 after spinner is just.. a bit difficult
17. 01:27:878 (5) - nc should be in here, not in 01:28:414 (1) - imo hmm want to follow stop in instrument with NC, so yeah~
18. fun hard diff ty ^^

Insane

1. 00:04:843 (1) - how about make this slider different a bit? wave shape seems fit with speed change and vocal :3
2. 00:16:628 (1) - del this note and make 00:16:271 (6) - more longer until here? it's fit with vocal (and I just remembered someone told me it's better to not end slider at long white tick lol). but if you don't want change, at last try to move this into 244|44 no sound at white tick, so it is okay. moved note.
3. 00:17:878 (1) - no need to nc this..
4. 00:19:129 (3) - clap
5. 00:21:985 (7) - ^
6. 00:22:164 (1) - why it end at blue tick? if you hear it more carefully, no sound in blue tick. also clap should in (2)'s start..
7. 00:23:235 (4) - clap
8. 00:26:093 (7) - move this to 88|244 for triangle?
9. 00:29:307 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - um.. yeah how about make it triangle and square in here?
10. 00:30:735 (1) - seems clap should in slider end
11. 00:31:807 (4) - similar thing as I said in hard diff ( 00:04:664 (4) - ) but in here it's better to follow prev. slider's curve diff sound
12. 00:32:164 (1,3) - move (1) into 132|168 ; (3) to 136|56. having a balance with (2) and (4) uwu let it messy here!
13. 00:33:593 (1) - remove clap and add in next note (slider start)
14. 00:38:593 (3) - clap at start
15. 00:38:950 (1) - remove clap at end and add in next note
16. 00:42:878 (4) - nc here
17. 00:45:378 (3) - clap
18. 00:45:557 (4) - clap should in next note (slider start), not in here
19. 00:52:164 (1,3) - wait the curve omg 8( also I have a suggestion in here -> http://puu.sh/be7ev/b1a134ccdb.jpg | also move 00:53:057 (4) - to 84|88 need intense, but moved 4
20. 00:55:021 (1) - why suddenly the clap not consistent again orz add it at next note.. not really fit in red tick. better follow drum in white tick :''(
21. 00:55:914 (4) - ^
22. 01:00:735 (1) - ^
23. 01:03:235 (7) - I wonder why this is not stream o.o I can hear 1/4 drum sound here.. you can add if you want from here until 01:03:503 - hmm nah~
24. 01:13:593 (6,1) - swap nc
25. 01:17:878 (1) - finish at start
26. 01:19:128 (6,1) - swap nc after this should nc at 01:20:735 (7) -
27. not suggesting pattern anymore.. it seems will ruin your stuff if I do this more 8( the pattern in this diff can more be improved imo hmm okay! but i tk most are ok, i will relook~ok~

umm getting lazy to mod extra lol maybe I will mod it if my spirit come back hueheuhue sorry
nice song, good luck \:3/