PureCreamy wrote:

I hope everyone will take a look at this beautiful map!!! . I added it into my favourites!!! . Is it done??

ImportantNobody wrote:

If you do add another map, maybe an easy mode would be the best choice. For me it seems like the normal is on the upper level of normal difficulty so it would help balance things out.

ImportantNobody wrote:

If you do add another map, maybe an easy mode would be the best choice. For me it seems like the normal is on the upper level of normal difficulty so it would help balance things out.

PureCreamy wrote:

Add insane please

PureCreamy wrote:

Add insane please

PureCreamy wrote:

Easy
00:17:943 Add a note and whistle there Added
00:18:170 Add a note Added
00:18:398 Add a note and whistle there Added

Normal
Seems okay

Hard
Seems okay

Insane
00:56:638 Change the hit sound into the whistle Fixed
00:58:353 Change the hit sound into the whistle Fixed
02:17:853 Add a note

PureCreamy wrote:

Here's the mod for normal and hard
Normal :
03:20:638 add a whistle Added
03:22:353 add a whistle Added

Hard :
02:00:924 add a whistle Added
02:01:138 add a whistle Added
02:01:567 add a whistle Added
02:02:638 add a whistle Added
02:02:853 add a whistle Added
02:03:281 add a whistle

PureCreamy wrote:

Star ~ ♡♡♡

PureCreamy wrote:

I like this beatmaps ^^

Rush_FTK wrote:

In fact i don't to want mod this map since i don't like this sound. D:
The version i mod is the vision in 08/08/2014.I don't check what update.

Mod

[General]
Warning:
- Clear following AiMod.
http://puu.sh/aLjwC/8b7c90daac.jpg
If you don't know how to fix it,just reply,i will edit this post.
- Deleat useless Greenline.If your green line dosen't change anything,plz deleat it. Fixed

[Easy]
Suggestion:
- Check distance snap.
My Opinion:
- 00:07:716 (3) Filp horizontally.then move to privious position. more suit for flow. Fixed
- 00:09:534 (5) NC.let more easy to read map. Sorry, I think SC is more suit for the music
- 00:12:716 (1) remove. Fixed
- 00:45:898 ~ 00:48:496 add a spinner. Sorry, I add some breaks there since it's an easy difficulty
- 00:50:210 (2,3) Don't let the note cover the others,it's hard for read. Fixed
- 01:02:210 Add a note,or uncomfortable to play. Added
- 01:18:067 (3) Let it turn back at 01:18:496 and 01:18:924. Sorry, I think I will leave it just the way it is
- 01:19:781 (4) NC. Sorry, I prefer SC
- 01:50:638 (1) divided it. Fixed
- 02:14:638 (5) NC. Fixed
- 02:24:281 Add a note. Added
- 02:50:638 (5,6) First,NC in 5,then make this to 2 sliders. Sorry, I think SC is more suit for the music, and I will leave it just the way it is
- 03:16:353 (1,2) The heart looks perfect,good job . Thanks (> w <)
- 03:59:210 (5)/03:58:781 (4,5,6,8) NC. Sorry, I will use SC
- 04:21:924 ~ 04:23:210 add a spinner.kiai time end up at 04:23:210. Added
- 04:30:067 (5) NC. Sorry, I prefer SC

[Normal]
Suggestion:
- DR-1 OD-1 since it just a normal diff. Sorry, I will leave it just the way it is
- CZ=4 is more suit for this diff. Sorry, I will leave it just the way it is
My Opinion:
- 00:09:534 (5) NC. Sorry, I prefer SC
- 00:13:170 (9,1) NC former than latter. Sorry, I prefer SC
- 00:27:716 (2,3) Make you can pass it when mapping too far from each others. Fixed
- 00:38:625 (3) NC. Sorry, I prefer SC
- Add Spinner in the second break like normal. Sorry, I will leave it just the way it is
- 00:51:067 (4,5,6,7) Too close. Sorry, I think it's the right distance
- 01:11:210 (2,3,4,5,6,7) little hard. Sorry, I will leave it just the way it is
- 01:17:210 (6) NC. Sorry, I prefer SC
I'm sorry but i have no patience to mod this beatmaps anymore..I'm sorry for this again.

Anyway good luck to you.
By the way.I suggested you can cut down the part after to 01:36:496,to make a mini version.Thanks to the same rhythm and long length,It's easy to let people bored.. Sorry, I will keep this map as a long version
Make sure you have a good skilled to mapping,or have know what a Insane like before add up Insane diff.

1. mp3: audio bitrate must be 128~192bps. your mp3 is 320kbps (unranked!!!)
2. set preview point. I suggest 01:00:924 for preview point
3. source: I suggest to change to "マギ: The kingdom of magic"
4. you don't need to add the word written in title, artist, source for tags
5. immoderate difficulty seeting is not good. fo example, HPdrain:0 at easy, HPdrain:10 at insane. (check the settings of other ranked maps)

1. you should delete unnecessary file. for example, the files about fruit~, mania~ are unnecessary, imo
2. I recommend to conform color of hit300, hit300g, hit300k. and, choose the different color form hit100, hit50, miss. otherwise, very hard to play...

1. for easy, you should conform DS(Distance Spacing) constantly. o/w, too hard to find rhythm. I suggest to set DistanceSnap all of the time
2. for easy, you should not change SV(SliderVelocity). that's hard for beginner
3. 00:18:625 (14) - too large combo number. in this case, you should add NC appropriately
4. 00:40:443 (5,1) - blue line pattern is irregular, imo. I recommend to recheck timing point
5. 00:39:988 (4,5) - for easy, it is betetr to avoid stack pattern
6. 02:12:924 (3,5) - avoid overlapping like this. hard to see
7. 04:23:210- end kiai? (applied to other diffs)

1. for easy, you should conform DS as far as possible, too
2. increase SV more?

1. 00:20:670 (7,1) - you should use the stack pattern like this frequently. that's hard to see
2. 01:02:638 (2) - it is better to add NC at starting kiai-time
3. 01:16:996 (5,6,7,8) - you must not cover reversearrow. take care not to cover reversearrow when using stack, overlapping, customskin (unranked!!!)
4. 01:47:424 (1,2,3) - when using sequence circles, it is better to conform DS
5. 02:51:496 (5,6,7) - very hard triplet. I suggest to stack correctly or conform DS
6. 02:51:924 (8,9,10) - ^

1. I highly recommend to increase SV more than hard-diff
2. 01:09:496 (7,2) - circle(2) is almosed covered by slider. overlapping like this should be avoided
3. 01:22:781 (2,3) - stack correctly in this case
4. 03:41:638 (4) - NC?
5. 04:08:424 (1) - NC is necessary?

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thanks for M4M req <3

I say basic indications at this time
[General]

1. mp3: audio bitrate must be 128~192bps. your mp3 is 320kbps (unranked!!!) I think the same. I want to lower the settings but I don't know how to . Besides, I am afraid it will reset the data, so I leave it just the way it is. Because it doesn't get listed at the ranking criteria, so I thought it would be fine ( I truly hope so! )
2. set preview point. I suggest 01:00:924 for preview point Done! Thanks!!!
3. source: I suggest to change to "マギ: The kingdom of magic" Sure!
4. you don't need to add the word written in title, artist, source for tags I'll leave it just the way it is
5. immoderate difficulty seeting is not good. fo example, HPdrain:0 at easy, HPdrain:10 at insane. (check the settings of other ranked maps)

Fixed!
[skinning]

1. you should delete unnecessary file. for example, the files about fruit~, mania~ are unnecessary, imo Sorry, it's necessary
2. I recommend to conform color of hit300, hit300g, hit300k. and, choose the different color form hit100, hit50, miss. otherwise, very hard to play...

I'll leave it just the way it is
[Easy]

1. for easy, you should conform DS(Distance Spacing) constantly. o/w, too hard to find rhythm. I suggest to set DistanceSnap all of the time Sure!
2. for easy, you should not change SV(SliderVelocity). that's hard for beginner Okay!
3. 00:18:625 (14) - too large combo number. in this case, you should add NC appropriately Fixed!
4. 00:40:443 (5,1) - blue line pattern is irregular, imo. I recommend to recheck timing point
5. 00:39:988 (4,5) - for easy, it is betetr to avoid stack pattern Sure!
6. 02:12:924 (3,5) - avoid overlapping like this. hard to see Okay!
7. 04:23:210- end kiai? (applied to other diffs)

Done! Thanks!
[Normal]

1. for easy, you should conform DS as far as possible, too Fixed!
2. increase SV more?

Sorry, I think that's the right velocity
[Hard]

1. 00:20:670 (7,1) - you should use the stack pattern like this frequently. that's hard to see Sure!
2. 01:02:638 (2) - it is better to add NC at starting kiai-time Sorry, I prefer SC starting at kiai-time
3. 01:16:996 (5,6,7,8) - you must not cover reversearrow. take care not to cover reversearrow when using stack, overlapping, customskin (unranked!!!) Fixed!
4. 01:47:424 (1,2,3) - when using sequence circles, it is better to conform DS Sorry, I will leave it just the way it is
5. 02:51:496 (5,6,7) - very hard triplet. I suggest to stack correctly or conform DS Okay, I will make it easier to see
6. 02:51:924 (8,9,10) - ^

Okay, I will make it easier to see
[Insane]

1. I highly recommend to increase SV more than hard-diff Sorry, I think it's the right velocity. Because I've already make the flow so complicated
2. 01:09:496 (7,2) - circle(2) is almosed covered by slider. overlapping like this should be avoided Fixed!
3. 01:22:781 (2,3) - stack correctly in this case Sorry, I'll leave it just the way it is
4. 03:41:638 (4) - NC? Sorry, I prefer Drum!
5. 04:08:424 (1) - NC is necessary?

Sure!

Ranking Criteria is useful for mapping Okay!

~Good Luck~

Moo-Chan wrote:

Hayy :3 The M4M from my queue~
Mod of death inc

[Insane]

1. Your SV is really slow, maybe increase it a bit? No thanks, I think it's already fast enough
2. Your notes are all so close together. Spread them out and increase the distance snap Sure!
3. New combos are inconsistent. Try to NC every stanza Sure!
4. 00:09:307 (4,5) - Space these away from 00:08:852 (1,2,3) Okay
5. 00:10:671 (6,7,8) - Blanket these with 00:09:534 (5) Okay
6. 00:12:943 (3,4) - Blanket these better Okay!
7. 00:41:238 (4,5,6) - Space these out, could mistake as a triple Sure!
8. 01:12:710 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't do this. 01:13:567 (3,4) - ctrl - g these No thanks, I will keep it
9. 01:17:424 (2,3,4) - ^ 01:17:424 (2,3) - ctrl- g Okay!
10. 01:19:353 (3,5) - Blanket these Okay!
11. 01:20:853 (6,9) - ^ No thanks, I will keep it
12. 01:23:960 (2,3) - ctrl - g Okay!
13. 01:23:960 - The note that's here, stack it on top of 01:22:781 (2) Sure!
14. 01:27:388 (2,3) - ctrl - g Okay!
15. 01:31:138 (2,3,4,5) - This is really confusing. 01:31:138 (2,3,4) - Stack these and move 01:31:567 (5) - to x:308 y:96 Done!
16. 01:32:853 (1,2,3) - Stack these and move them to x:280 y:248 and move 01:33:281 (4) - to x:208 y:308 Done!
17. 01:32:853 (7) - Remove NC Okay!
18. 01:44:210 (3,5) - Blanket these Okay!
19. 01:53:638 (10) - NC No thanks, I prefer SC
20. 01:54:067 (1) - Remove NC Okay!
21. 01:55:031 (4,5) - ctrl - g Okay!
22. 01:55:353 (6) - NC No thanks, I prefer SC
23. 01:55:781 (1) - Remove NC Okay, but I'll keep the whistle
24. 02:00:710 (1) - ^ Okay!
25. 02:06:496 (8) - ^ Okay!
26. 02:07:781 (1,2,3) - Blanket these No thanks, I'll keep it
27. 02:09:281 (4,5,6) - ^ No thanks, I'll keep it
28. 02:10:567 (1) - Remove NC Sorry, I think it fit the music
29. 02:22:781 (13) - NC No thanks, I'll keep it
30. 02:39:710 (2,3,4) - This isn't neat at all. Try blanketing these, 02:39:710 (2,5) - and stacking these, 02:39:710 (2,3,4) Sure!
31. 02:41:639 (8,10) - Blanket these Okay!
32. 02:43:139 (1,4) - ^ No thanks, I'll keep it
33. 02:41:639 (8) - NC No thanks, I prefer SC
34. 02:43:139 (1) - Remove NC Okay!
35. 02:45:496 (4,1) - Blanket these Okay!
36. 02:46:139 (1) - Remove NC Okay!
37. 02:46:246 (2,3) - ctrl - g Okay!
38. 02:48:924 (6,1) - Blanket No thanks, I'll keep it
39. 02:49:567 (1) - Remove NC Okay!
40. 02:49:567 (1,2,3) - Stack these Okay!
41. 02:50:210 (5) - NC No thanks, I prefer SC
42. 02:52:996 (2,3,4) - Stack and move away from 02:52:353 (1) Sure!
43. 02:54:710 (1,3) - ctrl - g then ctrl - g 02:54:817 (2,3) - Okay!
44. 02:57:710 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't fit imo. You should remove this, 02:58:996 (5) - and add a single note here, 02:58:996 Sorry, I think it fit the music
45. 03:12:924 (1,3,5) - Blanket No thanks, I'll keep it
46. 03:15:924 (7,8,9,10) - Stack these or something because this is so confusing No thanks, I'll keep it
47. 03:19:353 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Okay!
48. 03:19:781 (5) - You can map this. Don't just make it a slow slider No thanks, I'll keep it
49. 03:21:496 (7) - ^ No thanks, I'll keep it
50. 03:22:781 (1,2,3,4) - Stack or make into a small little stream No thanks, I'll keep it
51. 03:38:638 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - This is not a pretty stream. Neaten it up Okay!
52. 03:39:924 (13) - NC Sure!
53. 03:41:317 (2,5) - ctrl - g, then even them out No thanks, I'll keep it
54. 03:49:782 (3) - Move to x:420 y:216 Okay!
55. 04:01:782 (1) - Remove NC Okay!
56. 04:02:210 (2) - NC Sorry, I prefer SC
57. 04:02:639 (4,1) - Blanket Okay!
58. 04:03:282 (1) - NC Sorry, I prefer SC
59. 04:06:710 (1,2,3) - Stack Sure!
60. 04:06:710 (1) - Remove NC Okay!
61. 04:07:353 (5) - NC Sorry, I prefer SC
62. 04:08:638 (1) - Remove NC Sorry, I'll keep it
63. 04:08:638 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Neaten this up a bit Sorry, I'll keep it
64. 04:10:139 (2,3) - ctrl - g Okay!
65. 04:11:960 (2,3) - ^ Okay!
66. 04:11:853 (1,2,3) - Move these away from 04:11:210 (8) Okay!
67. 04:16:353 (1) - Starting from here to 04:21:281 (4), idk why you're making the jumps grow bigger and bigger. You can also add sliders during this part. No thanks, I'll keep it. Because I think it fit with the music
68. 04:21:496 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - As much as this is cute and all, it's most likely un-rankable Why???? I think it is still rankable
69. 04:22:781 (13) - NC Sorry, I prefer SC
70. 04:28:138 (7,8,9) - Move these closer together Sure!
71. 04:29:852 (4,5,6) - ^ Sure!
72. 04:31:566 (4,5,6) - ^ Sure!

So, these are all suggestions. You're not obligated to make all the changes, but I do recommend changing most
I'm sorry for the huge mod ><
I hope I was of help ! And good luck with your map (:

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ From my Q~
Pake Bahasa Indonesia yaa ^^ Oke!!!

[General]

1. Check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) deh, audio bitrate ngga boleh lebih dari 192kbps. Di compress aja biar jadi antara 128-192kbps
2. Kayaknya second offsetnya harusnya 48,924 deh, biar kiainya dimulai di big white tick.

Audio bitratenya udah fix ^^

[Easy]

1. Check AiMod, terus centang "Check Distance Snap", ada beberapa masalah (objek terlalu jauh ato deket sama objek sebelumnya). Kalo di Easy, ngga boleh begitu, DSnya harus sama antara setiap note.
2. Kayaknya mendingan OD nya jangan 0 deh... Ganti aja ke 1, gak bakal mempengaruhi banyak kok ^^ Sudah!
3. 00:09:534 (5) - NC Tidak, aku pilih SC
4. 00:16:807 (1) - Hindari menggunakan double reverse slider di Easy, apalagi kalo slidernya pendek. Mendingan slidernya dipanjangin 1/4 tick (di blue tick) terus ilangin reverse yang ke 2. http://puu.sh/b06Nk/8f30b34172.jpg Jangan lupa note berikutnya di DS ^^ Ok!
5. 00:18:625 (5) - ^ Ok!
6. Mendingan breaknya mulai di sini deh 00:20:443 Tidak diubah
7. 00:44:534 (3) - Note ini off-beat. Vocalnya itu berakhir di 00:45:140 (1/6 beatsnap divisor) Pendekkin slidernya ke situ. http://puu.sh/b07bz/da8a2d2bc6.jpg Ok!
8. Kenapa tidak kasih spinner di 00:45:443 sampe 00:48:511 ? :3 Soalnya ini easy difficult, jadi aku mau add break di sana
9. 01:02:638 (2) - NC disini, remove NC disini 01:03:924 (1) - Maaf, aku mau pakai SC mulai dari kiai time
10. 00:52:353 (5) - Kayaknya mendingan NC disini daripada disini 00:54:067 (1) - Tidak diubah
11. 00:59:210 (5) - Delete ini, terus mulai spinnernya disini 00:58:995 Ok!
12. 01:24:496 (2) - Coba ctrl+g ini, kayaknya flownya bakalan lebih enak Ok!
13. 01:30:067 (4) - Buat ini jadi lurus aja? (Kayak S tapi lurus) buat menghindari overlap juga. NC disini juga ya http://puu.sh/b07O3/2c06cbc772.jpg Tidak diubah
14. 01:36:924 Mulai break disini aja Tidak diubah
15. 02:24:924 (2) - NC disini, remove NC disini 02:26:210 (1) - Maaf, aku mau pakai SC
16. 02:50:638 (5) - NC Maaf, aku mau pakai SC aja, soalnya aku add whistle di sana
17. 02:56:210 (1) - Remove NC Ok!
18. 02:59:638 Mulai break disini Tidak diubah
19. 03:26:638 ^ Tidak diubah
20. 03:47:638 (6) - NC disini, remove NC disini 03:49:781 (1) - Tidak diubah
21. 03:59:210 (5) - NC Aku pilih SC
22. 04:03:067 (8) - NC disini, remove NC disini 04:04:781 (1) - Oke, aku remove NC di 04:04:781 (1) Tapi aku tetap pakai SC di 04:03:067 (8)
23. 04:05:210 (2,3) - Blanket better Tidak diubah
24. 04:09:496 (6) - NC, remove NC 04:10:781 (1) - Tidak diubah
25. 04:30:067 (5) - NC Aku pilih SC
26. 04:29:638 (4,5) - Blanket http://puu.sh/b08ee/bdbfbeacb4.jpg Tidak diubah karena ini easy difficult
27. 04:31:353 (6,7) - ^

Tidak diubah karena ini easy difficult

[Normal]

1. Distance snap juga harus selalu nyala di Normal.
2. HP Drain ---> 3 Tidak diubah
3. Ar ---> 4 Tidak diubah
4. OD ---> 4 Tidak diubah
5. 00:05:898 (1,2) - Blanket Tidak diubah
6. 00:07:716 (3,4) - ^ jangan lupa 3 dibuat identical sama (1) Ok!
7. 00:09:534 (5) - NC Aku pilih SC
8. 00:27:261 (1) - Remove NC, NC disini aja 00:27:716 (2) - Ok! Aku remove NC di 00:27:261 (1) tapi aku tetap pakai SC di 00:27:716
9. 00:28:852 (3,5) - Kayaknya 2 notes ini ngga diperlukan deh Aku ikuti ritme vokalnya
10. 00:39:534 (5) - NC disini deh terus remove NC 00:40:784 (1) - Ok! Aku remove NC di 00:40:784 (1) Tapi aku tetap pakai SC di 00:39:534 (5)
11. 00:42:148 (5) - Kalau ngikutin mod diatas, NC disini Tidak diubah
12. 00:56:210 (1,3) - Buat ini identical, 00:57:067 (2,4) - ini juga buat identical, terus atur dikit biar kebentuk kayak kotak. http://puu.sh/b08BO/a3301f67ca.jpg http://puu.sh/b08Dj/8e14f526ec.jpg Maap, gambarnya harus setengah2 x-x Ok!
13. 01:05:210 (4) - Kayaknya ctrl+g bakal lebih bagus deh ^^ Ok! ^^
14. 01:08:210 (6) - NC terus remove NC disini 01:10:353 (1) - Ok! Aku remove NC di 01:10:353
15. 01:16:353 (5) - NC Maaf, aku pilih SC
16. 01:26:638 (8) - NC disini, bukan disini 01:27:924 (1) - Tidak diubah
17. 01:30:067 (6) - NC Aku pilih SC
18. 01:36:924 Mulai break disini Tidak diubah
19. 01:45:496 (3,4) - Blanket Tidak diubah
20. 01:47:210 (5) - NC Maaf, aku pilih SC
21. 01:54:067 (5) - ^ Maaf, aku pilih SC soalnya aku ikuti ritme pianonya di sana, bukan drumnya
22. 02:00:924 (5) - ^ Maaf, aku pilih SC soalnya aku ikuti ritme vokalnya di sana, bukan drumnya
23. 02:05:853 (6) - NC disini aja daripada disini 02:06:710 (1) - Tidak diubah
24. 02:24:924 (1,2) - Dibuat identikal aja nih berdua ^^ Ok!!! ^ w ^
25. 02:30:496 (6) - NC disini bukan disini 02:32:638 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
26. 02:35:210 (7) - NC disini bukan disini 02:36:281 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
27. 02:52:353 (8) - NC disini, bukan disini 02:54:710 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
28. 02:59:638 Mulai break disini Maaf, tidak diubah
29. 03:14:638 (5) - NC disini, bukan disini 03:15:281 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
30. 03:16:353 (4) - ^ bukan disini 03:16:996 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
31. 03:18:067 (4) - NC Maaf, tidak diubah
32. 03:28:353 (2) - ctrl+g Ok!!!
33. 03:30:067 (3) - NC Maaf, aku pilih SC
34. 03:47:638 (6) - NC disini bukan disini 03:49:781 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
35. 04:19:781 (5) - NC Maaf tidak diubah
36. 04:30:067 (5) - ^

Maaf, tdak diubah

[Hard]

1. Mendingan slider tick ratenya disamain deh sama Normal dan Easynya (1) Maaf, tidak diubah
2. HP ---> 5 Tidak diubah
3. OD ---> 6 Tidak diubah
4. 00:07:716 (5) - NC Maaf, aku pilih SC
5. 00:29:307 (5) - Pisahin deh dari tripletsnya biar ngga bingung Ok!
6. 00:29:534 (6) - NC disini, bukan disini 00:30:670 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
7. 00:55:781 (3) - NC Maaf, aku pilih SC
8. 00:57:496 (7) - ^ Maaf, aku pilih SC
9. 01:04:353 (8) - NC disini, bukan disini 01:04:996 (1) - Maaf, tidak diubah
10. 01:09:496 (6) - NC disini, bukan disini 01:10:138 (1) -

Maaf, tidak diubah

Sampe situ aja ya... maap, whole mapnya panjang banget @_@
Insanenya aku skip, hardnya juga baru setengah...
Diimprove lagi ya~! Blanket, stacking, symmetry, dll
Good luck kk~^^

-Nya- wrote:

Hey! M4M from my modding queue.
I can't mod the insane, but I did mod the rest.
Well, here's my mod.

General:
1) AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)~ The audio bitrate must be less than 192 kbps. Unfortunately, I don't have a clue how to fix that. I had the same problem, but I abandoned the map. Ask a very experienced mapper or modder how to fix this (BAT) It's fixed now ^ w ^

Easy:
1) Check AiMod~ You have ALOT of distance snap issues. Distance snap must always be activated in Easy and Normal.
2) 00:09:534 (5) - New combo Ok!
3) 00:13:170 (8) - New combo Ok!
4) 00:16:807 (1) - Remove new combo Ok!
5) 00:17:943 (2) - New combo Ok!
6) 01:02:638 (2) - New combo Ok!
7) 01:03:924 (1) - Remove new combo Ok!
8) 01:12:924 (3,4) - This overlapping is not recommended in Easy No change
9) 01:19:781 (4) - Blanket better with this slider: 01:18:067 (3) - No change
10) 01:21:067 (5) - Blanket this hitcircle also better with these two sliders: 01:19:781 (4,6) - Ok!
11) 01:28:353 (2) - Move this slider to this spot: X:180 Y:136. Looks neater No change
12) 01:43:781 (1,2) - After applying distance snap, rather do this?

Picture

Also change the slider's shape like in the picture above Okay! But I'll move it closer ^^
13) 01:46:353 (3,4) - Try not to overlap these two notes like that Fixed!
14) 02:24:924 (2) - new combo Fixed
15) 02:26:210 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
16) 02:35:210 (5) - Move it here: X:176 Y:216 No change
17) 02:35:210 (5,6) - Don't overlap like that. Hard for beginners to read Sorry, No change ^^
18) 02:52:353 (7) - New combo Ok!
19) 02:54:067 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed!
20) 04:12:924 (4,5) - Definitely distance snap this. Too close to each other. Same goes for the next notes that are also too close to each other. Okay!
21) 04:30:067 (5) - New combo Okay!
Important to apply distance snap.
Nice diff Thanks! (> w <)

Normal:
1) Distance snap must also be on throughout the entire song. No distance snap issues allowed.
2) 00:13:170 (9) - New combo Ok!
3) 00:13:625 (1) - remove new combo Ok!
4) 00:28:852 (3) - This hitcircle is not the same distance away from this slider: 00:27:716 (2) - like this hitcircle: 00:29:307 (5) - is away from this slider: 00:29:534 (6) - Fixed!
5) 00:49:781 (2,3) - Definitely apply distance snap Ok!
6) 01:16:353 (5) - New combo Okay!
7) 01:26:638 (8) - Ctrl+G Ok!
8) 03:30:067 (3) - Move it here: X:380 Y:100 Sorry, no change ^^
Also fix distance snap. I'm working on it ^^

Hard:
1) 00:09:534 (9) - New combo No change
2) 00:28:852 (2,3,4) - Stack these three hitcircles on this hitcircle: 00:27:261 (4) - Okay!
3) 00:30:670 (1) - Remove new combo? Sure!
4) 01:02:638 (2) - New combo Okay!!!
5) 02:24:924 (2) - Also new combo Okay!!!
6) 03:49:567 (7) - Blanket this hitcircle better with these two sliders: 03:48:924 (6,8) - No change
7) 04:08:638 (1,2,3) - Move these hitcircles further away from this slider: 04:07:781 (5) - It's too close Fixed!
Nice mapp

Thanks (> w <)

Compress your audio and apply distance snap everywhere in the Easy and Normal diffs.
If you do that, then this will be a great mapset.
Good Luck!

Thank you very much for the mods!!!

1. Add tasuku to tags as he's arranged this song.
2. Change source to マギ The kingdom of magic (The original title doesn't contain " around it. Also it doesn't contain : in Japanese.)
3. Disable letterbox during breaks. I don't see a reason why this map should have it. It simply just cuts the image, so their heads are hidden - Insensible.
4. Are you sure you want to have The kingdom of magic both in source and tags?
5. Add these to tags, they are the singers of 9nine: 佐武宇綺, 西脇彩華, 吉井香奈恵, 川島海荷, 村田寛奈 - someone might like the singers, but they might not know they are from 9nine, so they would not find this map.
6. Addition to previous issue, also add romanised names of these singers: Satake Uki, Nishiwaki Sayaka, Yoshii Kanae, Kawashima Umika, Murata Hirona
7. There some multiplied and unused files, you have to remove these, you have duplicated versions of them, which you are using, so these just increase map's filesize, you cannot have unused files in your map folder: 30 (3).png, 30.png, 20.png, 26.png, 27.png
8. fail-background.png is 1919x1073. This is not allowed resolution for skin elements. You should get much smaller picture, up to 1366x768 resolution.
9. Combo colors are not the same in each map. You should not use different combo colors within difficulties.
10. You have to include all: hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, if you skinned hitcircleoverlay.png. Also you need to put SliderBorder: 255,255,255 to every .osu file under [Colors] tab, according to ranking criteria - If someone uses his own skin, it might make ugly mashup, so everything what is skinned must have skin for its connected files.
11. Hitbursts (300/100/50/miss) have to be easily recognizable. Your 300 and 100 have the same color, so it is easy to confuse, WHILE 300g and 300k have different colors, what's totally insensible. Also the hitbursts are way too big - It's hard to see rest of map when one hitburst is multiply bigger than the hitcircles. You should change colors of 100 and make them a bit smaller, it is really confusing to play with this skin.
12. Add a stroke to all lyrics files. The lyrics are hard to read if they are placed over those green leaves. Blues is hard to read on dark green, so you should open all the .png files and add a simple stroke around it. If you don't know how, you might PM me on forums, I might make it for you, but consider it, no need to be lazy.
13. Put the 2nd red timing point on 00:48:924. The downbeat is on wrong place now!
14. 01:36:924 - Move the pause start here to emphasize the beat in a song. If you don't know how, just put the mouse to the line where "Break" sign starts and drag it to this place.
15. You should remove or remake spinner skin. It is not compatible with 16:9 resolutions.

1. 00:40:443 (5) - Considering the inconsistency in the song and to improve play-ability for newbies, this slider is supposed to be on 00:40:367 (it is 1/6 note), same as you did with 00:39:913 (4).
2. Force yourself to use constant distance snap in Easy and Normal difficulties. It is called easy so it is supposed to be easy, not changing the distances each few seconds!
3. 00:16:807 (3) - Jump on easy difficulty is highly non-appropriate. Use regular spacing.
4. 00:17:943 (1,2,3) - Reduce the snap, or simply don't use 1/4 notes in easy diff. It is too hard for newbies to click 4 notes in a row within 1 second. If you want to keep it, even if it is definitely not good for easy diff, use 1,0x snap (and try to use it everywhere, inconsistency is just making it hard for new players)
5. 00:43:170 (2) - Same issue as 00:16:807 (3)
6. 00:56:210 (2) - ^
7. 01:02:210 (1) - Remove this note since it is totally insensible. There is no that efficient sound in song so it would be worth emphasizing. Respectively - There is no sound, just a voice in progress. It's better for newbies to start on beat than on nothing.
8. 03:12:924 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:16:807 (3). This jump is even bigger than previous ones.
9. 03:16:353 (1) - ^
10. You should not use the green lines where are no objects. Remove all these points: 02:10:567, 02:10:781, 02:10:996, 03:33:496
11. Use Overall Difficulty 1, not 0. It's best if you have same HP and OD, your map almost doesn't require the accuracy to play. Using 0 is in my opinion low for this BPM, even if it's easy.

1. 00:14:988 (3) - As mentioned in previous diff, easy/normal diffs are not supposed to contain jump and these are just everywhere.
2. 00:16:352 (1) - ^
3. 00:24:988 (6,1,2) - This whole combo is somewhat bad. It starts like this: You made a slider before, but you put this whole combo on the start of the slider - What broke the flow and obviously confused a player as much as possible. Then you play this slider, which is not bad itself, then there is slider above it, BUT, you just see this slider disappear and you are like: "LOL There's another slider just under it, I didn't even notice it." The overlap is really newbie's nightmare and they cannot play this pattern. Consider something with regular snap and flow.
4. About the settings. You should decrease AR, HP and OD by 2. Difference of 4 just between easy difficulty when is normal is just huge gap!

1. 00:20:670 (7,1) - This kind of jump is really weird, it has no sense - doesn't fit the music, it is too random. Move the circle on slider's start, that'd be the easiest solution I think.
2. 00:22:034 (2,3) - Same issue as ^. It just goes against the flow and the music is not that lively so it would need jump just here.
3. 00:23:398 (4,5,6) - It's similar to ^. Avoid this kind of patterns. It is same like before, it is just going against the flow, there is no reason for that, you don't follow the song properly and you obviously added ugly overlap which totally ruins the design of a map.
4. 00:24:761 (7,1) - ^
5. 00:28:852 (2,3,4) - Argh, an overmap is here! Don't put the notes on places where they aren't! If you want to make hard maps, don't solve it by using your fantasy and imagine a note here, but solve it by mapping another song - How simple! Never map something what doesn't exist. Difficulty of your map always depends on the song, don't use your fantasy when putting notes. Just keep 00:29:079 (2) and it will be okay.
6. 00:42:716 (2,3,4) - ^, just keep 00:42:829 (3).
7. 00:50:424 (4,5,6) - ^
8. 00:53:853 (3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:03:281 (2,3,4,5) - Already mentioned this pattern on 00:23:398 (4,5,6)
10. 01:04:138 (6,7) - Same as 00:20:670 (7,1)
11. 01:07:996 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:23:398 (4,5,6)
12. 01:10:138 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:28:852 (2,3,4)
13. 01:13:567 (2,3,4) - ^
14. 01:14:853 (1,2,3) - ^
15. 01:14:853 (1,2,3,4) - Also same flow-breaking pattern I mentioned above.
16. 01:16:138 (3,4) - ^
17. 01:17:210 (6,7,8) - ^
18. 01:18:281 (1,2,3,4) - ^ and 01:18:281 (1,2,3) is overmapped again.
19. 01:19:353 (5,6,7) - 2 notes anti-jump, 3rd note jump? Firstly, anti-jumps are only appropriate if it is in gradient from fast to slow part, else just not. But having anti-jump ant then just a jump is just a suicide. It makes totally no sense, and the flow of this jump is insensible too.
20. 01:47:424 (1,2,3,4) - ^
21. 01:51:281 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - I can definitely say you are inspired by some 2007-2009 players, such confusing patterns were used only here. I don't see anything "pretty" about putting pattern under pattern just so it is harder or it confuses the player.
22. 02:16:567 (7,8,9) - ^

1. Uhm... HP 10, OD 10 on 140BPM? This should be definitely lower.
2. How can you use same slider velocity on 2 maps of different difficulty? Hard and Insane have same - No reason why the Insane should even exist.
3. 01:02:638 (1,2,3,4) - Gap between 1/4 notes should definitely not be same as gap between 1/2 slider..
4. 01:09:496 (7,1,2,3) - ^
5. 01:13:567 (3,4,5) - Forbidden. That's the right word for this pattern. Changing snap to 2,5 in stream/triplet is just a bad idea. You probably make the map too much for watching than playing. Patterns might LOOK good, but if they are unplayable, it's not that worth.
6. 01:17:424 (2,3,4) - Also I don't find any sensibility in using different distance snap for the same things, if you are mapping exactly the same stream or simply anything what is twice in song, it should have similar style, not totally different.

[Teichan] wrote:

Hello, from M4M, sorry for the delay.
As your wish, I will mod insane.
Nice skin!
[Insane]
Well, HP10 OD10? I fc to die when test playing.
00:19:988 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the rhythm is repeated, try to find more pattern of rhythm
01:13:567 (3,4,5) - ...change 3 and 4
01:27:281 (1,2,3) - ...no flow
And I want to say it again "the rhythm and place is repeated, try to find more pattern of rhythm", and your flow is bad.
....Well, I think wafu says clearly, please practise your mapping skill, here's your star, you may ask for another mod for me when you think your map is rankable.
Sorry.

Wafu wrote:

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. Add tasuku to tags as he's arranged this song. Okay!
2. Change source to マギ The kingdom of magic (The original title doesn't contain " around it. Also it doesn't contain : in Japanese.) Okay!
3. Disable letterbox during breaks. I don't see a reason why this map should have it. It simply just cuts the image, so their heads are hidden - Insensible. I want to, but I don't know how to
4. Are you sure you want to have The kingdom of magic both in source and tags? Yes, I am!
5. Add these to tags, they are the singers of 9nine: 佐武宇綺, 西脇彩華, 吉井香奈恵, 川島海荷, 村田寛奈 - someone might like the singers, but they might not know they are from 9nine, so they would not find this map. Okay!
6. Addition to previous issue, also add romanised names of these singers: Satake Uki, Nishiwaki Sayaka, Yoshii Kanae, Kawashima Umika, Murata Hirona Okay!
7. There some multiplied and unused files, you have to remove these, you have duplicated versions of them, which you are using, so these just increase map's filesize, you cannot have unused files in your map folder: 30 (3).png, 30.png, 20.png, 26.png, 27.png Okay, I'll remove some
8. fail-background.png is 1919x1073. This is not allowed resolution for skin elements. You should get much smaller picture, up to 1366x768 resolution. Um... I'll think about it
9. Combo colors are not the same in each map. You should not use different combo colors within difficulties. Fixed
10. You have to include all: hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, if you skinned hitcircleoverlay.png. Also you need to put SliderBorder: 255,255,255 to every .osu file under [Colors] tab, according to ranking criteria - If someone uses his own skin, it might make ugly mashup, so everything what is skinned must have skin for its connected files. Okay! But the SliderBorder will be : 119,187,255 . Thanks for telling me!
11. Hitbursts (300/100/50/miss) have to be easily recognizable. Your 300 and 100 have the same color, so it is easy to confuse, WHILE 300g and 300k have different colors, what's totally insensible. Also the hitbursts are way too big - It's hard to see rest of map when one hitburst is multiply bigger than the hitcircles. You should change colors of 100 and make them a bit smaller, it is really confusing to play with this skin. I think it's already small enough
12. Add a stroke to all lyrics files. The lyrics are hard to read if they are placed over those green leaves. Blues is hard to read on dark green, so you should open all the .png files and add a simple stroke around it. If you don't know how, you might PM me on forums, I might make it for you, but consider it, no need to be lazy. I want to, but I don't know how to
13. Put the 2nd red timing point on 00:48:924. The downbeat is on wrong place now! I think, the downbeat is already at the right place
14. 01:36:924 - Move the pause start here to emphasize the beat in a song. If you don't know how, just put the mouse to the line where "Break" sign starts and drag it to this place. Sorry, no change
15. You should remove or remake spinner skin. It is not compatible with 16:9 resolutions.

Sorry, no change


Easy

1. 00:40:443 (5) - Considering the inconsistency in the song and to improve play-ability for newbies, this slider is supposed to be on 00:40:367 (it is 1/6 note), same as you did with 00:39:913 (4). It's fixed! I add some timing points there, so I'll still use 1/4
2. Force yourself to use constant distance snap in Easy and Normal difficulties. It is called easy so it is supposed to be easy, not changing the distances each few seconds! Done!
3. 00:16:807 (3) - Jump on easy difficulty is highly non-appropriate. Use regular spacing. Done!
4. 00:17:943 (1,2,3) - Reduce the snap, or simply don't use 1/4 notes in easy diff. It is too hard for newbies to click 4 notes in a row within 1 second. If you want to keep it, even if it is definitely not good for easy diff, use 1,0x snap (and try to use it everywhere, inconsistency is just making it hard for new players) Okay!
5. 00:43:170 (2) - Same issue as 00:16:807 (3) Okay!
6. 00:56:210 (2) - ^ Sorry, I think it's easy enough
7. 01:02:210 (1) - Remove this note since it is totally insensible. There is no that efficient sound in song so it would be worth emphasizing. Respectively - There is no sound, just a voice in progress. It's better for newbies to start on beat than on nothing. Okay!
8. 03:12:924 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:16:807 (3). This jump is even bigger than previous ones. Okay! I'll move it closer
9. 03:16:353 (1) - ^ Don't worry, I've already use the Distance Snap there
10. You should not use the green lines where are no objects. Remove all these points: 02:10:567, 02:10:781, 02:10:996, 03:33:496 Well, actually, I need it
11. Use Overall Difficulty 1, not 0. It's best if you have same HP and OD, your map almost doesn't require the accuracy to play. Using 0 is in my opinion low for this BPM, even if it's easy.

Okay!
The map itself is not that bad, but you should use more consistent spacing if it is Easy/Normal and definitely NO JUMPS in these. Hard is first difficulty that is supposed to contain some jumps, not normal or easy. Random spacing makes just confusion, so you are not supposed to use it. Okay! Thanks!


Normal

1. 00:14:988 (3) - As mentioned in previous diff, easy/normal diffs are not supposed to contain jump and these are just everywhere. Okay!
2. 00:16:352 (1) - ^ Okay!
3. 00:24:988 (6,1,2) - This whole combo is somewhat bad. It starts like this: You made a slider before, but you put this whole combo on the start of the slider - What broke the flow and obviously confused a player as much as possible. Then you play this slider, which is not bad itself, then there is slider above it, BUT, you just see this slider disappear and you are like: "LOL There's another slider just under it, I didn't even notice it." The overlap is really newbie's nightmare and they cannot play this pattern. Consider something with regular snap and flow. Okay!
4. About the settings. You should decrease AR, HP and OD by 2. Difference of 4 just between easy difficulty when is normal is just huge gap!

Sorry, No change
I didn't want to list all issues - It's simply always the same. Just do what I suggested you to do in easy diff. Focus on flow, consistency and don't make random things. It's not important if that slider has "epic" shape, it's not the point of mapping easy/normal. The point of mapping it is to make it playable for newbies. So, no overlaps, no jumps, no spacing changes and your map would be cool. Okay, thank you Sorry for so many issues, actually, I'm a newbie mapper here


Hard

1. 00:20:670 (7,1) - This kind of jump is really weird, it has no sense - doesn't fit the music, it is too random. Move the circle on slider's start, that'd be the easiest solution I think. Okay, I'll change the flow
2. 00:22:034 (2,3) - Same issue as ^. It just goes against the flow and the music is not that lively so it would need jump just here. Okay, I'll change the flow
3. 00:23:398 (4,5,6) - It's similar to ^. Avoid this kind of patterns. It is same like before, it is just going against the flow, there is no reason for that, you don't follow the song properly and you obviously added ugly overlap which totally ruins the design of a map. Okay, I'll change the flow
4. 00:24:761 (7,1) - ^ Actually, that part follow the piano sound
5. 00:28:852 (2,3,4) - Argh, an overmap is here! Don't put the notes on places where they aren't! If you want to make hard maps, don't solve it by using your fantasy and imagine a note here, but solve it by mapping another song - How simple! Never map something what doesn't exist. Difficulty of your map always depends on the song, don't use your fantasy when putting notes. Just keep 00:29:079 (2) and it will be okay. Okay
6. 00:42:716 (2,3,4) - ^, just keep 00:42:829 (3). Okay
7. 00:50:424 (4,5,6) - ^ Sorry, no change for that
8. 00:53:853 (3,4,5) - ^ Sorry, no change
9. 01:03:281 (2,3,4,5) - Already mentioned this pattern on 00:23:398 (4,5,6) Sorry, no change
10. 01:04:138 (6,7) - Same as 00:20:670 (7,1) Sorry, no change
11. 01:07:996 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:23:398 (4,5,6) Sorry, no change
12. 01:10:138 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:28:852 (2,3,4) Sorry, no change
13. 01:13:567 (2,3,4) - ^ Sorry, no change
14. 01:14:853 (1,2,3) - ^ Sorry, no change
15. 01:14:853 (1,2,3,4) - Also same flow-breaking pattern I mentioned above. Sorry, no change
16. 01:16:138 (3,4) - ^ Sorry, no change
17. 01:17:210 (6,7,8) - ^ Sorry, no change
18. 01:18:281 (1,2,3,4) - ^ and 01:18:281 (1,2,3) is overmapped again. Sorry, no change
19. 01:19:353 (5,6,7) - 2 notes anti-jump, 3rd note jump? Firstly, anti-jumps are only appropriate if it is in gradient from fast to slow part, else just not. But having anti-jump ant then just a jump is just a suicide. It makes totally no sense, and the flow of this jump is insensible too. Sorry, no change
20. 01:47:424 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Sorry, no change
21. 01:51:281 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - I can definitely say you are inspired by some 2007-2009 players, such confusing patterns were used only here. I don't see anything "pretty" about putting pattern under pattern just so it is harder or it confuses the player. Sorry, no change
22. 02:16:567 (7,8,9) - ^

Sorry, no change
Well I won't mention others - issues are still repeating over and over, you might find similar yourself.


Insane

1. Uhm... HP 10, OD 10 on 140BPM? This should be definitely lower. Okay!
2. How can you use same slider velocity on 2 maps of different difficUlty? Hard and Insane have same - No reason why the Insane should even exist. Sorry, no change, because I've already made the flow so complicated
3. 01:02:638 (1,2,3,4) - Gap between 1/4 notes should definitely not be same as gap between 1/2 slider.. Sorry, no change
4. 01:09:496 (7,1,2,3) - ^ Sorry, no change
5. 01:13:567 (3,4,5) - Forbidden. That's the right word for this pattern. Changing snap to 2,5 in stream/triplet is just a bad idea. You probably make the map too much for watching than playing. Patterns might LOOK good, but if they are unplayable, it's not that worth. Okay
6. 01:17:424 (2,3,4) - Also I don't find any sensibility in using different distance snap for the same things, if you are mapping exactly the same stream or simply anything what is twice in song, it should have similar style, not totally different.

Okay


Conclusion: Unrankable Okay, I'll work hard so it'll be rankable

Well.. I would mention all the issues, but I have to cut it here. The map has too many issues and these are repeating over and over. But that's probably because you don't even have basic mapping skills. I'm not here to tell you that you are bad, I won't make fun of you. You just need to improve mapping technique, you are missing consistency, your maps are too random, they have no flow. These all things are important. If you would like me to explain anything, just ask me in-game. I can teach you the important things which may improve your mapping skills - I won't force you to ask me, but if you will ask me in-game, I will friendly help you out to become a better mapper!

[Teichan] wrote:

Hello, from M4M, sorry for the delay.
As your wish, I will mod insane.
Nice skin! Thanks (> w <)!!!
[Insane]
Well, HP10 OD10? I fc to die when test playing. Okay, I'll change it
00:19:988 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the rhythm is repeated, try to find more pattern of rhythm Okay, I'll try
01:13:567 (3,4,5) - ...change 3 and 4 Done!
01:27:281 (1,2,3) - ...no flow Sorry, no change for that
And I want to say it again "the rhythm and place is repeated, try to find more pattern of rhythm", and your flow is bad.
....Well, I think wafu says clearly, please practise your mapping skill, here's your star, you may ask for another mod for me when you think your map is rankable.
Sorry.

Hi From SoGa's Modding Queue !

[General]

1. F4-Design-Display epilepsy warning (V)
2. Kimi ga soba ni i ru ka ra !!

[Easy]

1. 00:07:261 (2) - Try this ? or maybe just Blanket both 2 and 4
   Iyaa

   
2. 00:34:988 (1) - Finish?
3. 00:48:924 (1) - ^
4. 01:06:067 (5) - X:264 Y:140(Ignore this xD
5. 03:26:638 (2) - Volume to 50%-60%?
6. 03:33:924 (2) - Clap
7. 03:59:210 (5) - NC
   

[Normal]

1. 03:59:210 (1,2,3) - u can try something like (Maybe.)
   

[Hard]

1. 00:34:988 (1) - Ctrl+G
2. 00:43:207 (3) - ^
3. 02:48:924 (5) - ^
4. 03:45:496 (5,6,7) - is not better to seperate a littl bit ?
5. 04:27:496 (2) - Ctrl+G
   

I'm so lazy so i skipped Ins sry ._.
Sry for this useless mod And poor english ._.
Nice Song , i love 9nine ><

Xellie wrote:

AR8+OD10 is evil

SoGa wrote:

Hi From SoGa's Modding Queue !

[General]

1. F4-Design-Display epilepsy warning (V) Sorry, I think there's no need
2. Kimi ga soba ni i ru ka ra !!

(> w <)

[Easy]

1. 00:07:261 (2) - Try this ? or maybe just Blanket both 2 and 4
   Iyaa

   
   Okay!!! (^ w ^)
2. 00:34:988 (1) - Finish? Sorry.... I prefer whistle
3. 00:48:924 (1) - ^ Sorry, I've already use NC as the hitsound
4. 01:06:067 (5) - X:264 Y:140(Ignore this xD Okay!!! (> w <)
5. 03:26:638 (2) - Volume to 50%-60%? Sorry... I'll use 100% there
6. 03:33:924 (2) - Clap Sorry, I've already use NC as the hitsound
7. 03:59:210 (5) - NC Sorry... I prefer whistle

[Normal]

1. 03:59:210 (1,2,3) - u can try something like (Maybe.)

It's so cool !!! But, sorry. I'll follow the vocal there I'll probably use that flow at another diff. Thanks for the idea!!!

[Hard]

1. 00:34:988 (1) - Ctrl+G Okay!!!
2. 00:43:207 (3) - ^ Okay!!!
3. 02:48:924 (5) - ^ Okay!!!
4. 03:45:496 (5,6,7) - is not better to seperate a littl bit ? OOpss... That's right! Okay!!!
5. 04:27:496 (2) - Ctrl+G Okay!!!

I'm so lazy so i skipped Ins sry ._.
Sry for this useless mod And poor english ._. That's not true!!! You helped me so much!!!! (> w <)
Nice Song , i love 9nine >< I like 9nine too!!! (^ w ^)

kakifly wrote:

one of my favourite songs i love magi <33

good luck on rank! osu needs more magi soundtrack Dx

TKS wrote:

no kds.

metadata is fine except source.
we couldnt find official source about "colon(:)" of source.

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^ also, official website uses MAGI with uppercase.
in this case, source should be MAGI The kingdom of magic or マギ The kingdom of magic

1. 00:42:769 (2,3) – This spacing is weird, I'm guessing that you want to make it symmetrical but it's too confusing please move (3) further away or something.
2. 00:54:924 (2,3) – I would (3) to a different place since this overlapping is strange(to me).
   
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   Or you could just start this 00:55:781 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – pattern somewhere else. My suggestion would be first you change (1,2) with each other in the timeline and the same with (3,4) and (5,6) and all of them like that.
   Then because (3) would be to far from the previous note you move (5,6) in the timeline to where (3,4) are and move (9,10) to where (7,8) are and then the flow should be the same.
3. 01:19:353 (5,6) – too close spacing space them like at 01:17:853 (7,8) –
4. 01:20:853 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:30:067 – I think you should stop kiai time here. If you do be sure to do that for the other diffs as well.
6. 01:47:424 (1,2,3) – just to tell you spacing here should be okay. Just that at the other one I was weird since there was bigger spacing before that.
7. 03:33:496 (1,2) – I feel like this spacing is weird, but maybe that's just me maybe you want to move (2) so that the end of it is blanketed with (1)
8. 02:20:638 (7,8) – this spacing is random. Why not follow suit as the others before this one? Just select (8) and Ctrl+g.
9. 02:30:710 (2,3,4,5) – I noticed that you have a lot of these triplets with a 1/4 break and then a 1/2 break with a slider following. I'm not sure if it's okay for hard-mode players (I'm a player who just plays everything that I'm capable of…) But I'd say that it's a bit confusing if everything is stacked like that.
   In case you want to move them, I wrote down the places with spacings like that
   
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   02:43:138 (2,3,4,5) –
   02:54:710 (1,2,3,4) –
   03:13:567 (2,3,4,5) –
   03:20:424 (2,3,4,5) –
   03:29:853 (1,2,3,4) –
   03:42:710 (2,3,4,5) –
   03:44:424 (1,2,3,4) –
   04:28:138 (3,4,5,6) –
   04:29:853 (1,2,3,4) –
   Hope I didn't miss any.
10. 02:51:496 – I think you should stop kiai time here and start at 02:52:353 – again
11. 04:08:638 - ^ and start at 04:09:496 –

1. The kiai is ok because that is the chorus. Please do NOT rely on AI mod for modding/mapping. It is only to be used as a helpful guide.
2. 01:35:424 - You should move the break start here to 01:36:924 - in all difficulties because that is when the instrumental plays. You can move a break start by dragging the break point on the timeline.
3. I think your storyboard plays better without "Letterbox During Breaks".
4. The Hard and Insane have the same AR. Please differentiate the AR between the two difficulties.

1. General: OD+2 (or OD+1.5); In general the ranked Easy difficulties follow an OD around 2.
2. For this difficulty, the break at 00:19:534 - would fit better at 00:20:443 -.
3. 01:04:353 (3,5) - These objects do not stack properly, please fix.
4. In general, I would avoid mapping overlaps like e.g: 03:12:924 (1,2) -. Everything does not have to be overlapping; please try something like below for the overlaps featured in this difficulty:
   
   
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5. Regarding overlaps, if you look at 03:50:210 -, you will see that slider 3's hit circle is hidden behind slider 1 while the user is playing. Overlaps like this are discouraged in the easier difficulty. Try mapping for flow instead.

1. General: OD-1, HP-1; OD5 HP5 is rather high for a Normal difficulty. I would also do an AR-0.5 because of the rather low BPM.
2. Like the overlaps for Easy, please check this difficulty as well for any objects that may be hard to see.

1. 01:08:424 (2,3) - Are the patterns like this intentional? To me, they look like a Ctrl+G on a slider that was originally placed behind the circles.
2. 02:35:210 (1,5) - Here is another example of a bad overlap. Please avoid this.

1. The spaced 1/4s like e.g: 04:08:638 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -, I do not think that they are rankable. Please consider trying a different pattern (simple triplets, etc.).
2. The streams before the kiai, I feel that they are too much? Try adding sliders with the stream?