example

example

1. is spaced fine
2. is that 00:46:892 (5) - and 00:48:271 (1) - are not touching

example

example

1. Move the note to x:447 y:192 for the perfect stack
2. Move this along with 01:29:651 (1) - to somewhere far away so it doesn't touch 01:27:926 (6) -

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hey there o/ From #modreqs

General

Since this is a NH spread, you need to make sure that your normal diff can still be played by beginners. For instance, beginners have trouble reading overlapping hit objects, so you might want to consider checking all these and fixing them. I'll check the diff for them. but I had a friend (who's not playin osu) testplay it and he was fine with the overlaps. plus most of them are intentional, but I'll see. :3

You should try to keep your breaks consistant across all diffs. So map the breaks in normal or add breaks in hard. need breaks in Normal.. ;w; and I wanted to do a breakless Hard cause it's reaaaally Easy anyway, but I'll think about it.

Your maps have no tags, so you really should consider adding some, and make sure that the tags are consistent across every difficulty. If you decide to add a guest diff later on, then add the guest mapper's name to tags as well. I'll do that once I can think of some. orz cause unfortunately the album this song is from is self-titled, sooo meh. ><

Normal

00:33:788 (3) - You should get rid of this overlap because when it's a whole beat away on a slow song like this, it can get pretty boring, and a beginner might hit the note too early. You could move this to a place such as x:484 y:212 moved

00:36:547 (1,2,3,4) - Flow here isn't great because you make a right angled triangle pattern then you have to hastily change direction for the slider. I would recommend changing the pattern to something like this:

example

fixed

00:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Beginners have a hard time reading patterns where notes are on top of slidertracks, and they look ugly overall, and it's not good how the end of 00:48:271 (1) - overlaps with the start of 00:46:892 (5) - . Try this pattern instead:

example

and then move the next few notes so that it:

1. is spaced fine
2. is that 00:46:892 (5) - and 00:48:271 (1) - are not touching

dun think it's ugly.. buuut rearranged the part a bit. c:

00:55:513 (5,1,2) - Similar kind of thing as my last suggestion - not as bad as my last suggestion, but still bad for a normal.Move 00:55:513 (5,2) - away from each other so their ends do not touch in any way since as I have previously stated, can be confusing for beginners. Nah, I'll keep this. it's okay for Normal. :3

01:03:444 (4) - Move this slider so it does not make contact with 01:02:753 (2) - or 01:02:064 (1) - , these kinds of overlap look ugly and are confusing for beginner. I like them. ;n; keepin it

01:04:823 (1,3) - The overlap these two notes make is actually fine because the player does not have to click or drag anything beneath a sliderend. However, you should perfect this by moving the end of 01:06:203 (3) - to x:195 y:196. fixed

01:20:340 (2,3) - Make it so 01:20:340 (2) - does not overlap with the slidertrail of 01:20:685 (3) - since it can be hard to read, it looks ugly, and is not very appealing to beginners. same as above ><

01:25:858 (2,3) - ^ same as above

01:31:719 (3,1) - In my opinion, I think it would look better if the sliderend of 01:31:719 (3) - was blanketed with 01:33:099 (1) - better by moving
01:33:099 (1) - to x:264 y:228, like this:

example

If you decide to do this, remember to move the next few notes to avoid spacing issues. fixed in a different way

01:34:133 (2,3) - Do not make 01:34:133 (2) - overlap with the slidertrail of 01:34:478 (3) - since as I've mentioned before, it can be unappealing to beginners, ugly looking, and hard to read. overlaps differnetly now and I like it, so keeping it <:

01:38:616 (6,7) - Get rid of the stack since beat long stacks are bad due to various reasons that I've stated before in this mod; it's boring waiting, and newbies might hit the note too early. Consider moving 01:39:995 (7) - to a place like x:204 y:76 for a blanket. fixed

The area here seems like you just copy and pasted part of the map, because I am seeing the same errors and patterns :/ It can be quite boring for players, so I would consider remapping this section. was'nt copypasted, buuut the same pattern, yah. changed!

01:51:030 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Another hard to read pattern in this map, I've told you how to deal with this before in my mod post, so do what I suggested there to fix this. (Hint, it's at the 2nd linked image.) fixed differentely than the first time, variety.. yay! \^__^/

02:01:720 (5,1,2) - Change this so 02:01:720 (5,2) - are not overlapping eachother because it is confusing and it looks ugly imo same as above

02:08:271 (1,4) - Yet again, fix these overlapping slidertrails.You probably know why you should by now. I still like them, sorry. x:

02:12:410 (3) - Move this sliderend to x:317 y:188 so it overlaps with the sliderend of 02:11:030 (1) - properly.fixed

02:35:168 (1,3) - Since these two sliders are straight, this pattern can look rather bland and unappealing, as well as not flowing as well as it should. Try this instead:

example

This will result in enhanced visuals and flow. Just remember to move the next few notes to avoid issues with spacing. ok

02:40:340 (4,5) - Throughout the entire song you decide to not include any 1/6 until now, this is not good consistency and you should fix this. done

02:44:133 (3) - Move the start of this slider to x:23 y:165 so it perfectly stacks with the end of 02:42:064 (6) - which results in enhanced visuals. fixed

02:48:616 (4,5,6) - This pattern is not as unreadable as the other patterns similar to this because 02:49:651 (6) - is quite long, which helps the brain distinguish the end of the slider, so this isn't as important to fix as these other patterns. But I'd still recommend fixing. nope, keepin it. ><

02:51:375 (1,2) - Same as what I've mentioned before at 02:40:340 (4,5) - remove 1/6 for consistency. ok

02:57:927 (2,5) - Again, fix this overlap for ease of reading and visuals. is readable imo x:

03:02:065 (3) - You could blanket this as well! So it goes over 03:01:720 (2) - and is like a shorter version 03:00:685 (1) - , doing this will result in better visuals. wanted to keep angularity cause of the following, but changed, might change the other as well. >o<

03:03:444 (1,4) - An overlap like this can be very confusing for beginners so I'd seriously consider removing this like most other overlaps I've suggested. nah, is fine as it is

If you choose not to fix the suggestion I posted, then move 03:04:823 (4) - to x41 y:207 so it perfectly overlaps with the end of 03:03:444 (1) - done

03:35:513 (5) - Ok, this note goes under both the slider end and the slider start of 03:33:444 (2) - seriously I would consider moving this note to somewhere clean -.- This is extremely unreadable and is like, the worst part about the map, sadly ._. was totally intentional, cause it doesn't look that unreadable. (like I said, had someon test this..) but I fixed it for now.

03:35:857 (6) - Move this slider end to x:262 y:224 so it perfectly stacks on top of the sliderend of 03:37:237 (2) - not needed anymore. :c xD

Hard

00:13:099 (4) - This slider is stacked with the triplet of 00:11:719 (1,2,3) - , but it is a beat apart instead of 1/2 making it easy for it to be hit early and generally feels uncomfortable, so you should fix this. feels fine, imo

00:13:788 (5,2) - Think you can change the way that 00:14:824 (2) - overlaps with the sliderend of 00:13:788 (5) - ? This looks ugly imo and becomes difficult to read. is intentional. :3 might have noticed in Normal, but I LOVE these overlaps. :b

00:16:893 (8,1) - You can get rid of this 1/2 double and do something more creative with your 5 notes, such as adding a star pattern. I use this pattern with four circles more often so I wanna keep it consistent. no change

00:22:754 (1) - This hitcircle overlaps with the start of 00:21:375 (5) - which looks ugly imo and becomes difficult to read, so consider fixing this. oh, yeah. It was stacked with 5 at some point.. but I fixed sth with it and moved it, so now this happened. damn. xD changed to sth different

00:26:892 (5,6) - You generally shouldn't stack notes behind repeats because it is extremely hard to read and feels uncomfortable. I think it's fine. >: (but I fixed DS, how'd that get messed up..)

If you choose to deny my suggestion above then at least move 00:27:926 (6) - to x:286 y:64 so it perfectly stacks with the end of 00:26:892 (5) - did it differnt, still overlaps, but that's okay

00:30:685 (4) - Another stack issue, this time move it to x:411 y:192 so it perfectly stacks with the start of 00:28:961 (2) - Idk how this happens all the time. orz fixed

00:36:892 (2,4) - Third stack issue in a row now - move the slider end of 00:37:926 (4) - to x:276 y:121 for a perfect stack with 00:36:892 (2) - or vice versa. fixed

01:02:064 (1) - You should move this slider so that players are not just waiting for the next note to come with this long, 1 beat long stack. I want them to wait, is intentional. >3

If you choose to deny my suggestion above, then move the start of 01:02:064 (1) - to x:245 y:122 for a perfect stack with the slider end of 01:01:030 (6) - . done

01:06:547 (8) - Please move this note so it is not touching 01:05:857 (7) - in any way, shape, or form since this looks bad and is hard to read. looks fine to me. |:

01:06:892 (1,2) - Again, get rid of slow double so players aren't waiting. but that's what I want. ><

01:08:041 (4) - You really should get rid of the whistle here because it sounds bad and just doesn't fit. It would sound much better with a normal hitsound, trust me. ok, changed (I suck with hitsounds, haha. xD)

01:08:616 (5) - ^

01:11:375 (4,5) - Get rid of this overlap, 01:11:375 (4) - overlaps the slidertrail and end which looks bad and is hard to read. intentional, but it doesn't look as the others, so I'll think of sth to fix it. but keepin it so long. xD

01:12:409 (1,2) - Remove this double because as I've mentioned many times before, it will leave players waiting, which isn't very good. same as above x;

01:28:616 (8) - lol, this note really isn't placed in a good position right now, so you can either:

1. Move the note to x:447 y:192 for the perfect stack
2. Move this along with 01:29:651 (1) - to somewhere far away so it doesn't touch 01:27:926 (6) -

moved, stacks with 5 now

01:28:616 (8,1) - Again we have a long 1 beat long blanket which is bad because it leaves people waiting for the next note, and they could also hit it too early. same as above, moved this along with prev object

01:33:099 (6,8) - These two notes don't stack very well, so consider moving 01:34:133 (8) - to x403 y:234 to perfect the stack on the slider end. fixed

01:40:340 (9) - Make it so this circle doesn't touch the start of 01:39:306 (7) - in any way. .. ok >:

01:45:168 (5) - You should ctrl+g this to improve flow by a lot. wanted to keep similar style as the part before, but fixed. >:

01:56:547 (9) - Move this hitcircle up to x:59 y:133 so it perfectly stacks with the start of 01:54:823 (4) - fixed

01:57:237 (1,3) - Make it so these two notes don't overlap each other since it can be confusing to read. ok

02:24:133 (1) - You should really consider moving this somewhere else so that it is not touching 02:23:444 (9) - since at it's current condition, it can be quite difficult to read and hit. intentional, I think it's fine for a Hard diff. :3

02:37:582 (6) - You should really consider moving this somewhere else so that it is not touching 02:36:892 (5) - since at it's current condition, it can be quite difficult to read and hit. ^

02:43:099 (6) - You should really consider moving this somewhere else so that it is not touching 02:42:409 (5) - since at it's current condition, it can be quite difficult to read and hit. ^

02:48:616 (3) - You should blanket this slider with the end of 02:47:237 (2) - for better visuals. hmh, okay. ;n;

02:55:513 (5) - You really should curve this slider like 02:54:823 (4) - so that the pattern is symmetrical and that the sliders are consistent, resulting in better gameplay and visuals. fixed

03:22:064 (6) - You really should move this so it blankets the end of 03:22:754 (7) - which results in better visuals. changed differnetly

03:24:823 (1) - You really should move this slider to x:418 y:267 so it is part of the stack there, this results in much better visuals and gameplay. fixed with above

03:27:582 (6,7) - You really can improve the way these sliders blanket each other. Try moving 03:27:582 (6) - to x:142 y:204 nah, 6 blankets the start of 3 atm. :3 but I'll work on 7.

03:37:926 (3) - You should move the start of this to x:389 y162 so it perfectly stacks with the sliderend of 03:36:547 (1) - making it look nicer. fixed

03:39:306 (1) - Consider moving this a bit further to avoid spacing issue and the fact that players might hit the note too early, as well as looking ugly. intentional :3


Well, I guess that's it from me, and I hope you found this mod useful. Good luck on rank~

pkmnyab wrote:

From my modding queue~
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhvril lavigne

\o/

[Normal]

1. 00:46:202 (3,5) - I don't think this overlap looks very good (when the hitcircle overlaps both the head and tail of a slider), try arranging it a different way. Below is one suggestion regarding the placement of 00:45:513 (2,3,4,5,1) -
   
   SPOILER

   
   changed, but differentely
   
2. 00:52:409 (4,5) - this object placement can be made to look better. I think there are two things you can do here: I like the polygon-like pattern better here, keeping it. x:
   1. Move 00:52:754 (5) - to the left
   
   SPOILER

   
   2. Making this look nice is a bit tricky since you have three hitcircles in a row 00:51:719 (2,3,4) - , maybe you can turn 00:52:064 (3,4) - into one slider. It works out fine because it matches the vocal, and now that you have two sliders in a row you might be able to find a way to make it look good.
   
   SPOILER

   
   This also applies to 01:58:271 (3,4,5) - same as above, tho ><
   
3. 00:54:823 (3,4) - consider turning this into one slider as well. I think it's more fun to play that way and matches the vocal, and also because three hit circles in a row might feel a bit boring to some people. You can try using repeat sliders as well if that works too.
   This also applies to 02:01:030 (3,4) - changed this, cause I used diff pattern before here, but I've gotta work on that, doesn't look good atm.
   
4. 00:56:547 (2) - if there is a way to place the objects before/after this nicely, you can consider changing this into a repeat slider. I feel that this matches the vocal more since the singer alternates between two pitches during the duration of the slider. I'll think about it. there are so many reverse sliders already, I don't want to overuse them.. D:
   
5. 00:57:582 (3) - to make it more interesting, consider ctrl+g on this slider. The flow becomes a bit better as well. This also applies to 02:03:789 (3) - and 03:09:996 (3) - that way I'd have to place it directly below/... prev object tho, to keep DS consistent, and this looks bad imo
   
6. 01:02:064 (1,2,4) - I think there are too many overlaps here, consider a different pattern. Below is one suggestion.
   
   SPOILER

   
   This also applies to 02:08:271 (1,2,4) - since you're the second to suggest a change, changed. ;_;
   
7. 01:04:823 (1,3) - ends aren't perfectly stacked but I don't know if you want to change this or not. If you move stuff around then make sure 01:05:858 (2,3) - is still blanketed nicely. fixed
   
8. 01:06:203 (3,1) - this is pretty unexpected in my opinion since the time between the two objects is really small. I think it will be fine if you shorten 01:06:203 (3) - to 01:06:547 - (on the red tick). Alternatively, you can have 01:06:203 (3) - end on where 01:06:892 (1) - is (make sure you delete 01:06:892 (1) - though). changed
   
9. 01:12:064 (2) - same reasons as above, you can either make this just a hit circle or extend it so that it ends on where 01:12:409 (1) - is (make sure you delete 01:12:409 (1) - though). Both of the changes above also apply to 03:18:617 (3,1) - , 03:24:478 (7,1) - changed
   
10. 01:13:444 (3,5) - to make it look nicer you can try to avoid this overlap. Moving it to around x 176 y 264 should be good as you get around the same space between each slider (01:13:444 (3,4,5) - )
    
    SPOILER

    
    Of course if you make this change, you will have to re-position the objects that come after. done
    
11. 01:16:892 (2,3,4) - I feel that having a repeat slider instead of three hit circles matches the music better. You can hear the electronic beeping sound in the background and the pitch increases where you have these hit circles. However since you have hitcircles before and after this but the electronic beeping sound is the regular pitch, it makes sense to make this part stand out, which is why I feel a repeat slider suits this section. nice idea!
    
12. 01:52:409 (3,5) - as mentioned before, I don't think it looks nice when a hitcircle overlaps both the slider head and tail. Try to rearrange the objects, below is one suggestion.
    
    SPOILER

    
    changed up, but totally different, still overlaps, but that's fine with me. >o<
    
13. 02:39:306 (3,5) - perhaps it will look better without this overlap, moving 02:40:340 (4,5) - down a bit should fix it. fixed I guess. o.o (I don't see them overlapping. D: )
    
14. 03:02:065 (3) - for better flow, consider ctrl+g and moving it down a bit
    
    SPOILER

    
    fixed
    
    [Hard]
    
15. 01:08:041 (4) - slider is off, I suggest using 1/4 beat snap divisor for this one.
    changed differentely
    
16. 01:20:685 (1,2) - maybe the flow will be better like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    break of flow is intentional here :3
    
17. 01:28:961 - this is just something extra, but maybe you could add a repeat slider here to match the beat in the background. I think it's more fun this way, but you might choose to only follow the vocal.
    I'll think about it. ;u; (cause I like the gap xD)
    
18. 02:50:685 (6) - to match the stuttering vocal, you can add one repeat on to this slider. keep it as it is
    
19. 01:58:271 (2,3) - ctrl + g to switch positions (while the whole thing is highlighted), this way the slider accurately matches the vocal. Same with
    03:13:099 (4,5) -, 03:14:478 (1,2) - , 03:35:168 (4,5,6) -

changed

Looks like people want this ranked, so work hard and have fun mapping! I have loaaads of fun. *-*

Oh, I forgot to mention before but your background image file size is huge, I think it was around 1.35 MB. I've reduced the file size to around 200 KB by saving as jpg without any noticeable reduction in image quality. Having a 1.35 MB background image just bloats the mapset and it will take people longer to download.
Here you go, you can save the image and set it as the new background
no kds

PinkHusky wrote:

[Hard]

I love this hard map with some DT. Except I'm bothered a lot by how the notes don't stack at all. Changing it to 5 would be awesome in my noob opinion.
haha, I guess not stacking.. or rather stacking at weird parts is my style. xD but I don't get what you mean with 'changing to 5'? ;w; what should I change to 5?

02:21:719 (6) - Move to x:112 y:168 so that it matches the way you put the note 02:24:823 (2)
I think you meant 112|186.. so fixed. :3

1. You should add kiai time! herehere ! from {00:44:823 to 01:06:892} & {01:51:030 to 02:13:099} & {02:57:237 to 03:19:306}
2. tags!

1. sorry about the short mod for normal :X there isnt really big standout problems with this diff. the things i dont like are personal preference kind of things and id rather not go into that. the main problem with this is gonna be hitsounds. im not so great with them but.. here are a few to help
2. 00:44:823 (1) - remove clap add finish
3. 00:55:513 (4) - add finish at slider tail
4. 01:51:030 (1) - remov clap add finish
5. 02:01:720 (5) - add finish at slider tail!!
6. 02:57:237 (1) - remove clap add finish
7. 03:07:927 (5) - + finish @ tail

1. hp drain is HEELLLA high for a hard! you should set it to around 6! yeah probably 6
2. 00:22:754 (1,2,3,4) - you may want to turn these into a pattern of some sort like what you did at 00:19:995 (1,2,3,4)! it'll probably look nicer and ahve consistency! to hold your sort of formation you almost have there, one possible solution is putting hitcircle 2 at (220, 284) and hitcircle 3 at (308,216)! any sort of formation works though~
3. 00:44:823 (1) - oh balls.. okay. everything mentioned in the normal! applies to hard too! just put the finishes at where the timestamp is! (only if you go through with the suggestion ~)
4. 01:11:375 (4,5) - considering the pattern just before this, it might be misleading to put them at the same distance as them >.< maybe move 5 farther way?
5. 01:29:651 (1,2) - music doesnt indicate such a huuuuUUUuge jump! shiould have no jump imo. i suggest that, to preserve as much of the original design as much as possible, you flip! horizontally! everything from 01:29:995 (2) to the spinner at 01:40:685 (1)! then all you have to do is rotate this 01:30:340 (3) a bit so that it's placed to the right of the middle hitcircle so it doesnt overlap with the other hitcircle.. & maybe flip vertically so it has good rotational flow and youve got an effective fix! that is, only if you want to make the fix ofc~
6. 02:18:616 (1,2) - suggestion! move this away a bit so that theres a jump between these 2 thingies (what do they call them?...) 02:19:306 (2,3). this is so that people dont get confused with how 1&2 are slower than 2&3 in terms of timing. its not anything new since you did it nicely over here! 02:13:099 (1,2,3)
7. 03:38:616 (5,1) - separate or stack so that its not the same as the previous pattern imo~

Kihhou wrote:

Hoy!~ Nice map! really solid! such solidity! like rock!!

[General]

1. You should add kiai time! herehere ! from {00:44:823 to 01:06:892} & {01:51:030 to 02:13:099} & {02:57:237 to 03:19:306} oh lol. I forgot about Kiai Time completely. orz THANKS!
2. tags! I can't seem to find matching tags. IF ANYONE HAS SUGGESTION FOR TAGS PLS TELL ME ._.

[Normal]

1. sorry about the short mod for normal :X there isnt really big standout problems with this diff. the things i dont like are personal preference kind of things and id rather not go into that. the main problem with this is gonna be hitsounds. im not so great with them but.. here are a few to help
2. 00:44:823 (1) - remove clap add finish ok
3. 00:55:513 (4) - add finish at slider tail ^
4. 01:51:030 (1) - remov clap add finish ^
5. 02:01:720 (5) - add finish at slider tail!! ^
6. 02:57:237 (1) - remove clap add finish ^
7. 03:07:927 (5) - + finish @ tail ^

[Hard]

1. hp drain is HEELLLA high for a hard! you should set it to around 6! yeah probably 6 ooh, right. forgot to change that back while testing sth. O-O
2. 00:22:754 (1,2,3,4) - you may want to turn these into a pattern of some sort like what you did at 00:19:995 (1,2,3,4)! it'll probably look nicer and ahve consistency! to hold your sort of formation you almost have there, one possible solution is putting hitcircle 2 at (220, 284) and hitcircle 3 at (308,216)! any sort of formation works though~ prefer mine >:
3. 00:44:823 (1) - oh balls.. okay. everything mentioned in the normal! applies to hard too! just put the finishes at where the timestamp is! (only if you go through with the suggestion ~) okay, I'll add them. xD
4. 01:11:375 (4,5) - considering the pattern just before this, it might be misleading to put them at the same distance as them >.< maybe move 5 farther way? forgot to ctrl+g, then it matches.. >< thanks
5. 01:29:651 (1,2) - music doesnt indicate such a huuuuUUUuge jump! shiould have no jump imo. i suggest that, to preserve as much of the original design as much as possible, you flip! horizontally! everything from 01:29:995 (2) to the spinner at 01:40:685 (1)! then all you have to do is rotate this 01:30:340 (3) a bit so that it's placed to the right of the middle hitcircle so it doesnt overlap with the other hitcircle.. & maybe flip vertically so it has good rotational flow and youve got an effective fix! that is, only if you want to make the fix ofc~ I wanna keep the jump for now, so I decreaseed the distance, but didn't flip. I will tho, if more people suggest it. :3
6. 02:18:616 (1,2) - suggestion! move this away a bit so that theres a jump between these 2 thingies (what do they call them?...) 02:19:306 (2,3). this is so that people dont get confused with how 1&2 are slower than 2&3 in terms of timing. its not anything new since you did it nicely over here! 02:13:099 (1,2,3) fixed!
7. 03:38:616 (5,1) - separate or stack so that its not the same as the previous pattern imo~ wanted it to be the same. keeping it for now. >:

Oh jeez i am getting super bored from all these mods >.< hope this is legible considering all the unnecessary things i put in here
More importantly, i hope it helped!

Good luck!~~~~~@!@!

Julini wrote:

Mod Request~

Normal

00:15:513 (1,2) So eine Slidercombi ist zu schwer für Anfänger, mach 1 am besten zum circle ^^ okay
00:24:133 (1) Da kannste ruhig etwas mit der Sliderform spielen Ist ja so schön lang der Slider hab ihn so, damit er zu 00:22:754 (3) - passt. :3
00:26:892 (1) ^ is blanketed mit 00:26:202 (3) -
00:32:064 (1,2) Auch zu schwer~ durch Circle ersetzt
01:10:340 (1) Auch etwas trocken die Form, aber mmmm nja is gewollt so, weil blanket. ><
01:38:271 (5,6) zu schwer~ geändert
02:16:547 (1) Dieser Slider möchte formiert werden~ die sind alle absichtlich so. D: (außer ich hab dich falsch verstanden.. o.o)
02:22:064 (1) Dieser auch!
02:27:582 (1) ^
02:33:099 (1) ^
03:06:202 (1,2,3,4,5) Die Stelle ist etwas irritierend, weil alles irgendwie auf nem Haufen ist, versuchs übersichtlicher zu machen hoffe, es is jetzt besser. ;w;

Hard

00:23:444 (3,4) Objekte sind zu weit auseinander, ist etwas verwirrend, auch wenns ne Harddiff ist ^^ is eig gewollt so, zieht sich ja durch die Diff.. also hab ich den alten Kreis erstma wieder drin, vllt is das nich ganz so verwirrend.
00:32:064 (2,3,4,5,6,7) Verwirrende Stelle, versuch die Objekte mal klar zu sortieren :3 find polygon pattern eig sehr deutlich, auch wenn Jumps drin sind. >: lass ich erstmal so
00:50:340 (5,6) Solche bösen Jumps wären was für eine Insane-Diff, aber hier solltest du sie weglassen ^^ okay
00:51:719 (3,4,5,6,7) Verwirrend durchaus so gewollt. :3 find's hier auch okay für ne Hard diff
01:29:651 (1,2) Böser Jump! hab ich rausgenommen :3

Allgemein wird geraten, in Hard-Diffs wie in Normal und Easy noch ein einheitliches Spacing zu haben, nur kann man hier etwas mehr "Kreativität und Schwierigkeit" einbauen. Deine Map ist an vielen Stellen sehr unübersichtlich, das würde jemand, der sich keine Insanes zutraut, nicht schaffen, oben waren nur einige Beispiele. Also guck am besten selbst noch einmal drüber und mach sie was übersichtlich
Ich werd nochma durchgucken, find das aber eigentlich recht okay so. |:
Das Spacing ist an den meisten Stellen (nicht an allen, klar) eingehalten und hier und da hab ich die Objekte nur umgedreht. Und ich denk, dass erfahrenere Spieler das nach spätestens 30 Sekunden Spielzeit sofort verstehen und auch lesen können, deswegen werd ich die Jumps wohl eher nich rausnehmen, sorry. >:

Wenn du noch "kreativer" sein willst, musst du ne Insane oder Extra-Diff machen dafür wär's aber wieder viel zu einfach. ._.

02:46:202 (1,2) Gesangsmapping ist so eine Sache, wenn man sowas macht, dann sollte es auch jemand spielen können, der das Lied nicht kennt ^^
lass ich erstmal so. ><

Hoffe ich konnte dir etwas helfen

Grüße, Julini~

tennyecho wrote:

for M4M :
General :
Tags:
- add Avril Lavigne (2013) as source. The album title is "Avril Lavigne"
- Avril Ramona / Hodges, David as co-writter of the song
- uncheck letterbox in every diff during the break coz you don't use SB
- be consistent with widescreen support in every diff


Notes : don't give me kudosu, yet. I'll continue in two days. Please wait

lightr wrote:

HI Squirrel ><~ Hi! :3
My English is poor and this is my first time to mod in English,ask me if you don't understand what i said ;w;

Hard
the first kiai time should end in 01:17:926 - ,and the last kiai time should end in 03:41:030 - don't want to use too much kiai time ><
umm,you add so many claps,i think you should decrease some of them. I'll do that once I figure out which ones..! @@
just add claps on 2nd and 4th white line,and remove other extra claps.
00:26:892 (5,6) - bad overlap imo changed
00:33:788 (7) - delete this circle instead of a 1/2 slider? done
01:06:892 (1) - add finish okay
01:20:685 - I don't think this one need to follow the vocal , just use a 1/2 slider is better. okay
01:28:961 - feel empty here,why not use a 1/3 reverse slider? following the vocals here .o. keep it for now
01:29:651 (1) - add finish done
01:35:513 (4,5,6) - 4 is too close to (56) , increase distance wth them it's not too close, I think, just keeping DS consistent here >:
02:16:547 (9) - NC to remind people there is a slow slider okay
02:46:202 (1,2) - these sliders don't fit the music imo , maybe you should remap this part ;-;
I'll think of something and change it once I know how! ><
02:56:892 (7) - add finish on slider tail okay
03:19:306 (1) - add finish ^
03:22:064 (6,7) - make them have the same curve tried, hope it fits better now
03:30:685 (2) - don't fit the music imo ;w; changed

Normal
This diff is pretty nice!Ican't say much in this diff, just take notice of some bad overlap
like as 01:09:651 (5,1) - 01:19:306 (1,2,3) - 01:34:133 (2,3) - ...... I like overlaps. >< corrected the one at 1:19 tho

that's all,sorry for my poor mod QAQ
Good luck with getting this map ranked c:

tennyecho wrote:

for M4M :
General :
Tags:
- add Avril Lavigne (2013) as source. The album title is "Avril Lavigne"
- Avril Ramona / Hodges, David as co-writter of the song
- uncheck letterbox in every diff during the break coz you don't use SB
- be consistent with widescreen support in every diff


Notes : don't give me kudosu, yet. I'll continue in two days. Please wait
edit :
Avril Ramona / Hodges, David ( yes add 'em to tag)

Normal
01:34:478 (3) - how about blanket with 01:34:133 (2) - so, IMO it can be curved a bit changed
02:08:960 (2) - blanket with 02:08:271 (1) - keep this, cause it'd overlap with 02:09:651 (4) - and ppl kept mentioning that, so.. xD

Hard
00:33:788 (7) - how about move it to x=152, y=316. So a pentagon shows up ^v^ nice idea!
01:18:961 (3) - remove clap here okay

I can't find much. I'm so sorry. Good luck >w< helped still, tho. so thanks. <3

tennyecho wrote:

Umm.. I'm sorry. there's a mistake in my mod
The source field here should be blank. The source field is only filled with anime, film, game, series, etc which popularize the song.
Don't give this post a kudosu. Thanks.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿ hey °w°

Uhh oh, it's country/guitar music. I'm not very good at modding these types of sings

Normal

00:08:961 - 00:11:719 would be pretty neat here if you added a drum finish, so it can correspond well with the 'swoosh' sort of sound heard here, and ending firmly at 00:11:719. added a circle at 11:719 for now, not sure about starting at 8:xxx but I'll think about it!

00:13:099 (1) - Forget to add a clap on the tail. ooh, right. added

01:38:616 (6) - NC okay

02:07:582 (4) - Add finish. okay

02:16:547 (1,1) - CTRL + G, which ever one you prefer. Even in this slow-down part of the music, you should try to have the objects flow differently (I was going to suggest you do it for 02:16:547 (1,1) - , but then it would also affect the spacing for 02:35:168 (1) - too). reversed first two

02:40:685 (5) - NC done
02:49:306 (5) - ^ done

02:53:099 (3) - Forgot to add the clap on the tail. added
02:54:133 (4) - ^ ^

03:22:064 (5) - NC done
03:39:306 (4) - ^ done

Hard

00:18:501 - Add a note at 00:18:501, so it hits the lyrics "was". nice idea!

00:19:306 (6) - Consider moving it to 00:19:191 instead, so it hits exactly on the "worth" lyrics. Then add a hit circle at 00:19:651. In songs like these, the vocals are the strongest notes of the music itself, and beats are heard more weaker (which is why I'm not a big fan of modding these maps ).
prefer is as it is atm, might change it in the future tho '-'

00:27:811 - Add a note here. If you listen closely, you can hear a double beat here on 00:27:811 and 00:27:926. okay
00:28:156 ^ same suggestion as above, and a note here. Or another option is to make a 1/2 slider here from 00:27:926 - 00:28:156 like this:

added another circle :3

00:30:915 - Add a note, there's also a double beat heard here. done

00:33:329 - 00:33:674
Try this rhythm?
So it follows the beats that are actually loud and strong here.
did, have to figure out hoe to place them better tho '^'

01:20:685 (6) - NC okay

01:28:616 (8) - The empty space after this note sounds kinda awkward and empty, because you can still make objects here to follow the 'thud' beats heard here. So from 01:28:501 - 01:29:421, try using this rhythm?

I want to concentrate on the vocals here, but since ppl keep mentioning it I might fix it in the future >:

01:29:995 (2,3) - This jump appears out of nowhere, and it's too wide. Please fix. fixed

01:44:133 (4) - Please shrink it's tail to 01:44:478,so that it won't skip the strong beat heard here at 01:44:478. Then add a note at 01:44:823. done

01:59:995 (5) - NC
02:21:719 (6) - ^
02:32:409 (6) - ^ all done

02:50:685 (6,1) - Is an inconsistent spacing effect. Don't use this effect here, because it will only trick players to thinking that the DS with the next slider 02:51:719 (1,2) - will also be 1 full beat apart (when really, they're only 1/6 beats apart).
changed

02:57:237 - Kai time is suppose to start here. oh, right. fixed!

Wow, amazing O_O This mapset is probably one of the best works I've ever seen you make, haha! Awesome job
thank youu. 'w'

Good luck!

Luna123512 wrote:

Nice Beatmap. Usually I Only Listen To Metal Or Hardrock, But Your Beatmap Make Me Listen To This Soft-Song. Be Proud About This.
Mby You Add An Harder Diff. But It's Not Necessary.

shikyu wrote:

Hello, from my queue~ Hi! :3

[Hard]
00:11:719 (1,2,3) - maybe spread it? ppl don't seem to like it. u.u changed
00:18:501 - add note here like other patterns before? there is a note there o:
00:32:294 - ^ added, not sure about this tho .o.
00:33:788 (9) - seriously? this is unreadable didn't testplay after I changed that, orz. should have, changed
00:48:961 (2) - slider's end stacked with 00:48:271 (1) - tail, make it separate futher from (1) changed
01:04:823 (5) - NC here done
01:53:789 (1) - remove NC here and add NC on 01:54:478 (3) - because you add NC in start of lyric moved NC a bit differently to match better w pattern
01:59:651 - add note here okay
02:05:168 (5) - add NC here, imo combo is too long done
02:11:030 (6) - ^ done
02:19:651 (3,4,5) - make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1508561 the slider flow better like this ^
02:25:168 (3) - remove clap on slider's start whops, ^
02:27:582 (7) - NC here, you add nc at humming part hmh, okay for now, but 3-combo looks weird atm >n<
02:46:202 (1,2) - these sliders sounds weird, split them to follow phrase or drum changed
02:48:616 (3) - NC here okay
02:51:719 (1,2) - same as 02:46:202 (1,2) - ^
02:54:133 (3) - NC here ^
02:54:133 (3,4,5,6,7) - just a suggestion, imo 1/2 notes here looks plain so consider to follow drum here and don't just use slider, use some notes. prefer it as it is atm, cause I'm using it as a prelude to the refrain
02:57:237 - also highly recommended to start kiai with new note, so consider to make (7) slider shorter changed
02:57:237 - 03:19:306 - imo most plain kiai in whole section, almost no 1/6 notes. because it's the last kiai, maybe consider to make it harder or at least same difficulty as other kiai section? nothing changed as of now, but I'll try to find something to change ;w;
03:17:237 (6) - nc here okay

comment: pretty good, but some 1/6 notes not follow music well. there're some part that follow lyric, but there're some other that I not understand what it is follow. and there're much slider ended at big white tick. it follow lyric, but there're gap that could be filled because white tick is start of new beat in music. also check NC consistency, if you follow lyric, just continue your NC like that in whole diff. gotta do that later on :3


[Normal]
since there's so much overlap here, I guess AR (Approach Rate) 5 is ok for readability okay. owo
01:15:168 (5) - remove whistle at slider's tail whops.. x: done
02:42:064 (2) - remove clap at slider's tail okay
02:51:719 (1,2,3,4) - er... not really like this flow. put 4 somewhere else and change its shape? changed pattern. c:

comment: those overlaps... some looks good but some not also those stack ruin flow sometimes like 02:01:720 (5,1,2) - I prefer to unstack slider (2) from slider (5)'s tail I'm intentionally using the stack like this, cause she changes her pitch slightly :3

that's all, hope it'll help. if there's any question, just ask me

1. Are you sure about the blue colour? It looks a bit strange on this BG, consider replacing it with someone more suitable?
2. Remove Avril from tags, it's already mentioned as the part of Artist's name. There's is absolutely no need to mention it twice!
3. Try to find another BG? She doesn't look depressed enough on this BG + it looks like this BG is related to another album, if I'm not mistaken.

1. Use AR4 and OD/HP3. They will make your patterns more readable and they also work better because of low BPM. Moreover, this is the easiest diff, so settings should be a bit friendlier for beginners!
2. 00:21:375 (1,3) - please, try toconsider avoiding such patterns or making an Easy diff. This stack/overlap is unplayable for the easiest diff of the mapset. The way how tails overlap may stress poor beginners and this is too much for the easiest diff, imo.
   Note: 02:11:030 (1,3) - the same here.
3. 00:32:064 (1,2,3) - your flow is quite interesting, but here, the transition between (1) and (2) feels a bit forced. Why don't you try to improve it? Check an example and see if you like my pattern more! Example!
4. 00:34:478 (1) - isn't this spinner is too short? Yes, it is playable and rankable, but this diff is the easiest, so it may be a problem. Try to make the spinner longer, so beginners will be able to read and spin it properly or just replace it with a slider. Either way is fine, though I'd prefer the second one.
   Note: 01:40:685 (1) - the same goes for this spinner. Try to apply this suggestion for all similar patterns if it is possible!
5. 00:55:513 (4,1,2) - I am very unsure about the stack here. It may be a trouble for some beginners so try to avoid it or ask some beginners for their opinions!
   Note: I aim to make the diff playable for beginners because this is the easiest diff of the mapset. If you make an [Easy] - feel free to ignore this and some others suggestions!
6. 01:10:340 (1) - well, this slider is not bad, but I think we can make it better if we try to vocals here! Try to end (1) at 01:11:030 - and strat an 1/1 slider at 01:11:030. You'll have to remove 01:12:064 (2) - tho.
   Note: there're two ways to map it. This or this if you don't want to ignore the claps.
   Note2: 03:22:754 (2) - the same here! Don't make beginners cry, try to make the easiest diff more playable for them.
7. 01:25:858 (2,3) - beginners may accidentally hit (3)'s tail just because it is so close. I like the way how you organise your flow, but it should be playable for beginners since it's the easiest diff!
   Note: 02:51:719 (1,3) - the same happens here. Try to avoid such patterns when it is possible. I really enjoy the diff, but this slider confused me a bit at first.
   Note: 01:33:099 (1,3) - isn't this cruel? I'd try to make the diff easier!
8. 02:02:409 (1,2) - nice usage of copypasta. I am not a fan of copypasting, but as long as it works fine and not overused I'm okay with it.
9. 02:13:788 - try dragging the break here? Making it synchonized with vocals would be good! Same applies for 02:18:616 - 02:24:133 - 02:29:651 -
10. 02:55:168 (1,1) - too soon after the spinner. Players will not have enough time to recover after the spinner and probably will miss the circle. Try to remove the circle and finish the spinner at 02:57:237 - it doesn't sound bad, try it!
11. 03:40:685 (3,1) - your mapset has no Taiko/o!m specific diffs, therefore players will play your diff in their modes. Having 1/6 pattern in the easiest diff and even in Normal is quite weird, so I'd recommend you to keep your patterns playable for all modes!
    
    The diff was not bad at all. In fact, I liked your flow and patterns, but it seems a bit too complicated for the easiest diff and there're a few minor mistakes.

1. 00:18:272 (4,5,6) - as a player I don't think such stacks are really enjoyable to play. I'd prefer to see them unstacked in order to improve playability of the diff! Intuitively playable patterns are the best.
2. 00:32:639 - missed circle there, huh? I feel like you can place one here and it'll work with the music pretty good. Try it in action and see if you like it or not!
3. 00:46:202 (3,4,5) - awesome pattern! I really like the way how it looks and plays for some reason. ♥
4. 01:11:719 (5,1) - the transition here feels unnatural and it flows strange, imo. Why don't you try to move (5)'s tail in order to make the pattern prettier!
5. 01:28:961 - feels kinda empty there . You could map to the vocals here. Example! It works with the drums and helps you to keep rhythm consistent!
6. 02:07:926 and 02:10:685 - I've started to fall in love with the map and here. you suddenly ignore music! After lots of 1/2 beats players will expect these 1/2s to be mapped and that's why you should consider mapping them! Also, mapping them will help you to be more consistent!
7. 02:21:030 (5,1) - to be honest, I really did not like the jump here. Maybe it is just me or the jump in this slow part is awkward and confusing. Song goes slower and slower, so I'd rather use consistent spacing or anti-jump here!
   
   Great diff! Nice usage of 1/6 beats,impressing flow!

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi. I am really happy to see someone maps English songs.
Hi. \:D/ I prefer eng songs, cause I feel like I can map better to a song I understand. xD .. x:

[General]

1. Are you sure about the blue colour? It looks a bit strange on this BG, consider replacing it with someone more suitable?
   yah, I'm still trying to find a better bg, so I just left it as I had it before. but I'll change it with the background.
2. Remove Avril from tags, it's already mentioned as the part of Artist's name. There's is absolutely no need to mention it twice!
   Oh, right. fixed
3. Try to find another BG? She doesn't look depressed enough on this BG + it looks like this BG is related to another album, if I'm not mistaken.
   it's from the previous album, I think. and yes, trying to find one! >w<

[Normal]

1. Use AR4 and OD/HP3. They will make your patterns more readable and they also work better because of low BPM. Moreover, this is the easiest diff, so settings should be a bit friendlier for beginners!
   okay
2. 00:21:375 (1,3) - please, try toconsider avoiding such patterns or making an Easy diff. This stack/overlap is unplayable for the easiest diff of the mapset. The way how tails overlap may stress poor beginners and this is too much for the easiest diff, imo.
   guess there's no helping it, fixed
   Note: 02:11:030 (1,3) - the same here. ^
3. 00:32:064 (1,2,3) - your flow is quite interesting, but here, the transition between (1) and (2) feels a bit forced. Why don't you try to improve it? Check an example and see if you like my pattern more! Example!
   definitely feels better, changed
4. 00:34:478 (1) - isn't this spinner is too short? Yes, it is playable and rankable, but this diff is the easiest, so it may be a problem. Try to make the spinner longer, so beginners will be able to read and spin it properly or just replace it with a slider. Either way is fine, though I'd prefer the second one.
   replaced with slider for now, gonna change it a bit later on I think. not happy with the flow, atm
   Note: 01:40:685 (1) - the same goes for this spinner. Try to apply this suggestion for all similar patterns if it is possible! ^
5. 00:55:513 (4,1,2) - I am very unsure about the stack here. It may be a trouble for some beginners so try to avoid it or ask some beginners for their opinions! I'm forcing some friends of mine who usually don't play osu to tesplay regularly.. xb
   there was no problem with those stacks til now. .o.
   Note: I aim to make the diff playable for beginners because this is the easiest diff of the mapset. If you make an [Easy] - feel free to ignore this and some others suggestions! roger that, I don't think I'll add an Easy, tho. I tried and failed several times.x :
6. 01:10:340 (1) - well, this slider is not bad, but I think we can make it better if we try to vocals here! Try to end (1) at 01:11:030 - and strat an 1/1 slider at 01:11:030. You'll have to remove 01:12:064 (2) - tho.
   changed, not happy with how it turned out tho, gonna change it up a bit more later on
   Note: there're two ways to map it. This or this if you don't want to ignore the claps.
   Note2: 03:22:754 (2) - the same here! Don't make beginners cry, try to make the easiest diff more playable for them. changed, kept the stack tho
7. 01:25:858 (2,3) - beginners may accidentally hit (3)'s tail just because it is so close. I like the way how you organise your flow, but it should be playable for beginners since it's the easiest diff!
   I think this is fine for beginners. I know 3's tail is close, but the number is more eye-catching than a blank circle, imo. kept it for now, might change it when more people mention this.
   Note: 02:51:719 (1,3) - the same happens here. Try to avoid such patterns when it is possible. I really enjoy the diff, but this slider confused me a bit at first. changed here, cause I get how this is even more confusing adding 02:54:133 (4) - to it..
   Note: 01:33:099 (1,3) - isn't this cruel? I'd try to make the diff easier! naah. but changed anyway along with surrounding patterns
8. 02:02:409 (1,2) - nice usage of copypasta. I am not a fan of copypasting, but as long as it works fine and not overused I'm okay with it. :c
9. 02:13:788 - try dragging the break here? Making it synchonized with vocals would be good! Same applies for 02:18:616 - 02:24:133 - 02:29:651 -
   just wanted to ask how I can drag a break, but accicentally figured that out myself. done!
10. 02:55:168 (1,1) - too soon after the spinner. Players will not have enough time to recover after the spinner and probably will miss the circle. Try to remove the circle and finish the spinner at 02:57:237 - it doesn't sound bad, try it!
    want to keep consistency between choruses, so I replaced the spinner with sliders instead. owo
11. 03:40:685 (3,1) - your mapset has no Taiko/o!m specific diffs, therefore players will play your diff in their modes. Having 1/6 pattern in the easiest diff and even in Normal is quite weird, so I'd recommend you to keep your patterns playable for all modes!
    oh, I didn't know that. o-o fixed
    
    The diff was not bad at all. In fact, I liked your flow and patterns, but it seems a bit too complicated for the easiest diff and there're a few minor mistakes.

[Hard]

1. 00:18:272 (4,5,6) - as a player I don't think such stacks are really enjoyable to play. I'd prefer to see them unstacked in order to improve playability of the diff! Intuitively playable patterns are the best.
   unstacked 4, but kept 5+6 stacked
2. 00:32:639 - missed circle there, huh? I feel like you can place one here and it'll work with the music pretty good. Try it in action and see if you like it or not!
   oh, right. added
3. 00:46:202 (3,4,5) - awesome pattern! I really like the way how it looks and plays for some reason. ♥
   thanks. ;w;
4. 01:11:719 (5,1) - the transition here feels unnatural and it flows strange, imo. Why don't you try to move (5)'s tail in order to make the pattern prettier!
   tried to change it, not sure if this works better tho
5. 01:28:961 - feels kinda empty there . You could map to the vocals here. Example! It works with the drums and helps you to keep rhythm consistent!
   u_u since people keep mentioning this - added.
6. 02:07:926 and 02:10:685 - I've started to fall in love with the map and here. you suddenly ignore music! After lots of 1/2 beats players will expect these 1/2s to be mapped and that's why you should consider mapping them! Also, mapping them will help you to be more consistent!
   fixed
7. 02:21:030 (5,1) - to be honest, I really did not like the jump here. Maybe it is just me or the jump in this slow part is awkward and confusing. Song goes slower and slower, so I'd rather use consistent spacing or anti-jump here!
   stacked 'em!
   
   Great diff! Nice usage of 1/6 beats,impressing flow!

I would try to work on the Normal a bit more to make the mapset playable even for beginners. Apart from this you did a good map!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

[Normal]

00:19:651 (2) - In order to keep flow going, I would probably move this circle to 304x 168y
moved, a bit differently tho

01:09:651 (5,1) - I would probably move 5 somewhere else to avoid the overlap, as the overlap is pretty ugly.
changed this part with previous mod, so it doesn't overlap anymore. :3

01:52:409 (3,5) - ^^, only with 3 I like these overlaps, keepin it for now. :3

02:46:202 (1,2,3) - The diagonal "line" here isn't perfectly spaced between the head of 1, 2, and the head of 3. I would evenl space them out so the diagonal line doesn't curve a bit from 2 to 3
should be better now. owo

02:55:168 (1,1) - Since the spinner has little time for an average/below average Normal player to recover, I would remove the circle and extend the spinner to where the circle was timewise.
replaced spinner instead

[Hard]
I can't really mod this right now due to the heavy inconsistent spacing in the diff. At times it's on average 1.2-1.3x, sometimes its 1.4x, quite a bit its 2.4x, etc. I'm not saying you have to follow DS all the time and be exactly 1.4x, but at least make a general range to keep the map consistenly spaced, maybe like from 1.3x to 1.4x range of spacing.
oh, the original spacing is 1.4. for zig-zag jumps I switched objects around, which results in inconsistent spacing. (otherwise it wouldn't be jumps, haha.. xb)
I'm going to keep them, tho. I think these patterns are quite 'easy' to read cause of low bpm. plus, I use them consistently, which makes them predictable (imo).

Kiiwa wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]

1. Add tags "Pop", "Rock". added, thanks!
2. I would recommend unifying breaks on both difficulties. Having no break for nearly 4 minutes on a two difficulty set is probably not a good idea.
   I'll think about it, but I think it works well in Hard without any breaks.
3. 03:41:375 - 03:43:444 - These points are inconsistent with Hard. fixed
4. I would suggest increasing all inherited timing points' volume by 10%. okay
5. Honestly speaking, I think this custom softhit-finish does more damage than good. The default would suit much better in pretty much every situation I saw it used.

removed custom for now, might change it to something else at some other time, tho.

[Hard]

1. 00:34:478 (1) - Add clap. okay
2. 00:39:995 (1) - Add clap. ^
3. 01:28:961 (1) - Make it normal hitsound set? nice idea!
4. 01:36:547 - Add clap. okay
5. 01:40:340 (9) - Delete this note. There is nothing here in the song. Would also match with 01:45:857 - you're right. o-o' fixed
6. 01:40:685 (1) - Add clap. okay
7. 01:46:202 (1) - Normal hitsound set would sound good here.
8. 02:35:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could you make it clear and more attractive? hmh, tried. not sure if it's better tho.
9. 03:29:995 (8,1) - Spacing is too confusing. Please move (1) further away. fixed
10. 03:38:961 (6,1) - Spacing is too confusing. Please move (1) further away.

^

[Normal]

1. AR-1 nah, I think 4 is low enough for Normal diff (even if it's the easiest)
2. 00:31:719 (4) - Remove whistle sounds better. whops, fixed
3. 00:39:995 (1) - Add clap. okay
4. 01:46:202 (1) - Add clap on both ends? ^
5. 02:33:099 (1) - ^ okay

Good luck~

simplyparanoid wrote:

Hello from #ModReqs I'm far from expert, so take what I write with a grain of salt.

Normal
01:13:444 (3) - This sounds a bit off considering the previous two beats in this combo. I'd suggest either removing the repeat from the slider
or (maybe better) adding another beat on top of #2 so that it's more consistent with the other beats in the combo:
changed differently

01:29:995 (1) - In my opinion, starts too early. Even though there's a bit of a "skip" in the song, I'd personally just keep the other half of it:
does sound more weird to me if it's blank, I'll think about it

03:22:754 (2) - The length of this slider is inconsistent with the previous ones. A player playing on Normal would expect this to follow suit of the previous sliders. I'd split it up into a half-length slider and a beat like this:
I'd rather keep it as it is, cause it fits with the vocals and the beat

03:33:444 (2) - Same as previous, it really sticks out from the other sliders surrounding it.
I'll think about it, but keepin it for now, cause it makes 03:34:823 (3,4,5) - a lot easier to read

Hard
* A break. While it's a slow song, you really need to sacrifice 10 seconds somewhere and give people time to readjust their aim, which does get quite wonky if you're tense for over three minutes, especially for newer players.
since people keep requesting it, I removed some spinners. |:
* Background on sliders is not consistent with combo color (mostly noticeable with green combos)
of yourse it's not, I wanted all of them to be white. some patterns are easier to read that way.

00:32:294 (4,5,6,7) - Putting aside the fact that I passionately hate these kinds of beats, I think they don't really follow the pattern of the song and are like a fist in the eye of the entire map. I'd recommend replacing them with two sliders
it's the same double beats as everywhere else in the song. o.o

01:11:719 (5) - Make this the beginning of the new combo? Makes a bit more sense to me.
nah, I prefer NC on the long white tick here

Otherwise, I like this map and I'm looking forward to playing this once it's ranked. Most of these are minor concerns
hopefully I'm able to get this ranked, haha. xD

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ After a first look, wow. I'm new at this, and I've got to mod an 1/6. On top of that, it looks good. Gonna try my hardest~
hi :3

Normal

1- 01:56:892 (4) - Maybe add a circle here? If you decide to, then angle slider 01:55:858 (3) a bit better.
it goes unexpectedly well here.. done
2- 02:08:271 (1) - You can move this slider a bit to the right, which allows you to blanket 2 with it with a bit of moving around. The 02:08:960 (2,3) - will be pretty much similar if you do. nice idea!
3- 02:36:547 (3) - This might look better upside down, because you're still going for another note. It'll make it like a ladder (don't know if it was clear, you'll understand if you try it.
I think I understood it right.. at least I changed it up. xD
4- 03:08:961 (2) - You should cut this in half, keep the first part and add a circle where it was supposed to finish. It sounds better imo. you're right, done!
It looks SO GOOD :O

Hard

1- 02:42:064 (4) - move it just a little bit up, and have it blanket okay

I literally feel like **** at mapping after looking at this. It's good. Really good. Wow. This is one of the worst mods I've ever done, which weren't many, but let's hope others go better :\
nah, you're mod was totally fine. o_o you made great suggestions! and I've only seen one of your diffs, but I think your mapping is nice. :3 we just have totally different mapping styles. xD

Sorry for such a terrible M4M, good luck with this~

ninja-hands wrote:

Hi!!! It's me again o/
Your mod request has been heard! I'm also up for a M4M if you like

I really like this map, it is well done and it shows great promise. There are only few things I could pick with it, just a few suggestions really, but I guess I'm being picky again xD

Hard

02:37:582 - This break feels a little bit out of place because the music keeps building here, so it kinda feels like there needs to be a couple sliders or something low-key and easy to replace the break. Perhaps something like this: http://puu.sh/8g7ow.jpg
Doing that twice should cover the first break nicely, but move the second pair of sliders so they don't completely overlap of course.

02:43:444 - Same as above, try something like this maybe: http://puu.sh/8g7LZ.jpg, http://puu.sh/8g7QJ.jpg

02:48:271 - Same again

That is all I could really find amongst the awesomeness of this map, and that's likely just me being picky again Hope the mod was useful

SnickarN wrote:

From #modreqs~
hi there. :3

now keep in mind that i barley have any experience with these kinds of mapsets, so the stuff i say may be useless
but anyways, here we go~
no mod is useless, never ever. o:

[Normal]

00:57:582 (3) - You should change this slider into either 1 or 2 normal circles, I feel like having a slider there feels wrong, imo it feels better to click on a clap instead of letting a slider end do it for you, but thats just my opinion really
replaced with 2 circles and adjusted the following objects

02:16:547 (1,1,1,1) - I really don't get the point of these sliders and breaks, you should try mapping the whole section instead, and i dont think it will increase the difficulty of the map really
haha, I'd love to map them, really. but as several people pointed out it's better to have breaks in a 3minute+ song. :c

i dont have alot of problems with this diff, great job!


[Hard]

02:13:099 (1,1) - you should consider mapping the break here.
the diff was breakless when I mapped it, but it works better with a break in the end.

02:35:168 (1,2,3) - put some more space between these notes.
I kept the DS consistent here, so I just placed them differently to make them better visible.

i dont have alot of problems here either. amazing job on this!

yeah, if you think this is useless its probably because it is, i barley have any experience with these kinds of mapsets, thats all for me! cya~

Normal

This is difficulty would be really neat if not some overlaps. I'm not sure if you know what it is, but I'll try to do my best and explain by a picture:

I know the song is really slow, but I guess you could increase your AR to 5. Some of the issues would be solved just by it. :3

00:14:478 (3,2) - An overlap. People told me many times overlaps like this are unrankable. D:
00:17:237 (3) - Maybe NC?
00:32:064 (1,2) - I think NC is a good thing, but IMO it doesn't fit at (1). I think it will be better at (2).
00:34:478 (5) - I'm not sure if it something like a half-overlap. I'm not really sure, but maybe you could move some objects to make it more neat.
01:52:409 (3,5) - But it IS an overlap. :< Highly recommended to change it. D:
02:01:720 (5,2) - ^ As above.
02:37:926 (1,3) - And again.
02:42:064 (2,3) - And again.
02:48:616 (4,2) - And again
02:57:927 (2,5) - And again...
03:03:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - One big overlap. ;_;
03:06:202 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^As above
03:09:996 (4,2) - Not sure about this, but it isn't as important thing to change as the things above.
03:13:789 (4,1) - Again not sure about this part. But as above - not as important as the rest.
03:17:237 (1,3) - I advice to change it - really bad overlap.
03:19:306 (1,2) - You know, I guess you could make a slider instead of these two circles or move them because they are at the same position what doesn't really look nice here. But this only Bluddy's suggestion. XD
03:21:375 (4,2) - An unrankable overlap.
03:30:340 (1,3) - These two circles are messing the composition and the beauty of this moment. ;__; Highly recommended to change it because It's an overlap too.
03:33:444 (2,4) - Heve comes an overlap again. XD

I know you want to use always DS as it's possible, but sometimes it is just impossible to use it everytime we touch want. Especially when it begins to make overlaps which are unrankable. AlexaBM told me about unrankable overlaps (Thanks God there are people who have fresh ranked maps and are more helpful than BATs). But I see you make really nice Normals. :< Bluddy's jealous because he can't do it as you can do it. =.= #Insane #Bleeding

Hard

It's a really cool difficulty. I don't see anything to change, just some suggestions. :3

00:39:995 (1) - maybe make two following circles or one short slider at the same time and move your spinner for 1/6? I wish you know what I mean XD But it's just a suggestion. :3
01:44:133 (5) - Maybe add an circle at the top of the slider before it starts? Just like at 01:32:984 (5,6) ?
01:46:202 (1) - The same thing like about the spinner in 00:39:995
02:24:823 (2,3) - That anti-jump doesn't really fit here. Please, change it if you can because it ruins the beauty of this beautiful difficulty <3
03:19:995 (2) - A missing clap hitsound. XD
03:22:064 (6) - Maybe NC?

Krfawy wrote:

Hello. :3 I haven't known Avril has such a nice song. : o And after all I saw you're looking for a mod when you helped me. Maybe I could do something for you this time? Sadly I am not good at modding and my mods are not high quality or so helpful, but still - maybe there's something what would be helpful? XDDDD
Oooh, thank you, sweetie. <3 really happy here. ;w;

Normal

This is difficulty would be really neat if not some overlaps. I'm not sure if you know what it is, but I'll try to do my best and explain by a picture:

I know the song is really slow, but I guess you could increase your AR to 5. Some of the issues would be solved just by it. :3
I know.. unfortunately it might be too hard for beginner players then. but I'll think about changing it. s:

00:14:478 (3,2) - An overlap. People told me many times overlaps like this are unrankable. D:
it's actually commonly used. o.o well, not that commonly, but it's allowed!
00:17:237 (3) - Maybe NC? okay
00:32:064 (1,2) - I think NC is a good thing, but IMO it doesn't fit at (1). I think it will be better at (2). oh, you're right!
00:34:478 (5) - I'm not sure if it something like a half-overlap. I'm not really sure, but maybe you could move some objects to make it more neat.
I'll keep it for now, as it's not bothersome, but I'll see what I can do later on! (I'm lazy atm. ;-; ..)
01:52:409 (3,5) - But it IS an overlap. :< Highly recommended to change it. D:
yeah, it is. but imo this is fine for a Normal diff. plus, it's really easy to read, cause of white slider tracks. keeping it for now!
02:01:720 (5,2) - ^ As above. no change here, it's readable
02:37:926 (1,3) - And again.^
02:42:064 (2,3) - And again.^
02:48:616 (4,2) - And again^
02:57:927 (2,5) - And again... changed this up a bit cause I get how this is more confusing than the others.
03:03:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - One big overlap. ;_; figured something out that works waaay better, thanks!
03:06:202 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^As above changed this too
03:09:996 (4,2) - Not sure about this, but it isn't as important thing to change as the things above. this is fine as it is, imo :3
03:13:789 (4,1) - Again not sure about this part. But as above - not as important as the rest. uhm. but they don't overlap? ;-;
03:17:237 (1,3) - I advice to change it - really bad overlap.I liked it, but changed. >:
03:19:306 (1,2) - You know, I guess you could make a slider instead of these two circles or move them because they are at the same position what doesn't really look nice here. But this only Bluddy's suggestion. XD naah, I think it looks nice. and I wanna keep the rhythm consistent between choruses.
03:21:375 (4,2) - An unrankable overlap.It's not unrankable iirc. it's not even hard to read, especially since it's a different combo colour
03:30:340 (1,3) - These two circles are messing the composition and the beauty of this moment. ;__; Highly recommended to change it because It's an overlap too.I like this, too. |: I'll think about moving 1 to the left if more people mention this
03:33:444 (2,4) - Heve comes an overlap again. XD that's totally intentional tho. >:

I know you want to use always DS as it's possible, but sometimes it is just impossible to use it everytime we touch want. Especially when it begins to make overlaps which are unrankable. AlexaBM told me about unrankable overlaps (Thanks God there are people who have fresh ranked maps and are more helpful than BATs). But I see you make really nice Normals. :< Bluddy's jealous because he can't do it as you can do it. =.= #Insane #Bleeding
haha, you make nice Normals, too! You just have a totally different style than me, so they look different. :3 (which is good, variety rules!)
I'll ask around if those overlaps really are unrankable, cause I can't find an issue with playing them. And I definitely keep my DS 100% consistent in this diff. I'd rather remap the whole map instead of not using it. XD

Hard

It's a really cool difficulty. I don't see anything to change, just some suggestions. :3

00:39:995 (1) - maybe make two following circles or one short slider at the same time and move your spinner for 1/6? I wish you know what I mean XD But it's just a suggestion. :3 I don't know if I did what you meant, but I changed it..! xD
01:44:133 (5) - Maybe add an circle at the top of the slider before it starts? Just like at 01:32:984 (5,6) ? I'm just following the double beats, so I won't add another object here. ;-;
01:46:202 (1) - The same thing like about the spinner in 00:39:995 changed
02:24:823 (2,3) - That anti-jump doesn't really fit here. Please, change it if you can because it ruins the beauty of this beautiful difficulty <3
oh right. it matched with the previous pattern before I added the break.. now that they're gone I should change this, too.. -sobs-
03:19:995 (2) - A missing clap hitsound. XD oh damn. fixed xD
03:22:064 (6) - Maybe NC? keeping this, cause I'm sticking to the vocals here.

Really cool mapset! <3 Good luck squeeing Squirrel!

LVU Bluddy) o3o

Soggypancake wrote:

Heyo from #modreq
yay, finally someone reads it! Hi! -hugs- <3

oh how I love Avril <3, Anyways, really not much too add since its done really well already and I'm new but here goes. Only two small suggestions and its for your normal difficulty

why not add notes at 00:12:064 and 00:12:409 alright, added them!
02:16:547 and the next 2 I think you could make them back and forth (not sure what they're actually called)
Ooh, I think you're talking about a reverse? I'll think about that, didn't change it yet tho, cause I'm following the vocals and a reverse doesn't fit them there. .o. but I might change it later on!

Love Avril and love the song choice. Curious as to why you cut her face off from the picture She is so gorgeous!
yeah, she is. :3 but she was smiling on the picture and as -Bakari- stated already, this is a more dperessing song and well. happy face doesn't match here. :c

Anyways I hope this gets ranked soon. Good Luck!
that's what I am hoping for! >w<

Vhy wrote:

hi hi hi ~ Hi there! :3
here's mod from my queue

[Normal]
Check letterbox during break since it has a break oh right, fixed!
00:24:133 (1) - add whistle on tail like you did on slider at 00:15:857 (2) prefer to keep this silent, cause I want it to be consistent with other hitsounds (have none on red ticks)
00:39:995 (1) - imo i think adding whistle here is more fits instead of clap definitely sounds softer
01:07:582 (2) - unstack this note. seems hard to read. or NC this instead if you want to keep it I tested this with several players, it's readable, so I'll keep it. :3 (some panicked a tiny bit, but I think that's okay.)
01:13:099 (2) - same as above ^
01:28:616 (2) - not gonna make it curve? can be blanketed well with 01:29:995 (1) maybe nah, I'll keep the "symmetry" with 01:31:030 (2) - here)
01:53:099 (5) - i've seen so much overlap but this... seems to be worst orz. try to find another pattern since people keep mentioning it - changed :c
02:16:547 - you can lower the volume since the sounds become calm here. try 30%, it works well okay
02:39:306 (3) - same as 01:53:099 (5). quite hard to read didn't have any problems with testplayers so I'll keep this :n
03:12:754 (3) - this tail almost overlap with HP bar. better to rotate this okay
03:19:995 (2) - same as 01:07:582 (2) ^
03:25:513 (2) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:28:156 (1,2) - swap NC to follow your stanza if you meant to move NC to 2 - fixed
00:30:915 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:33:788 (4) - should NC this instead 00:33:099 (1) okay owo
00:39:995 (8) - NC this? nice idea
00:40:110 (1) - same as normal. adding whistle here fits more than clap okay
01:46:202 (8) - NC this? ^

i love this 1/6 beats. i don't see any problem to fix :3

good luck thanks!

Zero__wind wrote:

I've forgotten this map for a while and just now I opened the thread and saw
Wow that ammount of mods lol really hardwork
Well, but actually I mean that do you want a Insane diff from me?
as I'm thinking that the song hasn't really been weill presented yet by the current mapset

Priti wrote:

Hello Buttache Hello priti kiti!

General

1. Preview Point feels a bit strange, Maybe move it to 00:44:823 - or 00:55:857 - ? hmh, okay, moved
2. The settings gap between Normal and Hard is really big, consider making the settings a bit higher on Normal.
   I'll think about it. I want the Normal diff to be enjoyable for as many players as possible and since I don't want to add an Easy the settings are rather low. If it's too easy for standard Normal players they can enable HR. (that's enough, imo. xb) but since there is an Insane now, I might lower Hard settings instead.. I'll see. '^'
3. All Diffs: 03:41:490 (1) - Shouldn't this end on 03:44:478 - To match the vocal? matches better with them as it is, imo, cause it ends at the same time as the vocals

Hard

1. 00:24:823 (7,1) - Due to the overlap, it's really hard to read the proper timing gap between these. Maybe just relocate the circle so it's easier to read? okay
2. 00:33:788 (7) - Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound?
   added soft-hitfinish for now as I have to figure out how to add normal to soft sampleset. xD
3. 01:03:099 (3) - Maybe move this a bit so it looks like it's properly distanced from 01:02:064 (1) - ? This is purely visual but can look cool, Here is an example (Code is for the whole combo)
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   245,122,62064,6,0,P|230:158|230:198,1,80
   340,184,62754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   417,103,63099,2,0,P|384:81|345:73,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   253,257,63788,2,0,P|281:284|319:297,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   ah, true. changed
4. 01:39:995 (8) - Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound? okay, same as above tho
5. 02:02:064 (5,1) - Maybe move the new combo to the circle to emphasise the finish better? okay
6. 02:46:202 (1) - On head, Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound? same as above

Normal

1. 00:33:788 (3) - Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound?
   same about all of them as in Hard '^'
2. 00:55:513 (4) - Gameplay wise, this doesn't make sense. A cymbal crash should be a powerful thing you hit that should be high on emphasis, but instead you used a slider end which is a pretty weak thing when it comes to emphasis, Consider changing that so there's a circle/slider start on the crash.
   hmh, I'll think about it. I actually like how it works now
3. 01:06:892 (1) - Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound?
4. 01:12:409 (1,2) - Stacks in a Normal are usually acceptable, but they become really confusing when a portion of the approach circle is cut by the edge of the screen, making them harder to read. Maybe just space these properly so it's not as odd to play?
   I want to keep the symmetry with the previous pattern, but moved them so it's not as off-screen
5. 01:39:995 (2) - Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound?
6. 02:01:720 (5) - Gameplay wise, this doesn't make sense. A cymbal crash should be a powerful thing you hit that should be high on emphasis, but instead you used a slider end which is a pretty weak thing when it comes to emphasis, Consider changing that so there's a circle/slider start on the crash.
   same as above for now
7. 02:07:582 (4,1) - Switch combo locations to emphasise the finish better? nah, I prefer to match NCing with vocals here
8. 02:46:202 (1) - On head, Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound?
9. 03:07:927 (5) - Same issue with the emphasis as stated previously. kepping it as it is for now
10. 03:19:306 (1) - Add a normal-hitfinish ontop of the soft-hitnormal to emphasise the voosh sound?
11. 03:24:823 (1,2) - Stacks in a Normal are usually acceptable, but they become really confusing when a portion of the approach circle is cut by the edge of the screen, making them harder to read. Maybe just space these properly so it's not as odd to play?
    moved them instead
12. 03:30:340 (1) - Add a soft finish? okay

Priti wrote:

Hello Buttache

Zero's Insane

1. 00:08:961 (1) - Maybe end this at 00:11:375 - And put a note at 00:11:719 - ? dosen't sound like a good ending point to me
2. 00:33:788 (1) - Add a normal finish ontop of the soft hit to emphasise the vooshing sound? vooshing sound lol, good describing, added, also for the similar ones
3. 01:05:398 (1,2) - For the sake of consistency with the rest of the diff, move the combo onto the slider? nice catch
4. 01:08:271 (4,1) - Switch combo placement between these two? hmm, I'd keep this as this is kinda a special case
5. 01:39:995 (1) - Add a normal finish ontop of the soft hit on the head to emphasise the vooshing sound?
6. 02:51:605 (9,1) - This stream jump is a bit confusing when placing, maybe just regularly space these? it plays good to me, and symmetrical lol, will see more opinions
7. 02:59:651 (3,2) - I find this this overlap to be kinda unappealing, maybe redo the pattern a bit by rotating some of the sliders so you can avoid this? ok reworked a bit on these
8. 03:03:444 (3,1) - ^
9. 03:34:478 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off, Ctrl + G 03:34:823 (2) - To be able to perfect it with the approach circle. ok too lazy
10. 03:38:961 (3,4) - Blanket these? Seems a bit odd at the moment.

Really fun diff, good job.

osu file format v12

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Zero__wind wrote:

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44,136,196547,5,0,1:0:0:0:
196,280,196892,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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360,248,199306,53,4,1:2:0:0:
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68,232,200915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,244,201030,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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192,280,210340,53,4,1:2:0:0:
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Frostings wrote:

hi for M4M~ Hi! :3

[General]
03:44:478 - maybe spinner end here in all difficulties to follow vocals? changed since you're the 2nd to mention this. s:

[Hard]

1. 00:18:501 (5,6) - looks weird don't you think? maybe rotate slider like this
   
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   fixed
2. 01:12:409 (1) - finish okay
3. 02:27:237 (6) - maybe remove whistle? you only seeem to put then on white ticks, but this is only case of red tick
   ah, thanks. some of them always go unnoticed.. dunno why I added them in the first place
4. 02:47:582 (3) - whistle on head to follow your hitsound pattern fixed
5. 02:53:099 (3) - same here fixed
6. 03:22:754 (7) - clap on head? kept this silent on purpose cause I wanted to emphasize the vocals.. they're a bit less audible now, buuut I guess it improves gameplay. so changed
7. 03:24:823 (1) - finish on head? ^
8. 03:28:271 (7) - clap on head? ^
9. 03:41:375 (5) - NC to follow your NC pattern (like here 02:13:099 (1) - and here 01:06:892 (1) - ) oh, right. changed

[Normal]

1. 00:34:478 (4,1,2,3,4) - i think you should rearrange a bit to get last hitcircle to appear in the middle before the spinner. better for layout in my opinion
   nah, I'll keep it as it is. have a sligth aversion for anything in the center of the playfield directly before and after spinners.
2. 00:44:823 (1) - move to 256, 192. no reason not to (distance snap is still maintained) I'll keep my pattern here of starting where I left of before the spinner. besides same reasoning as above. ><
3. 01:12:409 (1) - finish okay
4. 01:19:306 (1) - clap on tail ^
5. 01:24:823 (1) - ^ ^
6. 01:40:685 (3,1,2,3,4) - also rearrange to center the last hitcircle? nope, same reasoning as above, sorry
7. 01:51:030 (1) - center ^
8. 03:06:202 (1) - remove whistle from tail? wtf, how did that get there. T_T thanks! fixed
9. 03:24:823 (1) - finishokay

sorry i got kinda tired at the end, maybe not all hitsounds were checked in Normal ;w;

hope it helps ~ It does, thanks a lot!

• 
  Nothing o3o

• 
  haii zero!

1. 00:12:754 (1,2,3) - consider making these jumps the same distance?
2. 00:25:168 (6,1) - distance out the same as 00:24:133 (2,3) - ?
3. 01:15:168 (1,2) - i think flow would be better if you did ctrl g o3o?
4. 01:29:651 (1) - there isn't really anything in the music that would indicate an SV change Oo, i know there is the finish but i don't really think that's appropriate for an sv change?
5. 01:45:513 (1,4) - This overlap really looks messy and may cause some readability issues due to how crowded it is
6. 01:47:926 (6,1) - try this, i think it gives some better flow from (5)
   
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7. 02:48:961 (1) - consider ctrl g? i think it provides some better flow and interesting gameplay
8. 03:13:444 (4,1) - make the spacing consistent with 03:12:409 (1,2) - ? (around 2.5)
9. 03:16:547 (1,2,3,4) - make spacing consistent?
10. 03:24:478 (4,1) - make the spacing here more like 03:18:961 (5,1) - to emphasis on the strong sound at (1)?
11. 00:36:892 (2) - whistle on head?
12. 01:43:099 (3) - soft whistle on head?
13. 02:24:133 - the sliderslide sounds here don't sound good ;w;
14. 03:41:375 (5) - missing a normal sampleset?

• 
  On a general note here, you may want to check where you're adding jumps, jumps are meant to be added in certain areas of emphasis so you may want to check that.

1. 00:27:926 (7,2) - maybe stack (2)'s end with (7)?
2. 00:34:478 - add note and drag slider back by 1/4 like you did here 00:39:995 (1,1) - ?
3. 01:40:685 - ^
4. 00:48:961 (2,3) - a weird place to put such a big jumps Oo since i don't feel there is any particular reason for (3) to be emphasized more
5. 01:28:271 (7,1) - i think you can stack this better lol
6. 01:32:409 (3,4,5,6) - the sudden decrease in DS doesn't make too much sense to me. since i don't hear a decrease in volume or emphasis
7. 01:45:513 (7) - remove whistle, sound a bit strange >_<
8. 01:53:789 (6,7,1) - for these jumps, see how (1) should sound more emphasized than the rest of the parts, however you have a bigger jump from (6) to (7) than (7) to (1) meaning you are emphasizing the sound on (7) greater, which does not make sense to the music.
9. 02:40:685 (1) - not a good place for spinner (for obvious reasons)
10. 03:05:168 (4) - place this closer to (2) for a better looking pattern?
    
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11. 03:30:340 (1) - finish on head?
12. 03:35:856 (5) - i think this is a better place for NC instead of 03:36:547 (1) - since it's on the measure

1. 00:15:857 (2) - make this slider 1/2 shorter? it makes more sense to end on the drum/clap
2. 00:31:719 (4,5) - how bout make this a slider instead, it makes more sense for me since the (5) is not very audible and it would make sense for it to be expressed by a weak slider tail
3. 00:55:513 (4,1,2) - this may be a confusing pattern for beginners since (4) is covering up (2)'s head
4. 02:48:616 (4,1,2) - ^ same idea
5. 01:06:892 (1,2) - this is arguable, however just for me, the antijump stacks are too hard for beginner players
6. 01:12:409 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:51:030 - pleez no copy pasterino
8. 02:27:582 (1,1) - important, do consider this. it makes it very hard to read when you stack circles under sliders because the slider will cover up the circle and make it hard to read. this isn't much of a case in hard and insane but easy and normal it is NOT recommended
9. 02:58:616 (3,5) - do u see the problem here lol? the (3) look like the head too and may be confusing
   
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Kibbleru wrote:

M4M from ur queue hi there! :3

[General]

• 
  Nothing o3o YAY! \:D/

[Hard]

• 
  On a general note here, you may want to check where you're adding jumps, jumps are meant to be added in certain areas of emphasis so you may want to check that.
  Yah, I know that, but I think it's just a certain part of my style here to have these constant jumps.
  I like how they play and go with the flow, while being easy to play, cause of low bpm and predictable movement.

1. 00:27:926 (7,2) - maybe stack (2)'s end with (7)? nice idea
2. 00:34:478 - add note and drag slider back by 1/4 like you did here 00:39:995 (1,1) - ? okay
3. 01:40:685 - ^ okay
4. 00:48:961 (2,3) - a weird place to put such a big jumps Oo since i don't feel there is any particular reason for (3) to be emphasized more
   just followed the movement here, but changed it up
5. 01:28:271 (7,1) - i think you can stack this better lol weren't supposed to be stacked (cause of different DS) but are now.
6. 01:32:409 (3,4,5,6) - the sudden decrease in DS doesn't make too much sense to me. since i don't hear a decrease in volume or emphasis
   3+4 follow the 'usual' jump pattern, while 5+6 aren't part of that, so I'll keep it. :3
7. 01:45:513 (7) - remove whistle, sound a bit strange >_< it's the same as 00:39:306 (7) - tho? added finish for now, sounded so empty otherwise.
8. 01:53:789 (6,7,1) - for these jumps, see how (1) should sound more emphasized than the rest of the parts, however you have a bigger jump from (6) to (7) than (7) to (1) meaning you are emphasizing the sound on (7) greater, which does not make sense to the music.
   It follows the movement really nicely, tho, so I'll keep it for now
9. 02:40:685 (1) - not a good place for spinner (for obvious reasons) I liked it, but replaced :c
10. 03:05:168 (4) - place this closer to (2) for a better looking pattern? moved a bit
    
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11. 03:30:340 (1) - finish on head? sure
12. 03:35:856 (5) - i think this is a better place for NC instead of 03:36:547 (1) - since it's on the measure prefer to follow vocals here since they're more dominant

[Normal]

1. 00:15:857 (2) - make this slider 1/2 shorter? it makes more sense to end on the drum/clap
   prefer to keep it as it is, cause of the beat at 00:16:892. I know I could put another circle, but it works better as it is atn, imo.
2. 00:31:719 (4,5) - how bout make this a slider instead, it makes more sense for me since the (5) is not very audible and it would make sense for it to be expressed by a weak slider tail okay
3. 00:55:513 (4,1,2) - this may be a confusing pattern for beginners since (4) is covering up (2)'s head
   I tested this with several players and turned out to be readable c:
4. 02:48:616 (4,1,2) - ^ same idea ^
5. 01:06:892 (1,2) - this is arguable, however just for me, the antijump stacks are too hard for beginner players
   some beginners panicked a bit whiel tesplaying, but since this is a Normal it's acceptable I think. It has to be fun for both at best.
6. 01:12:409 (1,2) - ^ ^
7. 01:51:030 - pleez no copy pasterino usually I don't like to copy-paste whole patterns, but as this is the easiest diff I thought it couldn't hurt to add some repetitive things so beginners find them easier to play. plus I changed some parts to avoid making it 100% the same, it's fine :b
8. 02:27:582 (1,1) - important, do consider this. it makes it very hard to read when you stack circles under sliders because the slider will cover up the circle and make it hard to read. this isn't much of a case in hard and insane but easy and normal it is NOT recommended
   lol, I can't believe I overlooks that. orz thanks! (I checked my diff for stacks at the end of sliders a while ago, cause I did it frequently, thought I changed all of them.. >__<
9. 02:58:616 (3,5) - do u see the problem here lol? the (3) look like the head too and may be confusing
   yah, but it's only in that moment. I think the movement makes it pretty clear where to move next, so I'll keep this for now. :3
   
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pretty solid mapset, good luck!
Thaaanks!

1. You should try to add a spin in the very beginning of the song, just like the one on Zero's Insane. It will build up a nice effect as the intro of the song and will make the playtime consistent for all diffs! :3

1. 00:12:754 (1,2) - Seeing this kind of symmetry on the beginning of the map kinda gives an off feeling for me lol You see, I kinda thought that the rest of the map will be like this with all straight linear slider>< So yeah, I don't think using this pattern at the very beginning of the song would be really good(whilst using it on later point won't matter as much), so I suggest to make either one of these or both of them curved. Doing something small like this should do owo
   here

   

   348,100,13099,2,0,P|336:133|348:174,1,74.6666666666667,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:20:340 (2) - The sharp turn from 00:19:995 (1) - to these played a bit uncomfortable to me orz With the natural flow from the previous notes, these one is a bit harder to hit because of it ;w; I'd suggest to move this note to somewhere along the lines of 00:19:995 (1) -, if you want to build a pattern, having this stack with 00:20:685 (3) - 's tail will do good, as the note will flow circularly ovo
3. 00:29:651 (1,2,3) - I find how these notes placed with a relatively close distance a bit weird with other notes imo. As example, the notes on 00:24:133 (2,3,4,5) - which also has the same vocal notes, are put with jumps on it, while 00:29:306 (1,2,3) - don't. So yeah, putting some distance on 00:29:651 (2) - will create a consistency between the notes that will be felt when playing; I'd suggest making it blanketing 00:28:616 (2) - hitburst should be good :3
4. 00:38:616 (4,5) - Is the off blanketing on purpose? Cause 00:38:616 (4) - looked like it is between blanketing 00:38:961 (5) - or not orz If it isn't do fix it since it doesn't look really neat
5. 00:42:064 (5) - A bit suggestion on the rhythm - Since the note starting from 00:41:605 (3) - is following the vocal, having 00:42:064 (5) - as a single circle doesn't really fit imo As the vocal is still stretched. Even with using a spin immediately after the circle, making it a slider will emphasize that the note is following the vocal(which is quite powerful at the moment). So yeah, you can try this rhythm http://puu.sh/8LW1y.jpg, or maybe even extend the slider to be longer :>
6. 00:55:857 (1) - Ah I don't really think that this big jump fit as it is currently imo. You see, the jump does fit, but I think it will fit more if the jump is between 00:55:857 (1) - and 00:56:202 (2) - instead, where the vocal suddenly gets denser and the flow get a bit more complicated :< So yeah, moving this circle closer to 00:55:513 (5) - will make the jump to 00:56:202 (2) - felt more, you can try putting it to somewhere around x16/y80 ouo
7. 01:09:651 (1,5,6) - hmm I personally feel that the rhythm would go like this instead of the current one imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1605880. It just feels better to click at the stacked (6) and (1) rather than the current; your choice though :3
8. 01:42:064 (5) - i really think that this will play a lot cooler if you use an antijump on this by stacking it on the end of the small stream on 01:41:719 (4) - imo. You see, as the vocal on this part suddenly stopped and gives an hanging feeling to the map, making player not moving the cursor will emphasize that effect better. Unlike on 01:47:582 (5) -, where the distance of (5) fit since the vocal still continue further, not stopping like 01:42:064 (5) -. So yeah, consider doing this as I think the pause on the movement played quite well and add more variety to the flow of the rhythm :3
9. 02:04:708 (5,1) - ee I think the jump here is a bit too small for this part imo. You see, you put a quite big jump(which fits nicely) on similar part like this on the first kiai at 00:58:501 (5) -, that gives an holding effect on the slider which emphasize the vocal well. So yeah, why not do the same for this one too? ouo try moving it a bit to the right more ~
10. 02:54:478 (1) - Since you put a soft-finish on 02:49:306 (2) -, I find that you didn't put another of it on this bridge part a bit weird imo, the finish seems a bit random :< So yeah, putting another sift-finish should do to make them feel more consistent; putting it on 02:54:478 (1) -'s tail should fit as this is practically the same time as the one on 02:49:306 (2) - :3 Though if you have other idea, it would be nice as long as you add it somewhere - otherwise the finish will feel off :>
11. 03:10:915 (4,1) - Basically the same one as 02:04:708 (5,1) - where the jump is a bit too small orz Consider moving this a bit downward or somewhere distant from 03:10:340 (3) - to make a stretchy feeling to the vocal :3
12. 03:41:490 (1) - Is the difference on the spin end between the diffs intended? If itsn't, remember to shorten it to 03:44:478 - so that the end point become consistent

1. I found that most of the placement of the notes are a bit off imo(i.e jumps doesn't feel right etc). So I will only point out some major ones for you; you should get my point after that and thus finding similar stuffs by yourself :3
2. 00:27:811 (6,7) - These two really looked standout as they have a really close distance with 00:26:892 (5) - because you followed the DS. It's actually okay, but it kinda make the map pattern less neat and may confuse people with it's distance :< So yeah, you can try to make this one a jump, as it fits with the previous repeating slider :3 And also as a personal note, I prefer to switch these two circles with a slider instead, it plays better imo and you can make a blanket if you try like this
   this

   
3. 00:32:294 (3,1,2,3) - I guess 4 of these is the most noticeable jump that doesn't really fit imo :< The sudden jump didn't emphasize anything on the song, either the vocal nor the music. I'd recommend to make the jump smaller or just put away the jump; space them normally, or if you would like to keep the jump, changing these circles to 2 sliders will help much as holding a slider will be much easier than clicking twice on a jump :3 So yeah, doing either of these should be good~
4. 00:51:719 (3) - This jump is a bit too big for these part lol I suggest to swap this note's place with 00:52:409 (5) - as it's closer to 00:51:375 (2) - and it will create a back-and-forth flow on the next notes :3
5. 01:03:788 (4) - Instead of having a sudden pause(which doesn't quite fit), you can try to just extend this slider to 01:04:478 - so that it will follow the vocal instead. At least it's better than leaving this space blank as you don't have any pauses like this on another places owo
6. 01:28:961 (1,1) - These two looked a bit too cramped. Instead of spacing normally, use a jump for 01:28:961 (1) - since it fits(change of rhythm of the song), and it will give more space between these notes; try somewhere around x366/y232
7. 01:45:168 (6,7) - Are these 2 being straight on purpose? They don't really look good together and the flow is a bit too sharp. Try something like this instead
   here

   
8. 02:13:788 - hmm I don't think the drag to the break works well here. It doesn't really emphasize the start of the vocal, as the vocal started since 02:13:099 - , the last beat before the break starts. So yeah, I think the natural start of the break fits better than the current owo
9. 02:43:329 - I'd suggest to add a circle here to match the rhythm you created at 02:35:857 (3,4) - where you used the purple line on the tail of (3) which creates a unique rhythm. It's good since it variates with the other 1/2 beat rhythm owo
10. 02:32:409 (1) - The repeat here doesn't seem quite fit imo, considering how you did the previous similar part on 02:28:961 (3) - , which you use a jump to emphasize the stronger beat with a clap. It fits nicely and plays good, so why don't do this one similarly? :3 I'd suggest to change this repeat to a 1/2 slider + 1 circle, and then you can put the circle stacked with 02:34:133 (5) -, that will create a nice flow imo owo
11. 02:47:237 (2,3) - These two would play cooler if they're stacked imo, just like 02:45:857 (5,1) -. As the vocal is practically has a same tone, stacking them will create a similar feeling for these two ovo
12. 02:51:030 (8) - Just a suggestion, but a jump would be cool for this. As it has a clap on it and the next note has an antijump; this two would go well :3 You can put it somewhere around x204/y72, above the 02:51:719 (1) -
13. 03:36:201 (6) - This jump doesn't feel right imo, it will be more fit if the jump were used for the next note instead at 03:36:547 (1) -, where the new combo as well as a new vocal line started. So yeah, just put (6) closer to (5) so that they spaced normally, that should form a jump to 03:36:547 (1) - ouo
14. I guess that's all the major things i found, the rest will only be stuffs to be neaten :3 Don't forget to check other places that I didn't mention that have a weird jump or anything else, you should've known which are them now! Anyway, the diff. is quite fun to play aside from the little stuffs I mentioned, so good job! owob

1. Wow the Normal is so much better compared to Hard! ovo I'll mention stuffs that can be improved here~
2. 02:51:030 (3) - Eh the flow for this one isn't good imo As the tail of 02:49:651 (2) - 's slider doesn't connected directly to it, and thus making it plays a it uncomfortable(especially with hd hr dt lol). So yeah I'd suggest to move this one higher so that 02:49:651 (2) - will flow directly to 02:51:030 (3) - :3
3. 02:26:547 (5,1) - hmm I think the shape can be improved here owo You can try making it like this
   here

   
   looks much cuter right :3
   

   319,234,146547,2,0,P|341:206|351:173,2,70
   259,293,147582,6,0,B|230:268|221:208|264:169|264:169|239:117|170:61,1,280,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:  

4. 03:07:927 (5) - Hmm the flow here isn't good too imo As (5)'s tail ended on the edge of the map and it needs a sharp turn to get to the next circle :< You can try making them curved like this http://puu.sh/8MWPe.jpg, I think the flow would improved there :3
5. 03:40:685 (3) - As it is the last note of the map where the vocal died down, I think it would make more sense if you put the tail not bended to the left, but directly down instead like this http://puu.sh/8MZbf.jpg
6. 00:37:237 (2,3) - ee I think the shape here could be improved imo Currently I think the direction it pointed is a bit random x_x Why don't you try to blanket (2)? That way the pattern could get neater :3
7. 02:13:788 - As of Hard; about the pause :3
8. The rest should only be nazi stuffs that I won't mention(I'll just suggest too much lol) :3 The diff is pretty good with lots of nice patterns and overlaps, accompanied by a good flow; i really like it

AnreFM wrote:

Yo Squirrel! ヾ(　´・∀・｀)ノ Hi there! =^w^=
Choosing random maps to mod and I found yours on your queue :3
As you may know I haven't mod in a really long time and it might get really sloppy orz oh, dwdw! sloppy or not, it'll be helpful. >w<
anyway

[General]

1. You should try to add a spin in the very beginning of the song, just like the one on Zero's Insane. It will build up a nice effect as the intro of the song and will make the playtime consistent for all diffs! :3
   true. definitely added the spinner in Hard, I'm not sure about that in Normal tho.. I wanna keep the three circles at the start, so I can't make the spinner the same length as in Zero's diff.. if I shorten it, it might get too short.. hmmh. >< added for now, but I might delete it again.

[Hard]

1. I found that most of the placement of the notes are a bit off imo(i.e jumps doesn't feel right etc). So I will only point out some major ones for you; you should get my point after that and thus finding similar stuffs by yourself :3
   okay, I'll try!
2. 00:27:811 (6,7) - These two really looked standout as they have a really close distance with 00:26:892 (5) - because you followed the DS. It's actually okay, but it kinda make the map pattern less neat and may confuse people with it's distance :< So yeah, you can try to make this one a jump, as it fits with the previous repeating slider :3 And also as a personal note, I prefer to switch these two circles with a slider instead, it plays better imo and you can make a blanket if you try like this
   this

   
   yup, went with this suggestion for now, I'm not 100% convinced that the slider feels better than 2 circles, tho.. I'll ask some people about that. :3
3. 00:32:294 (3,1,2,3) - I guess 4 of these is the most noticeable jump that doesn't really fit imo :< The sudden jump didn't emphasize anything on the song, either the vocal nor the music. I'd recommend to make the jump smaller or just put away the jump; space them normally, or if you would like to keep the jump, changing these circles to 2 sliders will help much as holding a slider will be much easier than clicking twice on a jump :3 So yeah, doing either of these should be good~
   imo, the jump works fine cause of the smooth movement. it's basically circular and I want to keep that. I had to stack the objects somewhere below 00:30:915 (5,1) - if I wanna keep DS, which makes thes pattern too hard to read, so I'll leave it as it is. also, I don't feel like sliders go with the music here well. yes, they are easier to play, but the double beats lose their emphasis if I have them on sliderends. :\
4. 00:51:719 (3) - This jump is a bit too big for these part lol I suggest to swap this note's place with 00:52:409 (5) - as it's closer to 00:51:375 (2) - and it will create a back-and-forth flow on the next notes :3
   oooh, right. changed!
5. 01:03:788 (4) - Instead of having a sudden pause(which doesn't quite fit), you can try to just extend this slider to 01:04:478 - so that it will follow the vocal instead. At least it's better than leaving this space blank as you don't have any pauses like this on another places owo
   changed, but a bit differently
6. 01:28:961 (1,1) - These two looked a bit too cramped. Instead of spacing normally, use a jump for 01:28:961 (1) - since it fits(change of rhythm of the song), and it will give more space between these notes; try somewhere around x366/y232
   uhm, that's where it's placed atm. but I get what you mean. xD
7. 01:45:168 (6,7) - Are these 2 being straight on purpose? They don't really look good together and the flow is a bit too sharp. Try something like this instead
   here

   
   yup, they are. it's the counterpart to the first bridge where I use straight sliders first and curved ones after. it's vice versa here and I wanna keep that (as I think it looks good. :3 )
8. 02:13:788 - hmm I don't think the drag to the break works well here. It doesn't really emphasize the start of the vocal, as the vocal started since 02:13:099 - , the last beat before the break starts. So yeah, I think the natural start of the break fits better than the current owo
   okay, removed drag o,o
9. 02:43:329 - I'd suggest to add a circle here to match the rhythm you created at 02:35:857 (3,4) - where you used the purple line on the tail of (3) which creates a unique rhythm. It's good since it variates with the other 1/2 beat rhythm owo
   nice idea, replaced 4 with a slider till the purple tick tho, cause it fits better
10. 02:32:409 (1) - The repeat here doesn't seem quite fit imo, considering how you did the previous similar part on 02:28:961 (3) - , which you use a jump to emphasize the stronger beat with a clap. It fits nicely and plays good, so why don't do this one similarly? :3 I'd suggest to change this repeat to a 1/2 slider + 1 circle, and then you can put the circle stacked with 02:34:133 (5) -, that will create a nice flow imo owo
    hmh, I liked both but changed this part now. (differently >o<)
11. 02:47:237 (2,3) - These two would play cooler if they're stacked imo, just like 02:45:857 (5,1) -. As the vocal is practically has a same tone, stacking them will create a similar feeling for these two ovo
    nah, I wanted to have a different pattern for these, cause the focus should be on 1+2
12. 02:51:030 (8) - Just a suggestion, but a jump would be cool for this. As it has a clap on it and the next note has an antijump; this two would go well :3 You can put it somewhere around x204/y72, above the 02:51:719 (1) -
    changed, differently tho :3
13. 03:36:201 (6) - This jump doesn't feel right imo, it will be more fit if the jump were used for the next note instead at 03:36:547 (1) -, where the new combo as well as a new vocal line started. So yeah, just put (6) closer to (5) so that they spaced normally, that should form a jump to 03:36:547 (1) - ouo
    yupp, true. changed!
14. I guess that's all the major things i found, the rest will only be stuffs to be neaten :3 Don't forget to check other places that I didn't mention that have a weird jump or anything else, you should've known which are them now! Anyway, the diff. is quite fun to play aside from the little stuffs I mentioned, so good job! owob
    Thank you! I'll chec the diff for other stuff once I have more time again.. T_T

[Normal]

1. Wow the Normal is so much better compared to Hard! ovo I'll mention stuffs that can be improved here~
2. 02:51:030 (3) - Eh the flow for this one isn't good imo As the tail of 02:49:651 (2) - 's slider doesn't connected directly to it, and thus making it plays a it uncomfortable(especially with hd hr dt lol). So yeah I'd suggest to move this one higher so that 02:49:651 (2) - will flow directly to 02:51:030 (3) - :3
   changed shape of the slider instead. :3
3. 02:26:547 (5,1) - hmm I think the shape can be improved here owo You can try making it like this
   here

   
   looks much cuter right :3
   

   319,234,146547,2,0,P|341:206|351:173,2,70
   259,293,147582,6,0,B|230:268|221:208|264:169|264:169|239:117|170:61,1,280,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:  

   prefer my shape here. D: cuz I don't like how the distance you have to move is shortened by this
4. 03:07:927 (5) - Hmm the flow here isn't good too imo As (5)'s tail ended on the edge of the map and it needs a sharp turn to get to the next circle :< You can try making them curved like this http://puu.sh/8MWPe.jpg, I think the flow would improved there :3
   yah, I get what you mean.. I actually liked that.. but I think I managed to merge both things.. ^__^
5. 03:40:685 (3) - As it is the last note of the map where the vocal died down, I think it would make more sense if you put the tail not bended to the left, but directly down instead like this http://puu.sh/8MZbf.jpg
   prefer the movement of my pattern here, keeping this. ><
6. 00:37:237 (2,3) - ee I think the shape here could be improved imo Currently I think the direction it pointed is a bit random x_x Why don't you try to blanket (2)? That way the pattern could get neater :3
   was totally random. xD changed
7. 02:13:788 - As of Hard; about the pause :3 yup, changed
8. The rest should only be nazi stuffs that I won't mention(I'll just suggest too much lol) :3 The diff is pretty good with lots of nice patterns and overlaps, accompanied by a good flow; i really like it
   makes me happy to hear that. QwQ

So yeah, I guess this should be all for now, hope that helped!
And as you may already know, the Hard still needs improvement as it currently is, whilst the other diffs are good and pretty much ready :3
And also I personally thinks that the spread between Hard and Insane is a bit big as how the Hard currently stands(not a really fast SV and not enough jumps). But yeah It may be just my opinion, though consider adding more jumps to your hard for wherever fits! ouo
So yeah, if you need help or if you have any problem, don't hesitate to ask me for a recheck or an irc mod, I'll try my best to help you
Thank you! Helped a lot.
I'm kinda confused tho.. cause some people tell me that Hard is too easy and some that it's too hard. Some say there are too much jumps and inconsistent spacing isn't well used there and some say I should use even more.. T__T''

Anyway, nice choice of song(Avril!<3), and it's pretty good for your first(real) map~ :3
Good luck with this!

konoshin69 wrote:

hello~ m4m from #modreqs ;D (sorry my computer is having problems so ill be typing the mod out on mobile hope thats ok with you
sure, I don't mind at all! (:

modding hard

remove 00:39:972 and put the spinner on its spot
(make the spinner a tick longer so it ends on the white line
I wanna keep this as it is as it emphasizes the vocals really well. so I don't see a reason to remove this, except for making the diff easier, maybe.

i think overall you really should fix alot of parts with distance snap, many notes are in a confusing placement
I didn't put a single jump without thought and (imo) all of them work well and are easy to play. maybe I can change something if you specify which jumps you think don't fit the music?

the circle at 01:06:892 should be removed and make the 4 slider before it longer
Why remove it? It emphasizes the loud beat there.
try keeping all notes within the grid
I'm not sure what you mean with that? .o.
If you want me to use Grid Snap I have to refuse as it is less precise and makes some sliders look extremely ugly when I can't place them as I want to.

take out 01:40:685 , move the spinner to its spot and make the spinner longer by a tick, do the same with other places that have this same placement
keeping this for the same reason as above, sorry. >:

also try and have a variation of slider speeds,
I'm using different SV for the part starting with the break, I don't see any other part fit for different speed, tho.
If you have some suggestions, let me know!

hope that helped ~ if you dont mind could you mod my map for m4m http://osu.ppy.sh/s/177064 ? thanks ^^
didn't change anything, so I can't give kudos, sorry! :\ but thank you, anyway!
I'll take a look at your map later on ~

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in my Modding Q
As requested, I'll go nazi on blankets let's kill them all! +__+

[General]

1. Do you really need 7 combo colours? D: yup. need 4 for coloured parts and 3 for greyscales. :3
2. Warning: 99% of this is ultra nazi, since your map looks pretty much flawless. feel free to ignore everything

[Normal]

• 
  
  
  Blankets that can be improved (full Nazi)

  00:14:478 (3,2) - trail is slightly off. move it closer to the tail of 00:14:478 (3) - (1~3 coords) http://puu.sh/9c4GQ/57c15fa55b.jpg
  00:34:478 (4,1) - head/tail are not close enough/trail is too far away (try to hold it in the middle of the approach circle | the trail almost hits the inside of the approachcircle while the head/tail hits the outside) http://puu.sh/9c4XL/5baf76f396.jpg
  01:39:995 (2,3) - ^
  02:30:685 (3,4) - tail/head mismatch, head hits the approach circle while tail doesnt http://puu.sh/9c5WO/c5749c828d.jpg
  02:43:444 (1,3) - clearly visible
  02:51:719 (1,2) - trail too far inside
  02:55:857 (3) - moves inward http://puu.sh/9c68e/41b17324c1.jpg
  fixed all of them! thanks!

1. 00:22:409 (2) - a little bit to the left for be in the middle of 00:21:375 (1,3) - ? don't want them to create a straight line, cause I prefer curves. ;_;
2. 00:46:202 (3) - eventually move this a bit lower so that 00:45:513 (2) - "imaginary extended trail" would hit it yup
3. 01:22:064 (1) - this doesnt actually fit 01:20:685 (3) - 's path http://puu.sh/9c5zL/cc6b6b72c0.jpg
   wasn't intended that way, but changed it up a bit so it forms square pattern.. kinda.
4. 02:01:720 (5,2) - no biggie here, but its kinda bugging me since the approach circle of 2 makes it possible for the player to think that 02:01:720 (5) - has a hit under it before 02:02:409 (1) - comes, but that is just me
   maybe it's not just you, but the majority was able to play this without getting confused, so I'll keep it. :3
5. 02:33:099 (1) - wrong overlap, tail off by x1 oh, fixed!
6. 02:57:927 (2) - overlap with 02:55:168 (1) - ? hm, okay

[Hard]

• 
  
  Blankets that can be improved (full Nazi)

  00:18:272 (4,6) - head is too far away
  00:21:375 (5,6) - not round enough
  00:29:651 (3,4) - off
  01:07:582 (2,3) - off
  01:13:099 (2,3) - less curve
  01:35:513 (4,6) - tail too close/head too far away
  01:53:099 (5,6) - tail too far away
  03:21:375 (4,6) - x pos is off
  03:22:064 (6,7) - round it more :> http://puu.sh/9c7hQ/9916cf9197.jpg
  fixed all as well! :3

1. 00:14:824 (2,3) - slightly off http://puu.sh/9c6kx/a0b83b7b98.jpg true. fixed!
2. 00:23:099 (2) - off by 1 on each coord it's perfectly stacked below 00:22:064 (6) - ;-;
3. 00:34:478 (1) - off by 3y fixed
4. 00:48:961 (2) - tail off by 1x
5. 01:21:375 (2,3) - i kinda dislike this random back and forth, keep it simple on this, ctrl+g and swap hitsounds
   changed for now, but I'm not entirely happy that it's not consistent with the pther parts now..
6. 03:31:719 (4,5) - ^ fixed
7. 02:02:409 (2) - i think the NC should be here due to the "fast" vocal change right
8. 02:12:064 (3) - wrong overlap fixed
9. 02:13:099 (1) - 236/116? naah, it's stacked with the circle after the break. (and I wanna stick to that pattern 100%.. >__<)
10. 02:39:306 (3) - overlap off by 1x fixed
11. 02:39:995 (4) - ^
12. 03:06:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd be happier if this combo would have the same idea behind it as the combos before (the low spacing after any combo ends 03:02:754 (5,1) - 02:59:995 (8,1) - ) it felt right and i think it should be continued here as well
    changed this up a bit, differently tho
13. 03:12:754 (3) - off by 1x fixed
14. 03:37:926 (3) - off by 1x 2y fixed!

I'll probably see this ranked soon, gl with it!
haha, thanks. <3 tryin to find a BAT with free time for a month now. XD orz

Zero__wind wrote:

I've read this, but Secretpipe didn't... so

1. 00:21:260 (4) - Stack it !
2. 00:36:892 (2) - I'd reverse it !
3. 00:38:961 (5) - Maybe Ctrl+G ?
4. 00:48:961 (2) - Same as above !
5. 00:54:133 (1,3) - Fix the bad overlap
6. 00:59:306 (3) - Ctrl+G'd fit better here imo !
7. 01:17:926 (1,2,3,1) - Shape of the parallelogramm can be improved !
8. 01:23:099 (5) - Ctrl+G that and I'll give you a cookie =3
9. 01:27:926 (2,1,2,3) - Reduce spacing or stack it a bit C:
10. 01:36:892 (6) - I'd blanket this !
11. 01:41:490 (2,3,4) - You can increase flow !
    Click

    
12. 01:55:168 (2) - I'd Ctrl+J , then Ctrl+H then Ctrl+G . If you make that , replace it ! It fits better imo!
13. 02:11:719 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G this !
14. 02:12:179 (1) - I'd remove this spinner and a note here 02:12:409 - ; 02:12:754 - and 02:13:099 -
15. 02:25:857 (2) - I'd Ctrl+J for increase flow with 02:26:892 (1) -
16. 03:13:788 (1) - Maybe blanket this ?
17. 03:41:030 (4) - Ctrl+G this ! If fits better !