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I love this instrumen :3
Ganbatte ne ~
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General
gray combo colour seems not really fit with this BG, try colour like http://puu.sh/57tno.png ?i change only combo 1, here is the code if you wantoh yeah, for SB. size of 1024x768 (in base_a1.jpg) is not allowed because rules from Ranking Criteria, you should make it become 640x480 or 800x600 for rankableCombo1 : 216,1,28
Normal
00:09:326 - SV changes is not recommended for Easy/Normal diff D: , i think you can use 1,00 SV with make slider art, it will be nice >w<
00:19:480 (4) - aaa you can make flow better here if you make a curve here. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077616 for blanket too with (3)?
00:45:788 (1) - no need to keep NC ~
00:52:711 (4) - i know it will be make break consistency hitsound but add whistle in this circle because flute sound? it's really fit ;-;
01:00:557 (1,2) - swap NC because stanza?
01:03:788 (3) - move to 148,124 for same flow with 01:01:942 (4) - , for spacing of 01:04:711 (1) - you can move it to 44,300 :3
01:23:172 (1) - volume 5% is not fit in this time because piano sound not really low as 5%, try 15 or 20% instead
01:23:172 (1,2,3,4) - why spacing increase here, it's unrankable D:
Hard
00:17:403 (2) - i know you did a blanket here but flow will be better if you move it to 144,264
00:20:403 - aaa add whistle? sound similar like 00:13:019 - and you should add whistle for every downbeat (long white tick) except when finish on downbeat,it's fine because background music
00:41:634 (6) - move to 164,116 for avoid bad overlapping. also for make nice jump, trust me >w<
00:53:172 (5) - try this http://puu.sh/57uDM.jpg for better flow?
01:04:249 (1,3) - swap NC for stanza
01:06:096 (6) - move it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077673 for avoid almost overlap and for better visual
01:23:172 (1) - same as Normal ~
01:23:634 (2,3) - ctrl+G this, for low sound like this, keep consistency for each pattern better ~
01:30:096 - increase volume 10%
Insane
flute have 1/8 sound here, start from 00:07:365 - and have sound 00:07:422 - . also in 00:14:749 - and 00:14:807 - too and etc, i'm sure you know where where and where since a lot here lol . idk you will add circle/slider in that map but just saying here ~
00:19:596 - add note for follow piano?
00:31:019 - add circle with drum sound? lol
00:53:056 (6) - i think you should keep this spacing, use 1,4 instead 1,5
01:00:558 (3,3) - try to avoid overlapping here
01:03:327 (3,4,5) - try to make its little far, it will be neat for visual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077731
01:12:557 (3,5) - NC because increase of spacings
01:23:172 - same as Normal ~
I love this instrumen :3
Ganbatte ne ~