1. Easy (1.93 stars, 197 notes)
2. Lunatic (4.87 stars, 924 notes)
3. Normal (4.1 stars, 340 notes)
4. sjoy's Hard (4.91 stars, 638 notes)

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  easy diff by me
  normal diff by me
  hard diff by sjoy
  lunatic diff by me
  extra diff by Syameimaru-Aya this diff just for fun~ download

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

随机mod，写的有点少

点我打开

“QQ图片20131124225400.jpg”改一个名字吧，用中文会导致导入不了。嗯，我也是受害者之一。 改了=L= 第二次犯这个错误了。。
01:01:799 (1,2,3,4) - 这也太简单了吧，跟前后的风格不一样啊，是我就摆成四边形 三个kiai的这里都是anti jump
01:14:132 (3,4) - 没包好 嗯改了

01:32:132 (6,7) - 跳一个看看 感觉不知道往哪里跳=L=
02:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:24:465 (5) 的间距没调好 这个用多变型工具做的 一点点误差应该没问题额

03:04:465 (4) - 折返有点多，改个spin出来吧 这是这一段的特点 全部都用滑条 没有别的
03:09:799 - 03:12:465 -->“你的HP在以每秒一格的速度流逝” 忘了加break了0.0

加油

1. Maybe, you copy tags from this map? If so, I suggest to exchange them for the following
   Kamisirasawa Keine
   Nostalgic Blood of the East ~ Old World
   imperishable night
   Starry Presto
   Halogy
   SumiJun
   Izumin

1. 00:22:465 (5,8) - aligh them correctly
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:24:132 (5,1,3,5) - stack correctly
3. 00:36:465 (1) - it is better to curve and blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:47:632 (6) - end at 00:47:965
5. 01:01:799 (1) - move to x:214 y:139 (stack correctly)
6. 01:08:799 (2,3,4) - I prefer 1 slider
7. 01:12:465 (1) - move to x:274 y:255 (stack correctly)
8. 01:33:799 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it is betterh orizontal patterns. it looks inclined toward left
9. 01:39:799 (4) - finish?
10. 01:56:132 (5,1) - avoid overlap
11. 01:56:132 (5,1) - move to x:178 y:191 (stack correctly)
12. 01:59:465 (4) - move to x:96 y:286 (^)
13. 02:12:465 (1) - move to x:123 y:261 (^)
14. 02:19:382- add a note
15. 02:20:465 (1,2) - stack slider's heads correctly
16. 02:22:049 (2,3) - move to x:166 y:330 (stack correctly)
17. 02:24:465 (5) - move to x:367 y:15 otherwise, this star pattern looks awkward
18. 02:46:632 (4) - move to x:210 y:157 (stack correctly)
19. 02:47:132 (1) - the stack of slider's end also looks awkward
20. 02:50:965- add a note
21. 02:51:965 (4) - move to x:290 y:235 (stack correctly)
22. 02:52:132 (5) - move to x:398 y:171 (^)
23. 03:26:465 (3) - move to x:350 y:131(^)

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
Thank you for M4M!

[General]

1. Maybe, you copy tags from this map? If so, I suggest to exchange them for the following
   Kamisirasawa Keine
   Nostalgic Blood of the East ~ Old World
   imperishable night
   Starry Presto
   Halogy
   SumiJun
   Izumin

you are right =L= I change the tag as you say
[Cucumber]

1. 00:22:465 (5,8) - aligh them correctly fix
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:24:132 (5,1,3,5) - stack correctly fix
3. 00:36:465 (1) - it is better to curve and blanket good idea~
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:47:632 (6) - end at 00:47:965 sorry, there have a strong sound on thiteline. red line is empty to a relax
5. 01:01:799 (1) - move to x:214 y:139 (stack correctly) fix
6. 01:08:799 (2,3,4) - I prefer 1 slider I think note is better here sorry
7. 01:12:465 (1) - move to x:274 y:255 (stack correctly) here not use a stack
8. 01:33:799 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it is betterh orizontal patterns. it looks inclined toward left fix
9. 01:39:799 (4) - finish? fix
10. 01:56:132 (5,1) - avoid overlap I make them unpurpuse
11. 01:56:132 (5,1) - move to x:178 y:191 (stack correctly)
12. 01:59:465 (4) - move to x:96 y:286 (^) fix
13. 02:12:465 (1) - move to x:123 y:261 (^) fix
14. 02:19:382- add a note sorry, I dont find why add a note
15. 02:20:465 (1,2) - stack slider's heads correctly fix
16. 02:22:049 (2,3) - move to x:166 y:330 (stack correctly) fix
17. 02:24:465 (5) - move to x:367 y:15 otherwise, this star pattern looks awkward fix
18. 02:46:632 (4) - move to x:210 y:157 (stack correctly) fix
19. 02:47:132 (1) - the stack of slider's end also looks awkward fix
20. 02:50:965- add a note I make them unpurpuse
21. 02:51:965 (4) - move to x:290 y:235 (stack correctly) fix
22. 02:52:132 (5) - move to x:398 y:171 (^) fix
23. 03:26:465 (3) - move to x:350 y:131(^) fix

nanahira is too addictive//////
~Good Luck~

tutuhaha wrote:

这么说吧，你现在这个diff给我的感觉是用hard排版方式加insane的节奏._. 不清楚insane的排版应该是怎么样额
所以这个mod我尽量在原有的排版方式上看看能不能搞出别的花样
然后你自己最好调节一下space的问题，有些地方太小了有些地方突然变大在这个diff里会给人一种时不时"抽搐"的感觉._. ....
00:15:799 (1,2,3,4) - 2和3换下位置？这边你也知道是强调音的话最好搞个跳 嗯 改了~
00:21:132 (4,5,6,7) - ^一样而且也加个nc吧 嗯 改了~
00:23:965 (4,5) - 这个可以搞大一点，间距可考虑^上面的跳的间距 嗯 改了~
00:25:799 (1,2) - 间距太有误导性了，就这么光读我估计看不出来这是蓝线节奏，况且这里的音没重到可以用这种大跳，再况且....你后面紧跟的1/4间距和这个简直看起来差不多了..........读图问题 这个是失误 滑条是在红线结尾的 不知道怎么跑到蓝线了额
00:27:465 (2,3) - 换成note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134651 嗯 改了 之前是觉得滑条结尾加连打不好点 随意改成滑条了
00:32:132 (5,1,2) - 间距，读图不清，你前面用的slider流线型摆摆摆摆到这里了然后突然一个跳这没啥但是后面的红线其实是有节奏的，你真的坚持要空拍的话建议拉远或者干脆就别空 嗯 改了~
00:38:132 (2,3) - 和前面一样换成note 嗯 改了~
00:39:132 (1,2,3,4) - 总觉得太近了....太近了....... 嗯 改了~
00:43:132 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面说的一样，这间距瞬间读不清啊 嗯 改了~
00:47:632 (6) - 拉到红线结尾 嗯 改了~
00:50:299 (8,9) - 换位置 嗯 改了~
00:52:965 (2) - ctrl+g一下会比较好这里有重音强调一下 嗯 改了~
00:57:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 间距，要是是故意的话在这里没有啥必要性所以还是搞成一样间距好了 这里也是失误了额 以前改的时候忘了改DS
01:01:799 (1,2,3,4) - 搞成大跳，你前面节奏那么密集而且流速比较快【间距比较大】这边突然卡壳...................... 嗯 改了~
01:03:715 (x) - 把这个节奏空缺补上，太坑了这块的节奏也不清晰还离得那么近真的很容易让人不知道该跟着什么走 这个感觉没必要 一个蓝线额
说一下这个歌我觉得在你不知道什么地方用短距离强调什么地方用大间距强调的时候你最好全部换成大间距短间距只有经验多了后才知道往哪里发不会让人骂娘还觉得特别爽._.b 嗯 确实是这样子0.0 我找你说的去试着改一改
01:05:465 (7,1) - 间距搞个大跳
01:05:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这边间距统一用1.2x
01:07:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这边间距再用1.4x
^上面说的就是另外一种调整方法，你可能需要用到这种方法多一点，调节两边的间距然后重音部分稍微拉远点就有突出的感觉了，你现在这个图有点重音分不清，用的间距都差不多
你先重新拿这个diff开一个新的diff，然后把你觉得是重音的地方标出来，重音的地方你先给自己定要统一大跳然后改，没标到的地方要是有大跳的话就全部先改掉
接着，像是这里
01:11:132 (1,2,3) - 间距保持一致
01:14:132 (3,4) - 01:14:632 (6,7) - 间距保持一致
01:15:132 (1,2) - ^间距保持一致
01:15:465 (2,3) - ^间距保持一致
你需要有个间距在你觉得这里不用跳的时候放上去，然后全图统一，在你这里我看到了1.2x 1.1x 1.0x接各种各样的小数点.............统一一下对全图美观有很大的影响
说了辣么多，先改吧，后面基本上的问题都和前面一样

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From pm req.

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[Cucumber]
General
之前mod的36s基本用不太上了，还是重写~
Beats
00:59:132 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏上虽然跟之前的连打一样但是这里的打击感却不一样，建议仔细琢磨这些打击感的问题，我感觉还是连打比较舒服些。 感觉这里还不错啊 因为稍微有点变化所以用了短滑条0.0 全用连打的话这图连打太多了有点单调的说
01:03:382 (2,3) - 说跟的音轨的问题，我感觉你之前是在跟的vocal，然后这个地方vocal还是比较富于变化的，完全可以跟vocal，这里却用两个短滑条组给带过去了，我不认为这是一个很好的节奏。。再好好考虑一下这里的音轨应该怎样跟。 我一直跟着鼓点，，前面那四个为了强调一下所以才跟的vocal
01:13:965 (2,3) - 这里做成三连感觉会不错，因为你之前三连用的比较多所以这里也可以使用。 没明白为啥要用三联0.0
01:19:132 (5) - 后边加节奏，要么加个转盘，要么加一串连打，我更倾向于转盘。 。。。。。。这个虽说声音是拖得长音 但是同时新的急促歌声开始了额 所以直接统一break 加转盘的话在哪里结尾都不合适
01:54:299 (2,3,4) - 此处的尾三连不合曲要注意 嗯 这里蓝线节奏是我自己加的 因为前后都比较急促 这里没那么多鼓点 我自己就加了个三连 我再考虑下
02:08:465 (1,2,3) - 上边说过了，不过我感觉如果所有地方都这么用倒也未尝不可，不过确实是跟音轨切换了。
02:19:382 - 这里加note，原因前边相似地方说了
03:03:632 (2,3) - 节奏抓的有问题，还是建议跟你之前那个地方的俩短滑条节奏差不多，就是这种03:02:132 (2,3,4) ，因为没有本质区别，本质区别在这个音后边，好好考虑一下这里的节奏感与打击感 换个花样而已。。。。因为都一样感觉有点无聊
03:05:799 (1,2,3,4) - 每个滑条都有四个音吧。。 是这样的 之前怕太难~现在改了
03:09:799 (4) - 我猜要是我的话这里弄个那种滑条。。我不是太能表述出那是什么滑条但是确实比较适合。本来是想弄个图的但是画太丑还是不献丑了。。具体请见0108对于这种音在他的dance with a number 里面的处理。。 明白你的意思0.0 我不会拉长滑条。。。所以索性把这里空下来 一会高潮更有突出额
Placement
关于排版我觉得还是看的有点乱，不过比之前确实好的太多。真的是细节出真章，好好再检查检查细节处的间距问题，这不是mod几遍能出来的，整张图即使打着没啥大问题，但是整洁度也是比较重要的
00:27:465 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不感觉这个地方的4连接滑条组的地方flow有一个急转弯外加间距突然增大么？我是觉得5,6之间的间距应该还是连打间距然后短滑条组间距可以增大。
00:38:132 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 恩恩 两处都改了
01:15:799 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 细微之处，这里你再仔细观察一下，我感觉间距仍然是有一个增大的过程。 改了~
01:12:465 (1) - 直接跳一下吧，不要stack，感觉比较合曲，跳到哪里去的话要考虑时间间距比后边的跳小，所以距离也应该是后边跳缩小。 这个没必要吧0.0
01:36:965 (2) - Stack到2上会好些？ 什么2？？
01:41:465 (6,7) - 跳开吧，这种缓和的节奏不要用太多，用在强调该强调的地方比较好，这里没有太多值得强调的节奏。 嗯 改了~
01:45:799 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这四个一组的梗如果要用的话吧第一个1,2也得用进去比较好，方向应该是1在2的下边，不过话说回来我感觉这里更像是在凑这个梗，从flow的角度来说这个梗flow足够去强调比较重要的音乐，而我感觉这个地方也不到那么重要的程度，曲子里面有这种相似的地方太多了 本来1,2就算在里面的额 飞kiai部分这种节奏出现了两次 我都用这样的小跳了
01:53:799 (1,2) - 按照方向上来说flow是有问题的，不过作为梗来说感觉还不错~ 这样应该没问题 首尾相接了 不存在flow问题额
01:55:799 (4,5,6) - 注意间距问题 故意用的大一些额 毕竟不是hard难度。。。
01:56:465 (1) - 容我吐槽一下这个滑条的形状，我不是sexy滑条党 跟你说我不会拉滑条么=L= 看出来了吧
02:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距可以增大一下 节奏不快 而且之前同样的地方也是1.0X的间距
02:48:465 (1,2) - 这么用的话flow永远都有一个sharp turn，如果不想强调这个地方就不要那么用 也是换换花样而已
02:46:465 (3,4,5,6) - 02:47:799 (3,4,5,6) - 注意着两个地方的间距，我认为这两个地方是等价的 嗯 换了
03:18:799 (6,7,8,9,1) - 不觉得这里flow有点危险么。。 全图这种滑条单点滑条 我都用的1.0X
后边的间距我总感觉用的变小了，也许是错觉但是再检查一遍是比较好的
03:53:799 (1,2) - 别扭的flow 这个位置失误了额 改了

That's my suggestions. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

axschiming wrote:

Hello

SPOILER

00:51:965 (8) - 00:52:049 人声在这里哦，不下个重音嘛？ 我基本都跟的鼓点额 她唱的也不重
00:59:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得排列可以做的更漂亮点，比如都弄弯一点点稍稍错开再包一下就成一个很好的梗了，我是见到这种一条线的滑条都会连打混过去的啦XD 就是让方便混过去啦
00:50:465 (9) - 能拉滑条到红线 也可以啦 不过我想把这个拍空下来
00:50:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果⑨拉滑条的话自下而上的flow会更好些？而且我觉得有点密了……KAIA建议这种五连可以带点间距 嗯 把脸大间距改了
01:43:132 (5,1) - 我觉得滑条后面可以立即接那个串 那样打起来不舒服
01:44:465 (2,3,4,5,6) - 柑橘这个跳可以再重新排排，561最好不要遮，那样接下来的8连散点会好看些，原本我也摆了下，不过图穿不上puu QwQ good！改了
01:48:465 (1,2,3) - 好近……太近的问题出现了几次，下面就不说了，其实多少还是看个人风格吧。 这是个anti-jump
01:56:299 (6) - 好远……感觉起伏不大，这个真的破坏flow 改了
03:09:799 (4) - 吉他声开了头就拉下去吧……或者换个转盘？ 这里有个很重的音 滑条开头没声额
03:45:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串有点密，后面的串又疏回来了……
03:47:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上 这里几处都修改了

[Others]

SPOILER

1.经常四个一拍接下来一个半拍在原地，那个我也觉得不太好，有点别扭OAO
2.很多串有点不齐的说
3.02:35:132接下来一段我柑橘可以缩缩DS或者减减滑条速度，伴奏弱了很多，跟kiai一个速度确实有点怪 虽然一个速度 但是下节奏就基本没用1/4拍了所以实在节奏上舒缓了额

以上都是个人意见，窝不会摸图:3
Good song and good map
祝早日rank

kamisamaaa wrote:

azuretwinight wrote:

[notice][Cucumber]

Placement

01:36:965 (2) - Stack到2上会好些？ 什么2？？
摸图摸晕了，应该是这一只01:36:299 (4)

感谢啊~你要是作图了随时都能找我mod~

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi 來遲了 >.<

[Cucumber]

1. 00:36:465(1) - Ctrl + G ?
   這邊也是個很好的跳點 嗯~fix 并且同类的地方做了一些类似修改
2. 00:41:132(1,2,3,4) - Note間的角度一致些會比較好play 嗯 舒服了~
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:16:965(4,5) - 前面的Note / slider都有跟到vocal , 這邊白線的vocal上也應該有個打點
   
   EX

   [img]http://puu.sh/5ASJS
   http://puu.sh/5ASKS[/img]
   (純屬舉例)
   这个感觉不是很好
   類似這樣的,既可以跟到3連打,同時在vocal處也能有打點的梗
4. 01:06:465(4,5,6) - 3連打的位置應該在01:06:632 - 01:06:799 -
   把(5)移到01:06:715 - 的位置較符節奏 01:06:715在这里完全没听到节奏点额
5. 02:04:132(6) - Ctrl + G ?
   感覺也是個能放反向跳梗的點 嗯~这种建议很赞！
6. 02:22:299 - 同01:16:965(4,5) - 的建議
7. 02:41:465 - , 02:42:465 - 這兩個同時Ctrl + G如何?
   這段雖然沒有較高昂的跳點
   不過這種的對稱梗 , 個人覺得和這邊挺適合的 这里也改了~
8. 03:01:465(3) -
   Set on x:184 | y:52 ?
   flow看起來會圓一些 没改 这个是为了包住一个点
9. 03:48:632(2) - 在03:48:799 - 有個很強的vocal , 感覺還是連打 , 用迴轉帶過有點可惜o3o
   在這邊設個Note , 然後03:48:799 - 設個3連打或1/4迴轉滑條如何 ? 非常棒！
10. 嗯,剛拿到這張圖聽了一下
    感覺節奏什麼的好像都還可以 , 於是自己打了2次
    就Insane的排版而言 , 移動部分玩起來感覺略拘束 嗯确实不太放得开

梗的部分多打圖 , 多開別的圖來看
然後想一想這個mapper為什麼要這麼放? 這樣放的效果感覺如何? 之類的問題 , 也是個進步的方式
找到喜歡的好梗 , 下次就可以拿出來用 , 或是自己再改個型之類的
找到不喜歡的梗 , 也是可以分析到"我覺得這不是很好 , 因為........."之類的
我不太會表達 -o-
總之 , 就是多感覺音樂和map之間的關係吧

大約先這樣吧

Good luck ~

smallboat wrote:

Hi,小黃瓜(應該沒叫錯?),PM forum req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

直線滑條稍多，00:19:132 (1,2,3) 像這種不是一個很好的pattern，00:44:465 (1) 這段也是。
都换了

[Cucumber]

00:13:799 (1) ~ 00:18:299 (3) - 感覺這段蠻單調的，因為都是1點完，2折返，3再回到1旁邊，這樣重複很多梗，顯得不太有趣0.0这个感觉还是蛮有意思额
00:19:132 (1) - 一長條+圈+一長條這樣的pattern，我覺得不是很好看，現在滑條幾乎都是用圓弧的，較平滑類。 嗯 换成圆弧了
00:19:465 (3,4) - 3到4這種直條顯然不是一個很好的pattern，建議能應用Blanket，像這樣吧:

SPOILER

00:20:132 (6,7) - 同上 这两个没做
00:22:465 (1,2,3,4) - 這可以跟前面對稱，1疊到00:22:465 (1) ，234與00:21:965 (2,3,4) 對稱，試試:

SPOILER

做了其他更改
00:26:965 (7) - 疊在3上還比較好flow，放之前那邊蠻扭。 恩恩~改了
00:30:799 (3,4) - 可以成對稱圖形，3跟1對稱，4就疊在4上，變這樣:

SPOILER

这个好棒！
00:37:632 (7) - (224|180)? 覺得67之間有拉長一點音，放遠點，個人意見。 改了一个小跳~
00:37:799 (1) - 連到2345的這個pattern不是很美觀，建議尾端跟2345成個弧度，看起來也"平滑"。

SPOILER

改了
00:38:465 (6) - (320|144)，可跟7對稱(用180度看)。 感觉没啥必要额
00:40:965 (4) - 移到(448|120)較flow，也成一個這樣的圖形:

SPOILER

感觉做成圆的没啥意思0.0而且不是很合适
00:44:465 (1) - 這段黃色的圈都刪了，大推薦用這節奏，另外滑條全改曲線，直的不太符節奏。

SPOILER

00:48:132 (7,2) - 這兩個可以上下對稱使較美觀。 吧7ctrl+g了
00:53:465 (3) - 放到圓弧中間吧，移到(264|124)左右，接著ctrl+g，覺得不錯。 很赞！
00:55:465 (2,3) - Ctrl+g 一下似乎更順手。 恩恩~
01:07:299 (2,4) - 應該是可以上下對稱，較美觀。 对称啦
01:09:799 (1) - 跟前面7有個鈍點，所以這個可以再跳遠一點。要調的話後面2的也要變動一下。 好的~
01:18:799 (4,5) - ctrl+g 下，比較順手。 真心合适
01:30:465 (5) - 丟到(196|244)比較好flow。 改过去了
01:32:299 (7) - 試試疊在 01:30:799 (6) , 之前這樣疊，點起來沒什麼感覺。 改啦
01:37:465 (7) - 放遠一點，移到(184|224)看看，蠻flow。 改啦
01:40:799 (2) - 跟1一起看不太美觀，要不要做個對稱:

SPOILER

做了个别的方向的对称~
01:41:465 (6) - 推荐丟到(256|23)比較flow。 改了~
01:56:132 (5) - 推荐丟到(400|184)比較flow。 改了~
01:59:632 (5) - 這邊太擠有點難讀，疊在01:59:132 (1) 上吧。 这个觉得没必要 读图还好
02:13:798 (1) - 對Blanket，丟到(492|288)試試。 改了~
02:14:798 (7) - 這個弄成圓弧Blanket02:15:132 (1) 滑條頭還比較好flow。 改了~
02:36:465 (1,2) - 放這樣有股容易miss的感覺，尤其又兩次折返，第一次玩有點難判定要折一次還是兩次。 这里不是很想改
02:47:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 推薦這幾個點可以排出個正六邊形梗，試試看。把1~3微調下。 这个不改了 因为后面两个和这个配合的
02:49:799 (3,6) - 感覺後面的白線可以加個note 这里故意空了一下额 搞个变化~
02:56:465 (1,1) - 這邊多折返的part，感覺有點單調，個人意見。 这一段全部用的滑条 不用折返担心太难了 我在考虑下好了
03:01:132 (2,3) - 建議變速時要NC，這邊太多速度變化了，建議區別下。 恩改了
03:03:632 (2,3) - 可以對稱。 是对称啊0.0
03:04:465 (4) - 建議這個DEL，以多折返帶過顯得不太好玩。改成了变态的1/8变态跳
03:11:132 (1,2,3,4) - 從這邊開始加白線，以antijump設置還不錯。 恩恩 好建议 之前想过这里一直没有好办法
03:21:799 (1,2,3,4) - 測試了一下，這段真的蠻扭手的，建議間距可在大一點。改了
03:26:132 (2,3) - 同一弧度? 感覺3可以變化一下不然有點奇怪。不知道怎么搞
03:32:465 (1,2,3,4) - 這四個稍微間距放大點，因為這四個唱的音都有拉長，很適合做個跳。 这里想收束了 因为后面节奏慢了
03:42:049 (2) - 作個小跳，(100|149)。
03:44:715 (2) - 同上 这两个改了~

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.希望我的mod對你有用.

tellertheworld wrote:

Form my messages.

[cucumber]

open

^:
紅直線距離不平等
紅方內的一開始的SLIDER角度有分別
令人難以捉摸 (試了多次都打不了) 这个不应该啊0.0 我做的时候是做了前三个 然后使用复制加旋转相同的角度做的 距离应该是一样的

00:16:299 (4) - 放在X:210 Y:67 这个是为啥额 不过我发现两个太偶的距离有一点点不一样 然后把2更改了一下~
00:17:298 (2) - 角度有問題 可以向上一點 这个一样是复制旋转的 角度应该没问题
00:19:799 (4,5,6) - 整個X:-60 Y:-10 感觉没必要额
00:21:465 (3) - 放在 X:203 Y:71 和之前一样 虽然没照你说的改 但是自己调整了一下
00:36:465 (1) - CTRL + G /調整角度和方向 这个是故意做的反向 根据音乐的原因额
00:41:632 (4) - 和 00:29:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 的方法有點不同 用的不同的摆放额
00:58:465 (5) - 彎度有問題 这个是为了与下一个note做blanket 不过稍微调整了一下~漂亮了一些（应该）
01:17:299 (5) - 與01:16:965 (4) - 我反彈次數不同 難以捉摸 (這個無關緊重)
02:22:299 (4,5) - ^


可以試試這個^ 明白你的意思 之前也考虑了很久 但是感觉你这样很密集的音呗转盘带过去了也不是很合适 所以就用了不一样的往返 之后说不定会改这里~

01:37:465 (7) - CTRL+G 感觉不好额
01:41:799 (1) - 放在X:251 Y:109 原因是啥额 这是和note blanket的 而且开头用的DS准确距离额
02:52:465 (1) - 放在X:187 Y:84 同上


^試試這個排列 / 自己修改節奏

03:09:882 - 加個spinner 至03:11:132 - 好吧~好几个人这么说了 加了个减音转盘~
03:25:799 (1) - 放在X:350 Y:284
03:26:799 (4) - 放在X:270 Y:100 ？ 给个原因啊0.0 要不然感觉莫名其妙额


另外:
02:39:132 (1,2) - 整體上這個難度 不應該用太長的SLIDER (可以分拆成4/4的SLIDER加圈) 这个是背景那个音啊 而且这一段我都用的比较舒缓的节奏

祝你成功~

• 
  [General]
  Design的地方统一一下 各个diff都不一样的

• 
  [Easy]

1. WIP skip

• 
  [Normal]

1. 你这难度finish怎有点奇怪的啊 单单whistle也不够啊 补fin我给你个示例 其他难度也可以做参考
   
   SPOILER
2. 00:57:799 (1) - head
3. 01:03:132 (1) - head
4. 01:08:465 (1) - head
5. 01:13:799 (1) - head
6. 类似的你自己补吧
7. ODHP+1
8. 00:29:799 (1,2) - 低难度注意美观
9. 01:57:799 (1,2) - 有点莫名 你前面类似的节奏vocal全跟这里直接就两个长滑条带过去了
10. 02:59:132 (1) - 太多次啦 分一个出来
11. 03:04:465 (5) - ^
12. 03:22:465 (4) - 我还是建议你滑条从03:22:299开始 03:22:799结束

• 
  [死猪哎's Hard]

1. 教练我也要复制粘贴
2. 00:23:965 (1,1) - 两个NC不用吧 第二个消掉
3. 00:40:465 (1) - 包
4. 00:43:132 (1) - finish at 00:44:132
5. 01:12:132 (4) - 咦 没whistle？
6. 01:17:799 (1,2,3,4) - 有点吵 60%?
7. 01:48:466 (1) - finish at 01:49:465
8. 02:23:132 (1,2,3,4) - 跟上面一样
9. 03:46:798 (1) - nonc

• 
  [Insane]

1. 感觉kiai跟前面的质量差了一截
2. 00:37:799 (1,2,3,5) - 这里节奏音调都和前面一样间距却大了（
3. 00:43:465 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里不适合连续三连啊而且鼓也没有这么多三连音 我建议是从这里00:43:299开始单点+三连+四个单点
4. 00:58:465 (5) - NC
5. 00:59:132 (1,2,3,4) - 你搞个这样的也比原来的好啊
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:30:132 (4,5) - 用120°转来搞
7. 01:35:799 (1,2,3,4) - 你这跳这么大很莫名啊 音乐也不激情
8. 最精彩的吉他solo段没做出什么特点来...
9. 03:23:132 最后的kiai我还是建议放在这里 鼓在这里开始重起来音乐也开始激昂
10. 03:57:965 (1) - spinner可以放在这里03:57:882 随你喜好吧

• 
  [Aya's Lunatic]

1. 00:23:965 这里的两个真的要忽略掉？
2. 主歌的sv有点不合曲
3. 01:17:799 (2) - 尾巴也加个fin
4. 02:23:132 (1) - ^
5. 吉他段遮挡真是瞎了
6. 我觉得做得很好啊 哪用remap

tellertheworld wrote:

Form my messages.





[Ayaya]

open

p.s: ( 個別注意事項 )

感覺上這個遊戲節奏有點奇怪
一開始的SV明顯的太慢 (00:24:382 - 開始)
在突然明顯性加速和減速
顯然太難跟
去到00:57:799 - (kiai) 感覺才好了一點

00:17:132 (2) - 放在X:411 Y:331不
00:18:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - 重新調整角度 根本不能FLOW不改
00:21:632 (6) - 放在x:271 y:160 左右你连着前面看，这个不太想改
00:25:632 (4) - 放在 x:497 y:85不改
00:29:632 (2) - 減速太快 (距離太近)怀疑说错地方，不过看了看前后，好像没啥
00:41:632 (6) - ^ (這個有誤讀)不太想改，应该还是能读
00:59:632 (2) - ^这是要怎样才能误读。
01:45:632 (2) - ^不改
01:46:965 (2) - ^ (這個有誤讀)虽然把note往上拉点的话好像很帅，不过还是不改
02:14:965 (4) - ^不改
02:15:632 (6) - ^不改
02:16:132 (8) - ^不改



00:58:965 (4) - 放在 x:116 y:44这里想给人一种往右移动的的感觉，不改。

01:01:715 (6) - 誤讀好像确实很坏，但我想给人一种来到新节奏段的感觉，所以要点距离
01:11:049 (3) - ^不改
01:14:465 (4,5,6,7) - ^改了下，不过好像更让人头疼想喷了
01:15:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^不改
01:30:215 (2,3,4) - ^不改
02:07:049 (1) - ^为什么连这都要指一下
02:10:382 (6) - ^你是多讨厌切指
02:17:715 (5) - ^还是说是讨厌这种梗
02:21:549 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^。我反正是不想改了
03:29:715 (4) - ^。这梗有这么让人讨厌么，我觉得不坏啊

01:04:299 (5) - 放在 x:119 y:310改了和note整体看起来就不好看了
01:09:632 (1) - 放在 x:117 y:224思考了一下，这是个三角形和180°转，改了还好看吗
01:17:632 (3,1) - 之間的距離和01:16:632 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 一樣不改，改了后整体看到的角度不喜欢
02:54:965 (4) - 放在x:317 y:264为何要叠，叠了后角度好看吗，间距还是一样吗。不如四个整体改不过这样不合我意
03:23:632 (2) - 放在x:90 y:66好像不错但不如往左摆不过不知为啥我觉得现在这样很赞其实我还是往右拉了一格
03:24:299 (5) - 放在x:179 y:153不改
03:28:965 (2) - 放在 x:363 y:342不改


整體上問題有點嚴重
有點不太嚴重沒說
抱歉的說一句
你可以在有需要之下remap.还是不remap，等喷多点多认识了自己作图的弱点和错误再进行进一步修炼。

當然 你remap的話 作為你的modder
我有需要為此負責
考慮之後通知我吧~

祝你成功~

Awaken wrote:

Mod From Request

• 
  [General]
  Design的地方统一一下 各个diff都不一样的

• 
  [Easy]

1. WIP skip

• 
  [Normal]

1. 你这难度finish怎有点奇怪的啊 单单whistle也不够啊 补fin我给你个示例 其他难度也可以做参考
   
   SPOILER
2. 00:57:799 (1) - head
3. 01:03:132 (1) - head
4. 01:08:465 (1) - head
5. 01:13:799 (1) - head
6. 类似的你自己补吧
7. ODHP+1
8. 00:29:799 (1,2) - 低难度注意美观
9. 01:57:799 (1,2) - 有点莫名 你前面类似的节奏vocal全跟这里直接就两个长滑条带过去了
10. 02:59:132 (1) - 太多次啦 分一个出来
11. 03:04:465 (5) - ^
12. 03:22:465 (4) - 我还是建议你滑条从03:22:299开始 03:22:799结束

• 
  [死猪哎's Hard]

1. 教练我也要复制粘贴
2. 00:23:965 (1,1) - 两个NC不用吧 第二个消掉
3. 00:40:465 (1) - 包
4. 00:43:132 (1) - finish at 00:44:132
5. 01:12:132 (4) - 咦 没whistle？
6. 01:17:799 (1,2,3,4) - 有点吵 60%?
7. 01:48:466 (1) - finish at 01:49:465
8. 02:23:132 (1,2,3,4) - 跟上面一样
9. 03:46:798 (1) - nonc

• 
  [Insane]

1. 感觉kiai跟前面的质量差了一截
2. 00:37:799 (1,2,3,5) - 这里节奏音调都和前面一样间距却大了（
3. 00:43:465 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里不适合连续三连啊而且鼓也没有这么多三连音 我建议是从这里00:43:299开始单点+三连+四个单点
4. 00:58:465 (5) - NC
5. 00:59:132 (1,2,3,4) - 你搞个这样的也比原来的好啊
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:30:132 (4,5) - 用120°转来搞
7. 01:35:799 (1,2,3,4) - 你这跳这么大很莫名啊 音乐也不激情
8. 最精彩的吉他solo段没做出什么特点来...
9. 03:23:132 最后的kiai我还是建议放在这里 鼓在这里开始重起来音乐也开始激昂
10. 03:57:965 (1) - spinner可以放在这里03:57:882 随你喜好吧

• 
  [Aya's Lunatic]

1. 00:23:965 这里的两个真的要忽略掉？队
2. 主歌的sv有点不合曲。想了想，还是懒了。
3. 01:17:799 (2) - 尾巴也加个fin不加，不太好听
4. 02:23:132 (1) - ^不加。
5. 吉他段遮挡真是瞎了
6. 我觉得做得很好啊 哪用remap

thanks
Good Luck

Hollow Wings wrote:

from q

General

1. 我清楚地记得此曲是Halozy社团的曲子，artist如果不是instru的话填的应该是社团名，所以artist应该是halozy，歌姬名字放在tag里就行 嗯 这个改了
2. 尝试用自定义combo color 我去研究研究 没用过不知道怎么弄

Insane

1. 00:27:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - 突然这么难大丈夫？？2345摆成直线好了，不过还是很突兀 改了~距离都用0.8了
2. 02:22:632 (5) - 这里不用八分拍？ 感觉没必要额
3. 03:57:299 (5) - ctrl+g？ 嗯~改了
4. ....................

Normal

1. 00:16:465 (1,2,3) - 这种地方可以考虑blanket 这里做的就是blanket啊
2. 02:54:465 (3,4) - blanket perfect（nazi）还有很多 我之后慢慢检查=L=做的比较随意
3. 03:24:132 (2,4) - stack perfect 改了~
4. 03:40:465 (3,4,5,6) - 这种地方你不考虑做个正方形什么的么orz 样子做歪了=L=
5. 唔。。。。。。

嘛。。。233

good luck

1. 00:12:465 - this spinner end on 00:13:632 (red tick) is better for me, to give a time to player for prepare to press the next note.
2. Switch NC of 00:22:382 (1,2) - to make it same with 00:14:049 and 00:14:715
3. the spacing of 00:41:632 (6) and 00:41:799 (1) is looks like 1/4 rhythm for me, maybe it will make player confuse so, move (6) to stack with 00:40:465 (3) (296|148) for make it looks clear that they are 1/2 rhythm.
4. move 00:55:132 (4) to 404|230 to make it better stack.
5. you can move 01:05:799 (1) to 144|308 for perfect stack.
6. 01:17:715 (1,2) - switch NC
7. 01:35:049 (1) - hmm why NC here?
8. 01:39:799 (3) - move to 238|55 for perfect blanket.
9. please NC on 01:48:465 (5) for new pattern and new rhythm.
10. 02:07:049 (1,2) - switch NC for new stanza and you do like this before.
11. 02:21:632 - can you change rhythm to this? the current rhythm is correct, yes. but the white tick (02:21:799) not fit with the tail of slider, it really fit with circle or head of slider.
    Nice diff :3 I like it

1. move 00:21:632 (4) to 426|62 for perfect stack with 00:23:132 (1)
2. 00:36:465 - Ctrl+G is absolute better flow imo.
3. 00:43:965 (2) - move to 236|264 for perfect blanket with 00:44:799 (2)'s tail.
4. move 00:48:465 (1) to 231|190 for perfect stack and Ctrl+g 00:48:632 (2) they will very flow believe me.
5. 01:17:299 (5) - use 5 circle for stream is better imo, you use slider 1 repeat before and continue with 3 repeat slider would be confuse player.
6. Ctrl+H of 01:29:799 (1,2,3) and move to the current place is more flow.
7. 01:51:132 - please stack perfectly.
8. 02:22:632 (5) - same reason as 01:17:299 (5).
9. 02:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - these star is too easy guy XD increase more spacing!
10. I think no reason to skip these beat ---> 02:50:132 / 02:50:799 / 02:50:965 It will more playable. and don't forget to add hitsound ;P
11. 02:58:799 (4,1) - make them perfect stack.
12. I think you should add NC on the slider that change the speed for make player notice that it has something! so they can guess that this slider is speed up or slower. 03:02:132 and other place.
13. 03:43:799 (3) - make it better blanket.
14. 03:48:465 - try these square pattern.
    nice diff just check the stack that all are perfect.

1. 00:59:132 - if you listen with 50% playback you will not hear the triple so I recommend to use this rhythm.
2. 01:01:799 (1,2,3,4) - make them all stack perfectly.
3. 01:03:132 - same suggestion as the first line hmm and fix other part too. :X its overlap for me and not fit the song.
4. 03:11:465 (2,3,4) - NC all of this? as you always add :X
5. 03:16:465 (2) - add NC?
   the diff looks fine, just check overlap and perfect stack :3

well, i think this is enough. I hope my mod can help and Good Luck

P A N wrote:

Hi, from pm :3

[General]

Looks Fine!

[Insane]

1. move 00:21:632 (4) to 426|62 for perfect stack with 00:23:132 (1) ok~fix~
2. 00:36:465 - Ctrl+G is absolute better flow imo. I make this because of others's mod~ now is more suitable for the music
3. 00:43:965 (2) - move to 236|264 for perfect blanket with 00:44:799 (2)'s tail.
4. move 00:48:465 (1) to 231|190 for perfect stack and Ctrl+g 00:48:632 (2) they will very flow believe me. I try yours but still think mine is better~sorry
5. 01:17:299 (5) - use 5 circle for stream is better imo, you use slider 1 repeat before and continue with 3 repeat slider would be confuse player. ok~fix
6. Ctrl+H of 01:29:799 (1,2,3) and move to the current place is more flow. I not use ctrl+H only change them to circle
7. 01:51:132 - please stack perfectly. fix
8. 02:22:632 (5) - same reason as 01:17:299 (5). fix
9. 02:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - these star is too easy guy XD increase more spacing! ok~increased
10. I think no reason to skip these beat ---> 02:50:132 / 02:50:799 / 02:50:965 It will more playable. and don't forget to add hitsound ;P umm, I dont know which better~but I want to keep this , maybe a little interesting~
11. 02:58:799 (4,1) - make them perfect stack. fix~
12. I think you should add NC on the slider that change the speed for make player notice that it has something! so they can guess that this slider is speed up or slower. 03:02:132 and other place. ok~I add NC all these place~
13. 03:43:799 (3) - make it better blanket. now is better~
14. 03:48:465 - try these square pattern. good idea~
    nice diff just check the stack that all are perfect.

well, i think this is enough. I hope my mod can help and Good Luck

1. 00:59:132 - if you listen with 50% playback you will not hear the triple so I recommend to use this rhythm.fixed
2. 01:01:799 (1,2,3,4) - make them all stack perfectly.fixed
3. 01:03:132 - same suggestion as the first line hmm and fix other part too. :X its overlap for me and not fit the song. keep
4. 03:11:465 (2,3,4) - NC all of this? as you always add :Xfixed
5. 03:16:465 (2) - add NC?ok
   the diff looks fine, just check overlap and perfect stack :3fixed

Xinely wrote:

Hi ~
Since this is your first map, i will point out suggestion which i think need to fix ~

• 
  General
  03:12:465 - kiai fountain here. (i mean 03:12:465 - kiai on and then 03:12:632 - kiai off). music is relax here
  03:17:799 - if you follow above, kiai should be start from here

• 
  Easy
  you should to respacing all. if you use 1,0x you get some of overlap patterns like 00:52:465 (3,4) - , 01:07:132 (6,7,1) -, 01:39:133 (1,2,3) - etc. i recommend to use 1,2x spacing instead you are right~I'll remap easy diff with 1.2X
  00:37:799 (1,1) - this rhythm isn't recommended. after spin should have break at least 1 whitetick, change like this instead http://puu.sh/5Pwfh.jpg
  00:55:132 (1,1) - ^ same as above, remove the circle and extend spin until 00:57:799 -
  01:09:132 (2) - slider's body is offscreen, move it until not offscreen
  01:56:466 (1) - spacing issue (0,93x) here. make sure to use 1,0x to keep consistency
  02:00:466 (1,1) - same as i mean from 00:55:132 (1,1) -
  02:35:132 (1) - better to remove it imo I want to keep this~If remove this break time will be too long
  03:09:799 (1,1) - same as i mean from 00:55:132 (1,1) -
  03:17:965 (1,1) - ^ same as above
  03:33:965 (1,1) - ^ all fix

• 
  Normal
  00:32:465 (1,1) - same as Easy. still Hard for Normal. should be like http://puu.sh/5PwH9.jpg
  02:00:465 (1) - you can extend to 02:02:465 - to make it easier, same as Easy. newbie still confuse when no break at least 1 whitetick
  I think it's easy enough to a normal diff~maybe I'll go to see some other normal diff which have ranked~

• 
  Insane
  You can name Lunatic for this diff ~ there already a Lunatic diff by ayaya~

your first map really better than mine o.o this is my second map~the frist one is in the Graveyarded

No Kudosu, this isn't mod
I think I should give you a KD~ because your suggestion is really helpful~
and Good Luck ~

Ikaros_F wrote:

Hello，晚上好

quick mod

[Insane]
01:17:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不如排个五角星跳吧 因为用过五角星跳 想换种花样额
01:32:465 (1) - 这个转盘我感觉太短了点._.不如去掉做点东西吧 嘛 这个难度中一个短一些的滑条应该没问题
00:40:465 (1,1,1,1) - 这些nc就不用放了吧
01:46:133 (1) - 这些nc就不用放了吧
01:46:465 (1) - ↑
01:46:799 (1) - ↑ 嗯 这些NC都改了一下~这几个地方是新换的 NC是复制的时候造成的 忘了改~
03:18:465 (5,6) - 感觉这个flow不好._. 啊？感觉没啥问题啊
03:19:382 (2) - 03:19:715 (4) - 像这2个我在曲子里没听见这里的音感觉可以去掉 嘛嘛 其实这里都是overmap 只是为了让高潮节奏比平时密集一些而已
03:36:465 在这之后的节奏我觉得还是不要跟人声比较好._.我觉得这样会连贯一些 这里鼓点一直是一个样没法跟啊。。。


orz，其他几个难度都摸不出来什么._.可能是我懒
就先这样了，祝你好运

1. tags里加上sjoy和Syameimaru-Aya

1. 其实感觉的话这个diff可以花点时间把blanket理一下，会让整个铺面显得比较整洁，比如00:29:799(1,2)，01:29:799(1,2,3)，02:09:465(3,4)等等。
2. 01:39:132 (6) - nc,前后保持一致0 0
3. 01:43:132 (1) - remove nc
4. 01:57:799 (1,2) - 这里的节奏的话可以对比一下前面的，00:52:465(2,3,4,1,2,3)，两段应该是同样的音乐但是下的节奏明显前面比较丰富，如果说要两段不一样的话，个人建议把较难的一组放在后面。
5. 02:00:465 (1) - 这转盘感觉结束在02:01:799就行了，毕竟是个normal难度，不用接的那么紧凑
6. 02:09:798 (4,1) - 没叠好
7. 03:24:132 (2,4) - ^

1. 00:16:132 (3) - 大概放在408，36附近试试
2. 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉这个5连有点突兀，不如上面那种节奏
3. 00:27:799 (5,6,7) - 其实可以试试吧56之间拉近点，这样对单双友好一些，相反67是的1/4短slider放远一点可以。
   大概像这样
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:38:382 (5,6,7) - ^
5. 00:33:132 (4,5) - 不如把4,5往右放远一点
6. 00:47:632 (6,1,6) - 没叠好
7. 00:54:299 (2) - 突然改成了这种slider似乎没什么道理
8. 01:17:299 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这个5连放在这里也感觉有点违和
9. 01:53:299 (7) - 304,283
10. 02:42:465 (2,1) - blanket
11. 03:25:799 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然不是不行，但总有种憋手的感觉，个人感觉不如摆成小一点的jump

• 01:00:465 (1,1) - 没叠好o.o
  01:17:799 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉根据vocal来的话这个4方可以比前面的稍微大一点，后面02:23:132(1,2,3,4)同理
  01:36:466 (1) - 这个slider感觉可以往左去一点，大概像这样
  SPOILER

  
  01:44:799 (2) - 我强迫症orz，感觉可以把2往上移一些或者整体拉大和1,3摆成正3角
  03:33:132 (3,4) - 3,4放成这样试试呢，大概就是渐远的感觉
  SPOILER

  

1. 00:37:799 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - 因为在前面一段同样的地方用了小跳，所以个人感觉2,3,4,5距离大点比较好，可以试试吧4,3向外移一点再调整4,5
2. 00:54:299 (2,4) - 没叠好
3. 01:01:132 (4) - 4可以考虑向上一点和之后的6,1再做个造型
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:16:799 (2,2,2) - 其实感觉nc换到这3个比较合适0 0，或者直接每个3连一组nc
5. 01:17:799 (2) - 其实就我个人觉得这里减速没什么比较好的理由
6. 01:35:132 (2) - nc不换到这个note上么o.o
7. 01:56:465 (3,4,5,6) - 因为这一段整体都感觉偏简单，所以突然出现1/4sldier会有点违和
8. 03:25:799 (3,2) - 这两个长slider感觉都分别拆成2个短的更好

- Kevin wrote:

Hi from #modreqs

M4M Request
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/80016

[Insane]


00:46:465 (2) - turn it into a 1/2 slider and add a note 00:46:965 sorry~I want to keep this
01:05:049 (4) - x:480 y:92 fix 01:05:132 (5) - why?change a little
01:11:132 (1,2) - make them more symmetrical (Ctrl + C/V 01:11:132 (1) - then 2x Ctrl + >)
01:16:965 (4) - tilt this slider slightly to the right
I think its ok~like this
01:29:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggest you to make first combo like the second (Slider, Slider, triplet, note, note) change to three slider~
02:06:465 (6) - move to y:112 or 02:06:799 (7) - y:24
02:14:715 (6) - move to x:344 y:48
02:42:465 (2) - Ctrl + G better a small jumps after repeat like this 02:36:465 (1,2) - ok~~fix
02:57:799 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + G them all them will make your slider end at the right side for a quick jump, prevent breaks ok~~fix
03:19:382 (2) - move to x:112 y:252
03:20:049 (6) - move to x:208 y:84
03:22:465 (4) - move to x:80 y:168 all these change a little
03:48:632 (2) - move to x:368 y:160 The nice flow guy will appear for you. sorry~I keep it~

[Normal]

00:56:465 (1,2,3,4) - make it more symmetrical: 00:56:465 (1) - x:268 y:288
00:56:799 (2) - x:348 y:228
00:57:132 (3) - x:288 y:148
00:57:465 (4) - x:208 y:208

02:12:465 (4) - overlap health bar move it

02:22:465 (3) - for symmetry x:56 y:244
02:22:798 (4) - x:124 y:316
02:23:466 (2) - x:264 y:176
02:23:799 (3) - x:336 y:244
02:24:132 (4) - x:268 y:316

03:01:799 (1,2,3,4) - make them more symmetrycal PLEASE! (just KIDding )

03:07:132 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:27:132 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:40:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:45:799 (8) - sound strange sorry i have no idea how to improve this maybe turn into a 1/1 slider? keep it~I thisnk it sound ok
03:53:799 (5) - ^ maybe end slider at 03:54:465 - sorry~I think now is better
03:56:465 (3) - ^ maybe turn into a 1/1 slider? if you followed remove 03:57:799 (5) - then add a 1/2 slider at 03:57:465 - make him repeat same reason~
others are all fix!

[Easy]

i suggest you dont use patterns like this:

SPOILER

On this diff the notes spread seems a bit random could check this? yes~you are right~I'm remapping the easy diff~

Melt wrote:

Hi
帮米桶还债

[General]

1. tags里加上sjoy和Syameimaru-Aya

[Normal]

1. 其实感觉的话这个diff可以花点时间把blanket理一下，会让整个铺面显得比较整洁，比如00:29:799(1,2)，01:29:799(1,2,3)，02:09:465(3,4)等等。
2. 01:39:132 (6) - nc,前后保持一致0 0
3. 01:43:132 (1) - remove nc
4. 01:57:799 (1,2) - 这里的节奏的话可以对比一下前面的，00:52:465(2,3,4,1,2,3)，两段应该是同样的音乐但是下的节奏明显前面比较丰富，如果说要两段不一样的话，个人建议把较难的一组放在后面。
5. 02:00:465 (1) - 这转盘感觉结束在02:01:799就行了，毕竟是个normal难度，不用接的那么紧凑
6. 02:09:798 (4,1) - 没叠好
7. 03:24:132 (2,4) - ^ all fix!

[Insane]

1. 00:16:132 (3) - 大概放在408，36附近试试
2. 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉这个5连有点突兀，不如上面那种节奏 这里是跟歌曲鼓点变化做的
3. 00:27:799 (5,6,7) - 其实可以试试吧56之间拉近点，这样对单双友好一些，相反67是的1/4短slider放远一点可以。
   大概像这样
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:38:382 (5,6,7) - ^
5. 00:33:132 (4,5) - 不如把4,5往右放远一点
6. 00:47:632 (6,1,6) - 没叠好
7. 00:54:299 (2) - 突然改成了这种slider似乎没什么道理 因为不想用连打在这里 所以基本鼓点用的很少额
8. 01:17:299 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这个5连放在这里也感觉有点违和 本来是往返滑条 但是他们都说啷个往返来回次数不一样不舒服额 所以搞得五连。。
9. 01:53:299 (7) - 304,283
10. 02:42:465 (2,1) - blanket
11. 03:25:799 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然不是不行，但总有种憋手的感觉，个人感觉不如摆成小一点的jump 这个我再想想~
    别的地方全部fix~

Good luck~

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Insane]
00:13:799 (1) - 這種地方我通常會下soft finish（內建的） 嗯 音效我研究一下你说的方案~
00:15:965 (2) - 拿掉finish 拿掉了感觉好奇怪额？
00:21:299 (2) - ^
00:23:632 (3) - 拉成1/1的slider？ 因为后面两个唱的音感觉note的击打感比较合适
00:44:465 (1,2,3,4) - 怎麼不跟前面一樣用加速 改了 但是感觉弯曲的加速滑条不会放=L=
01:00:799 (4) - 拿掉finish ok~
01:49:799 (3,4,5,6) - 同前面加速 这个还没改 我想比较一下加速和不加速哪个合适额
02:36:465 (1,2) - 考慮換成note放跳 感觉不想换。。。。
02:44:132 (4,1) - 這中間調低音量加點東西吧 keep~
02:56:465 (1) - 這地方其實可以用個kiai time 额 不是说kiai要一样的节奏？难道我被骗了？
03:01:799 (1,1,2) - 03:02:465 (1,1,2) - 03:03:132 (1,1,2) - 03:03:799 (1,1,2) - 試試讓這些有越來越快得感覺 不知道怎么做。。。。
03:07:132 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - ^
03:08:799 (1) - 這之後都改成串吧 这一段吉他solo我全部用的滑条 没有note额

有些地方有點違和，沒有連貫的感覺 =L=自己可能是看得多了感觉不出来额
不過也有些地方也挺有想法的 感谢~

[Normal]
02:49:799 (4) - NC

是我做的normal太簡單還是現在的normal都長這樣 我不会做normal额 所以只好大白线节奏=L=

[Easy]
01:01:799 (5) - 拉長到 01:02:799
01:05:799 (4) - NC
01:34:465 (1,2,3) - 弄個三角形？
02:11:133 (4) - NC
02:35:132 (1,1) - 其實可以拉遠一點
全部fix！

P A N wrote:

Hi, from pm :3

[General]

Looks Fine!

[Aya's Lunatic]

1. 00:12:465 - this spinner end on 00:13:632 (red tick) is better for me, to give a time to player for prepare to press the next note.I don't feel good，sorry
2. Switch NC of 00:22:382 (1,2) - to make it same with 00:14:049 and 00:14:715OK，fix
3. the spacing of 00:41:632 (6) and 00:41:799 (1) is looks like 1/4 rhythm for me, maybe it will make player confuse so, move (6) to stack with 00:40:465 (3) (296|148) for make it looks clear that they are 1/2 rhythm.e..don‘t like it
4. move 00:55:132 (4) to 404|230 to make it better stack.so good fix
5. you can move 01:05:799 (1) to 144|308 for perfect stack.fix
6. 01:17:715 (1,2) - switch NCno
7. 01:35:049 (1) - hmm why NC here?because this looks so good。？
8. 01:39:799 (3) - move to 238|55 for perfect blanket.OK
9. please NC on 01:48:465 (5) for new pattern and new rhythm.no。I'm too lazy_(:зゝ∠)_
10. 02:07:049 (1,2) - switch NC for new stanza and you do like this before.Yes，I open NC on next object
11. 02:21:632 - can you change rhythm to this? the current rhythm is correct, yes. but the white tick (02:21:799) not fit with the tail of slider, it really fit with circle or head of slider.I want to have a sense of continuity
    Nice diff :3 I like it

thanks


well, i think this is enough. I hope my mod can help and Good Luck

Ikaros_F wrote:

Hello，晚上好

quick mod

[Aya's Lunatic]
00:15:799 (2,3,4,5) - 弄成一个比较规则的形状吧→ http://puu.sh/5Qwn8不
00:21:799 (7) - 这里就加个nc吧，后面那个去掉吧不。
00:33:799 (1,2,3,4) - 要不要尝试一下速度越来越快的滑条呢。不要，感觉上不好
00:44:465 (1,2,3,4) - ↑~
01:17:799 (2) - 不要bpm*0.5,还是改成1.0然后弄个回转滑条音乐都没了，还是不要
01:30:215 (2) - 感觉这个点没什么音啊，还是把这个Note去掉吧不，丢失了连贯性
01:31:132 (6) - 直接大白线加个Nc吧._.不知道你为什么在后面加打图时有个轨迹也不坏，反正我不喜欢
01:31:799 (1) - 这里可以不用加吧啥。如果是指NC的话，我可不想让数字撑到10
01:32:465 (3) - 这里加._.不._.
01:40:465 (4) - ↑↑
02:23:132 (1) - 不要bpm*0.5,还是改成1.0然后弄个回转滑条不





orz，其他几个难度都摸不出来什么._.可能是我懒
就先这样了，祝你好运

- Kevin wrote:

Hi from #modreqs

M4M Request
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/80016

[Aya's Lunatic]


03:36:465 - 04:01:799 - I would like you to map that part too, as well as all other difficultiesI am so lazy

Melt wrote:

Hi
帮米桶还债


[Aya's Lunatic]

1. 00:37:799 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - 因为在前面一段同样的地方用了小跳，所以个人感觉2,3,4,5距离大点比较好，可以试试吧4,3向外移一点再调整4,5还算是算了
2. 00:54:299 (2,4) - 没叠好已改
3. 01:01:132 (4) - 4可以考虑向上一点和之后的6,1再做个造型
   SPOILER

   
   好像不错，就这么办
4. 01:16:799 (2,2,2) - 其实感觉nc换到这3个比较合适0 0，或者直接每个3连一组nc不。
5. 01:17:799 (2) - 其实就我个人觉得这里减速没什么比较好的理由。一次滑过去更让我喜欢
6. 01:35:132 (2) - nc不换到这个note上么o.o其实最初就是如此，后来不知道啥原因变成那样？。。
7. 01:56:465 (3,4,5,6) - 因为这一段整体都感觉偏简单，所以突然出现1/4sldier会有点违和这也挺简单的不是吗
8. 03:25:799 (3,2) - 这两个长slider感觉都分别拆成2个短的更好

不

Good luck~

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Aya's Lunatic]
00:18:882 (x) - 這裡空了1/4拍感覺挺怪的虽然换种样子好像好看不少，但一开始就出现五连以上总能让我觉得有点突兀
00:39:132 (6) - NC不
00:55:132 (4) - ^好像确实不错
01:00:465 (2) - 我比較喜歡在這加NC确实赞
01:14:632 (5,6) - 改成slider？最初是滑条，但不知道如何摆，摆着听着也不顺，最后还是算了
01:16:632 (1,1,2) - 3個note一個NC好看些不
01:40:465 (4) - NC，後面的拿掉不
01:41:882 (1) - 拿掉NC不
01:43:132 (4) - NC，後面的拿掉不
01:48:465 (5) - NC不
02:04:465 (5) - NC，後面的拿掉不
03:27:132 (4) - NC说的我整个人都NC了

Ntasuto wrote:

Just wanna say that i LOVE that Insane.
So fun and enjoyable <3 :3

and also gj on the other diffs

Random note: On Aya's Lunatic 02:59:132 to 03:04:382 seems too hard to read the pattern/+the combos the 1st time you play it. Maybe its just me ^^

no kud plz

axschiming wrote:

Hi,m4m
很好的图哦

[Easy]
00:23:132 (4) - 短一拍
00:27:132 (1) - ^
00:28:799 (1) - 往前拉一拍
00:33:799 (1,2) - 可以做一个折返滑条？顺便可以包一下-w-
00:44:465 (5,6) - ^
00:52:465 (3,4) - 包的不好看
01:03:132 (1) - ^
01:06:465 (2) - 可以拉个滑条
01:32:466 (1,1,2) - 感觉可以再填充实点
01:41:799 (4) - 包3
02:00:466 (1) - 大概能在中间插多个转盘？这样更有层次感
03:17:965 (1) - ……
03:21:799 (2) - 转盘从放这里更好……

[Normal]
01:48:465 (1,2) - 柑橘可以折返滑条
01:53:799 (1,2) - 换成三个对人声的散点？
02:00:465 (1) - 同EZ
03:52:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉还是跟之前同一个节奏更妥


以上个人愚见
预祝泡图

1. not have same tags between each difficulty.
   
2. title: Monosugoi Ikioi de Keine ga Monosugoi Uta

1. 00:20:465 (2,3) - I think this acute angle is hard to play as easy so my suggestion here.
   
   
2. 00:35:132 (3,4) - just suggestion.
   
   
3. 00:35:132 (3) - add NC here? because melody follow next section at 00:35:132 - . in addition you can emphasize 00:33:799 (1,2) - .
4. 00:44:465 (5,6) - ^
5. 00:52:465 (3,4) - why did not use the 3/1 slider? this map follow mainly instruments so this rhythm will not fit this song. try to use 2/1 sliders.
6. 01:10:465 (3,4) - this slider would confuse beginners. should not put the slider end around a before object.
   
   
   try this.
7. 01:15:132 (3,4,5) - the reason is same as 00:52:465 (3,4). but try this rhythm to emphasize this section.
   
   
   1. 01:15:132 (3) - 2/1 slider
   2. 01:16:132 (4) - circle
   3. 01:16:465 (5) - 2/1 slider
   4. 01:17:465 (6) - circle
   5. 01:17:799 (7) - 2/1 slider
8. 01:19:132 (1) - spinner end at 01:20:299 - ? at least 01:20:465 - is late.
9. 01:41:799 (4) - same as 01:10:465 (3,4)
   
   
10. 01:44:466 (1) - why did not same as 00:27:132 (1,1) - ?
11. 01:49:799 (5) - same as around 00:35:132 (3).
12. 01:51:799 (2) - off screen? this is bit issue but should fix.
13. 01:57:799 (3,4) - same as 00:52:465 (3,4)
14. 02:20:466 (3,4,5) - same as 01:15:132 (3,4,5)
15. 02:24:465 (1) - same as 01:19:132 (1)
16. 02:35:132 (1) - should use a circle. the slider follow only cymbal so the slider end hinder that.
17. 02:40:465 (1) - ^
18. 02:53:799 (5) - missing NC?
19. 03:01:799 (1,2) - why did you follow 03:02:299 - ? there is a sound but it is smaller than 03:02:132 - 03:02:465 - so would not be best.
20. 03:17:965 (1) - what does this spinner follow? there is not any sound which was extended.
21. 03:33:965 (1) - spinner end at 03:34:965 - (or 03:35:132 - )?

1. 00:23:965 (5,6,1) - these approach circles may confuse beginners.
   
   
   please do not stack >.<
   00:23:965 (5,6) - move to x252 y380?
2. 00:28:799 (2,4) - remove finish? the vocal's volume is less than 0:28:465 (1,3) so would be better to do it for emphasizing. if you dont like this sugestion, exchange finish to normal-hitnormal and (default)soft-hitwhistle at all.
3. 00:39:132 (2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 01:01:799 (3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 01:12:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:19:132 (1) - same as Easy
7. 01:36:465 (3,4) - this part is quiet so should reduce objects for emphasizing imo. try to add repeat at 01:36:465 (3) - .
8. 02:00:465 (1) - why did not same as 00:55:132 (4,1,2,3,4) - ?
9. 02:07:132 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:28:799 (2,4)
10. 02:24:465 (1) - same as 01:19:132 (1)
11. 02:35:465 (2) - why did not you follow instrument only here? if you want to put, will need to put at each upbeat.
12. 02:54:465 (3) - fmm...I think would be better to follow 02:54:799 - . there is not reason that can be ignored.
    
    
    1. 02:54:465 (3) - 1/1 slider
    2. 02:54:965 (4) - circle
13. 02:59:132 (1,2) - easier? at least this is hard to play beginners. in addition there is a huge changing to be different from 02:56:465 (1) - . this gap is too bad...
    
14. 03:04:465 (5) - reason is same as above. would be better to paired with 03:05:799 (1) -
15. 03:27:132 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:28:799 (2,4)
16. 03:44:465 (6) - missing NC

1. skipped for my rule

1. 00:38:965 (5,6) - this jump does not fit this melody imo. there is not any large sound at 00:39:140 - so not need to put it.
   
   
   like this.
2. 00:56:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think this is overmap....
3. 02:54:965 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

   

1. 00:19:799 (4,7) - I guess you forgot to add NC. should be like 00:13:799 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - because NC pattern is brokn.
2. 00:23:632 (3) - I felt odd because only 00:23:549 (2) followed also back beat. should be stream end at 00:23:715 - so remove the slider and put circle at 00:23:632, 00:23:715. if you keep this slider, need to remove 00:23:549 (2) - .
3. 00:46:465 (2) - off screen object.
4. 00:54:299 (2) - why did you use kick slider...?
5. 00:58:715 - add circle? just my feeling. /me runs away.
6. 01:19:215 (1) - same as Easy.
7. 01:16:965 (4) - keep a circular motion
   
   
8. 01:32:465 (1) - why did not you put like 00:37:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)? would be able to be cool if you map.
9. 01:35:132 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is quiet part so this jump will not fit this melody. should not use jump here, except to ignore melody.
10. 02:56:465 (1,2,3,4) - why did not you use two repeats slider...? just doubt
11. 03:01:799 (1) - 03:02:465 (1) - 03:03:132 (1) - 03:03:799 (1) - 03:07:132 (1) - 03:07:799 (1) - 03:08:465 (1) - 03:09:132 (1) - these slider speed may be an unrankable issue. I think hard to understand its changing. at least I can not say rankable with certainty.
12. 03:14:465 (4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest to remove (5,7). because emphasize the changing in next part.
13. 03:51:132 (1,2) - should not accelerate slider speed. other sections did not it so it would confuse player.