食べたい人 Don't eat me! ;w;
Just posting for now. Will mod later. I'm lazy (:3[____]
Hi, mods are suggestion, if you disagree with any, please explain why and not just type "no"
Normal:
00:13:019 (1) - Here, I made it more symmetrical.
436,172,13019,2,0,B|372:109|256:57|140:109|76:172,1,400,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:38:865 (1) - I recommend making it like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155527. It will help flow more because moving from 4->1 keeps the same motion. If you leave it alone, it plays awkward because slider (4) is ending by going right and up. But slider (1) is going to move completely opposite and does not make movement natural. It is up to you because you might need to move a lot of notes. orz
00:57:326 (1) - I think you should delete middle point. I think the sharp turn is good.
00:59:172 (2) - Remove whistle from slider body? Also maybe change slider shape? It looks too cramped.
Hard:
00:01:942 (1) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155571 Here is code if you want to use.
108,204,1942,2,0,B|104:120|148:36|256:-8|364:36|408:120|404:204,1,490,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:16:480 - Maybe add note here? I think it would sound much better than having 1/1.
00:35:172 (1) - Maybe move this to 336:208 to blanket 00:34:711 (5) better? and to keep consistency of pattern since you had blankets here 00:31:480 (1,2,3).
01:01:942 (3,1) - Maybe change it to this?
http://puu.sh/5FPK4.jpg I think it follows music better since (3) can be a hold note. And I think 01:02:865 starting a slider here would play much better!
01:07:019 (3,4) - Maybe make a small jump here? The music feels jumpy at this point so small jump?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155600Ex:
00:01:942 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe think of a new way to map the beginning? Small example.
324,164,1942,6,0,P|341:188|367:202,2,60
256,80,2865,2,0,L|240:172,1,80
136,280,3788,6,0,P|148:304|172:332,2,60
96,172,4711,2,0,L|184:140,1,80
272,216,5403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,280,5634,6,0,P|362:306|342:329,2,60
452,200,6557,2,0,L|404:128,1,80
304,68,7249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,68,7480,2,0,B|256:72|224:140|160:128,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
I think beginning seems too simple for insane. I think you can do little more variety for insane.
00:51:095 (3) - I think moving (3) like
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155626 would be a lot better. Since it is not a sharp turn, but a smooth curvy turn which will be a better flow.
00:55:943 (2,3,4) - Maybe like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155629 I think the triple look very weird and doesnt play too well with how you put it. Putting it like the screenshot will make the cursor keep moving instead of just stopping.
00:59:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - That's hard orz (私はSpaced Streamが嫌いですorzorz)
01:03:326 (3,4,5) - imo, I think you should make it look like this instead.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155660 http://puu.sh/5FQxL.jpg Jump from 2->3 will be more natural.
http://puu.sh/5FQCP.jpg01:06:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Imo I think you should make it a jump instead. You can hear the "jumpy" music louder than the stream music. (jumping曲よりstream曲をもっと聴きます :3)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155682 small example.
01:10:942 (4,5) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1155689 Something like that? Moving 4 would make 01:10:480 (2,3) more smooth motion and moving 5 to make it flow better with new position.
01:23:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - 星がすきですね
ごめんね。英語がたくさん書きましたねｗｗ I hope you understand! orz.
I do remap intro-part. your code is very helpful~
