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AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)

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Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, November 29, 2013 at 8:39:24 PM

Artist: AZU feat. SEAMO
Title: Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
Source: Itazura na Kiss
Tags: Ending 2 _AI romantic anime Gero
BPM: 91.5
Filesize: 7033kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. AI's Insane (4.95 stars, 297 notes)
  2. Easy (0.78 stars, 62 notes)
  3. Gero's Hard (4.58 stars, 218 notes)
  4. Insane (4.9 stars, 290 notes)
  5. Normal (2.83 stars, 115 notes)
Download: AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
Download: AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Itazura na Kiss（イタズラなキス） ED2
AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare
AZU - 時間よ止まれ feat. SEAMO

- Rakuen
- Rakuen
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Thanks to the modders!
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- Miomio Chii -
-Umi-
Xinely
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N E K O
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Last edited by Rakuen , edited 169 times in total.
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
I'm not really good with timing but go ahead and try this.

Bpm: 91.52
offset: 593


resnap everything and recalculate sliders length. :3
good luck! this song is awesome ;___;

Use this as your background
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
SPOILER
20:29 DEAncientNaga: hi >w<
20:29 DEAncientNaga: free to chat with mwe? :))
20:30 mintong89: hi o.o
20:30 mintong89: yeah
20:30 DEAncientNaga: can u help me check my map? :DD
20:30 DEAncientNaga: and see where to improve ><'
20:30 mintong89: hmm ok
20:30 *DEAncientNaga is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258494 AZU - Jikan yo Tomare feat. SEAMO]
20:30 DEAncientNaga: cuz I think the Easy is too easy... tho Heatkai said to me dont just use 1/1
20:31 DEAncientNaga: and need help on checkin bpm + offset too >d<'
20:31 mintong89: hmm are you know chinese?
20:33 mintong89: offset should be 598
20:35 DEAncientNaga: sorry just now dc :D
20:36 mintong89: offset should be 598
20:37 mintong89: are you know chinese?
20:37 DEAncientNaga: ya i know chinese
20:37 mintong89: 用华文可以么 = =
20:37 DEAncientNaga: ok >.o
20:37 DEAncientNaga: 我打中文很慢
20:38 mintong89: 没关系 你打英文 我打华文
20:38 mintong89: 这样好谈
20:38 DEAncientNaga: 怎样找offset阿, 看guide了也完全不会
20:39 DEAncientNaga: >..<
20:39 DEAncientNaga: bpm 也是
20:39 mintong89: 要人工听的
20:39 mintong89: 00:15:024 - 这种没放了 感觉不好
20:39 mintong89: 要么放完 要么不放全部
20:40 DEAncientNaga: ok :)
20:40 mintong89: 那个break也是
20:40 mintong89: Tags 不用放 Itazura na Kiss了
20:40 mintong89: 因为source已经放了
20:41 mintong89: Design 那边 Letterbox during breaks去掉
20:42 mintong89: http://puu.sh/39zCd.png
20:43 DEAncientNaga: 什么是letterbox during breaks?
20:44 mintong89: 就是break的时候会出现widescreen(就是上下有个黑边条)
20:44 DEAncientNaga: oo
20:45 mintong89: Audio 的 Lead-in 换回0
20:45 DEAncientNaga: 01:22:565 - 这边要放东西？
20:45 mintong89: (话说这个戏好看么...感觉可以看
20:45 mintong89: 要 TV Size建议不要break
20:45 mintong89: 哦对了
20:46 mintong89: Artist: AZU feat. SEAMO
20:46 DEAncientNaga: 嗯
20:46 mintong89: Title: 時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
20:46 mintong89: Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
20:46 DEAncientNaga: 这个动漫还好吧
20:46 DEAncientNaga: 不会说很好看
20:46 mintong89: 嗯
20:47 mintong89: 总结还可以吧...所以就这样了
20:48 DEAncientNaga: oo
20:48 DEAncientNaga: thats all need to correct? >,<
20:48 mintong89: 嗯
20:48 mintong89: 很重要的
20:50 DEAncientNaga: ok thanks :))
20:50 DEAncientNaga: u pro edit x.x
20:50 DEAncientNaga: i newbie
20:50 mintong89: me newbie too

Good Luck~
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
mintong liar! newbie D: liar!
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
imo, the ending was still kind of off.
this's what i found BPM: 91.513 | Offset: 604

Good luck! :)
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

HeatKai wrote:

I'm not really good with timing but go ahead and try this.

Bpm: 91.52
offset: 593


resnap everything and recalculate sliders length. :3
good luck! this song is awesome ;___;

Use this as your background
Thanks, and very much for the BG :)
I'll use orioncomet's BPM and Offset, hope you don't mind >q<

orioncomet wrote:

imo, the ending was still kind of off.
this's what i found BPM: 91.513 | Offset: 604

Good luck! :)
Thanks for the BPM, it's useful >.o /


-mint stalker D:
_Azusa_
144 posts
Joined September 2010
_Azusa_
this song makes me remember things i don't want to ;-------;

but this song is so awesome that I can't stop listening :)

GL in the map!
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, MmC's mod. From #modreqs .
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-

➭ Try to use New Combo. (Don't let it over 5 combos)


01:02:562 (4) - remove this note
01:46:162 (1) - spinner end here 01:51:735 -

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-

01:47:801 - add a note
01:20:264 (4,5) - change to slider maybe will be better

-finish-
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-Hard-

✔ Okay.
Good rhythm.

-finish-
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:) good map and good song,
but maybe you can try to map more modeling for slider and set.

Good luck to you! :D
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, MmC's mod. From #modreqs .
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-

➭ Try to use New Combo. (Don't let it over 5 combos) Will take a look
[/color]

01:02:562 (4) - remove this note Removed
01:46:162 (1) - spinner end here 01:51:735 - Done

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-

01:47:801 - add a note Added
01:20:264 (4,5) - change to slider maybe will be better Changed

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-

✔ Okay.
Good rhythm. Thanks >.o /

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
:) good map and good song,
but maybe you can try to map more modeling for slider and set. I'll take a try :)

Good luck to you! :D
Thanks for the mods ^_^

Working on Harder diff atm, see if I can put some different sliders
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
hi hi here from #modreqs :3

let'su go !

general

- Are u using grid size : tiny ? if no, use it :3 push "G" more precise
- be more varied with your slider's shape :3
- reduce the volume of your htisounds to 80% or 70% fit better
- what about add a silence slider ? if yes > http://puu.sh/3wAiH/ef134f9ee0.rar copy / paste in your folder and then you have to use S:C1 not S click on custom 1 instead of default and this for all your timing point :3
SPOILER

Easy

- AR +1
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head
- 00:12:405 (2) - wrong distance spacing, you can check here your DS
SPOILER
- 00:13:716 (3) - not perfectly parallel with 00:12:405 (2) -
- 00:15:028 (4) - same with 00:13:716 (3) - if you change what i say ^^
- 00:17:322 (2) - delete, doesn't fit here '-'
- 00:18:634 (4,5) - delete and do this instead fit better imo
SPOILER
- 00:33:058 (4) - wrong distance spacing
- 00:36:664 (2) - middle point x:172,y:188; end point x:136,y:216 better blanket
- 00:40:598 (1,2) - move to x:280,y:152 for symmetry with 00:39:287 (5) -
- 00:43:220 (1) - try to map this part instead of spinner
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head
- 01:10:102 (4) - move to x:320,y:172 better blanket
- 01:11:085 - add note here it fit
- 01:20:592 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:559 (2) - NC here
- 01:23:543 (3) - delete
- 01:25:182 (5,1) - blanket ?
- 01:25:837 (1) - add finish on tail
- 01:38:950 (3) - end point x:232y:120 better blanket.
- 01:40:589 (4) - wrong distance spacing

Normal

- OD +1
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head
- 00:43:220 (1) - same as easy diff, try to map this part instead of spinner
- 00:52:072 (7) - delete and change 00:51:744 (6) - into a slider end at 00:52:399 - and then add note 00:52:727 -
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head
- 01:02:562 (4) - better flow imo
SPOILER
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head
- 01:28:460 (3) - make a curve with this slider better flow
- 01:38:622 (2) - wrong distance spacing

Hard

- 00:08:471 (4) - NC
- 00:10:110 (1) - remove NC and NC here 00:11:094 (2) -
- 00:11:094 (2) - finish on head
- 00:29:124 (6,7) - blanket ?
- 00:35:025 (5) - NC
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head
- 01:16:986 (3,4) - make curve better flow :3
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head

insane

Use some slider reverse instead of single note x)
- 00:11:094 (4) - finish on head
- 00:41:090 (3,4) - not perfectly stack with 00:40:762 (2) -
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head
- 01:05:184 (1) - not perfectly stack
- 01:10:430 (2) - ctrl+g
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head
- 01:32:885 (2) - ctrl+g too, little jump could be fun

that'all, I modded only yours diff but i'll back later maybe after you've got some others mods >.< for more detail :3
If there are something you don't understand ask me in game :3
Pretty good mapset for your first map, but need some works sure :oops: Good luck !
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi here from #modreqs :3

let'su go !

general

- Are u using grid size : tiny ? if no, use it :3 push "G" more precise Small probably : )
- be more varied with your slider's shape :3 Will do my best
- reduce the volume of your htisounds to 80% or 70% fit better Reduced all by 20%.
- what about add a silence slider ? if yes > http://puu.sh/3wAiH/ef134f9ee0.rar copy / paste in your folder and then you have to use S:C1 not S click on custom 1 instead of default and this for all your timing point :3 Thanks.
SPOILER

Easy

- AR +1 Added.
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head Added.
- 00:12:405 (2) - wrong distance spacing, you can check here your DS Fixed.
SPOILER
- 00:13:716 (3) - not perfectly parallel with 00:12:405 (2) - Fixed.
- 00:15:028 (4) - same with 00:13:716 (3) - if you change what i say ^^ Fixed.
- 00:17:322 (2) - delete, doesn't fit here '-' Removed.
- 00:18:634 (4,5) - delete and do this instead fit better imo Removed and fixed.
SPOILER
- 00:33:058 (4) - wrong distance spacing Fixed.
- 00:36:664 (2) - middle point x:172,y:188; end point x:136,y:216 better blanket Sorry, I'll keep.
- 00:40:598 (1,2) - move to x:280,y:152 for symmetry with 00:39:287 (5) - Fixed.
- 00:43:220 (1) - try to map this part instead of spinner Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head Fixed.
- 01:10:102 (4) - move to x:320,y:172 better blanket Fixed.
- 01:11:085 - add note here it fit Fixed.
- 01:20:592 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:559 (2) - NC here Fixed.
- 01:23:543 (3) - delete Removed.
- 01:25:182 (5,1) - blanket ? Fixed.
- 01:25:837 (1) - add finish on tail Added.
- 01:38:950 (3) - end point x:232y:120 better blanket. Fixed.
- 01:40:589 (4) - wrong distance spacing Fixed.


Normal

- OD +1 Added.
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head Added.
- 00:43:220 (1) - same as easy diff, try to map this part instead of spinner Fixed.
- 00:52:072 (7) - delete and change 00:51:744 (6) - into a slider end at 00:52:399 - and then add note 00:52:727 - Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head Added.
- 01:02:562 (4) - better flow imo Fixed.
SPOILER
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head Added.
- 01:28:460 (3) - make a curve with this slider better flow Fixed.
- 01:38:622 (2) - wrong distance spacing Fixed.


Hard

- 00:08:471 (4) - NC Fixed.
- 00:10:110 (1) - remove NC and NC here 00:11:094 (2) - Fixed.
- 00:11:094 (2) - finish on head Fixed.
- 00:29:124 (6,7) - blanket ? Fixed.
- 00:35:025 (5) - NC Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head Fixed.
- 01:16:986 (3,4) - make curve better flow :3 Fixed.
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head
Fixed.

insane

Use some slider reverse instead of single note x) Keep, it's insane and possible to tap with 1 finger
- 00:11:094 (4) - finish on head Fixed.
- 00:41:090 (3,4) - not perfectly stack with 00:40:762 (2) - Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head Fixed.
- 01:05:184 (1) - not perfectly stack Fixed.
- 01:10:430 (2) - ctrl+g Fixed.
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head Fixed.
- 01:32:885 (2) - ctrl+g too, little jump could be fun
Fixed, hope I don't get blamed cuz of this lol.

that'all, I modded only yours diff but i'll back later maybe after you've got some others mods >.< for more detail :3
If there are something you don't understand ask me in game :3
Pretty good mapset for your first map, but need some works sure :oops: Good luck !
Thanks, make new reply if u feel anything to mod
Last edited by Rakuen , edited 2 times in total.
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
hi

[AI's Insane]

00:22:240 (4) - Distance Snap
00:39:287 (5,6,7) - don't use this type of pattern, it's look weird
00:52:399 (4) - +clap

[Insane]

00:00:604 (1,2) - 这个不是很美 建议换过
00:28:796 (7) - +clap

[Hard]

01:00:923 (1) - 不要NC

没了
GL~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

mintong89 wrote:

hi

[AI's Insane]

00:22:240 (4) - Distance Snap Fixed.
00:39:287 (5,6,7) - don't use this type of pattern, it's look weird Fixed.
00:52:399 (4) - +clap Fixed.

[Insane]

00:00:604 (1,2) - 这个不是很美 建议换过 Fixed.
00:28:796 (7) - +clap Fixed.

[Hard]

01:00:923 (1) - 不要NC Fixed.


没了
GL~
感谢
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

  • General
    since in your folder have soft-sliderslide, http://puu.sh/3MIz8.png, change S become S:C1
    also since this is TV Size, add video just i said in game


  • Easy
    00:17:322 (2) - inconsistency spacing here
    00:24:207 (1) - since after spin, make like http://puu.sh/3MIHO.jpg and move in 120,192 to make near with center
    00:33:058 (4) - inconsistency spacing (1,07x)
    00:43:220 (3) - head and tail should be not touched together ;_;
    00:45:843 (1) - also inconsistency spacing
    00:51:744 (1) - sampleset drum in head for consistency?
    01:04:857 (5) - itentional whistle? for consitency u can give clap
    01:06:168 - for this time, imo finish is compare, try this finish http://puu.sh/3NGFQ.wav (apply to all diff if you use this)
    01:11:085 (5) - inconsitency spacing (1,06x)
    01:11:413 - use my soft finish if you agree with my suggestion before
    01:14:036 (4) - remove finish in tail
    01:16:658 (2) - finish here
    01:28:788 (3,1) - placement like this http://puu.sh/3NGOQ.jpg, more better. also have inconsistency spacing (0,93x)
    01:37:639 (1) - finish
    01:40:589 (4) - inconsitency spacing (0,93x)


  • Normal
    00:17:322 (2) - imo, use this thythm more follow music http://puu.sh/3NH0W.jpg, (PS: the 2nd start in 00:17:650 - )
    00:30:108 (5) - NC here to follow vocal?
    00:33:058 (2) - inconsitency spacing
    00:34:697 (4) - ^
    00:36:336 (2) - nazi. 412,192 for diagonal?
    00:40:598 (6) - NC (new combo)
    00:53:055 (1) - whistle?
    01:03:218 (5) - inconsistency spacing
    01:05:840 (8) - ^
    01:08:791 (6,7) - replace to slider? imo to many circle is hard for newbie
    01:26:493 (6) - inconsitency spacing
    01:35:672 (7) - 80,200? to stacked with previous (fix spacing after this if you follow)


  • Hard
    00:03:226 (3) - reduce one repeat and add note in 00:04:210 - better imo
    00:09:127 (2) - ctrl+G?
    00:13:552 (1) - inconsistency spacing
    nice rhythm but you can add more jump to make it awesome :3

since i can't mod insane i will stop here
Good Luck :3
alvinheriadi
95 posts
Joined December 2012
alvinheriadi
From queue, sorry i can't mod

[[Insane]]
00:16:339 (10,1) - Swap NC?
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Xinely wrote:


  • General
    since in your folder have soft-sliderslide, http://puu.sh/3MIz8.png, change S become S:C1
    also since this is TV Size, add video just i said in game
Fixed. Will add video AS soon as I get one


  • Easy
    00:17:322 (2) - inconsistency spacing here
    00:24:207 (1) - since after spin, make like http://puu.sh/3MIHO.jpg and move in 120,192 to make near with center
    00:33:058 (4) - inconsistency spacing (1,07x)
    00:43:220 (3) - head and tail should be not touched together ;_;
    00:45:843 (1) - also inconsistency spacing
    00:51:744 (1) - sampleset drum in head for consistency?
    01:04:857 (5) - itentional whistle? for consitency u can give clap
    01:06:168 - for this time, imo finish is compare, try this finish http://puu.sh/3NGFQ.wav (apply to all diff if you use this)
    01:11:085 (5) - inconsitency spacing (1,06x)
    01:11:413 - use my soft finish if you agree with my suggestion before
    01:14:036 (4) - remove finish in tail
    01:16:658 (2) - finish here
    01:28:788 (3,1) - placement like this http://puu.sh/3NGOQ.jpg, more better. also have inconsistency spacing (0,93x)
    01:37:639 (1) - finish
    01:40:589 (4) - inconsitency spacing (0,93x)
Fixed all.


  • Normal
    00:17:322 (2) - imo, use this thythm more follow music http://puu.sh/3NH0W.jpg, (PS: the 2nd start in 00:17:650 - )
    00:30:108 (5) - NC here to follow vocal?
    00:33:058 (2) - inconsitency spacing
    00:34:697 (4) - ^
    00:36:336 (2) - nazi. 412,192 for diagonal?
    00:40:598 (6) - NC (new combo)
    00:53:055 (1) - whistle?
    01:03:218 (5) - inconsistency spacing
    01:05:840 (8) - ^
    01:08:791 (6,7) - replace to slider? imo to many circle is hard for newbie
    01:26:493 (6) - inconsitency spacing
    01:35:672 (7) - 80,200? to stacked with previous (fix spacing after this if you follow)
Fixed all.


  • Hard
    00:03:226 (3) - reduce one repeat and add note in 00:04:210 - better imo
    00:09:127 (2) - ctrl+G?
    00:13:552 (1) - inconsistency spacing
    nice rhythm but you can add more jump to make it awesome :3
Fixed all.

since i can't mod insane i will stop here
Good Luck :3
Fixed all, thanks for the mods!

。” ﾟ☆,｡･:*:･ﾟ★o(´▽｀*)/♪Thanks♪＼(*´▽｀)oﾟ★,｡･:*:･☆ﾟ”

alvinheriadi wrote:

From queue, sorry i can't mod

[[Insane]]
00:16:339 (10,1) - Swap NC?
Fixed, thanks.

ヽ(=^ﾟωﾟ)^/　ﾊﾆｬ～～
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
[General]
Add more tags like: anime romance

[Easy]
00:43:220 (3) - Put the SV at 1.00x? So the beginners could follow the map and they will not be confused

[Hard]
00:59:612 (7) - NC

[Insane]
00:11:094 (4) - NC

Sorry if that's just four things. Good Luck and star!
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
Add more tags like: anime romance

[Easy]
00:43:220 (3) - Put the SV at 1.00x? So the beginners could follow the map and they will not be confused

[Hard]
00:59:612 (7) - NC

[Insane]
00:11:094 (4) - NC

Sorry if that's just four things. Good Luck and star!
Fixed all, thanks.
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

♥ Easy and Normal are both nice ^^

[Hard]
00:24:207 (1) - Ctrl+G? for better flow (:
01:38:131 (2) - Could make this >> http://puu.sh/3TUKw.jpg << for a bit diversity on flow

[Insane]
♥ Nice too (:

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

♥ Easy and Normal are both nice ^^

[Hard]
00:24:207 (1) - Ctrl+G? for better flow (:
01:38:131 (2) - Could make this >> http://puu.sh/3TUKw.jpg << for a bit diversity on flow

[Insane]
♥ Nice too (:

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.
Fixed all, thank you very much! ♥
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Modding the AI's Insane under request (:

DEAncientNaga wrote:

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
[AI's Insane]
00:02:570 (5) - Make it like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGw1.jpg << Feels more pleasant to eyes (:
00:03:062 (6,1,2) - Move them to x:244 y:112 and make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGAq.jpg <<
00:03:882 (4,5) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UGE6.jpg
00:22:978 (2,3) - Move them by 1 grid for better stream.

That's it.

Hope the map get ranked soon (:

Att.
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI
[AI's Insane]
00:02:570 (5) - Make it like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGw1.jpg << Feels more pleasant to eyes (:
00:03:062 (6,1,2) - Move them to x:244 y:112 and make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGAq.jpg <<
00:03:882 (4,5) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UGE6.jpg
00:22:978 (2,3) - Move them by 1 grid for better stream.
All Fixed :D ~ thx for the mod
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
rakuennnnn
m4m from your queue~

[Easy]
00:26:829 (4,1) - because at (2,3) you didn't use any pattern, it would be best if you make them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919326 since it is the less troublesome pattern to move the next circles in a 1.0 DS :D
00:33:058 (4) - make it more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919348
00:35:353 (1) - It is better to make the shape sync more with 00:33:058 (4) - either make it encircle the tail or make the turn smoother here
00:43:220 (3) - It would be safer to NC here for SV change and different rhythm
00:53:711 (2) - Make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919362
00:55:022 (1) - I think spin starts too early. Move to 00:55:678 (1) - ? additionally, you can add reverse in 00:53:711 (2) - it's fit with the music
01:01:906 (1,2) - lol this doesn't play really good. Replace them with a slider and make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919367
01:14:036 (4) - move to x216 y88 for better encirclement and it really looks better orz
01:34:033 (2,3,4) - this.. isn't looked and played really well, consider changing this pattern. I have a few suggestion here
01:42:884 (2) - NC here instead of 01:41:573 (1) -
01:45:834 (1) - hmm i think it is better to start spin at 01:46:162 - If you started it that early, it doesn't follow a good rhythm imo

[Normal]
00:12:405 (3) - lol it will be better if you mirrored 00:11:094 (1) - and continue the patterns using that
00:13:716 (5) - NC
00:20:273 (2,3,4) - better if these changes to a reverse slider
00:21:256 (1) - start spin at 00:21:584 (1) -
00:33:058 (2,3) - may stands for every type of this pattern orz. make them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919401
00:36:664 (3) - make it curvy~
00:50:432 (5) - NC
01:05:184 (7) - try to avoid this overlap
01:03:545 (6) - NC
01:31:410 (4) - lol make this curvy too, fit with vocal

[Hard]
01:19:609 (8) - NC here
01:40:917 (3) - might be a bit confusing orz
yeah generally, everything is already good here, but i think you can make a small jumps here and there to make the map more interesting :)

[Insane]
00:45:515 - hmm seems okay but i think you can start the SV reduction here, seems fitter with the music

[Ai's]
everything seems fine, but i think the SV difference on the chorus is a bit too much. try arranging them a bit

okay hope that helps, really good map already. work more on your easier diffs~
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Rakuen :3/ don't forget to add me to the tags GL! I mod this later! :P GL!

Gero's Hard
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TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
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Source:Itazura na Kiss
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Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

AnreFM wrote:

rakuennnnn
m4m from your queue~

[Easy]
00:26:829 (4,1) - because at (2,3) you didn't use any pattern, it would be best if you make them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919326 since it is the less troublesome pattern to move the next circles in a 1.0 DS :D - Fixed.
00:33:058 (4) - make it more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919348 - Hmm...don't like the slider shape
00:35:353 (1) - It is better to make the shape sync more with 00:33:058 (4) - either make it encircle the tail or make the turn smoother here - Fixed.
00:43:220 (3) - It would be safer to NC here for SV change and different rhythm - Fixed, reduced SV to original.
00:53:711 (2) - Make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919362 - Fixed.
00:55:022 (1) - I think spin starts too early. Move to 00:55:678 (1) - ? additionally, you can add reverse in 00:53:711 (2) - it's fit with the music - Fixed.
01:01:906 (1,2) - lol this doesn't play really good. Replace them with a slider and make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919367 - Fixed.
01:14:036 (4) - move to x216 y88 for better encirclement and it really looks better orz - Fixed.
01:34:033 (2,3,4) - this.. isn't looked and played really well, consider changing this pattern. I have a few suggestion here - Umm where's the suggestion? I'll PM you.
01:42:884 (2) - NC here instead of 01:41:573 (1) - Fixed.
01:45:834 (1) - hmm i think it is better to start spin at 01:46:162 - If you started it that early, it doesn't follow a good rhythm imo
- Fixed.

[Normal]
00:12:405 (3) - lol it will be better if you mirrored 00:11:094 (1) - and continue the patterns using that Sorry ;w;
00:13:716 (5) - NC - Fixed.
00:20:273 (2,3,4) - better if these changes to a reverse slider No, there's a reverse slider previously which bounced 3 times
00:21:256 (1) - start spin at 00:21:584 (1) - Fixed.
00:33:058 (2,3) - may stands for every type of this pattern orz. make them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919401 - Fixed.
00:36:664 (3) - make it curvy~ - Fixed.
00:50:432 (5) - NC - Fixed.
01:05:184 (7) - try to avoid this overlap Keep at the moment.
01:03:545 (6) - NC - Fixed.
01:31:410 (4) - lol make this curvy too, fit with vocal
- Fixed.

[Hard]
01:19:609 (8) - NC here - Fixed.
01:40:917 (3) - might be a bit confusing orz - It's hard diff
yeah generally, everything is already good here, but i think you can make a small jumps here and there to make the map more interesting :)

[Insane]
00:45:515 - hmm seems okay but i think you can start the SV reduction here, seems fitter with the music - I feel slow down there makes player easier to notice the change

[Ai's]
everything seems fine, but i think the SV difference on the chorus is a bit too much. try arranging them a bit

okay hope that helps, really good map already. work more on your easier diffs~
Thanks for your mods!

I'll do the M4M now.
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
NavyYa
Hello~M4M

Easy

00:28:141 (1) - delete nc and
00:26:829 (4) - nc
00:28:141 (1) - delete nc

01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve and more round~


Normal

00:17:322 (2) -little strange

Hard

00:13:552 (1) - delete nc
00:13:716 (2) - nc

Insane
GOOD ><

I suggest..
01:21:903 ~01:25:673 how about
adding break time? :)

_Ai's Insane
00:12:405 (5) - nc

my suggest
delete 00:15:847 (6) 00:16:093 (8) -


I like this song! :)
GL~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

[Navy] wrote:

Hello~M4M

Easy

00:28:141 (1) - delete nc and Fixed.
00:26:829 (4) - nc Fixed.
00:28:141 (1) - delete nc

01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve and more round~ Fixed.


Normal

00:17:322 (2) -little strange Fixed.

Hard

00:13:552 (1) - delete nc Fixed.
00:13:716 (2) - nc Fixed.

Insane
GOOD ><

I suggest..
01:21:903 ~01:25:673 how about No break time on TV size song
adding break time? :)

_Ai's Insane
00:12:405 (5) - nc Not good for looking

my suggest
delete 00:15:847 (6) 00:16:093 (8) - Keep atm


I like this song! :)
GL~
Thanks for the mod, I'll mod for your M4M
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
[General]

  • Hi~ M4M here.
    A nice song indeed :)
    All the mods are suggestions.
[_AI's Insane]

  • It's a little bit overmapped imo.

    00:48:138 (7) - I think it may confuse some players here.
    may be better here.
    SPOILER

    00:54:039 (1,2) - also a strange pattern here..

    00:56:825 (7,8,9,10) - I think something missed here.. maybe try this?
    SPOILER

    01:05:184 (1) - a sudden slow down with short slider in kiai time is not a good idea in my opinion.Also the next two slow-downs.

    01:21:494 (6,7,8) - no beats here in the song,i prefer to delete (6) and (8)
[Insane]

  • 00:40:434 (1) - I suggest a stack here.cuz the beat pauses here right?
    SPOILER

    00:59:612 (1,2,3,4) - I'd prefer to have a larger DS here, cuz the music

    has a fade-in effect.
    SPOILER

    01:22:231 (2) - I think it's a little bit near from (1)

    01:06:168 (1,2,3) - umm,these three sliders makes a strange feeling

    here.I prefer to use curve here.

    01:10:102 (1,2,3) - try some patterns maybe?
[Hard]

  • Fine.But maybe the objects are too far away from each other in the first several seconds.
[Gero's Hard]

  • Nice one.
[Normal]

  • Fine.
[Easy]

  • Fine.
    00:43:220 (3) - A nice heart.
Looking forward to its rank :)
Good luck star
DeletedUser_2010275
DeletedUser_2010275
  • Hello~ M4M


    Easy

    01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve


    Normal

    Fine.


    Gero's Hard

    00:27:157 (8) - NC
    00:57:645 (6) - Remove the whistle on body.


    Hard

    Nice :3


    Insane

    01:26:165 (2) - I suggest
    SPOILER

    Like this.



    _AI's Insane

    00:12:077 (3) - NC
    01:00:759 (3) - NC
    01:11:249 (3) - NC
    01:21:494 (6,7,8) - I think.. little strange. I suggest delete (6) and (8)



    That's it.
    Nice song >w<
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

-Srui- wrote:

  • Hello~ M4M


    Gero's Hard

    00:27:157 (8) - NC Nou o3o
    00:57:645 (6) - Remove the whistle on body. Fixed

    That's it.
    Nice song >w<
G's Hard
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59612
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
Artist:AZU feat. SEAMO
ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
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CircleSize:4
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Thanks for the mod
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

N E K O wrote:

[General]

  • Hi~ M4M here.
    A nice song indeed :)
    All the mods are suggestions.
[Insane]

  • 00:40:434 (1) - I suggest a stack here.cuz the beat pauses here right?
    SPOILER

    00:59:612 (1,2,3,4) - I'd prefer to have a larger DS here, cuz the music Fixed.

    has a fade-in effect.
    SPOILER

    01:22:231 (2) - I think it's a little bit near from (1) Fixed.

    01:06:168 (1,2,3) - umm,these three sliders makes a strange feeling

    here.I prefer to use curve here. Fixed.

    01:10:102 (1,2,3) - try some patterns maybe? Fixed.
[Hard]

  • Fine.But maybe the objects are too far away from each other in the first several seconds. Fixed, I think. Using 1.0x DS
[Gero's Hard]

  • Nice one.
[Normal]

  • Fine.
[Easy]

  • Fine.
    00:43:220 (3) - A nice heart.
Looking forward to its rank :)
Good luck star
Thanks for the mods!

-Srui- wrote:

  • Hello~ M4M


    Easy

    01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve Keep.


    Normal

    Fine.

    Hard

    Nice :3


    Insane

    01:26:165 (2) - I suggest Keep.
    SPOILER

    Like this.



    _AI's Insane

    00:12:077 (3) - NC Fixed.
    01:00:759 (3) - NC Fixed.
    01:11:249 (3) - NC Fixed.
    01:21:494 (6,7,8) - I think.. little strange. I suggest delete (6) and (8) Fixed.



    That's it.
    Nice song >w<
Thanks for the mods!

Gero wrote:

G's Hard
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: AZU - Jikan yo Tomare feat. SEAMO (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59612
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
Artist:AZU feat. SEAMO
ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
Tags:Ending 2 _AI romantic anime
BeatmapID:287855
BeatmapSetID:96436

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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157,175,47154,2,0,B|206:233|206:233|171:286|202:334,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,285,48138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,265,48466,6,0,P|396:234|401:190,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,170,48957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,150,49121,2,0,B|322:150|322:150|302:156|302:156|272:156,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,156,49777,2,0,P|101:156|51:235,2,180,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,205,51416,6,0,L|256:256,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,159,52072,2,0,B|320:118|320:118|336:71,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,29,52727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,73,53055,2,0,B|192:118|192:118|178:159,1,90
146,243,53711,1,10,0:0:0:0:
209,306,54039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,315,54202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,324,54366,6,0,P|341:326|379:247,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,295,56005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
103,237,56333,2,0,P|88:192|101:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,128,56825,2,0,L|186:101,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,63,57317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,107,57645,2,0,P|392:169|380:261,2,180,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59284,12,4,60923,0:0:0:0:
99,330,61251,6,0,L|170:300,1,45
185,312,61578,2,0,L|256:282,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,294,61906,2,0,L|342:264,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,312,62562,1,2,0:0:0:0:
99,330,62890,2,0,P|59:304|47:260,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,188,63545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,118,63873,2,0,L|113:93,2,45,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,99,64529,2,0,L|275:124,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,118,65184,5,2,0:0:0:0:
94,188,65512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
107,277,65840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,323,66168,2,0,B|256:377|256:377|328:323,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67315,2,0,L|444:244,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,184,67807,5,2,0:0:0:0:
439,120,68135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,56,68463,2,0,B|343:89|343:89|299:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,74,69118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
139,131,69446,2,0,P|128:197|168:258,1,135,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,70102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,320,70430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,268,70757,2,0,P|346:310|339:353,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,211,71413,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,158,71741,2,0,P|166:116|173:73,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,38,72397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,47,72560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,57,72724,2,0,L|392:90,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,174,73380,6,0,L|449:207,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,282,74036,2,0,P|445:363|368:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,302,75019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,289,75183,2,0,L|219:289,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,225,75675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,147,76003,6,0,P|92:109|98:65,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,91,76658,2,0,P|256:45|328:91,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77970,6,0,P|420:109|397:147,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,210,78625,2,0,L|154:233,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,195,79609,2,0,P|59:235|74:279,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,131,80264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
154,111,80428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,91,80592,6,0,P|206:63|251:63,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,135,81248,2,0,P|337:163|382:163,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,125,81903,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82067,12,8,85182,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85509,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85673,2,0,L|128:288,1,45,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,313,86165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,335,86493,2,0,P|366:347|425:276,1,180,14|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,197,87476,5,0,0:0:0:0:
420,114,87804,1,10,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88296,2,0,L|288:69,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,69,88787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
118,92,89115,2,0,P|130:130|170:156,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,89770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,256,90098,2,0,L|340:286,2,45,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,256,90755,2,0,L|173:286,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,91410,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,99,91738,2,0,P|256:81|216:99,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,157,92393,2,0,B|15:288,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93540,2,0,L|104:328,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,277,94032,5,2,0:0:0:0:
259,262,94360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,276,94688,2,0,P|387:290|431:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,192,95343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,125,95671,2,0,L|269:107,1,135,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,104,96327,5,0,0:0:0:0:
155,124,96655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,188,96982,2,0,P|74:230|81:273,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,323,97638,1,4,0:0:0:0:
243,343,97967,2,0,L|330:324,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,300,98623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,289,98786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,276,98950,2,0,P|494:244|495:199,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,120,99606,6,0,L|367:88,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,55,100262,2,0,B|224:118|224:118|130:129,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101409,2,0,L|61:258,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,330,101901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,364,102229,6,0,P|155:374|201:357,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,102884,2,0,B|306:265|348:297|390:328|436:291,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,210,103868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,184,104032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,160,104196,6,0,L|364:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,189,104851,2,0,L|120:132,1,180,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,95,105835,2,0,P|28:135|43:179,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,223,106490,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,243,106654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,263,106818,6,0,L|248:277,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,352,107474,2,0,L|353:360,2,45,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,277,108129,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108293,12,2,111735,0:0:0:0:

Thanks for the mod
Updated.
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
01:14:036 (4) - NC
01:34:033 (4) - ^

[Gero's Hard]
01:02:890 (5) - NC
01:06:168 (4) - ^(Usually when a note has a finish, it'd becomes a NC)
01:11:741 (5) - ^
01:28:787 (5) - ^
01:37:638 (4) - ^
01:37:967 (5) - ^

[Hard]
01:34:197 (6) - NC
This diff looks ok, but the rhythm is a bit questionable.

[Insane]
  1. I suggest try raising the DS, I dislike how objects are touching each other, especially in this diff :<
00:03:226 (6) - NC
01:02:562 (5) - ^
01:07:807 (4) - ^
01:34:033 (5) - ^

[_AI's Insane]
00:58:956 (5) - Would be best to just have a simply hit circle here with a clap, since I hear pretty much only one last beat before the chorus.

Wow, this diff looks way better then the previous one ^^

lol noobiest (is that even a word?) mod I've ever given ;_;
But, wow! This looks like one of the best mapset you've made yet! :D
Hope this helps~!
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Gero's Hard]
01:02:890 (5) - NC
01:06:168 (4) - ^(Usually when a note has a finish, it'd becomes a NC)
01:11:741 (5) - ^
01:28:787 (5) - ^
01:37:638 (4) - ^
01:37:967 (5) - ^ Sorry no changes. I have a pattern that follows the voice. :3

lol noobiest (is that even a word?) mod I've ever given ;_;
But, wow! This looks like one of the best mapset you've made yet! :D
Hope this helps~!
Thanks for the mod :D
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
01:14:036 (4) - NC Fixed.
01:34:033 (4) - ^ Fixed.

[Hard]
01:34:197 (6) - NC Fixed.
This diff looks ok, but the rhythm is a bit questionable. Added some hitsounds and arranged a little.

[Insane]
  1. I suggest try raising the DS, I dislike how objects are touching each other, especially in this diff :< Added.

00:03:226 (6) - NC Fixed.
01:02:562 (5) - ^ Fixed.
01:07:807 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:34:033 (5) - ^ Fixed.

[_AI's Insane]
00:58:956 (5) - Would be best to just have a simply hit circle here with a clap, since I hear pretty much only one last beat before the chorus. Keep at the moment, but thanks :).

Wow, this diff looks way better then the previous one ^^ Thanks!

lol noobiest (is that even a word?) mod I've ever given ;_; No problem.
But, wow! This looks like one of the best mapset you've made yet! :D
Hope this helps~!
Thanks for the mods.
Hanabi
Hanabi
Hi~ m4m from your queue

my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358


[Gero's Hard]
AR +1
00:40:270 (7,1,2) - too much single circles for 4.5stars try to change into slider reverse
01:06:168 (4) - try this shape

[Hard]
00:20:928 (6,7) - use this rythm
01:11:413 (1) -
01:28:296 (4) - remove note
01:42:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should use this rythm as the song sounds
[box=]
[/box]
01:47:474 (4) - make a reverse

[Insane]
00:13:552 (2,3) - too far spacing
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - make them as same line
00:28:796 (6) - NC
00:34:697 (9,1) - overlap perfectly
00:34:697 (9,1) - NC
00:55:678 (8) - ^
00:56:661 (1) - remove NC
00:57:645 (3) - NC
01:23:870 (6) - ^
01:29:935 (5) - ^
01:41:409 (7,8) - seperat them
01:43:376 (3,4,5,6) - confusing rythm and not matching with song..
use this rythm
[url]http://puu.sh/4rz4t.jpg :?[/url]
01:47:474 (1,2,3) - distance check

[AI's Insane]
00:03:718 (3) - remove
00:05:193 (3,4) - overlap perfectly
00:10:110 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - reduce sound
00:22:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is not fit here
01:00:267 (2,1) - omg too far!
01:05:184 (1) - remove timing points
01:10:102 (1) - ^
01:23:215 (1) - reomove NC
01:48:129 (1) - make silence at the end

Done.

Good luck!
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi~ m4m from your queue

my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358

[Hard]
00:20:928 (6,7) - use this rythm Fixed.
01:11:413 (1) -
01:28:296 (4) - remove note Fixed.
01:42:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should use this rythm as the song sounds Fixed.
[box=]
[/box]
01:47:474 (4) - make a reverse Fixed.

[Insane]
00:13:552 (2,3) - too far spacing Fixed.
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - make them as same line Fixed.
00:28:796 (6) - NC Fixed.
00:34:697 (9,1) - overlap perfectly Fixed.
00:34:697 (9,1) - NC Fixed.
00:55:678 (8) - ^ Fixed.
00:56:661 (1) - remove NC Fixed.
00:57:645 (3) - NC Fixed.
01:23:870 (6) - ^ Fixed.
01:29:935 (5) - ^ Fixed.
01:41:409 (7,8) - seperat them Fixed.
01:43:376 (3,4,5,6) - confusing rythm and not matching with song.. Fixed.
use this rythm
[url]http://puu.sh/4rz4t.jpg :?[/url]
01:47:474 (1,2,3) - distance check Fixed.

[AI's Insane]
00:03:718 (3) - remove
00:05:193 (3,4) - overlap perfectly Fixed.
00:10:110 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - reduce sound Fixed.
00:22:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is not fit here
01:00:267 (2,1) - omg too far!
01:05:184 (1) - remove timing points
01:10:102 (1) - ^
01:23:215 (1) - reomove NC Fixed.
01:48:129 (1) - make silence at the end

Done.

Good luck!
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
hi

[general]

no video for a tv size song?

[_AI's Insane]

This diff isn't done very well. both of placements, rhythm and hitsounds should be fixed/adjusted. I can't list my suggestions one by one since it's the whole logic and the structure that should be fixed instead of concrete details.

Rhythm:

00:01:751 (2,4,6) - notes like these are not needed. Because no sound in the music, plus your rhythm here doesn't enriching the map. On the contrary, the metronous 1/2 breaks the tranquil sense during the intro. In my opinion, during this intro you'd use sliders or rhythm that sounds crystal clear. (your current rhythm is just like so many fragments thrown on the ground)

Placement:

Firstly, in macro view, http://puu.sh/4ttpH.jpg looking at this pic and you find that all of notes are placed on the center, the rest places of the screen is actually not used/abandoned.

Secondly, let's dig deep. A diff should have consistent style throughout the song, then diffs differ from each other. But checking your diff I find different styles everywhere, in other words, there is not a style in your map. It can be concluded "chaotic" or "messy"

00:04:537 (1,2,3) - l00:05:849 (5,6,7,8) -

Yep, you used two kinds of sliders in one color. and the angle of them is also different. the former was placed vertically&horizontally while the latter was acclivitous soft curves. This is disorder. I found no design from it.

Thirdly, spacing. There are many unreasonable spacing changes. fixed them

00:05:029 (2) -

00:04:210 (5) - 00:08:307 (3) - rhythm is 1/2 but spacing is half way closer

00:08:963 (5) - bewildering spacing

00:09:783 (2) - unreasonable spacing change


Hitsounds:

00:18:962 (8) - slider end could be soft and the custom actually doesn't sound very well


NCs:

00:11:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd nc 3&8

check through the map yourself or ask for more mods, this still needs a lot of works

[Insane]

00:10:110 (1,2) - clap the sliderend and circle2
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make them straight lines
00:20:765 (2,4) - soft sounds for sliderhead and circle 4
00:26:501 (4) - spacing
01:20:920 (3,4,5,6,1) - fix the curve

other diffs are fine
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI

LKs wrote:

[_AI's Insane]

This diff isn't done very well. both of placements, rhythm and hitsounds should be fixed/adjusted. I can't list my suggestions one by one since it's the whole logic and the structure that should be fixed instead of concrete details.

Rhythm:

00:01:751 (2,4,6) - notes like these are not needed. Because no sound in the music, plus your rhythm here doesn't enriching the map. On the contrary, the metronous 1/2 breaks the tranquil sense during the intro. In my opinion, during this intro you'd use sliders or rhythm that sounds crystal clear. (your current rhythm is just like so many fragments thrown on the ground)

Placement:

Firstly, in macro view, http://puu.sh/4ttpH.jpg looking at this pic and you find that all of notes are placed on the center, the rest places of the screen is actually not used/abandoned.

Secondly, let's dig deep. A diff should have consistent style throughout the song, then diffs differ from each other. But checking your diff I find different styles everywhere, in other words, there is not a style in your map. It can be concluded "chaotic" or "messy"

00:04:537 (1,2,3) - l00:05:849 (5,6,7,8) -

Yep, you used two kinds of sliders in one color. and the angle of them is also different. the former was placed vertically&horizontally while the latter was acclivitous soft curves. This is disorder. I found no design from it.

Thirdly, spacing. There are many unreasonable spacing changes. fixed them

00:05:029 (2) -

00:04:210 (5) - 00:08:307 (3) - rhythm is 1/2 but spacing is half way closer

00:08:963 (5) - bewildering spacing

00:09:783 (2) - unreasonable spacing change


Hitsounds:

00:18:962 (8) - slider end could be soft and the custom actually doesn't sound very well


NCs:

00:11:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd nc 3&8

check through the map yourself or ask for more mods, this still needs a lot of works
Yes, I have noticed a lot of my mistake you noted earlier in the quote, I could really admit the adjective "messy" or "chaotic" for the diff actually,
I am very sorry for the bad mapping because I was actually still learning to map several month ago :p so please forgive me,
I have looked back in the diff and found out how careless I am back then,
so... would you have been trying to suggest a Remap for the diff?
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

no video for a tv size song? I'll get a vid now :)

[Insane]

00:10:110 (1,2) - clap the sliderend and circle2
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make them straight lines
00:20:765 (2,4) - soft sounds for sliderhead and circle 4
00:26:501 (4) - spacing
01:20:920 (3,4,5,6,1) - fix the curve

Fixed all.

other diffs are fine
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~
Thank you for m4M request!

[Easy]
  1. 00:24:207~01:00:923- reduce hit-sound's volume
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:207~01:00:923- same as easy
  2. 01:47:474 (4,5) - it is better to change for 1 slider
[Gero's Hard]
  1. 00:59:284 (1) - start at 00:59:612
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:912 (1) - start at 00:21:748
  2. 01:12:069 (2,3) - I like this
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:946 (8) - delete?
  2. 00:10:930 (3) - ^
  3. 00:25:190 (5,1) - it is better not to stack
  4. 00:28:304 (5,1) - the following is better
  5. 01:05:184 (1) - move to x:98 y:312 (stack correctly)
  6. 01:29:607 (4) - I prefer to delete and add a note at 01:29:607 -
[_AI's Insane]
  1. 00:35:844- add a note
low BPM map is hard to beat out a rhythm for me :?
~Good Luck~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
Thank you for m4M request!

[Easy]
  1. 00:24:207~01:00:923- reduce hit-sound's volume Fixed.
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:207~01:00:923- same as easy Fixed.
  2. 01:47:474 (4,5) - it is better to change for 1 slider Fixed.
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:912 (1) - start at 00:21:748 Fixed.
  2. 01:12:069 (2,3) - I like this Fixed.
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:946 (8) - delete? Keep first.
  2. 00:10:930 (3) - ^ Keep first.
  3. 00:25:190 (5,1) - it is better not to stack Fixed.
  4. 00:28:304 (5,1) - the following is better Fixed.
  5. 01:05:184 (1) - move to x:98 y:312 (stack correctly) Fixed.
  6. 01:29:607 (4) - I prefer to delete and add a note at 01:29:607 - Fixed.
[_AI's Insane]
  1. 00:35:844- add a note Fixed.
low BPM map is hard to beat out a rhythm for me :?
~Good Luck~
Thanks for the mods!
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support"
[Easy]
Placement
00:16:339(1) it is hard to expect for newbie since this flow may be confused.
01:18:625(5) spacing isn't consistence, try to use distant snap.
01:22:559(1)^
01:32:394(1,2,3) make a good flow like this?
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:46:162(1) I don't follow spinner start here, it looks so fast. try to start at 01:48:129 same as Normal diff.
[Hard]
Placement
00:49:121(3,4,5) this flow looks not good, so maybe like this?
SPOILER
01:34:361(1,2,3) same suggestion on above
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:30:271 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
01:21:903(4) add finish at head
[Gero's Hard]
Rhythm
00:42:401 add a note to follow the vocal?
00:54:366(1) I suppose you mainly follow the vocal, so maybe this rhythm would be fine.
SPOILER
[Insane]
Placement
00:35:189(2,3) stack at end of slider looks not bfine since it might stop the flow, so I suppose you can stack these notes at (4)'s head.
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:06:496 unnecessary green line.
01:11:741 ^ and more... check your all diff again.
00:10:110(1) sounds weird for me, I suppose it would be better.
SPOILER
00:21:912(1) start at 00:21:748 better.
01:01:906~ I don't like this blank since it is a Insane diff, so you should put some notes here. e.g)
SPOILER
01:09:446^
Hit Sonud
00:05:193(1) add whistle at head?
01:21:903(1) add finish
[_AI's Insane]
well, I pick up some issues.
Placement
too random spacing I found, try to place notes with consistence.
Rhythm
Since this song sounds calmly, I don't like to use a stream even if Insane.
Too much velocity changes found, it is so confused when I played. e.g.) 01:05:184(1,2,3)
01:21:740(1) it's weird to start a spinner here.I suppose you can delete it and place some notes better

good luck.
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support" What's this???
[Easy]
Placement
00:16:339(1) it is hard to expect for newbie since this flow may be confused.
01:18:625(5) spacing isn't consistence, try to use distant snap.
01:22:559(1)^
01:32:394(1,2,3) make a good flow like this?
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:46:162(1) I don't follow spinner start here, it looks so fast. try to start at 01:48:129 same as Normal diff.
[Hard]
Placement
00:49:121(3,4,5) this flow looks not good, so maybe like this?
SPOILER
01:34:361(1,2,3) same suggestion on above
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:30:271 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
01:21:903(4) add finish at head
[Insane]
Placement
00:35:189(2,3) stack at end of slider looks not bfine since it might stop the flow, so I suppose you can stack these notes at (4)'s head.
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:06:496 unnecessary green line.
01:11:741 ^ and more... check your all diff again.
00:10:110(1) sounds weird for me, I suppose it would be better.
SPOILER
00:21:912(1) start at 00:21:748 better.
01:01:906~ I don't like this blank since it is a Insane diff, so you should put some notes here. e.g)
SPOILER
01:09:446^
Hit Sonud
00:05:193(1) add whistle at head?
01:21:903(1) add finish

good luck.
They are useful mods! Fixed all!

Thanks very much!
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta

Rakuen wrote:

kajiyatta wrote:

[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support" What's this???
I found only Gero's Hard is checked. so uncheck please.
SPOILER
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen
Ok.

Thanks for the reply >.o /
-S c a r l e t-
-S c a r l e t-
Some random modding~
All of these is just a suggestion, feel free to ignore them if it's not useful~
[General]

No problem :D

[_AI's Insane]

In my opinion, I think a 1/8 streams is not really recommended for this kind of song. This song is very slow and it's only 91.51 bpm, maybe change the stream into 1/8 repeater slider instead? Or if you want to keep this a constant difficulty, maybe add a few 1/8 triple at certain part, it feel kinda weird only have stream for few parts and suddenly is all 1/4 notes. And also, I think you change too much SV in your diff, I don't see the reason why change in SV is needed in this map. Try to keep a consistent SV in this if possible~

00:05:193 (3,4,1,2) - I don't recommend this part to stack a note at the end of the slider, the slider is short and is kinda hard to read.
00:10:520 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - About the 1/8 stream, perhaps change them into 1/8 slider instead?
00:18:962 (3) - I don't really like it that the end of the slider is at blue tick, try to avoid this if possible. Try this:-

00:22:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Again about the 1/8 streams, avoid it. Maybe make something like this:-
SPOILER
00:24:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - At this part, you avoid the voice too much, and same thing about the slider at blue tick.I recommend to make like this:-

00:29:452 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same thing, consider changing them.
00:34:697 (3) - @@, your map too many slider ends at blue tick, imo it doesn't fit the song.
00:41:745 (1) - I recommend this note not to stack on the start of (2) slider, at this part all of you slider and single note is not stacked together, it feels weird when suddenly the note is stack at this part.
00:46:826 (4) - Move this slider to 00:46:990 instead, it fits the song better that way.
00:51:908 (2) - I don't think this note fits the song, either remove it or place it at 00:52:072 instead?
00:59:612 (1,2,1,2) - LOL, I highly recommend not to make a big jump in this map, is a slow song and big jump doesn't seems right for me @@
01:11:249 (1) - Avoid small jump at this part, because the SV is slow at this part and is kinda weird to have a jump here.
01:01:415 (4) - I don't recommend a x1.5 SV in this song, the most you should be using is around 1.2-1.3 SV. Anyway just a personal opinion~
01:21:740 (1) - I think spinner is not necessary here, perhaps change it to long slider instead?
01:48:129 (1) - Start the spinner at 01:47:965 and ends it at 01:52:719 .

[Insane]

This map is pretty well done for a low bpm map! I don't have much to say, just try to make the pattern a little more interesting~ Overlay of notes make people find it kind of boring imo.

00:01:915 (5) - The end of this slider is out of the playfield, curve them more into the playfield. It'll be a bit of a problem when people play with HR.
00:17:978 (6) - NC this part and 00:18:306 (3) too, it feels weird for the change in combos here.
00:18:634 (4,5,6,7) - In my opinion, try not to overlay the notes much, try to place them at better place because the pattern is not really interesting. Try make it more creative!
00:20:765 (2) - Change this slider into a note instead, and add a note at 00:20:928 . The beat is strong here, the slider doesn't really feel nice.
00:24:698 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I feel that this part the notes is kinda closely pack together, since this is an Insane diff, why not try to space them out a little more? Personal opinion~
00:35:517 (4,5,6) - ^ This part too.
00:37:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change the (1,2,3,4) into 1/4 sliders instead, it kinda make your difficulty more consistent. And also, like I said earlier about overlaying of note, spread them out and make it more interesting :)
00:41:745 (5,6,7,8) - Personally, I think this will be nicer:-

Same goes to 00:40:434 (1,2,3,4) and 00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) these part~
00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I think it fits the music better :)
01:35:180 (4) - Maybe add a note here? The vocal is strong at this part.
01:42:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - At this part, I think make it like this:-

For me it fits the song better~ (Personal opinion)

That's it for now I guess, I'm really not good in modding Hard, Normal and Easy difficulty >.< Sorry~ Remember to try to make your pattern more interesting and reduce the number of overlays~ Oh, and please tell me which mod is applied and which mod is not, especially _AI -.- Good luck! Here's a star for you~ ;)
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

-S c a r l e t- wrote:

Some random modding~
All of these is just a suggestion, feel free to ignore them if it's not useful~
[General]

No problem :D yay

[Insane]

This map is pretty well done for a low bpm map! I don't have much to say, just try to make the pattern a little more interesting~ Overlay of notes make people find it kind of boring imo.

00:01:915 (5) - The end of this slider is out of the playfield, curve them more into the playfield. It'll be a bit of a problem when people play with HR.
00:17:978 (6) - NC this part and 00:18:306 (3) too, it feels weird for the change in combos here.
00:18:634 (4,5,6,7) - In my opinion, try not to overlay the notes much, try to place them at better place because the pattern is not really interesting. Try make it more creative!
00:20:765 (2) - Change this slider into a note instead, and add a note at 00:20:928 . The beat is strong here, the slider doesn't really feel nice.
00:24:698 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I feel that this part the notes is kinda closely pack together, since this is an Insane diff, why not try to space them out a little more? Personal opinion~
00:35:517 (4,5,6) - ^ This part too.
00:37:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change the (1,2,3,4) into 1/4 sliders instead, it kinda make your difficulty more consistent. And also, like I said earlier about overlaying of note, spread them out and make it more interesting :)
00:41:745 (5,6,7,8) - Personally, I think this will be nicer:-

Same goes to 00:40:434 (1,2,3,4) and 00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) these part~
00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I think it fits the music better :)
01:35:180 (4) - Maybe add a note here? The vocal is strong at this part.
01:42:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - At this part, I think make it like this:-

For me it fits the song better~ (Personal opinion)

That's it for now I guess, I'm really not good in modding Hard, Normal and Easy difficulty >.< Sorry~ Remember to try to make your pattern more interesting and reduce the number of overlays~ Oh, and please tell me which mod is applied and which mod is not, especially _AI -.- Good luck! Here's a star for you~ ;)
Fixed all!

Thanks for the mod!
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Sana
Hi~ m4m from your queue


[Gero's Hard]
AR +1 Fixed
00:40:270 (7,1,2) - too much single circles for 4.5stars try to change into slider reverse not is very difficult :( no changes
01:06:168 (4) - try this shape [ D: what shape?

Done.

Good luck!

RandomEffect
From my queue~
Thank you for m4M request!

[Gero's Hard]
  1. 00:59:284 (1) - start at 00:59:612 Sorry but no :c
~Good Luck~

kajiyatta
M4M

[Gero's Hard]
Rhythm
00:42:401 add a note to follow the vocal? Fixed
00:54:366(1) I suppose you mainly follow the vocal, so maybe this rhythm would be fine. I don't think so :( This is fine
SPOILER

good luck.

Sorry for delay, Here my diff:

Go Go Rakuen, Do not give up.

G's Hard
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: AZU - Jikan yo Tomare feat. SEAMO (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59612
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
Artist:AZU feat. SEAMO
ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
Tags:Ending 2 _AI romantic anime
BeatmapID:287855
BeatmapSetID:96436

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Accel World
Accel World
From AMQ

[General]

Add Gero in your tag :3?

[Easy]

00:33:058 (4) moved to 00:33:386, and still end at 00:34:697
slider
X:216 Y:244
00:50:432 (3) x:172 y:100
00:51:088 (4) x:256 y:156
00:51:744 (1) x:356 y:148
00:53:711 (2) x:136 y:292
00:55:022 (3) x:228 y:156

[Normal]

01:47:810 (5) moved it to x:336 y:344
00:48:793 (1) ^ x:204 y:244 and rotate by -28°
00:49:449
00:49:449 (2) to 00:50:432 (1)
00:50:432
00:50:432 (1) to 00:52:727 (3)
:3 记得后面的一小部分的ds也要微调，如果改动的话

[Gero's Hard]

01:02:526 (4) nc

Amazing

[Hard]

Excellent

[Insane]

_(:з」∠)_由于种种原因有点懒得写mod，我这里帮你修正了一些地方，不介意的话你可以看看
Test

[_AI's Insane]

00:46:171 (3) x:212 y:304
00:48:466 (1) move to x:248 y:356 will be more better?
01:03:381 (2) ds
01:05:840 (2) ctrl-g
01:21:740 This spinner should be start from 01:21:903
01:30:009
01:30:009 (2) to 01:30:919 (4)
01:33:869 (5) x:372 y:44
01:36:164
01:36:164 (7) (8)

Nice song and map ;D Good luck!
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Accel World wrote:

From AMQ

[General]

Add Gero in your tag :3?

[Easy]

00:33:058 (4) moved to 00:33:386, and still end at 00:34:697
slider
X:216 Y:244
00:50:432 (3) x:172 y:100
00:51:088 (4) x:256 y:156
00:51:744 (1) x:356 y:148
00:53:711 (2) x:136 y:292
00:55:022 (3) x:228 y:156

[Normal]

01:47:810 (5) moved it to x:336 y:344
00:48:793 (1) ^ x:204 y:244 and rotate by -28°
00:49:449
00:49:449 (2) to 00:50:432 (1)
00:50:432
00:50:432 (1) to 00:52:727 (3)
:3 记得后面的一小部分的ds也要微调，如果改动的话

[Hard]

Excellent

[Insane]

_(:з」∠)_由于种种原因有点懒得写mod，我这里帮你修正了一些地方，不介意的话你可以看看 嗯，这个我觉得很好，收下了^_^
Test

Nice song and map ;D Good luck!
Fixed all!

Thanks for your mod
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
hi~
刚mod不久，如有冒犯请见谅~ :D

General

easy normal 和其他难度的开始时间不一样
音效好~


Easy

感觉没什么大问题 有些排列和blanket感觉可以调整

00:45:843 (1) - 或许可以放到爱心正上方
不知道你喜不喜欢blanket 像00:48:466 (1) - 或许可以包一下 00:47:810 (3) -
不知道你喜欢对称不 像01:02:890 (3,4) 或许可以弄个对称
个人比较不喜欢01:10:102 (4,5,1,2,3) - 这种一串像毛毛虫的哈哈哈（看了你的2个图，发现你好像经常用这种 但挺喜欢 01:12:724 (3,4) - 这种


Normal

又是00:24:207 (1,2,3,4) - 可能我真不喜欢这种一串的XD
发现好像图一直都是在绕圈，或许可以尝试上下左右的移动


Gero's Hard

AR或许可以-1 毕竟是hard难度 而且歌曲bpm也不高
排列感觉可以在琢磨一下


_AI's Insane

00:40:434 (1,2,3,4) - 这个或许可以弄对称点
排列有点乱，一些地方的flow或许可以再调整


Insane

也是排列有点乱
好些都是一串绕圈的梗
有些梗很好，但是有点硬拼凑的感觉


大概就这样先，加油！ :)
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen
Remapped east and normal!

Updated Gero's Hard and added Gero into tag (please renew before mod :) )
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Accel World
[Gero's Hard]

01:02:526 (4) nc Fixed

Amazing Thanks >w<


Nice song and map ;D Good luck!

CET 6
Gero's Hard

AR或许可以-1 毕竟是hard难度 而且歌曲bpm也不高
排列感觉可以在琢磨一下

在我看来，AR8 好一个难度

大概就这样先，加油！ :)

My Diff:

G's Hard
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59612
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
Artist:AZU feat. SEAMO
ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
Tags:Ending 2 _AI romantic anime Gero
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174,81,24535,2,0,L|201:26,2,45,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,162,25190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
125,187,25354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,212,25518,2,0,B|160:233|160:233|184:274,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,317,26174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,267,26501,2,0,B|352:233|352:233|397:212,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,160,27157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,160,27321,5,2,0:0:0:0:
470,160,27485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,96,27813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
386,76,27977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,56,28141,2,0,P|283:92|221:41,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,24,29124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,101,29452,2,0,P|137:163|101:246,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,320,30435,6,0,L|9:374,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,246,31091,1,2,0:0:0:0:
181,206,31419,2,0,B|211:206|211:206|233:192|233:192|266:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,157,32074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,93,32402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,29,32730,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,92,33058,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,111,33222,1,10,0:0:0:0:
244,130,33386,2,0,P|202:149|161:138,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,108,34041,2,0,B|57:152|87:190|87:190|16:266,1,180,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,343,35025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,350,35189,5,2,0:0:0:0:
101,357,35353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,342,35680,2,0,L|234:331,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,315,36008,2,0,P|321:315|357:337,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,342,36992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
107,303,37320,2,0,P|53:236|83:154,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,122,38139,6,0,L|165:108,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,72,38467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
182,72,38631,2,0,L|234:58,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,49,38959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,69,39287,2,0,P|375:108|417:123,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,193,39942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,40270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,40434,5,0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,40598,1,10,0:0:0:0:
344,318,40926,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,318,41090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,318,41253,2,0,B|256:338|256:338|168:318,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,254,42237,5,0,0:0:0:0:
83,234,42401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,214,42565,2,0,P|53:146|97:102,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,89,43220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,49,43548,2,0,L|256:64,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44040,12,4,45187,0:0:0:0:
111,96,45843,5,8,0:0:0:0:
67,175,46171,2,0,L|41:219,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,175,46826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,175,46990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,175,47154,2,0,B|206:233|206:233|171:286|202:334,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,285,48138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,265,48466,6,0,P|396:234|401:190,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,170,48957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,150,49121,2,0,B|322:150|322:150|302:156|302:156|272:156,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,156,49777,2,0,P|101:156|51:235,2,180,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,205,51416,6,0,L|256:256,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,159,52072,2,0,B|320:118|320:118|336:71,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,29,52727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,73,53055,2,0,B|192:118|192:118|178:159,1,90
146,243,53711,1,10,0:0:0:0:
209,306,54039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,315,54202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,324,54366,6,0,P|341:326|379:247,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,295,56005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
103,237,56333,2,0,P|88:192|101:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,128,56825,2,0,L|186:101,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,63,57317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,107,57645,2,0,P|392:169|380:261,2,180,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59284,12,4,60923,0:0:0:0:
99,330,61251,6,0,L|170:300,1,45
185,312,61578,2,0,L|256:282,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,294,61906,2,0,L|342:264,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,312,62562,5,2,0:0:0:0:
99,330,62890,2,0,P|59:304|47:260,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,188,63545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,118,63873,2,0,L|113:93,2,45,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,99,64529,2,0,L|275:124,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,118,65184,5,2,0:0:0:0:
94,188,65512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
107,277,65840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,323,66168,2,0,B|256:377|256:377|328:323,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67315,2,0,L|444:244,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,184,67807,5,2,0:0:0:0:
439,120,68135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,56,68463,2,0,B|343:89|343:89|299:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,74,69118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
139,131,69446,2,0,P|128:197|168:258,1,135,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,70102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,320,70430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,268,70757,2,0,P|346:310|339:353,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,211,71413,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,158,71741,2,0,P|166:116|173:73,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,38,72397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,47,72560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,57,72724,2,0,L|392:90,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,174,73380,6,0,L|449:207,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,282,74036,2,0,P|445:363|368:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,302,75019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,289,75183,2,0,L|219:289,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,225,75675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,147,76003,6,0,P|92:109|98:65,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,91,76658,2,0,P|256:45|328:91,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77970,6,0,P|420:109|397:147,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,210,78625,2,0,L|154:233,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,195,79609,2,0,P|59:235|74:279,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,131,80264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
154,111,80428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,91,80592,6,0,P|206:63|251:63,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,135,81248,2,0,P|337:163|382:163,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,125,81903,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82067,12,8,85182,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85509,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85673,2,0,L|128:288,1,45,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,313,86165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,335,86493,2,0,P|366:347|425:276,1,180,14|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,197,87476,5,0,0:0:0:0:
420,114,87804,1,10,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88296,2,0,L|288:69,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,69,88787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
118,92,89115,2,0,P|130:130|170:156,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,89770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,256,90098,2,0,L|344:288,2,45,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,256,90755,2,0,L|173:286,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,91410,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,99,91738,2,0,P|256:81|216:99,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,157,92393,2,0,B|15:288,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93540,2,0,L|104:328,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,277,94032,5,2,0:0:0:0:
259,262,94360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,276,94688,2,0,P|387:290|431:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,192,95343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,125,95671,2,0,L|269:107,1,135,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,104,96327,5,0,0:0:0:0:
155,124,96655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,188,96982,2,0,P|74:230|81:273,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,323,97638,1,4,0:0:0:0:
243,343,97967,2,0,L|330:324,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,300,98623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,289,98786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,276,98950,2,0,P|494:244|495:199,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,120,99606,6,0,L|367:88,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,55,100262,2,0,B|224:118|224:118|130:129,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101409,2,0,L|61:258,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,330,101901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,364,102229,6,0,P|155:374|201:357,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,102884,2,0,B|306:265|348:297|390:328|436:291,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,210,103868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,184,104032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,160,104196,6,0,L|364:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,189,104851,2,0,L|120:132,1,180,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,95,105835,2,0,P|28:135|43:179,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,223,106490,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,243,106654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,263,106818,6,0,L|248:277,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,352,107474,2,0,L|353:360,2,45,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,277,108129,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108293,12,2,111735,0:0:0:0:

Is Time to look for a BAT \:D/
CrystilonZ
1,560 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
Hello~
M4M from your queue
don't expect much orz I'm newbie

[General]
Why no video orz
Your tickrates is so varies between each diff . . . It should be same (just saying)

[Easy & Normal]
Seems fine

[Gero's Hard]
00:38:139 (1,2,3,4) - This 00:38:467 (2) - circle make it somehow . . . confusing, and not supposed to be in hard . . . change all of this to 3 sliders instead ?
00:39:123 - Should add note here
01:48:293 (1) - shouldn't reduce volume at the end of spinner

[Insane]
00:09:783 (5) - Flow disturbing, keep the flow !
00:15:356 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - choose one of these, make spacing similar
00:34:697 (1,4) - awkward overlapping @_@
00:36:008 (5,6) - here too
01:06:660 (2) - move to 210 95
01:35:180 (4,5,6) - player will think it's 1/2 gap

[AI's Insane]
1/8 . . .
00:33:877 (6) - make it closer @_@
01:06:496 (3) - NC pls, slider speed change
01:32:885 (3) - ^
Definition of Insanity @_@

That's all
Good luck !!
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

CrystilonZ wrote:

Hello~
M4M from your queue
don't expect much orz I'm newbie

[General]
Why no video orz Finding 1 at the moment ._.
Your tickrates is so varies between each diff . . . It should be same (just saying)

[Easy & Normal]
Seems fine Thanks.

[Insane]
00:09:783 (5) - Flow disturbing, keep the flow ! Keep, not sure what you're mentioning.
00:15:356 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - choose one of these, make spacing similar Keep.
00:34:697 (1,4) - awkward overlapping @_@ Fixed.
00:36:008 (5,6) - here too Fixed.
01:06:660 (2) - move to 210 95 Fixed.
01:35:180 (4,5,6) - player will think it's 1/2 gap Fixed.

That's all
Good luck !!
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI
Kk~ Thx for all the mod above :p
AI's Insane remapped due to the asshole mapping skill of the older version of me

edit:
yesh yesh hunt BATTTTTTTT
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,608 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
hi, m4m
make sure changes improve your map, they're just suggestions based on my own experience

[Easy]

00:19:617 (3) - ctrl + h and then move back to the same spot, I think this gives it a bit more visual flow since the curve of the beats goes with this slider a bit more

00:40:598 (1,2) - perhaps you could move these two to the right and up some, so the slider before leads into it a bit more pehaps?

01:03:545 (3,1) - (nazi) blanket's not quite there

01:08:791 (3) - ^, try using two white points in the curve, it will give you more control over the shape

01:29:771 (4) - If you copy this slider 1/2 later and do ctrl + h and ctrl + j, you will notice that the curve isn't the same on both ends, if you want it to be I would suggest spending some time perfecting this slider

01:39:606 (2) - ^

[Normal]

Looks alright to me :D

[Gero's Hard]
pawwaaaah \:3/ gero~

00:38:139 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm felt odd to me playingwise, perhaps this will flow a bit better?
SPOILER

00:54:366 (1) - (nazi) rotate this -7? I dunno, this seems like it fits with the previous stream a bit better O.O

01:20:592 (1) - (also nazi) rotate about 9? This one has a better reason, along with fitting with the stream before, it leads into the next slider (once you adjust spacing heh) a bit better

[Insane]

01:30:755 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - only thing I wanna mention, is that with DT mod, this large spacing part is fun to play, but the three very close notes after are not, since the transition between them is fairly flowbreaking. I would suggest moving 1 down and having a bit more space between each note, so a player doesn't hit 1 and then accidentally hit the next note right away, which would most likely cause it to count as a miss

[_AI's Insane]
ooh I wanna hit these streams on dt, heh

00:08:143 (5) - Note seems odd being here, would recommend moving it closer to 00:08:471 (1) - for clearer spacing

00:25:518 (7) - I'd recommend having this the same spacing as the rest of this, or adjusting the direction of the slider so it accommodates for the jump down to hit this

I appreciate what you've done to make a song like this more interesting, however just keep flow in mind, some of these parts, like 01:28:952 (3,4,5,1) - don't have very comfortable flow, but parts like 01:11:577 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - do, this part allows the player to do smoother motions than the first one.

Short mod for a solid map, hope to see this ranked soon! good luck!
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI

captin1 wrote:

[_AI's Insane]
ooh I wanna hit these streams on dt, heh

00:08:143 (5) - Note seems odd being here, would recommend moving it closer to 00:08:471 (1) - for clearer spacing I stacked it on 00:08:471 (1)

00:25:518 (7) - I'd recommend having this the same spacing as the rest of this, or adjusting the direction of the slider so it accommodates for the jump down to hit this Yea this is awkward .-. fixed~

I appreciate what you've done to make a song like this more interesting, however just keep flow in mind, some of these parts, like 01:28:952 (3,4,5,1) - don't have very comfortable flow, but parts like 01:11:577 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - do, this part allows the player to do smoother motions than the first one.
Changed the flow, Fixed~

Short mod for a solid map, hope to see this ranked soon! good luck!
Rakuen: http://puu.sh/4OkJZ.osu
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

captin1 wrote:

hi, m4m
make sure changes improve your map, they're just suggestions based on my own experience

[Easy]

00:19:617 (3) - ctrl + h and then move back to the same spot, I think this gives it a bit more visual flow since the curve of the beats goes with this slider a bit more

00:40:598 (1,2) - perhaps you could move these two to the right and up some, so the slider before leads into it a bit more pehaps?

01:03:545 (3,1) - (nazi) blanket's not quite there

01:08:791 (3) - ^, try using two white points in the curve, it will give you more control over the shape

01:29:771 (4) - If you copy this slider 1/2 later and do ctrl + h and ctrl + j, you will notice that the curve isn't the same on both ends, if you want it to be I would suggest spending some time perfecting this slider

01:39:606 (2) - ^

[Normal]

Looks alright to me :D

[Insane]

01:30:755 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - only thing I wanna mention, is that with DT mod, this large spacing part is fun to play, but the three very close notes after are not, since the transition between them is fairly flowbreaking. I would suggest moving 1 down and having a bit more space between each note, so a player doesn't hit 1 and then accidentally hit the next note right away, which would most likely cause it to count as a miss

Short mod for a solid map, hope to see this ranked soon! good luck!
Fixed all! Thanks for the mod!

Updated _AI's diff
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
my bad mod:

Easy：

00:27:485(4) move to x|440 y|204

00:29:452(2) move to x|140 y|216

Slider Tick Rate -1


Normal:

00:18:962(4) Ctrl+G

00:20:273(1)(2)(3) all put on left (select all then Ctrl+H ,adjust distance

00:46:171(2) move to x|228 y|52 ?

01:16:330(2) move to x|392 y|168 ?

01:18:297(5) move to x|64 y|172 ?

Insane:

I think 686 is OK ,7HP 7OD is.....oh no ,my acc!

Slider Tick Rate in Insane offten set 1...

00:16:831 note ?

00:24:698(2)(3) ↓
SPOILER

00:38:959(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9) ↓
SPOILER

00:41:745(4)(5) no overlap , put on other place

01:34:361(3)-01:35:180(4) easy miss , time too short

good luck ranked ><
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

CrystilonZ wrote:

[Gero's Hard]
00:38:139 (1,2,3,4) - This 00:38:467 (2) - circle make it somehow . . . confusing, and not supposed to be in hard . . . change all of this to 3 sliders instead ? I fix it differently
00:39:123 - Should add note here nope
01:48:293 (1) - shouldn't reduce volume at the end of spinner is okay imo

That's all
Good luck !!

captin1 wrote:

hi, m4m


[Gero's Hard]
pawwaaaah \:3/ gero~ Pawaaaah Captin1 >w<~

00:38:139 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm felt odd to me playingwise, perhaps this will flow a bit better? Fixed
SPOILER

00:54:366 (1) - (nazi) rotate this -7? I dunno, this seems like it fits with the previous stream a bit better O.O Fixed

01:20:592 (1) - (also nazi) rotate about 9? This one has a better reason, along with fitting with the stream before, it leads into the next slider (once you adjust spacing heh) a bit better Fixed
My Updated~

G's Hard
osu file format v12

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140,243,106654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,263,106818,6,0,L|248:277,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,352,107474,2,0,L|353:360,2,45,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,277,108129,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108293,12,2,111735,0:0:0:0:
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

moonlightleaf wrote:

my bad mod:

Easy：

00:27:485(4) move to x|440 y|204

00:29:452(2) move to x|140 y|216

Slider Tick Rate -1


Normal:

00:18:962(4) Ctrl+G

00:20:273(1)(2)(3) all put on left (select all then Ctrl+H ,adjust distance

00:46:171(2) move to x|228 y|52 ?

01:16:330(2) move to x|392 y|168 ?

01:18:297(5) move to x|64 y|172 ?

Insane:

I think 686 is OK ,7HP 7OD is.....oh no ,my acc!

Slider Tick Rate in Insane offten set 1...

00:16:831 note ?

00:24:698(2)(3) ↓
SPOILER

00:38:959(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)(9) ↓
SPOILER

00:41:745(4)(5) no overlap , put on other place

01:34:361(3)-01:35:180(4) easy miss , time too short

good luck ranked ><
Fixed some, thanks for the mods!

Updated Gero's Hard
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Sonico Makaron
Hi :)

[General]
i think standart clap better for this song, maybe remove soft-hitclap and soft-slidertick2?

[Easy]
00:11:094 (1) - add NC since the bug, also you can add soft finish at the beginer slider (you can reduce volume if you want)
00:24:207 (1) - add soft finish at the beginer slider
00:17:650 - unessecery timing section
00:25:518 (2) - move to x:256 y:235 if you fix 00:27:485 (1) - dont forget stack end slider with 00:25:518 (2)
00:26:174 (3) - X:339 y:151
01:00:923 (1) - miss finish here?
01:27:149 (1) - ^
01:42:884 (1) - add finish at the beginer slider
01:44:195 (2) - finish at the end slider
01:46:162 (3) - ^
01:48:129 (5) - remove normal sampleset for clear sound
01:51:735 - unessecery timing section

[Normal]
00:11:094 (1) - NC
00:11:094 (1) - add soft or normal finish at the beginer slider
00:11:094 (1) - miss finish here?
01:21:248 (2) - finish at the end slider
00:51:088 - unessecery timing section
00:51:416 - ^
01:51:735 - ^

[Gero's Hard]
AR-1 because your AR like a insane
so many unessecery timing section, i recommend remove unused green lines plz
00:00:604 (1) - add NC
00:10:110 - unessecery timing section
01:18:625 (2) - add finish at the end slider
01:25:509 (1,2) - maybe make rhythm like this?

01:26:493 (4) - try this rhythm?

01:28:787 (5) - NC

[Insane]
slidertick 4? o,o maybe use slidertick 2? or 1?
00:00:604 (1) - NC since a bug
01:32:066 (3,1) - maybe stack with 01:31:082 (6) - ?
01:45:507 (3) - add finish at the beginer slider
01:46:654 (5) - finish at the end slider
01:48:129 (5) - remove normal sampleset for clear sound

[_AI's Insane]
maybe AR+1?
fix title plz

also i suggest change slidertick for 2 or 1
00:00:604 (1) - NC
00:24:207 (1) - add finish
00:32:566 (1) - i think slider not fit well, maybe you try this rhythm?

01:10:594 - unessecery timing section

good map :)
good luck~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hi :)

[General]
i think standart clap better for this song, maybe remove soft-hitclap and soft-slidertick2? Keep atm

[Easy]
00:11:094 (1) - add NC since the bug, also you can add soft finish at the beginer slider (you can reduce volume if you want)
00:24:207 (1) - add soft finish at the beginer slider
00:17:650 - unessecery timing section
00:25:518 (2) - move to x:256 y:235 if you fix 00:27:485 (1) - dont forget stack end slider with 00:25:518 (2)
00:26:174 (3) - X:339 y:151
01:00:923 (1) - miss finish here?
01:27:149 (1) - ^
01:42:884 (1) - add finish at the beginer slider
01:44:195 (2) - finish at the end slider
01:46:162 (3) - ^
01:48:129 (5) - remove normal sampleset for clear sound
01:51:735 - unessecery timing section

[Normal]
00:11:094 (1) - NC
00:11:094 (1) - add soft or normal finish at the beginer slider
00:11:094 (1) - miss finish here?
01:21:248 (2) - finish at the end slider
00:51:088 - unessecery timing section
00:51:416 - ^
01:51:735 - ^

[Insane]
slidertick 4? o,o maybe use slidertick 2? or 1? Some hitsounds will be missed tho
00:00:604 (1) - NC since a bug
01:32:066 (3,1) - maybe stack with 01:31:082 (6) - ?
01:45:507 (3) - add finish at the beginer slider
01:46:654 (5) - finish at the end slider
01:48:129 (5) - remove normal sampleset for clear sound

good map :)
good luck~
Fixed all! Thanks for the mod!
LexiaLovesU
822 posts
Joined June 2012
LexiaLovesU

im sorry for late mod ive been really busy
so sorry
Key
Red=unrankable
[General]
i don't think we are allowed to have tv size written in title anymore you probably wanna check in on it i'm not certain
[Your Diffs]
[Easy]
00:16:339(1) It sounds better on the repeat on white tick not red tick
01:28:132(2) I don't approve of 1/2 beats in a easy diff because beginners usually get confused even in slow songs
01:29:116(3)^^
01:32:394(1) i am using this wavy slider as an example for how wavy sliders should look follow it or not pls use this slider as a model for other wavy sliders if you follow
1st point should be x:467 y:94
2nd x:464 y:140
3rd [Red Point] x:420 y:172
4th x:376 y:204
5th x:372 y:264
[Normal]
00:43:220(3)wavy slider model as said in easy
00:53:055(4) maybe let it blanket the tail of 3
01:12:397(2) the way it blankets the tail of 1 is weird looking try this instead
SPOILER
01:18:625(6) pls mirror this slider after 3 and then make it exactly parallel 3 as well
01:27:149(1) blanket 7 tail maybe?
01:47:474(2) blanket is weird try this maybe
SPOILER
I heard that normals arent supposed to have stakes might wanna check with a BAT if its okay
[Insane]
not much wrong i loved it i enjoyed playing it i think you did a great job
[Guest Diffs]
[Gero's Hard]
Open Aimod and you will see that some of your sliders ends are not snapped fix that immediately
nothing else i love your diffs :)
[_AI's Insane]
00:16:093(3,4,5,) Why is there a 1/8 stream there. there isnt even a part in the song that has that beats what so ever
nothing else really nice diff :)
nice mapset you deserve a star~* sorry for bad mod :(
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
I'll post my diff and video file tomorrow , because i go to sleep now >w<
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

LexiaLovesU wrote:


im sorry for late mod ive been really busy
so sorry
Key
Red=unrankable
[General]
i don't think we are allowed to have tv size written in title anymore you probably wanna check in on it i'm not certain
[Your Diffs]
[Easy]
00:16:339(1) It sounds better on the repeat on white tick not red tick
01:28:132(2) I don't approve of 1/2 beats in a easy diff because beginners usually get confused even in slow songs
01:29:116(3)^^
01:32:394(1) i am using this wavy slider as an example for how wavy sliders should look follow it or not pls use this slider as a model for other wavy sliders if you follow
1st point should be x:467 y:94
2nd x:464 y:140
3rd [Red Point] x:420 y:172
4th x:376 y:204
5th x:372 y:264
[Normal]
00:43:220(3)wavy slider model as said in easy
00:53:055(4) maybe let it blanket the tail of 3
01:12:397(2) the way it blankets the tail of 1 is weird looking try this instead
SPOILER
01:18:625(6) pls mirror this slider after 3 and then make it exactly parallel 3 as well
01:27:149(1) blanket 7 tail maybe?
01:47:474(2) blanket is weird try this maybe
SPOILER
I heard that normals arent supposed to have stakes might wanna check with a BAT if its okay
[Insane]
not much wrong i loved it i enjoyed playing it i think you did a great job
nice mapset you deserve a star~* sorry for bad mod :(
Fixed most mods!

Thanks for your mod and stars!
Kinomi
1,229 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
insane主要是图风的问题，试着改变下做图的风格，抄比较受欢迎的风格
其实这图的BPM很适合做1/4的小跳
差不多BPM的这种风格的图一般都是纯音乐，你可以找几张看看
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/65545
no kud
Gero
4,456 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Your video offset is -1706

n.n

IRC MOD
2013-10-27 23:10 Rakuen: do u think my insane need to remap?
2013-10-27 23:11 Gero: let me see o:
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: ppl commented that my style is not nice >.>
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: or u could point which part to remap
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: so i dont have to remap all XD
2013-10-27 23:13 Gero: 00:59:612 (1,2,3,4) -  this is nice
2013-10-27 23:13 Gero: :3
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: after that is not? XD
2013-10-27 23:14 Gero: let me check this xD welll, not is bad 
2013-10-27 23:15 Rakuen: how many % rankable?
2013-10-27 23:15 Rakuen: like 20%? :)
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero: 00:01:915 (4) -  please This slider sounds bad should  finish in blue x.x
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero:  00:02:407 -  thist
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero: this*
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero: 00:07:160 (5) -  same here
2013-10-27 23:16 Gero: like a 80 % is rankable
2013-10-27 23:16 Gero: not bad
2013-10-27 23:18 Rakuen: yay :3
2013-10-27 23:18 Gero: i see one thing unrankable
2013-10-27 23:19 Gero: 00:55:678 (1) -  
2013-10-27 23:20 Gero: is outside the mapped area, this is unrankable
2013-10-27 23:20 Gero: you should move this elsewhere
2013-10-27 23:20 Rakuen: oo
2013-10-27 23:21 Gero: IRC mod is okay? xD
2013-10-27 23:22 Rakuen: sure :3
2013-10-27 23:23 Gero: 01:08:135 (3,5) -  Nazi* you can make this sliders bette please , something like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1064938
2013-10-27 23:23 Gero: if you make this move this to center , to give more aesthetic to the map
2013-10-27 23:24 Gero: 01:09:446 (7,8) -  many stacked not flow well imo , try to make one slider it starts here 01:09:446 -  until here 01:09:774 
2013-10-27 23:25 Gero: this makes it more fun to play imo
2013-10-27 23:25 Gero: this exactly http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1064942
2013-10-27 23:26 Gero: 01:11:413 (1,2,3) - Nazi* uglys sliders , I'm sure you can do it better
2013-10-27 23:26 Gero: 01:13:380 (6,7) -  slider, same reason
2013-10-27 23:26 Gero: 01:15:347 (5,6) - ^
2013-10-27 23:27 Gero: 01:16:658 (1) -  finish on head
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: owo
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: u free to help me remap? XD
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: i mean like arrange
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: and put some sliders in better shapes etc
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: >w<
2013-10-27 23:28 Rakuen: im suck on those T_T
2013-10-27 23:28 Gero: 01:29:279 (3,4) -  random jumps here D: can you put this more close
2013-10-27 23:28 Rakuen: im remapping 00:44:860 -  atm
2013-10-27 23:28 Gero: owo
2013-10-27 23:30 Gero: 01:32:394 (1,2,3) -  nazi* try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1064944 looks better
2013-10-27 23:30 Gero: imo
2013-10-27 23:31 Gero: 01:35:180 (4,5) -  remove this jump please x-x to play this ,is uncomfortable atm
2013-10-27 23:31 Gero: 01:35:672 (6,7) -  slider ^
2013-10-27 23:32 Gero: 00:09:455 (4,5) -  unstacked
2013-10-27 23:32 Gero: move this to X:168 Y:48
2013-10-27 23:34 Gero: 00:41:745 (1,2,3) -  this is boring please for your next maps, don't make a many stacked , not flow very well
2013-10-27 23:34 Gero: 00:56:989 (1,2,3) -  ^ same 
2013-10-27 23:35 Gero: 01:16:658 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -  spam of NC , you should not do it this again  please
2013-10-27 23:36 Gero: 01:36:328 (1,2) -  move this 2 sliders to X:256 Y:352 for more aesthetic
2013-10-27 23:36 Gero: well... this is all n.n
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: hmm
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: u can do more irc if u want :D
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: and put on forum XD
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: that one with offset
2013-10-27 23:39 Gero:  okay let me check this more time
2013-10-27 23:39 Gero: xD
2013-10-27 23:40 Rakuen: u can still do in irc :)
2013-10-27 23:40 Rakuen: im not off tht fast yet
2013-10-27 23:41 Gero: okay okay 
2013-10-27 23:41 Gero: xD
2013-10-27 23:42 Gero: 00:20:928 (2) -  stream here because is a insane xD
2013-10-27 23:43 Gero: 00:26:501 (4,5) -  this is a suggestion but in my opinion does not flow well because you're back to a place and mapped , try to make another patten here
2013-10-27 23:44 Gero: 00:27:977 -  add note here for follow the voice
2013-10-27 23:44 Gero: 00:33:714 (1) -  this NC is unnecesary , remove this
2013-10-27 23:44 Gero: 00:39:614 (8,9) -  slider
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: well i go to sleep now because i have school tomorrow x.x maybe later I will continue reviewing your difficulty
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: n.n
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: i'm tired xD
2013-10-27 23:46 Rakuen: ok ~
2013-10-27 23:46 Rakuen: I'll update it soon~
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: okay 
2013-10-27 23:46 Rakuen: thanks very much
2013-10-27 23:47 Gero: you're welcome , cya :3
2013-10-27 23:47 Rakuen: saved log.
2013-10-27 23:47 Gero: yeah xD
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Gero wrote:

Your video offset is -1706

n.n

IRC MOD
2013-10-27 23:10 Rakuen: do u think my insane need to remap?
2013-10-27 23:11 Gero: let me see o:
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: ppl commented that my style is not nice >.>
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: or u could point which part to remap
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: so i dont have to remap all XD
2013-10-27 23:13 Gero: 00:59:612 (1,2,3,4) - this is nice
2013-10-27 23:13 Gero: :3
2013-10-27 23:13 Rakuen: after that is not? XD
2013-10-27 23:14 Gero: let me check this xD welll, not is bad
2013-10-27 23:15 Rakuen: how many % rankable?
2013-10-27 23:15 Rakuen: like 20%? :)
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero: 00:01:915 (4) - please This slider sounds bad should finish in blue x.x
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero: 00:02:407 - thist
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero: this*
2013-10-27 23:15 Gero: 00:07:160 (5) - same here
2013-10-27 23:16 Gero: like a 80 % is rankable
2013-10-27 23:16 Gero: not bad
2013-10-27 23:18 Rakuen: yay :3
2013-10-27 23:18 Gero: i see one thing unrankable
2013-10-27 23:19 Gero: 00:55:678 (1) -
2013-10-27 23:20 Gero: is outside the mapped area, this is unrankable
2013-10-27 23:20 Gero: you should move this elsewhere
2013-10-27 23:20 Rakuen: oo
2013-10-27 23:21 Gero: IRC mod is okay? xD
2013-10-27 23:22 Rakuen: sure :3
2013-10-27 23:23 Gero: 01:08:135 (3,5) - Nazi* you can make this sliders bette please , something like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1064938
2013-10-27 23:23 Gero: if you make this move this to center , to give more aesthetic to the map
2013-10-27 23:24 Gero: 01:09:446 (7,8) - many stacked not flow well imo , try to make one slider it starts here 01:09:446 - until here 01:09:774
2013-10-27 23:25 Gero: this makes it more fun to play imo
2013-10-27 23:25 Gero: this exactly http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1064942
2013-10-27 23:26 Gero: 01:11:413 (1,2,3) - Nazi* uglys sliders , I'm sure you can do it better
2013-10-27 23:26 Gero: 01:13:380 (6,7) - slider, same reason
2013-10-27 23:26 Gero: 01:15:347 (5,6) - ^
2013-10-27 23:27 Gero: 01:16:658 (1) - finish on head
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: owo
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: u free to help me remap? XD
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: i mean like arrange
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: and put some sliders in better shapes etc
2013-10-27 23:27 Rakuen: >w<
2013-10-27 23:28 Rakuen: im suck on those T_T
2013-10-27 23:28 Gero: 01:29:279 (3,4) - random jumps here D: can you put this more close
2013-10-27 23:28 Rakuen: im remapping 00:44:860 - atm
2013-10-27 23:28 Gero: owo
2013-10-27 23:30 Gero: 01:32:394 (1,2,3) - nazi* try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1064944 looks better
2013-10-27 23:30 Gero: imo
2013-10-27 23:31 Gero: 01:35:180 (4,5) - remove this jump please x-x to play this ,is uncomfortable atm
2013-10-27 23:31 Gero: 01:35:672 (6,7) - slider ^
2013-10-27 23:32 Gero: 00:09:455 (4,5) - unstacked
2013-10-27 23:32 Gero: move this to X:168 Y:48
2013-10-27 23:34 Gero: 00:41:745 (1,2,3) - this is boring please for your next maps, don't make a many stacked , not flow very well
2013-10-27 23:34 Gero: 00:56:989 (1,2,3) - ^ same
2013-10-27 23:35 Gero: 01:16:658 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - spam of NC , you should not do it this again please
2013-10-27 23:36 Gero: 01:36:328 (1,2) - move this 2 sliders to X:256 Y:352 for more aesthetic
2013-10-27 23:36 Gero: well... this is all n.n
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: hmm
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: u can do more irc if u want :D
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: and put on forum XD
2013-10-27 23:37 Rakuen: that one with offset
2013-10-27 23:39 Gero: okay let me check this more time
2013-10-27 23:39 Gero: xD
2013-10-27 23:40 Rakuen: u can still do in irc :)
2013-10-27 23:40 Rakuen: im not off tht fast yet
2013-10-27 23:41 Gero: okay okay
2013-10-27 23:41 Gero: xD
2013-10-27 23:42 Gero: 00:20:928 (2) - stream here because is a insane xD
2013-10-27 23:43 Gero: 00:26:501 (4,5) - this is a suggestion but in my opinion does not flow well because you're back to a place and mapped , try to make another patten here
2013-10-27 23:44 Gero: 00:27:977 - add note here for follow the voice
2013-10-27 23:44 Gero: 00:33:714 (1) - this NC is unnecesary , remove this
2013-10-27 23:44 Gero: 00:39:614 (8,9) - slider
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: well i go to sleep now because i have school tomorrow x.x maybe later I will continue reviewing your difficulty
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: n.n
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: i'm tired xD
2013-10-27 23:46 Rakuen: ok ~
2013-10-27 23:46 Rakuen: I'll update it soon~
2013-10-27 23:46 Gero: okay
2013-10-27 23:46 Rakuen: thanks very much
2013-10-27 23:47 Gero: you're welcome , cya :3
2013-10-27 23:47 Rakuen: saved log.
2013-10-27 23:47 Gero: yeah xD
Thanks for the mods~
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hi :)

[_AI's Insane]
maybe AR+1? nah ar8 fit great imo :p
fix title plz

also i suggest change slidertick for 2 or 1 Chged into 2
00:00:604 (1) - NC 00:00:604?
00:24:207 (1) - add finish k
00:32:566 (1) - i think slider not fit well, maybe you try this rhythm? k

01:10:594 - unessecery timing section k

good map :)
good luck~

LexiaLovesU wrote:


im sorry for late mod ive been really busy
so sorry
Key
Red=unrankable
[_AI's Insane]
00:16:093(3,4,5,) Why is there a 1/8 stream there. there isnt even a part in the song that has that beats what so ever ikr lol
nothing else really nice diff :)
nice mapset you deserve a star~* sorry for bad mod :(
kk thanks all

Rakuen : http://puu.sh/55IVo.osu
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen
Updated AI's diff
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
just remind you i got this ._.


i like this song so star☆~,go rank it bro ^^
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Mei wrote:

just remind you i got this ._.


i like this song so star☆~,go rank it bro ^^
补了
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆ ありがとニャ!

嗯！
不过明天有考试，到12月4号才得空orz
会尽快把这歌rank了
谢谢你的心星
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Sephibro
Yo Rakuen! Here we go :)

[General]
I checked the timing, here is what i got..not a big deal but it should be better than the previous one
BPM: 91,510
Offset: 524

EDIT: ok rechecked the timing. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1084230 as you can see from mistimed hits error on top left corner, offset 524 looks perfect, 526 is ok too - and bpm should be 91,510 not 91,513 :)

Sliderticks shouldn't be silent imo

[AI's Insane]
Slider tickrate 4? I think it fits perfectly with the low bpm

00:02:353 (1,2) - this doesn't convince me, and i completely dislike sliders beginning on blue ticks, but there isn't anything unrankable here
00:10:493 (2,3,4,5,6) - :!: COMPLETELY WRONG You are using 1/8 snap here, you MUST use 1/6 snap http://puu.sh/59o0s.jpg
00:16:941 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/59nZS.jpg
00:24:808 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo (6) and (7) should be on opposite parts, like this http://puu.sh/59o9A.jpg. Or you can solve like this too: ctrl+G 00:25:464 (7) and change the position of this 00:25:956 (8) to something like this http://puu.sh/59oc1.jpg
01:05:130 (2,3,4) - I would go for ctrl+G on (3) like this http://puu.sh/59olN.jpg and find better arrangement
01:13:162 (1,2,3) - this is ugly, find better position for (3). A good one could be 140|332 http://puu.sh/59oom.jpg
01:24:308 - 01:25:619 - uhm these inherited timing points make me think this map has already been tickrate 4. btw clap hitsound on these ticks isn't nice imo, you should remove it if you decide to go for tickrate 4
01:45:617 - add note here http://puu.sh/59ovf.jpg and obviously rearrange
01:46:600 - ^ http://puu.sh/59owT.jpg

[Insane]
Oh this has tickrate 4 already, i like it!


00:10:056 (1,2,3,4) - :!: 1/6 snap!! http://puu.sh/59oSy.jpg 1/4 can go too, but 1/6 is way better!
00:27:103 - you need to put a circle here
00:28:087 (6) - make it last until the following blue tick http://puu.sh/59oVu.jpg
00:34:151 (7,8,9) - it is ok as you did it, but i think it would be nicer with (7) and (8) overlapped and (9) overlapped on 00:34:643 (1). Keep it as you did if you like it more
00:39:888 (1) - i would put it somewhere else, like in the middle of the pattern (384|248)
00:57:263 (5) - http://puu.sh/59p3l.jpg
01:02:016 - remove this clap
01:05:786 (3) - this is ugly. i suggest to reduce slider velocity for these 3 short sliders to 1.0x and find better arrangement
01:16:604 (1,2,3,4) - you can put some circles between some of these, like here 01:17:096 http://puu.sh/59pkN.jpg (104|220) and here 01:18:407 http://puu.sh/59plG.jpg (260|248)

Nice hitsounding, i like it!

[Gero's Hard]
AR should be 7..it's a hard of a 92 bpm song!

00:10:384 (2,3,4,5) - :!: this should be 1/6 snapped http://puu.sh/59pVx.jpg. 1/4 can go too, but 1/6 would be much better
00:38:249 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/59q96.jpg much better
01:09:228 - add circle here

[Normal]
00:11:368 - 00:12:679 - these hitsounds are unnecessary and too loud, i would just remove them. If sliderticks weren't silent that would be a good effect
00:35:954 and 00:43:822 these hitsounds are good..but shouldn't they be the same as hitclap? maybe you forgot to update one of the two
01:39:224 (3) - maybe this one is too low, bring it some grids up if you can, or it will be a mess expecially with Hard Rock mod

Diff is well made, but hitsounds are weird, i suggest you to give them a look

[Easy]
00:17:924 (2,3) - care for overlaps like this one, an Easy shouldn't have any
00:20:547 - this hitsound is kinda random
00:50:051 and 00:52:673 - i would remove this kind of hitsound, it's unneeded imo

Good diff and nicer hitsounds than Normal


Let me know when this gets ranked ofc! ;)
Last edited by Sephibro , edited 2 times in total.
Gero
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Gero
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[Gero's Hard]
Open Aimod and you will see that some of your sliders ends are not snapped fix that immediately Fixed
nothing else i love your diffs :)

Sephibro
[Gero's Hard]
AR should be 7..it's a hard of a 92 bpm song!

00:10:384 (2,3,4,5) - :!: this should be 1/6 snapped http://puu.sh/59pVx.jpg. 1/4 can go too, but 1/6 would be much better is much better 1/4 imo .-.
00:38:249 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/59q96.jpg much better No =3
01:09:228 - add circle here Fixed

Let me know when this gets ranked ofc! ;)

My Updated~

G's Hard
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59558
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TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
Artist:AZU feat. SEAMO
ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
Tags:Ending 2 _AI romantic anime Gero
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171,277,93979,5,2,0:0:0:0:
259,262,94307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,276,94634,2,0,P|387:290|431:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,192,95290,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,125,95618,2,0,L|269:107,1,135,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,104,96274,5,0,0:0:0:0:
155,124,96601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,188,96929,2,0,P|74:230|81:273,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,323,97585,1,4,0:0:0:0:
243,343,97913,2,0,L|330:324,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,300,98568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,289,98732,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,276,98896,2,0,P|494:244|495:199,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,120,99552,6,0,L|367:88,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,55,100207,2,0,B|224:118|224:118|130:129,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101191,1,2,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101355,2,0,L|61:258,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,330,101847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,364,102174,6,0,P|155:374|201:357,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,102830,2,0,B|306:265|348:297|390:328|436:291,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,210,103814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,184,103977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,160,104141,6,0,L|364:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,189,104797,2,0,L|120:132,1,180,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,95,105780,2,0,P|28:135|43:179,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,223,106436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,243,106600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,263,106764,6,0,L|248:277,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,352,107420,2,0,L|353:360,2,45,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,277,108075,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108239,12,2,111681,0:0:0:0:

Is time for BAT Rakuen :3
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen
I'll update it later ~ going class atm

I've requested Lunar and Frost but they seems busy ;w;

Help me find one if possible owo

Thanks!
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen
Fixed Sephibro's mod! Thanks :)

Will post the mod log later

Updated Gero's Hard diff

Resnapped timing from 91.513 > 91.510

Changed offset 550 > 524
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Sephibro
okay let's try this hitsound mod

[Normal]
00:17:899 - remove this hitsound
00:20:849 (3) - add finish
00:47:731 - S:C3 here
01:00:189 - S:C3 here
01:01:173 - 01:01:828 - 01:03:795 - 01:04:451 - 01:06:418 - 01:07:074 - 01:11:663 - i would remove all these
01:02:812 (2) - remove clap
01:03:467 - add clap
01:04:123 - remove clap
01:04:779 - add clap
01:21:826 - finish
01:32:645 - remove
01:37:890 - remove
01:47:725 - remove

[Easy]
00:19:538 (5) - something has fucked up with this slider when resnapping, it should be 1/4 shorter http://puu.sh/5bpBY.jpg
00:20:521 - remove or reduce volume imo
00:49:043 - 00:50:026 - remove
00:52:649 - remove
01:10:352 - i'm not sure about this, probably you can keep
01:32:645 - 01:33:300 - remove


This is how a noob hitsounder as i am would make it (really, i suck at hitsounding)
Rakuen
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Topic Starter
Rakuen

Sephibro wrote:

Yo Rakuen! Here we go :)

[General]
I checked the timing, here is what i got..not a big deal but it should be better than the previous one
BPM: 91,510
Offset: 524

EDIT: ok rechecked the timing. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1084230 as you can see from mistimed hits error on top left corner, offset 524 looks perfect, 526 is ok too - and bpm should be 91,510 not 91,513 :)

Sliderticks shouldn't be silent imo

[Insane]
Oh this has tickrate 4 already, i like it!


00:10:056 (1,2,3,4) - :!: 1/6 snap!! http://puu.sh/59oSy.jpg 1/4 can go too, but 1/6 is way better!
00:27:103 - you need to put a circle here
00:28:087 (6) - make it last until the following blue tick http://puu.sh/59oVu.jpg
00:34:151 (7,8,9) - it is ok as you did it, but i think it would be nicer with (7) and (8) overlapped and (9) overlapped on 00:34:643 (1). Keep it as you did if you like it more
00:39:888 (1) - i would put it somewhere else, like in the middle of the pattern (384|248)
00:57:263 (5) - http://puu.sh/59p3l.jpg
01:02:016 - remove this clap
01:05:786 (3) - this is ugly. i suggest to reduce slider velocity for these 3 short sliders to 1.0x and find better arrangement
01:16:604 (1,2,3,4) - you can put some circles between some of these, like here 01:17:096 http://puu.sh/59pkN.jpg (104|220) and here 01:18:407 http://puu.sh/59plG.jpg (260|248)

Nice hitsounding, i like it!

[Normal]
00:11:368 - 00:12:679 - these hitsounds are unnecessary and too loud, i would just remove them. If sliderticks weren't silent that would be a good effect
00:35:954 and 00:43:822 these hitsounds are good..but shouldn't they be the same as hitclap? maybe you forgot to update one of the two
01:39:224 (3) - maybe this one is too low, bring it some grids up if you can, or it will be a mess expecially with Hard Rock mod

Diff is well made, but hitsounds are weird, i suggest you to give them a look

[Easy]
00:17:924 (2,3) - care for overlaps like this one, an Easy shouldn't have any
00:20:547 - this hitsound is kinda random
00:50:051 and 00:52:673 - i would remove this kind of hitsound, it's unneeded imo

Good diff and nicer hitsounds than Normal


Let me know when this gets ranked ofc! ;)
Fixed all!

Thanks for the mod :)

Sephibro wrote:

okay let's try this hitsound mod

[Normal]
00:17:899 - remove this hitsound
00:20:849 (3) - add finish
00:47:731 - S:C3 here
01:00:189 - S:C3 here
01:01:173 - 01:01:828 - 01:03:795 - 01:04:451 - 01:06:418 - 01:07:074 - 01:11:663 - i would remove all these
01:02:812 (2) - remove clap
01:03:467 - add clap
01:04:123 - remove clap
01:04:779 - add clap
01:21:826 - finish
01:32:645 - remove
01:37:890 - remove
01:47:725 - remove

[Easy]
00:19:538 (5) - something has fucked up with this slider when resnapping, it should be 1/4 shorter http://puu.sh/5bpBY.jpg
00:20:521 - remove or reduce volume imo
00:49:043 - 00:50:026 - remove
00:52:649 - remove
01:10:352 - i'm not sure about this, probably you can keep
01:32:645 - 01:33:300 - remove


This is how a noob hitsounder as i am would make it (really, i suck at hitsounding)
Fixed most of it and removed some unstable hitsounds!

Thanks again for the 2nd mod :)
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI

Sephibro wrote:

[AI's Insane]
Slider tickrate 4? I think it fits perfectly with the low bpm

00:02:353 (1,2) - this doesn't convince me, and i completely dislike sliders beginning on blue ticks, but there isn't anything unrankable here
00:10:493 (2,3,4,5,6) - :!: COMPLETELY WRONG You are using 1/8 snap here, you MUST use 1/6 snap http://puu.sh/59o0s.jpg
00:16:941 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/59nZS.jpg
00:24:808 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo (6) and (7) should be on opposite parts, like this http://puu.sh/59o9A.jpg. Or you can solve like this too: ctrl+G 00:25:464 (7) and change the position of this 00:25:956 (8) to something like this http://puu.sh/59oc1.jpg
01:05:130 (2,3,4) - I would go for ctrl+G on (3) like this http://puu.sh/59olN.jpg and find better arrangement nahh :pp
01:13:162 (1,2,3) - this is ugly, find better position for (3). A good one could be 140|332 http://puu.sh/59oom.jpg
01:24:308 - 01:25:619 - uhm these inherited timing points make me think this map has already been tickrate 4. btw clap hitsound on these ticks isn't nice imo, you should remove it if you decide to go for tickrate 4
01:45:617 - add note here http://puu.sh/59ovf.jpg and obviously rearrange
01:46:600 - ^ http://puu.sh/59owT.jpg
Rakuen: http://puu.sh/5cktC.osu
Rakuen
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Topic Starter
Rakuen
Updated AI's diff
Atrue
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Atrue
Hello~
From qq req.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
As you requested, I mod in English. If there is somewhere no clear, feel free to contact me in qq or pm.
[Easy]
Hmm.. How to say..
Too many places you set too long slider. If the slider covers 3,4 or even 5 Kanas which is not so consistent, the slider make people don't know what you want to tell.So my suggestion is that to make the diff better to convey the song, remap some sliders covered too many lyrics to make the diff more interesting. So sorry for give that comment but I think that is better for the diff....

[Normal]
Nice diff.
00:35:274 (1) - The slider covered 2 beats which I think is not so good.00:35:929 - here the vocal is also strong and I think you should distribute a note here.
00:43:142 (3) - ^
01:46:086 (1) - ^

[Gero's Hard]
Hard to pick somewhere not reasonable. But I think is not 'that' interesting for the diff is just in smooth flow. and distance is almost the same. Which means almost no jump in the hard diff which I think is not so interesting. The song is pretty suitable to make some jumps, isn't it?
00:04:457 (3,4,5,6) - Music is flow here and I think stacking is not so reasonable.
00:39:044 - Add a note?


[Insane]
Nice map.
00:05:769 (1,2) - Nazimod but are you sure here is in good blanket?
00:16:259 (1,2) - Stacking is also a good choice.
00:42:978 (1,2,3,4) - distance here make people have a feeling of 'on purpose'.. 233
00:44:781 - Not so necessary to set slower SV here imo.
00:48:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - So what's the pattern look like? Not so pretty.
00:50:354 (1,2) - Distance between the 2 note is bigger than that in 00:49:043 (3,4,5,6) , which is not so reasonable.
00:56:583 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Distance between stream should be better controlled.
01:02:812 (6,1) - Not in good flow imo.
01:30:678 (4,5,6,7) - Distance here is not equal? Maybe.. But the sudden increase in distance is not so reasonable imo.
01:45:430 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern here is not totally symmetry.




[AI's Insane]
Much to say but still something I didn't know how to say. Just feeling not so good in distributing feeling of hit and distance...
00:01:015 (2) - Bending a little will help the flow here.And symmetry with 3 is a good choice.
00:04:457 (3) - Here nazi mod.. Blanket is not done well. Maybe you just set it on purpose for a better flow, which is also good.
00:05:113 (5,6) - Not reasonable jump imo. Maybe the same distance with 4,5 is fine.
00:06:261 (2,3,4) - Let's see this jump. The distance between 3,4 is about four length of that in 2,3, which is not so reasonable to set that big distance with flow changed here.
00:10:468 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream is really not good. Because here the music is still 1/4 but not 1/6 imo. And I think here 3 notes on music is ok. 5 notes is kinda unacceptable.
00:11:998 (3,4,5) - Distance is not so good and I can't see any reason for the jump.
00:13:473 (2,3) - Here the distance is also strange imo. The distance is bigger than usual but not so big as a jump.
00:16:915 (2,3,4) - strange flow. The flow 2 is straight to the beginning of 3 and the flow of 3 is not straight and turn to 4. This kind of symmetry is fake and confusing.
00:21:505 (4,5,6) - In my opinion the flow here should be made better.
00:39:208 (7,8,9) - Strange distance here. And 8,9 is not on good flow.
01:04:779 (1,2) - Here 1 no NC and 2 NC. And the flow is not good.
01:06:090 (4,5) - Strange distance. Here is mor fit in usual flow imo.
01:06:910 (6,7,8) - Confusing flow which I think is not reasonable.
01:08:385 (3) - Beats not reasonable. I won't agree that the ending of slider is on the starting of vocal and beat.
01:08:877 (4,5,6) - This part is not reasonable to set this pattern imo. Because the 3 sliders is not so easy to see the strong relationship.
And here you weigh 4,5,6 which is not not on vocal more than 3 which is on more important beat.I don't think this is good pattern.
01:25:432 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here you both followed vocal and rhythm which I think is really not good in distributing the feeling of hitting. But I've got no idea for the beat here.
01:34:612 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:40:349 (1) - Flow and distance is not good.....


That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Rakuen
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Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Rakuen

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From qq req.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
As you requested, I mod in English. If there is somewhere no clear, feel free to contact me in qq or pm.

[Easy]
Hmm.. How to say..
Too many places you set too long slider. If the slider covers 3,4 or even 5 Kanas which is not so consistent, the slider make people don't know what you want to tell.So my suggestion is that to make the diff better to convey the song, remap some sliders covered too many lyrics to make the diff more interesting. So sorry for give that comment but I think that is better for the diff....

[Normal]
Nice diff.
00:35:274 (1) - The slider covered 2 beats which I think is not so good.00:35:929 - here the vocal is also strong and I think you should distribute a note here.
00:43:142 (3) - ^
01:46:086 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Nice map.
00:05:769 (1,2) - Nazimod but are you sure here is in good blanket?
00:16:259 (1,2) - Stacking is also a good choice.
00:42:978 (1,2,3,4) - distance here make people have a feeling of 'on purpose'.. 233
00:44:781 - Not so necessary to set slower SV here imo.
00:48:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - So what's the pattern look like? Not so pretty.
00:50:354 (1,2) - Distance between the 2 note is bigger than that in 00:49:043 (3,4,5,6) , which is not so reasonable.
00:56:583 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Distance between stream should be better controlled.
01:02:812 (6,1) - Not in good flow imo.
01:30:678 (4,5,6,7) - Distance here is not equal? Maybe.. But the sudden increase in distance is not so reasonable imo.
01:45:430 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern here is not totally symmetry.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Fixed some mods! Thanks! :)
XinCrin
2,845 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hello , From my queue ~

Easy

  1. 00:11:014 (1) Put a Finish in the start of this slider , makes more sense since is the start of the map too :P
  2. 00:17:571 (2) This 1/2 slider feels a bit weird with the rest of this part . Also , this slider isn't following any kind of sounds from the music . In my opinion , you should change
    this slider for a circle only . It will be much better
  3. 00:33:962 (1) This slider doesn't make sense , the slider should finish here 00:34:618 , since the music stand out here . In my opinion , finish the slider in 00:34:618 and add a circle on 00:35:274 . Will work better :)
  4. 00:41:830 (2) For a better flow, CTRL+G in this slider
  5. 00:51:010 (1,2) The flow between these two sliders does not flow very well, especially for beginners . Could you try to make something like this ?
    http://puu.sh/5pnI3.jpg
  6. 01:02:812 (2,3) Stacked objects could be very hard to read for beginners , Try to unstack these objects
  7. 01:13:302 (2,3) Same as above
  8. 01:16:581 (1) What about to put a Finish in the start of this slider ?
Normal

  1. 00:17:571 (2,3) Honestly , the flow between these two sliders , is very bad . Try moving (3) away, so that the cursor movement is more continuous and fun . Something like this , but it's only an idea
    SPOILER
  2. 00:59:533 (1) In the middle of this slider , sounds a normal hitsound (custom sample) . Try to mute the sound, it sounds awkward and ugly
  3. 01:30:678 Following your patterns , You should add a circle here :3
Awesome diff <33

Gero's Hard
  1. 00:01:835 (2) Remueve el Whistle del final de este slider , siguiendo el patron que hiciste con (1) , este slider no necesita un whistle , ademas ese whistle no te da esa sensacion de que la cancion la necesite ahi
  2. 00:07:080 (2) Lo mismo aqui
  3. 00:49:698 (4) Para un mejor flow , deberías mover este slider un poco hacia arriba , x:188 y:124 . Y no me digas que no , que testee el slider con esa posicion y está mucho mejor e.e
  4. 01:07:893 (X) Estoy seguro que olvidaste poner un circle aqui , ademas la cancion lo requiere
  5. 01:26:416 (4) Honestamente este 1/1 slider no me da mucha sensacion a la música , ya que siguiendo apropiadamente la musica y la voz , deberia ser este un 1/2 slider con reverse o con un circle , Será mejor imo
  6. 01:48:217 (1) Al igual como hizo Rauken es sus dificultades deberias subir el volumen al final de este spinner , ya que silenciado se siente mal y yo siento que necesita algun hitsound ese spinner
Insane

  1. 00:05:769 (1,2) Try to blanket this much better :P
Good Luck with this map :)
Nymph
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Nymph
offset+15 差不多 539
Rakuen
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Rakuen

XinCrin wrote:

Hello , From my queue ~

Easy

  1. 00:11:014 (1) Put a Finish in the start of this slider , makes more sense since is the start of the map too :P
  2. 00:17:571 (2) This 1/2 slider feels a bit weird with the rest of this part . Also , this slider isn't following any kind of sounds from the music . In my opinion , you should change
    this slider for a circle only . It will be much better
  3. 00:33:962 (1) This slider doesn't make sense , the slider should finish here 00:34:618 , since the music stand out here . In my opinion , finish the slider in 00:34:618 and add a circle on 00:35:274 . Will work better :)
  4. 00:41:830 (2) For a better flow, CTRL+G in this slider
  5. 00:51:010 (1,2) The flow between these two sliders does not flow very well, especially for beginners . Could you try to make something like this ?
    http://puu.sh/5pnI3.jpg
  6. 01:02:812 (2,3) Stacked objects could be very hard to read for beginners , Try to unstack these objects
  7. 01:13:302 (2,3) Same as above
  8. 01:16:581 (1) What about to put a Finish in the start of this slider ?
Normal

  1. 00:17:571 (2,3) Honestly , the flow between these two sliders , is very bad . Try moving (3) away, so that the cursor movement is more continuous and fun . Something like this , but it's only an idea
    SPOILER
  2. 00:59:533 (1) In the middle of this slider , sounds a normal hitsound (custom sample) . Try to mute the sound, it sounds awkward and ugly
  3. 01:30:678 Following your patterns , You should add a circle here :3
Awesome diff <33

Insane

  1. 00:05:769 (1,2) Try to blanket this much better :P
Good Luck with this map :)
Fixed all mods!

Thanks for the mods! :)

Nymph wrote:

offset+15 差不多 539
谢谢~
求有空再摸点>w<'

Changed BPM of all diff, video and background at 22 Nov 2013!

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Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Hi, modding as requested.

[General]
Would it be possible to find a higher resolution background image? (1366x768)
Are you sure the BPM 91.51? o.o
AI's Insane is missing video.

[Easy]
00:28:076 - For slidertick hitsounds like this, I suggest lowering the volume slightly since it's not a clickable beat. Try 40% or 50%? (20 or 10 below current volume) This applies to all slidertick hitsounds.
00:27:421 (4) - Remove NC
00:29:388 (1) - Add NC
00:35:944 (2) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm of the song. Try something with more 1/1. It doesn't make much sense to have a slider end where there's no significant sound and instead put all the hitsounds on sliderticks ==
00:48:402 (3,1) - Same here >< These don't really fit in.

[Normal]
Same thing about the sliderticks.
00:49:713 (3) - You missed the hitsounds on this slider. (clap, normal, clap)
00:54:958 (3) - Unsnapped slider end.
01:34:954 (4) - Add NC
01:36:266 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
You have a lot of inheriting sections that don't do anything >< Remove them?
00:10:373 (2,3,4,5,1) - Seems weird to use 1/4 when the music is 1/6s...
01:11:350 (4) - I get that you're using rotational symmetry, but this just doesn't flow well from (3) to (5) Sorry I don't have any suggestions how to improve this
01:48:232 (1) - I think it would be nice, just for the sake of consistency if you'd follow the other diffs and use SC:2 whistle + finish here. If not, then remove the whistle? O.o It doesn't make sense to have a 5% hitwhistle.
Nothing else to say here. The diff is pretty good.

[Insane]
Same thing about the sliderticks
SV is all over the place D:
and some overmapping ><
00:10:537 (2,3,4) - This is rhythmically incorrect. If you listen to the music, you'll hear that these are 1/6.
00:11:685 (3,4) - This doesn't flow well. I suggest to do something like this: http://puu.sh/5rg9o.jpg
00:16:438 (2) - This doesn't follow anything in the music. You should probably delete it.
00:17:914 (7,8,9) - Do it this way for better flow? http://puu.sh/5rgiW.jpg
00:24:634 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm.. maybe don't use so many circles close together. It's a bit awkward to play. and the same in a lot of other spots.
00:39:551 (8,1) - Put more distance between these. It's confusing, and players will tend to hit (1) early.
00:40:370 (1,2) - Stack this normally.
00:41:682 (1,2) - ^ it doesn't make sense to do it this way.
00:44:140 (4) - Ctrl+G?
00:45:124 (1) - I wouldn't change the SV here. It's way too low and doesn't suit the song.
01:00:860 (1) - Now this SV is to high >< I don't think the song calls for such high SV. It feels especially weird because you keep low DS, so the sliders are really fast, but moving between notes is really slow.
01:02:499 (6,8,2) - I wouldn't recommend this kind of stacking. It makes it hard to read, especially since the notes are so close together.
01:04:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+J? I think it'd flow much better.
01:07:089 (3) - Try a different rhythm here. The 1/2 slider doesn't seem appropriate here, as suggested by your hitsounding. Try either (1/4 slider + circle) or (circle + 1/4 slider).
01:27:086 (1) - Same thing with SV here. I don't think it should be this high.

[AI's Insane]
Add video...
For slidertick hitsounds, I suggest lowering the volume slightly since it's not a clickable beat. (20 or 10 below current volume) This applies to all slidertick hitsounds.
A lot of unnecessarily large jumps ><
and a lot of the circle to slider parts with 1/4 beat spacing, the placement is awkward to play, and I would much prefer them to just be stacked.
00:16:274 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm, I think it's nicer: http://puu.sh/5rhfH.jpg
00:22:175 (6) - Ctrl+G? to be stronger
00:28:568 (2,2) - I know it's not visible, but stack?
00:30:207 (3,4,5) - Try to make the flow here better. For example, you could move (4) like this: http://puu.sh/5rhE9.jpg
00:32:994 (2,3,4) - Improve the flow here. Try http://puu.sh/5rhIs.jpg
00:39:387 (8,1) - Stack?
00:40:370 (1,2) - Why such big jumps? It really doesn't go well with the song. 2.96x spacing is a massive jump for something like this.. i'd try something else. Same goes for the rest of this pattern.
01:04:302 (8,1) - You need some way of making this more smooth. The way the slider velocity is, (1) is way to close to (8). Players will probably click to circle early.
01:10:039 (1) - This slowdown is really sudden and doesn't really make sense to me. I'd just keep going with the same SV
01:38:724 (5) - Spacing... 3.78x... I don't think you should make such huge jumps on a slow song.

Ok, well good luck with this.
Rakuen
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Rakuen

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, modding as requested.

[General]
Would it be possible to find a higher resolution background image? (1366x768) Can't find any other good BGs, searched for days.
Are you sure the BPM 91.51? o.o BPM tester says 91.51, tell me if there's problem with the timing.
AI's Insane is missing video. Fixed.

[Easy]
00:28:076 - For slidertick hitsounds like this, I suggest lowering the volume slightly since it's not a clickable beat. Try 40% or 50%? (20 or 10 below current volume) This applies to all slidertick hitsounds.
00:27:421 (4) - Remove NC
00:29:388 (1) - Add NC
00:35:944 (2) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm of the song. Try something with more 1/1. It doesn't make much sense to have a slider end where there's no significant sound and instead put all the hitsounds on sliderticks ==
00:48:402 (3,1) - Same here >< These don't really fit in.

[Normal]
Same thing about the sliderticks.
00:49:713 (3) - You missed the hitsounds on this slider. (clap, normal, clap)
00:54:958 (3) - Unsnapped slider end.
01:34:954 (4) - Add NC
01:36:266 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
You have a lot of inheriting sections that don't do anything >< Remove them?
00:10:373 (2,3,4,5,1) - Seems weird to use 1/4 when the music is 1/6s...
01:11:350 (4) - I get that you're using rotational symmetry, but this just doesn't flow well from (3) to (5) Sorry I don't have any suggestions how to improve this
01:48:232 (1) - I think it would be nice, just for the sake of consistency if you'd follow the other diffs and use SC:2 whistle + finish here. If not, then remove the whistle? O.o It doesn't make sense to have a 5% hitwhistle.
Nothing else to say here. The diff is pretty good.

[Insane]
Same thing about the sliderticks
SV is all over the place D:
and some overmapping ><
00:10:537 (2,3,4) - This is rhythmically incorrect. If you listen to the music, you'll hear that these are 1/6.
00:11:685 (3,4) - This doesn't flow well. I suggest to do something like this: http://puu.sh/5rg9o.jpg
00:16:438 (2) - This doesn't follow anything in the music. You should probably delete it.
00:17:914 (7,8,9) - Do it this way for better flow? http://puu.sh/5rgiW.jpg
00:24:634 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm.. maybe don't use so many circles close together. It's a bit awkward to play. and the same in a lot of other spots.
00:39:551 (8,1) - Put more distance between these. It's confusing, and players will tend to hit (1) early.
00:40:370 (1,2) - Stack this normally.
00:41:682 (1,2) - ^ it doesn't make sense to do it this way.
00:44:140 (4) - Ctrl+G?
00:45:124 (1) - I wouldn't change the SV here. It's way too low and doesn't suit the song.
01:00:860 (1) - Now this SV is to high >< I don't think the song calls for such high SV. It feels especially weird because you keep low DS, so the sliders are really fast, but moving between notes is really slow.
01:02:499 (6,8,2) - I wouldn't recommend this kind of stacking. It makes it hard to read, especially since the notes are so close together.
01:04:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+J? I think it'd flow much better.
01:07:089 (3) - Try a different rhythm here. The 1/2 slider doesn't seem appropriate here, as suggested by your hitsounding. Try either (1/4 slider + circle) or (circle + 1/4 slider). Changed the pattern of previous notes tho, will try this
01:27:086 (1) - Same thing with SV here. I don't think it should be this high.

Ok, well good luck with this.
Fixed all except the SV

Thanks very much! ❤
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