m4m request
Note: that these are only suggestions and thus can be ignored [Key]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Red= UnrankableBold=Strong SuggestionPlain= Regular Suggestion
[General]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~weird NC NC's dont occur every 4 notes it occurs by musical stanza
[Normal]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~00:09:326 (1,2) - not sure if you wanted these to look the same. but there not the same. i think it would look better if they were the same =3=
00:11:172 (2) - NC it should follow stanza
00:13:019 (3) - ^^
00:13:019 (3) -
dont end a slider on a stanza because there usually the most powerful part of the white ticks and thus should be clickable BATs and Natsu will mention this. it got mentioned to me x.x
00:17:634 (2) - move to x:228 and y:132 to make it align with the previous sliders end. in normal you want to make it as clean as possible
00:17:634 (2) -
dont end a slider on a stanza because there usually the most powerful part of the white ticks and thus should be clickable00:18:557 - a NC should be here
00:21:326 (2) -
idk know about this slider you have it pointing down while the next note is upward.00:22:249 (3) - NC
00:24:096 (1) - this slider doesnt really match with the song. maybe try putting a red tick first to make it seem sharped edged when that note hits on the blue tick
00:25:942 (3) - NC
00:33:326 (3) - NC
00:35:172 (1) - blanket is a bit off
00:37:019 (3) - NC
00:40:711 (3) - NC
00:43:480 (2) - this slider feels out of place like i feel the red tick should be earlier like it feels a bit late
00:44:403 (3) - NC
00:47:172 (2) - i feel like this slider should be the same with the previous slider
00:48:096 (3) - NC
00:48:096 (3,4,5) -
the transiction between notes right here is to suddenly upward and downard. this should make it flow better >~<00:51:326 (2) -
dont end a slider on a stanza because there usually the most powerful part of the white ticks and thus should be clickable00:51:788 - NC should be here >~<
00:53:634 (1,2) - i never liked placements like this i personally dont think they flow very well
00:57:326 (1) -
i dont feel this slider matches this part of the song maybe try a wave slider. try this one maybe :<00:59:172 (2) - i actually fell in love with this slider good job +u+ but you should put an NC
01:00:557 (3) -
okay the flow got a bit ruined right here since the slider had a very curved end and you put a circle extremely far right which ruined the flow. move the circle to x:256 y:184 so the flow will return natural and you get a cute blanket01:07:480 (4,1) -
im bit iffy about the flow here when people usually hit repeater they tend to follow the repeaters path.01:07:480 (4) - NC
01:09:788 (3) -
dont end a slider on a stanza because there usually the most powerful part of the white ticks and thus should be clickable01:10:249 - NC should be here
01:15:788 - Cool SB effect
Thats all for now
ill do the rest of the mod tommorow
[Hard]Omg the AR should be at least 6 i feel like 7 make the spread uneven because your normal is 4 AR and it just seems so uneven
OD seems to low with AR 7 but if you move Hard to AR 6 then it seems fine
Just my Opinion
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i personally felt like this was way to long mostly cause in the middle of the slider there is a stanza and that stanza is very powerful and it felt like a waste that you didnt hit it00:05:634 (2) - NC
00:07:480 (3) - NC
00:11:172 (3) - NC
00:12:557 (4,1) -
i dont like this placement at all. to me it seems so clumped up and smushed together. to me it looks like a flow ruiner. also putting that circle where the previous circle was seemed very repetitive and boring :p00:13:019 (1) -
i dont think this slider matches with the music at all maybe try something more flowing like a wave slider00:14:865 (2) - im not a big fan of these type of slider but its your map so do whatever you want and also NC
00:18:326 (4) -
i feel like this circle ruined the flow by being so far left why the slider before was curved alot to the right00:18:557 (1) - shouldnt there be a hitsound here?
00:20:403 (1,2,3) - maybe make 2 dip a little bit. i think making it go a little downward will seem less boring then a plain straight path. but dont make the dip super downward make it only a little bit downward
00:25:942 (5) - NC
00:27:788 (1,2,3,4) - i dont like patterns like this they always seem so clustered together :< but it was very creative
00:33:326 (3) - NC
00:37:019 (5) - NC
00:39:788 (2,3,4,5) -
that pattern it when people put a circle under slider i feel bad playing it. also the last slider makes me feel like you ruined the flow. that curve plus far right = meh flow transition. try this maybe00:40:711 (5) - NC
00:46:249 (1,2,3) - like i said im not fan of these type of patterns. to me they look weird
00:47:172 (3,4,1) - check your spacing on for its off it should be 1.40 but its at 1.33x
00:49:019 (3) - weird slider so curved XD
00:53:057 (4) - move to x:56 y:220 to align with the previous slider's end=
00:55:480 (1,2) - idk these 2 sliders placement dont seem to suit the song >~<
00:57:326 (1) -
this slider doesnt fit this part of the song because the red tick usually show a sudden change in music so the slider can match it but in this part the song sounds like more of a wavey slider00:59:172 (1) - see this is a part that should have redticks nice job i think it suits it well
01:02:403 (1) -
dont end a slider on a stanza because there usually the most powerful part of the white ticks and thus should be clickable01:08:865 (3,4,5) -
the placement here ruins flow because 4 is a bit to dipped. so what you should is move 4 more inward instead of being so outward01:10:711 (3,4,5) -
^^01:13:249 (2) - I dont feel like this should be under a slider it doesnt seem to fit
01:25:019 (5) - NC
01:28:711 (5) - ^^
01:30:096 (1) -
dont end a slider on a stanza because there usually the most powerful part of the white ticks and thus should be clickable[Lunatic]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~00:03:788 (4) - NC
00:07:480 (3) - ^^
00:08:865 (1) -
dont end a slider on a stanza because there usually the most powerful part of the white ticks and thus should be clickable00:10:711 (4) -
^^00:17:172 (2) - i dont think putting a circle under the sliders tail feels right here. they dont have similar sound or volume
00:18:326 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:557 (2) - NC
00:18:903 (4) - i never liked it when slider started on blue ticks and ended on white ticks to me it sounds wrong. maybe try this :<
00:24:558 (2) - i dont think putting a circle under the sliders tail feels right here. they dont have similar sound or volume
00:26:288 (4) - idk i feel like this too curved doesnt seem right :<
00:26:865 (5,6,7) - i feel like 6 goes to outward. i never like going to outward to play triplets
00:28:250 (2) - i dont think putting a circle under the sliders tail feels right here. they dont have similar sound or volume
00:29:403 (5) - ^^
00:31:019 (1) - that stack actually fits good job
00:33:326 (5) - i think this would better like a blanket and also NC
00:34:249 (6,7,8,9,1) - Like i said i never like patterns like this but its your map so do whatever you like
00:40:711 (4) - NC
00:59:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this seems like a huge gameplay issues
01:07:480 (1) - A 2.0 DS FOR A STREAM OMG THAT IS WAY TO HARD FOR INSANE FOR EXTRA MAYBE BUT THAT WOULD PROBABLY CONFUSE A PLAYER TO THINK OF IT AS RED TICK.
sorry at the end i cant test the Lunatic diff to more things wrong since my mouse for gameplay is broken sorry ;(