1. Hard (2.81 stars, 155 notes)
2. Lunatic (3.49 stars, 238 notes)
3. Normal (1.73 stars, 92 notes)

vlad969632 wrote:

hi from #modreqs
[Easy]
1) 00:09:323 (1,2) - Use distance spacing - 1.4x
no, sorry
at Easy-diff, I want to uniform DS as soon as possible
2) 00:16:702 (1,2) - ^
3) 00:20:392 (1,2) - ^
4) 00:24:081 (1,2) - ^
5) 00:25:926 (3,4) - ^
6) 00:25:926 (3) - delete this note
??
it is slider, isn't it?
7) 00:39:761 (2,3) - Use distance spacing - 1.4x
8) 00:43:451 (2,3) - ^
9) 00:45:757 (1,2) - ^
10) 01:09:738 (3,4,5) - stream in easy? it's imposible
Hold, Let me think...
it's not so hard, I think.....
11) 01:23:113 (1,2,3,4) - jump in easy? fix this
Hold
a little boring if DS is 1.2x at this part
[Normal]
1) 00:49:907 (1) - remove combo
2) 00:51:291 (2) - new combo
no, sorry
I intend to unform to 00:57:286 (1,2,3) -
[Ex]
all map is nice ) thx~

~~ Good luck ~~

Azure wrote:

Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

beautiful song

[General]
Your Normal is too hard
Your map diffs should be "Insane / Hard / Normal" or "Hard / Normal" or "Hard / Normal / Easy"
So, you have some choices to choose:

1. change your Normal as Hard (CS have to -1 and fix some DS) and change your Easy as Normal (make it little harder, 3~3.5 stars)
2. delete your Easy and make your EX diffs easier (CS-1 and fix some DS)
3. make your EX diffs and Normal easier
I'll choose 1.
I'll remap easy and normal diff to incorporate your suggestion
And I think your skin is unrankable...but keep it now until your map need bubble, BATs will tell you
Oh, it's so sad...
I make oneself available for fix of skinning
send me form-pm when you decide and ready to mod

• GENERAL
  00:31:460 - How about an extra kiai starburst here? It fits well with the song since the downbeat is really clear from the song part behind it
  00:46:218 - I really think kiai should start here. Besides it is the stanza(big white tick), the current one is too suddenly for the song imo
  01:34:181 - End the fading sound here and crop mp3 from this part. Too long blank lol

• Normal
  00:31:460 (1) - Adjust the curve on this turn so that it will make the encircling on 00:32:844 (2) - looks better if the turn is cleaner
  00:48:985 (6) - Make the curve cleaner and make it encircle the 00:49:907 (1) - better
  00:57:286 (1) - Make the turn more visible and avoid overlaps with the lines. Might be confusing for beginners
  01:06:510 (3) - Repeat -1? May be confusing for beginners to see the kick
  01:10:661 (6) - NC. Avoid long combos on easy

• Hard
  00:09:323 (1,3) - Make the turn cleaner for better looks
  00:13:013 (5) - Stack with 00:11:168 (3) - looked better
  00:13:013 (5) - NC for different rhythm and avoid long combos on normal(6-7)
  00:26:272 (7) - NC
  01:08:816 (3,4,5) - Uhh unstacked triplet is a bit hard, this one is actually fit more for insane try stacking this
  01:10:660 (3,4,5) - ^

• EX
  00:42:413 (9) - I don't think this note really necessary, nothing here
  01:00:053 (9) - better if you NC at this point to avoid long combos on the stream and looked better too

1. CS-1, AR-1

1. 00:11:168 (3) ctrl+G
2. 00:16:702 (1) ^
3. 00:28:463 (2) move to x52, y228
4. 01:08:816 (3,4,5) change to this http://puu.sh/3F17E.jpg will be better, because this is in a Hard diff
5. 01:10:660 (3,4,5) ^

1. 00:03:789 (2,3) change slider's order on here
2. 00:14:858 NC
3. 00:16:587 (9,1) DS
4. 00:26:848 (4,5,6) closer will be better here

AnreFM wrote:

Hey there RandomEffect M4M? :3

• GENERAL
  00:31:460 - How about an extra kiai starburst here? It fits well with the song since the downbeat is really clear from the song part behind it
  KEEP
  because Kiai-Time become too long
  00:46:218 - I really think kiai should start here. Besides it is the stanza(big white tick), the current one is too suddenly for the song imo
  You're right, fix!
  01:34:181 - End the fading sound here and crop mp3 from this part. Too long blank lol OK, I'll try to change

• Normal
  00:31:460 (1) - Adjust the curve on this turn so that it will make the encircling on 00:32:844 (2) - looks better if the turn is cleaner Fix
  00:48:985 (6) - Make the curve cleaner and make it encircle the 00:49:907 (1) - better Fix
  00:57:286 (1) - Make the turn more visible and avoid overlaps with the lines. Might be confusing for beginners Fix
  01:06:510 (3) - Repeat -1? May be confusing for beginners to see the kick Fix
  01:10:661 (6) - NC. Avoid long combos on easy
  Fix

• Hard
  00:09:323 (1,3) - Make the turn cleaner for better looks Fix
  00:13:013 (5) - Stack with 00:11:168 (3) - looked better Nice Idea!
  00:13:013 (5) - NC for different rhythm and avoid long combos on normal(6-7) KEEP
  00:26:272 (7) - NC fix
  01:08:816 (3,4,5) - Uhh unstacked triplet is a bit hard, this one is actually fit more for insane try stacking this
  01:10:660 (3,4,5) - ^
  Take Azure's suggestion

• EX
  00:42:413 (9) - I don't think this note really necessary, nothing here
  nope
  it fit main melody. After spinner become a little hard, but for Insane-diff it's no problem, I think
  01:00:053 (9) - better if you NC at this point to avoid long combos on the stream and looked better too
  That's so fine!!!
  it looks so good, thanks~

yeah actually you've fixed your biggest issue of diffs on your remap. It was your difficulty name, It is the right decision to change it
all good already, just make the sliders more cleaner and it should be fine~
Good Luck

Azure wrote:

come back as your PM

[General]
well... I think your rythm is OK,so try to make more variations on the arrangement
OK, I'll try!

[Normal]

1. CS-1, AR-1 All Change

[Hard]

1. 00:11:168 (3) ctrl+G OK
2. 00:16:702 (1) ^ ^
3. 00:28:463 (2) move to x52, y228 avoiding stack is OK, but let me think the place
4. 01:08:816 (3,4,5) change to this http://puu.sh/3F17E.jpg will be better, because this is in a Hard diff
5. 01:10:660 (3,4,5) ^
   OK, fix

[Ex]

1. 00:03:789 (2,3) change slider's order on here
   KEEP
   I want to keep their symmetrical formation
2. 00:14:858 NC fix
3. 00:16:587 (9,1) DS fix
4. 00:26:848 (4,5,6) closer will be better here fix

try to find more mods and good luck !

sjoy wrote:

Hi From M4M
Easy:
how about ar4? OK, change
00:36:442 (2) - it's diffcult set the note on blue line for this diff.try to combine with 00:36:788 (3) - to slide fix
01:00:539 (3,4) - don't stack them fix
01:00:539 (3,4,1,2,3) - I think they are the same color and 01:02:844 (4,5,6) - are another color fix
Hard:
00:22:145 (4,5) - chang it to slider? fix
00:31:484 (1) - add finish fix
01:00:539 (4) - move to 388,216? avoid stack by moving 01:00:308 (3) -
EX:
00:16:726 (1) - try to close with the 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5) - fix
00:38:748 (10) - I think this note can be deleted no, sorry
00:43:821 (1) - the note isn't on 00:43:936 so try to move more far
nope
No problem according to DS
01:11:146 (5) - don't stack with 01:10:914 (4) -
fix
That was hard to see

That's all
Good Luck

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

1. uh, "maybe" the rankable is easy-normal-hard-insane.. consecutive difficult. where is normal?...
   .............You know understand? (poor english;)
   No problem, I think
   According to Ranking Criteria, 4 kinds of mapset don't necessarily need for ranked

Easy

1. 00:41:630 (4,5) - maybe........ it's too hard for beginner?.. i don't know. two choice. or skip
   1.move slider, ex) 01:02:844 (1,2)
   2.remove slider, 00:41:630 00:42:091 add note.
   OK, I choose suggestion-1.
2. 01:25:904 (4) - move y-68. fix

Hard

1. 00:22:145 (4) - remove. and 00:22:260 - add note. fix
2. 01:00:769 - add note. no, sorry
3. 01:13:913 (4,5) - overlap. remap in order to avoid overlap
4. 01:15:758 ~ 01:22:675 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/892017 how about you? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/98234 << It looks like your map. found it.
   KEEP
   I think it is better to be notthng in this part

Ex

1. 00:14:420 (4) -maybe move (256,292)? it's too far fix
2. nice stream. it's pretty. thanks~
3. 01:15:758 ~ 01:22:675 - i said. ↑KEEP

Good Luck

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! xD Random mod:

[Easy]
01:07:456 (4,5,1) - I can picture the slider at 01:04:689 (1) being used here as well, jsut to give a small relief for new players. Having a lot of hit circles in a row can be pressuring imo. Still looks good as it is though.
KEEP
I understand your suggestion. but at this part, the slider like 01:07:456 (4,5,1) - isn't suitable, I think

[Hard]
00:12:575 - NC fix
00:18:571 - ^ fix
00:22:260 - ^ fix
00:41:630 - ^ nope

[Insane]
00:29:639 - NC fix
00:41:630 - ^ nope
01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to arrange these hit circles more neatly Remap!

These are just small suggestions. Nice story board, looking forward to seeing this map ranked ~! Thanks~
Hope this helps!

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hi m4m \o/

General

1. In my opinion, utilising a more percussion clap hitsound during kiai time would suit very nicely. OK, I'll consider

Ex

1. 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5,1) - This would look and play better if it was a nicer curve. Maybe bring (5) down a little. fix
2. 00:18:571 (2) - Add a whistle or a clap from the drum sample set here. add whistle
3. 00:23:067 - Add note? You're right! I forgot...
4. 00:30:562 (6) - Also add a clap on this with the finish to accentuate this note even more. A large bass custom hitsound would be nice. nope
5. 01:30:516 (5) - Add clap. nope

Hard

1. Same comments about hitsounds
2. 00:34:021 - Add note. nope
3. 00:51:084 - ^ fix

Easy

1. Nice

That's! Sorry for the short mod... There's really nothing much I say to help you improve, it's already such a nice mapset . The hitsounds are just personal preference, so consider them only if you want to. Thanks again for you mod. Good luck!
Thanks for M4M! it's a great help to me!

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Form queue

[Ex]
00:38:402 (9,10,1) - http://puu.sh/43Y9O.jpg fix
00:42:322 (8,9,1) - http://puu.sh/43YbI.jpg kEEP

[Hard]
00:29:409 (1) - start at 00:29:639 - & end at 00:31:023 - fix

[Easy]
Nice but i think this can be a Normal rename~

Mei wrote:

Hi,this is a new modder to try to give some suggestions. If yo have some commands with my mods plz point it out so that I can also learn from it as well ._.

let's start (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

Ex
00:23:067 (7,8) - I prefer a short slide for this but not teo single notes
fix
restore to single note
00:26:065 (2) - this note I think should be a little ouside from the tail of slide, which is like this no sorry

example

00:30:100 (3,4,5,6) - I think this should be move downward a littltebit like fix! it looks good~

eample

00:34:943 (8,9) - I think the normal way is to move this two on the head of 00:35:173 (1) - ,but if this is ur style just ignore
I agree
move 00:35:173 (1) -
00:59:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ...i am not quite sure this should be in same color,cuz 01:00:077 (1,2) - is a jump and it should be in a new combo
KEEP
is this mean remove NC of 01:00:077 (1) - ? I want to prioritize viewability
01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - strange shape, why not make it a pentagon?
KEEP
I want to distinguish 01:30:054 (1,2,3,4) - from 01:30:516 (5) -

hard
00:27:795 (1,2,3) - just a suggestio ,change to this fix! it looks good~

example

no more problem ;w; just good

normal
01:07:456 (4,5) - how about change to a slide like 01:06:534 (3) -
Nice Idea!
it's more enjoyable~
this one is also perfect

very soft song, and kawai skin (｡･ω･｡) thanks!

1. BPM:130.000
2. Offset:96

1. 00:36:096 (2) - 少し右に移動？ 独自スキンを使っていることもあり、00:34:251 (4) - の判定と重なって見づらいので。
2. 00:38:863 (1) - 末尾にadd whistle? ずっとUpbeatにwhistleが続いているので。2連続で使う分には00:35:173 (1,2) - で行っているので問題ないと思います。
3. 01:23:137 (1,2,3,4) - 今までの流れからすると少し遠すぎる気が、1.20xの方が無難じゃないかなと。
4. 01:26:826 (1) - 01:30:516 - まで延ばした方が？　Upbeatで終わってしまうことに違和感、Exで行っているようにDownbeatで終わらせた方が解決感があると思います。

1. 00:37:018 (5) - (192,284)に移動して、00:36:788 (4) - にblanketを作って見た方がキレイ？
2. 00:41:630 (6,7) - 真上に置くよりは、少しズラしてあげた方が好きです。こういう風に正三角形を作ってみるとかどうでしょう。
   
   image

   
3. 00:46:703 (4) - 真下に向かうスライダーだと00:47:164 (5) - と被るので、このくらいの角度にしてみるとか？
   
   image

   
4. 00:48:548 (2) - 下に置かずに上に置いた方が00:49:009 (3) - への流れが自然になる気がしました。（画像は一例）
   
   image

   
5. 01:03:306 (3) - こういう角度の方が、01:03:767 (4) - に向かいやすいかなぁと。
   
   image

   
6. 01:13:913 (4) - add NC?
7. 01:30:516 - add note. 01:30:054 (8) - を1/1スライダーにしても良いと思います。理由はNormalと同じ。

1. 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5,1) - このカーブが少しガタついて見えるので、もう少し整えられるかなと。もしくは反抗する流れを作ってみるのも一手だと思います。
   
   image

   
2. 01:12:501 (3) - add whistle
3. 01:12:732 (4) - remove whistle

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ M4M req from my queue
Sorry for terrible late, some accidents were happened IRL

[General]

1. BPM:130.000
2. Offset:96

最初の方が少し合わないように感じると思いますが、それはメロディーの音色が立ち上がりの遅いものであるためだと思います。
fix
最初に違和感ありますが慣れるとこんなものなのかも

[Normal]

1. 00:36:096 (2) - 少し右に移動？ 独自スキンを使っていることもあり、00:34:251 (4) - の判定と重なって見づらいので。
   OK
   特に300gが完全にかぶりますね。スキンのアイコンも大きすぎるかもしれませんね
2. 00:38:863 (1) - 末尾にadd whistle? ずっとUpbeatにwhistleが続いているので。2連続で使う分には00:35:173 (1,2) - で行っているので問題ないと思います。
   It's my mistake
3. 01:23:137 (1,2,3,4) - 今までの流れからすると少し遠すぎる気が、1.20xの方が無難じゃないかなと。
   no, sorry
   他のdiffもそうですが最後のpartはDS広げています。低難易度ではあんまりよくないことですけど、1/1rhythmなので難しくはないんじゃないかと
4. 01:26:826 (1) - 01:30:516 - まで延ばした方が？　Upbeatで終わってしまうことに違和感、Exで行っているようにDownbeatで終わらせた方が解決感があると思います。fix

[Hard]

1. 00:37:018 (5) - (192,284)に移動して、00:36:788 (4) - にblanketを作って見た方がキレイ？fix
2. 00:41:630 (6,7) - 真上に置くよりは、少しズラしてあげた方が好きです。こういう風に正三角形を作ってみるとかどうでしょう。That's fine!
   
   image

   
3. 00:46:703 (4) - 真下に向かうスライダーだと00:47:164 (5) - と被るので、このくらいの角度にしてみるとか？
   fix
   次のスライダーのRに対し垂直になる角度にしてみました～
   
   image

   
4. 00:48:548 (2) - 下に置かずに上に置いた方が00:49:009 (3) - への流れが自然になる気がしました。（画像は一例）　fix
   
   image

   
5. 01:03:306 (3) - こういう角度の方が、01:03:767 (4) - に向かいやすいかなぁと。
   fix　
   looks もgood！
   
   image

   
6. 01:13:913 (4) - add NC?　fix
7. 01:30:516 - add note. 01:30:054 (8) - を1/1スライダーにしても良いと思います。理由はNormalと同じ。
   OK
   1/1sliderいれました

[Ex]

1. 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5,1) - このカーブが少しガタついて見えるので、もう少し整えられるかなと。もしくは反抗する流れを作ってみるのも一手だと思います。
   NIceIdea~
   逆カーブにしました。playしてもこっちの方が面白いので
   
   image

   
2. 01:12:501 (3) - add whistle　I mistake...
3. 01:12:732 (4) - remove whistle ^

以上です、Good luck~

epocsodielaK wrote:

Hi~
M4M request ;w;

日本語が下手ですが、これは勉強のために。。。大丈夫かな。。。

approachcircle.pngのサイズは、必ず128x128で
Oh, it's a serious mistake. Fix it!

[Ex]
この譜面が、Exより、Lunaticという名前にリネームしたほうがいいと思います
普通難度順はeasy->Normal->Hard->Lunatic->Extraの順番だから
それに、Extraくらい難しいではないと思います
no, sorry
diff-nameのExは、"Extra"ではなく、"Exルーミア"からとっています。よってこのままで
（東方くわしいですね。fine~）

00:17:172 (2) - 少し下に移動して（132, 97）　fix

00:46:249 (3) - kiaiがスタート時、NCが必要です（ranking criteriaによって）
Really?
見つけられなかったのでどこに書いてあるか教えてくれるとうれしいです

01:00:096 (1) - 少し右へ（370，173）　fix

00:54:211 (3,4) - (3)と(4)を交換すると、流れが良くなると思います
Helpful suggetion
DSをそろえるため、交換するのは(2)と(3)にします

[Hard]
00:18:557 (1,2) - (1)と(2)を交換するのほうがいいかもｗ　一番長い白線のそばのふたつ白線はとても重要だと思います fix
00:46:249 (3) - NC - Exと同じ
00:59:172 (1,2,3,4) - ここのリズムはちょっと変
　　(2)は(192,312)に、remove（3）そして01:00:788 - add note どう？
Remap!

[Normal]
00:46:249 (2) - NC fix

Sorry for the short mod ...orz I think this mapset is fine enough.. and whenever you are free, can you give a simple mod to this? Thank you in advance :3

The song is nice and I like the Ex diff xD thanks~

epocsodielaK wrote:

Sorry but actually i didn't find relative rules ;w;

I've just been told by other experienced modders 2 months ago,

maybe this rule is out of date /.\

I'm not sure

1. 00:51:326 (2,3,4) - for some reason I can imagine a "few" people would get confused on this. Maybe it's just me but I didn't get confused on this part on the first run. Just saying, maybe that's why people say this can be a normal? I'll say keep it
2. Same for 01:08:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - maybe that's why they said it can be a normal cause of intensity of clicking. Keep it because I think it creates a nice point of climax in this kind of level.
   
   Can honestly say this difficulty is done and checked out very well. I can consider this as a Normal difficulty yes.
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy ~ Normal
   
   Results

   Did three tries:
   1st and 2nd:
   
   3rd( with mods (I'm bad with mods hahah)):
   

1. 00:41:634 (6,7) - A Suggestion (you can accept it or leave it as it is):
   
   
2. Doesn't seem to be a problem but just want to point out: move 00:46:249 (3) - to x:251 y:56. Reason that I say this is because the second point of that slider doesn't completely cover the 00:47:172 (5) - just by x: 1. Again, not really an issue I believe.
3. 01:03:326 (3) - Move this to x:127 y:142 ( You intended to make this part and the next part linear and distance snap of 1.4 or around it yes? If not then you can skip this and the box below.
   
   If you did intended to make that part linear

   1. 01:03:788 (4) - Shift + Alt downward
   2. 01:04:249 (1,2) - Shift + Alt to the right
   Pretty sure you won't agree with this but yeah (A Suggestion) :
4. 01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC
5. 01:06:557 (1) - Add NC
6. 01:08:634 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:08:865 (2) - Add NC
8. 01:10:249 (1) - Remove NC
9. 01:10:711 (3) - Add NC
   
   Smooth gameplay indeed, some parts can be quite challenging I believe such as doing the triplet circle notes( as in the distance snap of those) and 00:52:711 (3,4,5) - but hey, it's a Hard difficulty and I shouldn't complain about that,but I'm actually not. Again, smooth gameplay!
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Hard
   Okay, since I tried out this beatmap once I woke up I probably was too drowsy to stay full focus on during gameplay sorry.
   
   Results

   Did two tries:
   1st:
   
   2nd(After fully analyzing the difficulty without mods):
   

1. 01:01:019 (1) - Remove NC
2. 01:01:941 (4,5,6,7,8) - Bit of re-positioning (Suggestion)
   

   184,112,61941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   232,80,62056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,68,62172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   344,80,62287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   388,112,62403,2,0,P|405:148|393:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   Before

   
   After

   
3. 01:04:249 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:04:710 (2) - Add NC

Results

You can tell which part I kept getting wrong on

AllStar12 wrote:

Hey there, M4M just as I promised. Website kept going down so it delayed me on finishing this earlier but lets see here:

[Normal]

1. 00:51:326 (2,3,4) - for some reason I can imagine a "few" people would get confused on this. Maybe it's just me but I didn't get confused on this part on the first run. Just saying, maybe that's why people say this can be a normal? I'll say keep it
2. Same for 01:08:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - maybe that's why they said it can be a normal cause of intensity of clicking. Keep it because I think it creates a nice point of climax in this kind of level.
   
   Can honestly say this difficulty is done and checked out very well. I can consider this as a Normal difficulty yes.
   You're right
   this diff is a litte difficult for beginner player by resoun of the kind of above your comment. so I changed the diff-name form "easy" to "normal"
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy ~ Normal
   
   Results

   Did three tries:
   1st and 2nd:
   
   3rd( with mods (I'm bad with mods hahah)):
   

[Hard]

1. 00:41:634 (6,7) - A Suggestion (you can accept it or leave it as it is):
   fix
   that's smoother cursor moving!
   
   
2. Doesn't seem to be a problem but just want to point out: move 00:46:249 (3) - to x:251 y:56. Reason that I say this is because the second point of that slider doesn't completely cover the 00:47:172 (5) - just by x: 1. Again, not really an issue I believe. fix
3. 01:03:326 (3) - Move this to x:127 y:142 ( You intended to make this part and the next part linear and distance snap of 1.4 or around it yes? If not then you can skip this and the box below.
   no sorry
   I intend to uniform DS
   
   If you did intended to make that part linear

   1. 01:03:788 (4) - Shift + Alt downward
   2. 01:04:249 (1,2) - Shift + Alt to the right
   Pretty sure you won't agree with this but yeah (A Suggestion) :
4. 01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC OK
5. 01:06:557 (1) - Add NC OK
6. 01:08:634 (1) - Remove NC no
7. 01:08:865 (2) - Add NC no
8. 01:10:249 (1) - Remove NC no
9. 01:10:711 (3) - Add NC no
   
   Smooth gameplay indeed, some parts can be quite challenging I believe such as doing the triplet circle notes( as in the distance snap of those) and 00:52:711 (3,4,5) - but hey, it's a Hard difficulty and I shouldn't complain about that,but I'm actually not. Again, smooth gameplay!
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Hard
   Okay, since I tried out this beatmap once I woke up I probably was too drowsy to stay full focus on during gameplay sorry.
   
   Results

   Did two tries:
   1st:
   
   2nd(After fully analyzing the difficulty without mods):
   

[Ex]

1. 01:01:019 (1) - Remove NC why?
2. 01:01:941 (4,5,6,7,8) - Bit of re-positioning (Suggestion) mmm... KEEP
   

   184,112,61941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   232,80,62056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,68,62172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   344,80,62287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   388,112,62403,2,0,P|405:148|393:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   Before

   
   After

   
3. 01:04:249 (1) - Remove NC fix
4. 01:04:710 (2) - Add NC fix

Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane
Test Play
I've done reasonable amount of tries on this difficulty (5-6 tries?)
Either doing it single tapping, alternate tapping or both. Reason is because I wanted to see which is better. Here was my results:

Results

You can tell which part I kept getting wrong on

Gosh I wanted to write more about this difficulty but I honestly don't see much mistakes in this difficulty. Can't complain about the triplets and the streams because they can be playable. Just me not being able to know the speed of it and it's a Insane difficulty yes. So overall I guess you can say these are just suggestions rather than minor mistakes. I hoped my mod helped and again wish you good luck on this!

Rakuen wrote:

M4M from your queue

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96436

[General]
Nicely mapped!
Just some suggestions

[Normal]
00:13:019 (2) - Make this blanket with the first no
00:24:096 (1) - 斜めのsliderがストレートよりいいとおもう (my japanese is not good and lazy to type XD)
KEEP
ここはspaceが狭いので変えません
00:43:480 (2) - これも、たとえば　
fix
ここは気に入ったので変えました！

00:51:788 (3,4) - Too close, can make (4) a little down
no, sorry
I intend to uniform DS
01:15:788 - Break starts here fix
01:23:172 (1,2,3,4) - Make a shape, triangle or diamond is better
Change
I choose triangle

[Hard]
00:24:788 (2) - Stack perfectly, hold shift (or toggle Gird Snap) and move left by just a little fix
00:55:249 (4) - This too, try to stack perfectly if possible fix
01:13:249 (2) - ^ fix
01:15:788 - Break starts here fix

[Insane]
00:10:711 (2) - Off grid and move to left for just a little All fix your stack suggestion!
00:12:556 (4) - Off grid and move to right for just a little
00:13:942 (3) - ^ Move left a little
00:20:864 (2) - ^ Move up and left a little
00:55:480 (1) - Stack perfectly with 00:54:557 (5) -
00:59:403 (3) - Stack with tail of 00:58:711 (4) - ?
00:59:403 (3) - This and 00:59:865 (7) - is not on the same line, make it a regular diamond, ignore if you rotated it from a square
Let me think...
I made this pattern by use of hold shift
01:05:633 (6) - Stack with 01:06:672 (3) - ? you can keep, this is extra suggestion
KEEP
There is little point in it, imo
01:15:788 - Break starts here fix

Pandiar wrote:

Hi~ from m4m
ありがとう～XD

[General]
説明文?に「Artist:Sensitive Heart」「Album:Scarlet Destiny」も入れるといいかも？
KEEP
Tagsには入っているので
[Insane]
CS-1すれば万人受けするとは思いますが、今のままのほうがらしい難しさがあって好きです:D KEEP
00:20:403 (1) - add finish no
00:27:789 (1) - ^
00:27:789 (1) - ^
00:28:481 (3)から00:28:711 (4)が少し入りにくいかなと感じたのでこんなのとか
Remap
提案を参考にsliderを調整し、stackのやり方も一部変えました

SPOILER

00:34:249 (6) - Ctrl＋Gしてこんなのとか
fix
たたきやすくていい感じ

SPOILER

00:36:326 (4,5) - 前後の(3)(5)(6)が均等に並ぶこんな感じもいいかもです
fix
DSが変わるのでわかりにくいかと思ったのですが、むしろわかりやすくなったかも

SPOILER

00:37:943 (8) - ここはスタックさせないで離したほうがもっと面白いかもです。こんな感じとか？
Remap
rhythmが良いのでこっちに変更。配置はさらにいじりました

SPOILER

00:45:788 (1)or00:46:020 (2)にadd whistle　どちらも入れると変だけどどっちかに入れるといい感じ？試してみて気に入ったほうにどうぞ！
fix
(1)にしました～
00:53:635 (1) - add finish fix
00:59:403 (3) - add whistle?
00:59:864 (7) - ^
Whistle2つは試してみて気に入ったらどうぞ～ prefer it!
01:00:558 (3) - finish削除　始端にadd whistle fix
01:01:019 (1) - add finish fix
01:01:480 (3) - ここのスライダーはリズムがあわないかなと思うのでこのようにしたらどうでしょうか KEEP

SPOILER

01:05:171 (3,4) - Ctrl＋G KEEP
DSがだんだん広がってちょっとたたきにくいので
01:08:402 (1) - add finish fix
01:14:634 (4,5) - note2つでこういうのも面白いかもしれません（形が雑でごめんなさい） KEEP

SPOILER

[Hard]
finishはinsaneとほぼ同様です
00:25:942 (5) - スライダーでこんなのとか
Remap
note×2はsliderに変えました。DSをそろえるために配置は少し変えました

SPOILER

00:28:711 (3) - Ctrl＋Jの形でスタックさせたほうがスムーズに入れるかも fix
01:01:019 (1) - 音楽の伸びてる所にスライダーをあわせてこんなとかどうですか fix

SPOILER

01:23:172 (1) からのところすごく好きです　XD XD
01:26:865 (1)と01:27:788 (3)を逆にしてもいいかもです
mmm... KEEP
迷ったのですが左回りを維持した方がよさそうなのでこのままで

[Normal]
Distance spacingが1.2なのが少し気になりました。
最低難易度なのでできたら1.0のほうがいいと思います。
KEEP
Normalとして扱うつもりなのでこのままで
こちらもfinish音はinsane diffとほぼ同様です。
00:01:942 - 00:08:865　ここまでなにもないですがスライダーを入れるべきかと思います Let me think...
00:36:096 (2) - 斜めじゃなく縦にまっすぐのがいいかも？ fix
00:46:249 (1) - add finish

配置がとても勉強になりました！
音楽もskinも素敵でしたｗ
good luck!

smallboat wrote:

Hello, M4M Req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:22:249 (3) -Hold to "shift" x:133 y:47 ?
OK
00:59:172 (2) - Cancel the slider medium's whistle sound?
no, sorry
it's on purpose


[Hard]
00:05:634 (2,3) - End + whistle?
unnecessary
in this part(selected S:C2), normal-hitsound is same as whistle
00:10:711 (2,4) - +whistle
00:36:096 (2) - Can cover the 00:34:249 (5) - slider head.
KEEP
because of long time between them, it doesn't seem worthwhile to stack
00:48:096 (1) - Blanket the 00:47:865 (6) - ?
KEEP
I intend smoother cursor moving to the next slider
00:51:788 (1) - Can cover the 00:51:096 (2) .
KEEP
I intend to uniform 00:51:788 (1,2,3) - to the straight slider (45 degree)
00:53:634 (1) - DS 1.3x? Not 1.4x? I mistaked 1.4x is correct
00:54:096 (2) - Blanket the 00:53:634 (1) fix
00:54:557 (3) - Blanket the 00:53:634 (1) 's slider end. fix
00:56:403 (3) - Try blanket 00:55:942 (2) 's slider end. no. previously, blanket 00:57:326 (1) -
00:59:172 (1) - You can cover the 00:57:326 (1) slider head feel good. fix
01:03:788 (4) - You can cover the 01:01:942 (3) slider head feel good. no

[Ex] HP+1? KEEP

00:10:711 (2,4) - whistle?
00:13:480 (2,4) - ^
00:17:634 (4) - You can copy 00:16:711 (1) 's slider to do symmetric.
no
slider's length is defferent
00:30:095 (3,4,5) - DS suggest narrow? Good suggetion!
01:05:171 (3,4) - ctrl+g? no. it is smoother cursor moving, imo
01:05:633 (5) - cover the 01:06:672 (3) . no


[Other]

1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Can you help me my map for a mod? Thanks!

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi, from M4M!

NORMAL

00:36:096 (2) - Rotate right 45 degrees OK

00:46:249 (1) - No need to NC KEEP

00:51:788 (3,4,5,6) - This square pattern looks a little confusing when its too close to 00:51:326 (2) -
Consider moving the square a few units lower
Remap
rotate 00:51:326 (2) - 90-degree

01:10:249 (1) - Add a finish hitsound That's fine! good sense~


HARD

00:40:480 (4,5) - Bettter if these notes were stacked above the the tail end of 00:38:865 (1) - fix

00:47:865 (6) - I wouldnt suggest stacking this, maybe move to X:428 Y:208?
I agree
and remap in the way of not stack
Pattern is really good for this one so not many mods needed XD

Ex

00:31:019 - Add a note here to maintain rhythm flow
KEEP
I intend to add a little rest
00:38:865 (1) - Move to X:272 Y:136, not so good if stack with 00:38:750 (11) -
OK
but DS makes a little small
00:42:557 (10) - Add this note here, and slider start at 00:42:672 no, sorry

01:05:171 (3,4) - Swap locations with each other? So 3 on the left, 4 on the right
OK, fix
several modders indicated the same
01:06:557 (1) - NC this to show new pattern fix

Pretty good mapping skills in general! Good luck, and I hope I helped!