This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 августа 2013 г. at 1:04:34

Artist: Samfree
Title: Invasion
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 kagamine rin
BPM: 184
Filesize: 6898kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,89 stars, 134 notes)
2. Hard (4,49 stars, 235 notes)
3. Insane (4,9 stars, 548 notes)
4. Normal (4,2 stars, 217 notes)

Download: Samfree - Invasion
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st beatmap.
Enjoy!
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15089052
Changelog:
15.8 - Applied [Navy]'s mod
16.8 - Applied Rewrite's, Rice's, koreapenguin's, kelvinli's mods(and as kelvinli suggested, renamed Advanced to Normal and Normal to Easy)
20.8 - Applied RikiH_'s, Chronotakular's mods

Hello~M4M
Sorry for my bad English..
[Normal]
it looks like Easy diffs

overall difficulty>>2

Please open Aimod(ctrl shift a) and check the box
change distance~

01:21:880 (1,1) -
For this diff it's too difficult because of short time from spinner-end to next slider-start


01:56:772 (3) - ctrl g




Please open Aimod(ctrl shift a) and check the box
change distance~

[Advanced]

00:28:891 (1) - delete one reverse

01:03:293 (3,4,5) - same distance

01:47:152 (1,2) - - confused because of 01:45:359 (1) -
move it plz (other stack notes too)

[Hard]

00:23:674 (6) - nc

00:24:815 (2,3) - change to slider

00:49:761 (5) - delete one reverse

00:54:163 (2) - nc
00:55:467 (3) - nc

02:28:076 (3) , 02:30:685 (3) - How about spinner?

[Insane]

00:15:033 (1,2,3), 00:15:685 (5,6,7) - - Stack note or reduce distance

01:05:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:12:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
03:06:717 (3,4,5) - must reduce distance
hell..

01:28:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - but these notes are okay

02:07:695 (3) - wow wonderful sliders

02:30:359 (1) - not match with vocal.

That's all~
your 1st beatmap..? I can't believe
great map

Good Luck !

M4M back
[Normal]

1. 00:20:250 (5,1) - a little bit far between those two
2. 00:20:250 (5,1) - better to add a spinner from here to 00:20:250 (5,1) - IMO
3. 00:58:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep a same distance 0.8x
4. 01:55:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^

[Advanced]

1. 00:23:674 (4,1) - set those two for far distance, because 00:24:326 (1) - is a new beat
2. 00:44:380 (5,6) - replace it as a reverse slider?
   
   Sample

   

[Hard]

1. AR+1
2. Others are fine IMO

[Insane]

1. AR-1
2. one suggetion, make the loose part larger distance like 00:53:511 (3,4,5) - , and smaller distance for crowded part like 01:05:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

GL on rank!

Rewrite wrote:

M4M back
[Normal]

1. 00:20:250 (5,1) - a little bit far between those two Changed the distance a bit
2. 00:20:250 (5,1) - better to add a spinner from here to 00:20:250 (5,1) - IMO Nah, I feel like there are too many spinners already, and I really don't like it here
3. 00:58:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep a same distance 0.8x Done
4. 01:55:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^ ^

[Advanced]

1. 00:23:674 (4,1) - set those two for far distance, because 00:24:326 (1) - is a new beat Increased distance just a little
2. 00:44:380 (5,6) - replace it as a reverse slider? Sure
   
   Sample

   

[Hard]

1. AR+1 Done
2. Others are fine IMO :3

[Insane]

1. AR-1 Gonna leave it at 9 for better readability, unless more mods suggest decreasing to 8
2. one suggetion, make the loose part larger distance like 00:53:511 (3,4,5) - , and smaller distance for crowded part like 01:05:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Done

GL on rank! Thanks :3

Thanks for mod :3

For M2M Mod :3

[General]
- Delete "Kagamine Rin - Invasion (MFZ).osb" on the song folder.

[Normal]

00:31:989 - Add a note here.

[Advanced]

01:47:152 to 01:47:641 - the gap between this two objects are too fast and short.
-Change the kicker slider to a long slider or turn the two objects into 4 circles.

01:53:674 (6) and 01:54:326 (7) - give these objects a little space in between by moving 01:54:326 (7) to x408, y104 (Grid Size: Tiny)

02:22:859 (1) - Move this circle 1 tick forward.

[Hard]

00:30:685 - Add a Finish.

01:58:076 - New Combo

[Insane]

Lower the hitsound volume of this diff.

-adjust the 100%s to 65% and the 95%s to 60%.
-With so many notes in it, it's really noisy and it's unpleasant to play. >.<

01:42:424 (4) - Move this note somewhere else.
-It's an anti-jump circle.

02:28:402 to 02:29:380 - Map this part.
-Extend the spinner to 02:29:054

Hope this helps~

Good luck on this map. ^^

K.Penguin Mod

[General]

-maybe fine

[Normal]

01:05:902 (1,1) - need more rhythmic space between this spinner and the next note
01:16:337 (1,1) - ^
01:22:206 (4,1) - this overlap notes shape really not pretty, so replace plz
00:52:859 (2,3,4) - 01:51:554 (1,2) - the same reason, 01:51:554 (1,2) - slider head, tail add clap
02:03:293 (1,1) - need more rhythmic space between this spinner and the next note
02:56:772 (1,1) - ^
03:07:206 (1) - spiner add finish

[Advanced]

-this diff i don't understand D:
(not normal)

[Hard]

00:21:554 (1,2,3) - distance check
00:45:685 (2,3,4) - ^
00:47:967 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:50:413 (6,7,8) - ^
01:01:989 (1,2,3) - ^
02:16:337 (1,1,1) - slider head add finish
02:31:989 (1) - ^
02:48:946 (1) - ^
02:59:380 (1) - ^
03:02:967 (8) - maybe NC here
03:07:206 (1) - spiner add finish

[Insane]

-HP Drain Rate : -1

00:29:869 (5) - ???
03:07:206 (1) - spiner add finish

Good luck on this map. ^^

Ciao, m4m here~

[General]
Your patterns on hitsound is very unstable. Try adding a clap on every 2nd / 4th white tick. Excess clap is only acceptable when the music suggested it.
Try some curve sliders and 15° sliders, they can greatly boost the appeal of the map
There are whooooollllllle loooooots of overlapping issues here. When two objects are overlapping each other, they may not be readable, further more they would not give a nice impressions for players. Overlapping is what most maps trying to avoid, and you should, too.

[Insane]
00:11:935 (4) - make shapes like this, it will be a nice blanket with (3)
00:12:424 (1) - move it further to prevent overlapping
00:13:402 (5,3) - ^
00:14:706 (6) - since you have large spacing before, why is it so close to the previous object?
00:21:554 (1) - this part contains too few hitsounds. Try adding a soft-whistle on the 2nd and 4th white tick
00:25:467 (1) - too linear, try a "V" shape
00:29:869 (5) - I doubt if it is rankable
00:30:685 (1,2,3,4) - remvoe those claps, they are too noisy
00:44:054 (9,10) - I thought they are doublet cuz the spacing
00:45:848 (7,8,9) - don't really like straight lines, they play awkard. move (9) somewhere else
00:46:663 (1,1,1) - Del NC(Delete New Combo)
00:50:087 (2,3,4,5) - this spacing can be very confusing
00:53:185 (2) - move it farther.
00:54:815 (3,4,5) - consider decreasing the volume of these 3 notes to make a difference
00:56:119 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:56:446 (5,6,1) - very confusing spacing.
01:01:337 (3,4) - either stack them or use normal spacing
01:07:043 (5) - Since it's an insane, try using a stream instead, moreover one will not expect it to be repeated multiple times
01:26:446 (6) - I don't see any 1/4 beats in the music. The slider is not required
01:29:380 - add note with soft-finish here
01:41:119 (6) = 01:26:446 (6)
01:43:728 (1,2,3) - a little farther, please. plus they are having overlaps issues
01:44:543 (4) - unreasonable 1/4 slider, again
01:48:946 (1) - try some continous streams like:
02:07:695 (3,4) - stack perfectly
02:35:331 (4) - seriously I don't get why are those silders spamming in your map
02:38:511 - add note with drum-finish here.

[Hard]
Tick Rate-1
00:23:674 (1) - remove NC
00:29:380 (1,2) - add a clap on every ending
00:30:685 (1) - finish
00:48:946 (4) - too close with (3)
00:50:413 (6,7,8) - inconsistent spacing
00:59:054 (2,4,6) - remove claps in their endpoints
01:04:272 (2,4) - ^
01:04:598 (3) - I don't like this shape, if you have decided to keep anyways, stack its end with 01:03:293 (1)'s head
01:20:250 (3,4) - they are overlapping, not so intuitive
01:26:772 (1) - add a spinner here, end at 3rd white tick
01:28:076 (1) - ^ map something here then. 1 note per white tick is still fine
01:40:467 (2,4) - keep the last clap, remove everything else
01:43:728 (1) - too close, keep most distance between objects consistent please
01:45:685 (3,4) - ^
01:56:446 (2,4,6) - remove claps in their endpoints
02:01:663 (2,4) - ^
02:16:337 (1) - add break here, delete every similar sliders start from this point.
02:21:554 - start normal mapping here. Listen to the drums beats
02:38:511 - add note with drum-finish here.
02:52:533 (6) - remove keb- I mean clap in its tail
02:55:141 (2,4) - ^

[Advanced]
Tick Rate-1
rename it to Normal?
00:14:380 (1,1,1) - Del NC
00:17:641 (3) - up by 1 grid to prevent overlap
00:45:196 (1,4) - overlapping. discouraged for easier diffs
01:11:446 (1,2,3) - I cannot understand this spacing
01:23:837 (1) - make it even more curved. Move the second anchor point.
01:47:152 (1,2) - horrible jump
02:11:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much complex distance. Be sure to activate distance snap at most times
02:14:869 (6) - use only 3 three anchor points will do. Using 4 create a weird shape
02:22:859 (1) - you know what to do.
02:25:467 (2) - NC
02:38:511 - add note with drum-finish here.

[Normal]
Tick Rate-1
rename it to Easy, then
00:11:119 (1,2) - Don't get why jumps are in Easy/Normal modes
00:22:859 (2) -
00:31:989 - add note
02:07:206 (2) - mirror it from (1)

Copy and Paste 02:05:902 (1) --> Ctrl+< -->  Ctrl+<  --> Move it somewhere else --> done!

I was only mentioning major problems, while minors would be mentioned by latter modders.
Honestly, the map is somehow old-fashioned(at least to me). But it is acceptable, since it is your first map, you can improve anyways. IMO you should play a lot more maps, in the process learn their patterns and their styles. Some of them can be taken out, with your own method of mapping, creating your own style.

Sorry if I was being rude or something, I cannot make up my words

Good Luck

Thanks for mods, applied almost everything. :3

M4M from my queue

Black=Suggestion
Blue=Should fix
Red=Must fix/Unrankable

Okay, your map is quite new, so I won't make a super-nazi mod but I will help you to fix the unrankable issues and major errors!

General

It's ok

Easy

00:11:119 (1) - Add a finish in the beginning
00:16:337 (1) - Here too
00:11:119 (1,2) - Try to add some whistles in the end of these sliders, since you don't have many hitsounds in this part
00:15:033 (5,1,2) - Here too, add whistles in the end of these sliders
00:20:250 (5) - This is too loudy, there are too many claps, remove some of them
00:21:554 (1,2) - Again, these sliders sound "empty", add some whistles in the end!
00:24:815 (4) - Add a clap here, you did it earlier so you should do it here as well
00:25:467 (5) - Too many claps!
00:27:424 (1) - Add whistle
00:30:685 (4,5,6,7) - You put claps on 4 and 6, try to put them on 5 and 7 because they follow the drums much better...

Well, I think you have to remake all the hitsounds... They are unconsistant and no BAT will consider them rankable...
Some suggestions? Try to put claps on every upbeat, I mean on every 2nd and 4th tick. I'm not really good at explaining things, so contact me in-game and I will show you how to put them better!
Also, put finishes where there is a finish sound in the song, and try to use whistles where you think they can fit the song!
And also, don't leave parts of the map without hitsounds!

00:51:554 (1,2) - Swap NCs
00:56:935 (5) - This slider is too short for an easy and it has too many repeats, make an unique long slider instead of a short slider with 2 repeats, it will less confuse newbie players
01:26:772 (7) - The same ^
01:45:033 (1,2) - These kinds of 90° sliders are ugly, noone likes them... I suggest to turn them into normal curved sliders
01:54:326 (2) - Same as 00:56:935 (5)
02:07:206 (2,3) - The spacing here is wrong, why you used x0.4? It should be x0.8!
02:38:511 - Add a note with finish here
02:56:772 (1,1) - These objects are too near, a newbie player can't play them properly, shorten the spinner and let it end in 02:58:728

These were only the most important things, you have to work a lot to improve the map because some sliders are ugly to see, the best way to do this is by getting a lot of mods!
Another thing: While you map, try not to put all objects near to the centre, you had a lot of space and you didn't use it! Let me explain, if you press ctrl+a you can see this:
Well, all the objects are really near to the centre and during playing it gives a bad sensation... I don't know how to explain. Anyway, don't worry because it's just a minor thing that you don't have to fix, but in your next mapset try not to put all objects near to the centre

Normal

Same problem about hitsounds...

00:17:641 (3) - Avoid using straight slider like this, noone likes them!
00:19:272 (2) - Move to 181|193!
00:19:598 (3) - Move to 268|175
00:23:674 (4,1) - Why this jump? It's a Normal, jumps like this are not allowed
00:31:989 (3) - What about deleting this note and starting a spinner here and end it in 00:34:598 ?
00:42:424 (1,2) - Use the same shape for them, the pattern will look much better
00:43:728 (3,4,5) - Spacing error, use x0,80 please!
00:45:196 (1,2) - Spacing error again

Why you used x1.0 spacing in some parts? It's a Normal diff, so you should really use the same spacing through the whole map, so go through the map and fix the spacing...

01:03:619 (4) - Move to 419|188

______________________

Well, you have the same problems also in other diffs, so I think you should check them and fix them...
Sorry but I won't go on in modding because you will have to change a lot of things and my mod will be mostly like useless.
But don't worry, when you will fix and improve the map call me back and I will mod it again because I want to help you, since I think I have some experience in mapping...
I'ìll shoot a star, bye and good luck!

Hello Mod4Mod! (Sorry this took so long!)

General: I feel like this map ends a little too early, especially since the end of the MP3 is very close to where you have ended, maybe you should map the rest of the song? Just a suggestion.

[Normal]

General: Since this is a normal chart, I would completely avoid jumps of any type. Keep constant distance spacing throughout.
Keeping that in mind, I'll point out some jumps I think are especially bad.

01:26:772 (7) - I would try something else here, a slider that repeats like this too much isn't very fun to play, and frustrating when the player misses.
01:51:065 (2,4,) - Perhaps move these notes a little further away from the notes before them.
01:59:380 (1) - Try to make this note more symmetrical.
02:48:946 (1,2) - This jump is pretty bad.
02:51:228 (4,1) - This jump is also pretty intense.

[Advanced]

General: Isn't this like, almost exactly the same as the normal chart?

00:13:728 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think it is necessary to have these as new combos every time.
01:26:772 (7) - Like I said before.
01:51:065 (2,4) - I still missed these notes, but they didn't seem as bad as the Normal difficulty.
01:59:380 (1) - Again, try to make this note more symmetrical.

[Hard]

General: I feel like there are too many spinners in this map. Perhaps remove one or two or three of them, and chart the map normally instead.

00:14:380 (2,3,4) - I would use a slightly larger distance snapping here. Maybe.
00:22:859 (4) - There are two claps on this slider. It doesn't sound like it fits too well.
00:23:674 (6) - Same as above.
00:24:326 (1) - Same as above.
02:33:293 (4,5,6,7,8) - This beat change is really unexpected, so I would either remove the amount of notes here, or distance snap them and remove the stacking.

[Insane]

General: I feel that with your current distance snapping, your approach rate is too high, consider turning it down a little.

00:18:946 (1,2,3) - I would unstack these, and distance snap them.
00:19:272 (4,5,6) - Same as above
00:19:598 (7,8,9) - Same as above
00:19:924 (10,11,12) - Same as above
00:56:283 (4,5,6) - Since there were two triplet streams before this on a part on the song that sounded the same, I would use the same distance snapping, if that made any sense.
01:02:478 (8) - I hit this note early a lot because of the anti-jump. Perhaps you should move it?
01:14:054 (1,2) - I always have an issue with sliders like this on the faster difficulties. This kinda stuff is really hard to read, because the player thinks that slider 1 goes longer than it does behind slider 2. So mix these notes around here.
02:25:467 (1,2) - I said something like this above, because the sound is the same in the song, and you know the sound that is coming up, you are expecting a similar spacing, so move these notes closer together, because you had them closer together before.
02:36:880 (5) - I'd do something with this circle, it's really hard to read.
03:05:739 (4)(Until end) - This part of the song feels like a total spam, and I don't think it really fits the beat at all to be honest, consider remapping this small bit.
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That's all for now! I hope it helped! Good luck! (:

Everything fixed and hitsounds completely remade, thank you.