1. Easy (1.85 stars, 208 notes)
2. Hard (4.86 stars, 401 notes)
3. Lunatic (5 stars, 590 notes)
4. Normal (3.48 stars, 282 notes)
5. Ono's Taiko Muzukashii (4.74 stars, 760 notes)
6. Ono's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 1073 notes)

smallbeans wrote:

Hello.
NO kudosu thanks

Please remove "smallbeans" from tags if this name have no reasons in this map.
You can cancel letterbox because your bg is already have black frame.

Cheer up.

RandomEffect wrote:

That's a nice song!
So, I'd like to mod simply.

[General]
Tags is set only Insane-diff. For ranked, All diffs must have same tags.
I suggest to add below sentences for tags ok
"IOSYS"
"Flandre Scarlet"
(I don't know "smallbeans". Is it necesarry ?) just friend
soft-hitclap and soft-hitwhistle sound same. I think you should choose different sound-file. (And, soft-hitclap2 is unnecessary for this map, isn't it?) yes it's my fault

[Easy]
distance-spacing should be constant value for easy-diff.
02:25:369- 02:35:252- 02:36:664- I think these Inherited-Points are needless
(the same goes for other diffs)

[Normal]
For nomal-diff, distance-spacing should be constant value as possible, too.
how about integrating distance-spacing to 1.00x?
I found some mismatched-stacks for example 01:01:722 (2) -
Shift-key and Alt-key is useful for correct stack
i used 0.80 both Easy and Normal
because i think 1.00 is too far to beginner...

[Hard, Insane]
It might be as well to change different distance-spacing from normal and easy
You can change the setting of distance-spacing by use of Alt-key + mouse-scrol

and i use 1.00 for Hard.Insane
for all difficulties,i'll fix them when i have free time

I'm little experience about modding. So, please ignore if you think my mod is strange.

thanks very much! it's helpful!

~good luck~

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi o/ here from random pending, i found this song really good, so i came :3
very welcome ><
and my english is not good,maybe i can't realy understand your meaning...

Easy

- 00:04:899 (2,3,1) - what about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758940 ok
- 00:09:840 (1,2) - Not parallel replace fixed
- 00:13:369 (2,3) - align them fixed
- 00:23:958 - add note, or start the slider here, could be better same feeling
- 00:27:487 (2,3) - same as 00:04:899 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758950 ok
- 00:40:193 (2,1) - avoid to stack in easy/normal diff, except in certain cases as i recommended u 00:04:899 (2,3,1) - understand
- 00:51:840 (3) - don't tuch the slider with the circle, replace it :3 ok :3
- 00:54:311 (2) - move to 160,156 ok
- 01:16:193 (2,3) - align ? ok
- 01:21:840 (3) - make a curve to fit with end of 01:23:252 (1) - ok
- 01:50:781 (4) - move to 160,204 ok
- 02:28:193 (1,3) - align ok
- 02:28:899 (2,4) - ^ ok
- 02:32:428 (2) - could be better to use the same shape as 02:31:017 (1) - ok
- 02:49:369 (2,3) - it's not the same shape, remake it fixed!

Normal

- 00:08:781 (5,6) - align ok
- 00:09:840 (1,2) - stack better (you're using grid size: tiny ? if no, use it push G) ok,fixed :3
- 00:11:252 (3,4) - ^ fixed
- 00:14:781 (4,5) - ^ fixed
- 00:33:487 (2,1) - don't stack ok
- 00:35:252 (1,2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758972 good idea,fixed
- 00:38:075 (2) - the spacing o.o replace it o.o i see,fixed
- 00:43:369 (4) - stack on the end of 00:42:311 (2) - ok
- 00:46:899 (1,2,3) - what about this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758977 ok
- 00:48:311 (3,1) - and so stack them ok
- 00:55:722 (2) - move to 192,152 fixed><
- 01:00:664 (1,2) - stack better >3< you are right >3< fixed!
- 01:04:899 (1,2) - move to 200,256 sorry but the distance is error
- 01:18:311 (3,5) - stack better ok
- 01:40:193 (1,2,3) - this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758989 yes :3
- 01:56:781 (1,3) - align fixed
- 01:57:134 (2,4) - ^ ^
- 01:58:369 (2) - delete this note no>< feel strange,sorry
- 02:38:781 (5) - move to 268,160 good idea>w<
- 02:41:958 (1,2) - stack better ok
- 02:43:369 (3,4) - ^ ^
- 02:44:781 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758998 ok
- 03:04:193 (3,1) - stack better fixed><(how many times i said this xD, sorry >3<)
don't said sorry>< it's only my fault i wasn't notice

Hard

well same as the others difficulty, stack better your notes ^^ ok^^
- 00:09:840 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759006 ? ok
- 00:12:311 (4) - Ctrl + g ok
- 00:18:664 (2) - ^ ^
- 00:20:958 (4) - delete this note ok
- 01:07:899 (2,3) - align fixed
- 01:47:517 - what about add note here for a little stream ? :3 good idea :3
- 02:49:369 (1) - remove NC fixed
well It still need some work but you did a really good job here, i like thos diff :3 :3

[notice]

Insane

I'm not yet good to mod insane,so just 3-4 suggestion :3 stiil thank
- 00:04:899 (3) - delete one reverse ok
- 00:06:311 (5) - ^ ^
- 00:27:311 (2) - stack with the start of slider and not with the end ok>_>
- 00:27:487 (3,4) - ^ ^
- 00:56:428 (3) - stop the reverse at 00:56:958 -
- 00:57:134 - add a new slider reverse and stop it at 00:57:664 - it's funny :3 yeah >< why didn't i thnk this idea
- 01:11:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - My fingers !! >3< ( but good x) )
haha :3
- 01:58:369 (1,2,3,4) - yeah i love it ! me too

I really enjoyed play this diff !! :3 now wait others mod to make her better that she already is.

it's the 1st diff in this song i done,so i'm happy you like it

that's all, I hope it will help u (if you don't understand something pm me in game) and she will get ranked later :3

thank>< your mod is very helpfull,and let me find many mistake

xChippy wrote:

Hihi from Oyatsu's modding M4M queue :3
I'm modding in his stead since his connection is acting weird :3

General
How about adding Lead-In seconds :3 i lead in one second,but i'm not sure if it'll be better to play...
Untick Letterbox since you don't have a SB

Easy
First of all i dont know what you're following here ><
00:04:899 (2,3) - Stack them ok
00:08:428 (2) - Spacing fixed
00:14:781 (4) - Let it end at the stanza ok
00:16:899 (1) - Make it a repeat slider instead good idea:3 fixed
00:18:311 (2) - Remove the repeat here and just make it one long slider ok
00:19:722 (3) - ^ ^
00:29:605 (1) - Spacing looks like a trap to me :3 realy? i used ctrl+g :3
01:17:605 (1) - Clap on slider's end fixed
01:20:428 (1) - Add clap ok
Lack of hitsounds imo
Normal
00:10:546 (2) - Stack it ok
00:11:958 (4) - ^ ^
00:15:487 (5) - ^ ^
00:26:075 (2) - ^ ^
00:31:722 (4) - ^ ^
00:39:487 (2) - ^ ^
00:46:899 (1,2) - Make this blanket more pretty ok
00:49:722 (2) - Add note ok
00:53:605 (2) - Stack it ok
00:58:546 (2) - ^ ^
00:59:958 (4) - ^ ^
01:19:369 (5) - ^ ^
01:20:075 (6) - Add note no>< i don't know where can add a note pretty
01:22:899 (4) - ^ either
01:26:075 (5) - Stack it ok
01:29:958 (6) - Add note no,sorry
01:31:017 (2) - Stack it ok
01:31:369 (3) - Add note no,sorry ;w;
Yaah, if you want to stack notes do it properly >< ok thanks><
Hard
Heres just mostly again the stacking and the hitsounds >< but the way you stack >< wiil be fixed :3
thanks your mod very much

smallbeans wrote:

OK,I come.
Don't ask me why I come because I don't know why I come. (?)

red : unrankable
blue : may be unrankable, please fix it.
black : just suggestion.

[General]
Tag is not the same between the diffs.
For example, in the Hard you put "IOSYS" "Flandre Scarlet", but in Insane you put nothing. fixed
Lead in time is not the same between the diffs.
For example, in the Hard you set 1 second, but in Normal you set 0 second. fixed

[Easy]
00:07:017 (1,2) these two notes have the different distance around 1.00x . ok
01:50:781 (4,1) ^ ^
02:11:252 ~ 02:20:958 why don't make the map just like other diff?
sorry,this is Easy,so i think it's not necessary
02:41:252 (2) move to x:256 y:116 fixed

[Normal]
I am afraid not Normal can stack notes under the sliders, try to move the notes.
for example, like 00:10:546 / 00:11:958, and many. i will refer your opinion

01:04:906 (1) move this note to other position to get the similar distance. like x:180 y:256. ok
01:07:546 (1,2,3,4) let (1,2)'s distance and (3,4)'s distance the same? good idea :3 ,fixed
for example, move (4) to x:488 y:128
01:20:428 (1,2) these two notes have the different distance around 1.00x .
01:56:781 (1) move to x:192 y:108, just as the same position as 01:55:369 (4). ok

[Hard]
00:11:252 (1) move to x:472 y:180 ok
01:08:605 (4) maybe use the slider to bring out the vocal in 01:08:781? beat only to 01:08:645,sorry
01:47:428 (3) this small stream is ok. but the note (3) which is under the slider makes me confuse.
i think it's ok,sorry
02:39:134 (1) this note is weird. why the long white line is on the bottom of the slider?
because the beat is on the white line ;w;

[Insane]
01:07:722 (1,2,3,4) I think that the head of slider place on the vocal will be better.
for example, like the part 01:58:369 ~ 01:59:605 or 02:52:017 ~ 02:53:252
i think the same would be monotonous
01:11:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) NC on 17. maybe let the stream not so straight? 1.think no NC looks better 2.no
01:27:664 (2) move to x:140 y:140 because (6) is not stack well.
i move 01:28:546(6) to x:188 y:216 and tail move to x:144 y:136
01:28:546 (6) move to x:188 y:216 to have the same position as 01:28:017 (4).
01:36:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) maybe let the stream not so straight? no,sorry
02:13:017 remove NC. there is no NC
02:13:899 (1) I think this position is belong last part, and 02:14:075 is the real new part. not same feeling
02:14:781 remove NC. ok
03:01:369 (1) move to x:308 y:212, and the same as (2). fixed

If you have any problem about the mod, you can ask me.
Maybe use green color to reply the mod in order not to have the same color.
feel very sorry to refuse yor opinions ,but stll thanks for your mod,good luck!
OMG! thanks your star>_<!!

jonathanlfj wrote:

m4m~
nice song
yeah

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
the bg file size is too large for its quality, here is a smaller sized one (with better image quality actually)

SPOILER

remember to change the line: 0,0,"Picture.PNG",0,0 to 0,0,"Picture.jpg",0,0 in the .osu files
very thanks><,fixed
unify your audio lead-in (suggested 1000ms, change in .osu file) ok o.<

you can probably use more soft whistles, e.g. every time the guitar switch strings
^ to finishes, i recommend to place them when there are finish sounds in the music (e.g. 00:23:958, 00:46:546, 00:35:252, 00:57:840, etc.) will try :3

Recommended kiai time setup

00:46:546 - start
00:57:752 - end
00:57:840 - start
01:09:134 - end
01:37:369 - start
01:48:575 - end
01:48:664 - start
02:02:781 - end
02:36:664 - start
02:57:840 - end

fixed

[Easy]
00:04:899 (2) - stack perfectly on end of 00:05:605 (3) (or the reverse) ok,fixed
00:23:958 (1) - too soon after spinner for Easy; you should shorten the spinner to end at 00:23:252 ok
00:34:546 (4) - add clap ok
00:35:252 (5) - NC here instead of 00:35:958 (1) no,sorry
01:09:134 (4) - drag the break to start here (you can activate dragging by hovering over the line that separates the darker gray area with the lighter gray area). Applies to all diffs except Insane understand ,will fixed~
01:43:369 (1,2) - add clap ok
01:45:840 (4) - NC ok
01:48:664 (2) - NC here instead of 01:48:311 (1) good idea o.<,fixed
02:44:428 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm might be a little difficult for newbie players, how bout just use the regular rhythm here:

SPOILER

you are right>_>,fixed

[Normal]
00:14:428 (3) - avoid the partial overlap with 00:12:664 (1) ok
00:50:075 (1) - no NC ok
00:52:546 (6) - start NC here instead of 00:52:899 (1), and tbh i would say avoid the overlap here ok and fixed
00:56:428 (3) - put a blanket around 00:57:487 (4) looks and flows better yes :3 fixed
01:55:369 (4) - lower by 1 grid to overlap 01:56:781; adjust 01:55:722 (5) accordingly ok~
02:12:664 (3) - this slider feels more comfortable if u start it at 02:12:487 ok and stretched to 002:13:017 o.<
02:15:487 (4) - like above, start this at 02:15:311 ok and stretched to 02:15:840
02:44:075 (4) - move to x:108 y:124, stack leniency was broken here fixed
03:03:487 (2,3,1) - 1 grid down ok

[Hard]
00:11:252 (1,2,3,4) - this is very hard to read with AR7 due to the tight spacing, consider revising this pattern (e.g. shift the second slider left). ok,same as 00:05:605(1,2,3,4) Also 00:11:252 (1) should go 1 grid down ok
00:49:369 (7) - NC here instead of 00:49:546 (1) ok
00:50:605 - add a note here (maybe stack on 00:50:781 (1)) take your opinion and NC
01:05:075 (5,6) - blanket these two looks better not realy understand
01:40:193 (1,2) - avoid the overlap of the slider body here ok
01:47:428 (3,4,5) - don't stack 01:47:428 (3) on the end of 01:46:899 (2), again very hard to read properly with AR7
maybe you are right fixed
01:58:369 (3) - NC ok
02:14:958 (2) - stack the end properly with the end of 02:14:428 (1) ok
02:28:899 (2) - this may be deemed unrankable since the repeat is blocked by 02:28:193 (1) until moment before having to hit the slider, so its better to move this somewhere else fixed!
02:30:134 - add note (stack on 02:30:311 (4)) yeah,ok
03:04:017 - add a note here too, place it between 03:03:487 (1) and 03:04:193 (2) ok
overall the diff looks fine, but while playing some of the stacks were quite confusing, maybe you should do more testplaying on this diff and seek opinions from different players will do

[Insane]
00:07:017 (1,2,3,4) - fix stacking here, 00:07:017 (1) is a grid lower than the rest i see,fixed
00:17:428 (3) - dont put it under a slider in such an awkward position, try placing it here:

SPOILER

change

00:30:311 (3) - now this one is actually unrankable; the repeat is completely hidden until you need to hit the slider; reposition this or get rid of the repeat and use a note for 00:30:664 my fault ;w; ,fixed!
01:08:781 (4) - alot more fun if you stack it on 01:09:134 (1) instead not realy understand
01:13:017 (13) - NC ok
01:14:075 (25) - NC, and the stream should stop here; the drums imply 1/2 rhythm here (delete 01:14:164 (26) and 01:14:340 (28))
ok and change something
01:28:546 (6) - 1 grid left ok
01:41:605 (1,2,3,4) - this jump plays a little weird, how bout like this:

SPOILER

same feeling,fixed!
02:12:487 (1,2,1) - The way you NCed this gives a bad implication of the way the spacing works here. An ideal NC pattern:

SPOILER

ok~
02:14:428 (2,3,4) - these are in 1/3 snap ok
02:47:428 - add note ok
02:58:722 - ^ ^
03:01:369 (1,2) - 1 grid up, 1 grid right fixed!
This diff has some weird overlaps too, but the higher AR makes them relatively easier to read. still suggest you to get more test playing and player opinions on this will do o.<

Thats all, pretty nice mapset, good luck in ranking~
thanks for your SB&mod very much ><!!

Cobra wrote:

Hi, M4M (I'm kind of late, sorry)
don't mind

General
You could probably add more hitsounds, there are a lot of oppurtunities for soft finishes and soft whistles!
will try
The BG has big black bars, try finding one that fills the whole screen. It's difficult, but eventually you will find a good one.
sorry,this is the most primitive pictures..

Easy
00:04:899 (2,3) - 2 isnt exactly stacked on the end of (3). ok
00:08:428 (2) - too big of a jump for easy fixed
00:14:781 (4) - should end at 00:15:487 i see,fixed
00:32:428 (1,2,3,4) - if you didnt use ctrl+shift+d for this, you should ok~
01:43:017 - add note? no,sorry
01:51:487 (1) - too big of a jump fixed
02:36:664 (1,3) - these dont stack ends perfectly ok

Normal

I'm not sure what's up with all the incorrect stacking. I hope you didn't do it on purpose. If you need any help on how to stack easier just ask me. Now, I will point out all the incorrectly stacked notes.

00:10:546 (2) - not stacked correctly
00:11:958 (4) - ^
00:24:664 (2) - ^
00:30:311 (2) - ^
00:39:487 (2) - ^
00:40:899 (2) - ^
00:53:605 (3) - ^
00:58:546 (2) - ^
00:59:958 (4) - ^
01:01:722 (2) - ^
01:19:369 (5) - ^
01:26:075 (5) - ^
01:31:017 (2) - ^
01:38:075 (2) - ^
01:39:487 (2) - ^
01:49:369 (2) - ^
01:50:781 (4) - ^
01:52:899 (3) - ^
02:39:487 (1) - ^
02:42:664 (2) - ^
02:44:075 (4) - ^
03:04:899 (1) - ^
all fixed expect 03:04:899(1) move to 03:03:487(2) end

Hard and Insane look good. Nice map. Good luck!
thanks very much! good luck to you too

Xinely wrote:

[General]
rename "Insane" become "Lunatic", because touhou song
ok~

[Easy]
add more hitsound please.. seems boring
00:05:605 (3) - x:209 y:289 for perfect stack with 00:04:899 (2) -
only can find x:208y:288 but perfect stack done!
00:19:722 (3) - x:444 y:236 for branket ok
01:07:546 (2) - x:148 y:176 no
01:09:134 - add note? done><
01:30:311 (4) - NC for consistency ok
01:41:605 (3) - x:320 y:40 for avoid little overlap.. it's better imo think it's ok><
01:43:369 (1) - x:28 y:188 for better flow ok
01:59:781 (1) - finish? yeah,you are right and done
02:32:428 (2) - x:200 y:280 for avoid little overlap no,sorry
02:39:487 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency done
02:59:958 (2) - x:188 y:136 for better flow ok
03:04:899 (3) - finish ok

[Normal]
00:07:017 (1) - for better flow ok~
00:18:311 (1) - 1 grid up for perfect stack ok
00:19:722 (1) - ^ ok
00:24:664 (2) - don't stack it, make confused for newbie
00:26:075 (2) - ^
00:30:311 (2,4) - ^
00:39:487 (2,2) - ^
00:43:722 (1) - finish
00:50:781 (5,6) - don't stack
00:53:605 (3) - ^
so many stack Q_Q

think stack is ok in the normal >< sorry for refuse your stack mod

[Hard]
00:06:664 (4) - make confuse express
00:09:487 (4) - same as above ^
00:31:722 (2) - spacing issue (0,51x) it's okay i think
00:35:781 (2) - ^ (1,06x) ok
00:43:369 (3) - ^ (0,51x) ok~
00:44:075 (1) - finish done!
00:47:605 (2) - spacing (0,50x) oh,done
still problem with confuse stack Q_Q

sorry can't mod insane
GL
still thank! and good luck to you too~

SPOILER

180,304,148899,2,0,P|200:256|252:232,1,110
340,236,149605,2,0,P|312:292|252:324,2,110
340,236,150664,1,0,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

44,76,71958,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,89,72046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,106,72134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
23,124,72222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
27,141,72310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,157,72399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,168,72487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,173,72575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,172,72663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,167,72752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,161,72840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,152,72928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,144,73016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
166,135,73105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,127,73193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,120,73281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,115,73369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,114,73458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,118,73546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,127,73634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,141,73722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,158,73810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,176,73899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,194,73987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,209,74075,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Setsurei wrote:

[General]
Audio leadin Easy & Normal is different from Hard & Lunatic

ok fixed

some suggestions

[Easy]
00:02:075 (2) - add whistle
00:03:487 (4) - ^
00:05:605 (3) - add whistle on slider's tail
00:07:017 (1) - ^
00:21:134 (1) - add finish
00:23:958 (1) - add finish on slider's head
00:30:311 (2) - add whistle
00:31:722 (4) - ^
00:47:958 (2) - ^
00:59:252 (2) - ^
01:00:664 (4) - ^
01:03:487 (1) - add clap on slider's reverse
01:09:134 (4) - move to suit the distance snap
01:38:781 (2) - add whistle
01:40:193 (1) - ^
01:44:428 (3) - move to suit the distance snap
02:26:075 (2) - add whistle
02:27:487 (4) - ^
02:37:369 (2) - ^

fixed all :3

[Normal]
hit sounds follow Easy ok
00:57:487 (4) - x 304 y 252 (perfect blanket) move to x308 y252
02:28:899 (2) - curve fix blanket with this 02:28:193 (1) - fixed
02:29:605 (3) - curve ok
02:30:664 (4) - stack to 02:29:605 (3) - head ok

SPOILER

180,304,148899,2,0,P|200:256|252:232,1,110
340,236,149605,2,0,P|312:292|252:324,2,110
340,236,150664,1,0,0:0:0:0:

02:31:017 (1) - if you change ^, fix this distance snap.. x 292 y 160
i change but i think it's not must be move,i move to others place but it's same as your meaning

[Hard]
hit sounds follow Easy
first time play this map, confused with the stacks lol I must play this over and over to get SH (Hidden S)
so many peple tell me about this problem,so i remap 00:01:370 to 00:20:781,it's maybe better then before now
00:27:664 (3,4,5) - prefer curves rather than linear - it confuse people and think that 00:28:017 (4,5) - is 1 slider
ok,i replace
01:25:193 (1,2,3) - diagonal sliders (for more variations?) yeah,good idea

SPOILER

[Lunatic]
hit sounds follow Easy
whoa, I managed to get a clean hit streams on all of those long streams in 1 play O.O
it means the placement and timing is already perfect..
00:17:075 (2) - x 300 y 128 moved
00:17:428 (3) - stack if you move ^ ^
00:23:252 (2,3,4) - curve ok

SPOILER

01:11:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - better S shaped rather than V, too pointy

SPOILER

44,76,71958,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,89,72046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,106,72134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
23,124,72222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
27,141,72310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,157,72399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,168,72487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,173,72575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,172,72663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,167,72752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,161,72840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,152,72928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,144,73016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
166,135,73105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,127,73193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,120,73281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,115,73369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,114,73458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,118,73546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,127,73634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,141,73722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,158,73810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,176,73899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,194,73987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,209,74075,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:14:252 (1,2) - fix the hit circles of this if you change ^ fixed~

nice map and good luck for ranked! thanks very much~ good luck to you too!

* btw this map drain more than 1:59 - my rules is: 1-3 diffs mod, however I'm in a good mood I'm modding them all
next time when asking for request please read the rules carefully
i read the rules but i forgot...feel very sorry
i will be carefully on next time

Smoothie wrote:

Heya~

M4M from my queue.

[General]
Add "void" to the tags since he/she is the arranger .
Add "96" to the tags since he/she wrote the lyrics. ok^

[Lunatic]
00:04:899 (3) - Add a whistle on the slider start so it is consistent with your previous whistles. fixed
00:05:958 (3) - Remove whistle for consitency. ^
00:06:311 (5) - Whistle on the slider start~ ^
00:07:017 (1) - Remove whistle one the slider end. ^
00:07:722 (3) - Add whistle on the start. ^
00:09:134 (3) - Whistle on the start~ ^
00:10:546 (1) - Whistle~ ^
00:11:781 (1) - Whistle on the slider end ^
00:13:369 (5) - Whistle on start. ^
00:14:605 (2) - Whistle on the slider end. ^
00:16:193 - 00:20:428 - Just keep adding the whistles to the rhythm like i suggested above. fixed all o.<
00:20:428 (1,2,3,4) - Make these horizontally to 00:19:722 (1,2,3,4)? http://puu.sh/3gdTM.jpg ok
00:35:075 (5) - Add a finish on the slider end? yeah>< done
00:35:075 (5,6) - Mh... how about this? Imo it plays better. http://puu.sh/3ge16.jpg ah...fixed
00:43:458 (2) - Remove this note? ok
00:43:722 (1,3,7,11,13,15) - Add clap? wow,after i change i think this become very cool
01:01:369 (1,2) - Swap these two on the timeline for a better flow~ well,i think not change looks better :3
01:02:781 (5,6) - Add clap? OK
01:03:134 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:07:193 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:03:487 (5) - Add a clap on the start? ^
01:07:193 (3,4,5,6) - Claps~ done~
01:09:134 (1) - Add finish? done
01:11:958 (1,7,1,7) - ^ i think you must good at set hitsound done
01:14:075 (13,1,2,3) - Sampleset: Drum? add
01:14:781 (4) - Finish on the start? ok
01:30:664 (2) - Clap on the start~ done
01:31:369 (2) - ^ ^
01:34:546 (1,3,7,9,11,13,15) - Add claps~ done~
01:53:605 (3,4,1,3) - ^ ^
01:59:781 (1) - Add finish? ok
02:53:428 (1) - Move the spinner to 02:53:605 and add a note with a finish here: 02:53:428. Don't forget to adjust the length of the spinner if you change it. fixed

Sorry, mainly hitsound modding on this diff ._.
in fact,i'm realy not good at set hitsound,so thanks your hitsound moding><!
[Hard]
00:23:958 (1) - Add a finish? done
00:23:958 (1) - Remove these? I think it plays better that way. distance...ok fixed
00:38:428 (1) - Remove NC. If you removed that add a NC here: 00:39:487 (6) and add a NC 00:40:546 (1) fixed
01:07:017 (3) - Add a clap? done
01:09:134 (5) - Add a note with a finish? oh...done
01:25:899 (3) - Finish on the slider end? ^
01:34:546 (1) - finish~ ^
01:41:605 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:49:369 (4,1) - I'm not sure about that spacing. oh no>< it's wrong! fixed~
01:58:369 (1) - Add clap? ok
01:59:781 (1) - Finish~ done
02:12:487 (1) - Remove NC ok
02:15:664 (4,1) - Same as i mentioned above. I'm not sure about this spacing. intention :3
02:19:369 (4) - Finish on the end ok
02:20:781 (3) - ^ ^
02:26:781 (1) - Remove NC ^
02:53:428 (1) - Same as i suggested on Lunatic. :3 fixed:3

[Normal]
00:53:958 - You should add a note here. It plays a bit weird without having on there. add
00:58:899 ^ add
01:09:134 - Same as i suggested on Hard~ ok
01:20:075 | 01:21:487 Not having a note on the downbeat is a bit weird. Consider adding a notes there.
01:29:958 | 01:31:369 ^
01:49:722 (3) - ^ fixed all
01:57:840 (4,1,2) - How about deleting these and add a silder that starts from 01:57:840 and ends at 01:58:369? done
01:59:781 (1) - Finish~ ok~

[Easy]
00:04:899 (2) - I think you forgot a whistle here. done
00:09:134 (3) - ^ ^
00:52:899 (1) - Clap on the start? not sure but done
00:54:311 (2) - Add clap~ ^
02:58:546 (1) - Finish on the slider end? ok!


Well, thats all
I think you missed a few claps and whistles on your Hard, Normal and Easy diff. I haven't pointed every single one out. I'm sure you'll notice the missing ones by yourself.

ok,i'll fixed all difficulties and upload

Good luck!
thanks your mod very much!hitsound set is very helpfull>w</
Good luck to you too~

Smoothie wrote:

[General]
Add "96" to the tags since he/she wrote the lyrics.
KK 96 its too short For Searching! Tags at least needs 3 letters>3<

Tsumetaku wrote:

Smoothie wrote:

[General]
Add "96" to the tags since he/she wrote the lyrics.
KK 96 its too short For Searching! Tags at least needs 3 letters>3<

呦! 我來隨機MOD (喂 明明就來搏感情的
那麼 明後天有空看看~~!
先別KD 後會有期(?

Tsumetaku wrote:

Im Back!
呵呵 今天就是有空的那一天了!! (如果我是來亂的會打⑨⑨x100ww)
呼呼 吶開始吧>v<

>w</

General
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★那個綠色的combo真的太富含葉綠素了.. 葉綠素不好嗎 O_Q
挑了芙蘭的水晶顏色~ 參考參考=ˇ=

SPOILER

[Colours]
Combo1 : 6,255,155
Combo2 : 201,56,150
Combo3 : 228,145,18
Combo4 : 13,214,230

改了Combo2,4
Combo1 :6,255,80
Combo4:13,100,150

★手殘爬了一下文Artist可以輸平假ww - いちご fixed~

Easy
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00:23:958 (1) - Slider頭的Finish-掉吧! 轉盤那邊有了.o. 這裡也有喔 :3
02:02:781 - 02:25:369 - 這個Break好像有點長.. 因為這裡變奏很多...又因為是Easy,所以這裡就不+note
★真有才.w.排列很不錯喔~

Normal
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★Audio Lean in 跟別的難度不一樣ww ok
00:21:134 (1) - 要不要消掉Finish 連兩個有點... 有點什麼XD 這裡不消掉 sorry
太讚了 沒什麼能Mod =口=

Hard
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02:25:369 - 感覺從這邊開始的前面幾個Slider可以從0.5~1x這樣設 比較對味ww 這樣會不會有點亂;w;
02:39:134 (1) - 尾端跟2尾疊好=3= ok~030


Lunatic
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00:45:311 (1) - 這串stream打起來沒fu...是Sound太小聲嘛..? XD 改過了,非常感謝Smoothie~
00:47:075 (2) - ku的音是從00:46:899 - 00:47:075的 所以比較不適合擺1/4~~ 摁...覺得沒有差o.<
01:49:193 (3) - 到這個timing看會有2,3個沒疊好喔~~ fixed

很好的Mapset 你是人才 不敢當不敢當
不知道爲什麼 看到超級稀少的台灣mapper 都會想加FriendxD
加油囉囉~~~~~~~~

yeah~謝謝你的mod></ 我會加油

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, Here is my mod.
owo,雖然我沒說要m4m,可是還是很感謝>_</
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
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-Easy-

02:28:193 (1) - 左2 好
02:28:899 (2) - 4位置 ^

02:29:605 (3) - x 388 y 204 想要平行 02:28:193(1)
02:30:311 (4) - x 284 y 324 想要平行 02:28:899(2)
02:31:017 (1) - 1位置 done

02:32:428 (2) - x 200 y 304 沒有移動0.0
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-Normal-

CS+1 ? 不用:3 3.78我覺得沒有必要

00:04:193 (1) - x 204 y 220 沒有移動可是有完整圍住 00:05:605(2)開頭

00:08:075 (3) - x 148 y 268 ok
00:08:428 (4) - x 96 y 196 ^
00:08:781 (5) - x 120 y 112 ^
00:09:134 (6) - x 200 y 148 不移動這個,會覆蓋到00:07:722(2)

00:09:840 (1) - x 328 y 212
00:11:252 (3) - x 372 y 84
00:12:664 (1) - x 300 y 164
00:13:722 (2) - x 236 y 320 所以到這裡都不移動+_+

00:34:546 (1) - x 327 y 48
00:34:722 (2) - x 328 y 44
00:34:899 (3) - x 284 y 48 這三個排起來有點怪...

00:37:369 (1) - x 76 y 124
00:38:075 (2) - x 164 y 100
00:38:781 (1) - x 196 y 216
00:40:193 (1) - x 308 y 88 嗯....覺得不移動比較好

00:43:017 (3) - x 164 y 292
00:43:369 (4) - x 180 y 204 不是移動到你所說的位置,但改了一點

00:58:899 (3) - x 256 y 252 ok
00:59:252 (4) - x 328 y 304 是x304 y328吧 xD

01:04:899 (1) - x 200 y 244 移了一點位置
01:07:017 (4) - x 196 y 256 ^

01:57:840 (4,5,6,7) - 可以更有曲線一點 了解o.o

02:52:369 (3) - x 192 y 252 done
02:52:722 (4) - x 140 y 180 ^
02:53:075 (5) - x 104 y 100 ^
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-Hard-

00:52:546 (1) - 尾端建議與 00:51:134 (3) - 開頭的位置相同 ok
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-Lunatic-

01:13:546 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 可以再彎曲一點 ok~
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是芙蘭 ! (?) >w<
雖然這首曲子真的好多版本 orz..
但這首曲風還蠻輕快的
good song !
Mod 就大概這些,
祝你好運 !

謝謝你的mod&star!!
然後也祝你好運

[ Zzz ] wrote:

HI~ bigfrog

Easy

00:43:017 (2) - Delete done

00:43:017 (2) - Add Circle or Return the slider return the slider

00:43:722 (3) - The start of the spinner ok

00:45:840 (1) - Spinner's End done

00:46:546 (2) - Add Circle done

01:21:840 (3) - I hope a little bit of a slide table shape. oh...ok

SPOILER

For example, this

Normal

00:05:252 (2) - Add Circle

00:11:252 (3,4) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:12:311 (5) - Add Circle

00:37:017 (4) - Add Circle

00:38:428 (3) - ^

00:39:840 (3) - ^

00:41:252 (3) - ^

01:38:428 (3) - ^

no change of there ;w;

hard

00:13:899 (3) - Add Circle no

01:28:193 (2) - Delete ok

01:28:193 (2) - Slider seems to be a good idea to return the slider

01:31:193 (4) - Add Circle no

01:47:340 (3) - ^ ( Same as above ) done :3

jyc-Binggan wrote:

hi~from my queue
[easy]
00:04:899 (2,3) - 最好在ez难度里不要重叠 覺得沒有關係o.o
00:27:487 (2,3) - 同上 ^
00:46:546 (1) - 去掉nc okay
[normal]
02:13:369 (1) - 去掉nc ok
[hard]
00:26:428 (3,1) - 离得太近，摆远点 ok
02:47:958 (1) - 没拉好的感觉，建议

SPOILER

調了一下
03:00:487 - 这里还是加note吧，不然感觉4和5摆太近 好的,我+在 03:00:664(6)的開頭
[lunatic]
00:46:546 (15) - 这里建议这么下节奏

SPOILER

sorry,這理不採納你的建議
00:51:487 (1) - 去掉nc ok
00:51:840 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议摆开成移动连打，这样有点简单 哦,好的,不過 00:51:840(1)回移成1.00x的距離
01:07:546 - 建议这么下节奏 因為這裡沒有伴奏,所以沒有+

SPOILER

01:22:369 (1) - 建议摆远点 不太懂為什麼;w;

祝rank~我喜欢这歌
謝謝你的mod~我也喜歡這首歌 :3

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]
挺好听的歌~

[Easy]

00:04:899 (2,3) - 对于新手来说会有点混淆 想了一下,不過最後還是調了~
00:27:487 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:29:605 (1) - 这里ctrl+g之后往上往一点可能更好看 調了一下位置
00:38:781 (1,2,1) - 这一段的节奏有点怪，可以试下跟VOCAL 這裡不變動
00:41:605 (1) - 直接复制一个00:40:193 (2) 然后镜像一下排列更好看~ okay



[Normal]

貌似重叠的比较多，可能对于NORMAL来说难了一点
也很多人反映這個問題,所以我把一些有覆蓋到的note移到看的到的地方,但是還是有一些不做調整

01:23:958 (2) - 变成直的咋样 摁...感覺沒差很多,不過還是done!
02:16:899 - 这里加个1/4 slider如何？會有點亂...
02:45:487 (2) - 这条位置基本不变，弄成弯的，包住 02:46:193 (3) oh~這是個好主意




[Hard]

00:08:252 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的节奏排成这样比较好？ 好的


00:12:311 (5,6) - 同样是节奏建议（减少一次折返，加一个NOTE） 摁...done!


00:59:958 (7,1) - 没叠好 覺得這個沒關係
01:08:781 - 这里加一个NOTE，然后把01:09:134 (6) 移一个位置（不移也行）
這個很滿多人反應的,可是為了跟背景音,所以沒有加...
01:21:664 (1,2) - 没叠好 難以避免的
01:28:546 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
01:32:781 (4) - 加个NC 不了 :I
01:38:958 (3) - 这里挪上一点吧，和slider有些重叠了不太好看 移了一下位置~
02:16:193 (1) - 把尾巴的节点往左移一格 done!
02:18:664 (3,4) - 没叠好 fixed~


[Lunatic]

00:45:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 这串你可以考虑弄个弧度 歐...目前不考慮/_\
01:02:958 - 这里加一个NOTE，背景音乐里有重击 摁,這裡是故意2連擊的
01:08:781 - 这里加一个1/4 slider如何？聽不到背景音樂;w;
01:11:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 个人感觉这串不是很合音乐
疑!? 會嗎? 我覺得這裡的hitsound很合的說TAT
01:19:722 (1) - 多折返一次 會對不上下一個slider
01:22:369 (1,2) - 节奏改成这样：

這裡不想改...sorry

03:00:840 (4,5) - 没叠好 做了一點調整




就这么多吧~挺好的图w射个（喂节操

感謝你的mod&star !!

mtbbsben wrote:

From my queue of M4M

Means it may be Unrankable！

General
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歌不错~
00:01:370 - 加根绿线把这里的音量调低，建议20%左右 調到35%
00:23:958 - 加根绿线，音量调回50% done
00:46:546 - 01:37:369 - 02:36:664 - 所有kiai time 音量加到70% okay
还有，其实不一定每个note都要加clap,whistle或者finish什么的，有时候normal反而比较好，这个我也把握不好……但hit音效堆积肯定不好听~
其實我覺得每個人觀點不同,再看看囉
Easy
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00:29:605 (1,2,3,4) - 这摆的不好看，建议上下对称 不改;w;
00:35:252 (5) - 摆到别的地方去吧……作为easy不建议有任何重叠，除非放在00:34:546 (4) - 的位置 fixed
01:21:134 (2) - ^ ^
00:38:781 (1,2) - 不对称 fixed...請容許我做一個悲傷的表情/__\
01:34:546 (1) - 在01:35:958 - 结束，在01:36:664 - 加个slider，01:37:369 - 加个note done
02:03:134 - Breaktime时间过长！请把Breaktime的时间缩短在15秒以内！fixed

Normal
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话说normal就这么多遮挡大丈夫？/__\好的,我想還是不要遮擋比較好
00:15:487 (5) - 个人建议一种颜色的note就下同一种梗，前面蓝色是note放在slider尾部，这里的建议还是放在外面，和00:14:428 (3) - 一样。了解
02:16:899 - 建议加note
不建议遮挡的——
00:39:487 (2) -
00:40:899 (2) -
00:49:369 (1) -
00:53:605 (3) -
01:01:722 (2) -
01:23:252 (1) -
01:26:075 (5) -
02:39:487 (1) -

全都修改過了,不過還是留了一兩個遮擋住的
Hard
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HP-1
各种遮挡吐槽不能
00:06:311 (2) - 根据这里的节奏建议改成这样

00:52:546 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这一段对hard来说有点偏难……（只是吐槽一下）
02:11:958 (2) - 和02:11:252 (1) - 不平行
最后还可以，各种遮挡吐槽不能，很重要所以重复两次。

這裡我全部remap過了,因為實在做得太爛www

Lunatic
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因为这歌还是挺喜欢的所以lunatic摸了=。=
第一pc的replay http://puu.sh/3zm5Q
成绩界面

170bpm可以考虑ar+1 太快了?
打下来感觉还是各种遮挡
建议不遮挡的地方——
00:13:899 (6) -
00:42:134 (6) -
01:51:311 (8) -
可能还有
這裡不改,最難的難度就要難一點=w=(誤
————
01:11:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
01:36:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
这几段的连打感觉摆的有点蠢……建议加点弧度或者当中摆一个折返什么的 不採納,覺得加折返會不好看...
02:20:075 (2,3) - 根据音乐我觉得这段摆成连打比较好 改成1/4的折返
01:57:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段摆的不错我觉得 謝謝 :"D
我觉得lunatic可以把图做到03:28:899 - 我會考慮看看
——
嗯就这样吧，太多的建议我也提不太出来
謝謝你的mod~

1. 感觉这首歌的结尾是标准的转盘结束 但是后面却没有做 很可惜

1. 感觉音效也没什么问题~

1. 01:06:311 (1,2,3,4) - 这里这样做好一点 直滑条的话有些不踩音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866279http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866280

1. 01:16:193 (2) - 这种情况对准一些好看一些

1. 01:42:664 (4) - remove this circle 然后将1移动到长白线 2移动到01:42:664 - 然后距离适当调整下（这样中规中矩些，之前的那种新手很难玩好的）

1. 01:50:075 (2,3) - 没包好

1. 01:58:369 (1,2,3,4) - 其实这里的四连在这个难度也是可以的 但是如果是这样的四连击就不适宜堆在一块 可以分散开来摆成一个弧形 或者这里可以改成对称的滑条

1. 02:13:369 (3) - 踩音不对 滑条尾减短到红线 适当调整距离

1. 02:15:840 - 从这里开始太乱 试试这样改动 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866315

1. 02:31:722 - 这里这样做 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866327

1. 02:39:487 (1) - 这个滑条包住3试试

1. 02:40:899 (2,3,4) - 这三个这样呢？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866329距离适当调整

1. 03:13:369 - 从这个时间点再做一段 感觉后面空了好大一段

1. 00:09:134 (6,1) - 这两个可以做45度角对称的 这样会很好看

1. 00:23:958 (1,2) - 这两个为什么没有互相包住呢？

1. 00:34:722 (2) - remove this circle

1. 01:21:840 (3) - 这个slider换成弯的包住4好一些

1. 01:07:017 (4) - 这里做成和后面的一样01:57:840 (4) -

1. 02:58:193 (1) - remove the slider 然后spinner延后至02:58:546 -

1. 02:25:369 - 从这个时间点开始的清唱其实可以通过timing改变sv的速度来让节奏更明显，不喜欢的话就ignore掉吧QvQ

1. 03:00:664 (3) - 这个滑条的开始时间应该是这里03:00:487 -

1. 03:01:369 (4) - 这个也要前移03:01:193 -

1. 03:01:017 - add a small slider

1. 03:01:722 - add a circle

1. 难度到了这种程度只要踩音正确音效正确就没什么问题~ 唯一感觉遗憾的是既然难了 circle之间却没有跳开（就是放jump的意思）

1. 00:46:546 - 这里接一个滑条会好些吧 这样好难

1. 01:47:869 - 不要空出来 把这个circle加上去吧

1. 01:56:958 (6) - 滑条不好 用两circle

1. 后面一段做的真好~

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

乃好~~PM M4M queue~~ 非常感谢乃能发邮件给咱，咱会尽全力的帮助乃的
很好听得歌呢~~ 非常感謝;w;
[General]

1. 感觉这首歌的结尾是标准的转盘结束 但是后面却没有做 很可惜

因為太懶的因素我會考慮的

1. 感觉音效也没什么问题~

[Easy]

1. 01:06:311 (1,2,3,4) - 这里这样做好一点 直滑条的话有些不踩音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866279http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866280

沒錯! fixed

1. 01:16:193 (2) - 这种情况对准一些好看一些

好的...fixed

1. 01:42:664 (4) - remove this circle 然后将1移动到长白线 2移动到01:42:664 - 然后距离适当调整下（这样中规中矩些，之前的那种新手很难玩好的）

這樣後面會空一片大丈夫;w;?

1. 01:50:075 (2,3) - 没包好

fixed

1. 01:58:369 (1,2,3,4) - 其实这里的四连在这个难度也是可以的 但是如果是这样的四连击就不适宜堆在一块 可以分散开来摆成一个弧形 或者这里可以改成对称的滑条

擺成一個弧形

1. 02:13:369 (3) - 踩音不对 滑条尾减短到红线 适当调整距离

okay

1. 02:15:840 - 从这里开始太乱 试试这样改动 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866315

fixed

1. 02:31:722 - 这里这样做 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866327

了解

1. 02:39:487 (1) - 这个滑条包住3试试

okay~

1. 02:40:899 (2,3,4) - 这三个这样呢？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/866329距离适当调整

摁....ok

1. 03:13:369 - 从这个时间点再做一段 感觉后面空了好大一段

我是打算做到人聲結束._.
[Normal]

1. 00:09:134 (6,1) - 这两个可以做45度角对称的 这样会很好看

不太懂意思,不過還是移了一下

1. 00:23:958 (1,2) - 这两个为什么没有互相包住呢？

忘了[url](逃[/url] fixed!

1. 00:34:722 (2) - remove this circle

ok

1. 01:21:840 (3) - 这个slider换成弯的包住4好一些

沒錯!

1. 01:07:017 (4) - 这里做成和后面的一样01:57:840 (4) -

done!

1. 02:58:193 (1) - remove the slider 然后spinner延后至02:58:546 -

這個spinner尾有一個finish,而且kiai也是在這裡結束,所以不變
[Hard]

1. 02:25:369 - 从这个时间点开始的清唱其实可以通过timing改变sv的速度来让节奏更明显，不喜欢的话就ignore掉吧QvQ

sv的速度???? 不是很懂@@

1. 03:00:664 (3) - 这个滑条的开始时间应该是这里03:00:487 -

fixed

1. 03:01:369 (4) - 这个也要前移03:01:193 -

^

1. 03:01:017 - add a small slider

ok

1. 03:01:722 - add a circle

wow...打起來莫名的順
[Insane]

1. 难度到了这种程度只要踩音正确音效正确就没什么问题~ 唯一感觉遗憾的是既然难了 circle之间却没有跳开（就是放jump的意思）

其實我放了很多的jump,只是我故意讓滑條間保持1.00的距離,然後有些circle調整了一下

1. 00:46:546 - 这里接一个滑条会好些吧 这样好难

不改 希望能讓每一段都類似

1. 01:47:869 - 不要空出来 把这个circle加上去吧

囧...竟然沒有看到,fixed!!

1. 01:56:958 (6) - 滑条不好 用两circle

ok

1. 后面一段做的真好~

差不多就这么多惹 QvQ 祝早日rank good luck~
wow,真是詳細的mod...非常感謝ww
也祝你Good Luck!!

smallboat wrote:

嗨 來MOD了

整體
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圖片名稱改bg 或 BG 較妥當 好的0.0

其他都正確
不過後面03:04:899感覺這後面還能再做(?
真的會再考慮...只是這樣遊戲時間就會超過3分鐘,摁...

Easy
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沒什麼有問題的..只有音效吧

SPOILER

02:28:899 (2,4) - 可加個whitsle?
02:31:017 (5,6,2) - ^ 後面的2是02:34:546 (2) 的
all done~

Normal
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SPOILER

00:01:370 (1) - 前端可加個whitsle? 不加
01:02:075 (3) - ^ ok
01:38:428 (3) - 加個note+clap 想要對稱,所以不加
02:16:899 (2) - 加個note +finish 或 clap 擇一 這裡是打算隔著放finish,所以這裡不+
02:21:487 (5) - 可加個白紅短滑條 或2個note 擇一 想跟背景音/_\
02:28:193 (1,2,3) - 12尾端whistle 3在折返 +在2頭跟3尾
02:31:017 (1,3) - +whistle ok
02:33:487 (1,2,3) - ^都+尾端 只有+2尾端...
02:41:958 (1) - 前端clap ok
02:43:017 (3) - 應該可+note? 這裡想要對稱

Hard
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SPOILER

00:02:075 (3) - 尾端whistle 放錯了QAQ 刪掉了(2)的開頭,然後+在(3)的頭
02:21:487 (4) - 加個短滑條? 原理同上
02:31:017 (1,3,5,6) - 前端都whistle
02:33:840 (1,3,4,6) - ^ 1.3前端 4折返 這兩個的排放方式跟Normal的難度一樣

Lunatic
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SPOILER

00:45:311 (1~15) - 個人喜歡多點弧度.. 自選 摁...再考慮
00:48:664 (4) - 前端+whistle 不加
00:49:017 (1) - ^ +尾端 OK
00:50:075 (1) - ^ +前端 不加
00:50:781 (1) - ^ ok
01:09:487 (2,8) - 這邊不要break了 都+note在白線?
如果要 + (3,5,7) - 可+whistle 或不加
反之 可忽略這段 跟上下一個stream的話感覺會太急呢...

01:39:487 (1) - +whistle 不加
01:40:899 (3) - ^ +前端 ^
01:41:605 (1) - ^ ok
01:42:311 (5) - ^ +前端 no
02:21:487 (4) - +短滑條? 原理同上
02:28:899 (3) - +whistle +前端
02:30:311 (3) - ^
02:31:722 (5) - +whistle +前端
02:33:134 (4) - ^
02:34:546 (3) - ^
02:35:958 (2) - ^ 到這裡的音效放置都是跟其難度一樣o.o
02:38:781 (6) - ^ done~
02:40:193 (1) - ^ ^

感謝你的mod~ !!

Raose wrote:

hello! :3

[Lunatic]

In general, many of your sliders rhythms feel off because your 1/2 sliders start on red ticks and end on white ticks, when the strong beat hits. The heavy strong beats should be emphasized at the head of the sliders, not at the end, so consider shifting some of your sliders 1/2 or so not very understand,but i'll be try~

Also, consider using less stacking as it just doesn't play too well imo D: ok,i think you are right

And use more curvy sliders! The map will look and play more freely and smoother and less stiff xD
too stiff...okay i'll try to fixed :3

00:01:899 - add a note here? I think you're trying to follow the lyrics here but the beat in the background is quite strong imo, it'd be good to follow it sorry,i still want to remain the same >_>
00:02:605 - ^ ^
00:03:311 - ^ ^
00:12:928 (2) - i don't here this note following anything in the music D: please don't put random triplets just to increase the difficulty
ok,fixed!
00:14:605 (2,3) - move these two 1/2 over, to the next white tick and place a circle at 00:14:605, it fits the rhythm better, and the lyrics too. no change,i think the next will not keep pace...
00:15:311 (1,2,3,4) - not sure why these triplets are there, the beat in the background is just straight 1/2
i think there are so many 1/4 beat,so i put these
00:17:428 (3) - not stacked perfectly; actually there are a lot of things not stacked perfect D: make sure to check those out
ok,i'll try to fixed all :3
00:24:223 (2) - even listening carefully in the music, i can't hear this note following anything :/ i delete it +.+
00:24:928 (2) - same ^
00:26:075 (3) - arrange like this for more circular flow? ok~

SPOILER

00:28:899 (5,6,1,2) - not stacked properly ): it's too hard to stack perfect ;w;
00:32:252 (4) - probably better to move this elsewhere cause the hitburst from (3) might hide this note ok
00:37:369 (5,6) - switch these two to better fit vocals? i just want to fit background rhythm ;w;
00:42:311 (1,2,3,1,2) - not stacked properly it's too hard to stack perfect...because it's straight slidder
00:46:546 (15) - better to remove this note and move 00:46:722 (1) to this spot instead
i don't want to change there ;w;
00:51:046 (2) - doesn't follow anything i can hear, wont' mention notes like these again XD
i want to beat the rhythm~sorry :3
01:07:546 (6) - better to delete this circle and move the next sliders earlier. This is one of those times where it's ok to start a slider on the red tick! I think this plays better xD your meaning is at second kiai part,so not change xD
01:09:311 - 01:11:781 - map this section? oh,i'll thnk about this...
01:14:252 (1) - i think it would flow better to have this note under the stream, not to the right
ah...want to connect the next rhythm,so...sorry
01:14:781 (4) - since this is the start of the new musical section & lyrics, place NC here not 01:14:252 ok :3
01:37:369 (15) - better to remove this note and move the next slider to this spot instead same as above
02:12:487 (5,1) - weird spacing D: might be misinterpreted as 1/2 away from each other no >_>
02:15:134 - maybe this rhythm instead to fit music better? not very understand what your meaning..

SPOILER

02:19:017 - think you should add a 3/4 repeating slider or something similar here, like: same as above

SPOILER

02:20:340 - since this is lunatic, maybe you should add a note here, or add a repeat on the previous slider, or turn it into a stream..? xD I hear a beat in the background oh...i think it's too hard QAQ
02:26:605 (4) - bad idea to stack on repeat because the hitburst might cover it D: i don't think so D: sorry~

[Hard]

Looks a lot better aesthetically to me nice job

00:55:899 (6) - remove finish from repeat? there is a finish 0.0
01:07:546 (1,2,3,4,5) - make into square? i'll think about it
01:26:075 (1) - add finish to head ok
01:48:664 - how about this? ah...no ;w;

SPOILER

02:13:369 (6) - just wnated to comment that you had the correct rhythm here ): why not in lunatic?
i don't know why xDDD
02:19:017 (6) - reduce slider length by 1/4 and take out the finish from the end put a slider/circle on the big white tick instead
ah...not very understand ;w;
02:32:428 (5) - make slider symmetrical? it's already symmetrical
02:47:958 (1,2,3) - blanket better? okay~

SPOILER

03:00:487 (3) - woah, reduce the slider length by 1/4 and make (4) a circle instead D: also reduce (5) by 1/4 no change 0.0

[Normal]

00:14:781 (4) - adjust curve so it directly points to (5)? ok~
00:18:311 (1,2,3,4) - square/diamond? move a little
00:33:487 (2,3) - better to switch these imo ...no o.o
00:46:899 (1) - too soon after spinner i think it's ok i think :3
00:55:722 (2) - remove finish same as above i said
01:14:781 (1) - too soon after spinner ^
02:11:958 (2,3,4) - looks really awkward i don't know how to make it looks more better /_\

gj gj

[Easy]

looks fine

more like i'm lazy sorry

nothing struck me as really out of place good job

goodluckkkk

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! mod from my queue

EASY

00:27:487 (2) - maybe this is a bit too up in the map, try to move it a bit down fixed
00:31:017 (3,4) - move them one grid right so that they will be alligned and symmetrical to the previous two ok
01:28:193 (2) - move it 3 grid down because also this one 01:26:075 (3) - is 3 grid down respect to 01:26:781 (4) -
few changing


NORMAL

00:13:722 (2) - maybe rotate it of -4 and then fix spacing, it maybe should be better, but it's ok also as it is right now
i think spacing is not easy to fixed...but i moved a few thing
00:31:017 (3) - NC here? done
00:34:193 (3) - NC and delete next i delete all nc of there
01:05:252 - add a note here? ok and i add a clap
02:11:252 (1,3) - stack them better ok
02:16:193 (1) - maybe add clap at the beginning and on the reverse of the slider as you did in the previous one; and maybe a whistle at the end? add clap that you said about,but whistle not

HARD

00:48:664 (5) - maybe just move one grid right to separate it from the previous slider
ok...but i moved one grid right and down
01:01:899 (5,6) - maybe make the opposit of this: in this way I mean, I think it follow better the rithm
oh...i think no change will be easy for player :3

SPOILER

01:43:017 (1,2,3) - try to leave some space between these notes ok
02:36:222 - maybe add a note here or add a reverse slider from 02:36:134 - to 02:36:311 -
i prefer current situation
03:00:487 (3,4,5) - I don't really like the rithm yu used here. eaven if it's simpler maybe use this:

SPOILER

ok,i think you are right

LUNATIC

00:08:781 (2,4) - stack them better ok
00:28:899 (5,6) - ^ ok...i let them a little bend to stack perfect
00:29:605 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:24:311 (3,2) - ^ i just trying
01:42:311 (5) - maybe delete one reverse and add a note at 01:42:664 -
i fixed them but not same as your meaning...sorry

that's a good map! hope to see it ranked soon, good luck!

kocaca2009 wrote:

Hi~ newbie random mod!
Feel free to ignore them if my mod didn't help you. NO D: i never ignore any one's mod.
[Easy]
00:47:252 (2,3) -May be better if you try this? ok
00:55:017 (3,4) -This onemaybe better in easy mode.
oh...not think as you think ;w;
01:55:722 (2) -For symmtry, you can try this(ctrl+H).
i think it will be stack 01:57:134(3)
01:57:134 (3) -After above ,make a blanket with 2's end (and ctrl+G)? no,sorry
02:59:958 (2) -As I metioned at 01:55:722 . ^

[Normal]
02:43:028 -Place a note?(A bit weird without a note)
i think you are talking about 02:43:017,and i think it's ok

That's all I can do for you.(I'm not good at mod Hard and Insane mode,sorry )
Good luck!

thank for your random modding~

1. 00:29:605 (1) - 2nd Point 1grid up and right
2. 00:40:193 (2) - Finish on End Slider
3. 00:43:722 (1,1) - remove finish on spin(1) and add finish on note(1)
4. 00:52:193 (4) - Whistle and add whistle next note like here 00:53:605,00:55:017
5. 00:56:075 - How about Adding note with Finish?
6. 01:02:781 (3) - whistle
7. 01:04:899 (2) - 2nd Point 1grid down and right
8. 01:07:546 (2,4) - New combo?
9. 01:20:428 (1) - this clap is little weird..remove clap
10. 01:26:075 (3) - NC
11. 01:27:487 (1) - remove NC
12. 01:28:899 (3) - and NC
13. 01:30:311 (1) - remove NC
14. 01:31:722 (2,1) - (2) NC and (1) remove NC
15. 01:34:546 (1) - remove finish
16. 01:41:605 (3) - 3rd point 1grid right and down
17. 01:43:017 - Add note
18. 02:12:487 (2) - Finish
19. 02:16:899 (4) - NC
20. 02:19:017 (6) - ^
21. 02:31:017 (5) - ^
22. 02:39:487 (5) - ^

1. 00:11:252 (1,2) - remove (2) note and (1) expand to 00:11:781 and 1 repeat.
   
2. 00:21:134 (1) - remove finish
3. 00:40:899 (2) - Finish
4. 01:04:899 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:06:311 (4) - NC
6. 01:09:134 (9) - overlap on (8) and NC
7. 01:11:958 (1,1) - so close..Spin end 01:14:075
8. 01:18:311 (3,4,5) - this pattern is little hard For Normal Player. change anoter pattern?
9. 01:20:428 (1) - bend?
10. 01:38:781 (1,2) - don't overlap!
11. 01:41:958 (3) - Add clap on Arrow slider?
12. 01:47:605 (6) - NC
13. 01:58:722 (5) - ^
14. 02:14:428 (5) - ^
15. 02:20:781 (3,4) - change to slider

1. 00:28:899 (7) - Ctrl + G
2. 00:34:899 (8) - Clap on first slider and Finish on End slider
3. 00:40:899 (1) - Finish on first slider
4. 01:09:134 (5) - NC
5. 01:52:899 (5) - ^
6. 01:55:722 (6) - Ctrl + G
7. 02:36:311 (8) - clap

1. 00:40:899 (1) - Finish
2. 00:51:134 (3) - parallel with 00:50:781 (1)
3. 00:56:428 (3) - repeat to 00:56:428 (3)
4. 00:57:134 (4) - ^
5. 01:02:958 - Add note?
6. 01:14:075 (13,14) - Clap and (13) NC
7. 01:14:428 (15,16) - Finish
8. 01:18:134 (3) - how about adding jump? like (256,32)
9. 01:25:899 (5) - Finish on end slider
10. 01:36:840 (9,13) - remove clap or add clap on 01:36:487 (5)
11. 01:37:369 (15,1) - (15) NC and (1) remove NC
12. 02:21:840,02:24:575 - i think don't need to expand break time
13. 02:44:605 (5) - 2nd point (40,152)
14. 02:53:605 (1) - Finish

1. I would suggest to use CS -1 since how it looks now it looks morelike a normas as an easy diff
2. 01:43:017 - you're missing the beginning of the vocal here add something here
3. 02:53:428 - add a circle here + finish and beginn spinner here: 02:53:605 -

1. I would suggest to use CS -1 since how it looks now it looks morelike a hard as an normal diff
2. 00:56:428 (3,4,1) - make better blankets here
3. 01:09:134 (9) - new combo
4. 01:17:958 (2,3) - make a blanket here
5. 01:59:781 - add a circle here and start the spinner 1/2 later
6. 02:11:252 (1,2,3,4) - this overlaps look very ugly
7. 02:16:899 - and 02:17:075 - you're missing an important part i sugges to to add a slider:
   
8. 02:53:428 (6) - new combo here

1. 00:17:252 (4,5) - here should be like:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:09:134 (5) - new combo
3. 01:59:781 - add a circle here and start the spinner here: 01:59:958 -
4. 02:53:428 (5) - new combo

1. 01:14:252 (14) - new combo here
2. 01:59:781 - add a circle here + finish and start the spinner at 01:59:958 -
3. 02:53:428 (5) - new combo

TaMul wrote:

m4m

[Easy]

1. 00:29:605 (1) - 2nd Point 1grid up and right no
2. 00:40:193 (2) - Finish on End Slider ok
3. 00:43:722 (1,1) - remove finish on spin(1) and add finish on note(1) done :3
4. 00:52:193 (4) - Whistle and add whistle next note like here 00:53:605,00:55:017
   sorry,i just want to add whistle before finish appear
5. 00:56:075 - How about Adding note with Finish? yeah,it's a good idea
6. 01:02:781 (3) - whistle ok
7. 01:04:899 (2) - 2nd Point 1grid down and right done
8. 01:07:546 (2,4) - New combo? done~ and i remove 01:06:311(1)'s nc
9. 01:20:428 (1) - this clap is little weird..remove clap fixed
10. 01:26:075 (3) - NC ok
11. 01:27:487 (1) - remove NC ok
12. 01:28:899 (3) - and NC ^
13. 01:30:311 (1) - remove NC ^
14. 01:31:722 (2,1) - (2) NC and (1) remove NC ah...i fixed some
15. 01:34:546 (1) - remove finish ok
16. 01:41:605 (3) - 3rd point 1grid right and down well....i fixed some
17. 01:43:017 - Add note no ><
18. 02:12:487 (2) - Finish ok
19. 02:16:899 (4) - NC ^
20. 02:19:017 (6) - ^ no 0.0
21. 02:31:017 (5) - ^ ok...
22. 02:39:487 (5) - ^ ok

[Normal]
CS 3 ok 0.0+

1. 00:11:252 (1,2) - remove (2) note and (1) expand to 00:11:781 and 1 repeat.
   ah...i don't want to change there
   
2. 00:21:134 (1) - remove finish ok
3. 00:40:899 (2) - Finish ^
4. 01:04:899 (1) - remove NC ok
5. 01:06:311 (4) - NC ^
6. 01:09:134 (9) - overlap on (8) and NC only nc
7. 01:11:958 (1,1) - so close..Spin end 01:14:075 ok @@
8. 01:18:311 (3,4,5) - this pattern is little hard For Normal Player. change anoter pattern? ah...i'll think about it
9. 01:20:428 (1) - bend? ok
10. 01:38:781 (1,2) - don't overlap! sorry,just want to symmetry
11. 01:41:958 (3) - Add clap on Arrow slider? ok
12. 01:47:605 (6) - NC no
13. 01:58:722 (5) - ^ ok
14. 02:14:428 (5) - ^ no 0.0
15. 02:20:781 (3,4) - change to slider ok~

[Hard]
HP 5 ok

1. 00:28:899 (7) - Ctrl + G ok
2. 00:34:899 (8) - Clap on first slider and Finish on End slider ^
3. 00:40:899 (1) - Finish on first slider done~
4. 01:09:134 (5) - NC ^
5. 01:52:899 (5) - ^ no ._.
6. 01:55:722 (6) - Ctrl + G ^
7. 02:36:311 (8) - clap ok~

[Lunatic]

1. 00:40:899 (1) - Finish ok
2. 00:51:134 (3) - parallel with 00:50:781 (1) ah...want a little angle
3. 00:56:428 (3) - repeat to 00:56:428 (3) wait +.+ what do you mean?
4. 00:57:134 (4) - ^ ^
5. 01:02:958 - Add note? no
6. 01:14:075 (13,14) - Clap and (13) NC add clap but no nc
7. 01:14:428 (15,16) - Finish wow,done
8. 01:18:134 (3) - how about adding jump? like (256,32) no 0.0
9. 01:25:899 (5) - Finish on end slider ok
10. 01:36:840 (9,13) - remove clap or add clap on 01:36:487 (5) no ><
11. 01:37:369 (15,1) - (15) NC and (1) remove NC ^
12. 02:21:840,02:24:575 - i think don't need to expand break time ah...i''ll think about it
13. 02:44:605 (5) - 2nd point (40,152) oh...ok 0.0
14. 02:53:605 (1) - Finish ok

Lally wrote:

m4m from my queue o3o

[Easy]

1. I would suggest to use CS -1 since how it looks now it looks morelike a normas as an easy diff fixed
2. 01:43:017 - you're missing the beginning of the vocal here add something here
   ah...i don't know what you mean ;w;
3. 02:53:428 - add a circle here + finish and beginn spinner here: 02:53:605 - ok

[Normal]

1. I would suggest to use CS -1 since how it looks now it looks morelike a hard as an normal diff fixed
2. 00:56:428 (3,4,1) - make better blankets here well, i just want 00:57:840(1) and 00:59:252(4) symmetry
3. 01:09:134 (9) - new combo ok
4. 01:17:958 (2,3) - make a blanket here ok
5. 01:59:781 - add a circle here and start the spinner 1/2 later ^
6. 02:11:252 (1,2,3,4) - this overlaps look very ugly oh...fixed x_x
7. 02:16:899 - and 02:17:075 - you're missing an important part i sugges to to add a slider:
   ok...
8. 02:53:428 (6) - new combo here done~

[Hard]

1. 00:17:252 (4,5) - here should be like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   well...i think it's ok
2. 01:09:134 (5) - new combo ok~
3. 01:59:781 - add a circle here and start the spinner here: 01:59:958 - done
4. 02:53:428 (5) - new combo ^

[Lunatic]

1. 01:14:252 (14) - new combo here i'll think about it
2. 01:59:781 - add a circle here + finish and start the spinner at 01:59:958 - ok,but a little not same.
3. 02:53:428 (5) - new combo same as above

sorry for delay >_< it's ok !!

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

let me tell you a little story :

i found a frog and its very big and baka.
then i bites it and throw it away.

finish

/me runs away

Flower wrote:

我看看他咋玩的

[General]
感觉音效真的好少……多用点whistle会更舒服些吧> < （如果是我就会kiai上几乎摆满whistle了……不要学）
莫名觉得音乐音量有点小

音效我會試試在放多一點...我不是很擅長在這方面;w;
音量的話我有調大一點了

[Lunatic]
00:16:722 (1,2) - 这里都是滑条尾落在歌词上，不是很舒服，建议在00:16:722 - 加圈，然后顺序延后
00:22:899 - clap？
00:23:958 - 这里开始就可以规律地加24clap了，建议补上
00:33:134 (3) - 折返箭头被遮挡，一般来说是unrankable的
00:34:369 (6) - remove clap imo
00:53:605 (1) - 可以删掉营造段落感
01:05:605 (1,2) - clap？
01:11:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这边关掉格子重摆，不是很齐
01:19:722 - 01:19:811 - clap？
01:25:546 - 01:25:899 - ^
01:42:134 (4) - x:248 y:248？
01:44:958 (1,2) - 交换NC
02:26:605 (4,1) - ^
02:32:428 (2) - 把开口做得更圆润一些

抱歉...這裡我全部remap過了

[Hard]
00:03:487 (5,6) - 这里开始就大跳感觉不合风格 还是按照DS摆比较好 ok
00:36:311 (3) - 下移一格 done
00:36:840 (4,5,6,7) - 稍微逆时针旋转一些，来增大与下一个combo的距离，现在的距离容易读错 摁...考慮
00:39:311 (3) - 就现在的音效来说删掉比较舒服 不了0.0
00:41:428 (2) - 微微上移 了解
01:01:193 (3) - 建议不要叠在底下，有些蛋疼，可以放在x:504 y:244 我移動了一點
01:18:664 (4) - 顺时针旋转20度 不太懂不過還是動了
01:42:840 (7) - 就现在的音效来说删掉比较舒服 同上...
02:35:958 (6) - NC。实际上不建议这个跳，倒不如分开做成小四方跳 NC..然後後面的意思不是很懂

[Normal]
00:35:252 (1,2) - 这个重叠比较突兀，将2下移一些来分开 好的0.0
01:51:487 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
02:11:252 (1,2,3) - 说实话你打的时候有没有感到不爽…… 沒有XD 我改成好一點的
02:14:075 - 这边最好加个note，是重音 ok

[Easy]
01:41:605 (3,4) - 包好 已經是了..
02:12:487 (2) - 这里“裸着”的红线圈容易按错，建议重新考虑节奏 02:18:134 (2) - 同理 會仔細考慮..

Good luck~

hoLysoup wrote:

hi
秘密request :>

我知道是誰喔 :3

這是第一次做圖？　做得很好啊 其實我已經有很多的死圖了 ;w;
(clap clap)

然後我要說非常抱歉...因為這個難度我全部remap過了
所以有些部分沒辦法回覆qwq
[Lunatic]
00:15:311 (1,2,3,4) - 個人感覺這些移到白線(down beat)比較順一點？
00:24:664 (1) - 去掉NC
00:30:311 (3) - + 00:31:722 (3) - 為什麼這一段只有這兩個有加whistle? 要不就全部加吧　不然聽起來有點怪?
說的也是,我會也修改其它難度的這麼部分
00:35:252 (6) - NC? 新的一段的開始
00:42:311 (1,2,3) - 這三個中心點沒有stack好. 把slider頭, 先放到中心點然後再ctrl + g就好啦
01:05:693 (2) - 三連的中間這個要不要加clap? 個人感覺打起來超好聽
01:07:722 (1,2,3) - 這三個移動一下感覺很合音樂喔 像這樣: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908583 當然音效要改一下
01:14:075 (13) - NC
01:46:899 (2) - 這歌finish太大聲了　小聲一點吧
02:21:840 - 為什麼break在這裡? 移回原來的地方吧
02:36:134 (4) - clap？　哈哈　雖然說有鼓聲　但是這樣加的話可能有點怪
03:04:722 (1) - remove NC
沒了 沒別的好說的
只有kiai的部分, 可以多加很多whistle. 這樣更有節奏感而且比較好聽一點, 配著鼓聲一起. 不過這是我個人的感覺~ 自己看看吧
很多人都有這個建議...我真的會好好考慮看看= =
圖很好啊 加油加油!

這首歌滿好聽得 OvOb 摁 :3

a5135324 wrote:

以下全為意見 只是用來騙Kudosu的 我會假裝沒看到有海苔的那部分 xDDD

Lunatic

• • 00:09:752 - 考慮加個note嗎? 然後節奏換成 歐!! 好主意
  •
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:11:252 (6) - 換成這種節奏? 不了..想讓(8)包圍(6)的開頭
  •
  SPOILER

  我覺得比較好OAO
  • 00:19:369 (2) - 換成 00:41:605 (3) - 這種? ok
  • 00:35:605 (1) - 加個clap? 對,我漏掉了..
  • 00:43:722 (1) - 考慮提前到 00:43:546 - 嗎? 不了..
  • 00:45:134 (1) - 加個Finish? 然後我覺得 00:45:487 (5) - 加個clap 00:45:311 (3,7,11,15) - 應該弄掉clap,不過好像沒什麼差
  finish不了...然後後面不考慮030
  • 00:56:075 (10) - 換成Finish? 對! 沒看到
  • 01:26:075 (1) - 加個Finish? ^同上
  • 01:30:134 (5) - 沒對好 還是故意的? 這是對不好的= = 我覺得一點點沒有關係...
  • 02:13:017 (5) - 和 02:13:369 (1) - 的最後一個 加Clap? 02:20:781 (3,4,5) - 3跟4 Clap, 5 Finish?
  只有(1)最後有加,然後02:20:781(3,4,5)只有(4)沒加clap...我打算這部分的finish全部放上去
  • 02:35:252 (7,8,1) - 的頭加個Finish? 不了0.0

Hard

• • 01:46:546 (3) - 後面改成Finish? finish+clap感覺比較對
  • 02:20:781 (3) - 最後加Finish? ok

hoLysoup wrote:

^lol triple post :>
妳要我再mod一次嗎?

如果可以的話非常歡迎阿 !!

Momochikun wrote:

Hi Hi..
As requested ~

[General]
Would you mind add silent sliderslide instead of slidertick ? the sound of slider is rather weird..
will think about it,i think slidertick is not easy to be heard
00:23:958 - 00:33:840 Add some whistles maybe.. without hitsound is boring done
Consider reduce the volume of finish at here 00:56:075 and 01:46:899 fixed some

[Lunatic]
00:09:752 (5) - Better delete this.. IMO overmapped ok
00:19:722 (3,5) - Overlap.. add more spacing at (5) done!
00:34:546 (7) - Clap at start of slider ok
From here 00:35:605 - you hear that drum ? i recommend to remap part until 00:43:369 because your hitsounds pattern it's totally wrong..
For Example : the right placement of "clap" is 00:37:281 , 00:37:458 and 00:37:722 Try it on the editor~
oh..it's a serious problem but i really don't know how to fix them...
00:35:252 (9,1) - Swap NC ok
00:56:428 (1) - Why spinner ? this is lunatic.. use stream pls ah...i just think this song has too many stream...
01:14:781 (4) - NC for vocal ok
01:21:840 (5) - NC ^
01:28:193 (7,8) - Better to make same shape as the (5) and (6) well...i want to let them have changed
01:30:311 (1) - Ctl J + Ctrl H to make it like a circle ? oh! good idea~
01:41:605 (5) - NC ok
01:42:664 (1,3) - Swap NC ^
02:28:899 (3) - Whistle
02:30:311 (7) - ^
02:31:722 (3) - ^
02:32:781 (6) - ^
02:34:546 (5) - ^
02:35:958 (1) - ^ all done!!
02:36:311 (3) - Finish with drum additions done~
02:50:781 (2) - Finish at start ok
02:59:252 (5) - Slider break the flow.. consider remaking it oh...ok o.O

[Hard]
00:55:017 (3) - Finish at the start ok
01:59:958 (1) - End Spinner here 02:02:781 omg..it's a big mistake = =
02:29:428 (3) - 1 grid down so they not overlap ok
02:50:428 (1,2) - add finish at (2) and then swap the NC ^

[Normal]
00:35:958 (2,1) - Overlap.. fixed!
01:15:134 (2) - You forget to add clap here~ thank~
01:19:017 (4) - 1 grid down ok
02:50:781 (2) - Finish ^

Since this is one of your first map.. i won't complain much about flow and placement,
well~i just want you to mod more about these
GL anyway ~

OnosakiHito wrote:

My god, this song is really good!
Would you allow me to make two Taiko diffs for you? :3

Edit: Haha, I finished the Muzukashii already. I just love this song. Hope you are positive directed to the game mode Taiko. lol

Rakuen wrote:

Ancient's Mod Queue (DEAncientNaga)

Sorry for late mod, was busy in exams don't mind ;3

[General]
Nice.
00:23:958 - You can add light/soft bass hitsound for standard hit starts from here, might be ok >.o / http://puu.sh/3X011.wav
yeah,i used it
For clap hitsound you can consider http://puu.sh/3X0ak.wav , put it in and see if it's ok for you or not (Strongly recommended) no...0.0
03:05:252 - Try to extend your mapping in Hard/Lunatic, maybe some easy hits would do ahhhh... i just too lazy to do more ;w;

[Easy]
Easy doesn't mean you can skip rhythm, the time interval between notes is too far.
Follow more rhythm/cover instead of vocal ahhhhhh...i'll try.
SV is a bit fast for easy, suggest lower SV. But you can keep it still since you have mapped it.
Lesser circles, more sliders ok...
00:10:899 - - Add something nop
00:50:075 - Hitsound like this doesn't suit the song, try or add other hitsounds delete o.<
01:09:134 (1) - Volume too low compare to hitsounds at the front fixed
01:43:017 - Add something a circle
01:45:840 (1) - If possible make the distance further from last note not very understand
02:12:487 (2,3,2,3) - Why it's different? because rhythm of them are different

[Normal]
Same as easy, add more notes well...i think it's ok
^ For example rhytm here 01:37:369 (1,2,1,2,3) - is different with here 01:48:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i want some different
Increase sliders, decrease number of circles ok...
SV is almost same as Easy, consider to reduce SV in Easy it's not same
Don't stack too much, for example 00:42:311 (2,3,4) - is hard to play moved
02:14:075 (5) - Don't stack fixed
02:13:369 (4,1) - Rhythm is different fixed~
02:51:840 (1,2) - There's not double tap previously in this diff, change it cuz there's only slider like 02:20:781 (3) - ok

[Hard]
Seems it's hard, you can make some jumps by not following full DS (you can keep your notes still, it's nice enough)
^ for example 00:05:958 (1,2,3) - put (3) on red tick next to (2) i think it's ok ^^
^ 02:35:958 (1,2,3,4) - This jump is nice
02:24:664 - Add a circle stack to the next slider's head nope
02:36:487 (4) - Add clap ok

[Insane]
00:45:134 (1) - Don't recommend DS for this stream (cuz it's the first stream player engages with), lower the DS for the stream, or replace the stream with something else I like the the original
01:35:958 (1) - - ^ This too, and remember it's 170BPM stream ^
00:59:517 (7) - Add clap why o.O
01:42:399 (4) - ^ ^
02:36:487 (4) - Instead of making this as drum hitsound, try the bass hit as I suggested in General tab i think drum more fit than bass hit
03:04:546 - Add clap ok
03:04:722 (1) - ^ nope 0.0

OnosakiHito wrote:

Great! Thank you for accepting them!

Download: http://puu.sh/407uk.zip

Just put these files in your projects folder add me into the Tags and update it.
I will give you later a 'Taiko_BG'. Right now I can't make it, because I'm in serbia. I will give it to you in about 9 days when I'm back in germany~

Song = ♥

Fycho wrote:

hi ~ hi :3

Black: suggestions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[general]
Add OnosakiHito to TAGS in all diffs added
Breaktime的letterbox最好也去掉

不是很懂....

[ Lunatic]

• 
  AR要不要+1.我觉得9的话舒服点，自己看看吧 很多人提這個,所以就決定改了
  00:05:605 (7) –NC这里而不是这里00:06:311 (1) – ok
  00:07:017 –这里也NC ok
  00:11:252 (6) –add nc 摁
  00:15:487 (5) -^ ^
  00:18:311 (5,1,3) -^(建议NC设置在大白线，一根大白线NC一次这样比较好统一) 學到了~
  00:21:134 (1) –转盘加clap ok~
  00:26:075 (8) –curve down this？摁...我想做個對稱 \ w /
  00:28:899 (7,8) -试试这样 摁...移了一點位置,因為有些地方我並不想要有變動
  00:35:605 (2) –首加clap ok
  00:35:869 –add note 不了..
  00:36:928 (8) –去掉这个 ^同上
  00:43:017 (7) –Ctrl+G? done
  00:46:546 (17,1) –这里节奏有问题，这两个应该交换 交換...? nc嗎
  00:48:222 (6) –去掉这个 摁...我是故意這樣放的 所以以下的問題都略過了...抱歉
  01:00:928 (2) -^
  01:02:780 (8) –节奏参考 參考...
  01:07:369 –节奏参考 考慮..
  01:37:369 (17,1) –交换 done
  01:51:752 (2) –去掉
  02:12:487 (4) –首finish 摁...原本是考慮隔著放 不過果然還是全放好了
  02:15:311 (7) –finish ok
  02:17:958 (4) –尾finish（这段可以跟随音乐加更多的finish，其他diff 也一样）ok~!
  02:28:899 (3) –向下凹？呃...是阿 是向下凹 o.o
  03:02:605 –add note？不了 :3
  03:10:017 (7) –折返箭头上clap ^
  03:16:899 –在这里加一个note，然后转盘从这里开始03:17:075 怎么样 ok阿 xD 還加了finish

[hard]

• 
  00:05:252 –节奏参考 摁...我想暫時先這樣
  00:13:899 –add note 好~
  00:14:605 (4) –这个我倒觉得没必要 那就刪掉吧
  00:20:428 (1,2,3,4) –这里可以用，因为这里音乐平和用4个1/2的note太激烈了 對! fixed
  00:24:487 (2) –移到这里00:24:664 考慮
  01:07:546 (1,2,3,4) –做个规则的几何形如何，比如正方形菱形之类的 三角形(?
  01:15:664 (3) –移到01:15:840 – ^同上個回答
  01:19:546 (6) –节奏参考 不錯...可是位置有點問題 所以不調
  03:03:487 (4) –这里可以试试跟鼓音用多个1/4多折返滑条 好建議 :3
  03:27:487 (1) –跟最高难度一样用三个转盘比较好 好的

[normal]

• 
  01:50:781 (5) –remove finish？ 摁
  01:56:781 (1) –remove NC nope
  01:57:134 (2) –add finish and NC ^
  03:08:075 (5) –首加clap done
  03:09:840 (7) –折返箭头加 clap 不了.0.
  03:08:075 (5) –add NC ok
  03:10:899 (8) –add NC ^
  03:13:369 (12) -^ ^
  03:27:487 (1) –换成两个转盘，中间空那么长时间也不怎么好 摁...說的也是

[easy]

• 
  00:53:252 –这里用tick音 摁
  01:43:017 (1) –add finish okay
  01:38:781 (4,1,3) –这几个你加了whistle，后面最好也统一下 我+whistle都是加在finish前較多,所以暫時不考慮這個
  03:08:075 (1) –首加clap ok
  03:10:193 (3) –clap ^
  03:14:428 (2) –首尾加clap（把音效换成SC1）對...這裡忘了改,謝了 ;3
  03:27:487 (1) –同normal 好的

整体图不错啊star，曲子也好听~good luck

wmtokok wrote:

from #modreq

hard

00:28:193 (5,7) - 沒有完整的重疊 很盡量了;w;
02:45:664 (2) - 加none 不好放..覺得沒有必要
02:58:722 (2) - 考慮加clap nope
02:58:899 (3) - 尾考慮加clap 這兩個clap可以加強finish的效果 (這個不fix都可以的) 感覺不需要..
03:06:840 (6,7) - 不太符合節奏,, 試試這個 看不到圖片..

Lunatic

01:09:134 (1) - 這個可以試試放遠一點 中間就好..
00:35:252 (1) - 可以試試放在(2)的開頭 感覺上比較好 考慮..
00:35:958 (3) - 這個可以考慮delete 因為這裹節奏不太重 nope
01:26:781 (3,5) - 沒有完整的重疊 這樣就好了;w;

可能有點短,,,抱歉

不過先支持一下..加油`

Sephibro wrote:

hello! m4m from your queue thanks for m4m >3<!!

[Lunatic]
Settings are good

Rhythm is very good too, nothing to say

00:36:664 (7,8,9) - this is awful to read and to play due to spacing inconcistency; i suggest to put (8) half way between (7) and (9) http://puu.sh/46gLh oh..i'm purposely
here are the other ones:
00:47:958 (6,7,8) - 01:00:664 (1,2,3) - 01:51:487 (1,2,3) this is the worst one - 02:38:075 (5,6,7) - 02:39:487 (1,2,3) - 02:49:369 (9,10,11) - i hope i didn't miss any i'll think about it ;3
01:02:780 (8,9) - 01:53:605 (7,8) - this sounds very bad because it ends on blue tick, how about putting a circle here 01:02:958 - 01:53:781 to make it a triplet? http://puu.sh/46gW9 ahhh...same answer as above,i just want some different

i don't think there's much more to say, you're almost there

[Hard]
maybe it's a bit too easy, i would HP+1 ok

02:46:193 (3,4) - this could be blanketed better, you just need to move middle's anchor point of (4) one grid right on Grid Level 4 http://puu.sh/46hZU.jpg done

[Normal]
Settings are good

00:49:369 (1) - i would overlap this on (2) to make the whole pattern much more clear yep,done
01:05:958 - i would add a circle here ok
01:07:017 (2,3,4,5) - i don't like the syncopation here, if you really want to keep it, i would use repeat sliders instead nope .0.
02:28:193 (1,2) - blanket better ok

[Easy]
Settings are good

02:12:487 (2) - 02:18:134 (2) - i hate random circles alone on red ticks oh..sorry ;_;i add a slide
03:10:546 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i like this very much thanks

Good luck for rank, i guess it's very near

thanks for modding~i'll check your map tomorrow
GL to you too~

1. Why remove the words 'Taiko'?
2. Waiting your BG!

1. I suggest you can emphasize some more finisher as you often use it in this map, it sounds better to me. Here is some suggestions for using finisher.
2. 00:35:252 (1) - Missed finisher
3. 00:46:546 (1) - ^
4. 01:14:781 (2) - ^
5. 01:37:369 (2) - ^
6. 01:42:311 (1) - How about dd here? As I see you use dd here for every similar part. Surely you have to fix the kd dkkd first.
7. 02:15:311 (1) - Missed finisher.
8. 02:20:781 (4,1) - I will say kD here, better to play and read, also I think that make sense to use kD here.
9. 03:16:899 (1) - YEAHHHHH nice song！
10. That's it.

1. Same, missed some finisher, you can decide not to add as it's muzukashii.
2. No problem!

waxman wrote:

FOR THE FIRST TIME SOUNDS MODDING nice to meet you (?)

SUGGESTION

[Lunatic]

00:24:311 (2) - add a clap nope
00:24:664 (4) - remove a clap on the start of slider ^
00:25:722 (7) - add a clap on the start of slider ok
00:26:075 (8) - remove a clap on the start of slider no..
00:26:428 (9) - ^ ^
00:26:781 (1) - remove a clap on the end of slider no..nonono
00:28:193 (5) - ^ ^
00:29:605 (1) - add a clap ok
00:30:311 (4) - remove a clap on the end of slider nope
00:31:017 (1) - add a clap on the start of slider,and remove a clap on the end of slider nope,and there is no clap on this slide
00:31:369 (2) - remove a clap on the start of slider no ;w;
00:31:722 (3) - add a clap i put them separated by each note ._.
00:32:075 (5) - remove a clap nope
00:32:428 (1) - add a clap on the start of slider, and remove a clap on the end of slider no.ah..there is no clap on the end of slider
00:33:840 (5) - remove a clap on the end of slider nope><
00:34:899 (8) - remove a clap on the start of slider ^

GOOK LUCK!

KanaRin wrote:

SPOILER

Taiko Mod Request by bigfrog.

General

1. Why remove the words 'Taiko'?
2. Waiting your BG! Done!

Onil

Well-mapped as always, I will only list some suggestions here.

1. I suggest you can emphasize some more finisher as you often use it in this map, it sounds better to me. Here is some suggestions for using finisher.
2. 00:35:252 (1) - Missed finisher
3. 00:46:546 (1) - ^
4. 01:14:781 (2) - ^
5. 01:37:369 (2) - ^ Ah, as always I don't like to finisher at the beginning of a stanza, I like to use them as they are called like.
6. 01:42:311 (1) - How about dd here? As I see you use dd here for every similar part. Surely you have to fix the kd dkkd first. Oh true, I changed it in a similiar way.
7. 02:15:311 (1) - Missed finisher. True.
8. 02:20:781 (4,1) - I will say kD here, better to play and read, also I think that make sense to use kD here. I will keep it, sounds better but dosen't play so well in my opinion. After all you have to double-tap the K with one finger.
9. 03:16:899 (1) - YEAHHHHH nice song！YEAHHHHH
10. That's it.

Muzukashii

1. Same, missed some finisher, you can decide not to add as it's muzukashii.
2. No problem!

Overall the Taikos are very good, they fit the song very well.
Good job as always, ono!

Get 2-3 mods more and call me back.