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ZUN - Ultimate Truth

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Topic Starter
Dai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 06 October, 2014 at 12:59:16 AM

Artist: ZUN
Title: Ultimate Truth
Source: Touhou
Tags: lufi10 Konpaku Youmu Saigyouji Yuyuko youyoumu th7 PCB Perfect Cherry Blossom Team Shanghai Alice
BPM: 158
Filesize: 2861kb
Play Time: 00:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.16 stars, 33 notes)
  2. Hard (2.33 stars, 75 notes)
  3. Hitsounds (3.82 stars, 203 notes)
  4. Lunatic (3.76 stars, 191 notes)
  5. Normal (1.62 stars, 55 notes)
Download: ZUN - Ultimate Truth
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th stage theme from TH7 Perfect Cherry Blossom

The final stage is all about the final boss, so the mid-stage is only a token effort. Because of that, this song is rather short, but it's also refreshing and pleasant (in my opinion). The stage has visual imagery of flying over a sea of cherry blossoms; I hope this song will give you the same impression.
The Word of God
10crystalmask01
I don't think your background looks too shabby :(

But if you aren't satisfied with it, here's some other Backgrounds I've found through google:













Hope this helps~! :)
Topic Starter
Dai
oh awesome

thank you
Vainslay
Hi~

I was looking for Touhou songs and I stumbled on this one. Nice, but a little short... :c

~Overrall about the song. Why is it Pending? I don't think it's finished yet

Nothing much, distance spacing and Placement is nice and You have an awesome hitsound set.

Hard
At 00:29:003 (1,2,3) - these first 3 sliders made me stumbled a little. Probably because you had reverse sliders before and this just sorta messed up with the flow. nothing else~ but make it like the others

Extra
Considering how hard this is, you need to change your difficulty

HP Drain: 7 or 8 (10 is really high.) :o
Circle size: I guess you can keep it at 5, considering you mapped it like that.
Approach rate: 8 or 9 But you should probably choose 8 (6 is too low)
Overrall Difficulty: 9 is okay. ( I prefer 7 or 8 )

At 00:04:321 (1) This note is too far from the others. (2.93x prev. ) Perhaps ctrl h and j this 00:04:700 (2) and move it up till
it's 1.3x-ish away from 00:04:131 (6)
At 00:18:751 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Continue this stream, fill in the blue ticks (Accoarding to the drums in the song. :lol: )

I guess that's about it. Good luck!
Rei Hakurei
anjer BW killer
Topic Starter
Dai

Vainslay wrote:

Hi~

I was looking for Touhou songs and I stumbled on this one. Nice, but a little short... :c

~Overrall about the song. Why is it Pending? I don't think it's finished yet

Nothing much, distance spacing and Placement is nice and You have an awesome hitsound set.

Hard
At 00:29:003 (1,2,3) - these first 3 sliders made me stumbled a little. Probably because you had reverse sliders before and this just sorta messed up with the flow. nothing else~ but make it like the others ok

Extra
Considering how hard this is, you need to change your difficulty

HP Drain: 7 or 8 (10 is really high.) :o I'll change it if everyone always mention this
Circle size: I guess you can keep it at 5, considering you mapped it like that.
Approach rate: 8 or 9 But you should probably choose 8 (6 is too low) actually I want to keep this, but people is always complaining about this
Overrall Difficulty: 9 is okay. ( I prefer 7 or 8 ) 9 is ok

At 00:04:321 (1) This note is too far from the others. (2.93x prev. ) Perhaps ctrl h and j this 00:04:700 (2) and move it up till
it's 1.3x-ish away from 00:04:131 (6) fixed
At 00:18:751 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Continue this stream, fill in the blue ticks (Accoarding to the drums in the song. :lol: ) I like the current pattern D:

I guess that's about it. Good luck!
Cherry Blossom
Hai from my queue.
My mod is noooooob :)

Just suggestion.

[Easy]
AR - 1 or 2

00:27:105 (4) - I don't really like this slider, maybe you can arrange with :
and 00:29:003 (1) - and the tail 1 or 2 grid up.

00:54:067 (5,6,7) - maybe you can do this ? :


[Normal]

AR-1 ?
Fine.


[Hard]
OD 5 ? why ? Normal has 6, it's inconsistent.

00:29:003 (1) - You can do this.
00:41:915 (5,6) - Overlap, you can arrange these sliders.

[Lunatic]

00:02:802 (4) - You can arrange this slider :

00:36:219 (2) - Better blanket.
00:47:231 (1) - better blanket here, try second point 1 grid left, tail 1 grid left.
00:54:446 (4,5,6) - i suggest doing this, blanket (1,2,3) :


[Extra]

HP - 2 or 3, please no 10 because of OD9 and BPM, you can easily fail if you are not a good player with accuracy.

00:14:954 (1,3) - I don't really like this, you can make 2 blankets :

00:28:244 (7) - remove 1 reverse and add a note 00:28:814 it's better to play
00:54:826 (5,6) - why don't to make something like this ? :



That's all, it's little but i'm still noob, if it really didnt help you, feel free to no kd me please :)
I like this Touhou BGM (just look at my name)
Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
Dai

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hai from my queue.
My mod is noooooob :) I don't think so, your mod is great XD

Just suggestion.

[Easy]
AR - 1 or 2

00:27:105 (4) - I don't really like this slider, maybe you can arrange with :
and 00:29:003 (1) - and the tail 1 or 2 grid up.

00:54:067 (5,6,7) - maybe you can do this ? : I don't think it needs


[Normal]

AR-1 ?
Fine.


[Hard]
OD 5 ? why ? Normal has 6, it's inconsistent.

00:29:003 (1) - You can do this.that would break the flow
00:41:915 (5,6) - Overlap, you can arrange these sliders.

[Lunatic]

00:02:802 (4) - You can arrange this slider :

00:36:219 (2) - Better blanket.
00:47:231 (1) - better blanket here, try second point 1 grid left, tail 1 grid left.
00:54:446 (4,5,6) - i suggest doing this, blanket (1,2,3) :


[Extra]

HP - 2 or 3, please no 10 because of OD9 and BPM, you can easily fail if you are not a good player with accuracy. people keep pushing about this, so ok

00:14:954 (1,3) - I don't really like this, you can make 2 blankets :

00:28:244 (7) - remove 1 reverse and add a note 00:28:814 it's better to play I'm not going to change this atm
00:54:826 (5,6) - why don't to make something like this ? :



That's all, it's little but i'm still noob, if it really didnt help you, feel free to no kd me please :)
I like this Touhou BGM (just look at my name)
Good Luck ~
Aeonian Sonder
I'm doing the arrangement of this song!: dbu - Kyuukyoku no Shinjitsu ~ The Ultimate Truth~
happy30
Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replay

Extra
it's kinda short! :(
for an Extra I thought this was really easy. Especially since it's short there's not much of a challenge for the pros.
I think there's still plenty of room for streams in the song and in this diff.

The hitsounds are pretty nice, had to get used to it a bit though.
For the hitsounds of the chorus it felt a bit overdone. Maybe a bit too many whistles. I'm also missing the loud drum sound. you know, this hitsound:
http://puu.sh/3t3fV.wav
could you use it? :P
Topic Starter
Dai

happy30 wrote:

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replay

Extra
it's kinda short! :(
for an Extra I thought this was really easy. Especially since it's short there's not much of a challenge for the pros. it was challengin enough, but then Lunatic changed everything :(
I think there's still plenty of room for streams in the song and in this diff. you're right

The hitsounds are pretty nice, had to get used to it a bit though.
For the hitsounds of the chorus it felt a bit overdone. Maybe a bit too many whistles. I'm also missing the loud drum sound. you know, this hitsound:
http://puu.sh/3t3fV.wav
could you use it? :P okeh
Cerulean Veyron
Hey, from my queue

[Normal]
00:49:510 (3,4) - It looks nice, but overlapped.

Nice diff ~
[Hard]
00:51:408 (3) - Ctrl+G?

Nice diff here too ~
[Extra]
00:28:244 (7) - reduce the repeat by one, and add note after it.
00:46:472 (6) - ^

-------------------
Perfect map ! Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
Dai

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hey, from my queue

[Normal]
00:49:510 (3,4) - It looks nice, but overlapped. I'm doing it on purpose for distance

Nice diff ~
[Hard]
00:51:408 (3) - Ctrl+G? nah, it would be breaking the flow for the next note

Nice diff here too ~
[Extra]
00:28:244 (7) - reduce the repeat by one, and add note after it.
00:46:472 (6) - ^

-------------------
Perfect map ! Good Luck ~
thank you
Rakuen
DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nicely mapped, but it's too dead cuz distance snapped too much in harder difficulties (make some jumps in Hard / Lunatic / Extra)

The song is lesser than a minute, can consider making it harder

[Easy]
>.o)b

[Normal]
2.5 stars is easy rating, consider putting more notes instead of slider
Use more red ticks and some blue ticks if it suits
Spinner reduces the difficulty, replace with sliders or circles if possible
00:02:802 - Add circle
00:08:118 - Add circle
00:29:953 - Add circle
00:33:371 - Add circle
00:42:484 - Add circle
00:51:598 - Add circle

[Hard]
Ok

[Lunatic]
You can make some sliders to a reverse side to increase the confuse (Ctrl+G) , same as Extra

[Extra]
Approach Rate: +1
Try to raise the slider velocity in KIAI time, if possible (x1.25 - x1.75)
00:19:511 (12,13) - Make this the part of the stream too
00:38:022 - Add circle
00:38:497 (2,3,4) - Try to make these kind of circles distanced instead of stack, for example
00:41:915 (7) - Try to make it jump for example

Good luck on ranking >.o /
Kinomi
Hi~from my queue
normal mod

General
0.0

Easy
AR-1
fine but
I think clap before 00:19:131 is really noisy
00:56:345 (1) - I think use N:C1 is better

Normal
HP-1 OD-2
final spinner is a bit short and I think use N:C1 is better
00:09:257 (4) - objects before this have incorrect spacing
00:23:117 (4) - spacing

Hard
00:55:396 (1) - I think use N:C1 is better

Extra
OD-1 or 2 why 9.......................
00:18:751 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - tream start at 00:19:131 is better,listen to the music
00:14:194 (4,5,6) - stream starts at white line like this is not very good,don't use it often,I feel uncomfortable when playing,maybe I'm so noob 0.0
00:55:396 (1) - use N:C1 is better

Lunatic
same suggestion about stream
00:55:396 (1) - use N:C1 is better
00:05:650 (1) - why NC here 00:04:890 (6) - NC and00:06:219 (4) - NC
00:13:055 (1) - why NC here..
and I check other diffs there some same NC problems 0.0


that's all
good luck~
Verlaren
From my queue

[general]
deselect countdown

[easy]
SV 1.20 too hight for easy, please use 1.0 or less
AR -1
00:40:396 (3,4) - in easy diff shouldn't be a stacked notes

[normal]
DR -1
OD -2
00:08:498 (2,3) - spacing error
00:08:878 (3,4) - ^
00:22:168 (3,4) - ^
00:30:143 (2,3) - ^
00:31:282 (3,4) - ^

[hard]
00:23:307 - add note, sounds is really good
00:32:421 - ^
00:51:408 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow
00:51:029 (2,3) - maybe swap these sliders? IMO better flow, try it

[lunatic]
00:14:194 (5) - move on x:128 y:134 for correct spacing between other sliders
00:14:954 (1) - remove these note and add one repeat on 00:14:574(6)
00:17:232 (3,4) - maybe change on this shape? -
00:35:459 (8) - stack tail on 00:34:320(4) ?

[extra]
oh, really good diff

That's all, I hope this can help you. And star for this map :D
Topic Starter
Dai

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nicely mapped, but it's too dead cuz distance snapped too much in harder difficulties (make some jumps in Hard / Lunatic / Extra)

The song is lesser than a minute, can consider making it harder

[Easy]
>.o)b

[Normal]
2.5 stars is easy rating, consider putting more notes instead of slider
Use more red ticks and some blue ticks if it suits
Spinner reduces the difficulty, replace with sliders or circles if possible
00:02:802 - Add circle
00:08:118 - Add circle
00:29:953 - Add circle
00:33:371 - Add circle
00:42:484 - Add circle
00:51:598 - Add circle
I'm going to remap some part

[Hard]
Ok

[Lunatic]
You can make some sliders to a reverse side to increase the confuse (Ctrl+G) , same as Extra

[Extra]
Approach Rate: +1
Try to raise the slider velocity in KIAI time, if possible (x1.25 - x1.75)
00:19:511 (12,13) - Make this the part of the stream too
00:38:022 - Add circle no need
00:38:497 (2,3,4) - Try to make these kind of circles distanced instead of stack, for example
00:41:915 (7) - Try to make it jump for example

Good luck on ranking >.o /

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
normal mod

General
0.0

Easy
AR-1
fine but
I think clap before 00:19:131 is really noisy the other diffs has the same
00:56:345 (1) - I think use N:C1 is better Soft is better :(

Normal
HP-1 OD-2
final spinner is a bit short and I think use N:C1 is better I agree that this is short, but soft is better
00:09:257 (4) - objects before this have incorrect spacing I don't really understand about this
00:23:117 (4) - spacing ^

Hard
00:55:396 (1) - I think use N:C1 is better same as above

Extra
OD-1 or 2 why 9....................... because this is an Extra diff
00:18:751 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - tream start at 00:19:131 is better,listen to the music
00:14:194 (4,5,6) - stream starts at white line like this is not very good,don't use it often,I feel uncomfortable when playing,maybe I'm so noob 0.0 I think it's fine
00:55:396 (1) - use N:C1 is better same as above

Lunatic
same suggestion about stream
00:55:396 (1) - use N:C1 is better same as above
00:05:650 (1) - why NC here 00:04:890 (6) - NC and00:06:219 (4) - NC
00:13:055 (1) - why NC here..
and I check other diffs there some same NC problems 0.0 I check other diffs and yeah you're right


that's all
good luck~

Verlaren wrote:

From my queue

[general]
deselect countdown

[easy]
SV 1.20 too hight for easy, please use 1.0 or less oh right. but 1.20 is fine I think
AR -1
00:40:396 (3,4) - in easy diff shouldn't be a stacked notes

[normal]
DR -1
OD -2
00:08:498 (2,3) - spacing error
00:08:878 (3,4) - ^
00:22:168 (3,4) - ^
00:30:143 (2,3) - ^
00:31:282 (3,4) - ^
I don't really understand about this :(

[hard]
00:23:307 - add note, sounds is really good it's quite hard and make it inconsitency for the next part
00:32:421 - ^ ^
00:51:408 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow I think it's fine like this
00:51:029 (2,3) - maybe swap these sliders? IMO better flow, try it ^

[lunatic]
00:14:194 (5) - move on x:128 y:134 for correct spacing between other sliders isn't that too close?
00:14:954 (1) - remove these note and add one repeat on 00:14:574(6) no need
00:17:232 (3,4) - maybe change on this shape? - no need, for better flow
00:35:459 (8) - stack tail on 00:34:320(4) ? ok

[extra]
oh, really good diff

That's all, I hope this can help you. And star for this map :D
THANKS FOR MOD EVERYONE :) :) :)
RandF
Hi~
Thank you for request from my queue!
[Easy]
  1. 00:46:092- add whistle
[Normal]

  • OK!
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:042- remove whistle
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:02:042- remove whistle
[Extra]
  1. 00:02:042- remove whistle
  2. 00:52:927 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - it is better to make straight
     ●00:53:307 (7) - x:282 y:176
     ●00:53:497 (8) - x:324 y:108
     ●00:53:687 (9) - x:366 y:40
The hitsound of Japanese-style is so good!
~Good luck~
Topic Starter
Dai

RandomEffect wrote:

Hi~
Thank you for request from my queue!
[Easy]
  1. 00:46:092- add whistle no need I think
[Normal]

  • OK!
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:042- remove whistle
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:02:042- remove whistle
[Extra]
  1. 00:02:042- remove whistle
  2. 00:52:927 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - it is better to make straight
     ●00:53:307 (7) - x:282 y:176
     ●00:53:497 (8) - x:324 y:108
     ●00:53:687 (9) - x:366 y:40
The hitsound of Japanese-style is so good!
~Good luck~
thanks for mod :oops:
HelloSCV
from my queue

Easy

nothing to say :/

Normal

00:06:219 (1) - touching HP bar

Hard

00:31:282 (1) - delete NC
00:35:839 (3) - how about finish on end?
00:50:459 (1) - delete NC

Lunatic

00:36:598 (3) - same as Extra
00:05:650 (1) - delete NC

Extra

00:11:060 (5) - delete this and 00:10:871 - add a note here is much better
00:18:845 (6) - this note seems don't need if you fit with drum sounds
00:25:586 (1) - delete NC for consistence
00:33:560 (3) - NC
00:36:598 (4) - how about finish?
00:51:029 (5) - NC


good luck~
Topic Starter
Dai
Fixed all stuff suggested
Thanks for mod
fanzhen0019
Hi :3
From my queue.

General
  • Nothing to point out.Clear!

Easy

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Normal

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:25:586 (1) - Delete NC and add NC here:00:24:826 (5) -

Hard

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:24:067 (7) - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/853867 .Like changing their direction gradually.

Lunatic

Hitsounds
  1. 00:23:117 - Maybe remove whistle?and add whistle here:00:22:927 -
  2. 00:31:662 (4,5) - Same as above.
  3. 00:40:776 (6,7) - Same as above.
  4. 00:49:890 (2,3) - Same as above.
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:05:650 (1) - Consider remove this NC.
  2. 00:23:687 (1) - Remove NC.
  3. 00:41:915 (1) - To consist with other parts,remove NC here and add to 00:42:674 (3) -

Extra

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:12:865 (1) - Remove NC.
  2. 00:51:029 (1) - Remove NC.

Sorry for my poor mod...Symmetrical style is nice for you..
Your map is good enough.Consider ask for a BAT o.o
Topic Starter
Dai

fanzhen0019 wrote:

Hi :3
From my queue.

Hitsounds
  1. 00:23:117 - Maybe remove whistle?and add whistle here:00:22:927 - no need, to consistency to the other diffs
  2. 00:31:662 (4,5) - Same as above. ^
  3. 00:40:776 (6,7) - Same as above. ^
  4. 00:49:890 (2,3) - Same as above. ^
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:05:650 (1) - Consider remove this NC.
  2. 00:23:687 (1) - Remove NC.
  3. 00:41:915 (1) - To consist with other parts,remove NC here and add to 00:42:674 (3) -

Sorry for my poor mod...Symmetrical style is nice for you..
Your map is good enough.Consider ask for a BAT o.o no need to rush... I still want to improve my map :P
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Issues.

♥ You just made the [Easy] diff AWESOMELY AMAZING !!! With delicious Sliders I mean. Easy diffs like the yours are really Rare, hard to find ^.^ Well, the song helps too, but mapping skills are amazing !
* Easy diff is clean and very good!

[Normal]
:idea: 00:16:093 (4) - It could be like → http://puu.sh/3xjTV.jpg → and the code for it is →
140,44,16093,2,0,B|196:20|256:100|256:100|320:20|380:44,1,279.999980926514,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:

[Hard]
♥ Amazing flow ♥ and patterns. I loved playing it

[Extra]
♥ Well made too, and very challenging.

[Lunatic]
♥ Well made too
* Feels a bit easier than [Extra] (and gives less score), but it's amazing too ♥

That's it ^^

I hope this map get Ranked as soon as possible !



Att.
Topic Starter
Dai
thanks for mod and star :) :) :) :) :)
wendao
alo~
i found the sequel Gojou Kai - Ultimate Truth

[General]
Tambahin Customcolour warna Hijau dan Putih
Ga ada break? Disable Letterbox :)

[Easy]
Overall udah bagus
00:24:446 (3) - NC
00:42:674 (1,2) - mungkin dibikin lebih blanket lagi :3
308,96,42674,6,0,B|360:132|346:203|346:203|401:157|458:186,1,240,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,288,43814,2,0,P|277:294|253:186,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:44:953 (3) - ngikutin blanket dari (2)
252,68,44953,2,0,P|144:212|208:368,1,360,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:51:788 (3) - NC
00:56:345 (1) - pindahin ke 256,124

[Normal]
AR+1?
00:13:814 (3) - bikin lebih renggang?
120,256,13435,1,2,0:3:0:0:
120,256,13814,2,0,B|188:284|256:256|256:256|324:228|392:256,2,280,2|8|6,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
-- 00:13:435 (2) - stack ke (3)
00:23:117 (4) - mungkin kayak gini? xD
344,20,23117,2,0,B|412:68|388:140|388:140|440:136|476:192|476:192|440:248|388:244|388:244|412:316|344:364,1,490,10|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
00:29:003 (1,2) - wogh jump

[Hard]
00:19:890 (1,2) - node kedua *titik yang ditengah* pindahin ke 376,196.. (2) Flip Horizontal dari (1)
00:51:788 (1,2) - prefer ini daripada itu .. (2) Flip Horizontal dari (1)
336,192,51788,6,0,B|364:192|364:192|392:176|392:176|400:208|400:208|428:192|428:192|464:192,2,160,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,52928,2,0,B|148:192|148:192|120:176|120:176|112:208|112:208|84:192|84:192|48:192,2,160,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Lunatic]
00:01:663 (1) - prefer 2 notes \o/
00:02:042 (3,4) - gimana kalo gini 00:03:561 (2) - prefer 2 notes \o/
00:04:321 (5) - karena di akhir slider suaranya merendah, lebih baik potong repeatnya dan bikin not baru + New Combo 00:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - perasaan ga nyambung deh notnya orz

[Extra]
starnya kurang dari Lunatic, why? ;w;
nothing to mention here. good enough \:D/ *alibi males modding*

oke gudlak
Topic Starter
Dai

Harez wrote:

alo~
i found the sequel Gojou Kai - Ultimate Truth

[General]
Tambahin Customcolour warna Hijau dan Putih ndak perlu
Ga ada break? Disable Letterbox :)

[Easy]
Overall udah bagus
00:24:446 (3) - NC
00:42:674 (1,2) - mungkin dibikin lebih blanket lagi :3
308,96,42674,6,0,B|360:132|346:203|346:203|401:157|458:186,1,240,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,288,43814,2,0,P|277:294|253:186,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:44:953 (3) - ngikutin blanket dari (2)
252,68,44953,2,0,P|144:212|208:368,1,360,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:51:788 (3) - NC
00:56:345 (1) - pindahin ke 256,124

[Normal]
AR+1? terlalu susah kayaknya
00:13:814 (3) - bikin lebih renggang?
SPOILER
terlalu renggang, jadi agak tak edit dikit
120,256,13435,1,2,0:3:0:0:
120,256,13814,2,0,B|188:284|256:256|256:256|324:228|392:256,2,280,2|8|6,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
-- 00:13:435 (2) - stack ke (3)
00:23:117 (4) - mungkin kayak gini? xD
344,20,23117,2,0,B|412:68|388:140|388:140|440:136|476:192|476:192|440:248|388:244|388:244|412:316|344:364,1,490,10|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
00:29:003 (1,2) - wogh jump wogh, emang sengaja

[Hard]
00:19:890 (1,2) - node kedua *titik yang ditengah* pindahin ke 376,196.. (2) Flip Horizontal dari (1) nggak perlu biar simetris
00:51:788 (1,2) - prefer ini daripada itu .. (2) Flip Horizontal dari (1) err, tapi saya masih prefer yang itu
336,192,51788,6,0,B|364:192|364:192|392:176|392:176|400:208|400:208|428:192|428:192|464:192,2,160,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,52928,2,0,B|148:192|148:192|120:176|120:176|112:208|112:208|84:192|84:192|48:192,2,160,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Lunatic]
00:01:663 (1) - prefer 2 notes \o/ untuk awal note emang tak bikin slider
00:02:042 (3,4) - gimana kalo gini 00:03:561 (2) - prefer 2 notes \o/
00:04:321 (5) - karena di akhir slider suaranya merendah, lebih baik potong repeatnya dan bikin not baru + New Combo err... suaranya biasa aja kok
00:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - perasaan ga nyambung deh notnya orz nyambung ah.. tapi emang kayaknya agak jelek ya

[Extra]
starnya kurang dari Lunatic, why? ;w; tanyakan pada pepet :P
nothing to mention here. good enough \:D/ *alibi males modding*

oke gudlak
thanks for mod
aku cinta kamu
Ciyus Miapah
-EXTRA-
00:18:940 (6) - nah yang ini sebaiknya NC
00:36:598 (4) - ini NC
00:38:877 (5) - NC
00:43:814 (5) - yang ini NC juga
00:41:345 (6,1,2,3,4) - seharusnya NC di 6
00:43:814 (5) - di NC
00:46:472 (6) - yang ini jangan pake reverse slider, pake HC aja. sama di NC
00:48:371 (5) - yang ini NC
00:52:927 (4) - kayanya di NC bagus juga
00:53:307 (7) - di NC
Gamu
hi~  Requests from here

[General]

●Nothing

[Easy]

●00:13:814 (3) - I think appearance is not so good. So, rotate by 25% (Direction: Clockwise. Origin: Playfield Centre) [Ctrl+Shift+R]
Please try this. Surely, it will be well.

[Normal]

●00:19:890 (1,2,3) - Slider of straight is no problem. But, there is no fun. Therefore, create an interesting shape?
●00:55:396 (1) - Beginners will play most Normal diff. This spinner is very short...D: Beginner is very weak spinner. Are you want to remove the spinner for a beginner? If you delete, you would add circle in 00:56:345. it is good.
●00:55:206 (4) - add new combo? sound was changed.

[Hard]

●00:06:979 (1) - remove new combo. And, 00:07:738 (2) - add new combo. This is correct. I think you are mistake..D:
●00:14:954 (1) - remove new combo. And, 00:15:333 (2) - add new combo. ^
●00:55:206 (4) - Same as Normal diff.

[Extra]

●OD9 is no good... OD 8 is good! I think so.
Suggests of the NC
●00:02:802 (1) - remove new combo. And, 00:03:181 (2) - add new combo.
●00:04:321 (1) - ^. And, 00:04:700 (2) - ^
●00:05:840 (1) - ^. And, 00:06:219 (2) - ^
●00:07:359 (1) - ^. And, 00:07:738 (2) - ^
●00:08:878 (1) - ^. And, 00:09:257 (2) - ^
●00:10:397 (1) - ^. And, 00:10:776 (3) - ^
●00:11:916 (1) - ^. And, 00:12:295 (2) - ^
●00:14:954 (1) - ^. And, 00:15:333 (3) - ^
●00:16:473 (1) - ^. And, 00:16:852 (3) - ^
●00:24:826 (2) - Move to x504? It will line up neatly with 00:24:446 (1).
●00:25:206 (3) - ^
●00:55:206 (6) - Same as Normal diff.

[Lunatic]

●Same as Extra diff (Suggests of the NC)
●00:03:181 (1,2) - It looks bad. widen the spacing?
●00:52:927 (1,2,3) - ^
●00:55:206 (6) - Same as Normal diff.

that's all.

I'm sorry for simple modding..;w;
Topic Starter
Dai

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~  Requests from here

[General]

●Nothing

[Easy]

●00:13:814 (3) - I think appearance is not so good. So, rotate by 25% (Direction: Clockwise. Origin: Playfield Centre) [Ctrl+Shift+R]
Please try this. Surely, it will be well.

[Normal]

●00:19:890 (1,2,3) - Slider of straight is no problem. But, there is no fun. Therefore, create an interesting shape?
●00:55:396 (1) - Beginners will play most Normal diff. This spinner is very short...D: Beginner is very weak spinner. Are you want to remove the spinner for a beginner? If you delete, you would add circle in 00:56:345. it is good.
●00:55:206 (4) - add new combo? sound was changed. no need

[Hard]

●00:06:979 (1) - remove new combo. And, 00:07:738 (2) - add new combo. This is correct. I think you are mistake..D:
●00:14:954 (1) - remove new combo. And, 00:15:333 (2) - add new combo. ^
●00:55:206 (4) - Same as Normal diff.

[Extra]

●OD9 is no good... OD 8 is good! I think so. 9 is fine, to make it quite challenging
Suggests of the NC
●00:02:802 (1) - remove new combo. And, 00:03:181 (2) - add new combo.
●00:04:321 (1) - ^. And, 00:04:700 (2) - ^
●00:05:840 (1) - ^. And, 00:06:219 (2) - ^
●00:07:359 (1) - ^. And, 00:07:738 (2) - ^
●00:08:878 (1) - ^. And, 00:09:257 (2) - ^
●00:10:397 (1) - ^. And, 00:10:776 (3) - ^
●00:11:916 (1) - ^. And, 00:12:295 (2) - ^
●00:14:954 (1) - ^. And, 00:15:333 (3) - ^
●00:16:473 (1) - ^. And, 00:16:852 (3) - ^
even tough they're on the down beat, I think whistles would fit to NC
●00:24:826 (2) - Move to x504? It will line up neatly with 00:24:446 (1).
●00:25:206 (3) - ^
●00:55:206 (6) - Same as Normal diff. ^

[Lunatic]

●Same as Extra diff (Suggests of the NC)
●00:03:181 (1,2) - It looks bad. widen the spacing?
●00:52:927 (1,2,3) - ^
●00:55:206 (6) - Same as Normal diff. ^

that's all.

I'm sorry for simple modding..;w;
thanks for mod, sorry if I'm not clear enough to reply orz
xChippy
Hi~
From my queue :3

[General]
All clear~

[Easy]
Only one little nazi thing 00:43:814 (2,3) - move (3) end point a little so it curls evenly around (2)

[Normal]
all fine~

[Hard]
00:14:194 (5) - - NC and remove NC here 00:15:333 (1) -

[Extra]
all fine too =w=

[Lunatic]
00:10:017 (4) - remove NC
00:34:700 (1) - NC

That's all =.=
General comment: Request a BAT o-o
Have a star =w=
Topic Starter
Dai

xChippy wrote:

Hi~

[Lunatic]
00:10:017 (4) - remove NC OMG OMG OMG
00:34:700 (1) - NC

That's all =.=
General comment: Request a BAT o-o
Have a star =w=
fixed all stuff suggested
thanks for mod and star >_<
Momochikun
dafuq udh ada Lunatic ada Extra pula o.o
pieguyn
hi, from my queue :)

[Easy]
00:33:560 (1,2) - just wondering why you have claps here, but on the other ones, you don't

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
fine

[Lunatic]
00:39:257 (1) - remove NC and put it on 00:40:396 (5) -

[Extra]
OD 9? holy crap, turn it down plz 0.0
AR +1? as it's extra diff and it's a somewhat fast song...plus you've already got OD9 so ..
00:30:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/3AVfy.jpg how about this rhythm :?
00:40:396 (6,1) - switch NCs for new measure
00:54:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here might be a good place for jump ~

that's it, hope it helps :D
nice map and good luck :)
Topic Starter
Dai

Momochikun wrote:

dafuq udh ada Lunatic ada Extra pula o.o
bantu mod dunds :P

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue :)

[Easy]
00:33:560 (1,2) - just wondering why you have claps here, but on the other ones, you don't the others have

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
fine

[Lunatic]
00:39:257 (1) - remove NC and put it on 00:40:396 (5) -

[Extra]
OD 9? holy crap, turn it down plz 0.0 it's an extra diff, but still got a lower star rating than lunatic. so I think OD9 is fine
AR +1? as it's extra diff and it's a somewhat fast song...plus you've already got OD9 so ..
00:30:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/3AVfy.jpg how about this rhythm :?
00:40:396 (6,1) - switch NCs for new measure
00:54:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here might be a good place for jump ~

that's it, hope it helps :D
nice map and good luck :)
Thanks for mod :oops:
Satellite


[Easy]
00:44:953 (3) - end point forget hitsound? ( maybe Finish? clap?)

[Normal]
00:33:371 - add note
00:42:484 - ^

[Hard]
nothing to say. really great :)

[Lunatic]
00:19:890 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - "I think" end point whistle remove. maybe fit.( All place...)
00:42:674 (1,2,3) - not fit. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:48:750 (6,7,8) - try this Rhythm


[Extra]
HP and OD -1 plz
try this?


good luck :)
Topic Starter
Dai

Satellite wrote:



[Easy]
00:44:953 (3) - end point forget hitsound? ( maybe Finish? clap?) Finish

[Normal]
00:33:371 - add note no need, 1/2 triplet on normal is quite hard
00:42:484 - ^ ^

[Hard]
nothing to say. really great :)

[Lunatic]
00:19:890 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - "I think" end point whistle remove. maybe fit.( All place...) it feels weird on the next note
00:42:674 (1,2,3) - not fit. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:48:750 (6,7,8) - try this Rhythm


[Extra]
HP and OD -1 plz
try this? err.... timing please?


good luck :)
Thanks for mod :)
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