Double Recheck from my queue (: XD
General
General
- 00:46:087 - I think this part should be your preview point because you're missing the lyrics before the chorus.
- 01:16:523 (1) - Remove the new combo here to maintain consistency in your combo numbers. I might as well state that it's not necessary here so better remove it instead. (:
- 00:43:000 (1) - It would be better if this slider ended on 00:43:661.
- 00:44:323 - If you followed my suggestion above, I recommend you add a circle here to fill up the empty space and because there's some kind of a beat here in the vocals. XD
- 00:59:982 (1) - I've been thinking of this slider since then. For somehow, I think the slider is going with the rhythm but the problem in my opinion is that it is kind of breaking the flow of circles. No one kind of expects this one to start in the red tick. My suggestion instead is this: [urhttp://puu.sh/1AYcO]Click[/url]
- 01:12:994 (3) - Add a new combo here to maintain combo count on this part. As you can see, you've added new combos in every tall white tick on the part where the kiai ends. But for somehow, you forgot to add one on this part so yeah.. Add new combo XD Oh and this suggestion also implies with the circle on 01:23:581 (3).
- Okay now I've finally realized you didn't map the first part of the song. Map it instead? The rest of the diff except Taiko have circles on this part.
- 00:28:885 (1) - Move the 2nd point of this slider 2 grids left because this slider together with the two previous circles don't make a straight line at all. So fix this one to make it straight.
- 00:43:441 (2) - This slider would be more readable if you unstack it and use .7 DS instead.
- 00:46:529 (3) - Mark a new combo here because it's the start of the kiai.
- 01:25:345 - Perhaps you didn't see my suggestions in [General]. I think you should add a circle here instead to emphasize the last beat the occurred in the song. So basically you're gonna have to move the spinner on 01:25:566 if you followed this one.
- Regarding the spinner in the last part, why not add a descending volume in it like what PainSinger did in all his diff?
- 00:43:441 (8) - Inconsistent spacing here. Make it consistent please. Don't use 1.0 DS here, doesn't look great because you don't expect tight spaces on an Insane diff (unless it's stream of course. XD)
- I'm still seeing a lot of weird triples here. I guess you're not getting my point. D: For example, if you would listen closely in the music, the triples started in 00:17:416 but you added the triples on 00:17:637. So basically,you're triples are misleading and is causing MASS DESTRUCTION. lol jk. Btw, you should fix this thing because it's not making any sense at all. I hope you can fix this one and the rest of it. I've seen a lot of things like this on this diff.
- Meh, I can't find anything wrong anymore XD But I suggest you consult a taiko modder about this one as I'm not good at this.