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PainSinger

Starry wrote:

Nvm~

I'll star this.
Thanks :)
terametis
Hi~ :)
These are all suggestion.

[General]
You must encode the mp3 below 192 kbps.
Please set to 2~3 seconds lead-in. 1 second is short.
Remove Enable countdown. Easy, Normal, Insane doesn't have a margin of 3 seconds at the beginning.

[Easy]
I feel clap sound to fit this song. 

00:19:575 (2)    Add clap
00:24:869 (5)    ^
00:26:634 (2)    ^
00:28:399 (4)    ^
00:30:163 (2)    Add clap at the slider's start.
00:30:604 (~)    Add finish at the slider's reverse arrow.
00:30:046 (~)    Change to finish at the end of slider.
00:31:928 (4)    Add clap
00:38:987 (2)    ^  
00:41:634 (1)    Remove clap
00:42:516 (3)    Add clap
00:44:722 (2)    Add finish at the slider's start.

[Normal]
00:01:406 (~)    Remove clap on the end of slider.
00:02:810 (4)    Remove clap
00:34:575 (4)    Remove clap. You are just here to use clap from 00:32:369 to 00:45:604.

[Hard]
00:20:016 (8)    Remove clap on the slider's start.
00:23:546 (6)    ^
00:30:046 (1)    Change to finish at the slider's start.
00:31:046 (2)    ^
00:31:928 (4)    add clap
00:34:465 (~)     Remove clap on the slider's reverse arrow. I feel, clapsound doesn't fit to the blue tick on this part.
00:36:229 (~)    ^
00:37:994 (~)    ^
00:39:759 (~)    ^
00:41:524 (~)    ^
00:42:847 (6)    Remove clap or add clap on 00:42:737.
01:16:487 (1)    Add clap.

[Insane]
00:01:406 (~)    Remove clap on the end of slider.
00:02:810 (5)    Remove clap
00:11:634 (1)    Remove New combo. This is not a rational New combo. 
00:12:075 (1)    ^
00:36:781 (7),(1)  switch New combo.
00:42:075 (~)    I want hitsound here.
01:03:252 (6)    Add New combo. A big difference in DS.

That's all.

I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~ :)
Topic Starter
PainSinger

terametis wrote:

Hi~ :)
These are all suggestion.

[General]
You must encode the mp3 below 192 kbps. fixed
Please set to 2~3 seconds lead-in. 1 second is short. fixed
Remove Enable countdown. Easy, Normal, Insane doesn't have a margin of 3 seconds at the beginning. fixed

[Easy]
I feel clap sound to fit this song. 

00:19:575 (2)    Add clap fixed
00:24:869 (5)    ^ ^
00:26:634 (2)    ^ ^
00:28:399 (4)    ^ ^
00:30:163 (2)    Add clap at the slider's start. ^
00:30:604 (~)    Add finish at the slider's reverse arrow. ^
00:30:046 (~)    Change to finish at the end of slider. ^
00:31:928 (4)    Add clap ^
00:38:987 (2)    ^ ^  
00:41:634 (1)    Remove clap ^
00:42:516 (3)    Add clap ^
00:44:722 (2)    Add finish at the slider's start. ^

[Normal]
00:01:406 (~)    Remove clap on the end of slider. fixed
00:02:810 (4)    Remove clap ^
00:34:575 (4)    Remove clap. You are just here to use clap from 00:32:369 to 00:45:604. ^

[Insane]
00:01:406 (~)    Remove clap on the end of slider. fixed
00:02:810 (5)    Remove clap ^
00:11:634 (1)    Remove New combo. This is not a rational New combo. ^ 
00:12:075 (1)    ^ ^
00:36:781 (7),(1)  switch New combo. ^
00:42:075 (~)    I want hitsound here. ^
01:03:252 (6)    Add New combo. A big difference in DS. ^

That's all.

I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~ :)
Thanks for the mod :)
KuronumaSawako

terametis wrote:

[Hard]
00:20:016 (8)    Remove clap on the slider's start. No, feels empty if i remove this.
00:23:546 (6)    ^ ^
00:30:046 (1)    Change to finish at the slider's start. Kay
00:31:046 (2)    ^ Kay
00:31:928 (4)    add clap Kay
00:34:465 (~)     Remove clap on the slider's reverse arrow. I feel, clapsound doesn't fit to the blue tick on this part. Kay
00:36:229 (~)    ^ ^
00:37:994 (~)    ^ ^
00:39:759 (~)    ^ ^
00:41:524 (~)    ^ ^
00:42:847 (6)    Remove clap or add clap on 00:42:737. Okay
01:16:487 (1)    Add clap. Okay
[/color]
http://puu.sh/DWnY
sorry for delay
Topic Starter
PainSinger
No prob^^
also update your diff because I fixed a few general things
jossieP
sorry for late >v< I started my job and asdsa well it doesnt matter anyways /o/

lets see if I can help you <: /me dl witouth video

[General]

  1. hmm cant find significant tags to put here
  2. hmm metronome sounds a bit weird on begin of the song, but it fits on the last part, maybe incorrect bpm
    suggested timing:
    BPM: 136,025
    Offset: 640
    maybe you want to someone that can re-confirm this,

[Taiko]

  1. Set all soundsets to default normal and make all the same volume lvl, using custom sounds on taiko mode dont have sense since taiko mode use its own custom hitsounds as default, volume changes are unnecesary too, your sections may looks loike
  2. maybe OD 6 dunno maybe my test play got fail due timing
  3. wwwwww cant find a good image for make a bg >_< send me a image and Ill make a taiko bg for you, current is covering takumi's face
  4. 00:03:693 (1) - use finish here?
  5. 00:24:207 (2) - don? due vocal change
  6. 00:32:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - well drums here are not like this, but is readable I think
I have no much to say about taiko, but is a bit repetitive, maybe variate a bit moar your patterns, and some 5 notes streams ;3

[Insane]

  1. 00:01:928 (3) - tryin to follow vocals a bit better, whistle to the end of slider? and ↓
  2. 00:03:031 (6) - whistle to start of slider
  3. 00:07:663 (1) - this finish is a bit annoyin for me, it is following your finish pattern, but other patterns are 1/2 sliders, the second circle of the stream is enhancing the finish a bit bad for me, dont change if you dont want to
  4. 00:11:193 (1) - sounds different than pointed up, maybe the pointed up was due vocals or something, this sounds better
  5. 00:18:252 ~ a moar constant claping sounds more nice for me, maybe add some claps on 00:19:354 (5) - repeat, 00:20:457 (8) - , 00:21:340 (4) - (no whistle) ~ you may notice the pattern
  6. 00:21:119 (3) - no whistle? hmm the whistleing sounds weird, as this part is soft whistles should be more constant and have equal times of repeteances
  7. 00:28:178 (6) - stack on 00:29:281 (3)?
  8. 00:29:281 (3,4) - copy paste 00:28:840 (1,2) re-scale them by x1,8 then stack (3) on 00:28:178 (6) - that way looks moar elegant, if youliked that, make the same for 00:29:722 (6,7) ;3
  9. 00:32:590 (1) - use higher volume? I even was especting a finish /o/
  10. 00:36:781 (1,2,3,4) - this part is hmm well as the previous slider was a slowdown, and (1) is stacked the back to normal spacing of circles is so weird, maybe unstack (1) or of course you can space it to x1, but you have some objects like that previously also 00:37:443 (4) - should follows a better flow
  11. 00:54:207 (4) - overlaps with 00:53:104 (7,8,9) - looks dirty, try to place (9) on y axis and stack all combo 00:53:546 (1,2,3,4) - with (9)
  12. 01:04:134 (1) - space this x2 distance from previous, antijump wwww dunno :w
  13. 01:25:090 - add circle with clap O:?

[sawa-chan ></]

  1. 00:03:713 (1) - whistle or finish to this O;?
  2. 00:12:095 (4) - clap ;Q sounds nice better with clap on blue tick
  3. 00:13:639 (2) - clap on end of slider ↑ well you know
  4. 00:17:389 (5) - just clap on blue tick sounds nice due the section is finishing near here
  5. 00:18:272 (1) - finish on start of slider O:?
  6. 00:24:448 (10) - ºoº no straight
  7. 00:43:419 (2) - not perfect stack, maybe you want to make manual stack here <:
    SPOILER

    Manual:
pretty nice hitsounds <: what a shame that you dont use many whistles TvT also a bit disappointed by the squared placement and few variety of sliders but its ok /o/

[Normal]

  1. 00:00:163 (1) - tryin to make whistles follow vocals, whistle on repeat
  2. 00:01:928 (3) - whistle on start/end, not on slider body
  3. 00:03:031 (5) - ↑
  4. 00:04:134 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section is far different than the rest, make like others patterns please, 00:11:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - it was moar simple and that way you dont have that rhythm downgrade
  5. 00:32:369 - hmm dont use slowdown?
  6. 01:09:428 (4) - finish?


[Easy]

  1. 00:46:928 ~ aaand normal slider tick sounds weird >w<
no much to say here, simple rhythm as I like but just a maybe curve moar your sliders >w<


that is all ;3 wush wush
Topic Starter
PainSinger

ikari_kyon wrote:

sorry for late >v< I started my job and asdsa well it doesnt matter anyways /o/

lets see if I can help you <: /me dl witouth video

[General]

  1. hmm cant find significant tags to put here
  2. hmm metronome sounds a bit weird on begin of the song, but it fits on the last part, maybe incorrect bpm
    suggested timing: fixed
    BPM: 136,025
    Offset: 640
    maybe you want to someone that can re-confirm this,

[Taiko]

  1. Set all soundsets to default normal and make all the same volume lvl, using custom sounds on taiko mode dont have sense since taiko mode use its own custom hitsounds as default, volume changes are unnecesary too, your sections may looks loike fixed
  2. maybe OD 6 dunno maybe my test play got fail due timing fixed
  3. wwwwww cant find a good image for make a bg >_< send me a image and Ill make a taiko bg for you, current is covering takumi's face I'll try to find one :)
  4. 00:03:693 (1) - use finish here? ok
  5. 00:24:207 (2) - don? due vocal change fixed
  6. 00:32:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - well drums here are not like this, but is readable I think
I have no much to say about taiko, but is a bit repetitive, maybe variate a bit moar your patterns, and some 5 notes streams ;3 ok I'll try to do that it's my first time making a taiko diff so I dunno what I'm doing xD

[Insane]

  1. 00:01:928 (3) - tryin to follow vocals a bit better, whistle to the end of slider? and ↓ fixed
  2. 00:03:031 (6) - whistle to start of slider ^
  3. 00:07:663 (1) - this finish is a bit annoyin for me, it is following your finish pattern, but other patterns are 1/2 sliders, the second circle of the stream is enhancing the finish a bit bad for me, dont change if you dont want to ^
  4. 00:11:193 (1) - sounds different than pointed up, maybe the pointed up was due vocals or something, this sounds better
  5. 00:18:252 ~ a moar constant claping sounds more nice for me, maybe add some claps on 00:19:354 (5) - repeat, 00:20:457 (8) - , 00:21:340 (4) - (no whistle) ~ you may notice the pattern fixed
  6. 00:21:119 (3) - no whistle? hmm the whistleing sounds weird, as this part is soft whistles should be more constant and have equal times of repeteances ^
  7. 00:28:178 (6) - stack on 00:29:281 (3)? ^
  8. 00:29:281 (3,4) - copy paste 00:28:840 (1,2) re-scale them by x1,8 then stack (3) on 00:28:178 (6) - that way looks moar elegant, if youliked that, make the same for 00:29:722 (6,7) ;3 ^
  9. 00:32:590 (1) - use higher volume? I even was especting a finish /o/ ^
  10. 00:36:781 (1,2,3,4) - this part is hmm well as the previous slider was a slowdown, and (1) is stacked the back to normal spacing of circles is so weird, maybe unstack (1) or of course you can space it to x1, but you have some objects like that previously also 00:37:443 (4) - should follows a better flow ^
  11. 00:54:207 (4) - overlaps with 00:53:104 (7,8,9) - looks dirty, try to place (9) on y axis and stack all combo 00:53:546 (1,2,3,4) - with (9) ^
  12. 01:04:134 (1) - space this x2 distance from previous, antijump wwww dunno :w ^
  13. 01:25:090 - add circle with clap O:? ^

[Normal]

  1. 00:00:163 (1) - tryin to make whistles follow vocals, whistle on repeat fixed
  2. 00:01:928 (3) - whistle on start/end, not on slider body ^
  3. 00:03:031 (5) - ↑ ^
  4. 00:04:134 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section is far different than the rest, make like others patterns please, 00:11:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - it was moar simple and that way you dont have that rhythm downgrade ^
  5. 00:32:369 - hmm dont use slowdown? ^
  6. 01:09:428 (4) - finish? ^


[Easy]

  1. 00:46:928 ~ aaand normal slider tick sounds weird >w< fixed
no much to say here, simple rhythm as I like but just a maybe curve moar your sliders >w< ok


that is all ;3 wush wush
Thanks for the mod and star :3
Konei
This could get poor ._.



General

Maybe add " ed " to the tags? because if I look for an ending of an anime I always search ed

All of your timing sections are unsnapped and need to be snapped

Easy

01:00:629 add a short end of kiai time for a fontaine?



Find nothing wrong with it :lol:

Just fix the timing sections.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
PainSinger

Konei wrote:

This could get poor ._.



General

Maybe add " ed " to the tags? because if I look for an ending of an anime I always search ed ok

All of your timing sections are unsnapped and need to be snapped oh xD forgot to resnap them when I fixed the timing, thanks

Easy

01:00:629 add a short end of kiai time for a fontaine? nah I'll leave it as it is



Find nothing wrong with it :lol:

Just fix the timing sections.

Good luck~
Thanks for the mod^^

@KuronumaSawako update your diff because I fixed the timing a bit and added new tags ^^
Kanari
Kaichou wa Maid-sama! <33
Poggo
hi from my mod Q

General

• It will be sound better if you use volume 50%
• Lead in better make 2000 now it 2004

Insane

00:21:481 - remove this note, not sound here
00:32:619 - start this slider on blue tick 00:32:509
00:33:722 - remove finish. not sound here
00:42:544(6,7) - stack better
01:25:109(7) - maybe you put so http://puu.sh/GMBm

Hard

00:12:218 - remove this note, not sound here
00:12:108(4) - add clap
00:19:276 - remove clap and add on note 3
00:22:805 - remove clap and add on note 1
00:21:040 -remove clap
00:59:857(2,3) - stack it better
01:17:170(3,4,) - correct spacing between this notes
01:21:029 -remove this note, not sound here

Oh this random hitsounds sound not good~~

Normal

sound fine~ But looks chaotically and ugly. Maybe you make symmetric patterns or put notes triangle, square e.t.c It's will be looks better

Easy

Fine~

Good luck~~
Topic Starter
PainSinger

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q

General

• It will be sound better if you use volume 50% fixed
• Lead in better make 2000 now it 2004 ^

Insane

00:21:481 - remove this note, not sound here fixed
00:32:619 - start this slider on blue tick 00:32:509 ^
00:33:722 - remove finish. not sound here ^
00:42:544(6,7) - stack better ^
01:25:109(7) - maybe you put so http://puu.sh/GMBm ^

Normal

sound fine~ But looks chaotically and ugly. Maybe you make symmetric patterns or put notes triangle, square e.t.c It's will be looks better ok I'll try to re-design it

Easy

Fine~

Good luck~~
Ty for the mod
KuronumaSawako

Katty Pie wrote:

Hard

00:12:218 - remove this note, not sound here ok
00:12:108(4) - add clap ok
00:19:276 - remove clap and add on note 3 No, i think fits with the song
00:22:805 - remove clap and add on note 1 Same reason above
00:21:040 -remove clap No
00:59:857(2,3) - stack it better Made another thing
01:17:170(3,4,) - correct spacing between this notes ok
01:21:029 -remove this note, not sound here No no no, listen to the song carefully then you will hear a sound here.
here
sorry for delay again i forgotten to update my diff D:
http://puu.sh/KCL4
http://puu.sh/KCMR (forgot to save changes ><)
Topic Starter
PainSinger
dw about it^^ I've been quite busy anyway :)
Nagisawa
Hi!From my Q!

General
~timing is wrong. please offset here 00:00:198 -

Easy
00:12:549 - add note
00:16:078 - ^
01:16:067 - ^
01:23:125 - ^
01:25:330 (1) - end this spinner here 01:28:418 -

Normal
~Unsnapped green lines!

00:46:072 - add note
00:57:100 (1) - x:140, y:252
00:57:982 (2) - x:316, y:168
00:59:967 (1,3) - symmetrick will look better
01:09:892 (5,1) - ^
01:25:330 (1) - end this spinner here 01:28:418 -

Sawa's Hard
00:09:903 (6) - nc
00:26:664 (6) - ^
00:53:792 (6) - ^
~good


Insane
~good for me

Good luck your map for ranking!
Star~3
Topic Starter
PainSinger

Nagisawa wrote:

Hi!From my Q!

General
~timing is wrong. please offset here 00:00:198 - fixed

Easy
00:12:549 - add note fixed
00:16:078 - ^ ^
01:16:067 - ^ ^
01:23:125 - ^ ^
01:25:330 (1) - end this spinner here 01:28:418 - ^

Normal
~Unsnapped green lines! fixed

00:46:072 - add note fixed
00:57:100 (1) - x:140, y:252 ^
00:57:982 (2) - x:316, y:168 ^
00:59:967 (1,3) - symmetrick will look better ^
01:09:892 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:25:330 (1) - end this spinner here 01:28:418 - ^

Insane
~good for me

Good luck your map for ranking!
Star~3
Thanks for the mod and star~ :)
@KuronumaSawako update ur diff, new timing~
Chewin
Hi PainSinger, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
There is inconsistency in kiai times in the "Sawa's Hard" diff. I guess it is for some unsnapped green lines.
Set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:168, ends on 00:18:283 and Kiai #2: Starts on 00:46:514, ends on 01:11:215 plz
This BG is really LQ >w< Consider to change it
Offset: 176 is better to me. Try it and don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes.

[Easy]
00:44:749 (2) - You could move it in this way to make a blanket: http://puu.sh/N3Dz
340,116,44307,5,0
332,196,44749,2,0,B|376:200|404:168,2,80.000000596046,8|8|2
01:00:188 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:629 (2). It fits much better since the vocal starts on 01:00:629 (2) and you used a finish hitsound.
01:05:481 (2,3) - Improve the blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/387422

[Normal]
00:21:812 (1) - Remove this finish? It sounds too loud for me or you could decrease his volume.
Good map

[Sawa's Hard]
00:18:283 (1) - Finish on this slider's head?
00:24:459 (10) - I highly suggest you to use a single New combo here to advice the players about the SV change
00:25:341 (3) - Same of 00:18:283 (1)
00:44:749 (8) - Same of 00:24:459 (10)
00:53:571 (5) - Finish
01:25:330 (1) - Unsnapped spinner's end
I like how you used 1/4 snap divisor here :3 Good job

[Insane]
00:04:168 (1) - Unsnapped slider's end
00:05:933 (1) - ^

That's all =w= Good luck!
Topic Starter
PainSinger

Chewin wrote:

Hi PainSinger, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
There is inconsistency in kiai times in the "Sawa's Hard" diff. I guess it is for some unsnapped green lines.
Set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:168, ends on 00:18:283 and Kiai #2: Starts on 00:46:514, ends on 01:11:215 plz
This BG is really LQ >w< Consider to change it ok, I'll look for a better one :)
Offset: 176 is better to me. Try it and don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes. fixed

[Easy]
00:44:749 (2) - You could move it in this way to make a blanket: http://puu.sh/N3Dz fixed
340,116,44307,5,0
332,196,44749,2,0,B|376:200|404:168,2,80.000000596046,8|8|2
01:00:188 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:629 (2). It fits much better since the vocal starts on 01:00:629 (2) and you used a finish hitsound. fixed
01:05:481 (2,3) - Improve the blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/387422 ^

[Normal]
00:21:812 (1) - Remove this finish? It sounds too loud for me or you could decrease his volume. fixed
Good map

[Insane]
00:04:168 (1) - Unsnapped slider's end fixed
00:05:933 (1) - ^ ^

That's all =w= Good luck!
Thx for the mod ^^
@KuronumaSawako don't forget to resnap the timelines because of timing changes ^^
KuronumaSawako

Chewin wrote:

[General]
There is inconsistency in kiai times in the "Sawa's Hard" diff. I guess it is for some unsnapped green lines. Ok resnapped all notes
Set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:168, ends on 00:18:283 and Kiai #2: Starts on 00:46:514, ends on 01:11:215 plz Ok

[Sawa's Hard]
00:18:283 (1) - Finish on this slider's head? Okay
00:24:459 (10) - I highly suggest you to use a single New combo here to advice the players about the SV change Ok
00:25:341 (3) - Same of 00:18:283 (1) Okay
00:44:749 (8) - Same of 00:24:459 (10) Okay
00:53:571 (5) - Finish Okay
01:25:330 (1) - Unsnapped spinner's end Okay
I like how you used 1/4 snap divisor here :3 Good job OMG *--* Thanks :D
Here!
http://puu.sh/NnNO
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue

[Normal]
00:50:020 (1,2,3) - Try to do a better pattern

[Hard]
00:06:351 (6,8) - You can place them better, align them and put their start/end aligned vertically
I really didn't like your superpositions, but it's your choice, I reported them, tough.
00:47:483 (6,7) - You can stack them better
00:52:776 (2,3) - Same here
00:54:210 (7,8) - ^
00:55:974 (2,3) - ^
00:55:974 (2,3) - ^
01:03:363 (2,3) - ^
01:17:478 (5,6) - ^
01:01:708 (3) - Not straight

That's all
Good luck
Topic Starter
PainSinger

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[Normal]
00:50:020 (1,2,3) - Try to do a better pattern fixed

That's all
Good luck
Ty for the mod
DakeDekaane
Hi, mod time~

This will be short as the map is fine to me.

[Easy]
00:45:167 (2) - What about removing the clap in the reverse arrow?

[Normal]
00:31:053 (5,6) - This looks a bit closed in my opinion, you could try putting 00:31:935 (6) in x:164 y:140 and make the start of 00:32:376 (1) stack with it.

[Sawa's Hard]

I like streams in general but parts like 00:10:762 (8,9,10) and 00:28:626 (4,5,1) , I don't know but I feel weird, maybe the spacing between the notes are small, you could increase a little, because the speed change in these pattern annoyed me, well, it's only my opinion.

That's all, good luck c:
Topic Starter
PainSinger

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~

This will be short as the map is fine to me.

[Easy]
00:45:167 (2) - What about removing the clap in the reverse arrow? fixed

[Normal]
00:31:053 (5,6) - This looks a bit closed in my opinion, you could try putting 00:31:935 (6) in x:164 y:140 and make the start of 00:32:376 (1) stack with it. fixed

That's all, good luck c:
Thx for the mod :3
KuronumaSawako

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[Normal]
00:50:020 (1,2,3) - Try to do a better pattern

[Hard]
00:06:351 (6,8) - You can place them better, align them and put their start/end aligned vertically Really don't see a reason to put them aligned...
I really didn't like your superpositions, but it's your choice, I reported them, tough.
00:47:483 (6,7) - You can stack them better Ok
00:52:776 (2,3) - Same here Same
00:54:210 (7,8) - ^ I really don't want to change this...
00:55:974 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:55:974 (2,3) - ^
01:03:363 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:17:478 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:01:708 (3) - Not straight Ok

That's all
Good luck

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Sawa's Hard]

I like streams in general but parts like 00:10:762 (8,9,10) and 00:28:626 (4,5,1) , I don't know but I feel weird, maybe the spacing between the notes are small, you could increase a little, because the speed change in these pattern annoyed me, well, it's only my opinion. [color=#FF0000]Will consider this but no changes for now[/ color]

That's all, good luck c:
http://puu.sh/19KWq
wantuole
[General]
write "Heidi." in Artist
all start at 00:00:176 is butter
yellow line is so bad,other place like 00:45:829
[easy]
01:16:044 (2) - remove 2 is butter
[Normal]
00:32:376 (1) - more high, overlap 6 isn't good,
00:42:081 (2,3,4) - so poor do somework of this 3
01:24:867 (4) - there is butter,end must do more clean( I‘m miss this where with FL mod)
[Sawa's Hard]
00:04:145 (1) - not repeat,music play1212121223232323。follow you diff isn't like this song
00:13:629 (2) - clap in end
00:16:496 (1) - clap
sorry,so poor aduio sound get me tired find all,this song not use audio sound at blue line is butter.
[Insane]
00:30:502 (8) - move a little
00:35:244 (4) - not use short low slider there, play so strange
01:03:474 (2,4) - ctrl+g(old is "ctrl+r"),you change direction so fast

that all
if you can fix Sawa's Hard audio vol , maybe it's all ready for bubble :)
good luck
Topic Starter
PainSinger

wantuole wrote:

[General]
write "Heidi." in Artist fixed
all start at 00:00:176 is butter well it's up to the GD's creator where he/she wants to start
yellow line is so bad,other place like 00:45:829 fixed
[easy]
01:16:044 (2) - remove 2 is butter fixed
[Normal]
00:32:376 (1) - more high, overlap 6 isn't good,fixed
00:42:081 (2,3,4) - so poor do somework of this 3 I think it's good as it is so I'll leave it for now
01:24:867 (4) - there is butter,end must do more clean( I‘m miss this where with FL mod) fixed
[Insane]
00:30:502 (8) - move a little fixed
00:35:244 (4) - not use short low slider there, play so strange ^
01:03:474 (2,4) - ctrl+g(old is "ctrl+r"),you change direction so fast ^

that all
if you can fix Sawa's Hard audio vol , maybe it's all ready for bubble :)
good luck
Ty for the mod ^^

@KuronumaSawako don't forget to update ur diff, because I changed a few general things ^^
Ruta Kaguya
i think it should be "TV Size" not "Tv size" ???
Topic Starter
PainSinger
True, thanks for noticing :)
raririn
recently my network became very terryble D:
i haven't downloaded any map successfully these days,so sorry for my delay / \
i will mod your map as soon as the network is better :(
Topic Starter
PainSinger
don't worry about it, take your time ^^
raririn
sorry for huge delay >.< and here's my noob mod

[General]
remove 'ed' from tag since it can't be searched and is unnecessary as you have already put 'ending'

[Easy]
fine diff,but you use patterns like slider-circle-slider a bit too often :> try changing some of them

[Normal]
fine , but whatever try AR4 , AR5 is really hard for a normal diff
00:05:911 (3) - finish here instead of whistle? i think its sounds better

[Hard]
00:19:143 (3,4,5,6) - a little hard pattern for a hard diff ,try reducing the spacing?
00:31:493 (3) - i think it would be better if you change them into 3 circles :/
01:15:382 (3,4,5) - like this ? i think it's more interesting
01:23:102 (4) - add a 2nd point at (x=312,y=304) ?

[Taiko]
00:24:878 (3) - K ?
00:28:627 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - boring for players :/
00:33:259 (9) - D ?
00:39:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - a 10 note stream with only d is quite boring , try changing the ② to k ?
im noob at taiko but this diff really needs more mod :/

[Insane]
CS5 makes it hard for players to play with HR ,so i suggest using CS4
00:50:461 (2,3,4) - you can make the DS larger , for example 1.00 between ① and ② , 1.20 between ② and ③ ,1.40 between ③ and ④

i didn't see the 'really unrankable issues' here , but this map can surely be better ,sorry if my mod is necessary/ \
work on , make it better and good luck on rank , i believe you can do it :>
Topic Starter
PainSinger

raririn wrote:

sorry for huge delay >.< and here's my noob mod

[General]
remove 'ed' from tag since it can't be searched and is unnecessary as you have already put 'ending' fixed

[Easy]
fine diff,but you use patterns like slider-circle-slider a bit too often :> try changing some of them okay I'll change it up a bit later

[Normal]
fine , but whatever try AR4 , AR5 is really hard for a normal diff fixed
00:05:911 (3) - finish here instead of whistle? i think its sounds better no change, it sounds a bit awkward because of the upcoming finish

[Taiko]
00:24:878 (3) - K ? fixed
00:28:627 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - boring for players :/ ^
00:33:259 (9) - D ? ^
00:39:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - a 10 note stream with only d is quite boring , try changing the ② to k ? ^
im noob at taiko but this diff really needs more mod :/ yeah, I know, this is my 1st time making a tako diff :D

[Insane]
CS5 makes it hard for players to play with HR ,so i suggest using CS4 no change, I like smaller circles here
00:50:461 (2,3,4) - you can make the DS larger , for example 1.00 between ① and ② , 1.20 between ② and ③ ,1.40 between ③ and ④ fixed

i didn't see the 'really unrankable issues' here , but this map can surely be better ,sorry if my mod is necessary/ \
work on , make it better and good luck on rank , i believe you can do it :> Thanks :3
Thx for the mod :)
KuronumaSawako

wantuole wrote:

[General]
all start at 00:00:176 is butter I feel my diff start is fine, and really don't want to start here.

[Sawa's Hard]
00:04:145 (1) - not repeat,music play1212121223232323。follow you diff isn't like this song It's not a bad idea use 1/4
00:13:629 (2) - clap in end Ok
00:16:496 (1) - clap Ok
sorry,so poor aduio sound get me tired find all,this song not use audio sound at blue line is butter.
[/spoilerbox]

raririn wrote:

[Hard]
00:19:143 (3,4,5,6) - a little hard pattern for a hard diff ,try reducing the spacing? Hm...no, since i can pass this easily
00:31:493 (3) - i think it would be better if you change them into 3 circles :/ I think slider plays better
01:15:382 (3,4,5) - like this ? i think it's more interesting Good! Like it! Ok fixed
01:23:102 (4) - add a 2nd point at (x=312,y=304) ? Seems good like this so no
I feel my Hard is more a Hard+/Insane like a normal Hard now orz...

http://puu.sh/1kj1u
Topic Starter
PainSinger

KuronumaSawako wrote:

I feel my Hard is more a Hard+/Insane like a normal Hard now orz...
Yeah, pretty much, but it's good imo ^^.

diff updated
-xNaCLx-
req. Taiko Mod from mod queue ;)

All of them are suggestions.

[Taiko]
It's better to tell people the difficulty of the map. You can change Taiko to Taiko Oni so people know this is an oni level.

00:31:714 - kd
00:33:037 - kd
00:36:566 - kd
00:40:095 - kd
01:21:117 - k

I think that's all :P nice music and map.
Topic Starter
PainSinger

NewibornCLivee wrote:

req. Taiko Mod from mod queue ;)

All of them are suggestions.

[Taiko]
It's better to tell people the difficulty of the map. You can change Taiko to Taiko Oni so people know this is an oni level. fixed

00:31:714 - kd fixed
00:33:037 - kd ^
00:36:566 - kd ^
00:40:095 - kd ^
01:21:117 - k ^

I think that's all :P nice music and map.
Ty for the mod :)
Kuroneko-sHerald
[General]
Sawa's Hard has a different preview time. I suggest to set it at 46491, like the other diffs.
Artist shouldn't be capitalized in that case. Change "Heidi." into "heidi."
I suggest to change the Title in "∞ Loop (TV Size)" and to leave Romanized title "Loop (TV Size)"
I thing you should change kuronumasawako into KuronumaSawako in tags.

[Easy]
00:07:675 (1,2,3) - Change the Combo Color to another one
00:11:204 (1,2) - Combo Color 3
00:12:968 (3) - New combo + Combo Color 2
00:16:497 (3,4) - New combo + Combo Color 4

01:14:722 (1) - Combo Color 3
01:16:486 (2,3) - New combo + Combo Color 1
01:18:250 (1) - Combo Color 4
01:20:015 (2,3) - New combo + Combo Color 3 or 1
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 2

[Normal]
00:07:675 (1,2,3) - Change the Combo Color to another one
00:11:204 (1,2) - Combo Color 3
00:12:968 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 2
00:16:497 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 4

00:34:135 (3) - New Combo?
01:14:722 (1,2) - Combo Color 3
01:16:486 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 1
01:18:250 (1,2,3) - Combo Color 4
01:20:456 (4,5,6) - New combo + Combo Color 3 or 1
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 2


[Sawa's Hard]
00:07:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change the Combo Color to another one, then:
00:11:203 (10) - New combo + Combo Color 3
00:11:423 (1) - Remove New Combo

[Insane]
00:11:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Combo Color 3
00:12:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Combo Color 2
00:14:733 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 1
00:16:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Combo Color 4

01:12:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change the Combo Color to another one
01:14:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Combo Color 3
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 4
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Combo Color 2
Topic Starter
PainSinger

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Sawa's Hard has a different preview time. I suggest to set it at 46491, like the other diffs. fixed
Artist shouldn't be capitalized in that case. Change "Heidi." into "heidi." ^
I suggest to change the Title in "∞ Loop (TV Size)" and to leave Romanized title "Loop (TV Size)" ^
I thing you should change kuronumasawako into KuronumaSawako in tags. ^

[Easy]
00:07:675 (1,2,3) - Change the Combo Color to another one fixed
00:11:204 (1,2) - Combo Color 3 ^
00:12:968 (3) - New combo + Combo Color 2 ^
00:16:497 (3,4) - New combo + Combo Color 4 ^

01:14:722 (1) - Combo Color 3 ^
01:16:486 (2,3) - New combo + Combo Color 1 ^
01:18:250 (1) - Combo Color 4 ^
01:20:015 (2,3) - New combo + Combo Color 3 or 1 ^
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 2 ^

[Normal]
00:07:675 (1,2,3) - Change the Combo Color to another one fixed
00:11:204 (1,2) - Combo Color 3 ^
00:12:968 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 2 ^
00:16:497 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 4 ^

00:34:135 (3) - New Combo? ^
01:14:722 (1,2) - Combo Color 3 ^
01:16:486 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 1 ^
01:18:250 (1,2,3) - Combo Color 4 ^
01:20:456 (4,5,6) - New combo + Combo Color 3 or 1 ^
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 2 ^

[Insane]
00:11:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Combo Color 3 fixed
00:12:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Combo Color 2 ^
00:14:733 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 1 ^
00:16:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Combo Color 4 ^

01:12:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change the Combo Color to another one ^
01:14:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Combo Color 3 ^
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 4 ^
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Combo Color 2 ^
Thx for the mod ^^
Kuroneko-sHerald
[Easy]
00:14:733 (1,2) - Combo Color 1

[Normal]
00:14:733 (1,2) - Combo Color 1

Don't kudosu this post.
Topic Starter
PainSinger

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Easy]
00:14:733 (1,2) - Combo Color 1 fixed

[Normal]
00:14:733 (1,2) - Combo Color 1 fixed

Don't kudosu this post.
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