Hello! From my queue
General- "2 years ago" You can see that a little bit
- Combos are getting very high at certain places, consider using NCs a bit more
- I'm sorry for the wall of text ;_; but I'd like to suggest everything that bothers me or that could be a little bit improved in my eyes.
Insane- What are those 2 last inherited points doing there?
00:03:852 (9) - Stack
00:03:649 (8,9) - You could make them on a straight line, it will look better
00:12:669 (6) - The start of the stream is quite confusing because it starts on a blue tick. You could make this clearer by using a different combo color, or stacking 00:12:669 (6,7) - . The combo is getting high here anyway
00:16:216 (8) - I don't really see a reason for this circle to be stacked
00:24:933 (3,4) - Wouldn't it sound better if the slider and the circle were swapped? Both the slider end of 00:25:135 (4) - and start of 00:25:439 (5) - could be tapped this way
00:27:264 - It feels kinda wrong to ignore the triple bass drum sound here, maybe you should make this a triple
00:28:987 (5) - Move up for a blanket
00:41:149 (3,4) - Same as 00:24:933 (3,4) - . This way you would be mapping better to the vocals (like here 00:42:365 (6,7) - )
00:48:446 (11) - NC maybe? Combo is getting pretty long
00:55:136 (6) - 2 Circles would sound better
01:01:825 (13) - Again about the NC
01:05:676 (3,4) - Maybe it's better to increase the distance because of the big gap
01:07:095 (3) - Stack is off with both the circle (6) and the slider (1)
01:11:149 (6,7,8) - You can try something like
01:18:446 (8) - Consider making this 2 circles because of the strong finishe in the music
01:26:554 (3,4,5,6) - I think this shape is a bit weird, don't you as well?
01:44:189 (3,4) - Consider making a triple here or here 01:44:392 (4,1) -
01:44:595 (1) - Same about the bass in the background. Up to you
01:52:095 (2) - Idk about the curvepoint outside the grid, the slider is going pretty far
01:53:716 (7) - I don't think this return slider fits, you kinda ignore the vocals because of the slider-end, which would rather be something tappable
02:12:568 (7) - Make this a blanket maybe?
02:13:379 (9) - Try a slider like this
For a better flow. There are more places like these, though this one stood out to me
02:17:230 (9,10) - It would make more sense if the jump took place between (10) and the downbeat
02:19:257 (12) - NC?
02:28:987 (5) - You could make 2 circles here for the vocals, and make a jump to 02:29:392 (6) - to emphasize the sound in the BG
02:32:230 (12) - NC?
02:42:770 (7) - Why is there a random finish?
03:29:798 (4) - Blanket?
03:33:852 (1,2) - Hmmm, idk. The way this is placed kinda feels awkward coming from the jump from 03:33:446 (5) - . Consider moving 03:34:054 (2) - a little more to the left
03:40:743 (2,3,4) - Don't really see a reason for a different DS here
03:41:149 (4) - Maybe 2 circles instead, to emphasize the finish which is now a slider end
04:05:271 (3) - This offbeat slider doesn't really fit and ignores the vocals
Vass-RJ's Hard- I like it
- Same about green lines
00:12:771 (1) - Why not let this slider align with the circles? Very minor, but what's less minor is that it feels weird to let it end on the white tick, instead of letting it end 1 tick earlier and adding a circle. It will feel a lot better
00:16:015 (7) - Blanket?
00:26:758 (3) - You kinda ignore the triple bass sound in the BG. Maybe you could let the slider end 1 tick earlier and add a circle
00:51:690 (1) - Blanket?
01:01:015 (4,5) - I think this is very confusing in a hard. You might want to reposition these
01:04:055 (4,1) - This is confusing as well. The stack leniency does not allow you to see the rhythms very well by spacing them, and it might be hard for a hard player to know when to click (they will have to focus on the approach circles instead, which kinda ruins the point of playing to the music)
01:07:095 (3) - Maybe a regular 1/2 slider would fit better to represent the vocal
01:10:744 (4) - Improve this blanket
01:11:960 (1) - It kinda feels wrong to make a slider end on the downbeat here
01:17:636 (1) - You could make a blanket
01:23:312 (2) - Same as 01:11:960 (1) -
01:44:596 (10) - You could map the downbeat by doing the same as here 00:26:758 (3,1) - (and with the triple if you followed my suggestion about the)
01:55:339 (2,3) - Kind of a weird rhythm. The 1/1 slider doesn't really fit and causes you to use an offbeat slider
01:57:974 (2) - This circle is a bit confusing for hard players. Maybe move it so the four circles make a diamond shape
02:16:015 (4) - 1/2 slider (for the vocals)
02:17:028 (7) - By ignoring the downbeat and making a stack here, this is going to cause a lot of players to break here. I suggest repositioning it if you want to keep the gap, or map the downbeat
02:18:853 (4,5) - Same about how it might confuse players
02:30:204 (8) - Make this one parallel with 02:29:596 (7) - (it's a bit, but noticeably off atm)
02:32:231 (6) - Improve blanket?
02:34:663 (5) - This is also confusing and hard to read
03:18:447 (5,6,7,8) - If this is supposed to be a square, I suggest improving it a little :p
03:41:555 (4,5) - Consider moving this so it's a regular triangle. Current spacing might be confusing to read
03:57:974 (3) - You could make this a blanket
04:19:663 (6,1) - I don't think this overlap looks that great. Consider moving the square a bit
04:20:880 (6) - NC?
Normal Collab- Check AI mod. There are 2 objects of which the spacing is a little off
- Idk about the stacks you made. They might be a bit confusing in a Normal, at least the way you used them
- Same about green lines
00:10:338 (3) - 1 tick shorter?
00:19:663 (5) - It's better for this circle to be here 00:19:460 - , because you will map the sound in the BG like this. If you change this or if you don't, stacks might be a bit confusing in a normal and I would say no.
00:34:663 (2,3) - You shouldn't stack circles, and especially not 1/1
00:50:068 (1,2) - A bit empty between this?
01:51:690 (1) - Same about 1/1 stack
01:52:906 (3,4) - ^
02:13:379 - I think you should map the vocals
02:28:987 (4) - I think a 1/2 slider would work out better because of the voice
02:40:947 (3) - I don't see why the slider is placed here (on the timeline). It doesn't really sound good and 2 circles followed by a slider would make more sense
02:42:771 (6) - You have the same weird finish here as in the insane
03:09:528 (1) - Just space it
03:15:609 (3) - ^
03:31:217 - Add a circle
03:44:595 ) Add a 1/2 slider and remove the circle? I think it would fit better
04:13:176 (4) - Space
Easy Collab- Stacks in an easy is dangerous I think
- Again unnecessary inherited point
01:01:419 (3,5) - The overlap looks a bit ugly to me
01:03:852 - You might want to add something here, as it won't be easy to hit it on the red tick (polarity)
01:27:771 (5,6) - Swap the rhythms? The slider would rather start on the 3rd beat than the 2nd
01:43:582 (3) - Wouldn't this be better?
01:46:825 (4) - Improve the blanket
01:52:095 (2) - Again a slider starting on the second beat. Swap it again so the vocals will be mapped properly
01:56:960 (4) - here as well. They are basically the same as offbeat sliders
02:11:960 (2) - Improve the blanket
02:31:419 (2,4) - Overlap doesn't look that great
02:34:865 (2) - Same as the previous suggestion about it.
02:40:338 (1,2,3,4) - Grid snap causes these to look a bit bad
02:48:852 (4) - Slider on 2nd beat
It's probably old, I think it needs some work but since you're a QAT I suppose you know what you're doing lol
Good luck!