1. Easy (1.91 stars, 88 notes)
2. Hard (4.81 stars, 182 notes)
3. Normal (4.22 stars, 130 notes)
4. Survive (5 stars, 260 notes)

SPOILER

1. Found that the offset is too late by 11ms.

2013-05-26 12:00 Yasora: yee new pending beatmap~
2013-05-26 12:00 Yasora: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/256095 livetune adding Fukase(from SEKAI NO OWARI) - Take Your Way (TV Size) [Survive]]
2013-05-26 12:17 Miya: alamak circle sizenya =3=
2013-05-26 12:19 Yasora: kenapa??
2013-05-26 12:19 Yasora: kekecilan kah..
2013-05-26 12:19 Miya: liat deh miya main
2013-05-26 12:19 Miya: xD
2013-05-26 12:21 Miya: kyknya offsetnya harus di fix lagi
2013-05-26 12:21 Yasora: edann
2013-05-26 12:21 Miya: ato arnya kurang cpt ya?
2013-05-26 12:21 Yasora: gatau
2013-05-26 12:21 Yasora: tapi pas aku tes, offsetnya buat aku oke o.O
2013-05-26 12:22 Miya: bnyk 100nya ><
2013-05-26 12:23 Miya: kyknya sih offsetnya
2013-05-26 12:23 Yasora: sok atuh
2013-05-26 12:23 Yasora: tolong fix..
2013-05-26 12:26 Miya: kq kurang enak y? =3=
2013-05-26 12:28 Yasora: udah offsetnya?
2013-05-26 12:28 Yasora: gimance
2013-05-26 12:28 Miya: yup ketelatan
2013-05-26 12:28 Miya: harunys -10
2013-05-26 12:28 Yasora: hoo
2013-05-26 12:28 Yasora: coba
2013-05-26 12:29 Miya: btw 00:49:265 (1) - ini extend lagi 1/2 lebih panjang
2013-05-26 12:29 Yasora: biarin ah biar epic xD
2013-05-26 12:29 Miya: itu soalnya g ngikut vocal =3=
2013-05-26 12:30 Yasora: sengaja biar vokal selanjutnya "gaada note"
2013-05-26 12:30 Yasora: ini serius kan -10 ya?
2013-05-26 12:30 Miya: jujur aja soalnya g ada note disini 00:49:489 - jadi agak aneh dgrnya ><
2013-05-26 12:31 Yasora: ya.. gapapa '3'
2013-05-26 12:31 Yasora: ntar kalo ada yang protes lagi, dipikirin lagi
2013-05-26 12:31 Miya: yup
2013-05-26 12:32 Yasora: oh ya, 
2013-05-26 12:32 Miya: uda bisa perfect di putih biru merah kyk gini 00:59:116 (1,2,3) - 
2013-05-26 12:32 Miya: btw offset miya 12 :o
2013-05-26 12:32 Yasora: jadi gimana
2013-05-26 12:32 Miya: yaa
2013-05-26 12:32 Yasora: -11 atuh -.-
2013-05-26 12:32 Miya: itu berapa? miya lupa offset yasora
2013-05-26 12:32 Miya: lol
2013-05-26 12:33 Yasora: kela
2013-05-26 12:33 Miya: trus cs -1 lebih enjoyable deh
2013-05-26 12:33 Miya: ><
2013-05-26 12:33 Miya: personal opinion aja xD
2013-05-26 12:33 Yasora: ga ah.. soalnya di kompi rumah, itu gede loh
2013-05-26 12:34 Yasora: cs nya--
2013-05-26 12:34 Miya: terserah yasora kalo itu mah xD
2013-05-26 12:34 Miya: paling sgtu aja sih dari diff yg paling susah ><

• All preview time should be 01:04:489 -
  01:04:489 - this section still have the emphasis, too bad the kiai ends there, kinda feels empty imo. I suggest you to add a flash kiai before it ends
  And i suggest you to add more clap in your hitsound pattern :3

• OD+1?
  
  00:47:922 (2,1) - sorry, nazi, should stack properly
  
  overall is fine to me

• 00:03:593 (1,2,3) - prefer if you do the same hitsound pattern with 00:00:011 (1,2,3) -
  00:16:130 (1) - add clap at slider's end
  00:34:489 (5) - nc?
  00:31:130 (2) - the previous slider ends at upbeat, and this circle ends at the next downbeat, so the gap is a bit long imo, only suggestion, maybe you can move this circle to 00:31:130 -
  01:01:802 (3) - align with 01:00:907 (1) - ?
  
  SPOILER

  

• 01:09:862 (1) - it's touching the percent board and nearly touching the scores, you should change the position
  
  SPOILER

  

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels.
   Although 1024x768 is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen).

1. 00:44:339 (2) - this object is too close from the previous object
2. 00:46:130 (4) - this object is too close from the previous object

1. 00:08:519 (2) - this object is too far from the previous object

BoWAct wrote:

:D Hi~ from #modreq

[General]

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels.
   Although 1024x768 is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen).

Placing by the constant distance between notes is recommended Easy and Normal
[Easy]

1. 00:44:339 (2) - this object is too close from the previous object
2. 00:46:130 (4) - this object is too close from the previous object

[Normal]

1. 00:08:519 (2) - this object is too far from the previous object

Good Luck!

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1. Flow and parttern is good, so only give some rythem suggestions

1. first, Drum-whistle sounds bad in this diff
2. 00:03:593 (3) - not good.... plz don't paste 00:00:011 (1) -
3. 00:48:369 (3) - use 1.0 ds?

1. 00:21:056 (5) - 00:21:280 (6) - I think follow the vocal in normal is better and I haven't pointed all

1. 00:21:056 (5,6) - add? if you do this delete the finish in 00:20:384 (4) - and add to 00:21:056 (5) - also delete finish in top of 00:21:504 (1) - and add whistle

1. 00:58:220 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/3888B.png
2. 00:26:877 (5) - delete nc
3. 00:30:235 (6) - ^

1. The Hard diff has differents tags.

1. 00:16:578 (4) - Curved it a little bit because of 00:17:922 (1). It looks better like this imo:
   
2. 00:33:593 (4) - NC? This combo is a little bit long for an easy diff.
3. 00:37:623 (3,1) - Try avoiding the overlapping.
4. 00:46:130 (4) - Maybe a 1/2 beat long slider starting from 00:45:907 instead?
5. 01:20:608 (1) - I think this slider should have a hitsound at the end. Not a Finish but maybe a Whistle or a Clap.

1. 00:15:235 (3,4,2,3) - Did you try some sort of symmetry with these notes?
2. 00:34:489 (1,2,3,1) - It's nearly a square. Move 00:35:832 (1) to x=228 y=300 if you want one.
3. 00:41:653 (5) - Same here. Move it to x=276 y=92 for a square.
4. 00:46:130 (2,3) - Try doing a blanket here.
5. 00:55:533 (1,3) - Maybe you could make it at the same high as well as 00:56:877 (2,1).
6. 01:21:727 (3) - Same remark as in the Easy diff.

1. 00:32:250 (1,2) - Why not making an overlapping like 00:18:817 (1,3)?
2. 00:52:623 (1,2) - It would be better imo if they were the same slider but rotated 180°.
3. 01:22:399 (5) - This time you put something! Try being consistent in all diff for the hitsounds.

1. 01:22:399 (5) - A Finish here too......

1. 00:17:250 (5) - I guess the repeat should have a drum finish to keep it consistent.
2. 00:30:795 (2) - Try removing this note, it sounds oddly overmapped.
3. 00:32:250 (1) - Remove whistle on body and add it on start and end xD
4. 00:57:324 (1) - Finish the start instead of whistle?
5. 00:59:451 (2,4) - The drum finishes are coming far too sudden, try whistles instead?
6. 01:11:653 (1) - Finish on the start instead of whistle?
7. 01:14:339 (2,4) - Same as for the finishes before.
8. 01:15:235 (1) - Add a finish to the start, or at least a whistle.

1. 00:04:936 (5,6) - Move both a bit down? Would flow better I guess.
2. 00:09:862 (3,4) - Clap on 3's end and 4's start?
3. 00:13:668 (2) - Clap?
4. 00:24:638 (1) - Add a whistle to the repeat? Sounds empty due to the piano.
5. 00:32:026 (1) - Whistle on the end?
6. 00:59:116 (1,2) - Replace drum finishes with whistles?
7. 01:00:907 (1) - Finish instead of whistle on the head?
8. 01:08:071 (1) - Same as above.
9. 01:13:444 (1,2) - Same thing about the drum finishes.
10. 01:15:235 (1) - Either add whistle or finish to the start.
    

1. 00:13:668 (3) - Clap the tail?
2. 00:24:638 (4,1) - Totemo nazi, but disable grid snap and prevent them from touching.
3. 00:26:429 (3) - Whistle?
4. 00:57:324 (3) - Finish instead of whistle?
5. 01:08:071 (1) - Same as above.

1. 00:57:324 (5) - Finish instead of whistle?
2. 01:08:071 (1) - Same ~
3. 01:09:414 (2,3,4) - Highlight them and pull them to the middle of the grid to make them symmetrical.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:19:265 (3) - Try to make a blanket with 4? Would look more pleasing I guess.
   

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. 00:21:504 - Volume here 40% is light for me. How about 50%?
   
   Easy
2. 00:11:653 (2) - whistle instead of clap
3. 00:20:608 (4) - delete NC?
   
   Normal
4. 00:09:190 (2) - turning point move to 420:288
5. 01:08:071 (1) - whistle at end
6. 01:10:533 - try to place something here
   
   I can't find problem in Hard and Survive..
   Sorry about the poor mod.. Shoot a star instead.
   Nice song and nice map. Hope soon ranked! Good Luck~!

1. i think 00:39:302 is a better preview point, this one is after kiai, not good!

1. hp+1 or +2 (surviving at hp7 too easy, it doesn't feel like the diff name!
2. 00:06:392 (1) - slider begin here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821084 you can here a sound at the blue tick
3. 00:09:862 (4,5) - hitsounds feel empty, i think adding clap on slider ends are better
4. 00:13:668 (5) - clap at beginning and end
5. 00:17:250 (5) - ^
6. 00:23:966 (1) - i think better flow to put this note to x:192 y:172 and 00:24:414 (3,4) - ctrl+G ww
7. 00:39:302 - add note? that triple stream sounds lonely
8. 00:51:727 (5) - put it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821091 ww
9. 01:04:265 - add stream? o.o

1. 00:42:101 (4) - too short on the left.. try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821100
2. 00:51:951 (1) - jump on the left may be confusing with the next one o.o

1. 01:06:280 (1) - this goes out of the world

1. 00:03:593 (3) - this looks like a bad blanket, i would suggest a pattern of http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821108
2. 00:48:369 (3) - rotate 5 degrees (selection center), prev/next distance is not even

1. Please, check if your Caps Lock works correctly. I'm sure that correct source is Devil Survivor 2 The Animation
2. Add some more tags, so we'll be able to find your map faster! For example Bridge (name of the studio). Also you can add some character names.
3. you should think about using slider tick rate 2 here. It fits with music better, imo.

1. Reduce HP Drain by two ticks to make diff and diff spread better balanced. There's no reason to use THAT high HP Drain at all!
2. 00:13:444 (4) - whoaa. x2.7 jump which doesn't really fits with music and feels too unexpected here. Why is it here? You really should reduce distance of this jump because it is really confusing!
   Note: if you're that lazy, just Ctrl+G 00:13:668 (5) - it'd work here, too!
3. 00:24:414 (3) - wild jump again. I don't mnd jumps, but they should be reasonable and fit with music! That one is too fast + I can't hear anything jumpy in music!
4. 00:39:302 (8) - in fact, there's no ANY beat at 00:39:302! So, please, do not overmap and remove that circle!
5. 00:43:332 (2) - same sound appears at 00:42:660 - but there it is mapped with 1/4 reversed slider. Do the same here? yeah, just replace 00:43:332 (2) with reversed 1/4 slider
6. 01:22:063 (8) - second reverse arrow here isn't readable and doesn't flows so good. How about starting that slider 1/4 later + adding a circle at 01:22:063 - ? example
   Note: probably you should place NC at 01:21:504 (9) - because rhythm changes here a bit + combo comes out the way too long!
   
   Just some strange jumps and nothing else. Pretty nice diff!

1. 00:49:265 (1) - x0.75 SV Multiplier would be better here. THis slowdown is too sudden and too unexpected here. I really don't like the way how you use it here. :<
   
   Really nice and enjoyable [Hard]. Except for one slowdown, that bugs me.

1. 00:00:011 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'd recommend you to end this sliders 1/4 later. You shouldn't use too many 3/4 sliders here, because this is a [Normal]diff and tricky thythm is confusing for players. Simple 1/2 rhythm will fit here + it's much easier to play!
2. 00:08:071 (2) - it's a bug. Place NC here to fix it.
   Note: just in case if you've never seen these bugs before: circle has number 1 but C here isn't enabled. See?
3. 00:26:653 - you've missed a circle here, right? Circle here will fit with music, vocals and it'll make your rhythm more consistent and easier understandable!
4. 00:34:489 (1,2) - please, replace them with 1/1 slider. (2) sounds too quite, so it's hard to hear/feel that beat while playing. Slider will make rhythm here a bit easier
5. 00:50:160 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - this pattern looks too hard, imo. You shouldn't overuse 1/2 beats here, this is still a [Normal] diff, remember?

1. AR4 is the way too fast! This is the easiest diff! Do you really think that beginners are able to read AR4? Do you think that AR4 fits with slow BPM and Slider Velocity? Please, reduce AR by one tick!
2. 00:00:011 (1,2) - no-no-no! - (2)'s tail is TOO close to (1). So, players may mistakenly hit (2)'s tail after (1). It's all about your flow, that is really weird here. Consider moving (2)'s tail somewhere else. You shouldn''t use such patterns just because it "looks cute with your style"!
3. 00:30:459 (3) - nazi - the way how slider changes its direction isn't really really readable for beginners, please change its shae to something smoother, maybe something like this
4. 00:40:310 (2) - instead of having that gap in your consistent 1/1 rhythm, you could add reverse to this slider. So, you'll follow vocals better + it will make your rhythm more consistent!
5. 00:49:265 - don't ignore vocals there! At least try to hitsound slider-tick or sliderslide. But I'd recommend you to completely re-do this slider, it sounds unfitting, imo. see if you like this or not
6. 00:57:772 - you could place here a circle to follow music, it'll make your rhythm more consistent and a bit easier understandable for beginners!
7. 01:17:474 (1) - you've placed NC to emphasize vocals here, right? Then, why you didn't do the same to 01:15:683 (2)? So, yeah swap NC on 01:15:235 (1,2) - from (1) to (2)! It'll bring some consistency to your comboing
8. 01:20:608 (1) - can't say that I like how this slider change its direction, it's kinda too curvy. That'd be great if you'll make it's shape to something more readable instead. ;_;
   
   This is too hard for an [Easy]diff! Please, reduce your diff settings and work on your rhythm a bit more!

1. it is better that Kiai-time end at 01:21:951, isn't it? (all diff same this)
2. 00:08:071 (1) - move to x:264 y:224. it looks good, I think
3. 00:53:295- add crap

1. 01:07:623- add crap
   01:11:205 (3) - ^

• Good!

1. 01:00:011 (4,5,6) - move to x:208 y:316. it looks good, I think

Miya wrote:

add crap, oh rofl xD

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Easy]

1. it is better that Kiai-time end at 01:21:951, isn't it? (all diff same this) nope weird to me
2. 00:08:071 (1) - move to x:264 y:224. it looks good, I think ok
3. 00:53:295- add crap nope, weird for me lol crap.. you mean clap?

[Normal]

1. 01:07:623- add crap same as easy
   01:11:205 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

• Good! yay \:3/

[Insane]

1. 01:00:011 (4,5,6) - move to x:208 y:316. it looks good, I think ok

"Ranked" is near !
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

add crap

1. The source should be Devil Survivor 2: The Animation (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Devil_Surv ... _Animation , http://myanimelist.net/anime/16512/Devi ... _Animation)

1. 00:31:803 (4) - Add a whistle here, not consistent with your whistle rhythm.
2. 00:57:773 (5,1) - Switch NC here, doesnt consistent with other NC pattern especially 01:12:101 (1,2) -
3. 01:19:265 (3) - Add a whistle here since you constantly fill 3rd beat with whistle but not here.
4. 01:19:265 (3) - Put NC here since you add NC at 01:17:474 (1) - and this note has similar vocal at that note.

1. 00:24:191 (3) - I don't hear any rhythm here thus this note doesn't follow anything from the music. To make better rhythm, you can delete this circle, then make 2 new circle at 00:23:967 - and 00:24:414 - because i can clearly hear piano sounds at that time. It will be good if you add whistle at both of those circles too~
2. 00:26:877 (1) - This slider doesnt follow the music properly too because there is no beat nor rhythm at 00:26:871 -. It will be better if you just delete this slder, then add a new slider at 00:26:653 - to 00:27:325 - then you can add a new circle at 00:27:773 - or if you want to follow the vocal, you can add another circle or new slider here 00:27:549 -
3. 00:30:907 (2) - Move this circle to 00:31:131 -, or delete this circles, and make a new 1/2 slider at 00:31:131 - if you want more simpler pattern. You can add a repeat to the new slider too to follow the vocal more properly.
4. 00:38:519 (1) - This slider start should have a soft whistle at slider start according to your previous rhythm at 00:36:728 (2) - . Both of this note has similar rhythm in vocal.
5. 00:36:728 (2) - I think soft whistle at slider repeat will give you better and more consistent whistle rhythm here.
6. 00:47:474 (4) - Same, add a soft whistle at this slider start too.
7. 00:57:997 (2) - Add another whistle at this slider end, feels empty here.
8. 01:09:862 (3) - Whistle here, it's very not consistent since you always put a whistle at every long downbeat except here.

1. 00:01:019 (4) - Ok, tbh, this note is very hard to read, it requires me a few try to understand what rhythm it is. A note that very hard to read doesn't make sense here since the part itself is calm. I really encourage you to just change these circles 00:00:683 (3,4,1) - into a slider with repeat instead., since it's much much easier to read.
2. 00:13:892 (3) - A note below slider is unrankable except insane diff. Change this pattern.
3. 00:16:467 - How about a circle here? I can clearly hear a 1/4 rhythm here.
4. 00:24:638 (1) - Skipping a vocal at 00:24:862 - is not a good idea because at the last part 00:23:967 (3,4) - you clearly follow the vocal here. Changing the rhythm so suddenly while the vocal still on going is very not good idea. So, map this slider instead. Delete this slider, then add a new 1/2 slider at 00:24:638 - then you can add a 1/1 slider at 00:25:086 - to create more better rhythm.
5. 00:52:623 (3) - This clap at slider start is overused and doesn't make sense. Remove it.
6. 01:06:728 (2) - Ctrl+g for better flow?

1. 00:25:758 (3) - Add a whistle here at slider start, it similar with 00:23:071 (3) - start.
2. 00:29:340 (4) - Add a whistle here too, it have similar rhythm with point above.
3. 00:42:549 (5) - According to previous hitsound 00:38:967 (5,6) - this slider hitsound should be normal. Remove the whistle if you do this.
4. 00:55:086 (5) - Add a whistle at this slider repeat too to be consistent with previous whistle rhythm.
5. 01:11:206 (6) - The hitsound here should be clap, not whistle. It's very not consistent.
6. 01:21:392 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Okay, this stream is very very very overmapped. If you hear clearly to the music, the 1/4 rhythm end here 01:21:280 -. It doesn't make sense if you extend the stream until here 01:22:400 -. It doesn't fit with the music too.

Miya wrote:

Rawr, sorry, im late =3=

General

1. The source should be Devil Survivor 2: The Animation (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Devil_Surv ... _Animation , http://myanimelist.net/anime/16512/Devi ... _Animation) now I'm confused with this.. alright, after discussing in game, I follow you

Easy

1. 00:31:803 (4) - Add a whistle here, not consistent with your whistle rhythm. already whistle in there .-.
2. 00:57:773 (5,1) - Switch NC here, doesnt consistent with other NC pattern especially 01:12:101 (1,2) -
3. 01:19:265 (3) - Add a whistle here since you constantly fill 3rd beat with whistle but not here.
4. 01:19:265 (3) - Put NC here since you add NC at 01:17:474 (1) - and this note has similar vocal at that note.

Normal

1. 00:24:191 (3) - I don't hear any rhythm here thus this note doesn't follow anything from the music. To make better rhythm, you can delete this circle, then make 2 new circle at 00:23:967 - and 00:24:414 - because i can clearly hear piano sounds at that time. It will be good if you add whistle at both of those circles too~ that's too hard imo, but I add slider in there
2. 00:26:877 (1) - This slider doesnt follow the music properly too because there is no beat nor rhythm at 00:26:871 -. It will be better if you just delete this slder, then add a new slider at 00:26:653 - to 00:27:325 - then you can add a new circle at 00:27:773 - or if you want to follow the vocal, you can add another circle or new slider here 00:27:549 - changed into another pattern~
3. 00:30:907 (2) - Move this circle to 00:31:131 -, or delete this circles, and make a new 1/2 slider at 00:31:131 - if you want more simpler pattern. You can add a repeat to the new slider too to follow the vocal more properly.
4. 00:38:519 (1) - This slider start should have a soft whistle at slider start according to your previous rhythm at 00:36:728 (2) - . Both of this note has similar rhythm in vocal.
5. 00:36:728 (2) - I think soft whistle at slider repeat will give you better and more consistent whistle rhythm here.
6. 00:47:474 (4) - Same, add a soft whistle at this slider start too.
7. 00:57:997 (2) - Add another whistle at this slider end, feels empty here.
8. 01:09:862 (3) - Whistle here, it's very not consistent since you always put a whistle at every long downbeat except here.

Hard

1. 00:01:019 (4) - Ok, tbh, this note is very hard to read, it requires me a few try to understand what rhythm it is. A note that very hard to read doesn't make sense here since the part itself is calm. I really encourage you to just change these circles 00:00:683 (3,4,1) - into a slider with repeat instead., since it's much much easier to read.
2. 00:13:892 (3) - A note below slider is unrankable except insane diff. Change this pattern.
3. 00:16:467 - How about a circle here? I can clearly hear a 1/4 rhythm here.
4. 00:24:638 (1) - Skipping a vocal at 00:24:862 - is not a good idea because at the last part 00:23:967 (3,4) - you clearly follow the vocal here. Changing the rhythm so suddenly while the vocal still on going is very not good idea. So, map this slider instead. Delete this slider, then add a new 1/2 slider at 00:24:638 - then you can add a 1/1 slider at 00:25:086 - to create more better rhythm.
5. 00:52:623 (3) - This clap at slider start is overused and doesn't make sense. Remove it. noo, I want follow vocal and same in here 00:55:534 (1) -
6. 01:06:728 (2) - Ctrl+g for better flow?

Insane

1. 00:25:758 (3) - Add a whistle here at slider start, it similar with 00:23:071 (3) - start.
2. 00:29:340 (4) - Add a whistle here too, it have similar rhythm with point above.
3. 00:42:549 (5) - According to previous hitsound 00:38:967 (5,6) - this slider hitsound should be normal. Remove the whistle if you do this.
4. 00:55:086 (5) - Add a whistle at this slider repeat too to be consistent with previous whistle rhythm.
5. 01:11:206 (6) - The hitsound here should be clap, not whistle. It's very not consistent. ngg following piano and same in hard diff
6. 01:21:392 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Okay, this stream is very very very overmapped. If you hear clearly to the music, the 1/4 rhythm end here 01:21:280 -. It doesn't make sense if you extend the stream until here 01:22:400 -. It doesn't fit with the music too. but this stream is epic </3 kay added into some notes

That's all i think. Overall, this is a good map, but more work can be done. I'll leave my star for now.
Good luck Yasora~
/me play the game

1. 00:03:594 (3) - Not even a visible issue, but maybe place it exactly below 00:00:011 (1)?
2. 00:20:609 - The finish is not needed, IMO; go ahead and keep the drum sampleset, but finish makes it sound unnecessarily loud.
3. 01:17:026 (3,1) - Move (3) one grid up and (1) one grid right so the blanket pattern will look nicer? The spacing between 01:17:474 (1,2) will be inconsistent though, so fix them if you do this.

1. ...134 BPM + 1,5 SV for a Normal is... oh well, whatever works, I guess.
2. 00:17:922 (4,1) - I'm sure enough the NC here needs to be swapped...
3. 00:20:385 (4) - ...and that this needs to be NC'd to follow the stanzas accordingly.
4. 00:28:220 (3,1) - What's with the spacing here? Looks slightly... different from the usual ones.
5. 00:29:340 (2,3) - ^
6. 00:46:579 (3) - One grid up so it won't touch 00:46:131 (2)?
7. 00:57:325 (3,1) - Uh, swap NC? I don't see why should you place the NC on the current (1)...
8. 01:19:937 (2) - The flow here would be better if you make it look like this.

1. 00:14:564 (4) - Why going for NCs every two stanzas at all sudden? I don't think there's a reason to do that here, so NC this?
2. 00:17:922 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it's obvious why.
3. 00:19:713 (3) - NC?
4. 00:28:444 (1) - Move the middle anchor point to (200,192) so the blanket pattern of 00:27:773 (4,1) looks better?
5. 00:40:758 (4,1) - Why is the spacing 0.99x? Also, I think the flow is weird around here...
6. 01:06:952 - Uh, add a clap here since you added it on a similar part in the kiai time?
7. 01:10:534 - ^

1. 00:03:929 (4) - Uh, NC since this is the beginning of a new rhythm pattern?
2. 00:07:176 - 00:20:832 - Why are you suddenly using drums here while the previous diffs don't have them? This inconsistency just seems to have no reason...
3. 00:29:340 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks random. I'd move 00:30:012 (7,1) to (344,284).

1. 00:14:339 (1) - The spacing of this slider is a *bit* inconsistent with the previous objects. For an example, if you click on it, the spacing of the previous object is 1,00x but, with the next one, the spacing is 1,04x. Of course, it's minor, but it could be more consistent :3
2. 00:21:504 (1) - This is more like a question than a suggestion: Why is this slider having a jump from the previous object?
3. 00:42:548 (3) - Just a minor thing: the spacing after this circle is not the same as the spacing of the previous object, which makes it inconsistent. With the Distance Snap, space it properly.
4. 00:46:578 (1) - Personally, I would like to see a more symmetrical slider.. (Make the spacing consistent after it)
   
   Code

   160,108,46578,6,0,B|176:160|124:192|124:192|176:224|160:276,1,200

5. 00:50:608 (2) - I have troubles with that kind of slider.. The circle is placed behind it, which makes a very weird flow. What I suggest you is to make a reverse of 90 degres anticlockwise and then, you replace it in a consistent way. So, right now, the flow will be less weird and it will be easier to catch the next circle.
6. 00:56:877 - Previously, on 00:53:295 - , you have added a whistle instead of a clap. (You were adding claps on the upbeats and whistles on the downbeats) Personally, I think the whistles sounds pretty well because it makes some changes, which are simples but, was it a mistake? Did you wanted to add a clap instead of a whistle? Actually, you have two choices here, either you replace the whistle by a clap or at 00:56:877 - , you replace the clap by a whistle. I would personally, like said earlier, replace the clap by a whistle. (...) After looking a bit further, I think it was mostly a mistake you have commited. At 01:11:205 - , you have also added a whistle like you have done with the previous objects and it is basically the same exact thing but, placed further.
7. 01:19:713 - Have you forgot to add a whistle here? Since you are adding whistles on the downbeats and claps on the upbeats, it would be better to keep the same consistency by adding a whistle.

1. 00:10:757 (1,2,3,4,1) - Those objects are almost making a pentagone form (in other word, a star form). Since it's very close on making that kind of form, would like to move the objects (3,4,1) a bit to make that sort of shape?
2. 01:05:160 - It sounds very empty here.. What if you add a circle or delete the circle (3) to make another slider? It would emphasize the vocals and will makes it less empty.
3. 01:11:205 (3) - I think there's a missing a clap here. Add one to keep the consistency with your upbeats hitsounds.

1. 00:09:862 (3,4) - At the end of both sliders, there's a strong noice which can be emphasized with claps. I highly suggest you to add claps to both slider's end instead of keeping them empty.
2. 00:14:563 (4) - I don't understand why there's no new combo here, it has a different tone of the three previous objects. So, I don't understand why it is connected with the previous objects. Add a new combo please.
3. 00:17:922 (4) - You could also do the same thing here, delete the combo of 00:18:817 (1) - and then, add another new combo to 00:19:713 (3) - .
4. 00:23:742 (2) - I don't think this circle is actually needed, it isn't emphasizing anything. I suggest you to delete it and then, you make the spacing consistent with the next objects.
5. 00:51:504 (4) - The spacing with the next circle is acutally wrong: it is spaced by 1,00x instead of ~1,10x. You should fix it to make it more consistent c:

1. 00:06:280 - The electric bass/guitar is starting a sort of loop here and you have placed a circle and then, a slider. First, it sounds very bad the way it is right now. Second, to emphasize the sound of the bass/guitar, the slider could be moved here instead and after, you could stack the next circle at the end of the slider.
2. 00:08:071 - By muting the song and then, listening to the next objects.. are you sure this finish belongs here? For an example, if I look on the next combos, there's no finish at this similar downbeat, so I wonder.. is it needed?
3. 00:48:145 (5) - The blanket is not perfectly perfect. What I suggest you is to, first, disable the grid snap and move this circle on x:263 y:177. After doing that, make sure to move the next circle to make a consistent spacing. the blanket should be looking better after that.
4. 00:57:324 (1) - *Comment* i find this slider a bit.. meh. ;-;
5. 01:06:280 - I highly suggest you to add a new combo here, the combo is actually, very long and also, your previous and next combos are always *or almost all* starting on a big downbeat. Why not doing the same thing here? There's a thing I understand here: you haven't added any new combo here because it was following the vocals. But actually, the combo is way too long.

Gabe wrote:

Hello Yasora

The map has been downloaded on June 25th and the mod was started and done on June 30th, every changes you have made after the 25th, are not considered for me. Sorry in advance.

Easy

1. 00:14:339 (1) - The spacing of this slider is a *bit* inconsistent with the previous objects. For an example, if you click on it, the spacing of the previous object is 1,00x but, with the next one, the spacing is 1,04x. Of course, it's minor, but it could be more consistent :3
2. 00:21:504 (1) - This is more like a question than a suggestion: Why is this slider having a jump from the previous object? already consistent 1.0x o.o
3. 00:42:548 (3) - Just a minor thing: the spacing after this circle is not the same as the spacing of the previous object, which makes it inconsistent. With the Distance Snap, space it properly.
4. 00:46:578 (1) - Personally, I would like to see a more symmetrical slider.. (Make the spacing consistent after it)
   
   Code

   160,108,46578,6,0,B|176:160|124:192|124:192|176:224|160:276,1,200

5. 00:50:608 (2) - I have troubles with that kind of slider.. The circle is placed behind it, which makes a very weird flow. What I suggest you is to make a reverse of 90 degres anticlockwise and then, you replace it in a consistent way. So, right now, the flow will be less weird and it will be easier to catch the next circle.
6. 00:56:877 - Previously, on 00:53:295 - , you have added a whistle instead of a clap. (You were adding claps on the upbeats and whistles on the downbeats) Personally, I think the whistles sounds pretty well because it makes some changes, which are simples but, was it a mistake? Did you wanted to add a clap instead of a whistle? Actually, you have two choices here, either you replace the whistle by a clap or at 00:56:877 - , you replace the clap by a whistle. I would personally, like said earlier, replace the clap by a whistle. (...) After looking a bit further, I think it was mostly a mistake you have commited. At 01:11:205 - , you have also added a whistle like you have done with the previous objects and it is basically the same exact thing but, placed further.
7. 01:19:713 - Have you forgot to add a whistle here? Since you are adding whistles on the downbeats and claps on the upbeats, it would be better to keep the same consistency by adding a whistle. in the end right? already~

Normal

1. 00:10:757 (1,2,3,4,1) - Those objects are almost making a pentagone form (in other word, a star form). Since it's very close on making that kind of form, would like to move the objects (3,4,1) a bit to make that sort of shape?
2. 01:05:160 - It sounds very empty here.. What if you add a circle or delete the circle (3) to make another slider? It would emphasize the vocals and will makes it less empty.
3. 01:11:205 (3) - I think there's a missing a clap here. Add one to keep the consistency with your upbeats hitsounds.already clap~

There's nothing *wrong* here; simple difficulty.

Hard

1. 00:09:862 (3,4) - At the end of both sliders, there's a strong noice which can be emphasized with claps. I highly suggest you to add claps to both slider's end instead of keeping them empty.
2. 00:14:563 (4) - I don't understand why there's no new combo here, it has a different tone of the three previous objects. So, I don't understand why it is connected with the previous objects. Add a new combo please.
3. 00:17:922 (4) - You could also do the same thing here, delete the combo of 00:18:817 (1) - and then, add another new combo to 00:19:713 (3) - .
4. 00:23:742 (2) - I don't think this circle is actually needed, it isn't emphasizing anything. I suggest you to delete it and then, you make the spacing consistent with the next objects.
5. 00:51:504 (4) - The spacing with the next circle is acutally wrong: it is spaced by 1,00x instead of ~1,10x. You should fix it to make it more consistent c:

Take care of your combos.. please.

Survive

1. 00:06:280 - The electric bass/guitar is starting a sort of loop here and you have placed a circle and then, a slider. First, it sounds very bad the way it is right now. Second, to emphasize the sound of the bass/guitar, the slider could be moved here instead and after, you could stack the next circle at the end of the slider.
2. 00:08:071 - By muting the song and then, listening to the next objects.. are you sure this finish belongs here? For an example, if I look on the next combos, there's no finish at this similar downbeat, so I wonder.. is it needed? uh.. no finish sound in there now
3. 00:48:145 (5) - The blanket is not perfectly perfect. What I suggest you is to, first, disable the grid snap and move this circle on x:263 y:177. After doing that, make sure to move the next circle to make a consistent spacing. the blanket should be looking better after that.
4. 00:57:324 (1) - *Comment* i find this slider a bit.. meh. ;-; but I like this slider xD
5. 01:06:280 - I highly suggest you to add a new combo here, the combo is actually, very long and also, your previous and next combos are always *or almost all* starting on a big downbeat. Why not doing the same thing here? There's a thing I understand here: you haven't added any new combo here because it was following the vocals. But actually, the combo is way too long. adding in (5), cuz I want same combo (1-4)

If you have any problem or want some more suggestions, try to catch me in game or, if I am offline, send me a forum private message anytime!
Can you try to get at least, 2 more mods? After you are done, you can call me back for a recheck :3!

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No General issues to point.

* And no complaints nor suggestions for [Easy], [Normal] and [Hard].

[Survive]
00:23:967 (1,2,3,4) - why not make these notes like this? → http://puu.sh/3wpU6.jpg ← In other words: setting 00:24:191 (2) at x:320 y:36 and 00:24:638 (4) at x:300 y:120 .

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

1. 00:01:579 (2) - Hapus ini, susah bagi pemula
2. 00:03:370 (4) - ^