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Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart

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Rare
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Rare
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月27日 at 0:49:36

Artist: Kamishiro Ami
Title: Cherry My Heart
Source: Love Delation!
Tags: SMEE game Cilvery
BPM: 152
Filesize: 3998kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (5 stars, 649 notes)
  2. Easy (2.87 stars, 220 notes)
  3. Hard (4.86 stars, 521 notes)
  4. Normal (3.91 stars, 262 notes)
Download: Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#10
Collab Cilvery
Last edited by Rare , edited 13 times in total.
xsrsbsns
1,936 posts
Joined July 2010
xsrsbsns
kamishiro ami OP
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
@xsrsbsns
moe~ <3
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery
♥
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
てへぺろ
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Rotte
This song is your "inochi"-song?
XD
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
@Rotte i love this song!!
HabiHolic
5,410 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Hi~ m4m Queue~

[Easy]
00:36:629 (1) - Hit sound this sound too grand.
00:39:787 (1) - Nc Remove?

[Normal]
00:06:432 (6) - Remove
00:05:445 (5) - Photo ↓


00:14:721 (1) - Nc Remove?
00:37:418 (2) - Remove
00:36:629 (1) - Photo ↓


00:37:616 (2) - Photo ↓


00:46:103 (1) - Nc Remove?
00:49:261 (1) - ^

[Hard]

good dff~ Intellectual halgeot None


[Collab]

nice~ Intellectual halgeot None
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ m4m Queue~

[Easy]
00:36:629 (1) - Hit sound this sound too grand. reduced volume
00:39:787 (1) - Nc Remove? no, following finish of the drum.

[Normal]
00:06:432 (6) - Remove following the keyboard here
00:05:445 (5) - Photo ↓


00:14:721 (1) - Nc Remove? removed
00:37:418 (2) - Remove ^
00:36:629 (1) - Photo ↓ no change.


00:37:616 (2) - Photo ↓ no change.


00:46:103 (1) - Nc Remove? no, following finish of the drum.
00:49:261 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]

good dff~ Intellectual halgeot None


[Collab]

nice~ Intellectual halgeot None
thanks modding.
I'll mod your map~
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
Rare~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!
ohh~! another one! :D!
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
@hoLysoup ya! I love Kamishiro Ami and this song ></
moe moe song ww
ColdTooth
1,104 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
M4M~

[Easy]

00:23:405 (2,3,4) - Nazi. Exactly .8 spacing
00:53:405 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this would confuse an easy player, maybe make it a square and the others can fit to a transition to the kiai time.
01:41:168 (2,3) - Move this over to the left by one (Tiny grid)
02:15:116 (3) - One or two over to the left (Tiny)
02:19:458 (1) - http://puu.sh/25cuc <--- Might work better, but that's up to you.

[Normal]

The last kiai time extends and Easy doesn't, same as Hard.

01:38:997 (1) - Remove NC?
02:04:458 (2,3,1,2) - I like this better IMO (But that may be me.) http://puu.sh/25cCQ

Nice Normal difficulty. Done well :)

[Hard]

00:29:918 (2) - Could blanket 00:28:932 (1) -
01:10:379 (6) - Could blanket 01:09:195 (3) -
02:04:359 (3) - IMO it looks hard to see with that repeat slider.
02:11:366 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just to say, this star shape looks awesome.
03:16:695 (2) - One down? (Tiny grid)

[Collab]

[Rare]

02:21:037 (1,2,3,4) - This plays weird.
03:19:852 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Odd triangle shape.

[Cilvery]

00:44:129 (5,6) - I dislike this stack.
02:17:879 (1,2,3,4) - Odd square shape.


That's about it. Nice difficulty set.
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
m4m

[Easy]

  1. 00:16:300 (1) - finish
  2. 00:28:142 (3) - add whistle first slider
  3. 00:28:932 (1) - finish ; i heard sone sound like "chaaang" :?
  4. 00:35:247 (1) - NC and remove NC next note
  5. 00:43:932 (4) - more roundly :arrow: 2nd point (432,248)
    SPOILER
  6. 00:54:984 (3,4) - whistle?
  7. 01:02:089 (1) - finish like 00:28:932 (1)
  8. 01:21:037 - breaktime start or 01:17:879 (1) - expend until 01:21:037
  9. 01:47:682 (3) - how about this?
    SPOILER
  10. 01:55:774 (1) - more roundly :arrow: 2nd point (424,336)
    SPOILER
  11. 02:05:247 (1) - whistle end slider
  12. 02:06:432 (2) - and whistle
[Normal]

  1. 00:07:616 (2) - whistle middle slider
  2. 00:09:195 (4) - whistle arrow slider and end slider
  3. 00:12:550 (3) - whistle middle slider
  4. 00:24:589 (1) - clap start slider
  5. 00:28:932 (1) - finish
  6. 00:54:589 (2) - whistle arrow slider and end slider
  7. 01:07:616 (3,4) - whistle
  8. 01:17:879 (1) - same Easy Diff
  9. 01:52:616 (1) - overlap this end slider ( 01:50:839 (3) ) :arrow: x:336 y:250
    SPOILER
  10. 01:53:011 (2) - and move to (312,156)
  11. 02:05:642 (2) - whistle arrow slider and end slider
  12. 02:55:774 (1) - whistle end slider
  13. 02:56:958 (2) - whistle
[Hard]

  1. 00:41:168 (4) - whistle start slider
  2. 00:54:195 (3) - ^
  3. 02:49:853 (7) - whistle middle slider
  4. 02:56:563 (3) - whistle start slider
  5. 02:56:958 (4) - ^
good song!
Good Luck and go rank!
i give you one star 8-)
p.s.it's my poor mod :(
Last edited by GugUCorn , edited 2 times in total.
Entreal
136 posts
Joined July 2011
Entreal
Hello!

Easy!
00:44:721 - Finish
01:28:932 - You can extend this slider to 01:30:116 and move it like this

01:32:089 - ^ If you choose to follow that, might as well do this one too


Normal!
00:28:932 - Add finish
00:44:721 - ^
01:55:774 - ^
03:00:511 - ^

Hard!
01:07:221 - Replace clap with whistle?
01:55:774 - Add a finish

Collab! (It's okay to mod this right?)
In general not sure if these are intentional but, There are some snapping errors here:
00:03:668 - Slider (End)
00:04:063 - Slider (End)
00:04:655 - Slider (End)
etc. etc. I can't list them since it will take too long. you can check by Ctrl+Shift+A

03:11:761 (End)- Add a clap here, since you can hear a faint clap in the music
03:14:721 (End)- ^
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
VinylDash14

VinylDash14 wrote:

M4M~

[Easy]

00:23:405 (2,3,4) - Nazi. Exactly .8 spacing
00:53:405 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this would confuse an easy player, maybe make it a square and the others can fit to a transition to the kiai time.
01:41:168 (2,3) - Move this over to the left by one (Tiny grid)
02:15:116 (3) - One or two over to the left (Tiny)
02:19:458 (1) - http://puu.sh/25cuc <--- Might work better, but that's up to you.
all fixed
[Normal]

The last kiai time extends and Easy doesn't, same as Hard.

01:38:997 (1) - Remove NC? removed
02:04:458 (2,3,1,2) - I like this better IMO (But that may be me.) http://puu.sh/25cCQ idk how what look different...

Nice Normal difficulty. Done well :)

[Hard]

00:29:918 (2) - Could blanket 00:28:932 (1) - I want keep my current pattern.
01:10:379 (6) - Could blanket 01:09:195 (3) - I'm going it but I haven't been able to?
02:04:359 (3) - IMO it looks hard to see with that repeat slider. increased spacing
02:11:366 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just to say, this star shape looks awesome. can you see 02:12:155 (5,6,7) - triangle jump?
03:16:695 (2) - One down? (Tiny grid) upped.

[Collab]

[Rare]

02:21:037 (1,2,3,4) - This plays weird. I want to ramdomly jump here
03:19:852 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Odd triangle shape. umm, replaced

That's about it. Nice difficulty set.
Pisces

[Pisces] wrote:

m4m

[Easy]

  1. 00:16:300 (1) - finish added
  2. 00:28:142 (3) - add whistle first slider I won't add whistle on easy dif. I don't like haflway very much.
  3. 00:28:932 (1) - finish ; i heard sone sound like "chaaang" :? added
  4. 00:35:247 (1) - NC and remove NC next note added NC and removed NC next note.
  5. 00:43:932 (4) - more roundly :arrow: 2nd point (432,248) no change, enough current placement.
    SPOILER
  6. 00:54:984 (3,4) - whistle? same as 00:28:142 (3) -
  7. 01:02:089 (1) - finish like 00:28:932 (1) added
  8. 01:21:037 - breaktime start or 01:17:879 (1) - expend until 01:21:037 fixed all diff
  9. 01:47:682 (3) - how about this? I don't use red line on Easy dif very much. i'll fix it if anybody else says so.
    SPOILER
  10. 01:55:774 (1) - more roundly :arrow: 2nd point (424,336) fixed
    SPOILER
  11. 02:05:247 (1) - whistle end slider umm, no. same as 00:28:142 (3) -
  12. 02:06:432 (2) - and whistle ^
[Normal]
really sry, I don't like halfway hitsounds. so I won't add whistle. :(
  1. 00:07:616 (2) - whistle middle slider
  2. 00:09:195 (4) - whistle arrow slider and end slider
  3. 00:12:550 (3) - whistle middle slider
  4. 00:24:589 (1) - clap start slider
  5. 00:28:932 (1) - finish
  6. 00:54:589 (2) - whistle arrow slider and end slider
  7. 01:07:616 (3,4) - whistle
  8. 01:17:879 (1) - same Easy Diff
  9. 01:52:616 (1) - overlap this end slider 01:50:839 (3) :arrow: x:336 y:250
  10. 01:53:011 (2) - and move to (312,156)
  11. 02:05:642 (2) - whistle arrow slider and end slider
  12. 02:55:774 (1) - whistle end slider
  13. 02:56:958 (2) - whistle
all fixed except whistle suggestions.
[Hard]

  1. 00:41:168 (4) - whistle start slider no change, I cannot hear any sounds from mp3.
  2. 00:54:195 (3) - ^ finish will instead whistle
  3. 02:49:853 (7) - whistle middle slider same as 00:41:168 (4) -
  4. 02:56:563 (3) - whistle start slider ^
  5. 02:56:958 (4) - ^ ^
good song!
Good Luck and go rank!
i give you one star 8-)
p.s.it's my poor mod :(
Kamishiro Ami is so cute voice ></
Entreal

Entreal wrote:

Hello! hi~

Easy!
00:44:721 - Finish I'm following the drum.
01:28:932 - You can extend this slider to 01:30:116 and move it like this

01:32:089 - ^ If you choose to follow that, might as well do this one too
i'll fix it if anybody else says so.

Normal!
00:28:932 - Add finish
00:44:721 - ^
01:55:774 - ^
03:00:511 - ^
umm, all nochange. I'm following the drum and I don't like many finish very much.
Hard!
01:07:221 - Replace clap with whistle? changed hitsound by myself
01:55:774 - Add a finish no change

Collab! (It's okay to mod this right?)
In general not sure if these are intentional but, There are some snapping errors here:
00:03:668 - Slider (End)
00:04:063 - Slider (End)
00:04:655 - Slider (End)
etc. etc. I can't list them since it will take too long. you can check by Ctrl+Shift+A
wtf unsnapped :| fixed unsnapped

03:11:761 (End)- Add a clap here, since you can hear a faint clap in the music
03:14:721 (End)- ^
I cannot clap. sry no change.

thanks for modding guys. very was useful mod. I'll mod you guys later.
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery

VinylDash14 wrote:

M4M~

[Easy]

00:23:405 (2,3,4) - Nazi. Exactly .8 spacing
00:53:405 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this would confuse an easy player, maybe make it a square and the others can fit to a transition to the kiai time.
01:41:168 (2,3) - Move this over to the left by one (Tiny grid)
02:15:116 (3) - One or two over to the left (Tiny)
02:19:458 (1) - http://puu.sh/25cuc <--- Might work better, but that's up to you.

[Normal]

The last kiai time extends and Easy doesn't, same as Hard.

01:38:997 (1) - Remove NC?
02:04:458 (2,3,1,2) - I like this better IMO (But that may be me.) http://puu.sh/25cCQ

Nice Normal difficulty. Done well :)

[Hard]

00:29:918 (2) - Could blanket 00:28:932 (1) -
01:10:379 (6) - Could blanket 01:09:195 (3) -
02:04:359 (3) - IMO it looks hard to see with that repeat slider.
02:11:366 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just to say, this star shape looks awesome.
03:16:695 (2) - One down? (Tiny grid)

[Collab]

[Rare]

02:21:037 (1,2,3,4) - This plays weird.
03:19:852 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Odd triangle shape.

[Cilvery]

00:44:129 (5,6) - I dislike this stack.
02:17:879 (1,2,3,4) - Odd square shape.


That's about it. Nice difficulty set.
sorry, no change :( thank you for modding \o/
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there

[Easy]
* AR +1 or 2? Your current appraoch are slow

00:46:103 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars....
00:52:418 (1) - ^
01:35:247 (4) - For better looking, stack the tail slider with the tail slider from previous slider
02:44:721 (1,3,1,3) - I think these stacks are not beginner-friendly due too much overlapping of hitbursts....
03:13:932 (2,3) - Move 1 grid up, so (3) is stack with other circle (nazi)
03:17:879 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars....

[Normal]
00:15:905 (5) - Move 1 grid left? (nazi)
00:17:484 (2) - ^
00:36:629 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars....
00:46:103 (1) - ^
01:38:800 (2) - Remove this object? Since it doesn't following the sparkle sound
02:17:484 (4) - New combo?

[Hard]
00:23:208 (1) - Why new combo?
00:52:418 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars....
01:34:261 (1) - Why new combo?

[Collab]
00:03:274 (1) - Move 1 grid left for allign pattern? (nazi)
01:55:379 (7) - Fix this spacing with x1.00 distance spacing, it's doesn't make sense having a diamond pattern with different spacing
02:07:616 (3) - Make curve like 02:06:826 (1)?


Good luck~
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
* AR +1 or 2? Your current appraoch are slow added AR+1

00:46:103 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars.... removed new combo
00:52:418 (1) - ^ ^
01:35:247 (4) - For better looking, stack the tail slider with the tail slider from previous slider Since there is no obstacle to play, no change.
02:44:721 (1,3,1,3) - I think these stacks are not beginner-friendly due too much overlapping of hitbursts.... I don't think so. but i'll fix it if anybody else says so.
03:13:932 (2,3) - Move 1 grid up, so (3) is stack with other circle (nazi) fixed
03:17:879 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars.... ^

[Normal]
00:15:905 (5) - Move 1 grid left? (nazi) no change because the spacing would widen even more.
00:17:484 (2) - ^ no change
00:36:629 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars.... removed new combo
00:46:103 (1) - ^ ^
01:38:800 (2) - Remove this object? Since it doesn't following the sparkle sound this note is following drum. I won't remove this note.
02:17:484 (4) - New combo? added

[Hard]
00:23:208 (1) - Why new combo? ok fix it. 00:23:208 (1) - removed new combo, 00:24:589 (4) - added new combo here.
00:52:418 (1) - Remove new combo, since you adding NC every 2 bars.... I want to keep my pettern. I'm following the drum~
01:34:261 (1) - Why new combo? ok fix it. 01:34:261 (1) - removed new combo, 01:35:050 (3) - added new combo.

[Collab]
00:03:274 (1) - Move 1 grid left for allign pattern? (nazi) fixed
01:55:379 (7) - Fix this spacing with x1.00 distance spacing, it's doesn't make sense having a diamond pattern with different spacing (7,8) is stacked to head and end of 01:53:997 (1) -
02:07:616 (3) - Make curve like 02:06:826 (1)? cilvery said no change


Good luck~
thanks for modding Leorda ></
Itachi_Uchiha
188 posts
Joined December 2011
Itachi_Uchiha
[Easy]
00:46:892 (4) - i would do 3 circles instead of a repeater
00:56:563 (2) - it´s a little bit out of grid
02:26:563 (2) - flip vertically

[Normal]
00:50:247 (3) - bit out of grid
01:28:734 (4) - ^
well... thats all for normal :)

[Hard]
ar+1
circle size -1
00:27:945 (3,4) - you hear triplets in the backgrounds so make triplets there :)
00:35:050 (1,2) - dont stack these
00:59:524 (4,5) - ^
01:57:155 (1,2) - ^
02:08:405 (1,2,3,4) - it breaks the flow
02:09:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was hard to play and confusing
02:11:761 (3,4) - swap this two
02:41:563 (1) - out of grid
03:03:274 (6,1) - dont stack this two
03:15:511 (8) - again out of grid
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

[Easy]
00:46:892 (4) - i would do 3 circles instead of a repeater no, I'm decide that don't use red line as possible on easy.
00:56:563 (2) - it´s a little bit out of grid There are no problems in particular.
02:26:563 (2) - flip vertically no change

[Normal]
00:50:247 (3) - bit out of grid There are no problems in particular.
01:28:734 (4) - ^ ^
well... thats all for normal :)

[Hard]
ar+1 AR7 is the best.
circle size -1 no
00:27:945 (3,4) - you hear triplets in the backgrounds so make triplets there :) fixed
00:35:050 (1,2) - dont stack these why do you think so? thereby i'll accept your suggestion.
00:59:524 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:57:155 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:08:405 (1,2,3,4) - it breaks the flow I don't think so.
02:09:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was hard to play and confusing i'll fix it if anybody else says so.
02:11:761 (3,4) - swap this two putting on hold this
02:41:563 (1) - out of grid There are no problems in particular.
03:03:274 (6,1) - dont stack this two why do you think so? thereby i'll accept your suggestion.
03:15:511 (8) - again out of grid There are no problems in particular.
thanks for modding! I'll mod your map ~
Loooctav
1,070 posts
Joined January 2012
Loooctav
Need Mod?
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
@ThoomyyxD no thanks but when need you mod, send you pm!!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi :3 Rare chan :oops:

ひさしぶりのmodイキマス。

[General]
  1. Tagの"op"は"opening"の方がいいと思います。
  2. (nazi)BGですが https://osu.ppy.sh/s/11227 こちらとかぶってるので変えてみては？
  3. Collab diffのkiai timeだけ違います。Easy ~ Hardのkiai timeが正しいと感じました。
  4. mp3もっといいのがあったら192kbpsにしてみては！
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:090 (1) - Normal,Hardではfinishが追加されていたのでこちらも。
  2. 00:09:984 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  3. 00:13:142 (1) - ^
  4. 00:13:932 (2,3) - １つの折り返しにまとめてみては？　難易度もぐっと下がると思います。
  5. 00:30:116 (3) - 前の00:28:932 (1) - をのせたいところ。
  6. 00:32:089 (1) - x:220/y:96で見やすくなると思います。
  7. 00:35:247 (1,2) - 叩きにくいと感じたので、こういった音取りはどうですか？
  8. 00:39:195 (2) - 終点のwhistleですが始点に移動してみては？
  9. 00:40:576 - ここ音が欲しいので00:40:774 (2) - 伸ばしてもいいかも？
  10. 00:44:721 (1) - finishを追加。
  11. 00:48:668 (2,3,4) - 前後のパターン(00:42:353 (2,3,4) - ,00:45:116 (2,3,4) - ,00:50:839 (1,2,3) - )のように歌詞にあわせてみては？
    なお、そちらの方がここ00:49:261 - などにfinishも追加できてより良いと思います。
  12. 00:54:589 (2) - 重なってるけどこの変の方が流れがよさそう。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722000
  13. 00:56:563 (2) - この終点もうちょっと右にしたいです。なお
  14. 01:17:879 (1) - 01:21:037 - ここまでのばしちゃってfinishの方が好きです。
  15. 01:35:247 (4) - じゃっかん前の01:33:668 (1) - こことかぶってるのでちょっと汚いけど配置の提案です。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722005
  16. 01:41:168 (2) - x:204/y:236で幸せになれます。
  17. 01:49:458 (1) - 01:51:629 - ここまでのばしてfinishを追加。次のnoteまで少し時間があるので1/1で置かなくてもいいかも。
  18. 01:55:774 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  19. 01:59:721 (2,3,4) - ^上記に同じです。00:48:668 (2,3,4) -
  20. 02:10:379 (2) - 左に曲げた方が綺麗です。
  21. 02:13:142 (5) - finishを追加。
  22. 02:13:142 (5,1) - new combo入れ替え・・・？
  23. 02:26:563 (2) - 終点にfinishを追加。
  24. 02:28:932 (1) - 01:17:879 (1) - ここと同じ。またno changeの場合はclapを追加しておいてください(andこれもおわすれなく http://puu.sh/2GWrU.jpg)
  25. 02:44:721 - ちょっとやさしいパートなので音量少しさげてみる・・？MiLu・・？他の難易度も確認お願します。
  26. 02:46:300 (3) - whistleを追加。
  27. 02:49:458 - ,02:49:458 - ^
  28. 02:55:774 (3,4) - (3)の終点と(4)のwhistleですが、clapに変えてみては？02:06:037 - ,00:54:984 - 統一感があっていいかなと。
  29. 03:06:037 (4) - 始点にfinishを追加。
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:445 (5) - 始点にwhistleを追加。(折り返しにあってもいいかも)
  2. 00:14:721 (4) - 始点のwhistleはfinishの方がいいと思います。
  3. 00:44:721 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  4. 00:54:195 (1) - こちらも、始点のwhistleはfinishの方がいいと思います。(Hardなどでは追加されていました。
  5. 01:17:879 (1) - Easyと同じです。
  6. 01:30:708 - ここの音がいらないと思うので、01:30:511 - ここだけにnoteでいいと思います。
  7. 01:55:774 (1) - finishを追加。
  8. 02:05:247 (1,2) - 上記に同じです。00:54:195 (1) -
  9. 02:11:563 (4) - 終点にclapを追加。
  10. 02:28:932 (1) - Easyと同じです。
  11. 02:51:037 (1,2,3,4) - ここの４つだけwhistleが無くなってるので追加しましょ～(02:44:721 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - )
  12. 03:02:484 (4) - 気持ちもう少し上でもいいかも！
  13. 03:05:247 (3) - 終点にfinishを追加。
  14. 03:08:405 (3) - finishを追加。
    流れや配置がとてもいいです*w*
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:984 (1) - 始点のwhistleはfinishの方がいいと思います。
  2. 00:15:511 (3) - ctrl + h ?
  3. 00:44:721 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  4. 00:35:247 (2) - x:500/y:268あたりに移動して、ジャンプをつくってもいいかも。
  5. 01:15:511 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  6. 01:16:695 (6) - 折り返しにfinishを追加。
  7. 01:33:866 (3) - ctrl + g ?
  8. 01:37:418 (2) - x:376/y:104あたりでいいと思います。
  9. 01:51:629 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  10. 01:55:774 (1) - ^
  11. 01:59:721 (3) - ctrl + g ?
  12. 02:01:103 (3) - いきなり複数の折り返しは難しいと思うのでこういった音取りはどうですか？
  13. 02:11:761 (3,4) - ctrl + g ?
  14. 02:26:563 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  15. 02:27:945 (7) - 上記に同じです。02:01:103 (3) -
  16. 02:38:800 (2) - ctrl + g ?
  17. 02:46:695 (6) - 全体にwhistleが・・！？
  18. 02:56:563 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  19. 03:06:037 (8) - ^
  20. 03:08:405 (2,9) - finishを追加。
[Collab]
Rare san
  1. 00:02:090 (1) - finishを追加。
  2. 00:09:984 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  3. 00:36:629 (1) - 終点のポイントを1 grid左に移動で綺麗になります。
  4. 00:58:537 (7) - 細かい提案なんですけどDefaultだと音がなってしまうので、無音のsliderside2を追加して設定してみてはどうですか？
    めんどくさいので気にならない場合は無視してください。
  5. 01:31:695 (8,1) - (6,7,8)と同じ間隔にしてみては？
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722186
  6. 01:54:787 (3,4,5,6) - こういった音取りはどうですか？
  7. 01:55:774 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  8. 02:44:721 - 上記で提案した内容なんですけど、こちらもスライダーの音が目立ちます。
  9. 02:44:721 - snapさせましょ！
Cilvery san
  1. 00:18:668 (3,4,5) - もう少し下(x:184 y:244)に移動すると叩きやすいと思います。
  2. 00:43:636 - ここに音がないので不自然に聞こえました。
  3. 00:44:721 (6) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  4. 00:53:109 (1) - finishを追加。
  5. 01:14:129 (8) - 2 girdほど左に移動すると01:13:339 (5,6,8) - で同じ間隔になります。
  6. 01:17:682 (1) - 01:17:682 - ここにnoteを追加して、01:17:879 - ここからspinnerを開始させてみてはどうでしょうか？
  7. 01:21:432 - ここの感覚は不要だと思います。
  8. 01:41:761 (5) - 1/1の間があいているところではnew comboを使用しているように感じたので、ここも同じようにしてみては？
  9. 01:43:142 (4) - ctrl + G と逆側にまげた方が流れがよくなると思います。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722191
  10. 01:49:359 (1) - こちらも同じく、白線からスタートでいいと思います。
  11. 02:35:051 (4) - stack好きなのでかさねたくなります・・・02:35:840 (2) -
終わりです。何か、日本語等で不明でしたらチャットしてください！！

自分も1st Rank mapが神代あみなので耳が幸せでした

楽しみです :) Good luck ~ ;)
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery

alacat wrote:

Hi :3 Rare chan :oops:

ひさしぶりのmodイキマス。

[General]
  1. Tagの"op"は"opening"の方がいいと思います。
  2. (nazi)BGですが https://osu.ppy.sh/s/11227 こちらとかぶってるので変えてみては？
  3. Collab diffのkiai timeだけ違います。Easy ~ Hardのkiai timeが正しいと感じました。
  4. mp3もっといいのがあったら192kbpsにしてみては！
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:090 (1) - Normal,Hardではfinishが追加されていたのでこちらも。
  2. 00:09:984 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  3. 00:13:142 (1) - ^
  4. 00:13:932 (2,3) - １つの折り返しにまとめてみては？　難易度もぐっと下がると思います。
  5. 00:30:116 (3) - 前の00:28:932 (1) - をのせたいところ。
  6. 00:32:089 (1) - x:220/y:96で見やすくなると思います。
  7. 00:35:247 (1,2) - 叩きにくいと感じたので、こういった音取りはどうですか？
  8. 00:39:195 (2) - 終点のwhistleですが始点に移動してみては？
  9. 00:40:576 - ここ音が欲しいので00:40:774 (2) - 伸ばしてもいいかも？
  10. 00:44:721 (1) - finishを追加。
  11. 00:48:668 (2,3,4) - 前後のパターン(00:42:353 (2,3,4) - ,00:45:116 (2,3,4) - ,00:50:839 (1,2,3) - )のように歌詞にあわせてみては？
    なお、そちらの方がここ00:49:261 - などにfinishも追加できてより良いと思います。
  12. 00:54:589 (2) - 重なってるけどこの変の方が流れがよさそう。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722000
  13. 00:56:563 (2) - この終点もうちょっと右にしたいです。なお
  14. 01:17:879 (1) - 01:21:037 - ここまでのばしちゃってfinishの方が好きです。
  15. 01:35:247 (4) - じゃっかん前の01:33:668 (1) - こことかぶってるのでちょっと汚いけど配置の提案です。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722005
  16. 01:41:168 (2) - x:204/y:236で幸せになれます。
  17. 01:49:458 (1) - 01:51:629 - ここまでのばしてfinishを追加。次のnoteまで少し時間があるので1/1で置かなくてもいいかも。
  18. 01:55:774 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  19. 01:59:721 (2,3,4) - ^上記に同じです。00:48:668 (2,3,4) -
  20. 02:10:379 (2) - 左に曲げた方が綺麗です。
  21. 02:13:142 (5) - finishを追加。
  22. 02:13:142 (5,1) - new combo入れ替え・・・？
  23. 02:26:563 (2) - 終点にfinishを追加。
  24. 02:28:932 (1) - 01:17:879 (1) - ここと同じ。またno changeの場合はclapを追加しておいてください(andこれもおわすれなく http://puu.sh/2GWrU.jpg)
  25. 02:44:721 - ちょっとやさしいパートなので音量少しさげてみる・・？MiLu・・？他の難易度も確認お願します。
  26. 02:46:300 (3) - whistleを追加。
  27. 02:49:458 - ,02:49:458 - ^
  28. 02:55:774 (3,4) - (3)の終点と(4)のwhistleですが、clapに変えてみては？02:06:037 - ,00:54:984 - 統一感があっていいかなと。
  29. 03:06:037 (4) - 始点にfinishを追加。
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:445 (5) - 始点にwhistleを追加。(折り返しにあってもいいかも)
  2. 00:14:721 (4) - 始点のwhistleはfinishの方がいいと思います。
  3. 00:44:721 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  4. 00:54:195 (1) - こちらも、始点のwhistleはfinishの方がいいと思います。(Hardなどでは追加されていました。
  5. 01:17:879 (1) - Easyと同じです。
  6. 01:30:708 - ここの音がいらないと思うので、01:30:511 - ここだけにnoteでいいと思います。
  7. 01:55:774 (1) - finishを追加。
  8. 02:05:247 (1,2) - 上記に同じです。00:54:195 (1) -
  9. 02:11:563 (4) - 終点にclapを追加。
  10. 02:28:932 (1) - Easyと同じです。
  11. 02:51:037 (1,2,3,4) - ここの４つだけwhistleが無くなってるので追加しましょ～(02:44:721 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - )
  12. 03:02:484 (4) - 気持ちもう少し上でもいいかも！
  13. 03:05:247 (3) - 終点にfinishを追加。
  14. 03:08:405 (3) - finishを追加。
    流れや配置がとてもいいです*w*
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:984 (1) - 始点のwhistleはfinishの方がいいと思います。
  2. 00:15:511 (3) - ctrl + h ?
  3. 00:44:721 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  4. 00:35:247 (2) - x:500/y:268あたりに移動して、ジャンプをつくってもいいかも。
  5. 01:15:511 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  6. 01:16:695 (6) - 折り返しにfinishを追加。
  7. 01:33:866 (3) - ctrl + g ?
  8. 01:37:418 (2) - x:376/y:104あたりでいいと思います。
  9. 01:51:629 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  10. 01:55:774 (1) - ^
  11. 01:59:721 (3) - ctrl + g ?
  12. 02:01:103 (3) - いきなり複数の折り返しは難しいと思うのでこういった音取りはどうですか？
  13. 02:11:761 (3,4) - ctrl + g ?
  14. 02:26:563 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  15. 02:27:945 (7) - 上記に同じです。02:01:103 (3) -
  16. 02:38:800 (2) - ctrl + g ?
  17. 02:46:695 (6) - 全体にwhistleが・・！？
  18. 02:56:563 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  19. 03:06:037 (8) - ^
  20. 03:08:405 (2,9) - finishを追加。
[Collab]
Rare san
  1. 00:02:090 (1) - finishを追加。
  2. 00:09:984 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  3. 00:36:629 (1) - 終点のポイントを1 grid左に移動で綺麗になります。
  4. 00:58:537 (7) - 細かい提案なんですけどDefaultだと音がなってしまうので、無音のsliderside2を追加して設定してみてはどうですか？
    めんどくさいので気にならない場合は無視してください。
  5. 01:31:695 (8,1) - (6,7,8)と同じ間隔にしてみては？
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722186
  6. 01:54:787 (3,4,5,6) - こういった音取りはどうですか？
  7. 01:55:774 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  8. 02:44:721 - 上記で提案した内容なんですけど、こちらもスライダーの音が目立ちます。
  9. 02:44:721 - snapさせましょ！
Cilvery san
  1. 00:18:668 (3,4,5) - もう少し下(x:184 y:244)に移動すると叩きやすいと思います。場所は違うけど下げましたー
  2. 00:43:636 - ここに音がないので不自然に聞こえました。　ここらへんいろいろと変えちゃいましたｗ
  3. 00:44:721 (6) - 始点にfinishを追加。　おｋ！
  4. 00:53:109 (1) - finishを追加。　いれた～
  5. 01:14:129 (8) - 2 girdほど左に移動すると01:13:339 (5,6,8) - で同じ間隔になります。　なるほど
  6. 01:17:682 (1) - 01:17:682 - ここにnoteを追加して、01:17:879 - ここからspinnerを開始させてみてはどうでしょうか？
  7. 01:21:432 - ここの感覚は不要だと思います。　なおした！！
  8. 01:41:761 (5) - 1/1の間があいているところではnew comboを使用しているように感じたので、ここも同じようにしてみては？　たしかに・・・ありがとー
  9. 01:43:142 (4) - ctrl + G と逆側にまげた方が流れがよくなると思います。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722191
  10. 01:49:359 (1) - こちらも同じく、白線からスタートでいいと思います。かえたー
  11. 02:35:051 (4) - stack好きなのでかさねたくなります・・・02:35:840 (2) -
　02:35:840 (2) - こっちを動かしました！

終わりです。何か、日本語等で不明でしたらチャットしてください！！

自分も1st Rank mapが神代あみなので耳が幸せでした

楽しみです :) Good luck ~ ;)
あらきゃっとさんありがとーー
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

alacat wrote:

Hi :3 Rare chan :oops: ウオオオオオ

[General]
  1. Tagの"op"は"opening"の方がいいと思います。 特にOpeningでもなかったから消した
  2. (nazi)BGですが https://osu.ppy.sh/s/11227 こちらとかぶってるので変えてみては？ Cilveryさんと話し合ってこのBGじゃないと今後の付き合いを考えると言われたのでこれでいきます。
  3. mp3もっといいのがあったら192kbpsにしてみては！ 探してみます…
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:932 (2,3) - １つの折り返しにまとめてみては？　難易度もぐっと下がると思います。 この配置気に入ってるのでこのままで。
  2. 00:30:116 (3) - 前の00:28:932 (1) - をのせたいところ。 特にプレイに支障ないのでここもこのままで。
  3. 00:32:089 (1) - x:220/y:96で見やすくなると思います。 ^
  4. 00:40:576 - ここ音が欲しいので00:40:774 (2) - 伸ばしてもいいかも？ その前にある(2,1)で赤線使ってるのでこのままで。
  5. 00:44:721 (1) - finishを追加。 ドラムのクラッシュがなってない場合基本的につけないのでこのままで。
  6. 00:48:668 (2,3,4) - 前後のパターン(00:42:353 (2,3,4) - ,00:45:116 (2,3,4) - ,00:50:839 (1,2,3) - )のように歌詞にあわせてみては？
    なお、そちらの方がここ00:49:261 - などにfinishも追加できてより良いと思います。いろんなパターンで置きたいのでこのままで。
  7. 00:54:589 (2) - 重なってるけどこの変の方が流れがよさそう。上下反転させた。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722000
  8. 00:56:563 (2) - この終点もうちょっと右にしたいです。なお　ちょっとギリギリですがプレイは問題ないのでこのまま。
  9. 01:35:247 (4) - じゃっかん前の01:33:668 (1) - こことかぶってるのでちょっと汚いけど配置の提案です。 うーん、今の配置好きなのでこのままで。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722005
  10. 01:41:168 (2) - x:204/y:236で幸せになれます。 幸せになれなかったのでこのままで。
  11. 01:49:458 (1) - 01:51:629 - ここまでのばしてfinishを追加。次のnoteまで少し時間があるので1/1で置かなくてもいいかも。 ここらへん配置変えました。
  12. 01:55:774 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。クラッシュなってないところにはつけない
  13. 01:59:721 (2,3,4) - ^上記に同じです。00:48:668 (2,3,4) - ^
  14. 02:10:379 (2) - 左に曲げた方が綺麗です。たぶん右のことだと思うけどこのままで。
  15. 02:44:721 - ちょっとやさしいパートなので音量少しさげてみる・・？MiLu・・？他の難易度も確認お願します。他にも言われたら変えます。
  16. 02:46:300 (3) - whistleを追加。 うーん、このままで。
  17. 02:49:458 - ,02:49:458 - ^ ^
  18. 03:06:037 (4) - 始点にfinishを追加。クラッシュないところにフィニッシュおかない
[Normal]
  1. 00:44:721 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。クラッシュないところにうんたらかんたら
  2. 01:55:774 (1) - finishを追加。^
  3. 02:11:563 (4) - 終点にclapを追加。 迷ったけどこのままで。
  4. 02:51:037 (1,2,3,4) - ここの４つだけwhistleが無くなってるので追加しましょ～(02:44:721 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ) 鉄琴？みたいな音ないからあえてつけてません。ちなみに全部の難易度で付けてないので変える予定はありません。
  5. 03:05:247 (3) - 終点にfinishを追加。クラッシュ云々
  6. 03:08:405 (3) - finishを追加。^
    流れや配置がとてもいいです*w*
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:984 (1) - 始点のwhistleはfinishの方がいいと思います。うーんこのままで。
  2. 00:44:721 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。クラッシュないところにうんたらかんたら
  3. 00:35:247 (2) - x:500/y:268あたりに移動して、ジャンプをつくってもいいかも。このままで
  4. 01:15:511 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。 ^
  5. 01:16:695 (6) - 折り返しにfinishを追加。 ^
  6. 01:33:866 (3) - ctrl + g ? ^
  7. 01:37:418 (2) - x:376/y:104あたりでいいと思います。ちょっと悩んでる…
  8. 01:51:629 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。 クラッシュがうんたらかんたらで
  9. 01:55:774 (1) - ^ ^
  10. 01:59:721 (3) - ctrl + g ? このままで
  11. 02:01:103 (3) - いきなり複数の折り返しは難しいと思うのでこういった音取りはどうですか？ ミスらせるためにわざとやってます。
  12. 02:11:761 (3,4) - ctrl + g ? このままで。
  13. 02:26:563 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。
  14. 02:27:945 (7) - 上記に同じです。02:01:103 (3) -
  15. 02:38:800 (2) - ctrl + g ? クラッシュがうんたらかんたらで
  16. 02:46:695 (6) - 全体にwhistleが・・！？ あえてつけてない
  17. 02:56:563 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。このままで
  18. 03:06:037 (8) - ^ ^
  19. 03:08:405 (2,9) - finishを追加。しっくりこなかったのでこのままで。
[Collab]
Rare san
  1. 00:02:090 (1) - finishを追加。このままで。
  2. 00:09:984 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加。^
  3. 00:36:629 (1) - 終点のポイントを1 grid左に移動で綺麗になります。(6)動かしました
  4. 01:31:695 (8,1) - (6,7,8)と同じ間隔にしてみては？ (7)を囲っている（はず）なのでこのままで。
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/722186
  5. 01:54:787 (3,4,5,6) - こういった音取りはどうですか？ ドラムカバーなのでこのままで。
  6. 01:55:774 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。 ドラムのクラッシュが～
終わりです。何か、日本語等で不明でしたらチャットしてください！！

自分も1st Rank mapが神代あみなので耳が幸せでした

楽しみです :) Good luck ~ ;)
直さなかったとこだけ書きました～。
書いてないところは全部直しました。
thanks for Modding !!!
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
IRC modded and we fixed a few things such as break time, stack leniency and source. Bubbled~
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
ありがとうめろちゃん
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,785 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
Suggested some additional tags in-game, although they were ultimately declined. (They were pretty relevant though !)

Pretty nice job on the Easy difficulty, I thought.

Ranked.
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
MiLu
チェリオ
Satellite
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Satellite

MiLu wrote:

チェリオ
xsrsbsns
1,936 posts
Joined July 2010
xsrsbsns
cherry my
gratz
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
んほ～(omedeto) :D
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
waaaaaaaaa “ヽ(´▽｀)ノ”
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
oh~ full version :D! yay
fusya
90 posts
Joined February 2011
fusya
おめでとーです！
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
omedeto ~
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
I remember that song lol.

Gratz ~
Verlaren
Verlaren
Congrats.
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
thanks everyone!!
Patchouli
824 posts
Joined July 2009
Patchouli
omedetou
Verlaren
Verlaren
Yea full version, Congratulations!
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