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NERDHEAD ft. Nishino Kana - Brave Heart

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Aurele
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Aurele

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Mkayy~ and I already removed the folder inside the folder a week ago ;o
Oh... I didn't saw it ... gg.
Aurele
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Aurele
Okay :

The whole Folder have to look like that : http://puu.sh/pKaJ
Here is the Storyboard + BG : http://puu.sh/pKb3

Gluck. c:
Kanari
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Kanari
Thannkyhuu~
Aurele
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Aurele
Full Submit your beatmap.
Since you have a new Background + Storyboard.
Kanari
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Kanari
I did ;w;
Loneight
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Loneight
Request from Your friendship is mutual!

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[general]

  1. osb. should remove,XD?
  2. can make the slider look better

[Shy Heart]

  1. Slider Tick Rate change to 1?

  2. 00:34:457 (4) - NC
  3. 00:37:457 (5,6) - spacing~
  4. 01:05:657 (4) - NC
  5. 01:10:457 (3) - ^
  6. 01:15:257 (3) - ^
  7. 01:41:657 (4) - ^
  8. 02:08:057 (3) - ^
  9. 01:41:657 (4) - ^
  10. 01:41:657 (4) - ^

[Kind Heart]

  1. 00:43:457 (1) - NC
  2. 01:19:757 (5,6,7) - (5) NC and they crowd together let me feel uncomfortable , lol
  3. 01:27:257 (5) - NC
  4. 01:32:057 (4) - ^
  5. 01:56:057 (4) - ^
  6. 02:22:457 (2,3,4) - this rhythm let me feel strange
  7. 02:25:457 (1) - no under slider ?
  8. 02:46:457 (5) - NC
  9. 02:55:157 (7,1) - (7) NC and (1) remove NC

[Brave Heart]

  1. Useless green line:
    01:36:957 -
    04:17:657 -
    04:17:807 -

  2. I think ... break time shouldn't in kiai time

  3. 00:39:257 (3) - NC
  4. 01:10:457 (6) - ^
  5. 01:50:657 (7) - ^
  6. 02:04:157 (5) - ^
  7. 02:18:557 (4) - ^
  8. 02:47:357 (x) - add a note at there?
  9. 03:03:857 (2,3) - spacing
  10. 03:17:957 (1) - let it end at 03:20:057 - and add a note at 03:20:657 - ?
  11. 03:38:657 (2) - NC
  12. 04:41:357 (1) - remove NC ?
  13. 04:44:057 (3) - this rotation hardly be seen
  14. 04:57:857 (3) - NC
good song,star
good luck~
and sorry to my poor English
Aurele
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Aurele
Don't kd this.

[Brave Heart]
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BraveHeart.png"
//Break Periods
2,49057,55157
2,77857,87557
2,89504,93857
2,202057,212057
2,219104,220757
2,227257,230357
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB1.png",320,240
 M,0,29057,29657,236,452
 F,0,29057,29657,0,1
 F,0,29657,93857,1,0.9966671
 F,0,93857,94157,0.9966671,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB2.png",320,240
 M,0,94757,96857,135,448
 F,0,94757,96857,0.06399993,1
 M,0,96857,,135,448
 F,0,96857,144557,1,0.9915844
 F,0,144557,144857,0.9915844,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB1.png",320,240
 M,0,145157,,236,451
 F,0,145157,145457,0.0359998,1
 F,0,145457,170057,1
 F,0,170057,173057,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB2.png",320,240
 M,0,173657,,132,452
 F,0,173657,174257,0,0.6399999
 F,0,174257,197957,0.6399999,0.9491304
 F,0,197957,201857,0.9491304,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB1.png",320,240
 M,0,211457,,234,452
 F,0,211457,212057,0,1
 F,0,212057,221657,1
 F,0,221657,227057,1,0.03199983
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB3.png",320,240
 M,0,231257,231857,124,455
 F,0,231257,231857,0,1
 F,0,231857,257357,1
 F,0,257357,257657,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB1.png",320,240
 M,0,257957,,236,453
 F,0,257957,260057,0,1
 F,0,260057,278657,1
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB3.png",320,240
 M,0,279257,,125,453
 F,0,279257,279857,0,1
 F,0,279857,298157,1,0.9524462
 F,0,298157,298457,0.9524462,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB1.png",320,240
 M,0,298457,299957,235,453
 F,0,298457,299957,0,1
 F,0,299957,308057,1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Go in Timing and change the Slider Velocity for : 1,70 . Because the current one is too slow.
& also, change the Slider Tick Rate for 1

Just before I forget... Song Setup > Storyboarding > Uncheck the Letterbox during breaks.

Star & Gluck <3
Kanari
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Kanari
Thankyhuu l1106188~
I'll mod yhur map soon~ ;D

Gabee! D:
Yhu trying to kill me? p;
So much work to resnap all sliders and fix spacing ;w;
riffy
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riffy
lol~

i'm here again
[Brave Heart]
00:30:857 (4,1) - not stacked
00:35:657 (5,1) - ^
00:58:157 (7,2) - not stacked ><
01:05:357 (5) - new combo
01:05:657 (7) - maybe better shape?
01:06:857 (9,2) - this crossing doesn't makes sliders looks better
01:12:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks messy ><

01:48:857 (4) - maybe make another shape?
02:06:557 (5,6,1,1,2) - hard to read

02:48:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe symmetrical

04:02:507 (5,6,7,8,9,2) - maybe a bit hard to read?
04:15:107 (1,2) - ^

04:21:257 (5) - new combo

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yeah. nice

Star!
Kanari
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Kanari
Thannkyhuuu~
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
Hi there.

It might be a bit too late, but can I make an Insane diff? :P

Also, good luck with this mapset 8-)
Kanari
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Kanari
>< Sorry D: Im not accepting any guest diffs but thanks for offering~ ^^
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

>< Sorry D: Im not accepting any guest diffs but thanks for offering~ ^^
Then I guess I have to make a mapset by myself for this :P Good luck (again), anyway 8-)
Kanari
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Kanari
;o Good luck with thatt~ ;D
and thannkyhuuu ^^
Aoko
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Aoko
I really love this song >< /me throws kudosu star xD
Good luck ^^
Kanari
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Kanari
Aokooo!
Thannkyhuu~ >w<
-Hyde
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-Hyde
General

Shy Heart
Slider Tick Rate 2
00:59:657 (3) - Move to x: 304, y: 144
01:11:657 - Add a slider to "reverse arrow" here: 01:11:957 (red tick) and the end here: 01:12:257 (white tick)
02:22:157 (1) - That ends in: 02:22:757
02:23:057 - Remove the slider and place a note here: 02:23:357
02:23:657 - The slider has "reverse arrow" and ends here: 02:24:857
Why end there the map? xD!

Kind Heart
00:37:757 (6) - The slider ends in: 00:38:057
00:38:657 - Add a note.
00:39:257 - New combo.
01:05:357 - Add a slider to end here: 01:05:657
01:05:957 - Remove the note.
01:06:557 - Add a note.
01:19:757 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - That part is very confusing for a beginner, try to make a change there.
01:45:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
In this part you could do something like ~
01:46:457 - The slider ends in: 01:47:057
01:47:357 - Add a slider to end in: 01:47:657
01:47:957 - Add a slider to end in: 01:48:257
01:48:857 - Add a slider to "reverse arrow" here: 01:49:457 (white tick) and the end here: 01:50:057
03:11:357 - The slider ends in: 03:11:657
03:12:257 - Add a note and New combo
03:12:857 - New combo.

Brave Heart
This difficulty has a long way ~ :c
HP Drain Rate + 1
Overall Difficulty + 1
You put many streams unnecessary making the wrong play.
03:51:257 - That part was the least rate is. ~
Kanari
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Kanari
Thank you for your mod ^^
Konei
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Konei
From modding Queue


Told I only want diff which are shorter than 3 mins :/ But because it's you I will mod 2 Diffs of them



Black = advice

blue = very recommend you to follow

red = unrankable



Shy Heart

00:57:757 (1) snap slider on same ticks (red, red/white, white)

01:36:857 (1) add finish at slider beginning?

01:45:980 (1) ^

01:56:366 (1) on slider end finish?

02:25:032 (1) remove NC and add finish?


Kind Heart


OD + 1

00:47:057 (1) Slider end whistle?

00:48:998 (3) ^

01:36:903 (1) Finish? IMO it fits great to emphasize the Kiai time

01:41:075 (1) ^

01:46:590 (2) finish at slider beginning

01:53:780 (1) ^

01:54:500 (2) ^

02:05:643 (1) ^

02:10:457 (3) ^


So, that's what I found :)

Very beautiful song - good luck to your map :D
Kanari
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Kanari
I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<
Konei
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Konei

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

doesn't change the rule :lol:

But no problem :) Good luck
Konei
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Konei

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

Double post - sry >.>
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Hey!

General

  1. Firstly, change offset to 29645 (it's not perfect, but it should be around this one D:)
    Don't forget to resnap all notes and move your sections too.
  2. Also, default clap sounds very very bad. Try this one: link. For me it sounds more better.
  3. 01:56:057 - end second kiai here.
Shy Heart

  1. 00:29:657 (1) - remove clap from the beginning
  2. 00:37:457 (2,3) - looks and plays bad (you used 1/2 in such a easy Easy D:). Make this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:38:657 (1,2) - I don't like how you missed downbeat (yes, there should be downbeat, change offset and you'll see it C:). So, try this:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:57:557 (1) - finish to the end
  5. 01:07:757 (1) - no-no-no, start it from 01:08:057 - and finish on 01:08:657 -
  6. 01:09:257 (2) - missed clap in the end
  7. 01:12:857 (1) - remove clap from beginning
  8. 01:14:057 (2) - missed clap
  9. 01:15:257 (1) - remove clap from beginning D:
  10. 01:17:657 (4) - finish?
  11. 01:18:257 - quite strange choice of break time. Map this part.
  12. 01:30:257 - ^ as you have 2 notes and then one more break. Quite irrationally.
  13. 01:34:757 (1,2,3) - this red tick are hard to read. Make a slider from 01:35:057 - to 01:36:257 -
    SPOILER
  14. 01:36:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Use copypaste is bad >:O Try to make something unique! If not, make changes which I noticed earlier. Also,
    01:36:857 (1) - there should be clap on the end, not on the beginning
  15. 01:44:657 (2,3) - make slider, you remember. And don't forget about clap
  16. 01:45:857 (1) - remove clap, and again, missed downbeat. Fix it
  17. 01:53:657 (1) - clap to the end
  18. 02:00:257 (5) - extend to 02:00:857 - . Kick sliders are no-no.
  19. 02:05:657 (1) - clap should be on repeat, not on the beginning
  20. 02:09:857 (2) - clap
  21. 02:14:657 (2) - extend to 02:15:257 - (kick slider again)
  22. 02:19:457 (1) - start it from 02:18:857 -
  23. 02:20:657 - and then add a note here
  24. 02:21:857 (3,1) - transform it to the slider:
    SPOILER
    Maybe map till 03:32:057 - ? As Normal.
    Also, you have sloooooooowwwwwww slider velocity and little spacing. That makes your map quite inaccurate. Try to use 1,0x spacing
Kind Heart

  1. I must say that your claps are sometimes off. For example, 00:32:657 (4) - here should be clap, but it's here 00:33:257 (6) - and so on. Please, put claps on every second beat (as in music). I won't notice this again.
  2. Again, wide your spacing to 1,0x?
  3. 00:29:657 (1) - remove clap
  4. 00:37:757 (6) - I don't like how 00:36:857 (5) - overlaps almost half of this slider. It bad for players and looks bad :<
  5. 00:58:457 (1) - finish?
  6. 01:02:957 (1) - maybe remove this note? Too many 1/2 objects D:
  7. 01:07:607 - You prefer strange places for breaks. Map this break, please.
  8. 01:17:357 (1,2,3,4) - nononono, use this rhythm:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:23:657 (5) - make 1/1 repeat slider. And remove 01:24:857 (1) -
  10. 01:41:957 (3) - you see, it touches 01:41:057 (1) - and it looks ugly :<
  11. 01:48:557 (5,6,7,8,9) - make this:
    SPOILER
  12. 02:00:857 (1) - end spinner on 02:02:657 -
  13. 02:08:057 (1,3) - hey, make it symmetrical!
  14. 02:14:057 (1) - remove finish
  15. 02:19:457 (1) - remove this spinner D:
  16. 02:22:457 (2,3) - nooooo make repeat slider:
    SPOILER
  17. 02:35:057 - map this break.
  18. 02:43:457 (1,2,3) - stack them all or unstack them
  19. 02:54:557 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe make longer zigzag:
    SPOILER
    It will be more readable
  20. 03:01:157 (1,2) - remove this notes. It will be good pause. Also, objects with the 1/2 distance after spinner in easy-normals are VERY bad.
  21. 03:11:357 (7) - you remember? 00:37:757 (6) -
  22. 03:20:057 (1,2,3) - this looks really bad, and (1) overlaps repeat arrow and makes it almost hidden. Rearrange them.
  23. 03:23:057 (1,2,3) - stack them or unstack all
  24. 03:24:257 (4,5,6) - and it's better to unstack it, as you have repeat slider
  25. 03:27:257 (1,1) - look, make this:
    SPOILER
    Spinner starts 03:30:257 - here.
Brave Heart

  1. Again, remember my suggestion about hitsounds. Put claps on every 2nd beat, pleaseee.
  2. 00:56:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe try this?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:08:057 (2) - maybe rearrange it so that it would not overlap 01:06:857 (5) - ? As it quite hard to read
  4. 01:15:857 (2,3,4) - move it some grids right so that they wouldn't be overlapped by 01:15:257 (1) - :\
  5. 01:17:657 (1) - ^
  6. 01:17:807 - whyyyy you have such strange breaks? D: Map it!
  7. 01:29:657 - ^
  8. 01:36:857 (1) - remove finish from the end
  9. 01:45:257 (1) - finish to the end
  10. 01:50:657 (1) - ^
  11. 01:56:057 (1) - ^ to the beginning
  12. 02:07:307 (1) - wait wait, this slider is hidden! >:O
  13. 02:07:757 (2) - ^
  14. 02:15:257 (6) - change clap to finish and then remove all claps from this part 02:15:257 ~ 02:21:257
  15. 02:25:457 ~~~ - claps?
  16. 02:48:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reduce this jumps, they don't fit
  17. 02:53:657 (1) - change clap to finish
  18. 03:03:257 (1) - ^
  19. 03:22:457 - end kiai here. And maaaap this break, huh?!
  20. 04:02:057 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - naaah, separate them
  21. 04:12:257 (1) - make normal speed. I don't feel speed up here
  22. 04:46:457 (7) - new combo
  23. 05:00:857 (4,5) - stack them as you have so tiny spacing D:
  24. 05:07:757 (7) - remove finish
Not bad. But you should work more! Good luck!
Kanari
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Kanari
Thank you !
I'll fix everything soon ><
Flask
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Flask
Request From IRC >w< (or queue xD)

Crystal Crystal :D
[General]
well , some rhythm are bad ._. i don't want to point every and my bad Englishso i'll teach you :D
< try it
this is just basic , but it works on this map
[Shy]
00:48:845 (3) - add Finish at the end
00:59:645 (3) - remove clap at the beginning
01:07:445 (x) - add a note here because of the rhythm
01:09:245 (2) - spacing
01:34:445 (1,1) -
see ? (1) is behind 300 , please move it somewhere so the newbie player won't get confuse !
01:41:045 (2,3) - spacing
02:00:995 (1) - start on 02:01:145 -
02:14:045 (1,2) -

These 2 hit objects are behind "押忍" , please move it to some where .

[Kind Heart]
00:32:645 (4,5,6) - spacing
00:37:745 (6) - ^
00:47:345 (2) - spacing
01:01:145 (4) - spacing
02:17:795 (x) - add a break
02:22:145 (1) - behind "押忍"
03:04:445 (4) - spacing
03:06:845 (7) - spacing

[Collab]
00:56:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - something weird , try this
01:06:545 (4) - put on 308,248
02:02:645 (3) - touch the life bar x_x
02:06:695 (6) - ugly x_x

(6) is too high when testing , and it's messy on this part (5,6,1,1,2)
02:18:845 (3) - spacing
02:26:645 (4) - a few part overlaps on (3)
04:02:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - don't do this , it will make players confuse
04:48:395 (2,3) - touch the life bar x_x


That's all :D good luck for PonPonCrystal :D
Star!
Kanari
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Kanari
PonPonAy <3
Thank you ~
Athena Tennos
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Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~


[Shy Heart]
01:05:645 (1,2) - a little close....·~
01:08:045 (1,2) - ^
01:44:645 (2,3) - ^~
01:57:845 (3,4,5) - distance not uniform~
02:21:845 (2,1) - a little close~
02:23:045 (2,1) - alignment~

[Kind Heart]
00:35:645 (3,4,5) - distance not uniform~
01:41:645 - nc?
01:41:945 - remove nc?~
03:23:645 - nc?~
03:24:845 - nc?~

[]
00:30:845 - nc?~

00:34:745 - delete note?~
00:34:895 - add note?~
00:35:945 (6) - move to 00:36:095 - >?~just suggestion~
00:38:645 - remove nc?~
00:40:445 - to 00:42:095 - vocal a little strange~i have suggestion~maybe u can change like~~~~if u dont like ~just ignore it~xD
SPOILER
01:03:245 (2,3,4) - maybe u can keep to uniform distance~

02:20:045 - nc?~
02:21:245 - remove nc?~
02:22:445 - nc?~

02:39:545 (3,5) - hmm~~~just put more beautiful~like~
SPOILER

03:53:045 - tp 03:58:145 - vocal....is .........i feel no good....but idk how to change it......i think u can make like04:01:445 - to 04:05:645 - ......

04:41:345 - remove nc~
04:41:795 - nc~
04:46:445 - ^~

that's all~
nice song~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~xD
Kanari
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Kanari
Thannnkyhuu A-tann ~ >w<
Chewin
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Chewin
Hi, from my queue.
I will skip 1 diff to be correct with my queue's rules sorry

[General]
Offset: 845 is better

[Shy Heart]
00:37:445 (2) - Add whislte on the head and remove finish and whistle from the end. It fits better
00:38:645 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:245 (2) - Add NC and finish on the head
00:43:445 (1) - This slider: 00:46:445 (1) is too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff. To fix this you just have to reduce the spinner bye 1/1, and so: 00:45:245
00:48:245 (3) - This finish sounds too loud. Remove it and whistle is ok since it fits very good this part
01:34:445 (1) - Whistle on this slider's end
01:44:645 (2,3) - 1/2 slider with repeat would be easier:

01:45:845 (1) - You should reduce this slider so you can use a finish hitsound on the long white tick. Use this rhythm it's better:

01:50:645 (1) - This follows better since you should to use a circle on 01:50:645 to follow the voice:

01:56:645 (2) - Whiste on the tail for consistency
02:10:445 (1) - Reduce this spinner by 1/1 since the next circle is too soon from it
02:15:395 (1) - ^

[Kind Heart]
01:08:045 I'd add a circle with clap here
01:37:745 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:045 (1) - ^
01:46:445 (1) - ^
01:47:045 (1) - ^
02:03:545 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - Why so much new combos °-° Useless, remove some of them.
02:20:045 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for a Normal. Remove this circle plz
03:06:845 (7) - Distance snap
03:10:445 (6) - New combo

That's all, good luck ;3
Kanari
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Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~ ^^
Yu-Izanagi-12
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Yu-Izanagi-12
Hi

[Brave Heart]

00:28:900 Remove New Color
00:28:600 to 00:30:700 instead of all whistle put claps on red ticks has a better feel to it
02:00:400 New Color
02:04:600 ^

that's about it Nice Song
and good luck in the ranking :)
Kanari
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Kanari
Thannkyouu ~
itank
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Joined May 2009
itank
EDIT: Here comes the English Ver. Sorry for my bad english.
HI，M4M


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All in all
Nice song .Good speed for my bad play skill 　＞　＜

lets talk about EASY .
【shy heart】

00:35:200 this slider and next slider's overlap is hard for new player to read.and the slider1 turns back 3 times, it seams new player cant handle it too. Maybe you can map this part like this?(the slider turns back one time, the screenshot didnt show it.)

SPOILER

01:02:800 (2) note2's distance is a little bit far from Prev.

01:21:700 (3) remove this note

01:22:000 (4) I dont like to say it,but maybe too hard for new player? my suggestion is that change the slider into notes
seems looks good like this
SPOILER

01:54:700 a note after spinner is hard for new player too. but it matches the song,just wait till other points it out.Maybe it is oK for easy.

02:15:400 (1,3) 和 02:16:000 (1,2,3) too many overlaps is hard for newplayer（I hate to say itT T）

02:42:700 (2,4) FOR EASY it is too hard. Is this a normal diff ?（if it is not, how about change it to a normal diff?）

04:39:400 (1,3) ^

04:40:300 Add finish instead of whistle,seems better for me.


Just ignore my "new player blah blah blah" i know its annoying ;)


Let talk about HARD
【Brave heart】


00:07:000 (2,3) suggest to remove NOTE3 ,and change note2 to a slider ends at red line(00:07:300)

00:10:300 (5) remove Slider 5 then directly put a note on 00:10:600

02:10:900 (1) change the slider into notes feels better?

03:38:650 (1,2) 和 03:39:550 (3,4) how about add a note between two sliders?

SPOILER
03:47:350 (6) remove this note

04:20:650 (1,2) feel a little strange here,the rhythm starts from 04:20:800. suggest to remove SLIDER1 and make SLIDER2 start from 04:20:800

04:40:300 remove the NOTE,let the slider turns back one more time , add finish instead whistle


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All in all again ,HARD is fun to play， good luck!~ hope it can be RANKed soon

BAD MOD，and bad english， all for suggestions. if u dont like just ignore :)
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wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
:3
M4M
中文mod
[General]
first kiai is so fast,use short kiai is butter
[shy hrart]
Feel straight, some idea for looking.
00:10:300 (6,7) - 00:11:200 (7) - NC? and direction 6→7is bad for looking,6→7→1 is hard find the direction
00:31:000 (1) - end at 00:32:200 is butter
SPOILER
00:50:500 (2) - straight feel bad,00:50:500 (2,3,4,1) ,Crowding in the lower left corner
SPOILER
00:52:300 (1) - :roll: like my do in img,change rhythm is butter
SPOILER
01:10:300 (3,4,5) - all get a little up
SPOILER
01:14:200 (2,3,4) -^ a little down
SPOILER
01:28:300 (1) - remove NC
01:54:700 (1) - remove 1，rule say not fast start note after in easily diff
02:05:800 (4) - ctrl+h and ctrl+g
SPOILER
02:49:600 (6) - NC
02:57:400 (1) - on the right is better,on the left is too crowded
03:58:000 - 03:59:200 this 2 4white line use clap vol of tick sound:roll:
[Brave Heart]
00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - too crowded
00:13:000 (3) - remove one of white Point
SPOILER
00:15:400 (5,6) - like my do in img,5 end in blue line seem butter
SPOILER
00:28:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so bad.not follow music, like me do in img
SPOILER
00:45:100 (1) - not good foe look,move the red point
SPOILER
00:50:200 (1) - no need back,lower right corner is too crowded
01:20:200 (1,2,3) - you do it hardly read 3, I think 3start→1end→2start get a line is butter
SPOILER
01:39:400 (1) - remove NC
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - anti-clockwise is butter
01:55:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - ??，no follow music
SPOILER
02:30:700 (2,3,4) - two side of red point ,on one arc
SPOILER
02:40:600 (1,2) - short slider not good use covered,a little far of 1 start→1end
02:41:800 (4,5) - ^
03:23:800~03:52:300 - :? don't know how too mod
04:01:600 (1) - middle tick have clap vol
04:03:400 (3) - ^
end - in my img,follow music
SPOILER
last kiai? soft song not need so straight

good luck and star
Kanari
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Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyou! >w<
sunshy_old
141 posts
Joined July 2012
sunshy_old
haii~~(?

[General]

all looks fine

[Brave Heart]

01:02:800 - i think this break is unnecessary...maybe you can fill it

01:10:900 (2,3,4,5) - this fixs the vocal better~
SPOILER

01:17:200 (2) - i prefer this
SPOILER

01:20:650 - add note?

02:10:150 (2,3,4) - feels uncomfortable.. try 4 notes?

02:29:200 (4,5,6,7) - why not like 02:28:000 (1,2,3) - ?

02:31:900 (5,6) - this..a little strange. try just
SPOILER

02:37:900 (3) - move
SPOILER

03:05:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - xD
SPOILER

03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try make it more good-looking

03:49:150 (3,4,5,6) - ^

03:59:050 - add note?

04:01:600 (1,3) - oh...it's lazy

04:20:200 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this may be better?
SPOILER

04:20:800 (1) - nc

04:25:600 (1) - this
SPOILER

[Shy Heart]

oh...because this is 2☆ so you'd better follow the DS....open AImod to adjust spacing

i don't know how to mod easy diff ;w;

00:35:800 (1) - please no stack

there are some silders which are too long..such as
01:40:600 (1) -
02:04:000 (2,4) -
02:21:400 (4) -
03:57:400 (2) -
04:07:000 (3) -

02:27:100 (1,1) - why nc?

03:38:800 (4) - plz no stack

star and good luck x3
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Kanari
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Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannnkyouu sunshyy ~ <3 >w<
SC-DrawerX3
76 posts
Joined March 2012
SC-DrawerX3
M4M~

[Brave Heart]

00:07:450 (3) - move to 00:07:300
00:29:650 (4,5) - maybe move to a diffrent place?
00:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is so alone q.q maby map the next Break?
01:25:900 (1) - RNC
01:26:500 (2) - NC
01:43:000 (1,4) - remove whistle
01:50:200 (3) - Maybe remove finish or just make it a bit lower
01:56:200 (3,4) - make a symmetrical square
03:26:200 (1) - RNC

[Shy Heart]

00:40:900 Nooo don't make a break here
02:07:150 - ^
02:39:400 (7) - remove finish or make it lower?
02:50:200 (1) - clap

Good luck :3
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
m4m from your queue
General[/color
The placement is NICE already!


01:22:000 (3) clap at the beginning
Maybe add three notes between the two spinners? at01:50:800 , 01:51:400 and01:52:000
03:01:900 (3) end at03:02:200 and make 03:02:800 (1) start at03:02:500
04:19:000 (6) clap at hte end, instead of finish and, add finish at 04:20:800 (1) 's end

Brave Heart
00:29:650 the notes here is kind of……hmm, confusing. Maybe make it fit the song better, it's up to you
Maybe move the finish sound from01:21:400 (3) 's end to01:23:200 (1) 's end
02:33:400 (1) remove the finish sound at its end
Maybe the KIAI should end at02:54:401 ?
04:25:600 change the placement like this may fit the vocal better http://puu.sh/1nPeb

And good luck~as newbie mappers ^_^ I love this song.
Kanari
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Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyou ~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
~ Mod again!

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. There's no Title/Artist Unicode in both diff (check the notepad). Added it.
  2. Inconsistency in kiai times: It's not really need to fix since it's different on collab diff, but if you change it would be great :3
    AIBat
    Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
    - [Brave Heart] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 02:55:000
    Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000
    - [Shy Heart] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 03:04:000 (I think 02:55:000 - would be great imo :\)
    Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000
[Shy Heart]
  1. Check this!
    AIBat again
    Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    04:25:670 - snap to 04:25:600
    04:28:670 - snap to 04:28:600
  2. 00:10:300 (6) - (end) Finish is really weird here. Remove it and add whistle since I don't here any finish sounds in the music.
  3. 01:13:000 (3) - ^
  4. 01:17:800 (3) - ^
  5. 01:21:400 (2) - ^
  6. 02:39:400 (7) - ^
  7. 02:43:000 (5) - (begin) ^
  8. 04:04:000 (5) - (end) ^
  9. 04:19:000 (6) - (end) ^
  10. 00:30:100 (1) - Remove this? Not a very good start after this break. (Or you can make a reserve slider with 00:30:400 (2) - would be great, too :3)
  11. 00:31:000 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit weird imo, I can't explain why ;; so try mine?
  12. 00:35:800 (1) - (reserve) Where's clap ;;?
  13. 01:26:200 (1) - (end) ^
  14. 03:08:800 (2) - (end) ^
  15. 03:38:800 (4) - (begin) ^
  16. 03:40:000 (5) - ^
  17. 00:37:600 (2) - (begin) clap. And I'd suggest you to make it straight ._.
  18. 00:40:600 (6) - Finish please!
  19. 04:20:800 (1) - (end) ^
  20. 00:51:700 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm weird again ;_; Try this
  21. 00:56:200 (7,1) - Delete (1) and 1/4 longer to (7) is better than now. Reserve on the blue tick is really strange!
  22. 01:16:000 (1) - Remove NC?
  23. 01:22:000 (3) - That 1/4 slider is a bit hard to the newbies since your SV is low, and this is the easiest diff in your map ._. so 1/4 longer and remove (4) would be best :3
  24. 01:23:200 (1) - Ehh, add a note here and move this spinner to 01:23:800 - (end at the same time). Because you do this at 00:16:000 (1,1) - something ;n;
  25. 01:52:600 (1) - I'd suggest you to remove this and put a break here. 2 spinners here seems a bit empty ._.
  26. 02:01:000 (1) - Unfit spinner. Changed like this would be better imo D:
  27. 02:04:000 (2,4) - These slider is a bit ugly. Remake it by using the slider after osu! update?
  28. 02:07:150 - Well just a suggest: map something here? It's mappable and shouldn't break here._.
  29. 02:27:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These NCes is a bit messy to newbies. Suggest remove nc at 02:27:700 (1) -
  30. 02:55:600 (1,2,1) - Remove nc at (1) first, then if you want to make overlaps part, just overlap these notes. Or you can place them to a straight line.
  31. 02:56:800 (2,3,1) - ^
  32. 03:02:500 (1) - Should begin at 03:02:800 - since the vocal appear on that time, not on the red tick.
  33. 04:03:700 (4) - Remove this? Seems that 1/1 works on this parttern, not 1/2.
    This diff is rankable now o-o!! But needs some more nazi/suggest on your slider and placement though.
[Brave Heart]
  1. Crystal's Part
  2. 00:05:800 (3) - Same thing at Shy heart. So remove finish.
  3. 00:10:300 (5) - (end) ^
  4. 00:07:450 (3,4) - It's better if you overlap these 2, it would be more like stream here.
  5. 00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place like this since it's stream here. What you've done is like 1/2 imo ._.
  6. 00:29:050 (2,3,4) - This parttern is extremely confused due to the notes at blue tick, a bit unreadable since we're talking about Hard diff. Use a 1/2 reserve slider to instead these notes please.
  7. 00:32:800 (3) - (begin,end) Missing clap!
  8. 00:34:300 (4) - Remove clap since there's no clap sound.
  9. 00:37:900 (1) - ^
  10. 01:59:200 (4) - (end) ^
  11. 00:50:200 (1) - Place on somewhere else? I hate overlaps ;; but it's up2u owo
  12. 01:02:350 - You should map here, break is unfit imo owo
  13. 02:10:900 (1,3) - Make their shape same please
  14. 03:08:200 (1) - Remove a reserve? It's better imo D:
  15. 03:19:000 - Break start at here please
  16. 04:01:600 (1) - Just suggestion. It's a bit empty at the downbeat if you make an 2/1 slider here o3o, so maybe change to 2 1/1 sliders? Don't forget to add finish on the downbeat if you except this~
  17. 04:06:400 (1) - Again, a 1/2 slider at 04:06:400 - then move spinner to 04:07:000 -
  18. 04:37:900 (1,2) - Swap NC?
  19. Sun Rainbow's Part
  20. 01:17:800 (3) - (end) Remove clap please. Clap is unfit here!
  21. 01:37:000 (3) - ^
  22. 01:46:600 (2) - ^
  23. 02:31:450 (3) - ^
  24. 02:31:900 (5,6) - (reserves) ^
  25. 02:31:600 (4) - Missing clap.
  26. 02:35:200 (3) - ^
  27. 01:21:400 (3) - Remove finish. There's no finish sound here.
  28. 01:44:800 (4) - Clap at begin&end, then whistle at reserve (if you want)
  29. 02:46:900 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest you to add note at 02:46:900 - then move (1,2,3) 1/2 later (Remove (3)'s one reserve). Fits the vocal o3o
  30. Reed R Gale's Part
    Huge Hitsound mod!!
    1. Fix these b4 fix anything in this part.
    2. 03:23:800 (1) - (end) Remove clap.
    3. 03:24:400 (1) - (begin) clap.
    4. 03:24:850 (2) - (begin) Remove clap.
    5. 03:26:650 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    6. 03:27:550 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    7. 03:28:000 (4) - clap
    8. 03:28:450 (6,1) - Remove clap
    9. 03:29:200 (3) - (begin) clap
    10. 03:29:200 (3) - (end) remove clap
    11. 03:30:100 (5) - (end) remove clap
    12. 03:31:000 (1) - (end) Soft-sound here, no Normal-sound.
    13. 03:33:100 (1) - ^
    14. 03:33:100 (1) - (begin) Remove finish.
    15. 03:33:100 (1) - (end) Remove clap, add finish.
    16. 03:34:600 (3,6) - Remove clap
    17. 03:35:500 (7) - (end)Soft-sound, remove finish.
    18. 03:36:400 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    19. 03:37:150 (8) - Soft sound.
    20. 03:37:450 (10) - (begin) Remove finish
    21. 03:38:350 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    22. 03:39:250 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    23. 03:39:700 (4) - (end) Remove finish
    24. 03:40:150 (1) - (begin) Remove finish
    25. 03:40:600 (2) - (body) Remove whistle
    26. 03:40:600 (2) - (begin) Remove finish
    27. 03:41:200 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    28. 03:41:650 (2) - remove clap
    29. 03:43:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    30. 03:43:450 (2) - (reserve) clap
    31. 03:43:450 (2) - (end) Remove clap
    32. 03:43:900 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    33. 03:44:650 (5) - Remove finish.
    34. 03:44:800 (1) - (end)Soft-sound, Remove finish
    35. 03:45:400 (1) - (begin) Soft-sound
    36. 03:45:850 (2) - (reserve) clap
    37. 03:46:300 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    38. 03:46:750 (4) - (begin) Soft-sound
    39. 03:47:200 (5) - Clap
    40. 03:49:300 (4) - Remove clap
    41. 03:49:450 (5) - Soft-sound
    42. 03:49:600 (6) - Remove finish
    43. 04:11:800 (1) - Finish, remove whistle
    44. 04:12:100 (3) - Soft-sound
    45. 04:12:700 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    46. 04:13:150 (2) - (begin) Remove clap
    47. 04:13:600 (3) - Remove finish, add clap.
    48. 04:13:900 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    49. 04:14:800 (2) - (begin) clap
    50. 04:14:800 (2) - (reserve) Normal-sound
    51. 04:15:850 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    52. 04:16:600 (3) - (reserve) Remove clap
    53. 04:17:050 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    54. 04:17:800 (1) - Soft-sound
    55. 04:18:250 (4) - Remove clap
    56. 04:18:550 (5) - (begin) Remove clap
    57. 04:19:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    58. 04:19:900 (5) - Soft-sound
    59. 04:20:200 (6) - Remove finish
    60. 04:20:650 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    61. 04:21:400 (3) - (begin) soft-sound, finish
    62. 04:22:150 (5) - (end) remove clap
    63. 04:22:600 (6) - (begin,end) Remove clap
    64. 04:23:500 (8) - soft-sound
    65. 04:24:100 (3) - (begin) soft-sound
    66. 04:24:100 (3) - (end) clap
    67. 04:24:700 (5) - Remove finish
    68. 04:25:000 (6) - Soft-sound, remove finish
    69. 04:25:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound, remove finish
    70. 04:28:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound
  31. 03:24:400 (1) - Remove NC, this nc is not really need imo
  32. 03:31:900 (3) - 2 reserves is boring, remove 2 reserves and add a 1/2 slider at 03:32:500 - maybe?
  33. 03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream's placement is very un-flow. Try this or something else.
  34. 03:44:650 (5,1) - Spacing...
  35. 03:44:800 (1) - Please Remove this sv change here. Realllllly Reallllllly unfit.
  36. 03:49:900 (1) - Maybe a jump to confirm the rhythm (1/2)? Hard to read without it ;;
  37. 04:14:800 (2) - Change to a 1/2 slider?
  38. 04:15:850 (1) - Remove this and add a note at 04:16:000 - since there's no sound at blue tick.
  39. 04:20:650 (1) - ^ (add note at downbeat)
  40. 04:16:600 (3) - Pretty messy part, so maybe rotate 90° this
  41. 04:20:950 (2) - This slider is really ugly than others.
  42. 04:25:600 (1) - end at downbeat to fit with vocal
  43. Really needs work in this collab part. Really needs.
Good luck Crystal! You don't need to reply this but I wish you could change the hole things I mentioned .w.
*Notice: check this modpost when you have enough time. I put so many hitsound mods at Reed R Gale's part, and I think you fix the hole diff by yourself -w-
~
Breeze
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Breeze
[General]

  1. Mp3 is bad quality, consider changing a better one, and you cut this song in a odd place :/ Here is the full ver. mp3, and better quality, if you use this mp3, set offset to 375
My mod is based on your mp3

[Sky Heart]

  1. 03:11:200 (5) - Missing a clap here?
  2. 04:25:600 (5) - ^
Breeze
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Breeze
Call me back for a full mod when you changed mp3
Breeze
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
Do not kudos this post since I have already got 1

[General]

  1. Set preview point to 00:29:175?
  2. Maybe you should map the very beginning part, it's a little weird start at 00:29:175
[Shy Heart]

  1. 02:49:575 (7) - NC this spinner
  2. 01:05:775 (4) - Missing clap here?
  3. 01:33:375 (2) - ^
  4. 01:33:975 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, you can try use normal hitsound here, 60%-80% volume
  5. 01:40:575 (1) - Clap?
  6. 02:00:375 (1) - Clap instead of whistle
  7. 02:54:975 (2) - Clap?
  8. 02:57:975 (1) - End with normal hitsound would be better, also, 60%-80% volume
  9. 03:27:975 (2) - Slider head, add finish, 03:28:875 (3) slider end, add finish, so that fit 03:21:975, 03:23:175, 03:24:375
  10. 05:05:175 (2,4) - I don't think finish sound fit here very well, music here is quiet, using whistle or just leave them empty would be better
[Brave Heart]

  1. 00:43:575 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, remove it would be better
  2. 00:56:025 (1) - Why NC here?
  3. 01:44:175 (2) - A reverse slider here feel kinda odd, a no reverse slider seems better and fit music more
  4. 02:14:775 - 02:24:075 - Finish sound doesn't fit in this quiet part imo, considering use whistle or leave them empty
  5. 02:34:575 (1) - Missing a clap?
  6. 02:59:775 - Add a note here with clap so that fit the music
  7. 03:00:375 (1) - Try normal hitsound to slider head?
  8. 03:51:375 (1) - Why NC?
  9. 04:06:675 (4) - (nazi) End point 1 grid up so that it's parallel to other 3 sliders before it
  10. 04:11:775 (1) - Unreasonable jump :/
  11. 04:59:475 - 05:07:275 - Well, I'm still feel finish sound doesn't fit in this part, just personal feeling
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyou ~
Changed everything except normal hitsounds
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Hi Crystal~ :D
random F2 of this song ww

Nishino Kana<3

[overall]
I think it's a litte too many rest time in this...:<

[Shy Heart]

03:41:175 (1)- so looooooong spin OAO"3
04:15:975 (4,1)- maybe so far :/

[Brave Heart]

00:35:475 (6)- maybe change to: 00:35:625- add a note and slider 00:35:775- to 00:36:075- (like 00:34:425 (3,4)- )
00:36:525 (2)- dele this?
00:42:375 (4)- no slider here change to note?
00:57:075 (5)- end in 00:57:375-
01:05:025 (2)- maybe not so straight line (with 1.3)
01:12:075 (1)- add a note in 01:12:075- silder start in 01:12:375- ?(long white line~)
01:17:175 (1)- hide here isn't good when open hidden mod ;3...
01:40:275 (2,3,4)- not so straight ..?
01:44:775 (3)- not repeat here, isn't fit >_<
02:03:825 (2)- no this maybe o.o
02:34:575 (1)- not repeat too..?
02:47:475- note here~ empty
02:59:775- ^
03:02:775 (1)- change slider ?
03:22:275- to 03:32:175- not rest in your kiai time >_<
03:34:875- has vocal here~
03:50:775- to last :your slider stack half so many o_oa? i think it's no good that way :/

good luck >w< ganbatte~!
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hey M4M :)

Shy Heart

00:38:175 (7,1,2,3) - Place it right next to the preview sliderstart at the left side, it fits much better and easier to see
00:42:975 (1) - , 03:16:575 (1) - , 03:23:175 (1) - , 03:24:375 (1) - Combo really needed?
02:54:675 (1) - , 02:55:275 (1) - Remove new combo and add a new combo here 02:55:575 (2) -
04:10:275 (5,1) - These are hard to see, place them a bit up?

Brave Heart

00:31:575 (1) - , 03:20:775 (1,1) - , 03:36:375 (1) - , 04:11:775 (1) - ,04:17:475 (1) - , 04:33:375 (1) - , 04:41:325 (1) - , 04:57:375 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:575 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H them? it looks better imo and plays better
00:37:125 - This end of the slider doesnt fit together with the vocal
00:56:325 (3,4,5,6) - I got REALLY confused at this part when playing, try to make it more easier to read
01:17:175 (1) - You cant see this circle good when playing, place it besides?
01:48:375 (4) - This slider is also hard to see at the beginning, try to move it abit more up
01:54:975 (1) - New combo really needed?
02:06:075 (5) - New combo remove next
02:18:075 (1) - Remove combo and add one at the next slider
02:57:675 (2) - I cant get good with this slider, you map with the vocal, and this slider doesnt fit the vocal
03:50:775 (1,2) - You follow the rythm and then suddenly at (3) you change to something else, this part is abit confusing, especially 03:52:725 (4) - , try change it into something what fits the rythm,same at 03:53:625 (1,2,3) - , 03:55:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
04:03:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - You cant here one bit of a sliderbeat in the BG music, why stream? , it breaks the whole mappingstyle and song so far and absolutely doesnt fit at all // this one 04:20:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - fits but not the other one
04:26:925 (1,2,3,4) - , 04:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream also doesnt fit, it breaks the song
04:52:575 (1) - The vocal ends at 04:53:175 - not 04:53:475 - here

Overall its almost rankable, try to change what i said at least, i tolarated a bit more than usual :)
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
From my queue~
sorry for late ;(

SPOILER
Shy Heart
02:54:675 (1) - delete NC
02:55:275 (1) - ^
02:55:575 (2) - add NC
02:56:175 (1) - delete NC
03:28:875 (3) - make parallel slider with 03:27:975 (2) - this? -nazi
05:06:375 (3) - add finish on start?

Brave Heart
00:37:275 (5,6) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1LchG
01:27:675 (1) - x: 320 y: 164 ? flow and looks better imo
01:43:575 (1,2) - this is better for rhythm http://puu.sh/1Lckg
02:34:575 (1) - this is Hard diff ( maybe right? ) i think this slider feels little bit boring
02:53:775 (2,3,4) - try this http://puu.sh/1LcmM
03:11:175 (3) - make like 03:09:975 (1) - this looks better
03:16:575 (4) - NC here

Nice song lol good luck for rank! xD
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
GET MOD SLOT!~ lol :D
pw384
2,288 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
hi
mod request from forum-PM

[Brave Heart]
* 01:53:475 (1,2,3,4,5) -
Click to avoid getting eaten
01:53:475 (1) - 164,114
01:53:775 (2) - 235,63
01:54:075 (3) - 305,114
01:54:375 (4) - 281,199
01:54:675 (5) - 192,200
01:54:975 (6) - 164,114
* 03:12:675 (4) - new combo
* 03:23:917 - it's not a good choice to put a break in kiai time
* 03:57:525 (7,8) - use 1/3 here e.g.
I'm an example
03:57:375
03:57:575
03:57:775
* 03:50:775 - imo the hitobjects in the rap part are off-beat e.g. 03:52:725 (4) - (a missing beat) plz fix them!
* 04:16:875 (7) - use 1/6. start at 04:16:875 - , end at 04:17:075 -
* ^btw SV changes here, so add a newcombo

good luck :)
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
hi, M4M

[Shy Heart]

I think overall finishes are a bit overused in this difficulty, try limiting their use to downbeats unless the music has a finish like sound at that part.

00:42:957(1)- remove this NC, doesn't really fit.
01:19:275 (1,2,3) - I think maybe this part would look better if it was more centered
01:42:975 (1) - remove the finish from the reverse
02:07:575 (1) - This would be better if it was symmetrical
02:09:975 (1) - ^
02:27:975 (1) - This spinner feels kind of random to me, I suggest mapping this part, or having it end at 02:29:175 - so that the spinner corresponds with her voice.
03:22:575 (1,2,1) - maybe replace this with a repeating 1/8 slider
03:23:175 (1) - if no to previous suggestion, remove NC here
03:23:775 (2) - NC
03:24:375 ( 8-) 1) - remove NC
03:27:975 (2) - replace finish at head with whistle
04:10:575 (1,2,3) - move (2,3) to the left more to make it more lined up with the curve formed by 1, right now the angle is too sharp I think
04:24:375 (2) - I'd like this to be more symmetrical as well
04:33:975 (3) - Make this more symmetrical
04:41:175 (3) - remove the finish from the end, maybe replace with a whistle, but the finish does not fit there.

I think overall finishes are a bit overused in this difficulty, try limiting their use to downbeats unless the music has a finish like sound at that part.


[Brave Heart]


Again, too many finishes in this difficulty. The music doesn't tell you to put that many in, so limit them to downbeats.

00:30:375 (4) - the overlap with this and 00:31:575 (1) - is a bit ugly, I'd suggest either have them stack or move further apart so they don't overlap.
00:36:375 (1,2,3,4) - This plays a bit oddly and the random spacing difference between (1,2,3) then (3,4) is odd. Make (4) spaced 1.26 like the others and maybe have it follow a curve set by (1,2,3), maybe something like this http://puu.sh/1VX2I
00:41:775 (1,2,3,4) - I'd have 4 further away from (1,2,3). Right now the spacing looks too similar even though the time difference is not. Space (4) 1.2x. Also, make the spacing between (1,2,3) the same, right now it is not consistent.
01:02:625 (2) - Make this symmetrical so it makes a nice blanket around 01:02:475 (1) -
01:03:975 (4) - ^
01:05:175 (3) - stack end with 01:06:375 (5) -
01:13:575 (3,4) - replace with just a repeating 1/8 slider
01:34:275 - reduce the volume here, there is no instrumental and the sliderslide noise is too loud for what is happening.
01:46:275 (4) - NC
01:47:175 (1) - remove NC
01:48:375 (4) - NC
02:11:775 (4,1,2) - ugly overlap between (4) and (2)
02:13:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please make this a perfect hexagon
02:34:575 (1) - Make this perfectly symmetrical, it will look a lot better.
02:46:875 (6,7,8) - Nazi, but make these perfectly spaced. I know its pretty close but I noticed it while playing. Maybe I'm weird.
02:47:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This would look better if these were just equilateral triangle patterns. Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/1VXkc
03:00:375 - Decrease volume here
03:21:975 - I really don't like this break being here. A break during a kiai time just doesn't seem right. You don't have a break here in the Easy diff, so you might as well map this part.
03:58:425 (2,3) - This overlap isn't very good looking. Moving 03:58:875 (3) - to (240,68) both looks and plays better to me.
04:09:975 (1) - Increase the BSD to 1/8 and increase the length by one tick. Do the same for 04:11:175 (4) - . I know that this causes overlap with the other parts, so you have to remap them. I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/1VXua. It fits the vocal part better IMO
04:12:375 (1) - Same idea as before, increase BSD to 1/8 and increase length of this slider by 1 tick.
04:16:575 (6,7) - Don't do this. This is extremely confusing because the distance makes it look like this time difference is the same as 04:16:125 (3,4,5,6) - . The SV decrease here also does not fit at all. Move that timing point to 04:17:775 - and make 04:16:875 (7) - the proper length.
04:42:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is just kind of messy to read and doesn't really fit either the music or the vocals. Try a rhythm like this if you want to keep those short slider parts. http://puu.sh/1VXCJ
04:52:575 - I don't think a SV decrease fits here. Remove that and remap to make slider lengths fit again.
04:59:475 - Decrease the volume here, too loud for this part.

That's all, good luck.
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
Hi
M4M from your queue~

[Shy Heart]

SPOILER
OD+1?
Decrease the volume please, the finishs are too noisy imo ><
00:32:775 (6) - Remove finish. There's nothing to follow
00:36:375 (5) - ^ in the begining of slider
00:37:275 (6) - ^ in the end of slider
00:41:175 (4) - ^ in the begining of slider
00:42:975 (1) - Remove whistle in the end of slider
01:18:675 (3,4,1) - It looks a bit confusing imo.
01:24:375 (1) - Remove finish or decrease the volume
01:33:975 (1) - Remove finish in the begining of slider. It's not fit with the vocal imo
01:39:975 (3) - ^
01:40:875 (x) - Add circle?
01:43:575 - Remove finish
01:44:775 (3) - ^
01:48:375 (2) - ^
01:49:575 - ^
02:14:775 (1) - Remove finish and add whistle or decrease the volume
02:21:975 (1) - Finish is not really fit here imo. Remove it
02:27:975 (1) - End the spinner at 02:29:175 and add circle at 02:29:775
02:48:375 (4) - Add whistle in the begining of slider. There's a piano sound
02:55:575 (1) - Remove finish
02:57:975 (1) - ^
03:38:775 (1) - Add whistle in the begining
04:58:275 (1) - Remove finish
05:04:875 (1) - Remove whistle and add whistle at 05:05:175 (2) and remove the finish after that, 05:06:375 (3) remove finish and whistle and then 05:07:275 (4) remove finish too. It's more fit with the atmosphere here imo.
Still need improvement on hitsound. Overusing the finish sound is not a good idea imo ><
Your placement is abit linear. But it's ok, maybe it's your style of mapping

[Brave Heart]

SPOILER
Decrease the volume please, same reason as normal. And I'm not going to mod hitsound here.
00:36:225 - Add a circle? I can hear the drums sound here
00:36:525 (2) - Remove circle? since there's nothing to follow
01:12:075 (1) - Not follow the vocal well. Change it to something like this? http://puu.sh/1VZSC
01:27:675 (1) - Why NC?
02:14:775 (6) - Start NC here to make more sense imo
02:31:125 (4) - Remove circle. There's nothing to follow imo
02:47:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The place is a bit random imo make it like this? http://puu.sh/1W0jM Note: Add circle at 02:49:575
02:57:675 (2) - Long slider doesn't really fit imo. Because 02:57:975 need something to be clicked(?) (i don't know how to say it ;_;)
03:21:975~03:32:475 - Why you not map this part? this part is on KIAI TIME it feels awkward if you don't map this part imo. and I think that's the epic part of this song. I love it :3~
04:16:875 (7,1,2) - Anti-jump is not reallly fit in this part imo
04:20:925 (2) - Remove this circle. I know this is the last part of this song but it's just make this diff overmapped imo
04:22:725 (3) - ^
04:23:475 - Add circle
04:26:925 (1) - Again,remove this circle
04:38:925 (2) - ^
04:52:575~05:04:575 - Make the distance between a circle larger. It's only make the player confuse imo ><
Again, this diff is overusing finish sounds it's not good idea imo >< Try to listen to the song again or learn from other peole's map and place the finish sound in the right place

That's it
Good luck :3
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
From your PM~~

[Shy Heart]
  1. 01:07:575 (7) remove finish
  2. 01:17:175 (1) ^
  3. 01:44:775 (3) ^
  4. 01:41:475 (3)
  5. 01:53:175 (1) remove finish
  6. 02:17:175 ^ and green line vol 60%→5%
  7. 02:32:775 (4) I prefer
    and add clap in 02:33:375
  8. 02:41:175 (1) remove finish
  9. 02:45:975 (1) ^
  10. 03:00:375 ^ and green line vol 60%→5%
  11. 03:02:775 green line vol 100%→75%
    finish is too noisy I feel D:
  12. 03:21:975 green line vol 100%→80%
  13. 03:48:375 remove finish and green line vol 90%→5%
  14. 04:02:775 (4) remove finish
  15. 04:12:375 (1) ^
  16. 04:14:775 (3) ^
  17. 04:17:175 (4) ^
  18. 04:23:175 (5) ^
  19. 04:26:775 (4) ^
  20. 04:31:575 (5) ^
  21. 04:36:375 (3) ^
  22. 04:41:175 (3) ^
  23. 04:45:975 (6) 04:47:175 (6) ^
  24. 04:50:775 (3) ^
  25. 04:55:575 (1) ^ and add finish here 04:57:975 (3)
  26. 05:02:775 remove finish and green line vol 55%→5%
[Brave Heart]
  1. 01:31:575 (1,2,3,4) DS?
  2. 01:41:175 (1) remove finish
  3. 01:57:975 (1) ^
  4. 02:00:375 (1) ^
  5. 02:09:975 (1) ^
  6. 02:26:775 (5) ^
  7. 02:37:875 (1) ctrl+G
  8. 02:41:175 (1) ^
  9. 02:48:375 (3) ^
  10. 03:00:375 (1) ^
  11. 03:48:375 ^ and green line vol 80%→5%
  12. 04:14:175 (5) ^
  13. 04:26:775 (5) ^
  14. 05:00:375 (4) ^
  15. 05:02:775 (9) ^
too many finishhhhhh DDD-:
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
Hi :)

Modded as I promised :3

Shy Heart
00:39:375 (2) - Remove the whistle at slider repeat and add it to the slider finish.
01:17:475 (2) - Add whistle at slider end.
01:18:675 (3) - Remove whistle.
01:30:375 (3) - Sound better if you remove the whistle in slider repeat and add whistle in slider start and end :3
01:31:575 (1) - Add whistle at slider end.
02:25:575 (2) - Add whistle.
02:26:775 (4) - Add whistle
02:29:775 (7) - Add clap.
03:03:975 (4) - Remove the finish at slider end and add a whistle.
03:06:075 (6) - Remove whistle
03:06:375 (7) - That finish is too loud. Change it for a whistle.
03:06:975 (1) - Loud finish. Reduce the volume or remove it.
03:09:975 (5) - ^
03:10:875 (6) - ^
03:14:775 (4) - ^
03:15:975 (6) - ^
03:32:775 (1) - Add whistle at slider start.
04:13:575 (2) - Add whistle.
04:20:775 (2) - Add whistle at slider start.
04:58:275 (1) - Remove finish. Keep the whistle.

Brave Heart
00:56:325 (3,5) - Add whistle.
02:22:575 (2,3,4) - That claps doesn' fit. Remove them.
03:00:375 (1) - Remove the clap at slider repeat.
03:37:575 (2,3) - Add whistle.
04:05:775 (2) - Add whistle at slider start.
04:16:875 (7) - Spacing.
04:43:575 (2) - ^
04:44:325 (4) - Remove clap at slider end.

I love this song.
Great map, good luck :)

And if you like i can make a hard diff :3
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank your for mods ~
The collab diff is already a hard diff, and I don't want to add any more diffs since it's quite a long song.
Thanks for the offer though ~ >w<
Verlaren
Verlaren
Haai~
and let's go!


Shy Heart:
01:07:725 - 01:17:025 - I believe that this pause is meaningless. It would be better if this space will be filled.
02:34:125 - 02:41:025 - ^
01:41:175(2,3) - remove slider(3) and in the place (2) add slider with duration until 01:41:625 and add one reverse. I think it will be much better.


Brave Heart:
00:36:525(2) - remove note.
01:07:575(2) - move to x:300 y:248. So this slider will be symmetrical as 01:08:775(4)
04:19:875(2,3) - move (2) to 04:20:025, and place both of pattern on x:196 y:296
04:57:975(1) - remove NC


Nice map~ Star.
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
Hi~
M4M (or recheck ~?! xD).


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. I feel soft-hitclap is loud so that make music a bit weird, try this, if you can't get it, please contact me

[Shy Heart]

  1. 01:20:775 (3) - NC to make 01:17:175 (1,1) - combo balance or a symmetry 01:19:275 (1,2) -
  2. 01:33:975 (1,2,3) - try to this to be consistent with 04:17:175 - ~ 04:19:575 -
  3. 01:38:775 (1,1) - re 01:38:775 (1) - NC and 01:40:575 (1,2) - swap NC, let there same as 00:29:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 's combo length
  4. 01:48:075 (1) - re NC, reason same as ^
  5. 02:29:775 (7,1) - I hear stress is on 02:29:775 - , so swap NC
  6. 03:22:575 (1,2,3) - I think there should be confused for newbie, because they are 1/2, distance aren't same, try this, just let 03:22:875 (2) - on x:44 y:236,
  7. 03:24:075 (2) - same as ^ on x:108 y:168, also flow wound be much smoother
  8. 04:05:775 (4) - don't stack there, it is confused for newbie, if you want, try to NC it
  9. 04:23:775 (1,2) - try to swap NC, I hear stress is on 04:24:375 (2) - instead of 04:23:775 (1) -
  10. 04:28:575 (1,3) - swap NC, reason is same as ^, also 04:33:375 (1,3) - , 04:42:975 (1,2) - ,
  11. 05:06:375 (3,4) - I feel very weird for there, it dosen't follow anything, if you want to follow vocal, I think it should be this
for some slider, you should consider their length, otherwise, it would make note hard to NC, hope you can avoid this next time :3

[Brave Heart]

  1. Useless green line:
    04:59:475 -


  2. 00:33:375 (1,2) - swap NC, I hear stress is on 00:33:975 (2) - , like 00:38:475 (7,1) -
  3. 00:56:025 (2,3,4) - there is hard to read because 00:56:325 (3) - stack, try to let separate 00:56:325 (3) - instead stack
  4. 01:02:475 (1,2) - swap NC, I think you have known reason (run
  5. 01:43:575 (1,2) - I think there rhythm is contrary, a bit weird for me, try this
  6. 01:46:275 (4,1,1) - swap 01:46:275 (4,1) - NC and re 01:47:775 (1) - NC, i don't know why you NC 01:47:775 (1) - , I think it dosen't confused
  7. 01:56:775 (4) - NC this to make there same as 01:57:975 (1,1) -
  8. 02:18:075 (1) - spacing would be confused for people, try to fix it
  9. 02:34:575 (1) - I think make a symmetry would much better for shape
    152,80,154575,6,0,B|220:104|256:169|256:169|292:104|360:80,2,280,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  10. 02:37:875 (1) - don't suddenly use long distance, I only see there use 2.83x distance in diff, also, it is still uncomfortable when play, try to ctrl+G would be much better
  11. 02:48:075 (2,3,4,5,6) - do you want to make a symmetry? if you do, this is not symmetry, try this code
    264,284,168075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    196,204,168375,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    308,252,168675,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    220,252,168975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  12. 04:19:575 (1,2,3,4) - don't use jump after speed change, because 04:17:775 (2,3) - distance would make people cofused for 04:19:575 (1,2) -
  13. 04:23:475 - It is weird that there is empty, try to add a note, would be much better
  14. 04:21:675 (1,2) - swap NC, stress is on 04:21:975 (2) - , also 04:23:775 (1,3) - , 04:47:625 (1,3) -
  15. 05:06:375 (6,7) - same as Normal
some slider also use weird for me, and distance is short for play >~<, hope you can adjust next time ~

good luck~ Crystal, I think this is recheck after a long time ?! xD
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
[General]
GOOD SONG! lol

[Shy Heart]
• AR-1
• many back-and-forth notes I wonder if it would be too difficult for a normal diff coz many ppl don't use a transparent until they play hard .__.
• 01:09:375 (2) - middle node: 148,72 end node:108,44 (perfect blanket)
• 01:30:375 (3) - 264,176 (straight)
• 01:56:175 (2) - how about changing it to a straight one?
• 01:59:175 (5,6) - suggestion
SPOILER
• 02:00:375 (1) - end at 02:02:475
• 03:38:775 (1) - start: 340,40 middle: 400,24 end: 436,76
• 03:39:975 (2) - 348,144
• 04:05:775 (4) - as a normal, too difficult to stack at the back :3
• 04:22:875 (4) - 332,220
• 04:23:175 (5) - 320,272
• 04:33:975 (3) - seems not symmetric :3
• 04:40:275 (2) - how about this?
SPOILER
• 04:54:075 (2) - 256,300
• 05:05:175 (2) - 200,112
• 05:07:275 (4) - 196,312

[Brave Heart]
• HP-1
• 00:34:575 (4) - 60,220
• 01:13:275 - suggestion
SPOILER
• 01:47:175 (2,3,1,2) - this overlap is not good-looking imo may put 01:48:375 (2) - 412,104
• 02:59:775 (7) - unsnapped
• 03:05:175 (4) - ^
• 03:14:175 (1) - remove NC
• 03:51:375 (2) - 372,52
• 03:50:775 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - all these starts at blue tick, all weird imo. i think u should follow the bg music but not the rap..
• 03:57:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ coz all those drums are on white and red tick..
• 04:13:725 (4) - replace it with a note on red tick?
I think this problem exists at the part of Reed R Gale
for example 04:40:125 (2)
so I skip his part because of laziness
• 05:01:275 (6,7,8,9) - unsnapped

That's all :3
Good luck for rank .__.
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
Hello~ i'm sorry for not modding earlier >3< suddenly got busy yesterday
mostly suggestions, since your map is already great

[General]

  • prefer if you map this break 02:33:975 - /runs
    and how about adding a kiai fountain here 02:43:575 -

[Shy Heart]

  • 00:29:175 (1,2) - idk about this, it's all up to you, but try not to stack in easiest diff
    00:41:175 (4,5) - only suggestion, but you can rotate them (preferrably -9 if you want) so it won't be all linear
    01:05:775 (4,5,6) - suggestion too, to make it less linear
    SPOILER
    01:11:175 (3,4) - same as the first one about stack
    01:17:175 (1) - is kinda hidden by previous slider 01:15:375 (4) - , it kinda affect the performance, imo
    01:17:475 (2,1) - try not to overlap
    01:19:275 (1,2,1) - make it symmetry is better imo, you can copy this slider 01:19:275 (1) - then replace 01:20:775 (1) -
    SPOILER
    01:20:775 (1) - 1 1/2 reverse slider doesn't fit the song, imo, you can change the pattern
    SPOILER
    01:38:775 (6) - nc, since this is the easiest diff, let's make the combo pattern simple
    if you follow above 01:43:875 (4) - nc
    01:39:675 (7,8) - unstack? i'm afraid beginner can be confused with this
    01:45:375 (1) - i think this slider is still a part of this pattern 01:41:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so remove nc then add nc 01:45:975 (2) - (big white tick)
    02:00:375 (1) - spinner ends at 02:02:175 - ?
    if you follow above, how about ending the kiai time here 02:02:175 - then start it again at 02:05:175 - to accent the vocal
    02:07:575 (1) - add whistle at slider's head?
    02:05:175 (1,2,3,4) - only suggestion,you can make them less linear
    SPOILER
    02:42:975 (1,2,3) - try not to stack in easiest diff
    02:42:975 (1) - remove nc? 02:43:575 (3) - should be nc because long white tick
    02:44:175 (4) - add whistle at slider's reverse arrow? kinda fit the song
    02:45:975 (1) - add whistle?
    02:46:575 (2) - add whistle at slider's end?
    02:48:375 (4) - nc?
    02:57:375 (4) - red point isn't really necessary, though this doesn't affect game performance
    02:57:075 (3) - kinda hidden by previous slider, how about changing the position?
    SPOILER
    03:37:575 (4) - add whistle?
    03:39:975 (2) - the square point at slider's head should be 316|260 if you want it to align better with previous slider's blanket
    SPOILER
    03:41:175 (1) - well this is a relatively long slider for easiest diff

[Hard]

  • 00:31:575 (6) - move down a bit for symmetry
    00:35:475 (5) - 280|268 ? so it won't be too close with previous circle
    00:36:825 (4) - the flow is kinda hard so i suggest moving it few grids to the right
    00:43:575 (1) - prefer if this spinner ends at 00:45:675 - so the player can continue spinning
    00:56:025 (2,3) - prefer if you unstack them since they represent two notes at different pitch, so it's confusing when the music has different pitch but we click a stack
    01:17:175 - a bit pity not to map this break, but this is only my opinion
    03:52:575 - add a note? there's a loud music at this part
    03:53:625 (1) - how about changing this into a reverse slider? it fits the vocal
    SPOILER
    03:58:425 (2,3) - should have the same distance like 03:57:975 (1,2) -
    04:03:075 (1) - this sudden anti-jump feels a bit weird
    04:05:325 (1) - ^
    04:10:425 (2) - prefer if this slider ends at 04:10:575 - like the vocal
    04:12:825 (2) - prefer if this slider ends at 04:12:975 - like the vocal
    04:16:875 (7) - this anti-jump doesn't fit. i suggest to use 1.2x or 1.3x distance snap at this one
    04:33:975 (1) - how about spinner ends at 04:36:075 - ?
    04:43:575 (2) - prefer if you do the normal distance snap at this one
    04:44:025 (3,4) - well this can confuse the player. why not making it stream?
    04:47:625 (1) - remove nc, it's still a part of this pattern 04:45:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , then add nc 04:48:375 (3) -
    05:06:375 (6,7) - how about delete the circle 05:07:275 (7) - then lengthen this slider 05:06:375 (6) - ? it fits the vocal more
    SPOILER
i'm sorry if this is a poor mod ;_;
good luck~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
m4m from pm


  • General
    add "collab" and "collaboration" in tags?


  • Shy
    00:30:375 (3) - whistle in head?
    00:38:775 (1) - change with finish?
    00:47:175 (3) - whistle in head?
    01:00:075 (3) - i think not good to skip the stanza in here, how about http://puu.sh/3A6E5.jpg
    01:11:175 (3) - spacing issue
    01:13:875 (2) - 1 grid left?
    01:33:975 - make volume 70%?
    01:36:975 (2,3) - it's better flow if you placement like http://puu.sh/3A6Te.jpg imo
    01:48:975 (3) - spacing issue also you can placement like http://puu.sh/3A6W0.jpg for better flow
    01:59:175 (5) - spacing issue O_O
    02:09:675 (2) - you could remove this, it's a bad placement and get overlap
    02:13:575 (2) - how nazi, 1 grid down
    02:32:475 (4) - 448,176. have better placement imo
    02:45:975 (1) - nazi again, 1 grid down
    02:54:675 (2) - spacing issue
    03:16:575 (1) - 304,304?
    03:22:575 (1,2,3,1,2) - it's hard to read by newbie imo
    03:26:775 (1) - spacing issue (1,08x)
    04:075 (3,1,2,3) - try http://puu.sh/3A7b0.jpg ?
    04:23:175 (5) - remove finish


  • Brave
    00:31:575 (6) - it's more nice if (4) and (6) not touched together http://puu.sh/3A7la.jpg
    00:375 (5) - try http://puu.sh/3A7nq.jpg ?
    01:135 (2) - 180,356 so can avoid spacing issue 1,27x? xD
    01:34:875 (2) - it's better if you do ctrl+G here
    01:38:775 (1,2) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/3A7Eo.jpg ?
    01:41:175 (1,2) - try same rhythm as above
    01:44:775 (3) - should be spacing 1,2x?
    02:225 - add note?
    02:48:675 (4) - NC for easier to read?
    02:57:675 (2) - have vocal in stanza, i recommended to not skip it
    03:57:975 (1) - spacing 1,14x lol, just use 1,2 :3
    04:02:175 (6) - ^
    04:32:475 (7) - ctrl+G?

Good Luck~
how shit bug make invalid link, sorry about that >_<
Selisi
721 posts
Joined October 2012
Selisi
Hellow ~this map have been moded many times,I may just find little that need to fixed~
and It's only my personal suggestions,wish it can help you~~
[Shy Heart]
  1. 01:17:175 - Here was overlap，I try a new style here. Do you like it？If not，you can ignore this ;)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864083
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864084
  1. 02:05:175 (1) - feel its end at 02:05:625 -
  1. 02:07:575 (1) - here can be mapped better，Try
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864101
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864109
  1. 02:34:275 - here do not need break~ you may map it~
[Brave Heart]
  1. I feel it was Insane's hit diff(5 star) and normal's jump diff(4 star). Your distance snap and sv a little small, (To tell the truth,you can make it more jump...)you may try to stretched out your notes ;)
  1. This diff was done well
  1. 04:11:775 (6) - I feel it end at 04:11:925 - and add a circle at 04:12:075 -
  1. 04:19:875 (2) - remove this circle.
  1. 04:24:375 (1) - here slider feel it is 1.5 white line time but not 2 white line long.
That's all, good luck~~ ;)
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Mutual friend mod :3

General:
~Too many Kiais ><
~Check your combos and see if they are consistent to what u r following or not.
~PLS keep distance snap consistent. Even if not, pls make sure it makes sense.

Shy heart:
~I suggest removing some 1/2 beat circles in Easy diff :3
~00:42:975 (5) - Reverse selection and distance snap it. Better flow.
~01:19:575 - Slider starting here with a NC sounds better to me. Try this --> http://puu.sh/415pj.jpg
~Dun forget to distance snap everything behind.
~01:25:575 (3) - I dun think overlapping this note is good for easy. Just make a normal diamond shape here.
~01:29:175 (1) - Make this parallel to 01:27:975 (3) 's head for better flow. Even though if you distanced the notes, it's just a reminder for better placement.
~ 01:45:375 (4) - Overlaps ><''
~02:06:975 (4) - ^
~02:25:575 (2,4) - It's good to keep organised with overlaps, but I dun think it suits Easy diff too well.
~03:22:575 (1,2,3,1,2) - This might be too hard for Easy.
~03:28:875 (3) - Make this straight and move it to X: 280 Y: 188 for better flow.
~04:05:925 (1) - I highly recommend you NOT to stack sliders in Easy.
~04:07:275 (3,1,2,3) - Move them like this for more tidiness and flow. http://puu.sh/415Wp.jpg
~Distance snap everything else after of course.
~04:24:375 (1) - Reduce this by 1/1 beat and move the slider to the downbeat. The add note on 04:27:375 . It should look like this --> http://puu.sh/416wi.jpg
~Distance :P

Brave Heart:
~I dun really recommend any slider stacks in this song, cuz the music is too slow and those sliders broke my flow a couple of times. :(
~00:41:775 (1,2,3) - Doesn't really follow anything here. Replace it with a 1/2 beat slider instead.
~00:57:075 (6) - Reduce this by 1/4 beat. Just feels better to me.
~Distance.
~01:04:875 (1,2,3) - Why are these in different distance snap? Not consistent with 01:10:575 (2,3,4) .
~01:06:375 (5) - Now it's ok to stack on the tail of 01:05:175 (3) .
~01:13:275 (2,3,4) - Same distance problem.
~02:13:575 (2) - It's slightly overlapping with 02:11:775 (4) . Move it somewhere else so it won't overlap.
~02:54:375 (3,2) - Actually same with these stacking circles, like I mentioned about the sliders. Although circles seem to be much better so it's up to personal opinion on weather this should be unstacked or not.
03:08:175 (2,5) - ^
~03:09:975 (1) - This slider is overlapping with 03:09:375 (5) .
~03:12:675 (1) - Distance error.
~03:21:975 (1) - Blanket 03:22:875 (2) properly and avoid overlap with 03:21:675 (4) .
~03:50:775 (1) - Make end point X: 256 Y: 128 for better flow.
~03:54:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I recommend re-mapping this part, cuz the notes dun really follow anything and it sounds weird. :o
~04:17:475 (1) - Remove NC.
~04:17:775 (2) - NC to emphasis velocity change.
~04:40:125 (2) - Delete this, it doesn't fit. Add 3 circles instead, starting from 04:39:975 .
~04:44:775 - This part sounds weird again :o Try this --> http://puu.sh/418gA.jpg :D
~04:53:475 (2,3,4,5) - Pls space these properly or players will get confused with 1/2 bet notes and 1/4 streams.
~04:56:475 (2,3,4,5) - ^
~05:00:975 (5) - Same as I mentioned about this kind of stacking.

Well, seems like this is all that I could come out with :P Hope this helped though. Overall, not a bad map, but work on some patterns and tidiness of the map. So good luck!~ :)
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Kanari

gideon5504 wrote:

Mutual friend mod :3

General:
~Too many Kiais >< it's not too much, it's fine ~
~Check your combos and see if they are consistent to what u r following or not. owo
~PLS keep distance snap consistent. Even if not, pls make sure it makes sense. owo

Shy heart:
~I suggest removing some 1/2 beat circles in Easy diff :3
~00:42:975 (5) - Reverse selection and distance snap it. Better flow.
~01:19:575 - Slider starting here with a NC sounds better to me. Try this --> http://puu.sh/415pj.jpg quite a gap, i'll leave it
~Dun forget to distance snap everything behind.
~01:25:575 (3) - I dun think overlapping this note is good for easy. Just make a normal diamond shape here. i'll change if someone else says the same
~01:29:175 (1) - Make this parallel to 01:27:975 (3) 's head for better flow. Even though if you distanced the notes, it's just a reminder for better placement. ?
~ 01:45:375 (4) - Overlaps ><'' it's okay =w=
~02:06:975 (4) - ^ ^
~02:25:575 (2,4) - It's good to keep organised with overlaps, but I dun think it suits Easy diff too well. i'll change if someone else says the same
~03:22:575 (1,2,3,1,2) - This might be too hard for Easy. ^
~03:28:875 (3) - Make this straight and move it to X: 280 Y: 188 for better flow. did something a bit different
~04:05:925 (1) - I highly recommend you NOT to stack sliders in Easy. i think it's okay =w=
~04:07:275 (3,1,2,3) - Move them like this for more tidiness and flow. http://puu.sh/415Wp.jpg
~Distance snap everything else after of course.
~04:24:375 (1) - Reduce this by 1/1 beat and move the slider to the downbeat. The add note on 04:27:375 . It should look like this --> http://puu.sh/416wi.jpg if someone else suggests this too then i'll do it ~
~Distance :P

Brave Heart:
~I dun really recommend any slider stacks in this song, cuz the music is too slow and those sliders broke my flow a couple of times. :(
~00:41:775 (1,2,3) - Doesn't really follow anything here. Replace it with a 1/2 beat slider instead. i'd say that it's okay owo
~00:57:075 (6) - Reduce this by 1/4 beat. Just feels better to me. i'll wait for more opinion ~
~Distance.
~01:04:875 (1,2,3) - Why are these in different distance snap? Not consistent with 01:10:575 (2,3,4) .
~01:06:375 (5) - Now it's ok to stack on the tail of 01:05:175 (3) . would look odd, so keep the way it is
~01:13:275 (2,3,4) - Same distance problem.
~02:13:575 (2) - It's slightly overlapping with 02:11:775 (4) . Move it somewhere else so it won't overlap. it's okay =w=
~02:54:375 (3,2) - Actually same with these stacking circles, like I mentioned about the sliders. Although circles seem to be much better so it's up to personal opinion on weather this should be unstacked or not. ^
03:08:175 (2,5) - ^ ^
~03:09:975 (1) - This slider is overlapping with 03:09:375 (5) .
~03:12:675 (1) - Distance error.
~03:21:975 (1) - Blanket 03:22:875 (2) properly and avoid overlap with 03:21:675 (4) . already blanketed
~03:50:775 (1) - Make end point X: 256 Y: 128 for better flow. i don't
~03:54:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I recommend re-mapping this part, cuz the notes dun really follow anything and it sounds weird. :o
~04:17:475 (1) - Remove NC. vocal verse here, no change
~04:17:775 (2) - NC to emphasis velocity change. ^
~04:40:125 (2) - Delete this, it doesn't fit. Add 3 circles instead, starting from 04:39:975. let mapper of this part decide =w=
~04:44:775 - This part sounds weird again :o Try this --> http://puu.sh/418gA.jpg :D
~04:53:475 (2,3,4,5) - Pls space these properly or players will get confused with 1/2 bet notes and 1/4 streams.
~04:56:475 (2,3,4,5) - ^
~05:00:975 (5) - Same as I mentioned about this kind of stacking. i'll wait for more opinions ~

Well, seems like this is all that I could come out with :P Hope this helped though. Overall, not a bad map, but work on some patterns and tidiness of the map. So good luck!~ :)
thank you ~
no answer means changed
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
787B
Hi there.
Mod requested through forum-pm.

General

  • Looks in order.

Shy Heart

  1. 00:36:375 (5) - Hmm, would be nice if the slider at this specific part was improved just a bit, since the inside curve it's kinda unlinear. This stuff is pretty much notable when making blankets, in this case with 00:35:775 (4) - . It's something pretty easy to do and makes the map more beautiful. Take a look and see for yourself:
    Example
  1. 00:46:875 (2,3) - Well, you could have made symmetry here, though ctrl+j and ctrl+g on 00:45:975 (1) - doesn't really work, since it changes automatically its shape. But their placement could've followed that up, placing the circle in the center of the vertical line and then moving 00:47:175 (1) - a bit up as well would make that feeling. Here:
    Example
  1. 01:01:575 (5) - You could move this up a bit, the way it overlaps with 01:00:075 (3) - isn't really nice. Also you could do a nice blanket with that slider as well here:
    Example
  1. 01:14:175 (3) - Make a reflection with 01:12:375 (1) - here? Could improve the flow a bit:
    Example
  1. 01:21:975 (8) - I'd like to see a NC here, considering that 01:17:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is too much for this kind of diff.
  1. 01:31:575 (1) - If you came to change what I said on 00:36:375 (5) - you'll probably want to reshape this for the same reason.
  1. 01:38:475 (5) - Move a tiny up, it'll be consistent with the placement you did with 01:39:675 (2,3) -.
  1. 01:50:175 (1) - Spin here doesn't sound right, you should've followed the same pattern like 00:42:975 (5,1) - .
  1. 02:44:175 (2,2) - Hmm, they look a bit diffent from the other sliders before, I suggest you to follow up their shape here, so you can also improve the blanket.
  1. 03:41:175 (1,1) - I really think there could be some stuff between these two, it'll probably keep following up with the song, so it shouldn't be a problem in terms of mapping. Could even so something symmetric, but that's up to you.
  1. 04:48:975 (2) - This section here looks kinda forced to me, would be awesome to change sliders in a more natural way of playing. Notice you'll have to change other sliders as well to fix the spacing, but I think it's worth the change, take a look.
    Example

Brave Heart

  1. 00:36:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda hard to see. Could you make them more clearer? Something like moving (2) a bit down would improve a bit, would also flow better:
    Example
  1. 01:03:975 (3) - Do ctrl+g here, will play better.
  1. 01:06:375 (5) - Would be good to move this a bit down, so it won't overlap with 01:05:175 (3) - . Alternatively, you can try rotating the slider downwards, so you can make the pattern consistent here as well:
    Examples

  1. 01:30:375 (3) - Also do ctrl+g here, like in 01:03:975 (3) -.
  1. 01:34:275 (1,2) - This feels pretty random, mainly because the sudden drop of spacing. Also, move their middles nodes more closer to the center, it'll smooth them up, which would make the blanket nicer:
    Example
  1. 01:40:275 (2) - Move where 01:38:475 (5) - is (x:228 y:220), looks more consistent like that.
  1. 02:14:775 (6) - NC here, since the kiai ends.
  1. 02:18:075 (1,2,3) - Better move them a bit more to the left so it won't touch with 02:17:175 (3) - . And yeah, you should still stick with the 1,2x spacing.
  1. 02:21:975 (1,2,3,4) - Think you could make them more curved? I mean, this is pretty much a simple pattern. Here, take a look and see if you agree with me:
    Example
  1. 02:37:125 (2,3,4) - You should move all this to the left where the slider 02:34:575 (1) - ends so it also won't overlap with it:
    Example
  1. 02:47:475 (8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Very nazi, I know, but I really like if you move all of this a tiny bit to the left, this way all of them would be aligned to the center of the grid (symmetry). Make sure all of them are highlighted, so you won't have to change the spacing for each one of them:
    Example
  1. 02:59:775 (8,9,1) - Spacing here is kinda dizzy. Better keep up with that 1.2x distance as well.
  1. 03:16:575 (1) - You should really move this more closer to the center, since it's a good spot for the spin at 03:17:175 (1) - .
  1. 03:27:975 (3) - Also ctrl+g here to improve flow.
  1. 03:39:975 (3) - This is a cool place for symmetry if you move it to x:388 y:88:
    Example
  1. 04:09:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very confusing to read. Try increasing the spacing from (2) to (3), this way it'll make all those sliders at least more easy to see. I'd say to use 1.5x there.
  1. 04:12:825 (2,3) - Same as above, try increasing the spacing here since their patterns are different from 04:12:375 (1,2) - .
  1. Better change up to 1.2x here, so there won't be a gap between this and the slider before.
    Example
Still needs a lot of improvement.
I might do a recheck on this later if you want. Good luck there!
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
req via PM

sorry for delay :?

General

  1. You can convert BraveHeart.png to jpeg format in order to reduce the file size
  2. Add Japanese title in Artist also? NERDHEAD feat.西野カナ

Shy Heart

  1. 00:29:175 (1,2) - imo, its better to unstack this 2 combo, newbies may not expect the these notes are stacking together if they are 1st time to play
  2. 01:14:175 (3) - nazi stuff, try to blanket it with 01:15:375 (4) - :
    SPOILER
  3. 01:15:375 (4) - try this flow? seems better for me :
    SPOILER
  4. 01:21:975 (8) - NC here, its fit for a NC since the melody changed a bit
  5. 02:03:075 (1) - it a bit far from the spinner I guess, maybe put it a little bit right? :
    SPOILER
  6. 02:14:775 (1) - hmm, use a whistle instead of finish?
  7. 02:54:675 (2,3,4,1) - just a suggestion, I think they are placed so close and really easy to be pressed wrongly, if I were you, I would put it like this :
    SPOILER
  8. 03:41:175 (1) - well I guess this spinner is quite long :? Divide it into 2 spinners instead? The first spinner end at 03:44:775 - , and start a spinner at 03:45:975 again, end at 03:48:375
  9. 04:10:575 (1) - nazi, maybe twist this slider and make the flow better? :
    SPOILER

Brave Heart

  • 00:56:625 (4) - NC here to make the notes more readable?
  1. 02:18:075 (1,2,3) - move them 1~2 grid right, dont make them overlap seems better
  2. 03:01:875 (2,3,4,1) - well I think you can make some jumps here, music is going up gradually here, some little jumps are fit imo :D
  3. 03:48:375 - remove this break, you didnt add a break in Shy Heart diff too
  4. 04:26:175 (3) - make the same ds in the tail with 04:26:925 (1,2,3,4) - ?

Good luck :D
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[Shy Heart]
  1. 03:24:075 (2) - move to x:168 y:92 (avoid overlap)
  2. 04:04:575 (3,1) - I prefer not to stack
[Brave Heart]
  1. 00:29:175 (1) - I prefer not to stack
  2. 01:11:175 (5,6) - how about this?
  3. 02:30:225- I prefer to add a note
  4. 02:37:125 (2) - I prefer to delete
  5. 02:53:775 (2) - end at 02:54:075
  6. 02:54:975 (1) - end at 02:55:275
  7. 03:08:775 (4,1) - it is better to avoid overlap
  8. 03:58:875 (3) - I like the following
the dificulty is just right for me~
enjoyable map :D
~Good Luck~
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
from your request ;w; poor mod

first check your aimod,there are some kiai problems there (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

[Brave Heart]

* 00:30:375 (4) - add clap on the tail

* 00:34:425 (2) - in my opinon stack is better or move to 56 y188

* 00:35:475 (5) - i prefer this
Picture

* 00:36:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad for me, maybe move 3 to x496 y 240, and 4 to x492 y188

* 00:40:425 add note there

* 00:41:175 lyrics start from there, so i suggest no repeat there, maybe change the slider to a note and start a nother slider there

* 00:56:625 (1) - move this to the red line , this rythum i think is better

* 01:44:775 (3) - - i prefer use 1/4 slider and then add notes for this

* 02:04:575 (4) - same there if you follow the vocal

* 02:47:775 (1,3) - switch their place

* 04:28:575 (1,2) - you can do a blanket there

* 04:30:375 (4,5) - ^



[Shy Heart]

seemed fine for me

nice map. good luck :)
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
<333 I love this song
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Hi!

Sorry for wrong mod recently orz ...

From PM request :)

If you accept GD send a forum PM to me :3

[General]
01:34:275 - Preview time suits here better

[Shy Heart]
00:30:375 (3) - Make it same shape with 00:33:375 (1) - but Ctrl+H (mirror)
01:35:475 (2,3) - This stack is bad, remove them, it suits the song too :)
^ or put a circle here 01:35:775 -
02:54:075 (1,2,3,4,1) - A little confuse here, put more longer sliders
03:09:675 (4) - Remove
03:22:575 (1,2,3) - Hard for newbies to hit, don't overlap (1) and (3)
03:23:775 (1,2,3) - ^
03:24:375 (3) - Reduce 1 reverse
03:50:775 (1) - Remove (to prevent newbies to miss)
04:04:575 (3) - Make this slider stop at 04:05:175 - and remove 04:05:775 (1,2,3) -
04:19:575 (1) - Too edged IMO, try to put nearer to middle
04:27:075 (2,3) - Replace with 2 circles which placed 04:27:375 - and 04:27:975 - to prevent newbies to miss sliders after a long slide
04:30:375 - Whistle
04:30:675 (2) - Remove


[Brave Heart]
Consider a small remap? I think you can make it better since it's 2 years ago map already
for KIAI time you can try 1.1x or 1.2x SV to rise a a little
00:36:825 (4,5) - Strange overlap and stack :3
00:34:425 (2,3) - Make the rhythm same as 00:29:775 (2,3,4) -
00:41:625 - A circle here and remove 00:41:925 (2) - , it suits more with the pattern
00:42:975 (5) - Extend slider to 00:43:575 - and start spinning
00:45:975 (1) - Prefer to remove this spinner and map something here
00:55:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Don't like this part, feels a little strange. Try to change to more sliders or remove it
00:56:625 (1,2,3) - This stack is not nice :3
01:01:725 - Circle here
01:29:175 (1) - Copy and paste to 01:30:375 (3) - so they look more like twins
01:42:675 (2,3) - Move them to 01:42:525 - , remove whistle for 01:42:675 (2) - and add whistle for 01:42:825 (3) -
01:46:275 (1) - Remove whistle
01:46:425 (2) - Whistle here
01:47:475 - Remove whistle and whistle here 01:47:625 (5) -
01:56:475 (2,3) - Same likely above, blue tick whistle instead of red tick
01:57:675 (2,3) - ^ and remove whistle for 01:57:975 -
01:59:025 (3) - Whislte here
02:06:375 (1,2,3) - Bad overlap here
02:54:225 - Whistle here or it's strange
02:55:425 - ^
02:58:575 (5) - Whistle
02:59:475 - ^
03:21:975 (1) - Spacing is strange, no need to care about random stack here, and make it same with 03:23:175 (3) -
03:24:075 (4) - It's better to stack with 03:21:075 (2) -
03:55:725 (1,2) - Out of beat
03:56:625 (4,5) - ^
03:57:825 - Add circle
03:58:875 (3) - Flow breaker :3
04:17:775 (2) - 0.75x SV suits better IMO, 0.5 is too slow for hard
04:53:475 (2,3,4,5) - Jumps for these circles will be better
04:57:975 (5) - Stack with 04:57:375 (4) -
lupcha
62 posts
Joined October 2012
lupcha
Hey! ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ Mod via forum pm owo!

General

  1. The volume suggestions were made while modding Hard, but they can be applied to the Normal Diff, too. ~
  2. 02:15:075 (2) - 02:19:575 (1) - maybe decrease the volume here to ~ 60% since the background music goes kinda quiet and yeah, I think the 100% used in the Kiai time is a bit too loud for this part.
  3. 02:19:575 (1) - you could decrease the volume here further, to ~ 40% for example because her voice gets really quiet and I think it would be a nice effect. ~
  4. 02:21:975 (1) - the volume here could be ~ 70%?
  5. 02:23:175 (3) - and 80% here? I think it sounds nice to make the sliders slowly a bit louder.
  6. Everything else looks fine! And like I said, the map itself is already pretty good so I'll just throw some suggestions at you. ~

Shy Heart

  1. 00:37:275 (6) - super nazi: move it a tiny bit to the left so that it's in a straight line with (5).
  2. 01:00:375 (3) – I would shorten this slider and move it to the big white tick since you can hear a loud sound in the music then. owo
  3. 01:19:575 (5) - ^
Nicely mapped! :3

Brave Heart

  1. And here comes the huge load of suggestions!
  2. 00:35:175 (4,5) - doesn't really reflect the music here that good. I would suggest to change the rhythm like in the picture.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:56:625 (1) - I would remove this note since here's not really any sound ...
  4. 00:57:075 (3) - ... and shorten this slider to the white tick, move it to the next tick in the timeline and add a note here instead. Below is a picture for clarification. ~
    SPOILER
  5. 00:59:775 (3) - hmm, I think it would be nice if the player could hit the downbeat that's currently on the repeat. Here's a suggestion for this part, you'd have to do a different pattern tho since it would ruin your symmetry so feel free to ignore this. ~
    SPOILER
  6. 01:12:075 (1) - I would try to do something different here so that the downbeat can be hit, would play better imo. You could leave the slider shape and just make it a bit shorter and add a note at the former slider start.
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
  7. 01:44:775 (3) - you already have three other slider like this in the beginning of this chorus, maybe change it like this to have a bit more variety? Would fit better imo.
    SPOILER
  8. 01:50:175 (1) - again, I think it would be better to map this a bit differently so that the downbeat can be hit. Suggestion in the picture (you could also lengthen the long slider to the blue tick if you want).
    SPOILER
  9. 01:52:875 (4) - change this into a short slider + circle?
    SPOILER
  10. 02:04:575 (4) - suggestion is in the picture. ~
    SPOILER
  11. 02:11:775 (4) - I would try to emphaszie the downbeat again. Make the second note a long slider or just one circle, I think both sound good.
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
  12. 02:26:775 (5) - you could lengthen this slider to the blue tick.
  13. 02:32:775 (3) - suggestion! (ﾉ´ｰ`)ﾉ
    SPOILER
  14. 02:49:875 (1) - I would let the spinner end at 02:50:775. owo Or just make a long slider ... idk, but I think you could map 02:51:075 - 02:52:575 normally!
  15. 02:56:775 (6) - change into a short slider? Fits better imo.
    SPOILER
  16. 03:02:775 (5) - maybe change this into a slider (end it at 03:03:225), but the circle is fine as well. ~
  17. 03:11:175 (3) - suggestion! (ﾉ´ｰ`)ﾉ
    SPOILER
  18. 03:21:675 (4,1) - how about stacking (1) with (3) to avoid the overlap?
    SPOILER
  19. 03:36:075 (3) - maybe add a short slider here.
    SPOILER
  20. 03:51:825 (3) - 03:53:175 (6) - hmm, this part doesn't feel that good to me. Maybe change it like in the picture, I think it fits more.
    SPOILER
  21. 03:54:075 (2) - 03:55:875 (2) - I think another rhythm would sound better here.
    SPOILER
  22. 04:00:075 (1) - suggestion! (ﾉ´ｰ`)ﾉ
    SPOILER
  23. 04:01:875 (10) - add a note here ...
  24. 04:02:025 (10) - ... and remove this one!
  25. 04:26:175 (3) - I would shorten this slider to the red tick and add a note at 04:26:775.
  26. 04:28:575 (1) - suggestion! (ﾉ´ｰ`)ﾉ
    SPOILER
  27. 04:30:375 (4) - you could lengthen this slider to the blue tick.
  28. 04:30:975 (5) - suggestion! (ﾉ´ｰ`)ﾉ Shorten the slider to the blue tick and add a note at 04:31:575 (6)?
  29. 04:40:875 (4) - ^ change this slider into two circles?
  30. 04:45:525 (5) - move this slider to 04:45:375 and lengthen it to the red tick? Sounds better imo.
  31. 04:45:975 (1) - add a repeat maybe? Sounds so empty here.
The Diff is really nicely mapped and there's nothing really to point out, but I think hitting the downbeat more often would give more impact and improve the map a bit more. Of course, it's totally up to you if you like some of the suggestions or want to keep it as it is, there's nothing wrong with how it's now! And sorry for not explaining every suggestion, but this ^ was more or less my reason behind them all.

Good luck! (｀・ω・´)
LexiaLovesU
822 posts
Joined June 2012
LexiaLovesU

In game mod
[Shy Heart]
13:34 LexiaLovesU: ill start now
13:35 xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx: i still prefer in thread D:
13:35 LexiaLovesU: its gonne be in tread baka
13:36 xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx: owo
13:36 xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx: baka owo
13:39 LexiaLovesU: 01:23:175(3) i think it sound better if repeat was on the red tick
13:45 LexiaLovesU: 01:33:975(1) try to mirror the slider before it
13:47 LexiaLovesU: 01:38:775(1) slider is a bit ugly try this
SPOILER
13:47 LexiaLovesU: ill give screnn shot after
13:48 LexiaLovesU: 01:42:375(2) make this slider perfectly straight
13:51 LexiaLovesU: 01:56:775(3) make this go upward like so
SPOILER
13:51 LexiaLovesU: ill send screen shot
13:52 xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx: alright owo
13:55 LexiaLovesU: 02:44:175(2) the slider is a bit ugly try this
SPOILER
13:55 LexiaLovesU: opps again =_=
13:59 LexiaLovesU: 02:46:575(2) ^
SPOILER
14:01 LexiaLovesU: there is screnn shot of these
14:05 LexiaLovesU: 02:48:375(1) slider is a bit ugly
14:10 LexiaLovesU: 04:00:975(3) make the middle point got farther out
14:11 LexiaLovesU: 04:15:975(4) a bit ugly
14:17 LexiaLovesU: 04:27:075(1,2) the arangement looks weird try this
SPOILER
14:20 LexiaLovesU: 04:33:975(3) try to make the points match on each side
14:21 LexiaLovesU: 04:38:775(1) i dont like this slider
14:21 LexiaLovesU: 04:41:175 ^
14:23 LexiaLovesU: 04:43:575(2,4) make these sliders go out ward
14:27 LexiaLovesU: 04:56:775(3) make this go out ward
14:27 LexiaLovesU: that is all for shy heart'
14:27 LexiaLovesU: nice diff
14:27 LexiaLovesU: i usually get alot longer mods
14:54 LexiaLovesU: i cant find anything won O.O
14:54 LexiaLovesU: wrong*
14:55 xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx: owo
14:56 LexiaLovesU: amazing job
15:01 xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx: haha xD
15:01 xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx: thank you ~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,147 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
try to keep this map alive D:, i don't wanna see this in the grave when i mod it orz ;w;
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx. Forum PM mod req.(Bad English.)

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Preview time is not consistent,fix it. Please.

[Shy Heart]

Overall is good,but this difficulty to distinguish is hard,
if it is easy,I feel that short slider use a lot,reduce it?

01:39:675 (2,3) -
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02:54:675 (2,3,4,1) -
SPOILER
03:22:575 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER

[Brave Heart] AR+1 OD+1 ?

00:34:425 (3) - Suggest stack,read hard.
01:17:175 (1) - (432|48)?
03:27:975 (3) - (260|128),good pattern.
03:41:175 (1) - I think this spinner so long,suggest place note and slider?
04:42:975 (1) - Can be symmetry with 04:41:775 (8) ?

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,147 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
double posting because i can :P

ok here i go :D. note that i started modding this before smallboat posted.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
your preview times must be the same for consistency in the diffs. inconsistent preview times are unrankable.

[Shy Heart]
00:30:375 (3,4,5,6) - personally, i find that this pattern feels too straightforward, and it doesn't give that much of a "spark" to the song, so i feel that if you do something like this, it'll be a fun pattern to follow for beginners as it gives off a smooth pattern to follow as an introduction during gameplay IMO.
00:36:075 - perhaps you can add a circle here because it follows the vocals, and it'll be consistent with 00:34:875 (2,3) - since it follows the same pattern in the combo, or since the vocals are the same, i suggest that you use a 1/2 slider instead. basically remove 00:35:775 (4) - and add a 1/2 slider in its place because the vocals follow the same word, so it'll show that it's connected.
00:37:275 (6) - for this one, i think it should be 2 circles because this time, the vocals follow different phrases in this part, so 2 circles would be more appropriate in this part during gameplay IMO.
00:38:175 (7,1) - maybe a 1/1 slider to follow the BGM? i feel that this will follow the BGM nicely as it sets up for the next notes during gameplay IMO.
00:43:575 (1) - ik you can add notes for this. the spinner doesn't exactly fit with this part since the BGM and vocals are still going. for this one, you should replace this for 2 1/1 sliders because by doing this, you'll follow the vocals mainly, and it keeps the flow steady throughout the map during gameplay.
00:45:975 (1,3) - i feel that these wave sliders can be a lot nicer than these. the arcs make the slider lack in the flow, so it feels a bit uncomfortable to follow during gameplay. for this one, you should do something like this to both (1) and (3) because if you do this, i feel that the flow would feel a lot smoother and steady during gameplay.
00:57:975 (1,2,3) - ahh this time it doesn't flow to the vocals properly, so it feels too weak and uncomfortable to follow during gameplay. for this one you should replace this for a pattern i provided in the box. it'll flow smoother to the vocals and more properly during gameplay.
SPOILER
184,214,57975,6,0,P|223:190|292:190,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,236,59175,2,0,L|460:236,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,327,60375,2,0,P|284:351|215:351,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,292,61575,2,0,L|53:292,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:04:575 (2,3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest that you try something like this in the box in order to flow to the music more properly during gameplay.
SPOILER
293,241,64875,2,0,B|293:318,2,55,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,202,65775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
286,101,66375,2,0,P|228:101|167:128,1,110
152,268,67575,6,0,P|48:212|40:116,1,220,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:17:475 (2) - replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider because i feel that by doing this, it'll follow the vocals more accurately during gameplay IMO.
01:19:275 (5,6,7) - this part feels off and it doesn't follow the vocals accurately. if you wanna follow the vocals, then you should replace this for a 1/1 slider, followed by 2 circles and a 1/2 slider like this.
01:38:775 (1) - same as 00:45:975, but make it like this instead, or something similar to that, but be sure that the wave points are symmetrical.
01:47:175 (3,1) - perhaps you can extend (3) by 1/4 so that it'll follow the vocals properly? ofc you need to delete (1) if you do this.
01:50:175 (1) - same as 00:43:575, but this time replace this for a 1/1 slider, followed by a circle and another 1/1 slider. same reason as 01:19:275.
02:00:375 (1) - ^
02:03:075 (1) - i highly suggest that you replace this for a circle because it'll be easier for beginners to follow and read during gameplay since it ends at a 1/1 tick and not at a 1/2 tick, making the flow a bit odd to follow IMO.
02:48:375 (1) - same as 00:45:975.
02:56:175 (2) - ^
03:17:175 (1,1) - same as 00:43:975, also this is the easiest diff, so a 1/1 gap like this would be tough for beginners as they need more time than this to recover after the spinner during gameplay. if you wanna keep the spinner, than extend it till 03:19:575, while keeping a 1/1 gap. it should look like this if you don't understand.
03:29:475 (1) - same as 00:43:575. note that you can come up with your own rhythm in this since you should get the idea.
03:41:175 (1) - ^. this one has so many openings for notes since the rap part is the main focus in this.
04:00:975 (3) - i think you're missing a whistle at the end, so for this one, add a whistle at the end for emphasis in the piano.
04:04:575 (3) - same as 00:45:975.
04:15:975 (4) - ^
04:24:375 (1) - this slider doesn't seem to fit with the vocals in this since it doesn't flow as smooth as it looks during gameplay. for this one reduce this slider by 2/1 and add a circle and a 1/1 slider on the 1/1 ticks so that it'll follow the vocals properly during gameplay.
04:33:975 (3) - this slider looks asymmetrical, so try to find a try to make this slider symmetrical so that it'll flow a lot smoother during gameplay.
04:38:775 (1,3) - same as 00:45:975.
04:58:275 (1) - remove the finish on this slider because it sounds too distracting and it throw off the sense of flow during gameplay. also players might think that it ends here IMO.


[Brave Heart]
00:30:075 (3) - maybe you can unstack this so that it'll be more fun to follow for players during gameplay?
00:33:975 (2) - how about a whistle on this note for emphasis in the piano?
00:36:375 (1,2,3) - replace this for a 1/2 slider. it's the only way to make this any easier, and to follow the ocals properly during gameplay.
00:38:775 (1) - same as 00:45:975 on shy heart.
00:42:375 (3) - ^
00:45:975 (1) - for this one, you should do something like [url]http://puu.sh/5qz4I.jpg]this[/url] to follow the vocals and BGM properly during gameplay, also since this is the hardest diff, i feel that this pattern seems more appropriate as well during gameplay. if you want to keep the spinner, then replace the finish for a whistle because the finish is too distracting to follow during gameplay.
00:55:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you can do a better pattern than this because i feel that this one can be tough to follow for players during gameplay, so for this one, use the pattern in the box to flow properly and smoothly during gameplay.
SPOILER
55,48,55575,6,0,P|47:81|66:132,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,153,56025,2,0,L|153:206,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,140,56775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,237,57075,2,0,L|324:281,5,35,0|2|0|2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:12:075 (1) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider because it'll follow the music more properly and more accurately during gameplay.
01:17:175 (1) - perhaps you can unstack this so that it'll be more readable and easier to follow during gameplay?
01:34:875 (2,3) - i highly suggest that you replace this for 2 circles followed by a kick slider that ends at 01:36:225 - so that you'll follow the music more properly and it'll look more fun to follow as well during gameplay.
01:43:575 (1,2) - i feel that doing this would follow the vocals more accurately during gameplay IMO.
01:44:775 (3) - this doesn't look fun to follow for players during gameplay, so for this one, you can do 2 choices: replace this for a circle followed by a kick slider that ends till 01:45:975 - to follow the BGM , or replace this for a circle, but this time, replace it for a 1/2 repeat slider to follow the vocals.
01:47:775 (6) - this pattern can look a lot neater if you move it up. the overlap makes this part look bad during gameplay.
02:15:075 (2) - if you're following the piano, then this breaks the sense of flow since it doesn't follow the piano. for this one, you should replace this for a slider that ends till 02:15:675 to follow the vocals, or you can follow the piano by adding a slider at the 1/4 tick and ending at the next 1/4 tick, followed by a circle at the 1/2 tick.
02:27:375 (1) - this can be neater and smoother to follow if you align this circle to the end of the previous slider during gameplay.
02:31:125 (5) - delete this circle because you're not following anything in the BGM.
02:37:425 (3) - i highly suggest that you replace this for 2 circles so that it'd be easier to follow during gameplay.
02:53:775 (2) - reduce this by 1/4 because where you end it doesn't follow anything in the BGM.
02:54:975 (1) - do the same thing for consistency, but this time, add a circle at the 1/4 tick since it follows the beat in the BGM.
03:59:175 (5,1) - keep your spacing consistent here. in this case, extend it to 1.4 for consistency with the current spacing used.
04:07:425 (4) - same as 02:31:125.
04:16:425 - i can feel a circle on this part because it follows that beat in the BGM, so i suggest that you add it because of that purpose.
04:18:675 (3) - i really think that you can replace this for a kick slider to follow the BGM, and it'll be more fun to follow for players during gameplay.
04:44:475 (5) - replace this for a circle and a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals properly and accurately during gameplay.
05:06:375 (6) - replace the finish for a whistle at the end since i really feel that it sounds too distracting to follow during gameplay.

and that's pretty much it. you need to work on your rhythm selections and a bit on the placement before this can get bubbled. GL and don't give up on the map owo.
THS
1,024 posts
Joined November 2011
THS
i love the song~
gogogo
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Why no let me do a GD T_T

Btw you can change anything in the collab anytime cuz I only map a small part >w<

Thanks and I really love the song!
music life
6 posts
Joined November 2013
music life
like the song :D n the beatmap looks good
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
Please rank this ;__;
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Nice Song. M4M Req~

General
  1. Activate Widescreen Support for Breave Hart difficulty since it has got a storyboard.
  2. These difficulty names aren't allowed anymore. You have to be able to read the difficulty out of the name. So just rename Shy Heart to "Normal" and Brave Heart to "Collab-Hard" or something like this ^^

Shy Heart
  1. 01:06:375 (4) - 0,04 away from your normal DS. Consider to fix that
  2. 02:03:975 (2) - To big DS variety
  3. 02:07:575 (1) - Make symmetrical
  4. 02:09:975 (1) - ^
  5. 02:34:575 (1) - Use rotated version from 02:36:375 (3) -
  6. 02:39:976 (3) - ^
  7. 02:44:175 (2,1,2) - Blankets
  8. 02:43:575 (1) - DS 0,80? Wasn't your DS 1,00? Don't vary DS in Normals/Easies since it's hard to read for newbies
  9. 04:04:575 (3,1) - No stack please, could confuse newbies
  10. 04:24:375 (1) - Symmetry
  11. 04:33:975 (3) - ^

Brave Heart

  • xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
  1. 00:37:275 (5) - Not properly stacked with the end of 00:36:825 (4) -
  2. 00:39:675 (2,3) - Blanket
  3. 00:41:775 (1,2,3) - Distances could be constant here :/
  4. 00:42:375 (3,4) - You usually used DS 1,40 for stuff like this. Why did you use 1,99 here?
  5. 01:05:175 (3) - I'd suggest remaking this slider with the new algorithm to get a better blanket with 01:06:075 (4) -
  6. 01:14:775 (1) - ^
  7. 01:15:375 (2,3,4) - Not properly stacked
  8. 02:37:875 (1,2,3) - Remake these sliders with new algorithm and fix these blankets
  9. 02:43:575 (1,2) - ^
  10. 03:21:975 (1,2,3) - Fix these blankets or at least use a x/y flipped version of 1 instead of 3 :<
  11. 03:27:975 (3) - Remove the repeat and a dd a circle at 03:29:175 to emphasize the big white tick
  12. 04:28:575 (1) - http://puu.sh/7mntc.jpg Would fit better to emphasize the big white tick
  13. 04:30:975 (5) - ^

    Sun Rainbow
  14. 01:40:275 (2,3,4) - Constant distances between them :c
  15. 01:41:175 (1) - Suggestion: move a bit left?
  16. 01:48:375 (7) - How about blanket with 01:47:175 (4) -
  17. 02:03:825 (2,3) - Consistent spacing? (Not going to list them all, since I don't know if it's on purpose)
  18. 03:07:575 (1,2) - Not stacked properly
  19. 03:08:775 (4,5) - ^
  20. 03:09:975 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket with new slider algorithm
  21. 03:12:675 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this no perfect square? :c

    Rakuen
  22. 04:14:175 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 04:17:775 (2,3) - Sliders don't fit the music. These sliders fit for harder songs but this song is so calm and soft imo
  24. 04:40:575 (5) - http://puu.sh/7mntc.jpg Would fit better to emphasize the big white tick
  25. 04:41:775 (8) - http://puu.sh/7mnz1.jpg to emphasize 04:42:375 better.
  26. 04:42:975 (1) - ^
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
From req

Normal

  1. 00:41:175 (4,5) - Make parallel sliders:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:43:575 (6) - Red point up 1 grid
    SPOILER
  3. 04:24:375 (1) - It's not symmetric..try this code:
    96,188,264375,6,0,P|255:61|416:188,1,440,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Hard collab

  1. 02:11:775 (4) - bend to blank 02:13:275 (1) -
    SPOILER
  2. 02:18:975 (4) - Adjust to blank 02:19:575 (1) - ?
    SPOILER
  3. 03:09:975 (1,3) - Adjust the shape to blank 03:10:875 (2) -
    SPOILER
  4. 04:24:375 (1,3) - Adjust the shape to blank 04:25:875 (2) -
    SPOILER

That's all. GL~
Star for 西野カナ :)
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
I was just striding by in #modreq and decided to give my two cents cause i <3 Nishino Kana

I haven't found any major problems that you should fix but here are my ^^ two cents

Normal
01:50:175 (1) - Instead of starting the spinner at 01:50 mark, it could be better to add two more notes at
01:49:875 (6) and 01:50:175 (7) and shift the beginning of spinner to 01:50:775. Since she sings the phrase 'believe' starting from 01:50:175 mark
and the pitch swings up at 01:50:775 which fits better with the spinner.

02:14:775 (1) - I would make the spinner shorter and add more notes/sliders and remove the break part since she is still singing.
But it doesn't really kill the feels and rhythm so I think it's totally optional.

02:57:975 (1) - Same as the above one. Also optional

03:17:175 (1) - Again. I think this one is kinda too long of a spinner with all the singing going on

03:41:175 (1) - There's a lot more singing going on here and I think the spinner here is too long tbh.

03:48:975 (1,2) - You can add two notes here to match the rhythm, kinda too empty here.

03:50:775 (1) - The break here seems unnecessary (I still can't spell this ffs) with all the singing going on.

04:17:475 (1) - This is where spinner should be used. There is singing, but BGM goes silent.

04:58:275 (1) - It's ok, but not ok, it is ok but not ok...I think you put the spinners on right place but for longer than needed.

Everything else like sliders and note placements were <3. This turned out to be a longer list than i expected :S

Hard Collab
00:43:575 (1) - WHY U LUV SPINNERZ SO MUCH?! Well if it's your style, I'm not going to judge, but I
think we can put more pretty stuffs other than two spinners in a row here with all the singing.

01:17:175 (1) - Do we really need this long break here with all the singing still going on? I mean it's not even quiet singing.

03:41:175 (1) - Drives me nuts :( Such long spinner, wow, much spinning. We already have enough spinners, make it about only 2 ticks long and you can add more notes and sliders.

Less issues that comes jumping at me at the Hard Collab :D

Excellent work so far and I wish you get ranked :D

If it's hard to read PM me and I'll fix it.
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Kanari

guineaQ wrote:

I was just striding by in #modreq and decided to give my two cents cause i <3 Nishino Kana

I haven't found any major problems that you should fix but here are my ^^ two cents

Normal
01:50:175 (1) - Instead of starting the spinner at 01:50 mark, it could be better to add two more notes at
01:49:875 (6) and 01:50:175 (7) and shift the beginning of spinner to 01:50:775. Since she sings the phrase 'believe' starting from 01:50:175 mark
and the pitch swings up at 01:50:775 which fits better with the spinner. i think if i did this, the spinner would be a bit too short owo

02:14:775 (1) - I would make the spinner shorter and add more notes/sliders and remove the break part since she is still singing.
But it doesn't really kill the feels and rhythm so I think it's totally optional. same as above ~

02:57:975 (1) - Same as the above one. Also optional ^

03:17:175 (1) - Again. I think this one is kinda too long of a spinner with all the singing going on i placed spinners in parts like this if you noticed xD

03:41:175 (1) - There's a lot more singing going on here and I think the spinner here is too long tbh. follows Kana's vocalizing ~

03:48:975 (1,2) - You can add two notes here to match the rhythm, kinda too empty here. i think it's fine with one note here owo

03:50:775 (1) - The break here seems unnecessary (I still can't spell this ffs) with all the singing going on. the song is a bit long, so i though i'd put in a break

04:17:475 (1) - This is where spinner should be used. There is singing, but BGM goes silent.

04:58:275 (1) - It's ok, but not ok, it is ok but not ok...I think you put the spinners on right place but for longer than needed. owo i don't know what to say about this xD

Everything else like sliders and note placements were <3. This turned out to be a longer list than i expected :S thank you ~

Hard Collab
00:43:575 (1) - WHY U LUV SPINNERZ SO MUCH?! Well if it's your style, I'm not going to judge, but I
think we can put more pretty stuffs other than two spinners in a row here with all the singing. i pretty much put spinners on all parts of the chorus

01:17:175 (1) - Do we really need this long break here with all the singing still going on? I mean it's not even quiet singing. i noticed how i never put in any break for this diff xD so i placed i there

03:41:175 (1) - Drives me nuts :( Such long spinner, wow, much spinning. We already have enough spinners, make it about only 2 ticks long and you can add more notes and sliders. D:

Less issues that comes jumping at me at the Hard Collab :D

Excellent work so far and I wish you get ranked :D

If it's hard to read PM me and I'll fix it.
sorry i denied everything D:
if they get pointed out again i'll shorten/remove them, but i like them at the moment owo
thank you for your time ~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
My collab part update:

http://puu.sh/7GfUa.osu (full file)

Thanks
-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-
Hey~ Rakuen-san and Kanari-san

From forum PM.

Blue : Recommended to fix
Black : suggestion

[General]
  1. Tap : Remove 'collab' . We can find it if we enter the 'collab' in the keywords.
    SPOILER
    　
  2. Artist is garbled
    SPOILER
    　
  3. A low of break in the 'Hard Callab' after 01:26:775 -.
    　
  4. Offset : 00:00:375 - :arrow: 00:00:975 - The longer while line should be main vocal in the beat.

Hard Collab

  • Kanari-san~ ( 00:29:175 - )
  1. 00:34:275 - add note? I think that your map should be keep 2/4 or 4/4 bits because it is more tender to match your song. (special place you can use other bit~)
  2. 00:55:575 (1) - Do you like this pattern? ↓
  3. 01:44:775 (3) - is more strong than 01:43:575 (1,2) - .I think it make a jump or cross as well.

    　
    Sun Rainbow -san ( 01:34:275 - )
  4. 02:06:375 (1,2) - This is too fast in the rhythm ,IMO.
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 02:24:975 - )
  5. 02:48:675 (1,2) - compose a slider as well ? The 02:49:275 (3) - is strange now.
    　
    Sun Rainbow -san ( 02:53:175 - )
  6. 03:00:375 (1) - remove the rebound? It is can outstanding the rhythm (fast) in the kiai time . If you fix thsi, plaese add note at 03:01:575 -
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 03:21:975 - )
  7. 03:33:675 - do you like this rtythm ?
  8. 03:41:175 - delete this green line. It is repeated.
    　
    Rakueni-san~ ( 03:50:775 - )
  9. 04:01:875 (4) - 反彈多了好似太奇怪 覺得很快 可以試試下面這個.
  10. 04:13:275 (6) - NC
  11. 04:14:175 (1) - remove NC
  12. 04:19:275 (4) - 你可以刪了這個 也可以不刪喔~ 如果上面的 太陽彩虹san 改了 你可以考慮一下.
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 04:19:575 - )
  13. NP
    　
    Rakueni-san~ ( 04:38:775 - )
  14. 處理一下NC問題 有點奇怪...
  15. 04:50:025 (4,5,6,7,8) - 會不會對HARD有點難? 整首多只有這裡是長的連打.
  16. 04:56:025 (2) - 改為2/4 的slider 而且開始於 04:55:875 -
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 04:59:475 - )
  17. 04:59:475 (1,2) - Why you made a jump here. This part only have a jump here. It is strange fo rme.

Normal
  1. 00:34:875 (2) - remove ? It is no reason to triple here.
  2. 01:17:475 (2) - remove rebound? You made a lot of note on 4/4 bits. But it is special you are made note at 01:18:075 - .
  3. 01:33:975 (1) - ( slider ) please take care it. You are different with 04:17:775 - ( break time ) and 03:00:375 - .( spinner )
  4. 01:47:775 - there have a loudly vocal but you are not have a note here. Also ,it is different with 01:56:775 (3) - .
  5. 01:48:675 - add note. I do not think it is separate (in the rhythm).
  6. 01:55:425 - delete green line
  7. 01:55:575 - ^
  8. 02:00:075 (6) - remove ? same with 01:49:875 - .
  9. 02:03:975 (2) - loudly vocal at 02:04:575 - .Can you add note here?
  10. 03:02:775 - delete green line
  11. 03:50:775 - ^
  12. 04:36:975 - add note.

Nice song~
Good luck...~^o^~
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Hi

General:

  1. Inconsistency in Kiai Times, maybe is a mistake, but I think for an error you removed the kiai time in 03:21:975 - (Hard diff)
  2. Swap combo colour 2 and 3? since they are pretty similar is better to have: pink - white - pink - yellow
  3. Remove ¨collab¨ from tags, since you can fin this with the ¨collaboration¨ one already
  4. Just looking at your wallpaper and I believe the white combo colour can be an issue, since you can't see it in the white parts in the BG, consider to remove this combo colour
  5. Your timing is ok at it is
Hard:

  1. 00:33:375 (1) - nazi, move this to x: 256, Just to be in the center of the grid look a bit better with your symmetric
  2. 00:36:525 remove this circle, It doesn't follow the vocal line or some prominent sound in the music, I feel is better if you remove it to bring more emphasis to the vocals in 00:36:375 (1) - 00:36:675 (3) - 00:36:825 (4) -
  3. 00:36:825 (4,5) - nazi, stack this properly
  4. 00:40:425 (4,5) - add a slider instead? a slider will follow the vocals better and will be consistent with what you did in 00:36:825 (4) -
  5. 00:41:775 (1) - remove NC and add it in 00:40:875 (6) - , since 00:40:875 (6) - is where the vocals change, make more sense to me have the new combo in 00:40:875 (6) - than in 00:41:775 (1) -
  6. 00:55:575 make this slider a single circle, since the slider doesn't fit the music, trumpets? a single circle will do a better work taking in consideration the music in 00:55:875 is not prominent as the one in 00:56:325
  7. 01:11:175 (5,6) - Maybe move 6 a bit? the connection between 5 and 6 is not nice now and feel a bit forced in game, maybe try to rearrange the slider in this way:
    SPOILER
  8. 01:12:675 (2) - the rhythm here is not nice use a triplet or a 1/4 repeat slider? since the music and vocals at 01:12:825 are really prominent and need to be mapped properly, for better emphasis with the music
  9. 01:27:975 (1) - remove NC, since it is pretty unnecessary and doesn't follow your pattern or the music, is better if you remove it IMO
  10. 01:50:175 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song consider to change this for two 1/2 sliders and a circle, since ending sliders in strong beats as 01:50:775 - and 01:51:375 doesn't represent the song, that beats with the strong sound in the music require a click actions for better gameplay, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  11. 01:52:875 (5) - similar as above, the beat at 01:53:175 need a click action due to the prominent sound in it, also that's the place where your NC should be, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  12. 02:04:575 (4) - something similar is happening here too, the strong beat in 02:05:175 should be mapped as a circle or slider head to represent the music better, try this:
    SPOILER
  13. 02:05:175 if you follow my previous suggestion the NC should be in 02:05:175 but not in 02:06:375 (1) - for consistency with the music and with your combo pattern
  14. 02:07:275 (3) - similar as 02:04:575 -, the beat in 02:07:575 should be mapped as a circle or slider head
  15. 02:13:275 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nice pattern, but maybe do you want it to look more symmetrical? if yes try to move it to the center of the grid
  16. 02:19:575 (1) - the repeat of this slider is not following nothing in the music if you notice the repeat sound a lot better if it land in 02:19:875 -, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  17. 02:24:375 (5) - Add drum sampleset? It fit pretty nice the music at this point IMO
  18. 02:45:975 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - your comboing look a bit inconsistent here, try this: 02:45:975 (5) - add NC, 02:47:775 (1) - remove NC, 02:48:375 add NC, 02:48:675 remove NC, In this way they will be more consistent with the music
  19. 02:54:975 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with the music and your combo pattern
  20. 02:57:675 (2) - similar to 01:52:875 - when you end sliders in strong beats you're not fiting the music and at the same time in some cases you are breaking your combo pattern, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  21. 03:11:175 (3) - similar as above, for this case remove the repeat of 03:11:175 (3) - and add a circle, like this:
    SPOILER
  22. 03:14:175 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with your combo pattern, also remove the NC from 03:16:575 too
  23. 03:20:775 remove this NC too, It is really unnecessary and doesn't fit nothing in the song
  24. 03:33:675 also remove NC from here too it is unnecessary and your symmetric pattern will look better without it
  25. 03:54:975 (7) - similar to to 01:52:875 -, try to don't end sliders in stanzas, since stanzas are the point where the music change and that beats need click'able actions to fit the song better
  26. 03:57:375 same as above
  27. 04:01:875 (4) - if you are mapping all the 1/4 rhythm here, I guess you should map the beat at 04:02:625 for consistency
  28. 04:11:025 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song, since they should be triplets to fit the music and the vocals line correctly, try this:
    SPOILER
  29. 04:16:575 (4) - same as 03:54:975
  30. 04:26:175 (3) - similar as above
  31. 04:28:575 (1) - ^
  32. 04:48:375 (1,2) - mmm maybe just my opinion but this flow not nice, since 2 is placed in a really not nice place, making the cursor movement really forced, but maybe just me
GL nice map and sweet song <3 really long song desu :)
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Kanari

tellertheworld wrote:

Hey~ Rakuen-san and Kanari-san hellooo ~

From forum PM.

Blue : Recommended to fix
Black : suggestion

[General]
  1. Tap : Remove 'collab' . We can find it if we enter the 'collab' in the keywords.
    SPOILER
    　
  2. Artist is garbled
    SPOILER
    　
  3. A low of break in the 'Hard Callab' after 01:26:775 -. ?
    　
  4. Offset : 00:00:375 - :arrow: 00:00:975 - The longer while line should be main vocal in the beat. maybe, but the down beat is at 00:00:375
Hard Collab

  • Kanari-san~ ( 00:29:175 - )
  1. 00:34:275 - add note? I think that your map should be keep 2/4 or 4/4 bits because it is more tender to match your song. (special place you can use other bit~) i like it like this owo
  2. 00:55:575 (1) - Do you like this pattern? ↓ i think it's a bit odd since the triple starts at the blue tick
  3. 01:44:775 (3) - is more strong than 01:43:575 (1,2) - .I think it make a jump or cross as well. i like the current flow of it owo the next few objects after the slider make a kind of circle-flow ~

    　
    Sun Rainbow -san ( 01:34:275 - )
  4. 02:06:375 (1,2) - This is too fast in the rhythm ,IMO.
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 02:24:975 - )
  5. 02:48:675 (1,2) - compose a slider as well ? The 02:49:275 (3) - is strange now. i think it is okay o:
    　
    Sun Rainbow -san ( 02:53:175 - )
  6. 03:00:375 (1) - remove the rebound? It is can outstanding the rhythm (fast) in the kiai time . If you fix thsi, plaese add note at 03:01:575 -
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 03:21:975 - )
  7. 03:33:675 - do you like this rtythm ?
  8. 03:41:175 - delete this green line. It is repeated. nope, it ends the kiai
    　
    Rakueni-san~ ( 03:50:775 - )
  9. 04:01:875 (4) - 反彈多了好似太奇怪 覺得很快 可以試試下面這個.
  10. 04:13:275 (6) - NC
  11. 04:14:175 (1) - remove NC
  12. 04:19:275 (4) - 你可以刪了這個 也可以不刪喔~ 如果上面的 太陽彩虹san 改了 你可以考慮一下.
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 04:19:575 - )
  13. NP
    　
    Rakueni-san~ ( 04:38:775 - )
  14. 處理一下NC問題 有點奇怪...
  15. 04:50:025 (4,5,6,7,8) - 會不會對HARD有點難? 整首多只有這裡是長的連打.
  16. 04:56:025 (2) - 改為2/4 的slider 而且開始於 04:55:875 -
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 04:59:475 - )
  17. 04:59:475 (1,2) - Why you made a jump here. This part only have a jump here. It is strange fo rme.

Normal
  1. 00:34:875 (2) - remove ? It is no reason to triple here.
  2. 01:17:475 (2) - remove rebound? You made a lot of note on 4/4 bits. But it is special you are made note at 01:18:075 - . it seems okay owo
  3. 01:33:975 (1) - ( slider ) please take care it. You are different with 04:17:775 - ( break time ) and 03:00:375 - .( spinner ) ^
  4. 01:47:775 - there have a loudly vocal but you are not have a note here. Also ,it is different with 01:56:775 (3) - . ^
  5. 01:48:675 - add note. I do not think it is separate (in the rhythm). the previous notes seems full already so i'll leave it
  6. 01:55:425 - delete green line nope, kiai end
  7. 01:55:575 - ^ kiai start
  8. 02:00:075 (6) - remove ? same with 01:49:875 - . feels empty if i remove it
  9. 02:03:975 (2) - loudly vocal at 02:04:575 - .Can you add note here? many notes are similar to what you're suggesting already so i think it's okay
  10. 03:02:775 - delete green line kiai start
  11. 03:50:775 - ^
  12. 04:36:975 - add note.

Nice song~
Good luck...~^o^~
thank you ~

Natsu wrote:

Hi haii ~

General:

  1. Inconsistency in Kiai Times, maybe is a mistake, but I think for an error you removed the kiai time in 03:21:975 - (Hard diff)
  2. Swap combo colour 2 and 3? since they are pretty similar is better to have: pink - white - pink - yellow
  3. Remove ¨collab¨ from tags, since you can fin this with the ¨collaboration¨ one already
  4. Just looking at your wallpaper and I believe the white combo colour can be an issue, since you can't see it in the white parts in the BG, consider to remove this combo colour
  5. Your timing is ok at it is
Hard:

  1. 00:33:375 (1) - nazi, move this to x: 256, Just to be in the center of the grid look a bit better with your symmetric
  2. 00:36:525 remove this circle, It doesn't follow the vocal line or some prominent sound in the music, I feel is better if you remove it to bring more emphasis to the vocals in 00:36:375 (1) - 00:36:675 (3) - 00:36:825 (4) - i'll remove if someone else says the same owo
  3. 00:36:825 (4,5) - nazi, stack this properly help me D:
  4. 00:40:425 (4,5) - add a slider instead? a slider will follow the vocals better and will be consistent with what you did in 00:36:825 (4) -
  5. 00:41:775 (1) - remove NC and add it in 00:40:875 (6) - , since 00:40:875 (6) - is where the vocals change, make more sense to me have the new combo in 00:40:875 (6) - than in 00:41:775 (1) -
  6. 00:55:575 make this slider a single circle, since the slider doesn't fit the music, trumpets? a single circle will do a better work taking in consideration the music in 00:55:875 is not prominent as the one in 00:56:325 ;w; everyone has many suggestions to map this part, i don't know what to do @@
  7. 01:11:175 (5,6) - Maybe move 6 a bit? the connection between 5 and 6 is not nice now and feel a bit forced in game, maybe try to rearrange the slider in this way:
    SPOILER
  8. 01:12:675 (2) - the rhythm here is not nice use a triplet or a 1/4 repeat slider? since the music and vocals at 01:12:825 are really prominent and need to be mapped properly, for better emphasis with the music
  9. 01:27:975 (1) - remove NC, since it is pretty unnecessary and doesn't follow your pattern or the music, is better if you remove it IMO
  10. 01:50:175 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song consider to change this for two 1/2 sliders and a circle, since ending sliders in strong beats as 01:50:775 - and 01:51:375 doesn't represent the song, that beats with the strong sound in the music require a click actions for better gameplay, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  11. 01:52:875 (5) - similar as above, the beat at 01:53:175 need a click action due to the prominent sound in it, also that's the place where your NC should be, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  12. 02:04:575 (4) - something similar is happening here too, the strong beat in 02:05:175 should be mapped as a circle or slider head to represent the music better, try this:
    SPOILER
  13. 02:05:175 if you follow my previous suggestion the NC should be in 02:05:175 but not in 02:06:375 (1) - for consistency with the music and with your combo pattern
  14. 02:07:275 (3) - similar as 02:04:575 -, the beat in 02:07:575 should be mapped as a circle or slider head
  15. 02:13:275 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nice pattern, but maybe do you want it to look more symmetrical? if yes try to move it to the center of the grid
  16. 02:19:575 (1) - the repeat of this slider is not following nothing in the music if you notice the repeat sound a lot better if it land in 02:19:875 -, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  17. 02:24:375 (5) - Add drum sampleset? It fit pretty nice the music at this point IMO ?
  18. 02:45:975 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - your comboing look a bit inconsistent here, try this: 02:45:975 (5) - add NC, 02:47:775 (1) - remove NC, 02:48:375 add NC, 02:48:675 remove NC, In this way they will be more consistent with the music
  19. 02:54:975 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with the music and your combo pattern
  20. 02:57:675 (2) - similar to 01:52:875 - when you end sliders in strong beats you're not fiting the music and at the same time in some cases you are breaking your combo pattern, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  21. 03:11:175 (3) - similar as above, for this case remove the repeat of 03:11:175 (3) - and add a circle, like this:
    SPOILER
  22. 03:14:175 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with your combo pattern, also remove the NC from 03:16:575 too
  23. 03:20:775 remove this NC too, It is really unnecessary and doesn't fit nothing in the song
  24. 03:33:675 also remove NC from here too it is unnecessary and your symmetric pattern will look better without it
  25. 03:54:975 (7) - similar to to 01:52:875 -, try to don't end sliders in stanzas, since stanzas are the point where the music change and that beats need click'able actions to fit the song better
  26. 03:57:375 same as above
  27. 04:01:875 (4) - if you are mapping all the 1/4 rhythm here, I guess you should map the beat at 04:02:625 for consistency
  28. 04:11:025 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song, since they should be triplets to fit the music and the vocals line correctly, try this:
    SPOILER
  29. 04:16:575 (4) - same as 03:54:975
  30. 04:26:175 (3) - similar as above
  31. 04:28:575 (1) - ^ i think i'll just leave this one owo
  32. 04:48:375 (1,2) - mmm maybe just my opinion but this flow not nice, since 2 is placed in a really not nice place, making the cursor movement really forced, but maybe just me
GL nice map and sweet song <3 really long song desu :)
thank you >w<

unanswered means fixed/changed or not my part to do
toybot
1,067 posts
Joined June 2013
toybot
ok let's go bakanari

[Normal]
00:43:575 (6) - I feel this should be NC'd, one for the start of a new measure, and two it feels right >w<
00:45:375 (7) - and also missing a clap here
01:20:475 (5) - maybe move this just a bit northwest to make more of a curved feeling when playing that pattern?
01:22:875 (2) - you should probably move this a bit down while keeping distance, its current placement makes an unnecessary extra direction to flow
01:27:375 (2) - maybe curve this slider a bit? like
01:29:175 (1) - replace finish with whistle, too strong of a sound
01:38:775 (1) - add whistle to head?
01:45:375 (4,1,2,3) - make these more straight throughout, like
01:50:175 (1) - shorten this spinner by 1/1 beat, want to give the player time to move all the way up the screen where the next note is
02:42:975 (3,4,1) - i dont know, maybe change it to a reverse slider?, the displacement looks a bit uncomfortable
03:41:175 (1) - SHORTEN PLS this will completely tire out a normal player, so much, especially the avalanche of like 5 spinners before it
04:00:975 (3) - blanket better?
04:04:575 (3) - maybe shorten this by 1/2 beat so that it lands on a white tick, the extra length doesn't feel right, and the suggestion sounds better
04:10:275 (5,1) - swap NC
05:06:375 (3) - this is supposed to end on the blue tick before it, or maybe rearrange that whole pattern? doesnt seem fitting for an ending imo

[Hard Collab]
01:17:175 (1) - might be confusing on ar7? suggest you place it somewhere else
01:56:775 (1) - make this more straight pls
02:06:075 (2,3,4,5,6) - this whole thing doesn't look good at all... this looks a bit better imo; (5) blankets the next slider
02:15:075 (2) - how about make this follow the rhythm instead? it's like this:
02:29:775 (1) - move this away from the slider, bit confusing.. place it somewhere around x176 y324
02:48:675 (2,3) - these ;; might be confused for a 1/4 rhythm, so i suggest putting them in the same places that 02:47:475 (4,5) - are, and moving the (6) on top of the (1), like
or something idk lol
03:12:375 (5) - NC? add finish to the head when you do so
03:41:175 (1) - this spinner also so long ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
04:00:375 (1) - finish on head?
04:01:875 (4) - shorten this to only 3 beats, then add a circle ontop of the next slider?
04:05:175 (6) - add NC, new measure
04:21:675 (5) - move this down so that it's level with (4)
04:24:375 (1,2,3) - blanket better? plus (1) looks so weird next to that circle :o
04:45:675 (9) - NC this and remove NC from (1), it'll make that pattern a lot less confusing
04:50:025 (4) - delete this, so that itll give time to prepare for that stream, even though its easy xD
04:57:225 (5,6,7) - use distance snap for this. (6) looks a lot more covered by (5) btw, so maybe rearrange to this?
05:00:375 (4) - remove finish, too strong
05:04:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, i really didnt like this pattern much also as an end, as it doesnt follow the highlighted rhythm. try this?

this pattern goes like

good luck on ranking this map! nishino kana is such a beautiful singer >/////<
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
My part:

http://puu.sh/9bAo5/af824d0c5a.osu

Just a suggestion ummm....consider remapping the whole diff? >_> ...
Churcheell
62 posts
Joined April 2013
Churcheell
Hi hi!

Hard Collab

I suggest AR 7.5 and HP 5.5
01:55:575 - Make this part of the previous combo
01:56:475 - This feel like a really weird pattern for the combos, i think the slider should end the combo here
01:57:675 - ^
01:58:875 - ^^
02:00:075 - ^^^
02:07:575 - NC here
02:09:525 - Two circles here don't feel right to me, suggest you line them up with the slider OR curve them towards the next objects
02:27:375 - Overlap here, shift that circle to the left a bit
02:58:875 - Overlap i don't really like, space out these two back sliders a bit
04:57:825 - Spacing for this slider doesn't quite match the previous two sliders
05:06:375 - End spinner here?

Thanks!

~Churcheell
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
i'm gonna try modding this per your request, but this seems to have been through a lot of mods already...

you also know you can ask jonathanlfj for a BAT mod because this map is more than 6 months old and has more than +50 star priority.

[Normal]
  1. 01:56:775 (3,4) - blanket these
  2. 02:43:575 (1,2) - improve blanket
  3. 02:46:575 (2) - after fixing ^, copy/paste and flip horizontally for this
  4. 03:21:975 (1,1) - don't need two new combos here
[Hard]
  1. HP -1, OD -1
  2. 00:34:425 (3,4) - i'm not a fan of this pattern, i'd rather stack them or make them farther apart
  3. 01:02:475 (9,1) - improve blanket, it's too far in the middle
  4. 01:17:175 (1) - i highly recommend not stacking this on 01:16:575 (6) - because too hard to read
  5. 01:29:175 (1,2,3) - check your blanketing again, use the approach circle to help like http://puu.sh/akfTM/8891f5566a.png
  6. 02:08:775 (8,9,10) - 9 and 10 shouldn't be lower
  7. 02:29:775 (1) - stacking this a 1/2 beat before three 1/4 beats is confusing
  8. 02:31:275 (5,6,1) - move (1) a little higher to line up properly
  9. 03:14:175 (6) - this slider is a little curvier than the rest
  10. 03:21:675 (5,1) - improve blanket
  11. 03:26:475 (8,1) - 03:27:675 (2,3) - ^
  12. 04:24:375 (1,2) - 04:25:875 (2,3) - ^
  13. 04:45:075 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - don't overlap them like that, too hard to read
  14. 04:59:775 (2) - move one grid to the right to make 04:59:475 (1,2,3) - symmetrical
  15. how come you don't map the last part?
Map still has a few technical things to iron out before pushing for rank. I don't know about the overall structure, since the song is quite slow, but I think you might need to work on that too.
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Kanari

xxdeathx wrote:

i'm gonna try modding this per your request, but this seems to have been through a lot of mods already...

you also know you can ask jonathanlfj for a BAT mod because this map is more than 6 months old and has more than +50 star priority. alright, thank you owo

[Hard]
  1. HP -1, OD -1 i'd say it's already low enough
  2. 00:34:425 (3,4) - i'm not a fan of this pattern, i'd rather stack them or make them farther apart will do if it gets pointed out again
  3. 01:02:475 (9,1) - improve blanket, it's too far in the middle i think it's okay, it's still nicely curved
  4. 02:08:775 (8,9,10) - 9 and 10 shouldn't be lower ? do you have an older version of the diff perhaps? xD
  5. 02:29:775 (1) - stacking this a 1/2 beat before three 1/4 beats is confusing i think it's okay owo but will change if mentioned again
  6. 03:14:175 (6) - this slider is a little curvier than the rest
  7. 03:21:675 (5,1) - improve blanket it's fine o3o
  8. 03:26:475 (8,1) - 03:27:675 (2,3) - ^ ^
  9. 04:24:375 (1,2) - 04:25:875 (2,3) - ^ ^
  10. 04:59:775 (2) - move one grid to the right to make 04:59:475 (1,2,3) - symmetrical
  11. how come you don't map the last part? ah, you didn't update the diff
Map still has a few technical things to iron out before pushing for rank. I don't know about the overall structure, since the song is quite slow, but I think you might need to work on that too.

thanks for modding~
beeboy123
183 posts
Joined June 2013
beeboy123
Pro Irc Mod \o/
Kyouren
5,657 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Yo!
Sorry for late~



[General]

  • Add "Beginning of The End" in tags (because This name album NERDHEAD)
[Normal]

  • AR +1 and OD +1
    01:45:975 (2) - x:296 y:244
    01:47:175 (3) - x:188 y:280
    01:48:375 (4) - x:264 y:284
    01:48:975 (5) - x:416 y:312
[Hard]

  • Add "Display epilepsy warning" (you have SB Names)
    Slider Tick Rate, i think is good is 2~
    Nothing and Perfect~
    if okay, add circle in 02:29:775
Sorry if my mod is bad~
Good Luck~
Seijiro
osu! Alumni
3,438 posts
Joined April 2013
Seijiro
Alright, let's go down to business :3

[General]

  1. Since you have a SB it is recommended to enable Widescreen Support (only for Collab diff, since is the only one with SB)

[Hard Collab]

  1. 00:37:275 (5) - Stack this slider properly
  2. 01:02:775 (1) - I think a Finish HS should work fine on this slider's start
  3. 02:21:975 (1) - Maybe remove Finish HS from this slider. There isn't any strong verse starting there nor an instrument that makes it intended imo
  4. 02:29:175 (5) - Add a finish here. You did it here 02:32:775 (3) , having the same time space and rhythm, why at this point you didn't?
  5. 02:48:375 (1) - I think Finish sounds better than just a Whistle here
  6. 02:54:375 (3) - Stack it properly
  7. 02:55:575 (1) - Same ^
  8. 03:08:175 (2) - Same ^
  9. 03:09:375 (5) - Same ^
  10. 03:41:175 (1) - I think it's too long. Make it finish at 03:42:975 . Add a note at 03:43:275 . Add a spinner 03:43:575 - 03:45:675 . Add a spinner 03:45:975 - 03:48:375
  11. 03:50:775 (1) - Better a Finish HS instead of Whistle
  12. 04:00:075 (6) - Stack this note properly
  13. 04:00:375 (1) - Add Finish to slider's start
  14. 04:09:975 (1) - Same ^
  15. 05:00:975 (5) - Stack this note properly

[Normal]

I was about to mod HS but I can see that the problem (imo) is that you have some parts with good Finish HS, and others in which they are pretty much absent. I think you should find an average between these two (the same goes for the Hard diff too, but it's less notable)

That's all from me :3
Nice song. Go rank it ;)
THS
1,024 posts
Joined November 2011
THS
mod training~

Normal
01:45:975 (1) - make this slider longer until
01:46:575 (2) - remove this slider and add 1 circle at 01:46:875
add spinner at 04:17:475 until 04:18:975 imo
04:38:775 (1) - x 384?
04:38:775 (1) - x 188?

Hard collab
add circle on 00:45:675 ?
- ^ 01:13:125
- ^ 01:14:025
- ^ 01:45:825
- ^ 01:53:025
- 02:22:575 (2) - backtrack this slider into 02:22:425 and add one circle at 02:22:875
- 02:23:775 (5) - ^ into 02:23:625 and ^ at 02:24:075
- add 3 circles from 03:31:875 until 03:32:175
- ^ some jumpy circles at 03:36:075 (imo)
- add one circle 04:36:075
- ^ 04:38:475

goodluck and happybirthday baka \:D/
Fuuyu
856 posts
Joined September 2013
Fuuyu
From . . Miramono's Modding Team


Mod Starts Here
[ General]

Your BG was lower than 1024*768 so I edited it a bit with these changes . .

- Re-sized to 1024*768
- Add a little smoothness to the BG
- Increased the Photo Quality ( only a bit )
- Compressed the file space from 928 KB to 457 KB
- Right-Click then Save Image As . . . Hope you like it :)



[ Normal]
01:26:175 (4) - Move ( x:474 y:68 )

01:27:375 (2) - ^

01:27:975 (3) - Move ( x:492 y:128 )

01:39:675 (2) - Move ( x:236 y:212 )

02:07:575 (1) - Extend the slider end to 02:09:675

02:41:175 (1) - Remove NC

02:42:975 (3) - Apply NC

02:42:975 (3) - Remove NC

02:52:575 (4) - Apply Blanket?

03:02:475 (2) - Add a note

03:02:775 (1) - Change to Slider then end here 03:03:075

03:08:775 (3) - How about doing it like this



03:27:975 (2) - Apply Blanket?

04:45:975 (6) - Maybe like this?



04:53:175 (1) - Apply Blanket?

04:55:575 (1) - ^

05:06:375 (3) - Fix the slider, like this maybe



05:07:275 (4) - Move ( x:248 y:192 )

[ Hard Collab]
How about changing this to Collab instead of Hard Collab?

00:34:575 (4) - Apply Blanket?

01:26:775 (1) - Maybe like this?



01:29:175 (1) - Stack properly ( x:256 y:208 )

01:34:875 (2) - Move ( x:184 y:264 )

02:08:775 (3) - Apply Blanket

03:03:375 (2) - Improve your Blanket

03:05:175 (4) - ^

03:05:175 (4) - Ctrl + G?

03:05:175 (4) - Too Far, use DS on this part

05:07:275 (7) - Use a 1/3 Snap Divisor then Snap it here 05:07:175

Nice Song and Good Map, I like it :) . . . Good Luck~
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
Mod as request ~
[Normal]
  1. 00:45:975 (1,2,3) - How about you make it like this?
SPOILER
  1. 01:12:375 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 01:14:175 (3) for sym
  2. 01:15:375 (4) - NC ?
  3. 01:19:575 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:20:775 (6) for sym
  4. 01:50:175 (1) - This spinner should be at 01:50:775 and end at 01:52:575 because the long thing she says starts here
  5. 02:54:075 (1,2,3,4,1) - I find this a really weird shape, use something like this:
SPOILER
  1. 03:22:575 (2,3,4) - I find this shape looks weird, try to move (4) to x:56 y:200 to make the shape better
  2. 03:27:975 (2) - Make the slider more curvy for a good rhythm ?
  3. 03:29:475 (1) - This spinner feels wrong, it should be at 03:29:775 and end at 03:31:575
  4. 04:15:975 (4) - I honestly didn't like the slider shape, please make it like this:
SPOILER
  1. Some slider shapes can be improved, but good diff ~ !
[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:36:825 (4,5) - Remove stack and make blanket ?
Good map and nice song ~ !

Good luck
Nekomata
807 posts
Joined December 2013
Nekomata
NM from queue.

bold - recommended
italic - optional, personal taste

Normal
No major issues here. :)
  1. 05:06:375 (3) - shorten by 1/4 and repeat, remove 05:07:275 (4)
Hard Collab
Overall nice diff and beat rhythm.
  1. 02:23:175 (4,5) - change position on timeline and reposition as necessary http://puu.sh/b1qyX.png
    This beat placement does not line up with vocals. Unless if you are mapping something else that I didn't hear.
  2. 05:06:375 (6) - repeat slider, remove 05:07:275 (7)
Nice song :)
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
could you reply to last modders please? i'd like to do a mod after seeing what have you fixed and what not, your point of view on some parts
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Kanari

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Mod as request ~
[Normal]
  1. 00:45:975 (1,2,3) - How about you make it like this? not much different from how it is now o3o
SPOILER
  1. 01:12:375 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 01:14:175 (3) for sym
  2. 01:15:375 (4) - NC ?
  3. 01:19:575 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:20:775 (6) for sym
  4. 01:50:175 (1) - This spinner should be at 01:50:775 and end at 01:52:575 because the long thing she says starts here wanted the spinner to be a bit longer but will change if pointed out again
  5. 02:54:075 (1,2,3,4,1) - I find this a really weird shape, use something like this:
SPOILER
  1. 03:22:575 (2,3,4) - I find this shape looks weird, try to move (4) to x:56 y:200 to make the shape better i think it's okay o: i wanted to do a triangle
  2. 03:27:975 (2) - Make the slider more curvy for a good rhythm ?
  3. 03:29:475 (1) - This spinner feels wrong, it should be at 03:29:775 and end at 03:31:575 same reason as before
  4. 04:15:975 (4) - I honestly didn't like the slider shape, please make it like this: changed it, but not like you suggested
SPOILER
  1. Some slider shapes can be improved, but good diff ~ !
[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:36:825 (4,5) - Remove stack and make blanket ? i like it like this actually o: but will wait to hear more opinions
Good map and nice song ~ ! thanks o3o

Good luck
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