Hi

[Brave Heart]

00:28:900 Remove New Color
00:28:600 to 00:30:700 instead of all whistle put claps on red ticks has a better feel to it
02:00:400 New Color
02:04:600 ^

that's about it Nice Song
and good luck in the ranking

Thannkyouu ~

EDIT: Here comes the English Ver. Sorry for my bad english.
HI，M4M


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All in all
Nice song .Good speed for my bad play skill 　＞　＜

lets talk about EASY .
【shy heart】

00:35:200 this slider and next slider's overlap is hard for new player to read.and the slider1 turns back 3 times, it seams new player cant handle it too. Maybe you can map this part like this?(the slider turns back one time, the screenshot didnt show it.)


01:02:800 (2) note2's distance is a little bit far from Prev.

01:21:700 (3) remove this note

01:22:000 (4) I dont like to say it,but maybe too hard for new player? my suggestion is that change the slider into notes
seems looks good like this

01:54:700 a note after spinner is hard for new player too. but it matches the song,just wait till other points it out.Maybe it is oK for easy.

02:15:400 (1,3) 和 02:16:000 (1,2,3) too many overlaps is hard for newplayer（I hate to say itT T）

02:42:700 (2,4) FOR EASY it is too hard. Is this a normal diff ?（if it is not, how about change it to a normal diff?）

04:39:400 (1,3) ^

04:40:300 Add finish instead of whistle,seems better for me.


Just ignore my "new player blah blah blah" i know its annoying


Let talk about HARD
【Brave heart】


00:07:000 (2,3) suggest to remove NOTE3 ,and change note2 to a slider ends at red line(00:07:300)

00:10:300 (5) remove Slider 5 then directly put a note on 00:10:600

02:10:900 (1) change the slider into notes feels better?

03:38:650 (1,2) 和 03:39:550 (3,4) how about add a note between two sliders?

03:47:350 (6) remove this note

04:20:650 (1,2) feel a little strange here,the rhythm starts from 04:20:800. suggest to remove SLIDER1 and make SLIDER2 start from 04:20:800

04:40:300 remove the NOTE,let the slider turns back one more time , add finish instead whistle


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All in all again ,HARD is fun to play， good luck!~ hope it can be RANKed soon

BAD MOD，and bad english， all for suggestions. if u dont like just ignore

:3
M4M
中文mod
[General]
first kiai is so fast,use short kiai is butter
[shy hrart]
Feel straight, some idea for looking.
00:10:300 (6,7) - 00:11:200 (7) - NC? and direction 6→7is bad for looking,6→7→1 is hard find the direction
00:31:000 (1) - end at 00:32:200 is butter
00:50:500 (2) - straight feel bad,00:50:500 (2,3,4,1) ,Crowding in the lower left corner
00:52:300 (1) - like my do in img,change rhythm is butter
01:10:300 (3,4,5) - all get a little up
01:14:200 (2,3,4) -^ a little down
01:28:300 (1) - remove NC
01:54:700 (1) - remove 1，rule say not fast start note after in easily diff
02:05:800 (4) - ctrl+h and ctrl+g
02:49:600 (6) - NC
02:57:400 (1) - on the right is better,on the left is too crowded
03:58:000 - 03:59:200 this 2 4white line use clap vol of tick sound:roll:
[Brave Heart]
00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - too crowded
00:13:000 (3) - remove one of white Point
00:15:400 (5,6) - like my do in img,5 end in blue line seem butter
00:28:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so bad.not follow music, like me do in img
00:45:100 (1) - not good foe look,move the red point
00:50:200 (1) - no need back,lower right corner is too crowded
01:20:200 (1,2,3) - you do it hardly read 3, I think 3start→1end→2start get a line is butter
01:39:400 (1) - remove NC
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - anti-clockwise is butter
01:55:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - ??，no follow music
02:30:700 (2,3,4) - two side of red point ,on one arc
02:40:600 (1,2) - short slider not good use covered,a little far of 1 start→1end
02:41:800 (4,5) - ^
03:23:800~03:52:300 - don't know how too mod
04:01:600 (1) - middle tick have clap vol
04:03:400 (3) - ^
end - in my img,follow music
last kiai? soft song not need so straight

good luck and star

Thankyou! >w<

haii~~(?

[General]

all looks fine

[Brave Heart]

01:02:800 - i think this break is unnecessary...maybe you can fill it

01:10:900 (2,3,4,5) - this fixs the vocal better~

01:17:200 (2) - i prefer this

01:20:650 - add note?

02:10:150 (2,3,4) - feels uncomfortable.. try 4 notes?

02:29:200 (4,5,6,7) - why not like 02:28:000 (1,2,3) - ?

02:31:900 (5,6) - this..a little strange. try just

02:37:900 (3) - move

03:05:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - xD

03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try make it more good-looking

03:49:150 (3,4,5,6) - ^

03:59:050 - add note?

04:01:600 (1,3) - oh...it's lazy

04:20:200 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this may be better?

04:20:800 (1) - nc

04:25:600 (1) - this

[Shy Heart]

oh...because this is 2☆ so you'd better follow the DS....open AImod to adjust spacing

i don't know how to mod easy diff ;w;

00:35:800 (1) - please no stack

there are some silders which are too long..such as
01:40:600 (1) -
02:04:000 (2,4) -
02:21:400 (4) -
03:57:400 (2) -
04:07:000 (3) -

02:27:100 (1,1) - why nc?

03:38:800 (4) - plz no stack

star and good luck x3

Thannnkyouu sunshyy ~ <3 >w<

M4M~

[Brave Heart]

00:07:450 (3) - move to 00:07:300
00:29:650 (4,5) - maybe move to a diffrent place?
00:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is so alone q.q maby map the next Break?
01:25:900 (1) - RNC
01:26:500 (2) - NC
01:43:000 (1,4) - remove whistle
01:50:200 (3) - Maybe remove finish or just make it a bit lower
01:56:200 (3,4) - make a symmetrical square
03:26:200 (1) - RNC

[Shy Heart]

00:40:900 Nooo don't make a break here
02:07:150 - ^
02:39:400 (7) - remove finish or make it lower?
02:50:200 (1) - clap

Good luck :3

m4m from your queue
General[/color
The placement is NICE already!


01:22:000 (3) clap at the beginning
Maybe add three notes between the two spinners? at01:50:800 , 01:51:400 and01:52:000
03:01:900 (3) end at03:02:200 and make 03:02:800 (1) start at03:02:500
04:19:000 (6) clap at hte end, instead of finish and, add finish at 04:20:800 (1) 's end

Brave Heart
00:29:650 the notes here is kind of……hmm, confusing. Maybe make it fit the song better, it's up to you
Maybe move the finish sound from01:21:400 (3) 's end to01:23:200 (1) 's end
02:33:400 (1) remove the finish sound at its end
Maybe the KIAI should end at02:54:401 ?
04:25:600 change the placement like this may fit the vocal better http://puu.sh/1nPeb

And good luck~as newbie mappers ^_^ I love this song.

Thankyou ~

~ Mod again!

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. There's no Title/Artist Unicode in both diff (check the notepad). Added it.
2. Inconsistency in kiai times: It's not really need to fix since it's different on collab diff, but if you change it would be great :3
   
   AIBat

   Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   - [Brave Heart] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 02:55:000
   Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000
   - [Shy Heart] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 03:04:000 (I think 02:55:000 - would be great imo :\)
   Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000

[Shy Heart]

1. Check this!
   
   AIBat again

   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   04:25:670 - snap to 04:25:600
   04:28:670 - snap to 04:28:600
2. 00:10:300 (6) - (end) Finish is really weird here. Remove it and add whistle since I don't here any finish sounds in the music.
3. 01:13:000 (3) - ^
4. 01:17:800 (3) - ^
5. 01:21:400 (2) - ^
6. 02:39:400 (7) - ^
7. 02:43:000 (5) - (begin) ^
8. 04:04:000 (5) - (end) ^
9. 04:19:000 (6) - (end) ^
10. 00:30:100 (1) - Remove this? Not a very good start after this break. (Or you can make a reserve slider with 00:30:400 (2) - would be great, too :3)
11. 00:31:000 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit weird imo, I can't explain why ;; so try mine?
    
12. 00:35:800 (1) - (reserve) Where's clap ;;?
13. 01:26:200 (1) - (end) ^
14. 03:08:800 (2) - (end) ^
15. 03:38:800 (4) - (begin) ^
16. 03:40:000 (5) - ^
17. 00:37:600 (2) - (begin) clap. And I'd suggest you to make it straight ._.
18. 00:40:600 (6) - Finish please!
19. 04:20:800 (1) - (end) ^
20. 00:51:700 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm weird again ;_; Try this
    
21. 00:56:200 (7,1) - Delete (1) and 1/4 longer to (7) is better than now. Reserve on the blue tick is really strange!
22. 01:16:000 (1) - Remove NC?
23. 01:22:000 (3) - That 1/4 slider is a bit hard to the newbies since your SV is low, and this is the easiest diff in your map ._. so 1/4 longer and remove (4) would be best :3
24. 01:23:200 (1) - Ehh, add a note here and move this spinner to 01:23:800 - (end at the same time). Because you do this at 00:16:000 (1,1) - something ;n;
25. 01:52:600 (1) - I'd suggest you to remove this and put a break here. 2 spinners here seems a bit empty ._.
26. 02:01:000 (1) - Unfit spinner. Changed like this would be better imo D:
    
27. 02:04:000 (2,4) - These slider is a bit ugly. Remake it by using the slider after osu! update?
28. 02:07:150 - Well just a suggest: map something here? It's mappable and shouldn't break here._.
29. 02:27:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These NCes is a bit messy to newbies. Suggest remove nc at 02:27:700 (1) -
30. 02:55:600 (1,2,1) - Remove nc at (1) first, then if you want to make overlaps part, just overlap these notes. Or you can place them to a straight line.
31. 02:56:800 (2,3,1) - ^
32. 03:02:500 (1) - Should begin at 03:02:800 - since the vocal appear on that time, not on the red tick.
33. 04:03:700 (4) - Remove this? Seems that 1/1 works on this parttern, not 1/2.
    This diff is rankable now o-o!! But needs some more nazi/suggest on your slider and placement though.

[Brave Heart]

1. Crystal's Part
2. 00:05:800 (3) - Same thing at Shy heart. So remove finish.
3. 00:10:300 (5) - (end) ^
4. 00:07:450 (3,4) - It's better if you overlap these 2, it would be more like stream here.
5. 00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place like this since it's stream here. What you've done is like 1/2 imo ._.
   
   
6. 00:29:050 (2,3,4) - This parttern is extremely confused due to the notes at blue tick, a bit unreadable since we're talking about Hard diff. Use a 1/2 reserve slider to instead these notes please.
   
7. 00:32:800 (3) - (begin,end) Missing clap!
8. 00:34:300 (4) - Remove clap since there's no clap sound.
9. 00:37:900 (1) - ^
10. 01:59:200 (4) - (end) ^
11. 00:50:200 (1) - Place on somewhere else? I hate overlaps ;; but it's up2u owo
12. 01:02:350 - You should map here, break is unfit imo owo
13. 02:10:900 (1,3) - Make their shape same please
14. 03:08:200 (1) - Remove a reserve? It's better imo D:
15. 03:19:000 - Break start at here please
16. 04:01:600 (1) - Just suggestion. It's a bit empty at the downbeat if you make an 2/1 slider here o3o, so maybe change to 2 1/1 sliders? Don't forget to add finish on the downbeat if you except this~
17. 04:06:400 (1) - Again, a 1/2 slider at 04:06:400 - then move spinner to 04:07:000 -
18. 04:37:900 (1,2) - Swap NC?
    
19. Sun Rainbow's Part
20. 01:17:800 (3) - (end) Remove clap please. Clap is unfit here!
21. 01:37:000 (3) - ^
22. 01:46:600 (2) - ^
23. 02:31:450 (3) - ^
24. 02:31:900 (5,6) - (reserves) ^
25. 02:31:600 (4) - Missing clap.
26. 02:35:200 (3) - ^
27. 01:21:400 (3) - Remove finish. There's no finish sound here.
28. 01:44:800 (4) - Clap at begin&end, then whistle at reserve (if you want)
29. 02:46:900 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest you to add note at 02:46:900 - then move (1,2,3) 1/2 later (Remove (3)'s one reserve). Fits the vocal o3o
    
30. Reed R Gale's Part
    
    Huge Hitsound mod!!

    1. Fix these b4 fix anything in this part.
    2. 03:23:800 (1) - (end) Remove clap.
    3. 03:24:400 (1) - (begin) clap.
    4. 03:24:850 (2) - (begin) Remove clap.
    5. 03:26:650 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    6. 03:27:550 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    7. 03:28:000 (4) - clap
    8. 03:28:450 (6,1) - Remove clap
    9. 03:29:200 (3) - (begin) clap
    10. 03:29:200 (3) - (end) remove clap
    11. 03:30:100 (5) - (end) remove clap
    12. 03:31:000 (1) - (end) Soft-sound here, no Normal-sound.
    13. 03:33:100 (1) - ^
    14. 03:33:100 (1) - (begin) Remove finish.
    15. 03:33:100 (1) - (end) Remove clap, add finish.
    16. 03:34:600 (3,6) - Remove clap
    17. 03:35:500 (7) - (end)Soft-sound, remove finish.
    18. 03:36:400 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    19. 03:37:150 (8) - Soft sound.
    20. 03:37:450 (10) - (begin) Remove finish
    21. 03:38:350 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    22. 03:39:250 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    23. 03:39:700 (4) - (end) Remove finish
    24. 03:40:150 (1) - (begin) Remove finish
    25. 03:40:600 (2) - (body) Remove whistle
    26. 03:40:600 (2) - (begin) Remove finish
    27. 03:41:200 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    28. 03:41:650 (2) - remove clap
    29. 03:43:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    30. 03:43:450 (2) - (reserve) clap
    31. 03:43:450 (2) - (end) Remove clap
    32. 03:43:900 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    33. 03:44:650 (5) - Remove finish.
    34. 03:44:800 (1) - (end)Soft-sound, Remove finish
    35. 03:45:400 (1) - (begin) Soft-sound
    36. 03:45:850 (2) - (reserve) clap
    37. 03:46:300 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    38. 03:46:750 (4) - (begin) Soft-sound
    39. 03:47:200 (5) - Clap
    40. 03:49:300 (4) - Remove clap
    41. 03:49:450 (5) - Soft-sound
    42. 03:49:600 (6) - Remove finish
    43. 04:11:800 (1) - Finish, remove whistle
    44. 04:12:100 (3) - Soft-sound
    45. 04:12:700 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    46. 04:13:150 (2) - (begin) Remove clap
    47. 04:13:600 (3) - Remove finish, add clap.
    48. 04:13:900 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    49. 04:14:800 (2) - (begin) clap
    50. 04:14:800 (2) - (reserve) Normal-sound
    51. 04:15:850 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    52. 04:16:600 (3) - (reserve) Remove clap
    53. 04:17:050 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    54. 04:17:800 (1) - Soft-sound
    55. 04:18:250 (4) - Remove clap
    56. 04:18:550 (5) - (begin) Remove clap
    57. 04:19:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    58. 04:19:900 (5) - Soft-sound
    59. 04:20:200 (6) - Remove finish
    60. 04:20:650 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    61. 04:21:400 (3) - (begin) soft-sound, finish
    62. 04:22:150 (5) - (end) remove clap
    63. 04:22:600 (6) - (begin,end) Remove clap
    64. 04:23:500 (8) - soft-sound
    65. 04:24:100 (3) - (begin) soft-sound
    66. 04:24:100 (3) - (end) clap
    67. 04:24:700 (5) - Remove finish
    68. 04:25:000 (6) - Soft-sound, remove finish
    69. 04:25:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound, remove finish
    70. 04:28:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound
31. 03:24:400 (1) - Remove NC, this nc is not really need imo
32. 03:31:900 (3) - 2 reserves is boring, remove 2 reserves and add a 1/2 slider at 03:32:500 - maybe?
33. 03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream's placement is very un-flow. Try this or something else.
    
    
34. 03:44:650 (5,1) - Spacing...
35. 03:44:800 (1) - Please Remove this sv change here. Realllllly Reallllllly unfit.
36. 03:49:900 (1) - Maybe a jump to confirm the rhythm (1/2)? Hard to read without it ;;
37. 04:14:800 (2) - Change to a 1/2 slider?
38. 04:15:850 (1) - Remove this and add a note at 04:16:000 - since there's no sound at blue tick.
39. 04:20:650 (1) - ^ (add note at downbeat)
40. 04:16:600 (3) - Pretty messy part, so maybe rotate 90° this
41. 04:20:950 (2) - This slider is really ugly than others.
42. 04:25:600 (1) - end at downbeat to fit with vocal
43. Really needs work in this collab part. Really needs.

Good luck Crystal! You don't need to reply this but I wish you could change the hole things I mentioned .w.
*Notice: check this modpost when you have enough time. I put so many hitsound mods at Reed R Gale's part, and I think you fix the hole diff by yourself -w-
~

[General]

1. Mp3 is bad quality, consider changing a better one, and you cut this song in a odd place :/ Here is the full ver. mp3, and better quality, if you use this mp3, set offset to 375

My mod is based on your mp3

[Sky Heart]

1. 03:11:200 (5) - Missing a clap here?
2. 04:25:600 (5) - ^

Call me back for a full mod when you changed mp3

Do not kudos this post since I have already got 1

[General]

1. Set preview point to 00:29:175?
2. Maybe you should map the very beginning part, it's a little weird start at 00:29:175

[Shy Heart]

1. 02:49:575 (7) - NC this spinner
2. 01:05:775 (4) - Missing clap here?
3. 01:33:375 (2) - ^
4. 01:33:975 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, you can try use normal hitsound here, 60%-80% volume
5. 01:40:575 (1) - Clap?
6. 02:00:375 (1) - Clap instead of whistle
7. 02:54:975 (2) - Clap?
8. 02:57:975 (1) - End with normal hitsound would be better, also, 60%-80% volume
9. 03:27:975 (2) - Slider head, add finish, 03:28:875 (3) slider end, add finish, so that fit 03:21:975, 03:23:175, 03:24:375
10. 05:05:175 (2,4) - I don't think finish sound fit here very well, music here is quiet, using whistle or just leave them empty would be better

[Brave Heart]

1. 00:43:575 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, remove it would be better
2. 00:56:025 (1) - Why NC here?
3. 01:44:175 (2) - A reverse slider here feel kinda odd, a no reverse slider seems better and fit music more
4. 02:14:775 - 02:24:075 - Finish sound doesn't fit in this quiet part imo, considering use whistle or leave them empty
5. 02:34:575 (1) - Missing a clap?
6. 02:59:775 - Add a note here with clap so that fit the music
7. 03:00:375 (1) - Try normal hitsound to slider head?
8. 03:51:375 (1) - Why NC?
9. 04:06:675 (4) - (nazi) End point 1 grid up so that it's parallel to other 3 sliders before it
10. 04:11:775 (1) - Unreasonable jump :/
11. 04:59:475 - 05:07:275 - Well, I'm still feel finish sound doesn't fit in this part, just personal feeling

Thannkyou ~
Changed everything except normal hitsounds

Hi Crystal~
random F2 of this song ww

Nishino Kana<3

[overall]
I think it's a litte too many rest time in this...:<

[Shy Heart]

03:41:175 (1)- so looooooong spin OAO"3
04:15:975 (4,1)- maybe so far :/

[Brave Heart]

00:35:475 (6)- maybe change to: 00:35:625- add a note and slider 00:35:775- to 00:36:075- (like 00:34:425 (3,4)- )
00:36:525 (2)- dele this?
00:42:375 (4)- no slider here change to note?
00:57:075 (5)- end in 00:57:375-
01:05:025 (2)- maybe not so straight line (with 1.3)
01:12:075 (1)- add a note in 01:12:075- silder start in 01:12:375- ?(long white line~)
01:17:175 (1)- hide here isn't good when open hidden mod ;3...
01:40:275 (2,3,4)- not so straight ..?
01:44:775 (3)- not repeat here, isn't fit >_<
02:03:825 (2)- no this maybe o.o
02:34:575 (1)- not repeat too..?
02:47:475- note here~ empty
02:59:775- ^
03:02:775 (1)- change slider ?
03:22:275- to 03:32:175- not rest in your kiai time >_<
03:34:875- has vocal here~
03:50:775- to last :your slider stack half so many o_oa? i think it's no good that way :/

good luck >w< ganbatte~!

Hey M4M

Shy Heart

00:38:175 (7,1,2,3) - Place it right next to the preview sliderstart at the left side, it fits much better and easier to see
00:42:975 (1) - , 03:16:575 (1) - , 03:23:175 (1) - , 03:24:375 (1) - Combo really needed?
02:54:675 (1) - , 02:55:275 (1) - Remove new combo and add a new combo here 02:55:575 (2) -
04:10:275 (5,1) - These are hard to see, place them a bit up?

Brave Heart

00:31:575 (1) - , 03:20:775 (1,1) - , 03:36:375 (1) - , 04:11:775 (1) - ,04:17:475 (1) - , 04:33:375 (1) - , 04:41:325 (1) - , 04:57:375 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:575 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H them? it looks better imo and plays better
00:37:125 - This end of the slider doesnt fit together with the vocal
00:56:325 (3,4,5,6) - I got REALLY confused at this part when playing, try to make it more easier to read
01:17:175 (1) - You cant see this circle good when playing, place it besides?
01:48:375 (4) - This slider is also hard to see at the beginning, try to move it abit more up
01:54:975 (1) - New combo really needed?
02:06:075 (5) - New combo remove next
02:18:075 (1) - Remove combo and add one at the next slider
02:57:675 (2) - I cant get good with this slider, you map with the vocal, and this slider doesnt fit the vocal
03:50:775 (1,2) - You follow the rythm and then suddenly at (3) you change to something else, this part is abit confusing, especially 03:52:725 (4) - , try change it into something what fits the rythm,same at 03:53:625 (1,2,3) - , 03:55:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
04:03:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - You cant here one bit of a sliderbeat in the BG music, why stream? , it breaks the whole mappingstyle and song so far and absolutely doesnt fit at all // this one 04:20:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - fits but not the other one
04:26:925 (1,2,3,4) - , 04:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream also doesnt fit, it breaks the song
04:52:575 (1) - The vocal ends at 04:53:175 - not 04:53:475 - here

Overall its almost rankable, try to change what i said at least, i tolarated a bit more than usual

From my queue~
sorry for late ;(


Nice song lol good luck for rank! xD

GET MOD SLOT!~ lol

hi
mod request from forum-PM

[Brave Heart]
* 01:53:475 (1,2,3,4,5) -
* 03:12:675 (4) - new combo
* 03:23:917 - it's not a good choice to put a break in kiai time
* 03:57:525 (7,8) - use 1/3 here e.g.
* 03:50:775 - imo the hitobjects in the rap part are off-beat e.g. 03:52:725 (4) - (a missing beat) plz fix them!
* 04:16:875 (7) - use 1/6. start at 04:16:875 - , end at 04:17:075 -
* ^btw SV changes here, so add a newcombo

good luck

hi, M4M

[Shy Heart]

I think overall finishes are a bit overused in this difficulty, try limiting their use to downbeats unless the music has a finish like sound at that part.

00:42:957(1)- remove this NC, doesn't really fit.
01:19:275 (1,2,3) - I think maybe this part would look better if it was more centered
01:42:975 (1) - remove the finish from the reverse
02:07:575 (1) - This would be better if it was symmetrical
02:09:975 (1) - ^
02:27:975 (1) - This spinner feels kind of random to me, I suggest mapping this part, or having it end at 02:29:175 - so that the spinner corresponds with her voice.
03:22:575 (1,2,1) - maybe replace this with a repeating 1/8 slider
03:23:175 (1) - if no to previous suggestion, remove NC here
03:23:775 (2) - NC
03:24:375 ( 1) - remove NC
03:27:975 (2) - replace finish at head with whistle
04:10:575 (1,2,3) - move (2,3) to the left more to make it more lined up with the curve formed by 1, right now the angle is too sharp I think
04:24:375 (2) - I'd like this to be more symmetrical as well
04:33:975 (3) - Make this more symmetrical
04:41:175 (3) - remove the finish from the end, maybe replace with a whistle, but the finish does not fit there.

I think overall finishes are a bit overused in this difficulty, try limiting their use to downbeats unless the music has a finish like sound at that part.


[Brave Heart]


Again, too many finishes in this difficulty. The music doesn't tell you to put that many in, so limit them to downbeats.

00:30:375 (4) - the overlap with this and 00:31:575 (1) - is a bit ugly, I'd suggest either have them stack or move further apart so they don't overlap.
00:36:375 (1,2,3,4) - This plays a bit oddly and the random spacing difference between (1,2,3) then (3,4) is odd. Make (4) spaced 1.26 like the others and maybe have it follow a curve set by (1,2,3), maybe something like this http://puu.sh/1VX2I
00:41:775 (1,2,3,4) - I'd have 4 further away from (1,2,3). Right now the spacing looks too similar even though the time difference is not. Space (4) 1.2x. Also, make the spacing between (1,2,3) the same, right now it is not consistent.
01:02:625 (2) - Make this symmetrical so it makes a nice blanket around 01:02:475 (1) -
01:03:975 (4) - ^
01:05:175 (3) - stack end with 01:06:375 (5) -
01:13:575 (3,4) - replace with just a repeating 1/8 slider
01:34:275 - reduce the volume here, there is no instrumental and the sliderslide noise is too loud for what is happening.
01:46:275 (4) - NC
01:47:175 (1) - remove NC
01:48:375 (4) - NC
02:11:775 (4,1,2) - ugly overlap between (4) and (2)
02:13:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please make this a perfect hexagon
02:34:575 (1) - Make this perfectly symmetrical, it will look a lot better.
02:46:875 (6,7,8) - Nazi, but make these perfectly spaced. I know its pretty close but I noticed it while playing. Maybe I'm weird.
02:47:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This would look better if these were just equilateral triangle patterns. Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/1VXkc
03:00:375 - Decrease volume here
03:21:975 - I really don't like this break being here. A break during a kiai time just doesn't seem right. You don't have a break here in the Easy diff, so you might as well map this part.
03:58:425 (2,3) - This overlap isn't very good looking. Moving 03:58:875 (3) - to (240,68) both looks and plays better to me.
04:09:975 (1) - Increase the BSD to 1/8 and increase the length by one tick. Do the same for 04:11:175 (4) - . I know that this causes overlap with the other parts, so you have to remap them. I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/1VXua. It fits the vocal part better IMO
04:12:375 (1) - Same idea as before, increase BSD to 1/8 and increase length of this slider by 1 tick.
04:16:575 (6,7) - Don't do this. This is extremely confusing because the distance makes it look like this time difference is the same as 04:16:125 (3,4,5,6) - . The SV decrease here also does not fit at all. Move that timing point to 04:17:775 - and make 04:16:875 (7) - the proper length.
04:42:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is just kind of messy to read and doesn't really fit either the music or the vocals. Try a rhythm like this if you want to keep those short slider parts. http://puu.sh/1VXCJ
04:52:575 - I don't think a SV decrease fits here. Remove that and remap to make slider lengths fit again.
04:59:475 - Decrease the volume here, too loud for this part.

That's all, good luck.

Hi
M4M from your queue~

[Shy Heart]


[Brave Heart]


That's it
Good luck :3

From your PM~~

[Shy Heart]

1. 01:07:575 (7) remove finish
2. 01:17:175 (1) ^
3. 01:44:775 (3) ^
4. 01:41:475 (3)
5. 01:53:175 (1) remove finish
6. 02:17:175 ^ and green line vol 60%→5%
7. 02:32:775 (4) I prefer
   and add clap in 02:33:375
8. 02:41:175 (1) remove finish
9. 02:45:975 (1) ^
10. 03:00:375 ^ and green line vol 60%→5%
11. 03:02:775 green line vol 100%→75%
    finish is too noisy I feel D:
12. 03:21:975 green line vol 100%→80%
13. 03:48:375 remove finish and green line vol 90%→5%
14. 04:02:775 (4) remove finish
15. 04:12:375 (1) ^
16. 04:14:775 (3) ^
17. 04:17:175 (4) ^
18. 04:23:175 (5) ^
19. 04:26:775 (4) ^
20. 04:31:575 (5) ^
21. 04:36:375 (3) ^
22. 04:41:175 (3) ^
23. 04:45:975 (6) 04:47:175 (6) ^
24. 04:50:775 (3) ^
25. 04:55:575 (1) ^ and add finish here 04:57:975 (3)
26. 05:02:775 remove finish and green line vol 55%→5%

[Brave Heart]

1. 01:31:575 (1,2,3,4) DS?
2. 01:41:175 (1) remove finish
3. 01:57:975 (1) ^
4. 02:00:375 (1) ^
5. 02:09:975 (1) ^
6. 02:26:775 (5) ^
7. 02:37:875 (1) ctrl+G
8. 02:41:175 (1) ^
9. 02:48:375 (3) ^
10. 03:00:375 (1) ^
11. 03:48:375 ^ and green line vol 80%→5%
12. 04:14:175 (5) ^
13. 04:26:775 (5) ^
14. 05:00:375 (4) ^
15. 05:02:775 (9) ^

too many finishhhhhh DDD-:

Hi

Modded as I promised :3

Shy Heart
00:39:375 (2) - Remove the whistle at slider repeat and add it to the slider finish.
01:17:475 (2) - Add whistle at slider end.
01:18:675 (3) - Remove whistle.
01:30:375 (3) - Sound better if you remove the whistle in slider repeat and add whistle in slider start and end :3
01:31:575 (1) - Add whistle at slider end.
02:25:575 (2) - Add whistle.
02:26:775 (4) - Add whistle
02:29:775 (7) - Add clap.
03:03:975 (4) - Remove the finish at slider end and add a whistle.
03:06:075 (6) - Remove whistle
03:06:375 (7) - That finish is too loud. Change it for a whistle.
03:06:975 (1) - Loud finish. Reduce the volume or remove it.
03:09:975 (5) - ^
03:10:875 (6) - ^
03:14:775 (4) - ^
03:15:975 (6) - ^
03:32:775 (1) - Add whistle at slider start.
04:13:575 (2) - Add whistle.
04:20:775 (2) - Add whistle at slider start.
04:58:275 (1) - Remove finish. Keep the whistle.

Brave Heart
00:56:325 (3,5) - Add whistle.
02:22:575 (2,3,4) - That claps doesn' fit. Remove them.
03:00:375 (1) - Remove the clap at slider repeat.
03:37:575 (2,3) - Add whistle.
04:05:775 (2) - Add whistle at slider start.
04:16:875 (7) - Spacing.
04:43:575 (2) - ^
04:44:325 (4) - Remove clap at slider end.

I love this song.
Great map, good luck

And if you like i can make a hard diff :3

Thank your for mods ~
The collab diff is already a hard diff, and I don't want to add any more diffs since it's quite a long song.
Thanks for the offer though ~ >w<

Haai~
and let's go!


Shy Heart:
01:07:725 - 01:17:025 - I believe that this pause is meaningless. It would be better if this space will be filled.
02:34:125 - 02:41:025 - ^
01:41:175(2,3) - remove slider(3) and in the place (2) add slider with duration until 01:41:625 and add one reverse. I think it will be much better.


Brave Heart:
00:36:525(2) - remove note.
01:07:575(2) - move to x:300 y:248. So this slider will be symmetrical as 01:08:775(4)
04:19:875(2,3) - move (2) to 04:20:025, and place both of pattern on x:196 y:296
04:57:975(1) - remove NC


Nice map~ Star.

Hi~
M4M (or recheck ~?! xD).


good luck~ Crystal, I think this is recheck after a long time ?! xD

[General]
GOOD SONG! lol

[Shy Heart]
• AR-1
• many back-and-forth notes I wonder if it would be too difficult for a normal diff coz many ppl don't use a transparent until they play hard .__.
• 01:09:375 (2) - middle node: 148,72 end node:108,44 (perfect blanket)
• 01:30:375 (3) - 264,176 (straight)
• 01:56:175 (2) - how about changing it to a straight one?
• 01:59:175 (5,6) - suggestion
• 02:00:375 (1) - end at 02:02:475
• 03:38:775 (1) - start: 340,40 middle: 400,24 end: 436,76
• 03:39:975 (2) - 348,144
• 04:05:775 (4) - as a normal, too difficult to stack at the back :3
• 04:22:875 (4) - 332,220
• 04:23:175 (5) - 320,272
• 04:33:975 (3) - seems not symmetric :3
• 04:40:275 (2) - how about this?
• 04:54:075 (2) - 256,300
• 05:05:175 (2) - 200,112
• 05:07:275 (4) - 196,312

[Brave Heart]
• HP-1
• 00:34:575 (4) - 60,220
• 01:13:275 - suggestion
• 01:47:175 (2,3,1,2) - this overlap is not good-looking imo may put 01:48:375 (2) - 412,104
• 02:59:775 (7) - unsnapped
• 03:05:175 (4) - ^
• 03:14:175 (1) - remove NC
• 03:51:375 (2) - 372,52
• 03:50:775 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - all these starts at blue tick, all weird imo. i think u should follow the bg music but not the rap..
• 03:57:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ coz all those drums are on white and red tick..
• 04:13:725 (4) - replace it with a note on red tick?
I think this problem exists at the part of Reed R Gale
for example 04:40:125 (2)
so I skip his part because of laziness
• 05:01:275 (6,7,8,9) - unsnapped

That's all :3
Good luck for rank .__.

Hello~ i'm sorry for not modding earlier >3< suddenly got busy yesterday
mostly suggestions, since your map is already great

[General]

• prefer if you map this break 02:33:975 - /runs
  and how about adding a kiai fountain here 02:43:575 -

[Shy Heart]

• 00:29:175 (1,2) - idk about this, it's all up to you, but try not to stack in easiest diff
  00:41:175 (4,5) - only suggestion, but you can rotate them (preferrably -9 if you want) so it won't be all linear
  01:05:775 (4,5,6) - suggestion too, to make it less linear
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:11:175 (3,4) - same as the first one about stack
  01:17:175 (1) - is kinda hidden by previous slider 01:15:375 (4) - , it kinda affect the performance, imo
  01:17:475 (2,1) - try not to overlap
  01:19:275 (1,2,1) - make it symmetry is better imo, you can copy this slider 01:19:275 (1) - then replace 01:20:775 (1) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:20:775 (1) - 1 1/2 reverse slider doesn't fit the song, imo, you can change the pattern
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:38:775 (6) - nc, since this is the easiest diff, let's make the combo pattern simple
  if you follow above 01:43:875 (4) - nc
  01:39:675 (7,8) - unstack? i'm afraid beginner can be confused with this
  01:45:375 (1) - i think this slider is still a part of this pattern 01:41:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so remove nc then add nc 01:45:975 (2) - (big white tick)
  02:00:375 (1) - spinner ends at 02:02:175 - ?
  if you follow above, how about ending the kiai time here 02:02:175 - then start it again at 02:05:175 - to accent the vocal
  02:07:575 (1) - add whistle at slider's head?
  02:05:175 (1,2,3,4) - only suggestion,you can make them less linear
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:42:975 (1,2,3) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  02:42:975 (1) - remove nc? 02:43:575 (3) - should be nc because long white tick
  02:44:175 (4) - add whistle at slider's reverse arrow? kinda fit the song
  02:45:975 (1) - add whistle?
  02:46:575 (2) - add whistle at slider's end?
  02:48:375 (4) - nc?
  02:57:375 (4) - red point isn't really necessary, though this doesn't affect game performance
  02:57:075 (3) - kinda hidden by previous slider, how about changing the position?
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:37:575 (4) - add whistle?
  03:39:975 (2) - the square point at slider's head should be 316|260 if you want it to align better with previous slider's blanket
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:41:175 (1) - well this is a relatively long slider for easiest diff

[Hard]

• 00:31:575 (6) - move down a bit for symmetry
  00:35:475 (5) - 280|268 ? so it won't be too close with previous circle
  00:36:825 (4) - the flow is kinda hard so i suggest moving it few grids to the right
  00:43:575 (1) - prefer if this spinner ends at 00:45:675 - so the player can continue spinning
  00:56:025 (2,3) - prefer if you unstack them since they represent two notes at different pitch, so it's confusing when the music has different pitch but we click a stack
  01:17:175 - a bit pity not to map this break, but this is only my opinion
  03:52:575 - add a note? there's a loud music at this part
  03:53:625 (1) - how about changing this into a reverse slider? it fits the vocal
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:58:425 (2,3) - should have the same distance like 03:57:975 (1,2) -
  04:03:075 (1) - this sudden anti-jump feels a bit weird
  04:05:325 (1) - ^
  04:10:425 (2) - prefer if this slider ends at 04:10:575 - like the vocal
  04:12:825 (2) - prefer if this slider ends at 04:12:975 - like the vocal
  04:16:875 (7) - this anti-jump doesn't fit. i suggest to use 1.2x or 1.3x distance snap at this one
  04:33:975 (1) - how about spinner ends at 04:36:075 - ?
  04:43:575 (2) - prefer if you do the normal distance snap at this one
  04:44:025 (3,4) - well this can confuse the player. why not making it stream?
  04:47:625 (1) - remove nc, it's still a part of this pattern 04:45:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , then add nc 04:48:375 (3) -
  05:06:375 (6,7) - how about delete the circle 05:07:275 (7) - then lengthen this slider 05:06:375 (6) - ? it fits the vocal more
  
  SPOILER

  

i'm sorry if this is a poor mod ;_;
good luck~

m4m from pm




Good Luck~
how shit bug make invalid link, sorry about that >_<

Hellow ~this map have been moded many times,I may just find little that need to fixed~
and It's only my personal suggestions,wish it can help you~~
[Shy Heart]

1. 01:17:175 - Here was overlap，I try a new style here. Do you like it？If not，you can ignore this

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864083
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864084

1. 02:05:175 (1) - feel its end at 02:05:625 -

1. 02:07:575 (1) - here can be mapped better，Try

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864101
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864109

1. 02:34:275 - here do not need break~ you may map it~

[Brave Heart]

1. I feel it was Insane's hit diff(5 star) and normal's jump diff(4 star). Your distance snap and sv a little small, (To tell the truth,you can make it more jump...)you may try to stretched out your notes

1. This diff was done well

1. 04:11:775 (6) - I feel it end at 04:11:925 - and add a circle at 04:12:075 -

1. 04:19:875 (2) - remove this circle.

1. 04:24:375 (1) - here slider feel it is 1.5 white line time but not 2 white line long.

That's all, good luck~~

Mutual friend mod :3

General:
~Too many Kiais ><
~Check your combos and see if they are consistent to what u r following or not.
~PLS keep distance snap consistent. Even if not, pls make sure it makes sense.

Shy heart:
~I suggest removing some 1/2 beat circles in Easy diff :3
~00:42:975 (5) - Reverse selection and distance snap it. Better flow.
~01:19:575 - Slider starting here with a NC sounds better to me. Try this --> http://puu.sh/415pj.jpg
~Dun forget to distance snap everything behind.
~01:25:575 (3) - I dun think overlapping this note is good for easy. Just make a normal diamond shape here.
~01:29:175 (1) - Make this parallel to 01:27:975 (3) 's head for better flow. Even though if you distanced the notes, it's just a reminder for better placement.
~ 01:45:375 (4) - Overlaps ><''
~02:06:975 (4) - ^
~02:25:575 (2,4) - It's good to keep organised with overlaps, but I dun think it suits Easy diff too well.
~03:22:575 (1,2,3,1,2) - This might be too hard for Easy.
~03:28:875 (3) - Make this straight and move it to X: 280 Y: 188 for better flow.
~04:05:925 (1) - I highly recommend you NOT to stack sliders in Easy.
~04:07:275 (3,1,2,3) - Move them like this for more tidiness and flow. http://puu.sh/415Wp.jpg
~Distance snap everything else after of course.
~04:24:375 (1) - Reduce this by 1/1 beat and move the slider to the downbeat. The add note on 04:27:375 . It should look like this --> http://puu.sh/416wi.jpg
~Distance

Brave Heart:
~I dun really recommend any slider stacks in this song, cuz the music is too slow and those sliders broke my flow a couple of times.
~00:41:775 (1,2,3) - Doesn't really follow anything here. Replace it with a 1/2 beat slider instead.
~00:57:075 (6) - Reduce this by 1/4 beat. Just feels better to me.
~Distance.
~01:04:875 (1,2,3) - Why are these in different distance snap? Not consistent with 01:10:575 (2,3,4) .
~01:06:375 (5) - Now it's ok to stack on the tail of 01:05:175 (3) .
~01:13:275 (2,3,4) - Same distance problem.
~02:13:575 (2) - It's slightly overlapping with 02:11:775 (4) . Move it somewhere else so it won't overlap.
~02:54:375 (3,2) - Actually same with these stacking circles, like I mentioned about the sliders. Although circles seem to be much better so it's up to personal opinion on weather this should be unstacked or not.
03:08:175 (2,5) - ^
~03:09:975 (1) - This slider is overlapping with 03:09:375 (5) .
~03:12:675 (1) - Distance error.
~03:21:975 (1) - Blanket 03:22:875 (2) properly and avoid overlap with 03:21:675 (4) .
~03:50:775 (1) - Make end point X: 256 Y: 128 for better flow.
~03:54:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I recommend re-mapping this part, cuz the notes dun really follow anything and it sounds weird.
~04:17:475 (1) - Remove NC.
~04:17:775 (2) - NC to emphasis velocity change.
~04:40:125 (2) - Delete this, it doesn't fit. Add 3 circles instead, starting from 04:39:975 .
~04:44:775 - This part sounds weird again Try this --> http://puu.sh/418gA.jpg
~04:53:475 (2,3,4,5) - Pls space these properly or players will get confused with 1/2 bet notes and 1/4 streams.
~04:56:475 (2,3,4,5) - ^
~05:00:975 (5) - Same as I mentioned about this kind of stacking.

Well, seems like this is all that I could come out with Hope this helped though. Overall, not a bad map, but work on some patterns and tidiness of the map. So good luck!~

gideon5504 wrote:

Mutual friend mod :3

General:
~Too many Kiais >< it's not too much, it's fine ~
~Check your combos and see if they are consistent to what u r following or not. owo
~PLS keep distance snap consistent. Even if not, pls make sure it makes sense. owo

Shy heart:
~I suggest removing some 1/2 beat circles in Easy diff :3
~00:42:975 (5) - Reverse selection and distance snap it. Better flow.
~01:19:575 - Slider starting here with a NC sounds better to me. Try this --> http://puu.sh/415pj.jpg quite a gap, i'll leave it
~Dun forget to distance snap everything behind.
~01:25:575 (3) - I dun think overlapping this note is good for easy. Just make a normal diamond shape here. i'll change if someone else says the same
~01:29:175 (1) - Make this parallel to 01:27:975 (3) 's head for better flow. Even though if you distanced the notes, it's just a reminder for better placement. ?
~ 01:45:375 (4) - Overlaps ><'' it's okay =w=
~02:06:975 (4) - ^ ^
~02:25:575 (2,4) - It's good to keep organised with overlaps, but I dun think it suits Easy diff too well. i'll change if someone else says the same
~03:22:575 (1,2,3,1,2) - This might be too hard for Easy. ^
~03:28:875 (3) - Make this straight and move it to X: 280 Y: 188 for better flow. did something a bit different
~04:05:925 (1) - I highly recommend you NOT to stack sliders in Easy. i think it's okay =w=
~04:07:275 (3,1,2,3) - Move them like this for more tidiness and flow. http://puu.sh/415Wp.jpg
~Distance snap everything else after of course.
~04:24:375 (1) - Reduce this by 1/1 beat and move the slider to the downbeat. The add note on 04:27:375 . It should look like this --> http://puu.sh/416wi.jpg if someone else suggests this too then i'll do it ~
~Distance

Brave Heart:
~I dun really recommend any slider stacks in this song, cuz the music is too slow and those sliders broke my flow a couple of times.
~00:41:775 (1,2,3) - Doesn't really follow anything here. Replace it with a 1/2 beat slider instead. i'd say that it's okay owo
~00:57:075 (6) - Reduce this by 1/4 beat. Just feels better to me. i'll wait for more opinion ~
~Distance.
~01:04:875 (1,2,3) - Why are these in different distance snap? Not consistent with 01:10:575 (2,3,4) .
~01:06:375 (5) - Now it's ok to stack on the tail of 01:05:175 (3) . would look odd, so keep the way it is
~01:13:275 (2,3,4) - Same distance problem.
~02:13:575 (2) - It's slightly overlapping with 02:11:775 (4) . Move it somewhere else so it won't overlap. it's okay =w=
~02:54:375 (3,2) - Actually same with these stacking circles, like I mentioned about the sliders. Although circles seem to be much better so it's up to personal opinion on weather this should be unstacked or not. ^
03:08:175 (2,5) - ^ ^
~03:09:975 (1) - This slider is overlapping with 03:09:375 (5) .
~03:12:675 (1) - Distance error.
~03:21:975 (1) - Blanket 03:22:875 (2) properly and avoid overlap with 03:21:675 (4) . already blanketed
~03:50:775 (1) - Make end point X: 256 Y: 128 for better flow. i don't
~03:54:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I recommend re-mapping this part, cuz the notes dun really follow anything and it sounds weird.
~04:17:475 (1) - Remove NC. vocal verse here, no change
~04:17:775 (2) - NC to emphasis velocity change. ^
~04:40:125 (2) - Delete this, it doesn't fit. Add 3 circles instead, starting from 04:39:975. let mapper of this part decide =w=
~04:44:775 - This part sounds weird again Try this --> http://puu.sh/418gA.jpg
~04:53:475 (2,3,4,5) - Pls space these properly or players will get confused with 1/2 bet notes and 1/4 streams.
~04:56:475 (2,3,4,5) - ^
~05:00:975 (5) - Same as I mentioned about this kind of stacking. i'll wait for more opinions ~

Well, seems like this is all that I could come out with Hope this helped though. Overall, not a bad map, but work on some patterns and tidiness of the map. So good luck!~

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General

• Looks in order.

Shy Heart

1. 00:36:375 (5) - Hmm, would be nice if the slider at this specific part was improved just a bit, since the inside curve it's kinda unlinear. This stuff is pretty much notable when making blankets, in this case with 00:35:775 (4) - . It's something pretty easy to do and makes the map more beautiful. Take a look and see for yourself:
   
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1. 00:46:875 (2,3) - Well, you could have made symmetry here, though ctrl+j and ctrl+g on 00:45:975 (1) - doesn't really work, since it changes automatically its shape. But their placement could've followed that up, placing the circle in the center of the vertical line and then moving 00:47:175 (1) - a bit up as well would make that feeling. Here:
   
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1. 01:01:575 (5) - You could move this up a bit, the way it overlaps with 01:00:075 (3) - isn't really nice. Also you could do a nice blanket with that slider as well here:
   
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1. 01:14:175 (3) - Make a reflection with 01:12:375 (1) - here? Could improve the flow a bit:
   
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1. 01:21:975 (8) - I'd like to see a NC here, considering that 01:17:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is too much for this kind of diff.

1. 01:31:575 (1) - If you came to change what I said on 00:36:375 (5) - you'll probably want to reshape this for the same reason.

1. 01:38:475 (5) - Move a tiny up, it'll be consistent with the placement you did with 01:39:675 (2,3) -.

1. 01:50:175 (1) - Spin here doesn't sound right, you should've followed the same pattern like 00:42:975 (5,1) - .

1. 02:44:175 (2,2) - Hmm, they look a bit diffent from the other sliders before, I suggest you to follow up their shape here, so you can also improve the blanket.

1. 03:41:175 (1,1) - I really think there could be some stuff between these two, it'll probably keep following up with the song, so it shouldn't be a problem in terms of mapping. Could even so something symmetric, but that's up to you.

1. 04:48:975 (2) - This section here looks kinda forced to me, would be awesome to change sliders in a more natural way of playing. Notice you'll have to change other sliders as well to fix the spacing, but I think it's worth the change, take a look.
   
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Brave Heart

1. 00:36:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda hard to see. Could you make them more clearer? Something like moving (2) a bit down would improve a bit, would also flow better:
   
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1. 01:03:975 (3) - Do ctrl+g here, will play better.

1. 01:06:375 (5) - Would be good to move this a bit down, so it won't overlap with 01:05:175 (3) - . Alternatively, you can try rotating the slider downwards, so you can make the pattern consistent here as well:
   
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1. 01:30:375 (3) - Also do ctrl+g here, like in 01:03:975 (3) -.

1. 01:34:275 (1,2) - This feels pretty random, mainly because the sudden drop of spacing. Also, move their middles nodes more closer to the center, it'll smooth them up, which would make the blanket nicer:
   
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1. 01:40:275 (2) - Move where 01:38:475 (5) - is (x:228 y:220), looks more consistent like that.

1. 02:14:775 (6) - NC here, since the kiai ends.

1. 02:18:075 (1,2,3) - Better move them a bit more to the left so it won't touch with 02:17:175 (3) - . And yeah, you should still stick with the 1,2x spacing.

1. 02:21:975 (1,2,3,4) - Think you could make them more curved? I mean, this is pretty much a simple pattern. Here, take a look and see if you agree with me:
   
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1. 02:37:125 (2,3,4) - You should move all this to the left where the slider 02:34:575 (1) - ends so it also won't overlap with it:
   
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1. 02:47:475 (8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Very nazi, I know, but I really like if you move all of this a tiny bit to the left, this way all of them would be aligned to the center of the grid (symmetry). Make sure all of them are highlighted, so you won't have to change the spacing for each one of them:
   
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1. 02:59:775 (8,9,1) - Spacing here is kinda dizzy. Better keep up with that 1.2x distance as well.

1. 03:16:575 (1) - You should really move this more closer to the center, since it's a good spot for the spin at 03:17:175 (1) - .

1. 03:27:975 (3) - Also ctrl+g here to improve flow.

1. 03:39:975 (3) - This is a cool place for symmetry if you move it to x:388 y:88:
   
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1. 04:09:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very confusing to read. Try increasing the spacing from (2) to (3), this way it'll make all those sliders at least more easy to see. I'd say to use 1.5x there.

1. 04:12:825 (2,3) - Same as above, try increasing the spacing here since their patterns are different from 04:12:375 (1,2) - .

1. Better change up to 1.2x here, so there won't be a gap between this and the slider before.
   
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Still needs a lot of improvement.
I might do a recheck on this later if you want. Good luck there!

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[Shy Heart]

1. 03:24:075 (2) - move to x:168 y:92 (avoid overlap)
2. 04:04:575 (3,1) - I prefer not to stack

[Brave Heart]

1. 00:29:175 (1) - I prefer not to stack
2. 01:11:175 (5,6) - how about this?
   
3. 02:30:225- I prefer to add a note
4. 02:37:125 (2) - I prefer to delete
5. 02:53:775 (2) - end at 02:54:075
6. 02:54:975 (1) - end at 02:55:275
7. 03:08:775 (4,1) - it is better to avoid overlap
8. 03:58:875 (3) - I like the following
   

the dificulty is just right for me~
enjoyable map
~Good Luck~

from your request ;w; poor mod

first check your aimod,there are some kiai problems there (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

[Brave Heart]

* 00:30:375 (4) - add clap on the tail

* 00:34:425 (2) - in my opinon stack is better or move to 56 y188

* 00:35:475 (5) - i prefer this

* 00:36:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad for me, maybe move 3 to x496 y 240, and 4 to x492 y188

* 00:40:425 add note there

* 00:41:175 lyrics start from there, so i suggest no repeat there, maybe change the slider to a note and start a nother slider there

* 00:56:625 (1) - move this to the red line , this rythum i think is better

* 01:44:775 (3) - - i prefer use 1/4 slider and then add notes for this

* 02:04:575 (4) - same there if you follow the vocal

* 02:47:775 (1,3) - switch their place

* 04:28:575 (1,2) - you can do a blanket there

* 04:30:375 (4,5) - ^



[Shy Heart]

seemed fine for me

nice map. good luck

<333 I love this song

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[General]
01:34:275 - Preview time suits here better

[Shy Heart]
00:30:375 (3) - Make it same shape with 00:33:375 (1) - but Ctrl+H (mirror)
01:35:475 (2,3) - This stack is bad, remove them, it suits the song too
^ or put a circle here 01:35:775 -
02:54:075 (1,2,3,4,1) - A little confuse here, put more longer sliders
03:09:675 (4) - Remove
03:22:575 (1,2,3) - Hard for newbies to hit, don't overlap (1) and (3)
03:23:775 (1,2,3) - ^
03:24:375 (3) - Reduce 1 reverse
03:50:775 (1) - Remove (to prevent newbies to miss)
04:04:575 (3) - Make this slider stop at 04:05:175 - and remove 04:05:775 (1,2,3) -
04:19:575 (1) - Too edged IMO, try to put nearer to middle
04:27:075 (2,3) - Replace with 2 circles which placed 04:27:375 - and 04:27:975 - to prevent newbies to miss sliders after a long slide
04:30:375 - Whistle
04:30:675 (2) - Remove


[Brave Heart]
Consider a small remap? I think you can make it better since it's 2 years ago map already
for KIAI time you can try 1.1x or 1.2x SV to rise a a little
00:36:825 (4,5) - Strange overlap and stack :3
00:34:425 (2,3) - Make the rhythm same as 00:29:775 (2,3,4) -
00:41:625 - A circle here and remove 00:41:925 (2) - , it suits more with the pattern
00:42:975 (5) - Extend slider to 00:43:575 - and start spinning
00:45:975 (1) - Prefer to remove this spinner and map something here
00:55:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Don't like this part, feels a little strange. Try to change to more sliders or remove it
00:56:625 (1,2,3) - This stack is not nice :3
01:01:725 - Circle here
01:29:175 (1) - Copy and paste to 01:30:375 (3) - so they look more like twins
01:42:675 (2,3) - Move them to 01:42:525 - , remove whistle for 01:42:675 (2) - and add whistle for 01:42:825 (3) -
01:46:275 (1) - Remove whistle
01:46:425 (2) - Whistle here
01:47:475 - Remove whistle and whistle here 01:47:625 (5) -
01:56:475 (2,3) - Same likely above, blue tick whistle instead of red tick
01:57:675 (2,3) - ^ and remove whistle for 01:57:975 -
01:59:025 (3) - Whislte here
02:06:375 (1,2,3) - Bad overlap here
02:54:225 - Whistle here or it's strange
02:55:425 - ^
02:58:575 (5) - Whistle
02:59:475 - ^
03:21:975 (1) - Spacing is strange, no need to care about random stack here, and make it same with 03:23:175 (3) -
03:24:075 (4) - It's better to stack with 03:21:075 (2) -
03:55:725 (1,2) - Out of beat
03:56:625 (4,5) - ^
03:57:825 - Add circle
03:58:875 (3) - Flow breaker :3
04:17:775 (2) - 0.75x SV suits better IMO, 0.5 is too slow for hard
04:53:475 (2,3,4,5) - Jumps for these circles will be better
04:57:975 (5) - Stack with 04:57:375 (4) -

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