1. Easy (1,41 stars, 169 notes)
2. Escalation (4,82 stars, 616 notes)
3. Hard (4,84 stars, 440 notes)
4. Normal (3,12 stars, 253 notes)
5. RAIN (4,99 stars, 626 notes)

inverness wrote:

Let's see, am I gonna make Hard or Normal?

-Cloudchaser wrote:

M4M c: I am currently lacking on time, but I look when I can get to your map.

[Escalation]
00:29:880 (7) - remove it I would rather not remove this. If there is one more complaint about this, I will consider removing.
00:30:915 (2) - start with white line and end in red line, fix it I like it this way.
00:34:363 (6) - remov Same as first.
00:59:190 (3) - sounds good with one turn more? Spacing would be completely destroyed then.
01:55:397 (5) - ugly slider I can only give this a veeeery slight fix.
02:42:811 (2) - sounds a little weird Indeed, it was the whistle sound.

Also, Nice map and song!! Thanks!

Zarerion wrote:

Considering you're still using my metadata (and my BG, but w/e), I'd like to at least be mentioned in the Creator's words.

neonat wrote:

Escalation
00:48:328 (2) - change it to a slider from 00:48:328 to 00:48:673
add circles at 00:48:846; 00:49:018; 00:49:190; 00:49:363; 00:49:535; 00:49:708 Meh... m'kay.
00:52:983 - add a circle here Fine
00:55:225 - ^ Absolutely no.
01:05:052 (2) - move slider to 01:04:880, add a circle at 01:05:397 Okay.


I like the song. This difficulty seemed to only get into it after 03:18:242 lol. I can imagine/think of one that could be harder right now...but I'm not sure that would be what you want. heh. EDIT: But it does seem harder than the other insane.

Quiz-chan wrote:

neonat wrote:

Escalation
00:48:328 (2) - change it to a slider from 00:48:328 to 00:48:673
add circles at 00:48:846; 00:49:018; 00:49:190; 00:49:363; 00:49:535; 00:49:708 Meh... m'kay.
00:52:983 - add a circle here Fine
00:55:225 - ^ Absolutely no.
01:05:052 (2) - move slider to 01:04:880, add a circle at 01:05:397 Okay.


I like the song. This difficulty seemed to only get into it after 03:18:242 lol. I can imagine/think of one that could be harder right now...but I'm not sure that would be what you want. heh. EDIT: But it does seem harder than the other insane.

Thank you for your mod!
But to be honest, I don't get why you didn't take a look at the other diffs. And if you did, did you find improvements to be suggested here? Post them!

Broccoly wrote:

Hi~. I saw you from #modreq. Hi!

[Escalation]
00:52:983 - how about adding a note between 6 and 1? and move the 4 notes little bit to the left so that the distance between the new note and 1 is not far away. Hmmm.... I'd... I'd rather not... :/
00:58:501 - I would add a note here and arrange them like this: Upon second request.

2 by 2 (5,6 and 7,8)

03:22:294 (1)
03:28:846 (3,4,5) You think so?
- the notes might be looked as blended in with the background image due to their color and shape..

-------------------------
Great map! I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
Good luck on getting it ranked

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hello from #modreqs! Hi~

[Normal]
OD - 4 I don't feel good with OD 4 on Normals Changing upon second request.
03:45:742 (2) - slider does not fit the rhythm. Replace it with circle and slider: I prefer it my way.

SPOILER

03:56:776 (2) - same ^
[Escalation]
HP Drain Rate - 7 Procrastinating with decision, but whatever. OK.
AR - 8 Would be too slow for the higher levels then.
Too many Anti-Jumps and stacks like these 00:47:639 (3) (F) - 00:52:466 (4,5,6) (NF) - 00:53:328 (2) - 00:59:880 (NF) (4,5,6,1,2,3) (F) - reduce them
You must add break. 02:57:639 - 03:14:018 - here (destroys difficulty concept), for example, and shorter one in beginning, because song is quite long
01:05:742 (4,5) - you missed blue ticks. Replace it with stream or sliders: Upon second request.

SPOILER

03:17:466 (3,4) - unsnapped sliders Would never have found that without you telling me. Thanks!

BounceBabe wrote:

No changes

1. the "RAIN" diff got different kiai times then other diffs.maybe it's better to make it the same with all other diff?
2. The storyboard "SB\Hard" got so many overlap on the storyboard.fix it.change place or something.Maybe you should delete the osb. and make an update in the osu. notepad.

1. 00:30:570 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds kinda odd,because I'm not really sure which beat are you following.
2. 00:51:087 (2,3,1) - this is confusing for newbie player *easiest diff* because they maybe thought after (2) goes to (1) but actually there's (3),because the distance is similar.try like this maybe.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:05:742 (3) - other then straight slider,try to make a shape for this slider?
4. 01:23:328 (4) - add clap at the end? to make it consistent.and the beat at the music really fits with a clap.
5. 01:33:673 (3,4) - unstack this will be better,player may think that this is still on the same beat like before,but actually it's on a gap,so you better show some distance that it's on a gap.
6. 02:01:604 (5) - why don't you take this and bring it down? to evade the overlap.if you move it down,the spacing is still fine.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:09:190 (3) - make a better blanket.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:29:535 (4) - add clap at the end? to make it consistent.and the beat at the music really fits with a clap.
9. 02:39:880 (3,4) - same as 01:33:673 (3,4)
10. 02:43:673 (1) - this long slider doesn't sound right.maybe you should just map normally based on the song.
11. 03:08:501 (1) - putting whistle at the slider really sounds bad for this one,how bout put a whistle at the end,and 03:11:259 (3) - put a whistle at the end of this slider too.
12. 03:25:742 (3,4) - why dont you make this two slider as a blanket slider?
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 04:00:225 (3) - make a better blanket
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:16:087 (5) - move the second grid down by 1 tiny grid.
2. 00:59:535 (6) - why don't you make it like this? so it looks balance.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:05:052 (6) - same as above ^
4. 01:24:708 (3) - this overlap makes it looks ugly.maybe move it somewhere else to evade the overlap.
5. 01:27:466 (2) - this overlap too.maybe need to try to think of something.
6. 01:49:535 (2) - this overlap really ugly and got a spacing error.maybe like this is better.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. how to say it,it's better to evade an overlap that can be seen in the gameplay,because it can ruin some people playing because it's hidden/blocked.02:02:294 (1) - 02:07:811 (1) - 03:14:018 (1) you should fix it.or just try to make it not overlap.
8. 03:31:604 (2) - same as above.
9. 03:42:638 (2) - ^

1. 00:38:156 (6) - better blanket this.looks more good.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:259 - add a circle here,there's a beat here really fits for a circle.
3. 00:46:949 (2) - this is confusing @@ because of the sudden near spacing.people would think that this is 1/4 beat but actually it's still the same.maybe move it a bit more far or based on the normal spacing.
4. 00:56:087 (1) - remove whistle at the starting,it's kinda odd when there's whistle there.
5. 01:55:052 (4) - i dont really think that this is fit.just make the slider before end here? delete this circle.
6. 03:22:294 (1) - do you know started from here, "Extreme and Maximum power" I think that you're saying that this is the harder and hardest part in the map right? I was hoping for a high SV changes,long sliders and etc.
7. 04:05:139 and 04:05:311 - please add a circle ;w; don't ever make a gap on stream,sounds empty so sudden when you do it like that.

1. 00:13:328 (2) - started from here,the hitsounds pattern kinda change.you do it by yourself? or you don't mean it to be like that lol.
2. 01:44:708 (1) - make it as a normal distance? this anti-spacing kinda confusing then others,because the beat from the music still the same,no slow-mo or anything.
3. 02:53:328 (1,2,1) - this part,rather then like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   I like more if its like this.
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 03:24:363 (3) - make a better blanket! don't be lazy reiji =w=
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 03:31:777 (6) - why don't you just put it with a normal spacing rather then having a small jump here?

HeatKai wrote:

Helo Quiz-chan ^^
Please give me feedback which one you fix and which one you're not.

[General]

1. the "RAIN" diff got different kiai times then other diffs.maybe it's better to make it the same with all other diff?
2. The storyboard "SB\Hard" got so many overlap on the storyboard.fix it.change place or something.Maybe you should delete the osb. and make an update in the osu. notepad.

[BounceBabe's Easy]
There's an overlap happening in the storyboard.
Hard and BounceBabe. This was just fixed in the evening. Sorry for that.
Well there's nothing should be hard in this diff.So I guess you should remove it from the bg? just let the name stays.

[Normal]
HP drain rate - 1?

1. 00:16:087 (5) - move the second grid down by 1 tiny grid. The slider is now perfectly symmetrical. Wanna keep it that way now.
2. 00:59:535 (6) - why don't you make it like this? so it looks balance.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:05:052 (6) - same as above ^
4. 01:24:708 (3) - this overlap makes it looks ugly.maybe move it somewhere else to evade the overlap.
5. 01:27:466 (2) - this overlap too.maybe need to try to think of something.
6. 01:49:535 (2) - this overlap really ugly and got a spacing error.maybe like this is better.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. how to say it,it's better to evade an overlap that can be seen in the gameplay,because it can ruin some people playing because it's hidden/blocked.02:02:294 (1) - 02:07:811 (1) - 03:14:018 (1) you should fix it.or just try to make it not overlap.
8. 03:31:604 (2) - same as above.
9. 03:42:638 (2) - ^

got some problem about the overlaps but others are lovely :>!

Just in general: I tried to fix all those suggestions but that wasn't always possible.

[Escalation]

1. 00:38:156 (6) - better blanket this.looks more good. M'kay.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:259 - add a circle here,there's a beat here really fits for a circle. Inevitable anti-jump occuring at 00:47:639.
3. 00:46:949 (2) - this is confusing @@ because of the sudden near spacing.people would think that this is 1/4 beat but actually it's still the same.maybe move it a bit more far or based on the normal spacing. Fixed with aspect above.
4. 00:56:087 (1) - remove whistle at the starting,it's kinda odd when there's whistle there. Personally I liked it o_ o
5. 01:55:052 (4) - i dont really think that this is fit.just make the slider before end here? delete this circle. D'awww.... does that have to be? Upon second request.
6. 03:22:294 (1) - do you know started from here, "Extreme and Maximum power" I think that you're saying that this is the harder and hardest part in the map right? I was hoping for a high SV changes,long sliders and etc. Slider velocity changes with transition from "Extreme" to "MAX. POWER".
7. 04:05:139 and 04:05:311 - please add a circle ;w; don't ever make a gap on stream,sounds empty so sudden when you do it like that. I hope sharp stream curve will do as well.

Good luck Quiz-chan and others :3

Thanks

BounceBabe wrote:

Update

osu file format v11

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256,256,114018,2,2,P|256:128,2,120
320,304,115397,1,8,0:0:0
432,336,115914,1,8,0:0:0
400,224,116431,1,8,0:0:0
400,144,116777,6,2,P|476:51,2,120,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,224,118156,2,2,P|480:320,2,120
328,184,119535,2,2,P|256:288,2,120
328,184,120915,1,8,0:0:0
256,32,121604,1,8,0:0:0
184,200,122294,6,2,P|256:96,2,120,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,224,123673,2,2,P|35:316,2,120
112,144,125052,2,2,P|35:51,2,120
112,144,126432,1,8,0:0:0
172,292,127121,1,8,0:0:0
332,292,127811,6,2,P|460:292,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,192,128846,1,8,0:0:0
464,160,129190,2,2,P|432:116|368:112,1,120
256,144,130225,1,8,0:0:0
176,112,130570,2,2,P|64:64,2,120
256,144,131949,6,0,P|256:320,2,160,12|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,240,144363,6,0,P|400:320|400:320|320:336,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,288,145397,1,0,0:0:0
188,335,145742,2,0,P|112:320|112:320|96:240,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,80,147121,6,0,P|144:48|160:96|208:48,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,112,148156,1,0,0:0:0
309,53,148501,2,0,P|352:96|368:48|464:80,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,160,149535,2,0,P|400:240,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,304,150570,6,0,P|224:272|144:272|112:240,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,80,151949,2,0,P|96:112|176:112|208:144,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,152811,12,4,155397,0:0:0
48,320,156087,6,0,P|48:80,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,32,157466,1,2,0:0:0
128,112,157811,1,2,0:0:0
192,64,158156,6,0,P|256:166|256:166|320:64,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,112,159535,1,2,0:2:0
384,192,159880,1,2,0:2:0
400,32,160570,1,2,0:0:0
464,80,160915,6,0,P|464:320,1,240,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,352,162294,2,0,P|304:368,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,163673,6,8,P|112:176|400:112|256:8,2,320,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,336,167121,5,2,0:0:0
112,336,167466,1,2,0:0:0
48,288,167811,2,0,P|-4:176|48:80,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,48,169190,2,0,P|256:32,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,128,170570,1,2,0:0:0
176,272,171259,1,2,0:0:0
336,272,171949,6,0,P|432:256|432:256|464:112,1,240,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,48,173328,2,0,P|320:64|320:64|288:208,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,174708,12,4,177466,0:0:0
176,320,188501,6,2,P|352:320,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,1:0:0
80,192,190570,1,0,0:0:0
192,64,191259,2,0,P|256:106|320:64,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,192,193328,1,0,0:0:0
176,320,194018,6,2,P|336:320,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,176,195397,2,2,P|408:112|360:88,1,120
256,144,196432,1,0,0:0:0
184,104,196777,2,2,P|88:32,2,120
192,184,198156,2,2,P|96:256,2,120
256,144,199535,1,4,0:0:0
48,32,202294,5,12,0:0:0
48,32,202639,1,0,0:0:0
96,96,202983,2,0,P|112:176|112:176|96:256,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,320,204018,2,0,P|224:352,1,80
384,352,205052,5,8,0:0:0
384,352,205397,1,0,0:0:0
428,284,205742,2,0,P|492:220,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,284,206777,2,0,P|284:220,2,80
388,216,207811,6,0,P|424:144|384:80,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,72,208846,1,0,0:0:0
224,48,209190,2,0,P|128:48,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,80,210570,6,0,P|32:192|104:280,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,304,211949,1,8,0:0:0
256,256,212294,1,0,0:0:0
328,304,212639,1,0,0:0:0
408,280,212983,1,0,0:0:0
408,280,213328,6,0,P|480:192|448:80,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
374,113,214708,2,0,P|134:113,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,80,216087,6,0,P|32:192|104:280,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,320,217466,2,0,P|216:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
297,250,218156,2,0,P|336:320,1,80
416,312,218846,6,0,P|416:72,1,240,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,56,220225,1,8,0:0:0
256,72,220570,1,0,0:0:0
176,56,220915,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,221604,12,4,223673,0:0:0
368,344,224363,6,2,P|456:312|456:312|480:248,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,192,225398,1,0,0:0:0
479,134,225743,2,2,P|456:72|456:72|368:40,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,84,227121,6,2,P|136:92|88:156,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
20,192,228156,1,0,0:0:0
89,232,228501,2,2,P|136:292|216:300,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,300,229535,2,0,P|376:300,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,144,230570,6,2,P|400:64|400:64|320:48,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,96,231604,1,0,0:0:0
190,48,231949,2,2,P|112:64|112:64|112:144,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,288,233328,6,2,P|112:332|192:320,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,234363,1,0,0:0:0
322,321,234708,2,2,P|400:336,2,80,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,176,236087,6,2,P|385:85|321:101|305:53,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,237121,1,0,0:0:0
206,53,237466,2,2,P|190:101|126:85|112:176,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,320,238846,6,2,P|208:320,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,256,239880,1,0,0:0:0
304,320,240225,2,0,P|336:288|336:256,2,80,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,160,241604,6,2,P|368:104|320:48,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,104,242639,1,0,0:0:0
192,48,242983,2,2,P|144:104|192:160,1,160,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,243846,12,4,246432,0:0:0

Nur so nebenbei ich hab gemerkt, dass die AudioLeadIn nicht gleich ist sie sollte 2000 sein. Habs bei mir schon geändert!

OK. Danke!

Elly-chan wrote:

i love this song

MystykAMV wrote:

Hi! So here's the mod4mod finally, I finished >.< Sorry for being so late with it X_X

Normal:
Check AiMod because it says there are some unsnapped objects. Fixed.
OD+1? Hmpf... m'kay.
from 00:07:121 (1) to 00:39:535 (1) - very small thing but it would be a bit nicer if the objects didn't reach >< so if you left a little bit more distance (a few grids) - for example this one - http://puu.sh/29brj and this one - http://puu.sh/29bqY etc. it's not so appealing like this imo >< I don't think this is really that bad, nevertheless tried to fix some of them.
00:47:811 (1,2) and 00:53:329 (1,2) - I don't really like that pattern, they are both curvy but they are too different, maybe if the second slider would be flipped vertically it would look nicer (but flow would break a bit) so maybe you could try something like this? - http://puu.sh/29byV Fine.
01:01:259 (2,1) - why is that jump? you could try other placement you could just place 01:00:915 (1,1) - closer, so the first (1) to the right a bit and the second (1) to the left a bit, and pattern would stay the same Okay.
01:33:673 (3) - it feels weird to click this circle, it's a bit too sudden in my opinion, beacuse before you used to put long slider and the circles followed an easier rythm, I know it fits the lyrics, but it still plays weird to me (and the following ones too which are similar to this) Problem is I can't figure out what else to do.
01:38:501 (2) - you can make this a better blanket - http://puu.sh/29bH6 Isn't it perfect already?
01:39:708 (3) - this plays very weird so I would suggest this - http://puu.sh/29bIq - so basically remove 01:40:397 (1,2) - put 01:39:708 (3) - on the white tick (a bit later) and add a repeat, it would still fit the music and wouldn't feel weird I am doing this without wanting to.
01:39:708 (3) - well even if you don't do the above, at least remove the claps from this slider, I think they don't fit, there is no special sound there (like beats) so not really necessary to put claps
01:44:707 (3) - same as mentioned before 01:33:673 (3) ^
01:55:397 (2,2) - mentioned before too 00:47:811 (1,2) ^
01:57:122 (2) - maybe you could place this to some other place? stacking is a bit boring, so it might be more fun to play if you changed just example - http://puu.sh/29bMX I'll take the example!
03:20:915 (1) - I think this slider is too short moreover the slider afterwards comes too quickly (and this is only a normal diff, i know it doesn't have to be like very easy but still...) so either remove the spinner or make it longer? (for example remove 03:23:328 (2) - and put (1) one white tick later....etc. up to you) But it looks right to me :c
03:32:294 (3) - remove hit circle? and 03:32:639 (4) - put this at the place where (3) was (on the timeline) and add a repeat, it would fit better to the music imo and like this you could avoid stacking
03:39:191 (2) - I think you missed a clap from the beginning of the slider It was intention, but I like this even more with clap.

Escalation:
I personally don't think tick rate 2 fits this difficulty, the long sliders sound good with tick rate 1, because many times they tick when he sings something, also with tick rate one 00:22:983 (1) - the ticks would fit well to the melody on this slider << M'kay.
Plz lower AR, I think it's too fast and doesn't really fit << it feels forced to me Duh.... I really wanted to keep this off but fine...
00:43:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this plays weird in my opinion, especially the first 4 hit circles, I think unstacking them would solve the problem, put a distance between them Okay
00:57:121 (3) - make this a bit more curvy so that it is a better blanket Fine.
00:57:466 (4) - it's a bit annoying that this doesn't fit to the beat properly << it fits the melody, but the beat is louder so I think you should hit it somehow
plz try this - http://puu.sh/29cDd - it fits so well in my opinion and like this it doesn't feel uncomfortable to click the hit circles (01:00:397 (5,6) - ) I tried somehow else
01:40:397 (1,2,3) - these feel unnecessary for me, I don't hear anything that would mean stream, and I feel uncomfortable hitting them, I would delete 01:40:483 (2) - the others are fine Okay.
01:49:018 - add hit circle, it fits the lyrics and it's empty without it >.< Fine.
02:04:880 (4) - I don't really like this placed here, put it somehere else? (and it kinda breaks flow imo) I seriously don't know where.
02:22:639 (3) - ctrl+G in this slider? again because of flow, when I played it before this was one of the things I thought should be changed >.< ...fine
02:39:535 (5) - try to place this a bit to the right? so that the small stream is straight and doesn't look messy It didn't look messy to me but whatever...
02:42:811 (2,3) - I think this doesn't fit so well to the beat, since the blue tick is not really a beat, so I think properly it should be like this - http://puu.sh/29HTP Okay
02:54:708 (1,2,3) - 02:55:225 (5,6,7) - 02:55:742 (9,10,11) - these streams feel unnecessary and forced, or maybe don't stack them? so it would feel better to click them Okii
02:56:776 (1,2) - put these a bit further from the center, because it's not really appealing that they reach (3) >.< Fine
03:14:190 (2,3) - honestly, it feels weird to click on these >.< I think you should put (3) on the red tick, so here 03:14:535 - i think it woudl fit better to the melody(?) it's like türü-türü-tü türü-türü-tü...lol yeah hard to explain haha, you're right
03:16:777 (1,2,3,4) - don't make them reach each other Sure.
03:20:915 (1,1) - delete 03:22:294 (1) - and lengthen the spinner? it would fit better imo, and the spinner ends on a weird spot since there is not sound there (yet you even added a hitsound) Fine
03:24:018 (1,2) - place further from the center Right.
03:51:432 (5,6) - stack them properly M'kay


Sorry if my mod is not really useful, it's a nice beatmap. Good Luck! Thanks!

HeatKai wrote:

02:53:328 (1,2,1) - this part,rather then like this <- fixed
03:24:363 (3) - make a better blanket! don't be lazy reiji =w= <- fixed

MystykAMV wrote:

00:25:052 (4,1) - maybe try this instead? - http://puu.sh/29IkF - it feels more fitting to the music <- fixed
01:29:190 (1) - I think this slider should start earlier, or at least add a hit circle? because he starts singing on the red tick and not on the white one << <- fixed
03:07:639 - add hit circle because of the lyircs <- fixed

1. 00:03:673 (1,2,3) - 00:07:121 (1,2) - try to don't stack objecks in a easy diff i don't wanna mention all the stacked objecks but is recomended to unstalk they first because it will be more simple to play for beginners and second because i don't see a reason to stack they since it's not necessary
2. 00:23:156 - this line is useless
3. 00:24:363 - same about this inherited point is useless
4. i ask me which spacing do you wanna use 1.0 or 1.10 decide you and work on you spacing again.

1. 00:00:915 (1,2,3) - this pattern have inconsistent spacing
2. 00:11:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - this square have inconsistent spacing is lower as you used always
3. 00:25:052 (2) - spacing
4. 00:30:570 (1,2) - spacing
5. 00:42:294 (3,4,1,2) - fix it pls
6. 00:51:604 (3,1) - spacing
7. 00:54:708 (3,1,2,3) - spacing
8. 01:02:121 (2,3,1,2) - spacing
9. 01:18:156 (1,2,3) - spacing
10. 01:34:363 (4) - keep spacing consistent

1. 00:49:190 (3) - why don't you add a reverse slider here too it will sound much better and same about this slider : 00:54:708 (3) - and 01:00:225 (3) - like you did in the next kiai
2. 02:39:535 (2,3,4) - this can be very confuse someone try to change it in a other way

1. 00:06:432 (3) - what do you think about a clap here?
2. 00:11:949 - clap? even if here and ^ will fit a clap or a finish
3. 03:14:104 - why this big jump from 50 to 20% ? i think it will sound nicer with 30%

1. 03:20:915 - are here really neded all this lines? try to do 5-10-15-20-25-30-35-40-45-50 and not numbers like 43-46-47-48 - this is considered for me lines spamm

1. 00:01:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - keep spacing consistent with the rest
2. 00:13:673 (2,3,4) - spacing
3. 00:44:363 (4,1) - o3o spacing
4. 00:50:225 (3,1) - to near to the next circle
5. 00:55:742 (3,1) - same ^
6. 01:30:570 (4,1) - spacing
7. 01:41:604 (3,1) - spacing
8. 01:51:604 (1) - move to x: 310 y : 141 so you'll have a better spacing :V
9. 01:56:432 (3,1) - spacing

1. 00:26:432 (4,5,6) - why don't you try a pattern like thi? it will be sinmplier to read
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:294 (4,1) - why don't you try a blanket here?
3. 00:56:777 (3) - thi slider can be a better blanket for 00:56:432 (2) - and 00:58:156 (5) -
4. 00:58:156 (5) - this slider is not simmetric o3o i did it better here is the code:
   

   368,260,58156,2,0,B|336:295|268:283|256:191|256:191|244:283|176:295|144:260,1,337.500012874604,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:03:673 (5) - copy paste the slider that i did here
6. 01:28:501 (4,1) - this can be a better blanket
7. 01:38:501 (2) - one grind up the second white point
8. 01:57:466 (3,4,1) - can be a better blanket

1. you need a breake in this diff
2. 01:41:087 - spacing

1. 00:32:294 (3) - this slider touch HP drain
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:121 (1) - 01:12:639 (1) - ecc - try to make these slider better :c
3. 01:58:328 (7) - new combo
4. 02:40:225 (8) - new combo

Lally wrote:

ohai from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥

[General]
uhm actualy i think you should map a hard because Escalation diff is a insane diff and RAIN dif too :/ orz... fine

[Normal]
General:

1. 03:20:915 - are here really neded all this lines? try to do 5-10-15-20-25-30-35-40-45-50 and not numbers like 43-46-47-48 - this is considered for me lines spamm

didn't know if I did that intentionally, whatever, k

Spacing:

1. 00:01:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - keep spacing consistent with the rest Spacing *is* consistent
2. 00:13:673 (2,3,4) - spacing consistent
3. 00:44:363 (4,1) - o3o spacing I hope this will do
4. 00:50:225 (3,1) - to near to the next circle
5. 00:55:742 (3,1) - same ^
6. 01:30:570 (4,1) - spacing
7. 01:41:604 (3,1) - spacing
8. 01:51:604 (1) - move to x: 310 y : 141 so you'll have a better spacing :V
9. 01:56:432 (3,1) - spacing

done

Placement:

1. 00:26:432 (4,5,6) - why don't you try a pattern like thi? it will be sinmplier to read Because (6) is a blanket and stacking would ruin it
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:294 (4,1) - why don't you try a blanket here? slightly changed
3. 00:56:777 (3) - thi slider can be a better blanket for 00:56:432 (2) - and 00:58:156 (5) I think I'll leave this for now
4. 00:58:156 (5) - this slider is not simmetric o3o i did it better here is the code:
   

   368,260,58156,2,0,B|336:295|268:283|256:191|256:191|244:283|176:295|144:260,1,337.500012874604,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:03:673 (5) - copy paste the slider that i did here made the slider symmetric myself, thanks for pointing out though
6. 01:28:501 (4,1) - this can be a better blanket I actually didn't want this to be a blanket
7. 01:38:501 (2) - one grind up the second white point fine
8. 01:57:466 (3,4,1) - can be a better blanket I think I fixed this before

[Escalation]

1. you need a breake in this diff okay
2. 01:41:087 - spacing

okay

wah \o3o/ good luck

1. Using AudioLeadIn 1000 would be much better, imo
2. Try Slider Tick Rate 2, sounds much better.

1. First of all, I really don't like that increasing difficulity.I don't understand it. It looks weird and doesn't make any sense. It's not even funny, it's just weird, imo. Sorry.
2. Try to use AR9 because your Extreme part feels unreadable and weird with lower ARs. Btw, don't forget to increase OD by one tick as well to keep diff settings balanced.
3. If you still want to keep this (pointless, in my opinion) escalation, why didn't you start with [Easy]?
4. 00:03:328 - vocals start here, it TOTALLY feels off the slider (00:02:294 (5)) and flows really weird. I have re-arranged this pattern for you, see if you will like it. pattern
5. 00:14:363 - same as above, slider feels totally off vocals. Vocals here are TOO loud, you can't just ignore them! re-arranged pattern
6. 00:16:087 (3,4,5,1) - this pattern feels awkward and doesn't fits with [Normal] diff good enough. Personally, i want you to place more sliders here.
   If you remove 00:17:121 (4,5) - and add repeat aa (3) it would be great! what's more, use circles instead of 00:17:811 (1) - because this slider feels weird here! pattern
7. 00:39:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is not even close to [Normal] diff. It feels weird and ruins the balance here. :< Atijumps with growing distance are not acceptable for [Normal] diffs, for sure!
8. 00:43:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - you have a calm [Hard] part, and this 1/2 "stream" looks here too hard. It feels wrong here, because normally you don't use this kind of things.
9. 00:45:052 (1,2,3,4,1) - x1.1 > x1.2 > x1.0 / What's the meaning og those weird spacing changes? I feel like you wanted to copy "that cool flow style" and obviously failed here. It feels pointless, inconsistent and random, sorry.
10. 00:46:949 (2,3) - What is it? Distance is the way TOO big for manual stack and the way too small for regular pattern. This part doesn't feel antijumpy, and this spacing change looks like random and weird to me.
11. 00:49:880 (1,2,3) - every single parttern at this part is EASY to read, but (3) here is overlapped with hitburst. It makes this pattern kinda too hard. It feel more like [Insane], so it doesn't plays good enough here.
12. 00:51:087 (2) - nazi - how do you want us to enjoy your diff if we have to guess where to start slider? Slider start is OVERLAPPED and it looks messy.When I see messy patterns, I think that mapper doesn't care about his map and I feel kinda disrespected. It makes people very sad. So, try not to use messy//overlapped patterns.
    Note: Why don't you spend some time and clean your map up by yourself? I'm pretty sure you can do it!
13. 00:49:708 - 00:50:397 - these beats are ignored to keep this part [Hard] but it feels empty and confuses me a lot. I don't know why, but I feel like you shouldn't ignore those beats. can you follow music closer and keep ppatterns easy enough?
14. 01:04:363 (1) - suddenly x2.0 jump. As I said, your [Hard] feels calm, and those jumps are UNEXPECTED. They will be too much stress here, try to reduce jump distance.
15. 01:54:966 - there's no ANY beat, so ending slider here doesn't make ANY sense. Please stop placing offbeat 3/4 patterns because you think "it's cool here" and try to follow music instead.
16. 02:11:949 (1) - this is unrankable! reverse-arrow of this slider will be overlapped by 02:11:259 (3)'s hitburst if you miss at (3). COvered reverse-arrow = unrankable, y'know.
17. 02:11:259 (3) - stop ignoring LOUD beats! it doesn't make any sense and confuses players a lot! It is unplayable, any time I hear LOUD beat during dlider I want to hurt someone. What is the point of ignoring LOUD beat at 02:11:259 (3)?
18. 02:27:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it sounds EXACTLY the same way as previous jumpy-patterns, but there're no ANY jumps. Why? I guess you have never heard of consistency. Try to keep your jump consistent, so we will read/understand them MUCH, MUCH better!
19. 02:34:363 (5) - nazi - try to place a New Combo here, to warn us about stream It appears too suddenly, imo!
20. 02:41:949 (6,7) - nazi - can you unstack these circles cause it'll be too hard to click at (6) for some players. After stream stack is too unexpected for players.
21. 02:45:570 (2,3) - you've crossed the line. Those whistles feel TOTALLY off music and disappointed me a lot. I was like why there're whistles? WHY?
22. 02:53:156 (4) - this reverse-arrow might be hard to read due to POSSIBLE overlap. Check it out nd make sure it's readable!
23. 03:01:949 (1,2,3) - why did you ruined this break to place THREE OBJECTS with RANDOM jump? It ruins the flow here and feels unexpected. :<
24. 03:08:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - even when I increase volume, I can't hear ANY hitsounds. It is weird, because every object must be hearable for playes (unless it's a spinner with fading sound)
25. 03:14:363 - 03:14:880 - 03:15:225 - 03:15:915 - did you just cut out some circles to keep rhythm easier? I feel like you've deleted random circles and it feels weird cause some important beats are missed.
    Later, you go on with even more pointless/random/inconsistent jumps. What makes things even worser, is that you have a slow AR. AR8 gfeels TOO slow for final part and too fast for start part. You've ruined your diff with too much "creativity", I think.
    
    I'd recommend you to think if you really need this diff and if you still want to keep it, try to clean up! Fix some messy overlaps, some weird patterns and try to improve your flow.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo. from your M4M with TicClick

Tickie-nyan, I've done it for you! :3

[General]

1. Using AudioLeadIn 1000 would be much better, imo
2. Try Slider Tick Rate 2, sounds much better. Contradiction with MystykAMV's mod happening now.

[Escalation]
Note: I will check only this diff, as requested.

1. First of all, I really don't like that increasing difficulity.I don't understand it. It looks weird and doesn't make any sense. It's not even funny, it's just weird, imo. Sorry.
2. Try to use AR9 because your Extreme part feels unreadable and weird with lower ARs. Btw, don't forget to increase OD by one tick as well to keep diff settings balanced. ^
3. If you still want to keep this (pointless, in my opinion) escalation, why didn't you start with [Easy]? ok, that sounded offensive now... well, I didn't because I didn't feel like it
4. 00:03:328 - vocals start here, it TOTALLY feels off the slider (00:02:294 (5)) and flows really weird. I have re-arranged this pattern for you, see if you will like it. pattern ...'kay
5. 00:14:363 - same as above, slider feels totally off vocals. Vocals here are TOO loud, you can't just ignore them! re-arranged pattern I don't see any problem with this, noone has ever complained about this, so I will not change this
6. 00:16:087 (3,4,5,1) - this pattern feels awkward and doesn't fits with [Normal] diff good enough. Personally, i want you to place more sliders here. Would destroy the flow then
   If you remove 00:17:121 (4,5) - and add repeat aa (3) it would be great! what's more, use circles instead of 00:17:811 (1) - because this slider feels weird here! pattern How would you have handled the placement of that slider then?
7. 00:39:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is not even close to [Normal] diff. It feels weird and ruins the balance here. :< Atijumps with growing distance are not acceptable for [Normal] diffs, for sure! It is just that little part... the diff is becoming harder, besides.
8. 00:43:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - you have a calm [Hard] part, and this 1/2 "stream" looks here too hard. It feels wrong here, because normally you don't use this kind of things. Fine...
9. 00:45:052 (1,2,3,4,1) - x1.1 > x1.2 > x1.0 / What's the meaning og those weird spacing changes? I feel like you wanted to copy "that cool flow style" and obviously failed here. It feels pointless, inconsistent and random, sorry. I guess you should rethink what you just suggested. And that sounded offensive, too.
10. 00:46:949 (2,3) - What is it? Distance is the way TOO big for manual stack and the way too small for regular pattern. This part doesn't feel antijumpy, and this spacing change looks like random and weird to me. Haha, ain't life funny: if I stack it normally, a jump would occur and if I spaced it properly it would overlap at least one other hit object.
11. 00:49:880 (1,2,3) - every single parttern at this part is EASY to read, but (3) here is overlapped with hitburst. It makes this pattern kinda too hard. It feel more like [Insane], so it doesn't plays good enough here. works for me
12. 00:51:087 (2) - nazi - how do you want us to enjoy your diff if we have to guess where to start slider? Slider start is OVERLAPPED and it looks messy.When I see messy patterns, I think that mapper doesn't care about his map and I feel kinda disrespected. It makes people very sad. So, try not to use messy//overlapped patterns.
    Note: Why don't you spend some time and clean your map up by yourself? I'm pretty sure you can do it! Y U so rude ;v;
13. 00:49:708 - 00:50:397 - these beats are ignored to keep this part [Hard] but it feels empty and confuses me a lot. I don't know why, but I feel like you shouldn't ignore those beats. can you follow music closer and keep ppatterns easy enough? NO.
14. 01:04:363 (1) - suddenly x2.0 jump. As I said, your [Hard] feels calm, and those jumps are UNEXPECTED. They will be too much stress here, try to reduce jump distance. I SERIOUSLY DON'T WANNA and besides: another contradiction with neonat's mod.
15. 01:54:966 - there's no ANY beat, so ending slider here doesn't make ANY sense. Please stop placing offbeat 3/4 patterns because you think "it's cool here" and try to follow music instead. omg, you should read what you are writing.... besides, it was their idea
16. 02:11:949 (1) - this is unrankable! reverse-arrow of this slider will be overlapped by 02:11:259 (3)'s hitburst if you miss at (3). COvered reverse-arrow = unrankable, y'know. this does not overlap, next time, use default skin
17. 02:11:259 (3) - stop ignoring LOUD beats! it doesn't make any sense and confuses players a lot! It is unplayable, any time I hear LOUD beat during dlider I want to hurt someone. What is the point of ignoring LOUD beat at 02:11:259 (3)? Sir, what loud beat did you actually hear here??
18. 02:27:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it sounds EXACTLY the same way as previous jumpy-patterns, but there're no ANY jumps. Why? I guess you have never heard of consistency. Try to keep your jump consistent, so we will read/understand them MUCH, MUCH better! I guess you have never heard of intention.
19. 02:34:363 (5) - nazi - try to place a New Combo here, to warn us about stream It appears too suddenly, imo! fine
20. 02:41:949 (6,7) - nazi - can you unstack these circles cause it'll be too hard to click at (6) for some players. After stream stack is too unexpected for players. Naah'I don't really think it is that bad.
21. 02:45:570 (2,3) - you've crossed the line. Those whistles feel TOTALLY off music and disappointed me a lot. I was like why there're whistles? WHY? I am opposing now. You know why? Because if THIS crossed the line, someone would have suggested to fix it!
22. 02:53:156 (4) - this reverse-arrow might be hard to read due to POSSIBLE overlap. Check it out nd make sure it's readable! TBH, it is readable.
23. 03:01:949 (1,2,3) - why did you ruined this break to place THREE OBJECTS with RANDOM jump? It ruins the flow here and feels unexpected. :< On second request
24. 03:08:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - even when I increase volume, I can't hear ANY hitsounds. It is weird, because every object must be hearable for playes (unless it's a spinner with fading sound)
25. 03:14:363 - 03:14:880 - 03:15:225 - 03:15:915 - did you just cut out some circles to keep rhythm easier? I feel like you've deleted random circles and it feels weird cause some important beats are missed. No.
    Later, you go on with even more pointless/random/inconsistent jumps. What makes things even worser, is that you have a slow AR. AR8 gfeels TOO slow for final part and too fast for start part. You've ruined your diff with too much "creativity", I think. You are seriously being rude ;v;
    
    I'd recommend you to think if you really need this diff and if you still want to keep it, try to clean up! Fix some messy overlaps, some weird patterns and try to improve your flow.I actually think about deleting it since you insulted it like noone ever did. ;v;

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Sorry, if something sounds too rude or I'm too picky/strict. I just did my best to help you and I really want you to improve your style!

Good luck, you'll need it!