1. Easy (2,01 stars, 34 notes)
2. Hard (5 stars, 121 notes)
3. Normal (3,93 stars, 56 notes)

1. 00:08:908 (1,2,3) - why such a low spacing there o.o? It is just a Hard blah. It is your hardest diff so please make a huger spacing there .3 I don't want super hard jumps but well ... you know ... more love
2. 00:12:495 (9) - feels out of place. I would stack it with (8)
3. 00:14:452 (2,3,4) - spacing could be higher for a better flow
4. 00:19:832 (4,5) - try X: 92 Y: 300
5. 00:27:169 (9) - Ending is uhhh... dafuq. Song just stops there which sounds weird with a slider (Other diffs are ok due to spinner. Can't say if this can be improved. just saying that it is weird.
6. Is there really no longer version? I just talk about 1 or two seconds without a outfading

1. 00:25:865 (1) - would use some inherit lines to reduce audio equal to sound like 00:27:332 - inherit time audio to 30 or so.

2. 00:25:865 (1) - would use some inherit lines to reduce audio equal to sound like 00:27:332 - inherit time audio to 30 or so.
3. 00:02:387 (1) - Why not symmetric ;_;
4. 00:15:430 (1,2,1,2,1,2,) -

   332,328,15430,6,0,B|403:310|434:278|450:230|448:166|432:118|399:87|335:72,1,360,4|2
   256,192,17386,1,0
   180,76,18039,6,0,B|115:89|82:120|64:167|62:231|76:280|107:313|178:331,1,360,4|2
   256,192,19995,1,0
   396,160,20647,6,0,B|396:128|372:80|300:56|252:56,1,180,2|0
   124,36,21952,1,2

   just changed the position a little tiny bit

Konei wrote:

Eh, lol xD


[General]

* Die Zeit vor dem Countdown ist zu kurz damit er funktioniert, also schalte ihn aus Gut.
* Du benutzt ein Video, also ist es besser, die Letterboxen während der Pausen (die es nicht gibt) auszuschalten Jo.


[Easy]

00:04:995 (1) - Whistle weg? Klingt nicht gut denke ich Ansich hört man den nur schwer heraus, außerdem ist das dann im Taiko Mode ein Big Kat, was viel besser zur Musik passt.
00:07:604 (1) - Whistle am Anfang für Konstans? Okay.
00:07:604 (1) - Den Slider schief zu haben sieht irgendwie ein bisschen merkwürdig aus. Ich würde die Rotation ändern, um dem ein besseres Aussehen zu geben. http://puu.sh/1cK41 Changed.
00:15:430 (1) - Ich denke Drum whistle hört sich hier besser an Okay. (Wow, so funktioniert das also. xD)
00:18:039 (1) - ^ ^
00:20:647 (1) - Der Slider sieht nicht wirklich gut in seiner Funktion aus, eine Blanket mit 2 wäre in meiner Meinung schöner~ http://puu.sh/1cJYb Der Slider ist ein bisschen rundlicher gemacht.
00:23:256 (1) - Der Whistle am Start klingt viel zu laut und nicht gut~ Entfernt. :O
00:24:560 (2) - Kommt mir ein bisschen random platziert vor, das hier hat einen besseren Flow denke ich http://puu.sh/1cK13 Okay.


[Normal]

00:04:995 (1) - Whistle am Ende für Konstans? Nope.
00:06:300 (3) - Whistle am Anfang und Ende? Whistle wurde am Anfang gesetzt.
00:07:604 (1) - ^ Okay.
00:15:430 (1) - Ich denke Drum whistle hört sich hier besser an Okay.
00:18:039 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:256 (1) - Selbes über das Whistle wie in Easy, ich höre auch nichts in der Musik, wofür man es setzen sollte Okay.
00:25:213 (4) - Finish? Nee.. hört sich seltsam an..


[Hard]

00:03:365 (5) - Lösch den Circle und starte den Spinner hier würde ich sagen. Die "Hei, hei's" enden hier. Aber es fühlt sich hier unkomfortabel an eine Note zu spielen wo der Ton nicht laut ist <- Deshalb lehn ich es ab.
00:08:256 (5) - Whistle auf den gesamten Sliderkörper folgt der Musik hier gut~ Stimmt. :O
00:15:430 (1) - Selber Vorschlag mit den Drum Whistles wie in Normal und Easy~ Okay.
00:23:256 (3) - Selbes wie in den anderen Schwierigkeiten :3 Jaja.. okay.
00:25:213 (3) - Finish? Gleicher Grund wie in Normal.


Das war alles :3~

Viel Glück o/ Danke. Wenn ich wirklich vor habe, sie zum Rank zu führen, brauch ich wirklich Glück. xD

vipto wrote:

perp *derp

offset is 2391 k, thanks.

[Hard]

00:06:626 (1,1) - Stack properly What?
00:12:658 (1) - Split? No.
00:16:408 (4) - Spacing to 3 or 5 is wrong/inconsistent Fixed.
00:19:180 - Add circle nope.
00:19:669 - ^ Yes!

[Normal]

k

[Easy]

00:15:430 (1,1) - These look meh D: Maybe rework them There's nothing wrong. :<
00:20:647 (1) - Meh, too Good.

Wtf that song? o3o

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Hallo
Ich mag das Lied, egal wie kurz es ist und modde mal x3
Schade das es nicht rankbar ist TTATT

General
Auch wenn es nicht rankbar ist, wie wäre es mit mehr Combofarben ? Nicht unbedingt notwendig.

Easy

00:04:999 versuch ihn etwas schöner, runder zu machen http://puu.sh/1gpxR Gut.
00:20:651 ^ http://puu.sh/1gpzQ Hab's bisschen geändert.

Normal

00:12:825 etwas runder ? http://puu.sh/1gpAY Warum? :<
00:19:021 auch wenn es nicht rankbar ist, würde ich keinen Jump im Normal setzen. Du hast ja sonnst keine Jumps. Der Jump war auch nicht beabsichtigt..
Vill eher das probieren mit combo 1,2,3 ? http://puu.sh/1gpFm

Hard

00:07:608 stack den richtig mit combo 1 von zuvor Gut.
00:23:260 Ich würde den whistle in normal dort weg lassen, weil es mit den restlichen Geräuschen nicht wirklich zusammen passt, aber das musst du entscheiden Hab's vergessen zu ändern. xD

So das wars Ich mag die beatmap und das Lied gerne und hoffe, ich konnte wenigstens etwas helfen ^^

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Very short song.

No problems found.

Good luck for rank !

368,324,15434,6,0,B|473:288|504:192|472:92|368:60,1,360,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,148,17390,1,0,0:0:0
144,60,18043,6,0,B|40:92|8:192|39:288|144:324,1,360,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,232,19999,1,0,0:0:0

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Stefan :3
from my Q

[General]
Do you want basic combo colour ? :3 I will change them for a bit.
use 1000 ~ 1500 Lead-in. Not neccessary since there is enough time between the Intro and the Start to play. then this video has sound. plz remove the sound in video. Wow.. didn't know that. D:
and.. minimum draining time for a map is 30 seconds <-- ask the BAT Dx.. I will do that, but now I am looking for Mods :3
[Easy]
00:15:434 (1,2,1,2) - It is not symmetry. use the code. then 00:20:651 (1) - re-spacing it Alright, thanks for the effort. :3

368,324,15434,6,0,B|473:288|504:192|472:92|368:60,1,360,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,148,17390,1,0,0:0:0
144,60,18043,6,0,B|40:92|8:192|39:288|144:324,1,360,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,232,19999,1,0,0:0:0

[Normal]
not bad ^^
[Hard]
00:03:532 (1) - follow the vocal.therefore remove fifth circle and move to 00:03:369 till 00:04:673. Actually it's fine for now. It really sounds awkward without the "Hit" of (5). So no changes.
00:14:456 (3) - NC ? Not neccessary
00:27:173 (9) - add finish on slider's start. this better fit. Oki.

gl ~

1. I ask some mappers/MAT they said Draining Time must over 30 seconds. lol

1. 00:11:521 (2) - (end) no clap? I saw you added on 00:09:564 (3) - D;

1. 00:11:521 (3) - (end) clap again. Same reason as Easy o3o

1. 00:03:532 (1) - Can you delete this spinner and change to some sliders/notes? I saw you don't add spinner here at Easy/Normal, and here's so fast to place the spinner imo u3u. And you can change like this, fits the vocal :3
   

Flask wrote:

Yahoo! Mod Request from my queue

[General]

1. I ask some mappers/MAT they said Draining Time must over 30 seconds. lol I know right, as I said before, I will take care to get as first enough Mods to be sure, that it's "perfect" (in my sight) and then asking the Team what they think about it.

[Easy]

1. 00:11:521 (2) - (end) no clap? I saw you added on 00:09:564 (3) - D; orz, added Whistle.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:521 (3) - (end) clap again. Same reason as Easy o3o Same here.

[Hard]

1. 00:03:532 (1) - Can you delete this spinner and change to some sliders/notes? I saw you don't add spinner here at Easy/Normal, and here's so fast to place the spinner imo u3u. And you can change like this, fits the vocal :3 I like the Spinner for now..
   

Ohh shit, this map is so awesome, I just found these ;n; <3
Good luck to you~

AngelHoney wrote:

timing



im not sure about the timing , but its better than yours Ohh damn.. I was pretty sure that it sounds awkward at the End, but your Timing is godly for now <3, thanks. (For this you actually deserve two KD ;w;)

00:05:325 (2,3) - (2) end of slider end at (3)? Seems fine for now.
00:07:445 - add note? Ok.
00:09:890 - add note? Would be too much.
00:10:054 - add note? ^
00:12:499 (9) - spacing different ? (maybe 3~8 farther the spacing will be better ? derp.. I totally forgot to fix the Spacing in the Diff, thanks.
00:15:271 - add note? Ok.
00:19:347 (3) - the rhythm is a bit ...wering Fits well, imo.
00:19:836 (5) - spacing Fixed.
00:21:956 (6,7,8) - add notes to 6~7~8 ? what?
00:23:260 (3) - n-whistle ? maybe its wrong , click (3) start of slider and ctrl+q to auto hitsound ,Normal is wrong http://puu.sh/1m3dx Fixed.

btw Draining Time: 0:24 is not rankable (must be 30+ Ikr.

hope this is useful mod for you^^ And how it is useful. lol

Philippines wrote:

There's this official rule in osu!Wiki where the minimum draining (play) time for a map is 30 seconds. Uh

Wolf wrote:

Woof~
From my Modding Queue.

General
Nothing wrong for me.

Easy
Nothing much to add here too, although:
00:02:391 (1) Make it symmetric and place in the middle? Something like this would look very nice in my opinion. (Make sure to move 00:04:347 (2) if you accept the suggestion of course) Alright.

Normal
00:06:304 (3) - Move to x:152 - y:216 to make aligned with 00:04:999 (1) - ? Okay.
00:07:608 (1) - Move to x:480 - y:304 to make aligned with 00:06:304 (3) - ? Okay.
00:11:521 (2) - Why not make this slider to fit in the entire grid? I mean, I know you placed there to be aligned with 00:10:217 (1) - But this was the only slider that is off in the grid on the entire diff. I don't think that there is something wrong with the Slider.
00:23:260 (1,2,3,4) - Highly suggest moving to x:168 y:208. Would look much better in my opinion for symmetrical pattern. (http://puu.sh/1Hcst) Alright.

Hard
00:03:532 (1) - Spin here doesn't fit good in my opinion. Since it's a hard diff, why not map it? Since many people wish this Spinner removed, I'd did it.
00:05:325 (2,3) - A pattern like this plays much better for me. Yep.
00:06:630 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed Combos here
00:07:282 (1) - NC? ^
00:10:217 (1,2) - Aligned with the grid looks much much better in my opinion. (http://puu.sh/1HcyU) Coordinates: x:396 y:340 Okay.
00:24:075 (4,5,6,1) - Something like this? Okay. (This was a pain to fix that. D:)
*00:25:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very nice to play this, goob job!* Thanks. ^^

That's all I could find.
Good luck.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Even if Kokatsu is right, I will still mod it, so you can apply same stuff when you are having a loop.



[General]
Are you sure about the Artist? Better check it once again out! NicoNico Douga is not an Artist, it's just a site like youtube. I am pretty sure, it's correct.

[Easy]

00:06:630 (2,3) - Inconsitent spacing. Fixed.
00:08:912 (2,3) - ^ Fixed.
00:07:608 (1) - Move the slider beginning a bit down to have (3) and (1) in one line. Changed this part in own purpose.
00:20:651 (1) - You could make this a bit rounder by moving the second tick backwards. Done.
00:25:869 (1) - Maybe expand spinner to 00:27:767 Changed this part in own purpose.

[Normal]

You don't like following the given spacings, huh? -> AiMod Fixed.

00:08:912 (2,3,4,1) - To be honest this dosen't look nice to me and plays a little weird because of 'sudden' direction change. Maybe stack (4) with (2) and move the upcoming slider a bit so the transition from (4) to slider is better. I don't think that this will be too fugly, but I think about ti change it with more neat pattern.
00:25:869 (1) - Same suggestion like in easy. Denied.

[Hard]

00:12:336 (8,9,1) - I see no reason for using a higher distance space, just make it normal. No sound which could justify it and neither a voice. Keeping the general Distance would mess up the Look.
00:17:227 (6,7,8) - Offbeat for the vocal. Add a note 00:17:717 at and it works better. Else it can be treated as unrankable. This.. should work how it is.
00:19:836 (5) - Maybe it is better to have a reverse arrow here instead of a new note at 00:20:162. Voice makes it weird again. Good.
00:20:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsitent distance. Fixed.


Overall difficulties are fine, but I see no reason for having those different spaces in Hard. Also Hard feels like an Insane and the diff-spread between Normal-Hard isn't so good as well. I would rather suggest to make one easier Hard and rename the current Hard to Insane. Hard is actually fine, except of one, two Parts this is totally a Hard Diff. :c

Good luck, hope I could help you.

1. The last red Timing section is timed late, which causes the notes to be offbeat. Try changing the offset to 27951 (-36) for better timing! Don't forget to resnap the notes afterwards.

1. 00:04:347 (2) - Nothing major here, bit I would add a soft-whistle at this hit circle to better emphasize the vocal. It sounds a tad empty without it.
2. 00:04:999 (1) - This shape of this slider could be improved (and more curvier). How about readjusting this slider to something like this (sse image)? This fix will require to fix some spacing.
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   368,64,4999,6,0,P|336:116|300:96|256:104|256:64|256:24|212:32|176:12|144:64,1,270,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:10:217 (1,2) - I think you should add the soft-whistles at the end of these sliders to emphasize the vocals. You added them on your other difficulties so why not here?
4. 00:15:434 (1,1) - It sounds a bit awkward to use a drum-whistle at the beginning of these sliders (00:15:434 (1) and 00:18:043 (1)). I would instead add a soft-finish at the start of these sliders. You seem to add one at 00:41:030 (1), so why not here? :/
5. 00:17:390 (2,2) - I think you should add a soft-whistle on these hit circles (00:17:390 (2) and 00:19:999 (2)). It will better emphasize the vocals, please consider.
6. 00:20:651 (1) - The hitsounds would be more consistent if you remove the soft-whistle at the end of this slider. It will be consistent with the next notes at 00:21:956 (2,3).
7. 00:30:595 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:999 (1), but mirrored. Copy/paste the slider at 00:04:999 (1) and Ctrl+J. Also, consider add a soft-clap at the end of this slider as well. It may already be there if copy/pasted!
8. 00:23:260 (1) - The only normal-whistle in this map (lol). Unless you meant to add a soft-clap here?
9. 00:24:564 (2) - I think you could also add a soft-clap at the end of this slider to follow the sound effect of the notebook hitting Ryuuko's head XD.
10. 00:27:987-00:37:117 (2) - Repeat (but mirrored)!

1. 00:04:021 (4) - You could try adding a soft-whistle here at the end of this slider to help emphasize the prominent volume of the vocal. Also add one at 00:29:943 (4).
2. 00:15:434 (1) - You could improve this shape of this slider by improving the curve.
3. 00:17:390 (4) - Similar to Easy. I think you should add a soft-whistle on these notes (00:17:390 (2) and 00:19:999 (2) at the end of the slider). It will better emphasize the vocals, please consider.
4. 00:25:217 (4) - Same suggestion as Easy. I think adding a soft-clap helps to follow the sound effect.

1. 00:03:369 (5) - Since there is no vocal audible here, consider removing this soft-whistle here. There is noting to emphasize here. Also remove the soft-whistle at 00:28:965 (5).
2. 00:04:347 (5) - Similar to Easy and Normal. Add a soft-whistle at this hit circle at the head of this slider to better emphasize the vocal. It sounds a tad empty without it. Also and one at 00:29:943 (5).
3. 00:10:217 (1,2) - (Nazi) These slider ends are not exactly stacked! Feel free to ignore this mod of you want XD.
4. 00:11:521 (3,5,7) - I think you should only add the soft-whistles at Circles 3,5, and 7 to emphasize the "Dous" part of the vocal. Remove the soft-whistles at circles 6 and 8.
5. 00:13:477 (2) - Add a soft-whistle at the end of this kick slider to help emphasize the prominent volume of the vocal.
6. 00:38:421 (1) - You forgot to add a soft-whistle on this spinner.
7. 00:25:217 (3) - Same suggestion as Easy and Normal. I think adding a soft-clap helps to follow the sound effect.
8. 00:32:226 (2,3) - (Nazi) Similar to 00:10:217 (1,2), These slider ends are not exactly stacked! Again, you can ignore this mod of you want XD.

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello Stefan! Mod request from BeatofIke Knows! Very short map indeed! :3

[General]

1. The last red Timing section is timed late, which causes the notes to be offbeat. Try changing the offset to 27951 (-36) for better timing! Don't forget to resnap the notes afterwards. Thanks!

[Easy]

1. 00:04:347 (2) - Nothing major here, bit I would add a soft-whistle at this hit circle to better emphasize the vocal. It sounds a tad empty without it. Seems fine for now.
2. 00:04:999 (1) - This shape of this slider could be improved (and more curvier). How about readjusting this slider to something like this (sse image)? This fix will require to fix some spacing. Took your Code.
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   368,64,4999,6,0,P|336:116|300:96|256:104|256:64|256:24|212:32|176:12|144:64,1,270,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:10:217 (1,2) - I think you should add the soft-whistles at the end of these sliders to emphasize the vocals. You added them on your other difficulties so why not here? Forgot it. orz
4. 00:15:434 (1,1) - It sounds a bit awkward to use a drum-whistle at the beginning of these sliders (00:15:434 (1) and 00:18:043 (1)). I would instead add a soft-finish at the start of these sliders. You seem to add one at 00:41:030 (1), so why not here? :/ I had Finish there before, but since someone suggested to use Drum Hitsamples due the "Table Sound" of the Music is quite loud, I perfer to use here the Drum Whistles. Also, I used at the End Finish because it's the end. lulz
5. 00:17:390 (2,2) - I think you should add a soft-whistle on these hit circles (00:17:390 (2) and 00:19:999 (2)). It will better emphasize the vocals, please consider. Added Whistle on 00:19:999 (2)
6. 00:20:651 (1) - The hitsounds would be more consistent if you remove the soft-whistle at the end of this slider. It will be consistent with the next notes at 00:21:956 (2,3). Yep.
7. 00:30:595 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:999 (1), but mirrored. Copy/paste the slider at 00:04:999 (1) and Ctrl+J. Also, consider add a soft-clap at the end of this slider as well. It may already be there if copy/pasted! Done.
8. 00:23:260 (1) - The only normal-whistle in this map (lol). Unless you meant to add a soft-clap here? Nop, I like my Whistle here.
9. 00:24:564 (2) - I think you could also add a soft-clap at the end of this slider to follow the sound effect of the notebook hitting Ryuuko's head XD. I LOL'D SO HARD, BEST SUGGESTION FOR THIS MAP
10. 00:27:987-00:37:117 (2) - Repeat (but mirrored)! derp

[Normal]

1. 00:04:021 (4) - You could try adding a soft-whistle here at the end of this slider to help emphasize the prominent volume of the vocal. Also add one at 00:29:943 (4). Okay, but 2nd Whistle got added at 00:29:418 (3).
2. 00:15:434 (1) - You could improve this shape of this slider by improving the curve. Should be kawaii now.
3. 00:17:390 (4) - Similar to Easy. I think you should add a soft-whistle on these notes (00:17:390 (2) and 00:19:999 (2) at the end of the slider). It will better emphasize the vocals, please consider. Done.
4. 00:25:217 (4) - Same suggestion as Easy. I think adding a soft-clap helps to follow the sound effect. Done.

[Hard]

1. 00:03:369 (5) - Since there is no vocal audible here, consider removing this soft-whistle here. There is noting to emphasize here. Also remove the soft-whistle at 00:28:965 (5). Okay.
2. 00:04:347 (5) - Similar to Easy and Normal. Add a soft-whistle at this hit circle at the head of this slider to better emphasize the vocal. It sounds a tad empty without it. Also and one at 00:29:943 (5). Okay.
3. 00:10:217 (1,2) - (Nazi) These slider ends are not exactly stacked! Feel free to ignore this mod of you want XD. This is honestly not worth to fix. orz
4. 00:11:521 (3,5,7) - I think you should only add the soft-whistles at Circles 3,5, and 7 to emphasize the "Dous" part of the vocal. Remove the soft-whistles at circles 6 and 8. Yep, it is.
5. 00:13:477 (2) - Add a soft-whistle at the end of this kick slider to help emphasize the prominent volume of the vocal. Added some Whistles in this Area.
6. 00:38:421 (1) - You forgot to add a soft-whistle on this spinner. Okay.
7. 00:25:217 (3) - Same suggestion as Easy and Normal. I think adding a soft-clap helps to follow the sound effect. Yup.
8. 00:32:226 (2,3) - (Nazi) Similar to 00:10:217 (1,2), These slider ends are not exactly stacked! Again, you can ignore this mod of you want XD. This was a pain to fix. orz

Nice and short map, but I like to see more neatness and consistent hitsounds. Good Luck!:D

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi.
Here are just some suggestions:

[General]
I guess it's fine.

[Easy]
No major problem, however, I think the spinner 00:25:869 (1) is pretty short for an easy. And it's too close to the next slider. The OD is really low at this Diff and it should be easy enough to pass it. (I spun with 200, maybe a bit less and I passed with 300.)
And if you don't mind, move the timing point on 00:41:157 to 00:41:075. Tiny issue, but shouldn't be ignored. Fixed.

[Normal]
00:08:586 - Add a note? Good.
00:24:564 (2,3,4) - 3 finishes? Well anyway I don't like the clap here. The Finishes would overtune the Music and the Clap fits great with the Background Sound of the Music.
00:25:869 (1) - Sounds weird, move the end to 00:27:212 like what you did in Easy? Holy.. what the heck did I made there? o_o"
00:27:951 (1) - Move the end to 00:28:603 then add a note to 00:28:766. Okay.

[Hard]
00:03:369 (5) - Remove it? Okay.
00:12:662 (1,2) - Tto reverse 14 times only lemme feel boring... Of course I would rather make a Stream here but making this in a Hard Diff.. I don't really know. :/
00:19:347 (3) - Why 1/4? Because the Voice of Ryuuko gives the possibility to make 1/4 here.
00:22:282 (8) - ^ Same here but because of the Background Music.
00:27:212 (9) - Sounds weird...move the end to 00:27:489 may be better. It would mess up the Optic.
00:28:929 (5) - Remove it? Okay.
00:38:059 (1) - Remove NC. Yep

I'm not sure if the timing is absolutely correct. Have you ask (a) expert(s) to help you? Actually not, but it seems like it's better since BeatofIke's Suggestion. I'll ask anyway.
Anyway, good luck.

Jacob wrote:

[General]
- What's the name of the anime this is from? It should probably go in the source Talked in IRC about it, fixed.
- The way you added to the song to make it longer than 30 seconds sounds really sloppy.. I think it would be best to get someone more experienced with this stuff to fix it for you. I will look around. If I don't find someone I keep my Loop.
- The kiai time doesn't fit the song at all imo. It'd be best to remove it. Hmm.. okay. Removed for now.
- The timing is incorrect still. The very first offset would be better at 2409, but it's probably not completely accurate. I'm pretty sure about the others, though. Second offset should be 25898, third should be 26600, fourth should be 27235, and the last should be 27961. orz (except of the first I changed the other ones)


[Easy]
00:07:282 (3,1) - Space these out a little farther so they don't overlap. Looks a bit neater. Done.
00:32:842 (3,1) - ^ Done.

[Normal]
00:10:217 (1) - I think having this slider below (5) in terms of position rather than above it would flow better. Good.
00:18:043 (1) - It would flow better for this slider to curve directly into the next note. If you don't understand what I mean, take the node closest to the slider end and move it right 17 grids. Alright!

[Hard]
- Raise the HP drain by 1 or 2. HP 5 for a hard difficulty for a short map is too easy. Yup, raised up by 2.

I mostly focused on the timing and general settings on this map. The difficulties seem okay, but there's quite a few general problems. Also, if you look this up on Nico Nico Douga, there's a japanese title to this song. The title in the map data should be the japanese version and the romanised version should be the english verison (what you have now).

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, M4M from the Queue!

General

"Konachan.com - 116947 sample.jpg" rename the BG to "BG" or something similar. Huh.. if you say so.

Easy

The map is already short and you copy paste the whole part 00:27:961 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - , remove this and remap please
I just looped it to fit with the gay rule. Also: Beginner won't mind and actually won't care so much about Copy+Paste as long the first time plays well.

00:41:004 (1) - You shouldnt put a circle after the last spinner because it symbolizes the end of the map and the beginner isnt prepared for another circle True. Removed Circle and extended the Spinner.

Hard
00:12:336 (8,9,1) - Spacing is broken here, i suggest you to put NC at 00:12:173 (7) - and make constant spacing from 7 to 1
It's a really mess from the optic when I keep the Spacing here. If you have a good-looking solution for this I gladly will change it.

Nothing more

204,48,12173,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,112,12336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,124,12499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,168,12662,6,0,B|372:204,8,37.5,0|0|0|0|2|0|0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,228,13477,2,0,B|288:264,8,37.5,2|0|0|0|2|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. konachan.com - 116947 sample.jpg this file is useless remove it

1. 00:07:614 (1,2) - this can be a better blanket then fix this too 00:33:178 (1,2) -

1. 00:27:961 - add new combo here since it follow a spinner o3o

1. 00:02:397 - consider to add a finish here and to remove this whistle
2. 00:20:657 - same here ^
   00:27:929 - same ^

1. 00:17:402 (4) - unsnapped circle

1. 00:11:201 (2,3,1) - why don't you try to make something like this: and same about 00:36:765 (2,3,1) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:462 - add a circle here

1. 00:27:961 - new combo here since it follow a spinner

1. same about as easy
2. 00:04:679 (5) - add a clap here
3. 00:05:983 (2) - add a clap
4. 00:07:614 (1) - clap at silder end
5. 00:21:310 - replace this whistle with a clap
6. 00:22:614 (5) - clap
7. 00:23:266 (1) - clap at slider end
8. keep more your clap costency o3o

1. well same things for hitsound that i mentioned in normal
2. i don't really like that you used so many circles try to replace some with sliders
3. 00:40:026 - new combo here since it follow a spinner

Lally wrote:

sorry for dubble post but modding is modding o3o

m4m from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥

[General]

1. konachan.com - 116947 sample.jpg this file is useless remove it You got to redownload it since I changed the Name of the Background.

[Easy]
why so lazy and copy pasta from here 00:27:929 - ? I wanted to make it rankable. And Beginner seriously won't care about 15 Seconds of Copy+Pasting. People can call it as Laziness but idc.
Placement:

1. 00:07:614 (1,2) - this can be a better blanket then fix this too 00:33:178 (1,2) - Should be good now.

New combo:

1. 00:27:961 - add new combo here since it follow a spinner o3o Not an Issue but fixed.

Hitsounds:

1. 00:02:397 - consider to add a finish here and to remove this whistle Not really fitting imo. The finish at 00:05:019 actually makes the Start of the Song.
2. 00:20:657 - same here ^ I am really unsure if yes or no.. For now I keep the Whistle.
   00:27:929 - same ^ No because of previous Reason.

[Normal]
Snapping:

1. 00:17:402 (4) - unsnapped circle orz

Placement:

1. 00:11:201 (2,3,1) - why don't you try to make something like this: and same about 00:36:765 (2,3,1) - Moved a bit here and there..
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:462 - add a circle here Don't really like it.

New combo:

1. 00:27:961 - new combo here since it follow a spinner Not an Issue but fixed.

Hitsounds:

1. same about as easy
2. 00:04:679 (5) - add a clap here Fits bad and sounds a bit out of place.
3. 00:05:983 (2) - add a clap Okay, I am fine with it.
4. 00:07:614 (1) - clap at silder end Fits bad and sounds a bit out of place.
5. 00:21:310 - replace this whistle with a clap Whistle sounds much better..
6. 00:22:614 (5) - clap This is more supposed to be blank.
7. 00:23:266 (1) - clap at slider end Used Whistle instead of Clap.
8. keep more your clap costency o3o I follow the Song and the Sound Effects of the Song itself.

[Hard]

1. well same things for hitsound that i mentioned in normal
2. i don't really like that you used so many circles try to replace some with sliders Checked the whole Diff repeatedly and couldn't do anything to be honest.
3. 00:40:026 - new combo here since it follow a spinner Not an Issue but fixed.

good luck \o3o/

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

00:41:167 - What is this line needed for? Remove it. Was actually used for Kiai but since people suggested to avoid Kiai Parts for this Song it's not needed anymore. Fixed.

~Normal~

00:17:402 (4) - Unsnapped circle. Fixed with Lally's Mod.
00:41:167 - What is this line needed for? Remove it. Yup.

~Hard~

00:03:212 (4,1,2) - Pretty huge change of spacing, that's not good. 00:03:226 (4,1) is correctly spaced, (2) should make at least something like Jump.
00:10:223 (1,2) - Stack them better, don't use grid snap. Moved the last Sliderpoint at 00:10:889 (2) one grid down.
00:41:167 - What is this line needed for? Remove it. Yup.

Good job.

Stefan wrote:

00:11:541 (3) is clearly to see and not even a pixel is out of the Screen. It may looks like it since the Editor does not show the whole Playfield. About the HP Drain, 5 would be too less. Thank you.

Cancel wrote:

Stefan wrote:

00:11:541 (3) is clearly to see and not even a pixel is out of the Screen. It may looks like it since the Editor does not show the whole Playfield. About the HP Drain, 5 would be too less. Thank you.

The current HP is too much, because I can barely pass it. And I am a frequest hard player. But ok.

• • Artist: ニコニコ動画 || Romanised Artist: Nico Nico Douga
  • Video quality could be better, try to find a better one.

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • 00:07:331 (1,2,1) - Move this pattern so that (2) is at x:256 y:192.
  • 00:12:548 (1) - This is the only diff that has a spinner here so you should delete it and map this part to keep a consistency.
  • 00:22:983 (1,2) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:30:827 (1,2,1) - Same as 00:15:157.

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  • 00:08:309 (2,3,4,5) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:17:766 (1,2,3) - Blanket can be better here, try to improve it. (also, make (3) like (1))
  • 00:32:132 (2) - Convert this slider in 3 1/1 circles and add another circle at 00:31:805 to keep a consistency with 00:07:331 (1,2,3,4,5).

• • HP Drain Rate: 7
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • 00:04:722 (1) - End this slider 1/4 earlier.
  • 00:05:374 (3,4) - Convert these circles into a 1/2 slider.
  • 00:06:353 (2) - Remove the repeat and end this slider 1/2 later.
  • 00:07:983 (5) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 00:09:613 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:09:777 (x) - ^
  • 00:12:059 (2,3,1,2) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:19:070 (3) - Remove the repeat and end this slider 1/4 later.
  • 00:19:559 (4) - Remove the repeat, then add a circle at 00:19:885, one at 00:20:048, one at 00:20:211 and another one at 00:20:293.
  • 00:22:005 (8) - What is this slider following? Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:23:961 (5) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier.
  • 00:26:938 (9) - Add a repeat.
  • 00:28:219 (1) - End this slider 1/4 earlier.
  • 00:28:871 (3,4) - Convert these circles into a 1/2 slider.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• • Artist: ニコニコ動画 || Romanised Artist: Nico Nico Douga Ok.
  • Video quality could be better, try to find a better one. Nobody wanted to help me. Also it's looped which means that this Video is made exclusive for osu!. At the end if it's too bad I would remove it.

Easy

• 
  • 00:12:548 (1) - This is the only diff that has a spinner here so you should delete it and map this part to keep a consistency. I want to keep the Spinner because the Background Sounds wouldn't fit that good with a long Slider, etc.

Everything else accepted.

Normal

• Made everything.
  
  
  Hard
  
  [list:d3d39]• HP Drain Rate: 7 Done.
  • Approach Rate: 7 Done (Even if I think AR8 fits better)
  • 00:04:722 (1) - End this slider 1/4 earlier. No, this rhythm is more authentic and sounds pretty good.
  • 00:05:374 (3,4) - Convert these circles into a 1/2 slider. I used them because they fits nice the laugh of Ryuuko. While (3,4) are mapped on "Ha-Ha" (5) is mapped on the last "Ha" which is held for a bit. Sounds weird but I have a real own rhythm system.
  • 00:06:353 (2) - Remove the repeat and end this slider 1/2 later. After many tries I will take it.
  • 00:07:983 (5) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat. Done.
  • 00:09:613 (x) - Add a circle. Was already going to do that. :3
  • 00:09:777 (x) - ^ ^
  • 00:12:059 (2,3,1,2) - Try this: Asked around if this is okay and used.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:19:070 (3) - Remove the repeat and end this slider 1/4 later. Done
  • 00:19:559 (4) - Remove the repeat, then add a circle at 00:19:885, one at 00:20:048, one at 00:20:211 and another one at 00:20:293. Done
  • 00:22:005 (8) - What is this slider following? Try this pattern: Yeah it sounds better.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:23:961 (5) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier. I don't get the logic tbh.
  • 00:26:938 (9) - Add a repeat. Uh.. no.
  • 00:28:219 (1) - End this slider 1/4 earlier. Same here like before.
  • 00:28:871 (3,4) - Convert these circles into a 1/2 slider. Same as before.

1. tag MAD as we know this is a MAD song
2. Seems the preview time is late a bit, consider to change to 15184 (00:15:184 - )

1. 00:02:141 - idk but put a finish here sounds nicer
2. 00:03:608 (2,3,4) - try to put some whistle on these notes, since you add 00:02:630 (2,3,4) -, it would be great if you can keep their hitsound consistent
3. 00:09:967 (1,2) - Creepy sliders D: btw I make a blanket between (4,1) in the example,jpg, try to use the code (The spacing would be inconsistent after using the code, fix that)
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   260,84,9640,2,0,B|296:76|296:76|336:84,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   384,32,9967,6,0,B|415:70|394:119|394:119|382:145|393:174,1,150
   384,318,10619,2,0,B|415:280|394:231|394:231|382:205|393:176,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:12:412 (3) - Feel like you should add a new combo here since the 1/4s comes and you should make an attention to the players
5. 00:18:282 (2) - 2 reserves are too boring imo, also some players can't read it at all (since it has 2 reserves). Try to avoid that, and use another rhythm like this
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:23:010 - Whistle sounds horrible as it's inconsistent between here and other same parts, remove it
7. 00:26:938 (9) - Current this ends a bit late, try to end it at 00:27:354 - (red line) not 1/12 line
8. 00:31:805 - Oh well, clap again

1. 00:23:010 (1) - This slider can get improve on its shape, so use the code
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   152,296,23010,6,0,B|108:248|140:192|140:192|104:136|152:88,1,220,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:31:805 (2) - clap, you know that
3. 00:34:740 (3) - ?!?!?!! Is that a mistake or intention? Why you use drum sampleset, sounds really unfit by listening its sliderticks (that 'bo bo bo')
   This diff is pretty awesome, nice slider you've got there

1. 00:06:054 - Why you leave nothing here? Consider to add a note here, or just combine to a slider with (2)
2. 00:23:010 - As I said in hard (or you can add whistle on all diffs, seems Normal miss that and it's inconsistent with other diffs)
3. 00:29:523 - Well same as above :V
4. 00:34:741 (1) - Why you leave a new combo here? Is that a mistake? Hope it is, remove it pls
5. 00:25:619 (1) - AIMod says this is not snapped, but I don't see the reason. Anyways try to end this at 00:27:354 - to avoid some XATs mention this again

Flask wrote:

Request in #modhelp \o3o/ Also why you don't ask for recheck baka zzz

[General]

1. tag MAD as we know this is a MAD song Alright.
2. Seems the preview time is late a bit, consider to change to 15184 (00:15:184 - )

[Hard]

1. 00:02:141 - idk but put a finish here sounds nicer Meh.. I don't like it.
2. 00:03:608 (2,3,4) - try to put some whistle on these notes, since you add 00:02:630 (2,3,4) -, it would be great if you can keep their hitsound consistent Added on (2).
3. 00:09:967 (1,2) - Creepy sliders D: btw I make a blanket between (4,1) in the example,jpg, try to use the code (The spacing would be inconsistent after using the code, fix that)
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   260,84,9640,2,0,B|296:76|296:76|336:84,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   384,32,9967,6,0,B|415:70|394:119|394:119|382:145|393:174,1,150
   384,318,10619,2,0,B|415:280|394:231|394:231|382:205|393:176,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:12:412 (3) - Feel like you should add a new combo here since the 1/4s comes and you should make an attention to the players Alright.
5. 00:18:282 (2) - 2 reserves are too boring imo, also some players can't read it at all (since it has 2 reserves). Try to avoid that, and use another rhythm like this Changed in my own purpose.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:23:010 - Whistle sounds horrible as it's inconsistent between here and other same parts, remove it No. :c
7. 00:26:938 (9) - Current this ends a bit late, try to end it at 00:27:354 - (red line) not 1/12 line Fixed to 1/8
8. 00:31:805 - Oh well, clap again Yep

[Normal]

1. 00:23:010 (1) - This slider can get improve on its shape, so use the code Okay.
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   152,296,23010,6,0,B|108:248|140:192|140:192|104:136|152:88,1,220,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:31:805 (2) - clap, you know that I guess you meant 00:32:784 (5)?
3. 00:34:740 (3) - ?!?!?!! Is that a mistake or intention? Why you use drum sampleset, sounds really unfit by listening its sliderticks (that 'bo bo bo') I know what you mean, fixed.
   This diff is pretty awesome, nice slider you've got there

[Easy]

1. 00:06:054 - Why you leave nothing here? Consider to add a note here, or just combine to a slider with (2) I find the rhythm pretty cute and well.. nobody complained about it before. orz
2. 00:23:010 - As I said in hard (or you can add whistle on all diffs, seems Normal miss that and it's inconsistent with other diffs) yeap
3. 00:29:523 - Well same as above :V Well same as above :V
4. 00:34:741 (1) - Why you leave a new combo here? Is that a mistake? Hope it is, remove it pls Yep.
5. 00:25:619 (1) - AIMod says this is not snapped, but I don't see the reason. Anyways try to end this at 00:27:354 - to avoid some XATs mention this again Fixed.

This mod is much proer than the previous, good luck Stefan-nyan!

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from Moe Moe Russian Modding Room

[Hard]

00:10:293 and 00:10:945 - better put claps, it sounds more interesting and good combinned with music, or if you don't like claps, you can put whistles. I find it more cleaner that the "Ouh" of the Boy has no Hitsounds.
00:23:010 - if you added whistle here then add normal whistle on 00:24:314. That sounds legit, added.
00:24:967 - finish here sounds much better Nop, Clap is much sexier.
00:26:938- unsnapped slider end Fixed to 1/8
00:37:838 - here better add note, it sounds more rhytmically and better folow for music. I love the rhythm for now. ;v;
00:37:675 - http://puu.sh/2qBim here should be this rhythm ^

[Normal]

DR -1 Nah I want to keep a nice consistent spread
OD -1 ^

00:13:880 - 1 grid up for better flow with note 2 Good.
00:24:314 - the same with hitsounds Huh?
00:37:349 - the same with rhythm Eh.. It's acutally the same.

[Easy]

00:25:619 - Unsanapped spinner end Fixed.
00:34:740 - remove Nc, I don't see reason put nc here. And in identical place here 00:11:271 you don't put nc. Yep.

It's all~ short, not bad map) Good luck~

1. 00:04:749 (1) - *Comment* This slider is, marvelous! I like how you shaped it.
2. 00:06:380 - This circle is placed on upbeat, normally you would have added a clap like you have done with the end of your previous slider and the next circle. Since you haven't added anything here, it sounds very, very quiet and has a weird gasp. I would have suggest you to add a clap but, it's going to sound way more awkward, so, what do you think on adding a whistle here? It is going to sound better since it's going to keep your hitsound consistency, but with another hitsound.
3. 00:15:184 - Hm.. I feel like a drum-finish would sound better than a drum-whistle, what do you think? You could do the same thing with 00:17:793 - , to keep your consistency.
4. 00:15:184 (1,1) - *Comment* These sliders are perfectly symmetric \o/
5. 00:17:141 (2) - On this circle, I can hear that a clap would be emphasizing this part more than a whistle. The whistle is too soft for this part. I have tried to add a clap at the same time as the whistle, but it was sounding pretty weird. So, I thought a simple clap would be sounding better.
6. 00:21:054 - The whistle make this part sounding very.. quiet, which is a bit bad. I would like you to change it for a clap, so it's going to make it sound less weird. Also, if you are going to keep this whistle, there's going to have three whistles in a row, so it's better to make some changes. It would be good if you can make the same thing with 00:23:662 - owo
   
   And then you copy/paste. o___o

1. 00:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some of these whistles should be there, to be honest. I'm thinking of 00:02:793 -. Since there's four whistles in a row, it would be very great if you could delete this whistle after that, to keep a nice whistle gasp, you should be adding a whistle to the circle (5). (<- there's a whistle on Easy)
2. 00:03:445 (3) - I do not really like the flow with the previous slider here, since the previous slider have a curved form that goes up, it would be better to keep that flow instead of placing it at the opposite. I highly suggest you to move it on x:268 y:240
3. 00:10:945 - To keep the clap consistency, I would like you to add one here, and other claps on these upbeats: 00:11:597 - ; 00:12:249 -
4. 00:15:184 - Same as Easy, I guess, and 00:17:793 -
5. 00:21:054 - Like I have mentioned it on Easy
6. 00:23:010 (1) - This slider is, unfortunately, not symmetric. I would like you to make it more symmetrical since it's looking better while playing and on the editor. (Also, I would like you to replace the whistle at the end, by a clap to follow the previous suggestion and what I have said on Easy)
   
   Example

   
7. 00:38:001 (4) - Moving this circle to x:116 y:24 would make it more easy for players to see/catch it.

Gabe wrote:

usuk, Nuked
will edit with a mod

Easy

1. 00:04:749 (1) - *Comment* This slider is, marvelous! I like how you shaped it. yey
2. 00:06:380 - This circle is placed on upbeat, normally you would have added a clap like you have done with the end of your previous slider and the next circle. Since you haven't added anything here, it sounds very, very quiet and has a weird gasp. I would have suggest you to add a clap but, it's going to sound way more awkward, so, what do you think on adding a whistle here? It is going to sound better since it's going to keep your hitsound consistency, but with another hitsound. Yeah I find that the Whistle sounds great.
3. 00:15:184 - Hm.. I feel like a drum-finish would sound better than a drum-whistle, what do you think? You could do the same thing with 00:17:793 - , to keep your consistency. Honestly, no. The Drum-Whistles sounds almost like the Chair in the Music and the Finish would be more.. like a bouncing Ball. lol
4. 00:15:184 (1,1) - *Comment* These sliders are perfectly symmetric \o/ yey
5. 00:17:141 (2) - On this circle, I can hear that a clap would be emphasizing this part more than a whistle. The whistle is too soft for this part. I have tried to add a clap at the same time as the whistle, but it was sounding pretty weird. So, I thought a simple clap would be sounding better. Good, doesn't sounds so spamy now.
6. 00:21:054 - The whistle make this part sounding very.. quiet, which is a bit bad. I would like you to change it for a clap, so it's going to make it sound less weird. Also, if you are going to keep this whistle, there's going to have three whistles in a row, so it's better to make some changes. Agree, I've added Clap. It would be good if you can make the same thing with 00:23:662 - owo Not here, I use Normal-Whistle, Soft-Whistle, Soft-Clap and this Rhythm sounds fine to me. (Even if you all think that it doesn't fit ;v;)
   
   And then you copy/paste. o___o People can call it lazy, I call it as well-fitting.

Normal

1. 00:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some of these whistles should be there, to be honest. I'm thinking of 00:02:793 -. Since there's four whistles in a row, it would be very great if you could delete this whistle after that, to keep a nice whistle gasp, you should be adding a whistle to the circle (5). (<- there's a whistle on Easy) Good.
2. 00:03:445 (3) - I do not really like the flow with the previous slider here, since the previous slider have a curved form that goes up, it would be better to keep that flow instead of placing it at the opposite. I highly suggest you to move it on x:268 y:240 I've remapped this part.
3. 00:10:945 - To keep the clap consistency, I would like you to add one here, and other claps on these upbeats: 00:11:597 - ; 00:12:249 - Yeap.
4. 00:15:184 - Same as Easy, I guess, and 00:17:793 - Same as in Easy.
5. 00:21:054 - Like I have mentioned it on Easy Ye
6. 00:23:010 (1) - This slider is, unfortunately, not symmetric. I would like you to make it more symmetrical since it's looking better while playing and on the editor. (Also, I would like you to replace the whistle at the end, by a clap to follow the previous suggestion and what I have said on Easy) Fixed Slider.
   
   Example

   
7. 00:38:001 (4) - Moving this circle to x:116 y:24 would make it more easy for players to see/catch it. Weird coordinates but okay.

stefaniscurrentlylookingathard,iwillcomebackwhenhe'sdone
(ノ^_^)ノ

Gabe wrote:

To the next BAT: On Hard, 00:26:938 (9) - this slider is ending on 1/8 because it's sounding better than 1/4.

TheVileOne wrote:

I really hope this wasn't bubbled with Hard looking like that.

Easy

Looks fine to me.

Normal

00:11:271 (3,1) - Flawed transition, but I don't see any immediate fix. The transition looks better like this IMO. It's not a big deal though. Just don't make anything worse off trying to fix this. It's not worth it. Fixed at all.


That's the only thing that I found other than small spacing differences that I considered flowed better than standard spacing. It's a really clean map.

Hard

Oh boy. This map is definitely not as clean as the other two maps.

00:02:141 (1,2,3,4) - Looks unpolished to me. How about using a more even curve with a single arc here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/723999 If you want to keep your shape in this pattern, I suggest altering the arc on 1 to be softer like in the screenshot and then reposition the notes accordingly. I would prefer the former though because it fits better with the parts after which have a single arc. Should be more neat now (I hope so!)
00:05:075 (2,3,4,5) - Please smooth this curve, it's ugly. I guess I have done it. Slap me if it's still ugly.
00:07:358 (1,2,3,4) - Shape 1, similar to 4 and then reposition 2,3 accordingly. It looks better than the way you have it with 1, having no relation to 4, and 2,3 not really forming a smooth transition. I got to ask you In-Game for that.
00:09:967 (1,2) - Just a comment, but personally don't care for these shapes. Pattern is fine though. Okay.
00:11:271 (3,4,5,6,7) - Interesting flow here. I like it! Nice to hear! These pattern are new at this Diff.
00:15:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Structure of this combo is all over the place. The lack of a stable pattern stands out, but the vocals are weird and asymmetrical. You should work on the angles. Make 00:15:836 (3) - symmetrical and the angle here 00:15:836 (4,5,6) - disconnects the transition and makes it feel like there are two separate patterns instead of one coherent one. Here is an angle that is more agreeable. http://puu.sh/2HL3B.jpg I changed the part from 00:15:184 (1,2,3) that it fits more to the Music and also that the structure looks more clean.
00:17:793 (1,2,3) - Design is random, structure is unpolished, and the flow is weird. My thoughts: 00:18:608 (3) - might carry a better flow broken up into notes. If you don't agree, please work on your blankets. Both blankets don't retain the same distance across the entire face of the blanket. They create a blanket with their current position. I purposed here that you start at (1), then going to (2) and then having a short kickback to (3) again. And I find that fine for now.
00:22:195 - whistle? Yup.
00:28:545 (2,3,4,5) - smooth the curve. Fixed.

1. Add in tags Ground Control to Psychoelectric Girl it is needed here because it's an english name of the anime.

1. Consider reducing HP Drain and OD by One Tick to make this diff more passable for beginners. BPM is quite fast, so be more gentle with beginners!
2. Try to avoid copypasta at least next time. Show some respect to people who will play it, playing copypasta is always boring. :<

1. 00:11:271 (3) - personally, I'm strongly against using those sliders on easier diffs. Second reverse arrow appears too late, so players have no time to notice it and read this pattern properly.
2. 00:19:097 (3) - replace this slider with two circles to be consistent with 00:16:488 (3,4) - it will make your pattern more understandable

1. This is the [Hard] diff, so OD/HP 6 will fit better here.
2. 00:02:956 (4) - consider replacing this slider with two citcles. Also, you'll have to fix comboing a bit. Take a look at my example and listen to vocals here! At 00:03:282 - she says first "yo!" that's why you should re-arrage your pattern a bit.
3. 00:04:749 (1,2) - I've spent 10 minutes to hear anything at 00:04:994 - and still nothing. Why there's 3/4 slider? End (1) at 00:04:912 - to follow background music. It will also make your rhythm more consistent.
   
4. 00:11:271 (3) - 00:16:488 (4) - 00:34:740 (3) -00:38:653 (4) - I'd recommend you to place NCs here to follow lyrics/vocals/character's voice.
5. 00:12:575 (1) - nazi - curve this slider a bit, too. To mae this pattern look prettier. example

Current BG

Here are my suggested BG's:

4:3 1024x768

16:9 1365x768