Gabe wrote:

Hi Kiyro~
Reply on what you haven't fixed and why you denied it.

When it's in Bold, it's because it's an important point;
When it's in Bold/Red, it means that it's really important/unrankable.

[General]

•I wonder why, the slider velocity are so high for Hard and Insane when the Normal difficulty has a Slider Velocity of 1.20. There's something wrong for sure here. Since the spread goes from 1.20 to 2.50 to 2.70.
By looking at the other difficulties (Hard, Insane) the SV is really too high. As said above, try to keep the spread at around.. 1,20 > 1,40 > 1,60. I make it 1.20 > 1.50 > 2.00
•Since the song is getting more calm to 01:29:017, the Kiai time should end there on every difficulty. Fixed.
•00:14:033 - On every difficulties, Why there's nothing here? We should be starting playing there. So add a slider from 00:14:033 to 00:14:459 or even, add two circles on both points. Nope. I don't like it.
•For Hard and Insane, the Hard difficulty does not have any hitsounds and the Insane's one are very inconsistent. Try to use the Normal's hitsounds for both Hard and Insane. Call me back after doing this. Insane's hitsounds fixed.

[Hard]

00:41:512 - Why is this Kiai time starting here? Fixed.
01:22:626 - Same as above ^ Fixed.
Remember that there's no hitsounds here. I'll add them as soon as possible

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:19:145 (4,5,6) - Spacing error right here. Fixed.
•00:24:471 (3,1) - This can make so much problem because the cicle (1) to too much closer from the slider and it breaks the spacing. Fixed.
•01:15:170 (2,4) - These kind of slider are now unrankable, as I know.. Fixed.

[Insane]

HP Drain 8 is too high. Make it to 7 (-1) Fixed.
-1 to OD & AR Nope. It's to easy with Od 7 and Ar 8

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:52:377 (1,6) - As I know, these kind of sliders are now unrankable. Try to change their forms. [/color]
•01:14:744 (1,2) - These sliders looks weird. Here's the code for the new sliders v . v If you need help for this, poke me ingame. Thanks :3

SPOILER

200,80,74744,6,0,B|184:24|256:-24|328:24|312:80,2,202.500007724762,2|0|0
312,304,75383,2,0,B|328:360|256:408|184:360|200:304,2,202.500007724762,2|0|0

As said in the General, call me back from an Hitsound mod.

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

General
You BG is over 1mb, you should probably recompress in photoshop or something Fixed

RikiH's Normal
00:14:033 - Add something here so the notes don't start at an awkward beat
00:37:465 (1) - you could extend the red point so the slider ball turns on the beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456530
01:13:253 (3,4) - Try replacing by copy & pasting (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456532
01:22:200 (1) - Finish

Hard
I'm guessing hitsounds aren't finished lol Lol i know.

00:14:033 - Add something ...okay D:
00:15:737 (4,5,6) - equal spacing please Not fixed
00:19:784 (7,6) - can't have 2 notes on the same spot, delete one Omg, fixed lol
00:33:418 (5,1,2,3,4) - Maybe lessen distance a bit so the difference is not too extreme for hard Fixed
00:36:400 (4) - Try to match the reverse end with 00:37:252 (1,2) - Fixed
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe stack the ends instead, players maybe confuse it for 1/2 rhythm Not fixed
00:54:933 (2) - Ctrl + J looks cooler imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456546 Fixed
01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - Space out a little like the others Wtf D:

Insane
Mssing all the claps? Wut D:

00:14:033 - again, add something Fixed
01:17:087 (4,5) - Try replacing by copy & pasting (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456554 if you want Nope :c
Nice symmetry & jumps xD Thanks :3

Good luck!!

Gio96b wrote:

Mod

Hard:
00:22:766 - Aggiugni un beat qui? Suona incompleto Wut, fixed D:
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Fai combaciare la fine dello slider con l'inizio del seguente N O .
01:30:721 (5) - Bruttino questo slider xD Prova a migliorarlo Fixed.

• 00:14:033 (1) - I do not see a reason for the red point and the bend in the end here
  00:14:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not too sure if consistent distance suits the best here, for example, I get the impression of 7-8 having a stronger impact in the song than 1-6
  00:16:802 (1,2) - come on, this is a huge-ass mirrorjump without a reason, don't do this; there is no epic loud "BOOM"-ish sound in the song to justify that, just arrange it in a more calm way
  
  
  like that maybe?

  
  
  I like this because the sliderends are bent to point towards each other which gives it more of a belonging-together feel
  
  00:18:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as for 00:14:885
  00:20:210 (1,2) - same as for 00:16:802
  00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels like a good idea for the soundpattern of 00:14:885 / 00:18:293 ; maybe keep such an idea in mind and build other patterns based on the spacing-relations in this one (because pattern-recycling is meeh and not-so-nice)
  00:23:619 (1,2,3) - this seems more fine than 00:16:802 / 00:20:210, though I think you could replace 3 by a CTRL-J, CTRL-G-ed version of 1, also adding another circle on next 1's location to keep the slider-circle style of this pattern
  00:25:323 (2,4) - i don't enjoy these bumps in there; do not feel or see a reason in the song to add these (also, about the pattern, one-axis-patterns feel meeh and suchs; in adition, 2 and 4 get too close to each other with their reverse point locations which feels awkward to me but that is mostly artistic); they give a stucky feeling which is not too flow-improving
  00:27:451 (3) - if you want a slider here, it'd have to start on the white tick because there is the reasoned sound for it; replace the current start with a circle and arrange to your likings (though I do not really see the point behind that little snaky shape?)
  
  00:28:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as for similar patterns before, I feel more impact in 7-8 than in the pairs of circles before, might do something about that
  00:31:919 (1,2,3,4) - 3-4 get another sound to them in the song so it feels "stronger" and thus they feel as if they should have more distance in-between them than 1-2, also, the current overlap is somewhat not-too nice because the sliders nearly blend over each other and that... lets say is not pretty
  00:33:834 (1,2) - no reason for the bumps in sliders here, also, the mirrorjump is kinda wide and if you want to have one, I suggest a CTRL-H one instead of CTRL-H/J combined; in general, sliders should lead into the objects following them which would be the case if you used CTRL-H here instead of CTRL-H/J
  00:37:238 (1,2,3,4) - that jump is huge, please scale it down, that's nearly the whole playfield without a specific reason
  00:38:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find this too clustered; 1-2-3-4 will partly overlap 6 with their hitbursts and that is not a too good feeling; I suggest moving 2-3 a bit more down and widen their distance, putting 5 down aswell and placing 6 a bit different; after that, you can also arrange 7-8
  
  
  as in, this or smth

  
  
  This will not cause overlap-errors and gives more of a fluent and constructive feeling to me
  
  00:40:642 (1,2,3,4) - use changed 1-2-3-4 of previous combo in mirrored version here, suits better aswell imo
  
  00:44:046 (1,2) - still not a fan of the bumps and mirrorjumps of these, they lack flow as they do not lead into each other and their movement and shape are stucky
  00:46:387 (5,6,7,8) - I suggest scaling these more up so they do not overlap with the hitbursts and -circles of 1-2-3-4, also gives more of a growing feel which is pretty neat in this case
  00:47:451 (1,2) - mirrorstuff may be bettered out to lead into the respective next objects (1 -> 2, 2 -> next combo)
  00:48:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a very harsh and evil pattern as it requires wide- and short movement to be switched continuously which is hard to do on cornerjumps, I suggest replacing this with something that flows more and is more consistent to not have people go like "oh DARN this pattern I can't get through this" because I assume that'll happen to many
  00:50:855 (1,2) - the usual about these slidercombos, I find them too wide and unflowy
  00:54:685 (3) - do not see the reason for snaky-ish slider here
  
  01:06:068 (1) - I think this spinner should start somewhere around ~01:06:812, on the big white tick
  01:09:365 (1,2) - I find these too upscaled in distance, as in similar mirrorpatterns
  01:14:684 (1) - this speedup here came very sudden and without any expectable feedback from the song, please do not do this, it does not seem fitting
  01:16:174 (1) - the overlap with previous 1-2 is pretty not-so-pretty so please change that and use another shape or smth
  01:17:450 (6) - bumpy slider seems unfitting as the ones before
  01:18:088 (1,2) - well this mirrorpattern is more k, guess you can keep that distance
  01:29:017 - the kiai is ending pretty suddenly, could you try to give it a better transition to nonkiai?
  01:31:705 (1,2) - the overlap is meeh here
  01:33:195 (1,2) - this is very highly scaled again, I suggest CTRL-G-ing 2 and adjusting the following circles so there is not such a huge distance in this pattern because the kiai also ended before
  01:35:110 (1,2,3) - this should be a very more downscaled pattern since the song is decrescending very strongly (meaning it gets less strong); also, 3 should not have a reverse arrow but end where the arrow currently is and you should add a 5% volume spinner behind it that ends at about 01:39:153 (big white tick around there)

• 00:14:033 (1) - bumpy slider makes no sense to me as mentioned in Insane
  00:15:098 (2,4) - well these snakies are more k than the ones in insane, though still, I find them a bit questionable
  00:16:163 (5,6) - I suggest CTRL-G-ing these because 4 points towards 6 and thus people will play that first, it makes more sense in flow.
  00:16:802 (1) - this is too closely spaced and will likely be hit too early; also, the overlap with 4 makes it feel awkward at the current position and I'd recommend you to have it take flow out of the 6-1 motion rather than point-to-point 6 and 1 and then go into 1's curve -> try to keep and ongoing, smooth movement
  00:16:802 (1,2,3) - not too much a fan of this stop-go movement here, why not space them out
  00:16:802 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh this is lazy; apply the same stuff as for mentioned above
  00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest variating in spacing here; keeping the same zig-zag-distance is somewhat boring and you had more variation in Insane aswell - don't upscale too much though
  00:27:666 (2) - use a CTRL-H/J-ed version of 1 instead of trying to rebuild, that works better for this kind of pattern
  00:29:583 (4) - ^
  00:32:565 (3) - compared to previous patterns, this circle is somewhat widely spaced, consider scaling it down
  00:33:418 (5) - ^
  00:33:844 (1,3) - these are not properly symmetrical, please work that out without gridsnap on
  00:35:548 (2,3,4) - the sliderbows here are clunchy, also, 4 is a bit uglyishly overlapped by 2-3 and their hitbursts
  00:37:891 (2) - CTRL-H 1 here
  
  00:40:660 (1,2) - no fan of this because of the big spacing and most likely a probable abuse of slider leniency by players (as in, they will jump out of the slider before it is finished and 300 it anyways)
  00:43:004 (4) - work this more out so it has the exact same shape as 2 (for that, CTRL-H it and play around with the sliderpoints until it overlaps it perfectly, 100%; turn gridsnap off for such stuff)
  00:43:643 (6,1) - that distance is wide; whole playfield in 1/1 is too far for a hard diff, consider CTRL-H for following part/pattern?
  00:45:560 (1,2) - these feel too clunhed because of the low distance and sharp angles between the red sliderpoints; stretch it more out and suchs - also, 2 should start 1/2 later and there should be a circle on where it currently starts (for rhythm and consistently in suchs, that is)
  00:47:477 (1,2) - no fan of this stop-go, but it should go k if you want to keep it; you should work the curves more out though, they feel unbalanced and too harsh at parts
  00:48:542 (3,1) - again, this distance is kinda wide for a "pause moment", also in a hard diff
  00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like you to have more variation in slidershapes here, also, due to the distance in-between the objects, these might get misshit as 1/4 instead of 1/2-"breaks" from object to object
  00:50:246 (4,1) - again, a wide distance for a break moment
  00:50:885 (1,3,4) - Jenny does not enjoy one-axis-movement, consider a more bowy-flowy shape, also leading into the next combo
  00:51:098 (2) - clunchy red points are clunchy and do not make sense to Jenny, as in Insane, please consider change
  00:52:377 (1) - you could make this blanket 2 or smth, just a suggestion tho
  00:52:377 (1,2,3,4) - one-axis-pattern again, please change
  00:53:868 (4,1) - very wide movement again, not too sure if that fits
  
  01:06:010 (1) - same about the spinner as in Insane
  01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - the distance between these is very inconsistent when compared to similar combos earlier, please change this so it is more consistent and readable, right now it looks like 1/3 spacing
  01:13:892 (5) - correct the shape without gridsnap so it has 100% the same form and flow like 2
  01:13:892 (5,6,1,2) - these feel too clustered, especcially because of their hitbursts; consider spacing out or arranging so they do not overlap/recycle each other's positions too much
  01:16:448 (2,4) - clunchy redpoints again
  
  About the little kiai here: I find the slider variation more appropriate here because the song turns into a more different tone, though, you might work on balancing your curves and shapes more out.
  01:24:969 (1,2) - let these blanket 3/4 correctly; for that, turn gridsnap off and play around with points
  
  01:29:869 (1,2) - the distance here is quite huge compared to the rest of the map but I thiiiink it could be k
  01:30:721 (5) - redpoints feel ugly again
  01:32:425 (2,1) - again huge distance for a "pause moment"
  01:34:555 (5) - redpoints
  01:35:833 (3) - as in Insane, a spinner with 5% soft-volume after this would do well

• 00:31:926 (2) - ^ that, and also, you can balance this more out and make it really symmetric
  00:34:057 (1) - symmetric needs more workout here aswell
  00:35:335 (2,3) - I suggest changing these so 3 starts on where 1 ended, gives a better feel
  
  00:43:856 (5) - that might be me but this feels too close to previous 3, move it further away; also, I suggest building an equal triangle out of 4's end, 5 and 1's starting point; a bit more systematics and aesthetics may suit well
  00:47:690 (1) - adjust this to blanket 2 and go better with its approach circle
  
  01:09:418 (2) - you could use the above-mentioned slidertick on this slider to continue your clappattern
  01:12:827 (2,3,4,5,6) - this square feels a bit clunched because of the angles between 2-3 and 4-5 which do not have the same amount of degrees as 3-4, 5-6; make it more equal
  01:14:957 (1) - a bit pickyness here but you could arrange it so the slidertick is exactly in the "peak" of the slider as in, where the red point is
  01:16:235 (2) - again, a custom slidertick with a clapsound would go well with this
  
  01:26:460 (2) - ^ (also, I like this shape)
  01:28:590 (1) - let this blanket 3's approach circle (as for everything with blanketting, turn gridsnap off here)
  01:29:869 (2,3) - I find these a bit too harsh, they do not lead into each other too well; consider change of angles here

Hard

kurohana wrote:

Hard

1. 00:24:471 (3) - Ctrl+G to remove spacing mistake
2. 01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing

Well, that's short Good map, checked all diffs and couldn't find anything ^^
Good luck with rank :3

Snepif wrote:

Well there's not much to say about this map. The song is like 5 seconds mp3 repeating over and over and over and over AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER well you get the point xD

Manny wrote:

Snepif wrote:

Well there's not much to say about this map. The song is like 5 seconds mp3 repeating over and over and over and over AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER well you get the point xD

I FUCKING AGREE.
Kaira mappi di merda. *Runs*

Snepif wrote:

stavo parlando della canzone

not about the map

Snepif wrote:

Hello!
M4M I guess

[General]

The metronome is offbeat, the big white tick is where it shouldn't be, move the offset to 13180.
No need to resnap anything.
[/color]

From AIBat cuz i'm lazy:

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

[Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:299, ends on 00:55:323 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:200, ends on 01:29:017
[Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:299, ends on 00:55:355 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:200, ends on 01:29:017
[RikiH's Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:299, ends on 00:54:933 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:200, ends on 01:35:833

Make all of them equal please~~ Fixed





[Normal]

Mostly NC mod~~ don't pay attention to the "(1), (2), etc." because i changed them, only look at the times.

00:14:033 (1) - Add a note?
00:17:015 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:293 (2) - Add NC
00:20:423 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:701 (2) - Add NC
00:23:832 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:110 (2) - Add NC
00:30:648 (1) - Remove NC
00:31:926 (7) - Add NC
00:34:057 (2) - Remove NC
00:35:335 (1) - Add NC
00:36:187 (4) - Stack with 00:34:057 (2) - 's end
00:37:465 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:743 (2) - Add NC
00:40:447 (1) - Remove NC
00:44:282 (1) - Remove NC..
00:45:560 (7) - Add NC
00:47:690 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:968 (1) - Add NC. Also improve this blanket:
SPOILER00:51:098 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:377 (7) - Add NC

........... And keep moving the NCs to the big white ticks, okay?

01:28:164 (3) - Fix this blanket:
SPOILER
[Hard]

00:14:033 (1) - Weird... uhmm i don't like this but meh it's okay Stfu bitch
00:16:802 (1,2,3) - Make this perfectly symmetric Fixed
00:20:210 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:33:844 (1) - I don't think these sudden jumps fit at all... better make these jumps be a bit closer. Fixed
00:53:229 (3) - This slider looks ugly here... make it less sharp Fixed
01:25:821 (3) - Improve this blanket please Fixed
01:30:721 (5) - This slider has a ..... a something.. lol make it straight or something Fixed lol

[Insane]

00:14:033 (1) - Add whistle at the start Fixed
00:25:323 (2) - Add whistle on the red ticks Fixed
00:28:518 (1,4) - WTF this antijump? Separate 1 from 4 a loooooooooot Fixed
01:14:744 (1) - I don't understeand this sudden increase on SV..... don't do this... it doesn't fit at all Fixed
01:31:786 (1) - ^ Nope :v


Well there's not much to say about this map. The song is like 5 seconds mp3 repeating over and over and over and over AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER well you get the point xD
Also all symmetry so... yeah i wish it had more variation and less symmetry but meh can't do anything about that! I lol'd so much

Good luck!

Snepif wrote:

stavo parlando della canzone

not about the map

Kiyro wrote:

Mi sono ufficialmente offeso. :c

Manny wrote:

Snepif wrote:

stavo parlando della canzone

not about the map

LOL I know, but I NEED to insult Kaira. Makes me so happy. <3

Kiyro wrote:

Mi sono ufficialmente offeso. :c

POVERO, SI E' OFFESO. SONO COSI' DISPIACIUTA, GUARDA.
Sento che se mai dovessi chiederti di "mappare" qualcosa per me mi manderesti cortesemente a fanculo, ma vabbe'.

Ma comunque Snepif parla spagnolo, certo che capisce l'italiano, idiota.

Lally wrote:

nightcore \o3o/

[General]
che brutte le combo color tutte simili ;_; nel bg si intravede un po di fuxia e c'è anche del giallo :V dovresti cambiare tutte quelle sfumature del blu

[Hard]

come ho messo play ho solo detto che cazz D: ma sti slider superveloci?

mi riufiuto di moddarla con gli slider cosi veloci ;w; diminuisci la velocita prima e chiamami che te la moddo per bene o3o

[Insane]

00:16:801 (2,3) - falli curvi flowa meglio e anche gli altri
alora 1 cosa qui c'è molto lavoro da fare purtroppo la cosa che ti dico una meno copy paste e elimina un sacco di jump no sense come:

00:21:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sono brutissimi da fare e flowano malissimo o3o

il ritmo è ok ma gli slide sono piu normali qui ma lo stesso dovresti ridurli di velocita perchè c'è uno stacco grandissimo dalla normal alla hard la hard è una specie di insane e la insane è la 2a insane o3o quindi non so (che dici di rimapparla? :V lo so che è una cosa un po stupida per te ma veramente ci sono troppi copy paste e gli slider non vanno bene >.<

Kiyro wrote:

Uhm, sulla hard forse hai ragione, vedo ora cosa mi diranno gli altri, ma non mi sembra un'insane, è facile come hard, forse solo per la sv D:
Eh lo so che ci son dei copy paste, ma il ritmo è comunque sempre quello, è difficile mapparla in modo che non sembri monotona, e la sv sull'insane secondo me va bene. Per ora non fixo niente, aspetto altri pareri e poi vedo se fixare o no. Grazie lo stesso :V

HelloSCV wrote:

From you queue
M4M~

SPOILER

RikiH's Normal
CS +1 HP -1 Why? It's a Normal, not a Easy
00:40:447 (1) - remove NC Fixed (Problems riki? rofl)
00:47:690 (1) - touch HP bar imo

Hard
00:44:708 (3) - add whistle on start Fixed
00:54:932 (2) - remove slider and add note with finish Fixed

Insane
00:25:323 (2) - i think this slider's reverse arrow is hidden change little? Fixed
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is sooooo hard imo 00:48:968 (1,2) - how about Ctrl + G? 00:49:394 (3,4) - , 00:49:820 (5,6) - , 00:50:246 (7,8) - same issue Fixed in another way
00:53:655 (6) - add whistle on end Nope
01:04:305 (1) - move spinner here? and increase spinner's length Nope
01:35:619 (3) - add finish on end? ( maybe reudce volume is good choice ) Nope

interesting song good luck for rank!

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Mod richiesta da Kiyro :3

[General]
Abbassate il volume degli hitsounds in tutte le diff,il clap alla lunga può dare fastidio,soprattutto con cuffie a volume alto (consiglio di abbassarlo a 65) Done.
Sarebbe bello uno storyboard adatto alle nightcore,se non c'è la canzone perde molto del suo potenziale soprattutto nella normal,dove ci sono svariati momenti di pausa tra un beat e l'altro. Nella insane invece non si nota,grazie al flow e alla frequenza di jumps Uhm sarebbe una bella idea, ci penseròsu.

[RikiH's Normal]
Nessun errore grave qui,ma ti consiglio di mettere dei custom hitsounds per gli sliderticks,perchè durante alcuni sliders il clap che c'è sui tick bianchi non si sente,dando un senso di vuoto nella parte della canzone

[Hard]
Usa degli sliders più lunghi abbassandogli la velocità,è tutto troppo veloce anche per una hard,sapendo che c'è anche un'insane dopo.
00:16:802 (1,2,3) - Questo pattern è distruttivo in hidden,ti consiglio di non tenere questi sliders attaccati,ma di formare dei piccoli jump,non esagerati. Se un mat/bat mi dice qualcosa fixo, ma io preferisco così.
00:20:209 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:20:070 (3,4) - Non capisco perchè qui hai lasciato degli sliders curvi quando 01:16:235 (1,2,3,4) - qui gli hai fatto questa forma,è l'unica parte della mappa dove si nota in particolare,dato che sono anche piazzati nella stessa zona. Stanno male come quelli di prima D:

[Insane]
Niente di particolare trovato qui,bella diff,non capisco perchè dovrebbe essere rimappata.

Buona fortuna,questa mappa sembra promettere bene :3

Lally wrote:

[Normal]
00:14:032 (1) - suana cosi vuoto dato che continua il titmo quindi togli questa nota e sostituiscila con uno reverse-slider suona molto meglio secondo me

ascoltando c'è qualcosa che manca nel ritmo, secondo me dovresti aggiundìgere uno slider a reverse come quello sopra quando compare un ritmo simile 00:15:736 (1) - secondo me ci sta benissimo perche se no consiglierei di usare il tick rate 2 invece di 1 perche si sente il vuoto nello slider (si sono una filosofa) Che cosa complicata, ho aggiunto una nota random lol
00:25:109 (2,3) - dato che hanno una forma di loro rigida perche non renderli più gradevoli alla vista allineandoli (?) :

Ficsed
00:27:239 (5,1,2,3) - fai un quadrato perfetto se noti non sono paralleli se controlli. Ficsed
00:30:221 (5) - stack con 00:31:926 (2) il quale sfiora poco poco la lifebar almeno quella di questa skin Ficsed (mammamia 'sti errori stupidi però eh)

00:36:186 (3) - stack con fine del 00:34:056 (1) Non riesco
00:37:464 (1) - l'ultimo white point è inutile non so come rimuoverli <3
00:52:376 (4,5) - che ne dici di :

Molto meglio
00:54:932 (3) - invece di mettere un circle qui che ne dici di uno slider cosi finisci bene per il kiai (?)
Nah
01:08:565 (1) - dato che è una normal ed è anche la difficoltà più facile della mappa credo che questo sarebbe un po' difficile per i beginners è troppo presto dopo lo spinn Yep
01:16:234 (2) - secondo me se spostassi questo slider al centro sarebbe più bello perchè giocando è brutto vederlo cosi li Ma tutto il pattern andrebbe a farsi benedire :C
01:26:459 (2) - non so' cosa dire a riguardo ma semplicemente non mi piace :V no

cirno- wrote:

RikiH's Normal
Add some whistle. 00:27:665 would be a good place to start some whistle. I hate whistles, they must die.
00:33:630 - Finish with ~60% volume Done
Just brush over it a bit. Seems like there's plenty of claps, but missing finish/whistle. Maybe it's intentional idk.

HelloSCV wrote:

RikiH's Normal
CS +1 No. HP -1 Yes.
00:40:447 (1) - remove NC There is any NC lol
00:47:690 (1) - touch HP bar imo It doesn't.

masamune11 wrote:

RikiH's Normal
Add finishes in following return beats:
00:31:073
00:33:630
01:11:974
01:18:791
01:29:016
Other than that, everything is enjoyable by far.

RikiH_ wrote:

Toh, troia. http://puu.sh/1CsKz Muori male, puttana.
00:36:186 (3) - stack con fine del 00:34:056 (1) Non riesco CIOE' E TU VORRESTI DIVENTARE UN PRO MAPPER, FATTO IO.

RikiH_ wrote:

Non riesco = Non ne ho voglia.

Ti lowo 333<<<<505378509435

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Hellowww ~


[General]
- From the beginning of the map, slowly increase volume, it think the volume you have set right now is a bit soft. Nope.
- First kiai time use 75% volume ~ Fixed with 70% volume
- Second kiai time use 85% volume ~ Fixed with 70% volume
- You should use more finishes, I think it fits the song. Nope.


[Hyper]
- HP Drain Rate +1 Nope.
- Set distance spacing to 1 for hard diff. Nope.
00:31:074 (3) - Finish instead of whistle ? owo Nope.
00:34:483 (3) - ^ on slider's head.Nope.
00:37:891 (2) - ^ Nope.
01:15:170 (2) - Move this note up a bit, try x:256 y:40 Fixed.
01:18:151 (1,2) - Place where 01:16:448 (2) was placed. Fixed.
01:25:395 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on slider's end ? Nope.
01:32:425 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on slider's head ? Nope.


[Another]
- Same idea with the hitsounds, instead of whistles on places like 00:44:707, 00:48:115, 00:51:524, 01:11:974, place a finish, it sounds more fitting. Nope.
00:54:399 - This bookmark can be removed ~ Nonsense but ok.
00:54:720 (2) - x:256 y:80 Nope.



Well mapped ~
Good luck with rank and star! >w<

Nanika133 wrote:

A little modder passing by
M4M
Only suggestions:

General:
Nothing to say

Riki's Standard:
Seriously, 1/12?
00:14:458 (2) - 1 grid right
00:46:411 (3) - Maybe 00:45:559 (2) Ctrl+G, Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J like that

Hyper:
AR8 maybe? I feel it too slow compared with the slider velocity. Uhm, good idea, I'll decide later.
On the other side, you need to lower the difficulty (4,72 is too much). Why?
00:33:417 (5) - Replace it by a slider, there is a weird non-mapped beat after it, also the jump followed by an Anti-jump is hard to follow. Fixed in another way.
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this part at all, repeat sliders ? Nope.
01:14:742 (1) - Move it down so the end won't go over the 01:14:318 circle. Nope.
01:35:832 (3) - Spinner? Okay.


Another:
I can't do much about that but I'll try.
00:32:778 (3,4) - Stack them with the (1,2) NO
00:50:885 (1,2,3) - Maybe like that Uhm ok.
01:21:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped, remove (2,4,6) AHAHHAHA WAT
01:23:904 (3,4) - As 00:32:778 NO
This diff should be called "Jump" LOL I know

Okay, that's all

On the other side, you need to lower the difficulty (4,72 is too much). Why?

01:21:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped, remove (2,4,6) AHAHHAHA WAT

Nanika133 wrote:

On the other side, you need to lower the difficulty (4,72 is too much). Why?

Because hyper is supposed to be the equivalent to Hard and 4,72 stars are too much Imo.

Nanika133 wrote:

Well.. I said nothing

phaZ wrote:

is it cutted? rename song to "Levels (Nightcore Mix) (Short Ver.)" or something like that if it is cutted
[Riki's Standard]

every time there is a slider longer than 2/2 you used custom slidertick. therefore you used like 100000inherited timing sections.
what about this: open song folder copy custom clap as "soft-hitclap2". set the hitsound to s:c2.
then you would never need to change it :O but now you just did it....xD

mehh too lazy to mod it

...
why going for approval D:?

Go home, you're drunk.

phaZ wrote:

is it cutted? rename song to "Levels (Nightcore Mix) (Short Ver.)" or something like that if it is cutted
[Riki's Standard]

every time there is a slider longer than 2/2 you used custom slidertick. therefore you used like 100000inherited timing sections.
what about this: open song folder copy custom clap as "soft-hitclap2". set the hitsound to s:c2.
then you would never need to change it :O but now you just did it....xD

mehh too lazy to mod it

...
why going for approval D:?

• [General]
  
  Sembra che la song è tagliata , perchè non aggiungi un (Cut ver.) oppure (Short Ver.) (As phaZ said)

• [Hyper]
  
  00:15:736 (4,5,6,1) - Perchè uno sopra l'altro? ç_ç
  00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questi jump sono un pò difficilotti per una Hyper ;w;
  00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Oddio sono bruttissimi da giocarli così.. prova qualcosa così : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/552134 flowa molto meglio

Revy wrote:

Random mod da un noob come me D:

• [General]
  
  Sembra che la song è tagliata , perchè non aggiungi un (Cut ver.) oppure (Short Ver.) (As phaZ said) | Nah, quella di Rox l'hanno rankata senza scritte del genere, quindi va bene così.

• [Hyper]
  
  00:15:736 (4,5,6,1) - Perchè uno sopra l'altro? ç_ç | Non capisco lol
  00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questi jump sono un pò difficilotti per una Hyper ;w; | Per ora li lascio, aspetto pareri di altri
  00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Oddio sono bruttissimi da giocarli così.. prova qualcosa così : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/552134 flowa molto meglio | Fixed, mi piace

Non so nella Another e nella Standard non trovo niente , goodluck anyway

1. Secondo me Nightcore mix non ha senso dato che non c'è voce e suona completamente identica all'originale. Io leverei boh D:
2. Visto che i riferimenti delle diff sono di solito solamente per BMS ed IIDX, ti consiglierei di chiamarle Normal, Hard, e Insane.

1. Consiglio OD7 (ci sono solamente beat 1/2 ed è semplice) e AR8 (non è molto complicata da leggere e si puo' giocare in DT no problem; anzi mi sembra molto meglio AR8)
2. 00:32:779 (3,4) - E' noioso lasciare così, crea 2 slider diversi.
3. 01:09:418 (1) - Questa new combo è veramente brutta e non necessaria secondo me.
4. 01:23:904 (3,4) - Stessa cosa di prima
5. 01:36:045 (3) - Aggiungi una nota, suona meglio.

1. 01:09:418 (1) - Stessa cosa di prima.

1. 00:31:926 (2) - Non pensa abbia senso ignorare tutto il resto con degli slider.
2. 00:46:412 (3) - Brutto, rimedia pls.
3. 01:16:235 (2) - Stessa cosa.
4. 01:20:496 (3) - ^
5. 01:26:460 (2) - ^

Maddy wrote:

Generale

1. Secondo me Nightcore mix non ha senso dato che non c'è voce e suona completamente identica all'originale. Io leverei boh D: Ma è un nightcore mix D:
2. Visto che i riferimenti delle diff sono di solito solamente per BMS ed IIDX, ti consiglierei di chiamarle Normal, Hard, e Insane. Okay

Another

1. Consiglio OD7 (ci sono solamente beat 1/2 ed è semplice) e AR8 (non è molto complicata da leggere e si puo' giocare in DT no problem; anzi mi sembra molto meglio AR8) No :c
2. 00:32:779 (3,4) - E' noioso lasciare così, crea 2 slider diversi. Fixato in modo diverso
3. 01:09:418 (1) - Questa new combo è veramente brutta e non necessaria secondo me. Fixed
4. 01:23:904 (3,4) - Stessa cosa di prima No qui mi piace così
5. 01:36:045 (3) - Aggiungi una nota, suona meglio. Nope

Hyper

1. 01:09:418 (1) - Stessa cosa di prima. Okay

Standard

1. 00:31:926 (2) - Non pensa abbia senso ignorare tutto il resto con degli slider.
2. 00:46:412 (3) - Brutto, rimedia pls.
3. 01:16:235 (2) - Stessa cosa.
4. 01:20:496 (3) - ^
5. 01:26:460 (2) - ^

non c'è altro o:

kajiyatta wrote:

Hard
this slider velocity seems a bit faster as Hard diff imo...
Placement
00:16:801(1,2,3) I don't agree this kind of stacking slider it is worth near Insane, yeah a bit difficult. Fixed
00:50:885(1,2,3,4) maybe like this? Okay

SPOILER

01:19:217(3) I suppose not stacking with previous slider' end is better. Fixed
01:32:424(2) maybe this would be more nice omfg yeah

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:40:659(1) add finish at end to follow the music. Fixed
I don't know why you don't add hit sound partly at 00:48:967(1,2,3,4) LOL I DUNNO WHY

Insane
Placement
00:24:257(3) to be symmetrical, Ctrl+G seems better like 00:37:251 Nope
Rhythm
00:5:524(2,3) maybe same as (1) better. Wtf

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:33:843(1,2) no hit sounds?
01:11:335(1,2)^
01:14:743(1,2,3,4) Fixed all

umm, I don't understand your hit-sound pattern... but overall fine. ok here is my star for newbie Ranked. good luck

1. 01:29:868 (t) - the end kiai time should be there because the song start low that would fit better, so add end kiai time here and remove timing at 01:34:980 for all diff's IMO
   
2. I see only hard and insane are complety different patterns and lot missing patterns and inconsistency, example in insane:
   
   you style hitsound lot missing patterns and inconsistency example:
   
   00:14:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the (2,7,8) have whistle but is different patterns with 00:18:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the (2,4,5,6) have whistle so is different before. this song is repetive then need hitsound pattens same. example 00:14:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 00:18:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) this part music is repetive, not only, have more. You have do to patters hitsound if you do that would be good consistency if don't the modders keep it modding in hitsound.
   
   Pls remapping hitsound patterns all music. I can't mod this. because too many missing patterns and inconsistency.

1. 00:34:056 (1) - missing add clap in start slider and end because you missing patterns like you did after at 00:37:465 (1) if you do that, would fix consistency and fit you patterns

1. 00:25:962 (3) - why not try same shape with 00:25:109 (2) try same shape then do it CTRL + > like this http://puu.sh/1W2o4 if you do that move to x:476 , y:160 to fix spacing
2. 00:47:689 (1) - I wanna more nice blanket with 00:48:968 (2) like this http://puu.sh/1W2uu if you like here code
   

   396,168,47689,6,8,B|464:120|428:12|376:-8|308:8,1,240

   
   if not, try you owm IMO
3. 00:51:525 (2) - grid 1 down to perfect align with 00:50:672 (4)
4. 01:28:590 (1) - try more nice blanket with 01:28:164 (3)

1. The OD and HP is pretty hard to play in diff hard, better reduce if OD -2 and - 1 HP IMO because this is hard so the newbie player and experiencia will pass it and enjoy IMO

1. is same happened in general. lot Missing to patterns and consistency

1. 00:16:801 (1) - this slider shape is different with 00:17:653 (3) try same shape
2. 00:20:209 (1) - agian different shape with 00:21:061 (3) try same shape
3. 00:25:323 (2,3,4) - why not try more symentric in center try the (2) move to x:168 , y:136 and the (3) move to x:256 , y:284
   and the (4) move to x:348 , y:248 like this http://puu.sh/1W1jv this make good to gameplay and good flow IMO
4. 00:32:139 (2,4) - different shape try same shape
5. 00:33:844 (1) - this arc slider look is bad symentric try better arc slider like this http://puu.sh/1W1Gu
6. 00:34:483 (8) - ^ same
7. 00:39:594 (3,4) - really hard catch the jump in hard diff, better fix spacing
8. 00:42:365 (2) - try same shape with 00:43:004 (4) I see is different shape
9. 00:44:069 (1,3) - ^ same, try same shape
10. 01:13:039 (2,4) - ^ same
11. 01:24:969 (1,2) - ?? i see this slider are unsnapping you have resnapp all note

1. when I open Aimod and Aibat they say lot unsnapping here http://puu.sh/1VXAY yes is true here really proof http://puu.sh/1VXC2 pleasse resnapping all notes

1. 00:22:766 (6,7,8) - I when i test play this part, the flow make me weird better if you do CTRL+G 6 with 7 then CTRL+ 7 with 8. like this http://puu.sh/1W0O0 this make good flow and fun IMO
2. 00:41:299 (4) - better put new combo you did after at 01:22:199 (1), so better add new comb would fix you patterns combo color.
3. 00:41:512 (5) - the start slider make stack perfect with 00:39:595 (5)

Pereira006 wrote:

The gameplay are good. but the Hard and Insane really need remapping hitsound and I wanna see you improve hitsound consistency and patterns
anyway, that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!

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  • Loli mezze nude com BG, uh~ scherzi a parte, ti consiglierei di cambiare lo sfondo, sono sicuro che ce ne sono di più belli in giro.
  • Se non cambi il BG, prova ad usare questi colori per le combo: (apri i file .osu col blocco note e modifica...)
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 255,128,128
  Combo2 : 128,188,255
  Combo3 : 255,255,128

  • "soft-hitclap" e "soft-slidertick2" non mi piacciono per niente, questo effetto ping pong non si abbina alla canzone, prova ad usare dei normali clap (se non ti piacciono, vai qui per altri custom hitsound)

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • 00:23:406 (4) - Muovi questo cerchio a x:256 y:140 (inoltre, prova ad usare questa pattern)
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:27:240 (5) - Aggiungi una new combo qui e toglila al prossimo cerchio per mantenere una consistenza con i pattern precedenti. (tieni presente che la canzone si ripete un sacco e quindi mantenere una consistenza è quasi un'obbligo in questo caso)
  • 00:31:926 (2) - Togli il finish dalla fine dello slider.
  • 00:40:447 (6) - Come prima, new combo qui e toglila al prossimo cerchio (per enfatizzare la musica puoi anche aggiungerla qui senza toglierla al prossimo cerchio, fai pure come preferisci)
  • 00:54:081 (1) - Stesso discorso qui. (se vuoi lasciare la new combo, trasforma questi 3 cerchi in uno slider che si ripete una volta)
  • 01:05:158 (1) - Fai iniziare questo spinner a 01:04:518 e silenzialo alla fine.
  • 01:21:774 (5) - Stesso discorso sulle combo.
  • 01:33:277 (1) - Fai iniziare questo spinner a 01:31:998 (elimina ciò che viene prima, ovviamente)
  • 01:34:980 (kiai) - Fallo finire o a inizio spinner o a fine spinner.

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • 00:41:512 (1,2) - Muovi questi cerchi un pò più in alto, a x:256 y:24 ad esempio (e perchè c'è una new combo sul primo cerchio? Toglila)
  • 00:49:819 (3,4) - Prova questa pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:53:867 (4) - Il cerchio prima dello slider ha uno spacing di 0.64 e questo cerchio invece di 0.58, perchè? E questo non è l'unico caso dove succede, cerca di mantenere uno spacing consistente in tutta la map. (puoi usare dei jump, però mantieni uno spacing omogeneo in parti come queste)
  • 01:06:009 (1) - Fai iniziare questo spinner a 01:04:518
  • 01:08:778 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 01:33:276 (1) - Fai iniziare questo spinner a 01:31:785 (elimina ciò che viene prima, ovviamente)
  • 01:34:980 (kiai) - Stesso discorso della Easy.

• • Approach Rate: 8
  • 01:16:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Prova questa pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:31:785 (1) - Dovresti aggiungere uno spinner qui come nelle altre due diff.
  • 01:34:980 (kiai) - Stesso discorso delle due diff. (se non aggiungi lo spinner, fallo finire a 01:35:832)

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello there

Keep in mind that my Mods are not meant to modify your mapping style but just suggestions to improve it which is your choice to use them or not. If something is urgent to be changed it will be marked Red with a legal explanation.

[Riki's Normal]
00:27:240 (1) - Remove NC, it is not needed since the music in the background doesn't change so in fact, it's in the same "combo" Nope
01:21:774 (1) - ^ Nope
01:32:424 - Begin the spinner here and end at 01:35:832 Okay
01:31:998 - Put circle there. It's better like this cause it fits to the music o= Okay

[Hard]
00:27:665 (2) - Remove NC, it is not needed since the music in the background doesn't change so in fact, it's in the same "combo" Nope

[Insane]
This difficulty has no error at all from my point of view but you did not use the beats of the song, it feels like repeating the same thing all over again the drain time.

[Suggestions]
You may consider making a Storyboard, the beat feels more than good for some BG effects in my opinion.

Good luck with the map, it's good overall! Best wishes!

Chewin wrote:

hi m4m

General

1. Unsnapped #1 kiai time nella Normal. Attualmente è su 00:27:666 ma deve essere 00:27:665. Quindi setta -1ms.
2. Offset +3ms dal tuo attuale (13.183). Se sei d'accordo non dimenticare di resnappare tutto, sia elementi che green lines.

Normal

1. 00:14:458 (2) - Direi di aggiungere un clap per consistenza (o anche whistle se ti piace) perchè attualmente questa parte senza nessun tipo di hitsound suona troppo vuota paragonata a quella subito successiva dove ci sono i vari custom clap
2. 00:27:240 (1) - Cos'è questa random new combo? Direi di rimuoverla, visto che non ha nessuno senso :\ Se poi l'hai aggiunta per consistenza con 00:40:447 (1) direi di rimuoverla anche qui perchè delle new combo singole improvvise nella difficoltà più facile confondono i novice players
3. 00:38:743 (2,3,4,5) - (nazi) selezionali e muovili insieme usando distance snap con 0.80x spacing per consistenza
4. 01:04:518 (1) - Riduci questo spinner di 1/2 in modo che segui la musica (infatti l'hai iniziato anche sul tick rosso) non dimenticando di spostare la green line con il volume ridotto fino a qui, o suona troppo forte
5. 01:08:566 (1) - Questo whistle sulla coda dello slider è usato di proposito? Ci dovrebbe essere un clap infatti, sempre per consistenza.. Il whistle attualmente suona strano e brutto D:
6. 01:21:774 (1) - Già sai, la motivazione te l'ho scritta prima
7. 01:31:998 (5) - 1 grid up così è simmetrico con 01:31:573 (4). Non direi nazi perchè si nota subito che non è allineato ed è veramente brutto secondo me lol

Hard

1. 00:15:736 (4,5) - Suppongo tu abbia sbagliato ad utilizzare gli hitsound qui.. Bene, rimuovi il whistle dal circle (5) aggiungendolo invece sulla coda dello slider (4)
2. 00:14:032 (1) - Direi lo stesso qui, aggiungerei whistle sulla fine dello slider, suona bene secondo me, sta parte sembra vuota senza hitsounds
3. 00:17:227 (2,3) - Togli whistle dalla fine del (2) aggiungendolo invece all'inizio e, inoltre, aggiungilo sull'inizio dello slider successivo. Ho capito che stai utilizzando i whistle per enfatizzare il suono quando nella musica c'è un aumento di volume però sinceramente penso sia meglio mantenere una consistenza anche perchè la song è già ripetitiva ed utilizzare continui whistle solo per enfatizzare un suono già ripetitivo per sè in tutta la song è palloso lol. Ti suggerisco di seguire la stessa cosa anche dopo utilizzando whistles non sui tick bianchi ma bensì rossi che secondo me se li usassi in modo costante sui tick rossi la il suono renderebbe meglio. Per esempio 00:19:144 (4,6) - togli dall'inizio e aggiungi alla fine e anche sul circle (6), e così via.
4. 00:27:026 (1) - Unrankabile. La freccia è completamente coperta dall'hitburst di 00:25:961 (4), i players non riescono a leggerla in tempo
5. 00:50:245 (4) - Per consistenza con gli slider simmetrici precedenti dovresti invertire questo slider con CTRL + G e fixare poi lo spacing del circle successivo
6. 00:51:098 (2) - Fallo decente togliendo uno dei due waypoint rossi vicini
7. 01:04:518 (1) - Davvero non capisco questo spinner cosa sta seguendo. Lo ridurrei di un bel po' anche perchè lo slider successivo è posizionato troppo vicino allo spinner nella timeline. Ti consiglio questo: http://puu.sh/24AyR
8. 01:11:548 (2,3) - Capisco la simmetria ma lo spacing è inconsistente lol Fallo simmetrico ma mantenendo uno spacing costante
9. 01:24:116 (4,1) - Di nuovo spacing inconsistente.. Lo slider (1) dovrebbe essere posizionato più lontano dalla fine dello slider precedente. Leggi quello che ti ho scritto dopo, te l'ho fixato io direttamente.
10. 01:24:968 (1,2,3,4) - Direi di migliorare un po' questo pattern, non pensi? Te l'ho fatto io, eccoti il code:
    
    SPOILER

    
    

    248,100,84971,6,0,P|320:124|328:204,1,124.500001804733,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    264,284,85397,2,0,P|192:260|184:180,1,124.500001804733,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    256,192,85820,1,0,0:0:0
    256,192,86033,1,0,0:0:0

Insane

1. 00:15:949 (6,7) - Beh lo sai già.. ti consiglio la stessa cosa che ti ho detto sopra nella hard riguardo i whistles. Rimuovilo dal (7) aggiungendolo sul (6) in modo tale che sia consistente. Il suggerimento vale per questo ma anche per tutto il resto della mappa, sempre come detto prima ;3
2. 01:04:518 (1,1) - Non saprei ma ti consigliere la stessa cosa di prima per evitare lo slider posizionato subito dopo allo spinner..
3. 01:23:903 (3) - Se vuoi posizionarlo proprio lì sovrapposto allo slider precedente devi usare new combo perchè attualmente è illegibile e quindi unrankabile

Direi che nella Insane non ci sono grossi problemi essendo una mappa un po' vecchiotta e tutta simmetrica, però penso che nelle prime due (specialmente nella hard) ci vorrebbe ancora un po' di lavoro, specialmente nel flow e nello spacing che come ti ho menzionato prima è inconsistente in alcune parti. Per ora non mi sento pronto a bollartela ma mi avrebbe fatto davvero piacere farlo ç.ç Se trovi qualche MAT che te la bolla mi chiami e la rechecko e ritrattiamo un po' ;3 Buona fortuna caro, spero che almeno ti sia utile :3

1. allora sul BG qualcuno potrebbe farti problemi huvv duvv

1. 00:21:703 (2,3,4,1) - spacing
2. 00:30:650 (1,2) - spacing
3. 00:54:083 (1,2) - spacing
4. 01:08:142 (2) - aggiungi NC qui dato che segue lo spinner
5. 01:09:421 (1,2) - spacing
6. 01:13:255 (3,4) - spacing
7. 01:16:237 - questo slider sarebbe piu' bello se fosse in mezzo :c and btw non è simmetrico

1. 00:27:029 (1,1,1) - personalmente questi slider sarebbero meglio unstackati in game si leggono meglio
2. 00:37:254 (1,2) - same^
3. 00:45:562 (4,5) - che ne dici di una pattern simile? secondo me quegli slider attuali sono 1 brutti e 2 flowano male o3o
   
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4. 01:21:563 (1,2) - ; 3 ; secondo me è troppo per una hard cerca di semplificare un pochino, stessa cosa di 01:22:521 (3,4) - non ci sono per dire triplette in tutta la mappa perchè qui?

1. prima cosa che capita a occhio nudo è 01:22:202 (1,2) - 2 oggetti nello stesso istante è unrankabile
2. jump jump jump ...copy pasta jump jump jump

Lally wrote:

Hola Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥

Beh è la seconda volta che la moddo o3o vediamo un po'

[General]

1. allora sul BG qualcuno potrebbe farti problemi huvv duvv

[Normal]

1. 00:21:703 (2,3,4,1) - spacing Fixed
2. 00:30:650 (1,2) - spacing Fixed
3. 00:54:083 (1,2) - spacing Fixed
4. 01:08:142 (2) - aggiungi NC qui dato che segue lo spinnerNon ho capito cosa intendi.
5. 01:09:421 (1,2) - spacing Fixed
6. 01:13:255 (3,4) - spacing Fixed
7. 01:16:237 - questo slider sarebbe piu' bello se fosse in mezzo :c and btw non è simmetrico Nope

[Hard]

1. 00:27:029 (1,1,1) - personalmente questi slider sarebbero meglio unstackati in game si leggono meglio Nah, quel punto lì l'ho fatto apposta tutto stackato.
2. 00:37:254 (1,2) - same^ Meh, ci penserò
3. 00:45:562 (4,5) - che ne dici di una pattern simile? secondo me quegli slider attuali sono 1 brutti e 2 flowano male o3o Fixed
   
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4. 01:21:563 (1,2) - ; 3 ; secondo me è troppo per una hard cerca di semplificare un pochino, stessa cosa di 01:22:521 (3,4) - non ci sono per dire triplette in tutta la mappa perchè qui? Anche nell'insane ho messo solo lì uno stream, non vedo dov'è il problema D:

[Insane]

1. prima cosa che capita a occhio nudo è 01:22:202 (1,2) - 2 oggetti nello stesso istante è unrankabile AAAAH Fixed.
2. jump jump jump ...copy pasta jump jump jump Ma se son tutti pattern diversi, pls

''Lally firstly will mod your map and then I will mod it when she thinks it's ready :3''

Kiyro wrote:

Ah scusa, ero convinto che la moddasse Andrea, sennò ti linkavo la valley D:

Lally wrote:

ma hai letto le regole della nostra queue? mi sa proprio di no

''Lally firstly will mod your map and then I will mod it when she thinks it's ready :3''

mica si mette a moddare tutto andrea orz

[Normal]
01:08:142 (2) - aggiungi NC qui dato che segue lo spinnerNon ho capito cosa intendi.

se noti dopo lo spinner, se clicchi sulla prima nota non vedi che c'è la new combo non te la segna perchè è un bug quindi premi sulla prima nota dopo lo spinner e metti manualmente new combo

Kiyro wrote:

Ah scusa, ero convinto che la moddasse Andrea, sennò ti linkavo la valley D:

contaci che te la moddavo pure se se o3o

Kiyro wrote:

La valley me la modderai con qualche m4m, prima o poi :c

Andrea wrote:

~General~

Il BG non è molto adatto, cambialo in qualcosa di migliore.

~Hard~

00:27:668 (1) - Rimuovi questa combo, non è necessaria.

~Insane~

Riduci l'AR e l'OD di almeno 1 tick per piacere, sono troppo alte per una canzone cosi ripetitiva.

00:41:302 (1) - Rimuovi questa combo, non è necessaria.

Molto monotona, ma almeno la mappa è migliorata rispetto a come era prima.

Stefan wrote:

Didn't he said he wanted to look around a new BG?

Stefan wrote:

Ahh okay, Thumbnail isn't updated, that's why I thought. :p

grats for the Bubble

BounceBabe wrote:

This is not nightcore this is just a speed up =_=

RikiH_ wrote:

Bounce, stfu plz.

Yay, bubbled \:D/ I worked really hard for my diff.

Chewin wrote:

.. I loved the old BG and it was ok IMO.
I don't understand why you changed it, honestly.

deadbeat wrote:

i agree with bounce, sounds more speed up than nightcored imo. also i doubt youtube is a viable source of what the correct artist is ._.

Dark_Ai wrote:

deadbeat wrote:

i agree with bounce, sounds more speed up than nightcored imo. also i doubt youtube is a viable source of what the correct artist is ._.

Bass wrote:

It's just nightcore mix.
Imagine what happened if half of nightcore maps had title xxxxx (Andrea's RMX)

Melophobia wrote:

Everything looks fine ON MY END. Rebubbled.

Kiyro wrote:

*WITH SOME SHITTY UPDATES.

Lally wrote:

Kiyro wrote:

*WITH SOME SHITTY UPDATES.

non essere cosi maleducato con i modder plz :V

Chewin wrote:

.. I loved the old BG and it was ok IMO.
I don't understand why you changed it, honestly.

Kiyro wrote:

Lally wrote:

*WITH SOME SHITTY UPDATES.

non essere cosi maleducato con i modder plz :V
Non puoi capire cosa è successo mentre moddava, non ce l'ho con lui, lui mi capisce lol

Lally wrote:

ah gli update di merda XD capisco ho lottato anche io oggi o3o