athiota33 wrote:

Recheck for M4M~

[General]

Easiest diff should have 3 star or less if you want to rank your map My bad
At 00:00:060 maybe decrease the volume? More fit IMO fixed
At 00:29:225,like I said before. I think it looks more good if you map this part pending
At 01:26:892 like 00:00:060,it's too noisy ><" fixed

[Normal]

00:05:726 (3) - Delete whistle from slider slide >< It's really annoy me delete fixed
00:14:051 (4) - Maybe add whistle here? add finish,to keeps pace with other diffs
00:18:392 (1) - Too far from spinner,it's hard to catch for beginner fixed
00:52:725 (5) - New combo fixed
01:01:058 (1) - Same as 00:18:392 is it too far from spinner
01:03:558 (3,4) - Overlap by 01:02:058,put this note to another place to make more clean fixed
01:17:058 (5) - Maybe add new combo? fixed
01:22:392 (5) - New combo start here? fixed

[Hard]

00:34:058 (8) - New combo fixed
00:55:725 (2) - Maybe remove new combo? fixed
Nice!

[Insane]

00:03:726 (9) - New combo? because there's jump suddenly oAo; fixed
Like I said before~ Nice diff x33

That's all
NO KDS

l1106188 wrote:

以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO


[Normal]
normal不應該有spcing?!不過我看的時候也覺得怪怪的 距離明明一樣...先不管它吧~

00:15:051 (3) - 這裡感覺怪怪的!?改成這樣的節奏?! http://puu.sh/iavt fixed

[Hard]
00:14:385 (5) - NC?! fixed

[Insane]
01:08:392 (3,4,5) - 這有點危險 快碰到血條了~. fixed
01:21:725 (1,2,3,4) - 這讓我產生了些幻影.要不要改一下呢?! 这个先放放吧

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
加油!
Good song and SB!

Star for SB

SPOILER

Delete lines which starts with "S"

S,0,29054,,0.6880001
S,0,86227,,0.6639999
..etc

1. 00:03:726 (2) - Well... It would be nice if the first red waypoint here is right on (1)'s endpoint (move your first redpoint to the left a bit without grid snap on)
2. 00:05:726 (3) - I wonder, why you suddenly go bezier here? I think it's better to keep consistent with linear sliders for the opening
3. 00:13:718 (3,1) - (optional) It would be nice if you could space (1) apart from (2), for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:15:051 (3,4) - Do you really need this slowdown on Normal diff? I suggest to create something like this, to follow the music more:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:16:721 (1) - Having this spinner's end not hitsounded feels weird. Whistle here?
6. 00:18:392 (1) - (optional) Well, I personally don't like how this curve will play after the spinner. Slider wave instead? (also if you follow my hitsound suggestion above, finish on slider's start?)
7. 00:22:392 (3) - Sudden straight slider here breaks the flow. Why not curve it to the left? It's not that hard to do yet gives more flow (:
8. 00:42:059 (1,2) - Spacing error here - (1) should be moved down, most likely in x:392 y:344
9. 00:45:059 (2) - (optional) Again, this just my suggestion to increase flow - unstack it from (1), and make it encircle (1) like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:49:059 (4,5,1) - Your usage of 3/4s might be confusing to beginners. I suggest to create a 1/1 slider on 00:49:392 instead of that 3/4 note on (5)
11. 00:55:225 (1,2) - Spacing error here, it should be snapped as they're 1/2 apart
12. 00:57:892 (5) - New combo here
13. 00:58:392 (7,8) - Is there any point to use a soft-sampleset for these two? (well, if it's to use soft-hitfinish on (7)'s start, it's fine though, but no finish there ><)
14. 00:59:725 (1,1) - Give more time for beginner players to recover after spinner! - well this is your easiest diff on the set after all, you could just simply delete (1) here, (2) is already good standing alone
15. 01:19:725 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Arrange them symmetrically? Would be neater here imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:27:225 (1,2) - This 1/2... Actually it's fine, but it could easily trick newbies. 3/2 slider here instead? (this is one reason why I recommend Tick Rate 2)

1. 00:01:393 (2,4) - I think it's better to put whistle everytime the piano reaches high note, it will give a dramatic effect imo. Add it on (2)'s end and (4)'s repeat?
2. 00:13:218 (1) - Suggestion, make it encircle (2) as your (4) encircles (3)?
3. 00:16:222 (10) - Again, you don't need this slowdown here. 1.0x speed slider plays fine as is
4. 00:22:892 (6,7) - (optional) Unstack? Your stack here kills the flow imo. Furthermore, you can arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:30:225 (4) - Well, the single slidertick here sounds weird. If you decide not to use slidertick 2, make it as a 1/1 slider and a circle 1/2 after instead?
6. 00:32:892 (6) - Same as above
7. 00:34:892 (4) - Why you stop your slider curves here >_< - seriously, curve it to the right, it will play much better :3
8. 00:37:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange them in a symmetry to make this part less random? Don't worry though - it won't go offscreen!
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:43:392 (4,5) - This stack... It doesn't play well also after a 1/2 short slider. I highly suggest to make (4) as a repeating slider instead
10. 00:49:725 (1) - Hmm, this 1/4 repeating slider looks like they're randomly placed imo. To make it more meaningful, use a Normal sampleset with 15% volume here? (use the green inherit line)
11. 00:52:558 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier? Sounds much better if it's there imo, to follow the drums more
12. 01:04:892 (1,2,3,4) - Be more creative with hitsounds! You can play with whistles here, on (1)'s start and end + (3) for example. If you follow this, keep your next whistles consistent
13. 01:07:725 (3,4,5) - I'd rather use a repeating slider here, because the nature of stack will make (3) almost touching (2)
14. 01:13:725 (1) - I think you can make this part flow/play better by using more sliders here, I suggest to make like this (orbiting (3)) instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:23:058 (5,6) - (optional) You can add clap on (5)'s end also to build more power from the hitsound here, if you wish. If you do this, make sure you do the same thing on 01:24:392 (3,4) also

1. 00:02:059 (4,7) - Pretty much same as my suggestion on [Hard] here. Add whistle on the high piano note here?
2. 00:12:885 (6) - It's pretty noticeable that this circle is closer to (5) compared with its distance to (7)
3. 00:15:718 (2,3,4) - Add whistle on (2)? It will make this triplet sounds more meaningful instead of randomly placed for difficulty imo
4. 00:23:392 (1) - Why 1/1 slider here? Judging from your previous rhythm, I think it's better to keep using 1/2 slider and a single note 1/2 after. Maybe arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:27:725 (6,7) - The amount of repeats here could be deceiving. Remove all the repeats here, and add circles stacked on slider's end?
6. 00:40:725 (1,2) - Why not in the center? Is this intentional?
7. 00:46:392 (3) - (optional) To make the map more solid, create slider like this instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:55:725 (3) - Missing finish on slider's start here (or it's intentional?)
9. 01:04:225 (5,7) - Same as [Hard] also, you can be more creative with hitsounds here (especially involving whistles) - I experimented a bit here, and you might add one on (5) and (7)'s end though
10. 01:06:392 (2) - Minor stuff, but it's kinda obvious this slider is closer to (1) rather than to (3)
11. 01:12:392 (6,7) - (optional) Make them parallel to each other to make it tidier?
12. 01:20:058 (2) - I highly suggest to make this slider's end stacked below (9) to avoid ugly overlap:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:24:142 (4) - This stream's sequence sounds like it's being added just for extra difficulty imo. Perhaps remove (4)?
14. 01:26:058 (3) - Put new combo here instead, so the jump from this note to (1) will be guided by followpoint

Niva wrote:

Hello, AstroniX ~
I'm here for mod4mod as you write on your queue.

[General]

-> Red timing sections should NOT be used to modify slider speeds. If you're going to create a half-speed slider instead, this is what you should do:

SPOILER

-> Also about timing section, you do not need a new timing section on 00:18:059 because the metronome doesn't need to be resetted there
-> To reduce file size, resize your static SB background images to 640*480? With this, you also don't need any S (Scale) codes in the .osb:

Delete lines which starts with "S"

S,0,29054,,0.6880001
S,0,86227,,0.6639999
..etc

-> Add at least 0.5 seconds of audio lead-in[u]. (your first note starts out quite early)
-> Oh, and [u]tick rate 2 really fits this song (:

[Normal]

-> Hp Drain +1? (well... your difficulty setting looks like an Easy atm though. I suggest to increase all stats by 2 except circle size, it will still show this as a 2.5-stars diff though)
-> Also, it feels weird having 00:18:392 (1) - until 00:27:725 (3) - being unhitsounded. Because this is a Normal diff, you should rely on hitsounds more (and not on slidertick sounds more) to spice up the map, even simple hitsounding like clap every 1/1 sounds good also :3

1. 00:03:726 (2) - Well... It would be nice if the first red waypoint here is right on (1)'s endpoint (move your first redpoint to the left a bit without grid snap on)
2. 00:05:726 (3) - I wonder, why you suddenly go bezier here? I think it's better to keep consistent with linear sliders for the opening
3. 00:13:718 (3,1) - (optional) It would be nice if you could space (1) apart from (2), for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:15:051 (3,4) - Do you really need this slowdown on Normal diff? I suggest to create something like this, to follow the music more:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:16:721 (1) - Having this spinner's end not hitsounded feels weird. Whistle here?
6. 00:18:392 (1) - (optional) Well, I personally don't like how this curve will play after the spinner. Slider wave instead? (also if you follow my hitsound suggestion above, finish on slider's start?)
7. 00:22:392 (3) - Sudden straight slider here breaks the flow. Why not curve it to the left? It's not that hard to do yet gives more flow (:
8. 00:42:059 (1,2) - Spacing error here - (1) should be moved down, most likely in x:392 y:344
9. 00:45:059 (2) - (optional) Again, this just my suggestion to increase flow - unstack it from (1), and make it encircle (1) like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:49:059 (4,5,1) - Your usage of 3/4s might be confusing to beginners. I suggest to create a 1/1 slider on 00:49:392 instead of that 3/4 note on (5)
11. 00:55:225 (1,2) - Spacing error here, it should be snapped as they're 1/2 apart
12. 00:57:892 (5) - New combo here
13. 00:58:392 (7,8) - Is there any point to use a soft-sampleset for these two? (well, if it's to use soft-hitfinish on (7)'s start, it's fine though, but no finish there ><)
14. 00:59:725 (1,1) - Give more time for beginner players to recover after spinner! - well this is your easiest diff on the set after all, you could just simply delete (1) here, (2) is already good standing alone
15. 01:19:725 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Arrange them symmetrically? Would be neater here imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:27:225 (1,2) - This 1/2... Actually it's fine, but it could easily trick newbies. 3/2 slider here instead? (this is one reason why I recommend Tick Rate 2)

[Hard]

-> Again, a problem with unbalanced difficulty setting - Overall Difficulty shouldn't be this low when using AR7. Increase it?

1. 00:01:393 (2,4) - I think it's better to put whistle everytime the piano reaches high note, it will give a dramatic effect imo. Add it on (2)'s end and (4)'s repeat?
2. 00:13:218 (1) - Suggestion, make it encircle (2) as your (4) encircles (3)?
3. 00:16:222 (10) - Again, you don't need this slowdown here. 1.0x speed slider plays fine as is
4. 00:22:892 (6,7) - (optional) Unstack? Your stack here kills the flow imo. Furthermore, you can arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:30:225 (4) - Well, the single slidertick here sounds weird. If you decide not to use slidertick 2, make it as a 1/1 slider and a circle 1/2 after instead?
6. 00:32:892 (6) - Same as above
7. 00:34:892 (4) - Why you stop your slider curves here >_< - seriously, curve it to the right, it will play much better :3
8. 00:37:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange them in a symmetry to make this part less random? Don't worry though - it won't go offscreen!
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:43:392 (4,5) - This stack... It doesn't play well also after a 1/2 short slider. I highly suggest to make (4) as a repeating slider instead
10. 00:49:725 (1) - Hmm, this 1/4 repeating slider looks like they're randomly placed imo. To make it more meaningful, use a Normal sampleset with 15% volume here? (use the green inherit line)
11. 00:52:558 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier? Sounds much better if it's there imo, to follow the drums more
12. 01:04:892 (1,2,3,4) - Be more creative with hitsounds! You can play with whistles here, on (1)'s start and end + (3) for example. If you follow this, keep your next whistles consistent
13. 01:07:725 (3,4,5) - I'd rather use a repeating slider here, because the nature of stack will make (3) almost touching (2)
14. 01:13:725 (1) - I think you can make this part flow/play better by using more sliders here, I suggest to make like this (orbiting (3)) instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:23:058 (5,6) - (optional) You can add clap on (5)'s end also to build more power from the hitsound here, if you wish. If you do this, make sure you do the same thing on 01:24:392 (3,4) also

Much more solid compared to Normal, overall.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:059 (4,7) - Pretty much same as my suggestion on [Hard] here. Add whistle on the high piano note here?
2. 00:12:885 (6) - It's pretty noticeable that this circle is closer to (5) compared with its distance to (7)
3. 00:15:718 (2,3,4) - Add whistle on (2)? It will make this triplet sounds more meaningful instead of randomly placed for difficulty imo
4. 00:23:392 (1) - Why 1/1 slider here? Judging from your previous rhythm, I think it's better to keep using 1/2 slider and a single note 1/2 after. Maybe arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:27:725 (6,7) - The amount of repeats here could be deceiving. Remove all the repeats here, and add circles stacked on slider's end?
6. 00:40:725 (1,2) - Why not in the center? Is this intentional?
7. 00:46:392 (3) - (optional) To make the map more solid, create slider like this instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:55:725 (3) - Missing finish on slider's start here (or it's intentional?)
9. 01:04:225 (5,7) - Same as [Hard] also, you can be more creative with hitsounds here (especially involving whistles) - I experimented a bit here, and you might add one on (5) and (7)'s end though
10. 01:06:392 (2) - Minor stuff, but it's kinda obvious this slider is closer to (1) rather than to (3)
11. 01:12:392 (6,7) - (optional) Make them parallel to each other to make it tidier?
12. 01:20:058 (2) - I highly suggest to make this slider's end stacked below (9) to avoid ugly overlap:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:24:142 (4) - This stream's sequence sounds like it's being added just for extra difficulty imo. Perhaps remove (4)?
14. 01:26:058 (3) - Put new combo here instead, so the jump from this note to (1) will be guided by followpoint

I like how the map goes progressively~ and great SB also.
Good luck, AstroniX (:

1. 音源略差劲 建议去VeryCD等地方找一下这张单曲碟 有一个TV Edit的版本, 测下新offset 和原offset比对后 把notes和SB按时间位移下即可
2. tags: ending koeda 记得吧opening删了..
3. 01:27:724 (T) - KIAI这里结束

1. 00:23:724 (2) - 漏whistle了
2. 以楼主PC数来看 已经算是不错的Insane了 当然等你打够多回来看会觉得很多游戏性上的欠缺 比如note/slider的接续略枯燥 间距一成不变等 虽然vocal不是你跟的主线 但是 同样也是歌曲的重要因素 以后多照顾下会好很多

1. AR+2 OD+2
2. 00:13:224 (1) - finish
3. 00:50:224 (2) - 建议移除 因此之后的间距也稍调整
4. 01:13:057 (3) - 末尾clap
5. 01:15:890 (T) - 加note 然后new combo放在这个上面 而不是现在的(1)
6. 01:18:557 (T) - ^

1. 01:28:057 (1) - 结束时间和其他难度统一下
2. AR+1 OD+1
3. 中间的break没必要加的 一起map掉
4. 00:41:057 (3) - 这里音效略单调 尝试在起始加whistle
5. 00:43:724 (3) - ^
6. 00:46:390 (3) - ^
7. 00:49:057 (4) - ^
8. 01:07:724 (2,1,2,3) - 两个大slider挨着有点难看 可稍微做调整

1. 首先要说的是所有SB素材大小超标了.. 于是引用下目前适用Rules
   

   The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

2. 改大小起始很简单 1024x768 -> 800x600 然后把对应Scale代码里参数乘以0.78125就能得到新的Scale参数
3. 至于参数是什么. 打开osb后可以找到类似' S,0,76721,,0.6799999'的代码 最后那一串就是了 p.s 800x600 对应到屏幕的参数是0.8 因为默认分辨率是640x480 这样仔细计算后得出的值可以有效减少大分辨率屏幕显示时出现瑕疵
4. 做SB的时候最好考虑到spinner的因素 比如每个难度都有的最后转盘, thank for playing的出现和持续时间都最好延后/延长

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 音源略差劲 建议去VeryCD等地方找一下这张单曲碟 有一个TV Edit的版本, 测下新offset 和原offset比对后 把notes和SB按时间位移下即可
2. tags: ending koeda 记得吧opening删了..
3. 01:27:724 (T) - KIAI这里结束

[Insane]:

1. 00:23:724 (2) - 漏whistle了
2. 以楼主PC数来看 已经算是不错的Insane了 当然等你打够多回来看会觉得很多游戏性上的欠缺 比如note/slider的接续略枯燥 间距一成不变等 虽然vocal不是你跟的主线 但是 同样也是歌曲的重要因素 以后多照顾下会好很多

[Hard]:

1. AR+2 OD+2
2. 00:13:224 (1) - finish
3. 00:50:224 (2) - 建议移除 因此之后的间距也稍调整
4. 01:13:057 (3) - 末尾clap
5. 01:15:890 (T) - 加note 然后new combo放在这个上面 而不是现在的(1)
6. 01:18:557 (T) - ^

[Normal]:

1. 01:28:057 (1) - 结束时间和其他难度统一下
2. AR+1 OD+1
3. 中间的break没必要加的 一起map掉
4. 00:41:057 (3) - 这里音效略单调 尝试在起始加whistle
5. 00:43:724 (3) - ^
6. 00:46:390 (3) - ^
7. 00:49:057 (4) - ^
8. 01:07:724 (2,1,2,3) - 两个大slider挨着有点难看 可稍微做调整

[StoryBoard]:

1. 首先要说的是所有SB素材大小超标了.. 于是引用下目前适用Rules
   

   The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

2. 改大小起始很简单 1024x768 -> 800x600 然后把对应Scale代码里参数乘以0.78125就能得到新的Scale参数
3. 至于参数是什么. 打开osb后可以找到类似' S,0,76721,,0.6799999'的代码 最后那一串就是了 p.s 800x600 对应到屏幕的参数是0.8 因为默认分辨率是640x480 这样仔细计算后得出的值可以有效减少大分辨率屏幕显示时出现瑕疵
4. 做SB的时候最好考虑到spinner的因素 比如每个难度都有的最后转盘, thank for playing的出现和持续时间都最好延后/延长

废话就这些了 / GC终于完结了可以光明正大黑编剧了

改差不多时候可以发PM再让我看下 希望到时候能够变更好（不仅限于我说的这些

1. move this to pending
2. 01:27:316 is a better place for ending your KIAI
3. 01:02:649 ~ 01:03:316 (T) - how about making the volume increasing by time? would be a nice intro for KIAI part
4. bitrate of your mp3 is too high, turn it down to 192kbps plz. (check the offset again after doing it and fullsubmit is necessary
5. add 1500ms audio lean-in in every diff.
6. source is GUILTY CROWN
7. tags should be ending instead of opening

1. BG.jpg is included in your .osb codes but it doesn't exist in anywhere.
2. many of your elements for SB is taller or wider than the maximum, make sure you've checked all things HERE
3. sometimes the lyrics are using same color with the main theme of displaying storyboard, kind of annoying but not a big problem

1. 01:02:649 (5) - place new combo on this note instead of 01:02:983 (1).
2. 01:03:316 (2) - new combo
3. 01:07:649 (2) - clap at beginning
4. 01:08:316 (6) - ^
5. 01:10:982 (2) - ^
6. 01:12:316 (6) - ^
7. 01:13:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not fitting well as a stream here. or it's just too long. try to come up with a better pattern?
8. 01:26:482 (1) - 1/2 notes would do better for this parts, sliders are much too soft for playing.

1. OD&AR +2
2. 01:12:649 (3) - clap at the end
3. 01:13:316 (4) - same ^

1. OD&AR +1
2. 01:27:649 (1) - make it end at the same time as Hard/Insane

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哦, 要192kbps的mp3么, http://115.com/file/c250nuyx#supercell.rar

offset 大概是676左右, 一根红线就够了, 后面的可以去掉

1. 01:26:507 (1,2,3) - I didn't mean this, see 01:25:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4), and make them all normal sample-set.
2. 00:15:866 (6) - unsnapped
3. 00:16:366 (1) - unsnapped

1. The hitsounds sound too quiet until 3/4 part of the song. Consider raising up the volume?

1. 00:26:507 (3) - Make it like this instead? Add whistle on slider end of 00:26:507 (3,4) to keep the hitsound pattern consistent.

1. 00:06:342 (1) - Put an inherited point here with volume at 5% so that it makes quieter spinner sound
2. 00:11:342 (1) - Reduce the use of finish and/or use custom clap/whistle hitsound that sounds like soft finish to replace finish from here until 00:16:341 overusing finish is bad imho
3. 00:39:007 (1) - ^
4. 01:09:674 (1) - NC?

• 1. 00:00:676 (1,2) - Overlap is okay, but move them two grids down and right so it looks better with that Symbol in the SB
  2. 00:41:674 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
  3. 00:44:341 (1,2) - Add Finish on (1) instead of (2).
  4. 00:47:007 (1,2) - Add Finish on (1) instead of (2).
  5. 00:49:674 (1) - Add Finish.
  6. 00:52:674 (3) - Remove Finish from Sliderstart.
  7. 00:52:674 (3) - Add Finish.
  8. 01:03:341 (3) - Funny Slider. Keep it ^^
  9. 01:27:341 (2) - Not stacked properly, deactivate Grid Snap to do so.
  [Hard]
  
  • 1. 00:03:342 (5) - If you changed the position of this Slider in Normal, please do it here and in Inori too~
    2. 00:18:008 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
    3. 00:41:674 (1) - ^
    4. 00:41:674 (1) - ^
    5. 00:47:008 (1) - ^
    6. 00:49:341 (1) - Finish on Sliderend.
    7. 00:50:008 (3) - This Slider crosses Lifebar a bit, move it down please.
    8. 00:58:008 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart please.
    [Inori]
    
    • 1. 00:00:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ouwch, Spacing became weird, try to fix it somehow o.0
      2. 00:28:674 (1) - Add Finish.
      3. 00:41:674 (1) - ^
      4. 00:44:341 (1) - ^
      5. 00:44:341 (1) - ^
      6. 00:49:674 (5) - Finish on Sliderstart please.
      7. 01:22:341 (2) - Definitly crosses Lifebar, please move it down.
      [SB]
      
      • 1. I don't see why "move-b.png needs to be .png format? Maybe convert it to .jpg a the other to decrease filesize?
        2. Inori and ouma_shuu.png are quite large, maybe you can scale them down to 40% width and heigth via photoshop/GIMP to decrease filesize?
        
        Man, this is a brilliant SB!
        Also this map will become quite amusing to play in Taiko mode with all these Finish's.
        I don't see any grave Errors here, not even optical Issues. This Map is fine for me.
        So get that MAT back here asap. *Double Star*

Man, this is a brilliant SB!
Also this map will become quite amusing to play in Taiko mode with all these Finish's.
I don't see any grave Errors here, not even optical Issues. This Map is fine for me.
So get that MAT back here asap. *Double Star*

CDFA wrote:

Desu

Desu

Desususudesu

Overall:
The 2nd red section isn't needed~

Inori:
00:03:009 (8) - Make this symmetrical to (4) fixed
00:03:342 (1) - Make slight adjustments so the end of the slider ends at the previous (6) fixed
00:04:675 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap
00:40:674 (3) - Lower this last sliderpoint
00:51:341 (6) - Add NC because of jump? fixed
01:14:008 (1) - Add clap on end of slider fixed
01:16:674 (4) - ^ fixed

Hard:
Woah wtf this is actually pretty ok

Normal:
00:03:342 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap
00:06:342 (1) - Make this shorter so there's more recovery time for the easiest diff fixed
00:16:341 (1) - ^. Or maybe just remove this, since it's kinda short? because of SB...
00:29:007 - Dude like map this
00:58:341 (1) - Make this shorter so there's more recovery time fixed
01:03:341 (3) - I can assume you're trying to make a crown shape, but unless you have both sliders like, near each other, it won't work, and it'll just look wtf I'll try to make a new shape...
01:08:674 (3) - ^ fixed
01:23:008 (2) - Add clap fixed

desu.

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi~
Quick Mod from King's Lair.

[Normal]

• 1. 00:00:676 (1,2) - Overlap is okay, but move them two grids down and right so it looks better with that Symbol in the SB
  2. 00:41:674 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. fixed
  3. 00:44:341 (1,2) - Add Finish on (1) instead of (2).fixed
  4. 00:47:007 (1,2) - Add Finish on (1) instead of (2).fixed
  5. 00:49:674 (1) - Add Finish.fixed
  6. 00:52:674 (3) - Remove Finish from Sliderstart.fixed
  7. 00:52:674 (3) - Add Finish.fixed
  8. 01:03:341 (3) - Funny Slider. Keep it ^^
  9. 01:27:341 (2) - Not stacked properly, deactivate Grid Snap to do so.

fixed

[Hard]

• 1. 00:03:342 (5) - If you changed the position of this Slider in Normal, please do it here and in Inori too~fixed
  2. 00:18:008 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.fixed
  3. 00:41:674 (1) - ^fixed
  4. 00:41:674 (1) - ^fixed
  5. 00:47:008 (1) - ^fixed
  6. 00:49:341 (1) - Finish on Sliderend.fixed
  7. 00:50:008 (3) - This Slider crosses Lifebar a bit, move it down please.fixed
  8. 00:58:008 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart please.

fixed

[Inori]

• 1. 00:00:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ouwch, Spacing became weird, try to fix it somehow o.0fixed
  2. 00:28:674 (1) - Add Finish.fixed
  3. 00:41:674 (1) - ^fixed
  4. 00:44:341 (1) - ^fixed
  5. 00:44:341 (1) - ^fixed
  6. 00:49:674 (5) - Finish on Sliderstart please.fixed
  7. 01:22:341 (2) - Definitly crosses Lifebar, please move it down.

fixed

[SB]

• 1. I don't see why "move-b.png needs to be .png format? Maybe convert it to .jpg a the other to decrease filesize?
  2. Inori and ouma_shuu.png are quite large, maybe you can scale them down to 40% width and heigth via photoshop/GIMP to decrease filesize?

fixed


Man, this is a brilliant SB!
Also this map will become quite amusing to play in Taiko mode with all these Finish's.
I don't see any grave Errors here, not even optical Issues. This Map is fine for me.
So get that MAT back here asap. *Double Star*

1. I... don't get why the hardest diff is named "Inori" and not "Insane". What sense does it make ?
2. Avoid placing circles under sliderends. It looks bad in almost all cases, and the circles are always hard to see under the hitburst and the slider.

1. 00:00:676 (1,2) - I don't really agree with that kind of overlap, but it makes sense - just make sure it overlaps perfectly. As of now, the end of (1) goes a little bit too much to the right.
2. 00:16:341 (1) - This spinner is too short for a Normal, and there is an object too soon after it.
3. 00:28:674 - Why is there a break here ? None of the other diffs have it, and I don't think anything in the song calls for a break - all diffs would have one otherwise.
4. 00:41:674 (1) - I suppose this is an error - isn't the finish meant to be on the last beat of the slider ?
5. 00:44:674 (2,3) - I don't think this is a good idea in a Normal. The overlap looks rather bad, and it can be pretty confusing, because the last beat of the slider isn't entirely visible.
6. 00:51:674 (4) - You should move that one down a bit. It's too close to 00:52:341 (1) - and that's kind of confusing.
7. 00:58:341 (1,1,2) - For a Normal, I think you should remove the two sliders and move the spinner's end to 01:00:674 - . There is a slight pause in the song, and it should appear in the map. Right now, the sliders start too soon after the spinner, which makes this part too hard to play.

1. AR7 felt really fast on this. I'd recommend to lower the AR by one, because right now, it gives a weird feeling to the map.
2. 00:15:509 - My ears have been desperately looking for a note here. The song has a note at this point and your mapping calls for it. The lack of any hitsound here is literally disturbing.
3. 00:18:008 - until 00:23:341 - : I don't really like how you used different spacing for 1/2s and 1/1s. It would have been cool for an Insane, but for a Hard, I find it too confusing.
4. 00:49:341 (1) - This slider alone was very confusing. Usually, that kind of kick slider ends 1/4 before the next object, but not in this case, so players rush to the next note and mess up the timing. Also, it doesn't... make any sense with the song, which makes it even more confusing.
5. 00:50:008 (3,4) - These were quite confusing too. So far, you've only been using repeat sliders with a single repeat, and you suddenly throw in a second repeat.
6. 01:00:674 (1) - This comes way too soon after the spinner and is way too far from the center of the screen.
7. 01:06:508 (2) - This slider breaks your clap pattern. There should be a clap at 01:07:007 - but your slider makes this impossible, and the clap on its last beat sounds very bad.
8. 01:11:841 (2) - Same.

1. There are a lot of absolutely unjustified jumps, which make the map difficult to read, because it's never possible to know if a high spacing is a jump or a bigger time gap.
2. 00:11:342 (1) - This comes in too soon after the spinner for how far from the center it is.
3. 00:11:842 (3) - This slider is hidden under the hitburst from the spinner, which makes it impossible to see that it is actually reversed (which makes no sense but ok). Here's a fix that makes the pattern actually more consistent: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/355223
4. 00:14:341 (2,3) - This jump is way too big and for no real reason.
5. 00:15:841 (6) - There is absolutely nothing that warns that this slider is slower. I don't even see a reason why it should be slower, actually.
6. 00:16:341 (1,1) - I'm fine with silencing sliderends but this is not fine at all. The circle comes way too soon after the spinner, and the fact that the spinner is silenced makes the rhythm extremely confusing. Make the spinner end earlier without silencing it.
7. 00:27:341 (1,2) - Very confusing. You were using a very mobile kind of mapping so far, and you suddenly throw in sliders with two repeats, which completely stop the movement, which flows very badly and is confusing.
8. 00:30:174 (7) - Apart from the will to make people miss this note, there's no reason why it should be hidden under the slider. There is enough room to place it at the bottom, so why did you choose the uglily overlapping option instead ?
9. 00:39:341 (3,4) - Consequence of the unjustified jumps: this looks exactly like any of the jumps before, except it's not a jump. People will miss on this and get frustrated because they expected it to be a jump. Then 00:49:674 (5,1) - is another jump, and people get confused again.
10. 00:55:341 (3,4) - Same flow killing issue as 00:27:341 -
11. 00:58:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - HUGE jumps for no real reason at all. You also completely break the movement you were doing so far with 00:56:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
12. 01:00:674 (1) - Too soon after the spinner.
13. 01:12:008 (5,6) - Why is this a 3.00x jump when the other similar rhythms in the chorus are more or less regularly spaced ?
14. 01:24:674 (1,2,1,2,3) - These jumps are way too big and way too surprising, too difficult to read because of the hitbursts and the moving background, and play very bad because of the sharp turns and movements needed to play them.

• Fine~

• 00:13:341 (3,4,1) - 這3note距離不平均
  00:16:341 (1,1) - 太快了 對新手來說有點難 而且沒有Easy難度的情況下 ._. 建議用滑條代替吧
  00:42:507 (2) - 移到 x:296 y:144
  00:43:341 (3) - 移到 x:168 y:176
  00:52:341 (1) - 距離改到1.2x
  00:53:674 (4) - 建議這邊grid關掉調整前後距離1.2x看起來更好看
  00:58:007 (6) - 移到 x:384 y:312 比較flow
  00:58:341 (1,1) - 一樣太快了
  01:00:674 (1,2) - 滑條開頭加whistle?
  01:02:674 - 這條綠線移到 01:03:007 - 不然 01:01:674 (2) - 滑條尾巴用Normal音效有點突兀..

• 00:18:009 - 這邊到 00:22:007 - 這的距離0.8x 之後都1.2x 其實我不知道為何從這改成1.2x 建議0.8x的部份統一成1.2x 單點太多太遠可以用 00:18:008 (1) - 這種代替
  00:27:341 (1) - 距離
  00:37:007 - 這邊0.8x 部分我到覺得還可以~
  00:44:341 (1) - 滑條開頭上finish (另外有紅色做直角的...拿掉吧 雖然不是什麼大問題)
  00:52:174 (1) - 前後距離差很大 讀圖可能會有困難 ._.
  01:02:674 (1) - 距離
  01:03:841 (2) - 藏好吧 x:184 y:80 (可以刪掉note 重新放一個在滑條尾巴上放他會自動對準)
  01:10:341 (2) - 移到 x:108 y:88

• 00:19:341 (1,2) - 這是直線滑條吧? 是的話就重拉一個吧 不要有中間拉弧度的...
  00:27:341 (1,2) - 總覺得好突然的2次反轉slider 分成4個slider做個跳板感覺很棒呀0.0
  00:29:674 (5,7) - note7疊好在slider5下
  00:39:341 (3,4) - 這邊讀圖很困難 一定會搶按滑條4 因前面節拍很緊湊且 00:38:341 (1,2) - 這樣距離你當成跳 導致這邊也會覺得是跳的滑條...建議放遠一點
  00:58:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 打起來有點不太順 ._. 感覺 00:59:341 - 這邊更適合跳 其實不是大問題 ~
  01:08:841 (7) - NC

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- About SB: 01:02:674 - start to fade-in the white colour since here? It fits the new combo at the same time.
- The "thank you 4 playing" SB could last longer. A suggestion: the BG fade out since the end of slider, and the "thanks you 4 playing" lasts till the end of the song. fixed
- Rename [Inori] to insane enhances uniqueness of diff name, otherwise rename hard and normal to character name too.
fixed
[Inori]
00:03:342 (1,2) - mute the sldierslider sound since the music is so calm?fixed
00:16:341 (1) - it makes more sense if it ends 1/2 eariler, fitting the vocal.fixed
00:29:674 (5,7) - try to stack them properly?fixed
00:41:174 (4) - as the end of a sentence I don't think it needs a finish herefixed
00:43:841 (3) - ^fixed
00:46:507 (4) - ^fixed

[Hard]
Similarly, the sliderslider could be muted in the intro part.fixed
00:26:674 (4) - I don't see a reason using 1/2 spacing for a 1/1/ separation. It's reasonable under NC, but the music doesn't sound like that.fixed
00:41:174 - delete finish like insanefixed
00:43:841 - ^fixed
00:46:507 - ^fixed
00:57:174 (4) - needs an accent at the end? I propose that the coming notes can be in N too, with gradually louder volume.fixed
01:10:508 (3) - quite trivial spacing error.fixed

[Normal]
00:00:676 (1,2) - try not to overlap like this as part of (2) is completely invisible and this is hard for beginngers. (actually the (1) fits in the SB, wow.) i'll fix it by designing a new shape
00:18:008 (1) - Try to put the note nearer to the center to make it easier?fixed

These are the points made others than the above unchecked mod, I guess. good luck~

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

來自我的modding queue

[在mod之前]
我不是一個好modder, 所以我的mod未必能幫到你什麼.
我會用grid level 4來mod.
如果我句未打了 "?" , 你可以無視揖.
如果我句未打了 "." , 請認真考慮這個建議.
如果我句未打了 (FF), 這表事 "也要注意以後的notes的位置, 比如distance什麼的."

[Storyboarding]
- 用紫色的字不是不可以, 但是跟深色圖片放在一起會看不到字的...我建議的解決方法是吧光暈改成白色的. 雖然沒有人會看SB...但是能做得更好就做得更好吧.
字我会重做的0.0
[Normal]
- okay

[Hard]
- 這真是hard而不是insane? 這麼高的Slider Velocity...
- -

[Insane]
00:49:674 (5) - 左移1格?
01:15:341 (3) -下移1格?
额...这个貌似不需要

對不起我MOD得不夠好

wmfchris wrote:

You fixed the timing with a difference of 1ms in 0:18:008 - ,... is it really necessary orz

[Insane]
00:50:341 (2) - remove finish here because it's different from last section (before 00:50:007 - ), you don't really need a double finish here, and the music is turning more instrumental. fixed
00:58:007 - make these notes gradually louder? fixed

[Hard]
00:34:507 (4,5,6) - don't feel like such jump is needed here, just curve (3,6) nearer to (5)? fixed
00:35:841 (8) - extending 1/2 sounds better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/375495 fixed
01:15:341 - add a note here? fixed

[Normal]
00:00:676 (1,2) - this is still not recommended as explained before fixed

sounds much better, it looks quite ready now, and good luck~

1. Delete the second offset on 00:18:008 which is unnecessary. There is only 1ms difference. Also there are no bar change, metronome and even BPM.
   
2. Since you're using custom hitcircle, you should add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under the [Colour] section.
   
3. There are missing skin files.
   approachcircle.png
   reversearrow.png
   spinner-circle.png
   spinner-approachcircle.png
   spinner-metre.png
   spinner-clear.png
   spinner-spin.png
   spinner-osu.png
   Add them to prevent skin blending.

1. Why didn't you add "一人何を思えばいい" at 6342. I know the spinner covers SB, but it's the problem only on osu! standard mode.
2. lyc-2.png - Error on "Toki". It should be "時"
3. lyc-a2.png - Errors on "Boku" and "Gekkyo". They should be "僕" and "結"
4. lyc-a7.png - Error on "Boku". It should be "僕"

Like this

ykcarrot wrote:

Please give a kudos to them who modded yours if they could help you.


[General]

1. Delete the second offset on 00:18:008 which is unnecessary. There is only 1ms difference. Also there are no bar change, metronome and even BPM.
   
2. Since you're using custom hitcircle, you should add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under the [Colour] section.
   
3. There are missing skin files.
   approachcircle.png
   reversearrow.png
   spinner-circle.png
   spinner-approachcircle.png
   spinner-metre.png
   spinner-clear.png
   spinner-spin.png
   spinner-osu.png
   Add them to prevent skin blending.

[SB General]
GC.png - Showing it at 11342 would be better
bg12.jpg - Make fade-out. It disappears too suddenly at the end.


[SB Lyrics]
Check your Japanese font before you fix the lyrics. There are some errors.

1. Why didn't you add "一人何を思えばいい" at 6342. I know the spinner covers SB, but it's the problem only on osu! standard mode.
2. lyc-2.png - Error on "Toki". It should be "時"
3. lyc-a2.png - Errors on "Boku" and "Gekkyo". They should be "僕" and "結"
4. lyc-a7.png - Error on "Boku". It should be "僕"

[Insane]
00:03:342 (1,2) - You can change their color to green if you fix the color of first combo group.

Like this

[Hard]
Fine


[Normal]
Fine


Good luck.
I think this map may be bubbled if you fix them what I pointed out.
In other words, mapset is fine.

1. 皮肤有点问题 字体在每个部分都不一样 很难有种主题的感觉 而且每张素材的画风都不一样 这个有点苛刻但是必须考虑到 画风的话主要是fail-background.png这个
2. 实话说目前的hitcircleoverlay以及reversearrow很刺眼 加上SB中亮色很多 对体验负面影响不小
3. miss,0,50,100,300的分辨率必须是256x256的png
4. 100,100k这个需要有所区别
5. 300一组同上
6. tags加上: koeda

1. 00:06:675 (1) - 起点改成和其他难度一样
2. 00:29:009 - 这个break没必要吧.. 不要留全部Map掉好了 太怪了这位置

1. unsnapped notes
2. unsnapped sections

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

1. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/577754 skin实在太瞎眼.. circleoverlay换个亮色的吧 亮银之类
2. Insane的Sliderboarder没设置

1. 00:15:676 (2) - clap
2. 01:02:676 (1,2,3,4) - 反差过大 不推荐这么用
3. 01:16:676 (4) - clap
4. 01:16:676 (4) - ^
5. 01:26:509 (1,2,3) - clap
6. 01:27:009 (2) - whistle取消
7. 01:27:342 (4) - whistle取消掉

1. 00:00:676 (1) - 末尾没有snap

1. 01:06:509 (2) - 末尾clap取消
2. 01:11:842 (2) - ^