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Satellite
こんばんは(。ÒωÓ。)~

Hard

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:34:147 (1) - 私には1のスライダーの位置が余り好きじゃないので、2の方向へ向けて引くか、曲げたりしてもいいかもしれないです><
    http://puu.sh/1I96n http://puu.sh/1I9dG
  2. 00:37:897 (2) - 1grid上か・・な?
  3. 00:39:397 (6) - ちょっとだけ傾けてみては
  4. 00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - どういう形になってるかわかりませんが5角形作った方が綺麗に見えると思います・・・>< 00:58:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - 此方と同じように・・・?
  5. 01:07:522 (1,2,3) - こんな音取りのほうが好きかもしれないです><
  6. 01:15:397 (5) - この位置 01:16:147 (1) - と同じように曲げてみては・・・?

Normal

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:12:397 (7) - 2ndポイントを1grid落としてみては nazi~

Easy

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:55:147 (1,2,3) - easyだとちょっと見づらさそう・・・ 大した提案はないです><
  2. 01:07:147 - スピン中だけどこの緑線は必要・・・?(わからない)
alacat先生頑張ってくださいヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙★
meiikyuu
hi ~

Easy
  1. 00:14:272 (2,3) - for an easy diff., i suggest you not stack notes
  2. 00:32:272 (2,3) - ^ (i won't mention anymore xD)
  3. 01:19:147 (1,2) - unstack
other than that, good diff. (:

Normal
  1. 00:16:147 (5) - NC
  2. 00:28:147 (5) - ^
  3. 01:04:147 (4) - ^
  4. 01:22:147 (1) - extend to next white tick?
Hard
  1. 00:46:147 (1,3,5) - make equally spaced from each other ^^
i like your hitsounds :)
sorry i can't find much right now, i was rushing a little Dx . maybe i will edit this post if i find something else..

ganbatte <3
Topic Starter
alacat

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

こんばんは(。ÒωÓ。)~ こんばんは! :)

Hard

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:34:147 (1) - 私には1のスライダーの位置が余り好きじゃないので、2の方向へ向けて引くか、曲げたりしてもいいかもしれないです><
    http://puu.sh/1I96n http://puu.sh/1I9dG
    前の3連打と30°差をつけて置いてる感じです!
  2. 00:37:897 (2) - 1grid上か・・な?  okey!
  3. 00:39:397 (6) - ちょっとだけ傾けてみては 曲げる→直線 のパターンでここのパートはおいています></
  4. 00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - どういう形になってるかわかりませんが5角形作った方が綺麗に見えると思います・・・>< 00:58:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - 此方と同じように・・・?
    た、たしかに・・・;w; 今のままが好きなので、指摘が多ければ変えようと思います!
  5. 01:07:522 (1,2,3) - こんな音取りのほうが好きかもしれないです><

    ちょっとむずかしめにしたいので、このままで!
  6. 01:15:397 (5) - この位置 01:16:147 (1) - と同じように曲げてみては・・・? 上と同じです!

Normal

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:12:397 (7) - 2ndポイントを1grid落としてみては nazi~

Easy

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:55:147 (1,2,3) - easyだとちょっと見づらさそう・・・ 大した提案はないです><
  2. 01:07:147 - スピン中だけどこの緑線は必要・・・?(わからない)
easy , Normalは全て修正しました~!

alacat先生頑張ってくださいヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙★  ありがとう>w<

 ★もありがとうです :oops:

Thanks modding :)
Topic Starter
alacat

meiikyuu wrote:

hi ~

Easy
  1. 00:14:272 (2,3) - for an easy diff., i suggest you not stack notes
  2. 00:32:272 (2,3) - ^ (i won't mention anymore xD)
  3. 01:19:147 (1,2) - unstack
other than that, good diff. (:

yes >.< maybe... XAT say must change ;w;

Normal
  1. 00:16:147 (5) - NC
  2. 00:28:147 (5) - ^
  3. 01:04:147 (4) - ^
  4. 01:22:147 (1) - extend to next white tick?
all fixed :3

Hard
  1. 00:46:147 (1,3,5) - make equally spaced from each other ^^
oh , looks good ><// okey~

i like your hitsounds :) Thank you meiikyu <3
sorry i can't find much right now, i was rushing a little Dx . maybe i will edit this post if i find something else..

ganbatte <3 <3

Thank you for modding :oops:
mochi
(「・ω・)「
Topic Starter
alacat
(ノ*・ω・)ノmochi
h3k1ru
cutecat
787B
Woof~
From my Modding Queue.

General
Seems good to me.

Easy
00:10:147 (4) - Could have been placed better on the grid imo.
00:26:272 (2) - Fix spacing.
00:34:147 (1) - ^ When you fix this one, remember to also fix 00:34:897 (2) - of course.
00:58:897 (2,3,4) - Will also recommend to not stack here.


Normal
You are aware that you choosed several distances on the beginning of the diff, right?
00:40:147 (4) - NC? I found nice to add since you didn't placed a circle in 00:39:772 - and after a considerable time without a note, I'd recommend it, plus, it fits with the vocals imo.
00:34:147 (5) - ^ Same explanation as above.
00:52:147 (4) - ^ Yup, same as above.
00:58:147 (4) - ^ Yeah o3o
01:23:647 (1) - Would place aligned with 01:22:147 (1) - http://puu.sh/1IreW

Hard
Couldn't find much things here, although:
00:35:647 (3,4,5) - Could have made into a more "curved" way, something like this.

Well, that's it! Nice map and song afterall~
Good luck!
Pokie
はやっ
Topic Starter
alacat
>h3k1ru hekicat :P

Wolf wrote:

Woof~
From my Modding Queue.

General
Seems good to me.

Easy
00:10:147 (4) - Could have been placed better on the grid imo. okey!
00:26:272 (2) - Fix spacing. ^
00:34:147 (1) - ^ When you fix this one, remember to also fix 00:34:897 (2) - of course. ^
00:58:897 (2,3,4) - Will also recommend to not stack here. No change here ~

Normal
You are aware that you choosed several distances on the beginning of the diff, right?
00:40:147 (4) - NC? I found nice to add since you didn't placed a circle in 00:39:772 - and after a considerable time without a note, I'd recommend it, plus, it fits with the vocals imo.
00:34:147 (5) - ^ Same explanation as above.
00:52:147 (4) - ^ Yup, same as above.
00:58:147 (4) - ^ Yeah o3o
01:23:647 (1) - Would place aligned with 01:22:147 (1) - http://puu.sh/1IreW

all fixed this diff ! nice modding ><//

Hard
Couldn't find much things here, although:
00:35:647 (3,4,5) - Could have made into a more "curved" way, something like this. okey !

Well, that's it! Nice map and song afterall~
Good luck!

Thank you for modding ;)
Topic Starter
alacat

Pokie wrote:

はやっ
猫物語ですので(((╹д╹;)))
Guy
新年初Modイキマス

 

Hard


 ● 00:08:647 (4) - 1grid↑? (2)と(3)の間あたりに持ってくるようにです
 ● 00:20:272 (2) - 流れに沿ってx:80 y:356くらいに移動した方が自分は好きです。
 ● 00:24:397 (4) - (3)のスライダーと対になるように逆向きのスライダーを使用する方が見栄えが良いと思いました。後の流れ的にもこちらのほうがベターです。

 

Normal


 ● AR-1?
 ● 00:11:647 (6) - (4)の傾きに合わせて少し傾けてみるのはどうでしょう?
 ● 00:23:647 (6) - 1grid右,1grid上に移動しましょう。そうすることで00:22:147 (4,5,6) - のスペーシングも一定になり見栄えよくなります。

 

Easy


 ● AR-1?
 ● 00:56:647 (3) - もうちょい曲げるか、もしくは真っ直ぐにするのはどうでしょう?

以上です!短すぎワロタでごめんなさい
Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
alacat

Guy wrote:

新年初Modイキマス ありです>w<

 

Hard


 ● 00:08:647 (4) - 1grid↑? (2)と(3)の間あたりに持ってくるようにです
 ● 00:20:272 (2) - 流れに沿ってx:80 y:356くらいに移動した方が自分は好きです。 ここはジャンプになってます!
 ● 00:24:397 (4) - (3)のスライダーと対になるように逆向きのスライダーを使用する方が見栄えが良いと思いました。後の流れ的にもこちらのほうがベターです。

 

Normal


 ● AR-1?
 ● 00:11:647 (6) - (4)の傾きに合わせて少し傾けてみるのはどうでしょう?
 ● 00:23:647 (6) - 1grid右,1grid上に移動しましょう。そうすることで00:22:147 (4,5,6) - のスペーシングも一定になり見栄えよくなります。

 

Easy


 ● AR-1?
 ● 00:56:647 (3) - もうちょい曲げるか、もしくは真っ直ぐにするのはどうでしょう?

あとは全て修正しました!

以上です!短すぎワロタでごめんなさい  いえいえ大変助かりました!
Good luck ;)

Thank you for modding :P
Beren
(ノ・ω・)ノ゙


[Easy]
fine


[Normal]
00:22:147 (4) - add new combmo
00:23:647 (7) - remove note and 00:23:647 (6) -


[Hard]
00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - like
01:07:334 (5) - add note? i like 01:07:334 (5,1,2,3) -

good map
sorry for my poor mod lol
Topic Starter
alacat

Beren wrote:

(ノ・ω・)ノ゙ ヽ(*´∀`*)ノ


[Easy]
fine


[Normal]
00:22:147 (4) - add new combmo okey!
00:23:647 (7) - remove note and 00:23:647 (6) - no >< follow vocal here :3



[Hard]
00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - like  looks good ^^b

01:07:334 (5) - add note? i like 01:07:334 (5,1,2,3) - no ></

good map
sorry for my poor mod lol no no Thanks <3
Thank you for modding :oops:
C_Venn
Good Job
Gamu
[general]

●特になし

[Easy]

●00:11:647 (5) - ここだけカクカクしているスライダーは・・ うーんって感じです。 曲げてみてはどうですか? 
 参考画像⇒ http://puu.sh/1JOgy
●00:47:647 (3) - 左右対称なスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか? そのほうが見た目的にも良くなりますし 
 次のサークルへの流れも良くなると思いました。
●00:52:147 (1) - ^
●01:04:147 (3) - 一貫性を保つために New comboを追加。

[Normal]

●00:37:147 (1) - 別に気にしなくてもいいんですが なんか右寄りな感じのスライダーに私には見えます。
 だから、少し終点を左に動かしたほうが 見た目の問題で 良くなるのではないかと思いました。
●00:46:147 (4) - 流れ的にここにnew comboを
●01:13:147 (4) - ^
●01:22:147 (1) - Normalでは白線で終了していますが、Easyは青線で終了しています。個人的には青線のほうが良いと思います。
 だから、Normalも青線で終了したほうがいいのでは・・ あと、白線終了は違和感を感じます

[Hard]

●fine


これくらいです。 音付けも配置もとくに問題ありませんでした。
すべて提案なんでご自由に・・
Topic Starter
alacat
すべて修正しましたヽ(*´∀`*)ノ

Thank you for modding ;)
[ Zzz ]
Normal

01:03:397 (3) - http://puu.sh/1Kh8T

Good Map!!

Star~
Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks ><!! fix Normal :)
Kawayi Rika
For my Lucky Queue ~ God diff spread and perfect mapset >.<

Relax Song and Horie Yui <333333333333


Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks !! Rika chan :oops:
Fumika
Pika 4 days ago and waiting for rank wwww
BeatofIke
Bubbled so fast =_=! Here's a star to keep you company.
Go for rank!
mochi
( ^ω^)
Topic Starter
alacat

BeatofIke wrote:

Bubbled so fast =_=! Here's a star to keep you company.
Go for rank!
sry :( Thanks star :3 !

>mochi

_(:3 」∠)_
787B
Whoa, this was fast!
Congrats for bubble alacat!
kanpakyin
Hi.

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:147 (1) - I would like to change the volume to 35% at the beginning of the slider if I were you because a bit louder can fit the music better.
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:647 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider so it can fit the drum sound since you have used the drum set of the hitsound.
  2. 00:12:397 (4) - Also, please add a clap on the reverse and the end of the slider, please change to drum set hitsound here: 00:12:584 -
  3. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
  4. 00:35:647 (3) - I can't get the meaning of using triplet here. The rhythm doesn't fit the music, I would recommend a simple 1/2 here instead.
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:022 (4,5,6,7) - Same as normal
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
  3. 00:36:397 (6,7,1) - The flow will be better if you can make the distance between the jump more consistent.
  4. 01:19:897 (3) - Add a clap here to fit the music?
Check this mod and I will rank.
Topic Starter
alacat

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi. hi :oops:

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:147 (1) - I would like to change the volume to 35% at the beginning of the slider if I were you because a bit louder can fit the music better. fix.
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. ok , remove finish and add whistle.
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:647 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider so it can fit the drum sound since you have used the drum set of the hitsound. added.
  2. 00:12:397 (4) - Also, please add a clap on the reverse and the end of the slider, please change to drum set hitsound here: 00:12:584 - added.
  3. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. fix same as easy.
  4. 00:35:647 (3) - I can't get the meaning of using triplet here. The rhythm doesn't fit the music, I would recommend a simple 1/2 here instead. fix.
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:022 (4,5,6,7) - Same as normal fix.
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. added same as easy.
  3. 00:36:397 (6,7,1) - The flow will be better if you can make the distance between the jump more consistent. fix. put spacing 1.79x
  4. 01:19:897 (3) - Add a clap here to fit the music? yes , also add clap same as other diff.
Check this mod and I will rank.
Thank you for modding :)
kanpakyin
Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Beren
(ノ・ω・)ノ fast
Guy
おめでとう ;)
h-728
おめでとうございます
Colin Hou
surprising!Σ(゚д゚lll)/おめでとう
cRyo[iceeicee]
(ノ・ω・)ノ grats!
Pokie

Colin Hou wrote:

surprising!Σ(゚д゚lll)/おめでとう
おめでとうせんせい!流石に早すぎてびっくりしました
Gamu
おめでと=
Quilt
はやすぎやろ おめw
DarknessAngel
(ノ・ω・)ノ baka yay !
-Neipezi
congrats~>д<
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