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●特になし
[Easy]
●00:11:647 (5) - ここだけカクカクしているスライダーは・・ うーんって感じです。 曲げてみてはどうですか？
参考画像⇒ http://puu.sh/1JOgy
●00:47:647 (3) - 左右対称なスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか？ そのほうが見た目的にも良くなりますし
次のサークルへの流れも良くなると思いました。
●00:52:147 (1) - ^
●01:04:147 (3) - 一貫性を保つために New comboを追加。
[Normal]
●00:37:147 (1) - 別に気にしなくてもいいんですが なんか右寄りな感じのスライダーに私には見えます。
だから、少し終点を左に動かしたほうが 見た目の問題で 良くなるのではないかと思いました。
●00:46:147 (4) - 流れ的にここにnew comboを
●01:13:147 (4) - ^
●01:22:147 (1) - Normalでは白線で終了していますが、Easyは青線で終了しています。個人的には青線のほうが良いと思います。
だから、Normalも青線で終了したほうがいいのでは・・ あと、白線終了は違和感を感じます
[Hard]
●fine
これくらいです。 音付けも配置もとくに問題ありませんでした。
すべて提案なんでご自由に・・
●特になし
[Easy]
●00:11:647 (5) - ここだけカクカクしているスライダーは・・ うーんって感じです。 曲げてみてはどうですか？
参考画像⇒ http://puu.sh/1JOgy
●00:47:647 (3) - 左右対称なスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか？ そのほうが見た目的にも良くなりますし
次のサークルへの流れも良くなると思いました。
●00:52:147 (1) - ^
●01:04:147 (3) - 一貫性を保つために New comboを追加。
[Normal]
●00:37:147 (1) - 別に気にしなくてもいいんですが なんか右寄りな感じのスライダーに私には見えます。
だから、少し終点を左に動かしたほうが 見た目の問題で 良くなるのではないかと思いました。
●00:46:147 (4) - 流れ的にここにnew comboを
●01:13:147 (4) - ^
●01:22:147 (1) - Normalでは白線で終了していますが、Easyは青線で終了しています。個人的には青線のほうが良いと思います。
だから、Normalも青線で終了したほうがいいのでは・・ あと、白線終了は違和感を感じます
[Hard]
●fine
これくらいです。 音付けも配置もとくに問題ありませんでした。
すべて提案なんでご自由に・・
Topic Starter
すべて修正しましたヽ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ
Thank you for modding
Thank you for modding
Topic Starter
Thanks ><!! fix Normal 
For my Lucky Queue ~ God diff spread and perfect mapset >.<
Relax Song and Horie Yui <333333333333
Relax Song and Horie Yui <333333333333
Topic Starter
Thanks !! Rika chan 
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Bubbled so fast =_=! Here's a star to keep you company.
Go for rank!
Go for rank!
Topic Starter
sryBeatofIke wrote:
Bubbled so fast =_=! Here's a star to keep you company.
Go for rank!
Thanks star :3 !>mochi
_(:3 」∠)_
Hi.
[Easy]
[Easy]
- 00:13:147 (1) - I would like to change the volume to 35% at the beginning of the slider if I were you because a bit louder can fit the music better.
- 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
- 00:11:647 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider so it can fit the drum sound since you have used the drum set of the hitsound.
- 00:12:397 (4) - Also, please add a clap on the reverse and the end of the slider, please change to drum set hitsound here: 00:12:584 -
- 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
- 00:35:647 (3) - I can't get the meaning of using triplet here. The rhythm doesn't fit the music, I would recommend a simple 1/2 here instead.
- 00:12:022 (4,5,6,7) - Same as normal
- 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
- 00:36:397 (6,7,1) - The flow will be better if you can make the distance between the jump more consistent.
- 01:19:897 (3) - Add a clap here to fit the music?
Topic Starter
Thank you for moddingkanpakyin wrote:
Hi. hi
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:13:147 (1) - I would like to change the volume to 35% at the beginning of the slider if I were you because a bit louder can fit the music better. fix.
- 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. ok , remove finish and add whistle.
[Hard]
- 00:11:647 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider so it can fit the drum sound since you have used the drum set of the hitsound. added.
- 00:12:397 (4) - Also, please add a clap on the reverse and the end of the slider, please change to drum set hitsound here: 00:12:584 - added.
- 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. fix same as easy.
- 00:35:647 (3) - I can't get the meaning of using triplet here. The rhythm doesn't fit the music, I would recommend a simple 1/2 here instead. fix.
Check this mod and I will rank.
- 00:12:022 (4,5,6,7) - Same as normal fix.
- 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. added same as easy.
- 00:36:397 (6,7,1) - The flow will be better if you can make the distance between the jump more consistent. fix. put spacing 1.79x
- 01:19:897 (3) - Add a clap here to fit the music? yes , also add clap same as other diff.
Ranked.
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おめでとう
ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｉｎｇ！Σ(ﾟдﾟlll)/おめでとう
(ノ・ω・)ノ grats!
おめでとうせんせい！流石に早すぎてびっくりしましたColin Hou wrote:
ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｉｎｇ！Σ(ﾟдﾟlll)/おめでとう
おめでと＝
はやすぎやろ おめｗ
(ノ・ω・)ノ baka yay !
congrats~>д<
perfect slumbers! \o/
gratz for ranked map and thanks for make this *----*
gratz for ranked map and thanks for make this *----*
gratz moecat :3/
Topic Starter
(ノ・ω・)ノ Thanks !!
congratz~~
Congrats alacat ~ >w<
Topic Starter
Thanks again
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ome~
congrats alacat!
haee
おめでとう、hayacat!