This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年11月3日 at 4:25:06

Artist: Mizuki Nana
Title: Shin Ai (TV Size)
Source: WHITE ALBUM
Tags: AQUAPLUS PROJECT W.A. Elements Garden1 Fujii Touya Morikawa Yuki opening theme
BPM: 133
Filesize: 9550kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.23 stars, 75 notes)
2. Hard (4.74 stars, 191 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 299 notes)
4. Normal (3.41 stars, 128 notes)

Download: Mizuki Nana - Shin Ai (TV Size)
Download: Mizuki Nana - Shin Ai (TV Size) (no video)
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I can't happy, have to work for you.

\:3/

:3 冬哥我偶像

M4M! (yeah, I read your userpage.)
If you found this mod helpful then please take a look at this beatmap, thank you.




Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
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[General]

• • Preview Point: 01:04:145
  • Remove countdown in each difficulty.

[Easy]

• • 00:12:548 (3) - Add NC.
  • 00:16:157 (1) - Delete this circle and end the previous spinner here.
  • 00:19:766 (5) - Add NC.
  • 00:20:668 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 00:22:924 (3) - Add NC.
  • 00:25:179 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 00:26:984 (2) - Add NC.
  • 00:33:751 (3) - ^
  • 01:05:781 (1) - Delte this circle. Start a slider at 01:05:330 and end it at 01:06:232.
  • 01:08:036 (3) - Add NC.
  • 01:09:841 (1) - Remove NC.

[Normal]

• • 00:26:984 (7) - Add NC.
  • 00:27:886 (8,1) - Remove the slider repetition and delete the circle. Start a slider at 00:28:788 and end it at 00:30:142.
  • 00:43:675 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:43:111.
  • 01:38:262 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:38:149.

[Hard]

• • 00:33:074 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 00:33:751 (3) - Add NC.
  • 00:37:360 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 00:37:811 (2) - Add NC.
  • 00:43:224 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:43:111.

[Insane]

• • There are some unsnapped notes, please fix them.

Nice map~

Free mod :3
Thanks for before


[General]
This clap fits better imo~ http://puu.sh/12fdV

[Insane]
00:30:254 - double timing section lol
00:35:330 (1) - NC? unnecessary but easier to read
00:46:157 (2) - stack properly, or make a custom stacking to notice that it''s not where the slider starts (whenever players use snaking sliders or not)
01:10:743 (3) - 1/2 slider-slider stacking feels weird, reverse this? don't forget to re-stack (4) on the tail
01:33:751 (4) - why so low vol here? raise the volume a bit?
01:38:149 (1) - silence this spinner

[Hard]
00:03:976 (6,3) - either make a complete overlap or move it somewhere else
00:12:096 (1) - is this really a 1/3 beat?
01:33:751 (4) - low volume
01:38:149 (1) - silence this slider spinner

[Normal]
00:42:322 (1,2,3) - just my opinion; this is kinda confusing, make it into a slider instead?
01:33:751 (2) - low volume? ok I'll stop mentioning it now
01:38:262 (1) - silence this spinner

[Easy]
Why is this the only diff with tickrate 2?
00:03:525 (2) - whistle
00:08:939 (1,2) - whistle on the tails
01:01:269 (2,3) - greater spacing that this please, even it it's the same as usual. with greater spacing, this becomes less awkward. well, it's just my opinion
01:38:149 (1) - move this 1 tick ahead? this spinner is visible before clicking on the previous hitcircle. And silence this spinner


hope this helps~

Edit: lol ninja mod

@xxheroxx: lol'd at the NCs, and fixed some.

@Saten: thanks for the hitsound, and the rest also helps a lot. thanks again.

hi~

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. 00:03:526 - unnecessary Inherited section.
2. 00:22:924 (4,5) - I did not like have not been placed on the extension.
   00:22:924 (4) - 1 or 2 grid down (Tiny)
3. 01:10:292 (2,1) - This flow is hard to play for beginners.
   
   
   I think I like the flow of the image is easy to do for beginners.
4. 01:38:149 (1) - turn down the volume gradually from the beginning of the spinner.
   I do not like going down the volume for that is only at the end.

[Normal]

1. 00:03:526 - unnecessary Inherited section.
2. 00:25:179 (1) - NC?
   I suggest you to add NC to follow song.
3. 00:47:059 - same as 00:03:526
4. 01:11:194 (5,6) - I did not like have not been placed on the extension.
   01:11:645 (6) - move to x:416 y:196
5. 01:26:533 (2,4,5) - I better to think the same angle of all sliders will be a beautiful.
6. 01:38:149 (1) - same as Easy

[Hard]

1. 00:03:526 - unnecessary Inherited section.
2. 00:47:059 - same as 00:03:526
3. 01:38:149 (1) - same as Easy

[Insane]

1. 00:03:526 - unnecessary Inherited section.
2. 01:10:066 (2,3,4) - I do not think a good stack of different timing.
   Player will feel sense of incongruity.
3. 01:38:149 (1) - same as Easy

I hope this mod will help your map.
and I want to m4m

good luck!

most fixed, thanks a lot

M4M request~

[Easy]
00:14:352 (1) - ar有点快然后note和note之间的距离只有那么点的情况下，我建议这个直接代替note在00:16:157 - 处结尾
00:26:984 (2) - *nazi*弧度有点纠结，调一下？
01:02:172 (3) - 直接用这种节奏把，在easy里打的时候会不会太难了？

01:10:292 (2,1) - *nazi*俩调开点？2的尾巴碰到1了不好看
01:34:653 (3) - 和 01:02:172 (3) - 一样
01:36:908 (2,3) - 间距小的情况下这真蛮难读的，何况大部分easy player也比较不在意听节奏这种:I///
easy的sv是不是过快了点？

[Normal]
00:13:450 (2) - 头上加个finish比较好
00:43:111 (1) - 我觉得spinner在这里开始然后在 00:45:931 这边结尾然后再在00:46:382 - 这边加个note比较好
01:04:878 (1) - 这个finish可以稍微降低点音

[Hard]
00:36:232 (X) - 我听着后面那个slider应该是从这里开始的
01:16:495 (4) - ....你是怎么让这个slider只有一个tick而且还是在尾巴上的O_O|||....
01:27:209 (5) - 拉的再圆一点？
AImod里有一些spacing的问题，改改？

[Insane]
00:14:014 (6) - 这个音感觉蛮多余的
00:18:863 (9) - 放到中线上吧
01:23:826 (4) - 蛮难读的，不加个NC？
01:24:502 (6) - 然后这边也NC个

<3 哪个动画里的，为啥偶尔出现的几个人影我怎么看怎么像......3D.........

tutuhaha wrote:

M4M request~

[Easy]
00:14:352 (1) - ar有点快然后note和note之间的距离只有那么点的情况下，我建议这个直接代替note在00:16:157 - 处结尾 根据某外星mod改掉了
00:26:984 (2) - *nazi*弧度有点纠结，调一下？好！
01:02:172 (3) - 直接用这种节奏把，在easy里打的时候会不会太难了？ 不是note大丈夫

01:10:292 (2,1) - *nazi*俩调开点？2的尾巴碰到1了不好看 我是故意的我会说?
01:34:653 (3) - 和 01:02:172 (3) - 一样 大丈夫
01:36:908 (2,3) - 间距小的情况下这真蛮难读的，何况大部分easy player也比较不在意听节奏这种:I/// 给跪 他们需要HardRock
easy的sv是不是过快了点？感觉快是因为Spacing Snap低到

[Normal]
00:13:450 (2) - 头上加个finish比较好 其他难度都没啊
00:43:111 (1) - 我觉得spinner在这里开始然后在 00:45:931 这边结尾然后再在00:46:382 - 这边加个note比较好 凑开头finish
01:04:878 (1) - 这个finish可以稍微降低点音 统一50啊..

[Hard]
00:36:232 (X) - 我听着后面那个slider应该是从这里开始的 [stress] for instrument
01:16:495 (4) - ....你是怎么让这个slider只有一个tick而且还是在尾巴上的O_O|||.... 很奇怪么0w0?
01:27:209 (5) - 拉的再圆一点？ 好点了么?
AImod里有一些spacing的问题，改改？[stress] this is a hard diff

[Insane]
00:14:014 (6) - 这个音感觉蛮多余的 how?
00:18:863 (9) - 放到中线上吧 orz, no
01:23:826 (4) - 蛮难读的，不加个NC？ ok
01:24:502 (6) - 然后这边也NC个 ok

<3 哪个动画里的，为啥偶尔出现的几个人影我怎么看怎么像......3D......... 所以source里写了WHITE ALBUM 这个是GAL改动画

窝...窝去喘口气 233

i think i can ask you for a m4m, right? if yes http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52260 if not, just ignore this post~

[Easy]
00:22:924 (4,1) - maybe swap NC? more fitting with BGM imo
01:08:036 (3) - NC for your combopattern?
01:19:314 (3) - NC for ^ and it really fits (listen to vocal)

[Normal]
maybe OD-1 (-2)? OD5 is too high
00:17:961 (5) - NC for combopattern?
01:25:630 (1,2) - swap NCs?
01:32:848 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
OD-1 also, this is soo high~
00:04:653 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - do a NC like this http://puu.sh/13P0E
00:08:262 (1,2) - swap NCs?
00:12:096 (1,2) - ^
00:24:277 (3) - do a better overlap with (1)? like http://puu.sh/13P2X
00:26:533 (1,2) - swap NCs?
00:33:525 (1,3) - ^ (don't like over10 combos ><)
00:38:713 (3) - do slider like http://puu.sh/13P4P because it overlap with (2)
00:50:442 (5) - NC?
00:53:375 (1,3) - swap NCs?
00:57:435 (1,2) - ^
01:09:615 (1,2) -
01:11:871 (1,2) -
01:19:089 (1,2) -
01:25:630 (1,4) -

[Insane]
just OD-1. and please, check your combos D:

star, ignore my m4m req since it's a bad mod. gl~

OD -1 on Normal and nothing else. the combos are mainly following the lyrics and some for patterns.

thx for your time and the star.

Hi, I'd checked your user page, and want a m4m~

General
Easy
Normal
Hard
Insane

Good luck! This is well-mapped

[General]


. Maybe remove OP from tags as it cant be found?


[Easy]


. 00:40:066 (2) - remove clap?


[Normal]


. 00:25:179 (1) - remove NC and add on 00:26:984 ?
. 00:41:645 - add note here because it's strange to ignore this vocal?
. 00:41:871 - ^
. 00:42:096 - ^
. 01:03:074 (1) - Let this start on 01:02:961 ?
. 01:08:939 (3) - short this to the red tick and add circle at 01:09:615 ? Like this: http://puu.sh/148jl
. 01:17:510 (1) - remove NC?
. 01:18:187 (2) - add NC?
. 01:19:314 (1) - remove NC? I suggested them all, because I think you follow the vocals with them
. 01:21:570 (4) - add NC
. 01:22:924 (1) - remove NC?


[Hard]


. HD + 1?
. 00:08:036 - add note? I hear a clear sound here
. 00:41:645 - add 1/2 Slider with repeat to get the vocals here?



[Insane]


. I'm not sure, but you are using more than 3 Slider speeds in this diff, and this is unrankable, or?
. HD + 1?
. OD - 1?
. 00:14:352 (1) - let this Spinner start on 00:14:239 ?



Ok, that's all I can do orz
Totally cool map and wonderfull song and if you think this deserves m4m I'd like you to mod this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55407


Good luck on ranking~

@Sonnyc fixed a clap thing on Normal.

@Konei removed the OP in tag. and multi sliders velocity is a guideline not rule.

thanks for modding both of you :3

hii. let me try to do mod4mod

[General]
please, use Tick Rate 1 for all diffs (it's 2 for [Easy] >.< and it probably will confuse beginners to see tick rate 1 for normal and tick rate 2 for easy)

[Insane]
00:01:495 (1) - you can remove audio lead-in and be consistency with other diffs if you remove this slider.
00:30:142 (1) - try to remove this circle and end spinner here? it will make map more enjoyable for DT players
01:02:397 (1) - not sure about this new combo. anyway, i think it doesn't fits here >.<
01:03:751 (2,3) - it would be better to make velocity changes a bit asier to read. put new combo on each slider? (yea, it looks a bit ugly but it will hel us to read your patterns)


[Hard]
00:25:179 (5) - try to make this slider 1/2 shorter and remove reverse. i guess some follow-vocalas-jump will fit here.

[Normal]
00:06:232 - it plays way better if you put note here or make previous slider 1/4 longer.
00:16:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think that 8 clicks in a row is a bit hard for Normal players. try to use some sliders here? example
00:43:224 - try to start spinner here?
00:50:555 (1,2,3) - try to make rhythm a bit easier? (note: easier rhythm is more fun to play for Normal players, right?) example
00:56:984 (5) - remove this one and add reverse at (4) (note: don't forget to fix some patterns after this fix:example part 2 part 3)

[Easy]
HP Drain -1 maybe because mostly you are using 2/1 beats here and it will be kinda hard for beginners to play it with hard rock mod
00:05:330 (1) - try to make it 1/4 longer and add clap at reverse arrow? it makes rhythm a bit easier to read and it also sounds good to me
00:17:059 (1) - did you forget to put NC here? it's a bug, right? >.<
00:43:111 (1) - try to start it at 00:43:224 because it fits better here and also it will be consistent with spinner at Hard diff / also try to end it at 00:45:931 - (if you'll do it putwhistle instead of finish maybe?) and put slider at 00:46:833 - example
01:03:074 (1) - whistle + clap fits better to me (do same for all diffs?)
01:08:036 (3,4) - if you move (3) and (4) 1/1 earlier it will follow vocals better (i think it's better to follow vocals for this part :3) example
01:21:119 (4,1) - NC swap here to keep consistency in comboing between Easy and Harder diffs

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I like it. "Here's your apple."

fixed 2 combo things and make the spinners consistent in the first 3 diffs.

thanks for the modding and star!

tsuka wrote:

[图]

冬哥我偶像啊

Hi ~ Colin Hou ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions




That's all ~ Oh,this map really awesome ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

rearranged the combos, replaced note with slider and fixed the spinners.

fixed~

OK they ~

Pretty new japnese tittle,artist ~

thanks a lot!

\;D/

ok!

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

Gratz!

Gratz =w=

Great one.

Gratz ~

Holy shit, WHITE ALBUM.

Gratz

Faust wrote:

Holy shit, WHITE ALBUM.

not from the VN though

thanks everyone, a little surprised after taking a nap

great song

Gratz~

lol congrats~

con♂grats基友

愉♂悦

can you move it like this

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