Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Coro

Joined September 2010

Coro 2012-10-21T13:18:27+00:00

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Use alternating colours next time, it makes life easier for modders~

[MM's Taiko Muzukashii]
01:04:329 - d

[MM's Taiko Oni]
no problems~

Really good map, sorry I can't find anything wrong~

Stefan

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Stefan 2012-10-21T21:19:46+00:00

hue

Disable the Letterboxes.

[Muzukashii]
00:03:509 (2) - k
00:04:820 (3) - d
00:08:427 (7) - k
00:35:640 (111,112) - k
01:01:378 - Circle with d
01:12:197 (283) - ^

[Oni]
00:08:427 (2) - k
00:14:493 - Circle with d?
00:48:755 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - I personally don't like the Stream at this Part. Make something similar like 00:44:165 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121)

Well nothing much to find.

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-10-21T22:00:37+00:00

Good Map! Nothing found. STAR~

Star Stream

2,031 posts

Joined June 2010

Star Stream 2012-10-22T09:49:40+00:00

From my queue

[Easy]

00:15:312 (5) - NC it to be easier to read? a bit hard to read in 'Easy' diff now
01:20:886 (1) - doesn't fit well with the music and hard to play, i highly recommend to replace it with a slider

[Normal]

00:27:771 (2) - maybe follow vocal? its rhythm is a bit weird now imo
00:37:607 (1) - i think there's no reason to NC it
00:43:509 - clap fits better imo

[Hard]

00:00:886 (1,2) - wrong beat here, they acutally should be like this, listen it carefully in 25%
SPOILER
00:06:624 (5) - really don't think it fits well, i'd just put a circle on there
00:22:525 (1,2) - with the music, ctrl+g would make sense imo
00:23:181 (1) - are you following vocal now? then shorten it to 00:23:837 - plz.
00:51:214 (1) - its arrow is overlapped by 3's hitburst, can you move it to somewhere
00:51:706 (2) - a bit weird beat with a slider here for me, 2 circles would make sense imo
01:12:853 (3) - clap would fit imo
01:20:066 - ^
01:22:689 (1) - too sharp jump, can you use 1.6x or at least 1.8x here plz?

[Insane]

00:14:328 (5) - there's no reason to use 3/4 here, use 1/1 plz
00:16:951 (4) - ^

With the Insane diff, i think you'd better add an easier Insane diff for diff spread. you may know it's pretty hard now

Good luck with rank~

CXu

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Topic Starter

CXu 2012-10-22T15:12:45+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue

[Easy]
00:15:312 (5) - NC it to be easier to read? a bit hard to read in 'Easy' diff now - Sure.
01:20:886 (1) - doesn't fit well with the music and hard to play, i highly recommend to replace it with a slider - I think the spinner fits the same way I think the spinning pattern I have in Insane fits this part :p

[Insane]
00:14:328 (5) - there's no reason to use 3/4 here, use 1/1 plz - These have grown on me, so I'd like to keep them.
00:16:951 (4) - ^ - ^
With the Insane diff, i think you'd better add an easier Insane diff for diff spread. you may know it's pretty hard now - Mmm, I'd say the only part that's really harder than a regular insane is the jump-part in the middle, which I intended to make harder anyway (same in [Easy]) so I think the diffspread is fine, and that the Insane diff is all right in difficulty

Good luck with rank~

Thanks for modding!

rEdo

809 posts

Joined November 2008

rEdo 2012-10-22T15:39:27+00:00

[General]
TIMING CHECK:
913, 183.00 BPM
7458, 183.00 BPM

you lack a custom drum-hitnormal, thus your hitsounds are blending with my custom hitsounds and that sounds kinda meh

[Easy]
00:00:558 (1) - start it at the big white tick
00:16:624 (6,1) - swap new combos
01:19:574 (1) - unnecessary NC
~~you suck at mapping easies~~

[NoHitter's Normal]
00:17:935 (1,2) - I could complain about that being not centered, but I guess you can't do anything against that

00:37:607 (1) - this new combo doesn't really fit
nothing really to be honest, that's a honest difficulty you've got there.

[f e a r's Hard]
00:00:886 (1,2,3) - I don't want to be bitchy here, but that part doesn't really fit the song.
00:14:984 (1) - place it a bit further, click on green (6) and take a look at the upper-right corner of the window
00:14:984 (1,2) - and yeah, avoid to use new combos like that. it's rather recommended to start them whenever you're starting a new pattern. for now, just swap them over here
01:25:148 (8,9,10) - that doesn't fit the song, don't you think a longer slider like that (7) one would fit a lot better here?

[Insane]
00:45:147 (1) - you should move this a lot to the right

CXu

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Topic Starter

CXu 2012-10-22T16:01:58+00:00

rEdo wrote:
[General]
TIMING CHECK:
913, 183.00 BPM
7458, 183.00 BPM
^I'll fix this in a bit
you lack a custom drum-hitnormal, thus your hitsounds are blending with my custom hitsounds and that sounds kinda meh
^Sure I'll add one, inb4 remove cuz unnecessary.

[Easy]
00:00:558 (1) - start it at the big white tick - But the sound starts on the not-big white tick D:
00:16:624 (6,1) - swap new combos - That would result in a shooort combo.
01:19:574 (1) - unnecessary NC - Removed
~~you suck at mapping easies~~ - <3

[Insane]
00:45:147 (1) - you should move this a lot to the right - Intentional. Same as 00:47:115 (2,1)

Thanks for modding =w=b

Last edited by CXu 2012-10-22T16:26:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-22T16:24:19+00:00

~* Changed timing to: *~
BPM 183 & Offset -403
BPM 183 & Offset 7453

If you can't fix the timing or something, just ask me to do it

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-22T17:09:30+00:00

I'll mod this map soon,first check taiko mods pls ~

EDIT : OK, if you ready send me a from pm.

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-22T17:17:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-22T17:14:07+00:00

Yay! ww
I have to wait for MMzz, f e a r and NoHitter to check and fix their diffs, so might need to wait a bit though, hope that's all right =w="

Stefan

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Stefan 2012-10-22T17:14:44+00:00

~~Just want to leave this here: Did MMzz took something from my Mod?~~
nvm

MMzz

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MMzz 2012-10-22T18:22:14+00:00

Stefan wrote:
hue

Disable the Letterboxes.

[Muzukashii]
00:03:509 (2) - k No, I would like to keep my d d k k pattern I have for the sake of design.
00:04:820 (3) - d See Oni.
00:08:427 (7) - k Alright.
00:35:640 (111,112) - k No, I'm not very sure why there should be a k here.
01:01:378 - Circle with d Alright.
01:12:197 (283) - ^ No, I don't want to flood this section when the drum beat it just going d d k d d k.

[Oni]
00:08:427 (2) - k No, I reserved the k just for the 1 snare note. (00:09:247 (4) - )
00:14:493 - Circle with d?No, the drum beat is only going d d k d d k if you listen, so there is not need to map past that constantly.
00:48:755 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - I personally don't like the Stream at this Part. Make something similar like 00:44:165 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) This stream fits the song almost perfectly I would need more of an explanation before I consider changing it.

Well nothing much to find.

Ty for the mod.

Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/1hzzC
Oni: There were no changes. P:

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-10-22T18:33:15+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
[Normal]
00:27:771 (2) - maybe follow vocal? its rhythm is a bit weird now imo Following the beat sounds fine too. Its also for consistency since in the slow part, I mapped to the beat.
00:37:607 (1) - i think there's no reason to NC it Reworked the combo.
00:43:509 - clap fits better imoSounds too noisy IMO.

rEdo wrote:
[NoHitter's Normal]
00:17:935 (1,2) - I could complain about that being not centered, but I guess you can't do anything against that Yep xD
00:37:607 (1) - this new combo doesn't really fit Same as above mod. Reworked it.
nothing really to be honest, that's a honest difficulty you've got there.

Thanks to all!
Also fixed timing

Updated

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: SAOP2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:Aoi Eir
Creator:CXu
Version:NoHitter's Normal
Source:Sword Art Online
Tags:SAO Aincrad ALfheim Online ALO kirigaya kazuto kirito Yuuki Asuna Lyfa Suguha Yui OP Opening 2 2nd  f_e_a_r NoHitter MMzz
BeatmapID:183493
BeatmapSetID:61401

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
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256,192,86141,12,0,88436,0:0:0

CXu

osu! Alumni

3,558 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

CXu 2012-10-22T18:57:09+00:00

Well then, time to wait for f e a r to finish his LoL tournament =3=
Updated everything else for now!

Wreath

435 posts

Joined February 2012

Wreath 2012-10-22T20:00:14+00:00

i like this~

☆~

good luck

f e a r

317 posts

Joined March 2011

f e a r 2012-10-22T20:32:45+00:00

Star Stream

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue

[Hard]
00:00:886 (1,2) - wrong beat here, they acutally should be like this, listen it carefully in 25% Fixed
SPOILER
00:06:624 (5) - really don't think it fits well, i'd just put a circle on there No change
00:22:525 (1,2) - with the music, ctrl+g would make sense imo I didn't understand this.
00:23:181 (1) - are you following vocal now? then shorten it to 00:23:837 - plz.
00:51:214 (1) - its arrow is overlapped by 3's hitburst, can you move it to somewhere I'm fairly sure that you'd be able to catch the repeat slider. No change
00:51:706 (2) - a bit weird beat with a slider here for me, 2 circles would make sense imo Meh, it's fine imo + I think this one was weirder..
01:12:853 (3) - clap would fit imo Yeah
01:20:066 - ^ ^
01:22:689 (1) - too sharp jump, can you use 1.6x or at least 1.8x here plz? I think it's fine as it is.
Good luck with rank~

rEdo

rEdo wrote:
[f e a r's Hard]
00:00:886 (1,2,3) - I don't want to be bitchy here, but that part doesn't really fit the song. ? I think it's fine
00:14:984 (1) - place it a bit further, click on green (6) and take a look at the upper-right corner of the window
00:14:984 (1,2) - and yeah, avoid to use new combos like that. it's rather recommended to start them whenever you're starting a new pattern. for now, just swap them over here
01:25:148 (8,9,10) - that doesn't fit the song, don't you think a longer slider like that (7) one would fit a lot better here? Well not really, but I'll change it... All fixed (:

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-23T00:29:29+00:00

Hi ~ CXu ~

My mod here for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Inconsistency in tags,pls check osu file and fix.
Remove Letterbox during breaks.
I guess last spinner end to 01:28:764 is much better.

[Insane]

00:54:665 - Unsanpped kiai time point.
01:22:206 - ^

[f e a r's Hard]

00:00:853 (1,2) - If you change a slider much better with start.
00:34:665 (3) - Change curved slider looks better,here is code.
```
92,108,34665,2,0,B|60:120|36:148,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```

[NoHitter's Normal]

Change kiai time,same as other diff?
00:00:908 (1) - Start on 00:00:580.
00:28:764 (1,2) - Make perfect symmetry to here.
01:09:420 (4,5) - ^

[Easy]

00:20:895 (1) - Add whistle.
00:52:043 (4) - Should extend to 00:53:026.

That's all i can find ~ really awesome map and nice song >_<

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-10-23T03:41:24+00:00

Thanks Rika!

Fixed all except for the kiai. Guest diffs are allowed to have different kiai and IMO having it refountain is better.
(I would suggest that all other diffs place the refountain actually instead of removing mine xD)

Updated

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: SAOP2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15963,82027
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:Aoi Eir
Creator:CXu
Version:NoHitter's Normal
Source:Sword Art Online
Tags:SAO Aincrad ALfheim Online ALO kirigaya kazuto kirito Yuuki Asuna Lyfa Suguha Yui OP Opening 2 2nd  f_e_a_r NoHitter MMzz
BeatmapID:183493
BeatmapSetID:61401

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.32
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Ididntfeellikeusingabgthatspoilsthestorymorethannecessarysohereisanasunaxkiritoonefrombeforeaincraddisappears.png"
Video,320,"SAOP2.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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33682,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,60,0,0
38272,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
44174,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,60,0,0
52043,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,60,0,0
54010,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
54665,-100,4,3,1,80,0,1
64993,-100,4,3,1,80,0,0
65157,-100,4,3,1,80,0,1
75649,-100,4,3,1,70,0,1
80895,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,70,0,1
82206,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
83190,-100,4,3,1,30,0,0
83518,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
86469,-100,4,3,1,50,0,0
86797,-100,4,3,1,50,0,0
87124,-100,4,3,1,40,0,0
87452,-100,4,3,1,30,0,0
87780,-100,4,3,1,20,0,0
88108,-100,4,3,1,10,0,0
88436,-100,4,3,1,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 65,167,72
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 176,38,90
Combo5 : 30,121,155

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f e a r

317 posts

Joined March 2011

f e a r 2012-10-23T08:16:57+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
My mod here for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[f e a r's Hard]
00:00:853 (1,2) - If you change a slider much better with start.
00:34:665 (3) - Change curved slider looks better,here is code. Fixed everything (:
92,108,34665,2,0,B|60:120|36:148,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Thanks for mod!

CXu

osu! Alumni

3,558 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

CXu 2012-10-23T08:28:45+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ CXu ~ - Hi~

My mod here for my Queue ~

More Little Busters!

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Inconsistency in tags,pls check osu file and fix.
Remove Letterbox during breaks.
I guess last spinner end to 01:28:764 is much better.

[Insane]

00:54:665 - Unsanpped kiai time point.
01:22:206 - ^

[Easy]

00:20:895 (1) - Add whistle.
00:52:043 (4) - Should extend to 00:53:026.
^Why did I even quote this post; fixed everything xD.

That's all i can find ~ really awesome map and nice song >_< - >.<~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

I hope NoHitter won't kill me for extending his spinner to 01:28:764, or f e a r for adding another kiai fountain

I thiiiiink everything have been fixed right and stuff! Thanks for modding!

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-10-23T08:56:09+00:00

OK ~ Good job ~

Here you go :3

EDIT : Rechecked and bubble back ~

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-23T19:45:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CXu

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Topic Starter

CXu 2012-10-23T09:00:37+00:00

Weeeeee~~

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-10-23T09:16:24+00:00

The spinner is fine.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2012-10-23T12:18:16+00:00

Hi~ mod from the queue~
Only unrankable stuff marked. others are all suggestions, you can choose to take or not.

[Easy]
00:03:531 (1) - The piano hit is so weak that cannot be the reason to place it here, as beginners will often mis-hit it on 00:03:367. You should either place the note here or change it to a slider.
00:06:154 (3) - ^
00:20:895 (1) - relatively short spinner. the next note start at 00:23:190 which make the beginners confusing on handling the spinner. you can put note at 00:21:223 ,00:21:879 and 00:22:534 instead.
00:26:797 (1) - The stack is confusing. I suggest you put it further, at least like this

SPOILER

00:31:715 (2) - confusing. the vocal is on 00:31:551 and the downbeat here is not significant. beginners are not able to find out the regularity. suggest add note at 00:31:387 and 00:32:043 .

[Normal]
This level must have been easier than CXu's Easy?
00:03:531 (1,2) - Same as easy. A bit strange. suggest adding a note at 00:03:859
00:06:810 (6) - neither on vocal nor on drum. suggest moving to 00:06:646
00:31:387 (2,3) - unnecessary to put the sliders like that. suggestion:

SPOILER

01:25:649 (5) - confusing jump :O

[Hard]
00:16:469 (1,2,3,4) - imo, it flows better if the notes are put like this

SPOILER

00:20:567 (1) - better end at 00:21:879
00:23:190 (1) - shape not quite good.

SPOILER

392,120,23190,6,0,B|416:200|416:200|392:272,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:46:141 (6) - ^

SPOILER

256,72,46141,2,0,B|176:56|96:68,2,160,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:45:157 (3,4,5,6) - not quite neat. since it's hard level you can put it like this

SPOILER

00:47:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - since you are using Ctrl+H then fix it with the previous suggestion.
00:48:436 - delete finish.
01:13:026 (1) - better end at 01:14:174 and the next 01:14:174 (1) - start at 01:14:338 ,and 01:14:502 (2) - delete, add note at 01:14:666
01:22:698 (1) - make a slowdown slider here?

[Insane]
00:02:055 (1,2,3) - significantly DS inconsistency?
00:10:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - note quite neat... put a circle anywhere and use its approach circle as a reference (recently Niva taught me xD) then delete the reference circle

SPOILER

00:11:878 (2) - don't forget the stack
00:28:108 (4) - alternative: put a bit further following DS. if so, add NC
00:49:009 (2) - suggest delete
00:49:911 (3,6) - stack with 00:49:091 (3) - ?

[Taiko Muzukashii]
No difficulty spread. Muzukashii level is not easy enough for inexperienced taikoers. Remove streams like xxxxo in 00:43:847 (145,146,147,148,149) , and some of the compact triplets.

[Taiko Oni]
00:02:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - same as Muzukashii is ok. The combination is confusing.
00:39:912 (82) - x
00:40:075 (83) - remove
00:40:239 - add o

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-23T15:19:07+00:00

Flower wrote:
Hi~ mod from the queue~
Only unrankable stuff marked. others are all suggestions, you can choose to take or not.

[Easy]
00:03:531 (1) - The piano hit is so weak that cannot be the reason to place it here, as beginners will often mis-hit it on 00:03:367. You should either place the note here or change it to a slider.
00:06:154 (3) - ^ - I'd say they're a good enough reason to place a note there, as well as hitting 1/1 being easier than hitting 1/2.
00:20:895 (1) - relatively short spinner. the next note start at 00:23:190 which make the beginners confusing on handling the spinner. you can put note at 00:21:223 ,00:21:879 and 00:22:534 instead. - Mmm, the spinner is long enough for auto to 8k it, and the slider after it is close enough to the center imo.
00:26:797 (1) - The stack is confusing. I suggest you put it further, at least like this - Well, unless this is some aeofiheoarih unrankable thing for Easy, I'd like to keep it, since I like the "meaningful pause"-ish feel :p
SPOILER
00:31:715 (2) - confusing. the vocal is on 00:31:551 and the downbeat here is not significant. beginners are not able to find out the regularity. suggest add note at 00:31:387 and 00:32:043 . - Mapping to the vocals would be more confusing imo, and having 10 1/1 notes right after each other is more than I want to do in an easy, which is why I did it like this.

[Insane]
00:02:055 (1,2,3) - significantly DS inconsistency? - What?
00:10:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - note quite neat... put a circle anywhere and use its approach circle as a reference (recently Niva taught me xD) then delete the reference circle - I really don't think this is very important, and it plays fine already.
SPOILER
00:11:878 (2) - don't forget the stack - ^
00:28:108 (4) - alternative: put a bit further following DS. if so, add NC - ? This is fine even according to distance snap (1.0x).
00:49:009 (2) - suggest delete - That would be kinda silly, since there is clearly a drumsound there
00:49:911 (3,6) - stack with 00:49:091 (3) - ? - Well, it's almost unnoticable, so I guess it should be fine

No changes for now, but thanks for modding anyway!

I'll see if the other people want to change anything~

f e a r

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f e a r 2012-10-23T15:23:35+00:00

Flower wrote:
Hi~ mod from the queue~
Only unrankable stuff marked. others are all suggestions, you can choose to take or not.

[Hard]
00:16:469 (1,2,3,4) - imo, it flows better if the notes are put like this Done
SPOILER
00:20:567 (1) - better end at 00:21:879 I don't think so..
00:23:190 (1) - shape not quite good. Added
SPOILER
392,120,23190,6,0,B|416:200|416:200|392:272,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:46:141 (6) - ^ Noh
SPOILER
256,72,46141,2,0,B|176:56|96:68,2,160,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:45:157 (3,4,5,6) - not quite neat. since it's hard level you can put it like this
SPOILER
00:47:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - since you are using Ctrl+H then fix it with the previous suggestion.
00:48:436 - delete finish.
01:13:026 (1) - better end at 01:14:174 and the next 01:14:174 (1) - start at 01:14:338 ,and 01:14:502 (2) - delete, add note at 01:14:666
01:22:698 (1) - make a slowdown slider here? ^no change, I feel they're fine as they are.

Thanks for the mod (:!

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-23T15:29:31+00:00

*pop*

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NoHitter 2012-10-23T15:39:05+00:00

Flower wrote:
[Normal]
This level must have been easier than CXu's Easy? There are 1/2's :/
00:03:531 (1,2) - Same as easy. A bit strange. suggest adding a note at 00:03:859 Don't want to add a 1/1 yet considering this is a slow part.
00:06:810 (6) - neither on vocal nor on drum. suggest moving to 00:06:646 You can hear the piano there. Plus it's a 1/1 rhythm.
00:31:387 (2,3) - unnecessary to put the sliders like that. suggestion: The current one plays better and emphasizes the vocals at 00:32:207.
SPOILER
01:25:649 (5) - confusing jump :O I disagree. It's readable goes well with the song.

Thanks but no changes for now.

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-23T15:41:56+00:00

Actually, might as well fix that stacking thing in Insane now that I popped the bubble anyway.

MMzz

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MMzz 2012-10-23T16:46:54+00:00

Flower wrote:
[Taiko Muzukashii]
No difficulty spread. Muzukashii level is not easy enough for inexperienced taikoers. Remove streams like xxxxo in 00:43:847 (145,146,147,148,149) , and some of the compact triplets. I'm sorry but last I looked Muzukashii means difficult/hard, it's not for totaly inexperienced players.

[Taiko Oni]
00:02:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - same as Muzukashii is ok. The combination is confusing. If you could explain why it's confuseing that would be great.
00:39:912 (82) - x No, I would rather keep my current patterns for this section unless you have a reason I should change it.
00:40:075 (83) - remove ^
00:40:239 - add o ^

No changes.