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alacat

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alacat 2012-09-14T03:58:04+00:00

SiLviAさんお久しぶりです。つって

SiLviA wrote:
01:00:051 (3,4) - Hiddenの敵。突然現れるから慌てる。ちょっとずらしたほうがいいと思う。
　変えました！
00:36:138 (2,3,4,5) - マウスの敵（俺的に）。左下からの上昇は勘弁して欲しい。
　他の配置にしてみます

ありがとう！

DT + HD SS に期待(「・ω・)「

Kanari

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Kanari 2012-09-14T20:38:06+00:00

Halloww ~
You requested via forum pm ~

[General]
- Why end kiai time at 01:25:268 and start another one at 01:29:181 ?
- Why is there a kiai in hard and insane starting at 00:30:051 to 00:31:790 ? o.o

[Kosiga's Normal]
00:17:442 - Add a circle?
00:27:442 (4) - Move this down a bit.

[kusano's Hard]
00:10:051 (2) - Move this down a bit.
00:13:964 (6) - This is spaced a bit too far.

[Insane]
00:06:790 - Add a circle with a whistle?
00:13:638 - Add a circle?
00:14:072 - ^
01:17:877 (7) - New combo ?

Nicely mapped ~
Good luck and star! >w<

Kite

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Kite 2012-09-14T21:17:08+00:00

[Insane]
00:14:833 (2) - add a whistle to this beat? in my opinion it fits and brings out the beat a bit more, currently it feels too silent to me
00:15:703 (5) - ^
00:21:790 (4) - whistle seems good here too
00:22:659 (7) - ^
00:23:529 (3) - ^
01:00:377 (4) - maybe remove this beat? or place the next combo a bit closer to it

[Hard]
00:26:572 (1,2) - this jump appears to be quite big for a "Hard" difficulty

[Normal]
00:10:920 (3,1,2,1) - Spacing is confusing to read here, maybe you should try spacing it more out and use sliders for beats that start on the red tick? It might be less confusing

[Easy]
00:54:399 (1) - remove new combo?

Sorry that my mod isn't really helpful, mapset is really great.
Feel free to ignore anything that you don't agree with :3

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2012-09-14T21:43:49+00:00

Hi there~~mod for request~~

[General]

Set the audio lead-in of Insane to 2000 same as other diffs
Suppose another kiai could be inserted between 00:14:399 & 00:31:790

[Easy]

00:14:399 - before here, your hitsounds are too weak .. recommend to increase the volumn

[Kosiga's Normal]

00:11:572 (1,2) - consider choose slider here? notes maybe hard to follow for new players.
00:12:442 (1,2) - ^
00:17:442 - highly recommend to add a note here for consistent beats
00:48:964 - add a note here? or change 00:48:746 (4) - to a 1/2 slider?

[kusano's Hard]

00:07:442 (5) - move to 176:36 for consitent spacing within the combo?
00:13:746 (5) - 344:108? ^
00:36:355 (4,5) - this stack may break your flow,
00:59:399 (1,2) - a slider here maybe better~

[Insane]

00:23:094 (1,2,3) - i'd like to extend slider to (2)
00:45:051 (6) - move it to next blue tick and stack with 00:45:268 (7) - ? heard better
00:49:181 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern....i suppose it's not very suitable... because the vocal stess at 00:50:051 (1) - which could be placed top, and then 00:50:268 (2,3,4) - go down with the music, so i may choose a different placement like star shape, for example, just a suggestion and needn't to move 00:50:703 (4) - :
01:11:790 (1,2,3) - move (2) to prev blue tick ,and add a note at 01:12:116 - ?
01:12:659 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:464 (4,5) - highly recommend to move them to next red tick to make a triplet with 01:21:790 (6) -

that's all ~~ good luck with the rank~

alacat

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alacat 2012-09-15T03:21:56+00:00

>Kite , Scorpiour

Thanks modding ></

>xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

Thanks modding and star

MRMR_old

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MRMR_old 2012-09-15T08:36:31+00:00

よっす

noooob modding

マッパーではないから専門的なこと（音とか配置の綺麗汚いとか）はわかんないけど
プレイしてみて率直にこんな配置にしたほうが絶対楽しいと思ったところと少しやりづらいんじゃないかとおもったところをかきます
提案だけどまじめに考えたからよかったら参考にしてね

[Insane]

00:12:985 (3,4) -間隔揃えてこうしたほうが綺麗だし良い感じなきがしゅる

00:14:833 (2) - 　こいつもうちょっと上にあったほうが00:14:833 (2,3) - のジャンプが楽しい
00:17:768 (8) - 　これわざと曲げてるのかなって思ったけど前のジャンプを考えたら私はこんな風に直線のほうがいいと思う

00:17:877 (1,2) - - このスライダー少しやりづらいもう少しまげるの抑えて間隔近くしたほうがいいと思う
00:20:485 (1,2,3) - 配置の提案こっちのほうが面白くなりそう

00:20:051 (7) - これも上にもってったほうがいい感じなような！？

00:23:964 (5) - これ00:23:094 (1) - と左右対称じゃなくなっちゃうけどもうちょっと下にあったほうがやりやすいとおもうな
00:23:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -綺麗だし変では無いと思うけど、何か綺麗に流れる感じがしないっていうかそういう何かをすごく感じた
適当に置いたから綺麗ではないけどこんな感じのほうが楽しいと思う

00:34:833 (6) - もうちょっと右にかたむいちゃいなyoooooooooo
00:35:703 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - ココ好きです
01:04:399 (8,9) - 8と9を入れ替えてから9を↓みたいに置いたほうがたのすい

01:18:312 (10,11) - ここスペーシング広くしたいならこのままでいいと思うけど三連打と01:18:094 (9) - を入れ替えて

　こうしたほうがいい気がシュル

ょ

一応http://puu.sh/15ge7

この譜面すごい好き

ランクドがんばって～

alacat

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alacat 2012-09-15T12:44:40+00:00

>MRMR

mod ありがとう　ー！

kosiga

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kosiga 2012-09-16T01:35:01+00:00

00:11:572 (1,2,1,2) - everyone for pointing this out lol. I knew it and tried a new challenge

If MAT/BAT does not receive this, I change this.

Thanks guys

popner

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popner 2012-09-16T02:52:48+00:00

Hi ~

Just suggestions:

[General]
Add a Kiai section from 01:01:355 to 01:15:159?

[Easy]
01:12:659 (2,4) - same as Normal
01:26:572 (2,4) - add finishs?
01:29:181 (1) - curve to fit 01:28:312 (4) better? Like this:

[Kosiga's Normal]
00:11:572 (1,2,1,2,1) - the spacing change is misleading in Normal
00:20:485 (1,2,3) - change (1,2) into a slider? The mix of slider and circle is difficult to read for new player.
01:00:051 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:10:051 (4) - add finish on head?
01:12:659 (2,4) - add finish?
01:28:746 (5,6,7) - change the shape to fit 01:28:312 (4) better? Like this:

[kusano's Hard]
00:06:572 (2,5) - the overlap looks bad to me. Move (5) a little to the left？
00:07:877 (1,3,4) - ^
01:06:572 (1) - the finishs sounds loud. Change volume to 60~70 at 01:06:899, and back to 80 at 01:07:442?
01:07:877 (3) - remove finish?
01:15:051 (6) - miss a finish?
01:20:486 (1) - same as 01:06:572 (1)
01:21:572 (3) - remove finish from end?
01:23:964 (1,2) - nazi - not stack properly

[Insane]
Change lead in to 2000?
End Kiai at 01:30:920
00:24:290 - add a note here so the rhythm is consistent with 00:23:420 (2)?
00:24:833 (1,2) - ^ for similar reason, this is better imo:

00:49:181 (2,3,4,5) - to emphasize the high pitch in next stanza(00:50:051 (1,2,3,4)), the spacing between this stanza is better to be decreased. I put them like this and plays good:

00:55:268 (6,1) - make them symmetric?
01:03:094 (1) - add finish?
01:17:007 (3) - add finish on head?
01:17:007 (3,4,5) - the triple seems random, so change to the rhythm like 01:15:268 (1,2)?

That's all I can find. GL~

Last edited by popner 2012-09-16T11:06:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

10nya

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10nya 2012-09-16T04:21:55+00:00

m4m from PM~
alacat-san domo >w< <3//

[General]

delete the osb file? owo

[Easy]
Rhythms

00:20:051: add clap? owo
00:20:920: ^
00:39:616: move the clap to 00:39:181 ? owo
if you do so ^ then add clap on 00:40:051 would nice

[Kosiga's Normal]
Slider shape, circle placement

01:23:964: move the 3rd point to x216 y152? owo

Rhythms

00:42:659: clap on the slider head? owo
00:43:529: ^
00:45:703: clap on the slider tail? owo

[kusano's Hard]
Rhythms

00:43:964: clap on the reverse? oAo
00:47:442: add clap on the head and the reverse ?
00:50:920: clap on the reverse? oAo
00:52:659: ^
00:54:399: ^
00:57:877: ^
01:09:181: remove finish?

[Insane]
Rhythms

01:20:485: finish? owo

that's all I found, enjoy my star hope this will get ranked~~~ >//w//<

Last edited by 10nya 2012-09-18T09:13:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kosiga

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kosiga 2012-09-16T04:43:24+00:00

thank you~ :3

http://puu.sh/15yyW

Naichatta

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Naichatta 2012-09-16T18:05:22+00:00

almost fixed~
遅くなって申し訳ないです

http://puu.sh/15Jc8

joro_old

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joro_old 2012-09-19T09:59:16+00:00

From Twitter~

初心者Modごめんなさい
全部提案です

[Easy]

None!

[Kosiga's　Normal]

None!

[kusano's Hard]

None!

[Insane]

00:39:725 のけてもいいかなと思いました。

00:39:942 同じくのけてもいいかなと思いました。

音楽に合わせるなら、のけた方がいい気がしますが・・・
難しいところです＼(゜ロ＼)(／ロ゜)／（そのままでも十分いい）

全体的に配置が綺麗でよかったです！

[Kirisame-Marisa]

[Kirisame-Marisa] 2012-09-20T12:13:54+00:00

Hi may I add a Taiko diff?

alacat

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alacat 2012-09-20T14:56:40+00:00

sry , no

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-01T04:38:46+00:00

Hi ~ alacat~

Mod time for my Random Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

00:02:659 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:02:225 (1),because jump and vocal start to here.
00:46:572 (5) - Change curve slider?

[Kosiga's Normal]

00:00:486 - Add finish more fit than clap,same as other diff.

[Easy]

01:10:051 - Add finish sound better.
01:25:275 - Unsnapped Kiai time point.

That's all ~ Nice job on remap future gazer song,awesome <3

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2012-10-01T05:11:24+00:00

Rika also asked me about the video because of all the camera effects in the original. I know the current one isn't bad but because I made it anyway, here is one I encoded http://puu.sh/1aiJn

alacat

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alacat 2012-10-01T14:27:16+00:00

>Rika-chan

Thanks modding ></

almost fixed :3

>blissfulyoshi

Thanks encoding

but , I think it is enough now in the video

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-01T23:31:59+00:00

Change all diff Kiai time like this :

#1: Starts on 00:14:399, ends on 00:14:507
#2: Starts on 01:01:355, ends on 01:01:464
#3: Starts on 01:15:268, ends on 01:25:703
#4: Starts on 01:29:181, ends on 01:30:920

Pls fix and find me again ~

alacat

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alacat 2012-10-02T13:54:55+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Change all diff Kiai time like this :

#1: Starts on 00:14:399, ends on 00:14:507
#2: Starts on 01:01:355, ends on 01:01:464
#3: Starts on 01:15:268, ends on 01:25:703
#4: Starts on 01:29:181, ends on 01:30:920

Pls fix and find me again ~

all fixed

Thanks you :3

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-02T14:06:34+00:00

OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~