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Topic Starter
alacat
>maaagic , Gabe , winber1

Thank you very much ></
SiLviA
alacatさんお久しぶりです。つって

01:00:051 (3,4) - Hiddenの敵。突然現れるから慌てる。ちょっとずらしたほうがいいと思う。

01:16:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - スライダーの後の二連打は多用してると非常にやりづらく感じる。

00:36:138 (2,3,4,5) - マウスの敵(俺的に)。左下からの上昇は勘弁して欲しい。

きっとRankedするよ期待してるよ。
そのころには俺の指が退化してるだろうからHRHDで頑張ってみるよ^_^

ファイト!!! :D
Topic Starter
alacat
SiLviAさんお久しぶりです。つって :)


SiLviA wrote:

01:00:051 (3,4) - Hiddenの敵。突然現れるから慌てる。ちょっとずらしたほうがいいと思う。
 変えました!
00:36:138 (2,3,4,5) - マウスの敵(俺的に)。左下からの上昇は勘弁して欲しい。
 他の配置にしてみます :o
ありがとう!

DT + HD SS に期待(「・ω・)「
Kanari
Halloww ~
You requested via forum pm ~


[General]
- Why end kiai time at 01:25:268 and start another one at 01:29:181 ?
- Why is there a kiai in hard and insane starting at 00:30:051 to 00:31:790 ? o.o


[Kosiga's Normal]
00:17:442 - Add a circle?
00:27:442 (4) - Move this down a bit.


[kusano's Hard]
00:10:051 (2) - Move this down a bit.
00:13:964 (6) - This is spaced a bit too far.


[Insane]
00:06:790 - Add a circle with a whistle?
00:13:638 - Add a circle?
00:14:072 - ^
01:17:877 (7) - New combo ?


Nicely mapped ~
Good luck and star! >w<
Kite
[Insane]
00:14:833 (2) - add a whistle to this beat? in my opinion it fits and brings out the beat a bit more, currently it feels too silent to me
00:15:703 (5) - ^
00:21:790 (4) - whistle seems good here too
00:22:659 (7) - ^
00:23:529 (3) - ^
01:00:377 (4) - maybe remove this beat? or place the next combo a bit closer to it

[Hard]
00:26:572 (1,2) - this jump appears to be quite big for a "Hard" difficulty

[Normal]
00:10:920 (3,1,2,1) - Spacing is confusing to read here, maybe you should try spacing it more out and use sliders for beats that start on the red tick? It might be less confusing

[Easy]
00:54:399 (1) - remove new combo?

Sorry that my mod isn't really helpful, mapset is really great.
Feel free to ignore anything that you don't agree with :3
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request~~

[General]
  1. Set the audio lead-in of Insane to 2000 same as other diffs
  2. Suppose another kiai could be inserted between 00:14:399 & 00:31:790
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:399 - before here, your hitsounds are too weak .. recommend to increase the volumn
[Kosiga's Normal]
  1. 00:11:572 (1,2) - consider choose slider here? notes maybe hard to follow for new players.
  2. 00:12:442 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:17:442 - highly recommend to add a note here for consistent beats
  4. 00:48:964 - add a note here? or change 00:48:746 (4) - to a 1/2 slider?
[kusano's Hard]
  1. 00:07:442 (5) - move to 176:36 for consitent spacing within the combo?
  2. 00:13:746 (5) - 344:108? ^
  3. 00:36:355 (4,5) - this stack may break your flow,
  4. 00:59:399 (1,2) - a slider here maybe better~
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:094 (1,2,3) - i'd like to extend slider to (2)
  2. 00:45:051 (6) - move it to next blue tick and stack with 00:45:268 (7) - ? heard better
  3. 00:49:181 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern....i suppose it's not very suitable... because the vocal stess at 00:50:051 (1) - which could be placed top, and then 00:50:268 (2,3,4) - go down with the music, so i may choose a different placement like star shape, for example, just a suggestion and needn't to move 00:50:703 (4) - :
  4. 01:11:790 (1,2,3) - move (2) to prev blue tick ,and add a note at 01:12:116 - ?
  5. 01:12:659 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 01:21:464 (4,5) - highly recommend to move them to next red tick to make a triplet with 01:21:790 (6) -
that's all ~~ good luck with the rank~
Topic Starter
alacat
>Kite , Scorpiour

Thanks modding ></

>xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

Thanks modding and star :)
MRMR_old
よっす >:(
noooob modding

マッパーではないから専門的なこと(音とか配置の綺麗汚いとか)はわかんないけど
プレイしてみて率直にこんな配置にしたほうが絶対楽しいと思ったところと少しやりづらいんじゃないかとおもったところをかきます
提案だけどまじめに考えたからよかったら参考にしてね :oops:

[Insane]

00:12:985 (3,4) -間隔揃えてこうしたほうが綺麗だし良い感じなきがしゅる
00:14:833 (2) -  こいつもうちょっと上にあったほうが00:14:833 (2,3) - のジャンプが楽しい
00:17:768 (8) -  これわざと曲げてるのかなって思ったけど前のジャンプを考えたら私はこんな風に直線のほうがいいと思う
00:17:877 (1,2) - - このスライダー少しやりづらいもう少しまげるの抑えて間隔近くしたほうがいいと思う
00:20:485 (1,2,3) - 配置の提案こっちのほうが面白くなりそう :D
00:20:051 (7) - これも上にもってったほうがいい感じなような!?
00:23:964 (5) - これ00:23:094 (1) - と左右対称じゃなくなっちゃうけどもうちょっと下にあったほうがやりやすいとおもうな
00:23:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -綺麗だし変では無いと思うけど、何か綺麗に流れる感じがしないっていうかそういう何かをすごく感じた
適当に置いたから綺麗ではないけどこんな感じのほうが楽しいと思う



00:34:833 (6) - もうちょっと右にかたむいちゃいなyoooooooooo
00:35:703 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - ココ好きです
01:04:399 (8,9) - 8と9を入れ替えてから9を↓みたいに置いたほうがたのすい
01:18:312 (10,11) - ここスペーシング広くしたいならこのままでいいと思うけど三連打と01:18:094 (9) - を入れ替えて
 こうしたほうがいい気がシュル







一応http://puu.sh/15ge7


この譜面すごい好き :D
ランクドがんばって~
Topic Starter
alacat
>MRMR

mod ありがとう ー! :oops:
kosiga
00:11:572 (1,2,1,2) - everyone for pointing this out lol. I knew it and tried a new challenge :D If MAT/BAT does not receive this, I change this.

Thanks guys :)
popner
Hi ~

Just suggestions:

[General]
Add a Kiai section from 01:01:355 to 01:15:159?

[Easy]
01:12:659 (2,4) - same as Normal
01:26:572 (2,4) - add finishs?
01:29:181 (1) - curve to fit 01:28:312 (4) better? Like this:


[Kosiga's Normal]
00:11:572 (1,2,1,2,1) - the spacing change is misleading in Normal
00:20:485 (1,2,3) - change (1,2) into a slider? The mix of slider and circle is difficult to read for new player.
01:00:051 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:10:051 (4) - add finish on head?
01:12:659 (2,4) - add finish?
01:28:746 (5,6,7) - change the shape to fit 01:28:312 (4) better? Like this:


[kusano's Hard]
00:06:572 (2,5) - the overlap looks bad to me. Move (5) a little to the left?
00:07:877 (1,3,4) - ^
01:06:572 (1) - the finishs sounds loud. Change volume to 60~70 at 01:06:899, and back to 80 at 01:07:442?
01:07:877 (3) - remove finish?
01:15:051 (6) - miss a finish?
01:20:486 (1) - same as 01:06:572 (1)
01:21:572 (3) - remove finish from end?
01:23:964 (1,2) - nazi - not stack properly

[Insane]
Change lead in to 2000?
End Kiai at 01:30:920
00:24:290 - add a note here so the rhythm is consistent with 00:23:420 (2)?
00:24:833 (1,2) - ^ for similar reason, this is better imo:

00:49:181 (2,3,4,5) - to emphasize the high pitch in next stanza(00:50:051 (1,2,3,4)), the spacing between this stanza is better to be decreased. I put them like this and plays good:

00:55:268 (6,1) - make them symmetric?
01:03:094 (1) - add finish?
01:17:007 (3) - add finish on head?
01:17:007 (3,4,5) - the triple seems random, so change to the rhythm like 01:15:268 (1,2)?

That's all I can find. GL~
10nya
m4m from PM~
alacat-san domo >w< <3//

[General]
  1. delete the osb file? owo
[Easy]
Rhythms
  1. 00:20:051: add clap? owo
  2. 00:20:920: ^
  3. 00:39:616: move the clap to 00:39:181 ? owo
  4. if you do so ^ then add clap on 00:40:051 would nice :oops:
[Kosiga's Normal]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:23:964: move the 3rd point to x216 y152? owo
Rhythms
  1. 00:42:659: clap on the slider head? owo
  2. 00:43:529: ^
  3. 00:45:703: clap on the slider tail? owo
[kusano's Hard]
Rhythms
  1. 00:43:964: clap on the reverse? oAo
  2. 00:47:442: add clap on the head and the reverse ?
  3. 00:50:920: clap on the reverse? oAo
  4. 00:52:659: ^
  5. 00:54:399: ^
  6. 00:57:877: ^
  7. 01:09:181: remove finish?
[Insane]
Rhythms
  1. 01:20:485: finish? owo
that's all I found, enjoy my star hope this will get ranked~~~ >//w//<
kosiga
thank you~ :3

http://puu.sh/15yyW
Naichatta
almost fixed~
遅くなって申し訳ないです :o
http://puu.sh/15Jc8
joro_old
From Twitter~

初心者Modごめんなさい
全部提案です

[Easy]

None!

[Kosiga's Normal]

None!

[kusano's Hard]

None!

[Insane]

00:39:725 のけてもいいかなと思いました。

00:39:942 同じくのけてもいいかなと思いました。

音楽に合わせるなら、のけた方がいい気がしますが・・・
難しいところです\(゜ロ\)(/ロ゜)/(そのままでも十分いい)


全体的に配置が綺麗でよかったです!
[Kirisame-Marisa]
Hi may I add a Taiko diff?
Topic Starter
alacat
sry , no :o
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ alacat~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. 00:02:659 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:02:225 (1),because jump and vocal start to here.
  2. 00:46:572 (5) - Change curve slider?

[Kosiga's Normal]


  1. 00:00:486 - Add finish more fit than clap,same as other diff.

[Easy]


  1. 01:10:051 - Add finish sound better.
  2. 01:25:275 - Unsnapped Kiai time point.

That's all ~ Nice job on remap future gazer song,awesome <3

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
blissfulyoshi
Rika also asked me about the video because of all the camera effects in the original. I know the current one isn't bad but because I made it anyway, here is one I encoded http://puu.sh/1aiJn
Topic Starter
alacat
>Rika-chan

Thanks modding ></

almost fixed :3

>blissfulyoshi

Thanks encoding :)

but , I think it is enough now in the video :o
Kawayi Rika
Change all diff Kiai time like this :

#1: Starts on 00:14:399, ends on 00:14:507
#2: Starts on 01:01:355, ends on 01:01:464
#3: Starts on 01:15:268, ends on 01:25:703
#4: Starts on 01:29:181, ends on 01:30:920

Pls fix and find me again ~
Topic Starter
alacat

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Change all diff Kiai time like this :

#1: Starts on 00:14:399, ends on 00:14:507
#2: Starts on 01:01:355, ends on 01:01:464
#3: Starts on 01:15:268, ends on 01:25:703
#4: Starts on 01:29:181, ends on 01:30:920

Pls fix and find me again ~

all fixed :)

Thanks you :3
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~


Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks for checking :oops:


arigato !
Andrea
Awesome map, nothing to say here.

Ranked~
joro_old
おめでとうございます!!
Kawayi Rika
Omedeto ala chan :3
ririco
Gratz moe ala-nya~~~ >w<
terametis
おめでとーーーーーーーーー!!!!!!
Aurele
Ohyay! That was fast indeed. Congratulation.
Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks Andrea and everyone :oops:
Darksonic
Good job!
Kite
omedetou alacat!
MiLu
おめです ;D
Ryafuka
omecat :D
xsrsbsns
omecatww :)
haigawdy
Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
Melophobia
Omecat~
NewRulerNA
おめでとう
BeatofIke
Congrats alacat! :D
Saten
Gratz~~✿
maaagic
おめでとうございます~ :D
merchat7
grats!
Kite

Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
You should stop posting stuff like that in every new ranked map topic
h-728
おめでとうございます
kriers

Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
if you're so bored. Why are you here? Damned hater
Frostmourne
congratz alacat \:D/ !!


Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
wow

as far as I know , one of your pending map, which has the highest sp, is extremely boring ,not interesting and repetitive as hell

Do you feel good of being criticized in bad way like this ?


Please think before posting that every mappers,who just got map ranked, have been worked hard before getting to this state.

Thank you
Rare
Modする必要なかったな…
おめでとう
Mythol

Ryafuka wrote:

omecat :D
٩ʕ•͡וʔ۶ c(•ω•`c)
donpen
おめでとう!!
Fionana
omedetou~
Topic Starter
alacat
Thanks everyone :oops:
Fumika

Frostmourne wrote:

congratz alacat \:D/ !!


Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
wow

as far as I know , one of your pending map, which has the highest sp, is extremely boring ,not interesting and repetitive as hell

Do you feel good of being criticized in bad way like this ?


Please think before posting that every mappers,who just got map ranked, have been worked hard before getting to this state.

Thank you
Yes.
Bass

Frostmourne wrote:

as far as I know , one of your pending map, which has the highest sp, is extremely boring ,not interesting and repetitive as hell

Do you feel good of being criticized in bad way like this ?


Please think before posting that every mappers,who just got map ranked, have been worked hard before getting to this state.

Thank you

Alduric wrote:

I know that this map may be boring for some players
Garven
おめでとう、スイス先生!
Patchouli
こんぐらっつっつ~
Quilt
gratz
Pastel
おめでとう! :D
cRyo[iceeicee]
waaaa.......late grats~ ^^/
haigawdy

Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.

I would like to apologize for my rude words ;c

(peppy you bunny ban me!)
Rieki_old
gratz :3
sakuyo123_old
考慮でき上の動画?
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