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popner
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popner
Hi ~

Just suggestions:

[General]
Add a Kiai section from 01:01:355 to 01:15:159?

[Easy]
01:12:659 (2,4) - same as Normal
01:26:572 (2,4) - add finishs?
01:29:181 (1) - curve to fit 01:28:312 (4) better? Like this:


[Kosiga's Normal]
00:11:572 (1,2,1,2,1) - the spacing change is misleading in Normal
00:20:485 (1,2,3) - change (1,2) into a slider? The mix of slider and circle is difficult to read for new player.
01:00:051 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:10:051 (4) - add finish on head?
01:12:659 (2,4) - add finish?
01:28:746 (5,6,7) - change the shape to fit 01:28:312 (4) better? Like this:


[kusano's Hard]
00:06:572 (2,5) - the overlap looks bad to me. Move (5) a little to the left？
00:07:877 (1,3,4) - ^
01:06:572 (1) - the finishs sounds loud. Change volume to 60~70 at 01:06:899, and back to 80 at 01:07:442?
01:07:877 (3) - remove finish?
01:15:051 (6) - miss a finish?
01:20:486 (1) - same as 01:06:572 (1)
01:21:572 (3) - remove finish from end?
01:23:964 (1,2) - nazi - not stack properly

[Insane]
Change lead in to 2000?
End Kiai at 01:30:920
00:24:290 - add a note here so the rhythm is consistent with 00:23:420 (2)?
00:24:833 (1,2) - ^ for similar reason, this is better imo:

00:49:181 (2,3,4,5) - to emphasize the high pitch in next stanza(00:50:051 (1,2,3,4)), the spacing between this stanza is better to be decreased. I put them like this and plays good:

00:55:268 (6,1) - make them symmetric?
01:03:094 (1) - add finish?
01:17:007 (3) - add finish on head?
01:17:007 (3,4,5) - the triple seems random, so change to the rhythm like 01:15:268 (1,2)?

That's all I can find. GL~
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10nya
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10nya
m4m from PM~
alacat-san domo >w< <3//

[General]
  1. delete the osb file? owo
[Easy]
Rhythms
  1. 00:20:051: add clap? owo
  2. 00:20:920: ^
  3. 00:39:616: move the clap to 00:39:181 ? owo
  4. if you do so ^ then add clap on 00:40:051 would nice :oops:
[Kosiga's Normal]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:23:964: move the 3rd point to x216 y152? owo
Rhythms
  1. 00:42:659: clap on the slider head? owo
  2. 00:43:529: ^
  3. 00:45:703: clap on the slider tail? owo
[kusano's Hard]
Rhythms
  1. 00:43:964: clap on the reverse? oAo
  2. 00:47:442: add clap on the head and the reverse ?
  3. 00:50:920: clap on the reverse? oAo
  4. 00:52:659: ^
  5. 00:54:399: ^
  6. 00:57:877: ^
  7. 01:09:181: remove finish?
[Insane]
Rhythms
  1. 01:20:485: finish? owo
that's all I found, enjoy my star hope this will get ranked~~~ >//w//<
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kosiga
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kosiga
thank you~ :3

http://puu.sh/15yyW
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Naichatta
almost fixed~
遅くなって申し訳ないです :o
http://puu.sh/15Jc8
joro_old
78 posts
Joined November 2010
joro_old
From Twitter~

初心者Modごめんなさい
全部提案です

[Easy]

None!

[Kosiga's　Normal]

None!

[kusano's Hard]

None!

[Insane]

00:39:725 のけてもいいかなと思いました。

00:39:942 同じくのけてもいいかなと思いました。

音楽に合わせるなら、のけた方がいい気がしますが・・・
難しいところです＼(゜ロ＼)(／ロ゜)／（そのままでも十分いい）


全体的に配置が綺麗でよかったです！
[Kirisame-Marisa]
[Kirisame-Marisa]
Hi may I add a Taiko diff?
alacat
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alacat
sry , no :o
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ alacat~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. 00:02:659 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:02:225 (1),because jump and vocal start to here.
  2. 00:46:572 (5) - Change curve slider?

[Kosiga's Normal]


  1. 00:00:486 - Add finish more fit than clap,same as other diff.

[Easy]


  1. 01:10:051 - Add finish sound better.
  2. 01:25:275 - Unsnapped Kiai time point.

That's all ~ Nice job on remap future gazer song,awesome <3

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Rika also asked me about the video because of all the camera effects in the original. I know the current one isn't bad but because I made it anyway, here is one I encoded http://puu.sh/1aiJn
alacat
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alacat
>Rika-chan

Thanks modding ></

almost fixed :3

>blissfulyoshi

Thanks encoding :)

but , I think it is enough now in the video :o
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Change all diff Kiai time like this :

#1: Starts on 00:14:399, ends on 00:14:507
#2: Starts on 01:01:355, ends on 01:01:464
#3: Starts on 01:15:268, ends on 01:25:703
#4: Starts on 01:29:181, ends on 01:30:920

Pls fix and find me again ~
alacat
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alacat

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Change all diff Kiai time like this :

#1: Starts on 00:14:399, ends on 00:14:507
#2: Starts on 01:01:355, ends on 01:01:464
#3: Starts on 01:15:268, ends on 01:25:703
#4: Starts on 01:29:181, ends on 01:30:920

Pls fix and find me again ~

all fixed :)

Thanks you :3
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~

alacat
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alacat
Thanks for checking :oops:


arigato !
Andrea
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Andrea
Awesome map, nothing to say here.

Ranked~
joro_old
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おめでとうございます！！
Kawayi Rika
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Omedeto ala chan :3
ririco
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Gratz moe ala-nya~~~ >w<
terametis
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おめでとーーーーーーーーー!!!!!!
Aurele
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Aurele
Ohyay! That was fast indeed. Congratulation.
alacat
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Thanks Andrea and everyone :oops:
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Darksonic
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Darksonic
Good job!
Kite
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omedetou alacat!
MiLu
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MiLu
おめです ;D
Ryafuka
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Ryafuka
omecat :D
xsrsbsns
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omecatww :)
haigawdy
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Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
Melophobia
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Omecat~
NewRulerNA
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おめでとう
BeatofIke
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Congrats alacat! :D
Saten
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Gratz~~✿
maaagic
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おめでとうございます~ :D
merchat7
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grats!
Kite
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Kite

Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
You should stop posting stuff like that in every new ranked map topic
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h-728
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h-728
おめでとうございます
kriers
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kriers

Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
if you're so bored. Why are you here? Damned hater
Frostmourne
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congratz alacat \:D/ !!


Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
wow

as far as I know , one of your pending map, which has the highest sp, is extremely boring ,not interesting and repetitive as hell

Do you feel good of being criticized in bad way like this ?


Please think before posting that every mappers,who just got map ranked, have been worked hard before getting to this state.

Thank you
Rare
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Modする必要なかったな…
おめでとう
Mythol
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Ryafuka wrote:

omecat :D
٩ʕ•͡וʔ۶ c(•ω•`c)
donpen
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おめでとう！！
Fionana
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omedetou~
alacat
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Thanks everyone :oops:
Fumika
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Frostmourne wrote:

congratz alacat \:D/ !!


Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.
wow

as far as I know , one of your pending map, which has the highest sp, is extremely boring ,not interesting and repetitive as hell

Do you feel good of being criticized in bad way like this ?


Please think before posting that every mappers,who just got map ranked, have been worked hard before getting to this state.

Thank you
Yes.
Bass
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Bass

Frostmourne wrote:

as far as I know , one of your pending map, which has the highest sp, is extremely boring ,not interesting and repetitive as hell

Do you feel good of being criticized in bad way like this ?


Please think before posting that every mappers,who just got map ranked, have been worked hard before getting to this state.

Thank you

Alduric wrote:

I know that this map may be boring for some players
Garven
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おめでとう、スイス先生！
Patchouli
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こんぐらっつっつ～
Quilt
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Quilt
gratz
Pastel
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Pastel
おめでとう！ :D
cRyo[iceeicee]
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waaaa.......late grats~ ^^/
haigawdy
haigawdy

Alduric wrote:

Omg, fourth beatmapset of this song... Aren't you bored? 1/10 only because of that.

I would like to apologize for my rude words ;c

(peppy you bunny ban me!)
Rieki_old
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gratz :3
sakuyo123_old
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考慮でき上の動画?
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