1. Hard (4.88 stars, 278 notes)
2. Lally's Easy (2.3 stars, 140 notes)
3. Normal (3.09 stars, 167 notes)
4. Taiko Oni (4.5 stars, 888 notes)

[Te][Amo] wrote:

May i ask for a Easy/Hard/Insane Guest diff ??

agussdg wrote:

la hard es mia david e.e

-Bakari- wrote:

feel free to poke me in-game/ forum pm if you need mod for this map (finish it first, ofc)
star for now, because dat song.. is so.. so.. so nightcore

whoops~ my computer feels laggy, anyway, here's your stars, lol

ezek wrote:

Hola! Este mod lo pidio el tigre.
Easy
Se ve bien, solo una ayudadita con los hitsounds al principio.
00:12:323 (2) - Clap ok
00:13:755 (4) - Clapok
00:16:621 (2) - Clapok
00:17:337 (1) - Clap al finalok
00:18:770 (2) - ^ok
00:20:202 (4) - ^ok
00:21:635 (6) - ^ok
00:27:366 (2) - ^ok
00:29:515 (2) - Clapok
00:30:231 (3) - Clap al finalok
00:31:664 (1) - ^ok
00:32:738 (2) - Whistleokok
00:35:245 (1) - Clap al finalok
00:41:692 (1) - Whistle al principio y clap al finalok
00:42:767 (2) - Whistleok
00:43:125 (3) - Whistle al principio y clap al finalok
00:45:274 (5) - Clapok



Buena suerte con el map Si te interesan los sliders bonitos deberias de ver esto viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

eLtigreXXx wrote:

ezek wrote:

Hola! Este mod lo pidio el tigre.
Easy
Se ve bien, solo una ayudadita con los hitsounds al principio.
00:12:323 (2) - Clap ok
00:13:755 (4) - Clapok
00:16:621 (2) - Clapok
00:17:337 (1) - Clap al finalok
00:18:770 (2) - ^ok
00:20:202 (4) - ^ok
00:21:635 (6) - ^ok
00:27:366 (2) - ^ok
00:29:515 (2) - Clapok
00:30:231 (3) - Clap al finalok
00:31:664 (1) - ^ok
00:32:738 (2) - Whistleokok
00:35:245 (1) - Clap al finalok
00:41:692 (1) - Whistle al principio y clap al finalok
00:42:767 (2) - Whistleok
00:43:125 (3) - Whistle al principio y clap al finalok
00:45:274 (5) - Clapok



Buena suerte con el map Si te interesan los sliders bonitos deberias de ver esto viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

bueno aqui esta terminada http://puu.sh/KLL8

gracias ezek segi el ridmo

_Gezo_ wrote:

After listening to the song, I am going to map this as soon as possible !

Don't forget to add my nem* in tags right now. Your GD will arrive as requested in the next few days !




* : Typo of name.

Ryu wrote:

where is my diff ;w;

_Gezo_ wrote:

BG will come in 2 days ! \:D/

_Gezo_ wrote:

BG will come in 2 days ! \:D/

kajiyatta wrote:

hi from your queue(M4M can?)
General
nice SB
almost suggestion. if you don't like, please skip it.
tigreXXx's Easy
Placement
00:21:287(5) 3 grid down? like(2) and also(6) down
00:29:525(2) x:292?
00:50:298(1) why this slider down? I don't mean.
01:03:192(1,2,3) try this placement? like triangle

SPOILER

02:34:524(1,2,3) try this placement?

SPOILER

Rythem
Hit Sonud
01:20:026(2) add clap on the head?
02:13:751(4) add finish on the tail?


Normal
all 60% hit sounds? you can use more volume difference.
Placement
00:17:347(8) NC
00:23:078(15) ^
00:38:658(6) ^
00:41:702(12)^
02:09:811(3) y:276?
Rythem
00:38:479 add a note?
01:53:693^
Hit Sonud
02:13:751(4) add finish on the reverse?
02:19:481(3)add finish on the tail?

teA's Insane
not yet finished? using more volume difference is beter I think.
Placement
01:09:639(4,5,6) how about this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:44:023(6) remove finish?

good diff me likes.

sorry for poor English. Good Luck with Rank and star~

Xin-Kun wrote:

kajiyatta wrote:

hi from your queue(M4M can?)
General
nice SB
almost suggestion. if you don't like, please skip it.
tigreXXx's Easy
Placement
00:21:287(5) 3 grid down? like(2) and also(6) down
00:29:525(2) x:292?
00:50:298(1) why this slider down? I don't mean.
01:03:192(1,2,3) try this placement? like triangle

SPOILER

02:34:524(1,2,3) try this placement?

SPOILER

Rythem
Hit Sonud
01:20:026(2) add clap on the head?
02:13:751(4) add finish on the tail?

all done
http://puu.sh/Y4yf

eLtigreXXx wrote:

cuando tengas chanse le pones eLtXXx' Insane a mi diff c:

Dark_Ai wrote:

Sorry I'm late >< Hope you like it. Tell me if I still can do anything for you ;>
But here:
BG
SB Folder

SB Code

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\Strobe.png",320,240
 L,13049,15
  F,0,0,716,0.5,0
  F,0,716,1432,0
 L,35972,8
  F,0,0,358,1,0
  F,0,358,716,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\Strobe.png",320,240
 L,47433,60
  F,1,0,358,0.5,0
  S,1,0,358,1,1.2
 L,70356,17
  F,1,0,1432,0.5,0
  S,1,0,1432,1,1.3
 L,116917,8
  F,1,0,1432,0.5,0
  S,1,0,1432,1,1.3
 L,128378,60
  F,1,0,358,0.5,0
  S,1,0,358,1,1.2
 L,151301,33
  F,1,0,358,0.5,0
  S,1,0,358,1,1.2
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\Layer_1.jpg",320,240
 C,0,-1276,,0,0,0
 F,0,162762,162763,0,1
 F,0,162763,171358,1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Layer_1.jpg",320,240
 C,0,-1276,,0,0,0
 F,0,-1276,11617,1,0.3
 F,0,11617,35972,0.3
 F,0,35972,35973,0.3,0
 F,0,81817,85399,0,1
 F,0,85339,88264,1,0
 F,0,116917,119782,0,1
 F,0,119782,122647,1,0
 F,0,125513,128378,0,1
 F,0,128378,128379,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Layer_1.jpg",320,240
 L,11617,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,23078,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,41702,7
  F,0,0,358,0.5,0
 L,44210,6
  F,0,0,179,0.5,0
 L,45284,8
  F,0,0,90,0.5,0
 L,58894,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,68923,1
  F,0,0,358,0.7
  F,0,358,716,0.3
  F,0,716,895,0
  F,0,895,1074,0.3
  F,0,1074,1253,0.5
  F,0,1253,1432,1
  F,0,1432,1611,1,0
 L,88264,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,105455,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,111186,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,122647,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,139839,1
  F,0,0,716,1,0
 L,149868,1
  F,0,0,358,0.7
  F,0,358,716,0.3
  F,0,716,895,0
  F,0,895,1074,0.3
  F,0,1074,1253,0.5
  F,0,1253,1432,1
  F,0,1432,1611,1,0
 L,161329,4
  F,0,0,179,0.5,0
 L,162046,8
  F,0,0,90,0.5,0
 F,0,33106,34539,0,0.5
 F,0,34539,35972,0.5,1
 F,0,35972,35073,1,0
 F,0,46000,47433,1,0
 F,0,92561,93994,0,0.5
 F,0,93994,95427,0.5,1
 F,0,95427,95428,1,0
 F,0,114051,116917,0,1
 F,0,116917,117633,1,0
 F,0,162762,167060,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

-Bakari- wrote:

- _- pm request

[General]
use 'em for all diffs: Tronix DJ Remix [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_ Gezo
unsnapped kiai

[eLtigreXXx's Easy]
try to use whistles instead of claps for soft part of song? (aka use whistles instead of claps during non-kiai parts)
00:20:212 (4) - try to keep nimbers on circles under 6 (it;s confusing for beginners) and also put New Combo (NC) here for two reasons 1) it fits with music/vocals 2) it follows your pattern
00:24:510 (2) - try to make this slider 1/1 shorter? (end 00:25:227 - ) if you'll do it think about adding circle at 00:25:585. sounds much better
00:35:255 (1) - probably confusing for beginners because it's kinda hard to read/detect this slider (it's covered by spinner's hitburst)
00:59:611 (1) - it's too far from spinner. i think you shoul try to put it closer to spinner center (but be careful! try to avoid overlap with spinner's hitburst)
01:08:923 (3) - eh.. new combo here? (follows your comboing?)
01:34:710 (1) - doesn't really fits here. if you want to follow vocals remove this circle. (sounds kinda odd here)
01:49:395 (4) - sounds random here. and plays awkward for me. try to do it like this (01:49:395 (4) - circle / 01:49:753 - 2/1 slider)
02:28:794 (4) - same as 00:20:212 (4)
02:37:390 (4) - same as 00:20:212 (4) orz
02:35:241 (3,6) - didn't really like these slideres and crossing them isn't really good idea, imo. (nazi)
02:39:539 (1) - finish is surely should be deleted. it doesn't fit here at all.

[Normal]
comboing feels inconsistent. try to use new combos more often for 1st half of song
Approach Rate 5 - for consistency with your slider velocity and to keep diff settings balanced
00:24:152 - note here placed even on easiest diff. it's better if you'll put it here :/
00:43:314 - unused green line. remove green line here, please
00:43:672 - ^
01:02:834 (3,5) - no! it sounds odd. try to separate beats here. example
01:10:356 (1,2) - rhythm here is wrong. try to use circle instead of (1) (01:10:356) and start slider (2) at 01:10:714
01:35:069 - try to remove unused green line or add circle here.
01:50:828 (1) - ^ same as above. and example how to fix
01:53:693 - start spinner here? follows vocals better
02:04:796 (4) - remove reverse and make it 1/2 longer. sounds much better, imo
02:09:094 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst. try to move circle somwhere else
02:13:751 (4) - same as 01:02:834 (3,5)

[Hard]
00:44:568 (1,1) - didn't really like these spinners. try to remove one of them and make first spinner longer?
01:54:051 (1,1) - same as above ^
02:02:558 (1,2,3) - shoul be 1/4 later o.o (move (1) at 02:02:558 - )
02:05:513 (1,1) - same suggestion about spinners. not a problem but plays awkward, imo
02:39:897 (1,1) - yes. spinners.

[TeA's Insane]
00:34:718 (1) -- try to remove this spinner (it doesn't fits here) and put circle at 00:35:972
00:46:180 (1) - ^ same here o.o (blah..blah..blah, do the same for all similar patterns)
00:56:208 (7) - 1/2 slider here would be good idea since i can clearly hear beat at 00:56:387 (and some similar patterns)
00:57:104 - and circle here (jumpy pattern) will help you to follow rhythm closer

[Taiko]
nice :3

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

that's all for me.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

orale la imajen de mi diff *¬*
y que buen sb *0*
http://puu.sh/13CNe unos pequeño cambios

EpicRazor214 wrote:

Why is this beatmap not approved yet.

1. Song Setup - Tags - from AIBat. Inconsistency in Tags: it is all including order
   - [eLtXXx's Easy] : (Tronix DJ Remix) eLtigreXXx [Te][Amo] _Gezo_ ⇒ (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [Gezo's Taiko Oni!] : (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [Hard] : (Tronix DJ Remix) eLtigreXXx [Te][Amo] _Gezo_ ⇒ (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [Normal] : (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [TeA's Insane] : (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
2. Timing - Inherited Points(green line) - There is many that it is not put on a line. 10ms is early there ( except taiko diff ) kiai time can fix at least↓
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:423, ends on 00:58:884 ⇒start: 00:47:433. end: 00:58:894.
   Kiai #2: Starts on 02:08:369, ends on 02:42:762 ⇒start: 02:08:379.

1. 00:24:510 (2) - Suggestion of the flow note: http://puu.sh/16cBH
   

   52,264,24510,2,0,B|111:262|143:195|125:146,1,160,4|2

2. 00:28:808 (1) - add finish. Because you're using consecutive finish in the previous note, so I felt a little lonely sound here
3. 00:35:255 (1) - I think that the beginning of sound should make 00:35:435. but it is easy, I suggest a simple sound. i suggest: http://puu.sh/16cJM I think it is enough for this
4. 00:44:568 (4) - add NC
5. 00:48:866 (2,3) - nazi overlap. http://puu.sh/16cQa try like this?
   

   216,132,48866,2,0,B|196:172|216:212,1,80,2|0

6. 00:59:611 (1) - hidden by a hitburst of spinner. The placement that I cannot recommend in easy 　　for ex: patterns that do not use the spinner http://puu.sh/16dae , http://puu.sh/16den (I think that even this does not have any problem )
7. 01:16:086 (4) - move to 01:16:445. You match this part with a vocal. so I think that here is correct
8. 01:35:069 (1) - add NC
9. 01:45:455 (1) - 2 grid up ?
10. 01:49:753 (4) - add NC and 01:50:470 (1) - remove NC and 01:51:186 (2) - add NC is better imo.
11. 01:53:693 (1) - spinner start 01:54:051. then 01:53:693 - add note. This fits the vocal. I think that spinnerstart should change it if you want to match it with a drum
12. 02:18:407 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider?

• remapping

1. 00:14:482 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 00:20:212 (3) - 00:25:943 (5) - )
2. 00:36:151(x) - add note. ( i suggest same as rhythm. 00:38:837 (9,1) - . )
3. 00:49:224 (7,9) - add clap to start of the slider
4. 00:52:089 (8,10) - ^
5. 00:54:059 (4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/16dHj symmetrical with 00:54:776 (2). ( then spacing does not have any problem, I suggest this )
6. 01:01:581 (9) - 01:01:581 (9,1,2) - I thought you should not overlap the three note here. NC patterns that have not been used even once so I thought looks a little bad. 01:01:581 (9) - just one note. stack with 01:01:043 (8) slider end ?
7. 01:32:024 (1) - spinner start 01:31:845. ( sam as Insane diff )
8. 01:43:665 (3,4) - Spacing to be very confusing. Please extend the DS. or You will not do it, adding at least NC 01:44:381 (4) here.
9. 02:03:006 (3,4) - I suggest symmetric placement: http://puu.sh/16e2C It is not necessary to follow DS here

1. HD +1 or 2 ( I cannot recommend that it is lower than hard diff. and I do not think that it is so difficult )
2. 01:10:177 (6) - You simplify it intentionally ? but i prefer this rhythm >A<; http://puu.sh/16eg6
   
   others fine. good diff~ xD

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ XinCrin

sorry for late ><;

here my mod~

[General]

1. Song Setup - Tags - from AIBat. Inconsistency in Tags: it is all including order
   - [eLtXXx's Easy] : (Tronix DJ Remix) eLtigreXXx [Te][Amo] _Gezo_ ⇒ (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [Gezo's Taiko Oni!] : (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [Hard] : (Tronix DJ Remix) eLtigreXXx [Te][Amo] _Gezo_ ⇒ (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [Normal] : (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
   - [TeA's Insane] : (Tronix DJ Remix) [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_
2. Timing - Inherited Points(green line) - There is many that it is not put on a line. 10ms is early there ( except taiko diff ) kiai time can fix at least↓
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:423, ends on 00:58:884 ⇒start: 00:47:433. end: 00:58:894.
   Kiai #2: Starts on 02:08:369, ends on 02:42:762 ⇒start: 02:08:379.

[eLtXXx's Easy]

1. 00:24:510 (2) - Suggestion of the flow note: http://puu.sh/16cBH
   

   52,264,24510,2,0,B|111:262|143:195|125:146,1,160,4|2

2. 00:28:808 (1) - add finish. Because you're using consecutive finish in the previous note, so I felt a little lonely sound here
3. 00:35:255 (1) - I think that the beginning of sound should make 00:35:435. but it is easy, I suggest a simple sound. i suggest: http://puu.sh/16cJM I think it is enough for this
4. 00:44:568 (4) - add NC
5. 00:48:866 (2,3) - nazi overlap. http://puu.sh/16cQa try like this?
   

   216,132,48866,2,0,B|196:172|216:212,1,80,2|0

6. 00:59:611 (1) - hidden by a hitburst of spinner. The placement that I cannot recommend in easy 　　for ex: patterns that do not use the spinner http://puu.sh/16dae , http://puu.sh/16den (I think that even this does not have any problem )
7. 01:16:086 (4) - move to 01:16:445. You match this part with a vocal. so I think that here is correct
8. 01:35:069 (1) - add NC
9. 01:45:455 (1) - 2 grid up ?
10. 01:49:753 (4) - add NC and 01:50:470 (1) - remove NC and 01:51:186 (2) - add NC is better imo.
11. 01:53:693 (1) - spinner start 01:54:051. then 01:53:693 - add note. This fits the vocal. I think that spinnerstart should change it if you want to match it with a drum
12. 02:18:407 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider?

[Normal]

• remapping

[Hard]

1. 00:14:482 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 00:20:212 (3) - 00:25:943 (5) - )
2. 00:36:151(x) - add note. ( i suggest same as rhythm. 00:38:837 (9,1) - . )
3. 00:49:224 (7,9) - add clap to start of the slider
4. 00:52:089 (8,10) - ^
5. 00:54:059 (4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/16dHj symmetrical with 00:54:776 (2). ( then spacing does not have any problem, I suggest this )
6. 01:01:581 (9) - 01:01:581 (9,1,2) - I thought you should not overlap the three note here. NC patterns that have not been used even once so I thought looks a little bad. 01:01:581 (9) - just one note. stack with 01:01:043 (8) slider end ?
7. 01:32:024 (1) - spinner start 01:31:845. ( sam as Insane diff )
8. 01:43:665 (3,4) - Spacing to be very confusing. Please extend the DS. or You will not do it, adding at least NC 01:44:381 (4) here.
9. 02:03:006 (3,4) - I suggest symmetric placement: http://puu.sh/16e2C It is not necessary to follow DS here

[TeA's Insane]

1. HD +1 or 2 ( I cannot recommend that it is lower than hard diff. and I do not think that it is so difficult )
2. 01:10:177 (6) - You simplify it intentionally ? but i prefer this rhythm >A<; http://puu.sh/16eg6
   
   others fine. good diff~ xD

godd :3 star☆

Good luck~

eLtigreXXx wrote:

http://puu.sh/16lau
Aall done thanks kosiga ^^

Barney Stinson wrote:

BAAAAAAAAAAAAANG

Easy:

01:44:023 (4,2) - They're overlapping. Meh
02:20:556 (2) - a grid down
02:21:272 (3) - A grid left


Normal:

00:43:135 (5,6,7,8) - not suitable for a normal
00:47:433 (1,2) - Toooo close to end of spinner
01:35:427 (3) - Stack to (1) and (2) or unstack (2). Looks ugly and difficult this way
02:08:378 (1) - Toooo close to end of spinner


Hard:

00:38:837 (9,1) - switch combos
01:04:446 (5) - remove nc


Insane:
Nah, fine!

Gl!

eLtigreXXx wrote:

http://puu.sh/16rd6 listo
all done c:

kratoz wrote:

Hello 'o'

[eLtXXx's easy]

01:08:923 - Remove NC
01:36:501 (1,2) - Stack's may confuse beginners
01:37:934 (3,4) - ^
01:44:739 - Remove clap

[Normal]

00:42:687 (1,2,3) - Looks better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/438514
01:45:993 - Move to 01:46:172 -
02:38:822 - Add a reverse

[Hard]

00:13:049 - This should end at 00:13:765 -
00:14:124 - Add a note
00:47:791 - ^
02:28:256 - ^

[TeA's Insane]

It's ok~

That's all , good luck with ranking

1. To kajiyatta

1. To -Bakari-

1. To kosiga

1. To agussdg

1. To Taris

Taris wrote:

Mod requested.

Pretty good map btw~

Blue = recommended
Black = suggestion or nazi
Red = Must Change

[eLtXXx's Easy]

00:18:422 - You should add a note here ok
00:29:525 (2) - Move to right ok
01:11:072 (1) - Move down a little ok
01:17:877 (3) - Move up a bit ok
01:30:592 - The spinner should start here ok
01:34:531 - Add note? would be very close to the spinner

Nice use of symmetry btw

Taris wrote:

Mod requested.

Pretty good map btw~

Blue = recommended
Black = suggestion or nazi
Red = Must Change

[eLtXXx's Easy]

00:18:422 - You should add a note here
00:29:525 (2) - Move to right
01:11:072 (1) - Move down a little
01:17:877 (3) - Move up a bit
01:30:592 - The spinner should start here
01:34:531 - Add note?

[Normal]

00:25:943 (3) - Add Whistle to start of slider?
00:44:210 (9) - Move down a bit
01:15:370 (6) - You should add clap to the start
01:17:877 (3) - ^
01:18:594 (5) - ^
01:17:877 (3,4,5,6) - Make it perfect!
01:46:530 (3) - Whistle at the end?
02:08:736 (1) - Add clap?
02:09:453 (3) - ^
02:19:839 (1) - Seem like you miss a finish

[Hard]

01:02:297 (1) - Remove NC
01:48:321 (3) - Clap at end of slider
01:49:037 (5) - ^
02:24:854 (4) - Clap at start?

[TeA's Insane]

00:12:691 (3) - Add Whistle?
00:29:883 (3) - ^
00:36:867 (3) - ^
01:09:281 (3) - Clap at start?
01:35:069 (1) - Add Finish?

That's it

Nice use of symmetry btw

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi~

• add Epilepsy Warning on all diffs~

Insane

00:15:377(3) - http://puu.sh/1967G this rhythm better follow the music

Hard

00:11:617(1,4) - make this sliders more roundish and symmetric http://puu.sh/196em
00:20:123- make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/196hP
00:29:883 - better add note here
00:46:000(spin) - http://puu.sh/196fS It's better follow the music
01:42:411 - make this slider double or replace on 1 note on big white tick
01:55:484 - end spinner here and start second spin on next blue tick
02:06:587 - same as 00:46:000
02:19:123(5) - ctrl+R
02:27:003(5,8) - make this sliders identical~ will be looks better
02:41:329 - end first spin here

Normal

02:09:094(2,3) - correct spacing
00:40:270(4,5) - ugly overlap~ http://puu.sh/196nM make so looks better
00:46:000 - end first spin here
00:53:701(3,4,5) - unstack it~ will be more playable~
01:42:232(2) - maybe make so? http://puu.sh/196pk looks better
01:49:395 - put this slider in centre between notes 2 and 4 http://puu.sh/196q8

Easy

fine~

Good luck~

And can I make Extra diff??? ;w; I very want ;w;

eLtigreXXx wrote:

xin quta los bookmarks de mi diff :3

1. Not sure but try tick rate 2. it will fit with kiai but it doesn't fits well with non-kiai parts. orz
2. Not sure: enable letterbox during breaks? (all standard diffs)
3. I have some cute colours for you.
   
   Here's the colours

   [img]Combo1 : 190,190,190
   Combo2 : 86,171,248
   Combo3 : 244,168,162
   Combo4 : 202,228,255[/img]
4. my bad. />.<\ remove "([/b"] and "[b])" from tags
5. According to new rules, you need two taiko diffs, right? o3o
6. You have some unsnapped kiais [Hard], [TeA's Insane] and [Normal]
7. There's a lot of useless green lines! Remove them :<
   [box=from [Normal:4c95e]]
   
   Since they are all the same. You can remove them, i think >.</ Be careful - don't touch kiai!

1. 00:13:049 (3,4) - sounds unfitting to me. I'd remove (4) and made (3) much longer. (will end at 00:14:124 - ) So, if you do it THAT way it will fit with vocals much better
2. 00:31:674 (1,2) - personally, I think that if you'll remove (2) and make (1) 1/1 longer - you will make rhythm much easier and flowwill be more enjoyable. Try it! It fits with vocals quite good, imo.
3. 00:44:210 - that start of mix part isn't mapped and it feels wrong. How about circle here to follow music. if you listen carefuly you will hear beat at 00:44:210 - quite strong beat
4. 01:28:264 - I am not sure - but I think it's better if you'll point that red line out somehow. For example start slinner here. Spinner starts from nowhere, by the way. How about starting it from 01:28:264 - or from 01:29:696 i think it fits better
5. 02:02:647 (1) - don't you think that this note should be louder? How about whistle here?
6. 02:06:945 (3) - how about spinner here instead? You spin-spin-spin and in the end fountain appears! Looks awesome! Try it
   
   since it's kinda re-mod I didn't found many things. Neat diff <3

1. Heeeeey! How about AR:5? It fits much better with kiai section and makes diff a bit more interesting
2. 00:14:482 (1) - Your flow seems broken here. I mean it's not wrong or something.. it just looks awkward. Try to avoid randomly shaped sliders? At least try to do it this way? :3
3. 00:15:914 (3) - how about following music/vocals a bit closer? Let's listen to the music and we will hear "HEEEEEEAAAAAAAR" is 2/1 slider and beat at 00:16:989 - so.. mapping goes like this
4. 00:18:780 (3,4,1) - nazi - feel free to ignore but your blankets are wrong-shaped. Let me fix it for you
   
   Code/Image

   
   

   184,152,18780,2,0,B|196:104|244:56|328:72|352:120,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   276,176,19854,1,0,0:0:0
   376,188,20212,6,0,B|372:240|324:288|260:292|216:256,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 00:24:510 (3) - It's cute but it's off vocals :V new line of vocals starts in the midle of this slider - 00:25:585 - right here. Try to fix this slider somehow? Make it shorter and add note, maybe.
6. 00:41:344 (4) - I guess you forgot new combo here, right? it fits with your pattern/music
7. since I have something nazi to say - I will say it. Feel free to ignore but I'd like to advice you another shape orz
   
   it looks better and gives nice flow

   
8. 01:19:310 (5) - weird pattern. o3o (5) - follows "may" and spinner starts at "be". Broken rhythm, i think. add beat at01:19:668 - and put spinner start at 01:20:026 -
9. 01:39:725 (1,2) - do you follow vocals? do it this way! (1) will follow "maaaaaay*reverse*beeee" and 2 will follow backgound music
10. 01:45:455 (1,2,3) - i you want - you can copy paste blanket-sliders from one of my previous suggestions. same as 00:18:780
11. 01:51:186 (4) - according to your pattern/storyboard - you should put new combo here.
12. 02:21:272 (3) - if you miss (2) reverse arrow on (3) will become covered by hitburst. I think it's unrankable or atleast hard to read. Try to fix it somehow, please.
13. 02:29:510 (6) - kinda weird stack for [Normal], i think. May confuse Normal-players

1. Don't use same AR as on [insane] it makes map boring. AR-1
2. 00:21:645 (1,2) - vocals here are longer than 1/1 and it's bad idea to separate them :< I'd like to ee something like 1/1 reversed slider + circle? just like this
3. 00:40:091 (4) - not sure if missed new combo or you don't want to put it here. Anyway, put NC here to follow music.
4. 01:10:356 - this beat should be separated! It must have single circle because it's kinda end of epic part.
5. 01:39:725 (1,2) - hey man, sounds like those two are off vocals. But vocals here is the most awesome part! Follow vocals here, i'm begging you!
   
   Just awesome! I really LOVE this map.

1. 00:13:049 (4,3) - I kinda disagree with some of your shapes. For soft parts - I'd like to see some soft-shaped sliders. But as long as your sliders are fit here good - i don't mind them, anyway. Try to use softer shapes? orz
2. 02:02:468 (1,2,1) - instead of awkward comboing you shoul try single 1/4 slider with reverse
3. 02:42:046 (1,2,3) - how about spinner here? To be consistent with other diffs?
   
   As always, TeA is awesome.♥

-Bakari- wrote:

According to new rules, you need two taiko diffs, right? o3o

Map Info wrote:

Submitted: Jul 18, 2012

New Rule Announcement wrote:

This only affects mapsets submitted after this announcement.

Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:47 pm (over 3 months ago)

1. Remove ()from your tags so it would be Tronix DJ Remix
2. TitleUnicode must be wrote, but Gezo's Taiko Oni! has nothing at there. Fix it plz

1. AR+1
2. 00:30:241 (3,1) - no finish on the begin? Just saw you add finish on all downbeat b4
3. 00:48:149 (1,2) - Spacing... eh
4. 00:58:894 - ~ 01:34:890 - So no claps during here?
5. 01:35:427 (2) - finish
6. 01:44:023 (4) - (reserve) missed the clap
7. 01:52:261 (3) - (reserve) highly suggest you to add finish due to there's a sound o3o
8. 02:02:647 (1) - Finish here too
   I'm a little bit confuse on your hitsound D;

1. I saw many unsnapped green lines, snap them?
2. 00:16:631 (4) - I think you can copy (3)'s shape to make this slider
3. 00:23:078 (1,2,3) - Make like this? More blanket imo, and I'm not happy on (1)'s shape
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   376,332,23078,6,0,B|344:372|264:360|248:304|248:304|196:296,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   120,248,24152,1,0,0:0:0

   ^just give you (1,2)'s code
4. 00:41:702 (5) - NC
5. 01:54:051 (1) - 1/4 earlier imo. Vocal start at the downbeat!
6. 02:34:882 (2) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481847
   

   436,320,154882,2,0,B|484:292|472:228|472:228|436:184|472:132,1,200

1. 00:28:808 (1) - Finish here
2. 00:54:059 (5) - Spacing, makes your pattern looks so ugly u3u
3. 00:55:313 (3,4) - You can make like (1,2) ctrl+J like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481849
4. 01:52:619 (4) - Finish please
5. 02:19:660 (6) - Remove clap and add clap at (5)'s end, I don't think you're serious lol

1. This diff has many unsnapped green lines, snapped them maybe?
2. 01:10:535 (9,1) - I think 1.0x > 1.1x seems not a huge change but ugly. so use 1.0?
   I have nothing to say: awesome.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

http://puu.sh/1m55Z here mi dif