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Topic Starter
Ok, removedKonei wrote:
And btw delete the osb. file and full submit^^
Updated~
Hello ~ nich95 ~ 
Ramdon check beatmap ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
Ramdon check beatmap ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[Insane]
- Pls resnap to 00:53:731 (2) - 01:52:064 unsnapped circle and green line.
- 00:03:117 - Add circle sound much better.
- 00:03:284 - ^
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- AR+1 much better with play.
- Same as Insane pls resnap green line(kiai time should end to 01:52:066).
- 00:40:733 (4,5,6,7,1) - You can try move to center?,will be more beautiful.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
- You should add kiai time same as other diff.
- 00:24:955 (1) - Just putting a new combo to here.
- 01:50:288 (1) - Extend to 01:52:733.
[Konei's Easy]
- 01:14:733 (1,2) - You can try make more symmetry slider? looks ugly now.
- 01:50:288 (1) - End to 01:52:733 and don't mute this.
That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
Topic Starter
All fixed...
Thank you for mod, Rika-chan
Thank you for mod, Rika-chan
Topic Starter
Ok, Updated~
Hi, from my queue ;3
[General]
You must end the 2nd kiai time in the "Konei's Easy" diff.
First offset 926 is better, try it. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines
[Konei's Easy]
00:18:951 (1) - Since this spinner should start at 00:18:284 to follow the vocal, I'd move it till 00:19:617. It's much better if this spinner follows the music in this way.
00:40:066 (3) - Whistle on this slider's tail
00:48:066 (2) - ^
00:59:177 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:511 (2) because there is a finish and so it fits much better. It's easier to follow for beginners
01:03:177 (4) - Finish on this slider's end
01:04:955 (5) - Finish on this slider's head
01:14:733 (1) - I know you are following the voice here but.. reducing this slider by 1/2 makes the rhythm more flowing. Why? Because this is an easy and you just should to use 1/1 snap divisor ;3
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:24:511 Add circle here, there is a missed sound between the previous spinner and the next slider o.o Even for consistency with 01:38:733 (1)
01:25:399 (1) - If you follow above, I think you will, just remove NC from this slider
01:35:622 (1) - Move this spinner till the next white long tic plz, for the same reason I have written in the first point above.
01:39:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:288 (1) - I'd reduce this slider till 01:52:066 since it should follow the vocal
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play
00:35:622 (1) - Finish
00:36:511 (3) - ^
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:
00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:30:288 (4) - I'd use NC here for consistency with 00:35:622 (1)
00:40:955 (5) - Whistle on the head
00:42:511 (1) - 40% volume here on this slider's tail plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:46:066 (7) - ^
00:49:844 (1) - ^ this time on this slider's head
01:09:399 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with 01:12:955 (1)
01:28:955 (4) - Add NC always for consistency
01:50:288 (5) - Use NC here and remove from 01:51:177 (1)
Awesome map *-*
[Insane]
00:30:955 Add circle overlapping it with 00:31:066 (4)
01:21:622 (6) - This antijump without an advice (for example using NC) it's confusing and hard to read. Move it further from 01:21:399 (5,1)
That's all. I hope it's helpful.
Good luck with rank then ;3
[General]
You must end the 2nd kiai time in the "Konei's Easy" diff.
First offset 926 is better, try it. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines
[Konei's Easy]
00:18:951 (1) - Since this spinner should start at 00:18:284 to follow the vocal, I'd move it till 00:19:617. It's much better if this spinner follows the music in this way.
00:40:066 (3) - Whistle on this slider's tail
00:48:066 (2) - ^
00:59:177 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:511 (2) because there is a finish and so it fits much better. It's easier to follow for beginners
01:03:177 (4) - Finish on this slider's end
01:04:955 (5) - Finish on this slider's head
01:14:733 (1) - I know you are following the voice here but.. reducing this slider by 1/2 makes the rhythm more flowing. Why? Because this is an easy and you just should to use 1/1 snap divisor ;3
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:24:511 Add circle here, there is a missed sound between the previous spinner and the next slider o.o Even for consistency with 01:38:733 (1)
01:25:399 (1) - If you follow above, I think you will, just remove NC from this slider
01:35:622 (1) - Move this spinner till the next white long tic plz, for the same reason I have written in the first point above.
01:39:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:288 (1) - I'd reduce this slider till 01:52:066 since it should follow the vocal
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play
00:35:622 (1) - Finish
00:36:511 (3) - ^
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:
00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:30:288 (4) - I'd use NC here for consistency with 00:35:622 (1)
00:40:955 (5) - Whistle on the head
00:42:511 (1) - 40% volume here on this slider's tail plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:46:066 (7) - ^
00:49:844 (1) - ^ this time on this slider's head
01:09:399 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with 01:12:955 (1)
01:28:955 (4) - Add NC always for consistency
01:50:288 (5) - Use NC here and remove from 01:51:177 (1)
Awesome map *-*
[Insane]
00:30:955 Add circle overlapping it with 00:31:066 (4)
01:21:622 (6) - This antijump without an advice (for example using NC) it's confusing and hard to read. Move it further from 01:21:399 (5,1)
That's all. I hope it's helpful.
Good luck with rank then ;3
Topic Starter
General mod is fixed all...
Part to Insane diff, I didn't fixed, but add NC in 01:21:399 (5)
Thank you for mod, Chewin
Updated~
Part to Insane diff, I didn't fixed, but add NC in 01:21:399 (5)
Thank you for mod, Chewin
Updated~
Haii ~
You requested in my queue~
[Konei's Easy]
- Your spacing seems to be always changing.
00:41:399 (4) - One gird left.
00:45:844 (3) - Move it up a bit to make a better line.
01:00:511 (2) - New combo.
01:14:733 (1,2) - These two sliders can look better.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:57:844 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:46:733 (1) - New combo.
Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
You requested in my queue~
[Konei's Easy]
- Your spacing seems to be always changing.
00:41:399 (4) - One gird left.
00:45:844 (3) - Move it up a bit to make a better line.
01:00:511 (2) - New combo.
01:14:733 (1,2) - These two sliders can look better.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:57:844 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:46:733 (1) - New combo.
Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
SPOILER
Thanks for the mod! Updated![BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play. This circle is symmetical with 00:16:259 (4). Also, there's no need for a new combo.
00:35:622 (1) - Finish Okay.
00:36:511 (3) - ^ Okay.
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.I decided to just make the volume to 40% from 00:39:177 - 00:52:955 since it's the quiet part of the song.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:
I decided to do something else XD.
00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle I didin't follow the above so....
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head Okay.
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try How is this slider unrankable? It's not that hard to read. Normal is Normal, if beginners can't even read a simple overlap, how can they expect to prepare for Hard difficulty?
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head. Adding finish alone sounds good already. Whistle is not needed.
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p Omg, my mistake
. Fixed.
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude It's my mapping style.
http://puu.sh/H7My
Topic Starter
Ok, Updated~
Let's Mod 
(from modding queue)
General:
rise audio of kiai inherit points to 80%
[Easy]
looks like ok...
[Normal]
HD and OD 3
00:57:844 (1) - remove new combo
damn.. else is sooo perfect
[hard]
HD and OD 5
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
[Insane]
OD 6
else is ok
Good luck :3
(from modding queue)General:
rise audio of kiai inherit points to 80%
[Easy]
looks like ok...
[Normal]
HD and OD 3
00:57:844 (1) - remove new combo
damn.. else is sooo perfect
[hard]
HD and OD 5
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
[Insane]
OD 6
else is ok
Good luck :3
UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KdLk
http://puu.sh/KdLk
Topic Starter
Fixed...
Thank you for mod, Genshin
Updated Normal and Insane diff~
Thank you for mod, Genshin
Updated Normal and Insane diff~
Genshin wrote:
Let's Mod
[hard]
HD and OD 5 no fixed but others mention it, I'll fix it
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
well, my NC style fits with Long White Line, so I don't change all.sorrt, for your modding
(already KIAI TIME has 80% volume, so I don't update all.)
tiper
[Easy]
Please, try to use maximum grid level and check spacing after it
00:44:955 (1) - add a whistle?
00:59:177 (4) -
01:08:511 (1) - this slider looks ugly80,208,68511,6,0,B|128:176|128:176|184:224|272:200|272:200|320:272,1,270,0|8
00:05:592 (4) - nazi, but you may place this beat down to one grid
00:32:066 (1) - nazi
00:33:844 (3) - ^
00:47:177 (1,3) - stacks like this are not good for easy difficulty. seriously
01:43:177 (4) - two repeat on sliders isn`t good for easy difficulty
00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here?
01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier?
00:28:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:33:511 (6) - overmap?
01:45:399 (2,3) -
01:52:066 (1,2,3) - this jump is easier than jump in hard o_O
Topic Starter
Some fixed...
Thank you for mod, tiper
Thank you for mod, tiper
thanks for modding=tiper wrote:
[Hard]
00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
no fixed
00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here? OK
01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier? I think it's not too far but others mention that, I'll fix it.
updated→http://puu.sh/Kr8k
Thanks for the mod. Fixed some.
I also decided to adjust a few things for better flow. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KtzA
I also decided to adjust a few things for better flow. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KtzA
Hi there~ mod from queue
[General]
[Insane]
[General]
- Consider to add a silent sliderslide to S:C1 sample for the part between 00:39:177 - and 00:53:399 - because gd mappers didn't choose S:C2 here.
- 00:46:733 (1)- (nazi)Make it symmetrical?
- 00:48:066 (2) - ^
- 00:56:511 - a note here is better than 00:56:733 - imo~
- 01:04:511 - add a note here for consistent beat?
- 01:16:066 - ^
- 01:17:844 - ^
- 01:27:177 (1) - symmetrical?
- 01:31:622 (2,1) - spacing~
- 01:47:622 (2) - a 1/1 slider maybe better?
- 01:52:733 - end your spinner here like other diffs?
- 00:06:259 (1) - try to make the slider more smooth? i.e..
- 00:39:177 (5) - NC?
- 01:37:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the continuing 1/2 notes maybe too hard? i suppose u can choose repeat sliders here to replace some of them :>
- 01:44:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
[Insane]
- 00:05:926 - add a note? i think kajiyatta did better to the beat of prelude, so maybe u can take a look at his diff and make some change?
- 00:23:849 - highly recommend to add a note to connect the beat here together
- 00:30:955 - add a note, a triplet here is better imo~
- 01:05:844 (5,1) - use 1/2 sliders for these two white line?
- 01:06:733 - and then (follow above) i'd like to place a stream from here to 01:07:622 - for the music
- 01:21:399 (1,2,1) - reduce the spacing here, or it may be confusing
- 01:36:844 (4) - stack to (3)'s end, the 1/4 jmp here is mad
Topic Starter
Fixed some...
Thank you for mod, Scorpiour
Add soft-sliderslide in folder. Updated by full submission~
Thank you for mod, Scorpiour
Add soft-sliderslide in folder. Updated by full submission~
thanks for modding~Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~ mod from queue
[kajiyatta's Hard]I try this rythem but it doesn't fit with music I think sorry.
- 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
no updates
Fixed some. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/Lkia
http://puu.sh/Lkia
heey =3
from my Q
General
nope
Easy
~use mo hitsounds and unsnapped
00:33:844 (1) - remove nc
01:14:733 (1,2) - not beatiful
01:27:177 (1) - http://puu.sh/LxEp
01:34:288 (1) - remove nc
Normal
no promlem for me
Hard
nice
good luck with your map, good luck for ranking^^
from my Q
General
nope
Easy
~use mo hitsounds and unsnapped
00:33:844 (1) - remove nc
01:14:733 (1,2) - not beatiful
01:27:177 (1) - http://puu.sh/LxEp
01:34:288 (1) - remove nc
Normal
no promlem for me
Hard
nice
good luck with your map, good luck for ranking^^
Topic Starter
Thank you for mod, Nagisawa
Updated~
Updated~
Hi from my mod Q ^.^
Insane
00:28:511(1) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8VI
00:33:177(5) - better make so http://puu.sh/M8Xb better make identical distance between ends sliders
00:53:399 -here better sounds volume 40%
00:55:399 - add note here, it better follow the misic
01:25:844(4,5) - stack better
01:27:622(4,5,6) - ^
Hard
00:04:759 -remove this note, not sound here.
00:58:622 - ^
01:29:622(2) - better put so http://puu.sh/M93S it's looks better and more playable
Normal
00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^
copypast brrr... really borring...
Easy
00:50:733 - better make so http://puu.sh/M99l spinner to short for easy.
01:11:177(1) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/M9a7 looks better
01:20:955 - http://puu.sh/M9aP
Good luck~~
Insane
00:28:511(1) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8VI
00:33:177(5) - better make so http://puu.sh/M8Xb better make identical distance between ends sliders
00:53:399 -here better sounds volume 40%
00:55:399 - add note here, it better follow the misic
01:25:844(4,5) - stack better
01:27:622(4,5,6) - ^
Hard
00:04:759 -remove this note, not sound here.
00:58:622 - ^
01:29:622(2) - better put so http://puu.sh/M93S it's looks better and more playable
Normal
00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^
copypast brrr... really borring...
Easy
00:50:733 - better make so http://puu.sh/M99l spinner to short for easy.
01:11:177(1) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/M9a7 looks better
01:20:955 - http://puu.sh/M9aP
Good luck~~
Topic Starter
Fixed almost...
Thank you for mod, Katty Pie
Thank you for mod, Katty Pie
thanks for modding~
some updated http://puu.sh/MawS
some updated http://puu.sh/MawS
SPOILER
How is symmetical patterns boring?Katty Pie wrote:
Normal
00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^
copypast brrr... really borring...
Remapped a few parts AGAIN!
http://puu.sh/Mgcu
Topic Starter
Updated~
nao <3
[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke"
"sugar pot konei beatofike"
[Konei's Easy]
00:03:592 (2,1,2) - Not distance snap...
00:28:511 (1) - ^
00:35:622 (1) - ^
00:41:399 (4) - ^
00:46:733 (1) - ^
00:55:622 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:14:733 (1) - I think overlap
01:18:288 (1) - Remove clap to slider end
01:19:622 (2) - Add clap
01:20:066 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:25:399 (2) - Remove clap to slider start and end
01:25:844 - Add clap
01:27:177 (1) - Remove clap
01:29:399 (2) - Add clap
01:30:288 (1) - Add clap to slider start
01:31:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:32:511 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:33:399 (2) - Remove clap
01:34:288 (1) - ^
01:34:733 - Add clap
01:39:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:40:066 - Add clap
01:41:399 (1) - Remove clap
01:42:288 (2) - ^
01:43:177 (3) - ^
01:46:733 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:47:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:48:511 (1) - ^
01:48:955 - Add clap
01:49:844 (2) - ^
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:18:259 (1) - Add finish
00:53:622 - N:C1?
01:52:399 (1,2) - 1grid up
[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke"
"sugar pot konei beatofike"[Konei's Easy]
00:03:592 (2,1,2) - Not distance snap...
00:28:511 (1) - ^
00:35:622 (1) - ^
00:41:399 (4) - ^
00:46:733 (1) - ^
00:55:622 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:14:733 (1) - I think overlap
01:18:288 (1) - Remove clap to slider end
01:19:622 (2) - Add clap
01:20:066 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:25:399 (2) - Remove clap to slider start and end
01:25:844 - Add clap
01:27:177 (1) - Remove clap
01:29:399 (2) - Add clap
01:30:288 (1) - Add clap to slider start
01:31:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:32:511 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:33:399 (2) - Remove clap
01:34:288 (1) - ^
01:34:733 - Add clap
01:39:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:40:066 - Add clap
01:41:399 (1) - Remove clap
01:42:288 (2) - ^
01:43:177 (3) - ^
01:46:733 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:47:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:48:511 (1) - ^
01:48:955 - Add clap
01:49:844 (2) - ^
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:18:259 (1) - Add finish
00:53:622 - N:C1?
01:52:399 (1,2) - 1grid up
thanks for modding~ all fixed
http://puu.sh/Mpkw
http://puu.sh/Mpkw
Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~
[insane]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092
[kajiyatta's Hard]
suggestions
00:07:592 (3) - Add NC.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
Spinner New Combo
01:06:733 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
suggestions
00:14:259 (3) - Add NC.
[Konei's Easy]
suggestions
00:08:259 - Add a circle at {x:280 y:288}.
00:10:926 - Add a circle at {x:392 y:128}.
00:18:926 - Add a circle at {x:128 y:48}.
00:18:926 (1) - Remove this spinner.
00:19:592 - Add a spinner from here until
00:24:066, with a finish.
[insane]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092
[kajiyatta's Hard]
suggestions
00:07:592 (3) - Add NC.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
Spinner New Combo
01:06:733 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
suggestions
00:14:259 (3) - Add NC.
[Konei's Easy]
suggestions
00:08:259 - Add a circle at {x:280 y:288}.
00:10:926 - Add a circle at {x:392 y:128}.
00:18:926 - Add a circle at {x:128 y:48}.
00:18:926 (1) - Remove this spinner.
00:19:592 - Add a spinner from here until
00:24:066, with a finish.
Topic Starter
Piscis wrote:
[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~ ok, resnapped
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke"
Thank you for mod, Piscis and eLtigreXXxeLtigreXXx wrote:
[insane]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092 Fixed
Minor fix. Updated!
http://puu.sh/ME56
http://puu.sh/ME56
Hi hi, from #modreqs
This is already quite polished, so I'll investigate on details to make the map look better, and give suggestions.
Big Suggestions will be in italic.
The global hitnormal sounds very low compared to the custom hitsounds and the music itself, which has a quite high level, specially during the choruses. Maybe raise the volume of the hitnormal (and the hitclap as well we barely hear it actually) ? (not the volume of all hitsounds, heh )
[Easy]
00:28:511 (1,2,3) - Moving (1) a grid up would be better, will make the spacing look even, and more eye pleasent00:35:622 (1) - Same as above, but on the left with a grid 4. this is really a detail
Globally this could be done on several patterns where it's clearly visible, like 00:39:177 (1,2,3) - but I won't list them all, unless you really want me to do it
[BeatofIke's Normal]
[kajiyatta's Hard]
[Insane]
01:21:622 (2) - This note feels like it's not really on something... based on the music, I'd see a slider starting on the previous (1) instead
01:22:955 (2,4) - a clap on these would sound cool
01:32:955 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern sounds weird to me :s Below a suggestion for the timeline :
Cool
This is already quite polished, so I'll investigate on details to make the map look better, and give suggestions.
Big Suggestions will be in italic.
The global hitnormal sounds very low compared to the custom hitsounds and the music itself, which has a quite high level, specially during the choruses. Maybe raise the volume of the hitnormal (and the hitclap as well we barely hear it actually) ? (not the volume of all hitsounds, heh
)[Easy]
00:28:511 (1,2,3) - Moving (1) a grid up would be better, will make the spacing look even, and more eye pleasent
00:35:622 (1) - Same as above, but on the left with a grid 4. this is really a detail Globally this could be done on several patterns where it's clearly visible, like 00:39:177 (1,2,3) - but I won't list them all, unless you really want me to do it
[BeatofIke's Normal]
[kajiyatta's Hard]
[Insane]
01:21:622 (2) - This note feels like it's not really on something... based on the music, I'd see a slider starting on the previous (1) instead
01:22:955 (2,4) - a clap on these would sound cool
01:32:955 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern sounds weird to me :s Below a suggestion for the timeline :
SPOILER
Instead of this :
Why no this ?
It will feel more like the rest of the map
Why no this ?
It will feel more like the rest of the map
Cool
Topic Starter
Fixed all...
Thank you for mod, Sushi
Thank you for mod, Sushi
Hi~~ From CLANNAD Modding queue
[General]
*inconsistency in kiai times:since there isn't much difference,consider making them the same?
[Normal]
00:06:259 (1) - (nazi)see the pic below↓
it can be better move the third and the last tick 1 grid down
same as the other sliders:
move the third tick 1 grid up
same as 00:33:844 (3) -
01:06:733 (1) - add NC here since this is the note after a spinner
[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning?
00:45:399 (6) - ^
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end?
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern?
[Insane]
00:02:926 (5) - remove whistle ? it sounds strange here
00:06:259 (1) - add whistle on the end
00:10:926 (1) - add whistle?
00:34:622 (4) - remove the clap on the beginning
01:22:955 (2) - NC here since you change the SV
01:32:955 (4) - consider changing this slider into a circle?
(Oh it seems you change something before i post x.x)
didn't see much here,good mapset,good luck with rank~
[General]
*inconsistency in kiai times:since there isn't much difference,consider making them the same?
[Normal]
00:06:259 (1) - (nazi)see the pic below↓
it can be better
move the third and the last tick 1 grid downsame as the other sliders:
SPOILER
00:32:066 (1) - (nazi)00:00:926 (1) - 00:03:592 (3) - 00:08:926 (3) - 00:11:592 (1) - 00:14:259 (3) -
move the third tick 1 grid up
same as 00:33:844 (3) -
01:06:733 (1) - add NC here since this is the note after a spinner
[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning?
00:45:399 (6) - ^
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end?
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern?
[Insane]
00:02:926 (5) - remove whistle ? it sounds strange here
00:06:259 (1) - add whistle on the end
00:10:926 (1) - add whistle?
00:34:622 (4) - remove the clap on the beginning
01:22:955 (2) - NC here since you change the SV
01:32:955 (4) - consider changing this slider into a circle?
(Oh it seems you change something before i post x.x)
didn't see much here,good mapset,good luck with rank~
I'll do M4M from your queue ~
[General]
[Konei's Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement
[BeatofIke's Normal]
- AR -1 ?
Slider shape, circle placement
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing
Slider shape, circle placement
Rhythms
[Insane]
Slider shape, circle placement
Rhythms
thats all I can find, good luck for the rank ^w^)/
[General]
- I suggest to remove hentai from the tags
Slider shape, circle placement
- 00:45:844: Make this symmetrical ? 2nd point to x96 y160 and 3rd point to x96 y88 ?
- 01:25:399: 2nd point to x248 y128 ?
- AR -1 ?
Slider shape, circle placement
- 01:18:288: how about CRTL < -ing the slider?
- Make the same kiai timing
Slider shape, circle placement
- 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
- 00:15:592: add circle?
- 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
Slider shape, circle placement
- 01:31:844: make this overlap with hit 3 on 01:31:177 ?
- 01:02:511: add circle?
SPOILER
thanks for moddings~eLtigreXXx wrote:
00:07:592 (3) - Add NC. no change
raririn wrote:
[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here fixed
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning? fixed
00:45:399 (6) - ^ fixed
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end? fixed
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern? I like this rythem but if others mention that, I'll change it.
- t e n n y a - wrote:
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing ok
Slider shape, circle placementanother fixed
- 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
Rhythmsfixed
- 00:15:592: add circle? it's too hard for diff I think.
- 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
EDIT updated→http://puu.sh/MWU7
Topic Starter
raririn, I fixed some...
- t e n n y a -, I fixed only general recommend...
Thank you for mod, raririn and - t e n n y a -
- t e n n y a -, I fixed only general recommend...
Thank you for mod, raririn and - t e n n y a -
Just my own suggestions...
[Easy]
00:55:622 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:25:399 (2) - At the reverse: Where's the clap?
[Normal]
01:16:955 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:26:733 (5) - Clap?
[Hard]
00:21:844 (2) - Spacing?
00:24:511 (4) - ^
00:58:066 (3) - ^
01:07:622 (1) - ^
[Insane]
00:47:177 (4) - Spacing?
[Easy]
00:55:622 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:25:399 (2) - At the reverse: Where's the clap?
[Normal]
01:16:955 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:26:733 (5) - Clap?
[Hard]
00:21:844 (2) - Spacing?
00:24:511 (4) - ^
00:58:066 (3) - ^
01:07:622 (1) - ^
[Insane]
00:47:177 (4) - Spacing?
thanks for modding=
some fixed http://puu.sh/Nd2u
some fixed http://puu.sh/Nd2u
Topic Starter
Fixed...
Thank you for mod, Koro McAlpine
Note: Waiting for BeatofIke's update.
Thank you for mod, Koro McAlpine
Note: Waiting for BeatofIke's update.
Topic Starter
Updated!
Mod4mod :O
The 135 BPM timing section should be 21,380. This song was a bit hard to hear the timing of, so my offset might be ±2ms off. Don't forget to move all your timing sections back by 20ms.
[Konei's Easy]
00:18:926 (1) - This spinner is REALLY awkward. It sounds much better if you shorten it to 00:21:400. Then you can put in a few more sliders/circles in the space after it.
00:59:177 (4) - The lump you have in this slider looks a bit ugly. Try to make the curve larger, or just make it a plain straight slider.
01:00:511 (1) - ^
01:04:955 (4) - You don't need a clap hitsound on the slider tail.
01:14:733 (1) - Is there a reason why you have that useless slider point in there? D: Just simplify it, make it a nice neat round slider.
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:18:288 (1) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider tail again.
01:20:066 (3) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider head, rather it belongs on slider tail o3o
01:35:844 - Timing sections here are really inconsistent. Plus, your hitsound volume is so low anyways, nobody can tell the difference. Just get rid of the three sections in the middle of the spinner.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:17:592 (2) - I think it would sound better if you got rid of this hitclap.
00:29:844 (3) - Slider head missing hitclap.
01:50:288 (1) - Perhaps extend this to the white tick?
That's it! This difficulty is perfect.
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:15:259 (2,3,4) - Most awkward rhythm ever. Lose the slider and place some notes normally on the red/white ticks.
...I couldn't really find anything else.
[Insane]
00:08:926 (5) - Doesn't need a new combo.
00:29:733 (5,6) - The spacing here is weird. Either move (6) out to the right of (5), or move them both underneath the end of (4).
01:12:066 (6,7) - Random unintuitive jump. Just use normal spacing.
Good map. It's looking very solid, however there are some problems with Easy. I mean, aside from the inconsistent hitsounds I pointed out, it would be nice if you went and prettied up some sliders. If you end up fixing that up, then I'll shoot a star your way~
The 135 BPM timing section should be 21,380. This song was a bit hard to hear the timing of, so my offset might be ±2ms off. Don't forget to move all your timing sections back by 20ms.
[Konei's Easy]
00:18:926 (1) - This spinner is REALLY awkward. It sounds much better if you shorten it to 00:21:400. Then you can put in a few more sliders/circles in the space after it.
00:59:177 (4) - The lump you have in this slider looks a bit ugly. Try to make the curve larger, or just make it a plain straight slider.
01:00:511 (1) - ^
01:04:955 (4) - You don't need a clap hitsound on the slider tail.
01:14:733 (1) - Is there a reason why you have that useless slider point in there? D: Just simplify it, make it a nice neat round slider.
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:18:288 (1) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider tail again.
01:20:066 (3) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider head, rather it belongs on slider tail o3o
01:35:844 - Timing sections here are really inconsistent. Plus, your hitsound volume is so low anyways, nobody can tell the difference. Just get rid of the three sections in the middle of the spinner.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:17:592 (2) - I think it would sound better if you got rid of this hitclap.
00:29:844 (3) - Slider head missing hitclap.
01:50:288 (1) - Perhaps extend this to the white tick?
That's it! This difficulty is perfect.
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:15:259 (2,3,4) - Most awkward rhythm ever. Lose the slider and place some notes normally on the red/white ticks.
...I couldn't really find anything else.
[Insane]
00:08:926 (5) - Doesn't need a new combo.
00:29:733 (5,6) - The spacing here is weird. Either move (6) out to the right of (5), or move them both underneath the end of (4).
01:12:066 (6,7) - Random unintuitive jump. Just use normal spacing.
Good map. It's looking very solid, however there are some problems with Easy. I mean, aside from the inconsistent hitsounds I pointed out, it would be nice if you went and prettied up some sliders. If you end up fixing that up, then I'll shoot a star your way~
Topic Starter
Fixed all...
Thank you for mod, Kitsunemimi
And Thanks in advance for star
Thank you for mod, Kitsunemimi
And Thanks in advance for star
thanks for modding~
fixed and updated→http://puu.sh/NUrw
fixed and updated→http://puu.sh/NUrw
Updated!
http://puu.sh/NXaT
http://puu.sh/NXaT
Topic Starter
Updated!
feel free to ignore whatever u don't like xD
Konei's Easy
- 00:06:259 (1,2) - make these 2 sliders the same shape? they look kind of random right now because the combos around them seem to be same shapes to each other but its up to u xD
- 00:25:380 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view for a sec and move this note to x:172 y:172 (so it is in the middle of 1 and 3)
- 00:36:935 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view again and move one grid to the left for even spacing between 1 and 3
- 00:48:046 (2) - its on the verge of touching 1 so..move down a bit? while keeping distance snap
- 00:50:713 (1) - same situation as above, move away a little to avoid touching 3?
- 01:14:713 (1) - add finish at the beginning like u did for 2
- 01:14:713 (1) - add note
- 01:50:268 (1) - pls extend the slider to 01:52:713 - , it'll make more sense
BeatofIke's Normal
- 00:56:066 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note pls, because new vocal line starts on that next note
- 01:14:733 (1) - add finish at beginning
- 01:49:844 (4) - make 1/2 slider instead? xD
kajiyatta's Hard
- 00:11:592 (2) - blanket around 1 is not perfect, so i tried to fix the slider for u ^^ heres code if u want
32,224,11592,2,0,B|48:256|92:288|144:256|164:224,1,160,4|10
- 00:39:379 - i think a note should be here because u can obviously hear the voice start here.. xD
- 01:01:844 (5,6) - highlight these 2 notes and move 1 grid down, then adjust 01:02:288 (1) - a little to fix spacing
- 01:05:399 (2) - the end of this is not stacking perfectly with the end of 01:06:288 (2) - , not too big of a deal though
Insane
- 00:01:926 (2,3,4) - i feel like these triplets should be a little more spaced out? ><
- 00:39:157 (1,3,4,6) - i think it would also sound nice if you add a whistle to the end of these 4 sliders ^^
edit: 00:42:713 (1,3) - same here xD whistles at end
If you follow the whistle suggestions above, you can probably add some more to the rest of the soft part up to 00:51:602 - to keep hitsounds consistent~ - 01:02:491 - add note
- 01:27:046 (2) - move to x:408 y: 316?
good luck, i love nao <3
thanks for moddings~ some fixed
updated→http://puu.sh/OZT3
updated→http://puu.sh/OZT3
Topic Starter
Mostly fixed...
Thank you for mod, meiikyuu
Update Hard and Insane diff~
Thank you for mod, meiikyuu
Update Hard and Insane diff~
Updated!
http://puu.sh/Pa6H
http://puu.sh/Pa6H
im a newb to modding, so if its not helpfull, sorry in advance ^^
thats what i noticed so far, mb it helped somehow =)
nice song anyway, gl with that ^^
moddingattempt
Easy:
00:18:926 (1) - maybe give that spinner a normal clap AND finish hitsound at 90% vol? I think it fits the background music better
00:22:268 (1) - here i would also use the normal hitsounds at 90% vol, its a more powerfull part of the song, so it sounds better with more hearable hitsounds
01:24:491 (1) - same here for the whole kiai-time =)
00:56:713 (1,2) - they feel a bit strange here, everything else is more based on the background-beat while these sliders are based on vocals. That may be a bit difficult for beginners. At least it broke my combo at the first play ^^
Normal:
00:21:380 (1) - i'd start that spinner one tick later and make it one tick shorter. Instead of the current spinnerstart, set a hitcircle with clap and finish sound. AND since its the powerfull part again i think normal-hitsounds at 90% vol sound better (same as above ^^)
01:23:602 (2) - same with the hitsounds
01:41:399 (1) - add clap (seems like you forgot )
Hard:
00:04:926 (3) - i set this slider one tick earlier, made it one tick longer and deleted the reverse-arrow, instead of that i added a hitcircle at 00:04:259 (1) think this goes better with the vocals and since its "Hard" it shouldnt be a problem =)
00:12:592 (3) - one tick shorter would match the vocals better.
00:15:259 (2) - ^
00:21:380 (1) - same with the hitsounds as in every other difficulty ^^ for the powerfull part of the song normal-hitsounds at 90% vol
01:23:602 (1) - ^
Insane:
Gerneral: same with the hitsounds as in the other difficultys, just use the normal-hitsounds at 90% on the powerfull parts of the songs
00:03:426 (8) - add hitcircle?
00:09:926 (6) - add 2 more reversearrows? "feels" better to me ^^
00:18:926 (1) - maybe give that spinner a normal clap AND finish hitsound at 90% vol? I think it fits the background music better
00:22:268 (1) - here i would also use the normal hitsounds at 90% vol, its a more powerfull part of the song, so it sounds better with more hearable hitsounds
01:24:491 (1) - same here for the whole kiai-time =)
00:56:713 (1,2) - they feel a bit strange here, everything else is more based on the background-beat while these sliders are based on vocals. That may be a bit difficult for beginners. At least it broke my combo at the first play ^^
Normal:
00:21:380 (1) - i'd start that spinner one tick later and make it one tick shorter. Instead of the current spinnerstart, set a hitcircle with clap and finish sound. AND since its the powerfull part again i think normal-hitsounds at 90% vol sound better (same as above ^^)
01:23:602 (2) - same with the hitsounds
01:41:399 (1) - add clap (seems like you forgot
)Hard:
00:04:926 (3) - i set this slider one tick earlier, made it one tick longer and deleted the reverse-arrow, instead of that i added a hitcircle at 00:04:259 (1) think this goes better with the vocals and since its "Hard" it shouldnt be a problem =)
00:12:592 (3) - one tick shorter would match the vocals better.
00:15:259 (2) - ^
00:21:380 (1) - same with the hitsounds as in every other difficulty ^^ for the powerfull part of the song normal-hitsounds at 90% vol
01:23:602 (1) - ^
Insane:
Gerneral: same with the hitsounds as in the other difficultys, just use the normal-hitsounds at 90% on the powerfull parts of the songs
00:03:426 (8) - add hitcircle?
00:09:926 (6) - add 2 more reversearrows? "feels" better to me ^^
thats what i noticed so far, mb it helped somehow =)
nice song anyway, gl with that ^^
Topic Starter
I don't fix it. But thank you for mod, Nathien
Wait editing the guest diff. I will give kd, if they fixed it.
Wait editing the guest diff. I will give kd, if they fixed it.
Random mod
[General]
* Please full submit, because I have 3 diff when I download this map
[Konei's Easy]
* The first kiai should end at 01:37:379
00:50:713 (1) - Move further away from previous slider for preventing of overlapping (Nazi)
01:38:713 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
[BeatofIke's Normal]
* There are 138 unsnapped note, please snap it
[Insane]
00:45:157 (2,3) - Add clap?
01:14:157 (4) - Move 1 grid up for fix the curve pattern
Good luck~
[General]
* Please full submit, because I have 3 diff when I download this map
[Konei's Easy]
* The first kiai should end at 01:37:379
00:50:713 (1) - Move further away from previous slider for preventing of overlapping (Nazi)
01:38:713 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
[BeatofIke's Normal]
* There are 138 unsnapped note, please snap it
[Insane]
00:45:157 (2,3) - Add clap?
01:14:157 (4) - Move 1 grid up for fix the curve pattern
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Fixed all...
Thank you for mod, Leorda
Thank you for mod, Leorda
Thank you for request \(^^)/
Good song, i love nao's voice <33
Good luck ^^
General
Different Kiai-Times, fix that >.<
BeatofIke's Normal
00:08:259 (2) - move down 
Good song, i love nao's voice <33
Good luck ^^
=w= hey nich~
General:
Clear~
Konei's Easy:
OD +1 makes better play for this diff~
BeatofIke's Normal:
Maybe make the CS on 4 it'll be better for normal diff~
kajiyatta's Hard:
Nice diff~ OAO
Insane:
Nothing here too
Nice song and mapset star and good luck with ranking :3
General:
Clear~
Konei's Easy:
OD +1 makes better play for this diff~
- 00:06:259 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 1 grid to the right and 2 grids up~ o.o
- 00:11:592 (1) - i dont really like this slider so maybe make it like this?
- 00:14:259 (2) - ^
- 00:25:824 (3) - move this 1 grid up so it'll lined with the (1) .
- 00:30:268 (3) - add a finish on the head of this slider~
- 00:40:046 (3) - i think this straight slider is so boring :< maybe make it like this so it'll be more enjoyable to play~ btw dont forget to fix the spacing after that
- 00:45:824 (3) - this slider is not curved well so make it like this?
- 00:48:046 (2) - fix the spacing on this slider, it's too close from the other one~
- 00:50:713 (1) - remove this NC it's useless to me~
- 00:59:157 (4,1) - make those slider curved :< it looks bad orz
- 01:03:157 (3) - just like this 00:11:592 (1) -
- 01:11:157 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 3 grids up o.o it looks much better now~
BeatofIke's Normal:
Maybe make the CS on 4 it'll be better for normal diff~
- 00:18:259 (3,4,5) - I think a slider here feels better because the vocal voice went too high for notes orz~
- 01:08:491 (3,4,5) - I think you like blanket sliders \:D/ so how about this?
kajiyatta's Hard:
Nice diff~ OAO
Insane:
Nothing here too
Nice song and mapset star and good luck with ranking :3
Topic Starter
Thank you for mod, kurohana
And thank you Sekai to mod and gave a star, too.
Updated the Easy diff~
And thank you Sekai to mod and gave a star, too.
Updated the Easy diff~
UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/Qrc6
P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.
http://puu.sh/Qrc6
P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.
Topic Starter
Updated my map~
So, I will try to MAT for mod.
I think same that perhaps might ready to check by MAT ^^BeatofIke wrote:
P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.
So, I will try to MAT for mod.
hello, i picked this from #modreqs
[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - whistle on sliderbody isnt that great imo, can you remove them?
00:35:602 (1) - finish at the end
00:37:379 (3) - finish at the beginning
00:49:379 (5) - hmm for consistency with others add finish to the repeat of this slider?
00:56:713 (1) - since percussion is coming every white tick, you should follow it. add a repeat to this and move back by 1/2 beat.
00:57:602 (2) - ^
01:16:491 (2) - soft hitsound doesnt fit here, normal one is better
01:18:268 (1) - placing this note here doesnt make any sense imo, try to place it somewhere else to make good flow
01:20:046 (3) - i know you tried to follow clap on the whitetick.
but the clap isnt that strong to be followed and sounds odd to me, try to extend this slider by 1/2 beat and remove clap from the end
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the end
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:592 (5) - i think this note needs different effect from others imo, finish would be great
00:37:824 (2) - clap doesnt fit very well here imo (as you can hear it's not in the music and sounds different) but i think this is ok for consistency
01:36:046 (3) - finish at the beginning sounds nice to me
01:43:157 (4) - since you didnt2 more repeating slider everywhere else, you shouldnt use it here imo
01:37:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda dislike these notes, they are too hard compared with the rest, but rhythm itself is boring
i'd suggest to remove (2) for better rhythm. remove 01:39:824 (2) - as well
01:44:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:50:268 (1) - finish doesnt fit the music imo, it's better to remove it
good diff, but kinda boring imo you can try to use more 1/2 rhythm in the middle of the song not only in the last of the song.
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:27:379 (2) - clap at the end sounds nice imo
01:05:379 (2,2) - they can be stacked better i think :3
01:26:491 (5) - clap at the end
01:33:379 (3) - clap at the beginning because 01:26:379 (4) - has it
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:36:046 (1) - hmm maybe soft finish here?
01:40:491 (3) - same reason as the previous one, clap here
01:44:157 - feels empty here. maybe some hitsound arrangement would be great i guess (like what you did at 01:40:491 - )
01:52:379 (1,2) - this jump is too huge for hard diff imo
[Insane]
00:05:592 (5,6,1) - looks better if they are in a straight line like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402478
00:24:935 (1) - hmm i think spacing is kinda close compared with others (0.8x) and doesnt looks that great. maybe you can place them like this so that they make nice blanket
http://puu.sh/Veyh
00:25:713 (2,3) - this jump is too big imo, and i dont think it fits the music very well. can you reduce it a bit?
00:26:046 (5) - add clap at the beginning? as you can see it's included in music.
00:27:157 (2) - sorry for nazi mod but looks better if you move this note to 1grid right to make spacing flat
http://puu.sh/VeC8
00:30:046 (7,1) - switch these newcombo for better looking?
00:33:157 (5) - sane as 00:26:046 (5) - , add clap at the beginning
00:39:046 (10,1) - wrong spacing in a stream, you can check the correct spacing by removing green line on 00:39:157 - once
00:41:824 (6) - add whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end for consistency with 00:45:379 (4) -
00:48:935 (3) - add whistle at the beginning
01:13:824 (1,2,4) - feels empty here, so it would be great to add some hitsound arrangement here, add claps for these notes?
01:21:379 (1) - first, reduce SV into 0.75x for better readability of the next slider
second, it's better to mute or reduce the volume of the end. if you listen to music carefully you'll know why :3
01:22:268 - the slider tick sound bothered me when i was modding this, i think you should mute it
01:26:379 (6) - clap sounds nice here
01:40:602 (6) - ^
01:47:713 (7) - ^
i think this map still needs some more works, but it has potential for bubble/rank i guess :3 good luck!
[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - whistle on sliderbody isnt that great imo, can you remove them?
00:35:602 (1) - finish at the end
00:37:379 (3) - finish at the beginning
00:49:379 (5) - hmm for consistency with others add finish to the repeat of this slider?
00:56:713 (1) - since percussion is coming every white tick, you should follow it. add a repeat to this and move back by 1/2 beat.
00:57:602 (2) - ^
01:16:491 (2) - soft hitsound doesnt fit here, normal one is better
01:18:268 (1) - placing this note here doesnt make any sense imo, try to place it somewhere else to make good flow
01:20:046 (3) - i know you tried to follow clap on the whitetick.
but the clap isnt that strong to be followed and sounds odd to me, try to extend this slider by 1/2 beat and remove clap from the end
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the end
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:592 (5) - i think this note needs different effect from others imo, finish would be great
00:37:824 (2) - clap doesnt fit very well here imo (as you can hear it's not in the music and sounds different) but i think this is ok for consistency
01:36:046 (3) - finish at the beginning sounds nice to me
01:43:157 (4) - since you didnt2 more repeating slider everywhere else, you shouldnt use it here imo
01:37:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda dislike these notes, they are too hard compared with the rest, but rhythm itself is boring
i'd suggest to remove (2) for better rhythm. remove 01:39:824 (2) - as well
01:44:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:50:268 (1) - finish doesnt fit the music imo, it's better to remove it
good diff, but kinda boring imo you can try to use more 1/2 rhythm in the middle of the song not only in the last of the song.
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:27:379 (2) - clap at the end sounds nice imo
01:05:379 (2,2) - they can be stacked better i think :3
01:26:491 (5) - clap at the end
01:33:379 (3) - clap at the beginning because 01:26:379 (4) - has it
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:36:046 (1) - hmm maybe soft finish here?
01:40:491 (3) - same reason as the previous one, clap here
01:44:157 - feels empty here. maybe some hitsound arrangement would be great i guess (like what you did at 01:40:491 - )
01:52:379 (1,2) - this jump is too huge for hard diff imo
[Insane]
00:05:592 (5,6,1) - looks better if they are in a straight line like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402478
00:24:935 (1) - hmm i think spacing is kinda close compared with others (0.8x) and doesnt looks that great. maybe you can place them like this so that they make nice blanket
http://puu.sh/Veyh
00:25:713 (2,3) - this jump is too big imo, and i dont think it fits the music very well. can you reduce it a bit?
00:26:046 (5) - add clap at the beginning? as you can see it's included in music.
00:27:157 (2) - sorry for nazi mod but looks better if you move this note to 1grid right to make spacing flat
http://puu.sh/VeC8
00:30:046 (7,1) - switch these newcombo for better looking?
00:33:157 (5) - sane as 00:26:046 (5) - , add clap at the beginning
00:39:046 (10,1) - wrong spacing in a stream, you can check the correct spacing by removing green line on 00:39:157 - once
00:41:824 (6) - add whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end for consistency with 00:45:379 (4) -
00:48:935 (3) - add whistle at the beginning
01:13:824 (1,2,4) - feels empty here, so it would be great to add some hitsound arrangement here, add claps for these notes?
01:21:379 (1) - first, reduce SV into 0.75x for better readability of the next slider
second, it's better to mute or reduce the volume of the end. if you listen to music carefully you'll know why :3
01:22:268 - the slider tick sound bothered me when i was modding this, i think you should mute it
01:26:379 (6) - clap sounds nice here
01:40:602 (6) - ^
01:47:713 (7) - ^
i think this map still needs some more works, but it has potential for bubble/rank i guess :3 good luck!
Topic Starter
Fixed some...
Thank you for mod, Melophobia
Thank you for mod, Melophobia
Thanks for the mod.
I might need to re-map some parts since my patterns just keeps getting uglier due to excessive "change/add/remove pattern A to pattern B" type of mods or it's "too boring" If you suggesting me to make normal harder and trickier, I will do so. Let's just hope I just don't get too carried away and you guys complain that my normal is too hard for beginners.
I'll probably do that later. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/VhIB
I might need to re-map some parts since my patterns just keeps getting uglier due to excessive "change/add/remove pattern A to pattern B" type of mods or it's "too boring" If you suggesting me to make normal harder and trickier, I will do so. Let's just hope I just don't get too carried away and you guys complain that my normal is too hard for beginners.
I'll probably do that later. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/VhIB
Topic Starter
Updated my map~
[General]
- find a consistent ending point for spinners like 01:50:268 (1) in easy? don't forget the KIAI ending section for normal
- 01:03:157 (4) - 1/4 shorter and 1 note at 01:03:602?
- 01:49:379 (4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing 1 by 1?
- 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good
- 00:58:713 (1) - ^
- 00:59:602 (3) - ^
- overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean.
- lovely
- 01:14:713 (1,2) - bad shape
- 01:48:491 (1) - touched 01:46:713 (1), move out a bit plz
thanks for moddigs~Colin Hou wrote:
[Hard]
- 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good fixed
- 00:58:713 (1) - ^ ^
- 00:59:602 (3) - ^ ^
- overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean. remaped
updated http://puu.sh/X4pX
Topic Starter
Okay, Updated!Colin Hou wrote:
[General][Insane]
- find a consistent ending point for spinners like 01:50:268 (1) in easy? don't forget the KIAI ending section for normal Fixed spinner in Easy diff, and Move KIAI ending in Normal diff.
contact with me after the fixes.
- 01:03:157 (4) - 1/4 shorter and 1 note at 01:03:602? Okay, fixed.
- 01:49:379 (4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing 1 by 1? Fixed as well.
Easy diff not included in newest .osz
Topic Starter
I forgot it. Updated Easy diff...
Maybe nich didn't upload my diff correctly?
Topic Starter
Updated by full submit...
Hope that may not have problems with my map ><
Hope that may not have problems with my map ><
Don't worry, the download should work fine now >.<~
bubbled
Yay *-*
Topic Starter
Thank you very much, Colin Hou
Congrats on your first bubble. I'll see if I can find a BAT for you.
GOGOGO, nich!!
I think that you should revive this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43114 then. I can mod it if you do that, but first rank this!!!
I think that you should revive this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43114 then. I can mod it if you do that
, but first rank this!!!Go Go rank !! ต้นสู้ๆ >.< first rank เลยทีเดียวถ้า rank w
[Insane]
-- Definitely raise the OD to 7. OD6 is too low for the actual difficulty of the map.
01:05:824 (5,1) - It'd make more sense to the music if you removed the new combo at one and put it on (5) instead because (5) is when the music transitions
01:21:824 (1) - This speedup totally fits the music; however, consider changing the SV to 0.75 instead to make the slowdown less dramatic. There are going to be players who slider break because of the unexpected SV change.
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:38:046 (2) - Consider reducing the spacing between (1) and (2) -- it's a pretty harsh jump considering that this is a hard.
01:51:157 (3,1,2) - This part is pretty hard to read because of the 3/4ths spacing between notes. To make it more readable, remove the repeat from (3) and add a 3/4ths beat slider starting at 01:52:046. If you want, you can also add a hit circle at 01:51:824 once you've made the changes to keep the beat/movement going.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
-- AR5 seems a little fast considering the pace of this map. I'd go with AR4 but that's up to you.
00:56:046 (1,2) - Add the new combo on (2) instead to follow the music
[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - The paths of these sliders aren't exactly smooth/straight forward. It's not a real problem because of the slow slider velocity, but maybe you should consider cleaning them up a bit.
01:20:046 (3) - Extend this slider to where the spinner begins instead -- it follows the music better. After that, move the spinner to 01:21:379 and don't forget to shorten it.
call me back for a recheck and tell me if you made any extra changes unrelated to the mod whenever you're done~
-- Definitely raise the OD to 7. OD6 is too low for the actual difficulty of the map.
01:05:824 (5,1) - It'd make more sense to the music if you removed the new combo at one and put it on (5) instead because (5) is when the music transitions
01:21:824 (1) - This speedup totally fits the music; however, consider changing the SV to 0.75 instead to make the slowdown less dramatic. There are going to be players who slider break because of the unexpected SV change.
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:38:046 (2) - Consider reducing the spacing between (1) and (2) -- it's a pretty harsh jump considering that this is a hard.
01:51:157 (3,1,2) - This part is pretty hard to read because of the 3/4ths spacing between notes. To make it more readable, remove the repeat from (3) and add a 3/4ths beat slider starting at 01:52:046. If you want, you can also add a hit circle at 01:51:824 once you've made the changes to keep the beat/movement going.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
-- AR5 seems a little fast considering the pace of this map. I'd go with AR4 but that's up to you.
00:56:046 (1,2) - Add the new combo on (2) instead to follow the music
[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - The paths of these sliders aren't exactly smooth/straight forward. It's not a real problem because of the slow slider velocity, but maybe you should consider cleaning them up a bit.
01:20:046 (3) - Extend this slider to where the spinner begins instead -- it follows the music better. After that, move the spinner to 01:21:379 and don't forget to shorten it.
call me back for a recheck and tell me if you made any extra changes unrelated to the mod whenever you're done~