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Sushi
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Sushi
Hi hi, from #modreqs

This is already quite polished, so I'll investigate on details to make the map look better, and give suggestions.

Big Suggestions will be in italic.


The global hitnormal sounds very low compared to the custom hitsounds and the music itself, which has a quite high level, specially during the choruses. Maybe raise the volume of the hitnormal (and the hitclap as well we barely hear it actually) ? (not the volume of all hitsounds, heh ;) )

[Easy]
00:28:511 (1,2,3) - Moving (1) a grid up would be better, will make the spacing look even, and more eye pleasent :)
SPOILER
00:35:622 (1) - Same as above, but on the left with a grid 4. this is really a detail
SPOILER

Globally this could be done on several patterns where it's clearly visible, like 00:39:177 (1,2,3) - but I won't list them all, unless you really want me to do it

[BeatofIke's Normal]
:D

[kajiyatta's Hard]
8-)

[Insane]
01:21:622 (2) - This note feels like it's not really on something... based on the music, I'd see a slider starting on the previous (1) instead
01:22:955 (2,4) - a clap on these would sound cool :)
01:32:955 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern sounds weird to me :s Below a suggestion for the timeline :
SPOILER
Instead of this :


Why no this ?



It will feel more like the rest of the map ;)


Cool :D
Nichiyouki
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Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Sushi :)
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
Hi~~ From CLANNAD Modding queue

[General]
*inconsistency in kiai times:since there isn't much difference,consider making them the same?

[Normal]
00:06:259 (1) - (nazi)see the pic below↓
SPOILER
it can be better :D move the third and the last tick 1 grid down
same as the other sliders:
SPOILER
00:00:926 (1) - 00:03:592 (3) - 00:08:926 (3) - 00:11:592 (1) - 00:14:259 (3) -
00:32:066 (1) - (nazi)
SPOILER
move the third tick 1 grid up
same as 00:33:844 (3) -
01:06:733 (1) - add NC here since this is the note after a spinner

[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning?
00:45:399 (6) - ^
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end?
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern?

[Insane]
00:02:926 (5) - remove whistle ? it sounds strange here
00:06:259 (1) - add whistle on the end
00:10:926 (1) - add whistle?
00:34:622 (4) - remove the clap on the beginning
01:22:955 (2) - NC here since you change the SV
01:32:955 (4) - consider changing this slider into a circle?
(Oh it seems you change something before i post x.x)

didn't see much here,good mapset,good luck with rank~ :P
10nya
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Joined February 2011
10nya
I'll do M4M from your queue ~

[General]
  1. I suggest to remove hentai from the tags
[Konei's Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:45:844: Make this symmetrical ? 2nd point to x96 y160 and 3rd point to x96 y88 ?
  2. 01:25:399: 2nd point to x248 y128 ?
[BeatofIke's Normal]
- AR -1 ?
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:18:288: how about CRTL < -ing the slider?
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
Rhythms
  1. 00:15:592: add circle?
  2. 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
[Insane]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:31:844: make this overlap with hit 3 on 01:31:177 ?
Rhythms
  1. 01:02:511: add circle?
thats all I can find, good luck for the rank ^w^)/
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Fixed some! Updated! :D
http://puu.sh/MWD9
kajiyatta
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Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
SPOILER

eLtigreXXx wrote:

00:07:592 (3) - Add NC. no change

raririn wrote:

[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here fixed
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning? fixed
00:45:399 (6) - ^ fixed
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end? fixed
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern? I like this rythem but if others mention that, I'll change it.

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing ok
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
another fixed

Rhythms
  1. 00:15:592: add circle? it's too hard for diff I think.
  2. 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
fixed
thanks for moddings~
EDIT updated→http://puu.sh/MWU7
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 3 times in total.
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
raririn, I fixed some...
- t e n n y a -, I fixed only general recommend...

Thank you for mod, raririn and - t e n n y a - :)
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Just my own suggestions...

[Easy]

00:55:622 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:25:399 (2) - At the reverse: Where's the clap?

[Normal]

01:16:955 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:26:733 (5) - Clap?

[Hard]

00:21:844 (2) - Spacing?
00:24:511 (4) - ^
00:58:066 (3) - ^
01:07:622 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:47:177 (4) - Spacing?
kajiyatta
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Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
thanks for modding=
some fixed http://puu.sh/Nd2u
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
http://puu.sh/Nidr

Okay, many fixed :)
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Fixed...

Thank you for mod, Koro McAlpine :)

Note: Waiting for BeatofIke's update.
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Minor Fix. Updated! :D
http://puu.sh/NjPD
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Updated!
Kitsunemimi
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Joined April 2009
Kitsunemimi
Mod4mod :O

The 135 BPM timing section should be 21,380. This song was a bit hard to hear the timing of, so my offset might be ±2ms off. Don't forget to move all your timing sections back by 20ms.

[Konei's Easy]
00:18:926 (1) - This spinner is REALLY awkward. It sounds much better if you shorten it to 00:21:400. Then you can put in a few more sliders/circles in the space after it.
00:59:177 (4) - The lump you have in this slider looks a bit ugly. Try to make the curve larger, or just make it a plain straight slider.
01:00:511 (1) - ^
01:04:955 (4) - You don't need a clap hitsound on the slider tail.
01:14:733 (1) - Is there a reason why you have that useless slider point in there? D: Just simplify it, make it a nice neat round slider.
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:18:288 (1) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider tail again.
01:20:066 (3) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider head, rather it belongs on slider tail o3o
01:35:844 - Timing sections here are really inconsistent. Plus, your hitsound volume is so low anyways, nobody can tell the difference. Just get rid of the three sections in the middle of the spinner.

[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:17:592 (2) - I think it would sound better if you got rid of this hitclap.
00:29:844 (3) - Slider head missing hitclap.
01:50:288 (1) - Perhaps extend this to the white tick?
That's it! This difficulty is perfect.

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:15:259 (2,3,4) - Most awkward rhythm ever. Lose the slider and place some notes normally on the red/white ticks.
...I couldn't really find anything else.

[Insane]
00:08:926 (5) - Doesn't need a new combo.
00:29:733 (5,6) - The spacing here is weird. Either move (6) out to the right of (5), or move them both underneath the end of (4).
01:12:066 (6,7) - Random unintuitive jump. Just use normal spacing.

Good map. It's looking very solid, however there are some problems with Easy. I mean, aside from the inconsistent hitsounds I pointed out, it would be nice if you went and prettied up some sliders. If you end up fixing that up, then I'll shoot a star your way~
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
Thank you very much Kitsunemimi~

Fixed all you said and made some slider prettier.


http://puu.sh/NKsF
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Kitsunemimi
And Thanks in advance for star :)
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
fixed and updated→http://puu.sh/NUrw
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Updated!
http://puu.sh/NXaT
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Updated!
meiikyuu
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Joined August 2011
meiikyuu

feel free to ignore whatever u don't like xD

Konei's Easy
  1. 00:06:259 (1,2) - make these 2 sliders the same shape? they look kind of random right now because the combos around them seem to be same shapes to each other but its up to u xD
  2. 00:25:380 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view for a sec and move this note to x:172 y:172 (so it is in the middle of 1 and 3)
  3. 00:36:935 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view again and move one grid to the left for even spacing between 1 and 3
  4. 00:48:046 (2) - its on the verge of touching 1 so..move down a bit? while keeping distance snap
  5. 00:50:713 (1) - same situation as above, move away a little to avoid touching 3?
  6. 01:14:713 (1) - add finish at the beginning like u did for 2
  7. 01:14:713 (1) - add note
  8. 01:50:268 (1) - pls extend the slider to 01:52:713 - , it'll make more sense
c:

BeatofIke's Normal
  1. 00:56:066 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note pls, because new vocal line starts on that next note
  2. 01:14:733 (1) - add finish at beginning
  3. 01:49:844 (4) - make 1/2 slider instead? xD
pretty nice

kajiyatta's Hard
  1. 00:11:592 (2) - blanket around 1 is not perfect, so i tried to fix the slider for u ^^ heres code if u want
    32,224,11592,2,0,B|48:256|92:288|144:256|164:224,1,160,4|10
  2. 00:39:379 - i think a note should be here because u can obviously hear the voice start here.. xD
  3. 01:01:844 (5,6) - highlight these 2 notes and move 1 grid down, then adjust 01:02:288 (1) - a little to fix spacing
  4. 01:05:399 (2) - the end of this is not stacking perfectly with the end of 01:06:288 (2) - , not too big of a deal though
another nice diff~

Insane
  1. 00:01:926 (2,3,4) - i feel like these triplets should be a little more spaced out? ><
  2. 00:39:157 (1,3,4,6) - i think it would also sound nice if you add a whistle to the end of these 4 sliders ^^
    edit: 00:42:713 (1,3) - same here xD whistles at end
    If you follow the whistle suggestions above, you can probably add some more to the rest of the soft part up to 00:51:602 - to keep hitsounds consistent~
  3. 01:02:491 - add note
  4. 01:27:046 (2) - move to x:408 y: 316?
nice

good luck, i love nao <3
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
thanks for moddings~ some fixed
updated→http://puu.sh/OZT3
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Mostly fixed...

Thank you for mod, meiikyuu :)

Update Hard and Insane diff~
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Updated!
http://puu.sh/Pa6H
Nathien
44 posts
Joined January 2012
Nathien
im a newb to modding, so if its not helpfull, sorry in advance ^^

moddingattempt
Easy:
00:18:926 (1) - maybe give that spinner a normal clap AND finish hitsound at 90% vol? I think it fits the background music better
00:22:268 (1) - here i would also use the normal hitsounds at 90% vol, its a more powerfull part of the song, so it sounds better with more hearable hitsounds
01:24:491 (1) - same here for the whole kiai-time =)
00:56:713 (1,2) - they feel a bit strange here, everything else is more based on the background-beat while these sliders are based on vocals. That may be a bit difficult for beginners. At least it broke my combo at the first play ^^

Normal:
00:21:380 (1) - i'd start that spinner one tick later and make it one tick shorter. Instead of the current spinnerstart, set a hitcircle with clap and finish sound. AND since its the powerfull part again i think normal-hitsounds at 90% vol sound better (same as above ^^)
01:23:602 (2) - same with the hitsounds
01:41:399 (1) - add clap (seems like you forgot ;) )

Hard:
00:04:926 (3) - i set this slider one tick earlier, made it one tick longer and deleted the reverse-arrow, instead of that i added a hitcircle at 00:04:259 (1) think this goes better with the vocals and since its "Hard" it shouldnt be a problem =)
00:12:592 (3) - one tick shorter would match the vocals better.
00:15:259 (2) - ^
00:21:380 (1) - same with the hitsounds as in every other difficulty ^^ for the powerfull part of the song normal-hitsounds at 90% vol
01:23:602 (1) - ^

Insane:
Gerneral: same with the hitsounds as in the other difficultys, just use the normal-hitsounds at 90% on the powerfull parts of the songs
00:03:426 (8) - add hitcircle?
00:09:926 (6) - add 2 more reversearrows? "feels" better to me ^^

thats what i noticed so far, mb it helped somehow =)
nice song anyway, gl with that ^^
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
I don't fix it. But thank you for mod, Nathien

Wait editing the guest diff. I will give kd, if they fixed it.
Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Leorda
Random mod


[General]
* Please full submit, because I have 3 diff when I download this map


[Konei's Easy]
* The first kiai should end at 01:37:379

00:50:713 (1) - Move further away from previous slider for preventing of overlapping (Nazi)
01:38:713 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)


[BeatofIke's Normal]
* There are 138 unsnapped note, please snap it


[Insane]
00:45:157 (2,3) - Add clap?
01:14:157 (4) - Move 1 grid up for fix the curve pattern



Good luck~
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Leorda :)
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Snapping fixed! Thanks Leo!
http://puu.sh/PM4R
Updated!
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
Thank you for request \(^^)/

General

Different Kiai-Times, fix that >.<

BeatofIke's Normal

00:08:259 (2) - move down

Good song, i love nao's voice <33
Good luck ^^
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
=w= hey nich~


General:
Clear~


Konei's Easy:
OD +1 makes better play for this diff~
  1. 00:06:259 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 1 grid to the right and 2 grids up~ o.o
  2. 00:11:592 (1) - i dont really like this slider so maybe make it like this?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:14:259 (2) - ^
  4. 00:25:824 (3) - move this 1 grid up so it'll lined with the (1) .
  5. 00:30:268 (3) - add a finish on the head of this slider~
  6. 00:40:046 (3) - i think this straight slider is so boring :< maybe make it like this so it'll be more enjoyable to play~ btw dont forget to fix the spacing after that
    SPOILER
  7. 00:45:824 (3) - this slider is not curved well so make it like this?
    SPOILER
  8. 00:48:046 (2) - fix the spacing on this slider, it's too close from the other one~
  9. 00:50:713 (1) - remove this NC it's useless to me~
  10. 00:59:157 (4,1) - make those slider curved :< it looks bad orz
  11. 01:03:157 (3) - just like this 00:11:592 (1) -
  12. 01:11:157 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 3 grids up o.o it looks much better now~

BeatofIke's Normal:
Maybe make the CS on 4 it'll be better for normal diff~
  1. 00:18:259 (3,4,5) - I think a slider here feels better because the vocal voice went too high for notes orz~
  2. 01:08:491 (3,4,5) - I think you like blanket sliders \:D/ so how about this?
    SPOILER


kajiyatta's Hard:
Nice diff~ OAO


Insane:
Nothing here too



Nice song and mapset star and good luck with ranking :3
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
http://puu.sh/QoPM

Thanks for mods~
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Thank you for mod, kurohana :)

And thank you Sekai to mod and gave a star, too. :)

Updated the Easy diff~
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/Qrc6

P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Updated my map~

BeatofIke wrote:

P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.
I think same that perhaps might ready to check by MAT ^^

So, I will try to MAT for mod.
Melophobia
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Melophobia
hello, i picked this from #modreqs :D

[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - whistle on sliderbody isnt that great imo, can you remove them?
00:35:602 (1) - finish at the end
00:37:379 (3) - finish at the beginning
00:49:379 (5) - hmm for consistency with others add finish to the repeat of this slider?
00:56:713 (1) - since percussion is coming every white tick, you should follow it. add a repeat to this and move back by 1/2 beat.
00:57:602 (2) - ^
01:16:491 (2) - soft hitsound doesnt fit here, normal one is better
01:18:268 (1) - placing this note here doesnt make any sense imo, try to place it somewhere else to make good flow
01:20:046 (3) - i know you tried to follow clap on the whitetick.
but the clap isnt that strong to be followed and sounds odd to me, try to extend this slider by 1/2 beat and remove clap from the end
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the end


[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:592 (5) - i think this note needs different effect from others imo, finish would be great
00:37:824 (2) - clap doesnt fit very well here imo (as you can hear it's not in the music and sounds different) but i think this is ok for consistency
01:36:046 (3) - finish at the beginning sounds nice to me
01:43:157 (4) - since you didnt2 more repeating slider everywhere else, you shouldnt use it here imo
01:37:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda dislike these notes, they are too hard compared with the rest, but rhythm itself is boring
i'd suggest to remove (2) for better rhythm. remove 01:39:824 (2) - as well
01:44:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:50:268 (1) - finish doesnt fit the music imo, it's better to remove it

good diff, but kinda boring imo you can try to use more 1/2 rhythm in the middle of the song not only in the last of the song.

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:27:379 (2) - clap at the end sounds nice imo
01:05:379 (2,2) - they can be stacked better i think :3
01:26:491 (5) - clap at the end
01:33:379 (3) - clap at the beginning because 01:26:379 (4) - has it
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:36:046 (1) - hmm maybe soft finish here?
01:40:491 (3) - same reason as the previous one, clap here
01:44:157 - feels empty here. maybe some hitsound arrangement would be great i guess (like what you did at 01:40:491 - )
01:52:379 (1,2) - this jump is too huge for hard diff imo


[Insane]
00:05:592 (5,6,1) - looks better if they are in a straight line like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402478
00:24:935 (1) - hmm i think spacing is kinda close compared with others (0.8x) and doesnt looks that great. maybe you can place them like this so that they make nice blanket
http://puu.sh/Veyh
00:25:713 (2,3) - this jump is too big imo, and i dont think it fits the music very well. can you reduce it a bit?
00:26:046 (5) - add clap at the beginning? as you can see it's included in music.
00:27:157 (2) - sorry for nazi mod but looks better if you move this note to 1grid right to make spacing flat
http://puu.sh/VeC8
00:30:046 (7,1) - switch these newcombo for better looking?
00:33:157 (5) - sane as 00:26:046 (5) - , add clap at the beginning
00:39:046 (10,1) - wrong spacing in a stream, you can check the correct spacing by removing green line on 00:39:157 - once
00:41:824 (6) - add whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end for consistency with 00:45:379 (4) -
00:48:935 (3) - add whistle at the beginning
01:13:824 (1,2,4) - feels empty here, so it would be great to add some hitsound arrangement here, add claps for these notes?
01:21:379 (1) - first, reduce SV into 0.75x for better readability of the next slider
second, it's better to mute or reduce the volume of the end. if you listen to music carefully you'll know why :3
01:22:268 - the slider tick sound bothered me when i was modding this, i think you should mute it
01:26:379 (6) - clap sounds nice here
01:40:602 (6) - ^
01:47:713 (7) - ^

i think this map still needs some more works, but it has potential for bubble/rank i guess :3 good luck! :D
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed some...

Thank you for mod, Melophobia :)
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Thanks for the mod.
I might need to re-map some parts since my patterns just keeps getting uglier due to excessive "change/add/remove pattern A to pattern B" type of mods or it's "too boring" If you suggesting me to make normal harder and trickier, I will do so. Let's just hope I just don't get too carried away and you guys complain that my normal is too hard for beginners.
I'll probably do that later. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/VhIB
kajiyatta
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Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
some fixed.
thanks for moddings~
updated http://puu.sh/VoQE
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
http://puu.sh/WdKb

Thank you Melo~
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Updated my map~
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]
  1. find a consistent ending point for spinners like 01:50:268 (1) in easy? don't forget the KIAI ending section for normal
[Insane]
  1. 01:03:157 (4) - 1/4 shorter and 1 note at 01:03:602?
  2. 01:49:379 (4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing 1 by 1?
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good
  2. 00:58:713 (1) - ^
  3. 00:59:602 (3) - ^
  4. overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean.
[Normal]
  1. lovely
[Easy]
  1. 01:14:713 (1,2) - bad shape
  2. 01:48:491 (1) - touched 01:46:713 (1), move out a bit plz
contact with me after the fixes.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good fixed
  2. 00:58:713 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 00:59:602 (3) - ^ ^
  4. overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean. remaped
thanks for moddigs~
updated http://puu.sh/X4pX
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http://puu.sh/X5Aa

Thank you very much Colin >.<~
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Colin Hou wrote:

[General]
  1. find a consistent ending point for spinners like 01:50:268 (1) in easy? don't forget the KIAI ending section for normal Fixed spinner in Easy diff, and Move KIAI ending in Normal diff.
[Insane]
  1. 01:03:157 (4) - 1/4 shorter and 1 note at 01:03:602? Okay, fixed.
  2. 01:49:379 (4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing 1 by 1? Fixed as well.
contact with me after the fixes.
Okay, Updated!
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Easy diff not included in newest .osz
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I forgot it. Updated Easy diff...
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Maybe nich didn't upload my diff correctly?
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Updated by full submit...

Hope that may not have problems with my map ><
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Don't worry, the download should work fine now >.<~
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bubbled
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Yay *-*
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Thank you very much, Colin Hou :)
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Congrats on your first bubble. I'll see if I can find a BAT for you. :)
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GOGOGO, nich!!
I think that you should revive this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43114 then. I can mod it if you do that :P, but first rank this!!!
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Go Go rank !! ต้นสู้ๆ >.< first rank เลยทีเดียวถ้า rank w
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[Insane]
-- Definitely raise the OD to 7. OD6 is too low for the actual difficulty of the map.
01:05:824 (5,1) - It'd make more sense to the music if you removed the new combo at one and put it on (5) instead because (5) is when the music transitions
01:21:824 (1) - This speedup totally fits the music; however, consider changing the SV to 0.75 instead to make the slowdown less dramatic. There are going to be players who slider break because of the unexpected SV change.

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:38:046 (2) - Consider reducing the spacing between (1) and (2) -- it's a pretty harsh jump considering that this is a hard.
01:51:157 (3,1,2) - This part is pretty hard to read because of the 3/4ths spacing between notes. To make it more readable, remove the repeat from (3) and add a 3/4ths beat slider starting at 01:52:046. If you want, you can also add a hit circle at 01:51:824 once you've made the changes to keep the beat/movement going.

[BeatofIke's Normal]
-- AR5 seems a little fast considering the pace of this map. I'd go with AR4 but that's up to you.
00:56:046 (1,2) - Add the new combo on (2) instead to follow the music

[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - The paths of these sliders aren't exactly smooth/straight forward. It's not a real problem because of the slow slider velocity, but maybe you should consider cleaning them up a bit.
01:20:046 (3) - Extend this slider to where the spinner begins instead -- it follows the music better. After that, move the spinner to 01:21:379 and don't forget to shorten it.

call me back for a recheck and tell me if you made any extra changes unrelated to the mod whenever you're done~
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Let's get this ranked, nich~
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Fixed all...

Wait for editing of BeatofIke and kajiyatta. Then I will call you to recheck.

Updated Easy diff and Insane diff.
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thanks for modding~
all fixed. http://puu.sh/YYtx
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เตรียมตัวรอเลยต้น !
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Updated Hard diff...
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UPDATED! Go for rank! :)
http://puu.sh/ZjTA

GO GO GO!!!
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Okay, updated Normal diff

I'm ready to call for recheck. :D
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Looks good now. Ranked!
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Gratz.
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Thank you very much :)
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lol I accidentally ranked it twice
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gratz 8-)
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Gratz :3!
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yay for first x)
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Congrats for the first map !!
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Congrats ~ >w<
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well~ congratz on your 1st ranked map ;)
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Thank you everyone ^^
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Congrats on your first rank. :)
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congratz!
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KYAA KYAAA GRATSSS .w<
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congratz on first rank.
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Finally , Congratz on first ranked !
ในที่สุดก็ทำได้เเล้วนะคู่หู >w<
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Gratz nich on your first rank >w<
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congrats ~ :)
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congratz!
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Thank you everyone :oops:
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ยินดีด้วย แมพแรก :D !!!
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Late grats on first rank!
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this song brings back memories
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